【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
2 e6 m, g7 a) `3 v$ k4 JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( V% {* ?- O& o9 @! v  d+ xFrom the first moment we met,
& t: a; V6 ~! t2 S6 f) E- kI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& N" [9 P3 ^% J0 H! X' [: TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 j) \7 M2 i  g3 [. mI would probably know how you feel
6 a& M% d2 C" A& u1 V* eLove… just the word love
5 D) W! `- k+ X5 ]" YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. z- c8 J7 q& }) ~6 L2 t5 {+ POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 a( M6 O+ D# ]: ~* V. s# qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 h$ K9 K2 o( k; S3 e! nCan I entrust it to you?
9 N( N5 _$ H! m; g- xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 N$ b6 @, `& U% O9 S1 g  wI want to confess that I love you,
2 z( ?1 ~) @8 u. e9 w& EBut I never did
0 X4 E, S; p6 S8 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 h* d2 m  t+ n, `If today isn’t too late,
( K* x9 B5 F9 L$ jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# H6 \# Z: K6 i; I9 `3 BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: I6 R, j% n: t9 H! U2 B" }Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( K9 L  c5 }. G  Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  Q1 L0 {3 j. l& e5 N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) Z0 X4 D- s4 Y0 w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; }; c% e. m2 T, Z$ U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  T7 w  d2 H! k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 w6 t8 F: J8 @$ K& ?- `& J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% X$ D% E5 d; @. o* l  J% k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- g7 E5 b# I. ~3 T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ [" D' X% _# ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 q0 V# [/ p7 e8 s% N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- A5 P: `" \- G6 j9 ~6 R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* W2 ~; P! v: i4 {  I4 Z2 P! V<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! m2 m7 J6 |$ j/ k0 i( Z/ m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 E: ]) W7 z& u: m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ Z6 h5 X5 p" D! w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' U# Z. f# s6 ^1 i" I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ R0 _: {8 J0 C+ B3 G' d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! M8 x: D) J6 a1 y' ^5 i<P>但我不会 </P>
# ?7 q9 ?! h1 ]$ q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* J0 ]! C1 ]* e: O7 Y0 l<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& r, g: p5 f1 o# c9 N# L/ Q5 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 b, w: c5 B- n( d- A' g, Z# z8 ~: W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' @, E: e1 A9 h2 b" o5 `' q6 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. d( y9 o; F- T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% L2 }5 a7 X% Z% ]& z4 i& h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# \2 I$ X: s* j) d- ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 b7 Q8 C4 h' _, d( S7 d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 J7 B8 e5 C2 o! N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& E: W3 T( P, D1 U9 f& _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) |% u. u; A3 {, Z) [. x) L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>