【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 C2 l; K' h) t4 f: Y" Y我另将歌词附在此。
4 L* d8 F5 }: qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ w) \* h* A) x5 H5 R: I9 nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ f0 [0 \, z7 Z* C# b) eFrom the first moment we met,
: r% S# G. ^  Y. y9 zI already loved you with all my heart
% O: [0 h) q! J7 a5 FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  l7 O* I4 F0 j( x: v- ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ Z! k2 F9 R  j- M) zLove… just the word love
# Y# y3 Z3 Z: r$ G8 a) tWhy is it so difficult to express?
  v( i/ J! X+ t% YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 A$ u/ ^5 n9 p8 m* {7 ~' `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 J/ P2 \& o7 IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* Q. y2 ?+ X6 R7 c7 @Entrust my love within your heart
; k/ V3 ?3 Z2 Z1 W" O6 H0 ~. @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) O4 U1 B" ?5 v. DBut I never did
- P- w! B* R8 t. n: i* COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ |4 Y$ E% I% dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' c+ H0 R& U, p8 k% H' x7 b$ dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. O" I2 I4 L8 c' Z% ^Can I entrust it to you?
0 E- j# N; T/ S* l, C  S- e1 iEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# `1 N. Y3 a% j9 O5 D& Z5 L$ ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 ?/ s9 A8 i# A/ W7 E: m3 G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# p0 |% O& r$ b+ h2 E) b0 l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ l/ d1 p' v( Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; H; I, J1 ~! _8 b  w2 O% V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% z5 J7 i! l8 D- u' |/ O- D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( h" G, M  g. w/ J9 v% e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* V( E. ?( w+ f* _) \2 A9 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 c) b5 K' l9 }: Y& y0 G6 M3 H2 c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! @8 b8 y* t& B8 H; w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ P  w( S0 u) h: Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 }) o/ k2 L1 _$ V4 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# T7 s: o" E; Y# |; u8 U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 Y* a  Q, @9 ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 H) A$ x' W" y8 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& V# Q$ t, G9 z3 G" o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- w& d7 i  d! A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# L: Z3 M1 _/ V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, p# E% z' P/ F9 T- A5 m) u% ?( A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( n% c& F  p. s- Z* J; x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 [$ e+ }  k3 _$ ^8 g$ x9 f' T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; Q' v% R9 b+ c8 F0 Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; R' \/ R1 `7 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ k$ d3 ?# e9 c) a! W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# ?& p" Z4 T6 T1 g<P>But I never did </P>
% K% u9 T4 |0 q, i: v) d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" O2 \) B7 M' w8 D  D  |4 _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 V9 t$ A4 h/ U+ N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 U( F- J$ B2 o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ C( G. R) `) ?; \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ U) v5 h* U+ p8 |, P, x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- i; V1 a! ?% V1 W3 u" s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% G2 _3 a% v& V7 K, `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, e/ t* G: O' q( [3 y5 i3 Y6 Y" l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& q% M; @+ ?, O$ L! `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, k$ W+ o) _1 |1 q1 p1 ^# R8 B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, I% a4 C. r0 f$ i9 s* Z; k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: O! Y: u! ~/ D( U  D5 M5 K# U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 L. d: j9 ^3 r. K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>