【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
6 O% i5 e2 k# e2 h1 L9 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ t: z& e  u6 n3 a0 [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 j3 b! T5 m( {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* L+ m0 l9 q% mI would probably know how you feel
4 S; f, ~+ X& Q/ F1 m& vLove… just the word love
# e' t) |- Q5 g0 g2 `0 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) J9 w0 y6 q5 r- `) Y9 Q9 }But I never did
6 K9 P" v; @: s( z% ^" nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, w4 D  h, i# n. x6 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ j& d  E- q8 aLove… just the word love
7 c$ u9 T0 L2 g5 m' N) m* L8 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% Y' J& H5 v$ y6 m: P9 BBut I never did
2 a, z* ?- I, Z2 t9 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ R4 m. `9 f" ^8 e3 Z, q1 _If today isn’t too late,
! ~# K* p, X* \& Z6 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! ~: ]. G$ {2 M! c+ j- J9 |" SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ x4 S( s- w7 j5 s9 ]& YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; H2 A! D3 B9 z0 o3 x$ m/ PCan I entrust it to you?
8 h% L$ Z5 |: u% g) |* EEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 N! C- v' j# o  h( x5 p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: H" v7 q  C% Y; J8 I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. E, V2 k5 G, [! I2 N' b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# x% w- P% \" P' t2 x9 n1 {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 }& R9 h& B4 j, ?* [' I' {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" S# @" v+ r: n$ H! Y2 `* s" Q( B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# r& O! ^/ j) y* |5 `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- s/ o5 d1 C4 [% V3 y9 O/ c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* R4 U4 a4 P9 H$ B3 _* ]8 b* {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 v( R+ |' r7 i9 n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 L% h& ~) \. q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ s) z, Z9 |9 ^& p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ A  H5 Z9 K  J<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. t2 F  T4 F  V, ?  S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" J8 \% R, a- U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( S& s. N- i/ q) Z* M6 P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  ^, ~; m3 \( l+ O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) ^9 P5 b9 [2 r# ]9 n7 k& F$ S: A6 j2 u  {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! [) J/ i8 E; v+ v, E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* i1 I, v9 X/ b, j  r; n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 {/ w' I+ e, J2 T; c. }( [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ v: \0 j, L- D  h% E. r* ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! b3 I5 F  g9 u5 l% W! _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 g& ]! W% [1 n- z' x4 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; N* Q  h& h3 f- v& R5 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 n; S% k6 U9 X; q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* B* |1 a$ J6 K* t* M! q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  d# n- l# A& c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 ]( y9 h  z2 B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>