【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! i6 ^5 `7 b6 ]' |, U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 y  b5 P0 V0 @) r' K6 HI already loved you with all my heart
$ q# [  s, b0 y$ GWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% |9 z9 X; V% _# d: }/ ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- m- e3 M9 R% _Love… just the word love
" Q5 d% H1 t2 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" [" W# D1 |0 g- HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; [; e; m. n. b$ D5 K2 Y! }Can I entrust it to you?
' Q, Q% D( g: u% J  {4 E( mEntrust my love within your heart
: {% Y" |% j# B* rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 f' S6 ~4 f9 q3 eI want to confess that I love you,
1 v. N) o7 N: ]) Y) `7 |But I never did
4 O  n( y6 m+ Z/ n) r0 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 z, {- l, m( i8 G5 h( `Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% w. X" B0 W  S4 c0 F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, V( ?. A2 }+ @/ S$ v5 X9 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: w- t- W0 x1 G0 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' Y  W- Q& m4 `7 x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ f( T6 b% F4 T& x' B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 v1 H1 }7 j8 r3 M* p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' C) O6 ?8 W; ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 ~6 h0 p( }& C# }- U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 }* ^1 a$ I. `1 v" k" O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& k* m, S( d8 g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( J2 ?! H( Z$ L/ w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 q: B5 h; D' G8 v% l9 v; o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 r; c! K6 f$ H  i( Y, |<P>但我不会</P>
2 _1 o( v. U5 c: [; p# ~% P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* @5 w# I$ V, X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 f+ ~) e$ J3 H$ s8 n( D; Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" T. r5 H+ B: U7 B# B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 |- ^0 G$ J) ^3 d4 d1 A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% K& x1 A/ z8 ^( q% G9 H7 X$ W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 A2 y" U0 C' N+ T& h<P>But I never did </P>
8 E/ s0 w' s) o* |( |<P>但我不会 </P>
7 T2 z3 d8 f1 o  c; v, E4 e1 d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' @) a- J4 U% h0 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! `2 f1 G+ ~5 d: `5 }+ a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" |; D( H6 ~# ~' m5 s* g' g( |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) l5 u$ Q# C) |9 |- L: \8 N( E# y6 v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 [) m. A4 W, n, ?( f( s- J6 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 N+ t( `+ Z  \* ~这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ P/ f- B# S2 v7 y% J" ^* q+ b2 G& E* o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ t0 p' k; D/ Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>