【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  U- e6 l2 W9 l6 ]4 `6 S7 r" L/ L我另将歌词附在此。
% r7 D& a7 Q! nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ H+ s2 K1 k  k7 v1 S0 s7 wFrom the first moment we met,
. D% V( ^0 u1 X5 ]. jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- C$ C& T* C& H+ N5 p4 YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, d- R, O' V: f/ Y4 h" A2 c# jI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) x% `- |% ?2 P6 iBut I never did
+ [2 B7 w2 Q6 O1 k, V" n7 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( F+ b& C- ?8 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 f. i" [; y1 v9 F/ ^Why is it so difficult to express?
) ?1 J, i: K# m' r, {/ h1 ^1 TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% B8 i  g, j3 i/ @; R: FIf today isn’t too late,
) U& F! `, i  B3 y1 n! P6 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ Q# E' w  l3 z, ?. x( LCan I entrust it to you?
8 S* z; r1 d# v) r9 ]Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ {- v# C% B: c# }" w1 b* A- k0 U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 T) X3 q6 ?4 p; }  P4 Y2 v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 c+ E' I& x( s9 y2 W7 X9 s/ M' D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% [# R6 V/ q! p3 y4 q3 C9 b8 X. W<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 v( f/ O! |$ N* I7 V) H* N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 v, z, `* ]% a2 D: V  }" A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ u1 U: d/ y# r, q+ S3 f$ Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  z. w, C2 |6 Q( I8 ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* H8 ]& L  a8 d5 i$ F9 Z% A8 {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. H6 U5 G) ~5 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: k; z' s+ X4 V. z0 ]( k/ ]  ]$ l/ z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 S' N/ x1 ~4 R0 ?' y0 b# i  m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 A. K; k2 l2 F2 W6 s' F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" _' F3 T4 N4 E7 t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( i/ X2 i2 j, p6 v6 }1 }% R' h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: v6 L  C( A- w1 B" @. K- ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ Y2 m. W2 t& Z( s' o  b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ `, }9 s* u: h, P5 {% x# J" V5 N7 g& e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 e9 _3 Y, e1 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ o$ P7 U8 k3 K  {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 j  j4 q# h- B6 o* a$ ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* n6 x5 i0 L+ ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* m5 h; p( ?! v, w+ }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 _; c) U! l6 S2 I$ u* ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: L4 m, R3 q+ o7 u* D<P>But I never did </P>
% m# g! h4 a" m& W! B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' v& ?. X0 R& t8 I! D& A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" e" C8 Q8 J" i/ q& J& R. Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! ^) ?5 w8 k1 d" W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 E  w8 ]& t0 b, Q0 Y0 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 @+ g7 e1 g# P" @! A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  t: n9 b% ^4 o6 [, |2 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 K8 f8 F/ M9 F( U$ C5 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ N4 p/ p; M# C( n0 i0 q, Z+ x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! E2 \7 S9 a2 i2 v4 R9 n$ E# }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' z0 Q/ @7 l6 A6 L7 |8 N, Z1 f% D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>