【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& m; O: R% F2 v# XI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ V$ r. [8 g" {$ u" F. eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 }4 t& Z: o/ z; l0 W7 O* PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, a+ r4 E) W+ ^6 g2 aBut I never did
1 P0 u5 S7 s+ Y; fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 L% z: Q1 U- g. K( C( f! QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. ~& h( a# X$ u/ G8 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 \1 z, ?- {* VBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 R: P+ y7 c0 w5 R  ^' NIf today isn’t too late,
7 [# r. z5 K0 Y7 i, a" t! RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 u% `# R& k9 U" ]6 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 |- c9 l7 a' d# P& v. h3 z/ B! cCan I entrust it to you?
# @* Q2 G2 E" wEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! u- k* P+ C$ S: _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ ]& H2 u) q% s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 Y  U7 Q( E1 C! y+ |* y, r/ q0 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" Z$ w0 I9 p  E' w- J0 A5 Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ h* ?* t6 V7 v) U8 J! p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 r/ B7 u8 M& V3 s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ z, X: b' p; t# Y+ n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 T# E$ r- @: D3 \, ]  T; Y: R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 d; P4 S3 T9 R) D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! y8 J. p4 V, c$ T3 ^' t' {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ r- O& x( a6 e. L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ q. E& s0 z8 V( h  s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) W1 ]: |9 [" }. M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 _4 Y/ S7 `$ O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 c$ n" {4 d  n# r! F6 t4 [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ G$ f) v/ _% C  n4 l' z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) j8 {4 Y, R, e' ~* U* v2 U( O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. B. c: h+ A$ y1 `4 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% `8 N* C2 y0 q% T; C7 D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 s2 a  d2 y6 @4 e* k& j! Z" j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 z: n) U5 e5 @6 L' b7 U  k( e* l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 Y% R; g# L  Y3 i2 k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 W1 m: ?! W' G) ?& s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 P4 f7 j0 n3 c5 _2 q6 ~* C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& d9 B1 W( B! Q/ `! q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# t1 I: U+ d9 |  n, j7 m; U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ w2 P7 m; g% N( W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 ^8 z8 V! A, J8 u$ u0 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 U" V5 I9 C+ V! ^- B, m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; r1 x' S. C- s  {, w3 ]# W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, l/ i4 G/ j; n7 M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>