【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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4 u" t# Y2 ?" ~' M8 ]7 }! l我另将歌词附在此。
$ v* Y0 V) e+ s+ `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 c+ X0 e# a5 i, ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. w6 H% i* \: u* L: z8 u4 o7 tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; z! C+ _6 k* O! EWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ `8 \- ^! A$ `/ o) ]I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% B- @; k& S1 VBut I never did
' F8 @- R: p- T' r' R3 e+ l  ?+ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 _, T, r% ]* M2 T3 P6 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ U2 K8 Q, K& H# U8 ?# ILove… just the word love
/ o( m" }* E' E9 N2 h# A$ ?6 K4 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- L* f/ j( h: w4 H: y( LBut I never did
! i' _8 x, Z  k# GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. V0 |& p9 L  X: D2 W% z2 HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 }6 }( |) `# k: SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& h6 w% z+ ]; w. t- k) X4 {Can I entrust it to you?
7 F" J# b5 G  {3 wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 b$ K' e2 x% b6 O; CEntrust my love within your heart

/ \8 a) h, D8 r0 B' X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( P1 }) \0 f5 M! y$ |8 h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ?( T- f3 k$ N8 Y3 |; Y% k, C" {; ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 C# {9 Q: j; J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* q; S5 [4 n6 b' ?  }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 e/ L& L0 r9 X9 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 `4 {/ J+ Z1 I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' P6 W' E! F! o1 k3 s( }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 ^" D) J7 C  p3 L" q: A9 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) R6 L  H& _, u. p1 i7 g) E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, v% c) C  J, M1 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( [- _; c4 ^6 u& j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' S; U2 z* s1 l  f, j" j/ W) W0 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 S% @3 l3 D& C4 Q- k! S, v# K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 ^3 R9 D- d/ n# z<P>但我不会</P>
. C5 s* P4 N- h4 L* i1 Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 ]8 L  i4 Z; g, h" p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* J% M! n. X/ r( K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  }& R3 V, N; T2 X4 D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# K! o/ w. m- y6 e( V( J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 y1 m+ L' M0 y' ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& Q9 b, F0 d  E4 B: |$ U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ l6 ]; V- C, _0 @$ ?  B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- N9 z/ j2 H" Q! K. P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, }. T! Q5 U7 q: ?% B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 s- X6 j7 v. b2 T9 V2 V; |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 w1 ^( V, [6 v  I: M3 p" C: z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  l7 r3 {; s+ y5 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 e  d  V/ g# m1 V( b# E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 q3 D' d( S; m* E( L3 X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ }! `$ m1 a: g7 r- y7 X- R这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* E$ n' y) M& w* b5 |# d4 [' i( b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 J( ?( y8 i- G7 V6 N+ O0 ]. f$ Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>