【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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$ V) E2 X5 Q$ v2 w' R4 x* @我另将歌词附在此。
, e+ L0 t5 B$ fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ b6 H( c* P# R, W- _$ |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( b7 @' G5 }7 K* _& U% \- V5 \We meet and talk everyday,
  h2 |9 `; s# z6 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' W+ V  s$ ~  J- a5 [% @% }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ s* o; S% R9 J' \6 O5 i! c, oI want to confess that I love you,
6 L4 p1 w* G# l. ?; GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( Z" R6 ]$ Q! Q  mIf today isn’t too late,
* \) b" A! ?- |' Z0 ^; A( x) {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& z: K* N( I9 a( wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. h9 [: P5 l. f/ c6 g% P5 M. }Can I entrust it to you?
) U, g( c* l# CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 K  y5 t% F3 M0 ?6 w+ NWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 {3 }6 {; z0 J* [" Q, bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 m8 ~1 f$ V" I( vIf today isn’t too late,
  ^% p* i, G1 z- }8 o2 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
* f$ @$ J. C2 @/ YEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 e' A- {& x8 Q+ J7 ?1 t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( P# A, k2 z1 V9 s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- ?+ i: K3 f, o2 j! }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 t' w- I& e7 U' P3 ?( N9 K3 S1 \5 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 ?1 _3 @2 ~1 i0 n( I2 x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 N1 E$ [. E% r  R9 L6 \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 t8 I* t9 X1 m7 r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 z: u+ @: y; p6 C5 Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 e9 {8 `6 f6 R2 `/ p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% N$ o( k3 o- }, y# f: |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) w- B- s1 f) f% q: _1 h0 F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 F" l* T3 `- k& t! {  b, b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. F( n: V) r: l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ R6 a+ `* v! S& E' |: W& w! s1 O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ^6 E; H! Q  V! K- J- m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: E2 c6 u  q# r& Y/ H. o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' I6 f  c! f9 F4 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 r5 H2 J0 r; c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& ]  G( x/ P8 H1 G& }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: @' u' Y7 j4 T9 Y: ?$ K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 H; |, p4 }" w, S: C; C0 u, p+ c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- ^( \4 L& Y2 G( C8 W- {' F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 r1 Y: y7 q3 @& P* D' p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# ~1 D6 t' M7 E( l5 R6 B8 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! y0 T6 {" E  @- p7 W, ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" h) D3 ^$ t/ h. V& @, z1 r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 i) R2 Y0 ^: k5 z& v<P>But I never did </P>
5 H9 {: V8 J- q" S# w<P>但我不会 </P>
  ?; O/ g* j1 O8 ^3 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  k1 C4 b9 M& `( `6 ~0 W3 \; G  g, M' Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ A# W- l" B: _9 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  g( _2 A3 w5 p7 V" V7 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 ?1 p! s5 s3 `, r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  D) R; Z# e# z- h3 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" r; L% g" m6 Q; {% b0 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: z  E* q! L+ R7 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 o/ C9 f* O2 Z( [4 X/ g3 u. n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: r* ^# H2 W2 ~7 t! {2 m( e7 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) w4 }, h4 C; o" W* P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>