【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 t  {7 z; o4 w* v7 Z4 |! \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ g' e4 O# e8 Z* M, u: s  Z/ m- o9 YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 h1 K1 X5 }& T2 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. E# }. z2 H: t% G9 aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& B# D* x. ^% |: z9 m" KIf today isn’t too late,
+ ^- B$ I. L5 W  O+ G% P4 |. VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) Z$ u- G! m7 S1 Q- FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  y) Y+ y0 z9 {0 r/ LCan I entrust it to you?
3 t9 b  W' i# }* M8 e' y7 oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- r# F0 K4 m( g, @. T  IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 f7 `  N& F! [  g) r1 t1 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 @3 X- z  K4 b% q; p& AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, Q* ]+ v- v" p: O2 cCan I entrust it to you?
* P7 F+ N3 Y' K( n! L2 C- h+ |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ z4 J- I2 y2 w4 @Entrust my love within your heart
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  O4 O" D; z) J8 R( |3 W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% y+ b! Y0 [2 k! n. [6 m5 p9 N% \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 w* N! V. R4 z* b5 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( `) X5 w9 E7 M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( R' O5 T  k  j$ A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 S$ K2 Q2 h  t2 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; u/ d+ B4 s6 \3 `% V) }7 R7 _<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# Z& j3 H2 z$ w* y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# c( C4 C5 j$ m/ Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ Z: }( b* y+ B& k) }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 ]+ M+ C9 K& ]8 F. ?4 Z3 [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* B1 C* j6 _/ v. O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  ^$ p! m5 K' h9 [2 X( g  ~/ b7 h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 Z( h7 ]' Q) \: i5 r5 d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 y" D1 X, n6 n9 D) x% f1 k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# v2 M& g7 z9 E3 P) ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 m4 G' N2 @% }' W8 s6 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 V# E, Y  L6 L' H) S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: S" Q* L, x& a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( l7 P# t3 J- y; M( x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ w$ `: H" H+ j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: O1 }2 |( @0 `7 F8 F  ]6 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' ]- g' q0 i' y/ b4 m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; i9 w8 v: I- A# r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. l) q& q! _3 G  ]: z; q/ C. }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- R  `0 T5 s4 `9 m: a  q+ X% B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 ~  [9 j3 M; B2 W3 s- |! B# A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 \9 W) k* M6 H2 m% I<P>But I never did </P>
) ]" b1 f9 ], q<P>但我不会 </P>
- V4 N. q+ C! g; E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 {: b# O( P7 T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 {* N- ]' L8 I% V1 _. ]$ @& j4 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! f6 Y! X/ M! N# s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ K1 N' o! ?% N1 Y" E$ c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 C+ V2 r9 b6 R$ T5 ]# Q! O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 C# N$ G" G$ f, F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  R8 l# w7 R6 `0 F- D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ~. ~% f$ b+ Z! _  N: g9 j( Z" ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% g0 z' d  s" R- k& f3 \. n5 ]3 X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' `3 W8 N5 ~- Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: ?1 ]" r6 ^5 D5 @2 _7 \% y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 o0 b& k2 D3 w* ~' J, {# g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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