【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. ?1 `: i) {- u; [; v我另将歌词附在此。
+ D/ b" z: o* f  Z6 R9 t  XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 l+ S: R, D. V! T" i" \$ h: {) c) A* sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" x: s$ j  t# f' ZWe meet and talk everyday,
: S! ]  p) }3 y$ x3 t1 mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 `; ^! h% d5 C5 [7 ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 ~2 \; s4 t5 h. ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) p7 G4 i' E; A8 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 e: E4 C. e2 `7 f! u) O! II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! F  i0 g, M9 O" a- F/ D- f' aEntrust my love within your heart
* k1 T( Y' a# O1 D* bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 ?6 F, v% p2 ~I want to confess that I love you,
5 T& i$ i0 z  J( e# NBut I never did
) v. Y1 |. t+ aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" L! v2 R2 L% a4 N- YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 E& B% D8 G1 U6 A; j" ~/ hCan I entrust it to you?
4 X: i% ^5 Y  b; W8 D* r" pEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! ]- y! D9 m5 B4 k( X  iEntrust my love within your heart

. Z7 x2 B6 ]" U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* D8 t2 n/ w% A  s) ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ E* d, p% _; T+ [9 ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* y) m" r9 ~% p* q: M' ]& @# T9 [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. A' g/ @# h- U' X" P7 n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) L/ m" v. ^* O% |& j/ K5 B- f* b# i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ ~& o' D2 Y  m+ D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  U1 d# K/ l- ]6 F, V# n' V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ \+ G  b$ N7 Z/ j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ u4 u. V, J: h% o. t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* A( {. a' D: c3 M' |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- e$ Z. c7 _7 D& n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ N7 b$ ^+ n: v+ g8 c5 r8 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  K, Z( @4 y* V2 m) G+ m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 q% j3 V  W' A" m: {. ~2 b$ h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 E1 w# P/ O+ w! I  {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: A( P# w% N. k- q, r+ }) }4 }" u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 y) F7 Z4 J) [1 d6 B7 C. f! O. ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; s% U0 l- B$ M: @4 S3 T! M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' q/ T/ m2 {6 C3 @* R% w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# \( w+ k" I( E# U% G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 A! e5 ]7 P) U; _! w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% ?* n, @+ W* H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 x0 `, [8 \/ _$ e  b, s3 Z# K/ J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 [) b) x6 s/ G" k2 S; U0 [( ]3 ?; O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( H; o5 w, v* d& _' c7 e  n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, L2 \: m" \' |, c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: ^; w* w! o% d& V7 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! L4 j/ o0 S1 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 U7 W1 ~$ d" l6 u8 q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  r6 ]/ v* E3 K6 n: C- f6 e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ S& o) v. J  t- k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>