【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 P# a/ k4 H4 Q' _! L1 J我另将歌词附在此。
2 d+ N$ t5 R( U$ KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 k+ Y) t1 u- u( Z( I/ KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" w! D7 i9 M' h+ w7 t' l3 u% gWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  _9 J' g/ q( N4 |0 g% RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ t- z3 \7 `4 i( U7 S. ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 p% B: a* ?* `. [  d8 N: dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 s5 {0 |( Z8 c5 R! H6 A5 U6 q! eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: M9 F7 U- O- L  B) SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: r( s9 y7 X, }- _& dCan I entrust it to you?
- Q+ W) A& F8 v0 \4 M1 `Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 B7 S! `9 v% w: ]2 p# W0 K( TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( x% Q% a( i. u6 D: M9 A) P; M  O! X) s& VEntrust my love within your heart
/ F3 \: L5 d$ N1 C! FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ `' h* U8 C+ v9 M2 x' y$ p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. j; z3 a' k& y# Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- o' I$ @- |6 j. `5 h1 Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 i+ x5 F( Y, z, m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 S$ ^4 t# q* q$ J. A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; @9 j+ q, z+ ~& G% l; m' Z# q, X$ V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 V, m6 p$ z- R5 w- D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. A% J3 V3 o/ z4 l" A) H0 P+ u<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  y- j, h. s: l9 q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% p  D1 H3 S9 i5 Q+ e# T0 `8 w6 t) z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 q8 D9 d3 \% m& t- P" V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* K' U5 [$ i" F6 K- w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ m0 {8 x- M; S# f9 A* `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 m8 C, A+ b- F4 {2 ?- J% d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 G  o  o+ Z+ H& I4 w( b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, x* D" N% R9 Y+ d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ a4 p4 h/ J( p& Y# K0 X& Q& Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; ]0 W. X) M9 Q, A( \* W. @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 A' ~) b2 }" m3 |  }) x2 N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  `2 e7 b+ H# e8 G7 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# v5 [; |* d- r; P/ j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 O# n; R, q$ j2 m. j1 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* T" ~" g0 P% c- \0 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 x. \6 U3 y! u8 o& `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  E5 P1 q9 r: _" W, f# {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 O. a- U& |  U; e0 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* n% j2 N2 \* ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' Z1 v/ S9 V5 n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! c' L, ~- D- l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 N: F  Q7 E/ l$ h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>