【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 k" E2 K! ]/ z6 f' a2 ]3 B( n我另将歌词附在此。
1 Z6 R/ ^5 V$ [9 X6 FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ f3 V+ ?6 x- C3 K4 H' ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( F6 _, K) D2 e4 E; ?- J" a% kWe meet and talk everyday,
% f. p; L* e: N  P+ \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 Q/ W- y$ H  n0 YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ p2 T& W( m# x1 L. BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 t7 k3 \0 x% E. f& [I want to confess that I love you,
, q* Y" a- O  |  F6 |, \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; Y0 d8 H. h9 a% ^8 eIf today isn’t too late,
: V& G4 M% T! U  wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ w$ D/ k% |0 c( H( j- MEntrust my love within your heart
$ W1 h: X. b" c& P+ L3 kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ {5 _( u3 f& |% K! Z, o! b" PI want to confess that I love you,
- b: ^2 @: n* @/ P- aBut I never did
( G, ]9 ^6 l7 ?8 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& v+ ?' N1 r. L' ]- TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 W! V' e( {6 R% N# N* c  [% qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" G4 @+ e" m8 _; b) _6 X$ ~4 Z2 bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, O4 ^) p' Z/ E2 q) s) L' l% KEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ [3 u+ ^( I) ?) [8 x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 G/ i. O/ L# t5 x9 L1 H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 A8 Q. k$ B' s% v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ ~# |$ c5 c9 S; c; q3 @# F% {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 o  C9 D$ B; m$ ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# g' D, L1 w0 `5 z1 w& C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# M) v5 w* J9 l& I! s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 g/ u2 H- T: u$ @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) e6 ^! k7 U+ U5 z7 P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. F" s3 w% @( y" }, k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: H2 o  ]' G( A  ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! J( ]6 O5 o/ }0 E/ |- o& b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. S6 g9 z& l$ s; s: e8 M; f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- X6 `* ?9 l9 n1 |, r  X1 {0 ]5 X: ?' _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% {9 ^4 Y5 i' I5 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 ]. [: A% W* Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  [" Y0 Y) Y, M7 W- w5 D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 H( }, J3 R, e4 A0 {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  c0 f3 |. S' b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 _5 F0 z9 e( O# l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 d% ]. J* [7 U2 c7 }' A2 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 S3 U  ]+ Y; l$ X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  M: G0 {' v0 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' I- T' S' C: K0 g+ ~/ M. z0 q6 ^" i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# e  L0 R* ?) p7 R9 f6 `# h* b5 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 E. _/ F0 k3 w4 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ i$ l) W, T6 O5 A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# u' ?+ f. e+ D3 [% z+ b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 C2 o- R' R/ i+ M' {, `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 i8 l& X3 q/ F: z  a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# J) L/ e: f2 p/ c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>