【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
; |  r' H2 T9 v9 U+ e2 p5 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 A# g3 G5 C" }1 e1 V" ?- NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 ]8 W7 m+ t- F3 [& pFrom the first moment we met,
9 g9 x: k- l& Z4 z5 j. cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# j" L9 D* ^! {: J, k+ |/ uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 ?. k8 a% W7 }( X3 }Why is it so difficult to express?
! }8 ]0 z- H6 K! e0 `8 ^. OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 w$ z  H& E  R! m0 V& x0 f& g% w) sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. w3 i- C2 Y4 A3 B7 Z3 RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! a* i5 d2 L+ `0 p# k7 J; ?. \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- ]; C# G9 M. PEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* J4 m5 x: {8 d1 o) T- MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% `$ r! ^* [' x. y. k( vIf today isn’t too late,
6 O9 B& A# L3 |- L- x" ^, D' sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 s/ ^9 h+ a! Q& w+ |0 U, l+ n" YCan I entrust it to you?
' V- t+ n/ k$ i4 x" s0 E% {Entrust my love within your heart
% S# B- Q* a) m  q: {# c1 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 t) Q+ Y, e2 M. l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' b$ X% o/ A: }2 m. K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& H6 N7 w) A# k$ q( N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( u5 I( B$ U. [4 e0 Z- O+ L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 \7 p: _+ S: I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 V7 n" H- R) S8 j/ W# ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. E# i. d" |# ]( b/ U7 k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ M5 e/ V! h  p( E# F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) w6 k, L6 P8 d3 M. z; S& d" _% H# {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' a8 n% v% q7 Y5 O+ k% W- o: \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, K$ m- L. T9 V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ u6 D3 a; f0 @6 j+ F% z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* e, z% r+ H" B' y, f; k+ O# {. }) a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; \8 y! l5 E3 S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ F" U& }; M5 C- s4 A# x, X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 S' b, |! T) L4 k! V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: ?( J& r1 _; i* g# R; m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 F  D+ E) y& ]9 @6 I; L( C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# C# }. _9 h! R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ K  S- v9 h. w7 U3 F6 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) o7 @: ?2 E: v7 W  |' l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' A* L# M4 w3 D- m& A. }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; s) \$ c. h' \$ d$ f2 r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  l- q: F* c; K6 e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 `/ W0 R' q1 h+ k9 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! D, `7 h  w" L3 E" X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* E9 F- T$ [0 g9 m% a; n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) Z% Q7 I% `1 t& @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 H! w, Z3 R) u' t1 U2 ~4 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' t  _* _. W5 z, p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 A% b# u8 z" Y" T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ f8 T  g5 G) i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 b; q- y0 ~+ P/ x! Z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 X- ^. p  }( C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! g& U( D% l' @6 v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>