【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 [) [3 f$ h% @% y$ B, W- `From the first moment we met,
9 v4 F# O, K0 |9 w7 Q" eI already loved you with all my heart
  p- o* ?! k- y- z  `/ M$ D/ u4 t3 z5 qWe meet and talk everyday,
6 u7 Z+ r  f" n9 O; hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! f9 ?) @) j6 J; ?+ }I would probably know how you feel
3 N3 X6 f3 l! {& \Love… just the word love
/ n* T1 T: @7 s+ yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: }) g, c8 y8 ?- q, H. i0 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 q9 M6 q5 f1 J5 u4 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 z0 ^0 a, R$ |( v' kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 P+ X" M2 u0 B9 X  t1 vLove… just the word love
6 b0 }& d* U: ~8 T4 K- L4 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 |5 }9 O9 ?2 {) S" SI want to confess that I love you,
. L" ?2 K7 m/ E5 {* yBut I never did
4 w& k2 p, X' c6 m( q: Z/ eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: E* a* m0 l5 v9 T9 H+ v6 `4 u( NIf today isn’t too late,
3 {9 A+ }: Z4 K1 ^7 L! J  a- u; fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 ~# A8 D5 J! Z. _Entrust my love within your heart

  }% e6 E0 c0 v4 A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  c) V$ t/ u4 i# [5 Y+ U" V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( a! b* d/ |1 w, ~! s& N% D) J/ d; t& x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: q! `8 _3 H7 w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" @4 H7 |" P& N6 H# @8 H5 u" w( R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" b; v9 w& N- O' }! {+ w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. k/ ~: N2 g( O' G  x5 Q. o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* a3 ^; S3 ^4 ?8 Z3 d9 m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, v  Z4 o/ K4 j& O1 `5 s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 @9 N0 p8 \' [4 E6 M- e7 V6 r! d+ J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# t1 [/ V' z& \) `5 x8 }7 e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 ~1 A* p+ Y5 D3 Y0 J" H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 A4 w4 l+ \! `) `& Y0 O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 t) o3 }& ^2 E6 k9 e+ s; R5 m' y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 ?( r" n! h/ C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 q" }& Z& }. X0 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 e& H. T9 }; i3 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 R) P8 Z4 x( U/ l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 S* ~7 Q. a# A. g3 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: d& e/ T: @: e  |( X2 p5 Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& D$ `* _7 c  U. R3 |0 a5 Z* s<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 b3 W# n; z3 J# Z/ r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; `7 o. {) w: D" c+ A1 j. [! ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& P! C% i9 |6 d* f5 {# W2 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 u' w* L. _% e2 F9 Y/ i9 ]0 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* r$ Z  l* Y8 A. Q* A, ~' \$ T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 D. i! A) E9 s" n; n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( c/ s* K' ?7 e" _* j) ]* {5 s' {) A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 \0 ]# |2 L8 E8 l; _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 C# K( ]6 Q0 r2 j# ]6 {  @* l; l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 Y- t( R  t  L4 a, B: F2 u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ q( K0 T2 U$ M% f/ C$ H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' R. d  c& I% G) K4 W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& o5 f  v% w9 [: W" [, g, V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>