【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: q; G6 q. w: x+ t3 g: @6 TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& x" o9 r1 E5 }From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. c* i" A) C5 ]. s) A+ i; xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  s" b" ~* v6 w: jI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% l( e3 S2 A; F7 I1 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% m- s& ?  l, P% ?4 r) kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 I+ l# t) Y  Q- G- a# DCan I entrust it to you?
' N. A( T1 {/ e# w; c1 O8 T/ CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ P6 A' ^  {8 Y8 Z/ yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. m) _* b. Y" Y5 D8 OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) N% ~. r+ v& b6 v6 u: ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ U6 }) A1 ?8 m7 sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ^8 Y0 [) k% }# s# r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" Y8 R( m& {4 h; h2 N" C- r- F( }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! [/ L2 J# w1 T1 K! @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 k3 R& `, m9 Y" H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  V5 Y% W2 e0 e  U- u9 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& r5 b$ P6 j" }6 G& C' ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ V) J* H9 ^2 R. h$ h. w! E/ W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ H& h& W) J8 `7 O8 `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. C# s8 f- h, p  _& r) F. W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, k5 p9 w% y7 }4 i. m% E" }5 G3 @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 L' y9 K6 p& z% e% q. P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. l  _* C& }5 O+ i* P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 G% H1 H1 Y( m0 O6 _: ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 k* o! N( P/ Y0 `) e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( w+ Q- l; p8 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 V( ~" p9 z- H) F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! o; I! T7 ^2 [- }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ `& D/ }: p# D) P! i3 Y# u7 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& V. T4 @" v' `& s/ a9 K! S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. s6 T! ~* @  N8 V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! s/ x3 u4 S  U; Y8 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 |- U9 P3 X/ x+ k9 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* @9 o2 w" v4 a8 ?: r- j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ o+ W% y5 X" s& j$ V7 @. e/ i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 s/ H7 f7 U+ t: X+ r1 I; ?; t- l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, W7 h0 P1 S+ u; f& a6 i<P>But I never did </P>
5 \4 c$ q" d" y' }, x. u% l7 k1 Y<P>但我不会 </P>
* g  |" e6 A! W% c$ z* T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ ?0 y6 q6 O9 m8 p+ E# }, n: D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 b/ i- M* I) ^  J  H& }3 X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 O* o+ a% n. d2 Z6 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ T+ h4 Y1 u% x! N9 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 r1 ^$ O" ^1 S  M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 x  Z: y( ^! T8 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* |$ E+ z- D! N2 D1 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 R. a: u  T- F% {8 n- q* P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, [$ O" e3 r  x3 S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' W3 u! M; i& p+ H. @# I* f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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