【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 W. j) [! `9 {# E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ b* Z. G; y, N7 m3 G: x: S1 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ K# [, e! r1 [  e7 U- ~4 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 L, U' Q9 ~) |( l- l: {% V; TI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ c! ?/ f# T/ a. RIf today isn’t too late,
; E5 J$ q7 u; }( [6 a, q9 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* A, w9 u' E( c* K& c( oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; q/ w( ~" R/ vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- W) {5 ]; ^8 U7 Y4 n/ h# VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( a; P# _: q0 c" S  J* g( o6 D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* w6 J+ Y0 C8 A  v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 O; B4 k- T) K$ f7 K: M6 I4 s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ ^) Z/ k0 C# @9 x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ N: n! x) S. I+ o3 W( O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 c$ t4 Z+ `' c3 N. ]% z1 f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) u6 @, m" C- D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( N3 S0 K' ^. X; }! c# P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ n; V; }: Q: ]" o( L$ [+ ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 P6 k" o: s: M! R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 z9 A: F9 ?& `5 I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 x( B5 i4 b5 ]" X' E9 F% `# }, Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& ?& j2 G6 t( n  Y& Q) t# K; q<P>但我不会</P>
8 @4 y8 q- G0 C) r5 N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* w! U9 L2 |% k# E( [: w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; G! W* z, e9 t9 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ n3 p( `* P% o' M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; u" P2 b/ {( n* g# }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( ~; W7 g( t7 k7 j  a: ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! W% _- Q$ d) l( g5 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* }* P9 Y( W# r& ?3 ~5 s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 A' H0 t2 U, r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 P4 V8 b- N. ]# p! _4 ?! o+ u( G% D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% \' ]/ ?1 |7 u6 ~9 A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 W( S& L0 S/ u2 c% E/ X  z4 Q  B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, E" ~% \2 o' I  T: W, {/ Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ O) t  L3 T# D, t# i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* k! E$ n5 l7 v  v' \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; E( v: J3 Q4 h) Z5 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 r  Q. L2 x5 T: j( a/ g! o, Y1 U9 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 G# L; w5 u2 Z+ J3 t1 @$ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. J# y- N; v  x+ k5 I3 I" H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 u1 m. V" c/ N) M% i1 r, J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ I( Q* m/ a# ]; l, x- @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ @5 E6 d- j$ }( m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 s( _) n- g* ], m3 X3 E6 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ C3 m- T. u5 O8 r7 Z8 m' ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>