【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: f$ r) B# C% g6 U, H, r/ PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ ?9 n% a8 y: Z( bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 Q9 q$ X4 k2 J7 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* `2 E: S5 M! n  o8 M& nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! c/ K2 r; B4 GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 z% ~+ w/ U9 q$ `' \: _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 Q5 O  t$ |# tCan I entrust it to you?
9 P. W2 o, v8 L" fEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% y5 l# w& N& y( `- oEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; i1 j, l. \. k3 t8 ?0 i* `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% Y2 n) ~8 O# p7 v' ~1 Q  g7 Q$ J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: M8 w1 ]$ Q/ z! ?% \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 Q) ~3 [8 J: k6 X9 o  b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* T- y1 }6 ^& ]8 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 V2 P8 H: Z* I" o" R) G- Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, C6 j+ f/ N$ V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 V4 D" T2 q8 Z# f# D8 }( t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% _6 b. y! M! M1 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) C  I7 K; `* Q2 G* O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; A! D! H  j# _0 A9 m9 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 m7 k! i/ f) E4 Q6 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 @4 i3 F, a7 G7 p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 l" _1 e7 S1 P" z( {  V1 z$ H. {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. Z9 Z0 B  w' J' ]% L# w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" k- t: t6 x! g4 ~<P>但我不会</P>
( U0 I7 t! I. [0 ~) {7 }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( K' ]* @  V; N) F# G, D  g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 ?, _3 y& }) O9 M. K. C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ |8 h' p4 y: _! ~3 w( }! j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 b7 z( V% P" }; K9 ]+ Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 D+ m" q) V! V0 Z1 {' h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% I6 I. I; e- T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 q) j3 }, r: t5 Q* ~% S* d& n9 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- G( W5 r9 h$ W/ j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 @  Y3 H/ }0 q7 |, h" \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' n1 u! T/ P" }3 }; H* y2 E. a9 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 h, |6 H7 s0 I+ G$ d7 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' r& Z0 ?! e7 J, a9 }3 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 f# p, s& d! f% Y5 M8 Q( E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 x; N' @8 b& b6 Q: _# e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* u7 Q2 m* j* ~( h0 V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. c9 w) K. n' \0 a, {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ [' o' n" M3 ?1 I# S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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