【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! |/ g( v8 e( CFrom the first moment we met,
6 c: T$ U! Z2 k8 Z' J+ O4 F" kI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: e$ @% J0 Y* g. g, I) J& eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; t. F; U- Y) ~8 j( MLove… just the word love
+ j5 _  G9 h6 X& bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% B* U7 W- p* ?- w9 d; `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 S) J+ D& C3 a8 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- Y* G" t. {5 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ r* s# [1 J2 g( Z; p% yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ d/ B( m' ?0 c. e) N' Q1 h/ TLove… just the word love
% f, N$ b& W* Z& L7 q. Q+ g) D" zWhy is it so difficult to express?
  d% j8 W2 [6 Q) `. s6 C8 j& b% zI want to confess that I love you,
! I% C& q' j9 b  ]' ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 M/ h# R2 _4 z( z6 W: rIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ B7 V0 J4 E( r2 m+ CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! v2 A. k) c% pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 |2 I1 z  k* g: D8 m1 DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! A' K) W1 O6 g7 Q/ h# V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* U" `3 ~; _# t. w, I: r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 ]& }# r/ ~/ ]9 B0 g9 l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. U9 Z5 @1 @9 Y* y1 g& Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, k0 e& ^5 _# a6 }  r3 U6 `/ `7 ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 D& F5 s. x+ l; W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) H# M: y4 Y; f* x8 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, k: u! g- ?( Y5 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ \! N1 e$ o) T& C3 H. q8 L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 u# t! c# O! U/ @+ V; V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 Y2 Z0 r4 M# o& P. p  v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: i6 j) {* y( t- y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& F- I: J4 _  B  U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; B- B3 D7 g- y& t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; L# R5 k5 J& S2 E8 Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- v! M; N* g( d( ?: n. }7 ]+ M( l2 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 C" q) x; d) M$ j9 j7 g/ k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ c3 O$ N3 |; z8 Y$ ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 j; s" H/ L8 T( Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: w: I$ Q% X5 ?  r3 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- w+ J) J" g* X; X5 ~6 r- Z6 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 R( y- W" y4 Y/ [9 |; n0 C5 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 {5 p- Z0 Q# \+ Q3 _: B1 N# r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' [/ O9 c3 m! B& f  a4 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ I, A" t0 X  g, J<P>但我不会 </P>
- n9 M2 D. o6 n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% L. x5 N/ k7 _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# B! j0 C+ [( L: d3 Z; t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 T5 t- I$ e5 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; v4 }' F- ~1 n' l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( ~) T& y8 r4 i. `; Q( s+ v8 m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  J) n- G4 X8 E  z8 n- k8 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 O& h$ u( ^2 J$ s" B( E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 Z( w: O( b! W6 ]0 M<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' C! K& `8 Q6 z3 H) u' U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ H' t" b8 O0 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# J. |) @3 Y5 k6 b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' f' Z' v9 A4 f" v2 V+ |# J9 b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>