【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, o! e7 j3 L/ X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ T1 n0 n$ x7 ]* `& @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; a5 |9 J. N( ?; LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% T4 Q) B! j' X* |5 `I would probably know how you feel
0 H/ m- _# b- x! ULove… just the word love
& C9 W4 X0 s# Z$ [Why is it so difficult to express?
7 ^  \* Y5 d2 h. G) h! J; gI want to confess that I love you,
# @3 _) c# e3 @! k! c8 N6 h8 UBut I never did
' p/ E6 k' F! S6 B4 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; J; G& H, ]7 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: H; v8 n! @( bEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! `* _& z# B( L' w6 SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 k2 }, F# b$ Y* \- WIf today isn’t too late,
8 t5 C  b& D" l7 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* k5 F2 A; K# d9 N( _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, e  t; z9 R1 l) i7 t2 nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 [$ e1 ?: H" _7 V: c* U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& c% }. \. G$ |" B5 _7 |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! `4 U7 r/ T) @$ s" C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% r$ V+ s8 O* u! y1 Y$ {( O6 A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& c% V( U+ k( z& j1 y3 P0 V7 }4 k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- I8 x0 `- ~' S; w7 q8 [; \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( g2 N* H' t3 `! d3 g* E! r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# K5 x. s, o& B  q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 c) l5 l: R5 o; A  O, S& o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 L. q" D9 w! ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& I* t# i4 V# R) `$ a( B# g  C5 _$ |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 q- t1 V- g/ e, p5 G' o: p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! V$ u/ {; m! L5 q; t& P( b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& X: W0 b2 ]& x! ~+ _" ^: `# i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# C# ], @3 h& w* w- @9 \0 W- A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, X, Z9 ~( A( x; h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, [$ N& t+ c, z# t. l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* Y. k" l* u! [. W6 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( T, B/ C+ d$ n2 P3 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 }  K3 V" y, d$ ]6 x" ^( v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, e+ {: A, I1 ?+ i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, j- P5 T) l/ Z" F' H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 t% s+ G; v6 P0 c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' \6 |& }7 @( c4 `. Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; Y9 ~1 c, W/ z" ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, v+ @* K, W8 t4 D, _8 y. b! r+ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 I5 i. U* L/ }% t! C7 t  `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. m, P; m9 P# K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 g; k# ?2 h1 v5 l, S! G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* E/ F' ?# b% i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 U: W0 L' e" c) [; X. Z( U( B) h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& P6 y' {1 O( H% a4 N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>