【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 h+ X, y5 k- t2 z: p, g+ h4 X- sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 C, u: i' n9 D3 m! bWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* ?: e  B+ ]; A7 y# _5 s5 r4 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
% O5 [  C2 |* m7 l7 e. oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! m; b! F# K, p0 U" X) MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 C& Y) c* @  V% ]5 |% E" G, J5 HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) s; s) r( q, v1 i# R# }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) [" W2 l' c8 q: p1 _% M& ?2 C+ SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% u' s1 Z; O6 c) B, E5 ?8 ~* {7 E8 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 t) Y5 B2 y& F4 n6 N/ i5 BEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 G: F$ h' Z( X8 E" ^Entrust my love within your heart
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( d7 d' ^/ M/ d! F) O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 `+ j( @! E7 W( U7 f% Q% t' U! W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) [* ?+ Q/ a2 y0 Q( T; n  ~; g7 F4 _<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& i7 r8 M, S* \9 O1 {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 U% f! ~9 {3 g  H% B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. k7 c! h4 k0 s% y9 P, S# ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! a! x. ?8 R' i+ c: z# j, Y( C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 E. Q0 h/ r9 H1 |/ Z  \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) o) [( @+ n8 L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& H( O; X9 [% ]* P3 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# \  v+ U! g7 l, n3 ~1 y* `& [! Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" [: g0 f: t2 }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 l% N: F0 q! u, g( `9 R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* ?3 n( B; o! X' f: j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ [) w) f- O3 d: H7 w3 I' V4 X6 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( T/ }, n% ?$ X0 n( \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ P  X6 B6 Q3 [" |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 {9 h' b# r4 e5 S7 V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; `. G. m6 ?8 C  j. I! K. G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* o( x+ _1 Y& k  t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" K, h% H' J9 _( B3 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; [- U/ a5 U: ~1 k3 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) Y& o2 [' \5 t$ T$ ?2 O6 m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ^8 z$ e' b  o0 J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 v- |9 X4 |$ g4 }( h<P>But I never did </P>
; j/ ?  n) o8 n9 W# Q* {. L<P>但我不会 </P>
7 ]& c& ]. e2 X% U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 f- V" }) w; v- s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  H$ \1 [' @8 ^2 S/ U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: b- g9 T6 _2 _, t4 F: r1 A) ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: ~1 d6 [! _% @0 J8 m# `- m& t  {3 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' f& |8 M! [8 y* x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- }, l; l/ O* U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* T2 M% u6 L) L" p5 G  K. o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 v4 w* u7 J5 _3 J4 U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>