【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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3 p- w, o. I4 A; y2 _- A$ f; x% q5 R我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% _8 T1 l2 L4 s" uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ o) @" `3 G4 C( K& _" E; pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 u( \, m' R) L( X+ k, d. N, a$ _- ^Love… just the word love
$ Y. K. j" T/ L5 G: gWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ I- j( Q; q, X$ y) z- |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! `+ |% m8 Z7 j2 h, s4 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( _9 O$ f) q: [! X% RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ j3 v% H7 }0 Z+ ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! e- S) W' a- y7 \1 vLove… just the word love
. n- Q: g7 z0 Q: KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" S7 ^$ k) p: i4 b( EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- X9 D! p) `' A; ?7 v0 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 V, A: y; l8 ^, T" N8 x3 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 U9 i8 W( l5 ^- L) _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 {" V0 j& y& p. {9 q1 n# QEntrust my love within your heart

1 V6 I. Q- l$ d+ g$ @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( k6 P+ Z" S8 E7 S' d) d! g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 x. I' o3 G+ j5 j8 B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" Q9 H3 i$ Y) a) }" x' ?8 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) S% @+ l$ k2 H  w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. C. Y" h5 ?& l9 z: T  e& B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" x6 `2 X0 R8 r' k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ s  l5 P8 }+ n' j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; d# A/ L( T/ p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* [, B! x7 E; J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* A; h7 B6 l6 [5 d0 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! y$ E: p+ P5 _<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) F$ y% O6 C5 M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% f2 ~9 ?' [, Z) u. C, g  ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ U7 H7 G: M  ~: e. W1 l2 J9 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  ]7 W: W. D8 o8 k) z9 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' l" ]2 C# _/ k! I: l7 @; ]  a; ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 B, k3 w3 }3 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' a( b, C3 d& u7 b" S# I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 w) P; s2 e/ v1 E5 L# h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( y! T, Z' J( _7 \* S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. h+ X5 f2 m: W0 V; s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 B2 O$ _1 i8 E, o3 d+ u1 a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# ?# g, `# l5 G/ B+ r& b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 n$ u0 C. a7 @* j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) `8 o" u/ m5 ]' i& G1 [2 I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 v; n, }: D; E( G/ n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 b, r+ p; F4 E0 @; [: n+ G' m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>