【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 k5 \3 h5 [6 N0 f' c# {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( g; d' k3 d1 G7 hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ ]2 H2 x6 I6 g3 R* [' XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 k3 O0 T  w$ X+ x8 lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, g2 _$ v$ A, D4 Y( C- C8 hLove… just the word love
7 O# U* o5 b* J5 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 I1 p* q! z; Z; HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( J0 K6 y& O. `& ]4 C3 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% O" b, r% b% f& ]% m" w8 ?8 _I want to confess that I love you,
# l' c% a" L4 h; ?$ p  j4 U$ zBut I never did
/ I6 [' q! [1 \( |' jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% e& ~+ Z3 d& [# c+ i7 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 w3 V, \) k+ [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ^: P# x- E8 j# @& V. N  vCan I entrust it to you?
' g3 y$ Z& q# h3 d$ DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 g. s0 K" D/ K9 n7 A$ XEntrust my love within your heart

( M: e/ r& n! c/ A, `% g. e4 @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( d& t5 j' y0 x8 t0 j  V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- t  k: l6 X# x6 p/ ^& l) B<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 I0 s/ X: C; o  {' @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 I4 ], A- I% J  Y- d9 R2 J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 x2 |1 Q) _( E* j. E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 ?$ b: y3 e9 y; c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  t1 o) H/ s# |$ {! H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ }1 a1 z( ]1 h& {. g6 X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, n% {% {* L8 I# T2 U6 N. u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 n7 t0 S0 c( Z1 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) _6 q9 v! B! |# ^  M) U7 L1 q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 L* p: G+ h( ^9 P( ?* h; V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! g/ O$ i/ h. C  C* h2 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' j( `4 b  m3 W' T0 e, u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) m" D: f$ M# s1 Q  N$ @2 b+ `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) S0 r% ~* ?1 ~& c+ _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 t) f3 B/ ~* N% A9 Z% U5 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ~* K1 ^1 Y* H1 U3 D8 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ U, N+ A8 e0 E3 \% o. b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; [0 b/ l9 `3 n# R" k+ W# _3 @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  g  d7 i& A1 G0 t5 n* W: v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ y1 U1 q. s/ W3 _; O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 O% i/ u; U6 ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  \! L( D) I2 K7 t; @* I<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  t. H6 q5 k0 B' ]5 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& I2 s8 G$ I/ E0 G. l5 v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ v5 v3 D) J' z) K# y& A( g, v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  b$ X: h9 K8 p" L7 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' j! D9 \2 w, O5 D& A0 `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( n% ]% O" J" i: V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 r( @; j# D! R: z' I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" A+ a( u' n- V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- H8 m# G! r0 E% U$ Z; Y& h; T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>