【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
1 o6 r( v+ {0 Y. \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ s. x( r: H9 T7 JI already loved you with all my heart
9 s9 P3 D* l( A8 B& U) Y/ iWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 k! \: |5 H8 ?% Q4 ]+ u3 iI would probably know how you feel
# h4 Z- k$ N3 n6 Q$ s1 HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( z& G; E1 c9 h$ ^I want to confess that I love you,
! ~5 V# J! f# N4 h; X: q* V6 ^0 _! |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ y/ f4 z3 L- P1 s- z8 W  [2 UIf today isn’t too late,
3 v/ C/ b7 Z! w1 M  }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& t. u. K5 H* J& [7 c  y" ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 r( _* V$ B. G3 J) u* _5 UI want to confess that I love you,
; ^. A0 c$ F5 D8 k8 sBut I never did
9 g7 [' f8 A$ [7 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ @7 j& M# {/ H9 B! s/ w2 EIf today isn’t too late,
& S8 }& T  R! t* CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 E- B8 Z9 Q6 u2 c0 Q# ]1 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& Q' [5 R8 m8 Z' K3 \5 ?Can I entrust it to you?
( K9 g5 d4 d8 M; }6 A! J) p/ t8 WEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 b1 }. g5 t8 ?. o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 R, ?' S6 V" K3 `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! }: b& y! X5 t+ O1 s2 V2 U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 X3 x0 _0 A! o3 t! h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 e4 R/ M  X$ k& V& i/ D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% ?/ V6 k. J% ]3 ^( b( h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- `$ Y# n+ ^" Q* p4 ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; G& v" \& k: x: P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( h! Q, u$ b  x3 P" S4 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 R/ h+ {/ q0 t5 u, t: h6 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 X; s7 z' o- T2 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& f; |# W1 o9 J! y) f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 W6 U' B: K1 G" |' l8 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- k7 T4 q$ N: o) `) W" n7 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 N+ [6 c+ E( |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* Q' z( Y, t( K! t1 N) B' ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 g4 h5 k$ y( h6 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 q) E  Y. s6 C8 u) v7 O6 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# b+ I' b* t6 c2 a9 o0 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! d- R6 _" L# l1 C, k3 t* k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ~! u( q  R! R" v9 n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ b1 T% D' s5 j" `& p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ r  I% q  \, v  \3 h& m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, G. G4 f1 X  v% C- {: e<P>But I never did </P>
9 t, A% i9 r1 z5 q) g<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. o; h. Q# u! N, w8 a7 Z: I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& d$ Y7 K* I0 c& ~  @  ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  u* V0 D! q- Y1 H6 _: h9 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ y0 x# N; g$ S8 m- }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& V' g  X4 m, ^- x1 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 X2 }1 w8 j1 r$ {0 `0 I. x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) F$ b) j2 n, x) x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 n( M: i) _6 J! I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ r7 P) R1 c, y  G3 S( X6 L4 C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>