【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
9 T' _2 b9 B( L9 b6 Q
2 B0 }& }, Z) @9 x0 ]* M, k
* e" ]5 X7 S$ H" N<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
) U3 `0 r; Z2 m! b% U( v

$ ~6 q, u. ^% o: T我另将歌词附在此。
; u- c8 B6 `4 h, f5 p* _8 yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; h: `: ~5 d8 q) E- y# W$ iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  n+ Z: j/ w) G% G; u3 rI already loved you with all my heart
. I1 |8 [  P1 G7 p4 N8 Z0 oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ {3 q# _3 i! B8 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, X4 I% B* ^9 c9 ^& R6 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! f' h& ]1 a; A5 p1 _Entrust my love within your heart
& r1 E) x. Q( S& TLove… just the word love
2 c; H$ k2 R* |* PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 q. d" P7 c: u3 c' C% H. w( @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 N0 `  u7 y. g7 v0 YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 q& r5 }9 p: R" B4 q2 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ u& P6 p- `6 j1 W1 R
; E& F4 u# {- w; j/ S2 K3 B2 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& I2 `& x: z( r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( p% o$ v9 T; L* g% d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( c2 M- W) ^1 s& b; z1 H' U7 @, B, D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ G% ~$ ^- [6 I7 n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ k  @* A# P/ v* [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  x$ }, ]: J. V9 i! e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 E0 L. H3 Y$ o- x. n2 |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 b% C/ \; T6 S7 |, k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& w3 E4 @+ O. q2 {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( ?- q+ E8 Y- I8 N; S' H, ]; ]* f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, L' W" \- Q6 M<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: @0 h/ [0 [& d<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) q8 Y9 ~, ^. S! J# e' z& }7 S0 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' h6 C, |+ Z. Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 d5 a5 j! O9 S1 Q% a6 S: l* E! N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& g' k* @0 b9 C  j3 Z* x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# e3 `6 }' v  E- V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. P. [! Q* t" |+ b& V) H! C# C9 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 w, E0 N0 u0 z: x+ j$ D<P>But I never did </P>
& }# p0 b! Z, d1 S- E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 }- q' h5 `. K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 `8 _  C6 T8 ~, a& z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( M# r' m& z9 g, _+ p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  J  c" p6 I$ v, z) E3 y2 H% N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* @- H, i6 g' l, D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
& Y& c, G0 |2 c
: f2 X  Z! Z9 Q, ?* C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: e3 V, {0 B( O- |7 p
- [1 z9 D5 I5 N* `7 n# v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

, [& E6 B7 f0 M( z, H<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
9 a; j5 X9 y6 r+ m# P# N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
0 |' d$ C* c7 _  Q" G* L+ {6 x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>