【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 l( @8 h0 b# O: y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 ^$ G3 q. e$ K9 fFrom the first moment we met,
2 N4 g( M' g1 q; o; uI already loved you with all my heart
! U" [6 w  r5 }0 q3 o  wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: s: c. [. c( {" N' dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' c$ E9 A& G  L( S: _% `' YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  N0 Z% M# r, ^/ ^; k! z  o2 vIf today isn’t too late,
! Q+ _' g. e' h6 j3 b5 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 k$ @9 N7 K% E! B2 a" G. _Entrust my love within your heart
2 v0 U2 ~4 \+ VLove… just the word love
9 Z$ u% q& G$ N: H; W$ @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, ?: V) v$ Y0 c" ?+ d/ OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 {: E2 ]4 B$ i0 F  ]; f. iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ ]% E" m- t: ECan I entrust it to you?
2 E/ v  r8 |' e* p" g( mEntrust my love within your heart
" X9 C& A/ x! Y  nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, k8 t) A( Q- F4 q  I2 \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 y! R; X( d& g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' }% x* |% t' W9 S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  C- R& z3 L: C' E) |: t+ C1 v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; E* [; p5 w! f7 Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! @* ]9 _3 S: Y5 L/ C: R5 F, B3 n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: r9 M5 ~4 ?  Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) ]+ x2 t. \9 W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 K% m$ ], V  e- a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, ]3 L/ M4 E1 j# E& Z7 \5 Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 Z0 l/ Y% |" }6 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 d5 x, l/ r/ W  c/ p$ i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 i! v1 c0 j3 q6 u) F3 \' g% B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, A5 j9 w4 U( ~# d( a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 Y. b% N5 J1 B( [0 P" H( ^; z& [6 c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ g- r4 m. q5 d' `7 U9 s3 ^8 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, k6 \  S" s$ d1 ^  d; E1 i; f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# D: h' z4 Y% o) f# }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 l# w+ f6 s: X  K4 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% B/ w1 M: U% D) o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* b/ l2 V1 b1 ?5 r& w- v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% e% S' q4 X# Z& ]. ]$ U9 c<P>But I never did </P>
# W% y" g" r: O$ Y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. ]" D. o" c1 j2 M* T! n% ?8 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 y: H" I3 D1 M0 i- [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 `7 v' l- i3 u  C! j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  `2 y# `# _& p9 w; e6 p9 ]" I3 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 D; U4 h# t' s+ L$ q( w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! p7 p  e& j4 n  ]( O0 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ S$ G3 Y2 R+ D5 c& X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>