【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ C4 u# P3 q- f; PFrom the first moment we met,
9 S9 h9 V8 ~" F; sI already loved you with all my heart
6 E0 H* n, ^7 d3 n; TWe meet and talk everyday,
1 a# Z1 e! o% k! E  \& F3 NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( j0 G9 w3 h$ Q  o' k- Y0 [  RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ r2 q8 [" p" oI want to confess that I love you,
% W! }; o; O1 H7 [3 zBut I never did
7 R8 v6 n# @0 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- U( d2 J8 [: `& ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 Q9 q8 Q9 L/ r4 b) _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! X& K9 I* h9 j9 x' HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& s- R+ X- ?. D5 C; D- R! Q$ UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& J2 b9 t: d' D. l8 J" x7 I! nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) l# u6 D4 s5 g9 w. s$ v2 H, Y( e2 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 Y( Y0 ?0 c  [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ [/ U& g9 O! K) K% m% m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ b/ E7 v4 w& Q( F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 {1 `: ~, K$ z) U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) b; `. w- |2 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 V1 `) d6 X& k! _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ p# A8 z$ g2 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  i& q) P  s% \8 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 h: x3 l9 l) {, J1 L( F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" h" {" g; v( W) N! b$ n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 s/ W+ Y' K8 Y# E/ }; O3 l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! y) s6 ]% r# l2 h. R0 a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( ?& Y8 i" d6 t7 t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# q6 y* l$ F: G/ b  p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 L& _" h3 Z+ |  D8 K: V* d- s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ l" f+ K4 @1 V0 `& Q8 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! [5 @- }$ J! U3 f' a- U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* n+ G" k! d4 S' U4 M2 v; @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" ^; a! @3 ~5 u; l3 N2 ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" x; E2 B; q9 c# c# x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# H# c: X0 F$ g; R8 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" R* u! Y. C: `; B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 w4 U% ?+ b4 m, J: ^<P>But I never did </P>
) Z8 {2 L' Q- u9 {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, e/ M, X7 S! F  p* l- G; v& b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' V, F1 k* o& p; E* E$ ?. M0 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ S4 D4 J$ i0 o2 a. _( @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- D+ e/ a" N; _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# Y) B* {+ P4 [3 v) G7 F& n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ o' h4 B/ p8 e2 F" C$ V9 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# T" z5 r/ p0 s! o% t, z  B8 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! [/ L  N9 b6 p. @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>