【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
* N( U0 f( J! A$ Z& p$ w% hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: Y: b& r' W) g$ _0 t, T% n) ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ S3 l( @0 O' J7 q; A6 d5 VFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; \# a+ \1 y" GWe meet and talk everyday,
  X( k7 W6 y$ c0 v0 j1 QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' @$ `8 Z2 R/ `: j% F! D+ E7 w7 ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" T) O- X- e1 M* b: h5 BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 B7 {8 o- I4 jCan I entrust it to you?
1 R3 D  Y$ v5 }" jEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! ]5 d* ~5 E& ^8 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 x" H9 ]3 c4 BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* L$ }3 c2 T. ACan I entrust it to you?
7 p' U4 R& n  B; I) FEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ k/ u5 o& Y9 H% s7 ~3 wEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" {3 {& ?' K! ^1 t" g4 L  H# `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% G2 u( L) C% f3 |4 g/ R7 t$ n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ r& Z  P7 w6 w  Q6 }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* U5 L( W: a* d* k$ l: Z' j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: T$ M, H! [% a8 X2 L) }4 Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ p" N7 Q2 j$ Z" ^" y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) h- c/ B8 o6 ~* v8 C: E3 }! f# o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 M4 Y. r8 O1 ]  h5 e" W! X: |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& F% R2 _4 Z. A5 E4 F3 L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ s1 Q6 {5 Z/ _5 }4 l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 P7 F0 w, O& D9 t2 H" ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. e- O6 n& u, R2 ^<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 f" E) Q: J0 M( R# ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& Y4 w3 H/ G4 u! F/ Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 _2 z8 s( S# h$ Q) L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 S- `* P( {! ?1 M7 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 X$ F- C: z$ n& L8 R# n$ V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 {9 X1 R: H& Q8 A$ o+ i( s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* R; |1 E* X1 B/ T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. N; G9 e' u+ s: o- M* y. L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) r* n. _$ Y# ~, d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 ]7 z0 B+ ^, Z+ j# S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; S7 a- m. I7 h+ y. o5 x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 p: S8 L. w9 l( ~# O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) D) b2 q" }; ]% k7 _9 t1 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- H7 @  l6 E  E& b7 T* S( N+ e5 ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: |' L8 Y- X9 |$ ]; x/ H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 n8 n9 b, ?$ b) M$ a2 h' P0 z" k<P>But I never did </P>
/ k# ^" y# j1 X* U<P>但我不会 </P>
" F  O9 z' C% @) K$ t9 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 r2 S. K0 ?4 }3 w4 e# U) E5 G5 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& D' d, [: ~$ k8 I& p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  l( e; p8 w* t; F$ {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: u+ _6 V7 z* g; L/ r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! ]. _  r7 N9 J2 r" q- O3 T- }! {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 y* Z4 o1 [( M- y4 N0 {  g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>