【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
' l$ m# }; x' s# Y. j9 n* J% J5 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" @" @6 U# s3 T( _% |We meet and talk everyday,
1 b$ B5 G9 _& `; TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ J+ c9 V0 }( X0 R6 I" ELove… just the word love
/ l  `8 W& A' Y* N2 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
& J, p( }8 k; I$ OI want to confess that I love you,
+ t5 c) p) f- Z$ t5 k/ FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, b$ J6 b9 o* F( H5 k  ~. rIf today isn’t too late,
, s+ n. ?2 ]$ P2 ?: n+ w$ C( TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% ^! P/ X& F8 T. zCan I entrust it to you?
2 M) J2 @8 {# ?. FEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 @8 J; q1 u2 V) M' Q+ X) zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ H6 u& f: K2 t, i1 e3 ^2 Z6 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; I) R! t+ X& T" e3 F- @) K* F+ KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ S* ?- B  T: KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ S7 m  B- s/ NCan I entrust it to you?
& s7 p7 ^9 \( x9 |3 a- [Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% d) o! ~8 d4 C: S; b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# ]. ~. O2 s- V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  Y; l8 }/ A6 U( Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 l: m  R0 [  n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: Z0 k6 {  W7 {( P5 o' ~" a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ Q" ?0 C! Y( s0 O% F, ]* P9 v. w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 v& \' ~4 P" I. h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  z9 l; s- R8 y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 d3 q0 D0 u) b- I1 q* }9 D8 n% e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ t0 I0 H5 A* F; M7 f: }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, l9 K1 ^2 A- A1 f# p7 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ A9 k5 P. ^& b2 W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 U" V: H2 O' B/ e, v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# ]  C* q: d0 J2 Y  Q4 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! u  ~  \  t. ?6 ^4 z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  \% j  p, L4 Q, f+ V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 t/ \) h/ e. F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* w8 B' f& v8 F) f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 w2 P- v: C9 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ N) ~2 d; G" i' L& O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 t# ]  T8 o9 r) e  Y4 Q$ b7 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- T7 G% H, {* P# r! s: F! `# P8 Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 U0 l4 f% Y( v8 J% }2 y5 q<P>但我不会 </P>
5 m- ]4 i5 n6 n- l* k) w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 s. g4 P+ X3 b3 C7 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. D: e: @2 O& k0 q0 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 E9 L7 v) T* u* @0 C, {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) T% X  t& g4 \2 F+ g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ [  H7 l* ~8 {" ^$ t4 i( b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 {$ J7 U+ v  _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ S. j7 T6 t/ B$ N" k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% K. a& ]& L+ W) l) X' `. a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* q2 U$ q+ F2 K0 [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 A3 W# \' d- Z& z) ]6 `7 B+ H) g3 E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. N# _% A3 L, ]/ T6 N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>