【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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/ m3 u) @5 S( {) |3 a) v我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 g$ l3 j' M% |; QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 [* p) g7 P4 Q+ R1 YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 o6 \! |$ d6 ]* X# x4 bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# y2 p' ^5 {. C' m: T5 e% F2 OLove… just the word love
! v8 ~1 v. ^7 n  F3 T- V' w7 }6 c$ C% rWhy is it so difficult to express?
) K$ t9 k! s/ U+ q. @5 k, ~I want to confess that I love you,
5 W+ H7 B% x  e, @# n. OBut I never did
8 ^* c* F; s' |+ h& c# OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 q: x7 q6 e8 v5 {) ]3 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% d) Q+ G: Y4 g# p. `  x$ ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 `! R- L4 b4 O) `3 B( t9 MCan I entrust it to you?
3 p' o( |9 n  p$ FEntrust my love within your heart
2 A- X! e2 M# Y, v# gLove… just the word love
) R4 z8 U$ E9 L! g3 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( N: O0 k, R; H  M/ a" Q; JBut I never did
$ ?. ^' [2 E+ S; n& R, VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ j! H" m" @8 r" Z9 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 L+ }$ _$ l. l# Y' F  xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 D3 R% E: }  p7 uCan I entrust it to you?
; M4 ?! n" c! L# X3 cEntrust my love within your heart
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" i4 Y9 M4 A: G& ]+ K# h% ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% x- @6 @3 q. }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* }. M4 Z" l+ Z: l0 ?1 Y- T+ B<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& C4 J* @" o& g, Y% B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- P( _  }) O  R; t3 J: P6 c; G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, Q% ^+ j# B9 F6 e7 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  T& I, ~( c, K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 F( l. z7 Z9 w; ?+ A" l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 n3 c1 x; A/ A- ~+ Y2 o: b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% Q4 i6 ~7 S9 e9 ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 |% q* U$ x( F/ [0 x5 H4 \) F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, F* j7 {. H% ^5 T  M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 o0 i: ^: C" n( |% E# z. \- G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% W0 P. h. r8 q! x+ l# t0 m- r* {1 _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ G; C; R' e( ]) g5 G' |) ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ q& A: D$ C: X2 K' }) V- t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, B8 y: ]+ S% j) }8 j9 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 X2 A* G2 u! @' r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  y" b# M% s- i; E+ ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# J$ P5 n: t3 L2 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* f& g1 n4 \" |: d1 G6 x+ Z8 e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# N9 l. Y+ I1 ~& g: f2 ?" x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! m9 I) x7 b0 B( I7 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 W5 n6 J4 a; b7 `# V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 i* I1 Q  G% o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& ^# d0 h, ]( T# D* x7 u. {: X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# |9 J! _. ~  j  T, c) o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" M' B/ B0 ^# `2 k5 o  x6 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ b& Q0 Z6 i, T' J% A1 {! m* q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ P: t! ~$ w( [9 V! ]( f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# m: X/ \" |* \2 [! k- c. N+ |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ S7 O2 _* M7 H# n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) ~' @1 e' L% S3 C7 L) ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 E/ F" L4 N! N" i0 A# O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; c; Z, [# }" m0 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ Z$ k5 H* F* d8 {1 G! Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 m; _' j3 k* J7 f3 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" W" q3 g( q' q+ m& d' J
" k4 [& U0 W/ w& s* q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. X1 T& ?, \1 c0 u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 _* T. o  t! s- i: Y  N; K1 l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>