【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% S+ m7 {4 U5 t1 O9 mFrom the first moment we met,
/ c6 y2 B  E( }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' {0 t  D/ w+ W8 bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- B! t: z5 T! x3 z/ GLove… just the word love
/ k* V' `. ?" }! h4 u" aWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 q; X* D' ?# l, v  v2 @# x9 P" pI want to confess that I love you,
5 D, J% k+ d. E! H! c! DBut I never did
+ X4 J1 G" F2 r" x; J. P+ SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" {5 z5 T8 n- Z* s8 z& s, }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! O5 l; x3 o5 B  zLove… just the word love
. \6 b- H$ G; o' b: O5 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ \+ X' a# c: B) ~2 s: x! UI want to confess that I love you,
8 [5 Q5 R9 O! U* ^) K+ W. iBut I never did
% k, |+ W/ I, d* e) r1 k  J$ \1 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- }; v, _: I0 u4 E5 OIf today isn’t too late,
3 B2 s5 ]. S, ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. _" s5 o: s7 D' f. y; T5 ]7 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  t+ X; z8 o* x3 Z$ uCan I entrust it to you?
: n# d4 R* s' l# e4 K" X1 _7 mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 j' I& ^8 \; n5 ]% HEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: r8 \8 k4 I* Z7 {& ~  N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) i' C4 {& A4 [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 Y4 t- J$ X6 k- O8 Y5 C  L! o! R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# \% b5 o9 K, V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ W* L5 a8 Z/ m- F3 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 ]) @1 E0 t0 \) W4 w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ [3 `' L: X0 J, ^9 y' u2 g$ Z6 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 g* Q, u. a2 Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, h8 p! p/ |+ d, `; a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 Y+ I* F( R0 _* D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ M4 y3 t2 ^- \! F/ E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; J) C' i' ~, y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 Z  Y9 P# ~% X# z3 ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) v+ x9 P( T; _' q6 p/ Q1 y: H# R5 \<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" Q% Y3 a$ j6 g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ R( G" U8 `5 _7 e9 [0 F. c9 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 Y; h. `0 C3 q% ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* o$ ~! z' z. z3 Z5 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' X1 g. l- S5 z- M& R7 k3 W3 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  [. ^' `5 d  Q( j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 f+ Y' E) ]" w- G, e- Z- e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# S/ B( Q) _; @4 E. j) O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# V6 x9 ~; p& k3 `" t0 R, f% I( ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 x. F$ C. A0 S7 d<P>但我不会 </P>
/ q8 z8 R+ d" @  n4 U! d0 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; \6 f  M- v: b  V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 t1 E+ G/ p/ Z& z7 K& Z; V6 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. y6 B. U3 G; N' M6 `/ o2 Y, w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 ]. X) Y0 o+ I1 l. d% o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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+ O6 H) @2 W) m9 G# I<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>