【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 P* Y% X% M" W( d$ \我另将歌词附在此。
- S9 L! ]/ X8 a" PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- u: F/ }; d* V* z% ?! I6 i  z6 @6 J! xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ X- y% K. c8 Z; G3 C1 @; ~We meet and talk everyday,
+ M7 u) f1 E) C7 \% A; U7 qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ {/ m: X: W$ Y. }1 h7 d' ^+ U; O, \Love… just the word love
& ]4 j) \+ y4 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 e8 ~8 @) l: u: G9 n) {, tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) Q& A5 ]' L9 T- ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 _9 M1 W3 }/ \' ?4 Q* ^* }3 gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: @6 r2 u9 N' M* k8 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% s2 ~! X. j3 WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" h! h  C' U7 |Entrust my love within your heart
" J3 T' A! R5 {' e, d7 m; rCan I entrust it to you?
5 s; w) p( u, \2 @+ ^, dEntrust my love within your heart

( w5 p3 E6 Y: ]6 \8 `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& I9 _5 f2 J( y3 j1 `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 \& O& S/ K7 {* B2 P* d/ b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, W4 X2 v$ ]. Q  z4 D+ r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 E- j3 G+ U8 J2 v2 C4 V* t3 E8 w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; l6 b8 z" i' _6 ]+ K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ W' a7 i4 F5 X! v+ u# n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. w, d! u2 r! C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' X6 [: X) L6 o8 S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! W, j% t2 \- k" o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& T# K2 X2 r1 P% R  e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 w; ~. m3 F: N& r4 c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' p3 `( o& q) N6 B1 A<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! o, I5 g* s" C& W" |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 e3 W% z( B+ w+ y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 S- P+ V" @7 K& e* r2 w' ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ]& p; C6 j' S$ Y* [5 E5 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 [0 J! a  H( |7 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" ]1 ]- o# {( b8 p0 z9 @7 P+ i' N5 m) n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; n1 O/ }  E" ~0 y  z$ n$ Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" s4 ?8 h# C0 J  c<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ p9 j) Y9 z! w- k; O; S' R<P>But I never did </P>
6 Q9 J' P5 ?7 q( w: \. @4 m<P>但我不会 </P>
' A. j0 {1 m( O- \, \6 ]: q) p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 V$ h7 |# }2 b, f4 G5 F( |6 a; z: S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 X" B" D. x5 f! U' {& j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- Z0 l) H0 {7 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 h0 ], s$ B' X) l( v, U) K/ i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 z: E7 m! F* o$ S5 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 K; n4 T" L) b! s" ^. g) ^6 d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. [: }# m  A" u" G8 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 s" n3 l! s7 c6 i1 ?5 ~& y  c' d8 I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ \8 N) L6 b& J' n: \# N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>