【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
4 v. `7 [, X  {; _, cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 H9 m( P- s+ P" ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( _# K2 H( _  \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# c% i! _' Z) F+ h- X5 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; D, V2 F0 a7 l0 [  PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; S( B* L' e' k" C+ tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 d, ?' T/ o& P7 ~( g! lI want to confess that I love you,
3 b( B% Q# T! P) r1 n8 _) i( jBut I never did
. E: W8 s+ B, W$ M" f* H- T( U% rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 B/ o. v! \% J# u+ ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- ?/ u- G! B0 yCan I entrust it to you?
0 A& B% a. t+ H6 F! EEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 N% U5 z1 R# E. ]! `! EWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 |# `8 W* C: r) A) KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 z* C9 o2 c8 q" T: j3 W8 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 I) D; N0 a8 d4 L  B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 \$ X  p* c8 R  a* X; g9 [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% m1 S3 X, u: e. G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% p* g$ s! x2 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" @  P$ C. ^6 X" y% j8 }8 @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' R$ W7 _4 i  O* y1 y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 i/ O0 `' B6 D- p* a; F( q' Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ G# t, B- s0 v0 G4 `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: D: M' n' R, m, J& N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' n- ]8 I; T# D. J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 R/ t0 y7 h0 [' f) T  b+ _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ e7 q! `$ ?' g( P9 V1 y* R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 b' d3 W1 W0 o3 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; c. j4 o5 O9 r% e2 v/ q- j: K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 u" B+ T9 m. J6 U* S: \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ t: b( l: R4 `& [/ M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) ?1 }. G: }: T' e5 F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. M4 z' x9 F1 o6 M2 Q<P>But I never did </P>
; C0 A  R0 L" A( r/ F: ^<P>但我不会 </P>
" `* j, k: h" q6 i" k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  f; b; ]% Q! h* l. [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* O- i. h9 R: l+ B3 z1 ]- B4 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" u' W( |8 i" g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ R+ d) r3 \4 I+ V& q/ D# D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 U4 p- S& j2 @4 n% v, [; K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 y1 B7 }  P( u8 T' P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& m' L5 C3 v4 b; e2 R; J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ j8 S3 ?( K. B6 q2 E8 k& {1 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 m- n. q0 M+ x7 [: P1 s* p( i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>