【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
. ^5 I9 N4 T1 b4 fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, t9 e/ m% [* X# e3 d+ @8 nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 ^7 x, ]3 R1 J2 b* u# XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; I9 T$ X* E6 @* y( j; JWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- b! }3 m( _7 U; {  d- P  kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& c% u/ L8 ^& }7 vI would probably know how you feel
. \- }0 X$ D4 U" D+ @( K# GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 f% T' x. m3 J* k9 V5 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! O9 w, a$ m: tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 I/ y% c% H+ f( u$ S: C! ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& m- t* [3 z' D3 I0 K5 o% DCan I entrust it to you?
# {1 q' N7 K8 i2 {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! t# `# u8 i% iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' @5 C6 e6 D+ v6 j8 f( O2 FIf today isn’t too late,
$ x( k9 G5 h1 Y4 l" QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 C8 a" j# n" x( D: lCan I entrust it to you?
% V  T1 Q" l# ~" S# ^! UEntrust my love within your heart
+ T$ t' P  S0 `- {6 N4 {' hCan I entrust it to you?
4 u# x2 L+ u) E9 i; ]5 T9 HEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 M, J3 [: w3 n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. u& N* ~. O7 K1 R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 O) ~; w. D* J; n7 L  p+ k5 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) f' |9 V9 B& S& ~3 Y0 t: |6 h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. F1 v/ `, L8 }: C5 M  @( e+ e: F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ y' o& o3 m/ f2 ~4 ^. Z' S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& J* h  }) ~" E4 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. H; S8 N4 o3 E6 a- a0 j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! w' F5 `. T& w3 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# M& h  d2 a+ p& D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' E/ T* o2 F% G2 D( h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' H; y8 o2 S2 s4 ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 b1 s, m+ n! L' B9 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 ?. l# I7 r  N5 O1 m& r5 g/ E* m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 E* V! k1 D* r+ h5 O$ t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) n4 u* [# M( D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ B" W( y9 d5 J2 c% ^; J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ g9 y- f" `: q- }3 R! d* x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! h- Y1 z- [! u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 c3 }" N- m0 ]! n0 a  T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* [- g: F& ]0 z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- a% u! x: d8 r- Y$ G: y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# X- b3 \+ a9 p  k$ D& y6 q( n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 d5 k" m* A8 F: ~+ Y( I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 v: ^4 K5 Z1 p1 [* B2 }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; C1 a$ D% Z4 R- c* C7 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 w2 P# ?1 E3 u! p+ N4 M4 j# ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, X5 `4 b( V% i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' e; ]( K. J" d4 S/ [* @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( E& f$ T9 n5 r7 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' ^6 ^- k4 \: j! y' W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, a0 L6 \3 r$ A1 r6 N# D, ~3 s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. J2 P* v7 q. u& V1 b. Z  C4 x7 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& h8 h/ z! v6 s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, |5 P$ u6 }- H. ~6 H! O& ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: H5 }" m3 Y' U3 x7 [7 V% |! `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>