【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" w! l$ Q! I0 |! m# ?( W0 lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# C% ~9 [$ {5 Y$ v2 C8 {8 I6 D8 _From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 e7 b. y" q( n) s/ X, NWe meet and talk everyday,
/ E/ z* J& J' G0 j4 i8 s/ zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# L: o4 h. T4 S9 W5 q8 D1 @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) C# D: t1 v" y" Q5 kLove… just the word love
) p' J( r% A9 z3 U  _- M. {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 @2 {0 \, `" @- R  iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& a, [, X/ Q& w& ~3 P2 }% }If today isn’t too late,
& ?- v# N; Z4 }2 e5 M8 o; zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 }/ G9 q- i. t. `9 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ N! M) }& W' T& \Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  ~) J( }" t3 O. r2 Z, r2 U% YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! p% A+ d+ E/ b6 ^: ]9 l* NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( ?! ]! c. c" WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 f# h# G3 W- V) k! b4 f* jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& [+ v. Q7 i, Z* t" f' B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  E' h! I( B# m  E$ s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 |' @- S3 B) e, A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' p1 {, m% Y* ]3 p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  R, ^. T) ^- o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 W# J) U. P2 |: g  h  O8 u6 g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( e6 I0 i. u& R$ C8 O# a! F" ^4 I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 {! }1 f$ H+ I4 q9 S; D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! X- k" b9 f0 [' D  Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' j1 Z3 k1 a5 U2 O: f9 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( v7 z% t( n0 c- [- {7 F, I$ ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) |/ |, ]: I! w: {, `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& a1 u" ^1 N) C1 d7 P$ R% j/ p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ ?0 f2 @1 c- ^: c! o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. u' j$ O* O- A$ E4 u<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& l; q' ?0 B- r. Q# y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 M7 w& b" I4 h! ^$ Z7 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 U* K; G1 i$ M* I4 A) x/ _* p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! M& W7 O1 b: d8 t% ]3 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 _8 P. {: E( M# e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' n" u, ]/ {+ t0 I/ d7 @" W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 ^1 W1 f/ u4 [) G# r) I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! Q8 T: d2 K1 X' N: D5 r: {. u* B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. e. R& O% N  _3 r+ N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, K/ W9 w/ A* F7 _3 A0 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 m' I# Q9 k/ y% j- g  [) B. k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 f' d9 U/ ^7 y$ l1 b8 f! ~% a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# T4 W" G3 y8 k( I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: D+ V3 V, o. r2 \( _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 i3 p  U; x) i& v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 t: a5 @5 n; \) @& i/ e' W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 T$ |. h0 d# b6 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 G+ w6 n& F+ E' Y. [1 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" q  K2 p- h8 {* t! C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 s1 M( |% q2 N7 h: ~* A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# c6 T( g, F+ p1 x* z6 A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 E5 v- `3 F* _- w; @8 v/ V: o# k4 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>