【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( E' C( d9 X+ `, [6 r: tFrom the first moment we met,
$ @' @) w8 E6 N4 N+ N; x+ U0 |" g- AI already loved you with all my heart
- t$ J, e+ Z, P0 ~  Z3 _We meet and talk everyday,
; s* U) O. y1 x' c, ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( b) Z2 k9 Q# P2 |6 m5 oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, ]' M2 H+ A" V- n2 f! p) N7 b8 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 A% q1 }( B9 _4 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 e; s  \# g/ i* |$ ^Entrust my love within your heart
$ w2 K/ @6 }% [' y# O& GLove… just the word love
- |% ]8 J8 v- w1 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# C. @( F, I' y6 L5 `4 p: Q$ H0 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, |3 Z. n! P# \! T+ YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 S( m3 S+ R# tCan I entrust it to you?
* g* @( M* g4 l8 ?Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" @! c  Z4 n5 t  i( |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 R6 g$ C0 N% a. ]# y% X; f% ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ M9 z  X3 ]; n7 y6 ~2 p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ d( Q6 J$ u8 T5 p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ j& P% g* _3 C6 X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 l6 [6 j! s) s9 p+ t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 y, H) y: z1 I( K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  P9 O3 i% k3 e- ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" }) e, l. m  z% ^* _$ t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 F6 h0 {5 w  R/ d. p' ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 P- b' o& u" r# V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ V& o' D( B  W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 `/ M, E' m- V- S; }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" @3 N/ v1 R& y4 i8 X4 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 z5 h  d( q$ m3 p5 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ _- l4 X0 {" u# |7 n2 ^; _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ |  s. g; l! n( Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# Q3 m- `; [, F! \# H" {% [$ L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ E" E" V4 e! w' E9 U7 I4 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 \' H" O  l9 q% w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- J% S% Z8 \0 m9 P8 x. z) k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; i8 o: V' d% y; B! a5 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  g" x9 ?/ F/ _: J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; a- T6 o( f# r% i9 n# Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ `# o$ ?! D% V' A. K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: Q) K; W0 T* x; N<P>但我不会 </P>
: t! Y, E% a. _  V8 C8 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ v% I4 ]9 i- b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 C# a( l1 e+ F5 W  R4 S; f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 [* _0 O8 ^  t& w1 V( U- O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ [  H7 _! Y0 H* o) o+ n5 ^. X" n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: W2 B* y$ D8 o2 ]8 K- |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 E9 b5 ?8 r  F: w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* R! e( q  n  \( Z1 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ o" `' D, p' U9 C2 o. N6 K' o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' N+ P$ w& t' P, t' D0 u( X& M3 B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# g$ m# g- V7 l  H" }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: _* k$ ~: Y* O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>