【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
/ _3 l" [' S$ a1 |) aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- j# y6 D8 X4 g0 w5 YI already loved you with all my heart
9 a* p7 W* k, b6 b) W# A9 p3 s, `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% d' ?( l% V" BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- }: Y; y. J# @% V2 @5 q* FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; O- ~  c7 J# a2 i" pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: M! l8 \( h# q' U7 y* Z  [! l" v" wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 b5 x4 Z9 c5 k- fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 Y, }- G: Z" n) ZLove… just the word love
8 q) Z+ a$ K8 G$ A5 i, b1 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ p5 i/ R6 \$ M* [! V; V" YIf today isn’t too late,
4 Y) C/ e0 j) RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 `5 v; U  n% vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 w$ N- M  R" ~, a9 C; }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 I5 |0 ^; h) n6 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 B  j5 Q2 ^5 S, ^6 `1 t' C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- C: g8 |) M2 }  i* I2 T+ P2 W& F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 s6 G. z7 u/ U8 K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# C6 i2 D# ^3 r/ G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 s: D0 R$ G; D% f* F' U4 k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 Q! j. _: C$ I, o% ?4 I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) F8 f: V( Z% P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 s, p3 b- U$ S! U0 k- r3 V9 ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" K; o  e$ P' V& Z6 i7 x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 ^3 G  F2 q% I4 V' e: c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 b) R+ _  G' F. C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 v! w0 Y+ K0 M. E' O% {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 J6 m% ]) O& e7 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 a/ E- N- t% E% P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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<P>But I never did </P>
+ i2 e3 Q3 d9 h' k) W! i9 U, Z<P>但我不会 </P>
, b$ F, R8 }" T: A, Y$ D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ f# O$ O# n( w4 i1 x: Z; l4 a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  X: c' ~  I0 Z6 Q* Y* J0 M, I: g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: ?2 M/ w2 E. I0 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 |! H# T8 J) j& G" Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' e' \- P# ]/ q* p. j7 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 B. L& C$ O* F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ d: X- E5 S8 v* R6 A) S5 }& |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 b7 _% J! n; Q- P6 J9 i: h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: |& q8 A, N5 k. M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>