【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ ?" i: ^) N& `% V1 E3 Y  t. P6 V6 b6 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 O' n! ~# o! W1 K) \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# m2 a- n# B- z, y8 _  OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% {# S4 I& V; b, bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 e4 ?/ ^  p5 [! W. q8 DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. y8 ~+ H2 O! _; D7 b  MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ }+ ?& }  |9 I5 b& L+ b0 D: wI want to confess that I love you,
0 R$ U. V7 ]8 q5 c% a% Z& L3 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  j# T7 ~9 E. u5 f' M% |7 x+ sIf today isn’t too late,
& ?( j  Q! q$ P6 }3 j* L2 ?3 L2 x0 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ \/ L! `& e/ d5 V+ `% h5 |! V8 @5 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: p) W% _, \: i* T, ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 p' f" H% o% f% E9 |4 p- |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& M& z0 S0 E6 \, C6 ACan I entrust it to you?
9 }+ F" [* V3 T0 ], F* e3 TEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) l' \  [" A( i9 F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& F# ?, T& x4 Q* N7 b1 z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& L" ]* C( S& k- h3 V2 M  B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 U/ A9 O& m) r  v- J/ l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 K+ y4 S$ \# s; ^, y7 t, S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  o  I/ Z* o  ^: g# R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( @; U1 @* X6 Y7 @9 G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" ^: e& x% @# S: u( ~' h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: S& M5 Y# z' o8 h/ T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 \: k) h6 p1 R3 ^* u1 G8 J2 B; W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. D$ T3 [0 _$ d5 u/ l( E9 O<P>但我不会</P>
/ E3 p6 ^+ _) [* H3 l6 G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 b; I% p- _* g; t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 ]$ O! O: q+ S& ]% @. I" v3 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& }: X& b$ X3 ]5 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 n- }! ?6 y+ o) }5 Z) B# r4 u4 z% @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 x0 A" V; X6 N# r! X' N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 w0 j2 Q$ j. s1 C# j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  w1 H  Q8 Z  W6 a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  I  v, {! H# }8 m$ L: n9 [; n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 q' [5 s, L* g) X( D0 U7 c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 e$ k4 x0 z# T' m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 @" v9 v; z' d+ q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* n# X: e' q& ^) q9 }' A4 s0 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( P) [3 H- H1 V& A! t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 A! |* t% s+ n7 D/ j3 g  @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- M4 l9 r$ E% x" {& X/ _, R$ T8 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 j! T; Y+ h. Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, V2 A7 }" j) ~$ e% i2 ?0 K  J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ M/ h3 w; G5 E- }; r8 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 Q; x! U' i: p. p" y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>