【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 x% b- W" f8 K0 g* p" ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  s3 _/ U, _) Z( VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; d6 @+ d; G: }, GFrom the first moment we met,
* I) n2 x% b4 V3 o& F9 rI already loved you with all my heart
+ o7 a! _  s% G3 L  `$ {2 n7 bWe meet and talk everyday,
8 @. N+ H0 m) S  DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 |" c2 S4 v  _! y3 @I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 l3 h. q  A. o6 B/ ]$ ^I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 h5 t% E7 a5 Q! `2 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' \$ U' a! G2 H4 `& oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 ^. r# A' U6 B( K# eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( E4 C6 f. J  r( M5 mCan I entrust it to you?
! K4 f! e- M; T/ a& u6 d+ n- n" EEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 [9 i4 l6 x2 q* }5 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% m7 p: d2 ^% X# W4 g) oCan I entrust it to you?
% f6 w  E  \; s* @/ }. UEntrust my love within your heart
4 z4 O8 T+ Y' k. |! T- tCan I entrust it to you?
, A5 I+ w( p- l( `7 f: ?Entrust my love within your heart

& x$ C2 R/ Z: u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: T8 P( G) C$ `+ c6 x% v# D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# V0 b$ i) A) d1 d9 P* y' D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* }4 E* S0 ~' ]/ y: V! |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ q/ e5 L3 {6 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; ?. v! B& Z7 w" X6 o9 f1 }( U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 k! G# H' ?7 a' ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* o6 ~6 h1 T, o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, w. U+ z2 H9 E8 H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ~8 Y( ?5 s2 S# F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: w5 c7 f* D; \( [. F8 g: m/ l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* B( [- e6 Z" p4 p- `! F* e) E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: z& D0 R, u9 o7 a( B% v<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& j! A( a0 q1 C$ ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# a2 a! B% ]5 ~$ q' f0 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, ]8 N4 k! X5 m, }# h2 h8 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 f5 n. L- C/ C0 }8 k' ]) {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ d, Z. W- A0 E) D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( f3 J9 b- ~1 ~8 A) l. n3 g7 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: G) h; @" j4 _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, e, p5 _" S: V- ^- e. Z4 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ l2 A) b9 a7 E  J  u* m, D# l" a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 O1 C1 O( l+ [+ m( V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& B& q* ^, [  G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: y1 i6 A+ N; s# a/ P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 m# c, ~2 r$ d+ T& H5 ^: B+ I8 [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. y  ]) g% i7 d- s1 n% Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' O+ h% w& G: t' C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) J: z, B" C" V! D: C9 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" g  [( e: h; T. K 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* d" u2 {$ Z* G' {, E" G& R这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: H6 k% m9 T( D0 p, k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>