【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
( [* n& t; g3 c' A# J) N4 K
0 V( a4 s% U$ r: l8 w
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


我另将歌词附在此。
: W2 K, Y1 Y9 y6 U/ j* xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ d! o* d$ v9 n6 K/ hI already loved you with all my heart
  |; Q  j$ a3 G4 K5 TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& j8 h& T% r. R! L* l1 {7 wI would probably know how you feel
8 W, k% M0 i& t; N8 _9 ?' uLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 U0 i: {( M4 O* p3 s' pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 R4 \' y2 c0 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  @5 |$ g5 D4 mIf today isn’t too late,
2 f& x  l( }7 `* [, GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 w% E* `0 a" v3 W- v3 c4 S6 iLove… just the word love
& }- Z0 C" |3 `" PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 R5 F& C' C2 `$ kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 X5 D( Z2 r$ j' J) sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" o5 g5 b7 O# _  K7 \& MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 f- K$ V( u0 C2 q( ]3 WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, S5 l. e2 d1 S$ D2 LEntrust my love within your heart
  J1 K6 r, e3 Z1 x# r% `# o7 `8 Y" X
& H; u" @2 j9 n4 l" H+ _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& r9 D! ?$ J# L! R: \% N9 `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 {1 U. C% p0 v9 d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 T8 E# ?; g' `# S; v) N+ z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 Q' N. y: H! x9 C2 b' s- e6 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 h# ~* i' d0 T: ]$ [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: g" P4 k3 ~6 N  C* {7 M9 t<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' `; X& }% T; X+ a# z3 j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 b4 H9 E1 [% Q- Y# b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ E3 l* `+ s  j) Z+ o# S; @6 x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- p8 L! K5 Z. `" a$ m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 Z( u, h, `, U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ P7 v" L" e% u! Q0 b2 m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. n& n. r- R: s4 {; l# k9 k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 U1 C9 S4 z; T3 ^3 q! s5 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ s1 k2 u7 G) Z7 @# w  y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; F$ V% O' y3 b, V) l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 m3 o9 J2 p& K; P3 P) C0 q<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 X6 z3 Z3 g6 b, d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# c8 }) P+ R% n( W! z7 ^: B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ u3 n% F6 s4 X0 _' {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# D9 {8 q/ Q5 c2 Y  K& O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" Y( l% R7 c: V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ V9 t; {; ?$ R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 N8 n( B/ p3 Q! s. v- v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' X/ t* X4 m: Y9 J& C( x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
% v3 {3 K2 x/ @  }: t
% Y4 ?2 m" V; z$ _  F% m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: V; `7 M+ T# A; [" \% G, d8 T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>