【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 M* `: |, C: S3 Q* P  B我另将歌词附在此。
+ h0 \1 a( u7 M8 a0 \5 lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 s' I- B/ j6 p" [From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 r( H9 w: Y' h2 J, Q+ CWe meet and talk everyday,
7 J% I, J, J# w0 A. B9 s( iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- m6 u! X/ i% {& aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 W. `" U# L; K: nBut I never did
( T  @' V2 \2 I$ b+ ?, fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, Z: X7 p) N1 W* g" u' ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& m* Q1 C- U# V! eCan I entrust it to you?
  I/ ~: F: ?. J/ b5 q! G8 ~; _1 p2 eEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; U  A  Y  l' c' q" Y5 X7 p" ]4 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! l2 b5 {7 F- H3 J1 ]$ ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' ~1 S1 ~/ K: }+ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 l/ |  t: l5 _: C! k: `& v3 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! U; [  R  _/ ?" K+ h5 B3 oCan I entrust it to you?
4 y3 w7 }, w# P1 y; c* x" |0 b2 }" ^Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ _1 g# Y6 G7 G1 j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 u1 I6 T7 r- F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 p  ~' f) \" ~$ B# p' k# C. N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 ?4 _5 y$ C+ h. H& L* t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 ?* z! ~7 j3 Y. k: }) b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) N" S0 x9 M6 w8 ~4 s; J; h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  M. q& [% R' w5 B# Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 j/ y8 |5 h% [- n) R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ p# e& w7 `& T! A1 B+ s1 X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- G' r* C) U( C5 ~, R4 h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' D" k4 G" P. O7 d' B- E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  x% c3 n5 _9 u3 f3 w( p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) z' G! A* G; Q4 Z0 W, I. K5 b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 X6 B/ w, B2 I' h! J* @- v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' U& {) f+ X8 f1 y8 b5 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* ~" t! c  h) f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ |5 P7 a# ?: r* e6 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- U, o7 \  ^# n  u' W8 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 U* I1 B$ t5 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- x8 G6 B1 E7 k( h: X9 D" F$ x% I+ n9 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' l$ d- a* G# }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* G6 ~3 ?2 F/ m: t* Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 q" y5 Z. Q5 u. ]; ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 u1 i/ W9 N9 P2 V4 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, E- }& j: q) [. m( ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 f. s, G0 [4 M/ f* N  T8 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 h! x) M. y: c3 u2 O; T& T" N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 U( X$ T% ?* R8 y* g" ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- u* F$ F1 J3 e8 i& m5 S# b& f; K& e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- V+ J) B  t; n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 e8 n, T* K5 s2 {0 o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ L$ F  w0 L2 i. p$ D' r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* q$ |8 W' a7 a' m! H: F9 F5 Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>