【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 ^$ ?% {9 r+ |; ]! F我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 a0 G2 Z5 w) T1 o$ K; Z0 t- Y) v% f9 wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( F6 P# S1 ?: y3 ~' kI already loved you with all my heart
0 f4 t3 F$ t) g( r+ o& KWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( |  z/ E( @6 S$ _& ^( r% n( c2 N0 AI would probably know how you feel
+ Z1 T- l7 e4 K* aLove… just the word love
- ^# B$ Y6 W* g) ?Why is it so difficult to express?
" I0 x% X( @9 n& dI want to confess that I love you,
! u1 T: c& ]) i' H8 E% m- N: C# O4 h: e; kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* `2 ?( D( A6 Q$ \, l" g+ L$ w& h' mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* V/ s' O8 t9 S4 G7 E8 o7 ~( [Can I entrust it to you?
( o7 U2 L, k, P/ G% B6 wEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 {8 t1 K9 j" H* Y) NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 Z+ R* K# }2 p) Y' q" c) ?' B7 mEntrust my love within your heart
( T4 B% \& d4 Y* Z: I. v% P- Q; `6 X4 ZCan I entrust it to you?
' o  ^3 b4 s+ T# ]2 FEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 o# I& A- `+ p* e+ v$ d; r. o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 H5 |" X( N7 S- f& M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# ~7 o2 f6 G% {) r$ b9 v: h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% ~0 G8 v3 c0 s4 H; x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. N1 E! V1 s# Z4 _' G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, v( ?! i9 A3 X$ B: E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 y/ c/ Y  n  d  g& n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 s( u8 D# p: e# \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# Q) S1 Y# O0 j; \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 w8 ~5 r& B( J) e. x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& O2 j% p8 E0 U4 l* _: _* M6 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! u, `+ n0 O1 Q; k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ g2 I6 V( q# X! [5 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& n. Y. s" e  E5 B( b$ _6 a3 {" t! j" ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 [7 v% c* {& \: ^0 O5 j7 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 t! q- A3 u. ]7 M( w- _2 P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 l0 @4 m7 Q8 V: O( x! Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( {6 d# d* p, v9 k6 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 B9 l2 r! k1 r% h0 z/ s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 y% \+ U: |6 |. }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 s6 H0 A4 R- Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( [! E4 }6 i' \0 D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 O9 p9 Y" C: O' r8 |1 x5 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# j: X% D. O, m4 `! J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 _4 y. Q4 |6 p4 ~) f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- S6 U. i4 `7 b* |: z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" y1 f1 j/ j& Z( @. N, d5 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 `9 O2 `, T, [( j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 @3 p( N* D7 d, ]$ @+ d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# f6 J8 [3 A* ?8 Z/ r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>