【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 a( S: d4 B5 k/ I我另将歌词附在此。
/ H: t0 Q9 I+ T$ {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! w5 B, ^  a; _$ ~& B% dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( y" d: k7 @3 Y3 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( D6 I1 e$ b! ZIf today isn’t too late,
% _5 O: k8 N8 [" v( C% QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; u& }, T! ]7 eCan I entrust it to you?
6 m. ]& M7 n) @0 V: |6 ~' DEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* G; p+ ?) D7 y' F) }But I never did
+ l8 c' m$ b5 |; {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  a& z+ j' e0 n; q) jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. ?6 z) {' g2 E1 CCan I entrust it to you?
, o4 q- o# R. B- ]5 V# V; lEntrust my love within your heart
) {/ x" k- F8 ]# H. X! ACan I entrust it to you?
8 ^7 Z) x, x$ s/ q) J) I- r1 ?Entrust my love within your heart
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) f+ x$ u( @6 d$ R9 U$ \+ h( `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 g5 ]4 P# T) [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# ]7 t& P2 M) Z7 ^/ j9 p' e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ b$ [. m: l# `& y; W0 x& @3 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 J$ b: d: w2 U7 C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% u  j! S. m" b! y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( Y. `( M7 E- ]9 H: h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  R: ~/ t- m- T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& f( C; m3 p- |2 F' y, {/ s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: S- b$ |. |# f; v- D& d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 ~3 _. A! }+ [: y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: k* D3 a+ e/ ~  ?+ ^0 _/ _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 e7 A6 _. A0 v- m0 U9 d( _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 M/ z5 T% {- L! Y4 O2 x: Q4 ]* j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 n9 Y, V4 A5 m9 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) D0 c8 \4 P* G( X3 y! V  w: V7 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% x/ _- p1 s0 L; W6 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" Y9 \3 U8 s0 X0 Z4 L( n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; \( d) L8 {# X! ]9 C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  `7 O: \0 w: d- A/ B  |5 R- N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 m9 W5 Z* Z  x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ v9 C2 C8 w$ A% v' j4 y$ K<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% j. S  t+ g+ ]& ]6 b. h: ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, t5 L  t; b6 R3 [! m$ ^) y" K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 W. K, h- l) t  i  b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ [+ N  _6 v) s3 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( o7 N7 j* W' o9 d  F6 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# k# M1 x% I4 S# J2 Q- U4 ~. j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ H5 J- O+ h# E9 ?8 u 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! ~( d; T9 Q% v) r9 G7 V( K" m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ R6 U; G) w* s4 \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 g) r$ S: q, P. a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>