【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; ]. e7 b6 J) M* I. S3 @; uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, c- ]5 ?) D% ?; I$ G* R; OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ L* F$ j' [1 N, Z1 h( p/ D2 }I already loved you with all my heart
+ P0 \# A5 v3 y7 m/ X) c/ GWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" g# ?! B5 t& p: m, i% i9 FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, L6 d; d0 i( u6 g: F( CI want to confess that I love you,
2 D% {5 F4 c2 v8 VBut I never did
* H$ O; H5 K. c% B. B3 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! Y/ x  l; e2 t1 ^! Y5 {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ c8 i3 R# A* d( `. g2 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) K7 M2 k" Q. \; b- x7 `3 nEntrust my love within your heart
( r0 H  {+ E% cLove… just the word love
! z1 U; X) G$ b8 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ }2 n  e8 E7 }  [6 H, cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 D8 Z) m1 [2 Q6 `Can I entrust it to you?
1 R/ Q/ ^! G! ~$ ~. pEntrust my love within your heart
: C6 B! B. }# \6 `5 e' C, BCan I entrust it to you?
- L% _& b/ Q3 C+ n* uEntrust my love within your heart

% U) f! K: f5 y! _- d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: j3 Y5 J3 z- L' o  M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# T* Y, l0 y! c  ?4 {. @- ^2 C4 a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# `! A' ~  H& X- @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 H8 t7 a: [/ S  a: v  e7 J<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* R" I1 I% y0 G/ ?) }9 s9 V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 ]( P4 a: C) O' x& V* K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& Y" \3 v$ ?8 t+ d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 Q2 ?' u4 ~0 C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& b6 M8 |( W" d; m% D3 j* B' n5 u2 b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" C2 r% f5 @1 b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 t' x; V, {4 c' V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, k  z; Y' ?5 U4 R3 B. D+ O; T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ k: d, r; B) |, s, U; r1 a% K$ f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! m" I" t" A2 j3 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 K0 u7 s" J- u  e- ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  K! ^* r7 x9 ^* Y# z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ x3 X/ `0 i! b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- K; C5 Y1 q3 a+ I$ J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ S9 O- I( m2 w& c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 v, ], \0 Y$ Q( c+ ~1 C$ Q6 A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 V& G9 N( m% b$ U& U1 M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 W/ q- y) ~5 z. U<P>但我不会 </P>
! b0 j& e& ~. Q1 |: G6 o$ j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 M( I: P2 b+ K  Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, q+ d- k; C# B* Y0 k! O2 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& W7 \) ^) T/ s# C% Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 |- }8 R/ [7 u. A& F# h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; A7 G7 P6 I' D! t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  U5 V% u' u6 U* S7 O+ S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ f; P) q2 r$ d, O" X+ T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>