【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' j$ ?! [# B. d+ G, `. d# V% f' m  F我另将歌词附在此。
  ]( z- Z6 P& fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- x! e, W/ t  z- H7 P+ cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( b$ e" b4 {+ x5 W) l" n- A$ S# U3 CI already loved you with all my heart
0 g* S  b: V) Z# c5 H+ _9 l, c& oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 c6 g4 i7 j7 O$ z) h& f! X( g! L% GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  \) u" E3 P4 {: k" i. u( c4 wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 ^) q  F2 K0 R6 h  h2 u) nWhy is it so difficult to express?
: C- B( N+ ]& s- |1 N: S+ {# D  n, y2 EI want to confess that I love you,
7 k$ r4 J" P3 \4 }5 L3 ]- a+ \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) f/ }8 N  Q6 _/ m8 t( MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, _  R+ {$ w9 S4 z( n: v! z! D- sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; X5 L  c. r0 u6 \1 oLove… just the word love
; O9 S) Y8 I' V! V* r' M' k$ o# VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. I# n& ]6 t6 B0 k: jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# p; c, I5 n; |/ G/ WIf today isn’t too late,
2 O. N1 {1 G8 D. sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 z# n0 u4 j8 G6 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; ~. q: q  M+ @) j3 [3 ]" Y8 vCan I entrust it to you?
* ~7 ?3 G0 u7 [# iEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( A4 _, n4 {) u3 p8 H3 s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) @! ]+ k% T* }; m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 p+ z  Q3 N0 O1 `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 I# K$ |9 N1 b: r% U& ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ f& f& W5 [9 a# t" f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 {! B% X* U4 S6 d( h7 d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 V( H" h6 W7 {7 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' T& o9 K3 p3 g! _  Q: g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 t4 \/ W2 ?: d* w/ @0 ^, m% o, z' z: G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- @' a5 H" _, F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* `6 ?7 w8 G3 v9 o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 o. r9 r3 N- B* l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; c6 q( z7 X2 O. z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" u; h5 J' ]0 }* V/ M6 o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, m7 g/ C4 [# @, v<P>But I never did </P>
0 ]# q& ~/ ^& g; F7 w0 o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ l2 T4 N1 K7 n" T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" O) C: h$ {! m: r! H" c3 C- o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 i, Y5 E8 h7 S) d- k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- j0 @, Y& a1 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 W+ L% ?& E8 g  l* o- d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! c) `( k  w* E7 U1 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ B6 w. ]% k1 i  k  Z3 `' R 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ r6 N  F+ i9 s; `8 A0 m& X% a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ Y  ^  \+ x  U3 G& J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: T  m, M- ^9 w8 O% }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>