【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' r# B: e4 M1 v3 ~2 m+ F! n% g5 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) B. H  N' d0 |0 H! Y* R( B' SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ w) Z. q) o1 {# fWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 o) k' x) D$ b, v0 {But I never did
! Q& D7 N6 j) h" LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: v6 I2 I3 z" d2 ^9 oCan I entrust it to you?
3 u+ Z" t9 t% K' t. MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 @9 C, l5 }1 E2 G3 o4 M: YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& y4 }. r9 b6 L5 X( |9 L+ ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 _3 G1 B. ^+ z+ d6 l$ e4 \: CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, |; q! p$ L4 H4 q% C+ ^& D8 X/ l: S$ xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% f1 A/ m  {9 p8 o. LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ f/ M9 }# q* w7 c! x" M1 Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ y. z% E- C9 k3 Z0 `6 D- }( z' N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 w! _* J5 |" ~4 c* v8 B# Z" o* e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* z) N/ J( u6 h5 q0 w! Q  d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  A! \, l% l  j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" V" {* m& ~6 {6 `) }5 f# n  W5 l! ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 n6 h8 X/ g( _3 W) r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" b% B4 l# i% s8 A' D9 v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) N' i8 p  i0 b+ S& J<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 d4 ]/ A, ^+ o$ k* K" \5 o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  r) d7 p# u/ ]/ X0 {0 ?3 |1 j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ a% `; [' p6 ^0 ^) G% f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& Q/ h0 e, k$ }3 ^/ T1 z7 r" h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. J) k: Y) ], S& B0 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 ^6 X% a% J. t# m8 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) J7 G' ?/ [# w3 r$ G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. E' x' t9 P; W1 a# f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, q. j/ {5 ~, e. J4 Q( ?+ d' n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 T4 n" E* y9 `2 T  |4 c7 R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 l+ @6 n  U( W# r$ ~3 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. l# z  a" J( M6 ?' _% A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! |' U6 x  ?3 B- i$ N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% {' |* B1 P# T9 @" O% A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, q# A6 Y. C# y5 P; C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" U# `) Q1 B# F- A% H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ c( }0 c: s7 i7 V) Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- d& z) H) c: M3 d" _! E- L5 n( b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 K" U) @! l3 R2 @& b<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. x1 r- p+ f# H8 o, Q1 a) _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 n9 ?0 X( z/ e2 U& X, n7 G& O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 f; k5 h- `# o. _* ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 s" x- i+ G! H7 N: s) |! |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( e8 E9 V( m- z0 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 z2 V5 [5 _2 |5 }: A( W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 A5 p- U- z8 q  s1 [, l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>