【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) A: i% q+ Z( ~; {! N7 N3 }0 c7 o# ]我另将歌词附在此。
1 k" p7 u! |3 k7 \7 J! tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' q: u0 ~; W8 a! a: KFrom the first moment we met,
8 F& b1 n4 \8 f- vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' z4 A7 ?1 \/ o' n3 \. |+ cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 p9 g. S3 x7 d$ d8 G6 L% W) b- YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 r2 Q4 u( z& {# {% x. uLove… just the word love
5 g$ R4 v* _4 M4 \Why is it so difficult to express?
1 ]$ ^4 {  w* S  l* UI want to confess that I love you,
7 ~' H1 l# y2 O: \8 G! R) O$ X3 s/ HBut I never did
: y  a+ r  e- e' ~0 l5 e. l, r. ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' @) u. y$ f3 T: PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 n# ~; E6 K5 q+ H5 oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) |6 A6 B" K' m4 x. m/ \1 XLove… just the word love
+ o/ z7 i, g' W6 c9 ^/ `" fWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 q# U1 |# E& @1 M9 yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 C8 ^: ~& ~2 {3 m2 ]" V* s' H8 T( CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 L4 Z- ~2 \' X' ]3 S2 b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 A4 j4 T. X5 H+ q  m  U& x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. t# |+ f8 J1 [4 C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 I% t) H. {' I+ f( I+ g4 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 y( d5 E7 }, c. Z$ p" `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 B- ]+ Y7 A. U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* p8 H5 @0 C: Y1 z- l. f. c<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' o5 r2 o  v$ T6 g% P& J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 T- }6 y6 C8 l8 n7 S$ _5 z. [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, A6 w2 e8 I' ~2 C! S4 V; c' X1 i* I+ w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; i6 F: \9 _$ i# D1 N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ W. n3 g( R/ s- `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) w* Z0 i- l7 |" D8 J% N" B' i& x) Z" g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 e% _4 w) w* m' A4 ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, V3 E6 u9 u1 G3 ]3 k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; f6 `( v8 g. c6 I  ^* m+ L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( Q- ]; X1 Q9 K, Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ }' ?1 |" h2 y  C8 D0 _( l8 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, l) V+ V# P, i$ D. F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: m# N8 _/ _/ y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  Y6 J! S) C1 ^4 ^9 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# N, {% a- s1 X# s( ^4 f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 r. _- ?6 S2 t7 w* ~0 q' n( N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) v0 ^! s9 O0 Y; P+ q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 h+ A3 p7 {- `& z4 N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- g9 \1 A! M: e5 @) Z* g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, Z3 ~. m( W* r. U+ O* T$ S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% I# J, b7 [% I8 F+ Y7 k% l2 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 x2 F% q' H$ s# {3 y# c2 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 b  r0 v3 R6 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, n6 J% o' S: {$ z4 ?" X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  B/ V; F- Q' V6 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! C- V% R, W3 p# ^! L7 |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ b3 r5 B& T1 J) {3 ]* o4 m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 |) \& M1 _1 U5 ^
, |5 Z! `* T- h' i' u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ Z( t6 Q$ G' B7 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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