【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( ~& [9 R8 ]$ j. B) NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 g1 A3 c# T( M& x, ?4 m2 B, wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 b& V/ Z; x# ?/ O5 FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# y# O, E* b! A! n: }. XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 k  p5 N- l9 CBut I never did
/ l$ P1 n/ f, H! aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" q9 K, ]  X9 Z/ E& {, V" HIf today isn’t too late,
: h- C8 G4 D4 H2 V- NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& v6 X0 F( T* O. C7 m( pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. P  L- a0 t- HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 s7 V) {% O% R" v3 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
' c7 H( K7 }: D( g3 ~I want to confess that I love you,
- {4 q. v3 l- H- q( p2 ?1 Y9 eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 G- A/ A# F$ v+ W2 k% |* HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* r% K7 X( F0 T1 J) B# z! pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 D6 g1 T2 c: j8 V: d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 F' I: b- q; P2 w/ S; p% P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) V7 _  K: E& K. K( E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 m9 `) B1 C5 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 v4 L6 y) e+ ?: g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 G6 a: @1 @4 [8 \$ t8 Y! z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 e' A  d  J- R/ ~2 K4 j* \8 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 c. r' g8 M" Y" o7 d8 k2 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. s; ^# v! W/ b5 [0 n4 Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( r: B$ @) h1 o+ w9 j) w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% i& @1 g8 l9 J2 E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& d2 {5 [8 C' a$ E<P>但我不会</P>
# d  K5 p, ~7 b' n" Q. S$ Z. r, @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; w4 C3 i+ S, t. Q7 B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! K9 y! l% _7 W# n  }6 f3 l3 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 v7 u& G, N  R, K. @3 I  z% |; T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 r7 V; K$ J. G; t. s4 |# ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 a9 q$ {& M& n2 i+ ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 J% [7 g6 r+ D  Z1 G6 K) O7 \  R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& w" t/ N4 |  g1 o+ c# T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ Q4 ~3 p, T' w5 ^4 S6 ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( ]) S5 \7 `7 K; W$ y2 q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 y. B6 D; o' ~: [$ M% j& l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 I7 o! J' S  o! i* A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( A/ y. K+ [9 W5 x' X; |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- [1 u: D9 f" O6 z' N% U# I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  ^, T$ Y" c1 \/ n7 ^" B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; O! r: M' R: q. L( P- `* \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; ~+ ?+ w, V) w9 n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# j0 M! a: t" i2 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, P/ d- V  Z$ S/ c9 r5 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 d' l7 R) u4 o3 c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ v2 X( E# a/ m7 q6 w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! P4 [# f% n/ o2 t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 X, u6 L( Z6 O+ f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>