【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. @6 C6 X6 G. E我另将歌词附在此。
  ^2 s9 ^. V6 O3 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* F$ N( W8 {+ |8 |We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ V5 E1 |5 S7 V2 F! c: x# BI would probably know how you feel
8 y. X$ l! a3 ?1 t# SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ m" v" J# o& f$ b! R6 GI want to confess that I love you,
$ v4 c# V3 ^+ H: @But I never did
6 J2 ]  X- G9 _+ t/ }' E0 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 {9 y  }1 K: [; i$ UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. k0 Q: y! A1 U1 c8 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ u5 R- E$ c% m; N2 q6 r& t( [Entrust my love within your heart
! g* ]: Y5 I* d( s" BLove… just the word love
: u: I) D$ m, s/ s5 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 R/ i$ ^1 k$ DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) s+ a% g, ^; {/ N9 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ ]' f& n' Y; m6 r' u' JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 ?# {) V) S+ G" t( l2 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* e2 {- X3 A1 p/ oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, x( Z# W+ ~5 c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: l& G/ W: x% |) p* g% n' C; u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 @% q" F2 W9 x, m0 [* e) x! B$ W: U5 ^- q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 j3 \/ v, T1 Y6 G, q6 ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( \2 r  B2 Q4 K/ a* A9 ~, d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( R) b4 C. P1 N# @5 z' O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 ]# w. }( ?& L0 X+ d* b8 _# J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 T, f4 z1 T9 j) Z& ?2 u* D: q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ f. L9 ^- C( Z1 c<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- V5 O$ B# T8 s. {8 p* u8 Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 b$ v5 p5 ?  I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ {/ W8 \9 r! d6 k! q- w* l! F7 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; f2 T0 x- S0 B; N# h- A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, _+ P& a$ L$ ]( C% \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- Z9 j/ U6 @! k, o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( g' ]( `& L; W% D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& \9 g+ D5 k" g) U. |. g% k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* {! y: w1 ~! b$ I" g, k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% N( _3 g9 t0 E# b4 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) N: o' A3 B2 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  g1 c" @( w; s4 e3 E. R7 n& \8 ^' |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) J6 u4 E# c/ B, i( J5 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' |  `/ r( M' T2 y7 f; ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 Y' Y. z/ B6 w8 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! d/ k8 T7 [' ~; \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 Z  L! H5 ?5 N7 b6 K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- v! \* C  |9 G8 |! M4 W: z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 z5 n7 u- a' x, S& z  i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  X, m1 Y- P3 E/ q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ h0 m# C% ^4 A<P>但我不会 </P>
3 O/ E+ N% P! B9 m2 i6 c3 z7 _) T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 }* ]1 x0 {; Y( }' Q8 X& h: m/ r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" ^% m9 `8 Y0 p8 ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# N. J# B0 {* l" {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 d6 g2 D  p3 h# r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- k# O- ~% [: _8 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" C6 ?# B  c( A' _# m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 t1 {& ^4 l5 P% ?+ I: z% K% r9 h/ v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 B5 ]4 V1 `7 n4 j" f  }  n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ~, I' ]5 U# a2 i' [! o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 W5 V* Z" w- m" X6 I7 t% x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>