【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. v) l- m) F4 I0 ]I already loved you with all my heart
1 @( z# s6 ]4 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; j- ]2 b& \! j' VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# m2 k4 _4 ~- T- D9 K! oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 X; {* Z  Q: c8 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, T) @) T8 v, R3 D+ g- \Can I entrust it to you?
9 F. r' l+ f# k  M5 N" h+ e  U9 `' pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 Q" K- `0 B& W. ]0 E4 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ r: g- W3 ^( X+ Q. v) kI want to confess that I love you,
" f3 Q0 R; c% @; d( c) TBut I never did
+ f1 z0 a6 ?- ]4 }& _; \* F$ w5 A  FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( Y" l, t) b( r$ k' K/ v) k, ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) M! Q& L- B* hCan I entrust it to you?
  t$ D. m, h1 `/ r' mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# N( f$ ?/ s: Z' Z3 {7 \Entrust my love within your heart

$ A# @8 o9 c2 \1 f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 c0 C. F+ U0 W: P  P- c7 I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; W% s) g$ e$ N6 T2 e4 q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: W5 R3 Z/ @6 \- ~- O# u& c  l& a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 S: ]$ _9 \# e9 n$ U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) ?+ e8 L: Z: h7 E, _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# i& d6 h" V/ j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 y: J; @5 w* H' Z' ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) |# v, C2 B% M( l. h' B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% Q3 {1 i  A2 p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 m* Q0 _& h% Y2 \* [. X" |: S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ r6 m" `9 _, S4 f! z; \- q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# w9 [0 U) H$ D) x- U4 j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 }& I. q/ `/ D2 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ ^; O/ x1 \! u" L! l& C. y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 r3 z& W! n* P; h. [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( F) b4 m. E9 J<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" m; F5 {8 r) j2 U& g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 \' W6 ^7 U- s9 g' b/ o+ S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# b! Y0 Q* D- o/ v4 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) i! o/ j  I, d, z5 {7 |9 s! A2 ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 X0 ^' c6 k, z1 M) Z. C$ q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" V" U# G& P+ K6 P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* Y$ Y! d, u& M' R  Y<P>但我不会 </P>
! K+ y! g% F+ d+ f! W( B- ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( \" K1 k; C: @3 V8 N: e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 Y. d7 d( D3 q2 H9 }. L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 b+ l. X' r$ A  b+ q; t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ F: K/ f2 S2 H) B: j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, q( y* {$ e- Q; K0 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: a5 X* {) Z& q! P% u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) [; W# d- y3 d* H/ z3 D3 L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  Z2 o) O; s0 X2 O; {1 P- ?6 E' Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

2 U: g* @  u, B0 T; @5 e<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 t: M9 Y- T; [, _* V* @! B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>