【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ q4 z7 C/ a# d* d6 O  K) B- bFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 f. m5 l" n/ b+ OWe meet and talk everyday,
$ s7 i  \/ @1 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; |! Q( f* A8 S# R; bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, k# W& z. c( y2 `" W4 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
& L* t/ F; k# P! H7 YI want to confess that I love you,
/ W* }1 ^9 @! R7 wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& r: J4 v) o, \5 wIf today isn’t too late,
. J# E$ W* R5 I2 Y1 c" _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ]6 K0 W" d' o9 I- ]* r( e, g/ C) H& H8 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( b6 M, o1 f& ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 l6 f6 t$ d6 A" o. t$ mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 n) ]+ k, w: L( g7 l. U) g, |; zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ m8 `9 a, h1 I2 O2 F5 ?If today isn’t too late,
  o5 {4 l2 x. f/ [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 G0 d" l' G4 y) oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ o) a- j9 \1 |- ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* h+ w$ R5 x) d+ x' m) L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, h! |2 j1 N' P6 A# C& Q+ v; t; ^$ ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 ~+ N" @0 C# s+ ~* j0 y% A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 \) f" Y" ^0 s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 k; G  D: q4 K; G+ _1 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 d% ?$ T7 g6 }( D, r: z! \" R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" ?/ O  L+ \. M3 g9 M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 `  D2 Z$ ~- r3 j. H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) Z% K! h( K* D7 y3 i6 c9 D; w: P, t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 @& c! t4 }' T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 I- U& `7 [  C" w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 H3 `  ^4 E/ {; ~7 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% m# A' m" d/ s1 |<P>但我不会</P>
, F7 l6 @. o. Z: b8 {2 ?% K$ u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 q# O' J! X2 ~+ z6 _/ [$ {2 k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% h6 ^4 Z  g1 o& J8 G* y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; s6 g+ B; Y7 q2 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 b& ?8 j5 c0 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" O" F0 y- i, R- |% g) u1 F& |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 T0 ]5 c: m( Z9 l# U9 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: ~- v  b& r" s, X( u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" @  l5 w8 b' ]: S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) a+ }$ Y& e3 F$ p' s2 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  X) f1 A6 O; J; O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 |% o3 h/ N+ y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# U" d5 N' u* `3 s7 O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! t' ?( z6 V1 u<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: o- H0 i& x* Y5 A) o) c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 z& ]& d1 T  P- Y$ {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# A. v5 ~, A4 S& g% X9 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ l( M! p8 \/ A; @  t/ y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- c3 t9 r4 e) b8 j7 E+ s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>