【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. X4 o' F. m% W7 F7 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 ]# a. l. n' p% d+ q5 s6 zFrom the first moment we met,
; V. G' R/ s  j6 w5 E$ h7 Q: hI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 M( ~9 L2 ], }1 a! _- ]" ^Love… just the word love
: Y) \$ c- T) wWhy is it so difficult to express?
( g! N/ o( r  y, J8 x; b3 ^. V7 ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" K; m8 \( Z8 G* UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 b+ V' Z/ T4 y- R; i; N* R, b- VLove… just the word love
$ `% [# M2 H. u0 J: p. MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. R% [4 V8 {) B% S$ F/ B$ K6 b% wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 b, F1 T6 o4 P) V  h0 L5 {! OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; G) o! b- v1 {! U! RCan I entrust it to you?
% M* E4 @3 e4 j/ ^4 d# hEntrust my love within your heart

% u5 E5 D$ ?, }/ H, K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* e/ x* S' A; _8 ?4 G2 l$ n6 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% }8 e0 O& ~7 ~3 X# ^* i: z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 j/ V2 \3 c5 f6 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. S, E3 b* a; E% Y& L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& L8 T* f* y# _- I. ]% c2 e: f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 t$ {6 l; `8 ?/ _! t' d/ k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 C! d. U( Q7 V# T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! c3 R( v6 t5 _* {, ]4 }4 p5 o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 I9 y0 j; |5 ?" V3 p+ t* N% U2 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' e: c* S4 }: _( ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ L+ q! D- {; P& e9 W9 X9 u+ g1 N* F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 }3 J8 K3 Z: \/ ?4 a  s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( S1 p9 h# j( q- t1 }<P>但我不会</P>
$ z$ Z8 a+ J* Z0 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- `' l6 p2 J% ?8 W  o. ]6 R  o- A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! q5 X4 M' q% D7 v/ C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ @: d( o% H, z7 w5 i# t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 ], g3 F  Q$ a8 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ r3 {( r: e' H4 ^5 ~. o, e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' z+ q7 Z! P; ?. A* C# D( J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ G# V7 s" a/ Z# W* r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 Z! k. }. _, K+ ?8 x; k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# ]; Y1 S: o& q( Z7 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( z7 ], B. G7 K5 d1 F% c0 Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, }9 P6 i0 o8 |: I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% l( k* g0 N& c- J. M' Y( r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 @( }9 ?  B9 K0 i( Q" z6 \/ S. n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* o* C. a5 s3 C. c9 `; `+ [6 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( j7 X9 _" G. B- i( f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 L" d; S) Z: h" g9 u8 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" b, h4 v8 K5 j4 j7 }/ [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>