【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: l  N# ?+ v3 Y8 a" v! _' W1 ?From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" }$ d7 J8 h4 u3 v! lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 K& E$ L! {; X6 _# N* zLove… just the word love
% s( E5 ], I2 B, WWhy is it so difficult to express?
. \7 E* W$ |& K. @! \- kI want to confess that I love you,
  ?' G* l5 _& J5 i" I' F# EBut I never did
6 I$ q( c; x3 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ m* P3 m* ]* Z0 [& _0 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 a( K- ^6 ^8 c1 s+ p. k" x4 p; WCan I entrust it to you?
" s0 X3 y! E* t$ Z5 a, E6 ]: gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ C  m0 `; t1 U% {9 I2 R( X6 ?7 o0 ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' P+ T) L9 w2 Y1 U6 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 u; }. [# U6 ?/ |$ X3 q* oIf today isn’t too late,
" I! i- X* f- q* d( iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: u: G' t2 ^9 x8 |1 s0 P! _7 z& A% ]Entrust my love within your heart
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* q3 \% @  q- p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 v  U% }* n. T) @9 \" ^8 d3 ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* s0 M* z: _- z2 |2 u6 u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% i0 ?3 ]1 e/ Q7 D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 x. m7 i3 b1 w% f+ l, \; }$ G* }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! m7 D) |# j) w8 {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: r3 j( ~5 v, M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 u; w" C6 \+ _, ]7 l* l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; ?! N# `6 ?/ C8 S- o: U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& Q9 z1 ~# w; u  M- h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ v  Z+ O) S, {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% ~0 J2 u" w. ?' Y; k, ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. @# q% v, U. E4 Q2 {/ Q% z$ B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' b5 v7 ^* v4 e7 _8 ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' I1 D7 _* w5 A! a4 c1 x; C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# F8 Z- h0 q- \. f- E% e6 s0 H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 ]! I) d) v$ y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" ~8 o5 ?* o, d$ R, O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, e4 _( a/ P. {- P3 N1 r& B) C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 C0 ?6 @) o7 R. q0 D" ?- F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 S" [  x) X$ a4 n. q6 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( g# s$ v, o2 }: k4 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" m4 y: I, ]: |& {' R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( }7 q( z: f/ u) G/ q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% \3 K# ~3 h! E! K6 P3 e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 _. b: T" m8 G3 S, ~, e<P>但我不会 </P>
' V2 i$ \. j( ^$ K6 j* x, ^+ Q# k3 i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 m! x' X9 q' w) |8 |3 h( X" Z' N$ y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, i* v+ i1 M" x6 |% y$ J" d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" H  N3 l8 U# G, U. w- q( ]  D6 ]! J# f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ F- E  m; _- D( h# f. O, Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ P. L2 l% Y4 m  c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( V4 E# L% Z) h: T) S/ f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. C$ J, j4 z$ e3 R9 A, {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 r! I: I# j) `9 i3 m- O8 G<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 E* I* \6 V4 g% }" @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>