【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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+ L/ R" a) @7 B: M, |) {/ X. a我另将歌词附在此。
& J8 r1 g$ D: `4 |! k" BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 X# p( d$ H$ T, |7 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# o4 @, ~% ^$ v5 R+ F; rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) U# P" N$ ]  {% \6 b  V- sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 o% v3 U5 D* d$ YLove… just the word love
) E( ~* a0 y6 i6 ]. @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% q+ b7 W5 b8 \( k# hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) q7 Z1 C- S, w# gIf today isn’t too late,
$ p% {+ B- f2 [0 S1 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  K; O8 b8 D, \0 {* a7 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ y( u$ l1 L: Z- ^  [8 RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' `. U3 y( B$ D  i% O/ d. ~. VBut I never did
, n, q7 g! w0 x- }# z4 u+ V) aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' |; y' Y4 N. @" X9 v/ o' T7 VIf today isn’t too late,
8 G# ~$ S$ w1 @/ p$ tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 Z8 X. n7 U+ L+ k/ J5 M2 ~7 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: c2 E/ [) x( D% ~& ^: ^) H* Q8 D% ]Can I entrust it to you?
4 M/ U1 r; X7 L# R* J3 O! cEntrust my love within your heart
$ `- T7 s. s! m, L. F) V/ [Can I entrust it to you?
$ R: i4 E' j% y5 nEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 }1 J/ I6 l$ C9 }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ F* u7 G6 w: `, W5 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. u8 v: o6 C* \# o: d' d; }4 U. v8 I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: N( H. M! M, ^4 K9 ?: i2 C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' \9 G7 V5 s+ M% ~: F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* s2 o  Q+ J$ r  k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ w  |* h' a0 B# Z+ `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 W. ^, P! D7 b, l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% T1 q6 p, b" a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, v- u  R6 T4 [5 P, o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" ~4 t& R! |. s8 E, `& G2 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 G$ f( }# s( \2 c  c, V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ }. O3 O/ |8 w8 i. v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( O& @# {+ c$ P& F( l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( |- w) m2 b% \* J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ n' F5 Q# e8 ]: u  O" w  V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 S8 J" ?# o6 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. _( `0 i2 T% J8 g( Z, n9 E! L  {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 x3 D0 v& V8 j6 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 s$ @/ U* [  b; L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 n1 Z/ v4 \; F7 J$ T2 E, e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 e3 X) E- q: t. B: y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ n% w$ p, N$ V1 z" J<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" |0 N) C/ M1 N! C3 Z9 \# X; `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' f, Y2 i9 \) h: [! K' h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, {8 G# L- j' |. W# O4 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  x1 `' k3 [  [! {% y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( R5 w9 P( N$ R/ d% t6 S. `* W: ?! Q1 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; [8 N& y: `. T; E# Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  `! d; C% a, k. J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' a7 |9 }( v) w$ {7 K8 D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ]% }5 F. `8 G6 s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>