【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 e+ `  O& X4 G' CI already loved you with all my heart
3 B! b8 E+ ]6 }We meet and talk everyday,
: i1 _8 G9 v& t  T& uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 s& E; U: H) I2 }1 mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 B2 o* R7 U) ^) N7 Y* N# ~$ zIf today isn’t too late,
% G, T+ H* b* `; OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ j- E' d3 `% q2 o+ n+ vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 [% `; F$ ~+ O; k/ cLove… just the word love
" A' s5 i5 x. f& mWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 j1 H$ S3 T5 z% I* p( p2 D+ v: R' uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 N. d" H/ W* \5 q: A- B: pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# Z5 Q0 _/ ]3 X2 h0 Y+ o) L5 JEntrust my love within your heart
' p* a$ k  @! K+ hCan I entrust it to you?
5 w/ o0 r1 `4 w6 r1 X2 D# eEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( c9 G, Q4 {& Z7 d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 j1 Y9 r- Y. p% i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# i2 O4 ~2 N# ~! `  W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( f0 S* n$ q+ F% O3 t6 D+ _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 P' P0 q+ x5 s) o, m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: N2 X( Q8 r- X! p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 P+ R; I8 e% J3 t1 t( s2 Z/ ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- i/ W* q& S/ {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. E  ~; M- w! }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 Y3 L/ [# y9 {& B; V2 B3 M. ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ d: ~5 K% Y4 c% U3 Y* _' p8 O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, A# t2 z. B( |+ k) s% W/ R! X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" b0 |, Z4 ~, q* b/ n5 R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( i) r% }4 e5 L. R( k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 k4 o' Q9 J* c8 H4 |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. _: D( X) c/ _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 |4 \. B: ]4 ^<P>但我不会</P>
6 T$ G. \, i3 n8 X( b7 |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 ]6 I4 n$ M% x3 [( o8 G7 a4 t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 Q% l1 O  M; _3 I1 w. n, O0 [7 Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 V8 v: k2 ^% L0 s  K! S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# J7 b8 T# w$ o+ @, P4 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 @9 m7 C- C* I; x& W6 l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 q2 f6 x/ r7 D5 W% k1 G0 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- H$ R1 u' H6 c4 E- [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% [; D4 W9 T: ]& v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 J+ m8 k! [8 W6 T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 D: Z& H2 z. J% ~3 r7 N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! e: x) S  A5 Y. `  y# l2 }<P>但我不会 </P>
; M) j2 k8 G9 r; {6 e3 r2 P. }, m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ f  F' E8 N+ i% o( c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ g0 g; r2 ~$ q6 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 i( s# U/ K8 Q& J* ^8 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 t2 y0 x6 p9 ]* s. K, K  m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, ?7 ]* F4 O. c4 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 v0 u: u; A" A: R6 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 L, ?- i0 i2 s& |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 M/ x& o9 R' C- \/ D4 L/ w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 N; R- ?! @+ ~" _8 B& ^$ L2 B' q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 m0 n% G3 \! |/ W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ [1 Y& B  B* H8 p$ n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>