【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; y) d1 c& ~+ c5 ^; r, yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 ]: R8 j' _. ^We meet and talk everyday,
3 K5 p4 f6 s: x( ?! {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 @2 j$ _; P% a  V, \I would probably know how you feel
/ g+ }, {+ E8 a' o. M' V) fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ {0 w' ~2 b6 {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* _3 e5 H6 @6 ^6 v8 T# e8 c+ DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& H  u" f0 b: w8 W, o& J; GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! e9 a$ h/ t2 H$ gEntrust my love within your heart
. j9 t( I' }9 \% v7 wLove… just the word love
8 ?# r% J* }/ {! C! i5 q( fWhy is it so difficult to express?
' `$ Q6 v4 l: M1 L5 U. [I want to confess that I love you,
& [9 g9 }. b4 ]; cBut I never did
, p+ R# a4 b3 Q6 |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& [7 [% @/ K* f; Y% r, oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 h* h9 Q5 Z0 M, SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 v% S% l8 ~) V! XCan I entrust it to you?
  s5 E- V3 f$ qEntrust my love within your heart
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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 E7 ]7 O# W5 o& ]9 v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: z% l1 |* ?) _9 B1 S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& R: U4 f$ _$ m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, G0 Q9 k" E) D+ f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& P. _8 g2 K8 Z- W3 I/ P. R# V7 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: n2 O  u9 s2 m. x( G# |4 S1 O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 e4 I" r, \7 Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  D- l5 f; x/ c- X( K4 r2 C- A; M# Z+ p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 j4 \0 _: ?, j' d- M/ b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: u! V, N& ?  P0 R5 w" j# `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ L; B7 u/ Q$ q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ Z; c# J) {1 s" B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ ?1 r/ @& F2 O* d4 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, l) ?* S# P: j* {  u0 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ x8 J6 b5 R; d5 \7 Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' e1 n7 ^, U9 p  w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. S! c) u" w/ l0 }2 ^8 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 R1 n) F' d8 E! G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 I- U( Z4 c% r* ]3 E" m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 `+ d1 ?; V( b% a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 h$ h" h! H! d9 @) y7 d# w; `<P>But I never did </P>
5 ^- e0 C+ f& g; r( C0 ~+ w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 D& `% O# S& q: `2 B; v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( g* s+ Y" Q4 ]' J7 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 D, T1 V  j: T/ c$ t; ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& ~+ k# j) H- j3 O9 d9 e+ Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 {9 E% o7 F1 J1 M1 K/ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 G+ I0 t9 u9 c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 ^4 T' o6 ^7 A3 e: R* q" t9 k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ [5 Q+ T3 u8 F% J  K# e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 x: u& I9 r. c7 {7 D+ R0 v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>