【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& U4 K) p+ C0 W- U3 v. F1 l6 lFrom the first moment we met,
7 p' U% V8 N% |* I/ ?, PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- {( a+ u! K' N: s. `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 a& X1 b. ]1 ^( ^  E6 {3 J( pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. q, r: `! k- A5 ^1 AI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; c, y. B/ [) ^9 U9 yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, r: {# J6 S5 v5 zBut I never did
7 T7 o! H# w4 m# K- W" ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 ]+ B' F% `  H; A" C# ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# n2 z# h" D8 K$ H9 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 V  z" j+ s$ h( e1 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  \. G' y( ?: bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! J- z! {% Y( v5 k7 c/ a1 N' w8 k8 GEntrust my love within your heart
% A1 a! S6 d) ]7 wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 B: U2 h  i. `* E8 f  x. s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& S# z+ Y' ^/ V6 U% O6 d( Q: f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 R5 r! \1 y3 t, L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" |& I  v- n5 q% `* S4 a1 z' c/ A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ n3 M+ N% F2 G' U) B, O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& c, B4 J3 O: B- z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 }' f" s! K1 b: ?! i5 b8 s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ t4 |+ u3 ?* M% _; L* I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- d( `' v1 N5 F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' s0 I  ?, h6 ]- W- b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 i! d, s# H1 F% e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 W9 n; h( ?  H  p$ [: l3 d+ B# X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 I# ~& I' ]; ], m<P>但我不会</P>
  A$ a7 @  w1 Q9 `9 P9 B7 Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 s. e0 ?5 `  E: O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# l( Q2 s) g  w" P$ d. j  l0 s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 g, b* X4 c% A$ [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- d  E, s0 V1 D- Y. ^$ G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 _( Y) [* R- Z5 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% l/ M/ L8 i" O8 g+ a5 V6 I+ E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" u# X$ F/ Y6 c. G% k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# h7 d5 ?; ]& \9 i5 {" |! d4 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# t5 ]7 w: ^1 \7 L! f6 V* t4 o0 J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 A7 v& [! {9 Z- c7 u( [# g2 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 w7 S7 W0 l$ |  s' w2 ?. D* Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ?, ~+ C9 R7 x. h; p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; u, H2 [, A7 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ l- c6 H) F! Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" s" m% G, i9 C2 x/ r. \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>