【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 \+ y. o/ O# q+ X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) A7 V/ {. i5 z5 V( n8 E1 D9 ]1 UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ B0 O. z/ {" D9 JWe meet and talk everyday,
3 @0 w  }$ A6 p' j8 W5 ?, ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( C3 u4 p/ [0 e/ }I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% z. ^' r) j% Z/ P6 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 i! o3 I* K9 w2 {( j# h2 w* P; EI want to confess that I love you,
1 {5 C3 `- ?) d* YBut I never did
2 }* u: Z! u. ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' w# V5 \; K- i% JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( Y: q' y( I5 A7 W, u* JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 ?( v8 a3 t8 y) XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 Q6 E7 Z2 F+ m# A4 i, y# c. YIf today isn’t too late,
' S' I7 J) b- Q0 \" P8 M- QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) X  H8 t# `' v: qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 n: l" n8 W1 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ z5 \( v8 g! I2 \4 N( {Can I entrust it to you?
' w6 q4 K" v* |: T/ f, wEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' o/ [7 n; j! W% U+ H: |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: {0 O( J" T' j* i5 p% T7 @; j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& w& m5 t3 O+ ~: {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ `) O; p  ~5 R6 c. w+ W6 C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 C) U; G+ Q$ \: k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# t! X  r  I- Y8 A9 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- c9 f' q) ]5 u: A. u6 Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* J2 ?+ P3 C/ P2 J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. I- _9 ?1 a3 g8 A/ t- q% w- U) r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 d7 i$ p8 ]7 L3 m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& ^( s! Q0 D+ H. _1 V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 Q) ?: C* Y6 n" D( B5 U) z# I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  N( I$ N% p/ A8 r: h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, c% \) W. f5 g, K/ p8 b  @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 G8 H3 f& ?- s" p. m9 P, l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 r; b  H' k2 F) k2 o" t. Z6 j" P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 X: z4 X9 w& y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 h; X" I( `7 T  s! z! U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* A/ b& Y) K  W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 z+ \! m; C' F) L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" t2 T; N8 z  D. _% J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% o- @% i' e. \, f1 h1 L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 N# V* d! w" c2 M" [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( L! q/ V5 g3 p5 k<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: f2 i3 Q4 G; v& w* F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% }) O" b& o4 S, _! M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; O3 s4 M- r, S, w/ d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( j$ }" r/ `0 f+ m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! n* R* y! C; M2 \% t1 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 H/ N$ }. y0 m7 f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* M1 `6 `8 s! v: T  V$ ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; x, Q4 V9 V5 B: I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% t* G1 M  Q: v" |- y, a2 M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! T; k" b4 _' L0 g( u( X- {4 D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>