【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) |2 h! v4 F3 z# U: EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 `8 y2 G& F# o" CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 Q' C7 h. g; y/ R% [; yI would probably know how you feel
4 Z' ]& H2 d7 n( }7 Q6 O" U" VLove… just the word love
$ l0 S' m. {% k$ f/ z$ A$ s8 N6 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 j5 l! B+ S1 y) o; ]+ mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 G  P) @( Z1 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 M- H  O* Y$ }  M% \Why is it so difficult to express?
1 q: I+ t$ ^2 [  NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ @2 E3 _! I" P1 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) L! i$ F+ l) F6 i+ DCan I entrust it to you?
9 p* a+ Y5 r; F# ^% dEntrust my love within your heart
0 v3 @& w3 g+ |1 M" v/ ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 g/ J8 {1 j  E) i6 T3 Q( z3 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# j' j0 w9 n4 n* |- H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% a5 \. |6 R' ^( b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* P* t# {4 g, U. T3 n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# h. b: e: s$ k, v& M$ [3 ~# L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- b8 C5 o2 s1 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 r# w; P% a9 J  A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# s8 `( d6 r5 o1 F6 [# Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 X& c7 G: S2 K' g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  y* |% ?  o" H& ]8 Y5 e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 M0 n2 U3 W6 f' E; n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% d, W9 Q* H3 \* v5 A1 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 s( t# M5 @7 N8 K( T  O( u1 Z2 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 Y& W+ H7 a6 s3 P2 _! u; y9 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: Y# q, R% M" }- O: n" V; Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ ]# G. J/ K* t+ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 c* N2 v4 x- _2 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& u. I, T/ P0 T3 N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' F5 K, U% k0 i: x' S0 a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) `2 ?) p5 Z6 B2 |7 P1 T: n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' _" T( ?+ y- v4 O) t  s: K* {3 a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 g$ m: x* H! A! S1 w" T* j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. G. b# c9 w( X* Q' z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 V7 N# g7 [1 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 }! k" j3 |' u1 l/ l7 V; q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; N4 ~3 l4 o4 @, H! @" `- }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; a$ _  W2 H4 r% S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& q' L+ H. U$ L7 k- i1 I  Z8 | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 s9 L  h% O6 [) d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- h$ L/ a' J) p8 l3 I+ t' l1 {$ g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>