【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# a- P$ e% T; o9 A, `+ T* p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ u0 K3 S9 P# o) g7 X, |* C0 GFrom the first moment we met,
& D  h) u) _: e( }I already loved you with all my heart
5 s# r8 J" T8 ]! x( u" SWe meet and talk everyday,
/ h+ J1 p0 P2 I% G. I# {1 `  yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% M1 w& J7 c1 O% {6 sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ o6 V. V+ S. \5 fI would probably know how you feel
) @. h" [1 j7 k0 pLove… just the word love
  E" N- T! D& D: L; @  P2 n% WWhy is it so difficult to express?
( W/ L9 r: b1 e+ l  eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' }1 C$ w& ]# S$ J$ ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 }/ F" {1 H2 d3 o1 r4 M# R0 f: REntrust my love within your heart
- C' r# r3 g7 I) w* w- ?# W5 W- KLove… just the word love
5 y, L0 T* k- F8 y6 k! ~( ]: k7 V; SWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 x- \: F$ V$ O' E# M9 o. pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 O" r4 c1 O1 `5 v2 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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. b. F* f7 ?) n( [- k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) h# z! {# T- ]) M. a: r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: i" X) V9 r: D% M  p# Q: }* z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, b# U, o  V1 J- l3 |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 T/ T$ C4 X* U3 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' q0 s2 u) [: w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" ^6 [9 M+ c9 q4 D<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: b2 v5 i: o! ^6 }# B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 X0 `, R7 _! ]3 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 |3 o1 A5 Q/ |8 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 t# }2 c2 _; @7 E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 }' q7 P' A, U- y) [+ @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& h* W5 X% ^# ^% c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ j' Y/ G8 E! [0 Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* b0 _! \" B1 H) h) w! L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 `: Z! @( d5 s7 y: V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* h* t' e: q- h, K9 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 C7 |- \! ^5 o9 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  ^, |  v+ `6 U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 V! a2 F* Y) @3 f: r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 m7 e. E# i3 @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* z9 |' d9 G; v. {( I+ S. B" L<P>But I never did </P>
4 z. F6 R  T. Z$ D  |8 [<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  M& j, o9 E$ {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- b: D! ^8 d1 H( y. X1 W& C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: q( C& }( z3 d5 y  D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# |! S2 u- k. d8 ?) r0 {9 |- m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- y* x% T$ F  Z: }( s& L. g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ K% Q% l- G% }2 ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, I; ?+ L4 \1 j4 y+ c9 P! E  E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 i1 p& r1 r3 {. c7 t& d1 t9 Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>