【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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4 |- Q9 }+ _! j! |我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% d! [* d1 q3 Y3 ]5 V# p" NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& `# ^# V* o; Y- D- `) lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" y/ x4 ~" ]7 P9 I+ H- uWhy is it so difficult to express?
) k& z" y2 Q1 z- L5 z" fI want to confess that I love you,
0 K! W4 r6 b+ P7 ^# MBut I never did
+ [) y6 ^4 H& T. f5 _6 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 t! O4 U, }1 j8 G6 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' N( [1 R5 {0 j) f" ^$ O; NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& v- B' A. j) Q1 |/ ^Can I entrust it to you?
, b# F3 S' ~0 ?* N; ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 {, N6 ]9 D4 L* pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ O# \/ S- u; K+ l4 W3 n" x) oIf today isn’t too late,
& r* E1 p1 \, q/ N- Y( d2 p' m& W% MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! a7 T  u  E  VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 C( e( K" S. X0 \: ?  @Can I entrust it to you?
, ?9 [+ T# t2 o8 J5 cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 K! Y2 u. Q" ~. A& hEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& L( {% t  P# @1 B; F3 ]7 k* M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: a% F* B* }) u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 N2 m. \* S7 S3 x1 O$ |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 a: l5 z0 n# g4 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) F) e/ H# E3 N' J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 `+ z2 |1 j& T. Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- J, J, [! Z& C7 z3 V( _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  C+ e8 e3 M6 x! a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ M* \9 F. R0 d. d2 ~) v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 C/ G/ R, g. S+ ?3 u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! ]. Z7 @$ e5 \: g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 ?6 L5 H6 `7 g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 @" \% d: g2 E9 E9 i/ C# q) h  B' W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ C1 u& Q7 e- t6 E( n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 T  D0 y( r) }$ `% u' T<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ F0 [7 ?; O: K# v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 m. `. ~. }' Q3 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ?5 q7 [3 A) |4 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. \: V8 \$ X8 `1 [5 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' x" Q6 v3 Q* c4 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 ^. |- ~: Y& e( ^8 Z- A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& W2 m) t: e8 l0 m8 n4 b+ e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ h4 Y9 p# @! v. C5 \6 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: x) F, L6 E" S! d- {1 o. p8 m<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  X5 m8 @+ a7 B4 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# ^* Y& h* Y, l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  R3 Z3 k% t  U- p6 E  }& U# Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  U7 N! Y6 j0 Y; x( \5 M( Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 g4 j' B7 Q5 O: E5 `/ |, f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: T; X/ F7 n8 Q- ]; B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 a" `0 J5 X7 N) |! \7 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  ?+ V) Y, n0 i2 P" U  M. o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 k3 _5 k! j& q5 i, ~' W  v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 @, c' m( p( J' W  E% _# @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>