【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; a( P8 \1 J! ~7 l) \; |# jFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& Q5 p, z/ G# c" Z- RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 m- w" a/ R, T- g& JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 `# g8 j% n/ T5 v. `  LBut I never did
3 x, P0 W; n2 q" x5 ?5 L5 r3 MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" i  y  |' \! q( k" o4 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' ]- f2 ~+ u4 p, G$ L& E- HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 ^; J4 o" E7 a- O/ uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- p6 f6 D# S# L. _  W. A: tWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 ^1 C) K1 V+ L4 K/ N, x* nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ J; l# V8 N3 y( y/ n' m9 ~; CIf today isn’t too late,
, J' h" P  D/ b. l6 {$ g: xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, O; Q: u% E$ }- H& V8 d6 Y$ }; AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- n3 W* T$ g" O) U6 f9 XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 }, f$ [& N! |: j1 hEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: |/ S. f6 }) u/ |% y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% D; ]: g% ^7 w3 b2 X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 f% l. o3 ]8 }/ c) L8 A& [  @5 n6 I$ e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 x8 h: b; f6 |/ ^! i- I4 |, f: J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, r8 m$ m" U, H& C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 A; ?& v" V* h) y$ a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! Q7 k4 E$ ^/ I! F( }1 }1 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& A+ r% D4 A# _5 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- h" W9 M5 T) K2 d: n0 |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 U1 N' c. F# I9 |' G# F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 F7 y1 d' \% L7 {+ N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 |& \: y, A; k- S. r0 Z% o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ K1 }; A+ v$ M3 O7 [6 w" V5 _+ T6 M9 C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 k# |6 p/ f1 v/ F7 I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 ~& L7 W& o9 w1 T& u: ~7 ~, c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- [5 a3 L- q( D4 W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# D( x* o4 c! U0 }4 M, L* l8 f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, t8 S' m7 \! _$ ^# H/ h& ~1 |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( P- v" V4 t/ i. S5 F5 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ h/ ?  j8 N) c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) U8 g3 f- z; k/ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ Z% w# K& g, r" }* b' c' P# d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( A5 U( c5 a4 R, K* B- b: P' b' ^( \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 K0 C" Z9 N$ S$ _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  b3 G/ |/ p1 ^5 P$ h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# P9 f. u$ N& R' m. b- P' `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' L" S% l- |3 J9 L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 L. M$ T2 m, I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% t8 w) N- r$ D7 x<P>But I never did </P>
: ]) R  z, v& q7 V. p: U<P>但我不会 </P>
( w) @0 H- d" }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 C( Q/ b* {$ Z2 `3 w9 b4 S, Y, p  Q" o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' M% p6 I! ^6 M# r- G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" Y2 f  T2 [- U7 z' V; n+ K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 `- y2 L5 e, _. c3 H& ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 x, t% j3 ^% a3 E1 h" z' l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: O4 |$ c& Q# F- q) c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) W7 y$ E( B  P, f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>