【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* l" P: m6 N# w/ S$ S& V我另将歌词附在此。
* i  J& U+ T+ MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% m& q, _( w' v! @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% c. S- v! b# B+ o- U' J. Z# AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! w# g" m6 N6 UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. l  N2 l3 w7 c5 m( eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# J4 o% J6 v- B6 WLove… just the word love
/ |6 _/ K. P# d% i+ T5 D6 g% m1 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  y& X. Z8 a( b) TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 g8 m+ [: O, A0 OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 Y# Y2 D- G% F) W! }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: a  Q% P% F+ D/ w4 U" W5 l+ D0 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* J# I& L0 Y; [4 B& g5 V$ @' M  uLove… just the word love
7 b5 u# n. Q8 }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 E: |, u. ~' ^- M6 \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' U8 g* m. m& j: s- ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 ?( u  y" s+ B. @- y; d3 [* e0 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% c3 i2 k( c2 n% q, ]% {* R& T* D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 m3 r5 N+ h6 f- G! L3 @. a$ Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 i& q4 k, e  c  [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 r1 D& a7 |5 ?8 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% D8 e0 R3 \! j" p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 }5 z' k: I+ L* |, {5 `4 h) ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 b5 a  n$ s8 t+ N: V9 n7 G8 _+ u4 N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" ^) Y5 C  |$ O; C% I* g$ F/ y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" X: A" g8 n- ?& y$ O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: r4 n$ e# o- u% f" ?6 T2 N( f, a  I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# N/ P% S3 u" c" z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 `$ w* J7 `$ J, U. G: R  A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; V  a  Y; W! `  ?( E6 W. f3 S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  u. L/ w/ |4 ]! b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, e4 W% k$ M9 j# B+ J' i  p3 _  }6 G5 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- y* g4 a" `' c) J+ X# w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 w5 u6 t/ ?$ e* T' B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 t& X+ ]" a' P8 I9 Y5 T8 ~% L3 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 o3 q7 V7 `& E+ y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ {% G1 y7 E, U; f$ r0 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 J) i% U% Y& M5 W9 l& j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ]5 i) e* h& t3 O# h; H: y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ \8 m# z5 S# |! G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# u' `, D' z7 `$ z5 h) ^6 V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& ]/ D& s8 }) U0 t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>