【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 p8 d. h4 Y" F# D我另将歌词附在此。
1 Q& T, A% q% _& D2 ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; [" I1 o1 m# Q* V' n5 S' MFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) |; ?' F" b5 V; j- Y' pWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ L# d6 J' q) p4 {# ^* }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 F' a7 w3 A3 {) N! G& f8 gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- s; l5 z/ E1 D- X: rI want to confess that I love you,
% r" o8 A' N+ lBut I never did
  I' K, w5 z( ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 M2 G- p+ c( G4 c3 IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" _8 m! R7 ^1 ]7 K: T' WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! a/ q1 ]3 y/ o0 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 D$ D: S. b# L) k# E0 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 B2 J0 O) G/ EI want to confess that I love you,
8 J4 ]9 [. @: j& A5 v/ OBut I never did
+ A1 a( p8 l7 K" ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; \( j6 J+ w) w! Q% d+ WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) p: b$ S$ T5 h3 U& H# I: gCan I entrust it to you?
9 s) E4 K2 I* O6 ?  B1 P) REntrust my love within your heart
9 W9 v0 l4 g' P6 P8 \* CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- E. q  y! `8 u, j; D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ z6 K2 D. N' R$ ]5 e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 s9 V1 N; R$ X3 h' q4 ?9 b+ T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: e9 m& M0 ^2 P( R( T1 F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 P8 r5 ^0 Q" I- w3 ]& d; S$ Y6 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# ~) Y6 k( m, {2 w0 w# `! u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: c6 T. h8 |1 w1 [, V& B7 [, Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  i3 b4 A/ v/ Q7 L9 {5 s, N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* j, u" U  T4 A1 ?2 B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. n1 A/ H6 Z8 n$ x. \) f6 P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 \, `' H% k1 O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* h3 l" c* \$ _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 k) J% j: g8 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, c6 Q; j. r7 w2 \) j+ [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" A- K; z8 t1 A, @) M  z, X+ i: b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; T3 ^7 d# X# u, X<P>但我不会</P>
! o" _+ l" p7 s$ J+ P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ Z5 h. d, x% Q! a+ P- A# U! f0 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; Q- j; ~" C: f: {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Z9 C( i' o9 U# `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 b4 {8 m. N3 i; r7 j7 g, X# S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) P5 j, S, c5 ?3 S2 t; z/ E* n5 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 p6 @1 Y8 D7 ^& u, G- Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 B+ ?+ V8 n& q4 t2 h! _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ k* m& H8 G& `9 K+ G* J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' ?+ w% F9 N7 P' E) ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( R$ e& K2 E9 f5 ~. L: V4 P' u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 J; `: O$ a. A1 Z" S6 @" C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 z+ p/ P3 B/ n6 n" I; s4 h  x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" s* s9 Z  w% z! {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>