【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
/ k, ~8 t  A% gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 B  V: H2 x6 w  n( g# s0 mI already loved you with all my heart
  Q& S! R5 ]8 T5 R: y! i. dWe meet and talk everyday,
' s+ i' C: {! ]  P7 i0 bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: {* K- Q$ T6 Q4 B2 D( hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 x# h$ @9 G" V$ p* b; FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- k2 L4 ^+ J% s# R; D8 M; `* m- _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) t3 v6 U4 C/ t, D( T+ h. e' pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, u5 n, T2 J4 g5 g  xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ L, D$ T* E( L& U) D0 y8 s; fLove… just the word love
4 Z0 d8 Z" I3 z! y- |9 V$ W! F8 }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 c/ w3 B" H: X9 t* ~( u  Q% pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. S, {5 a  d) R7 i  jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 c6 `# v$ k$ ^  e0 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& f7 t- a; ~- [6 u! N  U  nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! j4 R, [7 S+ I4 m& U  B7 v2 }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ v/ F. n7 y! f+ x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  ?4 j1 Y2 F! U1 l2 w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  x: {' P" e# O3 @+ p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ N( I% n0 V" n3 v' e+ ]- o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 Q# @. U# N; e/ |' n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) t& q& T1 s4 Q/ a# s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) V3 Q% u- H* f' u! d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 k! \& _. Q7 _; K/ U+ A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  L1 y2 C" N3 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 S# ?% L# M) |3 l- D+ R! S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 }9 h6 T9 q4 W* Z- l+ G( A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ B$ a8 k7 ^# c4 j6 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' d  [; E! M* P, l2 v0 O5 a: e& @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; ]- R, R4 n% v' g+ q8 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 m3 T& q4 |: p& I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ O: _( g$ w2 `/ ?7 f<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 k8 N6 O# g7 }: M9 h7 n<P>但我不会</P>
' a4 a' J7 X2 L& _( b7 B" v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* V% \7 I0 ~2 j, h- R- q- E2 C  s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 P2 S/ ~6 J/ c, {" f5 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ U2 I$ M/ i2 X' R+ \/ V8 a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 t* Y( V) a( b" [9 ]" X0 b. L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' n4 L  t6 ]! w7 {7 I0 I: ~3 M/ J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 h0 J8 x* z9 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 p* r5 t4 z) u: M' }; _  ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# n  ^- a, t) n  K- F, i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 ]* ~% _- B) @6 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( `/ ]( k: T0 j$ _. I4 N<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% {9 t: l5 U. h- O* R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 [2 _- Z. J: E: @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ w- d/ k) D2 S- g* R5 H7 b- i6 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 f* {, r/ ^# b0 b/ ?) A9 e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: U1 s$ n" y9 s4 a/ x+ E. I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- ?9 K( p) @( d) L( \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 n  H2 M5 {( s. x/ `8 X' l8 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>