【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' S* G( Y- \, {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: ^( [# X& R/ x4 }" D" C) `+ Y, aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ W% D+ w; B; W- D8 ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 x- Y) g: L/ F& w. v/ B- M4 g7 zI would probably know how you feel
5 _7 z' M* g5 q& ~8 |2 ^Love… just the word love
3 Z$ c4 S7 }# A* ?. t. F+ fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* n3 H+ t, q& J. CIf today isn’t too late,
9 w3 O3 e% w( ]4 x, `" |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: Y5 i% S  K6 b( \7 _0 X* R7 \6 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ Y1 R7 ~" n; m* X/ {; H- D' |I want to confess that I love you,
9 f4 ]4 \. V, bBut I never did
# {6 V9 K3 r+ b, J0 L  DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& D" M4 ^+ I- I6 L6 U. N" tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ `* v# L, j' q/ S4 A/ XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
* g) g4 l/ U5 L. w, y0 pEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: M# b: s( ~4 }6 m/ z6 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. n+ r( M9 c$ z9 Q5 d6 g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! f% Y1 f! i/ p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 r9 ~6 B; a# ?! T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" ~% K1 Q% U7 w% R- s9 W# C" G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" [3 X5 \9 t8 {( D" ?- I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 B1 ?7 j! T0 |% \$ |' c& {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ g  o. m: a  r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 B& z( I* R" V! w! V* p- }) g<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 f# ?- c1 i/ A9 e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 }1 W1 E! x4 A: Y# f* A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, ?3 ?& T2 P' l7 D; C<P>但我不会</P>
  a- s& H' m' Q3 n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 D  F$ a0 ^0 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! k6 R5 i) b: y1 k* G3 H- W$ M( N  }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' o" I# Y$ j1 \+ R3 j& [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" c7 i; ~. t. h0 \6 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 l: _- t/ g" q+ l" `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 F& I! _5 h! {( z/ {- N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 K; B+ H0 h4 P, J3 s3 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' p) x( M! h4 e3 ~& i0 r/ W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 u% @* j9 }+ i0 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- D) @5 r: P% m2 H$ }$ J% l/ R4 W<P>但我不会 </P>
. q$ ]0 @$ o# [' G# k- Z% j3 n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 a4 y; z  |+ O9 q: N8 K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 x& B2 n* E9 {% r5 T: a8 n* m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" A& |0 ^* L: T5 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- b" S6 }1 E" L% S& \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' T; R/ b6 k. m) y: ?$ ]* S: w) n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* e" E  ^; I9 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 t9 T+ J! V  G& {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 |) y- o1 C" L( w5 ^# ]  |! ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 v& {) a5 D9 d. @8 G( ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 d- @& a# d; J- ~1 z" o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% q1 e' A; C+ m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>