【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ C2 p% ^7 i) u6 g/ K+ O: B- \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 Q' ]. [7 ~& k& i5 w0 P# m# NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) y* L& `- e+ I: `  {8 m. @From the first moment we met,
5 }8 z; i( {9 |- v# T0 tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ U2 o2 Y: j6 Q% `6 @$ q. j! fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 _3 F$ L6 z- a4 v4 }5 x9 ~# BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, x' F) e; j7 d. r' _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; U, l0 C! D2 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ g, B8 ]. m9 x0 B! T: k' {Can I entrust it to you?
6 n& ^, Q' b1 I! U+ g6 u% xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. a! u; q+ A; Q2 ]) iWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 f; B0 f4 }" YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; ?( R; Q9 V) |: U9 T) k! v: mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" ~* |- }3 p* \& S6 z+ Y, rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

- F* R+ p# F$ w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% C4 G9 ~- \7 P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 W6 m4 B& K, Q! g5 c, M9 P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 d  L1 M5 S% ^; Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* |5 E8 K/ P" I9 j. c2 K% C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ h7 b+ [6 I8 W* s) e( m8 E7 x( g. Q& ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 _( A% T$ w& k) F: A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, H# [; c% i+ p2 F8 d' o: d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& [) ]4 ]. z2 \/ \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' U6 p/ l% t- f# X, f# X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% h+ X# Y3 _( f5 f( @1 I& E4 ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! s5 E% z' V. M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* y) A% w# C- b- g/ k% @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 L8 {+ H: s9 }7 y/ h; x( F/ y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: v  l8 z  T; \+ ]+ K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) c" c' e; k8 \5 j5 Z, S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 i6 [7 v% Y: b% @$ [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* }# ~" m" z* U% G0 b9 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% c4 G) d3 ^: w; j/ U# U/ f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* y1 C! A! U5 \6 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 D* {; `: I: f0 p. Q4 Z+ k& p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, O! b3 D0 z2 v& t3 V, h) `$ g$ H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' i; m$ E/ K8 R" T9 [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 w! u2 L8 O; v( O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 Q" r* [7 j/ c- {- [8 M( W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% C. ?) w3 {6 H' W- a3 n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) {! h3 f. ?' i2 t  F' V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 A5 F/ ^! t$ P3 D* }( V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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. |: J4 j- [3 f$ [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 D( T( O2 M: G8 a3 B( S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>