【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* Z/ F2 Y/ B6 ^" A- sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 Z( S. C: V% v/ l) T" }From the first moment we met,
% Y7 l& U# {- h' {8 I% x9 QI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ x7 }# \7 x3 S" H7 ~2 E  XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ W, m1 [- l/ {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 m" j. B: d0 G" n) V' X! i1 ~Can I entrust it to you?
. B6 {  ]5 O) B5 e: xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 w4 e' v/ o5 O$ hWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 a  |: w$ q6 s$ aI want to confess that I love you,
, ~/ v- ?& V) z( G3 sBut I never did
1 Y* Z, [5 h! F9 e0 W% r6 C& bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 n5 b6 z+ ^/ [. W! }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! }+ L( x/ j4 ]$ i* g" m8 Q* sCan I entrust it to you?
2 B3 [1 x& f6 Q7 G4 C+ ~' PEntrust my love within your heart
0 ~3 P3 C; O2 x$ J4 w: HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% Y* y9 z( u: r+ Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 x3 g; a1 S( B! `<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; s5 L9 y4 \7 c! \6 ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( Q8 a: s( A9 a% ?/ v# D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 G! D: j. l3 @; O& u8 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' L1 _" P; i4 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% }, s3 N5 P% l& {( X! J) w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' B. u# H% {% L6 G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 O0 d8 P: z+ r. N/ i" c7 j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  Y9 J8 |4 {* H. n+ |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: o6 @' U8 ~+ s( {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 d; S" @. X) F' T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 d( U4 a, \! k3 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 K7 w1 A1 C) H2 T# q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ ^1 g4 K: U- S8 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 N0 o+ D& m, g7 Z, O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) H6 H4 q" R1 Q6 D2 N# h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 F' s4 c  q# L2 @% ^5 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 _! U: t( e, Q8 `' C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ A; e) ]1 x+ \5 v. l0 V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ j. b' B3 r& l- n6 i1 D1 @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# Z2 s- G. S0 w% {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ i0 m2 n) R1 ^8 ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! P8 [: |% A. ?, t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: p/ b; |  D( D/ \& ]+ x  q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( }! O" _! W0 P& n1 l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 u' m9 |4 R3 y, ]" P5 j+ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 x, S0 _+ K2 J& A7 C, T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ o! D, l7 @+ E8 y* e! g' n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% `4 P) B2 A5 t8 T3 Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>