【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
- p  o' v0 L  m' J, q5 {# T0 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 I/ o; }6 U( e  NFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- Z, e# j9 E5 Q" Z9 |! m: PWe meet and talk everyday,
" P' G7 k4 H  `, i3 BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; A; L' q3 N# v1 Q/ ]! TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: f" F6 p' }: @; E# f% Y3 lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' y0 N/ ?) e4 G5 l# m( z% `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- A3 l4 q0 ?4 O, Y7 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 a4 K3 x  F& F. p  G/ z6 aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- U- m% c+ I' E: g" @6 D9 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 f% ~; w0 w) u0 q) v* K, y( s% ~Entrust my love within your heart
6 k0 h) @$ s( Y) N/ o# G; R1 wCan I entrust it to you?
+ d- c1 N. j+ F+ ^Entrust my love within your heart

3 W) P( s. y! F1 O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 }" c* E; p* i3 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  e! d: M  Q" X" h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ B7 f( k) ~& x  Q. L3 \( O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 J/ y+ v7 |9 r8 @. u$ l! a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 h8 x& l) l; T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. j2 G3 m6 F" }# N0 E/ J: l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% m) J8 a$ A  z  k, h: P<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; |9 ]0 i  R0 h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, x; L- k9 \( |$ u9 T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 D; _' [5 {* _4 A! X' Y# V2 g- N& @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 K; L8 v- q, @7 X# ^; E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% v1 X/ S! c8 U" Z* I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ H  Q: J/ J3 P% E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" d5 \5 d+ H# g: M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. V* u6 e3 o: |, v/ `5 O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 v+ T9 b( \" q& O$ A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% I: E8 o* H+ h# ]: p# x* @6 ^. c* R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. g5 e9 @* C. c! \+ c4 U5 N<P>But I never did </P>
+ F. W, E' `, y& ?: t<P>但我不会 </P>
* R: t: x8 b  K9 ?/ k0 p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- F( g  ^( y6 T1 `# ]. W: T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 e5 o3 r  M: q4 i, S7 f; s8 z* x9 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 j$ d: Q4 F9 S$ \3 N! y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 b3 B) ~; P3 _9 V; a& c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& `9 l- a) @, q% O. ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& f: {+ I) r- t/ {& M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>