【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 e" ~, `1 {' z1 r% t" WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 D- r0 S. Y3 }+ g7 {8 oI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 e* g" ?9 p0 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
. [% o+ U' Y8 f# D, S) `6 }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! t3 J% l' _( {. Q9 a6 \" SLove… just the word love
( Q8 E0 l  Q/ g! p3 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ b3 ~; o& j, _" `I want to confess that I love you,
6 q$ D7 J' x) a- P% E. z2 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% l. {% s% K3 v3 t$ BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* ?% b' k, s. o$ yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% x$ H/ \* ]# F' b: q5 X& b# `& t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" C) O- W8 B5 s5 F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 c- ]* ]+ k8 O( q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 d0 X; Z* O, p: }7 Z( ]% t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, J# Y6 s* y9 I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ M$ j, {6 H6 e) L/ V) `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 l# c# E4 ?0 D7 a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 T7 E2 H4 \2 T1 E5 y5 @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 H" _3 V2 i- i* n7 A. P- x& F2 f6 T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 u6 b0 Q1 f6 B! L. D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 L- E6 P$ [, q/ g1 Q6 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( L4 U9 q- a  c( o- J4 c<P>但我不会</P>
8 _3 h* W! H" P, n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, U- Z- C3 a# ?2 ?5 [: t' G  t6 D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 y! z0 j) M( V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* ~, i  K2 L0 U. ?4 n3 g" ~3 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, J1 A/ w& |1 n! Q- j1 d" h) J% U0 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" [1 M( |. ^6 R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* I3 C0 O2 H3 B6 \) e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; ?5 l- t3 k! _6 ^, d% f% {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% R. m, H% w. j( G5 k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% L7 L. X) F0 K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 v. s. n. l0 x8 {8 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) k7 |$ M" |+ g% X( \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, p+ O6 i4 z. ]& ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, q/ E9 u' a  A$ W8 y3 V5 a1 J$ i7 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ k0 r* U- h7 ?1 D6 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) N" }8 U. o# R% S7 |% n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  b7 O3 H8 v4 }, _9 L1 f  R7 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( s5 l, r0 C# [  |* i' w* f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 M: i: n7 K! X* K: t5 z( c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 V+ l8 T/ q4 x, Q8 U/ ~2 P  U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>