【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 u* W: Q2 n3 g8 x* A5 r4 LI already loved you with all my heart
4 Y$ x5 E' a6 m( u" F# JWe meet and talk everyday,
# N7 q; s+ Q/ e2 j2 O2 \) R  y* N. E" V+ I6 MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% G9 T$ K- I3 c6 m. }: eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( E; P8 C8 J- e, Y6 d% q  SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- |2 ]; ?3 [1 r1 p6 \) XIf today isn’t too late,
, v3 s3 N/ H+ h8 g- YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; K/ e. _5 \6 Y6 X. U7 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  q9 x; d- _5 [7 z, PEntrust my love within your heart
! C$ x$ s  E( Q' x) N4 q/ x9 SLove… just the word love
4 b1 ]7 q/ h6 ^, {+ m( G! L2 M" ^Why is it so difficult to express?
( O1 j  u3 x" t6 ^! nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  [$ S) h2 }0 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% O3 s$ e( _2 a2 D8 tCan I entrust it to you?
" f  w- F! o1 ^0 xEntrust my love within your heart
3 L% V' }6 k+ b1 B& X6 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 @& d+ ?9 k. [) n3 E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 i7 s6 }, m$ p6 a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 r$ D5 y; ]  B8 q2 m% C! F. j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; A( Y( _* [$ O7 {% s8 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 M9 a3 d6 Y4 ?) E+ q# ]) x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, d( c7 w, M/ e& K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! w/ {, ]; D& U, P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) m) ]$ l: G, F, A" d* w  L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( W; s) L0 ?3 P9 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# y" i- J3 g+ ?: A# Q' k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, n# m3 O# }# [; d% D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 n, C& s: z  Z2 V$ S3 u$ q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% i1 k2 X0 Z  |5 g  H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 l4 f; Y$ E- N! G* p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 `0 C+ v% T# }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ M5 i- l* J" z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; V% P$ x4 J$ L5 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# r9 |7 n# B3 z1 I! x) p. e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 b' g- m' G" G) H+ J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 _! W" {. s/ g. {  F0 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 p) t- Z" s+ L2 s- f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 t- [. g1 _2 [- u  h! s- [' C1 e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 P9 I4 n+ b8 u9 y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- i" x5 n% S3 d/ \, b8 ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 ?: M. n2 |2 s. z8 p! h- |' k( E<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 k( H9 m) W( N" R3 T! V# J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 {+ {' e; K. O5 B! @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 o# O1 C$ G& B+ K3 T) j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ A& G! ^$ m3 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 A5 W: V0 O3 n9 t! Y/ B; @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) Y1 J' k, I) Y% Y3 g$ X2 D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 A2 F: D# m7 Y. X0 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: N6 c. r: D: @: q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 C5 \2 K3 p5 V: R1 f 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 e( V5 c6 f. A/ Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ o1 [4 A3 X$ O: I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>