【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ p: P1 k8 X- UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. m) p3 `: Z, X9 l' Y1 WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# `8 x) l, p5 J$ Q. Q4 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: b, |3 v1 s; e$ I" W/ a, Z* P0 \$ bBut I never did
( F: _! h+ [; J; S6 }# R/ F6 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 ~" K  z( E9 V3 K5 l7 Y2 L1 {Love… just the word love
2 B0 a3 [5 b; N6 W. D8 ^3 s& t  WWhy is it so difficult to express?
' q" A8 k0 q0 {! u; m4 {* o& F: ^% tI want to confess that I love you,
& r& k) B5 Q# U  A" E3 p/ T) HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 e; K3 l$ m5 KCan I entrust it to you?
* W& I, r8 }& \0 r# xEntrust my love within your heart
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$ a' e( v+ g+ H' R# o" L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 `. g$ K2 _: b  ^0 J: t  V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 m# s' P3 A# w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# V: V5 s; x8 n9 Y% A. \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 i3 E* t6 h) x/ S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ D: k; S% {6 s+ X. ^5 J: r  [; A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# q6 R$ y. `. B+ o$ o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 u2 b6 l) A$ p1 B9 C- u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 ~5 o- e, A$ k; j<P>但我不会</P>
: Z7 ^% ?# y7 i# i  w: h! R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 y4 c" Y$ ]( I: I( w% f4 o8 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  n" M* [6 n' x. I  W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 @: K5 D) ~' M1 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ S8 M/ r& U/ E- H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 i' y6 @0 K# T$ X/ R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ S" }/ S6 b% e" v4 n5 P# J2 B3 p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: |1 H6 f  l" K) r* M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 T8 e* I7 [, L& g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 ^. L5 {, n7 U5 A8 R& E$ v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) c5 a+ ~+ }) y# _# b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 a$ x8 v5 u7 B" q. m9 o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 ~6 u$ A7 P- I$ h9 F$ G( o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 c9 y- J" p4 m1 r. W9 a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 k3 w. a- J  s4 F' a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 W- C$ C# e$ f' {# f% y0 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>