【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 _9 f$ P- x" m我另将歌词附在此。
% ~- E2 V6 }! ~) D5 G+ g: k( C/ AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 M1 {, L  t& S+ d0 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! K& Q8 @0 X+ l; w1 O7 \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! ?1 B9 F" Z  ~  a7 i! oWe meet and talk everyday,
4 x2 l; ]. k: Q& pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! @6 ]0 \8 \6 r0 t: }$ F, Y' I) lI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 P1 X: X$ @. n7 F  o: u2 WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 v5 b2 k% \# l* A% X% a! [7 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; n+ M0 X( j+ gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, a5 S. @1 y$ E+ K/ _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 X/ F; u8 l4 |' t8 N* wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; l" [- G, }5 C6 A: n4 d7 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' w& ]# p1 z( T: [# kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 l+ q( l5 ?8 K" RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 J$ W( t6 w& ]( ?% D) x, Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( Q% J% @; g) ]& U+ ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' Z4 M0 F, [( ]/ X$ y5 V$ O7 N, l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ j/ n$ B+ R& s# f0 w/ B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# `, e' ?9 i5 \! `8 L1 S/ v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& ~- Z5 A& b% i; s* _* a, R1 c5 J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 J( m4 p7 d/ B7 \: w1 l! m' g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ n2 ]. B4 g) ^9 S; x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, s6 }* R. g7 B, k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* Q: a$ _& s( U# F& n' P5 v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" r# k1 x8 g' o& q! y0 w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  a2 ~& ~$ Z3 w6 M- a! x* K1 z; r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 F* H0 I' |, ~1 F  Y) ^3 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 f/ W# P1 Q& }" w. C. h4 B* [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& H$ R" ]4 _, S+ |$ ]0 \: @* z  L* X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& i* O6 c4 y7 J+ N* |3 x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 m4 G% B! t8 Z  N1 e" L  ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* ~/ V0 S$ R, {; J* M* H% ~0 q' x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: s7 v7 w2 _2 B. m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% s+ U! G5 Z0 D* y! g8 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! U5 L0 w" E) _, C2 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- e) |4 n" s( y7 L* G2 g* W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 q$ o1 K2 \+ j4 m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, J4 O' R( N, u/ s& [* x/ l8 i$ B! ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 b- r/ \+ K/ D. Q, |; v/ T0 H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% u1 D  h: `! ~; Z2 C, ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 G; ^( v, A- F' O2 ~9 Q9 Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, r  }* Y2 s% q) v$ y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; L! _7 w  U5 \% x+ A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 _" ]8 g9 o# s8 I& z4 ]. x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& t3 L" }0 T1 d; V. o7 r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) b+ Q; A+ a1 k6 U$ M1 w5 q5 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' k( Z9 s' o( q/ A" i+ Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) v0 g0 Z) r6 u2 X& Y0 L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( X* `% _& D5 U) j) v" y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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' f' u0 w6 G. I" |8 d4 M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) Q3 g3 o. [& {7 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% V3 K# D5 @( g, |4 ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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