【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* O  R# f4 J& Y( J2 B; s我另将歌词附在此。
+ B2 E2 a5 B7 g; y  lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 C. ]. S9 h' ?1 ?/ f+ I0 {I already loved you with all my heart
; z) q/ u4 g0 g4 h; f5 kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! y6 G+ R% e. x2 D* @# oBut I never did
" h; p4 V' C/ r7 h( r: mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( F# L% w* C5 hIf today isn’t too late,
5 C: K  X5 u/ e" FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 F; ~# G" L. D( L7 K* iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, G, m. [' y. \6 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* C9 a8 L/ w2 j. m7 o4 z$ [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- n# ^6 D2 s/ n) tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: A7 I) O! c( a/ V  zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 C9 W; ]4 }0 _4 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 L8 k7 w# y3 Q6 i; `+ s4 QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" M( B7 f1 ^1 ~1 b$ E( x' y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ J) J2 {2 d/ F  B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' D$ J# @. e- N$ U! k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: J# ~. Q: B6 \! }, `/ C9 W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) h/ v8 o% O3 K, T! h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 R9 Y* E" J: N7 U' L' K( F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 F9 u) r/ b, m" b( I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 _/ z, p4 G+ l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 ]8 Z/ S1 d# J3 `3 n<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 r: L9 n* Z# `8 Z4 g4 ]6 ?0 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ E0 W0 I! {9 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& c- p' e# g% i/ v, C1 d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 D. k' V* _" k1 \; \, ?% j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 y. a2 C% c' y4 l# z0 i( j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 g% }9 N% s% @8 X, \0 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 }5 a( h  C! C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 d) |" i7 m  Z! h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 \) w. L: q- H( c. s9 I* b# g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* N9 \; K5 k4 {& e, T/ U* Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  }4 p" g8 P) X. |7 A2 [8 P1 q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, d. |% Z  i) [* j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 X8 m. Y! D- R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 X" w7 A5 Y+ Y' e$ l6 d<P>But I never did </P>
& I0 u' ^& J- o. R) r<P>但我不会 </P>
' L* a8 O$ Z, g, l) h" c1 E5 w, ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 y# X0 s7 S% w& x  X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 d, d0 Z7 v6 E; z( k2 c6 r3 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" Z8 R2 G, T/ F$ ?! \' }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 |6 r7 g+ P( T; T6 a5 z3 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& K7 D" P+ G2 A, I3 z5 |* k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; R, v5 R: Y6 {6 \" f, }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  g: T& F% w0 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* Y& ?0 g4 N$ [: r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. O' j+ P1 A3 ~& v! O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- V& A) `5 b$ u1 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 e" N; p: k7 E. C  D8 H5 S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ s) G% [" |+ A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  H. b( m3 l$ ]' ^( I" I1 r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>