【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 \7 ]- G- u" B3 b( e# f+ n* |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 W# w" z. ?4 x3 @" x$ e  ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 M  M- a& v1 v' uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 h) ~$ h6 ?5 x, w8 k8 oI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- u6 H8 Y! k2 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' F0 a7 S8 x& \- i: zCan I entrust it to you?
; K1 ^% t$ m4 d( b0 P! V( fEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ B/ b0 C2 H; IWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ S; \/ g! K9 X# ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ x$ x, r; D1 d0 \+ ]% q% P  uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 q' |7 q3 Z7 a8 y3 K8 t4 p) uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( O3 G" `) U2 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 p) J$ r* t6 \7 s/ F5 d4 Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. `" c6 ^# X; L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, q/ @! r8 k1 Y: v1 E) V9 J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 |5 N8 j9 {* ]0 i  V0 q/ K  g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) q) F! k3 N. z2 t; I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" f* c9 c% |# u1 \! ~' [& Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" y7 P5 g: D) X( o+ @3 l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( T# @, _+ [3 P3 d& h' f+ r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ u4 e: a' `  R- t0 _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ k$ z$ H, P# u3 I! V' e! K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 C% K- g( ]/ k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 B( c" m4 _6 z7 A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 U0 {( W" X( x* {& O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. ^, \- Z" u: }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- |9 n& i" {5 o. v6 E9 o4 g/ j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 ~; a. I; U4 b- L' D0 Y$ p& ~7 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  b3 R% \4 A( I" |! A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 a! w! L: E# v; @0 s$ v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  G' o2 ]2 m; |2 \4 b1 \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 ]7 y: o6 J- z$ C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ I+ A0 w. T; z8 u: b2 }' n# x<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" A8 b) U1 p" v8 c<P>But I never did </P>
) K# Q/ Z2 }" G, N0 e1 H  a$ @4 S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ ~, O8 y$ |8 v% j3 a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# P; {* A, m& z/ b; P# s% F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  c0 g% n9 \9 f. e+ a8 j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 e* d2 l/ [* v0 M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 c0 `, s% U9 Q( [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>