【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ O; E: h1 T9 R2 N我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 q# r2 t6 Y. r' c# r) P/ J) y" q6 fWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ Z! p3 p7 s; G- r' A. b5 V! [, xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% Q8 ?/ M( p# M- QI would probably know how you feel
9 R- d3 B* z9 H/ m' K9 v1 I7 }# _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- d9 p. ^  ?; S% a) oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: U7 c6 f# R- Z1 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* F1 r3 L4 e' Z. j, N, pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  \' j3 P3 S! S. |Entrust my love within your heart
$ l* Q5 A; W: o6 P! cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. P9 C* m% L" n1 y, n+ X; ]! QI want to confess that I love you,
( w* ~( L( U, @  h' U, A1 |' z! jBut I never did
6 K! x* ^) w) w9 H# oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& ]3 K, s) W# F0 BIf today isn’t too late,
% y3 X& S) r' A/ A) G2 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' q  L4 X# j8 R- d. ]$ e  BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ B# c/ v) q) `# r  X$ a$ }2 tCan I entrust it to you?
. d; m, O/ ~, u' t( v9 Q9 j( WEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 {; y/ S+ w' {+ AEntrust my love within your heart
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  D( H8 o. _2 f% {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 M/ ^  h7 w6 d5 z% \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( D. M! g+ Y2 Q. }/ P: R' B0 w1 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 i1 ?7 e, y/ R7 k! o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 D0 q  |4 S+ Z# E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, O! \% u) ~0 I0 |% f: L/ L* L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& h3 M* T+ [$ G5 u. N4 y. t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 _+ ]. ]8 T6 M: H' ^) u. f( ?<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; X, H( J- Z2 S5 U  _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 P" Q# I" _7 Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: k0 v5 @7 {, M& b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& T  p1 D1 `' z! R% j- Z<P>但我不会</P>
. k% `* {+ X( ?" m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* _$ w3 ~. L! m$ D' k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% d7 v7 U& P1 t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 W( z( v! R' t9 k! t) X6 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 x0 K& [6 |0 S- T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 q$ E! u% ?1 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 B# q7 d! Q2 O' v! q1 y) ?8 u<P>But I never did </P>
1 M, x" A% x& {% ?* e, F8 v<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ }% B* D4 s# Y; I5 i3 I) d% k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- ~% Q! H; u5 q- U. u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; E# q/ V5 ]( b/ I/ v4 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 ]4 H6 K0 [5 h/ C8 f5 @& c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: v% c0 I; f6 }+ H* Z3 ~6 j7 V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, P/ c8 C* g" o# s" ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% ?5 w1 |: s' s7 X: I; g) Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" }7 P2 G7 z" R0 [2 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>