【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 ^( Q/ F  D" C2 YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) |2 z" P  b) C  X; lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. {# j# V9 G3 i- o0 jFrom the first moment we met,
( l( ]6 Q* d3 U% ^5 DI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) W8 p  n6 x: R- d7 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
* Q8 k: K1 d# w) ~- II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, s5 n- a1 M+ {. a# s* Y. Z: B9 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; R0 z7 M, A& oI want to confess that I love you,
2 G+ o* ?/ d. K/ c, F% vBut I never did
& {1 {9 ?+ d% D8 j# t5 p! _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 |' N6 k% [4 [) N6 kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 v4 D: w! o6 s2 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" Y# n2 x7 R$ |6 k2 [+ MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 d1 S/ N; a9 f! u/ T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. _/ G* p- G# x0 A4 _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 t$ G$ K) |$ W8 D' }5 c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; n7 y8 B  c/ a3 [0 M/ O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: O- U% R7 k- ^( P: e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 M: A1 u" ]9 E( a8 [+ I% V' W3 v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ F! ?+ x  z5 l, Z8 d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ }  f3 ^' W0 c+ C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 I/ A4 U4 W7 w$ U$ R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# W+ n% i+ v' U* e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% G+ _$ `7 y, {+ w. Y; j8 r3 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" C1 h9 R% Z2 j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 w4 Z5 ^) w* O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  u8 n& v1 F3 \5 ~0 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% M: }1 j8 N' j+ d  m. S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" a, J$ R* q5 N# v& a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. a! ?# _& h! D% m5 A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* r! R& j8 F) O0 v8 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 i0 v- g0 R# ^6 b( q+ P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  [- u6 w. z8 k0 y# r5 [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ Y: _: l/ K5 [7 Q" B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 p1 l* C4 v: h! @. R# _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 o0 _) R8 w) Y- y: _: t<P>But I never did </P>
- e" ^& j6 s4 e: f/ h& O% s0 R* a<P>但我不会 </P>
5 ^* I! G- ?: U, R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* Y! r/ c- T! j2 ]2 w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. P7 K" ~( U6 Z) z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# R) q+ Z  h* y" U, Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% r4 `0 X+ N. M' r8 h9 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- p! m# q% B7 O5 O- A  C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: Q4 s- h/ ]6 `" k% ?: g' s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% I' w/ G" d/ Q/ N5 i7 |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>