【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! l# |) l6 ^; [/ X" S) `我另将歌词附在此。
/ ^2 C6 r7 W% i) T2 GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! [* P3 J0 t8 m1 J& V1 J, WI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) T" Q+ s: S% u& f9 L2 e) GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' d6 X# j% z, n; e% B$ a: sI would probably know how you feel
4 E7 {4 E1 N- Q; vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ ~7 g) y  c* q" e6 {% P9 {3 zBut I never did
' o$ S) m, ]0 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. K3 z" G9 O- ~7 j( r# IIf today isn’t too late,
8 b/ a) q1 S% y% P4 \3 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# ?6 c/ e7 e. |1 N" dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ d% X: u& T3 T( `2 w; WLove… just the word love
: |: d' K  o" [1 q1 B6 ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ Z) g/ {  g1 k4 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! K0 e8 d# j- g1 Z& ?( q! O7 P2 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  l/ W! E: u0 J4 }6 D: @. N* ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! n' R. E$ R. S+ X, ~& O: K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 p! L1 Z" M/ G! \7 M: q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 c4 j1 @; S$ k1 i& `$ X. h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. T! ?+ J! F  l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# Y' {. ~9 n- F- P, f) v3 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& v4 w6 x4 }- A5 |  q5 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ ~/ D1 s% R. L; C3 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 V- Z- q7 P: Q0 s9 y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* i# O# ?4 w6 L" C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  p1 x5 I4 D5 d; R* ~& s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, G4 ^* U- J: y" Q2 o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: f4 z$ g6 l5 H3 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! A& h0 I& u5 n( s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: k9 N" z# I6 y4 }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# J; r( Q+ K" r- C3 U# r) z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ J6 {1 g* ~: Q) B: h  E9 _$ o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( Z5 {" u( [* K" U# z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* s$ I* l2 |& O5 |: @. |# X  K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  M7 g0 t5 X6 O) G$ U0 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 A9 i' ~3 `7 U+ {$ w0 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 A3 l$ n- O$ f& c8 d' h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 W& j* C  O! s+ O$ h' m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* T1 f) P' B/ R0 P  [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( i- b9 R1 M5 F% l5 P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: |( u8 d# n" w& t: v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. q4 Y/ D* W+ _! @9 L; i' N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# U1 J$ ?/ R* w6 v4 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" h8 L* y. D. D6 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- l# P5 C: }9 U2 f; h3 f$ u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 @! u& D5 f5 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 u$ N3 Q! z; ~% I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- h* f- U7 V- p7 u' \& i0 ^) c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 U7 @6 S. ?% | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  W& [) m' }8 S1 e2 @+ e, P* Z" W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 A) A7 q" \# Q2 N: |* |- a& B2 Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>