【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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% ?  Q* j: v$ U' y+ H我另将歌词附在此。
- W+ ?* T# C* tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( d! i2 G' m& Y6 w6 g7 x4 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ g4 s7 x+ u. h+ @6 ?5 u7 FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 w8 j7 r8 w0 S7 J7 m6 |We meet and talk everyday,
$ p0 N. K, s5 R( FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 Y) q, T% v1 J9 C$ xI would probably know how you feel
3 [8 o0 a; K0 f+ j; ?5 RLove… just the word love
) _3 w8 j' a1 v: O9 j/ UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 [' j4 J1 ]' y3 k( yBut I never did
* b: x2 Y  t* I6 n; K: d2 ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) b3 W) w0 K0 ?3 u) H1 Z, H! W- mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 T( P" J) g  DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; d% v0 F( l6 s9 _6 }6 e6 H0 h, W& CBut I never did
; I% B. ]7 G# t6 B; ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) n9 s9 \$ q7 xEntrust my love within your heart
  U* {- S( z% OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; E, D" ?9 l8 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! \& I9 H3 F0 @8 c& s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) y8 v1 _3 G! A( K) T! a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ L- U0 |/ G# C: U) M' H/ e, @1 B7 E: S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 |0 Q* ~/ F% h  L  `! {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 ]' O4 S* Z$ [9 }/ t9 t  B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- k9 H, M5 i& F; e1 c5 W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- y4 R  o% R  m( [# N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* T0 H' ^6 ]% J! |9 z9 v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# E8 x$ |4 t4 v, R: }% W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 g/ B" Q8 ?* a7 P+ h6 T) C$ q! H( a<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: ^" }* w" M# i% f: k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 h. E- t$ ]5 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 g2 |* e+ y. v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 f/ m& H) T9 w& D9 E  S( W5 d8 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 `' e4 A! N" @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# K3 w. P/ {0 A$ s3 H+ I7 a6 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 h, W, a8 D# ~: b. B' v5 {& ~1 \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ J! k1 r) x6 R+ r2 w) T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& F7 _3 U' F% N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 Q7 h8 V% L5 z8 u3 P# f; e<P>But I never did </P>
( Q3 j% ^8 A* `) G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, D( v' S$ S9 D7 N" G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 D( Q5 d) M( v( u/ K* V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# k) J" g: A  j2 W) K7 k$ d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  i: d* |. ^( H2 `# F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ s# g! ^* i# i& Q! r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' b. ?5 q2 N" o- U8 Q& W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* r- W6 \& H7 u; f<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ X$ ]' n) W5 |) q2 Y$ v# t9 E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 y  i2 c, e  S& T/ Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 D9 B' b. W, P5 F( E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>