【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& t2 `5 a) S8 ~& ~/ Q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 U# y( d" N0 O( K0 o6 N/ RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 A) s' B/ ?; o' q9 n0 ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  h1 a8 y7 `* ~4 U  kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 w8 n5 g4 ~$ P) f# T0 |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 r& J, n+ _0 K6 ]2 m0 rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. K$ _. b# [' _) v7 |I want to confess that I love you,
$ J1 X+ ~3 c- s9 r9 F3 @+ @But I never did
- e8 M8 d* f& G* ]  n0 O8 @) v/ [# xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 @7 z% ^% |( a0 \  ]" g9 E' sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% P' b1 S5 R) Z6 f2 o5 j5 OI want to confess that I love you,
- X+ o7 k5 k& Y6 b; W' U# PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 j" Y3 w+ F8 u  {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) O5 I* B- H3 w& e3 @, bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 A: A/ C4 Q5 }1 X+ SCan I entrust it to you?
- e* Q) e) ?7 l4 iEntrust my love within your heart
, s  F4 j2 J' x$ C0 P$ }1 h2 ]Can I entrust it to you?
# L5 _2 e% a% H) z+ T5 x) e9 X2 zEntrust my love within your heart
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% R3 D0 U5 u4 a5 X) C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# \6 _, q" B9 p7 ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' ]- _4 N! C* Z1 ]* d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 k# a8 r) k2 o7 Q# u9 }) ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 Y: @& P* L& m; h$ r* z' q. {& B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; j+ r, T' W/ s' a5 Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) z* X8 P2 f% y9 a+ c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; \  ?3 b% B6 Z& g3 H* X8 k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" z( D0 c& c6 _( n0 A. X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ D0 G: y' c: o8 o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* _- A8 B: ^( L3 T4 [<P>但我不会</P>
* e8 M* X' `- \- g  q+ Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* \; h5 L! w% p, p( U* I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* m# A5 b$ O" g) j3 K5 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 Z7 Q, @) e4 T& f. I2 P, V% B0 P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( i- i6 Q& q' p: [& V1 m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 K, {. k8 s7 A  T9 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 R$ C& |) d, ~8 y0 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 Y8 M4 H- Y' }. a' {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 {' S3 a. }7 Z1 |* a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( {" Z/ @6 i3 R+ u4 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( u1 \# t- L; A+ _' ?* m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 J  s9 T; Q; O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, Y8 N/ y. `( |2 m5 U% m! j# h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 L9 y* c3 b/ f$ v% U- W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- F7 q7 v! d# S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' S7 g% I  V( g$ B. y4 B- a5 g" [) N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 U  s+ g3 c4 F" n4 ?8 k5 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ ], p. J+ n2 U  l4 ^, ~  c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' I$ I) A# Q8 x2 i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 D$ G, i, G% D$ V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 y& Q( ~* F* s  T: K3 }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>