【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
3 h* @% q4 P9 ~% p0 {: |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; d5 v1 c5 i7 h( \4 JFrom the first moment we met,
/ o8 K: `0 G7 h  a4 lI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ G/ \: J! H/ ~$ |- z. s. uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* U( s# ^5 f9 {6 S' p" [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 J* y3 E! F! N2 c  U1 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 }% V7 \9 E# J  ~- \8 f- v  EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, l. o! d. i6 q) F8 H4 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- w  m6 C' z$ R  D5 D/ y) RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; G& j+ ^  C6 a$ s  a: [, {Can I entrust it to you?
2 |; p! v% b* n( S2 L' NEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" c. {1 m$ s  v  l# NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" _1 c8 C) Y# Z/ GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& Z' _2 b" I# q6 F9 J/ E! G2 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 {) v( `  X, C" [+ Q, w( q8 MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* y) E8 l+ R' I) m1 D5 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: i" y% q+ j2 ?8 ]/ l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 h5 @7 ^4 S9 a2 u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( w# \1 d( O+ B" e: t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' y1 x- |: j3 B4 K* \9 j# b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- Z4 x" C, k0 E; p/ {1 n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 J$ D: W4 B0 G4 s% M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! c4 C( T% A7 S9 V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 J7 s5 }& x5 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 s! v' K; o& k1 m/ _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% h: M. ?3 y- h$ z; f+ ?& |' v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, j  b1 t) k( a1 @  Y# \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ L9 f9 F' v8 o4 |# l" k4 K/ ]- L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 A2 |3 U* B$ F4 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- V! X2 s- B+ [6 b7 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 y9 j! O* f9 E. e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 _/ J/ [# P+ N: j- q/ V9 `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  j! c* h" r5 _4 ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% q5 N# J6 V( x8 j$ f# a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, P$ \9 f+ R, l6 S5 |, R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ l; K4 @/ I6 h" _0 d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* p& j7 k+ L* ~5 F( Q% D8 B4 G2 K" s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  o% S% V# ]( M  Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) E5 J$ H3 @# _; O1 _4 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 Z* L8 h9 H; {7 b1 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  _0 E4 w' s; Z7 ]! M  h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 p2 G0 W" Z: s6 a  B. G; E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# _8 T. F# o" F% b6 v3 d2 T; c/ _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' |! F1 s) W+ }6 C( T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( B: H& }/ E, \3 [: |# n$ ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>