【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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. o% v+ M1 n( X- B: G, J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 U7 Y. e: J/ j/ q3 e- O; D  ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 C- n; M3 b& p3 I3 R) D2 u0 X, ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' c7 D% X: H* t; ^Why is it so difficult to express?
# Y, M$ b" C3 C! p+ p+ cI want to confess that I love you,
" A5 n% p. X5 a- m2 f% ?/ R% gBut I never did
( Z" p: [! N5 ?6 }9 L" e+ COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 \, v6 q2 C& y* C# lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  H5 [' P0 x0 T3 I  }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' }' U& Q) D. l8 a- b; f, jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& J  z2 L9 w% _7 q+ S! M: OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# v& u) r* o/ v6 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, |) r3 W7 k0 k  s. jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. R8 F" L: t  W$ N/ M! ?Can I entrust it to you?
# U1 K$ p; T1 q5 c8 N( R: u0 jEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 K5 T  l: z; L6 _. N% t2 X+ J: r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 S, |, ?: H  y9 }  I% K( c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 X& D9 ^  x( Z8 P: ^% o: y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 R- _! Q3 @# U7 ^3 Y  \, X5 Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) H  _5 O% ~# F5 j+ z0 G) I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* I  F, ~3 D. k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 O) P% m  P- _* `. n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 H4 `/ ^  g" d5 v* ^9 h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, R5 ]4 C5 F$ O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 E. ]8 r- j) [  c: H/ g2 O" H8 P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 ]- k' Z* ], z+ t0 f& B( f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, u- R) m7 `( y% }7 `* ~) n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. @$ f" m( Z' z/ i) L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 ^# f" q3 p1 F9 Y0 t* `9 ?& G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( E1 E+ ]8 v; A& t" k$ \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ V$ |% r( o( |4 E6 `$ N" k0 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 J4 |+ I- @! V/ N/ g  ]" b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' B2 l% _* n# q# \3 _<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! u% X+ I* P. c: E1 a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ g$ G% O1 z' p" K0 B5 b- j' e# w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' Y, B0 D6 {& o- L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' t8 ^0 ~* z+ @5 j6 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 o7 B. ]5 ~6 Y& p4 t5 s4 _7 S# E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, T3 N) A% s% K5 K* ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 u2 ?0 ^2 d8 y" w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* {1 Y8 J/ D. S: @' Q: U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  s) Q' V7 J! a8 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 D" W  {- O% {$ M, K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 k) O! L9 T% q" U6 s& T; Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 p6 {3 X) L6 ?; X3 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>