【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ t* k) X$ w3 b+ v) Y6 Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 {# x, y" y2 ]* [* @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ T/ c8 u7 m- s* p+ uFrom the first moment we met,
1 n3 H( M" w9 r! D  rI already loved you with all my heart
3 J7 l2 w$ Q3 X% t$ U9 jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 a7 Z$ v5 s  U; N% v3 n* vI would probably know how you feel
) t- @3 p" n2 @, d8 o) mLove… just the word love
  t6 \1 h  t* Z3 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
! B3 ^( _% H: D# D8 W( RI want to confess that I love you,
. D) |1 S8 C  a9 A( u; l+ I- ~9 BBut I never did
9 C7 W& Z. \* {7 b5 F5 Y& ~. F& V6 rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 U6 r% i' P! @1 ?If today isn’t too late,
' U' l0 }, R( v2 U! cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ [/ e* j) s$ A0 |+ W: g1 v: {Love… just the word love
* R. h8 i) ?) r( z  R( K4 j& ?Why is it so difficult to express?
. K$ C" g" e, e. S' S. nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* P  Y# s. `+ q& U% WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 s! `$ c! Q- G7 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 A* g2 H) X7 r* s: ^: {5 n8 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* U0 k6 o- u5 I& a9 n  m- G2 jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* G" d" y& |7 |/ ~# d8 B! pCan I entrust it to you?
! h0 S8 q$ H! h1 g1 OEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 f* L4 I* V8 I. a* |) r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* t' v) A0 R9 ?% g/ K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; X# [) p; S9 U3 [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 b: I2 s% {' A$ I/ ]% I+ A- \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 z$ m  _. H2 j' s, x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. K4 y5 d1 c( T& ~) L2 E4 T  F. E/ a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 h) k: @2 ]' }% C. @# G2 @4 [4 {! ]! Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, ?7 `0 d' i$ O% k* B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 v2 }" l' `4 b1 M" C, j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  y' t4 F  m% Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 ?8 A( A1 w8 d5 [8 n3 a. D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, [( k7 E/ @( Q0 @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% j& D: K* O6 _3 }; u0 h' l( |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. H0 i3 T; g& U; `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" i9 r9 R- x: S" P/ Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 B/ ~9 W- s) o/ e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ B8 j( n3 b9 j  O1 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( z6 `& ?' m5 d# y& n/ U" x4 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 @/ X. e# `8 R: \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' c, T; J2 J- T1 L% C! M8 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, b! y9 i+ |: c5 W4 B/ }7 }<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! V5 |( ]8 Q/ X9 e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 ?, O+ G1 {/ t* x8 |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  {3 Q& |! [- C- h5 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; b5 w5 R3 O! {1 u6 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- S0 k3 F" {4 D3 x+ c4 s" F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ~( y8 ?8 t. K: C6 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& Z' q1 H# ]/ E- t5 _0 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% |5 I+ C8 `# ?- V9 h2 V3 ~% T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) X( Q. Q3 H, l" Q1 w8 T! Y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>