【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 p$ K* C% M6 ~% u! g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 {1 t" ?3 a% U* D" N2 AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 q  W0 i' B6 e, B/ e7 PFrom the first moment we met,
+ N+ e* G& R/ L' \$ x1 KI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 v: F" W2 [; u' D1 K$ xI would probably know how you feel
; ^& O2 J3 `/ a- T6 r5 xLove… just the word love
% m! y  E9 f; s! ?: i8 ?4 T+ [Why is it so difficult to express?
$ s' d7 N0 d9 N- ~5 }2 @$ C1 L0 qI want to confess that I love you,
9 t) |4 S  E# n/ EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# a, [, q2 _6 U5 X, JIf today isn’t too late,
5 K  }' F( ]: \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' o# p. i, F8 h4 l8 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. A6 L6 J- O, v, tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" g$ G! V3 @: [* K( B5 U) M" Z  DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# V+ Q' {- D* {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) Q) E  O6 k) n1 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# P1 j8 h6 c8 [: O, W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! h% o3 C7 h5 u0 f0 Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 i# s' C0 R( i1 R; u' [( H9 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; k  v& o# _, u% L$ t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) O/ u+ X* X" O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 P3 _! v% E4 u8 r* k- f- v8 y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ d, \; L0 \  q8 i* J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 I6 l" g5 A- G( q' D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 d9 @1 @9 Y9 e# P# F4 K' E' A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' O8 D! w5 F# g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* m4 b1 Q3 U8 E# O9 G! j' n& @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# S) n3 \% ^8 F( z9 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ z1 _( {3 C% e* N& R1 r! t<P>但我不会</P>
, Q9 y- [7 g# a3 U6 N' x+ g9 P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- Z1 ^+ j) a9 }7 z& _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) v3 c* m1 B1 r% ?* Q& k( J3 |9 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ I+ |% d! o+ H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 x) G& D, M- C# s( U/ x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ }- H- f' I9 y/ V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 [9 u* f1 _, o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  r" E! Z& y5 ]" [; O2 a0 P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 z, q. }/ z- @3 W# F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, z1 o. U) G0 g- X# q" J8 G<P>But I never did </P>
; Z+ E) t! [+ p! o<P>但我不会 </P>
" [# _2 X! `; s3 B0 X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; S+ W3 d6 v0 F3 S/ z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 A$ H# T. b! A0 ~3 F& u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 _% f: s7 v# t7 r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, w7 k# R1 l! c& b2 |# n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! g$ {6 l: r8 z0 r% b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ R5 L1 N5 P( R) ~4 w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% p' |" j5 J/ \2 G% \$ E/ t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. O" o4 O4 {5 k. h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! w; j/ c" C* g. H! R: n. t) R8 b/ V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& i+ B& o. p& G' T6 F% {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 L# Y% h3 s# n! X* t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>