【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ f% q- J$ z/ a7 @3 J3 ]From the first moment we met,
: _) w& ^/ v, bI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 F+ A2 O6 ?$ g7 ^$ |& ^! i" wI would probably know how you feel
  U8 T0 `. S  o, c: X6 u3 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 J! w& W- Y! Q8 q7 P0 x6 E# h# {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 O& `0 z6 s1 u, vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' h+ W. M; ]# K$ q" t4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 X1 I. f- `) }3 |+ w' h1 gEntrust my love within your heart
1 V! I2 f+ r0 N. nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 u: \4 O% e6 a, j; SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' \+ L- U$ m" Z" ZCan I entrust it to you?
4 v/ j& B9 x& M5 UEntrust my love within your heart
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' c$ c  w4 Z1 t0 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ d2 n9 y8 @* F- z& Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 m( `- }' U4 P& r" D+ B1 E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! \/ T. W$ F' o* c% [& X" A6 O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. u4 N% ^! n( Q' t& f7 L$ e& I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 n+ U( s3 X6 A# t7 L9 m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, W% H7 y" l% L2 {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 s" i; B6 s% B, b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. |( q) ?( X: t& ~6 X4 U3 d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( X% {6 v( E" k" z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 N. L$ X2 h& G0 [& {7 y3 v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# t. P6 G# U  V. s; `' F' |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 T# _) P: b3 Y, T2 c0 x% h( B5 L/ m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( H' d0 K; D: y# E& v+ b2 i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 ^4 S# q$ Q$ f- M/ R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: R& Q. S5 @6 {2 n/ G. v3 ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, F0 }! g1 u5 F+ O8 P: {: `9 H- x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 {  ^6 T9 {: ^. @- e6 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& y5 B) y$ \" Y& E+ B/ m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 A* r" A- q# s" w, E8 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& f, ^: i6 o; S6 O& D5 @7 v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  Y% l2 l' [' h. O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& D( n  y; o6 L" |6 M, W* \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 @0 b) g2 M, l2 k4 X5 y2 z( Y5 ^: S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 }2 J; F) d5 N" W+ {; M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; [5 q3 u/ M3 h! [4 N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! O+ Z+ M5 U" J7 e0 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 u; T  o0 F1 ]1 _2 m- q/ V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, w3 r) O0 [2 ?5 A% \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  e/ e8 a5 E; v8 ~) `# e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 T5 c& x( P$ p. P1 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& \7 O! L: h& T$ ?& p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ s3 X, w# }; w$ B3 W" t8 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 E; [! h5 \, e# m  ?9 P9 Z5 I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* B  m- I: n: E3 h% }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>