【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' H3 F. v0 z! p0 c4 {% Z1 a我另将歌词附在此。
9 o2 W" ]2 F- I, X0 j+ nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( E5 G. r* i1 T$ _( t5 r6 _; ]I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% _. u* r- c  ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ j3 p/ r& Q; z3 D* mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, j4 a/ `/ |0 l3 e5 N1 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 c! ^" ?1 t) T/ cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 N, z7 Z; T6 Q) G6 e* d% T1 s3 L* VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% t' L  t8 e' w+ Y) F4 ZLove… just the word love
; B! I& X! ]. d: b! @1 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 W0 m! ?5 _6 d3 C7 I5 V9 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% R' \) @. H  @. N0 a! e- K' P( R4 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ T! ?& o5 z5 j" N! RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. @! d3 \4 ]0 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 e4 i9 `- c/ o+ s) dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" G( V& v% W# n. T# A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" s. o' v* O2 K4 r4 O# z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( A% f3 S7 U! p% A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ Z! O' ]+ v& Z; l6 P9 p<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* |; w4 m% n2 {0 T  h2 ~) W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" _5 w0 N* M% a: ^. W+ u0 n4 K2 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) m# h% h0 v0 C' @+ j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ ~" y. v4 Z1 b8 X. [1 N9 N$ p+ U/ W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) [3 o: ~5 t$ {4 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 w8 }. @" u8 U+ c1 ?! C0 ?8 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 v+ l; K4 d' G3 |" f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# O  C1 x; r1 u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ L& `- @( @1 m- J# [: ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; x2 O4 _  ]5 {0 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! J3 q/ T# G* k- P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 S8 d# S, m7 @1 ~+ ^' b% {$ K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; q2 A  _% X: P9 [  S. O1 E: b+ I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# N+ K8 }, G+ z  U  r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 N! D- ]$ e" p9 }& |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 M7 u0 `5 b+ Q( O4 f! O+ u7 J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 {7 a) B, t9 p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ h8 }, L# n: `8 Z<P>But I never did </P>
5 C6 c- @% K* E) R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( k  m1 C$ n: L; G1 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( M6 @* w1 C1 l2 U- H: h* b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 S3 j+ b7 |3 \& ~( C! @. V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 X1 [1 T9 e  v+ t; C& u! {1 z/ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- K/ y. K# j9 D, t2 x4 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 [0 X; f; ]2 }# m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: Q0 h# A2 r6 k+ _& J' W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 u' j9 G, h0 C, t  x" O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 i$ h! a7 A2 H) k1 {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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. B# ?6 K1 L/ ~7 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% N- f# f- D) K* g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>