【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 R4 J9 a% l( [; @* A! l7 R7 a我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& d& l2 d  M; j6 u, @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 U) B& {! l- L. w+ a/ cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 y% L+ P2 ~  GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) q6 ^# X; F' j; o/ F5 tCan I entrust it to you?
7 e: X, Z3 U# c* C3 |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 u% ~- f8 m2 B5 b/ fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 q- E3 B" H. q1 [' h7 ]6 o( A; d- KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& |# t0 Q3 F2 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- c1 P. q+ J7 Y7 B; h$ m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 b5 ?) l# R6 |9 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ E- X2 x! f2 O3 E1 B  a& S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. C  m5 h) ]5 ]- [: S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 f) h& p: _, c4 E* R. @, o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' M7 q8 [, g# v9 @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# Z! `! R( G' N* h2 K$ z3 }: C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 Q* l+ ?( ~/ o5 F$ s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 D# k# m: L  P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, p' J$ |4 R9 u4 ]  Y) m+ {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* y1 U  w' R# K" p- S7 E2 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! q4 S, P  v. S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: x0 ~9 L* }* P+ P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* _3 q  b' |" Z1 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 Z; \, ?, d1 L% w/ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 `; V. c' c5 |& |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 z' I8 Y  p9 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, E5 l: V+ a2 e* D9 @: C4 x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; K6 k9 w0 _* c% S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& X. J7 ?2 _! ]+ |6 I9 U0 D- j  X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! f( t: D  z% `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 u+ @. A9 t& W! x( h! x<P>But I never did </P>
+ G6 L+ |0 |* m8 a1 X<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) ]/ p9 U3 c$ \1 O8 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ t9 g3 J; D& a  s5 I& E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ {. d5 C2 ]+ O- g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ b  P7 J9 t$ d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( T- K# P& B6 y; v2 g. b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, l# O8 z' S  T: Y3 O! n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* p) }1 T4 b% F, f! N9 H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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0 ^* X& b# ?3 w0 m+ I. U1 P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! t* B% F2 Z. m6 X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

" O# d( y, {4 a6 G; S<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ P5 K/ E& h% H7 w# W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 a' N7 p9 J8 J6 L8 x0 C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>