【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! P! l/ Y! Q. J' m" a我另将歌词附在此。
; X( s: I0 X5 Q, `( m. WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 R0 b; J0 ]1 d, B- yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 z: s8 {: I7 d" @+ bI would probably know how you feel
' p! e6 w9 i7 v+ B1 x+ t  bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. l# ]5 h5 E, j  @( _4 Q* \1 }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 ?3 {4 I. D& C& q2 z6 g$ ?; z: v$ A2 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( r. H7 r' j0 S4 `; a7 CCan I entrust it to you?
3 A6 w8 i3 x3 fEntrust my love within your heart
  a5 {8 @  i2 f( _5 g. pLove… just the word love
/ a8 [! O1 i9 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" H  h3 r, ^4 l$ L4 m; jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; a) \2 t/ }  ?If today isn’t too late,
6 I5 ?! Y+ L' ?; R; bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 X8 f8 `& S& x% ~: x% A# PCan I entrust it to you?
: W7 x/ b& y. Z' x! u6 y5 qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% L. x* K$ a3 eEntrust my love within your heart

3 K1 B. m3 }( M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; h" F% F" l% _5 V9 \- Q: \& @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" M- ^* z: _9 q* e. g3 ]2 `0 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ c, z/ ~7 ^7 c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( B8 B- N# ~/ f: g7 U' L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) M0 Q2 x6 p) r  E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, E/ s+ S7 J- {/ I6 D1 q' }3 z/ A- ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 v. {$ }9 z) Z3 _1 z4 m; Q9 N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: C9 C9 a! C; v3 {; V7 M2 Z8 l5 T6 q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ s" f  N3 J, x' w) \; h2 Y" g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ e* P3 z+ X& Z. a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! K  V" A- {) [4 A7 a7 J) L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 J, b$ p7 G7 k9 Q3 D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' W: `) U# J6 g# H- l. ~4 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ ?3 s6 k  h0 a8 o<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, }. \* [6 H6 B) o8 K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. j! B9 c" Z1 p9 M7 X/ n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. K4 S+ q0 J2 B" h/ e3 e  ~0 X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 ]2 J* A  z" x' }# x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 \  `0 h" E& @1 V: B" o& g9 }' ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* y7 q0 t& C( K; T8 J+ [<P>But I never did </P>
$ h$ K0 x( P4 f; k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& H5 M7 F$ }) Y0 U( [+ n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" e! m+ R1 Y5 P4 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' R. N0 |9 s6 E- K/ v+ d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 ]7 K3 F( E+ g6 j% b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 R/ W+ t2 a$ j! N' K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& H3 {9 z9 G9 [# F" \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 d- z8 F; F5 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: k5 v. h- j* h" J4 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; d1 D3 U( b4 a; C& x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 h5 L# e7 H* \. d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 i" @, ~' |; r. A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ Y9 O4 Q: E5 M+ y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* X; }% Y% j, d; t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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