【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
' h$ ^, N  d+ V: ~) R7 J1 HThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ w. c5 K) h+ H3 a! eI already loved you with all my heart
% _; m9 X& W4 T, H2 WWe meet and talk everyday,
  |4 ~6 x+ q2 g& [$ X2 S$ c3 eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& b! _6 F& `7 R* D5 W; PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 C/ l; l$ v. i4 e: BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& _' p& O1 j7 h# G  e: Q$ w; Z1 s( I& pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# i+ {1 r% M- q6 I/ {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. G, H- N3 O/ TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 S0 a9 s* A  E+ e+ K/ ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 ]: w) }( t8 m3 _- g* R' T2 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; j: U4 R5 J) ^, b0 ?If today isn’t too late,
. P& v% ?" X" VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  K" G. ^- S/ p- d  U  jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& h% M6 A( o2 s, w2 L+ l) \Can I entrust it to you?
1 v& S; t5 N6 EEntrust my love within your heart
! v- @! ]. W( c7 p2 B" NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 D& y# ~8 Y2 ^+ r+ A) t( y2 a( H. r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ E$ o- E) W0 t* o% o+ v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) j; ^8 X" p! {* J6 u( F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# M( X" C2 `% [( [4 I# f5 n9 `& ?1 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& L5 H* z% |  `6 G" ^  I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( Z1 q/ x+ u  \. M) J& @. w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ H  F" w# B6 g% A5 Q- V2 X$ X" \& I$ c" c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* W1 k. c5 f2 @8 N" b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 O* ~' [) ^. [5 \! e' M5 E2 O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" C& E0 M5 Z% x4 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ F' ^+ p, n) O2 O: ~, J# R6 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% K# Y; f# I. C, K% \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# F2 O( W4 R) s6 f) R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. |' B7 r: V+ g5 t0 K' D5 O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  M9 u( y4 |5 I/ u2 D4 `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 L$ \/ w" N" K. v) f: n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& H9 B# e* z; V* X9 p1 x8 w" ?$ Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. I" u! |9 l# f% a9 C6 }- Q1 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 p, h2 w) K& c. C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 U# B& s* {( [) T+ o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# S4 A4 V1 E4 ^% r' O7 E4 ? 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 {  `3 ~' ]5 B, R这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 _6 U$ \2 L4 f: @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" |5 H, H2 k1 k- z, e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>