【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  M1 b: ^, d7 w* ^; w) A我另将歌词附在此。
: |1 c/ {9 A- A# y* Z0 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 v7 A* _4 E$ i' hFrom the first moment we met,
- Z% p* R' s  O1 c. C* [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; J7 k: A! V1 U* LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 x$ q% ^: w" K$ h' AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# Y- ^$ T1 d! _If today isn’t too late,
! x6 o( c8 i+ s$ [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 k& k4 G7 P5 O  P' k4 L+ HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) j8 m3 `, j+ t) |: ~But I never did
# V3 T$ d" O8 X& IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 ?5 h8 o& U: X" B2 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 S6 p2 D, G0 `3 E9 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! p+ A7 l, u, |# T1 z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 h6 B" P) N/ |& r% a9 y8 Y  h4 S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( d6 Z9 x. i5 R' u4 R0 q8 X# p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ T; b; e$ ~0 x2 x5 d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& K7 R5 d, W0 f3 H, {; I9 \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 h* w' x/ C, y5 k) B1 G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ j, S2 O3 {. Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 Q: D1 O) P4 s! `3 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- m6 r# c9 D6 U$ p( K! W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 d9 C" e: t% W) G$ L4 E- T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% y3 i2 Q- n$ Y) D: }3 m' F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) y) n$ q4 n7 N4 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 y9 b# M# o3 b! f$ o1 v: Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  o- a7 ~/ l; e8 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 a/ M# n  @6 l, S3 w6 I% e: c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 m" l' ]2 _$ A2 M" O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 m' Y% f# ]% y  B3 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ G6 O* O, P/ o# V1 ~) m8 z0 n+ G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 k: n4 d6 b4 @4 e  a; O& I0 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- E( V$ n/ s' o1 P* e& ?& h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ y4 e% G( L. |9 C2 t& l5 d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 u% r( d3 K9 V/ g) P8 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  j! Y% G3 Y9 c! q  @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& p( D" d0 A9 @$ V. n5 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ M3 v0 y: Q/ X. C' H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ |$ u3 `& v) g, @, R& x, O0 L! X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% p9 ^( @1 r- l* s. m& s) f( C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- n8 [  q9 Q% @! ]# Q  `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* i2 S" G4 [9 l0 g4 h$ F9 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 O7 b" c8 n& Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  \3 M5 H/ E5 d9 P  o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) D/ o* B' ^: k3 b. q* \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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