【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" y! F1 c0 L/ p8 _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 T7 \7 c$ o- [3 Q+ h0 VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  r# X% c! _" R0 s9 c, L, IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ a/ Q+ `1 G( z0 n0 @; c6 [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 O1 o! x, u- E/ H: fI would probably know how you feel
( }" J) `9 ]% g* [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" v, S+ k6 J/ U! w: T3 ~I want to confess that I love you,
! r. q' X; x6 A9 R# _" UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 L6 q5 ^/ i; N( g9 nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 H! ]2 T- M) w- w5 kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ ~& V/ v7 s- W5 B) RBut I never did
/ {. S  v7 r( m3 m6 q& m- L) I4 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 v! y! i+ i6 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 c$ M, U& i7 Y! N. a+ jEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' O9 ~8 _5 c+ B2 v  LEntrust my love within your heart
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) J0 J1 c' q. w0 l$ k! L' O9 Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 c+ @- x$ G8 U- g, p; f0 N/ ]" k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' j& L+ j8 {* V! J7 }7 k$ L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* R) ?( j6 k6 A9 h: ^+ I) x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ d% r6 w/ L8 D3 n  H1 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 Y, P3 e# ~4 M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) ?$ Q) G: U6 f! D4 h# `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 H$ B& P# p# `! n, H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 E! f) E" I+ S4 I! {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ q0 J; |: Y9 C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. K0 h! c. k* l/ H# y% Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, Y" ?% h. X; d! o! v8 ~' m) S<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 |6 y5 t4 }8 f+ v* y: x5 o0 |<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ u" C$ p% g. l+ a* l/ y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, z  S* ], P8 O! ]( R* q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ @' L' J) M' Q: B, o. U' D# V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# z0 t1 Y. [: y# p! k; N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 w2 ~* n: I, [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% M+ ~6 {5 ~+ f) x4 Q3 H& q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" J8 [% T* g( \* f0 b- c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  R  j2 s9 R8 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ }. i6 \5 j! q+ b# a1 ?; Y$ ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: u5 a% C* w. Y# m' h. s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% R4 @7 m% Q& l% j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 R. g9 M8 o% R9 p( k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 n- y7 i% j3 D) R3 X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& G; b8 d' R7 i/ }( x/ h5 x6 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) t$ Y* O3 R# k# @9 u3 F" G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ n2 A6 ~, T0 U; c8 i7 ~; V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% ^$ k$ U4 e9 u* r- f9 p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: q# l3 U+ Z7 @, P  |  r0 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' y$ u4 P' Q6 u6 `, c. a5 e* ?<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 n/ ?& I6 s' `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 C6 f# V: J, h7 X& v. }# M' Y/ N( L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  J" G: `! i1 E; e) w9 \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' o8 x0 a4 k' T4 A' k- t这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' b2 b5 U2 j& l' {0 A' L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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