【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% j, D2 `8 V" o+ r$ |' }7 }From the first moment we met,
- a1 G$ x0 y3 W# H0 Y2 dI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 h: M# A9 n' G/ {5 B0 t4 MI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 s5 j  z& z1 B6 H9 T8 g' j' sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# h, h: P. G& F% xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ `$ L, _+ m+ G+ X7 O& MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 l5 E$ d* O- m# I- }6 ^* F9 z$ I/ @( g- hEntrust my love within your heart
- c, F. q7 T8 F: n6 w$ `Love… just the word love
7 }4 a' k) g4 L. DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 e/ k7 s/ a! @! }3 m# yBut I never did
9 _% t" d$ c2 [* YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 O" C& q! t" ]; ]! s# M  U- sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! ^9 q* Z8 O" H: \- Q! bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# k  r$ H: l7 D/ @  @+ y0 PCan I entrust it to you?
% [3 K+ o1 q2 V: y2 REntrust my love within your heart
$ O& v; t5 _" UCan I entrust it to you?
( X0 ?7 w0 ?8 B# I4 `Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) l0 b# F. f5 g" ~5 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- J  U+ d- h* B# n$ }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 p: I8 `. P" {9 s5 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) p3 I; x! b, C" f( i1 b: k) q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ O1 J7 d4 |1 S* z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 P' a6 [0 n5 C4 _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* g2 p# N- B1 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' Q' P+ y' M0 m" Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) R8 `0 \$ {# F2 |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ C, [* }' P+ S2 w; ^0 f+ R- `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 i6 a) t1 |, a& I0 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( R& j/ `, r; Y* W4 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 @8 u; N. M: B: v. w- Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) h' v6 z* t* k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! o; H# }8 }& M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 o0 D2 C( b3 ^: S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% R5 \  o0 G: o% L# c& @. A; g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, ~" U; u1 b- f8 q* s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 Q' R, l3 m1 g+ |- f0 K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, F; x8 Y8 F; W/ U9 ^7 N, b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: x4 K% X) X3 C; ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: [, f) [; {, ~, y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 `- N( ?4 X( i/ o1 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 s. J/ Q3 ?" [9 ^. `$ t( f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ }6 E8 H/ {/ D& G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 R% U% i6 k' Q: w2 o& l  [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# Y+ d9 G  S3 H2 l; W) O" w- |. b- ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 U1 f' P$ p: A3 J1 p5 j+ [/ z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  c6 S- s6 ?* }" d8 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ W+ B- |2 I3 O2 j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- l3 l7 ^& v# T% b) [" B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>