【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
  G3 m* P1 `1 Z! x. Q* aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- x( {- }. O1 {From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! M2 X4 _% {: e  Q- w" c$ pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& G" M; ~3 i  i& i- N' iI would probably know how you feel
& Q& s- q1 W" E! W, e; c0 X0 LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, I! \7 D/ W) }4 ]2 II want to confess that I love you,
$ X, N6 e, A' y3 U9 {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) k* t6 J: y" v: i+ t9 g. Q- p8 UEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( J( E6 g! X3 a1 R/ ]& JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. I3 `3 K/ X. X7 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; f. \5 e! m0 q8 {6 _Can I entrust it to you?
) t  o! }3 v% v# u! Z% W$ U/ aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% Q. e( B! X) I2 m7 _1 ~1 i4 }" qEntrust my love within your heart

; ^; L' v" Y. {7 B" H, I  v1 l" U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# y/ P5 o, T' A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, K* \; [2 }8 f. e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. ]* k. N, W% [( v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; |1 k' t# N% e$ u1 j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( N2 m# B/ M, [/ c; K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 F! r' \5 P, y; j7 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( |$ G7 a! S" X% i" N) Z0 X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  _4 K* i9 S0 c- h: }1 a  g' i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 t& l- w7 o! Z0 }0 c9 s! m' _( }. d9 I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; o6 D3 O& O7 h, K, {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! D" S, l7 g: m$ j  ]+ Y$ V: K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' p' Y& U+ U) y( ~$ d) r* d* t: e; W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; s. Q+ {: n% e( ?) o  `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ y! o. }/ z. ^$ E/ I3 W/ J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* T2 ~* n/ Q  \6 v' W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 |8 D& R# X( @% o" L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* {! o$ l4 j( h+ o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" d) }7 q4 s  g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 G4 H6 i) o2 x4 {, a<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ @" n, x% O% X6 \, n+ k) S$ l1 x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ n6 o  y1 t7 J( d2 S, v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 V: Y9 j# ^% R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: C# c5 Y. l' Y1 {  J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 I: T# i! g9 ]$ e' d; _1 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& K3 \0 o( W: p6 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  }2 D1 F( f1 G$ D. }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 y  M5 R/ T& b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 s. N2 R, n9 i2 J6 d9 J8 C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( V% m, {, v# G2 A$ [9 [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 `. h  C: E# n, k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 i5 I' ]8 o+ p+ J; [  n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>