【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 F, K* g9 h: z  H2 l2 zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 _8 ?, }4 J) l3 u: h) R, d; HFrom the first moment we met,
- a+ T" B% ]4 T- v) aI already loved you with all my heart
: P( ~( Q2 c7 p0 H/ ^) u# s: t8 @We meet and talk everyday,
& M& ]2 s9 f. U2 G* T$ C$ GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 H/ Y! e) }7 B5 D1 UI want to confess that I love you,
) ~2 J; Z2 O) o9 CBut I never did
0 [& l+ ^0 k/ A' T: |7 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( y( j# t/ B( o2 V+ ~% OCan I entrust it to you?
: y  e  F1 y0 KEntrust my love within your heart
0 p+ Y; i0 A( i. }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 i% v* T' n& u- J  _: V& M5 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ R$ o0 S+ W1 D/ EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; H  z- @5 f  t9 [4 u; yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 J3 t2 z# J" M/ e4 l. q2 ]Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 T- B8 g4 G* ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 X8 f& w* `& V5 h7 a& c<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ Y% a" g  c; ^/ h8 s; s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ w2 E0 p- X5 o, P( v3 ^5 E) k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; D7 G% g. c5 g1 i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; c0 Z: p0 Y/ K7 W: q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% S" h0 Y/ r2 x7 s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, p- X6 X7 ]8 E! T4 r+ P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ U* Y0 ~# w& j' d9 j* X6 N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 g+ N. }1 v9 t& Y5 k$ q0 ]+ o/ J<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 A) d5 K/ Z" D; H4 d" S" b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' _6 {% \1 `! x0 }  G" m! S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 h+ U% B- r$ t5 |+ \# i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# D8 l0 r8 x" T5 E* J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( \  a- i' ~4 b& O7 S! v( W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ j# }9 Q# t% s. U7 a* F: Z$ N( {# p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& E0 m- S7 H# l1 K9 k% d. ~: n+ ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ [4 U5 Y, f1 l: A; n$ i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' T) C+ `0 l( w; D& k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* _& E' N0 p5 S. X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, Z* }6 h$ G& |0 U1 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, V  R# U. n. M) p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ b% a$ Y& {0 D: W8 ?8 W+ v1 \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  M. w. M0 A( I1 G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ W, ~+ E4 y2 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 d7 D7 h) P6 P/ M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' B- h1 K4 c1 b2 r% {4 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ^1 A* _& i1 j4 j+ A0 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. j% I1 d; d8 }6 u' K3 E$ }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ G# [* G' Z8 Z# P+ s! w1 y) o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, x  c. k& p6 K. j; \<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, L+ }/ D0 g6 B. \" U! r! Q# K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! F9 k( h: F/ p2 x  n  \8 F; S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ {$ ^3 K% _( s1 h; D7 b6 D  ]3 D& a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>