【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
$ y5 B4 {" l% ]5 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 f7 M2 M' ?; N7 t* S9 G7 @! WFrom the first moment we met,
; n' E' ^- M1 O; [I already loved you with all my heart
; C! z' X( J/ @; u% B" c2 [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ h1 ^6 F1 G. jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 _  _3 n5 X+ _I would probably know how you feel
* O. J$ g0 I# T: lLove… just the word love
6 m' C: X- _2 Y$ F! @Why is it so difficult to express?
( z# {5 q5 S4 D8 iI want to confess that I love you,
7 o$ J" [4 |! M" b3 Z% n5 V- w% E2 ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* U6 T* E. M1 Z  ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! e" J9 T1 j& V7 |( n1 O7 N$ ]Why is it so difficult to express?
7 a% i. u9 Y3 j# o, W; jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" d/ g3 d5 u) _& i9 w# ]  HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 Z) i2 o2 _/ f" d7 D" uCan I entrust it to you?
# H1 p& |$ L7 [2 D, L" T4 J; pEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) `9 t  v$ w# R$ UEntrust my love within your heart

2 `3 {6 p0 o6 \7 L: f. b8 g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 `, j5 V2 K5 _/ K9 J1 w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ i8 B. x' ~  @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ e+ G8 @- _0 a2 A* E0 A1 R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* i1 V7 C6 n% p. [$ f9 w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- Y! D% |4 s4 z( ~! J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 F/ m" Q7 r9 x2 z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 x0 V9 O6 |" p4 b9 u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ u! Z/ S$ _  g5 f, f; q% @( ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  B. `6 d+ F, S# X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& ^# G+ z( g( B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# h6 w! W1 y) P" u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 D3 b- J! M9 T8 h, z* n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; F. I! o0 T! W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 S3 S* x2 U& J" l7 ~3 D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 s' f+ }: d8 D6 n3 ?( c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 S+ @' E; _- |5 D# b' s9 I3 t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; g8 X3 _* a2 j4 e  w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. ?, Y/ @% c" |/ j. [% l' q% J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! z8 ~2 V, k: R  Z" Q; u3 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- J6 K& e& D2 o. e% E9 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! @- \5 t) U  J4 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; z6 m+ i4 E& {; V8 b4 H* t8 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# x; l  e9 H  o  H& a7 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' p1 H( G; N, C1 L9 a" j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 p, k% W. Y( K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 c8 A/ X# {' ^+ k( e9 m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 d8 N& h7 D- C% \. m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 M  C( j$ Z9 o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* z2 L7 X3 k, t( V4 Y# j* G- h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" _' z: \  s  O6 H, j8 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 e  W8 C2 i, V/ a/ }+ Z  d" U' R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! a; [0 q/ l7 o/ r, e* \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ ]. U1 \9 E, R# w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" I1 ], A8 z' P. [! Q+ }. ^7 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 U. o1 w0 U* Y) |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 x6 A  {* ]$ p. v. Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! m+ f! u2 G% s+ D; Q+ V: {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 K3 `7 C, O3 e0 E% K; V1 f6 P3 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! O6 ?6 c1 p6 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 }6 v; T) M2 ^1 N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 M2 {7 X* M  @/ b' ]; Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>