【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; w: \$ b2 W( v  M% ^8 g+ c+ k; bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# D5 B) X0 v, l$ @. G/ OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 J9 d% \8 ]$ ?- l9 A* ?* cWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) D6 h7 M, X, l# I1 T+ K) l. \. _I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' _* m7 S- a% ?% MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 \/ U  I2 \3 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 A" l3 r1 a1 z( W) B* R. b( [! oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 F, e3 x! q' w9 d' t7 O& QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# I; \  U. g1 }# {( r9 }6 oEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 n7 J% @# o9 P- B* U$ dEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 ^# {5 Z, I6 s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" d4 b) d) y2 G7 F& v, j/ Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; i2 Y; f; _' [( D$ `3 N7 i8 ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ z- X- ]3 A; Q2 O* F- Q" L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 W- ?" @! {2 ], M# M/ s5 s1 p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* }0 r) C: t. E; N0 Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& ^1 B' z& g9 E7 }/ A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 u  Y( B7 n! m) s  i" R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 [4 b- Z1 H1 e3 ~/ w) e$ u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 \4 G& @* [- f' O/ \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- v2 j9 r: e- N! \  [2 \; B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  x4 R0 F* E, v5 u! U$ B/ `! `1 x<P>但我不会</P>
. \% x, l! z' Q! ]+ v" @1 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) K  r, @# \9 Q* W9 o6 q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- c/ Z; D: N& a- [8 }; E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 J0 v1 L$ _" l# {( v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" l( k" V+ g# ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 t5 T" p) f$ n2 r+ J+ k' [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ J1 S4 j+ }5 l# J0 c% B9 w' [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 D6 D* ]9 z/ A8 P/ i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* d+ }' u: N4 S: X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ]0 X  ^3 D/ S- `, B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ {$ ^) P1 ~: I" F<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, M- t( O4 p, Z# V% X: [8 l$ A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 |# {" a! n  i5 A. `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 \* K5 A; i) k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' P- d- s  D0 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ l; K! c0 f5 A- A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- u: [% ~& L2 g1 l8 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* J1 @' V% Z& s; }8 Q& A; z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: ^3 T- O- j8 S3 J2 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 F/ j" ^; o4 H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>