【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
5 @3 P* }4 ?6 D  HThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& X; p& M7 G& p, F0 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ B: `# s1 c( W3 ^I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ O% M$ {  A2 @  V* UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; x% N% A, u6 T7 G3 w( _I would probably know how you feel
4 V8 J2 L, z+ J& oLove… just the word love
7 t( C) H* N1 [( h4 O7 l3 U3 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
  Z; z5 Z$ r4 ^* ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 c* h" M; m& ]9 d1 D' K3 _  \If today isn’t too late,
+ v" X2 [7 P3 A5 \  j; eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( F2 I/ E& E4 a6 b3 @5 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; q( d/ G$ H+ V; iEntrust my love within your heart
- v6 Y1 n1 K8 I9 R% L& L/ @: XLove… just the word love
4 \# \9 Y7 t' k9 F2 K- dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% B# Y7 {" D& x: X9 V4 k3 l4 LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! T4 d5 e1 u! \2 jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ }( Y" z8 F- @8 A( mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, g  }1 G( A! `Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 }1 _" p: P; Z- V9 p8 M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' r! p, `9 k6 l/ U0 J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 d" ^$ k. y* y+ v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! q3 L! L8 a  r" g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ B# X: |/ c& ^( O4 l. O3 c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 O8 E6 n7 V9 F* Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 F. y- D4 i8 V  _1 F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ b0 Q+ s- Y6 T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' m. Q+ w' @# T4 b6 ?" g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: ]% d0 }7 d. v' t6 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" p, _$ g; e2 |" \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 T0 G7 S. z0 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& _% U6 `8 P/ c) j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 U9 b) o  A7 V+ }3 Z* k0 C# g; C<P>但我不会 </P>
+ a/ m  l3 W0 y5 V2 f# Q  K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% C% U" @; V; H/ P5 X3 J" O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 }  u9 M) q4 `. {/ L0 B# }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: U& d8 D0 j( R( l9 P8 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 D+ g' i) |7 ~# s4 j& D- w$ l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, C3 {) s- j2 b- m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) r, [% S9 S0 v2 A* I8 \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. N/ ]  k9 c9 }; K9 M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" i# C; Q0 _! d) J* L# ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>