【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ T/ x) g* d* b+ C, r4 r8 T% f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: ?! T  V1 w( y0 M9 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 t3 ]- ]' t* @From the first moment we met,
" J5 Q/ }; ~2 }I already loved you with all my heart
) t+ a" M/ A0 M; R, O$ VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 B, o# Q: n, B" z: yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. T) O3 V  b, i5 o  H8 C1 jI would probably know how you feel
8 T6 j& B6 N6 P+ T/ V% a8 \" lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ l0 E6 a1 m- [But I never did
/ c- l3 b5 a! k( ?* F- L4 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ T- S" m3 ~6 J! zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 j$ n* v$ r5 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; }$ s9 t( t# e0 T0 S, yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ r& q# ?! p( U. ]I want to confess that I love you,
3 M. K$ w4 K/ d, H& W$ sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 @8 U  P, I& _, E8 S7 rIf today isn’t too late,
+ U/ k# R, F* m$ B/ uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, b) ^8 `) w, S1 G3 B, e3 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! _1 ^% A8 W( L0 a: G; gCan I entrust it to you?
/ B$ Q: Y1 G0 I7 m& nEntrust my love within your heart
. ]3 w0 d) x4 i9 Y, sCan I entrust it to you?
, A) Y, U6 t. Y: ?' j  wEntrust my love within your heart

: J0 G9 y( H7 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 {8 e" b! U0 X+ j! [$ X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ @& |5 W9 t; ~3 @; O$ d8 ]* \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! |( t; L! L1 d/ z: U' C$ Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! s/ S( l: b5 \% s  n6 Y7 R; b, |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& W7 b4 [  |: C8 B' @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 E0 p3 d! J* a3 k9 }  r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 p* W  C$ f" ^* ^& @" W  e1 ?# j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 l- u$ [! G( }. Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& Z, U& M8 I1 [9 d( }( i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 H* r: L0 L4 A; C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 p( g# ?7 [, ?/ h5 I1 ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- ~5 ~% v/ ~0 n1 E# J9 b' J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; z' z+ {: C* _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. N# Q) V/ J& p* E1 S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 n: Y# d# O, S  H: f3 R6 z9 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' _' W# Y9 o9 F: Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, S1 {- {" z: w  ]+ P6 l/ J) \( y0 j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 r1 v/ U2 C& V/ z- m; L2 |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! P# Y! d9 b$ w/ D' J$ [! E+ m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% \" U+ A  X+ ~1 ?& r( l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ f0 V/ S; q8 A: }9 L  p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- K3 b! r3 s/ g. l. H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: D7 c* R% I3 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 k, G7 P( B8 x) Q  P  S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: N4 e) I$ Q2 Y. G7 M7 d! K# r) x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. a& g1 X, i3 ~5 T3 u6 G7 l* \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# O: b4 y9 }5 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" L- ?6 |0 W. h7 C; v. J( s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% i2 G3 V3 A% a/ p% [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; R2 L' e3 q) Q: I; C: `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>