【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% }: O; y, [) L# U: q# [我另将歌词附在此。
2 W. P" N# a5 _2 |( x. [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) a9 D/ B6 A- X3 }/ ?! T' i: U+ MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 Z4 m( r  E8 K" b0 N" n; aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. `0 `5 s4 t) s0 }* p. m" K( _* |5 c9 WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 P4 _- {, T& L, a/ K* @7 JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: w9 ^' y" v8 aIf today isn’t too late,
$ c% [1 V. @8 S1 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" A; f" K" S0 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 @4 R# D) a, X- i. c. G+ x# wEntrust my love within your heart
8 o) \- w' S) d& i! OLove… just the word love
! z7 C* H% C5 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! |5 c) U+ T2 n( ~* X- D! lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  r- u, ^- A5 B1 U" o9 }! d  PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 Z( f/ R  F- J7 b- h* j% ~4 ~Can I entrust it to you?
" y0 o( F$ B) y' b) n0 aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. Z3 x2 w$ v' A! W/ u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: ^) K8 U( I7 I8 J: P& @" }7 U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* Z, D( ]: y6 j( E, o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' S' X5 d' [% e$ @$ r! J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ f$ G  }: M$ X2 x, A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' g6 B: o# k! ?+ K# o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( m& Y; `- E/ B9 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 e$ q2 D5 B/ S2 \( ~! }7 D* Z7 P/ b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 E: I6 X% M8 v0 r0 e0 Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 [) m3 g$ `- T0 h; F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 R/ h( ^% _% H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* k2 W+ Y5 H  ^  Z8 Y* B% ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 k- J/ R) S# q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. S' g2 h3 t& Y7 v& I0 i6 H: o$ U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. o8 q+ B6 X4 x# n! o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 e7 O2 @& E; }' ^) d5 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 W3 F# ?: B5 A; J) e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) Y2 y# w7 Y; e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 p- u9 Y0 z# @9 H8 N/ x/ P! A2 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 G: v. b2 c3 {) I4 ~; f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 {$ x/ v( j9 `6 e; h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ R7 m- m1 w. q# p( P9 V<P>But I never did </P>
* ^+ W; u9 W6 F9 A% T<P>但我不会 </P>
+ Y0 o* ?# |1 G+ K3 ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# h* |9 K9 |) s8 J7 v, A1 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" f7 S$ i; H' ^& j# t9 B. X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" f0 O+ D2 l. q; h# W: }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 s  W5 j) K6 M5 B, |" `$ n" P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 a9 x$ z4 {% O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. W& g' `! P3 L1 E: {: F) u5 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ {8 P8 f! N& ^: a! b9 X( ?! ~% x/ z/ ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* D+ A, H" c5 d8 i7 E) v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>