【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ \4 A$ Q0 w1 h% f- L' ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ K* Y5 x- U6 J( E; J, [. BI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ i# Y2 r6 g' B( ~0 RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) j' J' t$ ]; h4 A. tWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ [  \5 F$ ^# ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) x" A1 Q  i& E8 w5 @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, @- C# F/ T1 ?* ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. m0 i& G  \( h: j3 Y) vCan I entrust it to you?
5 m9 }' u- ~  B3 ^+ LEntrust my love within your heart
/ V" N, ?4 N8 K' s9 JLove… just the word love
2 o) t1 ]% i, f  y4 N% Z3 Y  u: SWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 |) e# u0 l" d8 q- TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 y' R/ E! H9 K) {! T- T* \+ YCan I entrust it to you?
2 C  @+ ?- ~  E. H  z9 P1 lEntrust my love within your heart
, s, B+ D0 N9 r7 I" _3 RCan I entrust it to you?
% O% F+ ^/ R. u4 q: HEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 T. E$ X2 o3 G9 C( w% m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 `+ [" u: I& J6 r# N. R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% s, g# B9 V* _/ [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 T( I$ P2 n' e  C& ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 }9 b2 g3 n' o$ I8 y$ i. q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! j2 m5 m2 q4 J1 B& {$ t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& }3 v0 T5 D& ]2 c/ j7 y. H5 F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& n% W9 g) K8 D6 f; G6 B) m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 n1 t6 f% s1 H7 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, D& Z, J5 l6 q8 w) G2 b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 {4 ?# g1 d: D* o# T  o& x. P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  @! x1 J1 P2 u' V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 V  B* X' O3 C, u! o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( N' O! ^" }+ ~3 z: w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. a: {5 c* K; G$ G' h. o. a9 V2 c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- a, v& ^: i* Z# N% p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- J  v" `, P5 d$ r+ u8 F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 g# }( k) Q6 W% z( d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 ]: v- Y1 A* d, ~: J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; F1 T; y2 o: N' C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 q( n- r- c+ M$ R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. C8 P+ r! j5 H5 q4 Y* a' C' j3 q6 @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' h/ `. `1 u- ]6 X4 X& ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 y. }1 J, r+ @" u: k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% `" ^+ @! d3 o. q1 ]3 `; L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: A; x4 t! K4 |. |& U/ a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 ]! {) F) I% J" n5 o<P>But I never did </P>
# K" H' p/ _$ e5 K1 l<P>但我不会 </P>
: m2 w' I2 i; q0 L: P2 D/ C7 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 n/ _' ]" f6 E# j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 b' ^1 c" V8 N3 M2 I/ [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. M" x% O' e5 v8 I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* [9 l8 H" |. @) K6 B1 F6 @* V( a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- I) f$ O3 s( v1 P( I3 a0 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ }/ ]5 k+ `5 ^8 c5 m- Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; t& O1 s2 l0 y) F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 m- ]* V0 w  A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 q8 D' m# v( Z6 q) l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# j( ~1 B% d8 s* s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>