【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% D/ w" n9 n, Z' A$ B7 t2 `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( A9 H  i6 `& l; B/ V. QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! \- w) n# n  V# l1 kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 V/ R) o# a% M2 \We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ N) L: b4 I, J: gLove… just the word love
0 D+ c6 j- \/ hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 l' }9 T) X7 W$ f/ T6 v' jBut I never did
, L& g% W' j+ W% E5 q+ K! f+ y4 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- K! F- i3 k$ R) V* _; P) tIf today isn’t too late,
, X+ z  l4 O! y9 F8 HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 w7 H! `1 ^- h' P. gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ M+ ~. z& e+ p5 {& G7 s+ D0 OCan I entrust it to you?
% `% \( O5 x' R9 NEntrust my love within your heart
) l& Z$ y% {, V/ l3 q* H/ PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 K: u8 P* g/ cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# t9 ?& O& Y% b! j6 m+ ~4 j! nCan I entrust it to you?
8 Z" J( {# t: yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 \- g( |' R2 G& J! T  d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 h% `' l+ k, N; @( h, I) w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 g# x8 b. t( p3 W+ v/ d3 t) N% x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- z$ ]7 x; y# E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 {( {' |6 ~* g  j. W' e2 B& ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 u& v8 Y9 @5 @, m9 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  v& k, |3 H, r8 u, @0 j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& X- s  u; u$ i: q. `4 J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) X! C% q5 y+ F/ I( s* R9 @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( T/ ?( g8 \8 B, V8 o( ]# n% |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* |' b- u: O+ c0 t3 y3 R0 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! e$ J9 O7 c0 @2 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( ]7 {5 c! h4 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- q! S5 F; g9 p  i$ I3 u2 a4 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% \' U* b1 `, N4 a* g( V9 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 ^: `8 w( a  z( N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 e$ @: p2 ~) T+ X  V' a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 ?6 \% M/ ~! v# \/ e9 O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 x2 d4 N3 n- i% t; w. U6 ~/ Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 h# D  N1 v# }% Z( H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: b3 |* A8 z4 `' V( t& S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, s! t" V( z# R! B& Z7 N9 y2 H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: _  G0 a. \+ S4 c  }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: O' F7 v6 b/ U$ n" e0 e- s( K<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" A9 G' F( _6 B9 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# W; b. [! s8 v- I/ u  A9 X5 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; Y/ O! N7 K# }5 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( R& y, }+ K) G4 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" j" g- s+ ]5 z. w8 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 F7 p/ s5 Y3 G" x3 }+ y: x% I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 J( Y: A# f1 \" \% m, j5 n: R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 g6 I5 s' C& O* s<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 S+ [2 t7 b* N" { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  j8 d& h0 K7 T1 k3 q) Q1 {4 n8 E' a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( z+ D# B" ?% k; V% G/ J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>