【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! T/ _/ P: i, I* HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ ]5 Y0 ]: J+ x9 a* C: FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# {+ L: Q8 k* w: v( f$ U3 QLove… just the word love
- Q+ m2 _1 n0 R  I% h/ y1 n: u, E3 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 B9 Y4 Y; ?) [$ \. ^8 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! `1 v, b' v  W9 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ S) U( N! b0 H6 L& }" d! h( `" fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; E* ?4 B( t6 W* |$ B9 {: A" e+ `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ a6 F* q" Q8 [) M! c) L2 i* ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ f0 X2 h7 n' F5 F  [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: s1 V! A* g5 L! l% JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( I0 `3 j+ }8 P0 ~& gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 `: ]! X) U- X) s" ]6 F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 x3 ]! u9 V6 Z7 B' I3 Z  d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# p: M: V% [# R) ?* `0 W- O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 x. l) r8 b# v9 I0 g- f8 r! h$ L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 G4 W; S: {1 }0 N4 J* N9 h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! Q& [9 X  f: J8 `5 j; O% {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 |& U! K2 R( w4 C9 ^* r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. o+ ]! ~( j; ?" j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& m% p% R5 D# q& Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 x; {. x4 G" ^% m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ s; c; s( u% l" ?8 I) g( v7 [4 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 x  O. k9 r, z  {8 ]6 T$ u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ A3 H) g5 z/ b5 W! J' T$ v4 W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 O% T- R$ c. o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 o) P7 X, U5 K  G* H% F0 P7 z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: V" Q$ F9 `( v, |2 ^, \" B  P: W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 `- W. w9 @( K2 t/ a! F; J; t7 Y$ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, _( y# I# t# c9 }% n/ j. h& a* X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# g6 L/ n; Q, ?- J2 X# B2 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 u' s) _+ L& G. Q" Q1 Z. R4 ]( N' V) D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 @2 r; @) t2 h( y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( I& B; [4 M0 Z5 z% e<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' \; I, T% x; U& B! q+ F2 k3 b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  p- j5 u1 z3 Z/ V% r1 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 I/ R; r( N$ F$ ?- q7 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ `( o5 t3 q5 q& [* P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 e! w9 D* ]- U- H) R1 u- l4 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' `! N+ m7 U' \# p1 p+ Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ n% B9 ^& C! w! O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 g2 R2 s4 a. e: ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 c1 A2 C/ Q$ ?2 \8 c& f  s$ z6 ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>