【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 `& Z" h5 j( X# V/ ~我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 B( I: `0 N3 J% i& R% vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, U# F1 `8 \8 u, b  r5 G7 cI already loved you with all my heart
! H& m" [0 a2 U% {) X, {# nWe meet and talk everyday,
& P5 Y# q+ i2 o" V% v- |! eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 N$ O5 E7 m$ ^- r- j1 I) dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# i* F% f! E- j  H, Q# l3 }8 gIf today isn’t too late,
% r( a* u2 z" }- Z4 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. m1 \$ B4 B$ ]% X$ M5 PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( B: w1 }3 h) s* j7 Y, ~: ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ h+ [* T4 Z, E9 K7 |+ W4 v* A* o% XLove… just the word love
8 r: `; y. }, l7 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; q, b6 A! ^+ h' @' }% DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 o, a" i2 l5 Q* ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% I" T+ I2 ~1 p# z9 h1 v. DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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, D! w4 s0 ^  m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' N0 z! X0 G% O" g' r6 {4 V7 R* Q8 j& Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; C$ e' q6 H7 \# }2 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: {; \: }! M6 |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* t; B, {7 }5 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; q9 d/ w0 G( U0 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: O; D: m% b8 }' F% d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- Z" [; S8 Q, ?; U6 m  _6 i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ K) E; v+ J) K) c& H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) K( E% [: |3 C) Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" `$ ~3 q- Q: u/ f5 k+ p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) \& {* d; ^* M! W& ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ P1 X" L+ o% c- c; z5 g% o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# w5 X# ?% K: x7 u5 N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; g( ?. P, f2 k& x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 R; U1 s1 {8 r" I9 |: D: T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 l: h! ?2 _* b- }- G6 H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. c2 U: m4 U  z. C! m6 n  p4 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. g/ `3 k5 L. ?- D, P7 H/ X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' n/ f3 Q' k! [6 W8 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! `# N% M1 Q0 L6 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ x2 H$ E3 h4 w# x7 j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* a* e3 K9 A7 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. F1 l$ c* F) x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" c7 @) x; K% F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ Y: p: d. L( ~  |: @" F3 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 L1 y; H- |6 ~. g& P4 v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( B7 D6 \, s. n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; n; V$ l- X- l5 G. A* z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, f/ q% D/ j" Y, n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 T2 R" b# Y% Z( p: B4 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ _2 N$ A, j# W! @, J: c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>