【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# ^8 Q0 H5 P8 Q; gFrom the first moment we met,
, N( c: _( v/ g+ EI already loved you with all my heart
! F: m3 O9 |  N3 M& [We meet and talk everyday,
& s. j: O- o; a5 y1 x* pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' S- t$ ^! X( n2 UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 N( S  a1 u5 Q1 G* }+ [I would probably know how you feel
9 x5 `# _4 h  S& c8 @  Y: vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( J- P  r* V/ P* n6 BI want to confess that I love you,
5 t. x+ M! T8 a* F9 `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: ?" _: z7 {# Q; O' Y, B4 r/ u; aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 a% D. e5 `' s+ D; `Why is it so difficult to express?
) a0 f) _8 [5 \+ p+ V: BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 {3 q2 M4 N, q/ d5 DEntrust my love within your heart
3 v+ [5 b+ d  N/ G8 ^$ sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ X3 X, \) k% d  z3 z* q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- V2 f' \% n# w/ O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 W8 M$ F# v' K1 }' b9 H( V. V; r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( V6 q- B5 W' Q0 P6 X+ a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: T+ ?" n8 P/ Z, d' K- C7 n$ V0 S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ z' y' O9 v7 v% S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& |! I# q) m3 I- s8 b' H& p  q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 V* \& b: x$ h' ~% G  l: M( @9 w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" A5 _, M" ?! X4 I4 S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ u& [  }) ~9 L& g) J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 i1 Y+ `* E- x9 @# w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 c7 F* d) l7 `( \) Q) R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- H# k" a, [$ G6 x# ?9 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ |- _2 `7 U$ D6 N: f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. b! {5 `8 W/ |5 B5 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( T& w: o! G* n+ ]& {& j# g4 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 h. v2 o) n! w! m- p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  f2 u0 K2 W7 v  x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 ^/ v4 x- E+ x3 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 O  }% Z7 O9 x7 d' i4 X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 o- i  b6 Z0 w4 J, e. ~" u; [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 I% y' H# p! C. {* _<P>但我不会 </P>
" L  y- q9 ?3 a# S1 n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% ?1 ~1 \7 [4 D5 c1 T- ]1 e% v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) n6 a; F* ^: R) T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 L/ o, E( r+ ]) S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 j; U9 H" n; b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ~( g1 `* b" J& x& x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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" e. h8 q) l" O! A- q" z: a- S4 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>