【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
9 F- ^+ d) I3 |, Q3 y0 U$ r! EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 y- j3 B7 m. [1 w* iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 q% T- v9 r& zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 ]2 K) t& K3 @: VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( y) ^/ E9 f6 {  o* aLove… just the word love
5 O: J' Q& j5 s9 @6 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ K5 M- w# h" D8 \) {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# d9 W& i9 _! }. j: K, XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! D) X) ]1 D. E5 o8 N8 A, DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 u# I: ^3 [# T+ X8 R: DLove… just the word love
/ z5 }) \) I# L* J9 |Why is it so difficult to express?
$ P8 F  n2 ^* W0 qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 B, A* B( E" p& dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) f0 d, A6 t) T6 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! |: r: ]( K3 e. i! I  s6 sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# m$ {3 c9 p$ n  f* ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 O5 z- J) a& t0 b5 Z* l; x0 oCan I entrust it to you?
2 u: m6 D" [, ~$ F6 X, r7 iEntrust my love within your heart

3 R9 }) q5 A' D6 v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& Q1 y) e  t2 D9 d$ ?  K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, U6 ?( r( Y3 a4 D: K& A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( L, E: F: j5 \+ @- p6 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 n9 i2 [) t' {9 e3 P$ Y' h' T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# W& a5 |, _0 n& D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# V. ^5 N+ q- ~: [8 Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% S4 J' H$ `5 I6 c5 \: V# P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 n4 p3 a( g- c: J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 M& N* N- B) T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ Q$ S. _' U2 f, r6 I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, M, F4 L: L! o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! |  ~0 s6 G1 T; o8 X/ `* c/ r<P>但我不会</P>
5 @- g) M- N' Z3 I, m' R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! |" G- s% w! [: S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( j/ r3 d3 Y7 O- j- j' h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' j) P; K5 h* }" n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 B' t3 b5 L6 g7 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 s$ w9 [5 o' j  q( }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 d, ]0 w$ y7 z$ Y( |5 w# j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 e7 u9 M5 D! j$ m; g! S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Y7 h6 ?" U5 J! v4 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" K1 H5 y9 W: I, U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ S8 d( M- S: P* o8 j7 u, Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 U2 L, p  X7 G$ z! b3 M: F) j0 G/ b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 d* Y+ O) W' v! a3 A2 |. K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 I: c9 N4 f  `+ t* C3 t3 P3 q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, X/ _# [% V7 t& m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ U% ^% t* w. j$ ^1 M5 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>