【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 I! X8 j2 ]! R2 oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ t' L2 k1 r1 Y  r- B) wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 s1 s8 q- Z( ^1 x! U" c7 KLove… just the word love
8 b; w9 ~4 I5 d5 hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 c" o- L* i5 ~* C, o5 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* a, x- ^% y6 ]% ^, sCan I entrust it to you?
' r* j( r7 @" x, ~Entrust my love within your heart
3 h0 i" R- B7 J( RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" {. V* }9 K# W" POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 ^3 g) g5 c( yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- Z+ ^9 v: M9 q4 [& k5 w! W6 CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" B- t7 S# ~; u- t7 ^  S8 sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. w4 h* F( t' \' |* N" F+ r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) \. M5 Z5 E1 ^. x. n4 h9 h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( r2 k$ S! r3 @+ @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 h2 b* b5 H& T. B. X2 I3 F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 I2 L8 ~  d8 s/ K4 c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ D- L' i/ q2 v* u<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 P7 F0 N6 o" g- Y& V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* X9 F9 x6 j$ o" J( D3 p5 o5 G- B  _* x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 a% K! r5 ]3 P# A9 q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 e0 i/ J, @, X7 y( o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ i  n  C! z! P  T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' p2 s5 v; I+ r  |0 p/ j$ M7 T' c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, @7 ^" q6 q; N7 {0 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 ?% n2 Z( L2 [1 u& i$ N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ a5 G" T; j$ ~  U9 \& G1 ?* N! S$ t; a& ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ r5 s) J* r+ J8 f( H. c7 i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ J0 O6 P& H  ]2 w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ q" n1 s8 `/ K0 I& b/ e  V2 s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 f, M' m: `4 o+ {! y3 P3 z: L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# ]- w- v# X  k5 V8 U' Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' O: O/ Y- A, w  S% H1 L% O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 D+ u+ }* \/ Z5 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 F; D& @" G+ W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. f0 u4 C0 ^. K! a3 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 f) ?: S+ `1 `$ D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ C9 w+ O5 b; F* `; z  ]3 O% z0 W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  o# C$ D; W4 G6 T) {1 x 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' @% U* i* [; |% Z% [2 s, ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>