【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 P" |8 I) W4 @, O0 ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 ~  z# Q3 E  h7 b5 [* }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. n( _( H1 Y' h4 j1 ?Love… just the word love
+ ~. J3 K4 g- @; g' Z) i- \1 A9 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. B% Z% V( P& |, LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% h7 {" o/ H5 v* XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 n( F3 o6 i. ^3 z/ [* rEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 T/ o% ?" z/ Z) d* l7 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- e- `1 D* V# _3 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 J+ i6 d: g* {& vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 k2 Q4 V+ B1 J/ i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& }4 B( ]; ?7 U2 ]. A& c; ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& `, e1 @; ]7 W+ e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) f' x, F- {1 C, L7 J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* p0 N. h: f- O' A: U8 u) s- E! o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- X3 A4 N& F' y2 ]- T) t1 F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! m6 N; l( [$ Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! E5 E. s. J) g2 p4 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- }6 @# r7 n8 N" Q+ @1 ~2 ~+ W( N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 O2 w0 E1 T) }; Q0 W+ {6 e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ B9 F4 g. L: K6 ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! ^6 s5 j" ]+ u; M7 Z9 ?9 p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& K  h# `0 }4 N3 @7 y  {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  h1 a. U$ }, S% }# V7 u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" r& |! D& [2 c( _( _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! v. F3 h( B8 g) g% r2 A* s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 Q7 f2 n& `+ q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 Z8 S* J- P9 ?1 K8 q2 p" C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 S' }% ]' j  E+ B4 i, O7 R! e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, i5 |9 u5 |5 y/ o! r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) d0 ^* }8 i# D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 V6 _3 \! ^6 a8 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  [0 R5 Y9 }. n' _& h, P* ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 B9 Q1 m# }/ b5 d/ W1 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; d7 d) j- Z1 U" i* o- H2 F$ m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" A& p$ p% i( ], o: T& B8 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! d0 O2 A, {. {5 X  f* C) H<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; I6 ~) O- C: B, F6 ]* u( K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 Q) s+ i5 X% o( F+ x  \* H<P>But I never did </P>
7 P- f7 _  R; E! z( ]& [' P) O+ b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' I8 I5 R. E3 _" v; A  U2 a8 H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- k( y! G+ @5 E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 R0 [. u1 K9 X% r1 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 ^/ |# L* J: ~7 l' f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' J6 ^# V2 [- h& ~" }- D0 j% U2 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( Y, G- a; t# Y3 y  \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 R; A. v( o0 u' F7 o* k7 r; d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 ~9 M" x6 F0 w$ c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! i# ]# h& ]2 |: Z( P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! t" }9 z/ S" N$ b  N  ^0 k: ^' y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 j8 |+ ]) Q# T2 p3 C' |0 u& x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>