【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" B4 f) |: E8 s- t3 OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 H' u" k) S- ^* b" |' uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 _0 r+ Z7 y  M9 E! D; sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( h1 Y4 O) W2 m+ Q7 n/ n+ j/ T% aI would probably know how you feel
& d0 A$ c3 O* H% B; z9 ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 f' u, r7 n8 f( ]! m% T" G' ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; A3 m0 R8 z2 z: v6 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 l, A6 {; g" [8 u5 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: Q: F& T' P' Z: m4 n. a, ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 n# q8 W: K+ c- r+ r) M/ \9 Q; CI want to confess that I love you,
% q& i0 w. c$ I% Z+ YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 O4 b3 W, p3 j. r+ ?$ YIf today isn’t too late,
' l' o, a! f& U, d: ?  b2 T/ AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# |3 H9 Z/ E$ h6 I0 T" d& }$ u, nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, P8 r$ b& Z  |1 p6 ]/ \Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ c8 b2 t- {* ^Entrust my love within your heart

  y/ T6 X' e: g$ |. ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& \8 R) q) g( Q, i; m  b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- P6 A; E' w  ~; Z$ Y2 x* h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 _2 J' r7 z- R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 A7 n3 T6 ~2 A3 ^2 Z; t, Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ O' a, t$ I% R* H% e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. v$ P3 }' j/ Q, h5 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 O% i5 e1 J' |2 |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# u% f* _( _) W! K6 W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& @# E. S# k7 E' K. S, g& i4 Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 S! g5 A$ V. Z' ]/ Q- a% W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* L; _( i' r8 H/ H0 D; ~5 N$ C, r* U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 v8 b- s/ N6 n, N- R; W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  I7 O* X" E3 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 J% t4 }; l* i8 L" Z  y8 _<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- i2 i" V- ^# V) y( `, O) p. _* V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 I; |/ v6 L/ t0 i' @: C<P>But I never did </P>
# j' p. ]' @- I<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 l# }3 `# W) n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ U7 h( u) r* _( a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! Y! e0 t5 T; D! g  W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ @/ S- j1 w0 f" D7 M9 s2 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 [7 t2 i0 b4 N/ ~+ J( V; d$ i  s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ u2 J! b! D% g3 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; J7 q2 h& }, \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ h8 F4 \' u% E! c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 K* H; d' D+ l4 @  O1 s  h
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 x$ V/ Z$ u  V! S. m/ V" `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 q6 n* s5 v6 i9 Q6 Q, {! _" N
# C% x9 `$ |) |  i4 J# x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. \) v. O7 O6 D$ E; H. E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" U& Q  R  t5 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>