【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% L' p4 }: u5 X8 a我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 O( y0 y' }4 }$ H$ N8 x' {; x7 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 u% {: }) p) a0 M8 h5 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% T" _8 y6 K  M; _( }2 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: r6 ?; ?6 ?: u3 q* ], p8 ?" RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& r1 K, n% P7 {: `( \/ GCan I entrust it to you?
$ x7 {" P, @$ Q( }; r' @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ h. P- c3 {9 [! h4 S9 x$ hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 @4 R: \  x0 HBut I never did
3 n2 L, N1 F) X* [! K' E8 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" x1 w0 z: D' qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, |' r7 M3 F* k9 W$ _" @. o4 _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& C0 z. ~7 \* ~Entrust my love within your heart

' `& m$ ?' D) v% @6 y, G( ]5 D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ }- h: K# s4 U0 X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- i; w2 @% L  C! N/ f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 u2 V6 s/ F7 u/ q- _<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 |4 H" s$ {  N7 q7 O9 `# ^& w" E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 z$ E9 K1 J2 {/ K6 D2 r  ~/ i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 v# Y9 n( `+ e0 k: X9 N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 u% _, q( Y. x' w" O4 j0 \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 P" N2 n7 q4 u<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) r* T: U8 j7 a1 b4 z; @" @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' h2 B2 ]( f+ K5 B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 m3 q# S. X6 M9 |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# z+ H, T; u0 a& C+ v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 }' V5 l: v; Z<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 a# |/ g0 t4 a, ?1 {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 @6 t* p" Q5 z+ T2 {% \0 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 k: W8 K, x! G' m- K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% l. L; }! H6 n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# G% D& e: I% p& r, S* o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 [! U4 j, O5 l1 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% f  R1 y+ Y- L  u$ r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ B/ s1 L* B' _9 P. t. [, h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 N+ S7 V) \; n2 i8 p5 z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ L8 t6 c+ @# d5 `0 I" _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' H. c6 I9 N3 a0 |2 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ }8 _+ A3 b9 F5 G3 O2 X& v0 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" z/ R6 D; ]2 i- B' I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 A/ r, Z/ Q, V  j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 S8 N8 t; D2 t' Y' F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>