【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" J  O: {9 O; V2 x6 }2 `- Q2 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: j/ p# `- e' F* AFrom the first moment we met,
- g1 c; }1 U8 KI already loved you with all my heart
& C6 `# e* n. X, IWe meet and talk everyday,
/ o3 _3 F  F8 b/ HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' |6 o' D9 K4 t2 F4 KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% n1 v. d% j( LLove… just the word love
  P* F5 m; `/ N8 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
" U* J; @" R( j; N0 GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 @" ^: R/ `5 \* e) wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! G! x3 n4 O5 v) ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 Q, X5 l# A3 L4 ]! l/ ~Why is it so difficult to express?
- ~" }. L' M, Z  p$ f8 @" L6 r4 p' JI want to confess that I love you,
9 z9 m4 C9 p2 K3 c! EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 H8 {) A# |" l: FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 a( S) V- `$ [( N+ J' T9 iEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ x2 P2 ?9 ~$ I/ M5 j0 B! E! j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 l$ W5 }4 a8 n7 M$ E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ J5 b# d5 Q% ?7 ^  U7 T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 y) o% J. ?# x# y& @* c- y0 w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 n* d% A' f  G% U0 a0 x, F& L( Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ S; G* v9 [+ p& A1 W; `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 X+ t) A8 e7 j" J& \& N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& ], I8 H# x8 C" ?: E& `5 A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 S' ?2 W$ P" h- s( r) R3 ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 ~; o8 K0 g" R0 V' u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; u2 d+ b5 k- W- K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ t7 `7 X+ m9 J" K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 R- ]3 T1 ?6 _( u  o, r% }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" s5 C/ L8 @' R6 J<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  s4 v1 Y; }, h4 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- P0 H# s9 H7 A! S8 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ O" m+ v' _% }- i8 a6 T* P4 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 q9 _$ z! n2 d* @9 D# _- _- t5 X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' [) @4 r3 v; T, v! m  R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, W4 |7 u& h! e0 `1 n" t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" i8 l/ f( m" `. A% g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; B# \  o, B+ `( c6 ?( G  S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( s; g# q1 O* J4 t2 P. s* L; p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; W$ s' d% ?% b0 T) j+ H# {( a  s) ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ E& e1 t1 R' v, R* i2 z! u0 W# y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) J/ B8 B  z6 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 ?) O" j/ \7 z2 i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ }9 @0 N7 a( R; Y! P8 C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; Z$ t$ A: g9 n/ u: n' `. r' B6 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ w$ I& f1 Z+ T% l4 i5 E2 q% o0 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. d3 @- @/ \, O9 ^6 J. O8 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 t: Y8 X2 Q- @* l$ I+ ]5 C4 H0 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* U" t- X! o8 m$ ~4 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) P2 R9 M5 S5 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. ?' h, A# |3 k9 |  N( Q4 m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>