【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. V- n9 [2 r9 q0 Y" R7 }6 `我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; Z! P) {, B& z' lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 X% b) z' u8 I% GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* `# X' p& |) f6 D6 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& p) {3 w( U+ v# _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& [- ]6 w* s8 X* a! jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' G- c, K1 Q; k3 m# XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- t/ h. ^$ b0 gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& s( o3 z# J9 Z* l0 j; P8 H: C1 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. z4 c7 L- o+ d# x9 h6 q) OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. d$ Z% c, f$ X' p$ `& ]4 W2 dIf today isn’t too late,
8 ~$ O7 p" \& fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# x, d# u3 {8 k! Z4 @7 L( @* KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, Z. p; l5 l& c2 m8 H, iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 n( k( Y0 t/ }- ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& o7 k( P" }9 q% l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 g, @! B3 ^" T4 x3 `% d7 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 D4 i% D4 H! k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: s: Q: O& w  S5 P5 R5 U8 ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" @5 E6 F; e2 _4 }; r6 c<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ u( `  _- a# Z1 `* B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( E; C, H( ]: P/ {* Q8 y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& J( v2 `; K" f  N% l& r. U6 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 X# Q+ P9 |* R& O  Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 p2 Y% Y, l0 Z, p; n1 Z1 V- H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- l1 p! M* @4 {8 Z, X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 B; H8 ]2 Z5 m. p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 @; A# u$ F7 ^3 A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# b. U9 ]+ M' U/ c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 R' A+ M$ F( a5 C1 y" F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ A9 Z( a! j) }* h' G, W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- a6 R& ?) h. I( ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- q8 R/ E/ J3 j+ Q" H: @2 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. f& B0 M7 }0 b1 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 |2 I! l1 r) ^- Z7 T$ b8 [" v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 ^9 p, @) P; v/ {6 X/ _8 \9 r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 n( W) R4 {) H% }, h: U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 S( m$ \  H+ W0 f( \6 H% G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: {4 T! {7 `& t: \, W0 d7 [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 v" V9 k& N) L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 y, k- g/ ^4 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ n: I- J' ?# f" W8 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 }& c  g% k. T) ^8 n; |% L) W1 b& N5 b, Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! o3 R2 i% R4 G+ r% f1 G+ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 k. D# i/ N* w  g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 d" f* X6 O- B- ~" i3 [2 V4 G+ {( J5 i4 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# ]# A6 j( D3 O* y* Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 {( U6 R$ F5 [: Q. a" b$ A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ y8 u% b- |5 s+ c3 }2 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ \6 [4 y: A, P, I% H2 o& T) ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ P7 ?' d0 K8 _% B4 ?7 z3 I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 ~5 r; L; m  @' K$ u) T- y- a4 ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>