【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
* {3 E1 M+ ~' |! N8 b2 @6 M) DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 o8 v% {5 j& e8 G5 {From the first moment we met,
& Z4 Q" H! I3 k2 {9 I/ II already loved you with all my heart
- z; C" f0 w/ m; r! TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 \8 v& d9 {* K9 {* S8 ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  i, o  h; e1 D. O8 L& iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ D8 z6 e! b- D  {' rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( K. y0 r3 T$ yI want to confess that I love you,
0 k# A0 A. \8 A+ _But I never did
5 _8 e' R2 R7 c' j6 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 P" O. u+ B! \, w3 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 _, P" A+ v( P8 ?" `. P' MCan I entrust it to you?
4 a" Z2 y* ^% h* n) p$ T& V" TEntrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 N% X7 y7 d1 T$ o4 j( R) D% I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* r* Y3 q$ u* x2 K! r4 E2 `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! a# ?+ w1 \6 ]+ k$ H. s; A1 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* j# T% u) S0 {9 S( l6 s" {4 W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% O) O6 Y+ b. s! K, z3 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" v' D9 e& `. _5 ]0 t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 K- z* e$ D% X* j& s3 m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, H+ W' p2 N2 k; |! @) A* w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" X; F, b! H% Z9 @- i1 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) n( N2 m6 q. C3 J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* j( P3 H- E: B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: W9 P; F8 k. M7 l: R0 d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 j" @/ I) w) Z% |0 V8 s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( {  p& ~; g- Z, h% |$ j- i' |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 n, a0 m6 e  m% I: Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 y: D/ S0 B# [1 ?% M3 e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: u: @" t! n0 K, U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- q$ [7 z0 n3 T1 |. ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, A; U- g1 m+ F7 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- _$ D8 M" [! u2 `- O( x* Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 C) g' V& M% T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ P$ Y% `0 i/ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* [; e1 y0 v* {, v* D9 v7 x) k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! r: i3 L/ z) \/ l4 `4 N6 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! m1 o* ~+ b  P) Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# D+ L! p7 c% s$ E0 G) ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 N/ ~$ w0 K6 {$ Z- C& \9 U9 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" e+ B7 R2 A8 w+ Q3 Q<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  T* E4 m- m1 l; G' M! L5 O" F: |# P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% V( \' u* c) @  X9 q8 H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; i" G3 D5 k" v9 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* Y, M5 v0 e; D2 n* G/ b( j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- K; a0 P! V* o: c& Y. w1 j7 H  J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! N) Q8 y9 B) y; {0 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; }. R8 s2 C4 P# ]3 n& [7 ]: V  B$ V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' r. C' [' U0 v5 _; `9 I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  D' s2 t2 e5 f, r  N+ N. e; i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>