【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 Z+ m% L; x/ _& rWe meet and talk everyday,
. j. k3 f# Z) }9 L  {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  n  N0 M. Z3 J+ j5 B, iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ E0 P$ R/ s" sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ ?6 ~! y. A5 n; L8 C4 |Why is it so difficult to express?
- F8 N. u/ _8 r7 K$ HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, Y! @' Z$ C- B3 y3 |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( |+ ^2 ^9 a9 Q2 kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 g- [6 d: B# G9 M- VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' _5 w: f9 {, u8 [1 u' o! vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 [( i4 S& j2 p% Q% MLove… just the word love
8 ]% M; S0 N- W; R6 y- jWhy is it so difficult to express?
! y  A' ]( t: N3 t- hI want to confess that I love you,
: e& n+ W1 g/ ~7 IBut I never did
% o) j5 R' U0 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( A% s/ v) j) B. u# i9 `2 C5 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# V( M( v! W) ~# _3 N/ g: mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
* Q+ n; U  ^5 G! L8 e; pEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" k5 D3 G5 {- \1 X- b, D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. W* T) A( k) T& b5 c0 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 F2 U' [5 v, N  z; k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
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<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" K8 _, z2 {7 Z& Y( R5 `% ~/ G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; a7 z6 k' R( [2 g9 {2 g+ m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" y. [* G& d( a: o8 G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. n- ~- z/ X% l8 \  U  n: e& `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, |& r/ l2 E1 \! ?' X+ w4 F# K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; }& k6 S4 Y- \+ d" N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# a! r, m8 ~) I5 T, H0 x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 T7 q0 p0 v( i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' |$ @- V' x6 v# u" |5 X/ ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* N# ~) }/ _. A6 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% t, C. [7 ^: I- g3 e! Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 K! O; `7 ~4 u9 I4 |1 I% X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  g# ]- x, |4 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- K+ R# a% _6 {+ d8 `4 v4 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( H; w+ d; {- |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 D! M5 A. G; n# e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% u- d3 L; p9 v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ s, D  I! p6 m5 @, N<P>但我不会 </P>
# x/ G7 l- t7 i/ P" }$ N& B+ S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! \4 I3 b, `9 A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 _5 _, `3 M1 d) z. u/ d/ T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& _7 e5 Z; t5 L& D& r2 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( I) T, Z# v3 s% I; X8 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ I' k4 T2 H$ U' I' p& u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( h/ R4 J% S/ U" M  ^1 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  ~% u0 \/ U; k: y: v- w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 o! d$ K. s# w% B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ^& W7 l2 S0 {* L3 X$ ?! J$ {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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