【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
, U3 H2 D9 j1 G. |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ d+ t4 f0 C2 G0 V0 dThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ C; {. ~7 P9 U6 b# T2 ?6 v$ Y$ UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ q8 x1 ~: G# [- }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. ]. F1 d6 k3 t% `" r6 n0 F; gWhy is it so difficult to express?
( [% z8 t5 ~. I* ], R  |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* R1 O* y$ q8 u4 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! @  O. j4 a* v9 OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- |6 C/ ~, |, z& P  OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) v' r8 {% ^0 A8 {. \6 rCan I entrust it to you?
2 M# o4 \& X* I; \( s. {! `2 HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" _0 ?. ~* f, [; CI want to confess that I love you,
" \1 s. m* }2 h$ O0 _0 P' h- aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 D; Q/ l/ t% v* Z; \( R$ vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. {, q9 z. d4 pCan I entrust it to you?
& U2 `- {$ l! u4 I, ~( G5 D3 BEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; g) g. y$ H( q% U# U/ H  n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( ^/ m/ ]- A6 l- R( k2 T! b8 Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 S- A2 _  K! J% L# ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 S& M! t+ ?$ h: g. I, Q. j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ {' \3 ~3 l4 V, a4 m( o* L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' a5 a4 w0 ]+ k" P  D! w4 }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 U  ~0 g$ r& N8 D5 t  q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ W. D! H! g' b4 H$ L6 ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 s# W, m8 k  m# a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 N& s1 t. L5 C9 {- S+ j" H) z# p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 e8 W6 w6 }3 @. W5 O" z6 _4 e1 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 _% l, O9 v# j( L4 Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 [8 D5 {! o8 ?' u0 l" p5 \2 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# V8 b, @; C$ S2 O0 F# _6 @5 `- R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ @4 P+ v5 W0 h  n. M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) B" g8 y! z; q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* O3 s6 c# V- T5 l& ]5 `$ [# c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>