【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& o) R9 X' }# h8 Y+ eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: T0 a' j0 Z# H8 q/ mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- Y" y, |4 o$ R- y# [% M* }- _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; _6 e: D5 O3 C/ X" O  PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" u) a2 K) A- L6 @0 lBut I never did
" {+ f% @( r" m& I! C% S6 R2 Y! S' c- UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 ^6 l/ q& f% mIf today isn’t too late,
. i- T5 x, B) r' r: UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. T$ ?4 A! W( Y: n  @& x) lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# L/ H5 ]+ _, [2 B3 W. \% yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 M) G  y9 y6 K/ [/ EIf today isn’t too late,
$ C3 c/ Z5 z" R* B. d: N$ n. lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 j; R0 G# X/ G; jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 E1 y) c: y6 c' w; MEntrust my love within your heart
9 w, v' r+ q& ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  v. R# b' k$ M# j0 t& c2 S% Q' F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* G; w+ Z  L. }3 {& V, i. [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ [7 @5 R0 p% k4 H" P# U- ^  L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( ~) A! e2 O9 N% c+ W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. i( |: o! |+ `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. x1 @8 ?+ ?# y/ s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" l1 p. Q* e7 f( O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( z( x* p2 H' D/ M$ W% q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' p! V% ~2 E& Y) E  T+ @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 a4 a3 Y8 ]' `- G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 k9 O9 j# n/ I% T  i) E& ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) T% _: |- b! m9 F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% U8 l/ P8 d6 f% w) m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, I! Q3 L, }) G; e* v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 P7 l$ b- p/ P: r9 K+ e3 z4 J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) x# L8 L( l( Y9 b3 x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) \1 J7 g2 G, k$ B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( A& \1 _" Y: @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, V% A% i' x. A) w3 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. F3 K: a( k! Y/ g3 e+ J/ Y( }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. x7 J. A# `2 j( V2 H5 E, O- \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! g/ t1 i- Q& T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 @1 a  @& Y3 J6 A, o: S6 a& v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 N3 e2 u$ z. @7 z/ X<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% ^# a% T- X; r8 b& m' T<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' w' C" m- W3 m! v9 D2 k1 k! E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) b* A" @) ~. X% c; u" G1 E' E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% p; y7 [) X) U  E9 Z& y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ c! N: `$ f0 a2 S. h9 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 x& R, h6 q6 k$ I5 z* z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 w6 Q* T- T9 `: k0 D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 y4 l! t& z, F" G: I. R9 e# R8 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" ]9 A8 s9 W. Y9 Q# ~: T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 a6 j; Q, x" F6 P, _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 h: r: {; Y3 ^4 \7 m6 u& P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 L& p4 q* S( n6 Q! f( _( b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 F( b! m5 V2 G2 S6 A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 z* h  U3 A, p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>