【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 i9 I( V7 S7 a* l; n; H, w4 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 @' L* q# C% \: g* G0 _" ~From the first moment we met,
0 A- T, a$ {& S" G# zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- s% u8 D4 l$ _! \3 }, o  A" WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! ]2 m6 a' \' G% k. R1 fLove… just the word love
6 _3 p1 G8 O9 U" c( |Why is it so difficult to express?
: @. q/ j6 F: VI want to confess that I love you,
! U4 c# `" e/ b  oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 {7 S4 U  D- n& t. b: j6 ~; G' DIf today isn’t too late,
% u# t# Q4 k8 |9 p, F8 U( NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* k. r5 Q/ z( h$ CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; u8 z3 p" h: L5 O0 |! c) F" j5 pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 X$ `' s4 F5 `: x! GI want to confess that I love you,
! }0 u/ a' m4 @! y4 Y+ @7 cBut I never did
. ?, D! ~: ]( r# POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 S9 L* p+ v1 [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 P3 Y! K: q* v) M* n- yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; b) h" p2 u- o8 b0 H; tCan I entrust it to you?
/ ^+ d* Q2 C, h4 ]0 C- YEntrust my love within your heart

% @: H" q$ ?$ p  m5 Z, |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
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$ z4 S* o2 o+ i6 ?1 _4 f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, n1 n2 Q6 p+ a) x; e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 b9 d; t/ _  E" ?9 C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. W( X3 l# u+ E3 C. o6 Y* b$ a: l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 o6 q# d) ?" y$ b. A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* R: X5 I' B3 B) Y2 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) ?6 R  B( a* W; s4 X% a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 Y: w5 a$ W+ X2 I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; T# u3 u0 k8 S  W  M6 ^* f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# r, ~  M- r0 c" Z  F) ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 K! m- `1 L" y9 f7 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 t, I6 O; k- ?* J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% B8 j0 _4 H/ t7 N/ q* B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% c4 h; K- r2 L+ a: i' m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 i! C% N7 Q% S6 e& y! D! }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 S+ Y* G) m/ x" J& K$ I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 K6 F7 }  E* f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ R/ t# C  ~" a: G9 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 c. X1 @/ I5 }8 P9 j0 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! h) ~% z, r) m7 M: E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& v2 P  w+ F7 v( p1 m$ u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 ]( y6 [7 J; [3 ~: G, M  Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 M1 H, h1 c* A7 b' P$ s7 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ v% U) O8 @1 T2 _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 @' b8 o( W2 v: P; f7 B0 ?( I7 L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! M/ E, K# G; g! d# G' F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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* N0 ~  D9 ~0 x  B0 _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 W7 k( y; |- k' O% I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 P" n# Y, b. }1 }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ }6 C7 x$ p9 E  f- }5 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>