【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ c9 A$ U; W+ Q) e: C- c. W5 i5 v+ ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- ?9 Y% W3 [  I- XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ o" h( a# @. W7 m* p; v- H8 ^I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& s: Y, O1 W/ G& j5 ]+ \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 `. r0 D) u2 r8 ^8 `$ }$ E+ ?I want to confess that I love you,
2 V. H6 z+ t& D+ b+ SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 g* P8 O& Q# {6 J1 J5 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 F) i/ a' @; i5 g- T$ ACan I entrust it to you?
; p8 V4 S6 L* ~% _( GEntrust my love within your heart
( p( L. h8 L! C! a, R5 K, NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 @  i2 Y4 ^4 B1 Q$ b; Y* YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" U6 }: o) a6 d- N0 NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 ^. s* g" W; @* V1 y. ~# VCan I entrust it to you?
5 u4 w! b; o9 u: T( F7 F: }) d5 Q% HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( m5 R6 t5 n, m& T3 w3 G: Q! i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 q) s/ R+ d. J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 k2 J' ~8 B/ T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& o* |6 F& B5 f6 o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, L( V) K1 b$ B, p# R8 i+ u5 w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 F9 V8 m( Z3 M2 w3 L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 z: V+ j  B6 W7 g7 f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: i* g7 d, L  k& E' r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* q6 g$ t  j- f: ?+ Q* N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 O7 r: g( ], B7 Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 p  r$ G$ @! T8 W3 b; U, f! H5 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" s( F1 {1 `$ _$ R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 {* V3 M) m$ h% G& }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 d9 |- h, j6 C: l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 X! d) H1 r+ G! W% o) }; Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ y# ], A2 K% Q5 e) D- i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% N7 r! J% u. E) t$ _6 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ f) }% F) D2 M+ H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- H0 Q' @5 \% k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 ?, m+ c  `+ i: m& c2 L! C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! x7 }2 j/ i5 w# l+ ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' `4 ~; r4 i. t. |5 B* S/ g( a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) t5 @8 L. W9 P' i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; J, c5 W" i' X8 U# q/ K- z, y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% h4 |- t5 \! T' g) [% D7 v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% t" \2 x2 o1 z( V( N- k  W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* ^# e; M3 [1 b: {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) L6 f& l$ \" x4 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- e- d; Q% z; ?: F6 |! r/ e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 H3 e  h/ d& x* c1 i$ C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 K- |/ |: _# U4 S) G, Q8 J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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/ K, i( d% P# i, D4 R这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! _2 \" m% y5 b3 o# C6 O2 W; g/ O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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