【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  h+ O+ N& a0 r0 j我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) ~+ O0 }. q6 u# _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) u5 l; z% W- g4 JFrom the first moment we met,
& U, ?6 u7 t8 d, L9 Z2 ]1 VI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ Q1 J, s" \  h: rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ w) ]7 K  R% o9 n& ]1 X7 O2 pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 L! g4 Z0 e( U# t' `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' B+ Q7 d9 m" F% F0 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% Y6 ?8 r) P9 W. S0 C( r1 B/ lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! G. r2 g& V. S6 F; @I want to confess that I love you,
" V$ C6 T7 r4 w0 O$ J% m1 Y2 HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ T" c7 K, D: B0 N7 `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" [. H, m1 K+ |4 t- iCan I entrust it to you?
, b4 d) ?6 ?( dEntrust my love within your heart
) Y( z# n* e) w9 G* KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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. B/ d2 `. T( b( i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 H6 _3 X4 S0 r# I3 G( L+ h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ y) m4 p  R5 J' E7 _! R4 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 B( I4 n2 e! e9 I7 x: T% `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& f3 N. J8 j; X9 N8 }4 }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 V2 y# P9 C" {2 j! v2 N1 ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 N! e( w  x/ }) ]/ a' O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 ]$ n2 }7 C8 R  h- L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" B& c2 k* ?# h6 z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- H# B7 }2 G( ~) I! w& p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  l& C2 ^' @. m% Q( `8 G: `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& b! G2 j/ i$ y9 V. p) M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) k9 Q: O/ W1 l7 d' R; E( E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 m( K1 q0 R. ?, X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% M' O. {, @6 S) `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 X1 s3 O% Z" B3 }$ s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: f' B0 r9 V" u4 c4 z3 t2 v9 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, f" z% i# {) \, c* a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! M) b% g* u5 R5 f5 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: g. d; p5 h% e- h  V: d8 F# U3 a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 m" I: G& \1 o6 W; }+ U$ M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! G; N) |: _! v# d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 p. j9 k8 D) F9 i/ f6 l6 n+ C<P>But I never did </P>
/ ~, y% l; M/ Z<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 d' m' @9 q1 x+ j0 E. g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; R) r8 l$ d! ], N& ?8 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 K" g( N, L3 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' c& X" U' }  ?3 R+ |8 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 e  _% j$ b, b) d& e/ q: O" B' T' h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ @' ]+ a  u; U+ L& H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 b6 P  d3 ?. Y0 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>