【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
; c/ j, w6 _+ f, O4 AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& v/ w. ^# n/ p9 s& p4 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: \( c* [# R0 p* U  Q( p. A& yFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 h& X) ^5 k0 S* }( |& PWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 D# A& n+ K; B! vLove… just the word love
  H3 M- J5 Z- ~' Q  }9 B6 g& x- i% oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' f. |2 @) s& S4 Y, g  gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& c' e# x. l# [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 R; U/ ]' l; t9 L- ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% f3 v& C4 j1 V4 ], Y- BLove… just the word love
' L& f/ B8 E4 \Why is it so difficult to express?
( J- n$ E/ ]5 Y% G4 L/ MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% V1 L, _) H! S* v* I+ [- sIf today isn’t too late,
. {6 a- [' P3 h7 b& l; c9 W* J, f: LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 ?2 P: ^; o1 f2 M9 oCan I entrust it to you?
" y$ _+ i; r) a3 R6 iEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) R# A. d* j6 {: g4 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; F5 m  Y1 [6 Q3 s) F7 f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ q/ m* N9 h+ }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" L5 s1 l, `) N5 q, W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; i" h5 y& m; M% F' m3 @" R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 V% o' V, O. P<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* ~! M5 M0 w! I  y/ f) c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 a4 i8 I; I3 o% n0 U0 h( O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 O6 f0 e! G" G' ]1 \! p2 x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% J. N* w$ T" S<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- }  J# |. g) u1 x6 w  x<P>但我不会</P>
/ t: K" Z6 m8 S& s' G: s, X5 `6 L% `$ t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 q1 Q5 D) O2 v. X" D" k' P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' L& D" O( v1 v- b1 E# Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 n" w- P5 I$ a5 _  U7 U9 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 D1 ~% K" q+ T/ y4 F$ }- X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ P7 R$ e* `( k* @  z7 g0 U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 U: }9 S+ q. C# u) p& }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 d& A; D5 T0 E+ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 R; B" j+ b2 b9 t6 k5 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( h/ d, L! s. v* p2 t6 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 H4 D5 f4 H8 R5 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* I* I; m2 y% E7 R$ j% |- y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- g; B+ Q( f0 V0 A6 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, M5 p! e% d9 D  a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 x1 x4 g0 B0 _% } 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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- u$ H. i; }3 G: i& i: y% |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( m0 Z% u) E  d% m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>