【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: \% F  ?) `+ iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 N' g5 A: [, d6 f7 u2 L/ YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 W% {+ {+ r, I, jLove… just the word love
6 c* h( t/ L7 }+ M0 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& w: j9 A2 m4 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; {* u5 d" I* u5 Y  m  Q& j' |2 ZIf today isn’t too late,
- @' t' P. v. v6 w# T! ^+ j) f$ a3 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: Q1 x1 M3 H* z9 ]3 O6 e! sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; H: b! V( |* Q: MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 @% G& M0 ~: I4 S0 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
* G9 A' C- U8 Y, ?" ?6 ~- p) UI want to confess that I love you,
5 W8 E8 R* W! w6 r- h) p5 sBut I never did
$ u1 M- ]# ~- u; ?6 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ `! K1 [. q3 zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 e) G  r$ b& m, K0 w7 @* BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. W, v( s  I" n# ]; oEntrust my love within your heart
( I0 H7 b) S' u2 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) q- |: L  M' H9 ^' q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 O6 s6 v1 N* v% H% Z* a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" h! [) B$ Z7 `8 R# Q; Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 E8 M- B9 u9 Z/ w/ ^" o/ L- c" a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 F7 w& A" ~1 ?7 U' p# v. `4 s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' r0 z6 [7 K9 U# d! ^( U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 O. W1 M. o* c. I( v# {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 }$ K2 k2 \) R) n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" I8 y# m( a0 T5 k5 A% k5 V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 s9 `9 J+ i7 i9 Y6 F& h3 |  ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! U2 N6 J5 p& R: O+ M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ |8 a+ ]& E  ?1 M% k4 p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 B! K5 x: G. U& |2 t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( J% v% z" L5 x& M; I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ j; f' h5 t7 x" h! [1 a' s" x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& `: x% `3 O4 |+ X# e, \0 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  e5 Q: F4 i" o/ [* _* A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ V! `5 W8 [0 v3 k+ D4 y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
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% }# T- _- c; |& b$ y7 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- P0 I+ }1 w5 c# R; s' Q- y<P>但我不会 </P>
; h/ ^2 W, w. X, R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( C" g1 }7 W, Q; V, _( Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 e7 z0 A1 W* g% _) S1 L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 w+ _- z6 M0 L+ X. A' {  O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 A9 F, h- y# @' M5 b2 Y7 M* \* @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) @) F  A7 ]( P1 j% h2 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- M7 B8 V, b! v7 ?1 h7 I  V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  t4 u9 _. \4 ]9 {# M* r; l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 }% F0 q" g8 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 g/ V5 k* G) s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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2 O* H( Y1 B/ n* C( T5 P8 N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! ]; @! C" P5 F1 F" b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>