【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 q4 J0 h  |4 f# V我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# V9 ?* R+ `0 L* z4 @4 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 b( `- t1 ~+ E* J8 iFrom the first moment we met,
4 L$ I* B1 r% p/ S" J( ?3 s4 FI already loved you with all my heart
! ?: I' m* L- b: I; a; `: O1 r+ EWe meet and talk everyday,
7 N5 r. V* `9 U8 J9 l! P7 Z, DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) X, K6 T5 q5 x8 P" HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; S3 i6 l/ k& X2 g+ l  \: {Love… just the word love
( }' d, m/ Z  ~8 Q! Y2 Y9 a/ v) wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 Y4 i0 T5 ?7 g- \" _+ G' F; lIf today isn’t too late,
6 E' d, M/ B- `+ [# @# R3 q; w% qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" z) Z5 O3 A# U" I& }  y$ d% CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 l/ i/ D* x: b. A( O" NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 N* R- ~" N7 `+ l# m; NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' f* b2 [( g. `  g" KCan I entrust it to you?
5 h0 K0 `- O2 @) LEntrust my love within your heart
2 n. J% Z- _5 x' ]- HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! k! C: h/ L4 g1 C" R6 t. F1 e. p  `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" Q1 S" T8 u0 {1 v9 K% r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; Y2 B% B! ?/ a4 s8 `* ]$ _! g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 Y. y) C% l  H: h* ]- Y+ d* ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" q, K" v6 ?$ w4 }, C, @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) G$ r/ ^% f9 H* `8 T/ M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 w) w+ \  R4 r% \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# Y, @1 O5 A0 r' S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ H5 W' O  i+ B7 |% F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" t- i9 ~' [3 x- w) N0 ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% X5 y) _5 n, z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: m* e4 k+ U: T* U3 ]) P9 H: G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ u5 A& m0 p1 [3 L2 n$ i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 Z' u6 p8 |( U6 g, F# J: }<P>但我不会</P>
/ O7 ?" N0 q: Q3 l  {  x) B( F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: w8 O" l5 x$ U# P4 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: c- M0 F! a- Y3 R% {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& o5 T8 I' {; M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  F. u  e1 |- }% v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" Z0 ~2 Y2 {" Z+ x0 C2 H; C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 `$ Y( ?7 S! i% B- ?& l& m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ F, a0 k8 B. C& I5 p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 R) y8 a0 \3 [/ F. W  x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, N/ ~+ c3 h6 v$ O; y. y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' i8 I; j' V6 E8 @  _( B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ e( d( C$ t% I* T6 D8 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' E7 p- m% G; c. q4 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ [3 z* O! n' @/ c% ~& S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# q6 e5 m4 c: a6 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ G2 S: |8 m- d5 S/ T  c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 W2 B$ O+ N% w5 d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, ^0 p* ^, ?; j7 b: ]: {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 m7 _  c. e+ P: d. G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>