【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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$ s1 O1 D& `" `+ R8 ~$ _. P& p我另将歌词附在此。
1 O; t8 c$ B- L9 |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ t" Y+ H& F+ a; q. |9 sI already loved you with all my heart
, q3 N# p; I1 N: y* F  n4 JWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ U8 }9 K$ m8 O9 \! f  z9 \6 o! JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 V; ?; {0 l7 K$ O# {I want to confess that I love you,
) Z$ q( b% F& ^6 ~0 a* J; yBut I never did
9 I* x! v  ^' v. v6 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 I( i" S% q0 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 @: u9 I/ `& P' ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: B9 |& C2 n# G) f) j: qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; ~" v) J8 [3 {Why is it so difficult to express?
, f4 h5 a& `* r5 ^3 C8 ]% F" dI want to confess that I love you,
1 n! M( Y  y1 ^5 v4 `1 H, N4 ^But I never did
' y) z, o& U: p" z9 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% ~8 S& v/ o1 b' {) oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 y1 D0 [7 D4 ~) x8 `2 L  UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* U0 _: i# c  j8 {1 B; O: @, tEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 j" p: G; ^, `3 }  Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 [+ R6 F5 s5 ]7 E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  F8 i+ a$ f" X0 D! d/ H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 R1 G( I1 N" c4 D* E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- F2 D6 N7 q4 B2 `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' o4 ^  ~2 J. ]4 U8 |: C8 n0 Z0 c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. Z" H1 e; ]+ \: ^  m0 O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( G8 z8 G; M# y3 c4 Z: x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& i6 Z% {: c1 n0 _/ |( w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 D1 ^* r/ i; Z% ~  n7 e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ B; I  }* T' X1 a8 g' ^! e  g+ s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- j4 J% ]7 C8 _3 ]) l, ]+ s0 J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ a# b3 H) x2 o1 i1 L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: ?; L, y! ?  z* D+ }& ?" C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# t+ B6 l" ~9 y2 u8 `8 p, g: x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 g  v' Z: S( O1 P2 I4 v<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: x: {. \6 L& g/ T% K6 k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& @4 B: x2 O  C; v7 {0 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' B  w$ ?2 k0 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 u) _* T3 I) O1 l" v1 G8 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- t0 M! G7 c0 c+ Q$ @+ o' S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 }9 E0 B5 N% K" m, N8 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ f7 U4 d$ Q9 k# |: m6 c3 o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' F+ h' |3 H- h! W: c* F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" M* e: Q! L8 V1 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( T! m' ]$ Z3 ]( o+ P4 M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- |; T# Z, a2 V9 n$ ~* D0 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. I. F5 l1 P2 i2 C+ X# }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( b. D; h4 D; z4 @0 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 x" w! W; c3 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% ~: x. F# y& G7 J$ |9 x( ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) a" [* {# t4 I, g. F. o" b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" |' |, C$ U+ C* n# J: [7 s% @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( s0 t& N; \3 ^0 A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% n& y0 j( V6 ~1 Y" B- N+ e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>