【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) A1 _' i3 g4 ^6 O$ m我另将歌词附在此。
* M' R) {) Z/ a6 U8 nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; ^6 g+ F  p6 |( g; h, [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ _- v, b$ Y7 X- |0 S; ^$ W- mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% G, C$ R$ Q% y2 K/ j0 Q7 FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! w% ~7 u5 T2 c+ N' b$ r# `. SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) F& k; w$ S; W! V: u8 v% uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. \) u4 A+ m7 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 C, }" v, a# jLove… just the word love
: y6 a+ u; x# {Why is it so difficult to express?
+ P% C8 A" a) _. i* NI want to confess that I love you,
1 @  X! F$ C# _But I never did
1 l2 I( \* c4 H* U) pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 B* v9 e! o) B& M4 o& T0 ^# HIf today isn’t too late,
! l, I! u- F) f- c: z* S! b3 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

$ e% k3 x3 I" }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& u) V" p8 v8 k* m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) B' ]# L. v/ w7 n, j4 \6 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& y% k) y6 z6 I% v- F4 s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- R6 r5 q- J. j% L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) n3 _  A  N; r; }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 l+ `& A) H# g* m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 Y# R% d- V5 W. Z8 k1 E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; S$ l! @/ S7 A: a) Z: C) c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; Y$ g' Q# F. @$ B1 W<P>但我不会</P>
$ K% M, g1 w% i/ e# `; W4 r6 r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! B% H' ]9 p$ Q4 Z/ p5 O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# Q7 r* e: @8 V: _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ C2 z, d* Z/ ^, b. T: _; D5 L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 y. `  b- T; \4 E; b, ]5 C9 I2 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' j( [- _4 e* ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 f' o9 Q) B5 M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; H* V# H6 h5 I/ @* {) Q1 r/ a2 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 S3 w- H1 V: C' J* u& t& z) V4 v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& \) C% J" L( i/ O/ M6 A# j<P>But I never did </P>
5 D5 @% ^- e) ~- h8 Y' }1 t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 M" X3 t7 P% b& t3 J* j% O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) X# H, e& r* M0 e% }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- X% C, U3 Q$ d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ ~) Q' ~5 Q& X- q% s' J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 v' f* B% I, V0 [+ s  l* x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ B+ a. `$ D8 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% [+ X, d# |; T; x* `1 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" ?- c# t/ t6 ~8 j% }  o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" L" f# B) ?/ x, n& z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 u# ~9 i- x8 [# B8 [5 K. e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 w1 e: u8 i# X7 o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ l% V) ?; U3 }/ z/ q- T% F) n. h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>