【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ h; M" W7 S& r& d0 d8 K我另将歌词附在此。
" G2 }. o. h& [" \1 p, XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- D; z/ v6 ]3 @& v1 x9 G" B. Y- t" qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ H' T( Y. @4 }  K7 OFrom the first moment we met,
1 B  u2 d8 G$ J5 E# Z2 ?) J/ qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* i1 U4 w/ |6 H- `) J8 R: yI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ `' X) \8 ]9 b; G8 ]Why is it so difficult to express?
/ S4 ?/ K9 T$ ?. u" d  xI want to confess that I love you,
) o8 }# @( j( K8 j" ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* P# @5 I0 a( t9 R+ U& H: yIf today isn’t too late,
6 Y, N" w+ P% oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" K( J! r2 M7 d. e% ]# XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% F5 b; I4 m% u+ O4 a3 H4 A; u( MCan I entrust it to you?
5 C, h. Z. E& g8 m) @6 Q8 f2 IEntrust my love within your heart
9 \8 V# b7 D; C5 ]4 ]9 [5 H2 ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 n! Y; Z  R$ b0 QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 t% S/ r! H8 b, rIf today isn’t too late,
; `% H' m1 o% _$ F$ v; _1 }: xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 b. w) A* Z7 C5 L% O: MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" I) T( C/ ^4 V+ q" k' P- h6 S6 `Can I entrust it to you?
2 Y& V. ?& |, U+ y; q8 j! yEntrust my love within your heart
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; K+ ]% H; P5 v8 f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ W: B, j* V% X' g6 a+ r/ Q. i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ k; t+ k" a& ~0 H4 T, J( x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, J- }, S$ T$ B% [2 H" L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 G, }6 p3 L: w9 k6 t! r5 _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( a" y* X/ d. v3 t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" S5 ^4 K0 O; m3 x2 n. |! I<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 @) q  W( ]4 o8 I& l) e3 k" X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, F2 q: q4 T* g, U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: M2 M/ n! m; l) k( H9 v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! z, t+ s! ~, q7 F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 S. ^6 A' g/ B5 B- j$ t( x/ h3 r( w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! g& N  A. Q1 `) x# T! P8 W5 j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 F& l* {  M4 w( M* C( e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 o6 }3 G. f4 m" C& \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& k0 T, y, }( o- u9 p7 w$ D1 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( V# E' S& m7 Z6 ~- n; M- b& F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" x5 w  T+ h9 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: J4 X1 |, P% L4 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& S+ o! e" l  }2 F: ~+ V5 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% Q# r: N( M0 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, L* E8 q& Z! w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" B6 L& D" ?& `" l: w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 a9 [$ o: W# `9 z  h: N& B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ h+ J/ a7 p6 W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, h( v* d* u" G9 }0 u1 Z8 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 m" t" p. G5 c5 p) `$ l2 j! n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 j' M- c+ _3 K) o& D3 v2 A" ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) i" X! s- s% C1 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 d2 H7 @2 K) b- i( e0 V8 y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: E, `8 Y9 t, m$ ?$ V) e% {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: L9 h7 t9 ^4 w: J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' G1 w' n) L6 V$ r/ G/ V& r; c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>