【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
; T# G1 F9 m; YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 O. r% [3 c# U+ q- p& IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- `4 _* @# J/ z; t( kI already loved you with all my heart
, L1 ~- ~' n+ u! kWe meet and talk everyday,
$ D$ d/ R; y7 d- c5 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  l  m+ ~& d" C- fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# U4 k9 B: k( {" ~0 p) RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ B+ v5 f4 I  X- U5 m" Y, uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* E. D+ A2 I$ ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- V; @1 W8 F* O' ]7 Z# `) b* c, ?Entrust my love within your heart
6 |* f5 `2 G6 _2 ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( j2 F0 `  X% z2 iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ G9 N" y$ w2 B5 Z* lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 s2 r0 e( p, Z' d) |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 S2 J) }/ f9 t4 T* e4 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 X6 N( X+ E4 p4 r5 n7 YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" x/ P9 V6 K- P& s: P2 H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' e! j+ k$ S9 |2 y6 m/ M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& u& b# y0 N, a- ~9 {6 m, j9 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, ?; s5 N- s. j7 n7 u8 h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 T! z& Z5 C) D8 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* K# }( Q" N+ M5 B6 x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" F' T! N7 ?! `3 B5 n9 ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 @8 K7 m/ K" Z$ B1 K- e+ \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 y7 f/ p% i! A  y0 p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% G& U1 p/ P" ~1 K' M6 M1 ]1 q: [" \6 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 m& P, w( _, V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 q. A) d- f* L8 U, l% q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 f  j5 m3 q2 R# [; n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 |' w0 I4 [, t, \$ q& b: T0 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) A9 W- C/ i4 r- x" l- F+ {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ o4 H6 V1 K+ `0 A$ Y! L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  v: G$ Z5 d, _+ c- d% |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  o  Z5 @  e4 l2 r1 \+ i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. |8 N" s$ m/ e# D3 h5 ]5 O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ _& p: F2 t6 V7 q3 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( d  u) P; V+ g$ O$ {0 m, ]5 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; U: l( N* T  k& c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% r; Z+ \" m- m; ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  L8 j# B+ q" Z6 G5 E  ]) a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& l  T% i( j- F  t8 T( I5 O6 E, Y3 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ ]& j0 c6 g' G# K3 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 R9 u1 Y" U( y% w% C' y+ ]  X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# ?! W% z- T  t8 z' U/ M6 Y' i# c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- W8 m' _7 Z* O9 F6 k9 Q: Z2 J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' N: B3 T, R5 A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 B# j" q$ T, c" P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>