【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! C+ @* p' i' \  A4 n( X我另将歌词附在此。
# I6 D) Z: K5 Y5 \5 z+ @: uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ Z( {( `2 n; j& I9 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ m1 v% `$ `2 K1 y4 w. oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 ?8 R0 E5 W1 u! `7 A3 j, @. e+ BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 q; r. X, [) N# yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ E4 D2 M) V6 ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ a+ a+ z3 o/ X- B  vIf today isn’t too late,
8 y" g9 J$ Q9 o1 x# E* ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 `4 {# i. S; ~2 ~Can I entrust it to you?
4 K/ L- v" k" o% ~0 F6 XEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- a+ t9 N" s( Z7 @+ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ J" p9 S6 ?! S. q2 \8 zBut I never did
! u, ~: a6 P" n" T7 i8 B$ Y( UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' E' a3 X2 H) y7 w! x! ?1 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

. M3 {: ?: {1 A+ T/ Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, z. |7 c" j( p8 Q( j- V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- K1 Z  b- o8 a# R' r" J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; K4 w( }1 Y9 r9 d! A% i2 M8 M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 s/ r! q! b$ o$ w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 `) m4 P* q  x, w+ z4 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ O: }" Z- ?- b( i8 J: F; {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. J% e, L; a& ~8 z" v" i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 S7 R; N/ B* }0 Y! Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 z# G+ y2 |& ^$ j% h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ k" K$ F# [. N1 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* |' n& N2 h1 }+ T2 ?* n. b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, l5 P7 H% S( Z5 L# M% w1 Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! v& ~2 k' Y, F5 ~/ Z$ n# D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' I  k* x4 M8 g) Z, K+ u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: z! N3 {# c1 z# C. ]) g& R# h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  q; B# [- I, T5 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! P& M5 L  [2 i* `# E# L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' N- J; X8 s1 m+ r( {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 W2 j/ t$ g/ `- l4 }4 z* a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 `8 e& x  H0 S2 v8 K7 t4 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 G' ?9 u) K. C* L; L# ^$ M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& T$ S, f9 t+ L1 ?: [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* h3 n. D5 t" ~$ N4 N4 x6 |: I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, P3 a- M' b7 M* w( Z* h5 Z' A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ e: [' m0 K% G# B* n+ Q: y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( a; D$ U4 Q; M% c$ |# E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ _7 E/ l. [0 M. U" X3 b2 ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! M# `% M* t8 f! [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- y: x& m7 N; Y4 q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- G6 U) t/ b* p; O0 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# q9 I1 }  u" S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% [! p& f* X( r1 P( Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 ~! y' B2 ~( ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  X9 z7 J/ K; @8 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 [7 Y/ M* l' }" C2 i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, Z; a$ F; o9 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>