【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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+ m4 I, {5 N& K! P' t: A我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 I. L/ x" ^$ R$ |+ dThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ @) |. \: @: }I already loved you with all my heart
2 g$ O& K. v$ aWe meet and talk everyday,
4 M, ~3 V% B; c# g2 V$ hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 u& ]% R. e. j+ q0 m- xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 x, g# s' b- K" o  M$ }* q% \% \I want to confess that I love you,
" R0 b3 t! W' B" ?, c1 L0 UBut I never did
( V9 t: S6 Y/ P' w8 F/ N3 \% S( xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 f" y" Z& H( ]& d) r' rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 M* c7 G+ V3 F9 ~: fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 K# |( y! z& G, ~Can I entrust it to you?
# }& M: n" ^8 tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" V; W; I' [4 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, V- U7 c0 S- z' fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( j3 e. k( E# l9 |! fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; H- S0 W: e6 X, F* @2 G- sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* u0 K6 G/ R4 J7 b& `" x6 j  @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

# S! l0 L6 ?2 m/ b" l) n* u7 ?( i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# d. D4 R' C. \2 A' {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ T% `" F' u, Z) K# Z, z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 G9 f. j/ Z; p* g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! \  J: Z0 ~& I# J0 M& x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: X: E3 e0 d4 w$ x/ j5 R$ t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. S) [  j, D9 A& f6 u; [: z6 f- v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 a1 A. J( ^5 z6 R5 c  }4 Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& {7 f6 j% e( Z; F1 E/ R- |7 T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ E* O+ D4 |' X7 d  G% v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 x$ W: `, c$ G. @3 |1 @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  {5 h$ ^/ v. G/ G- D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 C: ~  ?6 L) p2 L  y$ Y0 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: b& f/ l* F) U- l! N" }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 l1 k$ F* y2 \5 c/ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 u$ T" R# R, }6 p  _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  t0 G7 ]2 Y7 j) Z2 P  E0 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* o7 W7 I3 o2 ^" _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ B. D) l- T1 Q" T5 o5 y* d& ]+ E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' U8 m  }. u3 A1 q0 J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 G- M* Y( W% e<P>但我不会 </P>
" H) J5 ?) K+ J( Y4 Y2 j# Y# m: P! C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  f; ~3 [! K6 s8 W: r3 o9 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 G' q: \+ C2 a6 h" J* G, U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ l  ]3 R6 q( J, o" `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 S4 T: J6 a9 r$ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 @( Q+ F. }/ X; {& O% Z  u% u! ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  j; T: b) J0 G. s" Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) `) O5 r9 u$ C4 `0 {8 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% N/ @2 d7 K3 W/ P* t. c; w8 H3 K3 N0 V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>