【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# I; L, j, ^3 e3 j# d$ ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 d+ B) Z& u+ g$ gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  O0 J' E& ~! @( a7 NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* y2 j; z( |5 c1 Y- |$ LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 [  H. f% p( Q+ A+ C2 F2 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* D* v5 }9 F4 ^- T7 X9 ?3 MCan I entrust it to you?
1 n, T% U3 m" R& W; `' G8 Z8 IEntrust my love within your heart
" ]4 m% v9 R' u8 w% DLove… just the word love
/ ]0 v! J8 ^2 U% B% D3 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
% o( R( O* q; g$ {6 V$ A% K: ]' mI want to confess that I love you,
) T3 Y1 h. m* bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" G7 ?0 h" K- d" ]3 T9 wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  C! D, B0 v7 M3 V. G7 ~0 R7 ~/ JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. L7 }3 q3 I  Y' A% ^5 ]0 hCan I entrust it to you?
- F- y+ p- O) fEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# ]/ {# ?" i! G+ [4 M0 ^. t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 \: L0 D5 S" n6 C, P# X" r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  o0 N+ x+ T' F) `, X. y8 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 Z( D, M7 [7 e, q6 V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" x; E- X% ]9 o- m1 I, W* D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 A5 N0 Z' l8 n) H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, [% |* t  ?9 v; s1 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 Z1 _: h" ^5 [7 ^* y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ c4 u4 {, I4 U4 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 {4 b: p# t5 l3 M8 R$ d( `! B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: p1 w7 \1 [1 r3 V% _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 {; \! A: D9 a2 [+ G, S6 M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 _; ?- y; q* x- a$ {<P>但我不会</P>
( W" `) E8 ~+ x& |, I- N. l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, b7 o  h2 b0 R' G* v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 \9 `9 B& H  s) @; J& c3 z8 X9 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" j: H% k& Y7 h" {$ ]: L) K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, x+ s2 i( y6 q' z  [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: Y; V# D+ n/ N, X+ j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- b$ h& U& }( F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 `% K" i; K4 [6 b<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ T; C' {" u# [9 t7 ^  R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 N2 b: h7 N8 v0 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* I* L) v' G; N+ ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& W0 d; i# g/ B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 _  A# u% q! U) l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( T# O3 M% Y3 U3 J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ C, A" j: a2 s; n; ~$ U1 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>