【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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7 W1 e9 G" ^) |- u' J& x我另将歌词附在此。
, K4 [: Q  H; Z/ \+ dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, Q) Y  |' P8 ~" CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 z, ?' q/ e3 y: xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& w6 {$ D# l8 n9 B/ |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( G2 r. D' O; L  XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ h) J* |* ]& c) tIf today isn’t too late,
0 A4 k+ B5 Q* a. w0 q! g% z8 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 w/ B4 U& |8 s6 w. c0 _$ u- bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# R& w  w6 p( i( J: `, VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 `' r- a6 f+ g6 m2 E2 u7 z  cLove… just the word love
' Q2 f" G, u# U0 J0 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ |# v; N) L+ S& K; {I want to confess that I love you,
8 y8 c" I" M) p; l! ~; G, YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 b. V4 Y5 {& g: mIf today isn’t too late,
0 t$ g# d5 r" p! [2 K& G* c' G8 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 \" k* j# F5 k7 q  A5 ~, ]Can I entrust it to you?
4 S4 ?! z6 w% ^9 UEntrust my love within your heart
, N8 |7 o# Y8 F- C! R7 rCan I entrust it to you?
8 G8 Y/ K$ @9 Y4 N/ F8 X. UEntrust my love within your heart
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4 E4 h# h$ d# P0 ^- h[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ k: m. k$ J3 R4 \5 T3 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' L5 R$ g/ M( l) q1 z2 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! {7 B* y$ ~+ k9 y- |+ \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: _; w0 n! Y# w- B) P! b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ y" ~( [7 w9 J4 j! t& S+ z' j6 i+ h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 G: Z  z6 o) O* t% d* m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; Y4 B. e- K; x+ B# Y) Y% p+ z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' a% i) W+ x; ?' S; }" c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! v% F6 _8 y" }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" Z$ I$ ~$ F/ j. O. p% }5 i+ [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- m9 K9 d% f, H6 j, o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; {! t% x5 |0 y: k- D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 ]. T+ ^! c( F& N* N<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 }6 }% J, G4 Z( K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  r/ N: e" j1 l1 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) V; ?5 b  X" K, s) h- m: G9 j- w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 n5 o9 L4 S7 O: o* N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 n% W$ v% d  E$ d1 U- {4 u" K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 a0 x) S8 b" V9 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( X. a  u9 V( E3 D) B% d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ V7 V" B! N( J6 Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 y- i/ q% h; \5 ?- I<P>But I never did </P>
3 q9 T6 Y" {, d5 r/ W8 W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ I5 @1 t( Y: Y& C7 _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" c2 K, N( E4 |0 U! |4 I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 j3 q8 f0 G/ J+ c0 J; \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  ?. B3 K5 e7 @/ o# V5 q  u2 Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 ?7 W- \- E4 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; i! u. [: @2 }  e2 r% x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  g# T. c; k9 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  E3 D: A# p: d! V; m# x3 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" w) W! h: M, Z6 X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ G. P* J  E2 J) j: i这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 S# ?  e9 g  |5 a3 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>