【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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, r" T8 B+ E) Q* t! H1 p  R! F% J我另将歌词附在此。
6 `' d8 d! D/ U# FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ `3 ~0 H0 e8 f' ~4 ^From the first moment we met,
6 c5 F+ [3 |  |4 ~& R$ G1 bI already loved you with all my heart
, q. ~; T. d! X" i* a# B. oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' m) y8 l9 T" S9 J5 `  U! C1 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 }0 X! T5 i/ S# \. o7 Y/ iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ d  W5 G( e5 G" q# K; lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 M9 A: b% w- |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 {4 Z% F, j4 E; q2 @. b- k4 \& [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* }$ M. w3 m: D. P" c( Q6 v* YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 g9 F/ }- Z. ]3 a3 O8 }7 ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( u4 v. o7 A" {1 XCan I entrust it to you?
/ {: M/ a6 m* A+ NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, u  b+ [' y( |8 uEntrust my love within your heart

( R6 C/ i; ]+ G& r8 ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( @, R$ \2 j5 {6 I4 C/ M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" i2 O1 ~0 S; n: G: S3 A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! o6 e: U  D( C" U; S; l( q+ F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) Q8 Z) h3 q5 v! f4 X9 @5 x, O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 o. s5 F1 C+ b2 n# a9 K8 E; N: x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& w0 n8 W" m! Y. G8 b0 h: g8 ~$ l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) t5 ~: P4 k# J, ]+ _7 v) V( {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 H, g* o* H& c8 o$ n! O, a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 a1 x1 I0 E1 ?. w$ Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# S4 V  U$ z( f( Y8 k4 L- i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 p- c% q5 E: z  g6 ~4 ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ G/ m; F6 `! q9 ]7 B  L$ c8 G" G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 s; a% {6 S* ]; x& T( z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ j( Y+ h. A1 S( z5 a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' i3 h) P$ _/ G0 a; Y6 C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 O. P- L9 V' {* _& f$ J* T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- o1 f( F  {- g7 j8 z7 T  k0 Y/ F5 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& e' A. k  Z1 ^, i" k; M/ V' Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  m( _  b) D8 w# `3 b2 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, Q% `9 V' R# X% Y. Y* J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 Q4 O; Q) K5 V! `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 |" P& w% V4 e2 h; k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# _4 ]% Z! X2 `' Y; Z0 L$ i5 z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 @4 _3 G" F4 H" ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 R( H2 d0 s3 D; o: `! f3 h/ `& [1 ~% H<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! H- O! _. |" z8 T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% S* E' X$ h3 v7 k2 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ |8 q7 O2 G1 b6 _7 m, Z1 j& t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- x$ _3 W+ ^, F1 V9 D! {8 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 z. Y! s, K3 X  {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ `4 d: G0 c; ]# \- l0 Y) p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>