【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; I* t7 N, j' L" \. Q% bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 Z* P$ p  {% p3 |9 s$ IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, P; y2 u- R0 h) B. }We meet and talk everyday,
' }/ w+ C  F/ w+ `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! ^1 H9 l8 _* Y0 Y* }4 u$ eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 b" z, K0 g2 o+ B' sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 y7 G/ a* {2 e  yIf today isn’t too late,
4 s) X# V2 a- ^. t/ m% G, zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' W7 {4 @* l  b+ c1 ^+ {& ?* wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# M" t! a" f+ [  u) O, B  R& uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, A7 y7 V2 W) B: eBut I never did
- W! U4 p, N6 H5 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" z4 |( p8 n' i9 {8 x" KIf today isn’t too late,
. U( U% x2 N, D. d4 P. }& I" c  u/ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' q$ x7 f* A( }* ~# eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ c5 m, H% R& a2 Z- r) QEntrust my love within your heart

0 L; b$ f& d/ l3 o6 L: ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, F+ c$ e- ]2 u/ E; k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 N- ?& ]& E% l9 H# B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 u+ E! p/ a: K0 Z& i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 Q  V% b  }9 T: R/ v" t: i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- n; d3 J* k; v* ?0 Z& C& h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ Z: f+ h6 d2 ?' i! _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 d; F3 E6 e% O7 ~0 y3 `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) R) S2 J6 R* B$ d9 H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! {& k1 l; f" y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# z$ ]2 o- b$ u4 r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, W* J: N2 w9 {0 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 O7 A% L* p- i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! ^- e9 l" n8 {2 s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! n( a% B' D( S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# \" }! V8 ]% h! s$ f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) v+ u, a( f6 t( d; p# E, [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ ]: L3 `+ l$ [, k- }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 c+ b, e" t: n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- J8 s+ ]' f1 `$ ~- b% d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: A' B7 t4 W( v2 _: `* d; h' h( n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 v& g8 E4 f5 @& i' G# Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 n% W- _( A2 b1 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 e3 [0 N' V9 i* ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, H5 P; J5 x1 r8 e2 O<P>但我不会 </P>
# D( F/ |2 j/ W; Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 X% U) h$ ?9 y) c5 A/ L3 H/ A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 _' s& \2 J* O/ B  ~6 R' I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ g. ]2 j! D9 F9 B. M- L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; c% g; s" p0 n: u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 h: s- V7 H0 `( {+ P) a) T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ X  i+ j9 v( j: J/ V: b/ f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' a; |+ R* R; G  d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ B- i8 Y8 i$ S/ v$ o  t5 D9 ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" r8 ~9 I! M6 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>