【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- e' r* V0 u, c$ r我另将歌词附在此。
( X, j3 i9 g! ^' H* aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# \5 w$ @0 E; BFrom the first moment we met,
- v2 E! b+ K& b! d  x- `$ x5 DI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 C: v; d; q, I9 `. RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" i$ g1 _) E" lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 N( `2 p+ ~/ a( p) M) Y+ DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 X1 ?. ]' Z* I5 W! iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 f; ?6 I9 I9 P, tLove… just the word love
+ H7 p6 U; d+ lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. t  c7 d% O& J0 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 @7 c3 B, V7 h7 x. sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% t9 B/ t) K0 S- AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 t6 d( w3 _' S+ G( P7 W8 K1 B) jCan I entrust it to you?
& A6 o8 a0 w$ @2 j; Q( S4 WEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 u& [0 O+ f2 Z; V. U, B. ]; }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. q  ]# E+ S- S; E) I$ t* I+ |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 ~, x2 \+ `" p8 ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ s3 B3 \! g$ E$ Q, Q' N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 {8 g  ^! ], m, ?( w& S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( P& x6 Q) Y! ]& ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; ^9 ~4 K( C* S1 e: }1 [8 F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 I" Y! }1 w0 r: x- K" Y9 ?" e: |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. O/ A& K1 \& w# ], Q$ B+ [6 k9 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- {+ y8 @0 ~( T8 |* x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 z8 q3 ^# J1 }. c/ [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* l. d# W- \( H# N8 B5 X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; ?' i0 }+ K$ P- j! }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, r4 n3 r- L  V& E- l& g+ `4 O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( |3 c+ v( W! r9 d$ z, U! P; o<P>但我不会</P>
$ {  w, y1 b% J3 P( ~; I; j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 C7 q& D) }1 E+ `* B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 r. H3 R0 b9 h2 }4 W, x% g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- ]. c' W2 u: e9 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. S4 J; u; N. f2 {8 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 O* }9 h+ W) n; X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ F, L! J: i$ }, G4 k0 a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 X7 F# d: @% Y* O  B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 V2 k; o/ L. x. a4 q3 N; Q6 E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. z* L1 v, M" v# e5 u$ y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! ~7 |9 ~* P% S. J' s! c- n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ H5 u4 M) b9 h4 F3 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 D' H+ H9 N; s  f) H$ Z2 I- A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 m% A$ r% n. H# Y& n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 @. M9 J& M# N' ]' z4 O* |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 s2 g& q) W5 @6 Y' w- @* F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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( G& J' M* O# G3 t% _2 C& _6 r7 _3 n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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