【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; G! Q5 V. q  a4 u4 b% f7 v我另将歌词附在此。
$ e0 o. e! k( p" [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* l% Z+ u, _7 S8 c  E' E4 \" AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  c2 c% d' ?% X% YFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! m0 M$ K8 y' D$ D* _8 W( S+ @& i2 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 c0 q& x$ d, o6 A/ C3 ]: _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' G. Q$ k# v" [9 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" C- i  p# H2 v) o0 D* p9 J4 KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 B9 T$ a! p; u& xEntrust my love within your heart
0 c4 g" s9 ]$ L3 u( R$ y! w% [$ iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 Y+ f( D+ l, i5 W3 F0 h: i% K: Z/ E+ OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 l& S; F0 f, s! L2 [If today isn’t too late,
* ^# s& U% i: r" oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( d3 |# B9 i' ]! V4 R' Y0 XCan I entrust it to you?
1 K, _2 g0 y5 y: bEntrust my love within your heart
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% ~0 q7 A0 R7 g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; |) p3 c' H1 ^. I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 l: E  }+ v' M* N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& e- F8 F; D' q6 M  d; m4 L7 W- Y" S: q) j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 j! M0 ^$ Y7 f: g9 g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 T8 T4 _3 ~5 ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* r: M3 f/ M) ?- m! t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: l% ~& s4 d: S0 Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* G0 F0 v  m( a* m1 S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& V. w8 r# i5 `2 Z; {1 f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ o: x" ~5 h7 @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) n  t" c' R/ W$ b% F8 g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' N; R, p, f& q2 W6 Q" u2 I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 ?% ^9 u8 e6 H" P4 T3 K. c% b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 ~* @& u  }5 {; c% a8 l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ U$ J) @9 t6 R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 V& i, p8 p  _  ^# `0 c9 L) _; R4 j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" |8 C$ Q0 T: L! a$ L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 K( _+ R1 `7 ]4 i8 a" A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ j4 n( a# g! y3 m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( j8 U$ u8 z9 T5 j. D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( ^# n" S. N5 J" {& \% {( @; {& Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* I, z6 f7 H) l  q( {$ X1 _- Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ d( O4 p( i2 ^( R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 p4 I, h7 s( f0 f- t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! N# T9 E) q* O( t( r- Q) D+ _0 U$ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: w% f9 g4 o  z# X7 V; c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 D" t2 P+ M8 z/ F# V. T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 r& ~6 a& Y1 b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 B6 W# C+ O( ]' M5 r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 }; t; S- _  j. j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; R; ~; @1 a: e+ d, \0 E+ Q<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* d3 \* S2 d$ Q' S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 c2 C# \6 }+ }' B, W% U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 M5 k; ?$ G! o+ T: g; o8 Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" a4 Y0 [) N/ J/ d5 K! s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' c5 }' S) c- k9 o9 S2 L* c6 _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ k( F  u  G9 {) A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 u: \9 D, Z0 r% O& b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>