【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
8 N3 i/ u* H2 D/ NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. R& i! b( _- d4 \: ]/ MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 S7 s7 d& a9 t) cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% ]5 Z% R( Q+ P* WI would probably know how you feel
7 x2 {1 |' W; j% S% o* A, @! vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! A' L1 G* Y5 q+ F  [0 ~5 TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ p* _+ z7 p8 {6 I  u- V) m( nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ Q+ {% C) \; ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 I# |1 L+ r$ Z. f! a. h6 J: X: JBut I never did
1 k9 k- t; H0 i% T6 r6 V; YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 v& h2 k& V+ W0 b' LIf today isn’t too late,
9 H2 ~) U8 U% D! NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  T# u! [' W/ p1 N1 G% CCan I entrust it to you?
4 W$ u3 [# A) N+ U" [+ Z4 g! sEntrust my love within your heart
4 f9 E  w8 H4 d; zCan I entrust it to you?
6 s# W  Y6 X# [+ I, V. R5 uEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 x9 V7 W- C! j2 n( D. ?% j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" c+ X% ?% z+ E0 I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ \3 _7 Q  {. y0 m+ I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 k7 Q4 G9 X' U* U4 \/ u- }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 O/ }( p) V  e9 W+ h# W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  x3 @7 B- G# U5 ~& o2 |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 V- c1 O' X: t& O# v& X9 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: c& e, D+ W/ P& t3 B1 G+ s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 C! @4 B- q) p4 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ m" K5 K  d, s5 V" |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ G$ ?" U% v7 v, S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 ~8 B0 D6 D0 V( @7 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) \0 }5 J9 K- |* W9 T<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' m3 g/ S- T" s+ R9 v  _: L# ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 G: J9 r( \' ]2 Z  p8 j& W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. x: N  d3 y  f/ P1 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ `! f. _" m" C5 B# M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 }6 i0 K/ P3 e: o( i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 u( i2 O4 H/ R: u. L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! Z9 @8 l) W4 z. A6 g3 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 H0 o$ h2 G: ]7 o- ]& k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# p( C' O7 ?! P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ _2 |* O' {- l+ L& ?( Q3 y- T% B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" [: }7 z% `8 B4 p5 e/ p4 I<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, M5 Y  p# m) p. B& S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! S* H" M5 q7 U4 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, V( Q5 S* @$ k5 a+ T4 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. N4 t" S: ]% g2 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( E6 V5 X1 }9 ~3 T9 L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 o2 y# p4 b8 g" b+ i* _7 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Y! v: B" V. w. a: t1 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% _6 ~7 H  \! B3 e, p, H* p! r4 Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>