【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; Y# O. w7 q0 [) H: N: u8 Q1 y$ tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" d$ @" E2 x" C: V0 U& r# V6 a  O& rWe meet and talk everyday,
! w! ]% Z# z# |" ^2 }0 H+ c7 f  fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: s( C3 g: `/ c# ~- |1 u) QI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! H9 r1 u* ?5 sI want to confess that I love you,
* X+ o1 R. n. Y+ {But I never did
2 ^" A  Q; [" o2 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 t/ @* O8 W' A$ KCan I entrust it to you?
/ P' V# E4 V7 x' b  m% Z  L) O2 u. b9 lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( d5 g1 Q( C, {) ]; i' c4 f  oI want to confess that I love you,
" ]3 w) ]0 \/ r" y8 {But I never did
/ G, @' f% q3 N2 E4 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 A' h0 \5 F1 ~& i# n; qIf today isn’t too late,
9 X9 ^+ _! \0 H# L9 p/ |) v0 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ u$ F- Q5 X$ k  n+ pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: Q# S  d$ g& L6 T# J* }% nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( r% i- T  c9 y' D  c) U' m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 G0 s: I6 n6 Z3 H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  ?* q. S' I! z6 G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- M: y5 L) b: I- M6 ]% |+ ^8 B7 @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 ]) K8 M% Z. w3 I<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- i+ G' X+ z; D<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) t: v* q6 `* g& u* O$ {. m: P+ j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# N. L7 J, V5 I/ q' u0 ]/ \$ @* V( X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" t  _' C7 ]4 N: j2 ^  h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  A* n( |9 `5 V9 Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# A+ N8 h+ k' \: \# ]: d* A' V<P>但我不会</P>
; d* ?" a/ [% S2 F! \# @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 O# w2 e5 w: z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- B+ j/ f$ d! {7 e5 _* ~+ G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ H0 x  S% e# l2 z% J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( S; Q) m& _5 a' u2 Z% V6 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 b' s/ ?$ C5 [- ]% x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: X# c) n& C! J% ~" j4 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# ?& X7 F: @4 o$ S$ H4 }* e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 C% L/ b; {- A, I! Y9 z- e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 w& b7 g0 C3 B" B0 u6 ~' `! d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' D) T* J2 l' U3 F5 ^- u; ]; g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 `% H  `& t0 `6 j7 f! v% q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; A- i% I% z" _/ q6 s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) i" }+ s/ D4 ^3 l0 y& O/ h<P>但我不会 </P>
2 c+ \; ?, n4 d) H* @3 q, Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. r3 O) S, _3 R$ x) h" n' D$ J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 x9 n* Z# R5 k) v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. o( c" Z( E7 {. H2 a" I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" x& m$ U2 ^! F$ c/ v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ V0 K$ x3 b5 m6 e! R" F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 r6 H& ~9 R& d1 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 |5 w0 F3 k1 T- d8 m! s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 x. S6 t$ O2 [2 D/ K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! _! G8 t( {; M: U7 Z% E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>