【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
) \1 B* w" h1 A. bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 z, s  ?+ q" Y" C, wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# _! z$ ~7 {! j/ S' R$ k9 O- ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ j: e# ]4 x% j  x4 E/ M* ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 i. l: r6 Z, [; ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# s) B- ?& o7 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ t/ x- g3 |0 L/ W0 E! b( QEntrust my love within your heart
8 C- r0 P+ z9 A1 g+ U0 cLove… just the word love
5 f  c) S# ~, e% p4 n' X/ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; Z% R/ w8 N. Y( ~2 f6 x0 SBut I never did
! K; G& `* v9 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. q0 Y' n3 g5 u  Q7 N  QIf today isn’t too late,
4 ~# U# t; Z/ G% n5 D$ O3 \% \! OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ L3 r& X2 J6 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( h3 J" r: ~$ {9 }. @% p0 u: kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ o0 G9 w# \2 v+ x( k3 B( A) @& o
4 l. _/ E: d$ t+ @4 [3 _5 x6 G, Z" j( w3 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, Q3 b: ~/ U4 i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 p( S! x0 g2 v3 h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 Y# y) I, @- _1 e2 v; v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( I6 P6 Z6 A6 q$ f3 }  q8 b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 u# g2 K; W- W! m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 I% u2 A: j- b$ @' y. F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' f, I- D: _' ]+ b* d, D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 ]. k( _; C! k7 d" Z( Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. o4 J8 v, C5 ~# s3 ~/ Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' t5 Z& P# i+ \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 d! S* h" }9 K8 d4 O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 C8 j8 [' m/ [( i; a* e0 e( v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 Y/ i) q9 [2 m2 Y3 d5 y( E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 g: ], y4 Z, C- E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 O+ R) O' w& t6 W7 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 Q( o  L, t5 |3 \3 Q9 ]5 K! Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" z9 i2 c$ b' g/ v; P# D+ O7 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# y: `" u8 ]/ y: N! j4 j; U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; u  w: F" s, y3 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 @5 L$ N# ~# H* g+ L0 r  v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. k/ `2 A9 w4 E5 S* ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 v5 I$ e4 M3 J5 G* s; q<P>但我不会 </P>
8 |4 Q( n  d) E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' ?0 r! E2 P" k! L" o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& F5 p4 Q9 }2 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 ]3 m; l, m0 S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" m; C* R3 R" ?$ \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 i* C, u6 c/ M5 _1 N8 }& O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 O0 y) ~+ v2 ?# F! E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. r0 F: i5 y& d: Q% H+ B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& s: s5 D( F+ g+ t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% L& W4 p' Y6 ]" U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# U; n3 x0 T% k1 ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>