【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 w8 c+ s) U. T. a! UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 D) p* h0 d+ N) C$ T( P2 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
8 g5 A9 B( P% B" CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% j/ n, L, e1 X+ }- xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: i9 G& S) s8 a2 I3 x3 F2 b* fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ ]1 S  U, p8 g+ j- SIf today isn’t too late,
5 E7 B- O; j. d, O- `6 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ n4 E# Q3 G! H0 o( z; g2 RCan I entrust it to you?
: F7 T5 N7 u" E: C, I( _Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, x4 M$ @4 F+ G4 g- wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" |7 R( k4 j8 fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 T6 p5 ^5 X8 [; n( M- r# r% [$ ^2 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ g1 y, [: o3 q! p) Y" A* {) zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 T( m) y& S+ J: }Can I entrust it to you?
0 c, ^- G. K4 O$ w% F7 t3 `7 XEntrust my love within your heart

  e6 D7 [5 T6 L7 Z/ G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 n( m# \" _$ p7 x& K9 x1 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" D1 J3 e5 V& l9 W" e0 }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. A$ W; l0 x6 z/ i: ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 G( V  I- [7 Z% ^* t. I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) }) B. I, U( h. h8 `! m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 e$ q5 d$ |: w: R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" g1 B9 X8 V& T/ G<P>但我不会</P>
: R1 y& H. A1 g# g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ e; y+ S0 w: H7 }  ]% \0 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 M, O+ l  X9 n* B( C, p4 E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: h7 V: U/ x4 y1 v+ V1 _3 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# E( U" z0 m; E8 z. G! J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 N! k( n2 `" L" F" p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 l! ~" j- I  G2 i* y1 u1 ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 P' O( A4 I! i/ S: T/ H$ Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# H9 [" k9 ~% @& @4 X<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 ]; w  g, ]6 g% r( Y<P>But I never did </P>
  s/ N* p1 l. P: u4 ?<P>但我不会 </P>
8 u4 a0 K; M* V3 j' C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 h$ P: h  a( \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ F1 z) P6 o% F1 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 G7 _; P0 Q* s! n7 O9 t* f4 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" f+ J- R. S) P" K% j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! D& f' L  V# b! t9 Y: T" V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, M5 O: e! {; {5 N3 B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 W; ^; i5 X$ t  `4 ^% @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 y3 w' [1 u( D  ?7 o+ U0 ?$ Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) p6 Q  V9 A, ~3 u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 S$ m' a! H2 O" u: Z, J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& T- q, ?/ k0 v( T/ X1 E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>