【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
6 s  c; V6 p! n) f; P2 }# c8 M! KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' [; h9 ^% I& aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# B- w5 b! @2 c3 c6 X+ @4 r' IWe meet and talk everyday,
, |7 D1 n* L9 ?, KBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, V0 ~9 e: o9 T. d2 `Love… just the word love
& j" o5 V0 i+ r# `- f# FWhy is it so difficult to express?
( R* w3 y& O+ h2 n8 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# S8 f+ O' u. b  XIf today isn’t too late,
( V; ^: h) n" T6 x* zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 w$ a% b. X/ hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 \4 L5 h0 {" gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 |! f1 Q- q6 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 G6 e# C; b' b+ W9 oI want to confess that I love you,
4 F; e+ u8 R/ t3 I- k1 \* H! aBut I never did
; q3 l( a" Q) ?8 v) tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 S- h% v# c( G0 PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 u, R# G* b) H4 D. D% z  J3 fEntrust my love within your heart
9 g. p; F' U$ x1 C! b6 _+ x) W2 O7 JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; k$ i4 u  ?' u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; Z; P$ R: O$ Y* K% ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 O. r6 `  u* v' _5 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! k: k; [3 n6 v/ V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 |" Z* l7 c2 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 R% c! G0 g7 x  {' g& y, C5 K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; z, O' P5 V9 A$ p- N9 g6 }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 L' o% Q' N) X0 S, K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. L, ?' c/ A/ B6 x( ^- ?* p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 E, D" b/ t0 a! Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 R/ c- _' U0 Y( a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 i* Q- L8 p5 |2 L9 O4 f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. W; r( i5 `1 u% ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ P6 t* C0 `$ c, V' X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 s: S8 E) Q* i  o! Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ |; L) c& G9 T( d$ K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& G! t! R: B, w. s2 N; l3 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 a9 G5 o$ N" B$ K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; [+ K( B2 f# b<P>But I never did </P>
$ e, d! x+ P& b: h- ~3 G% f<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% ?8 j3 [) k# u2 x6 T! ^# d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 X/ V1 P0 O: N( G/ p6 [* N! f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! _) N" M8 S! s4 Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 B( c$ x# T& M+ `1 I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>