【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: ~: n% C$ Q+ y% x* ?, S! zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 I$ v, _5 |+ E( D) s. \8 ~I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 ~9 i7 e8 c9 M4 k5 nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  V3 e; f8 Z: H6 q2 LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" L3 U& f+ o  Z/ F" w# }I want to confess that I love you,
; W5 C! M. R8 ?/ ?6 d: ^5 XBut I never did
% i" v2 y2 {" T; `& P* Y$ }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 @$ ]- U5 K& S% h5 c+ NIf today isn’t too late,
9 Z2 z/ R/ D9 u) ^* o+ o& a. H# SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' p0 O# b" D$ p$ \: M5 H' S4 ^; E/ A/ VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; n% T; u' o/ GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( W5 ]$ R. w9 @7 l2 KI want to confess that I love you,
4 `- A- i- y; V9 TBut I never did
( x. U2 X7 p2 `- m' t* J5 _' @  _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. h! l5 N2 y& YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 ?) g+ Y( w( y5 C/ O2 \. Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 ~$ t) d3 q: H0 [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ V7 ~1 d5 W' p3 K, m6 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ ]2 x8 I! {" J% d5 c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, g( K& _* y7 @' k/ m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. l# v+ g+ Q1 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 [, }/ V2 _2 O0 A8 g" P/ I, `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! C1 O. a1 _9 F3 ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 Q  B# l- K, i" x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 b3 y- p/ c- F1 ], s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 J' O$ ?1 E3 w  x' h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ \# X8 H2 l8 x' b4 n1 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ t# I6 l' j2 L/ j/ i, A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ A* `/ I- L. k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! d, O# [8 [: b, x  t5 Q# k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! ~+ A4 n9 x8 W  u# y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( O0 C$ t9 Y3 N- s; s" t. j8 W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. x9 g. ^& N$ e7 B+ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 R  s3 t! f0 r) @" x# s3 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ u7 ]' ^9 O/ S+ Z! Y: |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, C# s  e) Q. C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 O' J0 D) k1 G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) I% e* `; d, w1 H6 M2 q& t, q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 @' O: v0 g. E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 f& g! k# ^# k& B  u8 R+ v5 k& L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" C* o( m% s0 f8 C8 p& q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ Y7 ?! h+ v- I; X$ Z- V: V* u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ C+ u6 D" a2 p# d9 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! [6 [: M4 {6 o; }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 x; o- G2 G+ m: ^8 \* G0 r# H3 \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* v# X6 G# N% B/ I4 y& p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. K4 Y2 E, n$ ~! z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% k% o2 n5 H: z& H! O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  l* m5 P  m2 e7 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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