【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 |, O0 j9 t: d( K3 O# t9 l我另将歌词附在此。
0 F4 Z* s6 @! ]! {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 T8 E! L2 ^( U9 t& |& hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% A* T$ V; ]" u5 X3 i, j2 ~+ lI already loved you with all my heart
) z! q: X' ]* F% qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 }6 l* O- j9 W, rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ a# C) t7 T! B2 Y$ d) A! gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& \& |6 T$ a* A& u8 K3 aI want to confess that I love you,
% K: s4 N. I: `% @- B7 w; vBut I never did
) @+ ~4 m% i$ l, C* QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 d% B: Y, C7 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  h, W/ A) e2 J# ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, @* \& M6 G- K' [9 J9 TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 l% L; h' Y  `/ g, {7 U! c, ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 z) Z; b0 p: B) g( R, pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 f# d( n% S, B5 g' kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* f. L% o! K% cCan I entrust it to you?
/ d* U; l8 a2 y! \% h* \, HEntrust my love within your heart
$ z( O; P9 i. Z& jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 q6 i$ J6 u" Y: Z" T  O* y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 {6 o% z6 Q! X. ^3 k$ e, O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- q6 v2 x6 b5 ]: A  V: \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' L2 h2 U5 f5 X4 _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 B! Q! ~9 ~" n  H3 o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) c! L. U6 k2 A* _) Z8 b) U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 h* \. g' ?# D$ t- P! p+ C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' H% ?: z, K& s: t) q  T1 T4 B( W( l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" V3 W' F+ K8 a1 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 r6 u' V* o* @1 ?" D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ s9 ~# [& i9 Z9 [2 X( s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; Q/ i( ?0 G9 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 D& |" e) r1 X4 n& @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ b1 A: k8 x7 r5 B3 `% ~% m, U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( ~: g8 J! S. j% x, w1 \9 V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 b. \& f2 I3 P# D& i& U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 d1 b/ [* l. n% U. b8 a' I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% j% e9 q5 D1 w4 c& f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 R8 t4 A. _  S8 {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% i& s- t6 G5 @1 Z: G7 }6 i( E2 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 X* H% L) w/ f! v1 B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 k5 u# [0 \, G' o) {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ I8 ~( K) p8 C% V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* D9 V% x- L3 p) ]) C+ Z) |" x. o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# h% o3 s5 ]/ }8 h: t! W9 w) C3 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 r! |7 t: }4 V* U: x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ \: z! ~6 o6 C1 j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% i7 D* A/ ?' ]/ P  t1 a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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