【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; c& d) F- T+ a4 ]6 q+ _我另将歌词附在此。
8 ?4 E" i. o+ E0 y  @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 l8 R# ]; ?+ D/ cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, I" j' t2 |9 }* d6 zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" Q# U3 [6 O2 ^! s7 F, AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( g% ]# f& h; W7 R  e. |. qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, f! D  E& [# V3 Z3 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ B: K' H, v) m2 q* }* a) TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- Y4 ]2 q% }  ]3 @; Q# jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, ?% b* o" s( S( N) s4 S3 a+ Q1 cEntrust my love within your heart
9 h2 H( ]% W7 S9 ?5 ]8 h8 FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, x. y; w* L8 G8 S4 e1 g  H# L2 b7 CBut I never did
" f# ]& H) i6 v; D* p) OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( j. ~' I  m- ^+ X4 O, l: VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 b- E5 ~: ^) I: uEntrust my love within your heart
  W, O1 G& U! L7 h9 v! Z: xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 [4 L: e9 L% \( h7 O6 E. c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ b- _7 N. e" i, b  u+ b1 o. Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: o9 [  \4 H# U, Q4 d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 |! p1 w) O8 E& ~+ ~7 {  F, Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ \/ `- ^- K1 h; R9 ~: J) l3 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& ]: z. Z: o1 ?: t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* H0 R+ U, f* e: o, h9 j$ }1 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! L. p  e  R) y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 V1 Q. [, k7 K7 h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) a, @! n: L2 B5 n# C2 T' U7 X# R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 S. f9 A+ s7 q# d) V; e' j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( }0 M+ U2 a8 [! u3 a7 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 W+ S  |& ]9 C$ x& \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) Y( o6 k' ^( Z! N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* m9 ^- N+ `; E* z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 h* D( |; f, H" \5 j3 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! p8 C2 T& s2 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 Z" u; F; @, |$ Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- T& H1 k6 N9 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 F) ]- l( K4 j9 D2 Y; V5 Z; R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% L1 T7 M8 f1 h# l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( q! S* \( P& s1 W0 H, F9 x% a0 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" H: i- Y/ ]( P( y. O1 q1 D) q<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 t' c" n: ^2 V6 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 j: |3 V3 r8 E0 z9 q# K$ _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 `2 p" Q% |) s- K0 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
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<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
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<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>