【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 L" ^( o9 i. O" C6 J4 Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* I+ V4 ~6 v, J  S3 E6 B) UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 o! y" Q5 m' Z' I3 ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: u( e% \" @- @0 i% r) iLove… just the word love
0 T/ x+ d- ^7 a8 r! XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, Y. b+ y$ ~% u. qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& z* m# J( j/ t3 [& RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 }8 f  {7 o  w6 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- u5 q* M, [6 S5 A" o5 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 X) F$ g. N0 A. r! E# R- d& E+ G( oBut I never did
# d; f* @+ s4 c& Q3 _+ T+ tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% h4 Z) x& P6 Q- k4 i0 y0 ~8 q4 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* J( C' W, I+ g" J& z. t% bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! u. R. {) R; B3 s0 ^$ S! {0 h$ l" eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( V9 W) b5 o. Q! BEntrust my love within your heart
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8 s- k2 H3 a6 O) F% X7 u- I  W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* g. g( T  _9 W# k4 @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 R6 C9 [: ^0 W<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& F  z# T6 D' P: Z& u" ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. y5 k% \, T8 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. v$ @1 @! R& M  [6 h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- l' s8 u5 y- `  U& |; \5 p; y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 C* b% w7 \! H0 S) g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. V  u' M, d, a4 H1 H/ ?: f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ \9 Y3 v; Y1 p% J% d3 H% d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ b6 [: z% r; l. a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& Z: H+ v% M: t1 t# P& i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: f- g% Y, W: a6 ~5 N& n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' Z8 \2 f: H, P. ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: V) R5 u) b3 X! X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 X6 X% C+ a, I' `( U: R$ ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 |0 J6 G/ |" ?/ z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 M' i5 R2 O) v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 `9 m9 M, e7 u- q7 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 C* h- y: s" j2 f9 i* l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" `+ M6 j3 W' b* d  P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& q9 {, r2 f. c" w- Q! ?- v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ u5 B3 h% ?* a, \. T3 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- W" c" }8 z" w: u7 x$ |8 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 L4 u4 S* H& d2 M8 t" E8 l* `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 }/ T5 R$ b$ Y8 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. r. }* H& C1 X& [5 ]" `/ H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& e  }6 _1 V. S! i( {, |, J' p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ J3 f& y/ I5 Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 X" J% z) W  p) n; [! _" k$ Z" N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, D1 @  k! h& d: I! Q* o7 {" C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>