【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; F* B  j' y* e6 o我另将歌词附在此。
8 i. I4 v8 R* o2 y, h+ eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. V' [' j0 J0 p" T4 G, ^& s" _I already loved you with all my heart
1 s4 Y; l2 B+ i) T+ C- H) @We meet and talk everyday,
8 ]2 b& v# _$ R; k2 \) ~4 V/ VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) Y  s0 t$ a9 X; a4 {' Y0 OI would probably know how you feel
! N! Z8 y2 d) m2 x& n. iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' X% W0 S' T1 K$ N# II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; f# s6 a; h) Z7 _) FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 @8 Z8 Q  k9 _6 j& XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; q3 F$ p7 W3 T6 z0 _1 J7 n/ ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 D0 o) L; v  J& vI want to confess that I love you,
( f$ W$ ~( [/ A- v# a0 }- DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' G) y& O6 f/ ]) {5 t; n' |$ t: FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 J; l: t- ~$ hCan I entrust it to you?
# S  m4 o0 F( Y' X& j5 Z9 {. m! y# gEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; I( G5 c9 Q4 d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 i' `' O- Q: J2 q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 F2 Z" c/ \1 Q, N) I; K! y% {1 D8 W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 T/ |9 e) B# V8 J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" @( u7 [( z, Z3 D; d3 z! ]1 G- c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 Q% b9 n. s& @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% W8 ?6 ]- S( a9 V) [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ J5 O% d" d$ h1 [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ a" i0 a# c. T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 {1 z, E+ F" p  J: y6 ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ t6 l- w+ e: e$ k+ A<P>但我不会</P>
% B5 b/ E8 r/ A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 W! U6 T, X8 C, X! a- A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( N6 @& p+ K' W7 N9 d# V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, H* k8 g$ n( _7 e' @1 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 u* ?9 Z; L* I) \; S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! O0 ?+ m- q2 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 J3 j; z/ B. B9 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 c8 m2 |, w6 _+ ^, x1 Y+ S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" Z! D3 {( E" P. M1 R. h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 ]; M/ o! N8 F8 ]. e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  I' H8 `8 d+ Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 Y7 w* r& j* A4 e* ^$ r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 b5 J/ `3 w; d8 H) v4 |6 M0 c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 a6 i4 x: w, V& h1 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( `# T6 [! |! S  g5 g/ Q* E$ g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 j, V" Q: B& J* T! `  {6 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% [* n' I. V8 F$ H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Q5 s2 c# a0 l: ^! J) U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: W6 v# `5 h$ |+ s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 M1 ~. q- b* X- F+ @+ y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; A# s1 E' [3 s+ ]  ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>