【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
3 ?5 P. I& a+ X$ G& d+ s/ v, VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 P4 }* K" p& Y& _& Z0 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 y: c( H  i5 m! oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ i! S9 L; G* T0 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
  b: m9 }. j7 B  x) aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& O9 w! p8 G/ x1 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 w' L' D% ^6 g' b: p2 ]% eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) `+ x; I2 p: M: ]; HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 H# O' U8 w2 {6 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# G8 @2 e% [( B" i7 ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 ^5 z$ S( W+ J3 |. P0 y7 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: T6 i9 `+ p" W" |0 i5 fCan I entrust it to you?
! R5 p& K# x, i9 @  DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' g+ r! J( [: G" yEntrust my love within your heart
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5 J( R* `& Q- U% }! H; L% H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 D9 b  H! F& |1 E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# V7 ?" x0 ]. s+ e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ h. w- D2 D$ u0 f! A5 O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  ^; T! `! I' D* h9 y, y) j7 S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 n7 \) i4 J: M- }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! y. n6 R3 _( I- l% S; r  O( L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. Z* a2 U, I( g( F# `/ b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& I& P- A4 ^5 o6 Y( c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, @9 J( \1 A$ C$ s9 h% p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 c% K* }3 |! a+ e" v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 Z9 S' X; S( O4 g. i7 Y; m9 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 `3 [" t: V- i# K, c/ p( x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) J/ v; R2 s8 U& a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ a- y* Z" F* ?$ v4 T9 t* i  f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Y/ G7 a  |3 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: y0 \1 b. u( q$ _& p" j- k& |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: B) J/ g/ D& F4 L/ K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( z; a4 U1 [" q: |* k* i3 {5 P# L) |5 y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 e' H$ n+ `6 A/ c) z0 [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( W( ?0 r0 j$ b' {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  N8 I# P0 |, G& l3 j. ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 p/ s$ y5 [& _  a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 @$ g- L3 k( E6 @* D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ ~7 ^5 Y$ R- r4 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 _& Z3 t$ |' B; S- ^2 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 ?  _, Q* U, g6 q) ^; y; l& |5 o3 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 m2 g! q, u) z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& H6 o6 q4 ^2 q- Z2 i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 ~5 O/ ^6 _0 @3 b0 Y  h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 k! i1 H: b( N* T/ a5 j. t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 A, m, m* Z+ ]7 T: i1 ^; q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>