【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. w- K* M5 i& ~& n3 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 ]9 N( d9 e# tFrom the first moment we met,
0 X: z& d1 A" UI already loved you with all my heart
! W! S$ S  ^2 @; m, v! iWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! v- g8 q& X8 V. c, |5 GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; I& f6 t4 q0 J! E7 f3 WLove… just the word love
. @4 X4 h( H% BWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 Z: k$ l$ ~' C: ^( U' n1 M0 pI want to confess that I love you,
0 p4 s& v9 w9 w  MBut I never did
! J; w( f0 c/ C. Z9 R, ~, mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ V* R9 h5 C' R* p# x' QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 ^9 y4 r! o) \  O) P  xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 v/ ~$ s& H& \I want to confess that I love you,
) {# q5 t. A  sBut I never did
$ _5 R) ]+ J+ X/ ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' y6 z, S0 g9 n- RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ {' T' w8 X' x1 y0 K/ pCan I entrust it to you?
, v8 I7 E' V. m( v7 vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! ]) E+ A# E8 y0 G9 ]! k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 ]) ]0 _# O8 J, E8 `. x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( W% d3 G/ n8 v3 w. \8 `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% @2 V% v/ t  P7 |/ c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 P2 I: \1 V2 |, n' T% C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 l9 |+ Z' f# p; y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* A6 n& t: U- T7 k( V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) t4 |5 K8 W' o/ N* E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 j# Y. p( R* n+ K* |+ ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ ^! g' P: P1 ]+ i9 K2 V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! {" }( [5 I; W, \) E8 W+ u; B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 W5 H+ l; Q2 F) a2 \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, y, y* |$ _" X/ z5 P8 @# [, s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 x% `2 |4 ^, b5 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 t9 @" h/ h$ p- X) r6 I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, N% g" Y7 ^4 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: D: Y7 h* M! H. C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 b. [2 X2 [8 E5 f% ~; S3 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. U- q6 O5 m1 x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% Y2 x4 U5 Y; j: E+ o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 _3 n5 |( a2 R2 T2 S; C7 c0 i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ {$ i; T# R+ Z0 w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 k: _& ?& Y, v( f) f& z, N<P>But I never did </P>
) e" r$ [% ]6 _2 I4 g<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 D: W. Q2 X. d$ L/ N! s, Y  G9 L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- I( T! ^* ?8 Q6 |! C- K<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& [/ s% ?2 _. {- S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 l; D) W9 d9 a& T$ T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' D  {. `* }2 J# h. b) l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 J: y, k8 E0 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 W" k" `; C( Z' j& L' N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 d% ~+ @/ E- H6 `, _+ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. v( t4 ?( G- c$ N0 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 [/ c4 k/ X% R/ Z7 r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) P: Q' h5 @4 }# G& x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>