【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 P, V0 X# {, i; m  ^# R我另将歌词附在此。
) Q9 f- n+ E8 mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 z$ `  ]) [/ b1 Y# `5 d- OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ O" R! T! s" C) P; @* Y- dFrom the first moment we met,
2 I- |& h2 v1 V# M6 |1 _, A+ YI already loved you with all my heart
- f( T2 L) T, P6 ?( [0 y4 IWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 E; P2 _/ i9 v+ j( ]/ uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& S6 |& m  O. ?7 y/ qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 E% U  y+ ?& a' t2 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! T( f2 E; E: @/ Q+ @+ [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' O# _8 |: b+ @  L: _I want to confess that I love you,
) e0 f6 V2 c  Q2 _, O* CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' F! ^9 u: P  vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  m7 c7 a  e6 W( \5 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 j2 @# r* d( z) m$ ~/ T5 E" YCan I entrust it to you?
  h8 G) z- X* o* X: P+ r. S/ R$ L4 }Entrust my love within your heart
3 [: l) D! u# m; }- y. f; bCan I entrust it to you?
0 s% n4 M: U& `5 vEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! q& f* i% B" g6 [5 m5 c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 ^: R! p* ~0 q! I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ u5 S) A7 G& W" N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 L2 T( F* E* E# {, ^2 i9 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ @: w3 O( P7 z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- a% g/ ~$ `& x3 d, c3 ~3 i' r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! @: \5 ]6 r. k6 E( U# i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- R* e, N# x" ]7 e& g4 }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 M: g: r5 U: c  Z6 I  l; w. k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. N/ |+ v2 z  J/ n( O9 R& `1 B% ?% ~' [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ t+ }3 v. h, M6 o+ ^6 C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 ~" N: [4 J  R% v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 a6 Q, F/ W9 j+ C9 w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, P+ }& G2 b" B<P>但我不会</P>
9 w4 N" Q. D+ l4 W! r3 s2 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ?" Q7 y3 D4 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# H/ x5 t8 H4 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 m  U0 k& S* }; Y+ X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; q# K* i, D: ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* E) x( I' B/ }4 \+ ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& T9 |2 J2 u7 j3 W: [2 `2 g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' |3 k$ T4 B  \2 D+ \1 B- y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) C/ ~. V  {" J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) h& Z' H* q6 m<P>但我不会 </P>
+ c3 P3 O0 n" Z# m9 z; I<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" C! P- k4 q  G- K& {7 V" H# T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 t' k% o# K- e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ m7 U0 U: j# y- o1 B- s3 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; `: r9 T$ l1 ?' n7 X6 L4 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 w0 ?, z: |: r2 l& C* C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 D% C4 H0 `/ p5 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, a* w7 `" u8 J% w7 V: j4 k& `8 w7 _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>