【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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- H! n4 s/ I* q  c) |' O8 z/ h我另将歌词附在此。
1 ?3 N# M( `9 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 ?0 B( q- k- M* TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* ?8 N$ {0 ^; {' `I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) Q" W& V* w  A: I6 w2 c8 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) _3 M. Z* ~- s4 E+ u* P& eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- o# E( u* s; y6 _! P6 wCan I entrust it to you?
; j+ p7 {2 Q+ i- Q' l; REntrust my love within your heart
" W5 j, U2 W# @/ qLove… just the word love
% H+ f5 s8 k' _0 K3 ?% U% VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! x+ x7 [( C9 ]. C( [  s3 V: tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* R8 ^5 A' Y6 u: S  wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; O: F0 A( u; Q+ @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- i, i1 p* F. ?" K6 a6 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ [6 s. `- Q0 s+ {9 {- x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, n+ B0 Y9 S# @! `4 b8 u" q- e  _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# d9 F# ~; `' n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& D  K' {& j/ Y! i- P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 P" `3 r! Q: m$ C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( S" k: r* c0 ?" f# t- w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 N+ d, q7 X) N8 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- a& N( u& r4 G  G3 S, g& k# N/ a" v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; D  J7 H6 o$ q" D1 Y8 K8 ~  A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& X6 c) K" K3 S: y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; H5 F: _9 u. L& U" Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, t( K! d! q  I1 V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ S1 K1 m( L& D: u8 ^( p# G4 E2 ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  i5 b/ c* N  J# [5 O1 B* g' A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& L' k; z7 a0 q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, g. l! z; b2 c7 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 A- i2 N3 l4 c) K4 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ H% L" z; R. t) r% U+ W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# V+ D" y7 a3 U7 O% p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% Y9 ?, h, I1 s$ i/ Q: `% s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ y: q, z# c, a8 f+ {6 y! B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; i& d4 x9 n+ j% C& c4 r4 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 y$ m: G: x% t& I( {. P, w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# [- \9 ^7 D* f. H3 `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 H$ w. p8 O+ U" p' A  B# ?' F5 ~. U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 o# B; X) V! ]' Y9 k8 V3 |<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 K( @$ P$ {. E$ P! a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ D( k5 g* s3 D! l1 ]" f* ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 E% `& O+ h6 C+ m- J% T" Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 G9 I4 Q& Q0 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  V) w5 E% I3 N  q$ d) k' l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 r/ c, K$ M' a8 Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 `  X/ o( w# d& x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 t+ f' t6 W- D$ t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>