【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 t3 P7 O  X& k2 n* w, x: h我另将歌词附在此。
6 [0 l' ~# ?" i# B& yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* V, b' [7 l2 fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 p" j8 n4 X7 n- wI would probably know how you feel
) G! O, b- W& S" U9 |- y4 fLove… just the word love
2 ]  G/ D+ o+ f; R) [* n' M$ lWhy is it so difficult to express?
; u" g5 V2 ?6 `0 t0 S1 n% VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& W+ k/ Q3 y) F7 |1 Y6 H4 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 N9 x) y! `" l, {& y1 BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& z* M& a' e; i6 L6 xCan I entrust it to you?
6 b, x! _* T" q# }! e+ }4 n" iEntrust my love within your heart
* r/ ]6 @/ S( D8 ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ ?+ m+ i" M  G4 O( WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 g# h! H3 i: MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  t* {2 k8 w& t6 S" f2 ~Entrust my love within your heart
! t9 d% |3 F, C# pCan I entrust it to you?
/ B) V0 m: g. d4 SEntrust my love within your heart
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7 I- g1 N, p, ?& U3 ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 l$ @2 |! U( G8 Y8 d0 M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ O6 b: l7 G$ z. q1 h$ p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 [! T- ^; v; X# m2 \4 c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; p( s4 p- @3 i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ l6 }0 o' u. o% b: E2 r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. |9 N- O0 r0 x' D& k' n% ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 ?: m& P5 a& A, X: F. Q7 d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ [, `, j% h) l% T" v* G  T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 o9 W7 x8 X6 P/ B; A" t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- |- M' d# o4 E4 ^  ^$ [. V/ c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 i- x: ?) b4 T& u% h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* B9 O$ ^5 X5 a% k# o8 D# J2 O5 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: w; f+ N4 m3 `+ u7 L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 S/ b4 ^$ x  ^. L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 W, x+ f+ ^# y" c& o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  Q8 q- j! p. e6 r9 v  y; g9 d* O( z# A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& e; \- ^* i6 u1 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! Q2 h/ D  |; L/ ]6 {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" c& X  R3 J- \/ Q& i& u( d% D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. J  n. l7 Y/ I$ U- P; }9 H1 w* x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 p" W; _4 f( s+ }+ R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' q7 f' H$ n: l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  v2 u) e% z7 |8 a! T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 A) l$ a; j) m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 S1 C8 M3 C' E3 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 ^( A" Y9 ~3 y# C# Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" d5 ^3 B& M/ Q4 I8 F+ o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. a1 J/ x/ m( d: @5 Y4 ]/ I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 e) U; H4 ]. d- t7 m. e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>