【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
0 n0 @; k. _1 T6 |; i( dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! q0 v% ^6 s! c" z: T8 u# p8 O7 d. ?From the first moment we met,
: }0 d  q' j/ ]6 d0 KI already loved you with all my heart
4 m" r! _. g7 ~We meet and talk everyday,
9 p6 X5 j8 I. L8 ^( UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 ]* c  ]  X) t* K- q0 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 }5 C. m# v+ t9 h) }# }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 f2 `8 ^) y1 A' N; dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' y( `' s" C/ T* y( \7 S! z6 n- KLove… just the word love
0 n5 Q, ]' c+ m3 D: R) s! V! hWhy is it so difficult to express?
- D$ V8 Y! [& i  q$ t  t% aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' B2 x! ]# [5 f; QIf today isn’t too late,
4 ?& z( d! ]: d7 B3 e/ W! J; jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. F0 A5 O- ^0 G: eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* P' O* I2 f  a: `# x) N; uCan I entrust it to you?
' Y' W' g; u3 a7 N3 `! s7 S: d: ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: Q$ H) _; {8 [3 v, K! b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  u4 l: P% F, K$ f' W0 u! x7 p/ y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 f! r9 f( C/ Q4 a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( T  w5 J2 u1 T% c* X, [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ W- c" W' _5 b% k( r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, v7 v! h6 `9 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ F; t5 Y' @( }% Q& w0 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 @3 x& a+ i* e$ Q9 n+ A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: f0 D0 o0 S' [  I. D. X9 B7 o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ A7 b! t: C$ x% z2 u( S: R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 I/ ^  d/ i9 |1 D6 S, m0 B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" d: v; f5 h. P! p5 M$ h* k! y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ w9 W5 K. x3 D% v! y  D0 w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 B4 Z$ v$ t! a' c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 t4 \' m% s' b; T4 a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. D! m, j1 |1 J1 k% Z* L+ M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. B/ J4 |, P' i  F9 ~5 F<P>但我不会</P>
: \+ C. e; |" d3 _2 `" r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 c. I# M& a; k5 u: ]; N. g6 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( u/ k( Q! t/ U4 r% M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. l) X- e& E- c6 D: k2 x: X8 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" s2 X0 a9 s/ T, p, [- s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 B7 H/ n( P. h! F; x  |- c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 G  \, v# Z1 b; I/ q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: t7 r+ N( B  o9 a% E& r7 I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  M* k& {+ |9 `; S+ G- t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: D/ K9 [, X; l0 E: n8 x8 V6 u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. T8 I* D7 x# `9 D; [2 P; z8 f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. s! w1 `: M7 m0 u4 w6 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ e4 ]( |2 A6 _5 i$ _7 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! m( t+ d3 l9 V: P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 ?& _2 c, `6 X) B3 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  }  r. y5 O8 L! s- r* q- O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 f' _+ a" f; I! w+ F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>