【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 J; X/ x5 U$ D8 T! V( lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- C+ h0 e. i2 p+ wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ v$ [* E8 F" x8 ^- n1 LWe meet and talk everyday,
! {  j$ d4 U* |2 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& x* A  J& y, E7 J8 n9 f% `I would probably know how you feel
8 B- |+ [4 X5 j+ r! o3 k# ~- M/ o' ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 d( N. M$ v3 n! e- vI want to confess that I love you,
, Y" u5 v% `( A. g1 m8 S0 VBut I never did
6 i9 s) i4 n9 v: m$ ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 ^) U, m/ F6 Z& Q9 GIf today isn’t too late,
+ w3 H9 e" L6 [4 }1 a$ K8 ?: GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ @, [  H' c% `6 ?5 i% |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' X0 w7 N0 |: sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 o+ F) W, t- b, X0 @  c3 RBut I never did
9 ~# N. }$ \: Z, j, e- y! q8 T( ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ]) x+ o: H+ a7 T* `If today isn’t too late,
$ U* {' S' p9 n9 P4 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ ~& @/ ^0 n. ?1 |0 o" }) V2 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: _' o1 p6 x9 lEntrust my love within your heart
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& o; t1 p( v' V' H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 z/ C0 m  @; J& m1 y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 z) h) I5 ^3 F( `; d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 Z( h; y" r6 ?0 S* r9 V6 u% q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 Q. [+ {) ?3 K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) o: k4 m7 [, d8 N( E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% V3 W0 c- ]1 r7 {" @. e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! I* ~' c8 m$ c" i) K5 {+ H" F6 J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* X6 c# }* C) Z0 {4 p8 a+ h3 t, k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 G. S) g" O  j" t8 ]3 F9 ^: B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ n  |( K7 ^! K& u2 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 q( ?$ b3 M( u3 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' ~# M7 ~4 c0 k4 g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# }. N. b* L0 g! e. W3 {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  i& z( B/ P6 I5 A: w. |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, F/ p' c  ?( n; g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" G) d8 B. ~. u# w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ g/ Y0 }" w2 Q& n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 i5 H  J% r  y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* _0 y+ U2 q# x* |- c) Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; f6 N7 @% {9 T9 P! f7 m  i7 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# l" v$ Q3 Z- ?# t. z3 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* w. A7 {' I# g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( R1 x% [" x" P2 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! M9 X" y& ^& L( O<P>But I never did </P>
1 u4 h- A5 ]" F3 W<P>但我不会 </P>
  v  J: N: W+ d- I  m! {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 b% X0 a7 [' v* K8 M; n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" y9 Q( {+ s% s* h7 I, k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 A- ~( G) \4 i, j4 F. G* N4 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 u  x+ q  t! B) V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# O; p! @- o6 y5 K+ Z* k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, S! d2 s* O7 S& G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( `( n* m$ r. U, F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, i, X2 F: O4 D9 }) U  D 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 O; O6 ?+ k3 N- j( @& C% Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>