【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 J5 W, c; n1 t+ |我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, j4 i. j- F4 cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! t$ E# W& X1 u2 O9 KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  s- V6 c' y% T  ?7 z0 N- dWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# W( D" {! P) Z$ ]/ s6 Q% @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( A" h( g0 p  q* P" Q" PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. f6 \5 c$ a& A& N" z7 z, i$ HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ R- g6 h7 I. a; C9 a5 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 R9 b4 z* _8 ]1 \Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ C# r9 k# @4 \I want to confess that I love you,
) N, H% _& q0 r) d6 [But I never did
( S/ V6 t7 W: C2 \: N4 B7 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& e! }- j3 T3 D% f3 \% T- u0 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 C" |2 ?7 b5 j" T& ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* E; z% x, f' q4 N& r. BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) U* B: a, T  B0 v. b0 T. [& s
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 g+ _# ~% h" e& ~7 h. I! Q6 H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" D% U3 f7 d% O$ F$ F' N6 O9 w$ S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 B) b- d, g* q0 S5 w5 U- T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 t8 s) l* l  D! p( t  C2 e6 a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 D/ N+ w$ J4 q' I  ]' s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) I: w* f, F: ?( u/ p9 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 X# v4 X' G' i; g+ ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  c$ U8 T9 G, }, p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ t: k- l% N( }# ]! H$ i3 K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! W4 q) a! ~9 r8 H5 e- o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 r/ i7 z3 h- {0 {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 N# w; n# T! F. ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: `: U4 ?' ~# ?, Q- d, f: H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 k; i3 T  V/ ^4 ?' P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 o. v# d; \# @1 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; a  a5 q+ a* j+ y5 d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. R2 ~) h# ?2 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 U; U" I, z9 Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  I( ]2 \/ w7 e- h, ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 q9 W, u6 Y; P+ R  R' V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% S4 r- C+ ^) \8 J4 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 T1 n1 r  E  p' V) Y% ?% c4 I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  t; o& z3 k% J( t; Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 X# D2 @, C; h5 g4 W  h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# v4 `& I2 R6 y5 Y8 I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! {; b0 @% x& [. O. F' V4 N' @8 e8 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 k& ]( ]/ I* T. b% `/ k8 {<P>但我不会 </P>
9 b: F& k9 c6 q' I/ I+ ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( x: X4 c# h$ I$ t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; l, z) d  [( x6 @/ x& j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) O9 k5 @# G+ \1 x" s8 V2 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 x! ~3 S! q0 \0 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 }% ^$ P8 }& U' V' ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& s' r9 {  F* C  \. m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 P- _3 l2 H, V0 d$ s, }, {6 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' g9 o" C1 o3 t- ?6 G+ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  l) ?8 t/ c3 A3 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( E& V0 M. X$ {& C3 ^4 U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ p% I$ x9 ^5 a% Q0 s$ v* ?
9 J# J& I" Q! T; r) k5 L% { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
5 _% i3 a/ M  G' V# j( U
& {- }/ e9 ?# `0 C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& S  n+ L& B  _4 c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

! I% s2 O4 s& D9 Z4 V/ X<P>

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$ ~8 D( v# |- Q( S$ E: q3 \+ Q( b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; R5 J. _& n. f  t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>