【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- I! q- b" m9 U5 c( ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' _9 p$ S5 T, z  F2 ~+ K- z4 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 B6 ^( Y" F: T/ ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 r$ h: h' S$ b1 T& vLove… just the word love
- ?2 G, z" _3 G* ^, g& O, XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ B. t5 J" e- D; Y3 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 c. Y1 t" L( D$ ]" R4 T: WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ }6 Z1 U; [% i- k- r% f$ g- |Love… just the word love
  }$ f: u: i; ]) ]* T5 J( x& c3 xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. O# J$ P6 S3 f* j" nBut I never did
' Y! `7 t- O2 Z, n2 _9 C( XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ a$ d7 Q( r% w6 ]- q. {7 hCan I entrust it to you?
/ {2 t& M6 @1 _4 V( n8 d/ S* @+ oEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& Z" J, z* O  e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 V+ O2 g: [) p  i% S# a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. ]2 m; O$ A' {5 V5 [" N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 E/ S6 B) \" m, c7 S) ?% ^, _, v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. h' t8 Y- O) k* ^: J/ W4 ]7 K/ b<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- C7 y' J0 T& ]# K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- F0 V! i. [' W: Q) c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. E9 O9 l5 e8 p4 ~- y6 k! s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. |$ b& i4 h6 R- d$ i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 \; w2 F( o9 c0 R/ |8 U. y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 r' n% r, X8 `9 X9 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ v: z( x0 j7 U0 t' m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; n( M2 |* a2 o/ |) G. v0 n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' W; C; O* W. |, w+ w* x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, A+ m; G, y& `6 C) I& R3 T4 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: j: P4 N1 l* F5 m" p" r! n7 `& z1 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& B! S+ e5 W% |, l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 U  N) N2 y9 O0 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 z+ }; f& s1 X( K) w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: @; M1 _5 G7 @8 Y5 z, I, M% M# m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& O' |# x/ I/ t  y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: ^! K; U3 ?1 C; W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% j& b1 K" |; m( v0 m+ d( i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. L; ?& X3 j9 P0 J* K7 y0 ^" F<P>But I never did </P>
; c* n+ ^5 C4 n  G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- D, X" L; E+ [& U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 }2 Q: T* h8 n" ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 J/ S& G% a: f: t% p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' t; C+ v8 a. K5 s5 T3 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 G: h& h3 Q/ ~+ b) D# r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; W2 F  u6 [- I6 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; \% c) [, [; T  g1 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 k: y: r( D# t8 t6 P$ x% N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 P, F* y% }1 z$ O. f5 H0 R 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  x: }) j$ g9 a1 {% n4 ?, P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ p/ W5 e: Z; n+ Q1 C) f7 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>