【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
1 g& b  ^( |  V0 q. j4 Q* Y5 f3 sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. J" {4 g1 l! `* H) S+ [8 OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; l2 ?: f( w& c' k9 w1 }I already loved you with all my heart
# \5 j2 Q2 y. E+ X' RWe meet and talk everyday,
2 n9 \$ \/ _  ABut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* ^/ f  C9 v# @* v: b  EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 r5 M+ T. P/ p& E7 V$ dLove… just the word love
# _6 u$ U4 Z) }7 f. M2 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 B7 i8 P. ?) ?: VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. P- a* Y7 y+ }+ D& ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* e5 w6 q5 k' k( dI want to confess that I love you,
  @, ^/ x$ N& N/ I* fBut I never did
5 j/ b& ~: R8 i/ ?& ?- MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ I5 l' L: |6 K2 T, i$ DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: W+ c, Y' K9 Q' T) ?Can I entrust it to you?
, h4 L1 w$ h8 z+ u0 ^' ]* kEntrust my love within your heart
4 ^) W7 z( h/ h: y* u
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 R! k( |1 \2 B. ~7 X* I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- p) ~4 C; z4 z! l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- r0 W! Y3 {; {& G; r5 {% A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 d4 r2 {# Q" `) L& E) a+ c3 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, X, n# @# [. g0 ?) t- l; B! l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; _4 k3 t- w! m5 @8 P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: g$ l+ R, a. q3 j+ C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 a' Q6 h( A9 P; u  p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 i. [  D! `+ Z- ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 k+ M% G2 m: X! a  N0 A9 W<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 V' F. ^6 k3 L, |) ?$ O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ a6 |1 i$ x2 q- _' U% g* L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 {' O) L  e4 d# b! n0 k* }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" f# C& D6 k& j  i$ R! w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 \% l$ t. x# O- y/ k8 G: B3 v, @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 ^/ S9 m# a, S4 f% W2 V( O4 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 E, \, L. j- @5 W4 g' `! d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, p( y. u* E% T, Z: U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ _$ O7 J# Q- k) K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 H5 U+ K  C, e1 P7 U9 t: {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 W( [7 A8 K" i+ v! l, B2 q; ^<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  H$ W9 e( d9 o# k7 y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 s& d; d( a' u3 k  _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! Q9 }: }0 g( {1 ^- @0 A/ @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# G! z  O0 `; P. |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 T2 ~- O( b9 S' V# M- [: E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 G; w# B- B  G7 a4 j* Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& H- q# s: J% c; G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& @# p2 o( B& [6 B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 f" s7 ^* n, \; {4 l; Y' I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ N/ W; b, s) e8 n3 r' `2 ], B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 ~4 m2 L. X+ W. ?" V  X2 h' Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 Y# v" o6 m5 u+ f4 w+ W
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ k- O8 U# E: Q" V" F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ ~) `" Z# @! h4 {% a/ e& d5 F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>