【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 ^% M' Y! o2 NFrom the first moment we met,
$ I1 s4 U$ h) y, q# \& Y0 M7 a% i$ q/ iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 D2 H- G9 `, k5 L* W/ q. S' B8 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. j9 L( @* x$ {  g( c1 W% HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; J8 ^1 T% O+ P- F) OI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 s; U7 f6 ~% v6 LBut I never did
2 b# A  r( [% O* _+ cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& Z6 D! b6 ~; r4 K6 S$ b5 ?Can I entrust it to you?
3 {# J$ W; T0 m9 Q) N2 ^6 ^Entrust my love within your heart
9 P: L1 J' i3 c% O$ l2 t. wLove… just the word love
# W$ d+ g) |6 n+ m3 R- EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 h. @& x( ~: U2 e! R- }But I never did
  v4 q- j/ z& c! s! `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, ?, v6 V$ N# {7 D" f% _" UCan I entrust it to you?
: H* B& |& {3 k- k) W) p3 z) c/ IEntrust my love within your heart
% N% S8 Q# b8 `# JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' r5 n' [7 R2 x' G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ {; V1 e( k" R7 d! d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( M4 c4 v7 o+ N1 i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ C% _2 g# K+ I9 P. }. d( j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" z0 g/ N# J( V0 F: D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- ~- j# n" z6 ^7 c8 |3 g& z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" w: R  ~" ~- }! L/ p3 p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  P' L/ Q3 i  ~* M/ E7 S, v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 q9 i$ I# e: N, h9 |4 Z* ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 |/ T; X* \  a* U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 S. s9 W& V- R( ^<P>但我不会</P>
9 @& y. I6 e! @% q# g, h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 y1 w$ |& a. b! F+ B1 g$ W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 x. O" s' x: {7 n: x5 [& `  I+ E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ h; ]" }: [+ A2 a6 G8 |( T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; P$ \# Y+ d1 n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  g, E! I/ ]8 J% i9 ]) |- W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, `1 I* _8 ^$ Q% V3 _- e* R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, {; G- A/ [5 L7 v/ o- [% o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 L: e. f* f7 s6 k. z& f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 E& s* d: K8 h+ {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 M8 ]4 P( |$ L" C1 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; D# S/ ?9 z- a$ F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 G5 [2 {( {) f, D" d9 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 D- h' C/ |: T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 G& P; u  H/ R- r: k5 s0 k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 G  ~: X$ c% x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>