【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; b" M- u: w- o7 ^$ c6 Q- H# n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ w% L' |7 h8 ~' Z5 b9 _7 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* T+ \% F2 ~. \" P1 |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; V3 x( O$ @4 `1 z  zWe meet and talk everyday,
7 k7 y) T! ^9 i6 ^' z* WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 U9 F' t* F# y0 O! A8 V, rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: b  F( q! t, J3 s1 d5 F6 v/ |But I never did
; x. O4 u8 C+ z+ g- v% ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 J( c# O* |* b" f! O3 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ ?  E+ |5 }$ U0 {7 T/ tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 J- G# `; a' l% [9 \5 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
: E* B% p3 C, n" i4 {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% [0 O6 @7 [3 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 l1 P" Q/ P* R$ p2 q# |* e' aCan I entrust it to you?
. K  S7 E* I5 W2 d0 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: L0 R, b  I& O( AEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- G% q! Q! ~0 w$ a( k2 X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  [7 V9 Y  d. f/ z9 m" L& i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" T" G1 u& H! q' N5 E3 C+ \' `2 a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 y5 L2 _8 ]! w- T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 S( t0 }* g  Y2 r5 [& ~- {0 ?: y3 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' X, B% A  e) V7 G- r. p5 i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: V( r  ]& Z0 Q. l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 ~' T5 {6 B4 a) A) `% k2 b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' v7 ]7 q; P" {+ R/ x# q% f9 e<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: ^) \& ]: c7 I9 M/ \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 I" l2 I, B5 U9 j; _6 v2 z6 `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 M7 P% ^+ K! [- Z0 H! }7 l& z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% F3 i" b0 O# L2 N+ J0 c) `) p: T5 P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ }3 o3 t% `* M7 {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' F; U8 r, V0 f: ?0 u2 ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 \3 ]7 K5 p( T: ^/ A, C- c, [# `% k5 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 \* {+ n. o7 L' K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 S* ~0 t$ E$ B7 o  @% B6 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 V$ g  b( s2 m) ^4 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, y) Y% L- }% I" ^# l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 {! [/ R1 C/ |% I. ]- d, _5 B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  M) n/ P3 Z+ Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( q9 U* ?* ^$ V5 c' g- y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! G5 E  l7 }! e6 Y; y+ Y3 e4 \<P>But I never did </P>
- L9 e: G( D+ j<P>但我不会 </P>
8 N. |+ R9 l! N7 M9 c; e# \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ E- j# w  V; ]' I, f( r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 a- p8 E& u/ C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, n2 f; I" y( e; }' @3 @( }4 K# q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& \1 M7 T4 o; O3 a/ h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# K) D, Z# [. E9 a3 ~# Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' [4 q4 x3 G% ~+ \- q7 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 S* _+ |# a8 V: I/ D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; `5 L( G& g" \$ M, N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- ?2 Y! c) ?* d" K- C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>