【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. {3 i7 J0 y6 E8 [7 a2 r  o我另将歌词附在此。
1 f7 e( R* ]- a1 ?. {7 R& gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 s# i; x+ v" Q. _2 _2 u# w: EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 z& K" z" c7 @+ z1 U7 Z0 J/ C( II want to confess that I love you,
5 `" Z! X, G+ z: R* P  rBut I never did
; _3 B/ G+ [+ A" x- oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 N* G9 A1 w3 Q- V2 n7 Z/ Q$ Z/ t; e/ vIf today isn’t too late,
) U2 I$ E1 R& f7 r8 V8 V; ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" a; l' v% g7 @, R3 Y2 h( W% aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) B/ s  c! L8 j4 R; qCan I entrust it to you?
" a# i! B- [! [3 y5 g5 P3 fEntrust my love within your heart
9 q& u. |$ e3 t5 }9 L. G9 [: ?Love… just the word love
5 u3 \' E8 Z4 _% OWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 _+ \- Z! o* @" |1 S5 Z- ^9 f4 {I want to confess that I love you,
* Z& S* C0 x3 P: J0 s2 RBut I never did
! R7 n2 h( q$ [( f3 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" q  [  {9 o' X% e$ V1 Y7 @+ `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  b# z1 P% F' o# Z' F  u$ ^3 f4 S$ ^  \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 g* G- r& S' e- T# _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ A( |) L  C5 d0 @; H* @: n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ p* f. v, f( \; v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. Y) E# z+ L) a, }/ D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) q% Z8 u* Z6 n% R% Z. W8 {6 `: @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" O( y0 ^" i. X/ }, A5 o+ \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* K$ j' V; k8 Q9 Q5 ^1 ]) Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# O4 W/ _% E: U8 ]% w0 ]" M: `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; w1 Q- c+ G  w9 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ U4 L3 z2 q9 e4 p: v: m9 b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ e6 _1 z2 s9 J, f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' }) _; L& G7 i1 Z2 O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: N4 z5 n6 B3 x7 t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 c0 s/ _. i/ n) A  j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; k: ~( [) _! [( x1 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) C3 N  K+ ^2 V) y* B& u7 K  u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 z3 o- k; k, G1 ?  d7 g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) q; h+ l) Z& x8 J4 x/ a- Z: A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 s8 X$ F9 u5 [" `$ }# V/ @/ P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ Y6 ]0 c3 D* l$ ?( s<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" q2 \; h1 J4 ]" ]$ E* e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 K% m* o+ y8 i$ J/ y0 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 S  V  \* m# P0 Z  S# ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) w; a3 r8 u0 ?; C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ q9 w5 i- C0 W8 ^! q) Z% i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" D- n( O, S: P' t$ I0 A/ {, {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# X$ c& p7 V' _$ I7 n, U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- V0 d* |( Z6 C, q4 A7 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. l6 m4 E1 _0 b; |0 R1 l! ^' @% }) N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 \  {# {$ Q  T0 T2 q# k3 o* c9 u5 A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 V& V# ]5 s2 m4 S, {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 z7 U9 E( x4 s& S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>