【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 E9 m: s0 @4 uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 E3 i4 u: G  x& J- F0 sI already loved you with all my heart
# ]8 q. `, W1 q8 B2 u7 [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ f2 ?4 D! D6 c3 n" g  uI would probably know how you feel
3 g6 w& O8 I8 T- t7 c9 \. |( qLove… just the word love
1 k6 ?6 z2 y# s- o+ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 D1 \8 ]9 [7 ?8 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ h* Q4 [& O  c% J. z2 r8 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% Z0 L6 J+ |$ _# r" }& tI want to confess that I love you,
6 t- c1 z2 U9 x! Z9 W$ S* @' m8 e! mBut I never did
" H' M) r$ c' U/ W( \  o  g+ QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& Q  }6 g. X# v% \5 W1 \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 {: D  W% a) d0 g, g, g4 L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. |! K* q7 \. c: \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; R$ w$ u- c( P/ M9 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 ?, f$ S4 K' e% y4 U% |& a; [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 c* N! s! o# |) e5 z! T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* g! n# W; D% _7 W4 {: b4 m2 `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 \0 Y$ ^; ?0 S/ |0 r% t' v' s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! \- }+ Y; K4 X! {/ p. S; o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 j4 x, g/ z' a- G4 V% i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 R  U& W; _$ Q( U) H<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ v+ f" e0 \! n1 E7 p$ r1 y4 q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% U0 O4 N6 P& J9 |7 S' p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) i  ^) Q. f# H8 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 e. q4 U9 A6 C+ @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 x, U$ A# C( c4 _8 _) X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 Y5 _! }! D9 ]' T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 o4 i+ u3 r& k9 i" F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 L- a' Z' `% x7 f<P>But I never did </P>
; C6 ~" u* \( A$ c9 S1 g<P>但我不会 </P>
, f+ W/ ]: s5 \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  x# N- [0 z+ y- O" |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! u6 A7 D# T. _) J* V, c; |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# J1 {7 `% C& v, r1 H+ j# W) N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) I! u/ {: K2 b! k) Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" I% h+ J2 n- B) y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 x5 H$ R8 Y8 L6 t$ y: o* K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ?! i- D; q9 n/ M$ P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- F$ x0 R/ ]1 s6 u- P  T9 k0 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 ~; ?0 \$ e. @/ h9 s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 P7 O. t+ N3 J2 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>