【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ v" x' m, _% D, J我另将歌词附在此。
- [  T" i- P# U  P' UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ w5 O5 F/ J! WWe meet and talk everyday,
, Y5 q6 G/ |9 s3 f- QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ r! t2 I6 N$ D. V. a6 o& vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( w. [; n+ A) s! J# T" o, {3 ?% xBut I never did
4 J! V' S! b* EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! i$ c2 k3 L: C0 M% z$ d+ H7 U; TIf today isn’t too late,
8 T& w. L4 u* ~' `$ pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ U  b! b& n- X' f# a6 a" ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& l5 R% f, I4 t# I: u/ ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ P5 A% d! s8 q" [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 b8 d5 F8 A3 y/ I9 g  cIf today isn’t too late,
/ E1 ~1 o0 b2 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 ~5 u1 _2 G* Q6 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* Q# i+ o* p( S. [9 p0 E2 zCan I entrust it to you?
* K7 Z3 h! J3 U8 V# j3 ZEntrust my love within your heart
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5 G! F1 R* ?; ?6 h: x& U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% S! f  w/ ~7 v1 ?7 M8 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 @) i6 B2 C, [2 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) h) r. `2 D9 t) X' {: L( G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- l4 {) ^9 X6 c5 d0 F9 _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; M$ R  [; I7 P" a: D<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 Y& D) Y2 T9 c, E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 V  C; h) N6 S* Z2 z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 i) H* {. t7 R3 b6 {* T9 @7 o1 ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" p! U9 t( j; t5 a$ U  n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  `* w* I4 U9 g* o. m% A6 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 ~0 G% P: F% H, r8 p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% H  ^+ k+ O# }) m9 D2 e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  f% w; q, L# c+ q, ]: X6 ]) G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 u7 P% O. K( k' ^+ s, P9 w  w. d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  I) O8 z- ]  V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 |" S, g, z3 B9 G. S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. N1 Q1 U. q: `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 Q, w6 @* ?' y% N: z' E" u- n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. O3 v7 S* O2 z; [; J. L) G) `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* L" {% _1 Q6 ^# n' J2 {6 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 X/ o# a- B( H! ?8 r5 c6 [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! h: A/ _# A( ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# _! n8 h) ~2 z! ?5 _( q# K* I$ m. w<P>但我不会 </P>
7 i( Z/ i6 `7 Q& R5 U# L: c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ N7 e( t! C8 u; E& t) j8 @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 c8 U* V7 _! S( M9 l7 l2 z# u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 G$ M  Y% Y/ d) }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# K( ^1 _8 v, h1 D) U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% ~# a9 t" I1 a# L% N, K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! L3 ^7 |- _/ [: H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% y, B% r( G3 c0 i% q. K* g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 x; [% F, E+ R$ P1 W* m<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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) v7 D; K/ l, ?$ t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 m5 S8 Z! @3 S/ {# T+ s( t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>