【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; a/ D1 a$ G1 R* \& }8 G1 GWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% j: a+ X- A! U4 j: U; J' G/ CI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- i; R* J  c6 T; G' h3 [$ w9 hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ v  P; f( t. a: x+ P( _$ tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 X4 p' D4 v6 _4 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ n- M5 p. B$ H' i9 ]3 [3 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. T- T2 w. n4 I0 h# {Love… just the word love
3 k1 U0 a: F6 z0 M/ j; z5 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: K7 m1 F+ _1 f! t* ~, J# `/ I$ bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ~3 ^) n) p+ X9 E6 a5 E6 R5 }! W  FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ |3 \0 M% u# y+ A8 s; L; XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ L4 b# |1 Q! K' G9 [Can I entrust it to you?
5 a; `: Y. b; S8 n& \3 H( l% uEntrust my love within your heart

* J) T2 c/ a- N- F4 U$ v( C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! P& P6 p  T& B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 g% F5 o: w2 L+ P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 |: |8 J* V# O' a4 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 v9 _/ U  ^5 U6 }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, N3 [$ y; N/ {8 m7 {8 _# w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 p; [& l$ k. p7 n& n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 R+ h2 a( z# X/ k5 I9 X- P& k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 @, \8 X9 t0 w1 i0 ]- T5 w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! a2 {7 F" t0 `# A& W7 M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 y  p" v& w  z1 [( ?2 A4 j3 {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. Z" H+ y$ R; K4 t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& M  c8 I9 [: P% C5 Y% R3 w& v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ r/ K, T( S- t4 G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: ]% q  }" j0 x- m: ^, O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" U- {0 H6 k2 W6 Z' y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) l- x- o9 b; }$ I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' R" R: B& _, l2 r- ^9 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ E' g2 v- S  _' @9 x" d/ r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  r3 |6 F' _, O3 u, Y9 ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: z( @6 {) o, x/ _! ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# O6 X+ M9 U5 _+ M9 T! u<P>But I never did </P>
" p: L# v: c. c# K0 _3 ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; Z2 G6 B* {: E3 ]" M( u6 S: ]/ E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 W) Q# R1 [0 [; m, T* }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: ]+ E8 C! C: O5 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& X6 @: f$ H# }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: s8 ^2 R) I, g' F" K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 |& u$ x) G5 z0 _  @( n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# W% H' h9 F$ y  d0 @- I- ~! B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& B: o) Y  l' Q- _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( j2 `3 d1 Z" R$ h! L' f$ [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& m& S7 _& a1 B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# A8 q9 E+ J4 Z5 P; ]# `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% f, a( I. [( o: R; s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 |2 O3 o% Q" c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>