【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# u+ q. S3 ?6 Z# w. kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" l- F$ v/ b" ?/ bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# `6 u( U8 }4 \( ]  I1 IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ [# p( i7 r% D& ~  XLove… just the word love
$ Q) C" a$ h. ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ r9 ?2 q* |6 l- D6 h# kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) ^% J6 N, Y" X* v: \3 k+ CEntrust my love within your heart
) C6 F+ t5 x1 y4 pLove… just the word love
! j! F( g0 a7 _Why is it so difficult to express?
% J. e+ H( _8 l! {% fI want to confess that I love you,
' X% [7 o, P- L+ L' M5 K8 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 ?% o9 e7 z, ], W+ lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 m, c/ _* }7 B& zCan I entrust it to you?
( I, W4 W, U3 W" `# e8 N! tEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' F4 V1 P- ^' `Entrust my love within your heart

% ]7 ?  p0 s* [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ o9 C+ u5 ^  Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 _  \* y3 S3 o2 Z- T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ v- Y: ?1 @. P, Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 o; H' L* G- E) n7 Q0 a: _" C) X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! `6 i0 X- t) }+ [( b" y8 A4 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& _" q( C! M3 N$ v+ @" Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% \% c! b9 W  R$ n/ P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) l: P9 _: N- t1 Q' _" `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 j0 B4 d; _: O$ O: `$ u! m+ v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- [, G$ g% k+ z" G5 c4 R0 T- t- ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 P: a+ c; k( O$ f$ R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% q% i1 O& ^6 ?<P>但我不会</P>
$ r) e+ }7 `  [( P! w* W+ {8 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# Y; w! z( S3 s/ A, _, _$ _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 w( s8 C( Y( [* v) j5 j8 N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( o& k( D$ Z# O* H8 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 p. C: Y- z( a$ u# W1 @2 j/ J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( K' y  C! [& M+ Z8 `% S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ G+ {+ r7 z% a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; S; H/ x# Q7 [4 C6 v) ]3 |" @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 w7 o! f: j6 A0 n) R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 h2 B* d5 L4 |. _4 \1 @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' D; ^& `) V* _" n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( Z- |3 y" y8 _& W7 A, g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ ?! {$ s& }4 A- D: n9 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 F  Y3 F' Z6 R( R& F: F+ L: ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 u# `  I( `3 u6 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 x# R% a  S% e) g# c$ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 o# }4 f6 N0 v- n8 X: q0 N# r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- F, `: U. K3 T! p, n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: a/ N/ ?' {+ Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  F) X4 Q* t% [9 I, X* K* y+ z6 c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>