【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. ~; E# A2 `8 t  N9 J/ w我另将歌词附在此。
# x0 @' U$ A/ }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  S+ P; p3 s9 b6 I4 I" |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) `, P4 s: ]" E/ E* ~2 C# W) d6 GFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 x/ U' y, [1 v/ UWe meet and talk everyday,
% I' i+ H" A. s0 ^+ yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 c* N9 I  v; WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ ^- d& r% \# U* b9 TI would probably know how you feel
0 U5 {) g" h$ R' @) U2 E% eLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 L# F5 T2 A8 `( ]* w. n! _' iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ A- ]; ~/ g: {+ f7 f! A& EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: d$ [- l) @) N# CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ I$ t- G; _) [/ O7 C0 N& H8 \* [, wIf today isn’t too late,
8 b' ~. u% ?" j9 ^, T9 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' i7 L- o! X8 d: Y' `. rCan I entrust it to you?
4 d, ~) ?/ Z0 a' d" wEntrust my love within your heart
4 u$ l7 V% X. s3 R5 ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 K7 g7 Z+ w: ~- N7 U  U. D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ Y* k* g- W0 ^. |# _' ~% I. V1 i3 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) z: _, e# I( w& z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" o0 |4 H5 i& e) F; U- W' O& r7 z# W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: _5 W+ Z( s6 E7 Y1 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. u1 ]: b* A0 R% y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" ^! {$ v. j  |4 }, {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& J, }. Z3 G0 v$ L* H: |4 V. b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 K6 H  r3 p; b& w- L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 @! F. s6 J. A; D) d( Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 H- f4 P4 X- \+ D" I<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' j: G0 G  _5 ~8 Z& h- S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; r: Y/ G$ S' d* q  _3 B! E" B7 H) k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% m1 F$ C- L7 ]. L/ t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& i# D$ ]! g" t5 C" n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 w  A2 N8 C' j/ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 B9 h3 O7 t1 ^- f0 u8 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 \' A  k8 ?( p* V. ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; }* p& k! I' ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ I( ?; W/ d9 f- V9 |/ g<P>But I never did </P>
$ I9 u5 W; \" o) {& c$ h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: J5 }) `, n" D( H/ \' l1 k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) o% \# U# x, D6 I) ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: w! C5 e. H9 q$ |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( d* H% R$ [5 s# ]+ b0 q$ e. D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ r' U0 H  o! m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. ^+ ?3 l" u; f, S9 W7 O<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 d9 K5 F8 Y& K/ J0 h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 D5 p5 f$ A2 D0 z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& b0 [6 Z: U# ]# p3 }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- [) e- b/ ^6 q8 R5 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 M( K; j* Q9 H" U9 y, l1 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>