【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 K/ p! v) W9 j我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- a, n. ]  w( o" LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 Y! ^/ ^& N; t4 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! D' k  ^0 R' }* R0 A: m1 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
; d3 G2 m) B2 j4 t. H# _1 wI want to confess that I love you,
+ b* U1 V/ P- ~! p8 s  wBut I never did
1 A, W: t/ {1 \- N4 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  X! T$ ]1 V, Q4 h0 y+ r1 I8 }Love… just the word love
& `' O% N5 E3 d: o  a! tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" n- _1 I. S/ X( k) `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- P- y; {7 L0 U3 J( p; w" g$ G, TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: h, d. ~* @/ v, bCan I entrust it to you?
+ A3 \5 C2 i+ k$ p7 s& `- mEntrust my love within your heart
1 E3 b6 o1 g, p* G0 k$ NCan I entrust it to you?
; ?* n# g9 _- |' i% L5 t) N' lEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 n; f% w. |" }8 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 n; I7 P- `4 L) `1 ~4 L& b6 V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; ]! V- c* u& l" \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 I2 Q0 N/ D6 ]' D# M1 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% w. ?" g; S8 j2 P' k- i  n7 T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 V# s. M# B, s* r) \8 w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' G2 Z$ J$ {1 C: K! d4 S7 G1 y6 W( R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; ]- s4 F6 P/ O/ `- {/ U/ N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 G' `- n; j* J. x( {, c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" j( k, z& n: X: I- t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 `+ V3 s9 r( a* S" Q8 |2 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 c) l) r+ F1 Z  J; |7 t4 t  P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% W- h& p/ l( P* ]0 D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ z! q+ s4 I& G$ |7 z, s, S' w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ b( R9 y3 R$ K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% \% ~4 C5 k2 \! M; }: N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 v5 d7 j* ~2 S7 S$ j7 U0 x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. q. o, l6 N) T! Y! ]8 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% s, c/ @. Y! T3 B( N( _8 ~) N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% v% J4 M6 X& o4 i  J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 k# K1 E; ?- ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ i2 U& N) D# c5 G3 g' R% D7 Q- o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# z6 I- z2 ~0 q, B/ O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 M" y  {- l( [! W0 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& D& r5 o& q+ E) w  S' i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* Z/ u- k  B( D, ~( _5 y/ Y- `3 W+ c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ ^6 {. Q9 |  ], n* Y/ f5 o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' t" ~& z* F% r4 G3 c2 I  w. _7 U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% K) v/ w2 v6 l6 r; _* m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>