【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& x; X" w* x" [- |8 J0 s! {, A我另将歌词附在此。
+ Y4 W6 d3 [8 C* H1 j- gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) S% B  P' r$ V# vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. N6 S4 [  s$ q* Y5 `: q3 VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  n3 K' o' c. LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, R' [* a2 J3 L) O- Z  AI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' C5 }: b1 r4 ^: F1 ~# {Why is it so difficult to express?
! _5 Q! O8 N7 \8 R- `5 y+ K( ~, h+ xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) |2 K( Y$ S9 h$ L9 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 h6 x2 @  S6 j" ], yIf today isn’t too late,
* ~" x' F( y4 l% ^% B" q) PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% t4 h* v* |3 H' ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# i0 [+ \% [  ?# x2 {' c1 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! z( Q/ X5 L: b/ ^+ fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! W5 f& W8 S( A( \9 `/ ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 x# [, C$ _: i0 r( f+ Z+ Q8 @6 ?Entrust my love within your heart
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& o# a- p+ A+ A1 v: Z8 r; R% h. B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, j- h3 z) q5 R1 g/ Z) Z" [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# _' R! ~: a* [" P2 M/ l! [  F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# Y. h/ T$ d, t) Q+ l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' L/ y9 m# r9 R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ _  g8 M& b: z8 C% V0 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ y6 ~; n9 ]2 D% T/ a! z6 ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; G" ^% s* h& u! ^& Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 r. J$ k- A# h; T' F/ x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 p6 W0 l9 r7 F, _2 I# W" G, F6 V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ Q* q) D9 S" `7 I& c" U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: Q8 p8 `9 Y  O+ t" ~1 A3 `- @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# \3 y% t* R9 @$ ]  l5 \; ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 T2 L" N" s% `9 M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: ~$ q1 O# t9 |  a% |6 v4 S% P4 b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ b: ~2 h( v  G" {2 a3 o! u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 ?  T9 f0 r9 H+ U8 z% Q: R7 B1 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& Z) q, U) }6 k5 t$ n$ s0 O) a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- i! E- ^6 H/ T1 W: F; _3 A& k4 H, j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 Q& C$ u2 k8 y: f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 G5 o6 g" I* b; ^5 N<P>但我不会 </P>
0 c/ [' ?' i( S3 X* d) ~  a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 }% |6 r1 x+ c+ r5 G8 k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ @' J: u3 V: C3 x! b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. K: Z* I: ~. }$ y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 T  V+ L* G% v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# n% M" O) W1 H# M- a# A( g/ e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 R  i  S  Q" m' S) K* a. D5 T# n( f+ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; C2 `- M6 u9 O! Q" h( v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 s, n7 l: d, Q4 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: Y4 e$ e+ j! Z! y$ \" H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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" M+ U' x5 i: c1 f+ T6 |) [" A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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