【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 S; X7 p. O9 S7 N- l3 N我另将歌词附在此。
" I7 K; |* W6 U3 c+ e4 j1 Q2 X5 BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 N/ C8 a, d" l! j% A* i5 e9 EI already loved you with all my heart
; E- V  [1 b7 m2 _We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- F+ W" Q+ E( v4 zLove… just the word love
, ?; x3 d% m  b* {; k% z) @Why is it so difficult to express?
. S1 Q2 ^7 E, V6 l1 yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 s, e* q, u% B3 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 |8 j1 u' q9 }) f4 TIf today isn’t too late,
5 X6 r& Z- a" N1 j+ e5 j3 S4 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ c# ?2 F* E8 o6 S! z& S% B$ MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 {5 ]4 D' G: @  ]I want to confess that I love you,
! d, W0 T5 K4 l- c" |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 A6 U. ]% R) b8 I/ k: i) sIf today isn’t too late,
: L+ r  I; E9 N* g% `, }4 H8 O- LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# t( Z( L  F) r# ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& E$ v1 g. D" ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 k1 H# a2 y  ?2 b: C0 g<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ `5 \; X8 J! Z. f! [3 M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 D: Y5 g" z$ Y+ i$ B" n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 U, u2 X6 ^1 N+ `* E* O8 l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ B2 N. P+ ?2 z4 c1 _* k- v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! V, Z; o/ r) P+ I# ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( w1 |, a" Q  {4 {& x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 k  g3 o$ Z% q( F1 }! X. h- Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 A0 f8 B9 R. t/ b+ u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 L0 ~* v# F1 r3 X$ d/ Q( ]! t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 w2 {  K- ?) e& M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ |1 S% D; I1 H7 c- {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 q) o( }% ]" B4 \( Q( ~1 [! ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ P9 n( d( M2 S9 i: M/ y- ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. b% f; o; l6 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% a- P9 i$ n. W: ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- _' v- D6 w  @- D7 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 C9 F5 F# p  l+ A& B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 y3 k' g! ]; \. {$ V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! l/ \- S3 V9 k# ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' v, }5 M; }3 E1 W2 ]' k8 |8 ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 y! W6 E* z9 e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 n* A' b) A9 a0 x5 {+ ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ g1 R9 u' m. V, m2 n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( a1 Z& g) N9 Q0 P, o+ i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; y1 A3 f3 h& Z& b9 \" V. n5 D. l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 u2 |# W0 _/ |8 X9 ~+ h. _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) q0 @2 T* v7 ?6 p! V/ x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! Z- B* e4 Y* c" X  }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ p& Z5 g3 [; r/ j, D5 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' f( Y) |, B) E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 L% f9 K# M4 s( y/ m<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! {* ~' V, s2 k, T+ e: V+ K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. A* D1 n. S, N$ a% Y- ?; m5 e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* C# P3 U8 H: Z! S2 q9 u& c  t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>