【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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; `( W, \3 \. N. ^" _' _我另将歌词附在此。
7 |; E2 {6 W/ oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ q5 u* z2 X! {0 u# D( B- {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ d1 j; w+ C; o4 }' U! {I already loved you with all my heart
  d' J2 O1 j9 f1 i& a& xWe meet and talk everyday,
, q! _& X5 L6 i9 r: dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' c9 ^; ~: d& \2 q6 zI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, m3 L! @' d5 n" }( g# k3 ]; TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# s. n9 R6 i. L( G# kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 ?1 n' \4 X5 Z6 n" u: u9 z$ ^/ sIf today isn’t too late,
8 o" W2 `" w0 S6 O7 EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 k7 b1 ^! M. M  e+ OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 m6 \# O- [1 I9 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ r9 f$ E5 L6 P3 T# G$ @- OLove… just the word love
  C3 ?# }2 g4 b( K, W! I! TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- Z6 n- G% o, a) [# ]3 I* DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  R$ c4 c- e% AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 F3 O) P9 Y: d# @+ s% G9 |; ^Entrust my love within your heart
) I" q5 J" x9 h4 ]9 H& wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ e$ w9 Z2 k2 T/ L: r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" @' h1 P% m2 n( X/ F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( U. R' s) a& {# j; L) @# q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 ?9 h; R2 Z8 O/ h: i/ k: e* x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! ]! f4 K# T; B6 A% C1 c" Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  H: i2 W  _9 S$ q/ b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( d0 ?9 |! H) P0 r' i/ S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# s/ I6 s& C( t$ O  U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ P: [: _$ {. O8 U3 @* ~6 b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ k2 r- U. M1 k+ J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% ?2 X# `2 O- L9 E0 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& i7 h9 F  M' U- a9 U+ T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* b- y. H! |" ^1 z4 c, ^9 w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! V. ~7 ^* {, B. e* l* q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& Z" E0 i2 {/ z: y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 w$ s+ ^1 h3 s( K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' F( k% x5 r& F' l& }) d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 ]2 {6 S4 X8 \6 m. m$ ?6 e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ F# ]) C# a6 \, [: k( t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. y' u' a6 Q6 m  u( J; H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* z! r+ S+ q& F' Q7 g/ n<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% j2 M) x) t% A. r" p: B/ [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 j) z3 d; o0 y6 W5 O7 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Z& L" J5 U4 X% K9 z+ K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; P* ^3 j+ I; P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 P4 L9 _) q0 }- G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; E2 v: H% V% @, V. O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 ]7 p+ ]- `5 w( W/ d" D4 ]0 I" Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ C1 v  F- ]7 V# w6 Z/ L) c1 t3 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ ~7 X# t, a' y* U: W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. P# Q3 C  F! x& w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 a1 S# a5 C' k- [" B% T2 V1 |/ @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ K% h. b$ e0 q* e+ K$ R& U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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; e5 {6 `$ k5 E! n2 V. _$ e% \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 j1 [4 H( b1 M3 ]2 ?8 _4 z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" D. Z- `: V6 f2 o# m3 i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>