【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 e& i" X# e/ |+ @% u/ l歌词我附在后面。
+ W9 Q" M  ^- o+ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 ]$ |7 C0 ^" m$ H7 F, kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) @4 e: u8 M* x7 N% hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 L( ^4 v3 B3 o& G" J" V0 `4 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  u: B/ l( Z/ T7 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 Y1 j' Z) c% mEvery other word you utter is love
- ^0 r' L  r6 Z# l9 O/ t& G" lI really want to know just how much you love me
7 {" e. c/ T/ _/ x4 M! \0 n  LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 E  a9 e* ]6 }, S2 U" AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) s( \7 ~8 X. O4 {& eI’m still filled with fear
7 X, Z+ v8 O/ r; q  H- A4 B/ I4 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 Z( |2 `$ D/ }' {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 B9 c/ ~% \9 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 ?  I* f6 l  [8 M& D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 G! h) F7 Q/ v, x5 ]/ j, o" O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ F' U4 q6 R% R- c7 ]' @  I) c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ P3 Z7 }7 g1 `7 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 X: z( j( `- M5 y$ A6 ^- _" [<P>你无需担心</P>
1 w. U3 M4 }; Q# C( I2 f5 h1 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; K  N" i# C" T0 C7 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 W: r- {$ }  s( J# u$ o! ^8 c2 s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) G3 |7 h* t8 z6 U. X5 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& a5 Q; O2 P  L8 g7 m6 y3 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" ~; P6 R- p$ [9 _, {1 \! \9 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 o0 O3 l: `6 p4 `2 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' X( F! C5 ]# v( \4 \3 t( [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ K- C3 V2 t  N" d8 C( V* w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( D3 S. z2 c6 [2 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 p* `+ }# h2 p- \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; _% @2 Y) [* j) t' s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, n, `# c/ `+ b& w; \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 A9 u1 R3 ]  x/ \% N( y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: H$ Z0 C/ h* c1 z: M) |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* @9 O# k' O& n" _) }& x/ M  t<P>I regret not dying</P>
* z% O3 M+ @; o- V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 F8 ?: B5 B5 S& h9 ]& r& Z5 N+ v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" |4 P# U% R5 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 r/ D% S& K, w' {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 z& U: e/ ~& I4 P% k$ I2 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>