【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 @* B) R/ Y8 g& b- TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 ^/ _4 s9 w; C" i6 Y) t  N# @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# x1 u6 y% X  d4 b* A% X& H+ LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) |5 F. ~7 N% c3 O& H/ B1 a- pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% p* |, e9 ^# {: _4 O, zI really want to know just how much you love me
+ L; d4 K" a% `- }) p/ wI love you I love you with all my heart
0 w5 \7 p0 [6 a) _+ tNothing can compare to my love
/ ]; N) F- @. z+ J5 h% W3 K5 t9 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 j7 e  W( U. T' [! A5 Z6 @2 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" Z/ [+ a$ U' g& _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) e; {6 k- F  Z; S8 b7 WI regret not dying
0 \% V" @* n; _# q; u. V* S8 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 p& k9 T# i# B4 k% i* G; i: e( vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 U* g$ ~. X9 l$ t8 F0 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 R7 U  P; T% b  t- r' I6 J! r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, W2 _8 t6 [$ b# O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ H6 B4 T$ m; u- \) }4 C: N4 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 y% m2 F( \6 _  A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 Y+ l, a5 j1 J+ j  p9 Q1 v  U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; b# P/ q+ t7 E# Y. D" G9 b% l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! o+ G9 `. r% ~2 w' s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; Y- Y$ B( W% _4 p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* `  ^% K/ p4 X! G1 J, Y& _6 a/ f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ d. Q4 V& \4 `" R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 t: Y. J2 G0 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 l" p4 s: B4 H2 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ~& y+ Y# e( O- b8 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 @9 K$ m. f) j0 I+ h7 h/ Y% j; q, U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 _3 E0 G7 D( E* V  T. b+ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% f1 z) l* `' u4 }4 g, H; C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ y) V: C4 o. q( i% Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ `- t! Y: @  \& G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& @% a9 U- {& |! ?8 T3 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ?  ?* @. Q  p" |* a8 v3 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 M* N  ^# Y+ y$ H: p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& }4 C, f; d1 f& _% r$ F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! D. s7 g9 n: M/ v& w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; h) e( K+ d1 }2 h5 {0 M- j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( I8 q* i* S9 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 l6 \; s+ S0 o. _5 d0 A! W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  Y- e+ ^1 q! t: z$ Q2 D. `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ Q+ P" F# m* s; A  l8 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. b9 {. T# e% u! b, r( Y/ c我请你剖开它

$ ~# o0 [. A. O- S( y/ Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ n* h7 {0 T- r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>