【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  K- R5 Y) W& X3 ?5 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ |' z" M2 e% T7 {' _+ ^. ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( u0 e. E) y1 \4 ?# KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& l1 Z& u6 q4 P) }' N$ iWith the moon kissing it every night
$ R' P' C- F) @) K# Y+ a; i+ e" h8 dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; y" R# e! e2 a& z0 r( D3 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 t3 n* D& |* o) ~" d- ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 Y) [+ @. r# K! f) p, o- PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* A/ j' T0 v  yI want so much to see inside your heart
' y7 k4 U' h+ z, zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 P! ]/ F- J. |2 W' g$ ?# K6 x/ ]1 h* tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( n1 V9 p4 x" k' g  p7 t. x5 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ V9 ?( A  \: P& e9 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: {( ?8 a1 I4 U" `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( O/ j/ Y9 x+ `+ E* q( D3 }& N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( m" t. T, ^5 H( \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ~, l, r; X! E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 n3 Q6 ]' X2 H3 w% G2 A6 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' {- z$ `2 V1 z; v2 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, Z/ O: S0 W5 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* j0 s2 L5 L1 \6 Q; S4 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" A) }3 C) v1 o  a' ~0 L' r9 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 H) ]* J: p. n2 U# ~! r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" e- f/ m9 S8 N. M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 m5 p* H1 n, ~/ w4 p$ i* t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 \& [3 p5 k3 l. E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 Z0 {8 K% m4 P4 Z, J" g, L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 p3 y! K: h. s" F+ v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ z6 A# b" p; B/ o# Y" n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( l7 L: ]& m* {  D( S9 v4 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* ~0 `' ~; I1 K( x" S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 }  P% w1 X$ ~# X7 }3 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ _8 P$ _. r: q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 P1 ~% p+ L7 s; @) P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ]1 M' h$ ]$ }4 N% P5 d0 Z) H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* V1 I# k- i+ {" o! s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, Q* }7 [! f% k# [; t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ @# i$ H# G( o5 v3 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 _6 ]' r9 B; \8 ?% J  K1 ^6 N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( M+ Z& y6 s6 [7 v1 ~! s4 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 _5 T1 o4 f2 V3 j2 j" ?0 L/ ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>