【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! F- c8 Y, M0 r3 y& u7 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# h" h% |, Q8 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 |9 ]+ S) v/ f; u; tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' v4 d5 D8 k, T! N. x7 BWith the moon kissing it every night
+ H, }& c+ T) C' f7 z  pSeeing the sky content with its love
7 Y+ }- ~7 l$ vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% H0 q$ v7 j" L. p% L: XYou needn’t fear anything
+ Q' y2 |/ l. U' XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, @: c; i1 H7 j: V- \; HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 X, o0 _6 J& V5 U5 F- |Nothing can compare to my love
$ Z- \' Q$ d3 @5 w' W! k* ~3 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 g  X" H# B  uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ ~: y% ~: J" }0 ?8 q  ?/ e& N" KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ i; Y0 R: Z; O2 w2 K% Y4 oI’m still filled with fear
: t: A9 ~! R8 @7 V) vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' g3 Z1 k' f0 i1 J0 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 G3 Z6 W, U) U5 n2 T2 a9 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 x& r! n3 e! J8 k" W2 J% w* L: D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" w+ ^" Y7 a6 z* n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- ]2 f% x9 |: Z; j4 o( F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 F! I2 K- z( X' ]" |" i, M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 O. W! [, r5 t( Q" j, \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( s$ v% h9 t3 }, V2 v; W! j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( @. O( T" l0 b, r" m! Q5 L; r! ]( x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' L9 v8 B6 i, I: @( f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& u: G9 h' e/ b9 S. m' M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 O( ?3 ^( ]2 H/ L6 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( g' c' E3 M) |* h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ T$ e7 x8 A7 ~$ X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  D; x1 b. Q/ a& T  n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) |. p2 A% w- E0 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ E; E" j: p# m9 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. C! l% p  m9 @2 S0 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: F% i8 L/ O- Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  `7 p  r# Z, ~$ A( P- s7 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 {9 p: x* d! u; {/ K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ t/ E) Y6 z5 m9 P5 B' Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ^) L- u1 s1 z6 j4 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& q2 U, i; p$ o& e+ ~6 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& t0 F/ |* X! K/ [( C& a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( P7 E6 }) O: K6 n5 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, k( ~/ E( E; o/ A0 j4 K# b7 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; M) D& v3 w# a9 u- X- n我请你剖开它

& _: F! F- h+ Z5 m- J8 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  M& p- x% e2 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>