【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 C( e- X; H% X4 t# b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" C: u$ }; h6 v0 t  k- HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 d7 i% L& @, d6 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 V! |; K2 Z& H8 x3 `* [2 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% U8 [, N4 E( O6 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; u& K5 N9 w& E/ u8 J* e9 _* S% q! p# RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 L; D0 d0 r8 }7 sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  J' y% l7 ^8 A4 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 z3 H6 s2 m0 f( b, wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# }, ^. D: k, U3 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* }1 F6 Z: I- F* h" P- [; @  AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% T2 T! [* M7 j! n3 \  M+ qI regret not dying
) i+ W1 Z% ^* ^( N! ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# N4 I" H/ ~' O3 j4 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  s  ^' b: R! d9 t" `9 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q( y$ w1 H5 i6 v' D, U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* j0 Q0 H2 J3 g/ B0 x7 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# A, k* g4 {* }7 @* _" s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: [! t" S8 }* @/ S+ \# O$ @4 N: R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Y; F+ i7 E- V+ S& D$ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 W+ d, T# J/ y( [( r; ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' G  Q9 K) ?  i9 v$ N' R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 _" ^* A3 A- b$ t) I. a5 X* W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 a' c# D. u! F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  q7 O+ j$ c+ X- B2 ]- w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" I- t1 e" N( T  \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  B0 n! h" t( \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 y/ `3 m  F0 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 V7 W+ Z( C2 b: e" j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, `) ]- l& e/ C! l4 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& s) b- p0 I2 h! H0 L) Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% g6 ]7 i/ J5 O8 w0 c9 ]6 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 Q$ Z) E. m& b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 E2 ]/ Z+ L* N2 U& A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 D' Y' _! `+ G4 f1 Z/ L" T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- t6 K, E3 z# j8 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 }: i% Q; v9 P6 i! W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. W1 X7 h/ c& f* N5 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# }) s0 X( N# y; t1 v) I, ?% j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' j8 R$ @- o  |+ J4 t8 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ?: H% j8 g- S  H, g, ~) m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 g2 g: J* E, E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: w% Y, q2 o$ ^  x. s1 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! f4 d8 u. `2 {4 _5 s1 o- b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# [, ?3 C( Y8 ?1 ?4 _4 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- E1 b( h8 I: M8 U% _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- i+ w& ]! i, n9 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>