【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% Q8 f! \- b- R$ b: bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Z% u; K. a3 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- g( Z, M  d. U9 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 W* a$ H' u* v: W  L: ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 Y' f) \, Q  w2 C! q' AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. N/ C& _" l) y+ L9 i; a- VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' B2 w+ K! D4 a& W0 Q# K; EI want so much to see inside your heart
- m. A) P3 k1 s9 s5 c7 T  vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  L5 D; K3 d1 [* Y" }+ zI’m still filled with fear
# t0 }3 k: o; h. z! {# {. u( Y! aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% P3 C7 x$ ~& t# o6 L7 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" y, F4 p" Q4 J' TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- B$ D+ E6 N7 |+ \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 X7 q5 Z4 B! _3 |6 H9 o1 J- @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 w% x1 X( G/ n# S7 z( Q* A. ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 \) e2 u: ]" ^+ G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 b7 f4 p# n4 H8 Q9 t1 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" d+ L# X" o: j; Y' _0 _3 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( @+ i- g  c* K/ V7 d0 h8 r/ G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 K  w; \  y4 [0 D! g; v. a1 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 P- q. E' a. U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# a4 e: T; d$ t' K& Z0 W( N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: d) J3 J1 E, z! S7 V( k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: A1 e: i4 K* p9 k& A8 q<P>你无需担心</P>
# f2 W+ V( o+ Y& B" O5 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) P* g, @# E3 s- f% @3 |) P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ T! b9 ^5 l% L6 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Z) l/ ]( d, v* W, n8 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, @/ p2 p+ K; z9 d6 [4 v/ u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 l# j, r3 J5 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! }2 u. Y* [2 X: q, ^" G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ H; w! e1 n) ]; J8 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; Z: ]( u( e6 D* O) l; y* O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 m) d3 q* \) O9 ^0 N5 x2 r- H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 C7 m6 E' |% h/ F- @! X6 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 h) X( Z+ R6 C1 a, h! K( y% `+ \, Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ I5 Z0 N5 A# w: G  p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 h# Z/ s; J/ l7 ~* ~9 z  `; |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( f! M* [' m3 C+ T" U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# n+ h1 ~8 ?0 G; [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ Y8 Y! ?) r5 G& j% w; @<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 E8 ]1 H& Q2 J" q0 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  I( Z( b* o4 ?4 Q, D/ `' @1 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 B+ Q( d8 h  `8 d7 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Z4 j  O3 @- v# e7 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 m) N) f. ?9 n. [8 E5 v" ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% ^/ v' Q, d( [1 S, _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 T6 c+ @6 e/ s- r7 N: V, q6 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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