【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ J& d$ E: c% N. e$ X' Q; D歌词我附在后面。
" X- l* v# {8 d' U5 I$ J+ Q0 S9 _( mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  e9 O# ?* `( l: f1 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" f7 Q; Y! s3 F1 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: {' v) }) C  N) _: BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ^( W' I/ I3 x* r1 ]2 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 n. b6 q" p8 `; Z/ \  C4 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 D/ _7 z% q. e- H* z$ qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  {4 m, M: x) D) u( |. @# pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 j1 V! g" b% e2 F9 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 V' S. K& F4 O0 e8 Z& k$ S- rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, ]3 t5 ?+ w4 {' OWith such a tongue as yours,
3 M" {8 m- R! iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 J4 \4 O/ \' H/ p! `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ~$ T6 G8 l% r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 u3 o7 J9 H1 z0 e/ W4 c1 S9 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& F* |1 A; e" I3 w$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 Q0 d& l1 ^' V" @: \" O# _  ~' t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! h- {* s% [7 m# Q" N* S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 D8 I# J8 _2 Y/ @+ p0 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 g4 a! a' O4 l: ^# A. [# p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, ]0 `1 U# }* e, c6 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  g: g( e( A- U" [$ V) S+ e$ i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% F6 w! P, o5 O5 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) k4 ^: ~" ~: B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! X* c* s! X8 K, N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ^% y: ?# \% }# v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- P6 ^8 z6 l# q' d6 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- J' ?8 W4 y4 H* U  j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ K. A9 ^# R+ X. r6 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: e" L6 h9 d8 W1 j8 t4 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% }: w; _: u- ?) _0 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 k- U- W, v7 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. B1 u9 R  _# [) E! V& B8 w) q6 C! h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 G; o6 q1 L3 c2 f: \0 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: I) I+ ^. d2 k+ l# Q6 ^( A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  _; w% k/ Q6 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 s5 J, `+ a( H+ G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ n1 v% l0 o: l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ K" h) p9 M% }3 G2 k, C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* \8 C4 K+ `- g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) z6 m% v* a# \& s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 b' h$ ~' B% a  }/ y* z; S/ o, W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" K* z( e& d+ A0 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- i& U. o+ h* Q$ s% ?5 m) U/ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>