【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 O5 X7 y0 {$ \( E3 J( \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 d* t+ S. `' F3 Q2 h! C6 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 C1 ^. [1 n# Z) w: [With the moon kissing it every night
. G% d+ O( b% e; [4 g5 x) TSeeing the sky content with its love
& {1 n% ^+ |; u) Q/ U4 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, b) x% ]/ i0 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' Z' G( m" G5 ], [4 Q6 V  rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 z6 ?1 G" L7 U  I! NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 `8 D. L, a' Z: P* E+ ~7 Z& DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" t/ D0 \/ ?: }4 q( ~I regret not dying
5 o/ }0 B: Y! W# H7 I" x( q: Z9 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 }. c1 u7 z: `8 KWith such a tongue as yours,
0 w" v- Y7 J: Y; _* [. X0 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 R9 m. Q4 V' i% cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ _% K7 Y( b; n& d/ B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; L) S, U+ j. K9 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ K, x6 Q# v7 p3 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 |% y0 v- d8 V' @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 f% q5 b$ P5 q2 a, i8 Y6 }/ Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& V7 G5 ^5 \) B9 Q8 Q* l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# w& [6 D0 R) i3 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 V1 A$ t4 {9 D2 f# `/ P5 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 K) I+ `: K" G8 U5 W9 e. ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 Y# N: U1 w! m4 @" X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( H# X3 {  `+ Z) Y, Z% n* J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ?* W5 ^) |" y3 ^- l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ k) d% X" n  p8 K3 y9 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* H$ Z+ l" E$ v% ]' a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& T/ T, c3 r+ ^1 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 X, x( v1 }4 Y# g% A- R. ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 q& }. k/ [+ @- x, t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  [/ O1 a0 z7 t4 h# x4 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, X: h: @+ |: b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 A( L; e0 r( z; h( Z3 U0 e* W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" U$ K/ Z( ^' ^/ f1 O6 s' G<P>I regret not dying</P>
  e2 U0 w. l9 ~$ U' V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ^$ y/ F! E8 Z, ^" }$ t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 v4 m$ A  N- t! a% B7 z& C, k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' m  p9 Q# O$ U8 p4 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. U9 u" a1 g! W1 K" R3 u0 T/ G; A7 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>