【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 T9 A( I) k  n& H! v- n$ LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  x3 L. V; G9 x! ^# ?) u6 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' v) p9 ]' I2 DSeeing the sky content with its love
$ F3 Z; S  m+ k! ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ^% L5 x& i* Y3 J5 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 s4 Y) ~3 }+ s/ `( YEvery other word you utter is love
9 }  q, x7 v! OI really want to know just how much you love me
. z$ [; Y( z3 F  V+ iI love you I love you with all my heart
2 K0 A- m* p% r+ w  W* lNothing can compare to my love
8 ~7 r1 C7 X9 T. yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& O/ t/ U' l5 m6 B' V$ fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# G3 W! T3 a9 |- b! A- e# z; II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# i" O) U6 \8 \; e( L8 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 t: e! P2 \# ^* AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 h+ m$ {3 x  ^) V7 m  u6 o& oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. g/ f# j) b/ d& P; A- N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ Z( x0 T) b" Q# A% `2 A1 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; o4 R+ j+ d  s2 [! q. b* ^, k& H$ ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 C3 ?4 x0 L' _3 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! M$ D* F3 ?4 y5 P, v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. Z) Q% t2 }) B3 i- X1 h# g% h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* ]# U) ~7 z* n* c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 l, ~1 L, \3 C. |7 R  |" l& H$ h# Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s3 d  {" o% R: F' I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 S6 w/ U5 [; ~- C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, Y1 b0 {0 A, E: T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 k2 Y" Z" F2 k4 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ C* y% R8 P4 s* N! Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ f: z1 j! x% K6 N! x- U4 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 f4 r9 J* M% D* a( x' N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ?9 _8 k) b9 Q" m9 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ C+ H' d% @/ T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 X4 M% S% r7 C. O4 B' z/ Q2 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ u0 X) i' F3 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ a8 S0 y( g3 E. R  u+ ]. [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% i& n7 b+ |7 \; k) Q" \9 c  D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; l3 V& c1 _9 J7 @- F5 e6 q1 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. u% f4 _$ B3 j' r7 _# s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* }- n2 m! Q; P- D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, R4 W: K+ K( P+ B- f9 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% o& |. S; {8 n" I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 _- H- g. b& j. b' K3 W0 m7 F& [6 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 W/ ~" m9 K2 V6 ]/ N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! q# p& b/ f( N( W& _" D5 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: L" R! F5 t2 l! @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ ?$ N1 [3 z2 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 x( Q  O# m7 g& V% Y' @$ h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 T) B; U  h3 d- g0 R* f5 r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ c4 @: T( h' t+ X6 F; I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>