【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 T8 {. }0 c4 Y; _: i! W4 g# U5 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, N) ]" u5 s1 B1 r3 g. b, tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& o5 f1 }. f& I. P3 sYou needn’t fear anything
% C, O/ z- S5 Q8 d- P( iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 h: Q% t. c: \" A! ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" |* T+ x2 Q2 p' n) ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* w0 c: A( [: K  r, EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% T1 z  k. H# E9 Q: n2 v. @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( U6 `4 J; D" Y$ u+ A' mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. \: X% O; w2 q  a* ^, M6 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; s% [: c: X8 j2 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  _* _2 x% M' p( Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 B- z' ]8 I+ @8 P' M* Q; O! P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 ]& ^( C) i& q! V! b* y7 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, D& h. E( ]* Y8 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& B. L. D' D. J3 a8 X8 Z: O9 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 G! I( d, P8 U' r8 X- G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" F4 {8 f' D+ R3 g- R4 ?$ r& [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- C) H( B  k* f# Q) \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( e) c+ I- |) M7 T9 M2 `- u, {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, o  e6 i3 u/ E6 N+ a" |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 X( I" j# y' f7 b1 K# s7 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 r+ v" G" }- X) Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) g1 V+ a! U; w7 S( V: P" K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) r0 x$ k8 K, a6 M& ~9 d3 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- i2 ^7 F$ M- ]( o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 W) d  D- h. `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: [, R: h: h3 W5 A, B5 d5 |6 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 O7 M5 M) l; L7 _, z& n! a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  K) D2 [$ X0 l( w9 q( F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* J% ?0 c3 |5 H$ d: t" j) Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* |) z& x0 I+ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 L1 P" t6 a) a, p  u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" A9 @  P( z( B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' S+ A/ B. D* X9 l1 r1 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; `; D8 _8 L) `( D$ P5 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ^1 @9 n4 u7 Q- }/ s3 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, X  x2 N! c8 y' e0 k+ U. ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) U% [9 o( _( Z& G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( h4 @( F2 L" B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 o0 ]/ f) }2 F- c" { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>