【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" |) S( _7 B9 L  |( q, g& g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' n2 K+ q( i6 D2 Z& aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! k# p' A3 h$ I1 M" E/ I( ]4 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! c7 o, A* C4 }8 b5 E# qThe sky is happy down to its soul
' E0 W# Y8 Y$ T% _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) a& }3 C8 ~& x0 R! ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- Y. k! y6 V, u7 u& t' WI really want to know just how much you love me
! g1 b. N( _9 u: M# d' rI love you I love you with all my heart
( d& s3 s. d% }* g+ B" aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 W: X& S7 y# X! j; G  V0 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* y6 S' ]! `3 UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# N# s- \2 Q9 z! t7 f$ `; jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# Q- y+ y2 j. `+ I& ?( r! G- g% @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 Z* n. N) |! a7 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 W' ]0 v. ?4 o0 I7 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  [3 T3 s0 Y( h2 b* ~& t3 F1 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 A  a' m; S) g' k' V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* H4 F" g. j$ C6 Q, T& b) H! J3 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 H$ _' X  T3 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' @2 g' b$ U" j' c3 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" C4 b% P( i1 {& b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 X* G9 u* q9 }- A4 a% ]& u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  U; w( @$ D( i* g: I- A* N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! Q& c+ t" Z- @; X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- ]) M5 e+ {9 W% ~) K! W1 P7 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 q% m7 Q2 |9 k" S6 N9 Q* x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" F# k0 D4 _2 H/ W; s2 L& r5 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ H& S2 x( T4 G8 a6 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ H7 m+ E8 i4 p4 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; `5 t5 H, o6 f" @8 {3 l8 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ y" A- c; b: n* |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 V5 H  K5 e7 F2 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  [) D7 Y) q, L- f9 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 |% ]0 n0 c0 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 l/ {) e$ u' M# ~1 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& _7 S  u6 S5 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
  K! S. Z8 \$ K. {7 F1 j) Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 p8 l' b! i8 e8 V+ i5 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; J6 G- c8 v8 m, y$ |1 a0 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: j+ D& F( E8 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 R, Z7 L" |' H8 `2 @! U$ h% |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# S6 R# L+ r0 k% b0 K9 Z8 l# {- H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ d0 r6 n5 J' U) n+ B8 y: I- M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 {0 {, ?: b4 m9 C; P& }' m+ H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 b9 w# v. S5 w& u- B+ q0 V/ U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 `: H2 g2 I* o* C; x5 w. y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>