【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ G0 N  b6 `" l9 o& Y, m6 m歌词我附在后面。
) `  L8 ~6 N, H) L5 L' oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ R8 m# N5 q5 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ Z/ s' Z, |2 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 R% b" l7 {! z6 T" i2 ?8 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" ~* D0 A& K1 F: @. \3 F9 O" MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 x2 |% q0 s" ^( v+ PEvery other word you utter is love
+ i( k. x/ W0 ~$ FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: M) m, T1 E6 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' L7 ]$ R8 |$ F, C) a0 J1 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. E4 S" x: f, ]4 b" o9 f9 y1 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  R0 }! k/ H- y+ \/ MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! [$ H; \' G- `% x. p9 z  S) a+ }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: e" {2 Y6 B4 n! w$ M' i8 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& `! ~( x1 W; J4 u# m# t3 G2 E/ c2 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* g4 h" K+ m* D/ N: c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, k4 L9 w% u- n' g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" R, ?( k; U$ c9 x" d0 r9 {8 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( Q/ H- d+ a- C2 \1 M7 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ x/ v1 `! N$ R$ Q4 ?' q  f6 R8 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 A  L8 V7 M7 y; V4 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" a+ H/ `! @; a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 P' K7 H5 ^4 ~" C# D% n$ L# o6 z; p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. v+ L! \4 G8 e) f" u0 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 l3 z& @& N' f9 S0 M! i# W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ^0 R# u. e3 S' S, }0 [% W0 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; h; B/ \4 b- [3 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% {! h/ c; G6 }' k: I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ H* S+ R% u% X/ ?: e3 P! U: W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, R4 f$ b0 ]: ^8 A  K: h- L: p/ p7 V: f<P>I regret not dying</P>
% b# h  j, X, F& o, l1 d8 _$ n- E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 V# ~9 ^  v; Z9 a# l0 |# K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 X# ~0 R& u+ r% d, O3 E& m+ Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 x: C! S0 |; p- n4 c! h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' w: x# |6 F6 ]+ P, a# }- x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 K0 d* D  A+ e) ]& R! ?2 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- `! f# w1 ~: ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% ^) p; E) y  f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) u5 L  x, Z  `; \0 Y+ l9 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& H5 t: c5 n1 v" U( Y6 F5 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 t3 v+ \- o$ X+ w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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