【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" M# L4 R( Z( }% I6 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ^" u" K$ x5 J, s- bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. Y8 d6 g  u2 J+ T. T  yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( X3 E9 _2 G9 O6 S7 V- t- \" C  ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# @4 h1 P0 X$ |% vI love you I love you with all my heart
0 `4 O9 y+ Y" a$ C  L5 Y  oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) J! V7 J* b) D+ II want so much to see inside your heart
/ b2 h) x& e/ @3 F9 [; UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! r5 a3 J8 H% b/ pI’m still filled with fear
1 s+ o+ q2 G6 {; pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 t+ o; ^& c3 B$ DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 l8 v$ G, P' Y. t1 D) @2 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; p. m" H: ~1 e0 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  G/ Y9 F8 f6 n) B1 O$ ?, f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 s0 i( T; s. e  M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ K4 r; X( b5 b$ _/ s: S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ m/ s, T' f! ^. X- [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ J0 X' `/ R" Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& b( J" C: n" z  e) \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: J  o- J) O. ^4 ]8 m' Z9 s+ ]. c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 d5 X6 p/ c3 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  @$ a$ T3 A2 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) ]4 {5 F3 D. @1 V5 }) j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 g$ D* C" i! g, n$ d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) V) s1 i; r- ?+ M# R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 `$ |9 u& s+ u. O8 v+ h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 @$ D/ P, n6 @4 S" b6 Q! l% L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ]/ F# r' F3 t' K- @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ @+ Z! x0 R9 {; v, `+ D4 f6 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; G" S$ ~* G/ D# J) c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) J8 f/ K. e; M* b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 j9 g( t  P; a8 Y$ u6 w; Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) }; B/ x1 a' F4 {! }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, f8 S& D  u1 U' I. m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( q! S9 g0 {+ m+ N我请你剖开它
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8 u& R7 ^/ w( M6 F; b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>