【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) Y* g& {, P! z歌词我附在后面。
3 o0 p4 d" I1 M. c& dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. b( W1 L) U) t# bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. I2 X1 ~0 ~9 }& pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" Y. ?$ [6 M# z$ j8 b! RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" X( W; ]5 M. s- C+ n! Q$ IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 d1 M4 j6 `8 x2 G* TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ G. x+ [! w7 o3 y) vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* G) ?! _; R4 R) V" {: p7 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ A4 R' E8 X2 B4 p3 TI want so much to see inside your heart
# b0 J4 u( w) FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 e( V# q/ t: L/ Q) dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; b6 I! p5 f; kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, \, N7 s( A8 U# Y" w5 S( OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' Z% n1 B. O, f3 O  k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 M. s  z) S' D! E4 s( X% ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 w4 Q  ]) \7 X, n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( w  u! s  k4 T* F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: ]7 f" }0 C# t0 o1 T9 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ o( g" U( D" m; M8 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; \  u  K8 h# F! p0 r% K1 K3 w; R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& l  {8 d# L3 [+ o" q% V+ Y$ B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- t7 \, H0 M9 l4 i  f5 j/ C! |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% x- @9 D" D# ?' ~  @5 u6 P! d7 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) ]6 s$ g- y6 m3 ~# T" H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ q' c4 Y% n# e, c/ V4 C0 W6 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& f' t; e+ C  v1 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  |9 j; o0 B6 C! y7 `' C( z- H- }" p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ S" M! Q! }  t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 h3 B% c. {- d: F) k( x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 H2 m4 |% {. v2 z8 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& H% h7 R; r' M; c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 v1 V, R3 U! b' H' X1 e, s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" d% q5 \6 \& B9 ?9 W& H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" |  e- D8 X0 I( Y) Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) S' }3 R- H% b& i$ n& i; ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 L% v; x* e2 m4 X, W& H- B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  F. p2 {+ t$ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 V* y: Z1 v# D, {& f/ [- W  F" D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 _' `3 ]  ]1 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 g/ D5 \( h. V, T+ k; c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. Z: O  H; A! j; ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>