【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 y% x5 _; A! ^8 W* PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ~1 f( V) \, A8 ^9 Z; GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% q, d  H8 m$ A( U2 P- u$ ]" kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, n0 M$ o! N* O3 S! q/ gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% J/ G! }" s( w, k* z/ }' UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 K2 d. P  R2 R2 x  sI’m still filled with fear
1 L+ `& W6 V( H$ s6 k1 f$ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 x3 Z+ W9 c7 x/ R$ @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ m& m/ t* E, }8 ^/ WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 {# e' J4 j8 F* S" W/ sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, O: x) T# K9 r& ]* D' vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. @9 T- ^5 l" F& W2 s, i. f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 F; \% {% x+ X8 q6 F. _( g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# e. P! P8 Y; v$ z+ I. T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 P3 ^9 p1 Q( E+ v  \6 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# `: _! B, n; ^5 B& C* [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 e, N- [. b6 r  R! [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' j4 j3 Q& y, e$ ]% X<P>你无需担心</P>
0 S+ j) D; l8 B0 `: _8 ?- ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# [% j1 a/ X1 f- u$ R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  u% e# @7 P6 |) {) \7 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 Y4 K  ]: s3 q5 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! X  Y! A; ~% q/ g  Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& f4 x2 [( }$ ]! B8 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! N) ~4 y+ ]2 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% Z+ m  A, c6 M$ A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; q$ c9 T1 X) [0 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- j1 G" r+ o& g5 B' @2 Q% u5 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) W  b7 ^! l' @( c) _/ }$ a1 `8 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& x6 N) ^6 a" u$ f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 z* |4 E: o4 u6 }* w9 B/ e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) K3 K9 E& _+ _8 u; a2 \# r; O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 b; ]0 O! I8 X$ g  y) N- r; `5 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 B1 j0 D  r7 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& Q& ~) F& s& I$ D. Z8 f/ T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ ~7 @3 k0 }; i" x% h9 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 ?  A7 ]- G- f+ B7 I9 c* x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 S! n/ \2 v  g4 r6 M5 I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! T: `: z7 Z( o: F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>