【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* S& I# b: @  E& CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# B! q+ Y1 y$ w( AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 o* U' x2 T9 `; SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. m4 ?6 o1 \) l) J4 U8 ~9 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ p# Y7 s6 _0 k0 ~, S4 e2 tYou needn’t fear anything
+ ]% J1 V. K3 O7 {7 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ f+ C# F# l% ]$ e7 Y" ~  WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( }0 P! R$ G& Q4 n  hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ F4 K% }. d; f' ?! rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* {7 O6 d2 [0 v: I6 K  ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 s  `  M1 s$ EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 g! [- z' K) n- N/ P" ]7 pI regret not dying
6 o1 [6 ^) N! vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ }9 ~! _' \# {! F4 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ r2 x4 k8 G1 e$ ^( v& b7 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- Z! y. F# \8 U# D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ ]/ v3 k. Y" V  \% J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% b; @9 w6 @4 K' b: R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& Y0 _, x7 F/ M, {( V( Y4 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) K8 X/ H$ F6 n  o2 ^/ d2 }. D# }* F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^! D) y$ p, W* m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- B, u, |! o+ x, H6 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( f0 Y2 X& q: P; @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' o/ e: n3 G' u7 L5 w2 X; s, U; ]& z! l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ t1 g& V. y! |$ E! J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ ^  l) l* E; J& k1 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& i* d6 d1 h& a- a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, c! G2 ~2 O) P/ i, {5 }/ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, P0 o# f& c9 \+ ]! s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 o3 q( c8 @9 _* H# ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 w4 s9 W) K) N# K" A0 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 n# v  O; h) b0 I! ~6 a8 f4 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 B9 I+ [& _9 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 n- x: c/ T' v) T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: v$ L) C3 i5 H" I& t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: |; _6 V3 z5 F4 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  C& x5 }: W, W8 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 Y: S* C$ @: f9 ^& @, U" X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 }( R' G. z5 }' e$ L" _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>