【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& |+ I4 f5 S4 a8 D* s歌词我附在后面。
; ~; {7 B2 i6 `2 v+ QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: G1 G3 F6 K6 m& G9 l6 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
) z  {& i, C+ B5 G2 A% S. RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 L# B* V! I; n; w# N0 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) y5 M, c  }+ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, }7 |3 s: x) m8 e1 U* ^/ p& ~0 n$ iYou needn’t fear anything
0 B! g# p. s1 ^* ?7 \8 A. |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# h$ h' @  N: W% O, B: ]% ]- {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, H. S- H/ J2 i. A( i9 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" T' Y" p: c+ _' y9 @- jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  O$ V! i' f% e1 s  }5 M% rI’m still filled with fear
: B' F" b. {: b/ k, p! }0 |2 k1 Q* [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ _3 K% P; J' k1 e, V5 N+ e- PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 U2 ~' T$ Q, C/ g" `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( ?$ l7 o/ C3 r/ I' aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, ^6 k7 Q8 E5 u8 d
4 B5 Q! r  t0 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* K& \6 Q6 J) K# |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' X8 d! F5 M* F" c+ _2 }2 {4 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ a- i. o( F' ?( y: w2 N6 C# V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ?: D! J9 |* S1 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- L) [( I  W* G8 ^* y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 w5 ?' u8 w! {# ]4 y2 @6 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 }' l8 b* I) w% K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* P1 ?( P8 D' u& c! Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ {8 C) b' c* n( _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' z) v) B4 i8 I0 c1 F8 f2 |1 L- P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! r2 j" B* E5 }3 |8 Y4 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 ~) q# L* m6 @# I; a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ {! K( ]- ]2 Z; O; n% K8 R4 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  z8 R% J! g6 |: p$ u- a0 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) k+ u/ F7 w* ~0 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 w8 v9 \* t' r: h2 s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 F2 A" A1 L9 X4 F% [, _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- k, R3 {# Z* [8 a* K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ k. ~" b( v4 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  O* }8 X* G: c1 B) Q1 t8 r# q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 V; [; F5 {9 H+ M- r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ H: }! o: U  Q( O1 e9 y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' S/ C( p5 q1 }# Z1 J; T% j1 e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( i, Q. O$ m4 ~8 q3 \9 P: C. c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>