【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  w7 ?9 p3 N! P% k, ]歌词我附在后面。
: Z7 B( ?+ r( s0 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 i# \9 K' Q% j; B2 t8 _( ^; N/ dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 w8 S2 J' w) h2 g: e- j. U4 p* cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 |- t) l: `& r& tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 k/ z5 E, M& g- {  h2 N/ g" }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% T! H- J! i% z8 S' WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) `' o8 W7 G1 _. R- ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ~$ }+ I. Q. j6 g, eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ s. O0 v. }7 s0 v+ @1 U$ ?! e+ |I’m still filled with fear
$ c  }3 d* `- F# \$ @7 x1 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ Z& M% _6 z$ ^I regret not dying
6 u4 p; f- ?4 s- lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 h3 q# q9 V% {, O( X8 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( m! Y& U. I! sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 U! p) H2 M. y7 X* s$ c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' n2 X" k, ]5 y% J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- s* U2 T: I6 A- G9 ?7 s# I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ v" J2 m- |' m% S( d. E, V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 h" ?4 c4 A- \/ X; _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 e* n8 D# c( ^8 K  ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ p, b# u2 j! \" q, l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  }. x; A& I: {( L0 X1 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 v$ ?; v8 V% D. [  p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) O: y4 }8 R" F  d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 Y8 i! n2 P/ F; D2 Z- H& p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( O' L1 b9 C/ `$ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" l! Y0 `. d. ]4 p" ~' S( n0 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& |" q- r) Z+ Y5 _% Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 I" h: I: |6 ^; d+ H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 s/ E4 p* W" R. u1 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 s5 |' q5 s  C" z, r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 x. X- A' b& Z( G* \5 ?/ H" x+ ?! O4 n1 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 T' m+ ~2 u& q5 G8 ?1 ?8 R; r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 L, p  H5 I. C+ o) P9 q9 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; z. W5 e% ?/ l6 h4 P1 O( o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 z4 _3 j) F7 {: R# d4 {6 }( s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& h9 N7 T# X) k" E/ ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! ]; ?9 v7 q% U1 z) V  K5 c% M/ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 O$ J" `! P6 m5 q% @* p3 d7 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" o4 }8 y0 a1 X7 k- J; y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 [. ~- s! e1 k  w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 D8 f* H0 P1 e2 l0 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. M; H* N) F, [3 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. z9 O4 R8 r+ w" v& d: M' `: E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>