【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 p" W* v1 b/ O0 ~& [* F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 h8 d( {$ l+ CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 F5 h- Z1 J* q9 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( N3 T& c# Y5 w; R' n4 r; M; sThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 w( M$ V- j: ^6 T1 d" W6 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
6 D( Z$ U5 P9 B3 wSeeing the sky content with its love
! U9 O- f) l  S, bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& A3 `) ^! o8 i) F3 D9 A2 T0 o/ P/ _. ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) z, P# j. `. _# s; `; {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 e2 b  f# n% }: c$ G- N3 _9 {4 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 q0 b' ?6 B% Z& C$ B5 VI want so much to see inside your heart
6 H) J+ b/ D1 B3 }9 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: v; A6 l1 `% o' j, H+ HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* ]2 x* [5 m0 b: Y) |) Q- RWith such a tongue as yours,
4 ~% }2 T3 h5 b' KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 x1 r4 K- d5 q2 J7 H/ Z+ l3 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 m* i: _$ z8 d7 P8 v: k* x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" b4 |# \( q/ d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ?% T: J: g, W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ j, K% b* ^- p6 A6 i1 l+ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( G3 D, B( B( @" n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# e% g# W" v6 u. J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# V5 C9 J2 X% I6 d! v- O8 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: D1 g% ~2 b) I' Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ A/ p, C8 C( }  n- b+ G  x, ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 k& x$ l+ l% N# g8 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# B) B, L# b- E3 E& c& _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. u3 S: A( _% J2 s' M& Y. O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ u+ `! Z5 c- P: Z2 h7 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 u, v& f, G9 T! w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  q( X- k: d* N4 j' q& w/ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# @. ^) i: p: u0 `  V. I6 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 ~% a; }9 Q( A6 r) a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 f6 d1 ]) J( V( H) X9 G3 q( U: b- R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! V; L1 v4 w5 V) ~( v! ~& O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 ~! X" q: N) _. G2 t4 l. x- R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 a" X1 w' b) I3 b* b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 s7 g( C. q, @* n5 \9 l. a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. W5 r7 m, r! U% A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" I( m/ h" k) }+ I! O* c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& e$ a6 j% {  l5 [% r4 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 D" u0 W& w1 O. P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 F' @9 d5 G& S- I5 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>