【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# V  v% r* F: V1 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  C8 C3 S4 J  R; H2 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( D( F4 P- Q- E4 o* @$ ~6 i2 K' i3 P# i' MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ i- R, }. s+ I$ ]/ v( bThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 {' V& `% u2 ~$ j0 h1 A7 v* y5 FWith the moon kissing it every night
1 {9 q0 d! i9 I7 TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ A' R3 T! t0 d7 z) O$ b& @9 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; `" G, p2 p7 F+ TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' |( {+ W3 m# x9 I% ~I want so much to see inside your heart
, _3 F1 |/ r8 W- K! Q( SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: S5 A1 T; K0 m4 I' y+ W+ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 Q  |* [0 f  A% s5 k' C9 L( {8 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. \( I+ ]+ x! e7 j7 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ X4 I- p5 v1 e/ i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 N" \! I( O+ e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( I/ L0 U! i# a& m4 L5 v: \' X9 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ e) d2 K0 F+ T# E0 `. x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ?' k4 a) c! z9 W; ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ O* `( \) R6 V9 S; g1 I# H. t/ H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ v3 q2 x2 ?6 `9 j0 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% C4 V1 }" j! f) G5 l/ o" R5 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- \. x% s" \" E3 Y& m5 ~- O- ]3 U4 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ z, m$ h, ^7 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- j1 W( O) Z8 `% Y% z. D* r$ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ]+ K, y$ ^$ L+ M4 D% P2 J. b* x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, g6 g: N; g! p- |. h5 O: w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! q3 ~! c: E) z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 H% Y8 O* ?1 D' j* c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 o6 S  t( t7 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# f- p8 ^% I, p7 b5 G% A, B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 n& V1 @  |$ j( L/ ?5 u7 S$ a( ^# M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ F2 D# D! S+ S' U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- U3 q* W7 [3 ?) I2 S4 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ T3 O1 F& u( c" e& z' v* C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 p+ f" S: a1 b" ?" \3 B  E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; W; Q) P: V$ W( X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* b) S- w$ s. r$ n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ n, V& M% M- B+ H& B; D) W( e( ]+ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ p# Z% l1 a# g( \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>