【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 m$ B: c; |# s9 k$ Z* _8 |8 r. ]歌词我附在后面。
( {% F+ e4 u* i4 h* f3 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# T) w+ p. _+ d" tThe sky is happy down to its soul
* ?4 J1 Y( Z7 M  s4 K5 e  OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 H6 f9 u4 f! V5 ^( bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, M6 C! Z% T. `* _/ IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, S0 D- q) k' t9 T' _  TEvery other word you utter is love
7 M# S7 r; i% Z& G: T) W) A( n; uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ K7 f1 G0 A6 I9 }3 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 R9 g# Q2 u1 D1 C! t' ~8 `+ fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 @5 Z9 a+ ?. \: O' E$ qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) c& b* {- N% I- F& Y/ A& ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 l5 [. E9 p7 o- YI regret not dying
# m5 e+ e9 p. \4 ^# iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# d' W' t2 f7 k" h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 G/ v6 r3 {0 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' x8 I5 k. B+ D: B/ E5 P3 G4 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- y# `2 e3 _% V. M3 L8 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: @8 i* C1 a+ s  |+ X) L/ F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 A+ J3 f2 |2 U8 Z" ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( y  K: P( i% f3 s' s* i5 [/ d" P7 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ N, B7 v) G; O. |, C2 J/ [: N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  D: ]/ m2 f: z+ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 n  x  r: u# _4 K+ D: [* O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 I( Y9 W+ n, Z4 D7 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( `6 t7 l. v' s8 L* P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Q" x/ o- n! X5 E& T( ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 t* b. c2 z8 d# r  S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 V# M! e8 K5 G. l% G$ b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# T8 |" A/ A/ h8 Y6 u3 e/ f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) g( f6 q6 _" o/ N9 ~, L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 v* O$ D% Y$ |/ [  w3 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, c. z8 L7 u: c. `% u  s5 y4 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 d6 C7 i- x4 D' b8 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" n* V0 `% Z) X. o4 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' q. w- a5 f; Y( r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ H$ Z3 W) e' G$ Z. }) c0 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, X) c0 f1 a! V* X! g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 j1 b# E* w* d4 l1 \, {, c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# y/ t8 d2 \+ A' y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  }; d& l6 V6 ]: ?' P6 K: L% q# m- ~8 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& B( F% M) m& Y9 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ y% r& i% V  S( K; a1 R0 Z2 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>