【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  F+ _( h* U/ T# bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# l2 |% c8 s9 g" q$ \8 f: Z: RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) R4 H% I  C; C& u' @) q" c5 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% d! ^, f6 a8 M$ b$ U" E2 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' `4 T# q$ a$ \. vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. }- G1 D% k/ a1 L7 o* l, c* r8 CEvery other word you utter is love
1 R/ e! G" q. AI really want to know just how much you love me
; ^: ^8 n6 d' d) oI love you I love you with all my heart
9 f# @7 Z# b3 }6 V0 V( XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, B* Z0 W4 u" u9 u2 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* `: ~6 i8 D% X& A# Z  X) B6 CI regret not dying
) C0 K, @3 D7 G! EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- U7 z) v9 L1 E$ A4 h  ?. a8 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 Y( k; V  _. b- \5 z  v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# [% q: E0 n$ B; U8 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& U* T! p3 p6 z$ U3 ~( v1 b9 J. s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* c) a  w3 n$ q' d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. {. t: ?' J: {9 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( z/ u/ Y7 o: r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# R( M" x8 q+ O6 ~- K& E1 |5 Y/ O6 ~$ a# {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! O3 m1 k  u+ G2 N, b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: x5 T$ \2 e  h0 t2 H! z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; Z! E/ F9 J2 w/ o; b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ p3 V3 q$ {! ?& N' n: p% m+ P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ e; @% h5 ~/ y3 r# |8 b# ^2 v1 W<P>你无需担心</P>
+ g; h9 N. P2 B) {* d) P2 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 `' Z1 p% l2 u" @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 H% W. p. S+ M& z* o9 k: p8 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 h4 Y( Q7 F+ e* f2 k9 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  z2 n. K8 B+ J' X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  [+ W+ G) Y$ |; y6 y& F5 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ b0 w7 s: Y" I8 g$ f7 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. o$ Q5 g3 q+ N$ a  ^/ Q1 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" q1 R  A: y) A$ h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 u4 h2 F* ~7 h  _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 |2 l- x: j. S' D<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 t) U4 \2 V6 v" k9 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 l. u8 y2 q* O* @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% Z! D7 \4 Y* E' n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ d; b8 M! |! L8 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. f* \/ n8 |6 ]2 a0 m6 s# E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% b5 L9 {1 K  |' t+ v& ?2 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 t# b# R, z3 l0 z1 V$ W: a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) F. |" Z& U6 P6 r) X7 r* I' Q+ W4 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>