【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* a5 d+ @0 t8 s# u. J3 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ h/ \* w: M2 j& Y1 ~8 N. u( zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: h3 F( |0 H/ b/ B/ wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 q' q1 Q2 K( n5 ]9 @" gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ v3 p8 Y) k" i! S, @, O3 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 j9 w# b& i& f$ \& d8 EI love you I love you with all my heart
3 Y% V6 a$ ~7 W! t9 ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" H6 r# k- q7 z4 k. b7 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 k- V  j; D" _9 U, O) w4 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" f( n) u2 O! R# C* lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' b, V0 p/ r: \' q; W0 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 B: N' c8 P- k( _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 ]& f/ x: l* t: S* b. l, X4 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ?8 X" l& ^7 b7 _9 h! T6 H$ Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! I6 C" L$ J/ ?9 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& c" P: S7 w. x  @$ j& p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 B1 l" S) m; D4 Q% ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 \, F# v1 {/ z; B$ R+ D6 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: K! P$ }9 R2 x& o% X4 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ~9 X, k5 _4 v- l! I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: Y6 c  p4 [: O) D; ^# }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- C! T. \3 c2 |0 r. V" Y4 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
, Z9 s6 N4 q" Q2 A% y, d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* A- |$ g( {6 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' F8 h( b/ v- I+ K% N6 l: p, h( n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 {0 j4 Y/ U0 t3 j4 E; t* i! X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ^' n5 q+ P4 x, P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* v8 e2 N8 i7 n1 \6 n# Q8 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' q9 V: a9 U! s. {9 J" ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 @! `$ @, h- D! E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 |6 _; u) [, H' ^% O' u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* d( @# J5 ]/ l1 f3 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* Q* ]8 t& J; p) i; d$ j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ a2 e* y) O8 Z" ]+ \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ i* D% t9 k3 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 p# K5 k; e3 M9 e% e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( b* ?; {5 i7 T$ M: d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 e: r) b* o% F- h7 r, b; \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- }7 p9 _6 g  T/ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 N, c, e! ~0 h8 |* w) A6 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ R! w7 q# `3 v1 V2 M* K' `- }2 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 I8 g2 A  A. {& B/ {( T6 [  z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. d) J5 P2 }2 q) J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 z' K  J& X" q3 _6 F; F/ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' ~% B- L0 ?. ^我请你剖开它

8 A: A8 b3 j$ `2 N6 z0 x* r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 Z/ P; }* \$ G" m+ E1 o! W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>