【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ q9 e1 J4 v/ B% bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- R3 G7 u: V5 q! w; yThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 X6 B  z0 q7 [1 g+ q- J* F$ kWith the moon kissing it every night
/ m. a6 r+ `% D, vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 z2 q& _( q. I( `( N! jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* r$ `; e& D5 \# M, xI love you I love you with all my heart
4 `- F) O' _, {- gNothing can compare to my love
! d8 s; P# |$ i; B3 D7 P& uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: q/ A% F5 S' r3 f( ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( ?& t  {0 @7 e: S3 ]* EI’m still filled with fear
4 ^) o# [2 J7 e7 T6 n9 C  g0 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ u/ w* R/ p5 I% r; AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% ]$ _. E  U( e4 F. U. zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, r' S& u/ a: VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& ?& B' V" b0 P6 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 U; c0 g5 u# Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 H, a8 j4 Y) C/ R3 Z  \" \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 M9 g0 g7 e8 g1 `7 r8 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 x3 \$ x9 c: S4 T) p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& _0 z8 \* V/ T  d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 ^7 j" p- l# e* I$ N6 ]& x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 v3 G" ?4 O- l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 t4 t3 O! X: x- T; a8 q' g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Y- B& g; w  }, k$ Y6 n: n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- e' @  P% [  x/ t' k( N' O& M& I4 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" o5 O6 ^% R% c  e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  U) i" ~4 r+ c+ e" N# ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 q/ {! i5 q' U0 G' y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ `( U" a5 A' m  E+ c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# y3 D: ^  }* p5 p! T; ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" N! `5 ]; N/ b! P1 f" H  ~1 n: R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  R( n6 H& v3 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& k* J) b8 [, s- j5 {( n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 z: W1 U% ~$ E8 L+ N# Z8 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; p% R' H5 Q: p- Q/ Y  U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ K, e  [: q( E) l% v7 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 d. S+ B) c# F/ T2 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, \* e! J5 `1 R; O4 y+ h- X8 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 w+ A1 Q+ T: x9 ]( Q; H# N5 a$ a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ ]1 {3 A3 v4 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 c: [/ _$ I3 n! u* T$ Z3 i5 O5 V# C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>