【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& m( `. h# I$ \) Q& _# y  L- iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 U0 n3 D" Z6 D; q% qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ M2 j. H( ?$ |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 S! }6 z) W; k+ `- X; ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* X8 |3 V  E. |You needn’t fear anything
9 Y! X& N" P9 E( o( N, D, JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- {; e( [. `- f  mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' b/ f! c; J+ oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' W" a4 R. M' z- qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  J1 D7 `% U/ R7 j" |) p" i3 f, KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  F' s, v  j& S% @% A9 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 u9 E2 K, g# L! C6 V. w$ [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' h3 F% k4 Q! s* ]. [6 ~2 B$ q  e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 [3 j/ w# X* w% G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 w% S& w( B- [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, J9 X. r" c' V) ?- ^. S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ], w" T, b  H$ b3 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 Y1 G( f/ X3 V4 H" C# W8 O/ z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 v  I* F5 N4 G; k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 A6 R) Y; F$ i+ _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  x5 r0 O3 U4 A8 W- g- \3 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 e+ E  v: {( o/ l. o6 O& {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 Q+ W' d9 M1 G2 J- L3 v  h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 b$ m5 `" m7 P+ M1 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 N' y+ z( b5 D; T( l2 W; l6 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 T# c9 P2 L4 {9 m' R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; I# W0 V# S' I: O7 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 I$ a6 ]- P; @% u/ A; z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ r9 u5 t+ z( r+ [: W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ^" q4 X' k$ c" a7 j. U$ K) {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& U6 a2 _: o% m0 ?5 e; l. [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" U+ V8 A: k& ], `1 S4 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- D4 J! A4 A- \5 ^  q3 P& t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 Z3 {) v" O9 o1 I4 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( n9 x  K" X0 }0 u8 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ~* A" G7 m+ w! P" x* w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>