【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 Y# V3 {- ^9 d$ f, i% UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* B! W' I4 K: ]% L. x) oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. i5 ?8 @( |) q5 |6 b8 D3 U4 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; K- H$ @2 p; ?+ M7 T3 KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 u: n- R* ^1 D4 ]) qI love you I love you with all my heart
  P2 q4 [. S: V7 ~' q+ @# `Nothing can compare to my love
2 g1 U- l! m* v/ Q( H& n9 _! ?% `8 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& P  c  W: {7 f& p; J1 I7 s; R+ pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ^# I% {* m2 N4 J/ c$ ^% F, }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* u5 Z! T& v: b  |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. f9 `! ^8 R7 \) X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% X) x' I' R0 ?1 A9 k/ ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% {7 H0 l' z3 j* g6 {6 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 b. X, G/ Y# X; U1 m- h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! c/ J/ e) U- [$ |8 j1 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& [5 |3 o0 z1 i/ \+ S- ?, T( e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; s, t+ {" y/ |8 l& V; P4 ^3 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* s! C; [% K6 u# v. X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' N; Z" ]! g4 X' N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 \: ^! }! H8 x- q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: L) X* N9 V7 Y# `; r6 ?+ r9 ^# o7 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, M& G$ f* v8 v. r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* b1 h5 E' V  i5 R4 A+ K3 p" l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 e* X! I; `$ u+ ]# y! T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 y. Z* ~& B8 d- _' W7 X* O1 J$ Q9 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# j9 X4 l2 H. \8 v6 S; R2 \3 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ]% z: l6 y% S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 ~2 R; T# D( b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) T1 f. _! t1 M4 y" @' b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ s% x4 w6 Z6 [  `9 @* L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( o+ Q4 K2 Q1 h8 B% s5 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 ^1 q0 l# ?5 M2 E4 q& y# K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 n( {; I  P8 c9 U. H3 |( i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' h6 {' T$ a* p( N, O/ d: R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ }5 W& b4 p/ g* x4 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ?: `3 j1 n% H5 L% M2 l- y+ f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 f# A% n. t2 S; o; A; G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>