【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! J, G3 p5 q$ V6 Y# ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 o/ S5 ^2 y6 k  C+ DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: e5 A% w! d$ F- C/ W4 o" AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ C# ?* b- a5 L5 d7 H) R3 qYou needn’t fear anything
% n' e7 [0 j( @: SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 M2 u2 G6 l: k0 k1 Q7 eEvery other word you utter is love
  S5 M. {# H* K6 o+ QI really want to know just how much you love me
$ `; f7 F# _/ Q8 d6 S) i3 r3 AI love you I love you with all my heart
) q3 I- X/ N- W. q4 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. y3 o/ t5 K- H+ d& sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( p3 K- ~$ H- Z4 F" m% AI’m still filled with fear
1 N6 z; G/ e- d: DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R6 P' C2 W2 F. @+ R- PI regret not dying
1 x5 v- R, ^2 V; Y! H: ?& XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 A  A5 K/ V& L7 U  SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 ?, T5 @9 r  _' V' q7 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  I. S! u+ M- ^* c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 x8 b/ I# x4 H7 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 X0 P( W5 y1 ]" o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- E( B7 J2 N$ ~) y. [4 B: l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; I4 A5 S) p* i% O$ U; N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- ]$ f, P3 F6 G: d9 _  V! X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- S1 o9 ~+ N. i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# \+ O% k2 a/ f* j" Y4 n) H: b8 N<P>你无需担心</P>
! ^4 S1 J% W& I8 X; e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ @1 J' G* S" X) r$ q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, t- M4 i$ v2 _6 C" m: M& [3 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: T% |' Z# O& k8 i) q0 [$ ^+ z3 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  n/ c+ T9 }; e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 o  |7 s/ }4 A1 \- e" ]5 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: X/ K' Q; S6 B( {9 I( x4 t+ V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) x) u& v) d; L4 I( i1 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" `  {! ~1 F  W1 I$ B' q' \4 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! J4 G- r3 e  G' Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  o' E8 p, `  p% v2 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 U+ h3 b6 a, h% s6 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" L/ v$ V: i7 m& A+ h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" a! H8 N- P. k8 {8 I, t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 y- B- w' ]9 I+ u$ `  z, H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 W; K# f* o& ?5 ]( H' f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 E7 Y) _; k0 m* f9 l5 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 C. T: ?: t& {: f! G& ^, n- @我请你剖开它
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" D) p' }6 ~3 J8 U- _, K, v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ M9 I$ W3 f& u/ f6 @* v. I  W2 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>