【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, N  m0 L$ m8 ^7 m! f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( N5 Z& _1 D9 |1 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 {  P5 s/ ]( m9 Y5 n1 F7 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 Z; q5 D3 l8 a3 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ V1 o+ Z% q* a/ X4 O; DI love you I love you with all my heart
& F1 h. r  W9 Y/ N% g# D) W$ ANothing can compare to my love
5 U8 N. @7 h% c# I/ VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. x0 U* F. o8 N2 H1 V# c" HI want so much to see inside your heart
# o6 Z, ~, z" s, x% J; |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, h+ C3 c9 C' t! u9 k, |& ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 B2 D1 _' w1 J8 E) z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' S4 R8 J- n* l4 A) \0 B  n; M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ O3 u( A6 |8 b9 h2 l% q+ X4 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. M* a' j7 ^7 |0 F( _! W- G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' u, ^# @5 m5 O9 b$ O" a7 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& h2 a, l; G' }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% H8 d1 J3 s5 J2 Q( {, ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) Z1 L7 k4 z( s7 }+ h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 B* @; [2 c1 i8 {+ t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  j6 a+ o1 L  D1 D+ C7 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% `2 L5 Y6 r$ |. F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 L9 Y: Z3 _" G: A7 S3 P  e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! [9 Y) }; M$ `! F) W) V: }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" `) l* }# n5 {. b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 V; }4 u: r( G( l% ^. i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 t! I- }2 |! k3 b: z4 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ x. H3 n8 A$ V3 l' i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- O& I6 G- R9 ]# \2 @& k! R+ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 F( |- p% b  |! u  V% R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- ~( Y8 o4 @' q8 F5 p% j) ?: K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# W  @8 \* j0 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, c) E& D" Q: D( T7 X) E. q2 N/ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 H; }3 @  q0 F) I7 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" P7 D8 i$ Q& m; D: R* ~; U) ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; m: V' i  v7 a! X8 X7 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( F& W9 Z9 u% N" C  ]7 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 N; M9 H6 M( \+ w& z2 M$ O% o; o; Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% J- O* S2 Z8 S. p5 k7 [" D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- B' x; B, o/ V+ @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 H6 Q2 _' d1 O: U3 K9 \3 J我请你剖开它
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* `/ H( q/ A1 W, C8 W. T3 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& H& ?4 h3 p# b! |! j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>