【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 [8 S) h4 k0 w) R5 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, G8 y& M0 }2 `6 q* t6 y: T; f! K! fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. K' t+ Y+ h9 n: y1 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* b4 R& b. O+ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ |+ x# ^! b! j1 U  o. GYou needn’t fear anything
' G/ n8 u! d- U5 w( FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% F1 c; B; H; BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ?$ e) W+ m7 Z6 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" I) |2 ?: z' s# A; Q/ t' N' i. G- H1 ZI’m still filled with fear
) N( H9 w( z4 r  j& A) F6 {  eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* C4 Q- o" W4 b3 H* n: o  XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 Y! F0 ]0 Q9 S5 O8 h, N: m, q9 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* t2 a' x: ~$ e- s/ xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' `5 `+ H, }+ C  z6 g4 V- \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! f/ h- F* x8 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 ~/ o0 g( w- A( H# I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ M& n5 N4 t% H: ]8 I5 G+ c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: I0 a" f" Q8 K5 Z  S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( f, o- g2 X) [' v7 Q) q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" E- O# m3 `; M. l# r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 R* M9 u8 q7 ?6 |2 x2 R% w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# u; X4 d/ T6 l9 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ a. j2 o) u) C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% N+ d# ~" k" b6 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, h6 |" u7 _2 p0 q: u5 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 J5 S2 y, ~$ |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 y3 N( |4 \9 P9 c) Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 R7 l; {$ u( l+ _. G' R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  A4 P; T* N' ~7 @& i: D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 Y: w* k) ?. ?# s3 v# e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 `1 R; ^& x- L5 _8 |& b$ J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 q. ~. P1 F3 {+ @& S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 C0 v3 W3 A% {  |6 _6 O4 w, N/ E5 c- _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 k/ h# B) [5 t. R6 L- ^/ z8 z3 F, ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: T( p) F5 @4 L7 V1 k0 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) ]# `5 w3 L) f- v: L0 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 k+ u7 U5 c4 k7 Y. y! x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. B. Z9 l. G- q8 p% O( \, o) Q; C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
  |3 T/ L, k. l# e7 p. b4 d
我请你剖开它
  I1 a, @3 i6 T' {
/ m/ ^. D! O& z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>