【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. h" q7 z& l" D9 n1 n4 jWith the moon kissing it every night
) l$ G5 o" W- y" {! |, \Seeing the sky content with its love
: O+ i4 Z3 p; x1 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 S* Q. T/ y: U6 V8 \# ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# L' ]( A: b1 D9 ?  |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, J2 e: G8 h. S8 z5 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 q- w! _1 O' I3 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& w: ?1 J6 n. nI want so much to see inside your heart
; ]( J- [$ H4 R# m# Y) ~# kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) H0 F& ~0 |  [9 }* i( Z# ]' {/ qI’m still filled with fear
: t1 x* H% L& N9 N& aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 y3 ^+ s5 V% II regret not dying
) o. |5 C' N9 G7 l7 T+ S8 d0 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; X; i# @% ]3 j- m: B3 C8 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 d& A# M. E7 D0 w+ K# }$ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 K* v* P7 W" b; z# K+ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% ]0 q( }. U5 }+ Q4 H- h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* @1 q1 I# X( c! ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  D' T0 z' U. S4 g3 n9 P  L0 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: Q, F3 W+ q" L<P>你无需担心</P>
( l! d$ b2 Z: |7 r5 t/ {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ {8 ~3 i% z) b$ ~: y1 R: X- @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 E$ R! y7 |$ d, t. f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 r4 m, w) {. ^/ V/ K) t) {( z% g# ~" m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 \+ j. B2 Z- v" F4 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" {8 E4 L, }" q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 x/ z( i) o4 A' K& [. M6 N$ J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 o1 ?' x! ?- r+ a* C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 X9 g1 t  o& F6 x. T, J% r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% i+ e2 z; M! b" ^& ^6 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 l5 ~# q# p; I( b# H2 S3 Y7 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 @' w# L& j$ n7 W" o6 ~" A( A9 \" j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 w; |6 c! w1 V* F' [6 R# R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 D% F+ f+ Q& h5 W& t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 C0 j9 y; ^' e4 R; q- @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: Z' B' o/ X+ ]( m1 S9 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ K3 x2 j, J- j4 c5 A: A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% z: `6 L4 o& t) Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  A7 n" U3 G1 r/ f8 i" H; g9 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" L$ p1 _* H/ j7 u5 F3 m9 L1 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% d. O9 k% M6 Y/ q" \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) Z1 _6 K9 \! @2 Q. a# f1 G0 }( Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) d7 \  ?8 s* F* d9 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>