【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% V9 h- _4 g$ o! LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ `7 F. R6 V9 CWith the moon kissing it every night
# ~7 ?- c' R! X: p8 A7 y/ iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' A( Q% k0 p9 \( K2 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# y- j: W* b1 D' ^$ ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 {) T. [. H! oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: Q3 H8 j6 R0 y! c, MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ y; f3 @9 `, Q3 H! {- R+ bI’m still filled with fear
/ B- g0 Z: Q! _& I: `% ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 k: B! @3 ?+ I$ sI regret not dying
7 F& I  Z0 V) }: z, h4 z3 l% zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# Z0 R0 S( H. g8 IWith such a tongue as yours,
( l8 r4 v$ s$ ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% N) q3 o6 W! e1 @) ^) G2 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) C0 l$ L8 R4 ^6 @$ |6 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ l! N/ p  t& n! a, b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  v; D* d0 m# F; E  C6 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( J* G  l8 ?! {. ^- P4 @1 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K: B) O% |0 l/ T/ K/ I2 n; b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ O, r/ O' F: I0 F0 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  K% I$ U0 r* o9 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 C6 h3 @- D) F: q" I/ G' _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! Y: H  k7 @# o- o! c5 _% E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ d' G; M& u- `% w6 u6 F$ \2 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( S) s! s7 h4 i/ f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* S) R9 r5 X9 m. v<P>你无需担心</P>
: R  T( q, g% {4 C3 Z+ B# a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# L7 _9 m/ e. y6 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 b/ X$ T4 s8 W  y1 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% t( I) R" V0 Q9 p* h9 b/ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. g* o: v  ^( y$ ^0 Z" @: b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 j, P) M7 f  _+ `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ?6 f* A9 H9 h4 S& }; N) s% G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: s: u0 T7 f- W7 m: Q( T( y0 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# N6 C" i# r; v4 Y2 i* ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' R4 {& x* t6 x* I& e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ Y6 @, B" B+ m2 ]' R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 j1 ]# T5 a7 T% S5 t5 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 L+ s* \8 e1 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* I" Z. V1 C- d% ]; u& z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% p9 |( b& @: f# f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 f# y0 T. Y4 B! V+ Z; t% B( @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 T! B0 E( [1 S0 y: I4 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 _$ S+ S1 {& m9 _% `2 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# ?. O3 }! P" t% J9 t: m& G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>