【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; G. v! {& x0 {. k, T歌词我附在后面。
0 N' W3 C# I4 q; \The moonlight is shining brightly,
' \" {6 x9 B' y1 k. g0 o- SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& o6 S4 Y9 K3 k6 O  d- ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 a; x7 ?2 L" o5 L2 S5 ASeeing the sky content with its love
% b* D3 H5 m* x: O; F- Q7 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 t" F( r& |$ d/ j. O; s% WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ~- H# U/ h8 S- d( O2 ?, gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# }% R* v+ B" ]: g# sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, y, K* Q1 x6 I/ O- m$ ^4 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* p# ~! ]5 b) `5 C% tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" k* ^( _6 V4 `5 vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: c" A) e6 F- [4 X$ Y/ OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ v% x5 M1 J; H% m7 z; Z% a! KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* \% g. b9 }' L: @; f. h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- {0 X% _  q# k: `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' e& V4 s) W: U, @. J5 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( X2 `6 Y/ e  J% M% v6 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- m* f$ m7 h# P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( d. o0 V& O+ P. G: i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 r) p0 x; o/ a" B# u# r- J4 n( N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# M4 k9 j; N0 U5 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 x, M* k+ b/ B- Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. q. T% ~0 l* i0 i<P>你无需担心</P>
0 f( i8 ?: g! W9 ]3 @7 Q1 `" o  P; [5 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' J; Y0 d" i* B2 Z$ i& }' Z. g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' S* v% `5 B/ s( t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, a5 N- a4 `2 c3 W; O' t& A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 I7 s& B2 }) n0 _6 [$ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( J0 {  u% z$ k( W- d9 c  U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; L8 X9 X- [9 S% W- q' _' v& d$ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% ]1 ?1 `! I  i! ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) o4 P7 G( |# c. V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ Q% j, g5 ~% j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ~) t: d" E* v4 w; j( o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 E  k# e! V$ X4 ?7 H/ u* }# e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& z9 k! k+ U3 R$ O6 j8 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% W" F- P1 a7 a5 l& C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" O1 q6 g9 |$ O" ]; b- U" o. o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" L( G1 J1 w" v5 v) L- S  ?; h, X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 }$ P: B  N* T3 B! g$ j2 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, x" O$ }9 f& `+ C' t& o我请你剖开它
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7 ^: D# S+ _5 c" Z: p1 m% M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: u# ]; E- C/ J/ T- N2 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>