【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  _% H% S% b; AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( p  Q* V/ e6 @# D! m3 N3 BSeeing the sky content with its love
# p) |! H! `* O2 E% @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 D6 k  M9 o8 l& nYou needn’t fear anything
8 a2 {' l: r' ~# X  ]/ H6 E. R& S$ {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" p  |3 X# q. ^3 n' S% p5 XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! w4 Z, @% [4 L  i0 k5 aNothing can compare to my love
- I, x2 P0 h9 u, o3 ]# XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ Q0 ~; h# V7 Q3 x8 V+ W: o7 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ E2 y3 }8 H4 w, W8 `I want so much to see inside your heart
, X+ F' W* O+ i- C3 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 L9 Q4 n9 o$ |5 ^0 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 J2 n9 u) F* X0 t& X1 LI regret not dying
0 A2 b( f1 @$ @  S8 t( ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 U, _, _7 I8 `$ Q( U' O! V$ eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ b* S) Q$ s3 r4 G7 i9 c. P  D* {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' g# c! g( a  }& z, T& m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& l9 E2 g  X6 X7 |8 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! ?$ J: J2 Z7 L. `$ s- i3 r- g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  Q. V2 a0 z' `9 t8 S; I2 L) A7 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. _; A# S7 Q. B* g! E* a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% l6 U8 r8 _9 V+ t( P8 W* s5 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: K& {" N& w! r1 P, H3 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( Z( T( ]; W$ u8 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 O' Y8 I& ^9 b1 J, O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* @, M! {1 a2 E' n0 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 B2 c( _& i( W3 K" G2 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 F9 N2 t( t5 V. K2 n8 U- C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 |% q$ b! N; L4 U1 h# F  t% E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ^- \/ }; ~6 t$ o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, V, w/ A. x( h6 u. w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: j0 w) _% \* g% e# V9 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 Z; J( m$ v% u9 N3 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 c9 N2 s5 A6 W+ ~; }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 _+ U0 p& A' `5 N1 v1 m$ V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) J/ K- z+ `" l+ E- n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; f1 \4 n# G* o: U  l7 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>