【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. Q7 k/ y0 L: l( P- R; _5 y% {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( t7 x! v8 n" }: G/ SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; C, b# J8 q1 _5 c8 d& y) I# G1 Y: \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 h' v" i. \1 W  OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; ?- C1 t8 A1 V! \8 n- L6 c1 P9 yWith the moon kissing it every night
% e! h. w% i$ v& C& I  C- o8 h/ TSeeing the sky content with its love
5 j. M* s, ^" ~- o0 l8 ?0 N6 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% o3 q8 o4 {8 j7 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% h$ H: {5 d& D: [! N% JEvery other word you utter is love
2 G+ f9 t3 Q5 R6 c9 ]6 H, |8 SI really want to know just how much you love me
/ H1 J1 H9 l5 J; qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 k, f  A! }4 p: ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 M1 y$ ]! ^: s  ?I want so much to see inside your heart
7 W! s2 q. b* n: z& b. G) I8 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 O% E' k4 y( ~9 t# JI’m still filled with fear
9 r4 j3 B7 J1 D' GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. b( M+ O: g. @; z' X/ ?0 fWith such a tongue as yours,
& `" L. |+ {/ N+ a: ~# B3 N6 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& Q7 X$ L4 v8 }+ b3 F. K" Z$ `4 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: v. U; h& B1 \. r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% T$ s+ b7 e( c6 S* M8 g9 A# D+ i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! H6 Z; O2 P0 @" Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 F0 c# [; ]0 U. X# Y1 r* L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 p& |# A7 d* E& V( P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 \& }# d$ r6 v0 j% e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  @# \+ ]/ j" c3 c( C<P>你无需担心</P>
# E1 |0 K& R( }) l  @  l! U' [# L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 g1 R$ V% O; F* h& D2 P7 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# F% G# Y- [2 C" r* v1 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 J& q$ B& V& B# q4 i5 d; b5 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 M8 {" ^& `8 B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& x! z7 T0 K1 [5 o. ^- |. z5 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. T& ?5 U* Y% D& X& ?. i, @4 ~+ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! R8 D" t- w2 H3 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 k/ A: ], ?  l- Q" k% f9 u( m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' i" O4 B- ]( `0 u2 C6 X/ H# f, i" _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; @8 o6 ?0 c' [* U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 E7 `& g  v/ U& b/ ^' R1 Z' X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- x7 J) J7 w2 M! P5 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, ]2 y8 \2 H1 P* p0 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, W7 a% P2 z% a) T/ s% u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! P& T9 {% H. P0 z9 @& u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: a& [2 x- M3 P, v0 A$ z( @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" x3 l( s: R. o2 {/ f( A* j4 K: V2 Z我请你剖开它

6 Z# u8 P# s$ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 l) X9 W+ k, Y  p5 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>