【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- s; b" o( b$ b歌词我附在后面。
$ R9 L( \" i8 W6 `$ I, X* nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 d6 ~! X9 d; x( N" j8 F. F2 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ?8 z3 Q! U( o( JThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 D6 c: D/ s/ mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% R3 j8 e% g; aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 F& k9 _2 r" L. ]% YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. N- D8 Q# [8 L5 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 a: t2 D4 t; i" j! k, a$ |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 ?3 Q. x' @/ ^' HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 M! \0 l5 ^' g. Z7 b. `4 B' n2 ?+ L4 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; p* Y* [, L# A- L- w# a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 W* T3 }6 t/ x3 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" T5 a7 \) j% N6 l% \  ~* P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 b6 H( M% I0 K0 K( ^: I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" w: {3 i9 w, J) w& g; Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) Q, R2 Z3 C& s0 f* O& e, P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% p+ h0 h5 }$ w3 d4 ^- @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 j" e( L( ?; l# n* d( l. d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 Z) L6 F2 Z+ R% k) L9 x% o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ^& Q; w0 D8 o1 n4 {, ~4 {, U0 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 ?! l+ V/ b" c8 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ M' Z/ l# ?/ l3 X0 @9 x1 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ D' j" K+ p# H; ^% Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& _. |& E% C2 j2 a3 N/ l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 A$ t, v6 ^6 r0 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 u+ c( T8 f% H7 q# i2 N* ?) c3 M, e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- \3 P) X/ p" O: u7 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 c6 Q6 i) m% \" N8 d; e! Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 k: N1 D$ Q5 L2 _  R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# \2 \! a  v. f$ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# j6 Z* P' o! n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" o, N/ a5 \" g* D4 V5 r8 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# i4 S7 r/ X6 I$ y) ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 H) Z& _7 v4 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 N( W7 `8 {7 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 Q: P& y" x  {( T$ N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ C: c" J: S- v6 j, l0 {2 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>