【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! z9 S' y. C; t7 u- r' P% B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: I9 y) ]; q6 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 |7 a" e5 E. Y, v2 B/ lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. S% c2 `& }, C+ T, u6 UWith the moon kissing it every night
+ {1 Z# ]6 {( LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ U0 v9 }9 p, m! t! PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 d+ a9 K/ d& Z" ~. G6 v! ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* B+ L6 J: Z3 v2 ^' R; lI want so much to see inside your heart
2 R* _# g" _6 ^3 J; uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 V/ h; j: j' w' Q: i5 LI regret not dying
( v: @+ Y* R! f) K9 c8 D1 D( F+ {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# n5 E3 o# b1 t! j& {" pWith such a tongue as yours,
$ h0 t0 {9 m  s, g" QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! i7 t& y% i& r' J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 Q$ U# \4 x  q5 F( Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  e/ P* ~+ }* g. l! f6 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" k9 @1 P7 ~5 q2 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& |1 G. s" e( i0 h2 O- V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- v% i4 {* J6 Y5 J) L9 L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' L) f# |. M9 L( X9 @3 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ~# c1 f" J, u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- G+ l( H5 W3 B/ s  E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ~3 a7 ?( A) D- z0 `! B2 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( a8 V; C: Q$ \& @& M7 ?) x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 G) I1 ?" ]  _$ V6 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 o) r" I( T2 d9 n8 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 T7 Q. i/ M3 ?% z5 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& \& T; o5 {8 C, H5 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 K7 p" ~: c7 x0 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! n- B; G( W+ v7 d6 _5 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, W; s, ?, z1 P2 S+ p/ G: l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. c9 F  Y* K3 ^( c4 t/ k+ k  f$ {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 Y  d7 N0 E; i" Q, P! a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' J7 j- S6 e9 b9 z6 H! U6 A4 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' A2 E9 Y2 M# V7 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>