【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 q- P9 F! Z1 Z* K" U& o9 m: k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 c/ r2 a5 C2 L) c0 o/ dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 B) J- Y" E- lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, ?: z4 l: J# I8 I+ \# iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 M) `! t2 V. x3 E( S. j, oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 [) _" X0 t$ a* tI really want to know just how much you love me
, f8 D* V/ I+ J0 g1 hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 X" v4 H( P% s' z7 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 Q: x% Q- d3 ], @+ oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) N1 `$ k% o6 R# fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 |  L  o9 ~& g! O0 O  \I’m still filled with fear
1 N$ }) x( J! I# |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) c1 S4 Y3 y. n" q- U: @) WI regret not dying
1 e6 A. p5 |$ X6 D* kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 v$ `. M) ]( L' _% }# Z' ?" DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: V  _  b. e$ u: D4 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 p0 l" K( T: x( c3 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 E1 c3 Q1 y6 v7 G4 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ W, Q4 p- t8 n3 Q% l# G' ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, ^8 x  i' E% z& E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" m! q/ X+ y7 j$ j* I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: K! E/ h4 q3 h, L6 S0 `/ Z: b" C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' `. C  Q7 D. k' k4 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# b1 W5 ^" t3 f: R* u2 c1 ?- @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# E0 \5 Z- R5 W3 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* l& l' i" F; W0 S, Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. V3 T  `* l3 A3 T: j. y( T! r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 n* [) }9 d) v- G$ u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 q2 j0 }* [, F8 J  C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 L$ @) E  M+ A8 _7 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 Z7 H; o' ^" c  U  ^( a% h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" n: U) y  W( a1 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 w( U$ W% c7 ?3 [# G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 j" H4 V$ r+ e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ v5 [1 L# M! H- v( F) C5 I$ l- r" x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 G- n3 T: |7 a8 S& [# X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 O3 Y7 _7 t4 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 i4 X" J7 i. ~+ M3 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, [! n2 m. I; [/ k7 o; `6 B- F; t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ?/ E0 T( ]7 {9 l0 T7 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, g8 R* Y. f8 V2 ]3 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 C3 x4 u( k7 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 @; d  N9 o9 i1 s9 |# \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* B7 |# s5 n6 E2 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( |7 a+ A6 ?% d+ ^/ b* A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 p7 |0 U5 H" q) V  ]  s5 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 z8 _- z& L* y9 L" _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>