【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; B$ g- s0 g. |  i歌词我附在后面。
6 T5 C' g$ z! _7 B) T- K4 K! I0 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 }3 O+ C4 V6 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 @3 Q0 r; A1 N8 m& y/ R0 n1 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; R6 Y6 g  z6 Q# U6 A3 P2 T9 e7 R6 c9 K4 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" s+ W! S2 K( n* M+ }! d) qI really want to know just how much you love me
0 ~8 u: k# {# pI love you I love you with all my heart
6 n" V6 W- B) o  J  q7 v$ R* SNothing can compare to my love
# X  o" D0 `* e0 k* w* t& s- [6 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* G2 O3 e0 E  r' IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& t1 K) B) a7 a- oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 H5 j" f$ x6 |6 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% P. ^3 [0 H- ~$ OWith such a tongue as yours,
( c! G" |/ k( |: o( ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 @: P7 z) D) QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 s" L9 ^$ g% [# ~4 \2 f$ F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& B8 G2 n3 Y) W& e! k$ H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. r' S1 S0 z( `( ?( ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 k: R( b% n9 N) r2 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# c0 A; q/ G" y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 [+ K: X1 I3 [- ?2 C2 I# l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. @8 q, {! Y8 ~, p3 K5 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- S. d. d0 V9 Y3 g5 f' O8 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 g! \5 d) C+ N6 n; y2 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 H$ d. M4 k3 D/ L9 g* O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) }6 h, l  D. w! P. `6 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, L: a& Q( ]6 h5 U# e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 ]% N1 N$ m) l4 V' G6 ]) b/ @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 y! X' J/ D. o. @- B& v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 a5 `% N* f. U& g/ O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ i! J4 R* X* }7 ^1 p8 w: ~1 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( k! u7 J  }4 D) q2 j" B1 {5 j" W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ N2 T+ s9 b/ U( B/ O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 R% K3 R8 f; J1 u" R& R, r' K0 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% L4 ]) H$ Y  K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 s0 ?3 j/ d; t  u0 G5 X9 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" |6 M# D. Y4 s3 [& |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) u  p, a" m+ m2 @( r. n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ r' j$ i6 x: s( y$ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! R( u, s# x8 w" k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ [! H% T8 G6 D$ ^  ?. n0 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 |1 l5 n4 H9 c9 x& D- A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 z8 u: W& d) D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: ~( m# o' G' _$ Q& R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ O% _6 {6 {* e) q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* g% P  y# c; m3 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# ]: G0 l: }  i; A( m- R' R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  X" r: _/ M; V$ u$ ~, |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; K4 Z7 E  J8 j& ~, X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, T/ q2 h( t' h/ K: s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 O# L5 S& c3 W2 T$ L3 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>