【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- h# x) c# M# `+ u; {/ J& X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; |1 X. J; C+ A; ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( n; J0 k* P  I' rThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 z+ ], u+ N( ^& bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( j# S' l0 M1 S+ @: P3 s, VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 @$ t' d6 L: I, @/ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ H& [* @; i" b- C1 UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: A4 ]" Q5 H5 C1 Q" w3 I  r' TI’m still filled with fear
1 Z* _+ {. w- |0 {; W9 t+ sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 n- j$ q% t  r/ \' \/ UI regret not dying
2 L2 N2 {+ C' BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" c7 m  s1 t5 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. H8 k' d* |" x5 C. I8 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: w; N% R. M* `+ |1 I# ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ S! K1 @7 ]% v2 k. B  {$ A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 x$ A4 b$ J3 e* W0 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: {# _' @6 K! |5 q3 ~2 q2 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% A) W: x9 |5 W6 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ b% A. Y6 b; B! C2 R( z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 C4 ]1 r+ T9 T0 j( t1 q; u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) a6 W. b. [) i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- e" d0 f* r* j! U  b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- p- j+ i  ]* M( [  I: u& V4 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 ~* z1 H, s$ {. F; v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: Y( e/ t/ b( \1 y0 @4 ~! [2 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& i1 m$ m  y7 T, @3 E5 b9 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ {% q4 V4 w5 y8 i" j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 l4 s/ c" U: e2 o' [% v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 q5 t( L3 }* Y7 M* x. A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 P4 N; |4 ?- e7 t2 [: f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; j- H( D3 b% i5 ^0 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* `7 Z8 O. ]+ v6 p' P/ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 j: ^8 I+ a) ~* u. e# g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 U4 m" G% f# ^6 b& }6 C" j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 U; K6 _- L& Q) H; X1 Y* x4 W我请你剖开它
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* Q: d+ B* f, k6 d  c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ a' k0 ^4 T" P+ c0 i% @7 u9 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>