【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 o) O: L+ t. w* M歌词我附在后面。
/ J) O7 {' V; J  O0 P2 Z3 m$ CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. d- `" s' c( g  b; fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 Y( @3 q9 Q  E( xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) t: z4 i' R7 R  i( k% |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! O3 p+ b- }$ d: l+ `3 rSeeing the sky content with its love
3 U; |4 F( a2 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 a- @4 k9 Z2 q# sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* i# \. r0 y1 L/ w" P9 QI love you I love you with all my heart
, g* Q. F2 {6 @; |8 j0 lNothing can compare to my love
8 P& A* ^: g( q0 d& W1 |0 E- BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; h' J/ p/ K0 ~$ Z1 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. z6 V5 E9 ?% V; ]; kI regret not dying
* M. X" ^; g, o9 F9 `0 b6 ?. k) UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- g9 O- S& Y! G! p! r  oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 F5 D( k* K5 L- \2 }6 z7 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* I8 [; m& j: Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 U: _' h6 R  \8 y6 k- o: i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  Z8 l; k4 D) ?2 n0 X7 D" g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' ^6 ~; }* ~$ F% l4 a* F5 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  i8 I# G  r- d3 `% X: K  x/ s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 {; k" N; A0 X& I0 [$ L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% z. m; @  ~5 E; ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, z8 o% [$ Z& \# s2 }<P>你无需担心</P>
4 M" f7 o. Z' X  b3 Y) z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 ^9 G% J! L: z! {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 h) K+ s3 `2 E8 r! y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- a  j0 S, f0 [8 ]6 \8 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) \8 |/ ^9 e; x) Z4 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ^  a& w; S( U. W( l9 x+ b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  f  a/ I  N/ w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. q. i: Q7 G( t! a# P% i6 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ^+ E  ?7 a( e3 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) x" M1 H6 l5 a* X4 s; `& ?' \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: H; g7 Z" p4 ]9 ^* p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. E( p& ~$ R% @8 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 a7 J" ]. Q; V. C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 y' Q* O7 r$ [& \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 n3 d7 T, _( n# ?% W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' R4 _  \% u5 V) {) I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 k- {* i% l- _% [/ w. g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# i) r6 T/ a) z  J1 \& v$ a9 }. \7 c7 Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 {' M6 R! {. [1 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>