【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ W8 ]3 T$ o7 }1 ^7 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 k3 h5 [, A/ z1 `, ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ~, Q. }& G& \/ ]' dThe sky is happy down to its soul
# z$ J$ X- K+ T" ~) G* i$ l' yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( L. b) e" k3 H4 j4 S5 V: t5 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 I! L) ^" Z/ z1 h+ FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 [! q9 G1 y4 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& a& p+ N2 b0 D. R+ c6 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ N2 o1 [: }) U! \& P2 qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 `  y/ w. l' `( K( H* K) fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 f6 G( ]# P- uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! W; Y9 m' i, n1 B  s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' q4 t0 d1 S0 K" i, j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ?7 P& L  n% ?4 J3 \' k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" W3 X( A1 f1 Y, y; O( v" c  a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 P: E4 x# Q5 e6 {, t/ [& `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, x: z. m7 r$ F/ ]% M/ t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' C$ P3 ?7 y- r# |0 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: @) C: ?! o; Y( d  b! M& f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ Q' }& t/ y/ E; }: A# n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. c: c( P4 b. o) n* m( f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. [6 G/ H4 e) o# N6 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 X' q; x3 e4 A$ p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. K' H( {; {( N# d; s/ P# [8 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, B% R0 u* O' f3 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 K$ R$ p5 A% C3 `/ [9 @- e4 G5 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 H9 _5 B. N0 R2 `1 k  g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 F5 l% H. F! o  s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ^% P9 D+ S1 Q( v& M3 ?: V- O9 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" U0 |5 z( Z( n8 j9 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 {; s& y8 U3 [; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ L1 a" ]( E& J+ f$ G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 T/ p) o% _" Z' ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 @: r. e* @+ F; r! `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 V  p7 F/ Y/ M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ g0 W& G; v5 n3 ^) g8 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 E, m( ^% D) e5 ?6 t4 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ _( M; Z) o  N8 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ y* J( |) m& c: X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 c! Z& k: k, `) X4 K5 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>