【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 X) q& Y# }+ Y) T+ O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 B7 n% B$ n3 g, u4 i- h) cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 v" N% u  j) p2 u# OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" W, |9 `. x# D0 v0 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 {. x5 C2 G% |3 d# N$ T9 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 @* }3 Z0 m1 g9 CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* ?# Z. x8 ?! ~% {: b5 `Nothing can compare to my love
+ R, n0 s6 a7 f( v, W0 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) p1 S$ m8 G0 |: z/ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" `* p; X! {) Q1 l3 g& J' rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ g9 @( P( ]+ R$ C2 p- c0 H3 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" B4 B! A5 d5 D  R6 q' w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 u0 z1 L: X- N+ X" t; U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% ?( L2 R, r8 m* X" B: s, x; [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& b# Q3 j8 V% x2 a. x- d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. S9 L+ n) V8 I; e+ \9 `& m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 }, U6 t/ ]0 o3 p+ [4 H  i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' ~% J: U: E: g' [( Z, `; e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 M6 C$ l# X; U2 d9 u! \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  a5 a: J  r5 E. }; z$ R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! [5 p; h  L  q- x8 R2 ^9 m7 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  @! u4 v* o/ }; `2 u# W5 g: g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- v* M6 R1 E2 K/ |% I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; N* z7 O. v8 c! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" m. g1 M7 y- P& J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& Z5 i8 q0 ]) u2 q! K% x: }/ a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ D; z! t9 d# p' Q7 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ I* ^1 O3 [% W# V% N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 O" \. a+ S( ?9 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# f- j) a+ X2 J$ P  W- G- l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) {. f, X) s9 E0 l3 d6 N5 q9 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 M& ^) P+ _, O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 n$ l8 T' S0 ?2 c3 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ u: e" c6 p. Q! I4 g1 m+ f, B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: {2 z7 `' Y2 y5 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' i5 f2 b/ |- A8 r# ?& m5 G. f1 M* V$ d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) c9 L% ], I5 Z0 q6 k5 n; z8 n8 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' x' H: I. G9 a, J) E# D3 M( C" _我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>