【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
* x* ~- ]( O: k& A- OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 t3 Y# ]% B, b0 V3 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 K. _# k; F+ K( h* w9 Y( kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  P$ r5 [/ p: w. C# HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 C6 l) G1 `3 L9 EI really want to know just how much you love me
. p4 \0 k  M) v: t6 Z1 @$ q" J+ {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* r9 M& Z4 ]' n% x4 sI’m still filled with fear
: C! a3 J) _& s& z$ Y- SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. B+ [0 i' P% `) hI regret not dying
0 s* @. a, Y1 m5 K3 B8 }: zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ~3 N& x4 n5 uWith such a tongue as yours,
7 {& y% t5 b4 V0 X2 Q4 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 |; v% [" C( b3 `& R# I6 E, JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! u  i( {& |2 ?6 z- A1 ]. S6 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( o* v3 \$ W) r; ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 C' ?8 w4 _! Y7 k7 o- U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 l8 I  b* g& z! d; P0 J5 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 Q6 i/ P! s4 A" p/ o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; v% ]5 w: D( f0 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& U# P, s$ d$ k3 f8 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 q; M7 ?, _- E  E; d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 a# s2 s5 u% r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; P/ Y$ D+ O3 j1 r  X6 R& a( r7 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  j9 S* s$ @; e/ M" z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* S1 H& H1 l8 l5 J2 q( u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 ?& w0 A3 f" Q/ G# j! t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 D) @/ Y, ]; P7 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. W) q5 ?8 o+ \+ X$ f; R, x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* A. Q# Q3 X- A  L. t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  T* D3 g& u! f0 X* Q0 I; ?+ u/ ^2 N, m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 ]% Y1 x; |( p/ q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, |3 o- h0 n# U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. C( F9 U) P9 f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' T, [8 [/ e, ]! O$ P8 `2 K# a; x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) y0 [+ z  e1 X% J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  W) v) z/ y6 I2 J1 ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 Y7 C0 ?) I# Q7 Z; j4 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 J! F5 U# g+ ~3 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# G) Z3 ^. n$ }( {! u/ m* s我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>