【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- i+ [" @9 M2 B% G; F8 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 ^: L" d4 i/ d/ b' WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# i" l- M+ y3 |. `& O8 |" ASeeing the sky content with its love
8 B+ r: Y6 D* ~" ^$ {% |0 P1 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& o/ x- _: i2 w0 j6 k5 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 D: T$ S/ Q1 |# d& ?) d' J5 @8 i/ ~I love you I love you with all my heart
0 ?' B% D1 |5 I# TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 u/ L4 w" c% n' x) KI want so much to see inside your heart
! l2 u; q5 O% j! ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% W" L$ |5 M! ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* _6 t7 C& ]" L( W$ X0 }' aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 G# B. @; b9 i4 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& ]7 o" F+ `, A) X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 `: s, `& Y% g: d' B9 U, d7 S+ o8 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( C/ ?" d9 \; C9 x" T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 [; y! W0 ]# f1 f$ E$ Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! g% U* I0 b# ]8 C. `/ ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ u2 ^% B  |0 X9 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: O( C* g$ S, T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) n( O$ B# H4 c8 m) D8 O! ^6 O9 J4 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  G6 d. ^  H$ k  X% A- f) d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 {5 Y& R6 D; J! x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 N1 \: D) S( \5 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* |2 f; H7 \# B* ]0 i0 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# y% F* p5 V& K) p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' j, i, f8 ]4 @0 v, B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 D' X% w0 C8 h' Q- s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& |  ^5 Y9 H  c' j5 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ l9 U" z( k, k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 G; @, S' P0 \: j0 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- _, K# N$ [& F. D/ P2 n5 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 e6 i3 D) {) R9 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 \+ H% E6 \5 }! W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* y( ^7 k& C  m8 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" |: s& H  R* v3 Z我请你剖开它

% B( j7 }$ Z* \! F! f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' r4 I) i& J* I6 m9 n; w% {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>