【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 I4 Z0 d7 s/ X5 F/ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( C* f! R; D( F7 Z* D. ]- m% K4 L8 J! qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 K- g% H5 x0 }( j! bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 [* f" i/ j8 {9 `4 J% [. wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& C& _& t$ S' A/ q" ?* ~- w0 k/ s9 \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* s7 o0 J9 m  t+ |) x0 e9 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 d, }- b( R$ \  w, F7 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. Z2 N0 C  k+ p: u. V  v" kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 C3 `5 b$ i- O  O. q! R# LI’m still filled with fear
5 c2 x" O5 C, M9 _$ iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 q% B! i5 A5 N  d0 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 @2 [% V9 u1 R9 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ y: ?8 k- p! r/ Y6 T, u2 ?$ h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 k& S# H$ [/ o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- j/ r: ?3 L' C: f5 W' G4 b; h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 z; ^! V' m+ u' r, J) j9 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% I3 Y# W  Q8 l/ U( h8 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) p% a6 o6 T$ ?3 @6 |. S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; J6 o, L5 [1 d* `9 f& f# g/ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Y. E/ c' v, p  a  j* Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  b; M( w* y. c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 t' z, }1 Z5 C2 @9 j( p" m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ }, Q) w; F2 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ S# T7 ]% X. S3 B9 m4 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 U/ k' w4 f1 a) `) }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- `+ G8 M* v" h* f& |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 q. a6 Y) J- V5 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 x/ a+ k# ^: c- R% b0 ^% p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, a; M( u% v* x* g9 P$ z5 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 R3 b( v2 K+ S8 q) k<P>I regret not dying</P>
# j9 _+ n: x2 B8 ^0 v0 q  h) c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& R- Q2 Z9 v7 V: p$ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 w# C7 p. h2 }& _" I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( I( u0 n& E' F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 m9 u" w: T; l* I$ Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 Y5 c; C, z1 _5 F" d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 A; J7 B( y, V' c9 ^- I$ G我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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