【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& O% D+ `4 a& \  W5 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; i: o0 |7 x2 i" K0 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# Q. E/ F/ z- FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 v% J! i- w, _3 q2 i. S6 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( D5 [3 k5 E2 F2 Q. kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- Q; E. j5 D/ w; v* {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ w9 E+ k, b3 R) z1 |/ @0 N7 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ M6 Y, B; Q$ l+ E# @, ?) zEvery other word you utter is love
3 _) H8 z  ^/ w: A0 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- B. d: {+ Q) F3 gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' b  C4 t( W/ H; E' _; f+ II want so much to see inside your heart
  x" F. D' u" u& WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) Y! C  d. o" P; r* a6 v- LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 s- y8 I5 E0 P$ T: iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 n/ o$ W# X2 j# A. QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, [$ a% o0 F/ W) mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( v1 Q* i8 q/ U% m. u/ [$ r* ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% M; a# R' H' j: [9 w* ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) K3 F8 M( Y- N. `! ~' m4 Q0 K$ H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: c8 h/ R  }- I1 v7 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ I& @, @7 h+ h4 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- r/ ]) e, b7 K) N2 L" Z0 h' o( H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# g; {1 z: N6 y' B+ S2 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! k' i6 V: K' s0 a( D3 b' m* i( i1 {/ S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 q7 G& p: c  }+ _" [3 b7 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' \, N& x8 I1 [& h8 C0 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, E: `- x/ }' B- J) f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 _  G/ J' J  j: k* G5 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) }! I2 I; `: w- G" v0 L: x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* p$ s7 ]" N; y( Z% n; w' |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 P0 g2 p. F" i* G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: U) l) B) J5 z. L0 c3 q  T* u0 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  R  _) K- L, q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" e2 {7 u" @5 c: U1 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 I5 A- K4 F% l8 f( n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* @" T8 G) r- i; Z' Y& n" H* I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 \4 v: D, C, i6 K( a& S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- j3 t4 \! [0 M  g0 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 D4 @: G2 K- ~7 h7 M/ J& A* j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 z" m# d' i& B/ E% A' Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>