【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
. q  u9 M) ]7 B7 S4 b- y% A4 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ~) S; ^" w  N# b( S7 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' Q) @# V8 ?. pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 O  l' {9 f" a1 {  U$ WYou needn’t fear anything
$ K! f- R9 U' ~8 q& aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ G- F/ [8 J3 z- A6 sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" P" H' x- g( O2 C# J/ L$ H8 R0 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* z1 p- U0 q1 {3 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ q( T! O# D, t9 K+ i9 R1 XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& A# L- q5 y- UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 \5 z3 X( Y* {! B7 X% C7 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 e$ r7 M( h, ?( m5 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ {( z2 J4 {( f# S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 R' L) K0 K1 X" r' C/ X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 N3 G* p% B* y* y0 n# Y: y; s: s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! J+ `0 Z; u# C: g4 A1 X6 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X5 d" b3 @: a7 K9 j' S5 T  k<P>你无需担心</P>
# n0 `& q8 P: G' Q8 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, e& f; u* G5 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 T  z  w& _* c: R3 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" K( E# W0 \9 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% K: g+ r% s2 \6 b; N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( W0 ]/ v1 i1 o9 n* Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ~; Q; d  [4 G7 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; f2 ^, \7 l4 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 l: \  p, [3 k. ~% S1 ^/ q( Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 {$ U3 v9 r/ ]6 X1 b( A. S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: a$ ^: v1 X# i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) J: E0 }$ d6 |% ]5 [/ H* n$ w' O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" j+ M1 Z  ]" I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ k8 u3 m, F8 J6 c, Y; w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( V1 x( G. f2 v: \7 N) z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ^% h, Z# ~- q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% `+ l' H& z* k7 i2 z. ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 }* n. N9 C( O+ z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- ^, Q$ G% ]2 k( [; t+ S5 T* b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' x* R( ?6 x. E( ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 h! D! I, U* v, X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ _" k; @8 y' R4 R- I4 {8 _% v) `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ W* r' ]% p- w4 z2 t  f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>