【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- n# i  U- L  |1 K+ o' M  AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) v2 Y) C( H3 I6 `& L9 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: V8 o7 z: E8 R; Y- sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" j; D8 n% n, C# N5 Q9 W9 n% eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ]! C8 i6 j7 f  `/ f& m  u' YEvery other word you utter is love
" q  A! f+ V! @( h; SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, O. W" {6 j/ Q# a/ q6 r' x8 VNothing can compare to my love
- h7 R7 f1 E0 }" a' r% `7 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- Z: m4 r: J7 ]0 l2 D$ ^0 \$ KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ u" m3 e- w5 ~* c! V, P( @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( a) K2 R3 H( D% }% yI’m still filled with fear
1 q% O1 c+ K' ], ~& xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! z  |+ b. U# r" d/ vI regret not dying
+ h' m$ T0 o, pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ [# ?  q# a. Z+ n$ C' {" fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 b) r, w! K" J! j- E* J4 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ r" v; O# T+ Q1 p% ^) y- Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 [, G0 b& _' L( P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! O% n* i0 U( H0 D2 g' M1 V/ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% |! Y& b1 e# N, Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, [8 ~* G2 m- w2 b! ~) b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* K+ b9 K, x. q2 j1 N" x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Q# b5 A1 Y1 v, [* ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ _: f; L/ M: y: J0 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 K4 c- ^: |+ }2 x' [( y1 T( ]/ L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! M6 _  M& t' d# u( F, R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 Y4 e9 j  e9 b  v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ~& A5 Z$ ]/ |: G! l  z* {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# g0 k7 d# T& ~/ k5 j. M- q- \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, m4 v7 t2 ?; |2 q; F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, ~; r" l# V! A; a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 n3 A+ d4 r. @4 ~; N3 L" r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 Z' I2 I8 {1 }- c! u9 w6 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 C3 Z/ ~$ M, E1 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* F( p7 `* g0 I* ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 d& u" \% |- B& M( y8 M+ k/ F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 r/ o* f$ r+ p+ S7 h: x' a1 v0 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, H: A- a. \1 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 d. [' t) q  z$ K. X! f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 n% c$ H7 S* n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! b2 A3 |2 n- g  Q  X) n/ Y; a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ ^; V6 Z; n6 o; p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" m' r( W% ~- ?1 z& G0 ?1 R& X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  p( K; Z/ y& l# i' F- \" ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# x# h) _! a* c! Q, F6 P/ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ?) \+ W" e8 r, W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: _$ V6 X, U) `& l: O% |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Z) C( w. k) C* c% w4 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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