【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
" I. d* Q5 c1 _" DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% @0 O- |- }) R& iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* M5 ?# q7 D3 y& Z1 K! ]( B4 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 s0 d8 S; g) j" L1 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 ^* f4 e+ S/ N# h" \' YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. d* w; l/ v1 _# DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  c* m) {0 J3 _. BNothing can compare to my love
6 ]0 @6 R1 f9 X! B& ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 e  J9 ?7 p1 k2 a  dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) m. @5 L1 ^& L! u2 I& {- {0 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 d8 ^; L$ A5 i, y1 Y5 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: j: {4 L/ l# p$ i; v9 _* J# h# u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 d& M  S3 k0 A& M8 q, J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' r+ Q8 R; B' m/ U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ S" w7 _6 e# P. u" s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" _8 V" A2 x- r2 x0 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* M+ g( _; _/ y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 G- J/ e! }( I& E5 C( U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; w8 A; L+ e" Q! n. O2 Q# i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Y$ ~! s) a6 ?0 ?: f  r- G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( Z" A6 M) P6 q9 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ ?+ N  }5 A9 N) \# D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ ?* t) G. G+ K' V2 W4 R# w, t+ Z6 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: W- b1 u' z# O9 F* Y5 F. C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' b# S  N6 a6 w- y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; c, S8 e4 V  t' F7 `' ^1 g$ j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 X# w9 d# U7 j% W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' _: H# a; ^  b( E4 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- q  F2 ~$ y5 W9 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ C1 ?: C8 g$ t0 x/ O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" j; M, G9 r* x8 @. h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- r6 v1 t( D* w6 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 D4 J5 Z% e5 M4 U; {7 ]9 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' Z! r. N, X& |- K1 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ J; \' \! G5 p, V, Y8 q; N6 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 w  G0 T1 B/ ^: L4 \9 J/ |3 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 n  G: Q* e9 A* e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 @" ~: c. A. q% A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ H1 _3 t& Q3 Y3 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) D" A' S$ W6 B5 K1 W1 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( K1 h' J- B. W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 s8 E  ^$ ^' f" v! f& {6 c2 S; A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 S! w3 c9 S  F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' o: n) X; d- F; _: P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>