【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" H4 d# r* Y. Z+ Q" x- K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* a2 k3 |+ G2 ?$ J6 d7 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' h: x9 k& A! r! ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 ~! h0 e( O* m0 X! kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' k& j2 Y6 R3 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ M+ M$ y# D* NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  t# m" G. }. {- y$ e, U, t  K; bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 C; U1 A' r# d  n" QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 r$ |- }8 V& ~2 U* QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 [$ @( [7 S5 c3 V0 v1 l& W+ l, ~6 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. \! ~" m$ x1 x+ K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) ?% ]- \9 s) ]6 X; R) h9 _/ |! g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! g$ R! |0 x. ^  O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! y) V! [, Q2 X' B- g( }  C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) g. L2 d! T& q+ _- n8 y9 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 R- Q. u2 N+ M, M8 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' k5 q, [7 N% B8 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, u. H* u/ r  N" ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ C2 W5 `+ L' m$ z9 T& W9 K% |: W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 x3 o+ s# r* q$ Q; @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  O  E8 i! y2 g& w: {+ e. P! v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 i7 k: m& S# V9 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- L4 @$ c5 w" r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* r9 {/ {4 P, H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 k% [, v  i& q9 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 K0 W; d, _4 S: P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' J) u( u! W# F& M& t# O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; B& [* @: G5 m; _/ R  {6 w: N0 @# Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 o2 \" D+ i0 G* x1 N$ G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 ?0 f+ s6 w) {0 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: h% ~5 V7 \* b' g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% V: Z9 b5 m" z& S& Q2 h我请你剖开它

6 @1 L! m7 V) N  P! o4 m- g5 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>