【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; k8 @" z# b8 Y% l9 e) f8 N1 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& M( m0 J3 T/ Q6 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
# G1 d0 e% e2 z. H, j& R" a, ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( ]0 ?1 {* E% m* s# XWith the moon kissing it every night
1 o; C7 L9 E. m7 eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% B* D' I6 W- q% w6 \, |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 a/ Z+ I5 n, F2 @1 UEvery other word you utter is love
4 E9 g2 y' B+ J6 l# E9 l$ HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% r$ r" K; z' r* UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" `1 V) q) D: Y2 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' \5 y4 E$ r/ H- II want so much to see inside your heart
0 a+ w; y/ y( C& p- WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 p. @' M$ A: C% O9 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" b# ~6 B* u; _( i5 p2 V: }# DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 {1 ]# v) C* ^. K' v8 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 `4 W+ Q- Q* |! R1 X& N6 S# vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 H- y! }: H" P9 e) ]- D0 C+ ^# b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 [2 W- }5 r9 i4 J9 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ R+ _$ r# m* e8 n$ Z& C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 l4 l5 ^( V7 x* X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 N0 w9 |) n- f; j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 d5 e' t9 l. Z3 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: U2 a6 z. R% w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 N- K! P5 Z- K; g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 w' G. E* I' m( ?' ^  B9 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 x$ o; I( g7 C" {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ u. E- @( ?9 ^7 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ~0 p) `4 G, K) n! E) p  A$ R3 d1 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Q( b& u4 V8 s( h, ^, R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 s0 z' x# M! q! w. U7 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 Z: K  o' I3 M  n! v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* {9 t, l" g. v<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 n, r( k* Q% s* k( n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 v5 F& k7 E6 i! Z* w) R# I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, G. x$ k8 ]5 T/ ~( A' G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ o0 H3 s) l& J5 }7 @  F$ E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" M5 ?) d* ~3 X1 y2 Z9 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 \/ x+ {7 k+ h3 m3 [, J8 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 ^2 T/ R$ d1 I3 D, S$ E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# u3 D4 m( a' T; S2 r4 F( P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: ]; a( m8 b% J& k" l7 o( q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' o+ s6 z$ Y1 m  O9 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) o6 U: E. H6 |0 W, J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>