【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* G7 o! j1 B. Y$ [! X/ p- z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" w7 z7 }5 F. \, `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ M( q. J% A( H! c- L: Q' GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; _+ `1 `# F0 w5 N' a* eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 N) f5 ^4 U, O# X% ]/ c! i/ u4 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ y5 @/ o! y# d0 uEvery other word you utter is love
) O# c2 _0 ?5 ]$ F+ r3 C$ o; ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* m7 s" [6 x% w# Y2 W; r+ wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- v  y! w% S& T- ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ D  R7 H& h, XI regret not dying
) t. m/ F* M3 x, ]+ lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 p' d( j9 n4 |! r& O! R7 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( N7 y( F. O+ Y" W# t9 T5 P2 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; _, k# l' j* G1 Y- G1 t: w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! [( S8 z$ K# n. C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& P2 |, M! Z" B, |! A4 ^8 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# g. q/ {' `+ X/ V3 O" K( K7 B( U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 \- f3 a  i( F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% L. g. J7 v5 k* z' T) `- D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: |2 M" q! Q) @9 M/ W! R" P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 N- w2 k, u8 U5 Q, {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, p8 e0 v& P+ w3 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. k/ T2 l5 m: v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( t4 [+ }% s0 m# v- P8 ?, a- D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: k$ K" m8 m; e/ W  Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ R  t# u( h  s$ w1 ~& X/ K; p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 D  M7 i: z' ^( z# c" b5 d$ L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 t1 V  ?. F" `% l7 C/ }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' Y2 X7 i1 A1 X9 e; A. h# E; \2 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 o7 X3 U7 }8 Q' a& ]9 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 G5 l' t8 ^7 n7 ^/ z0 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* z1 _9 P9 l3 z5 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( u0 s& h8 ?3 z0 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! f# {+ W. N" \( z* [) l0 i8 d" R* K<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 l( }5 s% u: b! f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* H) o2 t  q1 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 d6 a2 _& u' h0 N, ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  U8 s% u' L$ d3 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ^3 ~  I9 m$ \- ~  u! B, [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ D0 R; y9 ^, P( i' e3 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! B# ^, C, ?. A; ~: J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 g: X0 a% O+ H6 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ Y, V8 m. C; @5 e& D$ x% z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>