【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- U" Z. j, L7 F# k; K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ c; q% w/ D5 V" n/ M( G& i7 s7 [0 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  l% W8 S( Z1 x. g' F5 R( M* ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ p! `6 \8 X, v2 B2 V9 a* R( HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" E5 ^0 S- U* X5 V1 r3 AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* l. S; A3 @4 n  S, sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 q3 J  ~  H5 @& w# _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 ~7 H. ^& B5 o5 J: w) F3 M* rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" z: I( t3 T/ l" }5 YI want so much to see inside your heart
( u% ^4 P+ [' w# g) ^+ ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 U& }" j! H7 Z( g0 P0 h9 c4 k" P- ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 i% ?2 E9 x4 E2 i" r8 @9 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) R$ H' ?  j' o9 Y6 L1 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. g" `4 @6 j! t; u  p2 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) J- g& A2 |" T& S' i) ~& P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 M; A6 ^$ Z# s* _. D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: J3 ^+ [3 l! V! X3 V; e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 j% E: u- u, j" V3 z% k$ g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. u# Y) c! i6 h; B) M. g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: @6 S9 a7 P. ?6 V( X' [$ b8 ^3 S1 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 ~& F) H' a5 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' H$ K8 Z% B1 W  F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% h9 U% a, k3 \# _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% J. `6 E( F  R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  Q2 D" B4 p8 |6 N8 d) y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" p9 K* O( a6 `. p8 w  l8 [  ^) T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( a2 N% k( _& P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" @* U' A) K: n% h) |% O4 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! d8 o! [% S/ x) L9 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& }0 M+ [7 @; [& X$ D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" A& C( d, B# x( ^4 a. Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ c: R( ^# A1 U- }  B9 `5 X  m$ h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 ?) b' p/ e" t/ C' m, ]# w5 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
; w3 g( M, A; j$ J0 L; X* C$ X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, q9 C( ~1 U. f5 j7 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ~; L: X7 X& I% W) L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* b7 K; G- p/ q, D5 q3 ?+ }" s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& v1 c* w9 N0 v$ s( ^9 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>