【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 i; y! N- w% [" [% Z/ b$ t5 P6 ?2 V% HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; q6 _# |% T3 o, nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 }1 m' f1 ?1 z$ k6 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' W& S$ d1 b6 [0 LWith the moon kissing it every night
) }0 r& o# ^$ U: R$ s. o: aSeeing the sky content with its love
; }5 J6 H7 e6 j9 I" VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; L8 [+ W. i! x5 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 s/ e. Q$ A5 hI really want to know just how much you love me
" K9 [7 w7 J! A+ ?5 CI love you I love you with all my heart
9 V: o  a$ s& V( ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' S4 z! r, D. C" s6 p% v  C+ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, T7 y$ a# Y8 u9 f: iI want so much to see inside your heart
, w( I. }  J) ]1 k- X3 `( qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 J" p6 H8 A% g3 i1 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, h7 J# D% ]5 g6 m& h2 |2 iWith such a tongue as yours,
$ _  g3 _% T" [5 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& z. A, B; Z' ?% w4 S$ w. BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 g. j4 M* ?8 o' O# ?: |4 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 I& A+ T( s( J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; n7 Z( A+ N& s, S: u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& a- F: |& t) g( d  ^/ R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 i7 Q/ {- q% D, F% x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" D2 g9 v) i! s1 Q* E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) y  p% a; ]( B1 S1 x# S: A7 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& w6 i6 I# U4 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ T6 r+ `5 C0 O8 e9 d, W7 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 D( d6 b6 E4 ]& Z) t0 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! w) m  Y+ Q/ U" L- J" O7 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ~: \1 x5 m! H0 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% f! D1 _1 n0 b0 J! Y8 }: ~2 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* A3 f+ s, X/ Y5 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 u0 f" ?9 n+ \) f& t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' d+ n! U, v3 k( c4 z5 j; U0 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% o# ]. F" F! k: v0 H6 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- Y% {9 B6 X5 w) O6 X+ o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 j( b+ |3 v5 w  j, ^6 P6 @2 Q! o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& ]5 v7 t# c# A  D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' W' l/ P: f8 s" S4 s# H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* M, g* U! j* m9 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 v- M  B* f: b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, w  c; `6 b) t& o7 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 J0 x7 h! N8 o% x7 y7 X  C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) C  k3 K- v: X$ ^" W1 \& l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 o- \# L5 E& i, P7 W6 a& b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% v, _  M  @9 e# W$ j8 e5 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 V1 ?. O/ d+ u" r2 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 G: d1 O5 m: M: N: i3 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>