【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 B. P; d' R  UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: D) n& a5 v# g/ E$ ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 Z1 p! ?. a- zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 W' U2 l' ?: ?2 @" YYou needn’t fear anything
' w$ O4 C0 o, R- gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ J" f1 h8 [' t6 l( ^8 yEvery other word you utter is love
7 X$ ]1 b: `5 }" X3 A# bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& u' O% P8 o, {0 X& xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. |. h& h4 y! a& W, v3 F( z, pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 y" H2 A$ p9 v) w1 k/ II want so much to see inside your heart
* B& X: R+ M3 Z' q  z/ g, NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 k( e: C" ~7 Z, S* K  Y% E" i2 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; U# J# t9 ^! Y% V& aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) ]( F1 `- P  g( w8 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: W' T: q2 h% G6 A9 @3 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' X9 A* N; w/ u1 h2 {# z+ u/ |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. p2 G" b% h- ^- A! w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% P8 x3 V7 v; R* x0 n% P0 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ r" j8 k, E* `. W# T: W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 b" s( c5 ]) ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& b8 N/ l" G  E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' l# N6 Y7 b9 F2 C* f, |9 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 e; \0 ^4 `: F, ~/ @) E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ]# q5 g/ ^1 `/ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- Z% a* X2 X8 d- i/ U* Z% X5 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ F. x. U& {& O* ?+ K9 w. x# o: q7 C- V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* }# o5 S3 n2 C% I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ c, z( J$ m! x; E8 B. ~- X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- g9 i2 S$ z+ |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# C1 M7 p# p) s' x. b' N) F9 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; X- Y# y# S" i7 O) }) u+ \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ?  K3 p: w) d. ?- b+ M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, T5 S$ t7 i0 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& K/ d! ~* K2 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# b* i# S% L- j& h& ^& ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) F4 f4 y) ?! C+ r+ S" U" r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. N! G8 C, H1 M" R0 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# K: E& Y' ]. m- l( ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 E$ [2 o! R3 t- Y! t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% k; u, O1 k- a2 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 `) K5 Q7 R5 F* O: h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& B1 O" K0 {3 @+ C: o1 `" c2 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 A( L: j/ B& p% p" ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>