【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& k1 S4 R4 {2 B4 n, GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  D( x8 h0 r# Z4 R/ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ u) g+ o2 _$ g( K$ T& U  c0 w  j" kWith the moon kissing it every night
6 D8 x& y& O/ e; P2 n) a3 I4 I; H7 J5 W. m+ tSeeing the sky content with its love
2 _* u7 T0 B4 p2 D% C5 e1 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 i+ Z& i: B8 i- S' _" XI really want to know just how much you love me
* P0 d' p: _% H$ H' c4 ~( EI love you I love you with all my heart
$ c* J1 O) i+ S5 h, C9 s" B. uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( ~" F3 d/ B9 i9 e6 I% xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# Z8 ]8 ~. x9 l- n4 v) jI’m still filled with fear
# Z+ M5 g4 {  I# \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) V( v+ j/ x8 G5 F; c# G$ o% J1 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 t+ p& r5 O, _; {& c% Q5 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ d4 I9 l( h- U' E9 k. S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# S( r' Z4 e& V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 K4 g7 c' Q& e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' T* Y0 W# r' c& l  e3 p, m; F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; o. v9 `) ~  p( F4 H  g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( ^- O) r- q2 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# n1 D9 T& S3 V1 y. Z! X1 \/ P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ B! j) Q: I/ x8 U5 D8 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 X1 s) B; D- U. R+ s0 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- b% J! p% W) w2 j: J# b1 @* W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, }$ M+ W" T) N( \5 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 n1 U0 E* p2 y5 N. L5 D6 y) }* l$ [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. t, s; ^4 k2 v6 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  r( F4 E, h7 e5 s: u5 q% ^& J/ a/ \1 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 I) V- z4 k4 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ H8 u9 I) S$ h$ v2 J6 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 t7 H. e, @4 {5 D9 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 i8 m" i- A6 u9 Y- w6 x/ l3 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 V+ p( i+ I/ k4 C7 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. X  z5 ~4 Z6 p( [2 _9 b4 f5 M. r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, m, y% u% R# N  W6 e& x8 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# w$ ]' V7 C1 H0 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' @, Y' p& Z! s9 f" ^* t0 r& Y: C% n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 _( e1 l( x* U5 n. b4 |8 i0 d4 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 d: L' \7 F) P( |" v9 n) `4 O  [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 y' a" ~. A& C+ v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' y" B& p: h, V0 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ Y4 D/ h. B9 |' s3 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 L! M" L+ }  s- s9 w) J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# s" M( m# D6 Q9 k' F, T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ l  c1 m3 q' e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 @9 n+ N, Y# F) _4 `+ Q. u: c! q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 }- U- i% [) g' e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 D; k) _6 t8 T9 y9 f( |4 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, \' g8 p; W% P# p- Q3 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 M- N, E+ w  M2 U+ R/ B" x" }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- \/ [% t& j/ h' R我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>