【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: a0 G# ]& G0 @3 J- B+ w, A# eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; @. M1 I& g, j3 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# n' m* o! N# Q9 a; Y) VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 {0 l7 l9 l7 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 L7 P: s7 |. U' CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 q! X& L& g; Q& K* F$ c* l1 i% CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( u/ }4 n' d  S! _4 H  QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( \  b2 ~& R5 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, x. q& I+ k7 r2 F# bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' k- b8 j5 i3 K, L) f$ C) J/ Q7 oI regret not dying
; u$ ?$ S% s, oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- G) z' S, G, T. CWith such a tongue as yours,
7 H& U8 |5 m# [4 F4 X2 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 L% I* u/ j2 M! `& x4 {8 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  I6 @! J# _! P- {+ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 I3 ?8 C7 J1 F" }: e, K, C; t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 h- f8 c  Z5 U& y8 S# X. {- e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 m" R3 a8 t: b$ A; z7 C  h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 [. N. f" F4 t, @* P1 q6 t9 U( [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. N  X9 G# {+ ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 V8 L  \5 C4 K' k5 s, s" u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- p( t+ z7 Z( _2 j3 ?. t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" u9 N+ {+ `# r# V: b1 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 t/ _; H- ]/ [; P/ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ P2 y2 q6 e% |" D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( M& C+ @8 ]6 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 x% ^7 |" Q- f; Z3 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 T; l+ x6 i: |. I/ c# n; O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, y: j. c& Q/ L3 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# t7 \  W8 E5 d" A- u. V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: X5 O/ w. J/ p  Y0 r; b' ^# J; t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, d) Z& I. e4 |! `8 n" K+ y8 o5 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# H0 ~- v4 x+ Z7 {/ q$ d& y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; m+ b& j# ]/ W9 |3 ?0 J4 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: r$ k! H/ ^. x4 F& ]* f* V# g5 {8 v1 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* @- b  W  f! @$ q& X# j8 }3 p9 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. i6 o- ^! m! K' S2 q8 z- v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: m% U. }1 W% h7 [! v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 @" E) E1 k5 i2 s& i2 c* K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 @) m9 \' P# Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 s  ]2 R$ J1 H4 V  P9 z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 N* x  Z" A7 ~- I8 }4 f! o, d" K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>