【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 u0 b4 h) _% n% o2 }+ H* n0 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 R. z! v( v3 n5 W" S0 z5 NWith the moon kissing it every night
- |% h9 A# z& `8 }* dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 D6 g) C& d' r# }1 QEvery other word you utter is love
9 t5 S! x- X- @+ a8 CI really want to know just how much you love me
8 e  `5 ?) p$ G2 L9 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 f, Q" A+ O5 d5 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* D) f! [; {% K$ u/ p! u% uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* O, e+ h$ u* O- E# QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 m# [# E- `2 i: w+ @# A% GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 ^+ ?& \! v# c2 J" M5 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ _8 H0 ]+ d( Q: u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 F0 R( y3 N/ h6 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ]5 o! r5 g. ^2 H9 W$ N* s7 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, V  p+ d8 J! q& Z# ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! K1 A4 ^/ Q. _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 T, I! i# g  Q3 v" N; Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ I5 m: P# v/ w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ W# G: r! B9 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 _% z5 |( A' q1 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: b" g8 }+ J/ r& D- [& t* b; N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 Z4 ?( i! C! j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ n, A" F8 \8 R1 b4 `* V- e* w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ z; t1 ]# O3 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. ~# C( B% t3 V% U* {4 Q7 F' K( K$ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' Q9 F" \% K5 E, e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ N5 F$ N. |  b! u* M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ R+ i- y8 X2 Z" \% m$ p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ C: p8 Y, b7 y0 s% z( R! H. ]% d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 Y6 z# q. X% {4 X  i3 [( p<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ]: T0 l4 j' x7 f& T, P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- m# [' d: h( [) Q8 G. e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! _. b6 E: w" H: J. o/ h, z) K5 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. r  N2 _5 P) u" V5 C5 c, H- ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, \6 F) ~% A& ^8 @/ h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 w7 {3 h2 y4 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% i( P: l, `3 `! C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& k) R9 R+ e/ D% L4 x3 g, p8 R6 z4 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( d2 ]. }. B4 ^; k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>