【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 Z8 e5 a7 t: p% p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: u: x$ f9 O  q6 d" v; `0 F3 [! aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. f- M' A0 Z7 C3 k$ `" o$ T5 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 ^& _0 e4 |4 u3 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% j* l8 Y4 O. ?" g* n1 Y; FYou needn’t fear anything
+ s* y: z: d) \, T$ B7 S# VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 C# u' U' W- x4 G, {: EEvery other word you utter is love
% Y: d7 I) F1 bI really want to know just how much you love me
4 s6 Y$ }$ k; h) aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 I% R2 `8 n9 y5 s! BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ d/ Z% V) F  m0 S4 M& a4 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ n" ?3 E. v3 T! {I regret not dying
* C: s. p& O" E3 `5 }) v5 R0 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 k# A& }5 O7 M/ l; y6 R4 WWith such a tongue as yours,
* ^% k* V9 y& a( |1 R# T3 s* Y! mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 d% W$ L' M/ S% p) b- c+ _2 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 D0 ^* d% o# z* ]$ T; k; b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: G" X3 p/ W* P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! L' I& F/ S$ t: l6 J6 i$ m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; \1 |9 i- b! u, n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 }7 O7 B' w$ G% a5 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# v# K" `6 p; r  U3 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& Z2 u: J2 S/ v2 C( `8 ~$ d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  j4 ]3 O- d1 A# V- _3 I0 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" v( X- h. T8 d7 o4 v6 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- h6 l4 k) r" ^! ~: l/ _; m; E2 c% E0 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. g3 w3 o( w" k' ?  J/ g. ~8 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% V' m1 C; o. N1 Z* s* O0 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  @1 O: A% D9 R+ s) ?9 X9 ~8 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* Q4 t$ t$ g# a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' E  H; I3 e" z3 m9 i6 q  p* Q% W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  O0 m' E6 D) t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 D( s" c) t4 c2 Q. O9 U! l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" o2 ~% y" \- ~" o/ x: _/ {  ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 y* z  }& y* s3 q8 C3 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* a9 |7 ~" f: H' X" T' H4 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) x" }/ @+ Z+ x4 b6 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- i  q! C" K* D1 T; E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ {) _# a- H* X, e- ~  F$ F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. r) h2 W4 p3 w) d; N5 ^/ x; O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* e2 E2 B& n5 |. G' Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% t* ]1 ^1 [( E7 X0 H5 d3 x+ t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ ?! P8 j- e4 E# }/ q( l, L3 U, v1 u! d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% R9 d; }2 E. g2 A0 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>