【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( H5 X* ~3 R+ X$ L( H3 q' R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( a5 d" ]. G/ V) ~1 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) P$ V1 E9 g0 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
& r* I+ N6 w, u# ]  [) E( mWith the moon kissing it every night
/ A9 G$ C; k, S. v2 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
) A) i4 v7 e" p3 I' [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ N+ v( @4 V: q3 w- _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# V) A. O% e* `$ bEvery other word you utter is love
! Z! b$ B( [% _; a- b4 y! G1 h  U( jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 h3 F. J7 ~& l5 e4 X' g7 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 I( i- v+ v6 V+ t1 W# F' DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, P1 d- y  m* D5 l) |' c! NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! v; C: t$ v2 n1 B3 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* n; }# c3 s5 u/ E1 v; NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ I) i' a1 x  D8 y3 t/ GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: _. M5 r% r" `  V6 O5 }' B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) M! H# G4 b0 A, x! l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 F4 j7 s, x- k" f* S- K  _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& T( |/ ?/ e7 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# D" u2 `5 a- n$ D$ \5 c  ]. N, ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 F9 d4 O  |" S& d: u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& O  K% }8 C/ l  j9 M/ }$ }  t$ V* o: |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 f' Z, H  {* b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! M3 R7 @3 P1 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ]4 G# e# }5 k. {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 n( }4 t( }" ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 N. p1 k8 q3 \/ _) g% m# Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 n0 {- j4 h+ u- t3 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; E* z* H' A6 R( m2 A# N% A6 N# A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. a' |  q, T# B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. X& @, O3 n; `5 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 D5 l( t  q: r; A9 s9 y! }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- q3 U; P+ G5 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* z  f$ T* {6 y6 g1 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ D0 i- R' Z5 @' }4 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ~6 J# Q! P( l3 @/ f, k. f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, R* j1 T6 G6 W0 B" s$ r& }# [$ S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ w+ W) J+ w5 X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, E" l! {6 J4 R) P6 e8 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 z3 ?5 P1 r( t8 T- C7 F+ ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ d6 e1 C4 E; L& [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# I; C, u$ A( |3 `0 W2 b  y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 N2 D$ A% ~2 k. o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, s$ l- G1 q! h5 E. |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* L) P6 w" I4 ~1 r5 l! f, k. G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, h! g2 J+ ~$ n7 E: Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>