【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 t' E: U' p$ ~' w( A& S7 C. }/ e# QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" y/ P; U: e4 E/ a5 S  nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' A1 K1 {' l9 t9 O$ [8 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' k& l$ ?. B2 i5 {$ Y3 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# c! \% i( t7 LYou needn’t fear anything
: f. {0 a3 e7 c/ H% _; _) AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% ]; p: D! e' V$ y4 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 Q" }( x) _$ |1 i' Q( B8 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 V' j- S8 `/ z4 I5 v8 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 E1 i! S9 N0 B) }/ n: e1 ^# g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 H0 Z; w. F4 f7 t* \- ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( r0 J5 b7 J6 V/ V: u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; T9 [9 B7 p( p" I$ t3 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 J% z! K$ a- A: a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( k+ e- a+ e* H& ]4 [" _& ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' M* p5 S8 t! c2 Z5 z) ?: R/ t7 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 H, ~. w2 @9 o# h: a  e# A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% N, P6 z; C" G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" v3 U8 R2 x4 f% D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! \: M- m. W' Z# G+ ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 B9 N0 E, U7 I4 v$ ~& }5 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: b& ^; ~: y+ B' h4 x0 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# A# m: i7 z' ?" R4 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Q3 e& a" B" b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% O% m  ~' b) e) X$ K! A; F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 b6 G( x( `; B- k2 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, }, {* y+ y2 D/ y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% }; s1 [  g  C! A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- s" g) z& q9 H1 Z" x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) v) F# |+ s3 |5 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( `+ S, ^9 U) t" s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 d5 K7 a1 k! u5 X8 n( d( W8 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! n& O  P/ ], F1 V' h+ q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 v4 m7 Q2 e: _( _! h  d7 t! L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  M% x& D  ^* F3 |" M. ]& e! d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>