【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ]& C% }' Z  C- HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' i' ]' C8 B: D. @/ j6 c* kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. a0 D# k5 D3 }2 ]+ l# zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 k9 }8 |8 K1 w& p. |1 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
+ n) G1 I1 V( I( r  Y, ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- O/ m7 P6 {4 Y# pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 |. B. w) Y1 O5 O6 \+ zI want so much to see inside your heart
: a! o7 }2 J/ c, ~$ Y* QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 d0 B8 Y; S  I2 t2 @8 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- I* m& b, B, {) n* D& }I regret not dying
' g& y( f* Y- Q8 U0 p" M$ FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% Q. P9 b' h! k5 y9 ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 U9 A2 ?! I- H& X, aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! r! ~" A. z  M' `( {3 m5 S4 ~+ XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( q$ c5 `4 k5 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ N* A  Y* B3 @6 z2 j6 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! W. R2 q; \* `2 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: f  [7 |) a2 z% L6 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 P( T% v% ?8 P9 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ ~' h6 G8 P) v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 R* S$ {' t: x7 d, k5 [9 k  D5 p0 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 c6 J% @& p7 V8 L+ d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, c! C/ q) D2 G! ~& x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) Q6 U. F' F+ }; T' l7 J, j: x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 M# `4 i4 J. ~, K2 t! v5 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( C( J1 s6 W/ F3 Q2 U) Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 {. P  ]: S2 c( o: g1 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 [3 M0 J! k/ ~$ ?' P* z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- ^1 V/ T, K7 z4 |8 q* N3 F5 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 C; ?2 w1 u% E; f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 {% j2 o/ t8 y4 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# |% P; `4 |, F/ o7 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 E, t" O0 n  f: ]1 p# u& v( c. E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 j, {5 b/ A4 o7 |* Q# i6 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% D! v' s5 j, _- p, f0 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& R$ Z" l# h) A. `+ Q; K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% W( V8 [5 h* ]' J3 J) m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, x7 F1 S0 J, E% M9 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>