【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 G0 J; p( o, d/ [2 d8 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- e5 X  _) x4 ?% PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* s2 B4 s9 E! _. zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- ^6 X8 ^5 m7 G/ sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) g+ E! r( D6 s' O  V, G' NEvery other word you utter is love
/ o$ f( @0 L" G, aI really want to know just how much you love me
8 u8 r1 I0 n7 J0 ]+ @! DI love you I love you with all my heart
/ J9 W) ], `- }: u' _3 U. m5 T5 u% Q. FNothing can compare to my love
$ [7 H% A4 I. Y# WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 T9 s1 O3 I4 F( U' s( X# CI want so much to see inside your heart
& h6 s  D8 R8 F- uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 Q8 U2 {" w! UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 P! f% ?+ p) Q2 E/ ?: iI regret not dying
1 D" v! J  [5 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 i$ X( j( B6 V+ t6 G3 h- aWith such a tongue as yours,
3 f0 }3 x' ~5 |  O1 x' dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# E% b5 b: k0 r* }* X* C5 \  @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 S- i6 x: T  N- W) F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( V+ ?- b: L  [4 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' t( |% C! k1 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* U  f( b/ y9 ?) |8 @% m) x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ^# D3 P! q" K. \! y8 H- `2 i: b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* \& u6 i- w+ E" _2 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 z4 w6 {9 B: }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 v3 a7 W2 k; r* j4 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  m9 T; e3 w+ o' h9 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 i- o( m' ^4 H. Z" g8 w7 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% k: R2 ~! J0 k  T8 I; L' I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: i+ _9 f9 y; D3 f) o<P>你无需担心</P>
9 i' L% z1 k  Z  A2 T4 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ f8 E; d% a6 p% s3 d  l* X0 y8 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' e1 F) R, C7 s8 Y9 Q" R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M: b$ w+ |" f* L& H% P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* S- G  j9 v/ D& g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) _" E) m5 P' t0 h6 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 w1 k9 h  u; ?& {1 g! P2 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; V* l8 q# [- R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ t: q; S, v, ~# {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. w/ {6 T  m8 P# R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ^' B, c! `8 d) a$ P5 a, t, G4 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& c" q9 j& \6 n" Z4 O: D<P>I regret not dying</P>
  u5 P( v9 H" n2 E3 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ ~) G4 y- j/ k5 s$ g. u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! N( Q! o8 W% E8 H+ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% f' n0 O, }1 |' J; z" P# {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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  s4 Y: M9 W! @# U, }% h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>