【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 I  z, c) }1 V- C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 R% a7 b3 V( WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- W8 \: n6 l1 [+ X" bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 Z$ J  G( w$ H- @/ Y& vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 I$ d; C+ N0 ^) H6 b/ wYou needn’t fear anything
- E/ R  J0 L- `1 P4 A9 m" x  yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) S+ h/ c- j4 `1 f' z8 RI really want to know just how much you love me
+ c, @# D7 u7 g# hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- a, f$ p+ l* I, O/ n! j- aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 n# U( }! V2 o! F' v6 i3 B$ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' t* y6 d0 Q" R0 O  nWith such a tongue as yours,
# I9 V0 ~9 y6 j/ U8 Y  S& FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ m( I* Y4 c; M3 j0 B1 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  y( |* Y! n+ O/ v3 L1 z3 F. Q1 V! ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; `- F) x. r% T- d( L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" s9 d" j5 `+ f6 R  F5 w$ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, c$ \( K: I% ~1 r/ {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. z& U" y3 K% d: q1 L* b% H- W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ k0 h0 ^* ~4 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: v' [/ V. C9 U3 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' W9 Z+ s; o2 f6 \! D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" _' A- b/ w2 U/ {2 M+ O6 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! e/ f" |/ \3 p) ]4 K% s% `( C5 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: E' g$ T3 }; d' ?/ O. Z, H% D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  D3 F- h" l; T& W6 u2 J9 }2 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 O( P' Q! ?% w8 B0 S1 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 o6 R6 n( L6 n4 h$ K* r: X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* D" A3 k. H7 E2 |5 X1 s1 ]# |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 X' X4 o! I3 G1 @( [0 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 I% X$ A0 j/ R) O* W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ I, D2 o/ k. G8 J$ g6 W- \$ m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% ?  G* K6 t) C4 F1 @$ x. O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 O  z7 a* ?$ I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 T  q3 e" ]  r  l) }3 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
" p  t! f& s: M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) ?0 K$ B% H4 {  {& Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' @) \! y9 j. I% r7 V" T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; r( Z% j& i( ~' C5 d& u0 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' G2 Q8 P7 a7 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 }0 r" d4 j+ y( p, R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 K! W. U, R- h; a# v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>