【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 E" r) V2 O8 e% I4 f& B) x2 J+ c歌词我附在后面。
: f% ?6 q$ D7 V3 i" qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, R( Z# n6 a/ C- r) qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 g( D% H) R$ e+ G) W* z/ ASeeing the sky content with its love
" t" U2 r- U3 z- q6 v' A4 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% c7 M  J! r4 H; F* d3 \* |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  [9 A9 ?6 {4 [% e2 hI love you I love you with all my heart
4 u" k' m$ V9 `% SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* n( J4 ^: h: [# m, ~' ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 t1 i6 h5 D5 ~2 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  M$ }2 S  {. Z$ u5 T* r4 V* JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; _, ^3 z. f( E+ v5 P5 r' z9 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" q% v. q+ k, H4 _0 u. bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ d# A/ [% G) @9 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! _" s& _2 `: k3 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ w- ^  u5 C# \/ j: ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' x5 G; N- s' u* Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 q9 y/ @$ M  e& e3 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  h3 B& x. ?  U6 @+ o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! R2 N( ]4 V, i9 s6 [2 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  k: R! @/ Q1 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; A: V: E: ]# q" f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. t" W9 H; a  m. K# u/ c, B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  e# n6 t. G7 d& {' A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ b6 A9 I# |* t& ]- s8 G& p! L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% I5 t: T6 C1 f. P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 R7 |) @" J* B. J6 G- T* B- H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( S7 n& w8 b7 K/ X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' }7 d7 s; I3 h: T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, _9 T1 x  p- V7 K' O# T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ x0 c; w3 N7 o( y0 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: W( i0 L+ x* r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# }' }4 y: O" k+ N7 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 V5 y" W0 m- i6 ]1 g9 T8 B! t/ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Y: }$ y/ C" X2 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# ^8 j- Y% S  k) h8 a- d8 c9 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 _; w5 ~+ g$ C: W% v! A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ Z& n; q- \8 o! W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; K' H8 c! z' s$ Q" q9 U+ Z' B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* h5 v# b% p, \" H& s* x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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+ M5 x2 o/ M6 q) C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>