【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% C% F* A. N  G$ a" D- i- l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  C' c; S) a+ e! A- X" j7 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) g# p. ~. W) a& w- P& wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 x9 K6 K0 N& d% W* q: u( V: HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ r" P6 W" X+ K' {2 C  o$ yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% |6 w# M" L2 _- [0 [: q% ?+ \I love you I love you with all my heart
! _! t4 y1 b; Q! T8 |+ o, J0 u0 wNothing can compare to my love
4 A1 ]1 b& _; D% ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 F7 z- R/ I  \' `' d$ }* s( {6 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) K1 z7 V; ~0 J, HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  n: Q: m& Q: O+ R; s9 F. IWith such a tongue as yours,
  T6 T$ |& P7 h" \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ T8 A  v: v8 y" d/ GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! m' a# y( ^6 R/ ]# n) a; g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 k, f# ]* p, k2 e0 O' q) k; _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ j! F9 h/ }9 x4 [) T$ c% i9 A1 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ?1 x# `' t# Z/ F; V8 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# e) D9 E2 O2 j8 Q% u- K7 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; A( n' ?  }( B& y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 L# e- E# t; E) U( a  [, ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 \) ?4 `8 r2 h8 F& x' @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& D8 e+ W) R, C& w) x9 I8 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |4 h# Q( L: X! ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 C% a( x' r/ K" @& o9 F$ z. y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; }: Z$ }  p8 ]/ p* a7 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* N, _; F, b9 |2 X* @/ c0 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 q+ x- Z+ a( f' P) t$ _; H2 l, y3 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 ^) d. j( B, D. T/ ^8 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 i% Q& C2 t4 ~; h& n) s( ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 U* W6 f0 t( Q/ }' b' {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  ?# I: ?5 f2 Q' g3 I7 A4 Z# G$ c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- O" ]; _5 q& A! e6 a) ^  B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& N5 P( M, T7 ~( W  ^* U1 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ L9 C( t# B6 N7 [3 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- u5 u- i# p, `; a* R- Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ w9 i6 S' M# m2 D9 n3 D' H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: ^8 Y  t. E1 U& H- F5 E1 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' P7 }- P8 Z3 ]) n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 N1 e- N% b  \, t. @5 Y, d0 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" A2 q+ K, [$ J9 c, M3 s; q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>