【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. [" t1 L* h/ z8 C. \1 o+ V* W歌词我附在后面。
9 r8 V2 }1 t5 D( mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( B" @* ?( D: b$ d2 ], x5 O6 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- i  e; d; J1 R6 e& B8 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. q9 R+ o/ M/ t' n* iThe sky is happy down to its soul
# N3 D; c- N) Y/ N; ~, B! AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# N5 j% A" ]3 I# p3 }' W9 |) B1 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; V* y, z; q( [0 l  c' ~) {2 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 B2 d5 L: O3 m( ^Nothing can compare to my love
# `; o- w3 C+ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" P7 [" ^3 F3 C$ l5 X2 J; V1 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' t6 a2 w' O8 `( v3 M" A1 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ s( Q/ b) t0 ?* fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 y, j4 P: v5 V, EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 ~# W! P% j  _8 ^& _2 A, sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. a" U# O1 v# ^9 c( l6 E- d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ]5 @& C* v7 M- y+ R! c8 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* D2 p) ?; ~0 a* F5 n+ `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: ~% R0 V+ M+ k) Z. G% ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 O- v- O" D3 {) a) l. S- s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 a  d5 S) }/ Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 Y9 q4 S0 E" ^' A* M5 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 k& d1 w) Y1 X+ D. i, Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) g2 P) I7 D3 M<P>你无需担心</P>
& G. r1 }5 e8 X& s" y- \( x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 g8 s3 j  M; ?8 c. F$ R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. F; x. V5 \8 @4 \" Q0 @6 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% u: b; k# K0 Q# B5 I- k# i0 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; y* L. ]2 p/ F# U# M! s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: C% s; q6 f; u; r' F, |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. t9 I+ d9 x& S/ M3 S/ u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 N, B+ {0 o: Q; K; D2 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ]3 \: p5 Z7 ^1 }5 N5 P: }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ^' Y# \, L& w$ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! G, ^$ ^: @  e" L8 M# ?6 s" O3 M# F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ]' ^: Q+ p6 z$ s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. R8 d5 `  v& t# `' K7 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 q' ^" I& i" K% C& Q( i& G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* m2 C9 @4 o' |5 D/ Z% h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 n3 z5 z' W- F, m5 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( Q( w1 D# k3 [6 c! V0 ~1 B我请你剖开它
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$ g. E0 W+ }* J+ V4 h. h. e% @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 `  ?4 p: F+ S- W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>