【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  C9 T5 B; |$ I1 D% a% L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ ~9 ~4 \) f- d8 w* dWith the moon kissing it every night
/ o& W, G4 C8 x* j# @5 j. d7 |Seeing the sky content with its love
" ]% a+ p# p1 v+ k, uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, Q9 n  r" H/ e$ q% L( E/ V- yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 K3 [6 D6 X9 S8 q" [- ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! a- s8 d* J2 X% c+ C. v  PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ Z& i8 i  l! m5 `  i: B5 t5 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 K$ ?. X  T6 p; J; NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. X& J2 y7 e8 B2 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ A: [& h* S0 a6 K- UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* u% h8 J7 G/ J! G& j$ }! E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 ?8 Z! ^/ F% U: [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; c- O( R* a- G: r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& e' ^, B% Z# Y4 c6 D" x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 Q0 o! G8 x# x6 {  M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 r8 a; F! O& |9 O5 n; Z; ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 t3 _7 L4 I0 I/ V5 y4 X/ M, E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, j5 s8 P3 O8 ~3 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ^7 b9 m7 m8 c<P>你无需担心</P>
  }6 H7 X  p; y3 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 `$ a* c: b  _) F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 x5 ~* R4 v( X1 Y+ u0 ?( Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ x5 G) d3 Y) j2 Y6 x- ^( P9 o% l- @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* z1 h) E& s7 W* [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 [3 j. @: g4 d7 d- {5 @0 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 T  ?7 _& ^- S5 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ^( F' W4 ^, t- G6 j. f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% G1 S* u! i3 y: b" [* U* }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, [& e8 ~/ Y! J& X3 n7 z$ ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; R7 X" w5 g2 j, {$ Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ B. ~8 `) ]* `1 A0 I( F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; e5 j" }$ R0 R* D" c8 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 u' }! D7 C3 ?; z" Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 u0 }5 S$ o7 G% F7 d" m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* T- ]# T$ Z) e5 ]' ?我请你剖开它

' H. ^/ v: M# H6 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>