【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) m$ x% u6 ]9 j0 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ Q! |( E% A; eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 g/ B7 L" b9 S  cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 f6 W: M- Q3 v" S4 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# G& H7 F0 i( I7 p% i, N) l: GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 I* H. i7 F& P# [8 uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 h& Y9 u% d' \: }6 W- [% tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, B+ H! Q! S# O5 k% y6 V% \I want so much to see inside your heart
3 m7 ~1 i4 M0 ~$ }) TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# d1 J) v0 C" p# m& A* r/ x$ EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% x& y- T% ]8 u7 d# V  c$ G* YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. _3 Z# i4 U4 S! _' R# X, \$ C8 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) \0 r- N9 P( o- ^' F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 |) h/ {! r) P5 U5 X* D+ a7 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 }+ B3 x8 L$ ]* O  a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, G: j# f2 Z6 ~8 N  n# A+ U* [3 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( G! y# R8 N4 @4 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ c9 W# Q% \! W7 P8 N  j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! z2 p; }6 |' Q* B/ ^- o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* i$ Y6 v8 d! q7 w4 C2 Z9 m# O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 R& o3 w. V3 Y% R3 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 U7 p& {5 {, `2 @3 R& }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 w9 M4 w9 ~  a' @0 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ u5 }8 L$ |" _6 T; Z2 `- _! }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ i4 B% i: e: u- Y9 G<P>你无需担心</P>
9 O& B9 g# {1 J6 e3 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ ^: |- l" B% b$ ~! n5 B2 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: d) c; ^% b# ]& `( ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( I1 I1 N3 O- Y- K6 K0 W2 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 x: [8 A8 ~* ], J) O' X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 j4 r, T% a2 a6 I1 p. z+ O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* c6 Y, \0 g( v7 U, c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: v( }8 R. X% Z" {6 _  m1 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. Z. F* l& v! G6 B' g7 E4 L5 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# _6 n; X! m; |/ z- k3 y. ?  N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" {+ F9 f  A/ @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  y  a8 U9 }+ o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! y) \7 O# P( H# \% x" E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 }) z8 o. v1 m- x# O  p9 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 L- F3 D; x6 X* A; O4 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% a2 {6 B# T- f: N# G3 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% h1 @5 }- t* Z7 @+ j% ^# @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>