【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# _  N4 ~  N( [9 L1 B/ W; c, A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 {' h, Z; u  H8 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ?0 Q5 [0 ~( m) e! k( K5 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: d/ ^4 p/ @3 ?: u2 v% ]With the moon kissing it every night
, x  Y+ S3 e9 t3 P0 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" p" O/ R! q! y- i3 r5 o2 [0 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% m9 S* b  {$ `4 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: H; Y# q. A! o& T7 E  Z8 j/ tNothing can compare to my love
1 N$ Y' x. q, W" U. _/ v% ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# S" l. s# W# s8 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' S4 [) \4 A  \; h$ M* d, JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 b/ L- Q5 l" \8 Y- H- N/ LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. O5 ^7 o8 J' o2 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 z, f( X; j6 ^& a, I- `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 @9 w5 h% U( E8 V. }, R( R. K6 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, a' O" B0 k$ O# l- D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 D0 v3 R6 l. a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 t" E, o9 W7 Q6 o0 \- ?- g+ ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 y: ~  T  l% C; r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ r/ N! F* r! E' C6 B/ ^; ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: m6 Y7 v1 Q5 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' f7 F7 ?9 N1 p3 Z' s2 P/ Y& D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 R' Y; Q. ?$ f2 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 G8 U' M) ]2 u  n3 ]3 x% l. d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 H: p' }% |5 c) A) [# h' ~7 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) U8 y; j+ n, `1 m* l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* J9 s& W3 o4 H: V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. z% O* Z  g  t. d3 t2 J5 N7 e- v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 V7 k+ Q" t& w) t  j. h( d2 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 h, {3 l4 H0 ^4 q% t- E6 P# @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' v7 T! S& R  H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ w8 u, i' Q2 o( Q& s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 _1 Q/ U& v$ q* |6 Y3 i% K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ M! f) ]% @+ N& X3 M5 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 S% ?, V5 t$ T% d, J: I  t8 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ]; H) @% ^# ]/ D0 G  Q6 U, u5 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 D/ E+ w; A7 s4 B' O. x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Y. o6 i6 A5 x1 S  d6 ^* r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) k" h4 [# r  }1 _0 [9 t: |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 E3 ^- v9 d, O2 E( }6 A5 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 s3 i- ?7 a5 N$ b7 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- M! \' t4 E  u3 T2 x5 _7 _0 V* Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 j& W. Z1 E) C6 i; ]+ j" e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 _( j" ?' r, Z4 y9 V: W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 p' P2 b% D1 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# O  S5 h3 t& o) v; |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 I- X7 A) ]# W! z1 \2 P. f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>