【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( x( i% {5 `. HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( w: j( Q, n- D; S) |; zYou needn’t fear anything
% E$ @; Q( X9 M5 W' [, z- EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: D& [, F  Q5 H  b3 |: J' m) GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; c- m4 {& m8 x- |0 d3 XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ K& m! B+ A" Z$ x+ X) aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 a3 ~- t# D) C3 j  i+ FI want so much to see inside your heart
: p- H" j- I0 C; L* h$ m5 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# ^6 Q" z% L$ q. N+ X5 a4 H/ hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 j0 K0 l) J; d0 L* \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ _8 e: I! |- x& bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! E5 W/ u) |& I8 Z7 [' _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ ?8 ~8 p- C9 C0 e' L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 Q5 d9 [+ a/ r! P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; q' d4 U' K4 f$ g" u, P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' o5 V6 n4 Q( L. f- G& E: x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" g' U4 h% k6 ~: {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^$ }& r7 V# [$ x9 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: R# t, @& t: ^3 {( c& i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 @) K  y  m/ J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ], M7 |9 w, [0 J0 q/ e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! V# G# ]% C9 @+ h% _# Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 L! @: l6 m( O! h" e! D! N. N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 p4 C9 A( y! L+ P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 A6 \  J4 o4 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% E0 F9 Y, E8 j  w+ ?* y: H  c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ A& _: N+ ^  N$ y4 ?5 l, D) e* E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% Z' e: L5 E* X! F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( q% Z( f) f2 c2 N3 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( o. ?) y0 c" P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 o! d8 Z0 g' S" I4 X9 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# ^+ ^) D' Y  n+ H$ _- [: w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 _& I8 [$ Q* d/ E& Z0 A2 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ F. l6 `% A4 l# S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  n* I. ]* H1 e4 g) U! C! O' I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 @" y; C1 W8 J" j" n. t, a% e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>