【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  u! P% u; ~- ]& ~1 ?+ FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 M/ |5 [6 V6 K! W5 L9 }1 \; [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 c7 D, D/ W. _7 j, `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 S( B) m, E; g6 l9 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 o, T! t3 ^) a) n' i- TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; n! t# e# a% n. }0 z: L! yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' S& @& ]/ b0 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 C% s3 t8 s8 r2 m3 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ?' q: l7 @, O6 aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 ~2 \+ d" Z8 R/ `% MI regret not dying
* J) _" A" V' F# nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( G1 z2 U) o9 d. I1 P4 mWith such a tongue as yours,
& D4 k3 J- [) x! VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( r1 z: A7 G4 A+ YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 L. Z+ X0 X; vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 U7 P% |5 p8 ^# V+ U. Y1 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 U& L" @  B/ N- |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# _* H! {' m4 W" z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Y% {. l- x, h9 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; _, g$ F7 j5 j4 R+ f  _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 X. Q3 s- y: m9 P" x! \6 j3 j+ @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 ]6 W8 B; f- }8 q" n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% i- _2 W3 c- n0 D  z& l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' x& e' D* D. n+ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) s+ r1 @0 H. N3 e. V& L9 W4 A$ Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 Z) G' [6 @/ S6 \% K! F" f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 R( a5 B# d. c2 L9 o6 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 K8 w4 l+ ?- n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% l* F! c: ~' Z- }5 R7 c+ g: A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  H2 n" |' k1 O3 H5 @, I; J3 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ h. l) L9 `0 O; }3 e# @6 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 K3 N) f- Y1 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ a7 t& \1 r! G+ B- s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 c6 m# k- ?( S5 y7 A8 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 e  s! q+ A. C2 t  I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" O9 \; g8 z4 A+ o9 w, ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 O3 X( X- ]; f/ l6 `+ B% h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! r" J  ~; b1 s" {# w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ h( h: h6 K' L1 |) U8 ]" `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 }+ R) K9 K* ~6 C/ {! y9 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>