【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: h! Y& w$ M8 \6 t, v9 T; w歌词我附在后面。
1 B) d5 f2 Y* [0 F# TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ y9 x8 j5 M( t: [" f5 ?( q# V1 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* L& o" @4 R% o0 F- ]8 u) a1 D- bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! y% c( Z- G/ a' B' gSeeing the sky content with its love
4 b: Y+ H# y4 z! J& v! eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ q5 ]" J( C. E* d$ sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 R6 h. ?: I- z+ p6 ?I’m still filled with fear
5 x5 |6 ]# `9 J6 k5 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# y; b; {) x) r- s* cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. D) _3 ?/ {5 C1 |  q7 J' u9 ^# NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: S3 V3 ~: i5 m% \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. e9 P9 v& I0 W2 D7 ~# E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, f% m# R. Y; k8 _8 l; b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) F0 c. d+ [7 b- T) N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 G/ N1 l- L3 [' n  C. b$ B! Z/ |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ?+ [) `. F# r. R3 g% ?. a" E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" ]1 e6 C5 A# h$ H! ]! V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  \8 o2 v4 L% n) ]) c' e+ q3 W" Z1 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: G8 v, w$ V0 z; j+ D; I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ R$ V+ y9 ^9 y* V8 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, i* Q$ I- j7 B" B2 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ t2 d9 d) O9 Z( _8 s( {- D4 C% q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: z% S+ Y- k6 g$ w1 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; ]8 @3 C- f/ e; u# X$ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 Z' t2 a+ d$ M+ \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- g* y* o2 [8 z# |- J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ g7 x# a$ ~2 M# E" F/ `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ q. T* n. u, u9 A1 _+ y6 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% V3 C% S+ Z2 {- W8 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 c* m2 e' X& {! @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. `& V( G4 [1 ^. x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 n: O$ P% n7 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ X# E+ ]9 a- r, y; J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ v, d+ H5 H4 \% A$ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 m% W, f4 w( A# u4 w( U& E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( |* X# s; T" K" c! q<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 u, h, s' W& w% J! F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 K1 g/ x% k5 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 x+ G/ ]- d# Z+ d* L& \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; J4 A$ l/ Q$ r) v1 ?; i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 B7 W- p' |- P! I. r' G我请你剖开它
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& _( y5 V6 r+ a- E) O4 I( p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ N! L& A% P! _2 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>