【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% y" q0 i4 M: p8 H8 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ t& H& ?9 ]7 Q/ TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 K7 V6 O) T+ V9 h: f. t4 U( PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; u; d1 t: j8 f2 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 }  ^, V2 a3 I8 \Every other word you utter is love
, ]; i( N# O3 ?- g7 ]4 Y. tI really want to know just how much you love me
: a5 _5 m- I8 n/ B5 f4 ?6 lI love you I love you with all my heart
+ S2 F' M4 M7 b/ q# ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 v2 {' d& F& F% R6 E1 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' _, e. p- Q4 S. p0 `( JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# t6 K8 n4 |: h% ^- Y8 ]- l& ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* o- w- H5 q! ^& I' W: q' OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) a+ A+ k9 L9 V* YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* A- V3 p3 s4 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ D' r, P! J5 F, `. i* e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ d' n8 I/ A" f! R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: M0 m7 P1 h, H' i. }, Z5 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 h" r* o- ^9 _  j' a( Z+ V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' }, K" Y! ]1 L  Y* b# a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 O1 ~0 \  L* u0 u* ]  i4 a- Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" d/ ^4 n. E( B* U, X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 X* N5 @3 d/ x! F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 s# N+ J) q+ R& N) d: n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) w' X& c# `, K5 S6 }5 y7 ?$ m0 j4 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, p, V  I* R  i2 O  N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- t* q4 H! q* r* C9 D4 N: ~. M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  i6 n( X5 g* C9 D* h  p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 N1 X7 E! y' A7 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' f0 o( Y7 I/ \% Q! {0 X3 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 \  W! i- g% k' ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& I: R3 X( Q( l* x+ z( D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 A8 f- W" q! {: `0 L# s4 d8 ~5 E9 H7 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 c" c% ]% M! T% I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! j0 m  w! ?0 [3 ~. i( y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 J6 F3 A4 [- U1 T0 `% D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% D9 E" f. V! R% i/ ]) ?0 U+ a' I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 B; G& ?+ ~' ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' ^, G) M. g6 S* ?, T! Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% i0 g8 _: a" v" U8 }+ W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; X7 D; k# F- G' l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 I$ h$ ~6 V- p% ]! {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# L) e. `9 s% f7 X' `9 X4 k我请你剖开它

$ j/ K% @& w) \  N8 e- K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 u$ `& C! [5 }6 D6 ^0 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>