【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ \( }( F  |% p. ~8 _' L0 A+ q3 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# g" z* e( A8 O/ [" c6 Q% T6 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 W2 `& y3 ~: J4 W( e% ?7 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ I( c, H- W* nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ o% e# [$ T1 _0 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Z* G6 f8 U" G/ gEvery other word you utter is love
  L' c9 Z4 i& q5 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
/ U# x! F# W, B; {1 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# h9 q8 e; S  d: s! lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 C6 J/ ~' H: T; S. r; \7 vI want so much to see inside your heart
! `- s* c- ~9 P! V+ lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* C" i# ]/ y$ {- ?. g" v- J8 \, \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ [  i& U2 Z8 o5 m1 y4 L% t) s) PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 z" a- W; L+ G+ P5 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: V/ Q* n8 i0 [1 S5 m- |* b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ t& ^. ]/ v6 h6 X/ g3 q" v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 X2 k: w" K, v. [( s( i0 p- C- ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 k  I6 C# l& {$ m( E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 l  x  U; s( N! B7 l" l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) \/ Z! z$ }  o' m. t' z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) H  j. ~8 Z' L* p/ }! h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 M1 e: y$ h8 o6 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ v) J- u  h0 L5 a0 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 k- O* _, B+ |! I, n6 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% c2 n: E' }- v# m( N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# c! p: X& |3 S, B5 \: h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! }4 S* A+ i! x' e* R" U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! W- e8 x! E0 H1 f) y4 D7 V& q- D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ G& R/ w$ c6 c* n, k% \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ o1 ]% a' E  g' m# N# P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: U: ^- O+ F& U# L9 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, R  {$ v9 u6 o" l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ?2 @0 r" D7 p/ k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, G, M* L! j" h  X1 J$ t4 w$ P) ]3 G, ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) d8 \+ [  k. e+ ]1 Y* `% ~0 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# f, I  w( X3 c1 ~2 H+ v4 H$ L9 N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) K% B  O8 H- L# c3 }' J: ~+ p2 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>