【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* F. @) `. A3 ^( T+ d6 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! x$ G4 _7 ]  z3 W# U2 E8 F5 f/ I  TThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ F0 s  ^! b( J0 ?; `: U( i) fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: O0 q: c, u& g8 s6 y# e- L; FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 t7 L+ W7 G  Z) Q; V* cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( \$ H8 O* ^$ g: ^8 SI love you I love you with all my heart
, H# _1 a- B8 ?; {3 E* l8 \$ A* vNothing can compare to my love
# g, s5 L2 N* d7 z3 x9 Y( VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" g# q; u& z1 o. {3 K) pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 o0 w" b3 b& q: \  i6 o: G- q9 AI want so much to see inside your heart
' _: ^: C% F1 C! x% q% nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" F, }' W  s5 U0 C* @# d4 GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& q# p7 K# f' ~0 b' x4 ~! v" MWith such a tongue as yours,
/ g* X9 m+ G  z% z6 z. QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# }! L4 c/ e$ AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* f0 b8 t  y( s# |# L+ @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& x* |, E* K/ ^% m. j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 j- j  M8 k% O& V- o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) W! f* u$ J( l  h/ t$ P- p: `+ K# ]/ Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% U# @% l1 V3 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 a8 C# F0 r( I1 d5 o' o, ]: M8 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 _7 k- m( u1 Y) Q6 L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! g3 [7 w1 `6 t8 X5 p6 k( ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( Z7 c2 A/ u1 i9 m+ Y8 t/ U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 Q6 F, X3 p' T# [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: T! a" e  l, G0 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 d; Q# B6 w+ w6 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 j# W8 [5 x. n; @- |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" P' K1 h2 X; H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. F( U& }( H2 @' ^3 B; a5 @9 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) w5 k# r4 Y, H5 t8 u8 b4 A# p6 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* R& L$ P# E' o5 r' i3 E7 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ I2 y; ?/ S$ I6 ^4 q# A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# c+ }# h; ]" A- c; F1 h( R; d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 \: I4 V% z; _# r7 w8 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# [( E' }, I% k4 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* P9 W( z9 \. G: Z+ F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ~, L9 I! a/ t) A1 U; _) c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 |  Q: y! u9 D+ z6 M: G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; i4 v2 M* H2 o8 e5 Z0 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ `0 y) W% U/ B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>