【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. x, `* m0 }+ l9 u/ zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 V! }4 r% T7 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- I1 v; s* @5 G9 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 {5 x( o: M% y# K8 l8 N: mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ w, v% V$ J! W' @6 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& o9 X9 S. s+ u$ b; w6 qYou needn’t fear anything
7 w% c4 }, {( a8 w( x$ YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 a- e6 _! W) C; B5 j, CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* y/ i% W& O, a$ mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 O! a) z: b( ~8 Q0 x" _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 `# i4 ~2 E6 m- r" ]+ t+ d# @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 L7 q# f* E  r8 I/ _. a# QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 y1 w& C6 }2 a5 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 r: x, }7 T& d1 K" v. t+ O0 DWith such a tongue as yours,
  `( l. t( l0 h, BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; u  R* v3 Q2 K1 _' MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: L. k" x" n% f! _0 |# }% aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 `% T0 F- R& D$ Z) _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 |% I, [# W) q) y& z0 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! X1 [* P8 P* C% I2 Y  h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% k; e+ t0 [* s' m' \9 Q& r( t8 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& O, k- P) ]  A2 @: P# z* ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 e0 L  Z" ]$ Q8 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) [! @( \/ A1 ^; p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 \' S; b2 t+ M  A% u# o; R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. U2 e3 @% n, H& l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* h1 Z) h* k: n5 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. G2 s. o( T$ N' X. X1 u& z) J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: @/ o5 `+ C' T$ q' W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. J/ E3 L7 R  c3 x& B# f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 c" R/ o3 y0 B/ [8 e$ c8 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) K* K' z) A* i1 m+ Q" p: h: M3 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% h/ `, t/ g. F; D1 ~5 h! y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, @7 p4 |2 p8 p6 W( N* o7 r, E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, u. D9 B1 t/ q9 E5 Z: ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 n) y0 w; s$ d, c. c- U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 n! G' W! @* o, D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) y' I# m2 U6 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 Q$ {4 ^& c# C: A7 A4 }/ d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) s# {* H  I% {  b% k# g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 S6 y' B2 x( ?- l$ G: R/ @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  l6 T! W' \: t9 J$ \6 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% [, X' Q- [) e: U  Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- f" N0 V2 P  z0 n) o! }- v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>