【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 m/ U( J- R6 m6 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( q# D6 i) U) m5 @  ~7 U+ B0 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 o% u! ?! g2 O& @  Y5 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 k  l2 p6 G7 L: L9 y% F" xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ J, x  N+ @: n0 ?% eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. Z% }. j- t* Q/ @) D' eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 \% a1 C8 E* X: b* mEvery other word you utter is love
( x& G6 s4 a( ZI really want to know just how much you love me
# f  H' ~- \% V: F) u8 aI love you I love you with all my heart
8 R/ e3 C$ t0 XNothing can compare to my love
6 T, b7 b( y0 [; b6 E- H1 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 _" m' R5 C2 k# Z! UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ [8 h! K2 \3 b  S3 F9 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 p* T& j( Q6 U  q) [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, ]) _& g5 l  i! X3 u8 |, @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 Z' N( r. _2 i) K# ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! m, K" y6 ?, ]/ f8 ^6 y( h7 R( A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 j9 Q. w2 u- n0 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 |5 [. d( E- G; f6 S1 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 J' @7 a5 B8 t0 v$ w( d' Q; q# _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 [& l* F% I+ T# @7 ~& z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" Q7 R8 d* v9 F3 f1 ?/ H& s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  @+ n* s1 U! }4 B! T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; X/ Q) }! U4 W1 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 H, S% l  t+ z; c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 k" {$ E; M9 A; v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% b0 @8 D$ I! X! B% ?2 C1 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  t3 P, P5 W* m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) |' ^' `* N4 v) o- i. O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 O. o* d4 V! p; _" L9 p3 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 x( M, c% @4 f- f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 r8 ]7 x8 z+ K# q9 L8 J: c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& O" U+ t" b' S; b' Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- o( Q' d, `5 r8 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 o) @( k$ I1 |4 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 _" k8 M3 Z5 b) x  X, c% q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) y8 [$ z  a+ M% P; n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; [' f* v2 A, `# E( `8 y; O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& X* @& \2 U# w- }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' x% z2 M/ i! w; S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 R9 V2 k3 x0 y) o# j1 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Q# c. a: D3 @$ d  Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
' f7 t" G( _$ u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ M" q  p$ X$ G9 i# U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' [3 I$ Q: ]2 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ w' Y7 i6 @; j- Z' b" G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' v0 X$ H! ]' ?  F2 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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