【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 s" _+ x: n4 e& R- a' i/ U9 g歌词我附在后面。
9 @& R- _; G9 {, p. [6 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
( v$ o5 M( O/ H% w) hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 P5 [6 K) ~& x9 E6 I) b) q5 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# l: h9 d: \( L& sSeeing the sky content with its love
2 w+ r% Q# T* A+ O1 j/ o+ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ Z, x' [; c6 O9 X8 S) ~Every other word you utter is love
: N) Y) P# o+ J; YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 T9 z; K( |+ f' x4 \- {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 u; c4 w3 i; [- U6 l6 z: D6 O) h( }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; [, F) F5 e3 C# K: a! D* TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# s& w8 T  i% f; jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( `: e+ H$ _' x) a0 J' I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 L( K6 e4 B4 I! u, ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 }0 `6 g& M7 p' [! b1 a& e# d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* T7 i: {6 J+ V- d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ y, m1 E; p  f7 N8 Q! x* c+ J0 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% F- a5 {9 ^- \7 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 F% ^3 S1 J( `( S, C' P8 J+ _0 O* T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 f7 x$ Y, A5 G. i+ o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 W  l2 I- m2 P# y4 l' I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! U/ w$ j+ X4 [$ _$ ~- ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( P1 `* [: a; r* K9 _" B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 h( L# h. F1 }% p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 l8 [- ^9 v# P' `& L% r7 F6 r) b' _8 w3 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' g7 v- H$ O, ]7 d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. O; {/ n# d, ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 Z6 {1 \7 c3 H7 d$ H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 {5 ^( D5 G' [6 D. e+ K$ m$ H, a; \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 k- S9 O- ^: K. E1 f# `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 \9 w- a5 o, I8 T: }0 }: o- X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) U% [" }4 }5 @6 v3 _! R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ [' n9 [7 r* @' p1 Z) ^0 w& {+ R+ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* f% a$ v2 D8 r5 B! g+ J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  E6 J- m7 }% k$ F% s& R1 Z0 E2 _& p4 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; R7 T  i2 a4 ?: H( e2 o2 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, s5 @3 ?9 F7 a6 Z; a0 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! e* ~. Q! h0 k( J) S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! v$ |) v/ Z$ \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, A4 a+ W. o! q) n. ]* Z3 S7 h我请你剖开它
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  X% Y  R; F3 ?$ d9 ^" n6 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>