【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% l; G/ `, ~$ O" E& d5 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, ~7 z& c% ^4 M4 T5 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, T( o1 [! o1 [# YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 E$ s' G9 N" Y* l# T" _6 g, ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ u' a# q/ t2 z9 C0 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! y* w% H1 K- ^. P( z( mEvery other word you utter is love
0 E) ]; a! O; X/ p0 CI really want to know just how much you love me
& L" |3 d2 x$ I9 iI love you I love you with all my heart
; A; {# D) X, H& |+ ?; ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 |& g) e  |& I2 \# qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 r# R6 I" \: O' GI regret not dying
5 }6 ~; l- m2 ?: g6 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; g: q, E5 j0 c0 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, S$ T7 V! P: X$ t4 m9 c8 R0 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 L3 d9 o2 b3 U/ K8 U) w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 w% m0 n. t& G* Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 X% p6 V2 A7 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 D9 b* J1 r8 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; v1 d! R% i: D9 J3 t9 Q1 V" K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 C6 T1 D" w- V0 A' j- P* E  m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; l7 E3 F; W0 u# P! h3 r- I1 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 q6 ]3 H/ \4 a% A/ K" ~  s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 G+ _$ g/ ?1 U+ K- \+ I4 X* z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* e% d4 Z6 Z" g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 U/ B! h) @; a% ~. [2 F0 }2 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, R6 E; |% C: C( J- f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( Q, _- j& w/ ]% k* k( W<P>你无需担心</P>
" M% ~( \1 a7 y2 B7 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) m7 T6 \, F8 V& u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 T' f( d4 D* J+ U) [+ c5 c* Y; N/ ]" t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  o" Q) ]+ Q8 s# a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  m% y+ d" o2 P" a* v1 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" w# v$ G' ]* `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ q; r: j8 p! n) `& p+ c/ y* V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! F9 a3 Y% G. u; ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 o* t6 I: k* o* C, D# ]& t# G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& m$ G+ p. O. m) d( Q4 z* |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# e" Z) t- K4 u/ c8 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ x1 `% H! U: |! w) q, O- g1 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 b$ z, H! P8 C7 w6 B2 h6 U; v$ K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( B9 W( {1 r# R$ a' e" ]; c- R0 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  Z' C. h. s2 _! J# V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) k, t+ `/ r# y+ `& s- p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. u! z# N6 B( U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>