【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 y6 w) `! w: {3 s$ A4 Z& w' {+ SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: D) ?6 n7 A) o1 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; H, K+ n3 o) t" VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, r- c$ Z5 C6 B: m5 O- hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 q8 u& J/ c3 g! {0 P) [' R3 zYou needn’t fear anything
/ b) c/ n5 c6 x2 G! sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( m0 p( |- ]$ P; O: l( BEvery other word you utter is love
( K: ^$ Z( ~, b- l7 n! R& DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 |2 G) F# ~: D- x( lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 s; n# [& b$ N2 ~8 N, _: dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ U2 F5 i8 v9 v8 ^. K! s5 bI’m still filled with fear
- K5 ?4 _/ V. u  [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. ?/ h) t3 A7 a/ X% z- ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, n0 E0 H3 Z& KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. r" j- [  f$ \" y2 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. J$ Q4 u( k/ u: @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: k' Q, O4 Z, R6 h% Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 v8 J* x% x* Z( p+ D7 y9 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ]6 ^/ R5 y1 W" R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 E7 T# t* s# C- c0 f' Q( T* s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! a! t2 R8 K* g, T% S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ \9 D" ?1 W' q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 V' y2 B# k" _2 O4 v: k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; _  S4 f3 i$ K- @  R  j3 h! f4 w& B3 _! b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* A6 @6 L" Y' r) m" i! k7 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 @2 @" G- q0 S! b# _6 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' |5 r7 D1 o+ `- w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 s! b+ }1 R  j/ _: I  C/ [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 b& p+ h+ W3 i- U0 r, A3 Y, ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 C. ^1 n) \% m9 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 U: W2 k( E2 A3 R: k7 @9 A( v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 m1 H& r8 n2 V* c8 g2 E) O1 V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" }- p$ |$ A1 j* A; K8 |7 U, q9 M+ a& v我请你剖开它

, u6 h% o( n& M$ p. O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>