【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( Q4 t2 \  m4 f% D% n8 @4 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 |& |- d% n) B$ y$ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 {! u: {- O, P  ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 l. v, U# R+ V+ t: j2 x+ oWith the moon kissing it every night
, G: f5 F0 G+ |6 P5 s3 O3 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ o# c  [: \4 {/ O: p  FEvery other word you utter is love
  a8 R- {( k/ u4 UI really want to know just how much you love me
; i0 n8 |7 x/ j2 PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" B- M! w/ ?6 V& Y8 X( e7 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ v# x/ b3 ]3 ]% RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 h* F# S) v5 F' x, u+ ], g- |I regret not dying
+ F! {2 R% c: w+ }# n/ \, I/ ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' K7 C/ ~& n( {( l2 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* p3 |+ d  i$ x$ ?2 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" d& d: u# V3 j, ?, {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Z* T0 l3 S8 x1 ?4 n# R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 y/ i# O) |! z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# O5 F9 @2 j8 g$ O* @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% g/ M7 I" M- _) N9 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) I7 {" ?' P1 B( \& {* @0 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) X- d; c. w# C% J) B1 ?* W9 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 C' A" _* ]' B& Q) `! I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' o, C9 V$ N; N$ l7 K0 k2 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 N9 S9 S, n* j4 s; m2 T) [7 }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 p- s) x% n: n% O9 O0 t1 V  f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* p8 S( p) P! W1 p; u8 K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& g. }: j4 |- }) T7 ?/ e' W) z( b8 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 V$ T( X& M3 ?5 q+ E8 {8 E  a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 u" z- g0 L; I) j$ u8 l$ L% H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, R( p1 R, x- @: C, D' h& h$ d7 I( Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" f5 u) V2 z6 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 }- |, y; d3 [( g) B7 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ P$ S- t6 b& a" x: @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* M$ X9 k9 H8 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& |+ T! w; d1 S7 B5 w. O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 V2 y2 F" v4 [& m. b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ^. D0 S( Z) o: l7 o8 v0 L& M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ a  O* J1 @; z9 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ d6 S+ t4 X: s. Y) p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. r3 z* w3 A- V2 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! M! n4 e' Q& j6 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% y$ `' b3 H/ W' _; ~3 v' h: P4 v3 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& G& H: x3 H6 c6 O" h9 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ l- ?2 U0 U0 Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" ~) c$ D8 i1 R6 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% H* p& Y$ Y. w, c- V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>