【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 u: u+ L6 S8 @0 `6 c; E% m歌词我附在后面。
% v, g( Q& p8 T! z( qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% Z9 @7 l" I) w; h9 W! LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# w; x' U  O6 h# |. m  f  i8 `The sky is happy down to its soul
& z$ o$ I3 j; z/ qWith the moon kissing it every night
& D6 H# y9 E; l" M4 S2 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, a( O) M9 f( `! _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 `+ ]% o+ R  K' BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# `  @  t% i- ]; t) ]: _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) \' u' |* ~# u$ ?1 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ [  {2 m: w: v3 z; I0 r# qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ], B6 x+ d# v# ]  pWith such a tongue as yours,
6 n2 k. g+ b/ J' ^" gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( m- c" F* K: c9 L* dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 j9 I  \6 @$ N  m0 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% f% l% y$ W! f  L, V+ b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% U. G% w; @# I8 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 o/ j7 y9 C" j" ?' d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' U: F$ p' p; t; T1 P  I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% h' n0 e: p0 a5 Q- f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 }. z( ?: ~5 k% h4 S* ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, {: s* L. R- `. ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 d3 K$ y* D( x  |; `, M+ n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" ^( y' p4 `- _3 G3 r( Y2 s1 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 _, o6 T7 E% a+ V, c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 n) W7 G8 S8 ?( W7 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* X* W' r0 {3 w% [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- g, g5 y- U4 R5 x, p7 b- d1 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 y/ f( ~" _3 K- \) ^" o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 i, T+ B6 `2 y; ]9 j/ q4 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* @5 }( {2 p' U) n; L5 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 H+ w9 Z. y' L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- d3 q# L8 |: P0 {" Z9 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ z  B& }, f% U# P1 J( V9 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ g/ }+ o8 h* V2 t% h) r8 h; I2 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
% f$ F7 l7 D- [" @1 t/ n2 @; x" d/ `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 W8 h% w, e$ B0 O) J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- r- P& n$ ]" ?$ }4 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) s# @4 J! K9 s! _3 R5 B* n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>