【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) c* ]1 @3 x7 Q" d( d2 F" GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% G. v4 N) U3 \/ e! |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' n8 h# ^+ p2 O9 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 l6 `5 s- ~0 i9 V0 E  p) S: UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 v" \! }- P3 d  h% R( gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 }& D2 t6 K, H% ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" W8 {) `& O! p8 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* i7 N0 V" z: }, D. g% tI want so much to see inside your heart
: C) u+ I: v2 `6 l4 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 o. ?, P5 _( ]- g, L$ RI’m still filled with fear
9 b5 V2 ?$ }% WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 P2 S# ?% y1 F) PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ @3 p7 `! h4 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 J8 r8 _8 f9 n# M$ b/ v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 N8 j$ F: S; T2 l8 V3 w# U2 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 x5 E7 K/ ?- r, W- T5 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  J" h  h+ x. h8 a9 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# P% D  V. F8 D, ^! p# U- @0 I$ s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 b0 Y( D1 [; f2 j# V0 f' X1 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 ?8 K" [- m& P" Q; G8 R$ J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ~9 e, T$ U6 F<P>你无需担心</P>
4 C8 y0 u1 b7 p2 v; Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 b7 a# V/ J4 l# B" I+ y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ _* H" g1 F4 c5 u8 K6 s$ ]. ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ z8 o3 o% ]# E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 }% t4 {" j! h( z: X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ A5 e# y" |  M) h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ w5 |2 ^' z3 q" Y* d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 `, k! ^# u* a6 n0 P) M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 H( v9 L: j9 l- g" [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! p4 _% F9 ~. M% n% Q) |5 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 I7 w# |- U9 m0 X6 @2 a) K: r6 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( W; ]* S8 F, p8 a/ J0 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# B! Z1 {* ~" T/ R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- q, g+ D# w0 b& a, f/ g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ t3 q# u  \7 }) Q$ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ w3 O- `' D- k: W$ }) `7 G  p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) j# L. B: W) ~; @' O; }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ }7 J7 F) l* {; s9 n$ V4 z! W6 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>