【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 ^- p4 u3 P& w  E2 L歌词我附在后面。
! q5 ~( {9 \9 ]) @* ]1 D# rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 U* ~/ @! D) ]2 H4 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" k4 z, @7 i  [0 F. T; GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  _4 H8 c) E- `! f& o) L# q. G5 `You needn’t fear anything
4 Z! O4 \! R4 F1 d) B% NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ]+ S2 z% m$ o" @  eEvery other word you utter is love
6 h/ S+ z8 o" f  a" K9 S3 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% r4 g/ Z5 V1 @. a  _2 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 F) r4 t$ G  h8 a$ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 c- M1 a  f" ]5 @2 v3 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ m. z$ q% F. j  `' M4 P: aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ~2 S9 X  X# l8 ^4 K8 M8 \- `With such a tongue as yours,
- s2 [7 G- R( H* LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 b4 r, t9 b+ l4 W/ h9 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, H2 E4 T( `! c0 [% C1 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' a* s- f, |# v; O$ {) ~: ]: U3 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ A, d" v" V) f! F5 C/ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 \7 O6 E" f2 _: m# p: ]. N3 L- @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 D5 Z# M  O- q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 p, C* p; E; q8 h( ~) I6 |" }& m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) ~8 Y: K3 ?2 U( p3 d% V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 x( l0 w! O4 m) V8 V" }) P9 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ Z+ g: h4 i  B9 c2 j4 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& `5 x+ |6 R3 Z5 r8 b9 L8 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 h3 U. |8 i4 A9 ^' q5 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ?; T. B5 l7 B5 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 A6 h& J* F' M2 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 M2 n- T  p$ c" }# X4 K- S+ @' I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 {) \$ ]& C* ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" S/ D* q: x" F. }1 l5 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 }# [- ^' G6 q8 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ O% m- R* d/ u, g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' |4 ]" t: M3 r1 H6 p, \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 G' ?4 Q4 z, e+ D/ N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 W0 J& ~/ x- M, O2 S: z  k3 ^$ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ N  d5 N  g4 T, [2 f3 x) i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, q$ b# a$ z* W# c. L$ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  {) U- I, K% h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 V/ ~% k/ R8 h! Z5 {1 D$ ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ R+ Z+ X/ P; L: S4 H* u. X我请你剖开它
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) g( y7 q" U, J) e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 T0 t- U( d" t1 L, z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>