【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 m* H7 ~6 k$ wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# e1 [9 D; O  VWith the moon kissing it every night
2 u, ?, r3 M  R/ k% ?& y2 ^# {Seeing the sky content with its love
4 f: \0 V) h! H( o6 S; ?1 ^) y. fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) S% {2 H" Y/ S4 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Y; I4 h0 S) V+ ^5 w) `; wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# q4 v1 X+ B5 PNothing can compare to my love
8 `! [/ W( B  s8 `, O2 H* mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, C$ o( k" S% M. j2 w/ K* A4 D) E, c9 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 C4 V1 K: `7 x2 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 V/ H8 e5 h  p5 a+ G) w! ?I regret not dying
! h; k( D; a0 ~, d5 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: P0 X/ l0 ^; a* ]& h+ d  q$ Q( g/ U- {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) D% a, c6 ]) y/ N3 I# |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- F/ W* E9 W/ O: ^4 {4 G, H1 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 ~  Q1 s; g% N$ G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 |! h0 [+ F* }0 c6 I+ ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 P; l6 G# S- s0 W: s  i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& H! }$ d' M7 T8 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" u1 @. t# H* C* F, M8 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ L& C2 Q2 Q+ O7 H5 l6 T- [8 c! I<P>你无需担心</P>
! S; h. @$ M/ i' R3 }9 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 c5 k2 @$ ?6 E3 g9 I- J& S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 x& {8 d2 b& M7 o/ E( E, C* M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" b# r, P& G3 G. {, F+ ^2 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ^0 C& s7 w1 V2 s! x# p8 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" l/ {$ l/ H& p" M& [% e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 w0 G2 a6 b$ p1 J3 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ v' _/ J' |2 n7 i# C  Y* z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* t- u  [7 T  m8 }9 v/ G0 E6 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 n7 y4 Z" i- g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( K( p% w5 U/ P' q( k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 _! s) r& `- o1 ~" P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ g, N, d* p1 x% a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; g' |0 U5 z4 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ [9 D7 i" y' ?+ d/ p0 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 z8 f- U2 E3 ^& D* e- V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* W! y6 _% \" C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 U- ]* c1 g' G; j$ B  g% e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' L" s# A- I4 s9 H: [. J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 B3 X& T) {' _" g/ S, g$ H. k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( p' N3 e1 Y4 b0 w1 U  z% I, A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ L& ^7 P# Q. B" O1 z/ X% _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* B* _, O/ F6 H! S, ?. Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>