【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 N3 |+ b# @* i/ W3 `歌词我附在后面。
2 ]: D- p( G; P: Z$ B! V+ n4 ^5 J9 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- E- |9 y  ~' V( pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 k" E0 J8 M$ ]+ q8 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 p3 Q7 c/ g: o/ nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  G1 B0 X- _2 `! k- A: q( x) v) {! |0 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 N3 s" J% R: W+ [' r; ^2 K# A# wI really want to know just how much you love me
6 C- E. a, j- e6 x' p- t: NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) U8 R* r0 C( M; lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 X3 L6 @6 H4 u  N8 c3 m" B3 Q% \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- R3 M/ Q3 L' e6 }  _. sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, x6 O) o' s5 @& e0 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- ^& R- h! `/ x4 D5 ^4 U/ c( |  PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ V* ^$ ^  j" v" y5 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( ]7 ^9 C+ T2 @) Q7 L- ^8 R# O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( {% b. G! k; k& A0 s6 M8 W7 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ W! T' _- m& Y* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; I: `  ^0 Q1 q1 p: Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& B8 }$ C2 c$ ^% n! A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. U" b' \# h$ i8 {7 f# `* a! @9 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- Y* ^  `  {" D: l/ R% S7 u9 l! t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 I$ r2 J9 r( ?$ F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Z4 ~  e$ s; Y$ |# ]% j6 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 g4 b2 M+ d7 c6 M3 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. E& ?" a  D+ K8 B, r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" y, x9 G$ R# g' y- f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# N, W2 _% s, q. L- c8 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# S: l# p1 F$ O, D+ X: L5 \9 Q! N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% p: f, U& H2 M6 a1 |5 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 v2 z) i/ S- R* a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 D8 F8 P) L# D& _& ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 d, T3 l! i3 U: V' n7 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 `5 G. M: f; o2 Q. R8 _; {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! w( H6 R$ |3 ^1 |$ d: B. }) t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: W% l9 r3 _! C1 {$ s0 m7 }4 D7 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, o! i3 |1 l/ r/ K- O) U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! P* d' s" H/ c, Y8 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, E8 Z) G, E9 U( l( Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 l8 _/ z$ X- T% H1 k" A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  R$ R" f* d. F* m. K1 @我请你剖开它

: H- F0 g7 p. ]. h9 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>