【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 x: Q* a( y7 n) c. \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 ]7 F: Y8 F5 y( oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* X5 v; T( g! y' ~% Z; ~With the moon kissing it every night
, S% x6 F  w: b% t! e) K& xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ q+ r7 s+ R3 Y' ZYou needn’t fear anything
6 ?  v) z5 p! M! N7 z. pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. q; F9 v6 k/ l$ A+ Q2 S- F* HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. ~% O, x) U6 l! v* p  S5 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( t; C( ?& O$ y6 N7 G. \1 o" z: i% RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# \0 d7 w1 A+ ?: F( s( nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% w% D4 d% L5 R1 O; NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 R4 z$ N, t5 ?% B" y/ A: GWith such a tongue as yours,
' g% w: {4 C% v, a4 t' y1 y1 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 G+ A' w& Z$ V& L3 w! m, |7 Q7 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" a* T! H+ p- v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 `* H, l" v2 U$ z! A) S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. i+ P- z& A2 l; j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 s" B2 `: P* Q1 p0 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! u! o& |6 {$ s+ H3 z0 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' w9 O  z' H  G" R, B! j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 ?) r7 n3 f7 t( z; K3 a% h" }7 J! Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! d2 o# m2 l& ^5 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( B# h+ ?! z$ \, M/ b% P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% a+ D  J) O% [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" C* B9 V: V+ Q6 `' P& B4 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 h3 p* X" L. k! t; i5 e1 K2 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ v5 k! y6 L% t/ r# \+ r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ _0 s9 F; F- `8 n; i/ k5 Y/ N$ A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; m# w2 `, N% M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" m: ]' I0 f3 r. E8 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 k$ T* j! c- l3 r6 `* `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; h4 e- a6 q% d8 g) d9 R* U, |5 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 u6 C6 z  X0 F- f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ U4 x, b+ t: ]' N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. A5 J+ ^* O- ?: s* F: T2 {) r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 C4 ]- a/ i3 `! B1 n" v7 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! t/ K# j, Z5 r5 v$ C+ N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ^0 ?! u6 q9 h& H% L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 q5 K, Q' @  b' g4 q2 H& W7 b) n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& j" o% q/ Q& J0 s( M6 I1 f8 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 m% N* M4 i, Z3 p& a  @. F8 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ B6 e- r) @  K6 m& C* {6 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  B# Q6 {" T: j& g5 v  }: e+ e我请你剖开它

! D1 d# e+ e4 T) l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>