【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 ^( H6 h, x: R2 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 A' X4 ?- y4 v! w: ?6 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ g9 C7 i9 [3 J: x4 B# i6 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% z6 w) Y0 c* u; g; A* q" e0 pWith the moon kissing it every night
) J* z! c1 V2 l  U( OSeeing the sky content with its love
1 t1 _8 t, y" yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 {  I; T; @$ m1 X* {# m# q% o7 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 G- c& Q9 x/ \3 H; u: Z9 `) {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: _4 f3 n; c# t+ k' NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) g, ]# I# Z* u( v# x: UI want so much to see inside your heart
. J/ ?5 K; T, y. P2 K6 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 L! S' k+ i0 e% `: h/ o, B, R- A( D8 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% C( }  n9 G, W$ D( p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ H9 V) X: C9 ]1 X( V9 H0 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) Q* Z% F' u$ `' ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ m' b* h  C: b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 C- W1 X' T: Z# n7 X9 n+ T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, D: `$ T# v, J& O8 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 i, |: E  E! ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( L% B2 L3 ]+ Z* J' b% X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 p+ B- A$ l- H" c- g3 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* n% w' E8 b& N! Z, U% X5 g+ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) H) s! j" ?' [7 I& A# z4 c& a1 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ b! c( V2 n) m3 ^2 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ^, n- S6 y# j  I% D9 H* B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" \* A0 G  Y. l$ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 X3 h  t# o" r8 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" \) ]$ p2 ], B" W7 B! q9 E4 L8 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 E& @: o6 @" S$ B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: @, |. L- l3 U8 S: I/ Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; K3 N% i7 t+ j5 U; P0 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 r# [4 J; c2 y2 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 `0 F2 g: I. b/ F  I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 h# C) Q5 ~: R' Y8 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: ~" ^! @( ~; u  e3 L( A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& j. B5 x* n- \3 P7 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; V+ a. S7 y8 t4 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 h3 |! c+ ?, Q- E9 q$ B$ f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# x3 Z$ k9 I: |# Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>