【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 `7 O4 E  m2 |; TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 I2 J" P# [. Z3 O8 e8 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 i$ E8 a( @  k/ J6 lYou needn’t fear anything
  M. }% X5 n# j! f! ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ C, k' r  u' ?* F' j5 GI love you I love you with all my heart
1 X5 o" s, m9 u+ [' k9 g$ RNothing can compare to my love
% d* n% }8 H. s. \4 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- R' f+ O3 _; t5 q4 O. PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- e6 F6 I: M$ I) Q& ^; _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ r  d5 C* u% d( e! A0 P; aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, ~# j2 P8 I  Q0 S8 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, I# N/ t- U& F; x8 Q9 A6 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' F; {& A& M5 c7 F) U8 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; q: A( v1 d- l6 F* _- B+ g2 V0 F- Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 P  e( q! y! f6 v1 l# O7 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  m& x  O9 z! G5 v6 _( p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 t( l3 n" V. Z( I, o7 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, X" m% c. B* {2 Z. @! T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( d: o* D% C% d: ^- ~7 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 Z+ ~: M6 i3 j4 i( p# B  [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 W# I2 j; ^% N. l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 q( z5 F2 \6 [; o7 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  _8 z  i5 k; ?( L* K6 y' T% q& A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 Q5 v& H0 q, l# q5 F. X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 M5 q" G, U5 U8 E" Q# H4 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. U) Z9 W: N6 b+ J: E# B2 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 V% t7 Q8 R2 k% ?/ v. b) U" ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) j8 D* e8 J4 i. l; {5 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 G/ R. Q, l8 Y3 w. O# q& I0 C5 {) w8 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- ~& U0 p8 i+ R) d" U( o# k- a/ e$ N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" u8 A5 V: g5 p1 I; z& |& {: J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: F* U/ s$ ~& t+ k- y, O& I3 f# ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& ~/ D, ]" O3 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! c: Y& V' H) {; S1 P. P3 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  v* {; G' G" E9 u2 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% `6 S, R& A' t' ~' m% G) z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 d+ a6 _5 e, u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  f0 a' @6 H5 y( C1 q. ?3 d. U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>