【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 G3 Z; g2 J. a- nWith the moon kissing it every night
' v" X1 ^+ |) lSeeing the sky content with its love
2 l5 f8 j5 P9 i2 p  x- k5 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ D8 j8 h$ l1 k; j/ PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: m- I( Q9 C# r1 X- x: dEvery other word you utter is love
; B' g7 ^; p2 [I really want to know just how much you love me
1 [. `* e  v8 m; O$ z, sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 _+ A7 K( v6 S# KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 _$ q+ ^( I$ y# v2 C7 fI regret not dying
1 [" \! x  P2 N% ]- TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) U( A. D% Z$ t- iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- C5 t$ R& `; S) n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' S+ V! R* K3 ]2 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' k8 ]7 z- P9 M( S* K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# t) H. P4 {' x! I+ E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 {. [8 R# j4 ]  b; M. u9 i& ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# X1 r! k) k2 J; `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 M3 P3 e# U0 |/ ?- I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- S8 ?# z! J) B- I" r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 m( A# m  ?- i9 H; V, {! X9 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( w" k6 K" L0 X1 J; [% F2 e<P>你无需担心</P>
2 L6 j- T: D( s; E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) a( D9 U4 X% d$ |6 u" c# J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 r" o# v) v8 L: V# S* b7 c+ ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# B! Q7 l1 C9 a8 U  n8 O$ y( t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, \/ Y9 [: n: V! x! T9 U! W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) w" @) X  ]$ y8 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! F: V: W' l3 l' S) Q3 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. _+ s! F* B. m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# N2 q+ m) ^- w. |2 c7 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 R5 R4 N/ L8 }: t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! K( q3 D/ W7 `4 _& M0 f5 W; P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& f& U! l) x% ^0 V5 j. R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& e' i4 C6 q6 A! Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ]. y0 l4 y3 e2 U2 R# i: H( H& k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) j) S7 [" ~9 q( W) \+ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- _8 M% @0 L' A) o5 \5 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ A1 U5 g3 D+ h" ?/ S9 a我请你剖开它

/ k9 o. P, u% C; {* y/ t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>