【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, J8 s' Q9 `8 }! Q: P0 j3 |( D% kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# n( k; q0 @. E3 w7 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; [: Q. |3 V. L) b2 K) J  lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" e. x6 C& V& T* I8 ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 R: }/ q# Q. J8 _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 A- |6 {8 b- }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 b' L* h1 }  M7 ~2 }! @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 h3 y9 d0 r3 E  o2 B- r) n6 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& F* c8 B0 b/ B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 S, K- K# n: ?0 L0 T, W: X& f# v- d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" V* \2 F4 K) y9 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ d% }& L0 W7 k8 x5 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ~8 j/ x  ]0 s' W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) G. ?+ q1 w5 W: }2 h9 z<P>你无需担心</P>
5 `& X- f- S+ ~! K5 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  b" |  Z% M# R' `" E) l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 t' o% }1 h3 B0 M* i! o" Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ e# A" {7 g- X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% L( q! L; {' U; z' z$ B& m$ o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  Q9 q" W1 s3 {! q0 R* D- F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ P: f+ f, g0 V9 ^1 ~. I. Q. b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# a% n" d5 p$ P* j* m/ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ {! {. J6 k1 t, d0 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ i; x, x. f$ \3 V; d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 l. i# o/ g5 j1 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 Q1 `3 s  D" M9 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ M- s% m% i$ ^- @1 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ]1 {* M+ J% w7 R* V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# L# k% J2 H; [/ H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 R; g$ `' o  d  a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 e! A' q. u- y# K* X1 O; R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) w/ w* g3 v9 q7 }9 d' b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. x9 b5 c/ [; I) Z& s) s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 s  F: J5 t- t5 H7 z% J8 f0 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# {  F: l( b9 B" Y5 l, ?. ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 X' R" n% w8 Q0 O$ q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ Z# @' f8 z/ |1 F9 }, i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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* ~# z+ L1 r6 R; f. R, n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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