【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 O/ j: a/ r9 a  cThe sky is happy down to its soul
& @0 _1 J; n$ {2 ^With the moon kissing it every night
' |1 o& M- i9 c  x/ hSeeing the sky content with its love
' u/ g+ |( f' T5 W0 q4 D' r3 R4 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, o/ q; Z& h/ Y4 DYou needn’t fear anything
4 |7 g1 D/ g5 b( K, z, k0 ], J, pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* _5 L2 l/ _8 B6 D0 F& ~7 ^: tEvery other word you utter is love
2 {9 B6 p; a' Q# X" E1 y: ]- S; sI really want to know just how much you love me
  G7 T2 J' e& k8 A2 O) ^( mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& x: M) `5 _" m& V6 c" G5 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; v8 F3 K5 T9 x; I. S8 u+ n8 X  ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( x% F4 C/ n8 |5 j5 D$ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' v1 ~; u/ G! C4 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
9 O9 v: @; B0 |1 v9 z7 l. u: a6 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& s: E0 P7 L) ~6 w* z- e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ I, E5 H. }0 q" |7 g( |0 L# v$ K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 A5 [) {+ s; j& L  l  L: `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# \% N+ D% p) ?! N# A* T& p6 ^9 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; i6 c5 W( S1 f6 @7 P, h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 o, g8 c/ A0 H% {7 w1 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 I, V- U' b/ e, Q' d9 R5 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" E6 X" ?* e' p" m! T% O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" \3 P/ m- h1 |9 `, Y: V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ V, c' K( R: ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& r+ B1 T9 H' X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 C) e, r# e& s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# ~4 Y4 m$ C) _  y- v) Y- ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ D, V" X$ r8 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 y3 `/ u: }* _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% v* }# L  w' w! n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" T+ I# E- [/ h9 R, c) |, d$ e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 v6 ]+ V) w: S+ M+ Q; J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ]( I" J! J1 G! B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ S% e) s$ G- i' {9 i/ Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( t' h' D. I6 B5 A! _' z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 f& \/ C; g" B% U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) m0 O* d/ G6 A" \8 u% _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! ]: X! w$ V: w: E; X: H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" ^/ t; N" |7 b' b4 C) u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 t; d- I3 s! z3 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 l4 U- q* G9 ~2 ]0 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( {5 O* J' p0 X% x' X0 A  p. c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>