【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 `6 C) R' V5 C& K/ A/ f2 ]2 X7 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L0 y' S9 @$ B3 \9 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( c1 q  r% d8 p" L3 Q& F; DThe sky is happy down to its soul
; D# t/ v3 U! |: LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 m. p. ?0 ~4 u/ Q7 F# M$ zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 g$ z( Q! ]; D2 F- v+ NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ w3 n2 u% q# q! a! ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ^, y# a" x- }; P4 M  wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ?& `% a( L% v- xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" R2 ^7 ~: @0 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' ^: ~" Y/ f/ k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  `6 h2 {% q- T; u3 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' k' X. y" Q! u5 I1 v( p1 c% y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ o. Z. L, \6 c) I( b- h9 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ d- u8 F3 X% L0 m7 d, G$ s- o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 K/ y- n8 ^$ G3 a2 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; N' o6 s! G. G1 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 c* ]' j  v' l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) ?3 M% t- w. v( E4 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' t- I4 X9 E# E: h& z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 A8 O: X" \5 x* b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! j( g* O7 \; M# x. h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 m1 j* L; a& G& f) ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, E, c$ H& b, i/ V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 g* F2 j' @3 I0 l  Y* [. U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! s/ Q6 R+ J! u- l3 s: T0 J) y9 E. O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. \6 f- E9 s  z; A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 D# f6 `) o1 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 A% ?7 H$ S& [: L. }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% g( h* h5 S) S: R! Z  P5 P# k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 \8 E" L+ K( E% p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 `0 w; B% v- P0 t" k$ h, a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* _2 O( B* I% e2 I+ y  C! f+ |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: E  ?+ O6 u  b* w7 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ K* }; j8 o  D: w$ P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 g& c* S* h1 f! e" s3 C& v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>