【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' y3 `8 d7 ^: o7 z3 a2 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' J' v0 E) r, Y+ A# z8 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  O0 P7 L8 r6 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
- f8 a& x# ?7 l5 OWith the moon kissing it every night
* N" t' s' T& B2 tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" s# A: Y: s  P& g. Y7 gEvery other word you utter is love
: J! i8 o/ s, `" m- k. FI really want to know just how much you love me
1 u  `: P6 b: a2 qI love you I love you with all my heart
) Y* G! E  o) O4 u* BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! h- u4 U6 {0 \. V/ C% W8 y5 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, z8 d  f9 j' z* y  QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 h& E; ^; a& M; A% qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ v- ?" P( g& ]1 C( ?, Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 W" u2 D$ K2 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 _0 Q1 o( g& N1 w# T( L2 L! D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. t6 f' x9 `, X: O: v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ?& i9 @5 F/ g7 Y( d" @# w  b7 j* H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: Z6 p* h' @4 z; H! |- \5 ~( \. O+ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: E6 T0 Y9 @' v0 U8 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' V" P& T( D6 Q4 Y5 i  S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 {: U: O) N% f6 n) e3 z( s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) N) E- J9 z/ \* |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" }- [. v& N3 m3 V% ]$ P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ U/ T: j9 M, C( I( @: f/ ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 z, I) R+ n, y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 Z2 C9 k# l4 [3 l6 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, \8 R' d( p' s. b7 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ^# Y! p! o2 \/ s3 z/ f2 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% H& h6 b8 Q, R# s# Z5 r( P: P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Z0 k; O0 g; B; a0 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: B3 a0 h4 O3 y! _9 @6 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; _; }6 I/ Y$ f4 U* r7 k& [/ F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>