【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" G# c1 ]5 ^% L  ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( {1 o. ~  G' O8 Y: R( R$ xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) w, u- f& C+ S$ [# m, y) }% HThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ _0 P" F6 E: U. x! s) ?% ~3 BWith the moon kissing it every night
+ `; J5 B2 ?3 u6 pSeeing the sky content with its love
3 u4 ?- l" M$ M8 _2 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- P1 S- J  m' j" i( X$ G, b) V0 CYou needn’t fear anything
1 J% N; p6 s0 X! ?1 N  u3 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; Z, S5 s3 q# l1 g$ E( Q8 X; YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 b; c# @. J- J) g' L9 ^% |5 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, O. M& a) m) K" zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 e  X* `3 X; w6 p) Q' U* @( X9 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. A1 ^/ r. w% s; ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' a9 R; T4 H9 H* uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 D3 S* ?8 x" KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 ]. i" l) X5 |2 S2 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ a$ d9 V: E+ D) s2 e3 a$ tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% H0 _7 {% X+ s6 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 L# R% J+ Z7 i  z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 t. O, M! F& Y+ z% H9 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, B* k9 N3 k5 |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 a1 h. O5 @. x3 x  C; l4 ^: U/ `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 z# W# ~2 U9 \3 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- L# D1 S% y9 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ M% m4 R- T. @' _0 x8 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ ^4 \/ [- b4 x  ]8 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 X# E; _- E/ R6 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Y- f( P; h9 ^5 I+ q- i/ q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 v- R% u+ L( n3 a" O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  o2 {% P+ U5 B6 A+ H% P" M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' c9 J% r0 c; F$ _* ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" Q: Y- h6 ^3 H- o( ]8 I. e8 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- \. L# \; D/ ~: k. V) P  a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( T2 @4 o# d* d' y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 F# I4 _  Z& O# m; B6 W7 d7 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- k- i0 b3 N+ y+ ]* a% n. e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 l- t& M& c0 a; V; f9 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' b7 y- T1 @% w3 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 K% e: R3 d  {& u8 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. l* n9 `1 ]4 s( C4 h4 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! Z) i) |5 e1 P: P3 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, T8 [7 O$ O' g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  ?) v) m& \( W: t2 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Q$ ?4 T- i$ H" ^) t9 p% V( I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ v+ K' c( E4 D: }2 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 W+ g( ~* n! L$ @$ c* K2 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>