【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# T3 ]2 W2 n0 o. d, r: HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: ~6 O  ]7 f9 M3 g0 m: l: m' aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' i; g; z. I  Y0 C9 ]) V; N3 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# K. {1 v* {; M$ b; fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* R5 i0 X, S4 g7 X$ v5 z3 H7 E" iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" z7 N2 b5 P/ u$ e$ {You needn’t fear anything
8 ?/ V6 T; e  }* SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  e- T; n( }. f) zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: y0 z% d. {7 F, e" B( g$ P% iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- H5 Y& a6 @" _% n! R3 B. @+ yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, L+ Z: n7 Y2 G7 j$ t1 l3 I9 vI want so much to see inside your heart
) [2 z+ L$ v/ X* c3 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 f1 }) L6 e+ k5 z" J1 g' LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# O' d; O* S" ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 J( g9 h$ b" v& L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 {8 n4 F6 T3 ^0 G! f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 d# q# R  Z! [# K- e: h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 f8 D0 x* c3 r. S- E+ m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- m$ f! o" ?# J- l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ w1 U" P. |7 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 {6 @+ [  d, Z; Z+ L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# K8 T0 i' h+ ?+ k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 ^- n7 y* I9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ g5 B9 ]1 f, w$ e4 M' K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 v3 w! N9 T6 C# x; F  K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 E: Y# f# @& [6 [# F- ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 G0 K- M# u+ f9 j' C9 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' d. ~; Z: M1 ~" u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ i( J( w& l/ \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 [1 N& i8 u. Y& {# e1 P8 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ \9 F) q2 e+ Z/ m* C& h; d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 ~2 r- m* f5 l" ~1 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 H8 y" \# `5 k* p2 K7 E& k; ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ O- U9 R* Q; f5 S( w  @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 R4 T3 U2 O* t4 N$ o% M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! U5 K5 X' Z: i8 J) O9 p' @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* t6 U$ T  e! |8 B/ r& F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 }  H2 Z6 [( b$ y2 w  H( z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( B4 N' c: A# y4 D$ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ }' }, T; @& S% W. g6 V* {<P>I regret not dying</P>
# X2 Q  T% t- ]% Z2 c" L4 q2 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- J3 x/ H; q& {% F# _) N3 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ [: o  Y& e  \! G2 H8 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 K3 P1 v8 w. f& x" n- y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. J" F/ q5 u+ x( S% D& h! R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ y. D/ u" f# N8 z6 |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, t* U1 _0 Q! W* L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ m' J8 q+ v# d9 w7 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>