【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' A  h* s' V8 x' a7 r  L& G5 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( g% x! x! C0 i" S9 \( l8 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ?2 l  |7 y! ~! {The sky is happy down to its soul
  }" B9 e& L- V# E7 O) D. k& d. s+ o& s, DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ?3 D  `6 D! U8 s2 o# g  v0 }, `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# l( R& Q4 T8 @8 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
/ F6 @. I5 T, [  y: @3 iNothing can compare to my love
" ]) [- i( X% R1 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 W! W$ J/ N( k" L# AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 J3 B$ w6 C9 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& N% S3 _) P& m4 a. U% F  WI’m still filled with fear
& R& o8 N  }" N  p& n# M, C6 O' j# bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. K; I5 B% @# P6 kI regret not dying
8 V8 I+ i1 @1 Q: tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" W) u/ Q( ~, @$ K0 W3 x4 ^3 w6 |( TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" I& [2 D6 W2 P5 A3 C' H* zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ K0 ]0 |( n: z5 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. @. ?! O6 _. T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, _1 E% ^4 f+ }* }5 K* ~  M& S/ j: G" |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 C/ o. f) {! v* z+ ^0 k$ i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 j6 _" y6 L2 x8 W' V; Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 S0 t' H. B2 j  \3 [) y, K5 O9 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. K* |9 F9 ~$ W, d4 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 q9 \% R2 F: n4 ?0 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- k5 Z& x8 H7 M; w$ l' Y3 h6 O0 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ \; J0 J& w3 z  a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 Q8 j/ Z; D' h3 T, _% Y' s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ^% J+ q: Y, y0 S0 d0 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* j# e' D! ^% L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ?5 h: U( |& l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ V( O/ Z. q# r* o! K. B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! F3 c, d4 A" I+ ?; ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; a# A( |( i5 O( d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! A6 w- V( H) p6 q- L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 d0 [4 }4 R! E( _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ]8 T  _* J! [$ m/ x9 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: \* H9 K+ u9 _  B! y# L! R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* b. b$ l( r  i+ Y$ E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; C- W+ d6 b* T8 M. H, |8 x. Y& k. Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* ~+ ?4 i4 g. a/ E* u$ p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% @# M* U, }  }+ j7 K  W5 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* P& N" n6 e6 M1 l  ^* W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 N& j3 c& R* g4 a: q1 H, g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 [/ V; L: r3 K7 O: d3 j9 G' o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ B8 t' s% N# L: v% B$ u( I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 N2 K9 h$ E, |) H# l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 O- `0 x& j! k  b( b' B8 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>