【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. K8 Y+ b" S4 @" g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 _3 q/ q0 X- F6 x4 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& d3 T. m5 _% u) u& Q) N4 a3 u! sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  p; P( d* H5 y  u: i( USeeing the sky content with its love
' z- _" I( w5 h& iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 m& _( U0 i3 V  ?, FYou needn’t fear anything
) P2 T. N; i& t, O" SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 m* S' U; S0 s. [* }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 i- z& k$ \  E' B' L% U. R$ bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" O4 k" `. `5 Q. Y- L( TI want so much to see inside your heart
. e6 P6 C; o& e, \" f% x7 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 q. F3 ?. K3 L! t" a% x* FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 |$ `4 p# T1 mI regret not dying
5 @( ~8 h" N; tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ D# O6 i. ~6 g' G& _9 ~& X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ c# e" ^" ]1 M' h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& V$ u( I2 [; y+ x* }: q5 Z* s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 k5 k: B! @7 u  I# F9 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 _  X7 _' {  {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 f/ e' }! N+ E( W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 ^! d+ m7 o+ t+ o" M0 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" R# T( k) e! I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" M% A( n& z1 T) W) m7 s; \& [$ S& ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* H+ y2 [2 {4 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, {+ C; O0 ~9 H2 f- \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, D) v$ x! n4 o- A9 K* Q, A# L, s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 d, k. d0 G% M& d5 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  ~: r2 y; q! E# M1 U1 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 s) X, u2 n: F7 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- j. x0 l- y& E9 e! ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 Y7 u9 [, l1 f' J' X4 X# C. b; i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 A6 B" Z% M5 |. h5 D( [3 ?; F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; K8 U5 o6 p# `) D9 i# B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( o9 y# ^+ K: K6 G4 T5 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* c# k4 W8 e1 q9 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 i9 J( R: n+ K& J  _6 s( [! l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Y5 I, ]. U/ Q; a3 C. r' V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% V$ y7 k+ g) E8 l) g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  j: s+ ^) g+ V/ g+ ?! [我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ d9 `+ [! a& P) K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>