【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# `* k( m7 ~2 }" J! a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  S" R0 f; I7 A( f$ p: B  bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! Z7 |* H6 \$ [, E0 {9 d# s4 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) q6 }$ \: w& _( E) tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ Y! d8 M" b: M4 u* e- [9 _Every other word you utter is love
' s0 P4 {- |. G/ B' QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  W  Y% _$ W7 [* E: _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 K) b  P3 `$ K, Z1 W# oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ ~+ P; s8 s& q3 I0 D2 qI’m still filled with fear
8 g2 g- @5 p! \( C; |. g& O+ zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 ]- ^# j, I# j/ rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; p& n+ m# e3 Y3 ]1 V2 Y3 F/ ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# [) k; `2 K. P# X9 y) ]/ _5 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 `) b7 [% \0 ~0 M0 c& ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; a. e" i* @0 R0 d2 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 {5 Y+ w* ~5 a9 l( I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 E8 Z. I* B: M$ k0 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. p' t8 `7 R+ l* Z+ @9 U0 `- b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- L8 X  [0 o( V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 u/ z$ w& q8 _0 n/ L* [) g  }  I4 r0 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 c3 M+ J! u# ]& X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( D6 O; t) s$ c$ J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 r% O9 w# R# D" k' u" I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 w" |6 }) i: W( k! c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ n4 w8 k) z4 T7 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 M9 e: l7 m! D# N# n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# [* c( D' _. ^2 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 W" z0 a: [/ V' g" @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 y5 G! f& {' S( Q- J) _0 b. I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# _! ~4 f. C/ a" d7 M& ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! l" @1 |$ r; I( |6 J) V) L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 r# A  k3 |0 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 B# B6 b! a$ m! o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 R. F9 R- B# w6 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" G% M4 y& x0 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 m2 S2 N" X# @7 n3 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 D4 x; m! d9 P2 b5 p7 ]( x! N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- V0 ?7 a2 h# S! z' t& c( @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 k6 o" I9 x, U4 w* x6 p" t1 n# N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  i) C/ x0 ^3 F8 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 n5 B: P# X) |8 N) [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>