【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 D- S+ \1 q- ?" R6 {4 u7 `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ A* \$ ]* M/ w4 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: K5 N  U# p* h: ?& D/ EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. E. T0 A$ J5 _/ y! k. Q; yThe sky is happy down to its soul
' f% \# U/ s' Z" gWith the moon kissing it every night
/ n0 o5 t0 X3 h9 A) A4 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* \+ f+ [7 u2 z) W1 w9 h6 }You needn’t fear anything
+ p4 K8 y9 H2 c0 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" [6 z2 @$ q8 GNothing can compare to my love
. n/ o4 I% v2 E; k6 d6 a! qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: B2 I( `) @3 N7 G! }# }4 NI want so much to see inside your heart
6 I" i2 v9 S' \' P( Y5 H/ RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. S$ ?  o4 r& T! K# YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 I* r1 u) k! ~, f. yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 K% w  Y4 E5 {6 b, OWith such a tongue as yours,
6 B% R( s( I; x$ C( O; UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ M! W( C1 p4 q& G* n) A0 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# r4 B; C# E5 O. z3 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ |; W5 N6 O3 n& u1 Q8 c) m  ^0 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  N+ u* B6 S1 y2 U# l0 [( k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 a6 @4 S# t* b; e  P- {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 y3 B) s) m$ O2 l8 h( C( t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ~# q7 w3 q) X. ~" V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 q0 f- I. `1 i# \- {! r5 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 H1 R6 K; o4 u6 H8 P1 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ?/ Q4 R3 n! b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 n" I  y9 Z0 O: G6 X2 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 `6 e, L' }8 s: a3 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' ~% w4 ]* `6 {) T6 a& ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( a' t* f* j0 ~' B) u  s  w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' S- m4 i' m, ~9 I8 f* X3 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! z  F3 w/ ~8 k: _3 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( D/ r, D/ N. A& C8 Z7 @) X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 V+ r9 f7 L, t3 P/ G1 j- g3 o3 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. ^2 E0 ~9 r" t. f  a9 }) @  _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 M+ Y% b* M3 s3 X9 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( Q6 p, E8 G6 ~5 o* |$ e/ c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; n+ d3 N$ l2 O0 u) T% l% Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 R5 J# q, D- m4 ?( `- J& ?7 c" I+ [+ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 D" d5 {2 e/ U# Q. a  Z0 Q- A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# P0 _1 H. e: p+ @7 L, u  e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ]) S& q+ z! H2 g% o) d8 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 B9 \* G# w# Y我请你剖开它

9 c) X0 n( b1 j! A% L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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