【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, Z( ?4 {. K1 X歌词我附在后面。
7 Q% x( K7 `9 X" ]+ k$ gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ n+ b7 b. h- k2 T; a& U1 oWith the moon kissing it every night
2 y# `$ |0 S( P5 R$ m# B3 o$ kSeeing the sky content with its love
: n7 R0 p) s, E' X6 J" @( v% j% B0 e! _0 ]! YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 }8 x: o6 V2 ?You needn’t fear anything
: t' U* O) b: KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, T7 B2 k9 ?8 l9 `0 Y! P* qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 n: x3 ?8 H  u- X0 g4 L2 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* w/ ?* Y1 p! D& f6 b+ l  dI’m still filled with fear
8 R% G2 S+ r" O( e1 `. `3 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" s1 h# L6 a$ j% i5 kI regret not dying
) z; Z, Q5 v( R# V" @$ m/ b4 A9 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. B5 _9 i4 S: V6 f$ _) YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ z8 p/ |& a0 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) i9 Q  _% M$ t  x) k6 C. n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" e- v" S: J( z/ K2 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 \% w3 j  L" M; d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 @" B3 ^. t  |3 J& o; C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- X1 C6 u2 I5 e2 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 Z& L  M( E9 S& `1 Z0 g6 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' @/ M: @- X" ^) s* {5 x( {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 n! `* A1 P  |$ L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& G/ J7 m# h% J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( m4 N$ I. u. s# v8 {* i* z6 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( d! l' w1 `% o  T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( }3 i! k8 j  \' N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' o  ~5 z; C' [6 _# T# {0 f" P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 q2 Y+ d) a. r2 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 {1 _) K# \6 ]/ ?  y+ \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  }  F0 P- _% y' V& B2 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" W9 f8 H( f4 C9 |6 w, Y# w" j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& Y% F# k, C+ ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# [$ n) s4 R" u% q2 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ }* h! N% W6 v  I% X7 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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) p! F/ \0 s( d8 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>