【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  F( [0 K1 D( ^* s7 ?" ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 b% O5 p1 O* z1 H& [% UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 i6 t1 U6 ~; i/ T0 \Seeing the sky content with its love
9 _. @, V7 d* Q. X+ w) aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; i/ a5 z$ b( F- d& ]0 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
3 w: w: [* I- ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; I: Z9 a; B7 P* qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ w( R; L: f9 S# C) sI want so much to see inside your heart
9 n' j- D; g5 e7 ~' x9 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( |  Y$ v0 e2 y! z( NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 F/ V- V+ Y9 r. v. _: \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 I% y! `# H( H& x" Z4 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: S6 J5 G6 i! t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 S" g5 p5 v3 A: q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. x6 ~2 S$ S  H! i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 B4 @- W! T+ Z* }, _% J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* A) h5 ]. }) c' w6 ?; C$ g4 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ B' h) U, i3 C( G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 e. N" c! {4 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& g6 a# g" C* [% y- r) s0 `( t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& G( M% `* `9 o' c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' ]6 t& g  {. Z6 Q: a  M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 Z& C1 N1 C- [: c* Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ^4 s- q5 L6 ?0 r! T& C2 N  P1 H2 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! G1 p5 w& h' O; H& Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, M1 C- _( @0 ?' f1 V6 W( G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ S; @3 J  A5 f* `* D' o: k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ M8 |& `: _% E3 V  A' P  o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 R, ~# s+ A, a+ R3 r0 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 d/ p0 d' I! M( e; g5 t# K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) m% s. t" s+ `' S* B: A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' n0 W' k$ |' X1 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% O. Y1 P. z( d) z& O' K* _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 C' X* k! H; @& d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. a8 i) l; d) Z% }: X& S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 Z( Q, l' F3 D: k9 S7 w/ v6 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& O; J8 z3 ~" j0 O4 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' u  U0 M1 S/ S1 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ]9 `) y" E) A2 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 J; f, r' L3 D& _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 k8 ~* U9 P# p: i我请你剖开它

: u, _- F6 J) }  p7 [. ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 V4 `" A' ]) a+ `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>