【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 ^1 P4 ?7 R/ B6 j, |7 X1 a7 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. a/ x+ h( h# J  [# x- ?; F9 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% Q4 M& |$ U+ U0 R* xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 H+ d' i8 C" M& f. i" O' JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' m  f6 u# \# ~* C" M: \I really want to know just how much you love me
* ^4 b% A! A4 k: O3 ^3 R5 Y* l7 fI love you I love you with all my heart
+ a9 ]4 a/ H6 w. e: W0 X+ {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 D; e. c5 B; u# iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( e% A4 i# [) |+ o4 C! v( dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ]( f  L) V# P  }3 kI’m still filled with fear
/ Y: _! s4 U- L5 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& a: E" f% r- |2 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. j6 R7 f  r1 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) K; t% ^5 g+ m7 c# ?; hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 z! P  v- O: i, x! b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" r( m" S: t7 u, u" _, U5 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ l  N2 W0 d/ u3 H8 q1 h2 A+ x4 v& K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 R: @, d& [5 X8 J; r6 N5 Y9 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ z! _4 b) F+ {$ W2 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- t. G. u% ~" P: z- R1 ~2 _. A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ s: O1 e8 p" U4 n  ~, @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' T% S% K4 m- c0 h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" j9 t2 ]9 ^  m. E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& M- j" L5 ]. S9 u( m5 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; y" J9 G, d6 L; h  Y7 q& j& ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 @, P/ ^5 R: i7 K- [" x2 n! M" J8 i- S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 |% ?+ {3 ]* E+ |( {# ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ K8 I  r8 D+ v7 l7 a/ E! l9 |4 s: M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' \# s4 F$ [- T; r/ K4 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" D' P( Z) H0 [5 v0 s2 }" k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# j* P" i# [1 B! W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Z, O, X1 F  Y; z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. ~  ^8 o* `5 I- s. K* s- ~4 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 g3 }8 `1 G! Q* y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  r. \$ z0 J- n8 f  R, ?8 J- H<P>I regret not dying</P>
( M* Q- m8 x) C, B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' G9 }9 x3 B( `' C8 q7 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; r8 `" k  I2 \+ X+ [8 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 b* p- K# v( y3 z% U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; G2 F% t8 q& U, K. z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 l% x" x3 S3 e6 P  `# c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& m6 J4 y; x' b, P6 K0 t& s/ u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( d$ _. G0 J7 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  S1 @" [7 x3 @  O' M9 p1 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 U% b5 S. [$ D7 z* }, d; P1 a* ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 x' H# C  Y  g$ A- H; i/ ?8 U& o+ w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. z" H, @% K1 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# u2 ]. G; [+ @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>