【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 h; q0 U9 p) L; e9 d; e$ Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 m9 G3 h( T! i  B) `/ _Making the sky glitter like gold,
, k0 ^6 h0 ]" F! E$ qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% L) E9 P! z0 q/ G. h; P5 LWith the moon kissing it every night
( |8 x% Z# k. J3 NSeeing the sky content with its love
% p, h/ q2 E- a) bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, l1 v3 o1 F; [9 ^& {, HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" ]$ e8 q- W) x( O+ fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 x# \% }7 [; U- K, @* j1 WI love you I love you with all my heart
5 n9 Z/ }+ j: F! x! cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ o  c# b# y% x# {/ E4 @5 rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 m5 ^- g7 U, Q9 y% _  a1 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& }; O2 j, K8 U9 ]$ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  `: _  R6 }( \. L8 Z- v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 u3 \5 P1 ~- W' G; X  I: L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  a0 O/ l. y% I0 T+ F& T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 t4 p  p1 ]' U9 I+ ~  E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 N/ ^  y5 V) P. G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# A1 [0 R2 n- q5 ~: @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 r+ E' m( m. l0 P$ f' s" N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# k6 a, T- ^7 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: B" \# Y. G! J- `. A) c$ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 p  E' o8 z. K' T% _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 \- ^* Q: ?4 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: ^( o' s8 ?3 [+ C6 u) U! ~, R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& i+ N, d3 @  Y8 ^, d+ F3 C8 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 ~: l. f. G1 G- f9 L1 x: h5 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* B3 D7 u/ x0 K/ ^/ o+ e0 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% u! P; n; _: Y: m( k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# I2 y( n. ~/ l/ V, M7 F, y( J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 I/ |$ K" D2 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) o% y9 S$ P/ K) t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! K* t- w/ Z+ B! d" q9 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 O/ s* J+ H4 g: M" I  _# f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ `" {5 M$ r4 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 N4 P+ y& ]5 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  I% ^8 I7 u& r2 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 }6 z$ u& F7 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 B' }* r4 w6 |& T9 e, Y" z8 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& i8 M" M% U1 l  \1 E0 P0 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 ]4 N; Y8 I; l7 b: I0 @4 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>