【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: _3 c9 S7 {& l% ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 Y: ]) _1 L0 V- N1 E! A  DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& G4 A6 H2 ?% YThe sky is happy down to its soul
! F( ^2 d4 C( j: K+ MWith the moon kissing it every night
8 @) M+ f5 e8 T4 ~# \0 \+ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 s4 U5 [! ~8 c  YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ \8 B, C4 O! i; y7 |Every other word you utter is love
' m$ c3 Y; I$ o- S5 J+ A% CI really want to know just how much you love me
* a( h6 j9 B% D+ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) e1 O8 q% v4 [( }9 y. pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& N" Y, y2 W1 Q$ k- R& MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ q0 F9 O2 C4 A( j, W* E3 UI’m still filled with fear
. X9 L, T$ Z% U3 m+ OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 U. f  s3 ?- S- EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m9 L2 Z6 U2 [) R  v5 X" e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 A0 x. L8 L$ r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# |9 R+ d$ i& a1 l$ B; K& D: B3 N9 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: I3 |: d6 n. H4 _) u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 M% A: t( s- t9 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- B# _7 H$ |5 P4 Z8 w8 t: T' [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* Q) X6 T' L% \, B9 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! T" j6 h% b' F. {; C( s4 m4 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* K' b) {9 A. V1 b/ P5 R% n5 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 D% ]6 l4 m, Q# B% ]1 u' e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! X& E/ g, J5 U2 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 h/ L$ x6 J* C' y) |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( D( P+ v/ ~% E/ A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 m. o' g6 S5 A+ ^+ G5 A; c* {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 x+ N  r7 ~/ n: I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 y  i# K5 K+ h7 n, N/ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) V0 f, h, L. v! u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, Z* W7 R& H- v/ S: `) d% e/ L$ P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 C& t) A( Z9 a. |6 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 G( O  T" E! L) d) w$ [! N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 ?5 o7 g8 G# G* ?  F+ }5 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, h& o) K6 y8 |# j% Y3 M' Z( |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. y, S+ \8 n& x+ t# w$ f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" K- {- B9 D6 h$ C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 H1 J1 T1 U8 b- ?3 T- F<P>I regret not dying</P>
& N( d$ _9 _5 @) I( y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 l& c$ A7 z9 h* {8 |: g) ]) x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" ]0 m: l. s; A$ q: c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, ?5 v8 B. E  W0 s9 _/ B# q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: y" X  J+ A, \( y  N+ o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ [' L( Y+ `, a1 Y3 V( K' v% {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>