【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 U  g4 r, S7 |5 O4 W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# W9 s* s2 D" n5 Y0 ?; V$ _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 |/ M, i# h: \9 o! wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ]; y& _/ E1 U, q; T! tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( C* `: Q: Z  D9 Z+ vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' K4 l, T; m9 ~$ O% iYou needn’t fear anything
1 K: B$ A$ X; N3 O% i# MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ A9 t8 U+ c4 n$ oEvery other word you utter is love
) F  p' t! M9 k  j% {/ VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: ?+ x& o0 G, M5 p$ N" i1 R2 P) ?7 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! O' h. V! S2 }  J$ h3 `0 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' k" o8 h7 p3 o: J6 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 S+ @& h, {. U* `& Q, {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 E; W$ \, B  nI regret not dying
0 R8 z) X/ b6 s$ {+ O8 G" I. wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 u9 j4 \' K7 r2 ]8 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# I. y' G: U! q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 T' `1 C; z/ L, ?2 D; W3 U4 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ]2 l' b* D2 A+ \1 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ S7 [( K7 T1 C: l  Y9 G1 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; t1 F5 q+ L7 ]7 U* d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ ?! \0 T2 k7 i" Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- o/ |7 x# l: S' I5 K3 |$ {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' b3 \7 B2 |% m0 K1 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ c) n8 x* M4 l% ^6 m: K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( n4 [/ Q' T4 K- t* t5 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 L; h+ H5 h* P! a2 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 Q7 {3 |) }0 ]! m& f. K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' u+ B! u- L* s/ E5 J  b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* O0 O! _' G* @$ R. F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. X  p* e% }  ?# r  E- ]2 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! s6 }, g0 U# g1 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 n/ |5 m( A% ?% {  x6 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) _3 \, K" f! t7 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ]1 q& |$ j7 _6 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 {( u5 d- o" B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) b9 z" T0 C8 F3 F3 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ?" b) [$ d3 ^5 }( ~. m- E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>