【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 W9 y" F  F0 n  g3 Q' tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: m5 q5 ?5 F9 l) nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 X/ i. E( K2 s/ k& F9 o5 ?- iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* F' {- C' `! ]' ?1 i8 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# H$ y, d4 |) y0 p* S: ^# QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ f0 \1 ?  G3 |7 ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ j5 u2 D/ L# R* Z' [) M8 H- gEvery other word you utter is love
- i) V- ^2 X6 @; `& S/ qI really want to know just how much you love me
: p9 b% K. K/ {7 Z. Z# MI love you I love you with all my heart
& d' Z! m; L2 g) u% E: z4 RNothing can compare to my love
  h& @! W4 c0 g; s! d5 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  k2 T- D; r7 D6 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 |, s; e! H' M2 K9 L4 R# bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 w3 j" s7 K  Q1 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 _7 k4 I! g/ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* p4 X2 w) \; S5 G1 E, XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# Y- x1 ]& G% i; A9 y* I" R! kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 _7 i4 ?4 u( O- @1 q/ z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! W1 W2 ^" v6 [/ |7 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- d9 J: z" }( @  e1 \5 ~$ k8 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, Z3 @  ^2 w( Q$ y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 e1 U" b+ S& u# |, y9 i$ z( O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# @( h- b$ k' b/ X; e8 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 R- W" s' x5 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 w- S+ b9 I  {) {: R7 X* ?, A0 m1 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) `! F/ [* B# Y' I: V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ]" i0 \/ r9 U" a$ \- T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 k1 N% U* E( Z8 I6 h( |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% I; P. k. K3 O- e; R; P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 Z  a/ J! \- g1 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  r+ q- F( t5 l+ r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# R: Q7 i4 O' i3 x$ h) H3 B1 T- r7 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 v6 l1 ^! E% x% j9 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# h' R/ ]1 K, g' a. c4 }2 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, y* ?' }  K5 Y5 T" ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, Q: F+ F5 L! _9 g& ]) t8 b& W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ o  h& I3 x6 m' j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. Q% Z3 P0 F0 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; ~  y! C6 E- `" Y$ X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 O6 n& W# \! Q4 P9 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: k7 O, F7 O& E9 Z! \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 i% k) m1 C) i1 b; [- [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ M. P6 P' V6 K" k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ q1 ]8 `8 H: T0 J* h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( E) ]& p+ l. a+ D- o* G$ g, R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: p. i+ F# w8 N# _% _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ?8 _! w' S& k2 w  X6 F' y: V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' G' y$ |, e$ c) O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 I8 z/ J& _7 `3 W. q' c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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3 N+ S! M2 Z- O6 I. D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>