【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ S! \9 L( `3 `0 p+ Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ~# z2 ?& H7 p6 }1 C- ^1 k  GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) e3 R7 D) \$ s1 W6 l/ OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ f& a! Q5 Q% V5 l4 e& \* u1 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 q: k; _) L( x; R$ r$ ?" YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 O+ w) O5 _+ b; M) FNothing can compare to my love
- G  ~! {- F1 |6 |4 e' c* YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  c( |& V& E3 m. s" h/ NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 [* N  o/ b4 a% P% |( @+ VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 q0 W+ M. b- Q& PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 w: G3 T( a+ d2 v4 s+ a5 `' `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 [, |5 u3 M6 {1 V7 j: C3 ?6 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) W" N# R# B% L+ ~. t+ m0 e% qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  G4 q9 {8 @( A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 t* a, {0 s% x0 _  z) F; T9 z' T3 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 g1 q3 ^1 V# A' ]9 A( ]" ?6 h9 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 V: A, c6 Q8 S* m% @4 w% ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 J6 u: l9 T; O: ?$ r9 z& d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! l6 r& D' G& w2 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, I, ?* s, ^9 r) Y4 O9 U; l; g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 B9 o! F4 z% G& X2 n7 u% ?' ?<P>你无需担心</P>
" n6 p% l8 w9 B2 k% P! M7 Y: E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 H0 T% z0 |; o! h1 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& i+ c8 |2 x: e5 s- q9 ]/ I- {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: n+ @. g" a; A2 W9 d% q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& R7 t+ J6 W" n- @; P3 ~' {0 l/ L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 G" m0 L( ^% F$ p* P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& j- u( v; y. O. M8 {0 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 y. {9 ]  n: i  P* M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 ]# O( r2 S, K( T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! Q9 b  k9 L5 p: N. ]( T0 W. V2 g, k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 I2 Y. |" U+ W/ j9 x* ]' \7 V( @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ D0 a* y9 s4 I" o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 \2 m: c4 V, T9 e* a1 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. X, L$ q4 s( C3 i. Z% o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' J/ x  r' O2 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( b; X& K2 [  {, k' ]( S# a' P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' P( X8 w! F" i0 A  m0 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ }: d, V( H, T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- x: f1 p4 R: V7 b0 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% ]# N; K' N3 k8 ~1 T3 t3 k5 r! H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 j# F+ F+ g) n. w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: e; D( U2 [, |  v. _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 h! ?: Z( @) ]3 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" w" J9 U/ I: V% C/ e6 ]我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% E3 M! Y" r; j3 m! S3 ~4 b2 L7 \& f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>