【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 h+ K! [5 m. f$ k. F; Q6 a歌词我附在后面。
/ E, I3 m& n9 |  [( y- f  s" cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 a6 y* L0 I& `7 t# ]0 \  U6 S! @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) L+ U( k& h  D3 ~. K  y7 x4 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ t# ~! V& o; U6 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) w+ T' ]# d& r4 N% D" BSeeing the sky content with its love
- e4 v9 y8 g! `- y! M' M. wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  u, l. @' m* S2 r" u: q1 sEvery other word you utter is love
; q7 x  @" p, T- `0 _4 JI really want to know just how much you love me
. R) [4 }7 t8 F( ~8 RI love you I love you with all my heart
/ J! R# j$ A/ n: FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ I9 s  T1 P( w) T3 S! {8 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- k3 Y3 U4 S& WI’m still filled with fear
5 v; X+ x4 D' T8 |7 E! h" YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* p+ ^+ b+ {3 i: w/ U0 W5 f8 ^With such a tongue as yours,
9 {; W; H6 j$ U. W- |8 E* g' H8 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" _( S) w8 Q: {. JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& o9 D1 c0 I8 V, Z$ t+ |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, q6 l/ i) C: T, K* H  a7 ~, o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) V7 R! ^3 [7 q5 E) z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 y/ Y4 P% D  i. K$ b& M) k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* j& a: w" D5 o* y$ Z) \! o7 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 P" i4 g/ f" L7 y* i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 D5 m0 x- F* G& U0 S+ E9 \9 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! m3 p6 p( F7 `7 T: u0 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 ?5 ^# [" y$ [7 g, |: g' O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: [0 t3 @0 E. `, Q7 I2 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ }& p: H9 Z4 f9 H& |$ C5 T+ W4 A( _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" C7 M- _7 h: ^: K8 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  N1 ]+ B1 N+ p; k9 Y/ A+ F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: G: J% t) R1 |( Q, {$ j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 }( C; l) w3 ^1 v/ Q. f" a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ^* ], p4 I4 ]7 t  _) b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 q+ L* s3 l: ?+ N5 h* Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& i1 Y/ J. k! T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 S  F! u- i" e& @0 C6 L; o+ e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 O2 T6 Z; {; W" u8 S+ ?, g: A/ r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ [$ h- }2 r. Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 ?/ ^" n+ T1 l' n0 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 q" e2 N3 o( ]' f# x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 `* E: ^5 g; g! I! o& S( m* [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  k! {. {# w- x( I7 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# t# X) _7 |9 g! h1 R! s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 J9 q2 s2 O) r- ^3 M) q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( J8 j0 A+ Z( p& c# L; s- }: h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. m9 x1 Z/ k% B8 M' \% t( k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* A6 O& S2 R1 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ y% q$ i0 w2 Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; j3 e, R" H- m4 J% U, q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 m0 S, I( R9 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>