【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 w: Q$ f; @6 q2 W$ w8 X3 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 n% o0 z5 b* h1 c5 l# DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 h1 Z. O9 `. s* M/ hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& t" O( v. ~+ h0 E6 q7 w4 \Seeing the sky content with its love
2 W/ l# H; t' U  ]: o* }$ ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! v- B! q' {+ a8 R/ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 A6 n  [5 L, X- T" A+ DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& P/ z4 u9 }1 M( F: A* LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 @% y0 F9 i1 o& ^, |/ g3 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- [- ^* F; S; I1 t" b/ s( D) l8 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 K; n& e8 u' L7 [" {6 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 H  M$ c* m( W+ TI regret not dying
! u/ f+ w. G+ G' x# ]* F& lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. f% _! }$ {" m( g; S) CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; u$ p+ y2 v- Y/ o+ L' @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 E' Z9 ^! A/ b& A) b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, b9 d# C" t3 J7 F8 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# d5 F. K$ y1 K3 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 j" u5 ^' Y, g! K- B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. r4 g, C* U9 J* ~. k2 a- _0 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 h0 y4 z0 o* M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ]1 G9 n! D  c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' x/ W8 N7 M/ h& e5 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ Q: L; a+ Z; z) U% s6 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! |7 g' N$ Q9 ~- \5 {; W- c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! Q$ K/ d; e: h9 E8 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  f. L2 _/ }  x$ f. ]$ S: `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" R1 a- f6 Z% S; E( O5 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 {* B% K; Z% }& ^/ V$ B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 F! E: D1 t) ^0 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 T% L2 ?2 \6 w# |8 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ I# |6 |/ {( W& H( H6 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 w. }# S( a) u7 s6 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 U6 Q3 F$ G4 d; j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( d# e! @" E" L& f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 L" v5 O4 A0 ?1 C) h$ f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- u; s" i. ]0 z8 A7 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 t- H- \( b& e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 W  e% v: K2 J7 v6 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; |' p4 v/ n* u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>