【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 n0 v5 t+ `7 ~0 o$ W" X9 J5 v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 v) d( D2 Q# {! cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# ^1 g$ g( Q* W4 p7 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 z, h$ Q) P0 ^+ O- kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, i/ l# a) B! q" D* s2 nYou needn’t fear anything
3 d4 q1 d  J: N8 [$ x" m* p* l/ oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: b! q- m2 [; x; C4 t2 m+ ]9 xEvery other word you utter is love
: s8 q3 v4 E' r0 z; q" B( V* EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' ]" G: j+ e& A6 m, lNothing can compare to my love
3 n3 k6 D  f1 {7 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- g4 V$ ], }% U) K8 W0 aI want so much to see inside your heart
0 M2 `! t2 a0 R) cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ]( [* y; t: o, N; ]) M- b1 qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; f* \4 y4 h/ jWith such a tongue as yours,
: a% i; Y# d% D/ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* a2 g; b$ l4 t# h6 d3 z) yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% f' y# ?( C! K( SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ d' h% o  i  T" T7 J9 h1 @3 p% u: M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 V7 I0 Y; a: X+ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. Z5 R/ i6 [7 {: N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 d1 y" O- f. C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) }: H2 j+ z) K" E5 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  W: P3 y+ g  C" T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 C% H# ~- N7 S6 |( y9 y/ Q5 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# z; s+ M* u4 B; r, r, ]7 Y8 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, l5 e% F- y9 ^/ ~  S5 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 A2 C. A; p+ s& @1 D/ Y1 Z6 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 v* M) C9 J: a6 e% \+ T. q, ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- S' E4 Q8 \! G- A: s: Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ E5 I% Q  Q3 x& X# \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 B6 P2 ]4 q" ]1 ]8 v+ `$ w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; P* V& L. C: F1 i3 Z5 K: `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 y9 s: }4 q/ X+ p# p" r$ c8 w# X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 i" c. b7 P* q& U+ D* v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 Q, W1 c4 d2 k+ R: O$ D( Q( K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ {0 Q! u& g2 k( Z: d7 N! C& |9 E1 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 ]0 v! v" a/ m: n/ u9 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>