【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 l# A1 R# O8 W8 X4 H" m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 v1 ?; b& ^6 X; s9 d6 LWith the moon kissing it every night
7 \# W9 `* B! YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- D3 }9 G6 a" P5 D9 i) @# o& kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' m4 M% z- V/ e( E  eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 E" u6 ~' z( p9 P9 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ v2 v' v1 K$ x3 D6 e8 TI’m still filled with fear
; K& P8 O' H4 E1 L6 xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 u. N2 H7 c. [7 t4 iI regret not dying
& y/ X! Q$ P' k/ zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 a! [3 q, h+ Z$ b5 KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( X. D  }( i" R3 h* X. R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 R. c7 K) M  U( t5 K! t/ P/ [1 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 n6 k' t: y, @+ h) D* n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 p9 P# u8 r2 v) f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 a5 E9 C4 s! j/ Q$ T% J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ p4 k7 w: x" B9 `( w5 Y! h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* N  A: h( T3 o- d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& f$ \; j# Z4 V" I$ j. L) ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ {# V, S0 M3 I$ e; F- u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ a5 t0 ]% a% U- L+ P<P>你无需担心</P>
. ^6 T: y$ Q. @0 B% P( N7 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, d& I0 d# T2 _1 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: |; y& N) k+ {4 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* ]& r& g& k) Z' l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 n3 b! O. D% H$ K) d/ n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 |. W. l  h9 H% Q! e- A- d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ~4 B: G/ @! v6 {- t0 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 a# O; Z1 J; ~: z. Z' i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 C5 y/ w, Y2 y- r# Y9 q& C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 s" P, t6 a8 s7 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) j* N8 g5 E/ m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, t$ s5 O  b+ n4 i7 I2 G7 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
* J" K) ~7 c8 y: I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 O  P( ]' a3 T7 u. G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ W2 v! a! l4 U$ G3 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 T8 n# `2 m( C$ T; r: y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- j/ ~+ \2 U2 T2 C* a+ X( q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ t! |9 H, j% z: B5 i0 s$ r& {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ J8 D' u9 L' @/ H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 V' z: B: ]& K  D- K) n1 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* ^. J4 V8 b$ `* z1 c9 u5 Q) }4 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>