【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 h: a& U# ^# z7 z6 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* n1 |& k, G* p1 }  \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 m. q2 B: ~4 T1 h' B, V( oWith the moon kissing it every night
4 X3 O* p/ M" g- S: ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 o/ G* y; x# R  s4 K, iEvery other word you utter is love
* l  U; I1 n. ]4 _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  Q, C0 g* b$ c" ^5 d* @& M* GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; y1 V4 _; n5 P1 `: }' lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( r5 S  _+ S8 r! d; BI want so much to see inside your heart
# [; e3 E! s, r" D( C2 E8 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! w: G' j5 H5 j. T7 a! O9 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 y! n- v& E$ C% C+ l5 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 u9 q/ E5 [/ S# r6 ^1 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! ^6 e8 B( Z  @: ~; PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 Q' a; @& ]2 B+ s7 p0 W8 N9 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! ^) O) i9 F; k0 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) X1 F! E( S  K# _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, c4 S, ~7 r% w3 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ]6 \$ H/ [/ q* H' v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 {: C1 u/ J4 R3 ^# X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' ]. L: P* m- w8 }/ a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 u# ]2 y! K1 j3 r+ J9 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* L6 I* m8 {# a+ z6 j) E$ ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, w* p$ M0 @9 ?9 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* W8 v9 N7 b  u& i* v2 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 U1 S% P# l  @# [( Z6 P- T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 I- V* Y5 _: A" ]* Q" n/ l; I$ G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 L0 _; t9 a' F% o% @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) J; ]( C/ [4 j8 E/ X, U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 q6 s7 S2 U% M+ a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ @0 t  z0 f3 m; M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 _" `" F& E) l; @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( g$ i/ {$ }+ d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, I! t) l2 j+ k' {# T) ^/ T: Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& U0 E( T! h: R+ O4 E5 W/ [% r; R! a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 H0 R, ]; C4 e& v# l5 I5 C8 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& t8 q: E$ I  C. w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% u1 r/ q# W, e+ ]- r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( h% ?- E$ k  C+ \$ y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 E" P; Y, R* z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' N' j& u* n8 U& A& h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" P$ F- X5 m6 y% {6 c8 ^1 Z# o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* w# e* U, v( J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ u. w) S5 Y! K* Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 q1 Y. c6 t% w" {" G/ w6 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, \4 |/ t$ t7 i. e5 e+ q) }我请你剖开它
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) s, P3 z+ g, Y, a( H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ [- _, L" ]$ V& X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>