【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 N* i8 k$ J" D- y+ @歌词我附在后面。
! v4 z% Q9 x2 G* E* I, KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 b' t5 F6 V6 l" O) o3 \" N: IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! G: {& `+ I  t) `5 L3 X5 V7 _. h1 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 N+ a) V3 k5 t" nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# ]- |+ i1 s& T$ tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, z/ b3 T' {7 X& D1 a* ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( _# t3 r7 Z+ H; hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 G$ D7 A* Q8 u, @$ \7 i- OI want so much to see inside your heart
4 {3 A. `. P' d1 L: SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 b# C( V! c* t: r7 {" N/ _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ s8 N$ }7 o( o5 Q/ _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 [0 \$ `1 r: T1 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 n/ B3 I7 U( W+ v5 O- {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 \* y  y5 N5 s( v6 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 g" C) w; t7 Q6 h% ~) l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 x: V, y4 o% X+ r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 ]* f6 x4 _. c" f) S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ]9 q8 K5 p4 c7 `( }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 `! b& q& G  N  N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- v# y" p& `! ?: l5 V3 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# W4 Y& R8 j; {% d8 Y( p; k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ X& `9 Z. t1 k& [4 W( [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 T9 ?% Z' B" A: f<P>你无需担心</P>
; E+ @  d! A# M2 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, Z9 F9 Q* j% s! R& u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# n0 t+ C) m( P5 o( B, |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% N. r1 H; ]. i5 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 n5 t" W1 }& U# ~, n) Y* z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ z# h" a% u, ]6 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( Z7 a# G3 M  d- }- y) l% W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ~  R5 M  H9 h0 H# G0 j, F# R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& I& d" S& v; k( O. _! s2 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! o2 @! ^% r' p* ^% f9 C) X( R. x6 {1 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" R$ ?( [7 @9 B8 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, _  v  k4 j; _# Z1 e$ d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ h; m  z: A  b7 ^) q% d  ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& \7 f1 c/ C% z2 |  Y6 Q: |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 w7 e" D- R; M  S( T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. y. p" c9 r; w; A" a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 m2 v+ q/ d  z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 w7 x0 v+ h& H! b- N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( x) D8 W3 l+ n2 R8 C' M; v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) N0 h( @: Y3 y9 g( |" |  N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ v# e: g( _9 \8 q我请你剖开它
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  W! j' |2 P2 ]0 Y* U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>