【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! O* g) D' ]2 M8 k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% t( L+ l& ~" j' n( z; r& ^& UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; ~( K1 {" P3 R* Y* rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% S  J6 \  H) _4 r- V. SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  K5 q& w5 @, wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  ~" Z3 L9 E- y( ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ r3 i  f3 j5 P; Y3 d+ V1 F8 XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; C1 @+ g" l* a8 J# T) d3 J8 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 r' F" X( W! V2 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% [7 m1 j* g9 @  e& g& V0 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ g! }: m. `$ V! s8 g: G* F4 k; ~With such a tongue as yours,
" m; O. r" h$ \" x2 s& @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. }1 c) ]( {: m9 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! r& o- `: ^% L1 Q+ I7 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! e, J8 V6 N' n9 u; z" l  J8 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. y7 f2 o8 M: p  T: e  G2 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 y6 W; }' O8 ^, l; X# ^8 i5 I1 {+ K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' g3 {7 z$ u" H% |. m& M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ H/ F. Y! w6 [* J0 O* i; _7 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ V  P% K1 Y# N2 ^  S- \" P- a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  U$ X! i7 z2 K; X4 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- ^5 p9 T, L+ }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 U# A1 z; I5 G5 n8 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% Q# K3 F& P' g5 j3 h* A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# |1 j. a. z* t, E) H: L+ S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' Z0 F3 l: R4 N& l: |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, T, j6 X, e5 z1 Q; Z" @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* J/ q. h, n4 Q0 r" g$ O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. t: o% O! B" K0 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 q1 L/ F, U  }( L: V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* h% n% s! [, U0 J; ^. ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. }& t, z# A, j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# W. P6 D8 ]/ h& t! g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" {. x" v- G$ t( j% e9 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" g  X! @  O" T+ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! g0 B+ D& |  L! m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% G- L% ]  v: @) y2 {1 X! r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 E$ s& Z1 m: D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# a/ W+ q+ j+ W& L7 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& I! [! w) D+ b0 `2 H2 j7 ^6 B9 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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