【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% K. b2 d0 A2 I; Q4 V; ~% u' R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 W3 u" ?4 T) }! xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; g" j( a& N9 ^2 d" z3 NYou needn’t fear anything
0 J. m7 Y8 n# @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 |( P' m/ y; _. h- fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ E: s/ j4 d9 j' @% v9 e8 y. R7 _0 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, W  G7 S1 i' eI want so much to see inside your heart
% Z, x5 v/ S6 b; q  uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 Q5 _0 H. N3 {( [1 d7 H8 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% [2 D8 D- D2 ?& A. C9 x% q5 ^1 dWith such a tongue as yours,
- L& s* j! n# N3 H, \: [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ a2 T& \; O. L9 B$ mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! C; `* i. P. \  b- t" _) L5 X5 n" w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% c2 \; F! s4 t2 p; {4 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 v  U/ H; d  z% s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* w9 {% e0 Z# G) p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' o2 r+ l4 f9 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 r( T5 [' h* P( q. z! u  n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 E# k. E$ D' v4 @/ Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  _2 l* h' y/ ?+ @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) n: n& q( g. u3 H) |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' y! B; p) Q  q; @' f* s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% w% ?7 ^* S# T) l6 _& ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) ~: d8 e( y5 k6 G1 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 V2 t8 |2 g, I  j( l" Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 Q0 h/ f  b' G; i$ Z2 ~9 p: Z/ M% X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; b# Z  [* }2 O5 B* o5 v' n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 {* D9 j+ A) B- Y8 ^$ i" c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- n8 }8 F' r( l% Y- d1 ?$ H! X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 x+ V. f" f2 _: @* }3 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ F4 k5 T8 E* {! q: J- ^1 h4 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* f7 F2 {8 j6 m( ~+ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ _/ i: v; G+ |; A5 }+ j* Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) {7 C9 s0 L6 H; b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ n5 b6 N1 t! Q& P# d! x* a我请你剖开它

, y8 K9 K, z3 r1 F' Y( E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ _1 n2 l$ V1 {, [' y- i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>