【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( A% g, D( G+ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ Y' H, W# |, d1 y0 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. {' g  d$ d. l' ?2 P& g: ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) o% K8 X  O2 ^# y2 W4 vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 t- N0 \0 W. PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- W5 f& ^8 V1 _9 ]/ uEvery other word you utter is love
1 f- A- v, v: b5 O# O- {I really want to know just how much you love me
9 r9 X3 m. i( a6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
3 x+ ]; K5 m; p1 H5 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* y& g7 [, q: J  sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. u* ]' a; s. t& {) w5 i* tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 d" @1 {$ J- I8 x2 q$ `( QI’m still filled with fear
* G. d8 h( Q1 i6 I! O) z! n8 V9 ]4 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! T, p$ L. x, D' g$ LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 E( H; o6 E, n( D  DWith such a tongue as yours,
# v8 P2 M( q9 f  e  KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 U/ S" e; x' O* D& {3 w  l1 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' P9 a& G  p9 W6 T0 c4 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 B5 G. y5 O. t2 z# V" A1 F0 ^" ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 w* s: c; J  J3 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 h7 u4 j& H, E  ^. h! _$ r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ P0 I+ G: ~/ K& i& T/ G+ h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 o* J/ a8 C, v: n5 L, J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; X* w' O3 X. ]" ?2 A9 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 Y+ u7 {5 V! L: ~! l9 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" E5 F- }) P, c. g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 |1 W) @& v) B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- a: W2 ~' d) Y. C& j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ]3 }: }# ~+ \4 x" H( x0 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 F- p/ Q  a+ B* [* D( h0 J' B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' i/ o9 L* N& o! T4 B% t( S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, E  f. ^3 z/ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) Z3 Y! G2 C. l: O$ X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 z: J2 {4 h8 D+ o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ E* Y( P: m- b; y" M- o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" N$ O  M4 `1 ^0 u0 _( \! e  D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 c+ n  K! P" I7 T3 n. W. T- B/ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 O, T; P' x( D  C+ p4 V; I3 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 B3 d% ~) ?- {% e3 x4 q; M+ ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# @) c6 D. G9 y/ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 N7 y1 Y- l, n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ i9 @. U2 W0 }* L& U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 f% }7 J, [3 O$ u. D+ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ]; x0 ]! P* c; M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* Q; M! U* S. e$ i! ~7 v0 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>