【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 h# d  G, A8 _) j/ H8 v# X% gThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ x+ k# w. b+ M; Q8 s# [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 t8 D2 O; q- v, |* R. ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( x, ?) ?4 p$ EYou needn’t fear anything
7 t1 P8 I; {4 W" r* z! lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 A! x6 p$ Q8 @. H; MEvery other word you utter is love
% m8 z7 b2 P; ^  u5 o' n) LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* C* {* B1 B/ X) p, ]$ p$ ~( y% fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 Q; ~5 H- w; ]1 F: X* J" a3 @With such a tongue as yours,
8 |9 {  P* i& ]( EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* ]5 ]; h& o5 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  R0 c) J. t; _( E+ F' U$ a8 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' U9 d7 C2 |5 G$ A: W/ l* ]4 t$ U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 b1 _( C. ^  A1 T. [( \0 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 H8 w# m# W4 g, z% d4 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. W* {9 r" X  A6 x7 c8 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ |5 [' v& s$ Z5 ~( q; Y/ C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' m6 o+ O9 E& H& ?: j/ [9 \% b4 B$ \2 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 a! j7 L7 n' h9 z% h4 m3 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' r# t" D/ p9 u; [: w; u* [. ~2 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 r0 N2 U+ P' ^! D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 W& n* f5 `' A: {% M& X  ?' Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! f# j- C2 i! w: T; r( D8 }( r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. _8 K& M/ P( E$ A1 \" d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 g' N( r* ]) ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: I8 [+ `2 c& g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  {& e( d) i$ b  r% W/ s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% Y3 L; Y" |4 i+ E* b- S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ^2 d" k6 `0 E9 F0 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 c( J! A: G9 w7 K! s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 A8 @' e/ Y0 Z; l8 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# h$ Y2 U) h! z0 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 L' j2 x) J, b( d2 b" v3 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ~& I9 Q; q8 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. b' V" q6 q" ]5 Y7 S$ }( @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 D) o4 m+ G+ L) H7 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. x$ _; c- k% c% e; I% B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 u/ [2 ~) ]) q9 U3 y9 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. A1 M3 R- w* @& _. C/ ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' ]$ l: d" x" v3 c! Q; p* w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ I% b7 w& S) S& d) S/ f: b9 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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