【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  B, N, K; n) q: gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 P- A8 B  X8 k) g0 v5 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
! y: D  ~" b8 i2 i) N$ g) C$ a. SWith the moon kissing it every night
( C# R2 V* ^* k3 f' Y8 A' \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# M; c6 k$ [/ V% E$ m* UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ v! Z, p1 D, u/ P- ^. v5 RI really want to know just how much you love me
( h5 X) G9 P, h# @, W/ ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# q6 g" H  G- qI’m still filled with fear
# b0 z9 D; l# _7 ?3 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' x( |6 x, V9 I3 K3 QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ M/ o3 Y4 a  b! V; }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( v* H+ C# K' U4 E! I+ ~, J  _6 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" F- Y0 ?3 X6 G1 ^/ z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 d, s5 m0 r5 X) C# o/ W: n( {: Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! n( F2 U* V+ v1 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 Y6 H; z9 a8 R7 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# \4 E* o! P; v" t+ B8 I  L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 h) o. a9 ]/ P: L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 J  o2 k/ {7 `1 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- n, G8 n) G9 X8 `) N! \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- d/ A1 K3 d) V9 D2 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 N; G) q" y/ O3 V' r<P>你无需担心</P>
& l3 t3 x8 V! k; {- e! k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' R0 Y6 Q3 k! t' I& H/ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 `; Z7 |- i; a5 S6 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# u" \  x- E8 J7 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 F2 f( S6 F3 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" Y2 d( t$ h2 @3 W, V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 L* {8 I9 x& F4 B0 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 x8 I2 K' w- }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 A; a" l0 K/ X+ ^6 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. C( ^( L7 l- q' b. |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; B* D' D+ S8 T2 J$ j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' R5 ]  J. `# p+ {/ W* C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( g' S$ Q% f( U% T6 y( P( Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  O6 j1 R- ^9 L3 L1 r7 s! M2 Z; ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ J9 K: _( ~2 W3 h/ a2 B# ?0 q2 r. w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. K  i6 u6 Y/ c4 R8 Q! b* F5 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 c  X; s% N1 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# c) d5 w5 x; i2 M* f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, k! _5 D5 \, R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; |+ f4 X& @' R; E7 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! p% g$ m2 _" f6 A' |7 W6 T7 L3 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! i/ V# G# B7 b; u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ P2 w& O9 {6 v/ l2 \' F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ g1 I  W5 m5 m& y* @) N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 L( }, I0 F. z+ c! K! z. ?- V1 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>