【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 g0 b% `  L5 M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ Y; x& q: v7 I# X( u% ?0 V3 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 R7 Z0 Z2 \; y" WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 R% S- g4 {9 K5 j% t& f" `1 s3 SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- }: f3 @% Y* h' S  UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' p  O: Z! f3 m5 |6 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! W; x  G# e9 [* ?( KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" [) e; c+ W  ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: k# R- l7 W# I( m. u9 {9 ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! p) K% j! m) S% _; L( t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K$ N9 B5 z7 B% [6 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 J7 e0 o5 w, s* G8 ~. Q# K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 b+ N9 ]& E) ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 g2 [4 V+ w9 i/ ]# F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  ~& B' [8 [. ]; ~, w$ d4 R8 T6 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& x3 a$ C2 C: k: D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 s3 r7 b. C. ?: L; k/ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% T- V9 d  _* L/ T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, Q( r3 K8 B: L; y* w& \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 H  M$ j# W" f0 }2 s: P  X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. a' Z5 {( ~$ N9 n2 g% Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, d2 C- y1 d0 ?6 e) B" v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- u. P$ S9 J  M  s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 _  l2 W9 X# p/ [' s- C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ [; C. ]- b1 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) q  I2 m5 }7 {" F* r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) J: D5 N. R7 ~* V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, \; B/ ]6 o% k. u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% ~5 m) b. F) R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ {& @4 A: d4 p; ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 V+ G) L7 `( R; F1 s  x& M4 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: d2 B9 g" ~) Q' K我请你剖开它

- l! B& l' z# p) [+ |, } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>