【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  g/ B4 j3 f  A% sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# K; r4 j7 O6 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  v# |( Y, c" [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 F" G6 k- `3 h/ m9 C! v. {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  {/ J: i: W, P$ NYou needn’t fear anything
: C$ `' t& [( `2 k2 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# `0 c7 d; f9 c# gNothing can compare to my love
9 d9 c) D# V* s/ l! o0 x/ TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" B; _* c# P3 A# D  r5 C( qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 W2 I2 m5 n! w8 E( XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 R7 I! {6 J' \! E6 x- HI regret not dying
' t$ [( U- J- L, v9 ]$ Y5 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" l! H) X- i$ t1 J% iWith such a tongue as yours,
7 ^, a' o7 \1 f! B; g: j5 W' nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" e. k- {& {$ YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( o4 {/ ^* n; Y4 x& d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: V3 k8 W  N; ]+ ~2 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. y; g8 Z6 k2 A  A5 i" V; n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* S2 o& C; A3 b# ?) [( j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- O# E$ P2 n( F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ X  E1 Z, @" |$ P, c8 H8 J) b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' u4 _3 a% B, n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 M+ t) @5 z/ G( J' c  d: Q+ B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 X7 P/ x) b: X$ Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( g+ x: W& Y0 q7 i5 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 A4 R5 j, d; J1 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 h0 G: Q0 Y2 r7 a$ Q; \- _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 j2 K' {1 x; H. @4 \; W3 C6 [, \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ W% y1 A" I( ?' T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 C9 c" Y) G1 G# O6 T) L- A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" Y* N9 ^( M+ L4 ~+ U, G8 O' Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, j  v( H/ @; m( n, Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 M* N& s# H9 z7 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 w" L$ Y6 \7 {3 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 R0 H8 p4 R, z) c) Z3 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" e- N+ i: U, V- R2 n# T6 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; s# z( }, [2 j6 B+ w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ m% n- _' o1 ]- a& C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. ?2 c% Z. ^% V3 `  ^9 k8 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- j4 D8 B8 [8 g5 D" B! }( a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( `7 k  w. i5 A9 f' o- v) e/ Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& ~/ ^" b% y' Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  h8 Y) C1 \+ c/ o2 P6 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>