【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! S( y* m; [# S  QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! |2 K5 ^4 b, k: D* NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 x4 S: Y1 y7 c( AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  l9 t9 D. ?1 g. Q2 R# |9 yWith the moon kissing it every night
. b7 I0 p: T. ~' l: J+ ~; Q( cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 D  o& t. q1 t6 I% O6 w  wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# s) m- f* t0 c$ Y5 CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 H$ J; a! C( M& kI love you I love you with all my heart
' X4 o0 C9 h. L1 ]( C4 WNothing can compare to my love
( `- A/ Q% o% y2 ?, tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 M7 R! J* {1 |/ N; j# vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ f7 ^# }+ \( G# P. HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 q1 p. t- j6 F3 {: l" U3 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# A$ R7 x5 v0 X' p) G/ v0 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ E/ v2 L2 c5 N( {" n/ x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 u8 G! B. z& e8 w3 D$ X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 l4 ]% _  Q6 `2 I1 ]" q$ Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ t- P6 G+ B2 T- K0 i1 o/ j( T  }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% R4 \' D4 a% F- i8 h3 u1 {) e- C; T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  A2 G7 \1 k7 H* Q. m) O; T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, X3 i9 R5 f! L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 }( ?+ _; S5 u. l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: d( P& i1 r7 X% D$ i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! \& c' @1 h' I3 ]- u/ a% I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! }# D' J% ~/ _7 u3 K# i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Q. ]' j: E! ^: Q5 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ f: M7 f* X3 T" k2 B( G$ ^) v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ ]8 x% l2 v5 C# ^8 U3 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ?! q9 v; T* o  O+ {7 n) c5 B, ~- i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& U9 J' O2 W0 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 J+ c) ^& b, d) w$ X% d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) J( _& [6 I' @/ T* ?& ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; J& f! @. r* {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( B! i% a2 t/ m: `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( Z. O7 R. z1 z, x( M: p+ x+ c9 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ r6 t! L5 U( l+ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% D2 S3 G4 \# k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: U0 n5 e7 d  d  _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Z$ t; x5 }7 D) T  W. ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 N; v; O; \" ^) w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( X$ y$ L3 r  K6 K# a7 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; ]3 q* T, q( R7 A- N5 t  ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 {( ^1 X" F. N/ G( N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 H# t5 V9 K$ }" b8 @" }6 {5 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' O+ y. b  ^1 ?7 P2 Z! Z, k& o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 {9 c4 z8 `/ @& d! b! s9 V% q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( s/ r4 ~( F1 g# |) J4 n% s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' M3 Z1 {( C! }5 }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ @7 A* N0 s* Q2 v" {2 j) g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>