【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 }, V5 t! L6 G歌词我附在后面。
  S; e# t5 R% @3 ?& U* z8 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
% W6 M) {7 s+ ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Q) o1 S% E8 M4 m/ {& aThe sky is happy down to its soul
" W$ [: \5 A& O" X; @9 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: }' @0 W7 ~: ~6 `2 cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Z& C& H. R/ Z6 yEvery other word you utter is love
; i& q8 s9 s- P' N; t& CI really want to know just how much you love me
4 x# i/ r# c( wI love you I love you with all my heart
+ X7 M, ]! a! t% P/ v( ^3 I/ ?Nothing can compare to my love
  b6 o! f5 i. N9 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! R2 o. h& a. |( |7 C6 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) c, q3 U' D2 o4 L& O) xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" @3 z$ J; s/ @* A" v- p; |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ \9 L1 s) N! v% T: `( mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: F. F: ~; t8 r9 h+ n$ w4 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 v4 P- k5 [# g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% Z* `  @# A5 e) p, ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 ^0 V5 S7 ~" x8 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ a  f0 y4 ]/ G3 O3 x1 H5 r# T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: F* o" J: p+ U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 w: F' H, R+ t/ I. f) t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' j  v0 ^, ^8 L: }( E8 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# s$ l# a  D: j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 l' E! p" p+ ^# V6 U) {5 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( h& E. H5 p9 f/ K8 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* o4 z1 A) Q. z- d& }. {* m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& v, M& e7 l& }9 v. ^4 y( d" ]5 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 i$ `+ ]2 w0 b4 M0 N0 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 C' T% I4 v! U8 H$ b6 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 I' @8 [8 ~  Y+ j/ Z" o1 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* s1 s% m* i7 e. d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 A( l& m) p" }) K/ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* u3 K; y# b( x/ D. B0 a4 E5 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 }/ n- }# @4 g  I& c7 s9 f# P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 |8 U& N+ S1 U1 E: ?  {. E- i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' I6 z* g" M; g7 d/ f6 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 C2 W+ g; ]0 B& x1 {; {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, D; w1 q0 m2 A. }4 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# z. a$ N2 I# g( Z; m9 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ p* D% k! ~! x: q$ ^4 s1 V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 C* ^7 D1 l9 g+ r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>