【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- ?5 }3 Y( \; F. m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 Q7 Q. {* V, ^/ _- dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 y. p+ s" T  }; `0 T; lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 X% L7 _. u6 }; G9 }4 I$ a# nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ^9 n. `$ _, ?" bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, d" g' e0 g+ k- F6 T: h4 _6 kSeeing the sky content with its love
  y6 z; f. F* p- l" C4 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 y  \% T! a8 J6 p& `1 p3 `" A7 CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% [& y: u& b3 tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; o* z, B5 X+ w8 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! [4 G5 g- Q* S) j# bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 T5 g) R; u- u1 R4 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 W' M) w7 S/ {; M& C' ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* m6 Y( }" G0 i1 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 I" E, M. b4 f$ n: z* ZWith such a tongue as yours,
; O5 ?4 F6 M: K4 w$ r% UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 i# i1 U& t- I4 c9 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  c! v6 a) O0 j" r7 l% T. Y2 P! Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, f% d: w/ U- I* d! z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. j2 h3 d+ x4 k3 H% j  M1 H  L( E9 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 i/ _3 i, s& e: |4 U1 i3 V$ w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" O* D& x  u8 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% a) f5 o) z: E7 q. ]0 v$ L& F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' U7 ^" J+ O2 `/ A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, e0 W9 g' u3 n" N# z5 n; G8 x- G& e. |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, G" M- g: f$ l+ @& {. J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 K+ y3 \, n6 P% E: G9 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; d. {" C# U4 u$ N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. _& A  n! Q# ?3 ]7 S# w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 X2 q; S- D7 _0 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. o2 A% D. ~+ Y% Z& }7 r8 o, V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! F1 {( i$ h, z+ [' P, ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# P, j5 C  [% T  G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# B5 z5 e4 ?# C; j- k, E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) _( [3 N# _% m4 Q6 @0 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, g0 c+ S" R: H: B+ z4 x; @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 F( ^2 m3 j  U. w1 T$ r<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 M' u2 d. p9 i9 _" c( P3 {# Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 d# x  H* y; k+ L% h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 y: Z+ g' h" m! ]) M0 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& z1 q) T  b2 [" O0 U1 `- |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 x: T9 `' {" i9 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 n" I6 S; W7 p0 u7 d& g1 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 b" K0 d$ D$ ?% R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( j3 y- c2 I0 J我请你剖开它
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7 S8 [- a7 G( R" E% R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>