【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' c' A2 V, n2 P) P0 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% j5 n/ I4 L- B9 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 O3 R) g; D+ Y, H" m/ U" B! [& YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  X4 m* a) C1 `- {7 ?; j# ?Seeing the sky content with its love
2 h* Y7 B  H  oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) }* z5 F  i' _& ?4 u6 y- sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& j: J! |( ?+ @$ w' K+ OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 d* N3 j# w" l5 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* Z5 O* M( a8 D, S) b6 ~: xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. H+ k( `2 G" x9 LI want so much to see inside your heart
3 A. v: F" N, ?  KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) \  J2 a% E  g2 y( X. F1 L* I2 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 T( x5 @3 v$ G* Q1 A7 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 m' g# l- J8 |" S, x8 D9 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* z7 c( T7 n9 ~( K/ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 ^% T4 ~; V( t: |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  K+ B- x" Y! n% D! N. ~6 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 h- g, B5 s# b" M+ ?: f# o0 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 F8 b) R8 m% j3 u! d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 t% H4 m' C0 F! M+ R+ f% U, \5 r<P>你无需担心</P>
1 A; v- h  M0 k  t. h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- N2 |5 Y6 C" q. C% Z; }/ K* w8 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! `; `( R7 s2 _$ Q- p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* o# ^: f: O4 t( N$ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* z7 {/ s# B+ `$ r, F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 ^' d0 v  I4 ~1 w0 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 [8 s. A) {3 @0 ]$ n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ D8 _( z1 W) e1 T* X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( `! Z7 x8 ]3 V# @" D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  h; \3 F' @* G  m5 ~9 d/ q8 t- b7 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* i# Y% M- [& Z" y% \6 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- p; G6 D' X: G; t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 r- s7 b: X9 A. p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* z5 `  v. m% O0 S; M4 F' a4 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 l* e( w# a0 y+ M7 \& A$ u) P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" D: F+ I& Y0 K! K1 ~. J' N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 i2 W5 ~9 o1 t6 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( z( H  X( ]0 d, T6 f1 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>