【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 ^* M- N- t% g+ t& H1 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 q/ H" ~8 K1 M. _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' M- |- ?" t4 q) g9 [3 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 |) `& O) J0 r$ K+ ^. b! a% OSeeing the sky content with its love
2 h$ R4 Y4 i2 b# f4 w) g' P6 L5 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ R/ B/ |. R' AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* i  r$ X8 r  f4 x* m/ ~" E$ b( @, bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! D( w9 r1 N1 bI love you I love you with all my heart
: L. C/ p, R& h% e. P# P0 JNothing can compare to my love
! E" |! P" _7 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, t; Z5 j  P# g9 b2 R; P( W5 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ r5 \. j- g% a4 w( g6 |0 _I want so much to see inside your heart
) @, f+ U+ M% b3 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- R8 t1 ?# M. a# `7 |2 p( @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ w2 e2 a8 j/ H' v& Z6 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  k& ^+ D* c1 E9 F# [- F7 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
$ m2 W/ G/ ]( \+ C% g' AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& `6 O/ N$ k1 q# V+ v# mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 c, M2 o! S+ n9 v% u& i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: ~3 c4 `* e& V$ I- t$ U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% h, _* S. h6 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 T- q5 ]$ W+ X3 q# H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 \0 u$ z* l& g2 V! z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 T8 r' b1 B9 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( B" R0 G# T* G" r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 e3 ~! p8 r; d9 h1 {$ B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* }: S2 G+ ]9 |: s: c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- n5 b5 u0 r! r" G% V<P>你无需担心</P>
: e' K" l5 |6 m9 n( d; r% M" y/ `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 u/ c* a; g& d% g1 W& f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& n$ O7 P7 z1 l9 C$ K/ k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 n# M" F! e4 }. I8 b( [1 E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 W$ Q7 w( G. T! S" X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 ^9 `  T) i4 P4 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* [( F$ s" d' G, |4 l/ k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! Z1 E9 l. |6 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 f2 U. r, _" t8 b, o/ Z% D6 b0 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 Y0 z4 m- c9 a9 {; U% B, ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 E" u8 A& r' s" t8 ?7 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, ~1 E- I8 p' Z) V6 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ j+ c4 s, E: x9 z5 e' i# a6 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' g/ a- A2 P5 C; J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- h: |- C% g, H0 k! i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# O0 l$ e$ H) x8 r5 Z7 N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
: o9 m: |' Z$ W5 J
6 A& w4 Z( t2 k8 W, e& A8 u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>