【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) R# C, W+ L4 m) |4 H8 g: dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! [% X) A! X+ ^5 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% h" C, y( B3 Z& t2 L3 r4 D% uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" i# m3 T1 n. a2 n- sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, K9 h% b  S8 e" W  CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; M2 a& @  h$ C" @4 z" RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 R  v% g8 W. O6 a% gNothing can compare to my love
) r0 e% j& j3 t4 A# f. r5 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 _8 [; }; [6 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 u' q/ R  F$ H5 m. ^6 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. |5 U' @4 n- ?+ E5 q1 _" Y8 n6 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( C( J  i3 U1 [" I) B2 TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. }9 |) ]+ k$ A. A' {7 O: ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; d8 T3 p. P. S2 P* G( q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* |8 e7 B% {4 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 J& C: N# K: \; `' C5 b0 y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 Y( s# _$ o" X% T9 t; B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 ]# E8 L& ]- E  S3 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |& Y* Z- E& K: b5 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 v9 |$ e& U8 {* Y0 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 @2 N: X9 ?, L9 Y8 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 `" l, c7 W& E* f9 A5 w& Z! C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 X% _1 B* _3 q+ {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  h1 ~. {6 ]& }* J) W1 j- j+ o* `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( D9 e6 N7 T% A4 Y) U+ B, ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- u6 p& s/ m- S9 p1 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 M3 F/ f3 Q9 y7 }& |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 i, ?1 \8 Q% K: H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ E6 v" y+ c. }8 A7 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( Q( g8 S, P& }9 p5 z" ~6 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: U6 S3 Z8 K) D2 ]- g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 K$ i/ {) i& R5 R6 W+ ^. G6 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: l7 K* Q8 a: ]) g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) D+ Y" ~0 p( B4 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% v" ^( x$ l; q  Z0 O- `: ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 P3 N! o) }4 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  W3 p/ E$ R, p2 |  l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 I) e# P% t) H# c2 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 X/ Z2 z$ n* Z8 w* O) j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 w4 V/ N0 v( c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 q- O' o- I) n: f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# l( H3 \# C2 p7 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>