【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( X' N% V! w7 C5 x1 R( g+ }; S+ D$ u- @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  C+ Q* y6 w' {. V, x( KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 v+ i" R6 t6 s9 j& b' NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ R$ L+ n6 d' ]2 t6 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# \+ j' b0 ~3 jNothing can compare to my love
' F" ^' Y+ T% w! p& ]5 n5 c" W) ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' k) h: Z- M# p: Q, E% B! P3 ~% cI want so much to see inside your heart
; |: i5 ^7 z' TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( i% Z8 J6 u% [3 H- e& d' i0 P3 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! z/ [0 s) F4 P" j# {/ b1 HWith such a tongue as yours,
5 L  z. n8 C' F1 F4 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* m; d) V1 C) q  Z" F3 _# y& QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ Y) x! u8 N7 N' M. g& G, x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. b( P2 v7 x0 }! e; n4 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. A+ C8 n9 T! Y/ F8 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 m0 |0 f; c$ ^/ @( g6 F) v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' {4 z! m0 H  d4 U1 {) d" w. v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 B4 O  W% F1 i1 @$ s8 Q1 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 r4 ?& M* V3 h" T! z  t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ^4 u& b" O0 S1 d' F5 Q8 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' g8 ~% ]7 C# {) r3 i: l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, i7 Z' Y' ~5 ~8 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% p  h3 \8 c% V; v# }: i" F- C1 E( D9 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& `% ?5 t6 I5 X$ V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) x0 P0 k& P6 K8 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% c9 n$ N! W' y' {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' R( [3 A5 i6 O0 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 [. @/ \" m; m* v# z7 W9 q0 [' |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; V$ S& @! N3 m! j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( F! N0 v, Y6 H- j% v* A9 r& `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 P2 P& ]$ n5 W! O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  V6 v& J% Q+ x, T; l* o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# u/ b4 [6 o3 C, M/ A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( U6 {1 E" I* Z! \' @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ l* o' _2 Q$ N+ }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" ^* W+ A+ S& i1 e% v5 n$ `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 v$ ]- N1 _7 l. R; V# u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ?( I, S' `! V/ z$ O: p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: B% z" c. }; u5 f/ _" G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 h7 H( ?' i/ V" {  t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 E1 F) e3 |) y7 ~9 ~/ o& y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  ~* [3 P& L% H7 u: D1 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>