【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

! b( v5 a! A' h4 N" F( D3 w! e<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

$ }2 g) u7 ~) [8 H4 \
歌词我附在后面。
% G! R, Y8 ~. u$ f5 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. C8 J" c: C, s+ g2 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 y+ [( X) ?; U5 m- V) FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 a( L$ x. z, ~5 g& CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- A0 @6 o: I- _1 i( m3 B9 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 C* B+ ]; @3 l% w; q) s* T! qI really want to know just how much you love me
9 i+ `- p7 E/ r" pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: l/ j$ @3 u6 ^; HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" f1 W9 t6 E% F3 Y5 U9 m- s; }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ j9 w% A/ f$ bI regret not dying
% D" d3 M( M2 H4 I% FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 u8 X$ O. Q9 x8 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. j  N6 f1 f) v% X% ~# ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Y. P4 P* J! O# A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 h. e. o5 Q2 W3 w* g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ {% ?9 }' E' I; m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, e7 a) I& p0 k5 W+ M6 d; ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 S/ `$ L4 G1 w9 A' |% ?- j& m: N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 U( N; h$ K; @2 d' V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) g% R$ Q5 ?3 s6 N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% N, S! g0 P( w5 J. ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 _5 q* s/ g2 N" z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' p: a: s5 Q5 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; m, n3 u$ }$ v' y& |& Q' x6 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& a' F' I3 D6 m, I" D, }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N2 p# h) j, q5 y0 c) a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 U8 g2 z3 N1 P, y0 O5 \, O0 S' j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' |. J. _& c% h& N" n# L4 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  V# g: i/ R3 u+ m* `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Z3 ?. b' {/ \& y1 M# H% o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% ?! Y: d: ~" _: \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- |3 q* Z4 J/ n! T; `! l6 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. U# g# X5 k8 I4 \" k7 F1 J% K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. _$ H" n: r7 i: V( \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; f# C! y, k  h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, d; g/ e) H( }+ Y! P. z- l1 E5 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

" p6 u2 ]- k: b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
1 I  ?" L7 g4 J% ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>