【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 w+ W; q, {' M) z) k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ P3 A8 J1 j2 p+ Q( hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 f+ R' H1 K  W" YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 J3 Q2 \" ~& e6 r- R0 l; _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ~4 l# ?: l+ F# f& y! TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; M0 `8 W6 W' vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; q& g3 A9 C3 F6 B9 ZEvery other word you utter is love
. f8 H- e$ `1 U, r7 P5 xI really want to know just how much you love me
% ~  Y; p; b( q3 N' e/ {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 L( I" \/ S) T7 N0 S; W8 MI want so much to see inside your heart
* U; t& J: J- u0 [6 e1 e6 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ @2 ~( \# p' x% I9 v& ?* M* x' PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 R& e, n" D# q" H' ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 q/ O- B' V9 W) \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 O  _+ o* i$ ~: H" q& R. V# VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& y# `: H% U6 }' v) N2 i& i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 y" P: _/ N' K9 m$ V- B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 q% ^* j. m, a" J( E5 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- e1 v( Z- u3 C% V3 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& R$ r: C- d7 G$ u8 ~- W) {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 k2 }, M, ?, u" @8 N: Y0 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 ~& u4 L) p+ Q/ P7 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& i5 Z8 m- G" x7 [4 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ O7 X# n7 s! C9 p! @  Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ j2 ]: C$ ]5 g9 o% b' c* A- o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' N5 M8 u$ k4 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* Y# Q% i+ j9 x; @, v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ X5 s2 |5 {0 @6 u9 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 J7 Y" p) W+ O; W; x. \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- w3 D. t7 k/ @; t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% x4 i. y' Z. R! [) i( @# S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 u1 D/ ~( C3 F4 M' r( {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& o' M! N# m2 ?! c) P) N- N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# R  F, r* `: v* d" c& y/ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' P1 M( @# T+ C6 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* _3 ?) H* t' ?' A0 k  j+ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# L) N$ X1 J. P$ |8 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 o8 o) _: ^  T5 v+ ]0 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- _0 |! r9 x# l% @' H4 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 H6 ^" \* @. M/ D7 @6 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; Z: u) D9 ^/ X; ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' p. U4 p. s$ P; a1 f+ V8 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ q# i3 D2 _3 w; _# _/ q3 L$ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>