【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 ?- f* |8 l! P9 ~$ ?( t6 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- r1 S: o1 s# ~' |+ pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 H, O$ Z: n; H8 D- _6 P) TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: R* Q) ~1 t. J) W9 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ~* t9 ^0 S- y+ rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 \. V: F" {& h7 CSeeing the sky content with its love
2 G9 p+ ^( G' M5 h1 L$ l; iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* c0 ^7 m5 a/ ^6 d; w2 R8 z! EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 C/ Q- e  C! r7 j- h8 k+ x; p8 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' d# J4 E) _& e3 ]! vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, m( q5 _& i: y6 C7 V" QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; |5 O- ^9 F% n4 f, W1 S9 n6 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. g4 F$ X, M; @( d' NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: g3 }2 W# K2 |/ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( o: I, x) t0 I4 V: \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ?  a8 B. b/ [* p) t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 S- F  l) ?& V; J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% n. ]# g# S. A+ y( d0 g+ t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- z& F  s2 _; v6 {/ y8 d6 V, O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* f6 ^( [4 \: U3 l9 J$ H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. a& l  H. c1 q% e' g  b7 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 {2 h0 f+ {5 j( A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& z$ N$ e2 K) V( x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: W6 k: t0 U8 ?' C$ c3 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, t, l  z$ q5 p3 q6 |8 y# c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- q4 o. @; n8 z1 y1 W/ T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  S+ r+ O4 d4 |4 v! G' _! l! Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 O. r/ s  l5 c* ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: v+ i& N' @% P) R# z; c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% L6 I) t9 x% A4 d% c; d9 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- r: v% D) i4 b: ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 _$ B2 k' H( _; X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ d7 M& x3 s" p; ]4 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 q) A. }1 @; X+ I<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ L. ]0 N8 O0 |+ ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. G, G" m& ~0 B' [! E% g1 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 C; y' ?8 Q" r) c2 Q; p! m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 W* B; k- B/ h% [- f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 W) Y" N1 B, }) t3 Z! ^0 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>