【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 t. G/ `6 i/ _4 Y7 L6 _歌词我附在后面。
) L8 r' q) d! nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 K* Q8 U+ h0 k/ {9 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# ]- w+ A$ P; d& nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 F) B9 O8 s, {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ E7 o' o/ A- D) kThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 X9 l* I% P" g" @2 `* P1 ?With the moon kissing it every night
8 |- {9 M( f! h3 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 P+ t- l5 T! K4 @: `You needn’t fear anything
/ I% ?* i, y, c! c* b! OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 j9 }: n( d9 G7 s/ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ M/ _# X4 H- J7 u( a% |5 K7 ~+ G  kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# \' z! x4 ~+ {: {* _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. }. w5 r0 A+ Z6 n. ~7 q! ~- ZI regret not dying
( V5 @- z& m$ M/ L8 ]  OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' ]8 ]( t5 @1 k5 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
8 A, _- x# C  q. b% d; a2 U: BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) Z! q$ J+ f3 s3 v% y/ l* Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' E# n! j$ u0 S- c5 H& e  J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 h. X- ?6 K+ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# ^) |/ x7 A$ j% Q0 m7 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% Z. W1 {: A) J- `; a3 a3 n' H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. K8 J, ?0 o! @6 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ U! F. S- d: F7 s9 `2 Y- M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 w* x7 K4 a$ Q5 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ @& _: U, K) [' m% q<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Y1 q7 b& R" r7 d- ^% j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 |. H' n9 d4 c! Y( @) k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 h0 w% E6 E4 O& p% E( F$ F% m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, x- L) T( m7 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& S$ Q; x: `$ y. B- V) l/ B- h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# v. l  \' Q7 p" q/ {& _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' ]; L9 V# k* n- p2 J! n$ X  e4 T( G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, R) r/ J" H2 v/ S, J8 [$ R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" |6 r( R, P4 h$ t/ X5 K' |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 |5 d+ l, I& g/ }3 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* w8 {  L8 l$ u# u* e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ r* S" V: w$ b0 q# B+ x$ b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# ~  I6 m$ b& r3 T7 p9 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ s& Z0 s4 B! ^* z& j7 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 K& X8 N- p- P7 g- ~: L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 l+ U) p; v& u" u2 m* i* i4 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" b" q/ s9 x9 v& B! y% g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ o: P3 D( F2 J: W, e. Z8 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 k! z6 w  l5 g" {* r8 ]) @5 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 [! |: K  M% `8 f1 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" T6 h, m" a" g$ O8 k% d$ o( ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ `, ~; w) ?  D  g0 p2 |# W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 c9 J4 |( X& Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>