【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ q0 \7 i! E; d5 E* w# Z; |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  N6 R2 u$ J+ C$ i: p! j+ [1 v. l" hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ H! p8 B. Z/ A5 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- h( S& r% U. l0 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 J5 Q: K' i3 vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ V6 U5 R$ _5 T, S( D- D/ I7 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. @8 Z0 {. ^5 }5 p/ mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  y: M* R' H; I, {) A2 L: VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) [) w/ l# `6 ~) p( VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ u$ G. u/ g0 \: O; }I regret not dying
% f% B) Z7 t0 w# C+ I% [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 w- L4 o* n1 w% {3 u% D! ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* ?9 ?8 ~( s8 C, t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ Z( M3 t6 e5 J0 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 M& X( T8 |9 v  r$ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ]4 R# e) ]2 e" W$ e! W) J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 {) \$ K% q3 o( u, O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* i) M9 Q; n0 p# P- ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ F( D; V& w+ d5 [, }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* N% f! x  U/ [9 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* h7 {+ I3 _- \  b  e0 t7 J! L- M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 E9 Q% F/ x/ Y; A# t8 e8 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 Z+ G; g" O2 |, ^<P>你无需担心</P>
6 F6 n6 n- ~) g, c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' i) z% ?0 l8 E  ]  _5 ^/ A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, S& q* @- ~( i8 Z# l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- C- K$ p0 i8 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% K5 `/ V4 i/ u& x6 k" n+ U* J+ h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 I) V! G$ B" n' x9 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; B  i& X7 `8 G. g3 Y3 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 |, V* e7 n/ g0 z9 L& v2 G1 q' W& H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P4 ?' h- E5 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 x* W" Q! c+ K0 D1 r$ y* O: q, ?  [/ r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, f, j7 H8 I: N8 F: u1 O7 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; \  E* Y4 o2 T0 g+ v6 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, k* ~5 N3 y/ D; g3 `$ N" A5 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, a& ~% F1 E- b6 r% y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' |9 m# x$ }" y2 ]9 I; _; Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 K( e2 o3 f0 J6 @$ `3 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 z5 h. \5 o/ m0 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 Z) u* i2 x0 v/ y$ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" O" u5 K4 t* t7 I; R5 c+ _# {: G4 l6 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, H4 q" S* ^6 p3 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' H% C) s% Q7 t0 W' H  o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>