【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ o( g1 @0 m  E. U' mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; R5 J& v4 c7 b, y: O7 s$ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# G, k5 s/ `! h1 H2 Y6 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( H- s- H: B" C' `3 fSeeing the sky content with its love
2 J5 ^* @# Q, Y0 w& E) _% A- IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 v/ z& L" X5 ^! C% K* MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 Z. i0 M  Y; K9 b3 [# ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, G0 [" P  K1 m* dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  v# f! W; R& m+ t0 `2 i% _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) y8 N* W' v9 ]' m; I" mI’m still filled with fear
' P- N- w/ x0 x- R8 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 Q7 [( q8 J) o+ L; x' LI regret not dying
% z5 Z$ m; T5 f7 P8 Z  qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 M& u$ x  [- D) p- gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: Z- c# P* i* i) R" [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 Q. g# ~4 `( f+ K* K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  f0 i* M, t+ ^$ `3 E0 V3 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# t! R& d& W. W: L  ]9 b4 b+ Y4 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ F* b6 ^( w; X2 \+ _+ R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( O/ B( V% X% d: q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( J" ?' Z* K( o5 _& P0 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) E5 j# U+ P; H8 e" b! B; ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 [3 R1 |; W- |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 k& t" l4 W. ?: X- u: C# ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' _- @7 h3 E% h4 {; S1 Z/ c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) u8 q- d, O# x; {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. o0 o  R# i/ ?' \5 Q& k% S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 M/ c+ N! V4 r! v& A8 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ R. H9 ~  _% q% f4 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 p6 M: D, E  b' }4 @; G8 a+ ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 {/ P% _7 B: j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 Y4 o* ?, u5 g: T  m  [7 ^+ c, E* G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) m' |; d0 g4 w" V: E( u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) s1 _+ h" D  G* o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( U) M8 B8 L8 \( q# U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 A: ~& Y! t4 z# j! O' I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( l& c6 |) k+ V: i" o2 ^5 k9 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: J- ^" |# G, \( Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 N& x3 |4 @1 [/ f, A. M& n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% W3 ?& a2 l" M7 F. O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 I; @& w7 M' n0 N. d/ ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 Q. @* K7 i2 U! d3 W. S7 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 c1 l+ W1 @' ~$ a& A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 K$ d9 Y- T* V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>