【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 t0 w0 L' E: b5 K; k  kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ I9 {7 ^: p3 T6 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 a. t- I+ N3 N7 s( ]; m: hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 E- g# y. n* d  c0 F& b' WNothing can compare to my love
" Q' H9 P( R( [1 d, ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- O# s1 g2 I9 }  TI’m still filled with fear
' c) V6 E9 M9 F' eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: t4 Q% Y# U" }1 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 Q: k3 u3 D# CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( W2 |) m* p( b7 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% c% T# o5 m7 M. i0 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: b6 K! m. I5 B1 G; y3 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, k0 q% S6 J# O/ J% f# k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 K( `2 ?$ d) S, b# i5 X. X) y. g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 ?" y- R" f! u, K+ Y' W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! w% A; g. ^. F3 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ ^6 K- g; {6 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) @3 x9 D9 [- P. N% C# e) N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 {) Z5 a: ?' g8 e' o" t<P>你无需担心</P>
0 h5 s# C# E* Z6 {) p% j8 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 x$ @1 t$ ?2 ~) U. j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ?2 ^% U2 H  m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) X& |) ^/ E* a4 H( _0 k, F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 q& ?# x# g; P! @9 e5 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Q; K" o5 q' g1 a: H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* B7 U( h3 x, K" v# M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 t! H. }& w. h4 x& J+ ]* a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) v3 b7 W/ w: d+ y% C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# K7 f- m6 s" m8 B. b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 j% _# T0 s: V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) a5 ^- H: V( p3 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( k  y; k  m1 P) w: m. G- f& \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 j" x5 n6 P& J7 d- S8 w4 ?" Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 p/ ~+ m/ ?: m+ f* h. J/ n9 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 j. Y' A6 x: B7 A  v8 A: K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- U6 S8 N8 l3 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 V5 p; j1 \0 [0 p' T: n/ Y我请你剖开它

$ C- i" E  J2 ^: n2 S0 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>