【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" [  X6 S# o& ?& m* S% PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, q* ^1 t- Q: ^2 h. HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 e! L' t" t! W' xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 }9 L& G9 ]! Z; s: n! D' y0 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
# O& t' e3 e) k6 Q) TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 Q% i7 R# z. I' z, |/ M; pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 t! d/ O. a$ |* ~# i! H  @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 C' F5 n$ }2 |( a% s9 EI want so much to see inside your heart
; q7 S7 _5 S6 w( K% I  [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) @. C/ M# g' i5 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N: x& @; m4 cWith such a tongue as yours,
) X4 m7 A) s) n2 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# O5 x1 _0 W% D  [% M. L' K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ^& C( ~" V- o7 }; n2 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* }5 X# O% B& ^% Z, ^0 G. a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 a# I5 u; a0 P% q7 c( o# i' W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ k7 N4 v- ~; d! x4 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- @  F' h  D4 D  h3 A% B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. p" L( c) w1 a3 t# n4 J5 m( ^3 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 f: I: H7 q. i) ?) [; i7 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 t8 W' b9 B" q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" |# m/ C) t( R4 O9 w, M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  u% k/ g; ]& d% \8 P. Y4 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Y- P) a9 w( c1 L% A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 t8 I+ ~- o  J  c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# n0 @- E" o- C) [  P% E: H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# h0 \  Q( G9 C) `) Z1 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) Y7 P7 \1 o7 x2 W8 K9 H- l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 `9 X/ i5 e. z+ Q& Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 I1 T* l# v% [4 x3 W+ P+ [) F; A! Z- O我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>