【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& ~. c7 @4 s! s7 A  k' s/ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 v: R' I$ H! T$ fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, |# c( G+ t' ^' I4 r! s: T* M( Z7 y3 m- gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 I) {8 c. y; I8 ~: g( @0 }( _3 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& C. l$ c" t  b+ }You needn’t fear anything
  {6 e# G5 n5 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 C1 _2 O" N# r: _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" g/ [# z- u/ o& I2 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ^, q) @8 r+ _# i, x# w+ j0 DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 L( R' t. P* f! q* c4 T! R5 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- y5 e5 }: w& HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! H, \5 R# M. c8 X& b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 M7 Z$ a8 s6 k6 y/ J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& O" o4 B* E# w0 x- g: r3 v: }1 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 |" ^, E9 J8 ^. l6 E% C6 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 }0 F+ A# ^' V" @$ Y% K( G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* {+ a  j* Y# J  {9 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" x7 K# o; [5 j$ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 h4 M  C/ v6 E4 o5 t* _; m0 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- B1 L7 E) a# _<P>你无需担心</P>
0 |. \! f  F$ x0 N" ]. G1 I' {( T+ P7 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; _" k' z! k: A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. y9 _; ~3 S; C. \/ i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: B5 \* }, a/ D: O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" B, `& r/ ?6 U0 ]0 I6 j, Z( J, h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 U- @$ h% ^& n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 @8 e) W8 L" j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  n* \# a5 c+ d5 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! C% g  K2 |5 R# Z7 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; e- O! F- a3 ^# \4 `9 x8 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, O1 V# a+ P. w. j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! Y7 W% J8 i8 v5 {7 W8 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, O6 e5 n2 f7 k) t$ o% c4 v; N+ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 u2 B' C) H% C6 z# B7 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 M$ y* ?" v1 j# d( e' \7 C7 |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ g/ a9 p, P" R8 L4 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( Y; V8 X) Z7 p  s  D$ |) u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>