【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 l3 Z! R' D8 R% e: b4 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. w0 E6 F( f1 u/ j7 ~1 O0 }, A6 jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- ]6 T& M  w  k) q7 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) i: B6 O8 G% o- t. a1 XEvery other word you utter is love
. ^! Y, x% @* `0 w6 r* ?) PI really want to know just how much you love me
3 ?5 Z* t5 \) Z" m6 K1 |/ RI love you I love you with all my heart
. g0 k: p9 H9 u! YNothing can compare to my love
1 T9 r% r( p5 j! gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ R; N# G8 ]0 d9 h" q3 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- I$ X$ [3 P. _- \; o3 HI’m still filled with fear
, z$ D% M, Q! K+ @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ]6 d( _" T6 @$ _9 N7 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 G( C; @) a& l" k9 w  eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* ]  A* g- ~8 {) `. V& h; N. \  }3 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 K( o) E/ K9 j' z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 e/ [5 ]' `$ T; d* z- t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 R8 n' g) T. x. h4 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! C7 N5 `0 H' h; b9 J  X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. V4 d) n2 ]6 A; u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. t7 \0 S4 v) a" J8 X3 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 m, M( @! d9 S% I8 s) W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 J9 R. U) q3 y) W  s7 j; j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 \- ]6 P5 o' o( i; Z7 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" g# _& {) Q; B" C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, {6 B6 W: Z# h2 j9 i8 k! P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 v- h* ?6 T; G, J5 }. j' n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% {$ N) X: m4 Y( h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ b) F1 z. x" w" N/ E$ q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' d6 O& u, r8 l$ `' ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! l5 D' ~% B6 \( S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  h3 c# ~9 g5 n' U1 ?6 ~' @: B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ b. X4 g5 Z4 h: I5 B; p$ ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ f1 H& r, j, m6 X' T6 u7 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) O) A+ e4 S7 c5 r) y& B3 {0 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ~& H( |, L* z+ ?9 z$ N( J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 t# |* V( z6 O# T$ ?. [+ g  |/ [3 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( g" B3 J. J. Z: W0 m  X. X% X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- J+ b" a. c; g" s8 M. g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 g7 c( ?/ m0 W* `$ L$ I. `; L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 c/ m! D7 E5 V# I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% O# b$ D1 X& b, H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  f- h5 A% }& B9 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ t$ i' }$ I# w/ B' K: j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>