【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 l9 d: A0 y/ I4 x' x* E/ Z* H; oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 H4 V6 ?$ v: ]) mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ e# q  N9 M- J6 h$ v5 W& FThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 y! x8 A, }2 l4 e( W4 S3 G8 vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ f- H2 m1 D, T5 u$ }8 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 b' S6 G9 `4 {+ B  d( r/ X. IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ U* |  X5 }0 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 K  S8 P2 G3 R" B1 R7 P, \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 X( F! D  U8 P2 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 _+ p) D+ P$ a& L3 [  w) Q  YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: @4 y! [5 Z  ]' G% [  Y+ M2 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 v& v! z4 r% O( O/ b+ `3 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- r8 o! p( m+ }0 w  H4 w/ @; n  T& j7 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* g# {2 [; ~) A2 b+ o) c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* W& U" m6 h) B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 y0 Q+ g$ [- v$ g/ A2 W4 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" N! B. Y7 L- \+ _3 Y$ b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# G; C' a. F4 U- [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 f  t% S4 m' k9 g" V0 K$ G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 m% H3 ~- c, e4 G  N* s2 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 l1 E. o! S* t' E# j- E, G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& c+ F# _/ f+ T' B3 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 u/ v/ K1 v; x4 K6 a7 g5 V+ H1 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ N( c0 J2 G& k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- h$ y$ C1 }* R9 ~8 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 b) {  o3 Q) Q6 w9 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, o( `8 k7 N1 Z4 m9 j2 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, D  @+ m( a) T  y2 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  K7 n' _1 Y, a6 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( v. Y; h/ i, p' N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; z& a+ f# W7 Z: _0 J) C! j: q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& a( H* L( n" k1 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* R1 ]5 ^* O# T0 v- P我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- R; U+ s! s0 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>