【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 }, H, f8 n9 J# V5 K2 j歌词我附在后面。
- J, z! F$ a* |The moonlight is shining brightly,
& q! G5 O4 U7 i0 |! LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* i$ I- s$ J: U) u# n- iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 m' j- r" d# w6 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" c2 d6 n+ r# jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 N" O# x+ `0 ~, M! c* YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( }, m6 |$ E$ s" j5 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
9 r- T0 P1 M( c! E/ YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 {1 r3 `5 C% a+ WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ z& W$ F& \8 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! J. Q  i+ {; u8 a. w3 rI want so much to see inside your heart
. w8 R- z: s% ~( P$ DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 H1 S* `, E' N0 F! g5 RI regret not dying
+ p- {8 V3 Q  u6 L! K  B, R7 TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 o3 r* u$ X0 o% _4 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' `& n& T+ v9 }- }/ X3 ?8 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: E! i7 M* f. x8 N. ^2 ?8 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ r/ O. [) C( Z& B- L1 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& g$ U! X  R: k: _+ R4 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! Q' o) _: O- o$ i) \( b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 c# r1 t: z1 P9 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 U- @& e" o3 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# h! X  L! O: W/ h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) \, H% Q' W4 c% R3 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 m& r2 x  @. x; Q$ v  `& `0 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ~4 j& A% V( |/ `<P>你无需担心</P>
, B6 C3 ?' j; O3 X: e0 u  P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 a8 x" n) Z$ M. f$ E' y6 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% I2 j0 d0 L1 g% i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, `; |# N: L5 t1 m8 I6 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 I7 X- n( ?  p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) [2 e+ J4 H( p4 x7 B+ t0 G+ }2 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 }& @$ k7 w( D! Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 n  {: ]. |5 L" n$ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( J/ c5 u/ g0 t" [9 u+ z2 ^0 j; P$ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 c9 S0 q( @; g. P- x' c' G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( F" F. f" ?* w0 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 |, C, C1 R+ I8 g) c/ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  @7 e2 y7 z3 {& ^" X) `6 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, K4 F1 u. I8 @7 _2 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% x4 Z8 ]' o% c8 S% `& K& q2 f6 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& x, [- O. d7 ?1 Q  ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" |% o, b( K% s) u5 D0 q  F: v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, |4 `* `. Y4 |' }( I. l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# z6 p# j( H8 Y$ h- n' c- f我请你剖开它

( s- U  g. j1 k0 d/ |' @/ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  X* P2 S0 D2 W- P) }* Q1 r3 [+ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>