【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: N7 G, s. d- a. q6 c0 m歌词我附在后面。
6 |: k3 o! C( E  W$ l. M' ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
  @$ C. D3 f# `" ^% hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: r2 R# c. v0 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
" N$ v* B3 b" K) X. Q  qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; q! k( C4 x/ H* V" BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 {# |  F' @, [' T; gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  `- U% b0 Z3 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! F2 p+ _# r1 ]+ c; YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- u: z1 ?6 t6 S. H9 D( l1 YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! V! i  c+ O/ p* \1 PI regret not dying
- w# V4 y3 y5 f9 H! zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ E! g' `) t) D" J- ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 p3 H9 g/ F0 I& d/ p. V+ H% v- `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& I7 x' F' l8 n/ k, Q1 A6 y1 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- n( I  E( ~! D. P! B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ m/ B/ R0 B/ {- T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& X8 r0 N; d5 e# x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ Q- Y0 p: {6 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! H  \8 h6 }5 P# \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 n: Y  Y, s& A  A/ K" i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 J2 p6 T6 B* `9 e' t+ b0 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 O$ c/ \# o8 I! U; J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" h; h: d, @) j. Q8 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( o1 e" ]2 @% L) H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( n: [2 \. Y! U: F$ W  r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. c4 d6 N( e9 z8 k6 R2 @0 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: b! W- \0 E3 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( U$ t% @" s' u. ^2 T  u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 d6 N& Y1 ?( B! Z; C! u7 I* D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; D% F3 ]: T5 Y' Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 v  U) I: Q; r6 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" Z; r1 u  M) P$ [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  P+ f+ f2 e, [' G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% I/ Y8 T" K3 L' |- n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# y- X) _6 i* k6 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) t' G- n. h! Q0 C* l' k$ j  n" D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, h3 z1 @1 l9 \$ Z8 u  X! f" _$ _" f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ P  |1 h8 [1 l3 s! m, z$ d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& Q& L+ @4 B9 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 \. g& x9 r; E7 W- n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>