【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* {1 w+ y& C$ h" s! p歌词我附在后面。
. y9 T4 N& c5 y9 x! fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ X' c6 b4 t' U( GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ s/ o0 ^' ^* C0 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 G  q/ Y" y, F- Q$ d6 O2 I( A7 z" mThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 s  F1 K) O  S; r* ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: V& x% b' N+ N" @4 a) {) `( {* QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: L+ A% V/ D8 Q  ?& T+ }  yEvery other word you utter is love
2 |$ T# H. w! q7 j! n3 UI really want to know just how much you love me
8 a+ A* ]3 N3 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 A/ M# J- Y2 V. @# z: g8 u, u1 f, x3 {1 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 [3 X4 E8 F% I& vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. D; Q, a- D# q6 E3 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) Q: c0 M* F4 j4 K4 W; m; u8 iI regret not dying
5 M& `8 w0 j9 `+ hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 P( i6 k& ~5 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ X( N9 u: z$ t. a& S8 F' T8 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 i" b* a8 _# @, D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% }' I1 I6 k6 D; G* X7 G0 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. f  j- I/ K2 y2 a% B; I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, I0 r  n0 o2 ?! {& w  y; [+ m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% C: @8 v/ y. L; z5 v% |/ l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# u% F2 m, B6 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- N4 J! U1 k2 P& G+ p- N& s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 P0 S6 l7 ~$ m4 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 U0 U% d! o6 b% W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ k9 T* X* T. _1 i$ m6 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ y6 M9 _" x/ r% L8 R) Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ]. H( S5 N6 e; ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' w9 d* a+ C; z# Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" @/ E3 o. T8 g' u; \$ n* h! r2 l7 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, }1 T- ^9 `  S3 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( n  u9 S. O- q# E  ?8 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, {; p$ m* u! b, ~5 b  _: o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 W9 f1 M2 A4 Y, B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. d1 |, }3 I; M5 K2 E2 @* r: ^: |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ c/ ]6 W- r9 Q9 m, Q, k8 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 |1 k4 X+ a& V9 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 l. F6 F- C7 p& c' l4 I8 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& f0 l% S6 N3 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 o/ u6 \" X0 E6 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
5 R& C+ [5 G" m* x! a! P# y
3 s$ A; m, a' X# D. ?我请你剖开它

3 |* h( k9 u2 S7 I$ P& k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>