【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; r5 X* a' }6 K6 y歌词我附在后面。
6 Q; k$ T- b1 a5 H% O+ G2 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- l8 n7 O( k/ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ [, t) N& V# [5 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 s6 v" s( F, g% _5 x. m! uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) d4 G+ U- s  W( P* N! q% CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& y4 G! b1 B3 XYou needn’t fear anything
) N4 d% {! U/ r4 n' i/ \2 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 M5 a7 e" t% V2 c' C, GI love you I love you with all my heart
; E( `/ g& D) \% ^( n- eNothing can compare to my love
/ t# y1 O) J/ FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  M, M. ^: n$ a: f4 R4 PI want so much to see inside your heart
6 D: f: ?1 R9 I/ b) b# p6 ~- n: hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 p" M) `( g9 Y. IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" J( g8 B, l0 k$ H/ C1 _; UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  X5 _4 u$ ^2 n: F" J* @$ A! B& YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* A$ q* e2 c# B' M8 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- W. P3 b5 k# g, \* p9 Q3 f3 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& L8 q  g7 V# Z+ L$ H' k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: P) a5 ~- C: B% h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  b/ W$ F, K2 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" B& I3 |8 ]* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ q- J  x/ @/ O7 Y! o# K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ t& i  k: `" T9 a$ C, I: W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- H5 V; @; t2 t6 W% ^4 q3 L- T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ?: i9 y: I1 i8 W: J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  f8 u5 _' n0 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ c( w3 x, d" o! g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! A5 n; @0 |$ [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  h# Y6 U$ x( E8 V; m" ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 C; O( \) E9 B4 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% T1 s0 ^7 I6 t7 K0 H- ~5 C9 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' E, l4 P+ \/ l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& P# L+ d2 U/ _. v- V4 P) @5 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 _6 u; |* ~+ _" ?, Q, X, B. W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 N7 v9 i- f3 U' M8 A% a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& F  z4 Q7 I6 U, P# \+ E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 L7 ?* H- A( @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 q3 p- t# I2 R# S% L% f- ?1 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- i5 K) `* \( H) \; Z6 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ _/ ?  i1 D) N6 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 E) Y& L/ {' \5 S, y! c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- h/ {; G: F! z3 |, \9 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 @. b3 a& F" I% S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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5 [& n# M! Z# I3 X  [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>