【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 w2 J* l( j9 b& V2 q: V) k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, r0 l6 ?1 N8 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" R4 @$ x" q& U8 C7 K9 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" C. [' I6 i7 \2 k! ~6 ?. |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 A. D& }2 T/ c. {/ ^' eThe sky is happy down to its soul
: J2 I' V5 r) [$ D2 p9 }9 cWith the moon kissing it every night
! J# W; ^$ `1 O& z- `Seeing the sky content with its love
/ y1 _# M. c$ K, q, t2 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' d  H; T( l, QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ O, F7 e3 h6 y0 X% Y0 VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 `9 p1 _$ U/ tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ]( G8 k. x5 BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  D' A8 p+ i" i0 U+ D/ rI regret not dying
$ E7 ?( z" \) z8 |$ O, L5 U+ u/ EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% t7 M: O7 p  D# J' rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" h7 s8 S  h7 q- C1 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 Y2 j+ x4 _$ `7 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 I$ T, ]' _7 K+ }' \6 w) }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ `$ L  R7 ~( p4 y' }+ S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 }) I( u: x$ O. W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ~3 H& K! c' p3 L, U& J- l<P>你无需担心</P>
+ k0 W4 ?  b+ e+ O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 }: D6 j& A& E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 W/ x9 Q* B; N: Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 f7 |: R* W4 L. E5 m, w/ y$ i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! D$ w0 _3 Y( X. N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 j/ W; c* b2 T$ o5 h8 Z; {. ?! a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 R) {: A; m% g' l' b" s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 l6 q* V8 u& T' V0 Z3 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. [; o* X- z2 F0 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ }0 {0 m0 p$ }3 `' n* D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 ]5 O' K0 g: u( C2 {9 D+ v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ F6 \6 n5 b+ A$ ?% C. P6 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 M0 I8 f1 k2 v! T2 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 b/ Q; z) L6 G* }  l( X4 @7 |  O2 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" N0 K: |1 n' [! M2 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) l) Z( D0 X/ y+ @5 E3 f& d$ R+ L# A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  a1 f  M+ w6 u2 w4 T( D& F# a3 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% b" U# g: H1 S# p+ J; B0 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. w4 i4 B& Z9 s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& P- }# X7 `0 q, N( B) t0 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>