【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 U  G( j6 ~' t. x5 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ G0 D! U( E/ |: n5 R6 SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; |# Y) R( X6 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- g! R* D7 L% x) kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) G6 `* P5 A; x- |9 t* E) SI want so much to see inside your heart
) U% q6 I. g/ x  J2 F- A8 W9 p% K) ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ?4 K3 u' a" C/ q: `1 j5 dI regret not dying
! @  O  Z. Q2 a4 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* Z6 n6 ?/ [5 e' L( hWith such a tongue as yours,
' v8 G; u' G, n/ s6 o* }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& B8 {1 P5 H& v& W0 R$ A$ e. K7 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 a1 }5 l$ m5 O0 a+ U8 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' ]. e9 O$ ?" @) n$ b6 H6 V2 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 T6 Y/ Z+ X/ B9 E9 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 n9 [- F+ T$ [. q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% W9 S8 n) ]. C' O' B( ]& M+ q: {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# h0 E3 k: ~" y1 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ~, n5 K' R3 n, X) ~* J' U5 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& A; q7 N8 t* Q( E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# _# L# e/ X' e5 w5 f0 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- @5 z. w5 J3 D, Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ y8 b, f3 c( d3 q- K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. a$ V9 W/ D# z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 c* M/ d: i/ M; X7 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 m" B: b4 p6 M3 P) l2 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ y' {* j; u7 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 k3 Y; u) |4 \$ C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' v  ]8 G) e2 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. J" Y7 p$ j( L. o" |' M# M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( O7 N+ {& O9 ^1 [# N7 Z3 R! `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 c; v# M0 w1 q- A. n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) l2 c' G5 g6 d6 `5 W1 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: e( i" n5 B2 W2 T6 u5 E: k+ W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 t1 o7 z+ Q7 j5 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% k! J; u. @, i3 n' i7 N( M) N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>