【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, f& L& e) q  \6 V# ?* ?+ j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 h; o# b; }( z  C- [- kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 P& O0 t/ `- e0 @- eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ D% P! K5 N0 I1 J  [The sky is happy down to its soul
+ x% D( l3 B6 c4 a  ?2 S, V6 j" RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" ]2 Q/ `2 _" y: b8 B) m8 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  P' \6 N6 q% FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 c7 Z- [/ i8 N+ S& y9 i7 i9 ^, ?Every other word you utter is love
9 Y! A( G: \6 j. wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ A$ O# y, t  J) M8 _: N# u! WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 S# ]2 r8 o6 D/ `* ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 }- v+ _7 |, A3 m9 @4 U. FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# l, d( s! V: ~9 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ M1 H' e. V6 W) R5 sWith such a tongue as yours,
# l" A4 K# ?1 E3 c: J) bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  ^, n* _3 b1 D$ ^$ e5 r! q6 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  Z6 M" h7 }$ Y# ~: V1 }; R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  D: x& I( g1 ~% F4 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 G1 w) A, V5 s# R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; Y; [4 V4 S8 K! C, `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! k$ R7 e0 e0 k; s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% i0 e9 |6 G8 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, v$ f( m- X/ X  I9 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- ]( w; @% k9 N1 o% s* {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 i8 F/ V  |, G0 o! r4 G" t5 }+ M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' A$ @, n! V$ m* W1 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# R) ]4 V; o* Z  ~5 v8 G/ [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 l! Y, o1 }/ ~5 ?* C3 Q( `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 r) C/ X$ U: h; s: l" Y% Y: k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! V/ t- G2 Z: q. {3 d6 @5 v- m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) a  a' v6 j# n7 t) i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 I6 e: Z& F% W$ j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- y9 W( d. G' |) E, V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- N3 R" J3 d4 E% M* c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Y1 ^6 F0 t* z; x+ G$ B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" v; p: x# T0 C7 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ F- R! I  G4 Z: P8 E' z7 g: b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* E  o" {+ r7 z$ K3 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* g+ V, t$ Y% y我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ l5 G; X$ l, ^, H/ @2 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>