【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 X- ~# ?3 ~+ h9 u0 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! E2 A3 I, F, h4 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" t4 K% z9 c9 n9 c$ |$ C/ F: H# ^: cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 N) x7 I/ G6 U  H" K' m8 m  EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; {: d- J8 u3 E+ G. ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 `) u" j9 c7 g2 V$ n2 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& T) m6 t0 e& `/ @Every other word you utter is love
' X8 |* s! j2 V3 h6 V  ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 e; v# G7 ?* D; eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! k0 z! \6 Q! x- _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: I3 \' }. |) D+ h( gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 P: X' s! Y0 {( m: [# f% ?5 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# S, p) k/ s" p6 g4 \8 I5 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 q; k; j6 z( T: J$ t' o9 [& NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, v6 ?% s- q3 I8 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 L2 l/ }+ l% s: @- `" S0 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) j, ]" s7 k, z3 x2 o; {, k  K) W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m& m2 T& a5 A! y6 a- z5 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ H, ~2 p1 z" ^- B. X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; e3 s3 R0 u/ v* x! k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 m9 @6 p. m. D* D# a/ r: `' E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ F( c* V! J  _- x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 f" @' r' f( [  u4 J<P>你无需担心</P>
. U% g1 A: U  O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ r( [# |9 J& V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 m8 Z$ B" P  G5 x( E3 |0 [" _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! |& q# l) B# Y; b- M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 S3 s, R1 ^9 o  L9 {. {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ b3 t7 a* ?8 G) @6 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" Y; s) h, }, F# ?4 }4 t. }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ J6 R$ X( j+ Y; l$ ~1 w  N$ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ a- |5 d, |  ]0 I/ f4 O4 }* z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 ?( _& W* x6 _, m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 f4 B) J& I, |& h, i6 k7 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 \4 |$ L  Y' y) j6 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- h5 r7 `" n/ k* e1 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 s9 G3 Y- p0 h' \3 c7 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 c$ S5 z; t! A$ ~4 I5 j( e; B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 F& {8 \) p$ E3 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  u; R5 ]) h7 o7 w. H9 j7 ~4 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 ?0 E' g  F: W) w( w" V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! F$ U& x+ I  S; |+ o2 i, T  z" H0 s0 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% B1 [5 ?8 O2 m+ P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ B6 p% S  e" B- j! X9 B1 Y4 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" ^$ m7 b2 @$ b: _8 |' N' ]: \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>