【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; F1 O. T! o3 U. X2 E  b/ FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& w! N) T, ^2 {6 n9 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" y/ L+ b" k. p; u; x, T4 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; _9 v- H) L/ Q& ~$ h) GI really want to know just how much you love me
7 K5 C# _' i. E+ X$ HI love you I love you with all my heart
# [, x* E3 F4 d; v& _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 y' e  N; g  Z3 d/ W1 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ?+ e. x% k; `0 ~) J" i8 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 |6 K6 R/ Y. d% uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, h2 L/ ]6 F- C6 @I regret not dying
2 z- ~2 Y, s5 v7 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 e- x1 G: D. `7 c- L) V2 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. L/ N. x- {6 R7 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" S% S% K" c6 M$ D) @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 k: ^$ _! q6 I" ~, l( {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* \! m  L: O9 j/ y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( e  s3 s! o3 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: t+ {/ G5 L9 q4 e, \: j! o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 U7 I- I8 f* b' y" ^" z4 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: H# M0 S" v. e- I' o* @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% }6 ?& w2 l: `4 s! q* ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 c4 U( X3 T, g3 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 T" a( r8 J7 f, O. L- c' @* R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. H1 x# ?+ w9 `1 s! K% x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 |  J% u# ^. `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 v* q, @  y" Y; g; R7 @6 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 m$ X+ D  A! {3 B6 c7 t7 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 U% b6 c0 I2 u" B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ [# A0 A' c4 A( `" {  M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Y+ u# b7 t# c0 p! M& S/ a1 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 {& F  R6 x* z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, P( o3 b9 O, B2 r) U! c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 E: d) b& |% G$ l" N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; z# G; K/ A6 ?7 _% @7 G6 j% ^3 x0 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% \/ ?9 R* u  a1 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' S# H# W* N. E' B0 g1 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& ]" v- w& T1 E# z0 T; d3 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* k2 _0 q( a4 V/ c1 I8 o8 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% l0 D2 T/ K5 c3 J& G# ]( M6 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  j' D7 G. x2 L" m( k5 |2 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 L( }( \, ~! g; y* g6 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 _9 C1 `+ z1 I# \7 ?: X0 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* I+ O. T/ a; {) r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>