【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  ]) l8 |) a% X0 h; D5 y8 X3 N歌词我附在后面。
/ ?, c& Q, R0 S: M% ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 @, i9 b) G2 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 C4 R) _& b3 _% ^Seeing the sky content with its love
& v/ L# ~8 @; X( IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, n) e2 q1 T7 m; C5 r. x1 |4 WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 Q( O2 w7 F  g( T2 y+ sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% \/ |3 S! `1 {( S9 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 \7 _1 T1 R8 I6 b* d3 B1 c, U/ kI want so much to see inside your heart
; [' w, g: g2 _# |2 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 i# n; X# Y9 `I regret not dying
; v% o7 f6 V; V- P) L; ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 q* @: @$ c, v* C$ c4 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 {* R' D7 n- j' R2 V. uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 M: ~: I: H2 A& \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% _- _3 A$ D3 D1 k' A$ |1 s6 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 K5 T6 y& j, ^+ H( j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# n: z# _0 a+ h0 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  [/ s: s* x, n/ }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  T9 z/ c; v" q9 Z! h& f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 A8 k; g: U9 {- g9 t- ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 @! D! S1 |! [, z$ ^" h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 t9 D0 P+ N4 j1 |. {- g' Z7 ?! w. R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 M1 F: A9 l# c$ j- U. }1 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" I/ _+ h5 D1 C- B) d0 r* ]/ w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ n; h* j4 `- l7 r. g# q' [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* P9 N3 u! f* B/ c$ Z. H% z( W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( S  o8 M) `9 Q- ^7 k& |2 u: r+ ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 j. w6 [8 Y/ n5 m0 `, p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) t& s9 C2 S0 Y0 v7 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  c9 |0 p! I' }& G. W! F<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 N0 m: e7 b' Z* E& L5 A% C' r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 D# B+ T2 z3 \( M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 d2 Y" j: ~4 @6 J- X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) k2 l0 Y0 Q% ~  U7 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ f6 ?% \9 E- O6 C* C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 I: m* a0 F, ?, h# [  K' S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( r2 t2 w! h# S+ ]9 `我请你剖开它
; l3 G& z- Q* D2 Y( v
" w) [+ X& n3 r5 z& j9 C" _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  I* }# w9 p( X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>