【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. r" b, ]4 O3 T- L3 u. _The moonlight is shining brightly,
) c  e% G3 e! B. nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* ]) K5 C6 i' q- LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 j+ [/ k+ H. v8 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ^; J6 R1 K) @6 [The sky is happy down to its soul
5 h0 o0 S/ q/ q/ \4 {) E2 x& dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 B) h4 N4 V6 ~" J+ ]: IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 s; R0 O! _3 j  Z: fEvery other word you utter is love
" e; D  W! P7 l5 }I really want to know just how much you love me
6 |. ^4 q( V5 f" H0 M& |6 H+ uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 g8 R# g' m4 R( F- O9 _' ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. W9 g% {' F2 [, A* i( uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# s( S9 {6 @" `$ \( eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- Q% s/ l( W/ i* }+ L8 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! C2 N' S/ ?# Z: P  r3 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 _1 f8 Q  s- W% E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 f" @- R' `$ R" V% c* I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 F  M+ S1 g; o, o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ], p4 |- t% I6 b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ^9 o- M# R0 u# n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 C% A2 o* j- ~, E) Q7 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( _3 V; [7 l  Q+ n% J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 S- Z' m1 F7 W; w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ^, \" T) [4 e) Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- @* V, j- V& z& c* ]; G/ C6 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. O' `! y' U; J+ f7 t4 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 D* C+ V) Z% m4 j+ ~; i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ p' ]4 N7 |, M& U; e( t7 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 e7 h: O) {0 S1 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# P8 ?" ^5 b, |/ c& O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 c! d, [, _! p4 d* R/ L$ _2 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
" z* V+ m7 z8 S6 w3 [, Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& w% u/ N  x8 }9 T- k; J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 H9 s- u; E* i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) n0 t/ p/ ]& Y& l$ [3 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' U" U9 U/ Q0 k( r. _( n5 e" ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ U: L  }! F. t5 g) r7 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" q" L* |% A# J2 y* I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( S2 G% |0 w, X; w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>