【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( w4 y5 v; a- b# c* s8 S; w3 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' t5 f4 _, [. ?4 Q( d  GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: @9 J0 l2 m; ]+ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& J2 U  r7 K# vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 e9 B) l" s1 V" ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# T% a" g" m3 K8 g7 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 k/ R0 c. ]6 J6 ~: YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 V5 L( W; i( o  H2 GI’m still filled with fear
9 S. X5 @; a2 l6 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# T$ n- O7 g+ b2 [# n; wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 G# j% I, z( t1 L7 aWith such a tongue as yours,
6 S7 p; f9 [0 M6 B, OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 h1 i$ K) Q* A9 ^, O$ r. H) a0 l* N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, c# N' z0 @+ v2 n& u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, s) Z8 h1 t% r* L6 N: g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. x5 t' @: o4 `6 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) y2 V. B9 [5 I, b7 l1 M2 k  ^( P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ ]% |8 _) f; w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ^5 K$ W: f% V8 k8 _( [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" R  a$ P+ G5 S/ _) g6 a/ [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! u6 I/ d! E+ z3 a1 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ j+ m% E/ w3 b+ ?9 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; V. I- i9 u7 x( G: [2 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 \( k& B  `, q7 q# S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ d1 m0 q$ [0 L  P- Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! i; p- D. }, u+ ^- @, {) G0 e% R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 Y) z: u7 g# |  @$ G+ A# ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; q4 K8 a3 j. y! h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 O, b1 z+ ?7 W( q' N+ l& w! H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  m5 H0 C# H1 m8 x3 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 G9 |& V+ y8 o7 |  a6 X! l<P>I regret not dying</P>
) K) f! `; Q+ |5 U' g# _: l' G. ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ^, P- c" o1 f4 t( H) C; A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 W$ V/ U7 z) o; t* z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 M, E6 C. t" h5 r- m, A( d& j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 y# \3 d* e4 [! [! l5 R4 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 {! w7 b& P, d5 [0 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! J: K0 ~1 l) \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 ?" G$ [+ ?+ Y% K0 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>