【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! j1 A: P0 z* rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 A8 v7 Y$ h3 V/ Q! q& ?2 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! T: J  w2 ]) x- G: n# s% sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' U# T$ V3 y& O2 ^0 G8 m% e* `' lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  ]9 o: ~( o) u8 |& C! E. {9 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 W( N. }1 v  d' t9 U8 U& s9 y* W2 XI love you I love you with all my heart
+ q# r: e$ M7 c* o) y) @3 V8 eNothing can compare to my love
6 R/ r2 J3 W) dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 S* r% E$ q2 U1 i0 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ B/ f0 M2 T) E; XI want so much to see inside your heart
8 F9 i) b9 j# l5 k8 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 E, L3 ?5 J8 e; ?! SI’m still filled with fear
( H, M% z$ ^' ?/ s5 p% H; A) }. qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 ]: j/ i* O3 e# s! q8 c. U0 j" sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, `, |' n1 |- JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 R$ Z) h4 ^8 X! n/ ?" P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  U! }/ i# s, [, v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* R& H9 g9 Z4 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 l+ v4 d; z5 q. f/ v$ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# Y, m: n6 o8 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 T. \: L% I9 u. B9 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Z; \) o+ H2 z5 c& D* j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 }0 f0 c4 F8 D5 o  K8 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ z* Y; L9 w3 ^9 q, d: V- z/ c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- P# q: ~# v: U: }0 Z9 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* g3 C; @4 V1 l# r& X8 f& A" g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ~( i( C* \. s+ A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% Q6 z( A  _0 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, d8 n, X# @7 q; |2 R3 a! |, h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 J) x% }& G" W+ n# R- f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 D4 f3 S& m' v2 ?% }$ [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" d8 u$ U, [' s, z- Q9 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 Z# N2 C1 d! M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( @/ h( b3 h, N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* m- A% i. y. C, D. N$ n. W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 D9 l. t& B3 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; C0 @  T+ R' l7 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 I3 N/ j9 E8 M- Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 h$ A1 v: e, l9 m" U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) l# Y8 h0 w1 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  J$ j0 R3 e6 g3 E4 R. K<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 Y( d. d- {4 u& n* c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  u7 d3 q* @2 t: k( V, }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( G4 F1 j( P: h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  a/ |- {  m( c2 \' ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 @7 L' ^& g. b7 n- j/ V* k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 V4 P+ ]* x& T9 d6 U) k" q$ u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: F. s9 a' k) A% j2 I0 z9 N7 T% l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 L& L" X9 i: o$ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  b( A& o; U: A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>