【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 F; K: }8 ~# Q' ^4 y; ?歌词我附在后面。
0 y: S! [9 I' F0 a: [' NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& [7 D* ^6 F% W$ y2 S: XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 v  y4 J+ }+ [3 W0 v! }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 B! a! K# t+ C4 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 q; o2 y4 u0 l) |( p) J1 BI love you I love you with all my heart
! ^7 s% ^9 k2 r4 xNothing can compare to my love
$ _# \4 W3 ~- `2 qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ]( [8 u3 E3 j0 P1 \0 ?, AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: T* v% |# p) T8 CI’m still filled with fear
' D# ?3 Y8 J% f5 d5 k* EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 l# A. e1 j, n5 X$ c: g: G9 |I regret not dying
) H. T# i- G8 J3 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 q0 W$ Z' w  kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 u- {  k' @( D- L- PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. S4 t3 N6 Y& Q- U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 p6 k* [6 t5 d; L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" O: \7 T% E3 N. X, W) n9 \  c6 v5 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, E; r9 p9 U' M/ H- h$ ~9 O) ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( \, y' O8 e4 p8 J; o1 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" y. S* g/ X( b; j& Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 n5 ?. @8 T% z( h; Q# K<P>你无需担心</P>
: Q) S" a* ^+ L1 n8 g0 M* ^/ g- }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 V3 t$ |" u! b; j4 @5 j. B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ?1 k$ s8 s+ e+ g7 W4 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. w5 |6 w* g, y- [3 x& U" F" Z5 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ^0 Q8 y" d3 Q& i' L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; H0 [9 X% G5 p3 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ o& z6 |! H3 h: ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 v, e$ i6 ^3 }7 M6 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; Z: _; ?( Z  \( f8 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! |5 p' p2 j% s8 P" q# k( o; z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! ]  T% g0 e& U) z. d# i! ^5 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# x' d' d, q' E1 N+ i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 w& }6 K, q, R0 K: C; a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 M$ g- n, z  x) D9 m& m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 c! {# p5 ~2 ?2 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! b& V; }# N& m" y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ g" E( k5 \0 D/ _4 ^! y+ A! j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" A, P" Z; L/ W2 C1 s+ ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 w( y8 d9 x, N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 ?) P, z) V6 \5 t* c1 e我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>