【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: V" R9 i5 F8 ^# I5 J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& z4 y/ m6 F1 r+ X5 j! B1 u+ W0 i! fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 m+ [, ^7 g7 J( Z# q/ QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 M+ L* {9 {% w, p2 r) |5 ~3 @The sky is happy down to its soul
8 U% J9 p5 c6 O7 _& O; m' TWith the moon kissing it every night
: X. S. F. [$ i) n7 p6 T5 S% SSeeing the sky content with its love
; i; @2 ^# X( zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; k3 U% {5 W3 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 N/ j2 O1 B+ S' O( I2 Q2 Z& hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 D4 G" H- X4 J* ^2 {$ iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ @# j/ ~. H9 d$ \I want so much to see inside your heart
7 m6 z& }- Q8 S  |& S. z9 F, _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 ?8 Z+ k- |6 }+ F' H' u. n* M! F" bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 @  \1 y2 j* q* @% aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: p, P; T! p9 @5 a6 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, t# p; H" C# O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: K& b0 @8 K7 I0 N& @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 B' V; b3 m* R9 W- j0 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 q2 S2 k, [3 v1 t4 K) B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 r# W- M. Q* N$ J5 o+ g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 S) C+ R3 I7 {0 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. \1 B, Y* n% D% s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 J  u! }+ w2 g9 R2 k1 D) @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; n0 G; `  U4 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' x2 Q8 Y$ o1 c+ k6 o' Q; `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 {7 i$ a9 d2 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% f: N% c& {; y" B) ]7 l8 ~  G( \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 n! r5 q- G0 |% G  U5 ~+ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) i: j4 d: C# [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 E/ F. M, f; z9 ^8 P9 S  P% U( U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 C: ]# J4 |6 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: t4 @/ e3 H/ A% n8 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! y1 w. D- y; s, b, H! H" o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 V+ r! Z% G  ?+ F$ Q' R9 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 @6 I/ w% [+ R' _& ^4 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  y: l5 `' ]- U) s+ b4 O' `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% A! S4 ~; h' t( \* Q9 \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& ~! B, T3 F1 {# i5 y4 M. ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>