【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ~( b4 c# S+ D9 v* J0 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 [% H$ ?! G2 d) J  L4 j" }- aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ J; ~# }' ]$ d4 R8 \8 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) j( b9 k7 n- @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ c! T# J! C* o% h7 WI love you I love you with all my heart
5 ^! P* x3 w1 j% k7 P# P& J7 u& oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- @7 k8 E- r8 j9 p, _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 C" v* V; v+ B5 @& [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* K5 g; \+ A4 h& T! L' ~1 CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 P  W- g3 ?3 `# WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. t; u& c# i1 B/ dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; D. a% ^0 ?) S  ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; E7 z; S( a% E( M7 O; a# O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& |, J; L9 m& N& h( D- b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. P8 y: ?% J- U: V' s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  J& X6 L+ k2 ]$ S( H3 d& e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 T' T, h1 F0 t7 j! y# @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 x* ]7 H+ [  W+ f+ b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. {( U4 S& u3 z: Z7 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' }1 G* k1 u8 `& F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 _( h2 n4 [& W, k% ^2 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# ^2 }  n& Q5 C* s/ T0 P) `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 U7 ^6 t( s/ S1 c  V! p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 J+ K7 w  [  s% J9 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 M" v' H; A; S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: S. e- P9 p. h# O( U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 @& _1 e; s8 g% q$ C' ^( V1 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) p: [6 j# _- H- u. X; Q; d* J$ W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ]8 q$ N* E3 C8 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ^5 z7 Y$ t/ x$ G<P>I regret not dying</P>
) {8 a3 z  Z) M. P2 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" S; o9 ]& ^6 U/ x; O& G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ X! g* g' N) v& ~% T6 d, X0 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% `- R0 h2 x+ R3 V9 m" Y2 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ~" j! |2 I' m' G. `# U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) ]  Z  Q  ~2 ~# Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 T9 _# z. L, q  v: V5 R6 b$ W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 k  k1 t6 M- c2 F! J9 U0 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>