【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ {4 `& y: R& N, z. D1 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! E  J4 s5 h) V  z6 H; o- ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 R8 m8 o5 O& oThe sky is happy down to its soul
  v# K2 N$ [* X& `2 bWith the moon kissing it every night
+ U. y! j) X3 {) x& k8 L7 ~+ T: _Seeing the sky content with its love
5 x& A5 _) L) U0 ^' \; `# p, n4 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, r" D% J8 x  n/ ~; N7 T; sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 r6 V3 r" H: hI want so much to see inside your heart
  [" S: S: F1 Y6 F0 uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 j# |8 J8 C' v6 O8 }& VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) B2 _, @: D4 }) D5 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% _1 l6 ~! M: o2 z+ Z. B9 ]: H  c! BWith such a tongue as yours,
; I# _4 C0 Z8 m) }- z% ]8 C1 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ @: g* g2 @' x3 I( FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( Q# I8 g  g6 ]7 {  Q# t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 N5 x, u; G9 ?  X6 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 S4 p$ C4 }: N$ G1 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( b: v5 j& d2 W! b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! H* j: l# o  g* w- W; c9 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 U7 k: A: d+ b! C4 s; w' ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 a. M+ E6 j# a; q& `; N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 g6 c( x* Z7 G1 B) B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 c% t7 S- Y% S9 n+ b: }  L" [, Z, u' ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  n' Q+ l% ]& b$ ?; \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 a$ `7 m+ f, V  P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ?# B, P& p' v# ^/ v0 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& R' |" O8 n( ?" r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& C0 v5 P0 f  K  }4 I, Y7 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( J4 u$ I/ K4 d7 [$ T% c0 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- \4 ]; i2 _5 I0 T/ b( t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- e' u7 ]) i1 G9 M. p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) S, M1 _; j9 l+ Q  H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ F  _, k, b! P+ Z" X1 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, a% y% v! T( r) T" L, }9 D( {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 B  u: S; y' ^  I1 d5 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 ]- J' b9 w" }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  W- L+ V; J6 V& l3 j* N& R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 |2 j1 `4 e5 G$ l% W- C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 }7 h1 M, g  \  Y, U, d" Q. o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ y( m; _8 s: L" q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 O" ^$ _) C) E2 b. j% ?: \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>