【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ ^% f) _/ l4 O3 r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 w* [5 A, J$ Q. N; `Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 _) X! k) D" D& E( UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 }+ |1 }8 G6 x# }! `$ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, _  a  L0 L/ g: N! N$ E0 zSeeing the sky content with its love
5 a1 t' |% W* t6 Q. HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% a4 G0 b( m9 J: S+ z+ z6 Z! A4 \You needn’t fear anything
. S9 Q7 c$ B9 S, J  Z: G1 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 a" v( x0 }( EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' W$ j3 [; F# h" p5 b/ }+ U9 T) @I love you I love you with all my heart
5 v" r6 v/ F6 a3 f' M7 I) gNothing can compare to my love
* n* F- H. @: J  V' ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ Z' x. M1 \/ `8 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- i& H7 @, ^8 W4 u+ b$ K7 j, FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( R9 C6 W  Y& ~; Z) M( q/ qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! J1 c0 A9 h$ y6 T. kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 @+ L7 c0 Y) URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 b) {& x/ F; V# Z) P8 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 _" C, a. a8 ~1 a7 w) V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 g% B. M. U' C; p. P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ S( {0 a9 r: B% H3 B6 Q& z8 u7 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 H! Y- S9 V: a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 h7 r1 Z0 X) N( B1 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 W+ e$ T2 I9 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 }' r' d( N+ Y, h* r' m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ]' E6 B+ P" T" n6 p/ b4 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 T  A" Q+ y4 I0 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; Z9 v2 K, @4 ]1 k$ r9 c) z. v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 D; Y% t) Z0 t9 ^( Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, e# o" `' h, G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- V7 z& r$ G% Q: g: O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: A' ]/ W) n4 e* W0 r# j+ r# n9 t* v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ M# T: V: V$ g" X) T& v' k+ R3 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 W5 \# ~6 i* p. ]* A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 W1 q9 [. T/ Y; v" S9 t4 X9 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ]+ b+ s- R. R  K; e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' I. z. n& b* {+ ?! C# W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* P! j0 _, {4 A" `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 L; A' V( Z( W/ p$ @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( d( F3 A! x/ Y& E6 m. a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& a3 k( c9 J0 O( l1 a) K/ l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 u. u0 f$ m) ]2 n, s% A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) M7 B( B1 w/ o  [. h+ L( S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 j+ i! D# r! O. C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 `2 H" u6 t# Y6 A$ X1 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: }; f7 C6 k& u, w, ]' }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 C/ m) w5 g1 p/ @) m( F1 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 l# [, ?3 o' z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; U% ^/ [$ g5 F6 a4 s: b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; V# K0 r1 m+ w; ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>