【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* e7 z+ J4 h- d1 Z6 G1 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. d: O2 F: n$ {$ U* ~7 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ r3 B7 a+ Y, S* m5 ]# M5 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, @5 [# m& C: O7 ~3 N. _5 AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 y  k, d- I$ hI love you I love you with all my heart
) X8 H: Q2 j) yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 Q- z9 `, g7 @9 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' a' ]7 K* [0 V+ B. n- z5 p( ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. @' }8 v  @3 M7 p9 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  V" P3 e) w3 }, `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! ~9 y) ~1 q  _; ~* ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 x# X' D" G0 ]% T2 N; p  jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 }' ^7 k; V- Q2 {% K# E6 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( E# t$ C8 W2 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 k* V* v$ X! ]% k3 h( C0 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 D2 r+ o( N: z8 W* Q/ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 R" x' \0 Q! w7 [+ i1 N1 a$ {! c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ]+ M' H: Q+ B% S; }' o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! s- T  L9 U% ^! W: y! y<P>你无需担心</P>
0 l: Q. P: h  x; w. G. ^0 P" A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ r  `7 {7 a  t  M3 a8 }% ]% C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* l( X! r$ {$ U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# {5 Q! F% Q2 w+ a4 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( U, x, w! Z2 O/ x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& p2 H; [# x0 g0 ]3 |+ }1 S( n" _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. S0 T; A) b8 P5 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% w, ]2 i# ~: P; [  X3 l5 I# V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 V! a% J! t. V- v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, E1 o2 v/ a+ U. a6 |+ C& ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 z: @1 m5 Z3 r: o3 q; s3 ]7 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. b  R& f  w9 [8 H2 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; u; ]& i6 B* O; V7 F# R! Q8 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& _" J# O% ]  w( k0 ^6 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( i7 `# X& |1 R: S2 \* X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, I" w9 k* u- U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( m+ ]9 C: v6 \5 X6 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% w7 @) G: v; \  K) W5 \; B4 l, g( U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: |$ Z; R7 J: i1 ]3 v4 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ I2 n7 M# q. N/ \2 x4 y' ]; A+ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; I" {( x  `: o7 F% d3 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# D8 d2 d- \4 x0 X; t$ i! D- M5 @$ x0 Z0 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Z# h) b+ Q+ E9 _5 H: N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  |1 t6 ^, K2 I, V2 v" ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 e. x, `; f8 S" X% L; _7 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 c! p6 `- ?* K! X3 Q- W+ @- B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 m$ ^- i4 B9 E! Z" T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>