【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: X1 |! K7 B4 c1 @! y: M, Q9 L歌词我附在后面。
7 n  w/ i: ~+ f8 @, |. _  aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ O3 Z% a. J" F) \. HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 L% |: e5 I* |( d2 sWith the moon kissing it every night
4 P+ c5 [9 I; TSeeing the sky content with its love
+ C# H( {" Q$ G4 p* @- ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. X  M+ x6 `) C& w5 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# y, S+ D& B$ Z+ yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! C: x) A, L$ K' OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 e$ y) B6 h' `% oI want so much to see inside your heart
: t7 L* N0 h6 w, V3 A  pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ n1 m5 Z) m# z) C& q  H, MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  [  H: r) i9 J+ vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 @- z: b& T6 g7 s7 s; KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 Q* d/ x) @$ g- k% k0 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ r- v; K/ `! k* T* \) K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 C$ u* B: P5 ?3 f* Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" b' C/ Q8 b+ L$ w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ^, L9 {& j7 v* A" a% I* }2 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* C1 X* H2 K+ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ ], C( x9 \7 X) G1 ~6 {8 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" `8 v/ I# y" F5 h- \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 j5 U# G* J, k  h! \7 T' Q9 Z1 C: L8 r<P>你无需担心</P>
" A, }: T2 p3 ~- F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  @! ]  H" `( B& u7 ~" c6 e: J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ v+ C8 L* ~, ~- J7 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- D3 }1 x0 }( {) A& n* j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' j9 g& R% X9 K, q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ]. A+ i! o  B' J  i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 S' y0 C, y0 E9 u) B# i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. }1 @% ]; }1 i" Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 r0 n" n* O, k% U% s; h' m; a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ P0 b4 J0 i) g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P/ F( R3 Q2 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  E$ W0 H+ ^  I5 Y, f; g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) A* O" N! H$ E. V* @# I4 o+ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 _# M; l+ Z- W. ]6 _9 p* \8 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# `& L; Z/ w9 i# Z3 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 A) j  N7 P5 t; C- l# u, _2 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, C" E/ T0 C4 \' e" ~; v# m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 @( O& X- x* v5 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- w$ h2 F& N7 Y' `0 V% l& \: V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 f8 I5 [# g2 M' e7 i5 L6 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! p7 m: e  N2 ?3 y  H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& K, R5 H1 a+ Y. ?1 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 G7 P% l: R/ H6 s0 E7 K* m* S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 O9 t7 `+ E* o( R我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 F: d. W; l% }* H  A; M7 {7 [1 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>