【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 v# Z1 K. h9 u. ^! X% cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 U- Z1 d9 q! \1 U& X0 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 p9 Y$ R3 }! \% A. Z" aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) ]) M$ x5 f' P+ Z! a2 v' BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( A) l* i/ a! q! Q1 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  ~  Z& U+ c" LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 `7 p" U8 h1 L( }2 v  gI really want to know just how much you love me
* j1 d, M4 M9 l' a, |7 D3 J$ k) X7 _9 _I love you I love you with all my heart
) T1 i0 S, W2 n+ V( p2 \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 r/ u0 w; U) b; II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. I4 A: b: Y3 ^* I) XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: O; q' {8 b. M2 ~5 _. wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: b$ o) L$ p5 m! }& |. t8 @5 H* j' mWith such a tongue as yours,
  k- W* o# Q7 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ D/ @9 i+ }3 ~* M8 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 }. U: u( E  J. d% A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) ?, Z4 o) i! e: ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 `& ?6 l. H9 Q, t3 h% J0 [) n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 Q6 S7 j) O# t+ w% ]- u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% m) s5 k, z8 m# c1 K6 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: J: o/ r6 P5 q5 J  |" c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 v) U  }% g& `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ m8 |* y- ~6 @( C3 |% U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' ^. C/ ^5 e0 u& |3 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ z  L' {, H6 g1 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ k& V! v3 R3 x8 x( x' L# I- k4 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 C, J7 a5 y+ P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 {  _# M0 N8 E" `1 ]" t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Q, ~) X5 ~0 X; Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ m& J: U: {8 W" D( `& D9 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 o: m% _$ L. Q# \4 |0 v% w& _5 n, S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 B# X$ J$ x1 v- l: d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 R1 \8 `- i! o7 Z! p1 s; b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 G/ z+ G) m8 _7 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 F7 J* n( Y0 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 O$ z9 T& h9 s5 a$ C! Y' e) b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 ~  N. x7 A* l" o3 M6 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' N" I- A! |3 S1 f: y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 \) Q! n: m- u) h9 V  E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 e: }4 [6 s6 i4 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& c( t5 y8 f$ H/ \: w6 ^3 o( T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 o  N2 h- j9 ~( d* v" ]( P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  C% a5 R$ [0 k$ A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; }% _$ g0 P0 u7 l: Q' y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* r! _) N( q  J1 [- z" K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 E0 C0 V& S; _! A- e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ l6 r% _, N# ?9 u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; w7 l' V. M$ y( m6 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>