【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 \6 O3 C$ q+ ~0 R% A& U4 E7 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 v% N$ w; d1 P& a7 E9 V/ C& qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 c( X2 V& P; M, SThe sky is happy down to its soul
* X8 Y3 V8 E4 P+ T: g, @6 s- jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 H- R* Y  A) p9 m- T/ o$ tEvery other word you utter is love
' a" |" {" x/ A' R$ W% I' jI really want to know just how much you love me
+ e+ z- s& c8 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
2 j9 [6 b% C1 ]) INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 Y3 |3 f4 G3 }' A: oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- s4 p& Z3 i1 T7 uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ E8 ]: C$ g/ c  E9 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ]$ `. s* v/ r8 n7 XI regret not dying
! H6 p- B- M' c$ S7 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 ~4 I7 T& b! \% X& oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% I1 J( ]4 D! O9 D# HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 m) U+ S1 v/ @1 g# _# t( l# D/ R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# H+ L8 A  O8 x& a8 b, V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* j5 P  D7 h* @! h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 S. z" Y, W, r  U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 i) _2 L- H' H9 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( y6 z& @8 U' @9 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 Z& g, e# ^% b" t/ _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; y9 t, |" Y/ `* L& Y" _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# W0 T1 ?4 t) W8 h  D8 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& J5 [) ^/ k9 F' \$ w  U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( E7 X1 C: D' S- r$ O% b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 B( M0 h- Z8 \  B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 \0 P$ O1 p- ]; m$ O: v$ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 L& Q; }- N. g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# X$ v/ L7 f# N/ Z7 P6 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# c* {! t) i. u, F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% n: ^, c1 _+ f* d$ f, x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ m* _; A" x* Y* x) i, m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 q8 V" M/ h! d! |3 v0 W& N& k$ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; z4 G) Q$ B3 l+ H' y! s3 ~9 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' d6 ]0 b7 o$ k7 k$ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ u- n: K  a6 x: O( J' J( {3 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ k  W. v9 G- V8 ^8 b: F$ x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 h, z' W6 H7 a( y8 r  q) c2 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 s  q$ M. `  y. a2 N( U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 \4 [8 H1 x: H1 Q# w  {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 R1 g, O$ A8 H/ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 j4 `* g# }. {- l2 c% {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! C( O2 M! t! b* b) u" Z. T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>