【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 @; f! L: E8 R. }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; T6 M% K6 H2 r% P( sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( r2 L: v2 m* Q+ I) bThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ x3 n. R  F/ C0 w1 O& p9 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- Z3 K  `. Y# [8 i! H7 W$ NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: O' s! l* I3 I8 f5 R0 m! e+ Z0 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' L% h8 P8 z9 s# R- r; e; T) x- HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. c, Y! e; A4 Z. IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 B3 M  l5 C/ g4 J1 W: Z) UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 }7 r6 C# Z1 G' @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) C. q6 @: p( K" Q4 F" w7 c2 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" V! u) x8 [: B1 `1 X% D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; {8 ]0 X8 y% F/ I0 |2 p* F, }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Z1 i3 u( U0 I  g. F( M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' {0 B# I$ r+ ^6 M: R4 _+ ^# g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 b* W4 o1 F3 p3 m8 c1 @& ?3 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ ]$ `$ L9 d, R/ S+ K" H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ~' @$ t$ v/ g3 Y, ^$ l! H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; [/ p9 _/ n, h* ~1 f4 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( n0 V3 ^5 X- _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 E! X3 T2 ]5 _/ [+ J4 I; ?/ J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  a- c  J  q' B3 D6 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 j- G, L3 Y: K2 _6 E! v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. e& K! U4 [! u( Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- D4 G0 q( O9 E; X6 |3 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 F5 F1 m" l# E  B. p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ u1 ?% B3 \: r& z$ }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; X2 T" h7 A1 h/ A6 b. b$ I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) N& N4 `- `0 K+ W* N# m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ j7 _* r" w& w+ S, h/ a3 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 Q% B1 L, ?6 B5 m7 e! x5 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 U- X% t( e- h% F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( M: ?8 J5 J, R2 B/ z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 f9 u8 `# h. h$ ?3 v+ d$ V% \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" C3 A5 i5 N) T& L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- M" @6 J5 z: W" k0 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 \# Y4 a, ?! @# y$ b+ e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 M& `/ Q/ P7 R( Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% m2 t+ v/ j# u( ~7 [7 _# R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>