【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. J2 u* B; b4 x7 D* X3 {' k, yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% E6 i* I. J/ v, e( n; uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 l( P7 \0 |+ C/ D  S; [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 v$ P+ d) x5 @" P5 g- gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) I' C7 c& J  {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, [, p& z" f0 K: Y" pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 X: P& q; k! z9 O* pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! C+ N! k) ^: }& MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- w! {' a% [- q( h9 w, S6 d4 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ a& c/ O6 x2 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* K& y  w4 L* z; z& S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& A  C8 l! t7 [* V- Y* K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 ]; \6 u) R' _: Y4 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* k8 _$ c) q- k* h4 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& }4 u% p7 A7 u. ]) Z% o. k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- h& N( K0 S6 x# p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- ~! q! D7 K3 a6 O+ e& w8 L- C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 ?" Y7 }2 Z4 k$ t) P6 ~% h/ k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# s; G+ f( e4 A0 P6 H. g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; J& o6 `0 d' w4 o$ @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) n: c+ Y) }& O) j' V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! G: W& n8 n! J6 X3 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 M1 [% t' K, y; m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ^( B* c6 ?  n/ @5 G& U8 G7 c2 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, L. T, _* _5 S! k! M/ O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Q5 R: v) ?% u( w( g; \# v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 `, M0 k7 \9 ]/ R" V- I: c! B" m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 F9 I* I0 F2 y* k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- u, [4 @! s5 V* p7 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 n1 t* k" N' I# \  G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* y3 K* E+ e) V# J. S" T  f! `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! H. k- \$ _6 C7 j+ G& F, p# i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% c# K4 m5 P* \9 ~. g! e5 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ l' ?- L; X8 b( w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 \( T0 D+ ^! V, N$ ^( }0 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* d0 i, m! }! J4 h. @% ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 m; s  R9 L4 S: o: D; {. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% E" e' G$ X6 \: d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( i- e% n- |3 j5 N% @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>