【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
# M9 n4 `" O4 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. m( v! R1 ^$ c/ \# kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# `) V( k# u% O8 E# q& JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 V/ N/ V6 g* F# UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. G( d& C9 @( A# U- L. WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 O, _- t2 V. S4 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 k9 _" W" s- l& `* ^2 n5 O, e" H, }0 hI’m still filled with fear
6 `7 Y1 v, p2 P8 O1 K% Q- }( V- UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  V/ N0 Q8 V  Z# @' TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! N  n' t& @0 L# q& \# HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" k# m: R# {* z' Z, @+ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ u0 f: w9 U5 U1 s9 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ P9 L, W3 y1 t- Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 E  n0 k( J. ^- e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) N) h3 _0 O+ d, X: B5 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 i" y( h  s0 N& s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 h+ X& W/ |" v' Q/ ?6 z) z& X& P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 B0 ^" s) d$ ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 G3 N5 m; n- o- g& @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ _' X( h, |8 r5 d+ W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ~3 U$ A: h5 n9 O" T, \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# b; l( |0 \3 {% w( Y6 q$ B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' Y2 x, [7 [) g1 B- l( i: I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ z" M6 ~: g* W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 B$ N! A( j0 {1 N5 Z- J5 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ O+ F- p; N+ h* p. e. `/ F, M/ p7 x- A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 O) l0 x4 v2 _1 X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 T/ l+ J' Q2 X4 {3 a$ a- b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 P" a7 W1 U0 v, X, ?" O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 i/ v7 X% f" q! F" X6 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ^; V) v; Y2 Z; F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, M( z" v  D2 }0 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 I6 e3 `5 ]5 a2 N% D1 m' k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, j0 z+ Y" A8 {# ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# a2 ]# G, u! |/ h3 ?) g: V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ G5 b' ~2 }% z$ q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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