【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! O9 L' ^! j9 O9 j' d5 n歌词我附在后面。
$ |$ c' `. r9 ^6 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 \) a& d+ y& eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& K! r; A4 I+ FWith the moon kissing it every night
3 p( J2 l* ?* x+ t: e' p  lSeeing the sky content with its love
1 Q$ C8 s/ a% j3 _5 `! e$ A- pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 p' Q/ {0 |6 X" FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( w6 W, T# M# z: ^$ s) gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ k* [0 p- K: E2 x3 GI love you I love you with all my heart
, M9 |) j+ B3 ^% ~  XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# c# c4 D5 A9 C: F2 S; E' N  p) }7 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 w- Q: g/ P6 CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 {0 F  E! t( l7 W& A9 y# Z3 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 G. F/ j; q- h$ lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ y  M+ o9 l2 S* Y$ N2 ]3 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 W& K- a  g+ n/ f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* p: h7 _; n' t+ r% Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" [2 ?% I/ |8 _: _' p9 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& B0 x( v% `2 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' i3 l& v" P8 E' N$ W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 [# T: ?: Z$ i; t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 v9 l" R- M  x1 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! v( _* k) y* i" L& {- D' \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 z/ g, c) i0 ]0 d  z! A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 U1 f% f# {4 V' L# I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) c8 K$ f: h; U& X5 d, D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 `7 F: i- p% y) B" q9 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 v1 `! ]" F/ k+ C1 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; m5 C8 v0 g( S5 |2 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% P% a( i9 N" e4 f, y% F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ |( |( [& Y2 _+ ?( s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 e! i1 D" v4 H9 L, U" e3 k0 V8 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 f3 C2 p0 p: G: h' T+ j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' v% c' u/ T7 C9 b/ @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, [, I6 j% x) n" l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; Z0 N2 W1 j6 f# @: c6 q4 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. E+ c2 p' r2 g1 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 z0 J, l& m# c" _3 j% e) b; q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 s. `2 o/ T, I6 T+ H4 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; F& |9 P( @- |, }. S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- v1 y7 \3 [& @( z: L1 m: q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ]! N& X% x* U) ?" j* N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ i* m$ V* X* P6 S  Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, z0 d$ G! j, m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( w  [5 u1 A: N8 Y. n8 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>