【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% D& w7 o: Y, G; F" [0 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 R3 o, V/ I8 y5 ]  D4 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ L: I9 @, U- v8 q3 H! u+ hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: s- \' c! R, e- ^% j. s1 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 J" B4 }5 H; D# s2 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ^7 k! h% l4 I9 r0 tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' }( G2 O) F" {% `, ?; SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 j" C* x" T& @' G7 k* I8 ]$ gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* t) G( [5 a- f4 E4 X8 s, Y0 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 |+ _' J9 T9 F1 h( S% _) Y! X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 o: I3 r( Q' `( }# k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ~3 S# r+ f7 U0 Y% ]# L1 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* U* x3 |% d2 Z! T7 V9 T( T2 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 t  Q/ n4 w$ }/ O& o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: |, t" V. E* c# B) B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 C' P+ [; ^; w5 t  M8 @! T1 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' m2 i. O: f  y% a3 K. K# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. K% U5 Y1 _' C5 B6 j1 R7 k$ M. Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, H) D9 ]' _8 {+ D/ L* r3 P4 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( O7 _# m" [: d1 L4 R; O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# |0 e9 J$ V0 C. y% `( |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 O* b5 |' U+ R7 c! H: A% t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, n& k  I5 E' a  U3 I4 j, z. Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 o* U9 Q& t% m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. Y: J0 d- b/ _7 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 p* t0 x6 G7 w1 E' K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  C  K& {( @$ _! @5 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 I% T$ F$ Y- i9 C6 R6 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) S# @3 O! z$ R& g8 h. {; t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* m2 o$ I/ [4 I. d1 _! O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- K5 V7 D1 b. ^: Y5 [  L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 [7 ]2 w5 {* o7 }3 k  G/ P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 ]6 b1 X2 n( m9 j& H: T/ F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& q5 P, Y) ~3 Q, c<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 l" h1 M2 R+ v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 }4 x; D, ~) f5 N& a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; L2 i/ W2 x  f2 t/ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ^. I; e4 G4 s0 v) K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ z% ~% v! b3 z5 w+ B" s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ I; |; i! T! \9 |: W, v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 {8 J% h0 q! A# X% d$ r9 H% T2 V$ c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: V% a5 y  u+ V! F& m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# v) \' I0 q3 N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* c. _5 D( l9 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>