【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: X, {/ \& L! U- LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) q. g! n8 @" H4 v! R# TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: \9 M/ K/ u8 A3 o! G  a+ HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 o+ j$ ~3 M, @4 n- OThe sky is happy down to its soul
& W. v; O* G- r$ ?/ VWith the moon kissing it every night
2 P  n5 G2 a' Z- P7 b1 XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" U' R& T6 v, f% E$ O( o7 U1 Z8 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' F6 \5 b5 x( F0 ^7 ^: l+ o  g9 aEvery other word you utter is love
, q& b: v3 D& k! g8 \: TI really want to know just how much you love me
# A! `- r8 ?6 Z: W' D4 T0 AI love you I love you with all my heart
; N0 |5 q$ B; c( o4 S8 x' l2 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. h7 V9 g# D; g* J5 z9 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 B+ V. I. m  ]5 V* Q4 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 R( |7 ~- B% d5 ^9 ~9 fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 d( O) Z, K6 {) O8 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 N# j/ \/ k6 ^/ k  g# vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* a& r8 o' [  p4 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ c/ z; K) L3 A4 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 C; }+ q! x4 ?) l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& g7 K' g4 r( U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 J2 Q' N9 V' W2 u) I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) [# _3 i  \" Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" j- b$ d4 w) m* q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- E, q/ k' w7 p0 d  D2 t" j/ p# x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ^0 Q8 e! e' u3 u/ w1 `' L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" o+ k4 u$ ?) G% E# ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( z. l: _7 `3 P! E/ \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- ^# _4 I, b2 @. I* e  l' I% z: ~4 z0 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ e" F3 @9 c* g/ B7 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 P% s: J( E1 ^, A1 v9 @# e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. x0 m% |/ ]& M  [: }% P9 c1 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) Z0 e3 U; ^, d$ G7 V0 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 P2 D. q. F5 H! L% X. L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* t+ ]) {) K8 c" w! |4 Q5 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 r3 `! A! v  @0 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" j3 A! ~- h7 M0 y+ l& L$ Y8 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: c% {: i6 C# l4 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* U' _7 @, P9 @2 m3 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 \( b$ Q+ \7 b- v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 e' n+ |* X: a/ s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, x+ f$ z. u3 M$ m* ]0 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 E5 T! C! x7 t$ r8 w) Z/ L0 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% `$ E/ L2 e. r, `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ~2 w& T8 M" x0 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; p1 [/ y- @# B/ I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" m1 M& D+ q; S2 g4 L! ~我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>