【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 W6 x; j1 ]1 u0 D' z; h) Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 G3 f! f- c$ Z) hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- x) E( }4 X8 Z# J$ J' q7 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 d0 p# ^1 x' y4 FEvery other word you utter is love
: y% A) j+ h9 a% \  u! `/ ^# h$ WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" ~4 B1 O0 [/ ]2 r$ ?5 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* C3 q8 Z: e# u; \$ \" a8 I  vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 j1 ]1 w( c. g  j8 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  q1 T( T- d" x+ V7 m7 U; uI’m still filled with fear
2 j! u' ?& i& T/ b3 n$ x2 e7 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ c# c% K. Q( A) G# tWith such a tongue as yours,
# h% ?4 ]6 |( d9 }/ O# ~7 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 Z0 u& [3 i( FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 u+ p  D# s1 o) B+ ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 T0 ?, m# G% m0 k- D7 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 r% |& |& h7 n: A6 L& i4 V# k: O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- F, S! r! t5 ]9 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ D% C8 v% b/ {+ D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 Y4 D" `9 H0 N% I: a2 u# N' e  |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) u1 w% W+ l7 U; f9 O+ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 o: _. @  F* D3 }$ f2 e) m. H: ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( p( {+ @$ M1 n; {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! D. U8 }% W$ {% h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ~& ~4 ]$ j6 e  U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 @2 |/ j0 l# v. D* l) P6 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' \2 v4 q  E; x  h3 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, G- F- U- r5 H* p( G9 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 m/ @" b: m8 h/ B/ R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# x% P" Q* ]$ j; o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ p1 ?+ F% ~6 v9 p6 X9 f% I( D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: e+ }: s# R; Q& C: m4 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# L8 d# t( w7 t2 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 Z6 y0 ~0 Q& _# }7 q5 l. b$ V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ J4 U! @( {# m2 D4 E& l( J$ z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) n$ _% L4 y1 r) M* }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, C" \3 R/ ?+ \$ A% y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ I, x% z3 T' D8 n6 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ~. E1 h$ w* Y2 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 o# H6 v3 ?: K) S$ O. Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 b1 ]" K) n' M4 l) ^% I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- l6 D. R- |3 M' C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& d# S- T3 I9 i. p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: x: l3 [8 V9 ]% U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ P, D/ @8 Z, i7 B( r: l2 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>