【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; Z* a8 |3 V2 y1 j歌词我附在后面。
# L/ R8 p& h3 }7 I- \- X4 m2 A5 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ g. x( y" O6 R4 s7 `, e6 K- _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 g+ [) L5 ^- T8 r6 [) RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. y$ O1 I; L* {+ i# S+ dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# J3 ^: q* z, O7 D! w% YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# h' L4 |+ |. p6 `; RI really want to know just how much you love me
& Y' n3 @; A6 J8 [1 I/ @* `3 u1 mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' A* L- T' t: @4 U* S, wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# @2 a" e( {1 F2 C7 YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! v; n8 _* N/ M9 [: I/ rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  S) t- j$ d+ H0 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% F' k0 h7 k1 b  t/ a3 l8 x/ g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 L, H" T' J3 E1 y' c4 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& _* M$ A7 J7 v3 v& b1 _% f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 X$ ^6 i! @; M9 ?# Y0 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' T5 Z+ B: Z% U8 u- f6 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ~: v/ q! n$ U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  \, w" t5 i. ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; [  t  d! p# A& Q+ Y. S/ P7 `$ C<P>你无需担心</P>
5 s2 E# L5 Y* x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! z5 `6 Y4 e( f) j; L( E1 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 H% _( m1 m  z9 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# \% F( }2 P0 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ Y7 g7 D1 j" O7 C. \) d9 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& `' V( P6 [  s" r- M9 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& g* f( Q5 a4 S+ t% R# {, D2 f- ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 Q5 Y, {) v2 ^0 B9 Z9 M, o( O' D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) \1 g- s% Q' M! k5 r/ I/ K' e- O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' e& [6 x2 E( a1 p. k; e. q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, E. U+ w* \7 C; r) w8 \8 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( K9 {0 d$ J- {' z' w, S7 N8 B7 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 S+ w7 Z/ S3 ^6 `* w' M# L4 w7 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' U8 O' d& Z8 Y9 ?2 o# G0 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! ~: U" r* K% e6 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' H9 ]7 u. E0 x5 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ i# H: p  V+ ], i. w! m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, y& k" x6 M% p8 L* N# ~0 n' g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>