【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; R, |6 [3 |9 S% r0 c/ n! T歌词我附在后面。
+ l: s" t' _4 _- o3 r# n7 W$ j% a! e' QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 _: b7 U3 `# ], O5 h. m) T5 L8 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 u6 y" O& n* i8 |' CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' p, d# Q2 W- zThe sky is happy down to its soul
% Q7 p0 J& L9 n) `  r$ VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 H( k, }8 ?  A: Z( JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ {1 m0 g, d: V' QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& @: G7 G: a4 l4 ^: K: o: v! xEvery other word you utter is love
$ |% S: s2 x/ p, i: wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 m7 }" C: Q! j) j! z" T: M5 ]$ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ o* E& P0 Y  A  V* \/ i2 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; n3 c$ ], _9 F- c8 R! eI’m still filled with fear
' N7 Q4 T, d+ L4 b/ G2 D# U. eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: v. j6 D9 G$ p: o/ k  V9 V  iI regret not dying
# }0 k, g( O; P( T/ m/ ^/ V* bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! t# g+ A1 h- X% O7 OWith such a tongue as yours,
* z' ~" g7 K( n1 _0 k9 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. S8 h, ]( U/ S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ Z$ p- y7 _2 Q7 \" _  f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ K( \7 Y+ F+ U& f: l% m5 E$ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ K2 e( B6 H* N+ w+ f- f# h9 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 Y0 J: b1 h8 e! C, Q( w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ~* x: M4 S! [2 I# c2 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ^$ b; O, E- E. }. Y. `* e0 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- n& Y- z2 O9 f- g; c. g7 k2 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ S* k8 T/ d& a  @9 \( j  @2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
! z$ s8 P7 }3 j$ R5 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 t$ y" j4 v" k0 x: i% u1 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  T  c8 E+ A6 B4 c: A; ]  E/ J8 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 Z" F- c0 r9 j: v0 b' [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; n# A9 O: k: W" o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 ?* n  b6 M6 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  k2 l% `# ]* O& G: B3 O2 `- ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ^: s/ ~3 Y  a9 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% c, ]) o& \; L! l; r7 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# a/ R, N$ Z! P5 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 V. C/ Y( V7 L" \2 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! z, s/ y* O! D4 z4 D1 ]6 j+ K5 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( o" C, q( r. h: I% U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 b$ i+ b! `+ y8 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 B& Q1 S# ^: L2 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 w. H1 v7 M! o2 q! N/ Q7 n3 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" Z% T0 u  [5 I" P& j: _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! V- |! w9 c; i( q% l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 t$ U5 Z/ N6 e8 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>