【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% \9 _- t" K; K+ }2 T' O" tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 b8 s: d) ~+ o' V. JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. R1 \. S7 x+ h7 I- @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ d4 Q8 _) z+ w/ l7 {The sky is happy down to its soul
. B$ K0 o" |! g) u# \9 A* RWith the moon kissing it every night
) ~' ?' s$ V. X: s4 ~: K! M% e+ QSeeing the sky content with its love
2 @3 q" M3 {9 @* V6 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 L2 G% V: \2 q/ W$ R: F3 R% e5 n) ~" hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( z) o( @/ f7 A# YNothing can compare to my love
0 `5 c# N3 |3 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) y, `* C4 \$ @  [7 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- T5 w: f& p  H. x" L8 P; wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ H! l9 p1 a# R7 x. ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ ]/ K8 ^9 }1 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) I& a7 h, l) V  W; v1 f0 ~5 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 c9 y. U2 ^+ G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* X( K$ Q' l3 l- l& H# O( e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# _& P/ x4 \0 W5 ~, S- U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 t3 G$ N! L; q9 N- l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ g, _+ S" g: U4 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 H# O9 T0 Y% V" i# [0 H, k& ?4 z" o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ y: ^2 {( }# }7 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( n, {7 ~7 N+ d( N5 W" g7 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! b5 R, p( u7 }+ k* X! ]+ |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ?* R1 P* N* h9 j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- \: A2 B) ^) Z$ A& d9 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" U' N2 V& j$ d* O. a* |7 B: c) r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& d- b* s8 P$ ]& x: e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! f9 X9 x1 ~  K) ]& B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( T/ d3 S$ V0 g# L/ O# ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  @3 L1 f7 Y/ u+ e, [( a! s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 i& L  A! w) a6 x/ h" o: \6 S" q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; B" R( \, L8 q; M. c4 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ E  Z- N0 u+ A: o/ b- A2 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 Q+ v7 w0 ]& F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Z, f( X9 x8 u$ O/ y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>