【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 l7 K! X# I8 c& [* Q4 O6 C歌词我附在后面。
  G& S( n$ X2 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" P4 P7 R( |) o. L! P# uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 T* W9 A& r) x# B& v* gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 X+ p6 ~1 u  n8 O0 T1 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ M; z0 e, A7 l! _% [You needn’t fear anything
* m- l- E: i) qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ D* X) n9 v7 E4 Q- ~$ W7 m* xEvery other word you utter is love
5 c  Y, h9 }9 n1 Y2 pI really want to know just how much you love me
6 a. E0 p* k2 p7 JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& f3 Z( j8 |, r* w. W' DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 L* m$ D; R. N$ _: a5 F. j% q" eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 |  r& c5 u  X6 i" l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 r) Y/ h) l, O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 k) \5 G! K( R' u4 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; E! f8 F$ K2 X/ y3 f+ j7 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 N/ U3 }8 Q0 E5 f+ a3 n) B0 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ J9 e7 c$ e. T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: O3 [% h& x# N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" W" _4 c" K" e. u: o  d+ G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 p, X. r# }; e7 _$ f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: S' _" \- z& u2 `5 H% z3 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" e0 L  @2 S3 T2 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! @9 T  W: {' V, G0 p% [( I# n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 s% ^6 S  w; r- g% r+ J! I5 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 y$ ^( W, m7 C1 Y% u, ~  @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 |$ Y& U5 V/ M3 Q# a  ^8 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 Q4 p. l( n$ X. ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ A$ m* t+ N: q8 X# @# J  [0 W, b" i6 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 e/ m0 I- I3 s- m7 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 Q$ D1 c$ w; r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 J4 p6 W9 V1 m: L6 g" [3 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( z1 @' l: t% |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 j3 d  M: T! D* X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( t# o( N% X, Z7 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 k) _3 y3 k: |3 K' i. I0 C1 C. t# `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# D1 T* `$ m5 b3 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ S4 c  o" l; z% o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) K# q/ H5 D5 d7 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Z' J: X: c- E6 o1 |. e+ ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 ^3 k& j) Y: M+ S! w我请你剖开它
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* |0 [% k; u4 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. k' A% M2 x: A$ @9 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>