【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ }' ]& ?$ ^$ F2 q; P% @, p% X歌词我附在后面。
0 s- ^8 L3 {! F0 i$ tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# v6 T( W- j# r6 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 L6 Y+ G9 _  oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* U' w' K8 }2 y- dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: E( D: h9 R! P0 m9 II really want to know just how much you love me
  \/ ]6 l$ }, ?6 v. T  II love you I love you with all my heart
8 g5 h% a+ i" t  iNothing can compare to my love
  H* {) v* [  Z% c9 K/ ~/ m, RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' b" S0 l( S3 c, jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% L' w3 C8 d5 N$ J% v' R5 M  i! ?1 GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 `+ t1 p5 x, W) e" V6 d1 a$ HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# D: N( E; k4 L. t# k4 _+ B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( O% {1 M) |1 A" s3 ^- v% s% I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 A1 X: _: P, _. r! D' c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! v5 ~; x! n) O) ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: I) o3 t0 }6 g6 {" x. f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ D* }8 l  Y5 z( y) K) T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- x8 i- g0 v/ Z: J; L( Z. ?# Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ^7 C' h* Q8 W. y; y; ^* t: Z* ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) t+ L8 j9 N1 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, w6 n3 J5 ]3 ]2 R; A. X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- x( T0 R4 w! m5 W8 Y( `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ `' G0 V: g9 X) z8 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% y+ u) q  S$ k4 d2 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& u1 f1 g: }; ~& D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, d6 {( I+ F9 e0 g% ^0 L# `# k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; n, h* m$ U$ k: [# m8 l4 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* O2 z6 k9 y5 u! I/ r7 n+ p% F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% l/ d9 s7 f$ L<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 P8 y% ~3 w5 O) V) `; w8 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' }+ E% v0 i( n9 v# c' Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 c$ R1 N/ K% G1 h$ |2 {( D* J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: a6 |  ~; ?+ d+ T, N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# V: m1 ]. D1 [& h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ E( P* u, Y! C+ l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* `" {) Z  I2 V- q  F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 U1 c( R& B1 ]2 h, X' L+ G4 n% Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 x& S( j" G- d8 K2 @9 @- \. _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>