【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 G* Q  u5 J% h" A/ _* n% V' pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% a6 Z5 _  P; q5 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 g" S. m, M# U/ w2 s# e1 U+ aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# L. ^+ t. @& ?6 f. Y1 h, oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# f4 m* K, [/ i: M: {4 ~$ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% U' W) V8 {( B2 b5 @2 M& KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ H8 _7 v; W  g4 b4 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 H/ j, x) R( @; K  a4 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: A4 r, G9 V. E: }+ \I’m still filled with fear
! W: K& d. l5 C5 d9 i! FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# K% ?. O( U9 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' L6 o+ b. t" A" {, b" y  y. sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 G" J" t$ `1 Y' B4 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; R4 `& S8 H- k; A- S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* J# E8 V* I' x) w* J/ i8 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" K1 I2 e. k/ H( P6 ]* r$ @. Q9 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 R6 t9 J( j7 ~( M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" n: Y7 W: y* {# T. s' `# o1 O4 I( G4 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& l( {- ~: I5 z. X5 a$ N6 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' j+ J$ @* u$ V8 ^( F+ x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ w6 Y' g& A9 K2 _+ D/ p' k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) x! O" f1 j* m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 u1 W1 j, f: I' y! V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 [% E1 y$ l" d' e* g+ e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 w* \' Z/ B9 t4 [; M0 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 T0 M0 W  c! ]# }+ r: u$ M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) H$ Z* S, u; z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 u( j- M* ~; @' r# F' f+ ?6 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ _7 _. [- V2 X# e. U0 x" k& O<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 y' K5 t. K+ V4 F1 W" G* A0 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ]2 \* B9 q$ z" |4 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( w9 m* ?. n  p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- y) U; k1 [5 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# m! D. I* ]; y8 D3 u* O  } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" ?/ Y! m# ?% t( b4 @  }* f4 L+ l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>