【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' w6 \5 ]! h7 Q$ A% T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 d; V* f: }  Z* k+ r; S0 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 }3 O4 a2 D! A7 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 y" p$ y1 f& {- f* O) v9 I4 ?& P) LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 O/ w1 f. |4 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: g0 N1 o  f- ]; W4 ~) dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" L! e' z3 ^* j% Z5 l  Z2 Y$ fEvery other word you utter is love
$ O- g' K) k: ]9 `  J$ pI really want to know just how much you love me
; @! n2 [( W1 [" b& tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& m$ I; t9 }0 L" ?% tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 @$ M  L8 J5 S; T- D  |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% ^4 ^7 p# _! [0 e. {With such a tongue as yours,
) W7 o( y& Y8 H7 o7 }0 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* u: H% S4 H3 E! |* ^9 O& ~$ C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ y* T/ _) z7 v% R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& i# s; X' X' y% i+ G- e* k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 u& W2 F! R% u6 X( h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; c& E+ Q3 S5 N+ p# M0 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ j" Q2 g  S+ n1 c1 u+ O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( Z  y4 E- t! X7 M; i, _; y! {; M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* {* }1 E2 @: N# u2 O, v7 e% s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ A! G- r- F2 I1 k5 D& ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# C' K; f7 ]$ n' G, x- E# N6 m, o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" q9 I9 t3 v: |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ f* u9 T) h1 W) T: F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- A* e9 \+ b0 Z& \8 }- o9 W. h: p: P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 a* a2 l  k- D$ w: s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  D% M4 v4 d* V9 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" I/ l" l. T& n2 ?; u( T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# W$ V5 l' s. b- G. d# @  C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! \4 w  g6 d+ k: }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; w* K4 a. g6 G: }! V: N5 Q, U/ l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 D9 I$ @5 Y! }* F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 E; J0 ~5 w6 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 s/ v- {5 i; }" O1 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- F- N9 a* V' I4 D( e' L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 b6 @5 t, n: t( Z4 m% `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. f  ?# a8 ^% Y) a! h% s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 U: N: ^- R/ V) }4 `; ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* x% J+ I+ s8 L. G' i# o: ^$ T5 B& a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. G+ d8 O  {$ ]' N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" T$ E8 E6 _" J3 p我请你剖开它

9 S( ?! K# S% X9 O1 Y+ o# I& q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>