【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 @4 s" v. r. M, J0 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. g6 b; Q) |$ P  \1 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 B6 d+ X' _8 i: R7 N/ RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 t4 d. @$ P3 H  ]* p& DEvery other word you utter is love
( _, P4 S" W0 A6 {I really want to know just how much you love me
- p+ i& A! y5 E; \; @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 t$ n- A/ M* S& K: FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 x5 f6 N" g3 N" R/ EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% S5 Y# F/ f2 Y" ~( V4 aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 M, B  C$ n( p0 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! V7 \, o' e1 D% ~& S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; w: K8 j& k& }6 N- j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 ]. m$ P& d; X+ h5 U4 }. ^/ f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) E9 J1 P6 o; x" k( x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 y; f2 y6 u! L& X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ F/ O; }8 Y, Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& x: @$ p( Q9 H% O' ]! W$ c* n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! \$ B3 Y. a4 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; a) p3 |/ k7 ?* u" o* c/ i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! k+ B% T/ k4 P6 a$ |0 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 i' l) }2 y9 L$ T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ ^! e' V. M% t: d& {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 `8 a, t% E+ B; u4 p  A0 W# x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 W2 u5 j! {$ L  n" n: O" _5 s5 T( m) v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ }2 B1 [2 H5 }" H% @( c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 c$ C0 k3 l# n" r$ K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 f3 W" F- w% ^; o1 w% F0 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. c8 E# \5 S* x# t/ k+ c2 g4 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- ~! I; x; y8 A5 q, ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  B# i( P  t, b: h; g; f9 A' T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& z7 _% j$ c! H! D' i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 K$ z- G( x3 s  `/ @7 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) y* Y" S! n( x; t$ H% f( ^" z: V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 w$ S- w$ V% D5 ?+ M' F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 G! D4 |- f+ w# U  \7 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 _* ?/ T. x2 S* m- n" Z! \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; D, D. {6 [  b% T8 I9 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>