【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 J5 H: S! J+ w( o% l  Y/ qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; {1 J4 i- n& D% K& o+ H$ S4 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# \( U+ J3 \4 s- \1 ^, V7 X# SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 o2 d' x6 c. [- U; F0 E# i# z( wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" \6 W5 J9 F1 I/ P9 \2 r# D6 o3 Q. NSeeing the sky content with its love
% Q9 ^7 g6 d. kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 {$ f3 b9 r9 ~5 L5 o. p' dEvery other word you utter is love
1 b+ ?! u8 M7 w0 i2 \I really want to know just how much you love me
. n/ i0 ^. d9 v4 I% bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 p; D0 w3 `! O* I! Q  o/ IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; o% S& l7 G/ mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 ^  V# ~) X9 k  k# j. q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 g: i8 T* H4 e* U4 _1 _4 L1 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, N# O- V8 a7 m9 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 C: j+ }! e% m6 V4 ?) m! U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 @# s/ I8 M7 I( D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ x+ V& m2 H/ r1 l8 g# k; s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 H4 d9 f$ D; a1 u( R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& v4 ]* V# d& t$ T# d2 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 J" B: E- [* f, v% A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 M7 Q, D0 x3 d4 S+ M- A* a5 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. W8 c1 k& l; a. i" N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 p8 `4 z$ ]7 }* A, R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ _* D9 @3 I* s$ P' B: |/ \: d) \5 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 {0 X; Z8 j" I& y3 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. ^/ X7 F0 Z; f: J  D0 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 E" l" u6 _" m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ c+ E5 F% @  R! W/ {" Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 S7 U$ ]; O0 t, q6 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ?% H% B4 V9 ^/ E7 z" u, D# t" D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& l# i3 H& j( w4 r9 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; Y" W2 A8 S6 o3 C, g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! [5 P; z! B& ^! Q  I4 A. E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 D: ]4 f- Z8 @2 T- }4 r* X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ h/ h2 I5 k4 `( N7 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 H  n/ R1 Q1 J. [- D9 [4 ?7 u" A  L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" w1 y* x& s1 {  d2 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' ]7 u% n* _6 X% v/ j3 O  n0 o( C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* m% o! Z1 ^$ b% i% M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; \( g* w$ M/ S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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