【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( d8 ?5 p: g$ ^% ^# m歌词我附在后面。
" t) h) F* S& |" Q, Y+ f% {9 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" r9 h8 H; t# Y( s+ \. n0 e' CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 x" X/ X7 E# i* x$ PYou needn’t fear anything
+ V( ]9 }% |" I% v; JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# t0 \& D  J- U- Q3 M" A. [$ E2 bEvery other word you utter is love
1 r: r# l5 `4 @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 u$ }, S( G9 t$ ^( C6 s, a* GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 f; N9 T# i+ Q" j  x# WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 N% S) p. ?# A# A( t. h" \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 ]( {$ [' c. T7 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 Y% p: e7 A; vI regret not dying
3 z/ F: k" s$ y3 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" ^  p+ |; T6 C0 kWith such a tongue as yours,
+ U5 Q' C- D2 k+ v( X! XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. S. ?2 [5 v  [! C  i$ RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ ^" o7 V2 W4 L1 T; R5 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ S# R. a6 H! V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! @# I3 L5 a1 t: ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 e9 ?& Z# d( a& Z2 Y# K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 ]# |7 e5 f5 q7 G% h$ N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 G& M0 q1 X# y( R3 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 R: q7 x" x4 T8 P* N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 j* Q- F: e* m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& W7 B1 q% y! i9 {1 k) t$ u<P>你无需担心</P>
$ P1 ~! `( C  k' o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 T7 z9 X* H8 ^4 S% ~+ s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- p: X5 I5 @5 T/ r$ E" _4 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. q/ l8 `0 W9 C# @! v* O" j+ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 f' T# {; W/ b4 j  i( p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 ^5 G2 q2 ]  @, @3 u3 i6 v; Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 K1 b8 E! e. F3 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 \" |1 T4 d7 `. @* ]: f: N% X; b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) I3 y3 P! u+ r9 Z# i# F6 p1 n2 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; G, m2 Q5 I) q' a' \; C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 J$ K4 K8 F" G) a4 @. s6 s9 r1 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( w/ ~1 W3 K6 V9 D5 @2 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, G  ]+ r' j) {5 t" N8 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 H* H7 m0 L- u: f1 P, M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# q' K; k" u" r7 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; |& H; ?* v; A5 u# u% t) l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 u+ H% k( _5 ~0 s3 K+ F! E# a% ^+ ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 x' V% S0 x' k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, _2 k( {( [% x+ S& b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" F6 E2 R2 l2 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 J$ s! ?+ ~# t! G- S: ]* l4 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 U; C( R/ X! g% |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Z# f" d. ]% x. g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ R  |5 J- Z% {% o8 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 y& K) `6 J: U! C5 f我请你剖开它

) X" w* X+ k& o' P* p' R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# Q0 ]8 S  V* `* \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>