【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
- [+ b, U, e, h+ V8 x. ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ r$ k' }( c) MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( V* ]9 U' \2 D$ ~2 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! U; u5 @! z2 ~. mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ m$ d! Q0 b& _You needn’t fear anything
, p' T/ l' D- d6 F9 M6 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 X. R0 u8 k8 x' l" V  h& PI love you I love you with all my heart
  a8 H  x7 |  c4 y5 M4 z  ]. GNothing can compare to my love
) Z2 H$ x; m* z5 c8 h) T4 ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; H- e( i) a3 @( gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. b3 t$ r$ u% yI’m still filled with fear
8 B; E8 I/ `6 p4 c4 o: yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ W8 b- x( Y" j" `1 h, xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 F4 V/ R! A7 n0 n6 a: HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; c1 M, d$ }7 Z( ?1 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) A6 j, w, O2 i0 K1 {$ J$ iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: y# Z: G% u# Z& X( o! X) _$ Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 k: V1 k- i- M0 Q! U/ v  k2 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ w# I9 v  I1 `+ Q& I  T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 _0 y2 H: }, B4 z: k' b' B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' K/ o+ y4 v, D& O6 V5 _( Z1 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ f0 L. V" U9 s4 m+ c+ _/ W& r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; p2 v0 I& G; H- e/ T9 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 f/ X8 r2 m6 U5 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 [: ?9 N0 S" P# V$ w# l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 B. J# u, g  x. j+ p% b4 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, B  s4 y6 g' V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 X# |1 b2 k+ S' |. _7 E$ {3 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' e$ u/ @) ~. S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ [6 L7 c2 A. k$ q$ Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- x! ]* C- l; t) U* F, K# S6 A. \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ u1 c& f9 ?1 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' y% j8 E+ [- n( I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ^% e0 G) b/ j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 U! B4 z' d# g  d0 h  C6 r4 g' a6 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 |3 m5 t/ y5 q9 X& S, `3 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 }( k, s  V3 k# H* R( r9 ]. P7 x9 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; i! W9 {: {% h, @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* Z% e% \# L3 @- ^& r2 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 q4 a" c; H8 Z, x! Y* c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 P6 F! C+ [+ Y" }4 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 k9 i3 r- _+ u$ }+ C5 W* B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; r% O- h0 L6 n7 K4 N6 a/ d. n+ K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>