【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& k; ?5 I4 E  A7 Z5 N7 o4 X' k: P歌词我附在后面。
) u& {& z; G- t0 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& ~7 o! y2 ]9 v' Z7 o4 S" iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 W, f1 R+ O: U4 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: y0 `$ l: G$ UThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 C9 B) v5 h  y, O0 d2 LWith the moon kissing it every night
! m0 U. r2 A0 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 u' k) D; v1 _1 n7 O; d+ YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. i% t* ?9 d: y3 m0 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 m0 D, Q, v, ?* n" o- f- ]: ZI want so much to see inside your heart
1 v4 E& }8 ^4 y9 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 `2 I& l  U; j) z7 g+ eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 X; b$ T& l$ V2 K7 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 {9 E. S! |, u! d7 }. Z5 @! EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 A+ w) r! B! X8 N7 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 d; I/ l5 _- y( M5 s- i8 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 ~% |- o/ S- h9 {% F3 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) |  s% W2 L& z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 h1 }6 F( ~  I- H. }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 a  _# O& l/ b3 `1 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 r9 ?0 g, m3 ?1 ~9 d( t# G: E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, d# i8 q, [4 {8 B& h( O7 b, r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 v9 l1 \% `6 s1 Q! K+ S5 k$ P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ q) |1 z% t7 X: ^  L/ ]0 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% A( t! [' o7 P$ i' L( `1 [# }; J. E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 E0 ]5 O8 r  a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- N1 g( ~6 U: }6 Z, |6 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 H: j. ~+ i; }! v: s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; j+ ^3 _; ]- g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 o+ W6 B# L- s' W2 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 v. [2 n( G0 R8 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ t. P5 q$ n; w; T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. v$ j  _* J. b8 ^4 a5 N+ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 x( P/ m) i/ P# S1 A2 y1 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 h  x* f- c5 q4 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 Y" `6 b5 A, S0 M# `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 ^3 ?  e+ O8 m' E/ h8 v$ B- U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 k$ e4 a% W$ m6 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% p: I2 a& N% V8 D' K  a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' S) [) C) i1 E6 m" ?$ r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 q) G4 _# {3 p3 j/ _" t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 v# P% N! {! I/ y& F6 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ X1 ^: Z* S7 F7 }" {9 F' k$ J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 j* k3 J2 Q' X2 r" [' q# ?8 l+ p; z1 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* E( F) J2 i7 J+ H$ X( v- v! }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. r! I% d$ E, ^- W$ r' p& o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" r) O2 h3 @* w4 Y2 Z7 G2 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 n9 z/ m: [( z( `3 }2 `6 g" J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 Y3 K: s% D* i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) V: e0 A+ `! `; Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>