【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# v. u2 U, o+ M+ V& Y% L+ _5 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ f; D) f! u$ J7 D2 K3 m, TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, h; _3 a  Q3 u$ _% P; DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 q' h; T2 F; |% AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% H% |4 l3 T# h' G0 |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: T7 q+ i; g) {# OYou needn’t fear anything
+ C9 d0 z9 h' L1 }" e/ wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ \/ I! y. t$ Y% U" z3 rEvery other word you utter is love
( O2 ^3 y( a4 Z& p3 n( B4 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; I& v$ J8 B. t) x3 q' J4 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' ^1 Z/ ?6 A$ o0 F; Z* Y6 nI want so much to see inside your heart
6 x8 C+ O0 [- `9 m# m' II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ R/ f5 |' R. J2 E& ?& q: TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! v0 L* e! L" E. J+ X' l' ?' ?7 g( YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 R3 v2 |- e; _$ y; Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 |& r. }+ q( X- X' J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! r3 v" Z! k" A! w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ]2 N: k) m  ]- S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Z6 i  [# f( q7 |5 C* ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" _; `1 b4 |+ M9 p( X% ]( k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% Y2 P9 n2 h: m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 {/ e) n5 S8 s$ v5 e0 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ^2 d& @6 v; h1 c( j* Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% @% b: p/ k6 h6 h2 p) Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; y8 ~7 U: n- S: ~7 c! A& T# \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ v2 {* }( S) }9 a. W5 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ \3 d; K( n5 s3 e; Y8 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 o# r$ l1 \' C' R; _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ w) {( M- X7 }2 n! p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ Z+ m9 }( n# [' J# W& z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" n: s  ~% L9 v. K1 P, g3 z. @5 g6 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ~; w0 b. a1 \$ I3 }9 g3 Y) X0 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& f9 N0 D7 I* ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 k* Y+ O0 h+ q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. U& s' ^) v5 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, L$ z# ^/ d# T; ?; K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# I  W' Z2 t- W5 j2 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, q' G$ A1 D* a1 C- |: z: C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. x3 m" ]' L1 c, u. M6 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- s$ \, i) u* n9 j; z& c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% E) O- z5 J! n0 ?8 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! N( V. I( X8 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 e8 z+ b$ R7 `: u, R) W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& L) x5 d- _* V% E* e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 q4 M; Z* p4 ]% {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) M1 u& A: Q" _& W) R) Z) s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 [) r! T3 p1 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 \; v2 ^% _8 j& F; \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 |+ Y( @3 q( _6 p/ e/ U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>