【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. e' z- Z* v. Q+ oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ~& w$ z8 z# JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ^5 J5 _, {4 A; M6 ~4 K* MThe sky is happy down to its soul
) x! c6 y; A# }/ a( TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" V% A$ x' h8 A. ]2 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 p# u' x3 U% }0 O2 H# W3 m% EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 v( X- ?& T; w# r# j/ vI really want to know just how much you love me
& ~2 X, O: y9 h7 |/ b% X: o2 |I love you I love you with all my heart
8 K7 t. K9 \' l4 o3 y, sNothing can compare to my love
" F- g$ k+ ^$ }( N5 [, wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 z; J% k/ s( j  I% I! nI want so much to see inside your heart
+ o0 h& ~; ~) I* x4 U, i) X# B4 `5 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" }- w) A! Y4 _0 q% F; U/ fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: a; |$ ~/ M- z( JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! K7 i, p* U, f# x- ]& E* E* Q4 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. e* z' [8 C4 f  O& ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 C3 Q7 S; Z4 ~2 R( U( |6 ~, A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 y0 k" Z5 G4 Z, X: C9 V7 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; d$ A# t! M( P5 ?: A# J# X, D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# _% u- t' n6 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 Y; X/ b8 p3 \) F- F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* ^/ B6 c' k" ^: o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 h4 Q& g. @( c" F( N/ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 Q6 d% J# P3 ?5 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; r& B8 d1 z- @/ E; B' a; U% f$ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' v7 Y7 `8 i5 E" E. c0 |! T<P>你无需担心</P>
, }, f0 N: g. r# s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 x, l, `" U; U( m/ o6 z+ e; E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' U5 {3 ]" S3 O2 U. T; I1 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* N3 R3 `& v3 A8 X% Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 c! F! J, R! f$ U% {! L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" C! N/ S1 l7 R7 A1 {, M0 L+ h( w( D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# q3 f+ g) r/ w" N1 s/ {5 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 S/ [& ~# x, {2 q1 V$ {* G% W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ P& V0 X* O: O; u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  r1 [  I0 p" a" A' G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  d+ \6 x; M+ f$ b2 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) f* D7 ?# O) \- `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 A/ J* ~0 c' C: A$ z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' G8 |9 x3 B! z6 D4 g2 ^# v0 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' z0 @5 k& F9 l& J9 W) ~, ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ H9 P! i" C+ H. S8 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Y  k4 Z: }% @- @- I  I7 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( T7 o# j7 Q1 L8 q6 m# v/ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# E- r) }1 J2 ~. i4 e; k6 Q我请你剖开它

- S3 ?3 M$ e$ @, G# L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>