【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" d8 H7 v: g5 ~  _; \; E' rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' }# h5 a0 r& t5 b. K4 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( o, V  {* Y5 A: jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% K3 V2 q* Z" Y1 q8 h- RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 c1 S) ]6 o; M$ f6 e4 o) D! ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. n' U  q8 E! O* TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ [2 n- S# N) q  ~) L: INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 x% G2 l. t# w$ n! gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: J& C/ [% c- @) W- ]6 Q6 h4 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 d" y7 v, R' J3 k$ lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ?2 |* L* R1 e' z# ?0 MWith such a tongue as yours,
5 i7 J# h0 V% U8 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  Y* g+ r& F# g- Q0 Z3 M. YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# V2 k. ]* Q( y# O+ ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 }; i' k' A" J3 a9 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% p7 w6 d7 s$ [4 ^: Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. o& u) Z) {6 Z1 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. B  i( W# ~2 r# B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" i/ x6 Q3 `' ~8 h6 q4 D# _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ~+ n( U0 g( `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; E( W$ f7 d: X$ w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 a2 z" `# M  E1 f% [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# @& _1 W* g) a, g6 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ r( K" S4 [! j9 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- D8 @+ b* N+ N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( G% S6 c/ v( d/ D5 X5 L8 Y& Y1 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: P# L% e: \! u8 m9 J$ S+ p/ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  N& y2 u0 X9 u9 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' D/ h( F1 J1 j4 q, B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: J+ s6 W9 h/ g1 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* j5 L# l7 G& e' H# S; v% e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! V- {( j2 n, \8 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" N. c: c& C1 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ D  P8 N2 k5 t5 ]% i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 J5 m' z, i$ C) j3 g" O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; F. _1 l( F# O& c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" F6 O3 O. G: I6 `+ N) R& w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 a9 [4 Q" [4 ^- j% b4 r+ G6 Y$ L9 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 K1 G+ E. \* ~  v; Y4 g0 y9 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ t0 C* c% D9 U4 J# r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ k0 A1 p  Q% Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# k' B* ]1 \, e9 {, L6 j* t! a" i6 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ~, F2 ~, ?8 G/ O/ g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 ~$ p& S- v$ `( R! M5 X& h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. c2 g$ V; R) p* p. o4 E* n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. _1 g* N8 j" P! M5 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* f* ]! g! @. A" j  L$ M- U1 p我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 w& I& i' H, ~( A- C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>