【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! |- I3 T5 j0 l2 Y3 E- w- Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 o5 y+ H7 @) E) \( t$ y  K: ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( G# H2 `3 }# M7 j" i6 t' GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 j6 M6 G* Y: c1 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 S, _- A% s0 V# K# f: hYou needn’t fear anything
# }, L+ u; f. J  eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 d. X0 H1 P, c$ XEvery other word you utter is love
  x% k" c3 R! X. u# RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- D' o7 W3 F+ X/ _Nothing can compare to my love
: w5 y8 F& }+ y% P" s; bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 y, i( N2 E* b0 w; A. J& R$ h2 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 s2 i  ~9 }! b7 K2 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, B+ _% m, N$ W% oI regret not dying
% p7 ~. G2 u4 K3 [( lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 D2 I9 V/ A. ?# VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* [6 k# y7 Q0 \1 `" ~/ bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' B0 e" H$ x' O6 O% D( c* \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, L9 y% V# t6 P& d8 o8 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 W: S! ?. h: r% e  T; v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 h9 W5 _0 a* ^  N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ @* I9 n# W. r, \9 s% c, S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ i- ~5 i* e- z4 E& h/ H. n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& v: X9 W. r( }2 U* Y8 ?8 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- u* o1 j- _, j0 ^2 g, O+ C/ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& {* P7 y+ H8 }6 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# p0 b4 y) y8 L8 P1 ?# e; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ?3 ]& K3 S+ o7 W8 \( k; H; j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' n' \* H8 F! t9 _9 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" }. r7 k" X5 q: Y; F3 n  K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 d1 D6 ^# M" A  V* B! c1 q# j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ q, L4 P9 `( v: L* M* P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 _+ j# `  ^( Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 I( d0 K. Z9 m! Q. L2 I0 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 \. O: c6 g2 t+ O9 u9 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 L# V1 W; x) r  |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 Q2 y8 j3 ~0 m. {$ x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 u7 y' S4 d" |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 c' x  i; Z, m, A4 Z3 V5 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 s* Q$ C+ T! w7 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, s+ {4 S7 r0 P+ C3 t3 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! B+ ?+ ?# m. D# [( w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ?* J* @3 Z/ w2 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 i" o3 p7 x7 U" a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! }0 U$ }% U9 R2 j" x- h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>