【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' |5 ^" Q! c8 \) ~4 z3 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 l/ E% f1 s  E6 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 F5 D5 ?+ d9 b* U& {1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ~# K2 i. E/ n0 I. h" MYou needn’t fear anything
' z+ S2 R+ N, x- I8 R0 nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ?: n; k$ Z1 c7 h* z! P7 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! |3 E6 p; w! F- g3 B" X) T; b- kI love you I love you with all my heart
' L2 o7 `6 l( u. qNothing can compare to my love
; B( h9 M4 w' G5 D0 a" iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 s/ @5 k+ {5 n9 B' b9 k. J5 UI want so much to see inside your heart
, e# W2 @, X0 g2 |' S. ^% O, tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& l2 c1 v' K' e' x- T! k4 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 m+ C) \5 _( c8 N2 a0 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% s! T: C, [* o9 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 f* p7 W% l' i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 y% F0 P/ Q  m. h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% [. I/ |/ _2 b: Q% a, F; ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 A8 ?8 E% J/ }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ _% D% b" ]% n' f% X2 [9 N' A* Z* B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' z9 h9 ?8 i: X; y& e+ b3 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; b5 i5 r4 g, ?: _$ c. c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' [& J! M! h5 R' Y7 H3 ~7 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: O) \+ u; C7 t& _8 J& ]" G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ O+ P4 n( w: i/ M5 M" W2 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 N* x1 p9 v+ _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 S) p# `% _! {# [7 h1 M1 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* _9 _0 w& Z- }, X* [% @0 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ v' u0 }( H0 _: \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" I8 }* O5 N! }. G7 @% y8 L- ?+ r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* W9 h( W! K9 B4 u  {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 h3 e" W  y. ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( g. E3 x; F. n6 [' p( C7 f' W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# U( b3 I3 C# ?5 z: B, p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Z0 K4 w$ n$ k; B* w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ w% A- }% H% c& A% x. h( G* x: N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) r) j" y, q* x' d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 g3 }( K/ G5 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 b, j( S8 f" n+ V1 \0 @0 T3 S! z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: x7 S1 i" L' f5 ~* [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 s# z$ \: m3 x1 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ P& I/ D. t) f  X, i9 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: }; F/ v0 g, |- q- u  n1 A2 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 Q, r7 B; h8 A- d' t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  {5 m: t- A# b6 T! j5 d0 X( z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 O: i$ S: h3 B+ a7 A* z& P2 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 X( L/ o8 i, u$ s. W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ J! }1 m7 a# C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>