【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" a) [. i! ~! a) c, f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& F3 |1 r0 l3 \; Q3 e) H* tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 c  H: ?) s! A2 A0 @5 p+ P. IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 d  ~2 i3 E% d4 Z* V( y: q9 g6 ?9 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 _8 H3 z* a+ y! _! xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ ?$ \% s6 j( M+ ~4 a* f, RYou needn’t fear anything
7 ?( `/ r* M# ]* |0 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( U9 t5 r* _8 @0 l! [* PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  k+ ~& q% K; j! f# S1 G  iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! Q$ ~# L( D: ^* `1 G3 W/ FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' w& Q2 k8 g" W& A6 t& [+ pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( g; v* m9 T: c& W/ f7 s8 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: f- P' \" G7 ?; O1 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 {/ R+ I& u, ^) M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 a& q( V* s/ \$ }" e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 Z6 D' D% _* ?$ l) N7 [0 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 X# G4 E" |. s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% V6 J) h+ a, O2 d* P8 T8 E+ b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* p- E& P& a0 Z% K- H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  K  O4 X* S9 n7 H) S6 k" y: G<P>你无需担心</P>
% [: ~  X/ I- U  k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& V  I% `+ ]  P, d" \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 g* n# {4 O+ s/ P- T6 {6 f+ v+ o, Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! J* U7 H' f- D7 }) i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 P* m" \. k8 S* t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 ~7 h" U& I! W" P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 ~/ Z' ^+ ~3 x% L, p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 Q+ V0 s  x9 S+ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' b1 ^+ p6 x6 r6 |* [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ M7 p6 g& a  l: z7 t; u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 p% [# J* k4 f- Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' g+ l- ]! a' g5 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 r1 J1 y4 L1 s: i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 q2 U7 t% g3 E/ `* p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 r- g: D- n7 k% I* s- c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 [$ v; y3 i, e* d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 _1 t* f5 d: Y3 T% n& u7 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" `5 z# {3 N$ \$ M7 I- \3 G% c) F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* O# ]$ H. S& V) q' @  m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>