【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; i; M+ A  Y) I; h: XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 i  K: h  j* mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# I0 K2 |2 r, ~" T0 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 |8 a' T' \2 X: _& NSeeing the sky content with its love
1 [* z# A4 K5 s. Y" AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 [9 ~( }7 f7 d4 E1 ^2 B+ H8 eEvery other word you utter is love
* W. _3 }0 _6 R% \+ vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( H! U! u; n1 Q% }4 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ?0 R! \! Z3 H0 Q, v+ XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; {+ O* n- B4 V% v' fI want so much to see inside your heart
+ _6 ^1 u( `- D7 N" yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 \$ |9 ?( o. n/ y% oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ O4 a% v) G& X4 E5 V- z: n7 i5 eI regret not dying
: ~. E/ R3 z9 t7 e$ G* ~, j3 T# m# HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 d/ Q0 R  N4 l% N) |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( y3 U& h. X# T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& f  j1 F5 t1 _6 T% A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 A' O/ @0 [" q( F' J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 E3 f/ N! d9 g, [/ D* M$ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. w5 C2 k0 ~# Z5 u' E; j! ~) {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& R/ \' t; b$ _0 J( Y1 S/ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 i3 v" T4 n8 \. J% K+ V( S" j+ h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ^; o3 x. i7 a4 H3 V+ l5 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ x. T2 t  s# Q$ Q" v0 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 J5 Q. \( Q  v: ]# q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 r) a4 X; o8 E: u+ b5 A) @# p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 r- S" P' P0 W- m# }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% m) K% w1 D) g: v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: I$ d# w- {& E( F9 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# D) I# o: [! k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 M1 `. _* \+ F* _0 t7 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" E6 V  h3 H3 N2 {' A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- `# b2 f% Z+ S4 [, D2 Y: H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ N6 Q8 P5 v4 p1 O8 D/ s) c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ r2 v  t. u  C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' _( ?( \7 {8 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 z1 v$ Z$ p% M- @3 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* d$ X4 [: N0 l2 v5 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ Q/ F. m6 x9 w+ Z& W- Q" B* {8 _9 w" v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: Q' V0 @$ m: V+ t) l% B/ w' w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>