【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 c# p9 R: k: x& H+ \The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 N. y, l! E6 ]6 H: g9 e1 J+ }9 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 v  u; Q) F6 L9 g; _5 v2 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ l9 b( v% y3 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 _3 ~/ B+ \- Q* c# SWith the moon kissing it every night
6 J1 x) O; I5 w6 X% L5 M/ z5 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: B9 Z7 ^; O5 N' Q1 O3 E; X/ |You needn’t fear anything
5 I% @/ g% W" V) u4 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" r! P- w. r) j* CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ]( A# \$ K8 F! {( Q6 d% XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 G+ M$ v! ]4 T& z6 x$ _I’m still filled with fear
/ Z4 x+ F8 b2 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' r+ }0 z- q0 v, H3 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 ^5 b7 e  ~8 p/ M; A, {( Z+ bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 Y* a  Q* Q# w7 @! X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& |0 a0 U" D4 o9 e1 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* m3 T% Y5 B/ x% V, E" f, D* v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- l3 H9 i" ?) J  _& i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 |9 @$ ?- Z! \# a8 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  n7 O1 _" D3 m: h% O; T2 i  q8 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, }' q2 o" ^9 e! E3 `2 W5 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: r) b' }) t* X( I$ Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# }0 @. X/ v2 C9 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" [: v/ \1 P- t5 ]' D( j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 K" M9 V) v# l' C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& ?! W/ J+ M5 I" c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ^9 @' \' A( b7 J. d8 i1 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ N$ T: C/ S$ T# P& m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 o2 E: ~+ O5 N+ y6 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, L& n% y) s# W1 p- Y# B& W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 [) W) X1 F+ n4 M7 u" i, r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) [, z$ L' X1 P9 J# U# \8 r. E7 k  ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! L; i4 C6 T. \  g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# j7 ]: H8 y0 Q5 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  b) ^( t/ Q; \$ i. w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, N6 C% {! F6 F1 l1 K$ _0 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' D- J# s  s! ]1 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, V% L1 g$ J" h7 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 l7 w( ^6 F6 K8 j5 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- {8 U- V5 {5 t; W3 i! ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% I: J- `  Z- c5 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* c% a: _- ^; ]1 X  }$ u* `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 f5 u5 |! A% V7 N" _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- F. x+ l3 `. u0 F- W- ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>