【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! j7 w# s$ Z  y  E: V+ L+ O3 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! V$ u, e( m" ~! `0 h3 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- K8 D7 O% Z+ g/ [4 v; UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: H  }. u7 g2 K" KYou needn’t fear anything
; m% k) ^3 y+ E* ^( o, a4 U7 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) g7 u+ L8 A5 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 W  j( |4 \$ r8 O3 w* _I want so much to see inside your heart
5 {6 l* W6 ~- \' Q! K: [* K/ Z$ II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 K: X0 @. z- ?+ ^9 XI’m still filled with fear
( F. L' j5 a0 U5 z3 h. uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 t0 z$ }# _' R- R- f, f) N+ O7 II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 R3 B  C' m. k, u2 T7 UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# [/ W7 {9 z. o7 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, a7 z5 D" f  V! C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( h) e# S8 E% q# ]* p# j6 G0 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 e  m0 e+ u+ ?7 p& ]; ]; ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. N8 s4 d; Z7 @& [( j& T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. J! w* V6 K. ]! A( A1 z* I6 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ O: u/ \4 g2 |& Z- `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 U1 L, o% V1 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& G, a% D0 T' i7 _' r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ U3 }* b' _. N, B- h1 ]. t+ w+ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( V7 h/ Z2 Z$ p; f0 v1 \<P>你无需担心</P>
; \& O7 R' z; o( H8 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' @/ E5 z! B/ _. y) i% `7 E& h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& i; u4 h% [! A5 }2 l0 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 T% g1 {+ e& u, Z) x) q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, K* N% p  B3 b, r/ D5 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 u$ f* S, w, x7 v$ C5 I& h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 i* V6 M2 c& ]. b1 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  o. ^% ?1 w% M( o3 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# F# r$ d4 ]2 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* ?+ Z- j& v; I. o1 h; K) x/ W3 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 X6 E# a2 f1 V: v  ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( \, V5 y4 h# ~# c- m, n/ d# z& n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ i, [+ w+ C7 y: D2 ~6 c8 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 h& X! U1 _7 y' G. q- x0 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) g2 f4 R9 _2 V! W6 R: g- d0 C+ v4 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
* P% j$ k# X; k- g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) z3 J2 L8 Q! P. j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, }( V0 Z1 g) v& _& c2 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" {  L6 g  [; {  u# v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( Y3 K5 c6 v! X3 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: q! p* m2 v9 p$ L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ u" R/ g% Y8 k$ v; v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ z; i+ k' P! N; m1 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- X$ M: V) c. @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ^) q: D% Y; j: `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>