【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 \+ x1 j! i5 l  q8 k4 N; X: N歌词我附在后面。
  I$ r  K7 H. Y. O' a% d/ m0 m- xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: E( t; p) p! Y) {The sky is happy down to its soul
! j" w9 H0 A0 B1 ~7 WWith the moon kissing it every night
4 @$ H* T7 ~  ]1 f# `* E% VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& F9 i" N% h0 `7 D" |8 PEvery other word you utter is love
7 b! K2 A) o6 J" c% S5 n2 iI really want to know just how much you love me
# k0 E* m9 _* A# L7 h- ?& ]I love you I love you with all my heart
( @; _6 ^5 M) Y8 N# S7 r# i9 VNothing can compare to my love
% R9 m( z+ h+ P0 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( V, l2 ]0 d4 j4 ]3 J2 M: nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 o% f. `$ g& o. @1 H% y" m* ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ T+ R, P- k1 |* H0 U; a! R+ O* |) EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 l+ M: L$ j( s9 g( r0 H( g& aI regret not dying
& `' R& t. K, H7 T) ?! WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  `) K7 [4 f" M9 T- O. M' ~9 EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( C4 b* L0 L3 O; X4 F: D# XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 G% ^& [$ a" L* F: B5 Q0 x( r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! B4 {0 {: e" W- v& n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ]0 m- A" S" w$ ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 U& U( ]. X% p1 x% {  q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) x; C4 o/ E9 }  h( e# T7 y3 H3 x" X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 o* q' ~5 Z9 K' h2 h' i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) o/ b! K" O  c6 W0 W+ U8 ~0 X2 d3 C* Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' f2 g, Q6 q9 r# g/ {, d1 H$ [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 P& A" W8 A% v: e  m9 q0 g1 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 h( i' ?+ M: i4 i# A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* d% @+ Y: x" J/ g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* x' @" R3 a; Z0 B4 t( i0 @$ F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 Y7 N+ m0 H0 B! e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* Q% v5 v' S: B& _- M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 V( \8 D# k" u( w, M+ a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ H( o- N, i0 C5 b* L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" B2 @! k3 n8 c, S  }0 o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 f* H/ T8 q/ U/ U' S" O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: {- V0 [; g( \0 }% B8 |9 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, A+ f' g6 ?/ ]7 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 g% \) v: n  g. I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 W2 @' J& h& x7 n$ Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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) m/ I! `: T" x9 p/ I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>