【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 c" E  D$ G- Y$ D6 g2 C7 L! `歌词我附在后面。
, K; z. E6 e& U' D' k/ r0 H' bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& [) P6 F1 b6 i0 a6 x6 h: ]% NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% t) s/ T- l! Q7 [& Z+ F7 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ r4 ~- A, i8 [0 u% gWith the moon kissing it every night
9 Q* R6 Y6 M* x" |  t. {" s0 @Seeing the sky content with its love
6 m5 ]: y+ ]4 i: z  _$ F; B' iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 C3 {, ~5 _$ }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. m$ j8 ?, z2 E1 ^  eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 S. E+ G0 `2 V  L" o% cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, I% _: w9 d, |1 U" TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* U) K! M3 Z% U. _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 P% ^6 E5 Z# [6 S! y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% u6 W5 }% y9 q/ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 z6 |1 \; N. c; n6 G' J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ G* c2 Z6 t6 T- u* {% K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ K& \6 h$ c3 {' {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% \8 |3 Y" q- q8 \6 l; w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- l% l& i! Z/ [9 i. |. k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; J/ ?3 p" ^7 ?3 r& U, v/ @: V# f" R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 L, z+ `- m; s0 C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 O/ f2 }! i9 M2 _  y; r6 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 B6 I2 Q) X/ w0 F! h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) j, r! q, d8 v" X8 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' @2 [# Z4 F8 A  y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 }# `) l0 W3 @7 `: ~! r2 T: U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! z% E- h3 w9 W; L' `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 O3 c+ {; A0 B" |$ o# b. u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) ~9 E) }$ U& s- z: |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 l4 \9 u8 V3 W9 v0 J7 e' S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, ~( w+ }4 i3 J7 S3 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# |" _& m! G! w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# {5 @4 ~+ j. `4 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, c: j( Z* |4 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  J, L# `/ S- r- k& E& ^我请你剖开它

& v+ y2 \8 _+ x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>