【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ U) x% g4 S# e1 b5 D8 l* L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; n  a0 b6 M2 Y4 `) BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) O0 k/ v* I' zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! c2 A  s% O' |3 B' }3 h& [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 T# {8 E* a. A* e. VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 ^" J/ v3 r" U6 H5 D6 {# V$ qSeeing the sky content with its love
( \8 n; Y: T$ }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 _, ~- f5 T2 G( v  aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 A/ J( S, z4 xEvery other word you utter is love
( [0 |; s4 n: d, _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. {" k2 _  o8 i8 O4 TI’m still filled with fear
1 n4 S, k; ?" R  F* zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 D0 e$ y' M' B( t9 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ A0 D2 [2 F5 {3 a$ SWith such a tongue as yours,
2 U3 W, C" X" |( y" kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) D, s7 ]* L( x$ s- ]9 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! z) z& S8 v, _; U2 z  l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 k0 h. J) i  i9 b! {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 }1 |1 D) P3 V& i1 h& w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- V2 O, B' {/ R) B. u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" d, k1 R1 s# Y- e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 f% r7 k1 C4 j/ e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 @* A* E$ ?7 s; g6 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Q5 z" e+ P3 H$ ^, g' t2 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 q- k; J1 _+ B+ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: @, X  q# g9 n) _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 d& H9 H( z& P, w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& j: V' N+ ^3 q0 j1 L$ G4 K" G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, H% m4 t: G4 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) _% @8 T8 X7 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 t) X7 W$ W3 `/ ^' h9 h0 W( `3 |$ t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 l) f$ C2 J1 S3 I: n" f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, r  H1 w# I& B4 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ]$ j* K2 F$ ?1 a2 Q. D, R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( Q: i$ j2 ^& o8 h+ `% S2 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! ~' j- @1 A3 q$ U- S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 X- j/ V$ s2 d1 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ?4 N! {1 f: G$ Y5 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 S- d2 }" F5 P# a/ Y  J# C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 Q; }4 [' x( Q3 z3 y7 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 i3 {% g- b# N7 \; g, Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 D% V& v6 f6 V- _/ Y( Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: O  C$ t8 K4 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* r( l/ o$ ]+ ?2 ]* w. x9 n5 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 I& H. ~7 V) N( C+ I2 g0 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

  I! Z* E1 m& Q( i" _6 {5 g+ b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  o- T  g) Z, z6 j) ?( e' q* s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>