【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 W6 ?. r6 P$ \5 u9 v0 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) f, J) J' `' Z, ?/ vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" _0 C" n& x, KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; n% G( C' d$ ?( c2 JWith the moon kissing it every night
% K# K' ^  ?7 c5 O6 vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 _9 _8 [+ Y' K, vYou needn’t fear anything
; v# C" s6 e! i) N' Z9 A6 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! z  u# U% S$ d' c9 A8 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, \$ Z% K) F* d' O  HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" X- y1 h! C" L/ i0 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 Q, {: O' M6 ?+ ^( T, Y/ \/ E& q  XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 `& j/ z+ x; v& W1 [" [I regret not dying
9 Q9 ?+ U3 O+ ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 K. f! |2 F& i0 R% K8 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& J. j6 R1 x! I9 h4 {7 W- O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ {" X1 W+ f8 m" B8 T% i" ?% m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- `2 z0 V; S. @0 @5 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 H5 |3 H) J1 K  X" d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. D# U4 J+ e; V, P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 c' x6 a. y$ ^2 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ j0 E" T) O4 o* I6 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, \8 \( J4 h# s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 J. N) f% y! |1 {) x. [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 q) g6 T1 e  {* M6 F( o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Y1 ?4 D6 g& g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) @6 r/ P3 q: m! Q) ]+ f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 P, X' t7 z2 d, e% c% ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. Y' h+ ~; k* k7 t) g) ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& n/ c- g. I6 ?+ ~" ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* H0 j9 t" E! i* I. D" }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# d& l1 s  n, R6 D" o4 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& y' k" a9 T& @4 g2 o- _, Z/ E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 T7 r/ A4 y, {9 y9 a9 A# a) o' C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. q9 d$ l8 B/ R+ \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" o- n+ T$ p# J$ H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! b+ r& S& ]% O+ ^; K9 J( F: W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 H, W8 N9 P8 l0 _; z# A6 J" y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 o7 f- \( X: W% j0 `+ o3 o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 I8 W, {) O$ e7 t* Y* H2 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>