【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ D7 ]& X* s! B% h' D$ vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; e5 ^; W! g2 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ c" ^3 ^( V- OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 D/ A! E# M7 ?( z4 UYou needn’t fear anything
/ M4 `0 c: v( }( W. P1 T. g( ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, m7 ?& }* q9 D& ~0 ?, RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 C4 O/ r) M# f* `1 b8 m% XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ^/ A- [; H" _7 X: j2 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, [* Z) x' Z3 N% P6 q4 MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 d7 p) g9 n1 f( p( y2 `  oWith such a tongue as yours,
& L  A6 x/ i3 V; C$ ~% ?- q+ ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# T0 d( P9 ?; aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ U6 _$ b, t/ d: ^" Z: t5 X' c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 Q0 H% @7 E  J4 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ H7 X$ M3 Y& D: \' u( C6 o: V* S6 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) M8 L+ h% D$ e) v, `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 M1 ^2 D& V- c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 w' i' k' a; M! F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: B* q+ C9 D9 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ v) K' M' j5 W" O  [) s3 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* P- l0 D" z. J4 m8 t7 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% R) }3 H# [7 t6 R8 C7 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 A' |( t2 u7 G% H1 D7 E" F# K! W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% K8 J) A0 \* X6 ]6 O9 V6 y8 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 y; R0 Z& Q* ~7 S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 A6 m0 l* l! ^" W% t: l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- |8 F4 s) J! `( {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, N9 G0 B3 {1 e) e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: l: ^7 o2 H7 m1 G( I0 U; L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 f7 {' v' t  t# ]2 Z- L/ ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 C* ^" c: b" F) i7 H; O0 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! P+ q) G8 y+ K8 k8 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% t  C/ ]+ O8 B5 Q; ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 ^3 Z2 i9 q, ]2 u6 C. ]3 j  ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ O* N5 R  o  x, X4 s# O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( c0 ^) G" e9 h1 t( S% G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( O- G1 D2 ]( W( v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: y" c. X! S8 w: Y+ W! i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* X- n: A+ `+ X/ ?( t- u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, t; T! |' `& ?& ^4 {( |+ a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ K" u  e- J; @4 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* j5 T, i; w) Z8 U& ?" X3 {% k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 i: [; b' k- d. Y8 u6 B' W/ u- s6 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" n1 A. K0 N# o- s( e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' q1 Z4 N# O6 h- q8 }" Q: D% ~: S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>