【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; E/ T  s" }7 j9 N6 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  w  w! V9 c; ]1 s9 n" q1 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 f' f5 X& k! YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- S9 u' Z! t! {* X6 w: pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; N1 Z( ^0 i! [( m8 k  w( i* qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. c7 H3 e1 e" J5 w/ {% I2 J3 ^Every other word you utter is love
1 ?; o) V$ _$ P/ I- w: f4 x) bI really want to know just how much you love me
6 m8 ]9 b, y1 j& k/ VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ Y$ p. }0 u0 B9 u' i: l: gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! P4 [% G* E4 j( x6 W" e7 ~) RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 C7 x0 G3 _3 {2 D* U% q& I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; M, X+ V' v2 P9 q* n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) t( C  O, d& I6 t) G- `8 @2 Y& D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. m- M' i& I/ c) A3 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- j1 N6 f5 w# F: n9 N; t7 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& K0 `4 S9 L. G! d, l, g5 F- G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ |, u( k0 t: a& `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% Y: n1 U9 W* O6 Y3 A1 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! L; |0 U  V- O1 _  A, n7 p4 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* O1 Z% O# N& Q; [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ~' |- W* B1 N" {4 o. B% `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 U4 ~- P$ T8 O- w  O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 J' q/ U% d* w. Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 _& V) I& D) O: l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 K1 y9 m) L. `$ q2 Z) e: ]* d9 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# u8 C/ E2 ~8 W8 k: o1 Q' g* E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ B* @9 {9 a8 T% o4 p/ s+ E: s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( p# E% R5 S$ m6 H6 ^4 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ M+ P4 M( L* j6 V9 B( x. m" Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ n8 p5 w: F* W6 _9 M% C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 W4 r' B0 G! n- l1 p6 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. I/ y* u5 r9 n( f9 {  x& w5 E. H) X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 N# Y/ `* I# P1 ?) ?. r- a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ^( b' G" K1 l/ E4 r9 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& [% h  B% R. H" Q3 p' m6 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 M: k: ?4 b  x/ x<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ l0 W1 c  I/ ^1 y) o. }9 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 V7 V4 J4 t/ L% X7 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 ]4 P/ U7 w: g% o8 z$ s7 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& u, f5 k2 y) H3 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 f8 t: {* h# {2 y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" J  G+ P0 ?9 ^- e1 Q' G2 P, p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% ^$ h6 Y/ x; U. W) u# d. \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 R9 F' L6 F# ^. j- d; C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ X+ i' h% o; e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 I2 I5 B9 r6 ^, F+ }) W$ v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>