【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* Q/ b; g" T: W5 T/ p: G* t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* q  E/ ]" x! Q- AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; c% W: R2 E3 E6 H* K$ u2 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 B$ a/ M. |- p. ]- ~- l4 ]" F8 @The sky is happy down to its soul
6 Q. Y+ v  `0 @9 [6 u+ t; ZWith the moon kissing it every night
4 n$ j9 |$ ^6 e1 n1 W7 G( TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 f: M0 D  r$ w4 B& |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& Y& v; _7 @/ l! yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- P1 Z5 h6 N6 k7 V; UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; w2 t7 F% ?9 X$ KWith such a tongue as yours,
/ J3 Q/ c4 A0 w  a# p0 Y* lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 K( e$ Y% N5 O" ]1 a% i( vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 p5 h% \2 ^7 \( {& b6 L/ h/ d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 u& u  b* [/ o! `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 @5 l$ g8 M" P1 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) y6 ~; [- u; {5 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ L$ r; X$ o& U1 {; R' m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 e4 |! `+ Q, t) l/ w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) W8 V1 h* v, c* R0 w. Z1 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 \9 @2 E" u# ~/ K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: u# `& _# }# @8 q6 F2 `- l: H! G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! d7 ~' j7 H0 I' O0 [! y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 ^+ S/ d: |- I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 c) Q/ ]; o2 ]' j; G; k$ M5 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; @$ U' x0 h8 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ R. [! c7 W$ }4 r; ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' j4 e; N/ o# o; _, z8 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 [, \( P8 [2 q( e( T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 F0 l7 I( m* v+ e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 K! ^) Z1 _! ~7 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( J  y6 X& N( N9 Q7 T6 _% w8 P1 y0 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% U. }2 g9 c; A; y0 u" T/ P7 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; Z' V- T$ F7 w- S( i  G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 O: R, g2 D* [6 `' F& w<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 p* J3 L" `- G* H/ R1 g# x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 ]" s+ x7 O/ `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: r; V. t4 L$ t& h7 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  a- L* w5 e8 h7 {9 O, V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 D0 {$ U6 ~- p! @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( o! \' O( {( o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ T0 F* s, W9 C) a% O' ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 d( [* \+ O4 R/ Y0 [8 y. B: G+ M我请你剖开它

& o+ z- Q- Z+ K9 `* l# P4 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# }) F# V& q0 y# g5 H% {& S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>