【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 r4 l0 Y0 J4 E! F8 N& tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ w3 E& \0 i5 M$ kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 o  _9 \+ E. d7 i2 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ]! S4 i5 a: w" p. \: s% @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) {# O( s+ @/ Y% ?% c* x) CNothing can compare to my love
: o! L& f: g. a, eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; t; m3 d; t8 c# e, ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 T2 y) G( O9 m) u: d2 f" m) RI want so much to see inside your heart
! o2 D2 i% U# x3 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: Q9 Q: W1 C- f& e) PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" ?& U% R8 `/ h8 T! z/ A) p% J4 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 z* ]% F3 [+ q7 x9 j9 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 O" |( {9 R) q7 M! G4 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, m# v/ S3 c% h. q0 s. s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 @( H0 p6 ?5 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ V) @7 }6 _6 x7 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% P) G4 A4 y. I2 R, |0 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" c7 h4 m" H8 h$ J  q$ r2 {- K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 c# e* K3 @1 Z+ ?0 k8 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# l0 a$ l, y; N6 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 W7 F2 ?1 d; N, D: y0 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 I) t) A8 Y* L* L: [3 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' K; p& l9 l2 h/ T/ Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* p8 E9 f2 @3 x1 a' m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* h9 J: {+ V, v% A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ k) [( B1 Q9 ]6 R  L' y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 g- l1 R4 ]$ m$ R- P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: g2 d1 b5 f6 Y0 }; s7 R9 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! F! q- G0 T3 N! }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ Y( T* r( K, M2 b: a. A1 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& V2 T7 a2 Y/ H" z& ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, X5 i1 b. k/ {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 u+ X: X7 }4 Q+ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 H) i, e2 i; u7 g, `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# `3 h) e; Z. k8 k3 p: j' C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 W1 p/ L, i  W3 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  G/ M1 p& J& i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& H3 @& d- I- P" {% n4 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ o: [8 s' G- ^! c* j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" u. }6 o' _1 D8 @) H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Q+ a0 f$ c2 E+ T* r: ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 r5 w. q2 j$ V' ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" ]9 {' D6 I& O5 M- \2 D! N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 H* h0 w* t& ]" o$ s$ J1 J" l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>