【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! G  f7 ~: t5 K$ Q, _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% L; r# u' D1 G" NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- N7 V  \# L& s. V3 a) Z& N5 {/ UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ _8 T1 V2 r  d( CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( U- S, y1 p4 h9 g/ `2 k. SYou needn’t fear anything
& O# T& q3 I; S- G- A* _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ l0 W; ^: A5 K+ {, dI really want to know just how much you love me
6 _- A# ?& ^* L/ G! i9 d% HI love you I love you with all my heart
0 V. @3 g% I. R# ^+ TNothing can compare to my love
" e6 L% i9 L! o" T  s: iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ T$ t) G0 \2 A5 X2 N& eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ~/ c+ k* w' |  N6 ~- TI’m still filled with fear
) y" b$ n' l/ J% sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  c+ p3 [( h. Y) }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 J% G2 e$ A8 ?$ vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' \+ k+ k5 C0 u5 A& W2 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# m+ V1 R* R1 i5 a3 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- ^6 t5 L4 |  N5 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 c& i6 ?0 F' S3 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 m; z- x0 Y3 F- f& r( Y0 K0 @7 N6 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) }4 Q3 _, Q. `, a: G7 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( Q' h3 H! w: A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. C1 ?$ X  ]% g! r" M6 ]3 @<P>你无需担心</P>
+ u" Q$ N# ?* ^, }& p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% J  z- Z* U& b: v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# P0 U7 a; M, q1 y. S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# l$ Q& S. x6 t6 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( ^1 }3 _+ A* Q9 d" p% w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 D; c7 {9 G, q5 I' H/ ?" }5 l& p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  p" h* `/ F7 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 Q: T4 J' z7 {$ _7 H3 Z/ K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ C$ T4 g0 v" Y, |) q  S# C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  R( `/ v- r, G) ^4 u' L<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 ?7 I4 F3 V+ F8 F, X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  J- h3 D/ \' R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# _' S6 \) u8 [/ j2 O; N6 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 p+ w8 P- V, F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# l$ g; [$ J5 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- l" H2 K0 j( Q9 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 I. L$ c* R: w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' l- U. v& r6 o; w. h) p4 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>