【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ B5 b# j  _7 o6 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 o  w5 _' F. O9 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; w* w: i9 {+ t4 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& H4 I" `: S) w3 T$ @* x4 PYou needn’t fear anything
- Z  T. |4 ~1 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: m1 P5 }0 V' U9 a1 R1 r- bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" i5 i  m# d- I+ e' M  E/ T$ TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 @3 T  i7 t! p) yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' L+ v8 g1 a' _' @; cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 q  k/ ]7 F: f+ \, I2 a# c2 X" II’m still filled with fear
# W) H4 ~3 d( _1 @" oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 I7 C8 K0 g; ]8 ?, K/ _$ A  a- @With such a tongue as yours,
( O: K% K. l7 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; m/ \6 e9 Q; C2 e6 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 t1 L; d% i& o' h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: X8 C+ |9 Y2 {. r* O# n/ H8 V* B) f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( Q" l. U. I4 f9 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# O" b0 T# C( W+ o) [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) }& Y& A% Z, R( [: \1 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! K6 P/ z0 C! a0 V- C2 y+ D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" ]5 O3 q9 }+ A. Q8 n/ W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ |- O1 h# u% I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( J) X6 _& Q1 V; {! L! Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, e5 z+ Q- k" N8 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. H  Y& Q7 H- y" |. z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* B2 P" m+ X  m6 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ m  g! m5 m# O& d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& H7 j9 o, D' M; c+ R6 c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( J, [. x; I9 T" l" W+ n' \: O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 ?6 V. G4 g' L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ T) `7 ]/ k: Y: M/ L, J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* s$ l. |( e5 {( c1 }. @! t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: o" ^( `' P" V0 W$ z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. }( k/ N# p; Q8 @4 Q8 U' b' V" x/ i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& U0 g/ F- u, i+ X# I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ w. s  X$ }* @3 a1 b& V8 d, a- c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ a1 b! I) q$ V2 x4 ~8 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, C6 ?6 O3 v; ~+ c, A8 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ U1 S0 Z& D9 N, e6 H- I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. n* O4 b' ?, U1 M4 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ `/ l; g, U$ U# B2 B7 j) u% }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 J. ^0 i& g2 D4 F. S: D4 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, B- v6 o0 C4 R7 j4 H: D  s0 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) u3 ~9 o0 ~) n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 o/ G* h" F0 @) A% N; y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ Y; ?2 q; ?6 Z6 C* R) g  e9 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 Y8 m3 `, ]$ l0 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>