【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ Z/ s. T) w4 S; j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 v% g, u$ V  n4 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" K/ K% t& x2 R4 y: t& VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ~+ N; x) L- B- v5 u& Z3 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 S; V/ a' _; o+ UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' M1 y/ Y" _; O( H4 wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 k0 E8 G0 c$ j: `+ ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ ?& }4 V/ Z3 j/ f% T" I# aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# o5 O9 s/ l1 \7 L5 ?2 _+ }7 |I’m still filled with fear
2 a' \( V0 P+ C! i6 ^4 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! R/ D& g/ O! `2 f; G/ p& mI regret not dying
3 z7 ]; w4 E9 C( ^0 Q9 X. d) ], u  @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 O( M% x4 C7 [* r/ M# W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# o& b. s4 X  G5 b1 @) W. X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 H+ X9 g1 U- C! \* `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 O8 w7 Y2 g: S2 n- Q* L4 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 D, ?4 U& {+ p# c( }: I8 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 q" c& B7 ?! [' S5 L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 p4 {$ F1 ?! c- }: V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% f1 d2 [7 B& n' \+ b7 l3 b9 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' T) V! d, g3 r. A( u, a" a' ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* j: f% f) ]" x0 s, P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 X, h* }' g- L+ g7 o8 n2 p0 Z% A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! Y0 ]8 p( X/ Q1 P4 l0 W* F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 R! V# C+ s. J/ P. ^- \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ a' I0 G$ x* C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! }* V2 ~: u: g  A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ ~5 c9 c! V( d) ]: f- {! E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 e  z) W' P. O- `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ s( z& A3 m4 Y5 s, @' B2 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) D! s/ X$ l1 L/ @7 L4 h3 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, _% |& n4 H! q0 J. c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 k# m1 C& S$ ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ _- M% R9 r' C6 e. l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, r# N8 t- h' H; `: I3 w. ]( J2 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' @" ?7 b+ j  ?( n" M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ y; f* _5 u) D. \; K1 m$ @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: U: D: Z, P( x, y3 T, V8 z" }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>