【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# I) s# ~: h' q2 q7 I9 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
* P$ H, I: j4 h0 ?5 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 i5 R+ C# U( B( u  cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& g* _' s8 z: ^+ r/ CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- v9 E# W2 h9 K" MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  v$ c( _+ i& h' Z0 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 h: V& U+ i# J5 M/ z# r. TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& @/ x3 J* O( D( d2 x% Q% uI want so much to see inside your heart
# K  g8 d9 q6 g% q$ rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( ~7 B4 u0 S5 l( {  xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& ^* g; \0 O7 Z7 Y7 D# o4 f1 E( RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' L1 M. x! b9 z8 t3 X' g7 y% A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& p9 ]% W( ~5 }( o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" a+ Z  q$ z. d' s7 u- w5 t1 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  S$ x' K! z, U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 O; P2 q; m1 e( _3 s7 b3 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( k8 E7 y" o1 u( O3 e$ O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. D: M' k- H- G# w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  s* c$ p3 h* W2 ]0 i! ?$ Y; D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 \. j$ e- X% C, r" v; @<P>你无需担心</P>
; G& g9 i/ k$ f6 @+ L' l+ v" ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, |$ i  d+ d- W; i6 Z% N3 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& r' b. N- s; A( e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, z4 E1 u9 c6 f- Z( n  C5 L! @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! A, A/ o& n, ~' r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' _! c+ x% \4 w" C* y6 D% W) _' a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. {7 t( g6 s' i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# ^# `5 Y1 F+ s7 h- v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- l) l* W; _8 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- |( H* e- o3 z- T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ~/ z* \6 m1 R# M) q- o) d% a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& o5 ]3 m. G% D, c, u+ \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& E3 @% W/ y% D5 o& b. l' |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" i* `; b0 G* @' I) W4 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- v* Y  e8 H/ L" Y9 L; `4 N- M0 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ ^$ {. c3 |* P  X" H& J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ W; P; s: \  h$ R1 P5 \* i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 V0 y( l% a9 k$ H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  m0 z3 i4 X4 L& H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>