【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  P7 {. Q( D# ~( `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; `7 [* x7 z. H/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! s0 ^# X( u0 W; k& {1 A$ @The sky is happy down to its soul
. _+ Q, Q; R+ F: U8 d! bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 F9 T% D3 M  Q6 ~1 x' ?! ]0 j5 Y8 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 [5 t5 u! m" y7 {8 U3 ~# `& ^  iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, [2 q/ K& _0 sI want so much to see inside your heart
4 w/ Z3 v# t/ s: q) `, C6 Z, N& MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. e7 o1 N  W- K' O% g. A, s9 I: T& GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 V' }) W# T' `8 T' ~/ fWith such a tongue as yours,
6 ^; ~% D  T) d( B6 Q2 [0 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 Y- S9 H8 ]0 R. ?  D6 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 I/ h. X1 v' t; P* N/ u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& C5 z) `( c* k2 ?( E8 f% [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 F$ b' e; Q% O8 x1 o4 t9 A- L; E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! p( t- ?) T' J9 b" l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( @; f: \) T3 G- Y2 C, \* C# A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: g" |1 o0 |1 j, \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, R) R5 k" p( J! q8 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ Y4 t( x( `, e<P>你无需担心</P>
. y' V, D; \$ H, U2 _7 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ]: \$ U, v9 n+ o- ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ \, g7 J# m7 [$ ^  {+ f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 j( Z" l- o4 g# c* m3 L7 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ {; K1 i: F  \# K$ A7 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 R# N5 \4 D0 ]* `2 |# i# `% }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 e% e  p9 {& w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( ^- x' D9 ~0 ~. F! }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' e* {: I$ K/ `6 M2 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; z+ ^8 o6 o  @' Z8 ^8 e6 \: L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ B. U+ ~9 `  b# Y) c) G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* R' u. ~: n2 E. Y5 h$ f9 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: V: u' I+ }3 \" \. y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 M3 e, S+ P1 l' r+ F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 d! w; ~+ C7 {& [3 l) b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 d% a4 j- u7 o9 m4 m6 e  s( I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 G9 Y8 ^3 y. g  k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) }$ E9 U! e% |( ]+ n6 x+ i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ^/ y+ i8 }: B" u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 O( p1 D" i5 G' r1 t# H; S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& o: h5 c9 U1 ?3 ?  i, f7 P5 g" Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>