【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( K. W+ x, V6 m/ y- }" jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. m  ]7 n- C* J- R& }+ PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 t3 v% ?) Y  R5 k5 ], Z7 h0 ^5 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) h5 t7 N9 G3 r9 _- [4 p- S& MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ U8 e' t$ a7 g% L2 K' K. O2 U# EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! Z' j& w, J# v: ]/ v/ r4 h8 SI really want to know just how much you love me
! U) {2 o+ k7 L. k- k" v& a0 z3 f  QI love you I love you with all my heart
) U1 j$ V0 @, |7 \, f" j3 rNothing can compare to my love
3 I% [/ i$ f: B0 f+ T5 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 e( o  I6 O3 z8 `9 e9 i1 i- wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 |/ P& k5 w5 {4 Y+ J- wI want so much to see inside your heart
9 F2 t; c* V, @( p: Z& M( z1 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ z6 K* j% E* aI’m still filled with fear
  T+ W1 y5 \) X; k- A. |, RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 A) W7 m' b5 Z( n  D* ^# Z6 }6 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 z* I' F8 w3 v* T) O( ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" F- e  w) @7 L: K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 N7 U, A$ S! A4 T7 x( u$ D: }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 ^6 ~0 p% S5 f0 `' }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ z( u$ k% W) _2 h2 a% Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ l! V+ U# u) v, g8 H+ O& U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 N1 ?/ L3 y4 x; j$ _3 p: W7 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. i+ [3 j. i8 E0 @8 K8 E6 `3 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 V" i0 @$ ^5 r) E3 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 H, U0 V5 t) M* I6 W; w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  {, e/ `- \* A  c% g+ q3 ~6 {) S% u* f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 h- ]7 {, F5 b  m6 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 p! W2 u& M2 N  V5 k2 ]8 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 A7 M) B1 m* C, a7 Q# Z, g0 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* u/ V( G+ u  r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 A  c4 @  D7 v( [- a& G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( z; A0 q& r& ?! R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  q0 s2 n2 \2 l$ D5 m. I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! [8 R$ k3 V2 R2 K, {, o9 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) {, n% [+ k8 W7 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( f4 X9 k, m# t! L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, H. \) `* [# w4 k5 T4 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 |7 a0 R0 L$ N8 ?' J1 J) q9 e我请你剖开它
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6 k  ^( F: j" g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>