【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ^: C  [7 ~! F; w4 x" l; ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" w+ ?6 Z5 W% H9 g6 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& d5 L5 [8 y" c3 `: O' nSeeing the sky content with its love
( v2 p3 C1 S9 i! S- NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* a; I7 @. ^! @4 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 H9 W) a# x' r. D  K4 Z4 PEvery other word you utter is love
/ z7 ]2 b. a* @* z& {& o$ X9 @I really want to know just how much you love me
+ Z2 a4 w2 U0 }! o# m, wI love you I love you with all my heart
6 c7 R5 D7 ?) o, zNothing can compare to my love
3 R. y8 S3 [8 M1 s5 f) `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& x3 p* |/ D  D" ?9 A: kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& _  Y! h3 [/ FI want so much to see inside your heart
' S" w" J2 d% O3 u- K; XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 |: A0 Y. h- I8 x6 o! f6 X' bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 \) b2 Q+ w. E+ E$ dI regret not dying
( Q+ n' m, M0 s; A0 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ o- A! V* `; S1 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 X( R( c1 W7 F3 E# JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 f; s5 h+ z6 G9 ]% W' l# M; B2 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" b  t2 n; R3 ]7 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ w  @% }1 I7 W! n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! ?, k8 |2 X, S7 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 z) N0 \4 U; t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 ?% P1 T% ]& K* _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' {1 b- B6 G6 k* T) r! ~9 J6 O" [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' d, a  `! e8 b; T/ Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: H) u- U2 f+ Z: q* W1 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' R0 a; ?4 l" j0 E* ^/ T1 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! c8 K" X; _) N( ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 d2 Z# `) ^, f$ ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 E3 ]# `/ T# f! L, J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 P; h* b7 p) O4 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 S' _9 O  n- B6 Z: G* U; ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ^0 R- d, }: z% _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( D3 S6 H& _6 o8 a# H+ n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 f' T! o& ~# p; y; T* N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& M7 o" |% s$ I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; q8 l0 z, q. i5 I" Z7 |9 V0 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: j* V: H5 T9 J& f% J4 @2 Q4 ^; I; h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# t, g- |# D3 V; w7 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 j5 s2 N, ]* s0 ?2 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 A+ M0 H6 z. N; p1 U7 {6 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  d7 F: w+ O9 q/ S6 l: H3 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Y  i/ M7 r: B+ C% \2 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) U: X0 X" g& `) e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' ~% c, @1 T( k/ z4 r3 }$ m/ C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% a  W$ q' @' l9 Q: N: D+ U4 w0 I9 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 q# [0 Y! B1 n5 ^' W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( v, A% m+ }1 e' m+ H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* v& H6 b9 x& t7 I! M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& P/ U& [' H" h6 y% I9 |( N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>