【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  Z  P. G5 C' _% q1 ?' T2 r7 z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  l/ a& X3 m5 N. l$ X! IThe sky is happy down to its soul
- @) a" \- @0 C7 y: H; qWith the moon kissing it every night
$ h. l& r  {& q" [9 g- S" kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ P$ Z$ d, R" _' ^5 l# XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 y) W+ P) i5 U3 ?% A7 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, v; R8 n, h, `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  b3 g6 }4 n& f7 W$ ~0 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' E9 g. ?0 b( f; j  ~% M" TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) x& ~* |9 b( |# G: B0 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: A* P$ {3 g$ a' y- ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 U4 f3 @: \. {( F( w  {3 y0 K  `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# X7 ?; _) u$ w" I1 Q4 P. ~+ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. e2 @4 R2 g8 M. C& P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( `: c( Q" k) s8 g+ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 Z2 Z( S4 u7 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 ]3 I, m6 J5 E: _, a7 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- s' v5 t( T. q4 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 e" k6 W% X3 d7 J1 m( f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% y, G/ g1 Y2 b  t4 |% F$ M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 @/ s- |& y/ q4 T' R# Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( S7 o9 I* f( P/ L6 U% v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 P5 i9 P: l& b9 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' \5 m. i# N  O+ C0 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- {3 G* r7 |% K& o/ }! Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' A8 O# `# \, h: d& @& O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 G, F  G9 S1 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 A2 ?- M5 k9 h3 X2 y$ _: y- e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- r/ S% k- J- c% ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. l8 ?6 C6 g+ v0 m# n. Z: e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 s& G, f' r( j/ k2 D% O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! H0 o9 S8 L% f) p' x1 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ m9 n; E% v7 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 q3 f+ I: |6 z4 }( a- X) `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 b. O; e4 P  C/ c2 s( I2 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>