【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ V2 @( u$ j" D; x- U) J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 D$ ]# Q5 e) D* XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- K! X4 g$ P* K. _% u; q  tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% u( |" Z5 d; @& z* {5 z6 H  X- `8 }* fThe sky is happy down to its soul
' ?2 a- Z$ u- [9 [0 a. e- CWith the moon kissing it every night
4 ~! H/ O- s) tSeeing the sky content with its love
1 |* J! Q& w  Y$ LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: G. O8 v# {0 @: r9 n1 r7 B" a% Q8 u% rEvery other word you utter is love
4 ~  s9 z1 n4 V9 \/ rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( R* @! ?+ G3 x* y6 P+ D( `2 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ m1 B: ?0 O7 ~; M! A  LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 h, F- h3 V# GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 S. L* L7 x3 [1 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 Y$ H3 G& J( G0 R8 u- `( WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 f) I( S$ z* a8 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# _" ]3 S# ?' }. j7 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' F/ z# K4 j  m8 q) ~$ |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( v! _6 V; t$ b2 d( m" ]# K+ Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ t7 e7 F! I7 ?& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! u) R0 a4 x/ S7 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( x1 M0 @# M6 y' E- l# ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& H/ z1 f9 z6 K: F; ?6 Y2 V  q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ b7 T# k" x% _. x" B6 k% e+ g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* @, A; T" l/ S9 \- d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, {: R5 g2 V5 s; c- _: K+ g. R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ?/ a& W3 Y: J$ N/ h8 o. k: a0 n% y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 C# i. _, \$ u4 ~4 l: ?- R& ]$ Y0 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; |5 D$ I) Z, ^; Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 }3 N( B: M% q- L& W& p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ `" t' A% m( {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- B. Y2 v$ z6 f# @+ ]* _" d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& G; V$ S7 I; _* y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* r! X: g: u; ~; i! V( M9 ?6 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( _( E/ u5 f/ f8 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ @0 A6 E( k( ~& w/ O, p, a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  E$ Q7 Y& h$ X" g2 p+ ]* R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 ~( @; Y* _% j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 Z5 k) n3 M( Y3 o, T6 G- e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 h7 c1 z8 U) R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" }, a) m9 [1 X. `1 r# r8 F$ P9 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 s8 M/ x; {, ^0 {; |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 X1 V* X/ w0 ?$ T0 t/ K! _* z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* c. r' H3 o  g( g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( D3 a5 f. Z. s8 m1 Q3 C  G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) m! T7 J+ K7 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, S  ]3 s- J" x# y3 ^. q4 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( y: x/ _; v4 O: V9 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 l0 L1 R2 m# A. J* ~3 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>