【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 U2 D6 y& N, y% `3 ^: o* v6 i; lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* D* l6 S, D4 {/ |- j0 E! }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ {( V7 _  j$ r) B( ?( nThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 ?$ u3 X3 R2 o3 }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- s+ n% [0 Q+ I$ n# ], y. UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ Y$ N4 R8 a4 ]6 I: E) }* ^  r5 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& H8 l4 l( U/ E" {  X8 P$ E9 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, e; q) o  |6 W$ @) J5 b$ QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 |$ |% x4 M9 PI want so much to see inside your heart
; f; m% E' o; M4 ~' a  C6 n$ H" TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 S% W8 B  m+ H$ d  o3 e6 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% a" g! F. p; \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( c1 t8 ?  _) A1 x9 mWith such a tongue as yours,
# ]& t% c, f0 K$ @, \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) e  d4 D4 c- b4 K) w( n& n  Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 c$ v) f& S9 A. _0 j7 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  X, d2 u+ }0 ?  S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 Y1 r6 ?: \+ g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! Z# z, U( b# P& {) |* `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. e& s( S! O) I' ]+ Y+ G7 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, k# V0 K7 L  H; X' x* @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ F9 I+ E3 ]/ h! D, U7 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 S- Z  i* M# i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% X/ m1 ]2 k0 D! {' E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 V8 i: `: I( I4 e! l/ |7 e/ u$ \. A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ^+ Y! Y. B( ]1 ]9 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Q- ~* Q) L& h& ~3 h" D' u7 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& U( V4 Z9 q. ~2 j! H* u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ D% D& B: m3 I, Q' h. ~, _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: h% D% w+ c  E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ A& s' K" }0 M7 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ]- |; z0 n+ L1 }7 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 G' r6 p" p6 e( b2 n8 I9 u6 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 |# g+ e7 _2 Q6 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ ]  \2 j2 h1 V* X9 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ \1 v3 j2 i: A7 \& H- g! ?7 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 a2 c! X9 p5 y* Z) c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 r* L6 s+ q- y- y" S* v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ e" c" U4 P# q% R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) A9 `( k4 S3 E1 Z; p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: P( h& C5 T1 {, T7 {! A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; P! O+ q( V% S' y. ^4 s4 v0 @1 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>