【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 u  Q& s' M7 W* E+ M2 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 p! v* L, [! O7 V( |( @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 W+ b! S8 a+ F% _1 t- a) D3 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( C+ J( q( I+ S* n- ]! Z. J7 M" EYou needn’t fear anything
. v/ P$ d( U% t0 F/ P% V1 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ a" i9 j" \7 J7 C3 B/ j) tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" _* O6 y& p' d8 m1 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 V7 a) Q0 ?6 ?0 j& w/ I8 O9 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& e- y" V3 T$ b" I$ n# _& a1 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  E( z2 \- d+ sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 Z& }& k4 F; }- |& EWith such a tongue as yours,
. T, e9 \  l8 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 \( V: ^9 R* i  nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( I8 W9 v% i6 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, F  z7 N5 J( F+ Z; y0 N; m* z( H3 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 g( ^  g2 H1 g0 k1 }* y  f+ U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 a1 {3 p& C1 Z4 `: R- f3 e' `. r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' }$ K3 x4 ]5 i. a" c5 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% a6 |" ]5 ^9 v4 i! r! y& |. J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 o1 z' P) f! p! _! F$ {& b) l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ \9 p2 |" t' M2 Q/ S/ ]( Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! D# _- B; R. ]. \! x, ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  a5 x0 c' `6 D6 H  w* g! _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- @+ _$ T: f, M: S* [, S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  ~$ z; Z5 j1 C/ E( x6 @! w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, Q* a* l4 u2 J& @  g% A4 g" Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 N7 ^, B* @! z( E0 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* R3 K/ c! X6 K' }  c$ l; W9 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 H$ }% \$ K8 y3 [2 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* w  |3 e* j2 P$ E3 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% e5 V2 [0 s/ u, w. p, B6 `& \7 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 u: }7 K7 c) b; G1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# b% {' B& p# Z# }' e# A& b8 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! B0 c8 e; Q  O! O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 Y4 D7 Z& V( c" A. t% s6 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ w( y* N9 R2 l& X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 S8 a( O, t( ?6 P) z1 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 A0 L8 p9 v4 ?. y, s; e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ v1 l1 @4 ^0 |* C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 l8 ^4 Z" |) w/ b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>