【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& H% _, a; v  ]* o7 z# T, k" ?% Q4 T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ~) h  c' O' s. [2 ^+ t- X( F! xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 v; u  l3 g3 r; W% H4 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 k8 h2 Q0 q7 n" I; b3 R! \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: T* Y; S  l8 ~0 Y9 Y: ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 _5 L1 m, o3 ^5 ^* LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ ]5 z8 m; c0 w+ k# Z' MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ E1 S& u' T1 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 V2 I) J; m1 {3 h) H/ s  i; TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% ]& t" h; T3 K& D$ _* a* X5 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, B& k. b0 y% f' O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  a9 T8 ~9 `; ~& B; i2 F6 p0 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ^+ _' H$ J3 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ `: M" ?0 E+ A: n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* Z( X+ _1 I8 I2 G  ?! O  h# ]% R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ s1 @/ F6 s4 G3 h# I1 S" y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 M/ Z+ E) k9 S$ m1 |. F$ l* B! W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 i* N- z" Y- Z& q! k/ V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# j( E! u( \, K# N7 e/ E* o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 Y( D; W, B, C0 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 h. O# b! U( b7 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- W5 ^, [5 l- d) r4 u( X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 X+ ?0 g4 J+ t: ?6 a) g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# P& A0 L) J. J) K0 V3 C, R1 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 C( c5 q% R) D" i, r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- m# Q- @3 Z" [' y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) |) g# r( X" ?# I  w! e; M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 r' {- W; f- r( J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ q0 f2 F7 `' u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) h9 y* K* t- y3 V, M- R5 d2 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ |. |) O  H% t+ N1 x  G) t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 h0 j3 [9 ], w. |5 A2 ^) N$ ]$ z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) a- d6 J7 z. v2 k7 I8 G5 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 y7 t1 g8 D& c5 f4 \9 i& V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* i7 w; b* K! F4 z0 y; N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 k- k5 w) s8 C( J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# }2 o0 _- X# ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; u0 Z$ M& m7 e5 ~) b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" z$ i& N: |" r; z4 U( e8 j( T8 F' o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>