【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& y+ i2 q1 u1 y* l: p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 f, ]( k1 I; Y, h; b3 y$ dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  y; W% U9 M# cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) _- k, e7 a# a, q2 C; H  s& pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' I$ ^' P* f% Q% m& q, Z, J) WSeeing the sky content with its love
6 I5 u, r) V4 D$ |4 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 J" j1 U+ ^% a8 P  FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 F1 x+ n: j9 Y4 N) D5 j) ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 x5 K# M: b9 [) @7 b/ m9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
3 V: \8 s: _1 q- C7 u& bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 N9 ~$ o, l9 X+ d, UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" |+ n1 t. b9 Z7 _* i1 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. _7 s" e1 F/ J# W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. K0 @& q2 D. Q" o7 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, Z( ^' j: @2 g9 J; d- s9 r0 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( l) c+ Z+ ^/ a, W2 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& r$ R2 ?, A: q. q0 b) W( y1 B  j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ S/ g- r7 k0 h  S) K- _7 V0 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! }6 J6 h- J) m; S+ }: a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 D& B% t3 L( p- U* [! c/ n0 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  V! _7 x$ K, }" Y$ |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; B5 x  ~6 ^( J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- s# n/ h; n3 V. R) Y& F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; V/ }; q  _# u; J9 U6 Z6 `7 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, R+ _/ l# M( V! e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 R, i4 X; z0 |, d* C+ K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ^4 s1 }* a# G( G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 N  S. r+ \( U1 y4 i: y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% c" s2 g) o9 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( U' r: C; }9 w) k# O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ N( }0 V8 A) L5 y4 N% P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 z  Z1 F8 T8 `, |: g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" e  [' z8 X' h1 A: p* W4 T! X" c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ f. d, A7 Q. d8 H4 M5 S0 w& T  L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% Z) ]4 z7 z! ]  a/ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 k8 k+ _2 p( E: ^8 Y. ]8 v3 @0 z, ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ^1 F/ L. N/ ]  H1 ]# T' _0 {  ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 h  N2 u3 z/ J2 E. h+ H8 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ W3 M4 E( m" S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>