【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 j) p) f6 Z6 y6 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" \; g1 E- f% U% fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. k8 X1 {' M" l2 Y) K, ~% y: GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 O0 ^) F9 j. \$ OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# ^! {( l4 {" @0 N" {9 s0 MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 M0 z! V- X! ]5 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( K( O, |3 H  HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 N9 N% D# y+ jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 ]. t6 x2 m0 ]# D4 f5 a" ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 H$ A  n3 @' ]: Y/ [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 V4 S0 L) u: B$ M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 t5 g( A/ X! \* F9 M0 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" O2 C- g' b+ h: J  t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 W* B& Q8 P& S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 p$ D* X9 d" y  T0 G& W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 r9 ?; u( |$ `' a; ?  o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ u+ |. G: v! t9 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |4 N" [3 [' ~5 P! l6 |' U& c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 S  e! }. t! O) a<P>你无需担心</P>
' d& H9 K" d3 _, J# l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. h5 J( \7 ~4 G  c% F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ f3 b  R8 ]  O; _2 C2 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 W, y9 \) M! Q+ Y# c# Q8 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: |' g2 o! h; N& c) q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- @' M, T9 i  q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) t6 ~# N8 k  T3 Q* d8 c  P7 T4 G0 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: X- v6 c& ?. O! ~/ p! |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- {; b) I+ m8 w8 l, q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" o6 x" g6 g0 i4 L0 L( g8 `3 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- F5 p- B0 M3 X9 x( z. H% l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, O  {1 m0 n% O4 p3 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& \( j/ W! p/ Q# P" `% a8 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ V6 N2 l+ R( G$ ]  h; }5 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 i5 S# G) M9 U我请你剖开它

% T' q/ Y2 j1 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 }+ y9 t9 }, W1 S: e8 b$ ~& ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>