【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' \! c, p) X1 g! l4 d9 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ~9 \8 _, X# x1 m' Y% U( ?; NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ L+ ^, J) H" {* FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; w+ H/ a8 ?$ A1 ?) j* Z! lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  C5 o7 P. f; E5 R% FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# e9 h1 w6 Z4 \+ C, \7 C; }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ R# w, `6 {4 Y9 C5 w) QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* H4 _6 C8 m  P' ^& KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. z! ]3 |2 C( x7 |' s  R0 C- \With such a tongue as yours,
, P* z  p6 f$ w4 F3 K4 D+ ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 z! G  P# `$ N4 T5 W1 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( m5 J' f5 h& p: u% k" u- z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ R+ N  G1 A. M- K( S" i2 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 D# O4 C: ~, L8 a. j2 j2 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. p5 D- G4 K$ e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 y/ N! G5 X/ `/ a/ G7 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# @' L7 P; |& m# N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ k; i- x+ I1 Q% E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- c1 \* v7 j2 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! \. i1 f) s& J" E  h( J8 k0 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 V; @) w# B7 s3 l! Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 R1 L0 Q& J' n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 w+ q1 F& Y; I; ~$ X( \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ u% L! J- j7 T8 n( w' q! n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; r0 E! L9 Z+ o6 k5 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; Z& E. a+ u0 b+ e/ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; ^$ {. G# l0 O) K9 B% u& ]6 \, L<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 k5 {- Y! \7 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* N0 B+ g) O% S! @  b. ]3 i7 A7 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& h" x1 s+ E) G$ ~1 `7 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 z' B5 Q* e% O) E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* [: K0 h8 k% j' y  o! q/ |1 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# C8 D" s3 t5 a' L$ c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 m9 L' q# w2 `& r. C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 y$ b! M. ^& `* _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% V0 p; J: b/ j( Z. W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>