【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) `; c! [' H& I/ e/ G5 I& AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: a  L$ i' n& V! n# [, I: QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 i. w$ v; s: o4 A- D9 W* OSeeing the sky content with its love
- v& G' e2 s( c/ C1 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* _: B/ L1 G4 v/ c( @You needn’t fear anything
6 V2 _6 ^4 ~7 x# u. I+ QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& \" a( ^$ z- f; b6 UI really want to know just how much you love me
* p/ H# Z) o% u, ?2 Y$ j4 I' sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 m; A! h7 e- x& c! I- `' ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" N& |# u; C% mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! A* K- w' n2 k1 b& g( z9 P8 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ ?- B( f1 O5 i3 S9 }. z" I2 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ ^6 c  B" h' wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 G& M& Y  S' z% xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! r$ b; @9 H: o1 }8 w# `$ O1 T1 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' F( s1 X) D  T* |) d! K" c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 U# [: |9 d8 O$ P8 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 t- S1 f: z1 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ D$ Q: n4 V, [6 z% c1 s, q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' f+ x9 f: f0 W) w% ?! S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ?) Z8 Z' [' J1 a+ I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ^! h1 Z1 a' M8 {, Q/ D; N& A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 c, z+ ^2 }7 Z* W/ T% |! I- l: d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ \& z0 @; T' }) M8 d" F9 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* u7 M- Q* C- m! K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 \0 J8 b* M% N7 C; d; y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 U/ F' P. P: D, u) k: f. z4 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; T; i4 S: q3 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: L, s' v* \/ h5 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 I1 L1 v! b+ O0 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Y$ u  T6 c( V# u" X( ]7 ^* \  ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 s2 Q( Y$ B  d( I* T' P1 D/ y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 h# p* {3 b& y0 K% J- l" X& U. [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: A! P1 Z9 a! t0 [; N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ r, W6 l+ i- z+ @0 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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# a5 U- g) S9 u# p5 |) Z6 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* Z6 s% h6 ^" \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( m: V) C+ f9 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 V, f. e! O! P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>