【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% a6 n8 N% O2 {' l. r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. K; b! t0 G/ V' e9 B' @7 q5 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, R$ A# P" F8 [/ n2 m* ^. {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 c9 N4 l% e* B. P2 gEvery other word you utter is love
: D4 n* S5 x1 T" j0 p; B( e6 ?! o( `I really want to know just how much you love me
& i! E! z+ M% w; XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" o3 `4 g# }1 L& p" |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' B4 B& b1 @9 V) e  y2 `I want so much to see inside your heart
0 K' [4 |+ L" GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 }0 r: q- |4 ~* Y/ E5 w3 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* p) ~& |/ t3 aWith such a tongue as yours,
$ q" J* b2 N  B5 |1 o3 {* j0 M+ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 F7 E4 Y& l+ r2 u  c4 @3 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 `+ `0 t- N& m+ c# D% m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* @8 n5 |3 i  E8 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 B* v% \; A7 r6 P+ N, c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ W9 o2 R/ |" I* I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 l# A( W7 [; j/ X/ A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! d7 }* G! G# o- B3 V; W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ z5 _, X8 X, M, C; I2 Q% ]/ A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 |; O7 r# U8 h+ p  E( N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 }. K# b) K6 A) Z: j9 P- O. c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( Z0 p  A% t2 C! O" O) f  }1 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 g) x1 r" T! u; u" M: W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) U- w0 k9 N& `& l1 d& j8 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, Y+ G1 q0 s5 I* e2 S9 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 W* M) N5 t: N1 p* z# `4 p8 z$ l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' G' n8 {3 {  q- [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  I7 h- \- N' f" S* |) S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 p* a! R- s, r8 b' W+ ^- _7 ^5 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# L7 l5 p1 w+ d+ ^+ X6 D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 e$ U! B$ V7 c0 C6 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; Q& \; i  ~2 g7 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' ~3 K+ t8 U: q5 b0 K( N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% e4 ^8 M% m# o; l4 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ v2 Z4 s% r' U5 K2 o! p7 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 z5 X* [: a6 X; x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% L! e8 @: ^. ^0 U, z! Y4 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ ]2 m9 \! [( w7 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. j& q- w9 k; K0 ~6 ^% ^, m6 Y0 w6 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 h7 N0 C3 Z4 h6 f: m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>