【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- x3 n5 k+ |* R歌词我附在后面。
* V* ]3 }  k5 [4 r8 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 d8 x* E, A, E1 v. N4 t, mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 @( s3 \0 j" W! d/ S0 VWith the moon kissing it every night
7 T% |  X8 u9 v/ G' QSeeing the sky content with its love
+ u* f! p3 q' A  `2 H7 t0 x" ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 q) c. l: p& f! jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- {7 w- ]/ d% z& {4 D9 Z7 o" ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: E5 k/ K" q; J2 e  j  k. X0 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ O8 |8 M, {3 z+ RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) F  C8 |( w$ T# B  `+ x0 P' KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ n, B0 E+ }. JI’m still filled with fear
4 M  l. M) C3 {0 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; K! p4 i( }) A# F. {! u/ M  m8 Q. PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; I( n. x8 O' h+ |: ?2 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' V) x* N2 d8 l; Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 S% Y2 q2 R; `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 d( F# B% W8 _8 d0 W* U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, v: a* r# L+ l8 [5 s" J, k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% k3 X) E9 X( a3 B! N+ m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 _2 H, j. p% W1 Q6 ~+ Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- Y, t. g  u9 I3 T" X8 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 U' X7 H; \/ f, Z1 ]% F; w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 Q& F2 v. t% }( Q* z$ Y' ?$ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( U5 i6 c4 d4 ?3 r- ]: _- f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: v: ]) W* X3 u* F6 _2 V9 _7 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  v' Z6 m& b# s% F) H7 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ @2 }; j  T; I  T" U% s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% B( L; H8 p$ P1 D0 l# x1 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; \6 s9 w0 }0 z7 S& _$ T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ z2 N; f& |& `5 P8 Z3 ~. g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 H7 [; |# {' c6 F# g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ n5 t$ R, m- h5 ~5 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" l6 l: V4 d7 q% R  n0 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 [8 [+ d/ P9 R/ x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 G7 X4 [5 g/ t- |: u6 [) E我请你剖开它
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1 ^3 S' q* E9 \6 J7 G1 u4 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>