【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# H1 {: x* t0 n2 p( {: a/ `6 O4 p  BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! f1 U) k' O$ C) kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ w1 v4 N' o8 i/ C( kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ?5 C6 v: m) C. k5 X: DYou needn’t fear anything
" s; C$ R6 Y3 K0 }1 d) BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ S& _( b- L8 O" i- lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 I7 ?/ ?2 A) Y6 D3 uI love you I love you with all my heart
4 f+ o3 W/ v9 h' ~% o- q6 [8 s% i5 s+ vNothing can compare to my love
, m8 O6 k; I& v0 W1 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 q$ f1 T+ }! GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 s8 V, M6 `; T3 |6 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 ~; _- a, X" [, x" iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) w/ l$ u& \0 Q! w3 a! II regret not dying
0 @$ i& ~0 F8 o1 }5 z" yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. X4 I% c4 K* W$ bWith such a tongue as yours,
' I# J8 L$ n# N( M+ ]& lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& [& B( T& w1 r% i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 c6 |" \# m. [' ?; D# u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ }- `0 q* K% L6 p7 o5 z% a5 G+ Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Z) W* y* v' W/ t' Y0 [+ y* v  ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 U' b6 K+ i  q% Q. k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* f/ N- d! Y, z! H5 @$ a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, h. X) y( U& u% y& L8 h" _, ?: B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 u" w9 r; c4 E* ]/ k+ i4 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; f# |& o# l" _0 h. L' c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- M1 ~7 I5 V# d: J" H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; C) @6 \3 P+ V% b6 }+ y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 o1 U. Q2 x( E4 V1 N% w9 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# P" s" e* d1 Y: H3 z# d( n9 o' J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* {( H1 Q" }% F4 B5 B6 k6 U* C4 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# A! J: ^% T: |0 m6 n* u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! ?, A2 X& N( ]3 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: {+ u% h8 m9 T% F- P- r. U4 b$ }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 i/ z7 K0 Z- B" D. X+ g& c/ |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ [- n1 J7 B1 z3 }7 S8 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: A$ X7 R  s7 |0 L# Y; T% x  E! k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 I+ u0 ^0 T/ W5 N3 ~/ x4 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ o; K# {; i2 s; x  j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, s# ?; V  D2 U% J0 p* P8 v7 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ }; T* x1 ~. i  ]7 G: P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ k% H4 g; {3 c) t' a4 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. K" R2 F# J6 e. M# N) S( N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>