【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. d( M* ?5 \& O# q9 {# QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 k( K# J. k& ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 z7 S5 r2 m7 h- m! pThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 R' }- ?8 O; I# ]1 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ G' r. w& O, TI want so much to see inside your heart
, v4 _; U* Y) `" P3 }! TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% u( s" Q& j9 o' }/ tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; _6 Z  f/ F$ dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* g% _2 {  a  R  ~3 L3 S# RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' Y" j* r' X' m3 @$ }; z/ [7 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 e" D; ]% [, V1 b, R" X/ p; o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( \8 Z0 [2 p1 l4 @% W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% d5 c2 L$ x" f, G- ~. z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' z3 M5 ]  o( R2 l3 G1 ]5 |# P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ i' @, i6 m1 ?+ i- _- P+ M* ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  Y$ x; {1 n) @3 ]9 @5 \- l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* V: B- k$ z" I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 I# B. R' U+ F, P3 W, M, z( ^; \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ~$ r: \- q( e  L) o+ {6 I% Z; Z) @. W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 ~9 q# f3 J0 c! |4 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) a- S' h% J9 _% R! S# P/ O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ i4 i1 I& i' i+ W$ G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 B0 j+ T# `( c0 ^6 }1 j* F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' ]  B* {* B: e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 M8 I2 r% X9 D$ S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ [7 v+ `5 Z3 q7 p2 c. L  P$ l4 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! @5 y' f, v1 x! d: a! e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( X4 d7 R2 x: v4 i0 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 u7 ]6 C5 p% x. e1 M3 k# m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; Q4 L9 C: \7 X% n( Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 L6 s5 G. ?1 t# l& \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 j- S+ B$ k% A+ n3 ^4 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; [9 U  V# j3 o" }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 u- }3 s+ n5 t! ]% y; b* b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( q) H, ]: [0 B我请你剖开它
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6 }3 y& T' ~! \/ V6 S: I+ f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ w) K( j, Q0 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>