【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
! j# N+ _1 M6 k' j
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

0 V0 p" t7 t( s( q' [1 G
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- m$ X8 s0 d$ C2 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, k3 C' C0 B; Z. d  mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ l) o0 i" Z; I- o& u( YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ i/ D* N# }. h) A! |4 wSeeing the sky content with its love
% G" ^# X( [9 X9 |0 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, [. }( y2 Z2 R; J/ b* U. A$ G- ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 J- h6 ^) P4 S! Y: N8 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; t  ?- Q3 h# Y- R; `8 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 P$ U! x6 _) nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: A% x' r3 M' K8 W6 O  m$ z$ Z) fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 T( X4 |5 y' g4 u7 E8 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ~1 L' p/ }  uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! K: [: b0 o/ y1 R9 Q) C' V
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. T2 D. `; I; `" i2 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 z/ D1 x9 O; }2 t) x6 u! F+ g& ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 v# m5 N  {, i' Z0 g: ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. X0 L. ?: J; X! D1 S5 B7 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 }" z) [6 M2 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 M/ {0 B6 S3 u5 Y" |1 W2 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 {, F* V" ]" O% D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. i9 L/ p' h, a. Z2 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 y3 G$ \0 B+ R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 V9 s7 u1 F& J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; f$ J7 @. n0 @- g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( u3 I. n- z4 u9 }- `& V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& l, J7 ^! g! N, c1 n" U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' r* F; Q* e- P, E; C% @. |, l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ ]) Q6 @% ?# ~7 B' A0 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 t. u) m4 Z% }' I2 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 I: l) p. ^( I& m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
. Y4 H- R$ ~1 x1 O
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>