【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 T& P5 j; |  D3 Z. c% Q% k( e歌词我附在后面。
/ |# R4 k; m1 R1 n0 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 u* u6 w0 ~2 h; C6 c2 Q: o% H, M' yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  O& }8 I% ]$ E( }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 T1 y0 x: [  S' mYou needn’t fear anything
7 I. c+ T; g: r) u$ TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) e) X) X* [* q0 y5 n$ N- P" lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* `/ O7 N3 j" Y3 Y3 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ h% R5 W/ B5 V: S1 a6 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 ^8 G6 x& V/ D$ ]9 ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- k$ _: t/ K8 m! k- _" _  {$ E4 C9 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 V) K; [. M1 F9 I! dWith such a tongue as yours,
+ z+ [# n% i3 X. e9 T' X* pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- ?1 s- p1 B- G0 R9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( a( Z& j5 ?* Z; m" T, ~* xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: c# B( }: T: S) c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, a/ I6 J) u$ V" T5 H" c1 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" J1 t" f0 D# o1 t! e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 Z7 R7 k+ l2 f# u  X( w/ R+ j6 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 r; z2 F4 ~& K$ z  J: S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 _" p: ~5 `* q! d+ [- `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# ~' z: v% K4 j) A+ p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 y! b% {( ]& H$ H2 H% w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( [, R9 P- x1 J! n5 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" A0 Q. D1 H6 R7 }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* L/ u+ e  M4 D$ r0 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ?, \9 o2 C6 I, s# {& q6 O: `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 w9 _" q* A2 S& x/ d& D- }0 o! P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- |+ `$ e4 D7 B+ i+ n7 \& L( [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 F$ p8 g' Z0 E/ Q+ h1 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 o- [( _/ C; Q2 }. q" M3 \$ k) ?5 S" V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% B& [' [9 `- P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! K5 R1 ~! e1 G$ J, e& t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 x9 Q2 K$ z5 Y0 J( d8 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) H5 Z1 K1 u6 V# I. _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 Y0 G) p) _) b( C/ v2 A  X) O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( T9 a9 k, |; a7 |4 I; d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 S2 e+ b3 M$ t4 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 F2 g/ z0 a, z1 N% O  g; S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 c3 u- b) T. u- M9 g3 r) X# N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>