【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  k9 k% O  z; R' m, A- cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ h: o, I$ ^9 ^1 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 W" ?9 L" B( L2 N, a9 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 j# w0 v2 {/ NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! ]3 k3 W2 r+ ~5 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; ~) E6 K) `( q; s) F$ e9 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ @% X+ G: l) ?# e: sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 ^0 w9 M2 ?1 K% ]+ d# q, r! h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 f/ h% h/ B6 K8 D7 u1 |& N" i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 N# \+ U( ], M: {/ M. Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) J6 |- C; j2 ^+ A6 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& y. s* ^2 D2 A: z! h8 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  f/ U; p2 e; A& ^, ?2 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Q3 K' q% K, B7 _7 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% P& P, H6 c4 j8 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 x/ @1 F4 j: ?# d2 M) {0 A: C2 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* a5 ]9 X/ I9 Q# n2 l/ f/ \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* }* V0 Q7 d5 w9 P7 A+ Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! |. o$ G# D9 r0 E# P( N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& b3 O2 ?9 _5 u4 Q$ W& |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 l& j, h) @: M9 u' m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' ]+ |* y7 b- h  }& w- k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: P1 Y3 L( K! E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 ^* q1 Q$ H9 R2 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  Y6 O% K- y! a  |, X: P/ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; ?. m& V# X' i8 X  n<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 U! Y" U! G- Z8 L( V& a$ _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 Z/ F* \# u% O5 U  l* y: b1 Z: L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 z) A/ \. {! n" L9 q2 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: g: V; f- ]: m# }9 o7 L' r  @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ x& v! ^, d# r+ e! q4 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& A4 r  F3 m' U- |& D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>