【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# G" Y" |5 ]9 k9 c; N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# b/ G1 b6 z9 D. e; lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  A) B5 K" L  nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! v7 L+ E4 \, @+ R9 M- SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. S$ a- r; j  y# rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ E  A2 q2 t* k; S( p; YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 r% B3 b1 j, j5 ]5 N' EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- G3 B: j  ?; a0 F; j* ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 y) I/ m1 Q: e- ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( H6 f# e5 H$ u/ pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% E0 B$ Q- a. Z; ]. C4 N; xI’m still filled with fear
3 n7 F9 k" p6 t, [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ^: l) u. E& ^( P$ e" z& n8 B4 xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; @" O( L, _$ R: e) UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 c. Z8 K" [, gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 M% F$ A& c+ {9 Y2 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" C9 E# w3 ]2 k' @4 s; v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" w" H% w& E( S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 E' F1 }# d6 V5 ^+ `9 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 _1 F1 F- ^3 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ P# N0 C" ?; Y9 u9 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. Y, Z4 g8 \- q% q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; k( K6 i: x; k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 L  W# H, W3 V+ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% v* ]# I. O6 I$ m" G( x1 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' E8 ^7 L% `- P' I$ t1 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 f5 _' X$ Z. O' I; J$ w$ l" b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" G( {2 _  I) ^& S1 C* _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" _6 {) E: J( ?! p+ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* }  e- z1 i) R9 b5 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 x' M; H7 A/ U9 u" g$ h. z3 M1 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% [4 u. v' _2 L; T# _7 F: t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& r3 l1 H; U$ q5 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% A: ~/ V6 ]7 X6 s) ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 Z1 \/ g+ t1 l: I/ [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ U+ d3 _+ J0 }; \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: x3 T& _3 ?9 y! h: M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' S% P. f. \6 b: l" A( E3 c& z' F% d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ W) h: V# m- d3 I0 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 H1 O8 U6 C4 m& @5 i4 h) w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% q) {! p, ~+ e- }* Q/ n; o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. _" [2 k6 X, v% T& f5 S; a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, t0 ?- s, U, z6 D: m7 i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 X) ]/ s& j' U0 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- p! ^0 L0 [- j7 [# _6 v! ^2 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 K' O9 c2 o% ^0 w7 V% Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& m1 j  r# G. m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 z, S. J/ `1 l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>