【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 p9 S; T  R  Q& Q" O9 B歌词我附在后面。
, i6 V5 l! ?, V' \% ^! ~' b& DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) I6 P! m3 v8 G- n( i1 ?* vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ I- M/ a5 T5 W2 b* e$ lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( h$ g5 q1 |- ?4 F) BThe sky is happy down to its soul
' z# j, t/ u  W' UWith the moon kissing it every night
6 o7 c2 O- ]9 E. v* `& e( w, SSeeing the sky content with its love
. p% N: `$ w8 ~+ g2 b* bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 T" s( h5 S/ x2 RYou needn’t fear anything
# c' x3 b# X, ]' m4 I$ AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 c5 I' {: |. a% BEvery other word you utter is love
0 V! R* f9 h) qI really want to know just how much you love me
. u6 V. ]% F. H8 U6 [, z  P) p# CI love you I love you with all my heart
3 v) V* i  {2 @6 H% BNothing can compare to my love
1 a5 M' |% f* Q6 C1 w1 U! N% gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# t0 H" V; V7 U9 a6 |1 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 ~& R# ^1 u1 h" Z4 ]- r( g/ ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" Q1 Y% g& i0 h" z: QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. N) ^, E8 R& t$ x  L2 i% qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- [$ d0 E7 A, P* j8 ^  G" F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  M  o! n2 x7 W% m) p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* j3 L7 H, I, }2 j& Q7 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( f" M/ J' e# f3 O, h0 n+ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& ?. r: C/ O6 x9 p$ S. T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: z9 S- v0 ~  p- V2 [1 F. ]+ W0 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. p4 a8 g+ o! b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 I! x# |+ z- p( {1 W* e& ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ w% o4 |- t1 L& J' c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% B8 v. ~) m3 ]; T1 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; S2 V# w) H( R2 N; [& b9 q- S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: `) T- {$ Z5 y% f<P>你无需担心</P>
5 \6 e* f# N) `6 c: Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 R4 _/ z# L( u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 C8 s" p5 m4 j* O3 K6 B- C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! F  E8 ^2 T: M+ E; c6 B* c% K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- [/ s; b/ g" l2 y0 `. E4 t- o3 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! [7 Z+ D% X: C# Y% ^% t; e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 X; q! @- C; Q% s% h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# Z0 @2 t; g* G: S0 P8 d' v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ T9 d1 j, e5 z2 K* y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ^1 F* n9 s& G9 q" k2 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. @2 j$ S5 }3 i, T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" Z* L. `' \' V<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 I. u3 |- s; n7 @% G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* a2 w) b7 k0 I9 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; |5 ~- G! W& a3 @8 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) w2 t3 p( l) w! _% [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 i  A( i( N8 b  T- [$ v- t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 g; H2 ]+ _" H! i/ T! j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  T6 o' o3 M5 |- D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  E/ r( u4 O2 K% \! F% r0 y/ ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# L' r. \9 X8 I# ?3 i' l5 {9 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>