【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; z, x+ B. G1 J% C4 X歌词我附在后面。
+ A) c2 ~6 ^! {8 X4 X  w; P1 Q9 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ?5 I# v( Y$ I3 o6 m. D* aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! x: f7 s2 G) {( A, M& B# IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' J) o. Z5 ^( `* S% `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ ]5 o) T- T! |6 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 G" D5 K$ |1 w" ^5 a, LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% C; j8 W: k2 R* ^  Z- [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ?- C! X" X, \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 U3 @+ H$ B2 ]; f# s: NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  U- d6 H# H7 b9 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 z) W: J0 k9 M) i; ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: H% P9 O& z+ Y) O0 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! q; C3 t2 B# B, ]) b5 d4 {- t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& }; }2 F3 N6 B9 o8 m7 Q2 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" F" k9 R  m7 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  T7 W$ R$ {  d7 S! x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  ~* r. m1 k- S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' T  J$ w/ F( d- ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. O: v) ?, ~( v! ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 U3 j4 D. }$ Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ^" x. D2 n% a9 ?4 A9 i6 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" x4 P# W$ u& \) B5 p8 z. ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ]$ I  ]5 m; \2 \% p! s: @6 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' l0 o# T1 L" N$ S2 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) `  f8 ?8 g% B# _  d# y<P>你无需担心</P>
7 D3 v3 H& Y7 b# A, \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 U2 k5 t$ t2 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 K% g8 A8 b2 a2 B0 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 D  S- s9 N1 a" K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- ]8 ~8 P& _2 c9 W7 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! s2 e& A: v: n% W) q& T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 J& r) Y% ^' o% f) T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  l7 ]" L9 @& a9 e5 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 k/ k' S; k8 `8 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; v5 {- }* R' L6 F& H: P4 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- f- `% S" O4 t. }. @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; K4 I8 e& m5 P- {/ ?# R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ J& }7 Q$ L. F" X& \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ?; [# G2 ]) r0 P3 t; l. |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 V9 ~  w3 ~# }4 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, c" S3 L2 L1 P- \# \# j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( R; s) O% t6 U) t2 @' `: H我请你剖开它

9 ]& t" u4 r  Y/ }# _, Z1 x  m9 q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>