【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 g: a  l& W$ b1 \' {; V+ bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% y9 @$ U% L4 `( F! sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ~" l' S* ?* Y: g& o; l5 @5 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. m3 E1 M/ [0 L+ V& e$ f& W3 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# F, p8 r1 X6 x' i" G3 W5 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 U- k/ B# h6 R. j2 i/ @2 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% L" C) W) B2 U9 o5 P! lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* S# D* A" D& y  `I want so much to see inside your heart
+ n( I8 D+ x' @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# S* S  |  Y( E1 V2 [I’m still filled with fear
  {7 o, k2 i6 G. Q- K, D% TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& E9 L9 E5 E/ q, x$ z( I6 S9 cI regret not dying
# S6 m1 p7 G: R, X9 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" I: b. Z& ~! J  |7 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 q, N; F: B" B% @, f+ K$ g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! [5 k2 b: s" z3 g8 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 `4 i0 P1 @$ P+ J# _1 I% M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 K3 d3 o3 u# e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 Z1 @/ ?; w7 i, K- \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% N. A3 Z. b; \1 O' c( j- d! V/ j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( a( v7 [4 D2 W' V9 i: ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. b0 C: i3 Q. A0 g6 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 I3 m! s* F8 Z& y" P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! D. i+ u; z6 X# h/ n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ P* K, G! }1 e  l$ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) S; o2 E. E# ^% @' m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( X6 e- |0 H4 Q/ b& G+ w( @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 N1 f3 i1 H1 ^3 J* d: L4 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" m- M5 o! H. \7 c: y5 J' [3 o; @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 v6 e5 }8 T8 Y: D5 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 J7 W! T4 H# @; p3 E& n7 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# P2 }; j/ D$ O7 ], Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 Q5 r7 d+ m+ C3 ?! Q. c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 u6 R+ q1 R5 m6 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 g- c# S3 R& T. h- g" U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ _8 X0 v) q/ x" ~. d/ V+ c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. N( Y" Q9 W2 Z! N4 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ J; t) d( H0 S8 P5 Z% R% a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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