【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 k5 k: Y$ h6 b  i+ f9 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: ~6 k9 h; o# e& W3 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 T  D- l' M, I2 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! x. i  d* I; V( b( nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 C  a; e, Q9 F5 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& F7 ?! y: @! o: Z4 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  j( I0 `" f& A: p/ a9 j( iI love you I love you with all my heart
% ~; ?1 v% |2 c8 T  w2 `0 i+ ANothing can compare to my love
( K9 m$ y2 V2 m5 @/ yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 ?( L2 w$ W, y4 d1 S& p+ @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 Z6 \$ \) u' l7 ]0 }, hI’m still filled with fear
) O# ~; V1 Z: X1 S" yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; y/ N+ X$ N" i# R& PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# k+ F/ q7 ]) I/ j4 Y  AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) f4 U6 O$ {$ q- ]" @3 |+ eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 A1 o9 H; ?  v7 V6 ]; q3 F# F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' r- ?' H8 y! [8 f  s7 u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ^# t+ i: Y$ S3 ?* L3 I! j. b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( X, u+ a. c! W( t$ U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 M7 X' a- R1 d8 k+ ]" E8 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" a+ F+ |3 A2 O5 k! a" |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: a2 ~* Y+ G2 x8 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ~3 w. K4 y: _0 D9 Z5 s  w' L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! Z& ]& G, g* e: u! M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s8 l* {0 F2 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ j0 [$ q6 ?" S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 K) @  x6 @% v' Q# t& L* G1 `' T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 U* U6 Y- m' X; n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 V8 t- H+ u  \  C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 q4 E& v3 U5 x  s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 K8 }9 Z, s3 w5 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% C9 w  H4 s8 p/ ?' l7 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% ?7 ?% }. n% ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: X) ^' A* Q. O; B5 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 H  C3 O# Y* R& l. {% z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ V1 {5 n& S4 A2 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  T) L" V5 u) S# C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* c& c& _, p) q9 b# E- y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! J; m" r0 z! w# P! V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; x: G% e/ e+ `0 r, Y# p1 u5 C  u: _) C& _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ c0 x! R- _% g3 G! u3 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 M! U! ^6 G) k3 K/ }9 c$ y6 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. a- \& Z# Q  l# p' g( T# X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 G9 j4 {9 T9 G6 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' ?/ N: A5 c9 F- m7 m: d, o我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>