【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ~1 r( A* W6 {3 R. L; ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' _$ J8 U( T$ M  _Seeing the sky content with its love
4 H# `* _6 b  rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ u% M* m6 I% aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 B! f" }! B1 N! lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 Y6 b: q' Y( T$ T+ F. g. a# o9 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" `% p5 ^7 Z  y: G% N3 I! LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ o* u* W, \4 a: ?  B& R) E" `I’m still filled with fear
  p  H3 m3 ^* s- Z! Z) x3 W! |/ e8 s1 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, g5 K! d3 l4 u5 o" m2 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 Q6 |  G+ W% u9 WWith such a tongue as yours,
% Z0 B7 E$ N( n/ u# U- DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 B$ f* ~- \# K2 H  T, s7 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* v$ i2 l+ i' Z7 X. j9 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& K1 r+ I" B1 C( G6 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ o7 I. R2 l2 N* g& ^* X7 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" O6 I* j9 X# [9 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 w! e# i7 [4 x6 P- j" E. J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" T& R5 c) Q/ }) W  ]" e, M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: e4 o7 \  d, {1 o; H" s8 Q% d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  e, `, T/ O  w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- m( S7 @8 O6 |/ s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 t: k) l2 H/ Y+ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% M. I- _. S# ^% D, t1 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 Q/ v7 y- O. a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ K2 O9 {3 s. U) O+ l" b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- P3 H( c+ F/ c1 w5 {: x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 C/ `# K( B/ y" q/ i4 V0 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: u8 ^% t5 d( z9 D1 E$ C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, \) G2 a' w  @1 C/ ~" f0 `% ?. t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, Q- U0 W/ L  V- j1 Q* h2 m. X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 N+ _* \3 o' y2 w7 z' C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 B0 k8 P$ {5 e: N3 @2 Q/ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: m; n( M4 _+ M) L  u+ j/ ^1 b$ @0 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 Y  y+ S2 R4 u9 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% `( _: X+ q6 e3 ?/ c5 B8 b  y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>