【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" i$ j2 n4 v2 H% e( A+ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" ?" u+ N: X; P  O9 [# ~$ x& G9 N( rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ K2 v6 z- U. N+ f& v+ _' D- Q# ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  B1 l8 @3 F) F9 s5 ~& nThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 D5 F4 k6 K, A; E8 [; mWith the moon kissing it every night
4 t, |: z3 n6 `0 s' [1 Y! q3 V" uSeeing the sky content with its love
7 j# h0 o2 y* A! UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ?1 c8 b$ |* tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 r8 _% m, y6 r  @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( \! p$ J2 X( O1 \/ QI want so much to see inside your heart
! e! t8 f  \: h5 f7 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- l  R& C% O' ?$ j  @+ A2 I# |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Y+ D) c4 s3 ]; ^: G8 [+ b! @I regret not dying
$ q7 `6 ^/ Q% |; k) J9 q8 g' _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: g1 q5 R( [' C. j: O1 E: g) \7 nWith such a tongue as yours,
/ Q& k  _; t% u8 [) ~8 F. q: k1 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( e9 [) N) c$ D( _- A) j6 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 J3 @- W# P' H/ m6 ~  m5 l9 S5 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 M8 W# S" V! M0 a7 {0 r% y, b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) f7 ^# e: v* G5 z4 n- }$ y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. P% B* N4 t6 a8 d" F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ _/ ?+ v7 X# @3 Z1 i3 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. F) R( T/ g# y1 I: ]5 {9 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& s4 F/ e0 w$ Z# h. U* u  r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# u$ \9 m2 E; v2 t" i0 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, i# e% h5 E' }8 m) N/ Y, i9 t. R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. }& N9 m: d5 J, o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 }+ l+ x% }9 p8 g) |3 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: f" F* d9 O5 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 [/ m: p( D1 e+ u- r" N* `- w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- C$ ?, ]6 J- e* b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 j+ D1 G6 f* P' B- _: q0 h- e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ A# z1 P! w6 c8 t/ a. V, p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; N! k3 K; D. w2 U# r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 B  C$ C# j% Z, ~! A6 Y6 V7 D! S8 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! ~, w" Q4 `8 L! R  O" F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 v8 {# m1 X- F" R" [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 F- r1 a# [, a7 p5 \& _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ?/ R4 q: O1 b) T) K. v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 q# }6 M4 e1 `) X: W1 Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" i1 U6 U: B# g" ]/ c+ f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ x8 k. |1 x% R/ A$ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 t3 g( h2 b' }, \$ [- k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 Y% G0 L( B6 y2 C# p6 C* _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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