【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 c# g4 i0 a9 }9 S" ?7 `" G" qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# x5 S$ L3 z% G' L0 l$ ^  o  y9 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. _7 e. J! Y8 WSeeing the sky content with its love
/ b, |# \; v& |/ u; C6 Q" NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 w( K/ Q4 A& {" t* U8 i3 O; iYou needn’t fear anything
& C6 H! ~+ X8 W. WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ N& c* b& N- l) I. uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 J! T6 b# e# ?, y) FI want so much to see inside your heart
5 }) r& L: w1 L/ u. G3 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% i3 Z5 T2 v5 g9 q6 y( \I’m still filled with fear
( E0 O. K9 @. J, e, SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 p$ j# u" v- E! E1 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 h6 i0 F# g1 ?4 h8 X3 ~1 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 \$ t$ E! r- n/ X: k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 q1 D2 O0 Z% ?' ~  b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# E7 f8 K! i4 ?0 m# c4 }. A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 g/ f9 i7 a$ [+ S* c3 |" |4 v3 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( S2 w" j! J: L  D& {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 K* |+ B# u9 W. [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, L6 R; l  Q( C* S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 z! ?2 j6 H8 C! m# H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- U2 d$ ?* f7 m& o$ }* @' k7 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 t5 \) V4 O: m4 ^( @& @9 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 F; H/ [" O5 H* Y/ p# F) f; J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" I' `% b0 I) Q& s+ l/ g" o8 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 b' ]. W* P4 v/ k* e2 }# T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 ~  h  y4 @7 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# X& k. L# M9 l( J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( |8 |4 b  I" F7 N+ @  G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  V! m5 o! E% `" V5 @- u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% J* }  i. y% Q" v* m0 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 \- J% t6 e1 |" ]8 k' d$ ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  B+ k9 ^% w# l7 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 i& I  k; E; M4 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. n* j+ b0 m. I0 W4 U$ S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' P4 J+ F$ H0 Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& w' q% S( v" @( L: X3 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) l& p$ D, ~8 m& W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>