【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
# Y# v$ L6 f/ V5 R7 F/ Q" _' n: fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- E" u4 x2 x' u" uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 i7 R/ f' f) }% ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' n5 E; x) ~+ P' P' q; Q  p' xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 n: b5 u) H* J8 |7 U9 e$ w7 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ^0 K' V0 d7 _6 `1 L5 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 x1 O- W* X& u  g6 yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 ^3 ]: g, D  ?- {2 }! P1 f6 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. z3 V# ~6 i# s5 V0 R: ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% |5 g6 Q5 N' \6 n4 AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" j' F& }$ J- U( |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  W- r% d( G# L$ C- [# QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& _  k( r2 a+ k; w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Y$ Q* U- m8 e% g- d3 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) W1 k8 Y1 P! e. s; K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; W% k  P$ y# r1 L0 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( h* ~4 E4 f1 B. R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  a3 p1 S2 T( e3 w' }& P' M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& Y( M% y; W9 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' O: Y6 Z6 e! i! Y1 z. P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ d5 k* F2 C3 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 ~5 L1 t0 t& z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 w4 ?6 w* `9 H4 G% o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ y- N% h6 l7 P( J4 B! E: R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# }0 O% t. S: I7 N% z, }: u0 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 O" f$ [: W/ ?: {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* B3 L. J3 y* W; J$ B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 L; W0 \0 @# r8 f# m" M: T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* w# |7 _+ @8 B- x) y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ^' B& b1 j/ i5 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! w% e( Q8 \( n  U- `3 C' v" E* n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# k. k; _% S0 Z5 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 b0 U" u- R! w5 n( L" i2 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; m& _1 E0 Y' ?3 R7 O  F; _2 e& f+ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ W2 h* }" Q) o$ B2 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! U; J- r$ H$ T9 c" Y2 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  L& B" z* W8 W& U8 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" x5 [1 M) C  u- E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% t. o( `# C8 h& I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 C, \3 E5 Z, \0 O" {' }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% |+ s/ Y- U' R' T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ l, L5 X, D. B( I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>