【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 A' {; M$ t6 m) ~5 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! t1 m9 {4 m6 N. L- E9 X9 I: n5 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ }  o2 p* v5 t5 r2 \0 v/ W6 tWith the moon kissing it every night
* q( c7 B! y( c8 y  aSeeing the sky content with its love
* s( L% B9 w0 E9 W9 L  kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& B6 T1 J# C' e* c% n7 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: D0 z% R7 x8 j* c2 P' v  l. OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% g9 X  f: K/ _! [+ X9 O4 E. qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 s- u: w/ y4 c: ^" E& SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 Q! c5 t! V  }+ H; Z" Z% UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# j5 h) N* l( I6 }I’m still filled with fear
/ {1 M" G7 ~  j* A7 T7 Q8 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) M3 _! R7 D; m( II regret not dying
' A5 a+ u3 I/ x+ MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 d# T, Y+ r! \& q% LWith such a tongue as yours,
- e: y) [, A% M$ _3 @0 R  EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ h8 n0 X. H+ k' tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- T9 ^$ W! z6 g, D3 I3 q/ P: [/ pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ `8 D: g5 e4 L! J7 J$ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ d$ R( @9 B; S2 y. n9 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; `, x& B8 s# H0 J* [1 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 L! K& x1 ?) S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 |/ p- l" t( C# C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 [# F4 M  o( N( P5 i5 k* }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 a6 c3 O, j; K; k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 F1 u* y5 W/ ^6 T' F! J( D8 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ Q$ [+ c1 T' ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 f% {+ f" K2 g, ^) G% |% l2 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ?- N# z3 t2 g  E- `( E( \, ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ?+ N% h! W$ U* Q6 R<P>你无需担心</P>
9 Q& C2 N" F3 I( M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ]8 v) S, U& t7 d) p5 |* `* P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 }. h3 h# x# S: }. z' y0 E$ G5 M# j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! U- w' G: @( }8 c" d! f. S2 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% o0 i7 X( g2 u3 m+ d5 a& d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' R3 {2 v- W5 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ H7 l& y6 m" z/ H( g) a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 |# S- l) r# Q- ^& q8 W+ l: c, ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 l9 \, r$ }0 \  C( n3 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' u3 U7 z5 Q8 L3 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 C0 J8 V4 S2 f7 p5 n; _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 h  p  j1 I3 C; _3 ]: L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 s) a- Z% V3 r$ j; F8 h+ l  u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 ]; U& n3 D% ?3 E5 B! F" q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: A  }6 Z' A+ q3 {: v7 Z3 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 [* I# i% i  N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% u; ]. H- q( i$ S! W, S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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