【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, U0 H' T: Y$ x( fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) }& S4 ^( v1 j0 {2 z' kThe sky is happy down to its soul
" s5 Z/ ]5 h5 B$ i9 Y! U, UWith the moon kissing it every night
* w- @6 U. [* ]' t9 VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( p; g5 ^7 t  ~4 W, I% uYou needn’t fear anything
' [3 q/ f  `% f. \/ QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* n0 _2 D' H6 o- d, nEvery other word you utter is love
' t( U- _, D- {. \7 UI really want to know just how much you love me
$ E- M6 e" A/ ^( A' M1 i8 V# NI love you I love you with all my heart
7 ~+ g& }# T/ Q4 INothing can compare to my love
* w5 x$ [. j/ l+ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 _  E  e" [$ q5 d' F6 o  `I want so much to see inside your heart
+ p" w: s( I1 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  e; s. R6 ~# [! Z( F( QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! v1 _) a. a5 ?/ B  eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 S. Y1 y4 F: TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 T2 Z' K* Y# n% E2 E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 Z0 X' n# w, w! }* i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' O  K! Z( ~% @3 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 m% c  i9 V  C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 \7 E5 F4 a. x  k; w3 a) q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 ?4 [) f/ d: e- n& Z' w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ z0 k' U" z; F$ U4 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% ]: ]# T$ F5 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) f4 H  [2 r2 M, v# z7 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 s+ f. x7 A7 r; }& e$ ~<P>你无需担心</P>
2 R/ z, D% N9 n# r7 E+ P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  V. Q! x( d: \; n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( T4 H6 k" a% O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& U8 u6 o9 r) g9 Z6 v6 i7 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, g6 M2 R" v7 R- l: [% H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 G! q; d; t) S3 W3 N' f, ^+ r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) ?: c% e4 ]5 @. G9 ~8 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 O5 d* d. u! p, L" I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# G( a- R; N# v' H. y9 J# c  Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) e5 f6 P, h) ?6 y' C4 y0 F6 K7 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& U( x9 `3 O8 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( X5 x2 K& e: l9 n% G3 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" g3 F3 ~% U0 o  Y. d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ f& E. n, [# m- a; f% w+ {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ r! |7 j) K& f5 K3 q/ H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. u. Z: C2 n/ h, [$ B  j; |  s* {9 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ x1 |! l, Q$ S  {4 h9 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>