【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 {  t. r; p" {4 v# GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ D. N* S: P; ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* a7 K5 E2 @+ l# L% ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& z( p6 ^3 ?" V$ R! [! _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. g) n1 ~4 T& a  b: u$ B8 dSeeing the sky content with its love
  n5 E# k2 S* ?0 x: aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 Z) h) I  B8 }) G! o% r  Z9 eYou needn’t fear anything
1 ^# A5 o. C4 D4 y( v: v" WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ I. N- k$ E+ i0 J2 N( {Every other word you utter is love
+ s  J1 _+ f  M+ D( S% f0 D$ mI really want to know just how much you love me
5 X9 W) @, U& X9 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ A8 e: H& Z, cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ }( T/ E$ |4 ~7 J2 ~2 B; S& j" P+ mI want so much to see inside your heart
/ ?6 ]4 Q1 i1 V+ K+ g/ a! {; m* LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* z! ^% ], G2 x; ]5 K# ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 I, Q! X: J( h1 G5 }: n! w! o, VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* q, L& |+ U7 g& X& w9 x3 O) }With such a tongue as yours,
* x0 }% `+ A, B" a( }6 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& @7 }9 S* d  h- D, yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- M# ^) u2 m  n" w7 R' x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! [$ W$ E- l. s+ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' s( D, I7 j8 q8 `" K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; k/ h* b+ X' C9 i. o7 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& F& e& H" ]" }1 [3 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* |+ ]. k5 p- p7 p& l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 f1 F& |* U4 \* m' R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) U: w4 }" B# t" E4 x3 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ K3 {- a$ r4 O4 j6 ]3 }' y" t8 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 U3 D2 t, A7 W! X9 l+ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; p2 y9 k8 ?/ m# N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- [5 I( O7 }! f2 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 T% @  T* p# _! O$ T5 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 {) g5 X2 X8 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 ~  \: G. Z4 {9 `- z4 ~( _3 _% S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' z2 n/ z# s2 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! p$ N8 B/ n2 ?$ y2 |6 q8 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 W5 H0 L% D' H1 R1 u# ]  d! C2 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; q. u( W  H& [* E8 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; k9 T. G, g$ J& F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 B: T& a" h7 ^4 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 T' T% u! S' O* ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 k6 |2 ~. g# o% s- E3 N( _4 W% ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 @' |0 E3 Q; ~' v$ k0 M  j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) k4 t* v  J4 R4 I5 u6 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' h( i+ N2 [1 ?; }& b" Z' z) c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 x, @" y6 s4 p: s7 V' w$ i) D  r  u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- l8 O6 L- z; w% j6 \. k3 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# e* F! d4 [& @+ w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Y1 W/ D2 _2 M( z1 U/ C5 _: m2 I+ D$ Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 H2 n0 f4 p) k5 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ z$ c' H- A( `% |* o4 @8 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( a& G4 N2 t# A$ r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 G: w) W& E7 \" E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% K& z# x% f* h" H  ?9 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 K+ n6 d1 I' i7 \' m, K我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) v- Y/ ]7 m8 {$ z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>