【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- b6 V  V* w7 J) L" x! E/ s; CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! a- L  e; P. e5 S+ w* aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& n+ }0 L. n* f6 R! z9 I0 U5 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 y  X- e" H+ \# n, h# UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ ^$ p$ j. }1 R) o: y& l- wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- {. v& W/ r5 X+ D* p+ N+ h: }I want so much to see inside your heart
, A+ Q: d6 B+ f2 k0 @3 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# v# Q% E! x  pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. N$ Q( v" r3 p( }$ Q4 n' wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 R3 r, x3 I1 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) P2 w2 L$ j0 F7 ^# m7 Q! URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 }9 {+ z( |6 x# T0 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& b8 q1 ^8 k. K1 g& ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 d" G5 r, e$ h$ x; v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# W( C% r- r% f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! R' d  u/ }" |: \5 q. k0 b( u4 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( x. ^' {  ^2 |! h/ {6 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& s% x' d) [# J6 j6 I' a8 e; q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 D$ U5 Q/ V+ u( z$ e, m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ?2 ~/ `. c9 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* G: Z8 Z6 k. J/ F& j2 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ C: F" J; L: A% o* k% m& }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! k- K1 g1 D7 `" q( ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
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<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, r" \! u1 p/ c/ i7 n- P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; W9 ?6 c' V( E5 [; a* Y0 U2 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. k' S1 k) _) _( v; s6 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; X, L0 `1 a  X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% }4 o# g5 L4 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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$ w$ L- [% [& M, @/ e& W8 S! w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! g$ X' L6 r1 G  u5 J6 u" i+ d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ?3 N* |3 f  B) I" i! |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: Y( `/ }7 n" w1 I; x& y' l% a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 v4 v. X* v" L+ S4 f3 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ p/ R, B; Q$ a3 Q+ ?: ?2 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ ~2 g5 x- P8 J" U4 q2 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>