【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* U8 k8 q( C+ d% a$ ~: ^9 _! lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 \" C$ Q# E9 N2 H! \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, i) V4 u9 E7 U2 U) E. X% TWith the moon kissing it every night
/ S4 m2 n7 L/ _1 XSeeing the sky content with its love
2 H* k' I8 u# o4 j% f* g) A. {8 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" |* m7 ]" `8 \3 M9 Y9 zNothing can compare to my love
% h  }0 x' j& |8 t: A0 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 \, W% a9 R" u8 O8 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 o8 p6 T, t9 f: p# D6 U+ HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. ~- M2 L' f/ V2 \* Q: v8 \/ s/ ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 s, x  \9 v3 e( i9 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, _: Q4 ~+ M4 S0 G0 \6 H& q, GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. p) C8 a) ^; Y7 N! i+ R' w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# S9 C/ q& g( _: e& t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 ^. H3 R$ R$ j( [$ \5 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) d6 I" y9 s: n6 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ f# `9 u0 o: q' z, g2 n" U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 m6 d6 V* n! V+ r& X) F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 \  _0 Z$ ]% k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 L& x" Y/ p- t/ [' Z3 l8 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! \' o& `$ c0 M9 W7 P+ d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# O% J. Q, i, Z- n: [% h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. J& G9 E0 @2 I' J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 x! U/ E1 x, ~% |) D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( j- E7 |' ?4 `( J+ ]/ ]3 e5 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 H! ~' M. O: q2 V* E; ^* W0 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' j3 y, `  @  \) ]4 A: @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 D* [. d3 M+ Y- i* Q6 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 J" g$ f1 |8 g  b: P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: K2 X- Z' b  R5 K0 e( P0 e. o, u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 V$ q" F. S4 ]  ?- H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; T7 P- G( k1 Q  b  m- \) o) D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, ~9 l) L- A. D3 l) g% B; t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% i, x6 o! @, E; s* P: o& _8 r6 h: z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ b! L1 b( W# h3 E* r* B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 h9 I& J' e. s- p) Z5 t3 N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>