【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 k) j7 I$ x8 ]( F+ q) }% n9 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ S# n, v6 Z  K8 g- o- e: }9 e6 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 i5 ^/ f$ k( U& a/ z7 YSeeing the sky content with its love
" D- c9 e, K+ GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! W* N6 n9 c. nEvery other word you utter is love
, T& [  c* S- C+ S2 b. j! c5 HI really want to know just how much you love me
. @; N; B) k$ }( ]9 EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! o, ]: e1 x' E- b, L- x) \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 N. Y9 p8 x% p/ g  d! U1 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# G) M# K% c: ^. D9 hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( _: J1 b# @4 H" Q5 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! s6 E; w# R2 KI regret not dying
4 L* l; t3 f* I( b; u5 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 G; h) p* q7 }# M: @5 n# dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ f% U7 K0 q. y$ ^' N0 E# ^; cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; d$ G! f+ l, g/ i$ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& i  F9 ^! V! O- n; _6 M& K) Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" ~: Q9 F4 J4 P( X; D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( @: P! F" F  {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ P9 G& Q7 e/ p  |: c4 W6 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( {5 `' y0 i! t5 z& G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 A, }, a/ ]9 H7 \+ d# E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 @, x: W1 F1 |; H+ Z  {8 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 ]$ O/ V" m! Y4 o: q  ~$ e% w5 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ t9 `: g! o5 l' y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ H! {; ]6 ~, w( t( {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! }3 ]6 a4 D& V8 d; {. |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- k! d# ]% S" N. p  W  Q1 v2 w! L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 f/ c2 B' Q6 [2 f4 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 [# l8 U+ Q6 n* a: m7 H/ p3 I! H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: X) F. N4 N1 ^: g& l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ U5 [' u6 `# K/ b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, L. t3 V) Q( F, p9 F0 Z; p<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 w$ g- d0 T) F3 {9 f* U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* Y1 T  F7 U" c3 B- r) a# k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 A, F! \7 [8 b. m" d, N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! D5 B/ u) E4 n& K+ J, t! l  Y: O4 g. S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ I2 M  ]2 _" `& R- a' B/ _5 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ b3 Z* {2 @  V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% s- E, ^1 C( b% R( G2 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>