【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 S) j$ i4 i7 m+ Y1 n% fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ K$ Q1 d% c) b- Q5 `. n. `1 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. Z. q4 e8 R% x3 P& ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 F& e+ ]+ j% d9 Q# zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 }$ \/ o* H5 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
( y7 L5 z" J; _2 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 k. Q  [3 ~9 uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 l5 o- C7 h4 n$ G, J$ MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- H4 U( P( Y) n4 r; W1 c1 |/ rI want so much to see inside your heart
2 ?" s" }9 f- [- P9 U! t0 Y  m5 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 [( s" c$ B8 L' a  ?5 i. mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! S2 x& T$ Z0 I- M- }0 Q5 Q6 dI regret not dying
  r# f' r3 c8 Z7 w- q3 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  M+ u  I3 l. D" l4 l' uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 \3 d3 L: Q5 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  {5 a' p, y! ?( y1 [0 [0 ~! o9 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. K, V: f& S. M0 Z1 Z8 |7 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ E$ Z( ?1 ^  ]! h4 z) I3 o1 ~6 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 J; M0 ]  R4 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 Q3 H% Q* A" C$ F5 q) m- p: L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' V7 W/ q  I5 T: z* X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' k% b0 j! \# s. R4 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 J) l+ C& J! f" ^7 [) F7 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, T& R2 P. E- P* Y5 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 ^3 X( z+ U2 u$ `$ _# `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' ^8 G7 P% F3 |4 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, t  N4 d9 v+ E' X0 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 j: q3 A& ]5 A* ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  y2 n3 y/ }& U2 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: R# C8 ^+ [, r7 I7 e- k) O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ m" S+ \% c  U7 Z6 ?0 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( ~) t! ~. O5 ^7 b4 p+ @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% l7 g1 [4 ?0 Z8 @- E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- y* t: u* m+ G' k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) {, B4 W' e7 Z$ ?; X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- c. P$ x" q7 t! q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- z: R% T# l2 i$ L3 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 w2 L1 ?! q: l! q% u* }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 |- k- x% ^5 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 W& ]7 |9 f7 N7 S9 `9 a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 G2 J- j; @8 V% F" s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>