【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& u; a) i% d4 Y8 |: J8 j/ c; D歌词我附在后面。
* e8 F4 j) k2 X$ ~* U+ pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. D8 ~3 D  [/ rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. r% W4 o8 {: r: R/ G6 p0 N" qThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ \( U: S8 [$ w* F. xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% b1 J/ D% }" z: }, jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& p6 I- C- W% SI want so much to see inside your heart
8 R( |" d0 \& ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ L3 e3 _" J% m6 c4 i6 q5 k: H9 nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 R  O: m6 }7 L3 {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# ]% Z. v1 R+ [& q* @# GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 k) U9 y' Z( c! [0 x  P! s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% g& ^1 h5 b3 h" d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 @; W0 _+ E3 h* z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% D9 V4 `4 a5 k4 n# r; m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ l$ m, U$ f  T9 d% z' J  M1 J. T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 \% r( H: M. v! R' K, i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( v1 O& L  I/ F- d$ R( @2 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! R! A. i* y6 ^! l7 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" b# _; \$ K$ z4 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 D! Z+ y0 B7 L5 s" j! k- O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 M3 T. B, C' i0 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) r( h/ ?4 O4 |0 t" r: m* [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ I* g. O+ M  Z6 s5 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 u0 Y1 i+ J0 T3 {+ ]  k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. \7 H9 G9 f; ]" |9 d0 O! ]" ^5 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) M/ \9 B) H" @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) g% A6 W& H5 X0 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" s, D5 D) W: j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& N, g+ p* M5 ^$ i' r' y% t1 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 U3 e/ p6 z3 u5 m1 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. f3 `7 t& q$ F7 J2 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 _7 v) g4 }& q6 B, V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 `  H, [. q4 @. i7 e" [2 B! m/ A6 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- T' Z9 T: D# M/ c& S% Y9 t: j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- M" s% c# \$ ?/ F: {! `+ T0 r0 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 l5 A6 M  r9 X2 p3 s, _1 ]* \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- J- Z5 }6 N6 N3 P) I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* {! U; I6 m3 L2 R8 G3 o) Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% o3 Q: d' {; ]. M/ w, U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% `! J4 x2 d% D% W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. f! N- O+ H7 m2 F$ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 ~% w. ^2 O9 Y/ p3 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* i1 }. k3 ]8 }8 o* Z5 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ w0 t, d5 K; ]7 g7 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>