【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. O, Y- Q. a4 D( l' N: h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) d) x8 N8 M: _4 V# c; T3 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: @* n/ K, u9 b' O4 \9 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  m3 B$ f- s* m$ s- BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  q9 i1 p* v6 f5 W! `You needn’t fear anything
8 [9 A+ E' f; D- O9 m" RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 T; b6 j$ @+ a$ DI really want to know just how much you love me
, f% D7 n& @( }, Q0 R! U% lI love you I love you with all my heart
/ P) \0 h1 h3 }7 z4 aNothing can compare to my love
' n6 v, i1 Q% ~" ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) f1 j- i# e3 w  T: T+ R5 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! u6 g6 f& i% B" P" v9 I# R% RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) v/ u) r9 L' D" ?I’m still filled with fear
) B# U- V; U2 W! M) B* R+ xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 j8 B% T, i* t8 V9 G# |% JWith such a tongue as yours,
( @0 m2 ~" O4 n% C  e" gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! }% o3 |, ^: Y' M! a) ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- X/ k8 P( S" x- sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 b; y* _5 j: ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# h; U( \4 k5 q  u6 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# P+ a- z  ~1 L, E6 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# g) H$ b7 B' R: b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 k* D  k$ `7 {/ Y. u$ N8 t& {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ p! W. O3 {8 v5 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) x# v! [9 q- w( T0 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 W! H, k4 l1 p# E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; c% p. [- `! P9 g: e! p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; \4 _: ?8 Y- t, [+ I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ i! t8 E/ K2 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 r" G' k; @! v( X) ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  X4 q3 {) h# s) A" Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 t6 @: C' U7 k  {" g/ L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 j4 z. i% w- q& z( S; A, J" ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. x  |$ d. i& ?5 y4 A* v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ `7 M( ], O6 g# c3 i' Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 |9 [3 h& ?2 M2 d! K, T: r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ J/ i7 U1 |6 a6 H" O4 V6 X4 m' A8 c4 x/ Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 B0 b& Y/ F9 g- b" x& R" b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 k- h- s$ Q; ?+ }* w9 U) ~5 h( ]0 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 r2 b) s& ^0 r  m7 M, J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& J4 }7 F; P1 v; d8 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 t# o% L; N6 Z0 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! y" ]" |0 ~: W% o5 t5 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ?% ]" c5 p: a% h$ G* `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 ?" [8 E+ `$ Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  V  U3 b% s7 M: M/ ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* t$ j  w% w4 _4 e( M9 S. z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' n. W7 N$ G4 f! f7 w9 Y  H5 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 s# y3 m2 ^: y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" J1 Y0 w( O7 _9 [  f7 o( D; k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ n$ C0 Q$ F! }! X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* n, K" y/ x$ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 F. l/ w) h& E. m. B) J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 ^+ D" I. {4 J4 N4 x4 o" ]4 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>