【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 _4 g3 Y  m/ i歌词我附在后面。
& E/ z( U0 S& _( hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& c+ R7 N5 v  P2 Q* I: SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Z; W/ Z) s. s8 _( KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 y% I3 S: e/ `7 m9 F6 BSeeing the sky content with its love
# E* U; X1 l- y2 c/ ?2 p  @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) e. c7 d9 i* g( Y6 j" X* vYou needn’t fear anything
' g* w6 }/ o5 ~7 e" [1 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ O7 o, G  [' u- M, R( X; hEvery other word you utter is love
2 j3 U- z6 t- o: p' }! lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( G  L. o8 y! h: B% Q( w8 FNothing can compare to my love
* g4 C% I5 h. lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* c% a: }7 A; gI want so much to see inside your heart
' I8 F' S% [7 X1 q: C" [. KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 K' F/ x7 r. Q: f6 u1 O0 GI’m still filled with fear
' ?8 k. s7 c2 _' ?' IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, ]6 C4 s7 |$ R' d& ^4 g3 XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* M7 j4 k/ F# V5 _' BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 T; ~( [# b# L! P' s6 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 k" y  Q% N( O, f+ [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) |! z* f5 ?& `2 T, P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, W1 N6 g3 v4 v/ ~; \* C- p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# b8 K8 X1 x: G; U6 ^2 v& ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# y$ g, S! ~. K  E+ }! `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 l2 z' A; t) }6 y4 g1 l3 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" c/ z1 V& f/ m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 D# C( R0 [7 B- z2 q" l* y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; f/ `& T/ _. r6 w0 {6 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% @0 }6 A0 ?4 g* D2 V0 |% _  x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! m. Z% M- a) O3 W# _6 p9 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" R( I3 ~( t& A  S  L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# ]2 @+ l$ L- L8 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* }% e# ?2 ]2 m  W0 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' w+ Y% I" V# Z2 E' q! r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& M# b, E0 @( R" W- a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ i6 ]* H! }' x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 g" C7 @, e9 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' e# R- U0 Z5 |0 u( X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 i/ n. b, w9 [( y! S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* I, W: E: |. q6 w2 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 q* ], `! e+ N% ^& ?) Z" K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# }' J9 i3 q) I. ]: H1 Y" Z1 [! U: O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" m1 A+ a  i3 x  C7 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 i/ i+ M" @$ [+ h+ [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; K' g5 G# N/ c7 q8 T7 ?0 X" f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 U, y, x  S. f9 ]5 ^# d; [' i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. u, s) g/ h9 U+ s4 n* c6 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ {7 R/ L' `/ |/ r4 ^$ ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( y, o/ B: x" G0 g, H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' l: G/ R' E. u; X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! A+ E2 X1 ?2 O9 r6 [+ D  \0 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 H7 `7 p8 x/ O, r$ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 M) r8 W. K: T8 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>