【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# }4 U4 k/ r1 _! d& WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& T$ _2 B; C- {3 c) \+ A1 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& R, L6 g. S: y; H3 U! \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ y6 C6 G1 k$ }0 `' XThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 Z& X7 G) F0 Z+ JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& F: ], A- s6 @3 T; f  w& C  QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 G1 }3 _& `- p7 @2 F2 pYou needn’t fear anything
$ E8 `5 `% b$ K8 k% a5 p2 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 I3 E+ p# d# C7 DI really want to know just how much you love me
7 b) N& J2 T3 ?' tI love you I love you with all my heart
8 s3 z% p& Z% s' x' QNothing can compare to my love
% _2 S; p( F8 @* KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ B6 E% _9 |0 ^  C/ z% _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 m8 C0 S& c/ H! b( a  o% W* ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ _' B% t9 N- |3 a% nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, _2 J) D% O8 y9 t3 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 k8 i& P  c5 G5 R( y+ G0 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) e1 V! T; U' ]" B2 u: |& @) X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! M0 s" h9 i( P6 d! ~; e% B& T1 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# ^" m6 F0 c6 ]6 g% l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' O6 g: ]- [4 D3 B8 k7 j( N- A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 _8 Q1 o) V; @* n/ i7 j1 b& A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! X, q0 `$ R# j! }4 f% w5 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; U* U) [  ?0 A! T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: Q8 z8 T1 o, h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  s5 r) ]% M7 ^8 V# z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- i# c9 p. X8 a6 k! G6 i- `# n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, `# i4 t" `8 A' {. Z% V6 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 h" p4 f9 R+ {) c# A2 ?* _% Z: [( \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' }; {' A+ x7 `1 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 X2 d; w, v8 Y* B% X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% ]4 @* `* c! X% {  a+ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# c( {. h# ?0 {* W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! l/ T5 d. S% R# \4 b" Z7 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' q" Z8 l; G! {  q3 [4 [! c8 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) M; u+ b+ D: z  I& {/ s+ O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ V7 p9 c) w) z' u9 @. b3 U+ E2 b8 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' e; b+ Z/ d! d6 u- p# b; s# n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ j' M5 x+ C+ I5 o7 w5 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 z4 {3 H# S2 }2 e; d" x5 M& C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ g3 A2 I! C7 g# p" ~/ B8 O: f# O2 {我请你剖开它
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9 A4 u6 ?# x1 D+ q" [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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