【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 W* I- b. S' C2 ^1 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 u; Z7 ?7 B+ U" k& ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% y( s( }. U0 c, w2 [  nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" f$ V- X! Y% JWith the moon kissing it every night
: U* ]' n/ v- q- t. D! t# DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& O0 o+ r5 T- Q3 j  mEvery other word you utter is love
- q# o7 Q2 j- t' bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 b3 V7 a+ I- Z9 Z% S" VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! T; c* y8 K; R- ?3 J* GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 }. ~- T1 r7 F  h/ n, D; sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* K; a1 M7 Q2 X( `$ N+ A" cI regret not dying
0 J' T( Z# ]3 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* I* {( @( V0 z: e) c3 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! T+ l/ Y7 R: {, Z4 d; _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' u" i3 O! W7 r+ N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% N; w3 F0 @/ f2 H# u$ j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* T% F  L& a6 I% U& H& f* R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Q% u. A( }( j: [4 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" N& A- b4 m6 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 M& k) C- @) L& Y. [3 x6 o" Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) [7 D7 N3 K" T2 u' r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ ~- C* @( W+ n' O# k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, B, e3 I# R5 Y) P/ K3 X# W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 L& U5 `# i1 ], J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# z4 U* M$ W; y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 d, _3 n* c$ [! }: G) A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 `6 J& X6 b' m8 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 u. `4 X2 ^+ L. Q. P! b' S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% G+ y9 ~: o0 m* M* D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- R% E0 x! ]5 O" M+ k% @6 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% {0 W, T6 D& \- f% G2 {$ M# w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 H9 G+ @) ~7 b: j( f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: k6 T( S& j. Q) x! @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 C. _' H! d2 c8 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 L6 W: b- Y5 K' x3 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 A! b4 o6 Z% T6 c) N, _% L8 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>