【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 h/ t6 \4 z* K; p3 v; x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 s5 S, W! G0 ^! R  t& H# d. rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, B' B$ f9 _  fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. ]3 k( P& d5 G1 v' bI love you I love you with all my heart
' S5 {+ k2 [! o1 P1 |- ]! pNothing can compare to my love
8 S" @% ~  [% U) v+ E1 K" NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* `" O3 C$ ~. @- x8 ?' I/ }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' s  j0 ^1 @- lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, |" `5 C7 Q$ Y+ nI regret not dying
" C* e0 p& N2 m' j2 Q; ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 P) X' M9 ]& Z( w4 k, HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 E5 i: m/ Y* \7 [/ _6 p, ?% d5 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! j: C# u$ E9 f, D9 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 z% U. x) P9 F6 o5 t8 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 \, D. g& t* N5 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: O1 h( }( ~; }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 @! v3 e2 l2 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, C2 H$ S& G$ x! `8 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ q8 F* g6 m: A1 {( B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 P, y  k, o3 t1 y3 R; ?; C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 |& O2 o/ y* w. ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 I+ l' ~: b$ D/ E& S( H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, C2 `+ n- O8 x/ P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; o1 J7 P! Q, x; g* S$ K) h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ R0 I9 g6 s5 c2 _( m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  r5 l; I  s6 r# i# f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. h0 O" X/ S! o+ l9 M: T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% j0 {0 o4 z& s' t- `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 v- h) c5 C$ _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 t- J3 ~! g  c/ d3 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ [* p2 z* x( v9 c( i5 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>