【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 G$ Q  v: G% I- O5 p& aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 }2 h" i1 `8 Q6 A3 v4 {- wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 A' U4 a9 X! BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 C# Q: i6 D- k# y3 Y4 x6 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* {9 j6 X/ ^7 l& c3 h7 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
6 z  K' N: J) u/ X; q! WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* ?5 S$ Z  x+ P; A* B7 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 l2 h/ i. G7 Y8 J" g+ lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 g: D( v8 ]* I) `8 c9 L/ }3 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 P  P2 u1 y3 V( H' y. p7 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! M/ j! u; h, ?, M+ w4 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; [$ [6 g1 W  Y) I+ f* E" [; A3 w1 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  o2 Q; d# H8 W* F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ z/ k8 O. {; _: H8 A# \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 t+ R: M  h0 |0 K5 x' ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- A* L, p5 Z# {0 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! x! y! l+ A. V3 p+ c0 y; n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  p4 P) S; P, e/ V1 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* d! o. k# m0 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: Q/ X% O0 q  K/ x9 i% B# D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 A8 {9 a/ s- s$ a: b/ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 S- K! O( x  r& ?( ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% V: r8 Y# e, t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, N0 g4 y7 U2 f' }6 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; I/ X, x# d3 N8 A! t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 \# C& Z+ K7 H8 p5 G5 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; p* x" r6 K6 j/ i- E% ^5 Y. p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ^0 v. H  J- N7 b' Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 P% H; [" D4 o) N1 @0 E+ _' `: }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% d6 j. P* W$ _; Y) n* `5 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 s# D3 O5 _  V8 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ x( S7 }; O" p+ q$ G8 R' j. K& w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( R7 \# Z/ Q5 k/ t$ ~6 Y$ g5 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- P/ M# x1 e9 n& F/ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ z- ]8 {$ q* J+ C( q. M" q1 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 k5 F/ ]9 S) i" R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, ^" c5 B/ h; ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ q, c0 B8 s! Y3 U我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>