【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 N& A% M) `2 ~* b0 W3 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 P9 L: P+ y8 ]' f+ GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 M8 ~% |  q; P: q+ @, J- \) TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 P' h% \% l) }: I+ z( aThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 c( K+ B7 l: t4 m# jWith the moon kissing it every night
' B: V2 S8 O; U0 H4 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- f, l  ~' w+ x0 v& z  j$ T" p2 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 v! O3 }0 p8 O8 S" rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 E( m3 H' g" `$ Q+ I6 w/ o+ ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# B2 R  q3 I; F; |- CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 V7 _3 }. J8 V- Z3 o  o4 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! W! f7 i& W( ~" j3 C1 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 ^" I. e2 q) [, YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 m# V/ t+ U& Y" Q1 `# D4 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; y# Y! ^, \; j5 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, p4 r4 w! t3 R* K8 [3 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 N4 U5 t. A* x& G! h7 W. m" G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; b- B9 E, B* V* g3 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 g0 |* B" H! L' n; F% Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 E6 |. |$ l4 S# ]$ S+ k5 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' g. w: f: v2 l" R$ O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 q& |2 I  ~$ H6 I- t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" `8 Z/ a2 U% P, s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( B3 {7 y: x6 L* F7 P<P>你无需担心</P>
- f% F, @! P* k3 ~8 p) ]! v  [4 [0 V) L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) m$ o: `1 W. Y) y) }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* a- f; j+ t; _8 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 T5 r( m% H0 c- c% ]7 t% U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 x: l, P# X4 ^. q' Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' W& i' ~9 q/ [# G, e* ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 {3 m0 d7 f8 v$ q' U6 w' [) w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ E9 k* ^0 B! v+ X( w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! B6 H* _) f- H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% U& O7 B0 P5 m6 u5 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( g& P' ]: F/ S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, X: b9 f' s% t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! }" @, v: I- @1 @. O  a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 y' t; y5 P7 U8 ?, D+ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& W/ ~  d7 z4 c# \& F. W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 y& ~. ]7 C6 q7 ]. ]2 O& G! I6 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 N2 F% N  z" j" |# i8 D/ r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) [- k2 ~; c9 p' C# D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 F8 T; I: x! ?$ R4 ^# |1 a8 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 y/ O+ k, l* {; D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>