【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 Z8 [* ]" k2 D$ S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 E6 r- p4 B! H5 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 ~9 w) g) `9 H) N* BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& @! M; P! R2 C+ d, D) ~9 f5 ^7 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) \! J6 B% {# nEvery other word you utter is love
* u3 y; {# l+ ?I really want to know just how much you love me
: _, w+ M. L" ?: V& jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 j% j. I; X7 PI want so much to see inside your heart
' p: L  Q1 v  Z: x: W& @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) C' B+ l4 Z$ j5 m2 y: `! `4 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 I( n' n3 H( aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% w( c7 f) B+ G2 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 W  {8 _9 a  [: C% |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 J' H3 o0 c1 V8 c% }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. f; D! Z, h2 H* Y+ E6 C# x; C9 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# r/ e# [1 {7 l; z1 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 Q1 W% E- A. E  o% T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 ^6 q1 M6 g$ l3 D$ h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; f+ q% z9 y( D" ~4 a6 P& Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# D/ I) a( k7 J- x; ]8 X1 r: u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% G2 I  K. U2 {2 F9 ~3 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; f) i4 S9 I, J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 x( z1 `1 z: F- c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" b% H3 v7 @' @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, T2 h1 i( u( }% \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ~) t* U( j8 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 J# ~$ s6 V1 v( [; U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( r, X  f3 f- s+ H3 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 t2 R4 O4 t5 H, Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ Z( B+ i1 l3 x0 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& Q9 }, Z6 p' _' l2 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! w! ^  e: h* K5 L1 H# Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. l, n1 y3 H$ }8 ?2 @/ B. R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ y7 e2 a/ n' z$ [2 g: n( Y$ u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' ~* ]0 e' R7 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 @, H% N' `* v% K6 n" Y+ z5 H/ v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# |  o. K: N" s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- B3 H6 @4 p* u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 r+ N, {1 c9 }; Q8 v+ b) P* q% C0 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 _# s' d& f+ Q" V: {) ^" E& C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 T  I& M( K* T' P. O+ z: c. ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, j+ C- e9 K$ P& N" r, t. z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 m4 C4 w; l4 R6 p8 Q7 Y. @) G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 s1 `2 \( S1 D5 S- _$ H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>