【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 x& U! X, C9 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 \# T0 N. ?7 x0 C  GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* B( p6 C" P" c. AThe sky is happy down to its soul
* G( T5 u+ `( G1 z+ q  }) Y! l% C9 PWith the moon kissing it every night
% j4 N0 O  f, o2 M- V( ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& m4 z, c5 j0 D0 jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! T0 ~- B7 s. V6 J2 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* t2 f* N% g$ h% {; H0 h# ONothing can compare to my love
  S& h+ d* g, |4 `6 N+ m7 k; _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! x+ r. i6 W7 n7 N% _) jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 ?) ^2 X0 J/ {; A+ P. ~  e9 s: G7 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; \, f4 c  m; S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 y' g* |( j  y1 x' l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' M# O$ N9 A4 X' O: ?- e5 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; v$ {' o7 r0 D1 X$ E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 N& R* v8 d8 @$ ?# D- M9 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ S8 |% c3 m( x6 V5 G) e' {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  G0 O: d$ C: n& a* Y  G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' a" v  @# j. U" B, `. Y% {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" W6 E0 q* a! V# c+ E% t( V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 L4 p0 t' T" y8 s) w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 s1 F/ ~! M5 R: P+ `/ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ Q; V  M. V/ |<P>你无需担心</P>
# j& z- j7 ]$ N4 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 w: ]* \( U- l9 K0 H6 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 d; N  F' {( z$ u. x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" r) u% h3 b; r! ~; G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ u8 L& X* \7 s+ z0 D" x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 t) p. c4 u$ z) e2 }9 w7 }. b/ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, M6 r3 N* _7 k3 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" s! i/ F4 s$ ]% X& O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% q0 u+ @  q: |% S( F$ A4 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 m$ }+ J3 G' g+ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ~  J, K' l0 `  V( I" ^0 k0 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! A. d. D+ X* j2 v& U5 I4 b+ N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 O! \5 O' g6 L3 h4 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ]$ s( p! d8 N* B* J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; Q: P0 J4 Z2 j7 s- ~5 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 G/ B% i' o# O/ C6 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  b" o- _: t6 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 q; J9 I0 Q) {3 D4 @9 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>