【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 w* c% R; h' [1 k0 A/ ?/ u+ t歌词我附在后面。
* m5 r  q# \6 w& I7 ~5 w' j, DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ E- e2 v. L: Z2 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 [1 [& S+ H0 s5 ]* b2 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 }+ G) _7 H8 N, T7 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 r: K: @; O1 a$ ~1 ?) UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ \! o- e' x! C; iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* ?) l3 |( s) lI really want to know just how much you love me
  o  Q1 e- h6 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ j; I. O  R2 y9 p6 S, \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! m, m! ]/ u. f8 \I’m still filled with fear
1 K2 f; [2 F9 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 n3 b  s' ?* s/ s: y3 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. g( c# V. L5 M( y! F. B" OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ r) Z% P9 {# YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- T1 u: l0 R4 Z8 c7 h* u' Q8 h8 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% S: \" J( X' I" d+ Y! E( ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) ~9 D9 D* I( ^. L* `: S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 R: M0 l$ d+ C4 c1 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. y8 `* h$ F/ L- O+ j- B- b5 j# _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 t' i' k# {% r5 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( A9 y1 B4 j3 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; a) u& i6 u4 J1 _# e1 ], ]- [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Y5 R; [4 Z" a: R+ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. z9 n( F8 M! w8 T- I, J9 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ }' |: x8 n! L, p5 W- A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# z% G! O& d! ]1 l1 X: U1 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ [* Q! E* a" `' L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 N8 H, j- g3 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 V4 t# V; U3 t5 \  N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ?$ I5 y( H  ~7 ~# v* A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" L: c+ i1 f$ l8 n5 z. s( \$ q( `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 u, V+ @% M0 ]( m) @% |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- s1 {7 Q/ @$ ?. N4 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ M: G0 s, v  P/ ?7 M9 i- e+ a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 \% F" q, A' S$ z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ K+ E3 U' K& B3 P8 M9 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. \" R# K9 t+ v8 I, w5 F* c) R+ I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" \0 k- J2 `) v! x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" K9 R" y/ ^9 L( _' e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' P! |% @. T* z3 {& K& m5 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 i7 s7 J5 }- c9 T7 ?" u$ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ]' v0 k: _* `. H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 [4 j: ?+ M1 p6 F1 q  i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ m4 `, ^9 x- K) f4 F7 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 y1 H( C7 Y9 A. y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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" k2 a  f, P" G' g1 L0 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>