【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# f% S* m& U/ hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 ]) b. [8 H. T" P3 p; SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 o& J. q6 \0 m7 j2 B! jThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 f0 P: @% p2 u. K1 O& [" n* P6 BWith the moon kissing it every night
! v0 r* ]* D% _' v' R4 P" uSeeing the sky content with its love
! g0 Y) q* T; i  G0 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ p- R! j+ z, II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" v! f6 a( u1 {& K7 X7 N5 \# wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* y& T. e% m+ S9 Z+ P; w! j9 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 C  w4 \, T) a/ p( c$ WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 b4 \, R1 f7 ]) ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( Q/ G: U, q- G2 [, K# i6 b% EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( w- v+ h& ~! V9 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: `2 W; Y1 D) D; D; g! V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" Q* ~( h; r$ N# q: b6 Z: D5 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ v+ s3 z4 x6 t6 B" X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 C( z0 e/ I8 z, l  d3 W6 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 r3 k" l* b8 Q# u( B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 O+ b% ^  a. x6 `; R' I) O8 m3 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 M2 d( P* ~3 J$ g1 d8 V1 E4 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( A! Q  W) L% u7 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 h: j. e5 c3 |, H8 _* v+ R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, M' N) E. Y# y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ C8 U& m; c# w& R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" o% V( }3 b4 B4 B5 V8 N% n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 E3 x  m6 A. y: E4 }% ~. E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) G3 I# `& w- k' v. F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ v4 A9 E; c0 T1 H$ e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 R! s8 N2 ]$ ?' z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! J5 @' B! r* l/ x9 u4 z- D4 ~2 y9 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ^' {& _: x' p- I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; y+ E. f4 E3 s1 I: q( h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 M4 f  w" T3 N1 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 F6 n" L+ Y/ v" z* n! z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! H7 g) m4 k6 ^5 v' c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. o3 u" j. T6 p9 J: I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. L; N+ L# P* u4 s& a: c0 K, q5 X$ z  P/ ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>