【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" H  j1 R: i+ I$ w+ E; TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' t+ J9 V* `% c& e1 g/ K, xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! U5 u6 a( n$ WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 \9 ]7 m0 ^4 z2 L% M2 e7 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ L: m& ~, d/ m" W' a" nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 z3 @, u  s/ |0 t+ R# ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" j; S8 E- G. A. |: w" q4 WI want so much to see inside your heart
, a9 s* `; p# o. ]7 U8 r( j$ P1 ?; gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& f4 i8 [' R1 k/ N, S; ~3 w2 z8 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 S9 ^: O% `8 \( q% }/ p# C- V4 ^1 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 k- \: M$ u9 \- ]* L  i0 m. HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& r( q+ p; w$ g5 M3 c! R! V3 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ o! @% A1 `4 t+ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ @8 p8 q( D& ~. X' T9 A7 t+ n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 s% p$ G1 B, ?" G' w. ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( E! O$ \- a# f3 @( x4 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ X! a) ]. v7 E5 P1 R( p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 i  x9 t  e+ [# N, S" ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" F) b  g* G+ ?8 e" r, k( x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* N1 n8 Q( N* P2 F9 z8 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Y) \' p- M  S  V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 O- Z9 o- Q! V* t6 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# O: T$ ^  S* I/ O0 Z- l) R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 X: C) z* g& R9 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% Q- D* Z3 A+ I( `- k; _; V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  U# E- Q7 k: q: s$ I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; S: t6 R+ [( \8 t3 b4 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# g' B6 d1 w7 d. i: x+ e% x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' e+ E0 O& V2 a$ x; Q  |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# f- `  m; l' b" ?/ J$ `2 R- G- T- i, p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ j, B) \1 b! i0 K' @( ?- J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 D; r* A, q3 l. s! l# v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) D! n1 t' c( ]4 H0 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! o  p' ]4 E( s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% c3 \+ j; ~6 q9 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 r, U/ ?( [; N* B; {2 Q# y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! m2 F% g' ~  W# I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 y9 Z2 Z- a$ z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& _0 i2 o1 {' b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# [6 m, b0 ]/ p: u3 |3 W& Y: B; o6 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 \7 ~9 H, C# h我请你剖开它
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" Q, v1 q5 k4 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. B$ M# \* f0 k1 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>