【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" @/ J  z$ b* q: C8 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ X/ ^- E$ j* D2 t" wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 c- r9 @) b! SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, \+ n4 ?0 I% A( iI love you I love you with all my heart
  L9 S4 `9 z: f, p" }: ^7 Q1 NNothing can compare to my love
7 R, _2 Z1 g# J6 o' w# z) |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 @2 x- y5 j6 {1 V% b5 k, dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 h$ z9 {! U9 u; ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 j+ t6 h! k9 ~7 {( jI regret not dying
8 \7 T4 h9 {! II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 H( Z& G, V" r. y2 ?( \! DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# h& d: a) h% E+ z' Y6 ~+ zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Z4 C- g" w3 X5 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ u. T" R# F, t4 _$ s  j; O" K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 W# C/ H% k0 O$ S* D( {# V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 z- S* ]- Z6 P) D$ X0 _4 j( {/ d4 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 f* W( `1 [$ ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 \0 {5 E# z3 j: ^/ U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 k: x) r. y1 W3 [" h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# p# l" C* f8 W* H# L) J* W0 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 [" \* `8 V# d3 b  R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: T) G3 k" _, {/ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 Q6 X$ r6 Z' T' t" o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% v2 W2 h, A! A' n. ?/ |0 E<P>你无需担心</P>
! o) n' A) ]7 W5 S7 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 u/ G' S+ N! F* J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 T6 ?9 @: X% Z9 L" Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; F/ A8 Z2 S1 u7 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ G& y* n* I! _( `+ F# I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 f4 j$ S1 ~/ z% z  j" X# O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& t  m, M& V/ J3 i- O+ \8 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- q  d" M5 c- Y, o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: ]( a. S, ^/ }4 {; B3 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 g$ g1 }( h& C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 P, U! t; }" k6 g5 i$ s1 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' M5 K# B# R4 H* D  ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, e5 y# a) g7 Z& |! G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 n: U5 q% W! Y  Q2 P7 ~+ C* c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& U$ U. z  Q; a# D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) E+ L) Q+ t- j% S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" h# E, m- J, Q! t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 K2 ?4 w9 C1 Q0 e, {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 c5 P% p6 `8 s7 B* b  G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* m0 Z1 b% `% ?9 A$ G; J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 J' E  R( h" s' c% a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 h7 p/ _& L# y, u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% o. ]7 F/ I" \, `! \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ A" l, e+ Z$ L  h( r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" S) A* F- V7 X# ]0 A! x! v' q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* F1 Y) f8 p& D' H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: s: Y% q7 A. D& ?9 Z+ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" G/ q7 s6 @+ s5 A" e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ Q- C0 _% J3 J, q* d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' F) ]5 q/ S/ E! s$ ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>