【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 P4 G- e- y( M& j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# }2 X7 z. v5 C, O! z$ z# _; _  }8 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* H: j% V; Q% I: }: p4 N0 g' wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; L# y# j  g6 a' J* dThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ H- n6 ^+ V8 _# YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 E$ h4 O# }/ i  h# X% B) a# [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 D' F  s' X" D! K: cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  \# B4 A9 X/ n2 `$ H# sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) k& }* K7 H6 Q# L1 |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' D  o9 Y0 q* Z" W! hI regret not dying
6 h% n8 R# U- h( w- hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# w2 G, ~7 c% T- H- d% p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 r( N7 `3 S  G& L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* k( t) ^. O0 p  B8 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ c1 ^' Z0 M) L; I3 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- R. y+ j7 O8 B2 ~' u2 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. P/ v* S  w- ^# b) \0 f' \- t9 Y) P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" p  L: Q% s; Z- R& D4 ?4 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 h( h. S& v6 X6 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 s! p% B# M% I5 s0 P+ }3 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* s. K4 K7 k8 i- \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 T: F+ h1 v$ R/ v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 O8 Z* A0 Y# C  i# O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  [% Z; p$ o/ H- ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# O) t4 [/ B% t2 B: e6 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: T& V4 r' B0 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! f9 I: K* `3 h4 D7 Z: T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. K6 \7 B1 Z1 ]9 P; C5 c! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! x% Q: u6 |; K  ?3 V/ c! v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, Q+ }0 t# k) U( `; d2 I4 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; g% L9 m) g" {+ S" U& K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: z6 J0 q8 `5 ~* c/ |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, H) W- D. w4 m& u1 @* J9 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: T6 g/ G8 Q3 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. W4 t9 L8 P# O$ b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ~6 e" @' b4 {% z. ^6 ~  l, T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) Q" N2 X4 |' `% n4 U7 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" r" X  w/ k1 S* k) I3 B9 G/ U& c# \, i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ T( i3 M3 K4 w% o, ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>