【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ X7 R4 t8 [3 y: K# ^: M" oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  C$ k) \; B& \5 D* C6 S# T/ cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* I: ?& }5 T- v) ySeeing the sky content with its love
) c3 W( Q5 q5 D0 V  DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 v* i6 p/ Y5 a9 X. HI really want to know just how much you love me
3 o0 _0 n# c0 f; H7 W/ d0 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 c4 ?/ o9 ?% ]; v6 _0 v; g1 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ B% ^# A% U9 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ H- v; i% y. h/ f2 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 B8 v3 Q2 d3 r$ k" SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 A7 a& X) a% f) P, T) w; d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 T, F. k3 B9 t* D* S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( r8 z* c8 N; p7 P2 V4 A: Q7 g8 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% x. w) n, W$ x( c3 k3 k- q2 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 j. ^  ^- ?! }+ e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; S" [0 `9 z' }- ~$ {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% e# @& `  {0 l- t2 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% d6 N0 R  \9 P* Y0 I# s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ c& a3 x3 g/ g; Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ I8 t7 y0 \; I1 {. c% ^+ Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" u+ Q* ^2 t' ]- m) B: w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 W9 B% c6 Z8 W  d" w( D$ e! E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 M5 ~- l! }- N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- H' ?2 W% d6 n" T  v# d: Q  e) Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 Y' M$ K7 A& h' h" \8 g' T7 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 B3 _2 g0 C$ B) c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ N! n; }. [' ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 v( Z" {9 C5 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 c2 c8 r3 m* E: b$ d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ x5 c! \3 f/ [' l  }; R% X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ k$ ~5 O# j* F2 p# O+ k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ b# m- K9 x+ e$ @% o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# n6 d( i" o) c" W. ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 h+ U- C+ f; i( s8 f( D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 {8 N% x: q$ p+ d, D1 q) k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! L5 n6 N& j& b: ]" F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>