【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 }. g& U% [; I2 U, B5 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! B0 y5 Y& {' m7 C* g$ bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ [  I& g: P( M% E1 nWith the moon kissing it every night
" |/ P/ p4 M/ O, z! n& rSeeing the sky content with its love
4 R8 R4 A1 T* n7 v' @7 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; V6 M* b; `" ]  ^2 ~3 h; {! ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( @& k! d# Z! n% O4 s  z- X& PI really want to know just how much you love me
8 S% _7 a. j1 h" p' ?$ y9 fI love you I love you with all my heart
/ G* d$ M7 J7 G8 P  Z' h3 sNothing can compare to my love
- J- T, ^* s9 e7 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. Y' P0 R+ M2 q! EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 l7 F! z& ?* ~8 }; {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. w- I8 ]+ q3 R* I/ R* `3 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- n# Q* \/ L: D* A# m9 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ q' b  k( n+ ?; }+ N. gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) y$ Z$ F6 B, p8 i5 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, w3 p; p+ x8 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 ?! ?1 z& ~  s/ M- u6 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 l! h3 U. f  \, q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ G* D9 |. O( \1 c3 [6 w, ~* n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( z: K/ X+ @4 H/ J) x( r( s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ x7 [+ C. B4 _: f& q4 |- P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 u8 F( w, Q# K8 L' Q1 j( g9 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- Z. M* s- j* M4 k/ P8 L1 e8 T$ A9 D  ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ^9 ]+ {1 i0 M% k' Q$ l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- |% W5 V/ K: l5 H2 _# U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( x, @7 Y/ ^: X: \8 ~. k7 j& V+ R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# ~# {" M5 R" J2 v: U6 Q! ~7 |" t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" q/ W- R; K2 r& N2 i3 q+ U  A- Z- W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, M1 H1 p+ ]6 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 i3 Y& B/ R  X+ v8 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 s) B* K: j4 p' c1 W! C: ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  s8 F1 w8 r3 m& P1 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  T& v& L6 |" L3 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# G$ w- V" n5 ^+ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 D! K! ]' S% K- s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ a3 n. l. U% c4 d& h+ S) g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. V7 t. j6 E5 H! T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 T) D% P- z$ E9 y& r/ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: F, r6 k, ]* T: D<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 B1 ^& L' L! o% D2 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 ~# h  N! c5 b4 s& k3 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 E3 b3 x' Z1 A" f2 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 |& i, h; ]. Y/ s! P6 O7 T$ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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( H* `  z5 P+ ~% a+ @/ J) K  ?' | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>