【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, Z8 O' K6 L: T) h& k/ N8 J6 p3 e$ @The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 [- J6 C2 ?5 o1 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 H+ X; Q2 ]+ F0 j" \$ L2 Q, L0 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" J# I! y/ {: X9 q4 k( f0 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ]# U8 t6 Y( C3 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 f" R2 \$ X9 a. w( |I really want to know just how much you love me
0 g* u5 q. U8 Z6 R2 \2 Z1 c- TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: {/ Q; I7 |3 w) ?* E7 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) ~: q: N5 C3 f8 O$ TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 f* L* a0 P$ {# X% P: O$ WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 J* ]" V, d7 ~$ gI’m still filled with fear
1 n, P  S" k1 j7 B& s4 E* d( Y9 u8 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% @! |* W5 K2 E4 l) r* GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 {5 R+ M% q: K/ a( Y% lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 E8 y8 W3 a8 }, MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* b) r' i, n9 z7 X6 H) c2 `1 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ H5 I0 g. |& c8 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ d3 K' K7 s; t- D( U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 a9 g: h: @: ]4 \. E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( p! d, k! R7 [% m8 A% Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* E3 F5 a" R3 X) y. w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  {0 |6 P- b% t9 f7 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( t/ a% j& o7 o$ ]- U3 g! S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 g' r, x8 t6 w' m  p. ~# {, P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 J# b& E8 ^# ^! n! y8 x  ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% H. @' D" B. q* o7 _" e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' c& R6 a9 \, s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% `# q) Q2 U' D: ^- s6 L! m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. C" l/ A8 O- M' B* Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 [( A  a+ F0 E# i8 M7 f/ S; E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) a, z6 a- `& y: `9 Y" d( B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ c8 p) j2 G9 k% W5 R5 ^- {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 o, X5 S0 K# ^6 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 m: L1 [+ s& [# A' @/ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  o7 @3 i# @- {6 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ Q/ r# {) ~7 M1 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ l. X, V3 ^( q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- o6 x4 h1 M( ^) \: A" }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! ~- u6 d7 M! [2 Y% P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! \6 U8 _; J7 K* X7 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ A' G: Z0 ^9 a. c# L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 p. |  a5 U, ~1 i2 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>