【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. R0 o" t5 H" v9 i9 i+ B' cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" K5 N/ e1 T* Y  u! s4 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 n/ _# f3 f& ]# X6 @+ u3 g' e1 KSeeing the sky content with its love
# J# Z9 h, n5 S0 X8 C  v" AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ]3 G9 B- p- V9 x7 u' oYou needn’t fear anything
- Q% q0 ~& y! B* }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ n( M+ I$ {$ j  Z+ Y  P$ II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) @" Q$ s1 i0 c3 C) f5 y' A; F% W  \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, N  r# i  ~0 L$ Y/ c6 d2 g& {I want so much to see inside your heart
- C% Y$ [* [/ c3 ~4 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. I! t0 u" y; _& K4 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' p/ P% u2 ~( ~4 {) A: c# wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ _9 S# X! A" B- ^/ M9 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" T% R6 ?5 {8 _- X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 j. ?( A0 U: B9 z! Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! }7 P2 e  p4 O& n, U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# N" }& o3 v) o1 d! o8 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ?2 H0 D- P4 D* F9 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* Y4 Q* J8 K3 |2 f: ?! G' j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ `# j- `& G& `) f: J/ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 }1 ~1 E; e9 t+ P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( u5 J: s  l" F6 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 b2 o' ?; v! x: z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) c8 L! I, f# S) I5 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( J# }0 s+ {, q& Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" q3 @* L. h7 w2 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 R( m, X& ~, K6 ]4 z. b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" ~9 O$ M: Z/ G) u# V. g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 L6 C! F0 B% c9 Z2 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 d; G8 ?4 K% B. b+ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ ], [) q. {/ J/ y1 L* B* P+ Z0 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% s1 Q* e' I! V2 }7 d<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ?, [; B: ^2 x& o. h* ~! h& G, s) U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. I( }+ u8 \) \2 E: r; e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 L: ^- u2 e" g! P5 S) v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- b9 c! E9 v/ C+ f% U8 Q! T, }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. G7 n3 k7 B" W# }# I( x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! \0 K* B' G3 A  k) i' f, s7 ^8 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- }; F8 j( L' v! ^  e9 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, \+ w/ u8 B5 b/ m: x# l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 G6 c8 U# ~' M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( y% o4 g- J' F! @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! W. y# j% \; w7 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>