【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 J2 D" e) r9 |$ b; R  cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# Y% I/ R& e  c6 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 p& }* x! s1 `0 O4 C6 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ E  n. O% y; }$ s, Z7 l' \- n/ zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 _  P" k2 Z. u8 o! @4 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' m( Y1 F" Q2 f  _3 z( r+ ?" {: a! gI really want to know just how much you love me
: l" x5 J& C8 a, j0 V/ `I love you I love you with all my heart
* `4 Y; A1 ?0 p  [Nothing can compare to my love
: l+ B$ x! }6 |3 N4 g% Y& {' \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 v$ c, x0 o- v/ r. ]9 a3 q; B! w" J/ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 t; d) r. s5 \- U# k3 ^# JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ i8 b) H9 Y% p3 ~7 g2 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Q% V4 z4 C0 K, _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 h5 R/ I# o  f4 s' U0 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& \4 r' M' T+ e3 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: w, T. j6 s. a: g7 Y+ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 w, \! j% \5 F: F. A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ g, U3 w6 b# |5 H! I7 d, L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" P  [3 q$ r/ `% N" _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ F0 a8 t( R0 X1 q7 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" @; ^/ d! J! F# r/ A% f* s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! A, e0 o4 v9 ~# ^* [( A$ _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& z! Z! l4 R; c7 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) o2 M9 {4 u) a: F! F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& {% _8 I. C% K) q7 D. p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( c2 Z  o( q) E8 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- b$ \( L2 D& k2 h) h; P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 f5 A  s. z, {9 u4 S% V5 R/ N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 T  g+ `& T+ [3 s. G: H2 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 z) o+ `! D/ Y3 R3 W4 J2 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 h5 p& I9 k% y- Q* l6 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 t1 L. {/ y5 i2 H3 b0 K+ e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 q0 d! ]: A, m3 g: `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) w* y$ [  `* C# g3 A7 G; q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ o" }, ^6 Z! U+ l: b" j, a/ q2 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 J8 K0 x. r# `/ ^! y% j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 q/ T' J& X& L  J+ N( N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! B8 G: M& |3 C0 Y% \2 }9 B; S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 S* j4 ], x- }. I. C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ^* m( u  [8 z  G9 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 e8 m  [6 m: C$ }+ D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) m# p. m7 d/ [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' `& k1 k+ j8 a/ T1 x6 K. m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& ~8 }8 O. o; }6 T/ E" f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 `- d0 o1 Y$ C; t$ u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 a5 X+ A" g' f6 V$ b; N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* K" U2 r0 b3 z+ g( {" o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ y4 S  ?5 K& W/ o* a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& ^4 v' }6 q0 ]* N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ Y  E5 e/ w- T* o$ M7 @2 A* |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>