【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 _- X$ j% v1 t$ L% R+ @7 Y( sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 G' s* r# {  c* X$ C0 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 P& \: v! u+ p( dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" F0 E( k$ Z0 h5 Q8 x0 M2 mEvery other word you utter is love
+ j: m+ j. Y: s% ~  w, qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% N' T* }8 Q% UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% v# J3 r7 S/ D. z7 C1 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' a, \, k$ U5 f6 I) |3 J& i3 r2 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; l0 |, F3 I$ i! l# s8 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' Y) y6 f3 T7 c6 N1 [( B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! M- A7 M- Z9 h, F! |5 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: E+ I' F3 s' X5 G4 `" O" X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' `- T9 d, P& k7 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# y* a' _+ F) q( }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 x+ ?! p9 Q6 s" p0 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 X1 ^* A' V% w- L8 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# ?6 L( z, I( i( V; _2 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% u+ G+ i6 Z* m, f& s2 _( C5 e7 i6 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* s- Q- m" m0 p1 l; X# F( o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 z& v$ F! m' z: ?, g% Q- x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) V& }, Y" W. c0 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 A! A! W$ i' B5 u0 C/ x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. M" \, b2 T8 _, g6 y: \* v  s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ _2 v3 w3 W) N. I+ n4 V9 k- x3 p3 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* f9 y- j+ X# K0 H# i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 \) m2 t% ~6 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 D3 X1 n; a6 ?4 O+ ~! H, J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 l. r9 c) `" B  @$ @7 H<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ |# p$ D5 Y* |6 U5 Q0 @) A9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 f; I2 P$ D$ {+ M; H+ t! c5 Y) c1 p4 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& b5 O: U7 E1 n9 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 ~# k7 }1 z3 Z- ]- t( ]. }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* k6 v0 k+ U  s7 |# H  q! E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" L8 v5 d8 r) S, o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 c& I" w5 M7 h5 U& ?' u4 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. Z2 Z% v% Y# m, \! R  V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 w. E, m8 J5 n/ s$ L. B/ v' y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>