【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 F! e& L" Y% K. x- O歌词我附在后面。
1 a" i6 F/ n; V# N/ FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 I5 Y- k3 ?% c+ G2 H# [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ v2 }$ Z7 f2 s0 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- E% x% D) {7 A6 \* Q. ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% \7 v" ]5 N2 G: D* H" w& DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, b* W- Z0 X- R# [3 `You needn’t fear anything
' G2 [, y* A! h8 s$ g  aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 u/ h7 k4 {" d, |! U+ aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; s# _+ s" k9 U8 lNothing can compare to my love
5 F  z. K" u% Z- ]# eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 v0 e0 y5 \! Q+ r9 S3 \1 {8 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
0 v' K) E1 o5 Q6 b7 r" UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 ~" E; C; U& UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! m" ?1 A( b( dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& Y6 \/ h; k$ J/ X+ P/ nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 F/ p% @9 U4 o& j* A' `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 q& q% j  y. ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- o1 u+ V! K/ c& l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& I' }! P, a" V; G. d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ w* M, A7 X2 y: N/ m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, n: ~& p( D- m6 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 v! w( |. g( N: Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  a: R! x3 a4 H1 B9 D+ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ^  ]3 m, M8 y, z% ^' ^$ p% ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) R  U+ i0 L- A2 E- s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 ?, }4 G- y# w8 Y: `/ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 j' S+ ^' y5 |1 H+ J5 e! ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 g3 A6 W: y/ w4 r/ t. V. j1 t0 t3 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* H6 `% ]7 j' \2 C: j! s8 r0 j6 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 X/ W$ E5 ~: N) L! K# V- E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* z! [5 X; ~# Y& c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; K( c$ U1 i, z3 e8 B1 ^' ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 I& g1 E* o) ~' i, T9 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' T. `6 B# v( X5 a$ e5 n+ M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 U! @+ Z( O; X" {! J& U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& U& A1 O8 z$ D9 l6 M& Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! e  M$ g" v- @6 {7 w  ^6 q/ o4 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ^/ v0 b! o0 N, r6 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' k. |( z/ Y* N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 O; g% J2 B1 d9 t2 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 K' F6 c  Y: h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" v5 C: k, `& Q; y/ H% E# N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! v9 Q" z! N4 E: A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>