【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ _+ i& r, D0 }5 M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 ?# |7 v3 l+ K' |7 h! r8 t/ dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. _$ f' c6 z8 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* g1 n( b. {  t, SThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 u0 b7 q/ w* ]With the moon kissing it every night
" L0 P  D! z, A; OSeeing the sky content with its love
/ L# r% o8 u( I0 M7 ]4 M% b+ M3 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 I( s# i9 a5 X5 C# W; K: mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 o/ u3 ]. r: c$ R- ?' ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# R3 [( d  x6 W$ ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# i) o# r( S7 N# EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( B: k# x# W6 X# u! \' I( jI regret not dying
$ V' r# @0 C4 ?5 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% |6 v* X1 ^6 Z1 ~+ ZWith such a tongue as yours,
2 a% f6 A2 a& y4 \" ]) ^6 X7 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, i4 K4 H9 [$ i; v# W1 \; t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& [. t& G' [; h3 V; z9 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ \$ G* _4 Z$ W5 K: M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ `+ N( i! V" E1 Z6 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) o) v- L: |  M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 }' @+ S. n$ F0 u( T# U+ |8 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, U0 d! n  S7 ~6 \5 h! |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ B+ I7 C6 Y4 Q3 Q( B) ]- P' W! a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, w; v6 n* x6 l: b% }. y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) h( ~5 t' |: q4 O$ @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 v! |; e0 E; H7 }<P>你无需担心</P>
! I, Z& E1 Q* o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! Q" S- P1 G% n. h5 L2 ~$ c  I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: N4 N" p% R! H0 N( M+ W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. q6 j8 o6 i! V! v, o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* r% T# c9 C4 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 Z2 Q, r  E$ q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( f, W$ y1 P) k/ w( I' {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 |+ W1 f" Y7 }7 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ E# M  i; i5 V/ a. f- Z! t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. Q* D6 k# b- f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" V: u, P4 a% t  U4 \1 g. X, X' l8 m$ C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* m; x+ i% y% e6 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 X: |# I* O1 Z4 @5 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" _5 I3 \' F; E! N% r8 ]6 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! Q2 u0 F- q" N% Z. P+ c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 F( K8 r) f8 Z8 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* K8 w% {. Z7 i$ K+ F# ]* x1 x! F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; F0 h! v% e  Q% F( G# [" p  z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) E3 C- y" P! T7 I: g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' L; _: Y/ F. ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) x$ h* [* }: V5 B# n& r  c4 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% j, J+ D9 `' f% v3 o, @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& Q5 F/ x% L; K) u$ F0 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 k) b9 c, e* B! c3 \. R  B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 K+ b! Z  f& \" Y# W我请你剖开它
% \$ s* x: q: S' q0 {& Z
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# L: j! @% v2 H% X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>