【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; r2 e1 K# C/ T+ uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# k! S) O# H- T5 i+ f) J+ nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Q9 y3 @8 U* YThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 ?2 D7 D0 O! d2 O8 B! V- O* u; n  vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 q3 z. O  m+ G. F! p4 a) jEvery other word you utter is love
8 J' h+ r; {8 |I really want to know just how much you love me
: K( h4 y# x$ [* n! X+ MI love you I love you with all my heart
1 @' o9 t8 ^3 U# f- h+ y+ ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: f7 N! Y& t) P+ z; g4 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" X8 {8 v& N' o/ E2 [; mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 s! q$ d/ _/ s' p6 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! _; @; a, a! k6 k6 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 t& K) c. J" g1 P4 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 ^' @0 n8 W7 n+ w; M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, d+ L! H0 f& l2 \- J' w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- o7 d6 J% o! M, R7 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  j* i) b* J, v; N& c) O. \6 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 N, F0 k( l" n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) ^$ E6 t2 F2 @/ K- x. ^% \3 l# G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 {  t- q, w0 X- V- P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 C8 t# G, u2 U5 F- F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 ~" f3 p% K! I! i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 j& ~6 T- v& _3 Z& c. q& g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% f% e2 [/ f8 e; @. X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 Z1 S( g2 U* ~) s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  |) z; Q1 z9 u  I+ A. r8 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" D8 O0 ^3 L1 h4 X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
( P- [( r5 b4 Q; K* |* {
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 l  ?+ Z; P( u( X! |* O1 k  a4 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>