【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; W( a' W2 o' z) C) ]1 r) @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; @5 m6 q6 O8 K2 t7 l; ^9 A2 d& WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. j  F. T" h1 e% \8 u$ S; MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( ^0 R3 k7 S0 B+ \2 T6 y9 X! ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ {- l+ c- n" t( w6 v1 n8 X# rYou needn’t fear anything
3 q) c4 n$ X$ D: N, v0 x  j( E! ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 x! l0 ^) m  t" ]Every other word you utter is love
. a% g1 R, h7 m1 i2 S4 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 H: v+ J$ L) Y$ `- y2 RNothing can compare to my love
  O# ~6 M! [- y& c+ M0 I% XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  G" l0 V! m' H8 i; N/ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 d, M/ L" \. J- kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ @, m' s' B/ ^' JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, u$ |/ P2 P6 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ V5 U/ a2 y: ]  f& V' A! {! H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 ?$ y) o; q6 t2 f" X4 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 F! i+ F- {" N1 @: U; z, D5 j; B- p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' f& V  i  d7 S! h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- K( J5 R# I3 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! Z$ ]( f* q( o4 g$ z3 L) o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( _! f6 B" J1 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 Z. O: K' A% A9 @& d* @5 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 X5 J% }' \$ V& ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* A# \% t  M0 H0 v' N8 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Q/ X6 d% q; [* @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 n9 q" t& a. |, P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 R+ n0 O  c  g9 h' ^; _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& c6 z; z; d% T. p& l' C: V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 a6 s: N  O' V8 \0 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" |- ?1 H9 j/ J# D0 V0 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# v" G0 G: e1 a  J5 _& m7 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" n! `+ u9 S0 b) P! B' l, H- y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; }. A* N+ t  |* N7 U# r  u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 D% C1 @0 b% `9 ]" y, X1 C* W% N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 D5 S1 P% \, A! l* m$ h2 O' [' S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% O. ^: ~4 ]: H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ^6 {, D5 f4 q5 q4 L/ S( H% J7 a( v5 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ r  Y3 q9 J, B- X/ R' D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 ]8 }3 k" p1 [# r7 U( C  \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) @/ N; b, K) `3 v3 t. j$ f9 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 K( S9 o; n, @- L& u" z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: F$ I: C, _+ O$ S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>