【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* }! C+ d) l; H1 X; e& R6 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& q  }5 O, f: s8 e( |7 q/ ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 h1 h4 z6 L9 E" G+ K- j/ xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, j: d, J' u1 G+ p+ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 C$ O1 i5 B! \. pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: a+ k! g8 g9 R  i6 U* B% i. T5 g) aEvery other word you utter is love
+ f. d/ L: c" B2 r8 pI really want to know just how much you love me
4 |6 u' s8 q  l' [5 E  B# i' iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 A1 m8 q  s& m# K. jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' G1 H1 m6 M, {2 X( AI’m still filled with fear
4 K. C" B- f- q  Z8 [8 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# Q4 K( q) ^- u9 Z+ x& K; PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 d2 H# s' V7 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 _  p1 O4 A9 E( ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 [  _" P1 {3 Q# ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 g% ]/ v/ [7 u$ |/ L8 V% l  i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ w* ]0 q: G! F+ V# {6 j% @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; r$ n5 A% `, v& A& R/ J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ~1 n0 d6 D8 ?3 W1 ]+ c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& V& |8 N% G/ G" j. d2 P% p" m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  C2 D: N! G' V1 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ h6 y1 m2 `: w3 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 b- {8 T9 b' J0 r<P>你无需担心</P>
$ a: r' u* b; B0 P! @  D7 B" Q$ j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 |* }  t; _# K9 a9 ]1 b& ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' K4 G4 x: e+ L  J7 n  W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 J; g( s% D: K8 K  L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 F% Y: X0 n6 \3 s7 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ], e, k' |9 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ ~  C6 u, n  A& ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 L0 B. k9 K, M" c( ?  Y% n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 P# O  q; p0 D) s; G; y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ U! ?8 _! R+ P, v$ |" N9 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 L# w9 L2 A+ j: L" t5 Z; j' d; i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ r; g% ^5 {& y6 H0 w. X4 ?2 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ z0 z5 M' b  A& V8 J2 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 c, j4 U# v" m1 A8 c  F<P>I regret not dying</P>
& F% ?& N4 y  ~5 u6 P9 P& c# p0 J$ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 y6 M- U( ?2 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 ~) e! {! V% e! _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. k( e4 f' }2 Q; |" v4 A6 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& X8 [. p* x- ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 N2 t+ @' q3 U+ m+ P  J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 G3 H! }& p$ w" O7 x( A9 u# `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' [6 ^: W( T$ |4 d/ Z8 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 h! z6 I* G3 s0 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>