【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 R- c0 Z8 u) o7 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# L( D9 o1 m* q4 H; X5 G. c0 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* f" ]0 \8 L: M% Y7 \1 X, iSeeing the sky content with its love
; b, m3 |1 ~, i4 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- n0 {) G* S: b% I5 a- tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 b. |/ G7 R6 l5 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) o& o1 J' G& [3 M/ i4 x" }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, L. n- E$ u. Z  vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  c7 \6 h/ L; s, T, r3 ~0 KWith such a tongue as yours,
6 K- a- X- v8 P- b# s$ V+ d8 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; `) k: y, r. }- y( E9 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 }* a" k9 j' x0 u( y/ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. F3 f7 Z# }8 u  |+ F6 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 ^9 t; d8 k5 }# v- O$ g8 |3 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 `/ p7 ~1 X  }3 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# a3 L3 G' ~* j! S' z8 l9 U! Y$ l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 _4 f' r5 i2 D4 G. ^  X# g6 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* m/ _  a5 k" L9 z3 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ c. K8 ~+ O  q  k) C7 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) k2 e; S+ j/ q3 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# n" a0 z  D* n4 n* T' e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 O; d- d) E, n( f4 }" b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( x5 H: u3 `" e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# @5 X) [6 d% Q" d# r5 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 D8 \( @+ `& ^1 t1 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. U) t6 G  }) S. P% x- l0 y: z) L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ A$ Y' y: k) ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 u. F7 ^: u2 ~! I' H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: M# ^2 u* c' |/ D, W4 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! Z5 X  m; N0 J& D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 u& ?& r0 d$ p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  A9 [' b- l4 t' E7 W) J, ~7 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% C4 k: I. G* z' K3 i- |2 P- t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 M* i7 X2 n$ @" u9 t) U  E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 [7 `5 ]0 w: `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, i. t1 U  z" p/ s) D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& r+ ^6 ]' d$ U. s; [4 t9 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>