【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- g2 o' c: U' t0 w& j4 C; b$ I1 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, p4 u1 Z9 _; a/ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% o1 o! l! `! r* g* y5 T% tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 u+ s9 M6 P& RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ |, X% F7 y9 CI love you I love you with all my heart
* D% ~# X5 P2 A( lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: _3 E: [5 g! W2 Y! C# L, ]I want so much to see inside your heart
, ^# D7 ?/ A& B, p- jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; s& e- h0 W0 G) j+ jI’m still filled with fear
2 ~* S: T$ O- B3 e4 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 W# j% X* v" A( j+ C, m, c$ {I regret not dying
. i$ V5 t2 x. k# g9 ^/ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 a. P) n* A( d# [* I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: v' @4 l( Q: B- k4 ?/ }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 Y: S8 \% ~% Z$ \. D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ?* n5 C% @$ j, |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 B& Q. W3 |! ~% R7 h/ T9 {6 D4 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ X, G9 \: P9 |2 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 P  g$ [% W; E- z$ Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" L( u$ [* K" p/ T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ t* z) t9 ]4 Z! B! N+ D* z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: \- j$ Z9 c( \% J$ r/ l- R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# h: E8 ]! n4 c. {  M2 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. `2 O& f: P* `- \. Y  i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ M) ^  x2 C7 B1 u' O7 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ f+ z/ j& y( m, E$ X3 }: A1 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& ~8 R7 J4 l( h* x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* Q5 G" m1 j0 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& j) p- d- D; n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- g5 S; d. ~/ a/ q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( k2 K8 T3 p1 G) ^& C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' ]5 x0 t* A4 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 N2 k+ n2 O: {- y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 O& m$ ~  h: }2 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! q5 s0 q0 I/ B8 a" G" t: g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 m) r/ N/ X5 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 `" u4 t/ g' M& S' I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  H# x& M- V0 U3 ?8 l" L' N7 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# B4 l: r' p4 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 s, B% Z" o9 T( {7 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) p6 O! T$ o3 H  K. ], @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ]. l+ ?5 h  K( C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 L" S2 t. r' d8 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# e0 i8 a5 {2 C( c+ B+ b0 o  ]9 W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>