【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
) ^( {6 W- J  t2 V) }4 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. C& {8 t7 M0 i; g+ KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 V6 f  B6 }- h7 G3 V7 lWith the moon kissing it every night
, e7 A8 g9 }- W+ gSeeing the sky content with its love
" B! t/ L+ r, D& w) A7 T$ D* Z0 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ A$ s. u+ W# \+ ]& [' i+ eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ i. ?4 ]- q2 ?  W6 D- bEvery other word you utter is love
9 c( u1 E6 @# n" R- R0 iI really want to know just how much you love me
( s  p; K1 a/ l5 pI love you I love you with all my heart
" @( g7 `* z2 W* Q1 M/ v9 KNothing can compare to my love
! c/ b; K# n% pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% H! c/ V) ?: fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 k$ s2 T$ M* ~. q/ FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 O4 |( \. ~: t" N0 RWith such a tongue as yours,
9 O  T! H5 ]  W" VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* r9 |0 b* i( c8 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 Y8 W  E4 X5 u* Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# e" W, y" _  R  K- }$ C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( |2 @$ P$ F* n$ v( c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* ~0 R8 \5 x$ @% K+ A: _3 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) x1 n/ W- R# s6 Y' ]1 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 U$ r4 Y0 @! M0 t# G) L! b+ `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 h% ^# L" \/ {. Q8 L5 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 S4 q6 `, ?9 P, p& }* e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  {7 U" |5 U. {" b! }% Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 P! R& ?9 c' d7 C! p, C<P>你无需担心</P>
0 i- r0 O4 x0 B& k( p, o  @1 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( v- p7 }$ J$ @* `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ Q9 Q& V# n% s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 R& X5 }3 E5 @3 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 F* b! {; C3 l0 `  ]3 a( P0 a4 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ K5 O  g5 G9 {9 s- M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 P9 C! W) G0 ^$ `  p! ~4 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: X( F! u5 y- R" \' }4 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" Z7 }' q* ~8 Z7 w, W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ H- W8 `; q9 a# a3 J* d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 ?2 a1 p* ]6 L/ `( K4 u% D; A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; b& P3 ]3 V$ ]3 i2 I1 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 w; G, d% g4 |" M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- S3 i4 v# {- K& j* S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( h+ n/ {2 E0 w2 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 e3 \0 V' R, Z  @  x" G5 ^( b) e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 ?8 V" C9 d8 T+ q2 \# B* g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) J/ k3 V4 @4 T9 c& u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ e7 a' {. D7 K% F& A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>