【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 b/ S7 n+ ~0 N5 p8 x: QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; s8 S5 S' |- f$ Z) VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% m- y/ O( d5 B" NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( O" ~# }1 `- f3 v2 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" M5 S6 i5 A. R# Q4 N: WI really want to know just how much you love me
1 ~1 O1 ~; I1 ~" `& {% c& r5 lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 q+ M# E: _1 g* OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 n  X5 Z' ?( e5 K  A0 QI’m still filled with fear
6 ^/ a0 o, i! s' M: m/ g6 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: ~) z( A* C0 J* BI regret not dying
* q: L4 I6 R$ G3 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! |% z8 \: N! {) b( h& lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 a) d3 S( |8 |/ K: q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% `; X* P# w: @6 o. K, {- y5 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 a% k) P& D) M$ P, F. k. k$ c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) O# d) U! V; W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ w- B+ T) g7 D- s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ P) k9 X5 e6 o$ m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' T  B' F/ M+ c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 t' v) X) c3 Y, A9 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ U$ i) V6 l* G4 G: c7 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 B" s( V3 z2 p2 ^0 a* U( U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- W$ o! h4 E9 Y* a' y1 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, K3 Q% }( r2 f# k, v. t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% m5 f- `! E* \5 B: v  a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 J8 u' l2 B. Z# U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 A  x7 B6 z3 K+ f2 e; f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 P9 ]0 M- b% S8 @  h7 h& h9 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" s+ _7 G: a8 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. ~# H1 O4 ]- J; U4 C5 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 f5 V5 n, K$ ]* |- n* }, a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 y8 y* W/ u0 j2 w: w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  C5 O7 j% m, J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' F$ E+ b% N& _- a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ i! {+ @6 Q( V, Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 {8 f$ _: H" }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" Q, B3 b( ~" d" N2 v. Y& U# s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ Z/ ~/ z6 B2 U0 X" `  o0 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& S! l. k* l% M4 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ U4 E2 t0 j' p) n' A* M6 ?$ @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 H3 N+ V1 D9 {7 u1 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, g$ b' P; q. z* C1 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ J8 T2 t5 W" B& i, D+ M4 S8 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>