【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ]6 N6 D  @: u6 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% C/ A1 a/ [' c) m7 hSeeing the sky content with its love
+ i& q* ]7 {, u8 E# ^$ [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ _$ c0 \! e! _You needn’t fear anything
, V" F8 u3 K  w6 R2 e6 ]2 Q6 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 n3 ~9 \- U( A6 t8 YEvery other word you utter is love
6 L9 S$ B# W- N+ l" q# A- DI really want to know just how much you love me
6 L, E0 `$ M; B  LI love you I love you with all my heart
* W2 _7 @* h  a- i% \Nothing can compare to my love
8 d0 L& a" q( z$ b9 @# lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 `2 y4 x" _  y  b  l5 p9 nI want so much to see inside your heart
: x- D# V5 I6 \) LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Y7 d2 j+ `2 }( o/ ]& aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 x( u4 ^" B* IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% v1 I  m. C7 t4 x- ]  a5 `( k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ c. P1 [" S8 b! H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ s! G' P& ]. Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ |5 w& u6 b1 P0 \; t+ X2 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ~+ N% Y( J) U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 Y/ d6 M' G1 y( a+ r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 Q- d5 w4 s$ X) K4 k9 k: o% U8 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 c* K/ o" o% D! o; H/ k) I7 U  I9 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: s9 b; Q- b6 |/ A% f& y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. x: B6 c# O! E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- h% z# d4 |# W2 L) L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) b" J6 w. B: S& V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 q: |: A2 S$ B# |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* A8 _+ A2 v2 t1 b3 S9 v( z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( g/ _* l# k& c  m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% X1 P  \5 q" G  r% x- l  M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ]+ ?- `$ b9 i9 x, W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& X1 j" D/ y( ]2 ]$ G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 R9 m" J; W% S) m: ^! U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% ?  r+ h" ?0 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 w' {( Q; X, S9 V, p9 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 ^, n0 q+ @( ^) O2 x" H4 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 K$ F3 Z4 m( i' {( ~9 T8 E# t% e2 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* }0 b, C, T$ u/ f+ Z# j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 a* C1 w2 t* w2 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: v1 L7 h* D: X# [* X. }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. X3 a5 g5 B+ J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* w2 I8 i* l* E- ^* s: c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) _+ z: ?. |( x0 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ ^4 G  z( P2 q- O: P+ X. Z' P+ y我请你剖开它
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  X& `$ p. e* H( b' t6 G8 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 F- r# Q. \2 o* H0 X) C( L- d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>