【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) ^1 a! j) E2 v歌词我附在后面。
  f$ s) f( l7 k9 ]' w1 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  q. Q/ |4 w, f' i2 W/ X  j. cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 w( D$ L, a! d+ uWith the moon kissing it every night
/ h$ z) |/ U. n9 U/ q! mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# ^/ ]- f, k- u5 E7 lYou needn’t fear anything
6 L1 }# S. |4 A9 o+ A# h; [  H, r) PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Q; s, b$ d% REvery other word you utter is love
8 u: x; K% u; ]. a; wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ Q# Q2 i. P, ]+ _  u$ ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ n; X" ]6 P. IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, P) ?/ O9 ^% }  p' Z" i9 J- mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ o6 f8 h: [5 v* U0 HWith such a tongue as yours,
! M2 X( N. f0 {! }2 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% O  y" M9 }/ }. vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) ?* M) `; r0 O2 ~; f: I) s  k1 P! E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! u8 L, ~2 r( w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 I& L' d3 N' u' A1 T1 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) S& F( y! T9 s( F2 ]' W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, X+ w5 `( @2 X8 a9 Z3 o8 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- y& \; C2 E% Z: w- Z7 Q% u! s4 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( s1 B* w6 {0 m/ H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ W% p3 K- O% _, ^$ s% s! C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 H' [: \' M' ^" b% J6 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ?: _3 M+ {6 [# h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" ^! {( |# `2 l1 E4 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 y& [# A" t/ ]9 {* S- V4 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' x. {6 f8 Q. L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 m4 b1 n2 y+ s9 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' d  Q$ y7 f! v8 f<P>你无需担心</P>
! T5 B1 T9 Y( n# B! T8 w5 s" _: S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 P5 h. f: \: Y' m' ^7 C. w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. I; i# |# m( k5 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 S+ L' @9 }/ N) ^3 J0 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 C7 M9 ^1 f* L$ w# ?- A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 u1 y* t! ]+ H4 i1 B9 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: `2 Y7 s% y- P2 n( Z6 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ l2 j0 c+ D8 `/ h/ G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 s8 c: ^& r: U& S( v* M- D5 m- E, [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 e* `& W( e, i; E! ]. V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 F! Y. a/ v$ W+ d7 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ p% c) G7 y8 D1 k" h! n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ e2 R4 C5 ?3 n" ~4 I1 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ d4 x) a2 Q3 {" e. ~  B! i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 e1 y! p3 o( R, t7 y+ ?* Z$ Y1 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>