【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 A, l& e$ m3 Q- }0 N" R: X' DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, O" S" {0 H9 n; T8 c2 y3 E- JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 i: H  J) k8 W+ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) |; H+ e4 C2 L% pSeeing the sky content with its love
" ]) y6 I) C! m+ e7 n# fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% _9 y; |5 S- h. g; z/ `Every other word you utter is love
2 L1 ~7 I9 U% R) o- II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  h% r& W/ V( Z2 ~' JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 E: N' d4 O6 A9 g& y5 `I want so much to see inside your heart
" C9 A! X8 C4 J- X. J7 U! `, ?7 ?( oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( A( ]3 l0 b! y2 a; H+ WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ o) P6 J3 J! a: ]+ e' K) S6 eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 \* M$ b9 V0 B0 k! o+ ?" e! m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ [5 d$ S2 ]" n$ C6 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  r0 R, A6 D$ {7 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 {! S$ {" b3 U, p, e" i+ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! b/ o% q  b( R( v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# q( i! l* N$ r" v& k<P>你无需担心</P>
5 H0 r) @" z% J* W% M% t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 @7 K8 `2 j8 L& W5 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 {  ?& H& v5 h4 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ r9 D$ F1 @8 v9 k# _/ R7 A6 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 G6 d4 D9 ]: X2 }) u6 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 ^7 t4 D( i" d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ _4 @6 q; g+ u' G6 I" g) }9 a( B5 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 g% S6 A; I: W- U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( \3 v/ U5 X. I6 L- w. K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 C, K4 a2 F/ a7 n: A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
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$ c6 Y4 s' n( H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 Z) K' V3 @4 [! j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! b+ h7 J5 F) K  C4 o5 Z# f+ k8 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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