【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% y5 B  ?! d# y! W* c7 A9 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 M+ l% N# [& U8 M3 k1 H, ]3 p# zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 W  ~* o. c& n7 e" L8 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* z* I2 o* f! s+ ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( b8 E7 v; N( p; j: D* `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ r2 Q+ K3 M, @You needn’t fear anything
: \) y5 B8 x+ bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 h7 t9 \' v- }& g' e# iI really want to know just how much you love me
) y6 Z/ Q2 A  D% t+ {) QI love you I love you with all my heart
1 V! ]) F/ ~! D9 D( \+ ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- A! u& M' u2 u4 {6 k) Q: [' yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! o- \7 B3 G1 V* b1 f* E9 fI regret not dying
0 g6 U$ M/ A4 I8 }7 g( UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 y* s9 p- N: ?1 _+ I3 u7 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" F" @0 k/ u& w" }' T# D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# u+ Q# k8 {/ T2 @! s8 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' b9 L3 K5 n) q2 g9 T* o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' H3 V6 O/ f$ }. k2 G" s+ Q7 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; ]# W4 M6 g: s8 i. L# ]- E; ~8 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# P3 ?8 O' X7 g/ s5 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; r6 k5 j0 c! @3 ^. J, W! X<P>你无需担心</P>
) U2 s0 @' K- Q7 P. z+ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! `+ g$ H; l& V0 p) J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( u- |! U: a2 u, f) s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* E( `3 E' q* g& H& B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: ~; O$ I  m! I# F; Q# ^4 }, b4 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% Y$ |2 N: Q! {0 p  ^; t9 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% i- B' r, k" c  e4 U4 L, w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- h  {7 w  k9 k$ |* C1 f3 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 X9 R  P7 K, C8 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ |, j- k; B& V6 |$ I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& `+ f; j; ?1 U) O: C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 j) s# b9 R5 L0 u0 q3 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' r* q& o) |8 r1 p' d7 ^/ y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ D, ?: g, c. y( `. [6 l! Y5 t- a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- K) B3 E0 F' o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" f' @! z: G8 u. ], @2 D4 ?8 r8 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# X! r" x, F" r, x8 j! k  ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' |$ Y# ?+ `' n; r. b" E2 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ }: M$ a3 z( ^+ Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% u1 L& g- V  }; ^$ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>