【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# W! ]" r7 u5 ^" \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 r0 [5 ~0 z- x  KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 C/ {0 [  [2 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* f5 B8 |0 i, R4 K' ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 S. C: u* x8 aI love you I love you with all my heart
& G* n. W9 ^9 n$ j# vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 W4 h+ l# E3 h. [4 _# N$ |" uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ E) b2 e7 G) k8 }9 t: Y% r, sI want so much to see inside your heart
' H* Y$ H1 N! BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ W8 ~. J4 ]. q! U6 h6 }( h9 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- M* u  u. f' `% k  n9 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ e  K1 x. v1 Y# z' s0 {3 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& o% K  m& [, h' ^9 u# k* I; ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ?( W# g, b# Q+ A/ q( ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 M* |( N3 q5 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 E8 W* ?0 j- N, N* N9 m  x4 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: ?6 _5 M, A  L3 [" ]4 R, ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' @2 G2 q& ~! D7 O! ?9 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 }, G( ?* F+ d7 B1 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  u$ s" N2 w/ n. ]% L) Z" W) _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( X+ X9 \4 [3 Y: R- f' X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! T3 U! N: i' F. ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ s4 g& r( S( E1 E' j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 v1 X9 r* t5 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; u* o# \  _# c+ i; x4 l; x4 W4 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- J9 ]1 I3 m$ k+ Z! |! t9 b( Q! \' ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: Z4 m  J+ Z! K' S  C9 P5 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 h5 r3 i; h9 Y4 e+ X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ e9 ~- w, p" T" r' Y) W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 w9 n9 @8 s) }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 t- z" A: L3 U3 `/ G: i) L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 C4 ^0 {+ f9 V, I6 R: ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* J( _9 H+ K2 j7 J' J+ n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 A  R, w1 p6 ^' J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: U* Y* w( l; D4 b9 [8 ~0 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" P' l4 x0 _, G8 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. H3 [+ q; D: M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 }8 S! U) ~- _. g# Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) N. P7 `% }3 J% \# k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( j! ?7 M( ~8 r& m0 [; I$ K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
2 @: ^: V/ M+ A5 a
" P7 b9 L% X' b! T$ G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ }" |1 y5 _, ^! a. B7 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>