【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( Y% n: \2 ?" Z1 r' U. gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ A1 N3 y4 f, e2 P3 e& WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 H( L! y# r0 G' XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ O& [# Y/ J8 e' eWith the moon kissing it every night
% j1 s5 I" F6 z3 uSeeing the sky content with its love
( G6 y, ~1 O( \" h: ?6 W- SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; P) ^  p- E2 C$ i8 [You needn’t fear anything
( X3 B( X' e7 \; SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! x0 x' }% p# PEvery other word you utter is love
( W+ j6 ~. Q3 E: FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) L2 B6 O5 D0 ~! [0 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- q6 ]' u7 |! C% F5 |' h& R+ }I regret not dying
$ b1 o5 {$ w8 t0 R) ~# Z: f* nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, K/ W6 Q+ _( |. L4 b" f4 r  G- C) tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 \3 w' q" h. E3 j- KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! g2 f. c# m0 U. b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- V7 Y' [( \4 t* h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, R% r/ V7 T8 Z/ u' Y% p3 B6 s4 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 n# w' z& ]* G9 u- p# B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ A5 m' X9 a& N" Z1 h* |$ [* O$ Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, Z, h+ {, q1 B& l; Y0 A! X6 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* \( Q2 D3 c. g% I: f9 n+ @# ~: a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& L, j) q) M$ N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 p; A, ?" t2 K' p  a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" a6 H) g6 K4 z; J% t5 X9 n1 g: g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 {  A7 A7 @0 c  ~% n1 {2 o8 E1 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 @* q) ]% K7 q% O/ ^$ T8 W/ f7 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* A- A% s% D. n* ~2 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 B  l' A% a" Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- R: D( Y, S  K. k4 Z1 u3 x) \: }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 c+ A" [3 L  v# m# w8 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& x  q" [" }5 ?" W" L. B+ o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- W, I3 C1 V7 D- w: Z2 P. P! ^: {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 J& t5 B8 j5 }6 Z2 r: j/ g6 Q' p0 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: X' u3 G7 `) K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; P" g( s) u' ^0 {; i8 z" V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* [/ l5 @' e$ L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ h; Z% i  P' L* e' V' T6 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: ^; N- D4 c7 n5 m+ x0 m, Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' f7 ?  U7 r5 ~2 {+ U& k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 P3 n. F+ H1 X5 O, ]: z* n- t3 `% H  o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  A9 Q) D  {  W& J7 }; V! U% c我请你剖开它

( T0 p& r1 {* P/ x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>