【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ Y6 }1 r9 c; w歌词我附在后面。
7 }$ J0 t5 h# _7 C' d% F4 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 L( q$ c5 e# X) A" U9 T5 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 ~7 g  }/ ]2 I- K5 [. OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* L  S9 i7 ^& |0 G; B$ ?0 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- D" i/ o8 i" R& vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- f" ?) F6 [7 f* \4 KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) z! p4 _! o- E8 B9 @" UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 y- S$ {) \" |( s2 w0 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& P9 l: B2 a1 ?! KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 L8 n# X' `% x/ T7 R: u4 y8 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" {" N9 r- ~% n% LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ x7 D6 J8 j* }% v1 `  RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ O7 A6 h# \! N5 D+ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' s7 U% ~, |) U4 r5 r  }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 M0 @  h! P7 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i& h8 C5 ^6 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 Q4 T: T' R: l  ]) S: f& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- o+ f' j4 e  C" z  l0 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! R3 d* {! J& @  M) h8 i1 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 {2 q$ A# z, I% K' Y3 a# {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! Z; |6 _9 p, r' L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( q! b7 P' R( Q1 P2 ~: t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 N9 _9 T8 p2 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* _1 I2 q+ i' d' I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ]+ r, x2 I' P4 x6 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& n* A  }$ @; R) d' D5 @! c) l' o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ U: v2 p/ [! n8 s* e' M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 C. q1 U* ^& X9 I8 @4 N8 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, N! @3 F- R& T. X% O" A( z7 B. K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 C/ I  ]; N+ \' `; T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 o, C1 F" W/ ~" n. ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( E7 K4 t; B2 {. R5 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) b5 o% k3 ^: W& i<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 P& A2 Q+ o) w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 V% A# f+ _" p, J$ t0 t9 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ F5 A- [  u& K2 k% r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 O7 j& _8 j' ?6 I# ~3 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 n6 j# U. A2 b- F1 l( P$ S1 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ }; ^$ d- X4 ^& q% Y$ x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& Y( R2 X5 o* \& o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>