【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 q' ?8 d$ {0 B6 q' H' }  tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# t3 U! R; B) F9 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ~* U; _6 d& @# |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& q2 f0 q& N1 lSeeing the sky content with its love
. V+ Y1 m6 q8 f! N6 A- yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 f0 K1 j% Z, x4 {5 W( C3 Z, m% ?You needn’t fear anything
. s, c9 f# O9 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; j- B, l# |7 U3 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 P; f2 d8 S+ cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  _! \+ ]! S! g* J$ R/ k$ q  LI want so much to see inside your heart
' h0 m' w9 ]! E' i0 r( }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 T* {$ v! x- @4 F7 y7 F2 SI’m still filled with fear
" D* i; Y! o5 V5 N/ ^+ PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" h2 W! W! l' m! R- X8 O+ }8 r3 k  N% s! G4 mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: O/ r9 H$ ^5 @3 {4 I  p) kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) m' o& g+ E2 K2 y  TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( v, S5 @5 {2 `+ o6 k+ M# C8 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' K9 a! |* T, [' r$ c; U+ m0 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ b$ a" p. a* A. E7 _4 p! ~1 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ~* M! \" z/ d0 Z9 y8 X2 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ p, ^, _' }( s% L' n$ `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% q% b% L( Q$ a, v; p! H- B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ c& z# V; e  g  ~$ ~: t' y# F0 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! w$ L& F; L) R" N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) \3 ?' L" ]5 f/ u2 U4 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- S- F8 v% x7 I3 u, d8 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' `) ^6 M/ `+ {- \/ I" R. @, L% r7 x% P. G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 o0 h( n$ U4 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 A. f# s& m2 {  f6 m- O: B6 B1 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! O% L) B0 n3 [1 _' s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 N7 U- B  g7 j% F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 E; {) B1 D( L8 z: e* X' L9 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 S; K1 J) X- k$ M6 ]( a6 z) v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 C. X& }" [9 f. ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 \! f0 ~, y; I1 i9 D4 o2 R9 X: K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* U8 t6 Z! c, ~4 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" `& b# R1 ~& t7 U: g0 O' t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% h/ O* S5 [5 ?2 m3 m3 q% a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' A1 B3 P, k& L' `6 r& T) m- S/ a) n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ y# ~8 O& u9 _5 @0 w) }3 o$ }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, X+ l0 H: O% _/ V/ Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. I" z) `/ I6 u0 n1 n) P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 T5 f4 G8 z) E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>