【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 A$ }* f7 ?+ ]* ^歌词我附在后面。
# @( B8 R# o. Y) G% ^4 F8 M5 Y: iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. _; ~' V/ G' r' _7 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ X! [8 d, _. \; f0 C* l1 F6 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
, E1 L8 G4 V  }" i$ YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. H2 K# R# d* l& [1 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 W! {4 g4 c$ [& ^You needn’t fear anything
  p1 P3 M2 M% y' JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, [+ Z8 U5 C& a9 T  O5 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ I' y* b: M& k3 hI’m still filled with fear
3 M( l! ^/ t; F, Q, G5 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ U/ H2 M8 W$ \+ oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' O; D% y/ _9 V9 Y6 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! }: I8 K  J8 E6 ^& Q. l  r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ F4 N: F- i$ J- Q, K) U0 C( z) L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ~4 ~5 E; D, q* D. B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 Q( i, S% j: m( v* U+ V, `+ J& J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 f$ ]6 A& x3 B* i( R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! |% s" ~5 ]5 Y7 a% e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% x5 `3 U" c6 S- A6 |( ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 q& O) G- W: [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. o8 {: I0 E9 @' ?" Z8 ]0 j. V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" D- m6 k) P; r( C/ l) K1 n: \& E% ]! \) ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; s7 L5 v; h7 c( x' d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 L0 y, C& O, P5 [5 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: G" I7 E( j) ~# A( W2 X& r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ^6 v- j+ o0 [; R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 f% }% i; `: U6 L) [7 I  d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 Y# q7 P- d, |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 C* o+ V0 ^9 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 v6 M' |+ x2 ~6 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! i+ _2 O: }8 M6 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 r' E0 J1 {: [4 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 V- |: V3 V8 G" q& G3 Y5 Q9 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 o/ y3 m- G. [  C# l9 P3 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 V1 d+ v% K: Y+ o/ K* c5 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 g- C; e; w& O: m' Q- P$ [. ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 c  y/ T$ u7 }8 ~6 I7 W$ ^" q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 v: P! M, @- t; \1 K( ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& d: H; h. g4 J& ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 c$ I% c( W( X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 m/ X! A; A# z6 f8 ^5 D1 K, |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& u8 L* W* w/ P9 O- A3 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) \8 Z) H9 |* i! I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* [$ E1 u3 x4 b0 g. b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>