【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ E# ]. M- q1 z1 R歌词我附在后面。
3 T4 H$ g) d" b" O7 @6 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" n0 K+ p5 n# v1 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ n3 z: Y( Z" G. zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, M( B9 d1 b2 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- A+ \" w3 j, J" zSeeing the sky content with its love
# }9 s. z7 D; e+ S: S+ x- Q9 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 \# s' O( q" n5 WYou needn’t fear anything
  _4 n9 N# t# x3 u3 w+ L. dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! ^; O" `, T- d8 i* sI really want to know just how much you love me
% B% V5 F# x( ^# n$ N, i* _: V" RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 R1 ]" ^0 G4 p7 G7 X* I6 G/ [+ _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# I! O5 u- G6 K3 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 V7 z+ E6 g/ E& K4 J8 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( `# [" F5 y9 ~, F; I) ]I regret not dying
3 g: t( F3 ^4 q2 W9 C9 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: Q+ C, c# R- K; YWith such a tongue as yours,
" @7 X$ {7 @4 Q+ G& JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 R  ^, f1 k; x% W4 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 G+ a) \6 E; e5 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 u# f, j# i- s( |+ n# m  {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, [$ n5 O# D6 K0 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; x  ?2 e+ V# E, G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 F; y9 Q9 `5 n, t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ?7 e/ R/ F, P+ e, s5 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! Y0 ^4 a9 Y0 |. w; J# W# k# [9 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Q( E1 {! b, K( s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ Y# d' s0 V( H+ ]! _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 R! Y* z' Z& F% \2 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; m8 a7 @9 D0 S0 S/ Y  V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 [, n. s* G" x% Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 Y6 M9 y5 `: c; p" E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 [$ i, L1 J* m& Y: d/ s" K* U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# x- m' U7 I% @5 t/ ^8 }; A1 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 ]2 _7 l+ U9 q3 {. Y5 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 F$ p( x) z1 h1 y/ s  K+ g( G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; F1 u, o9 ~8 U* q+ F2 h0 V9 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; ?( {( Z1 V' U" E7 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" C, x' R0 G3 |" w0 C3 V9 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. G8 O) e0 g  ^; W" T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 r! o0 |' F3 a  b# H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 ]' Z* X% E1 Q. i. ~# u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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( k- ~8 B/ i% b, S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ O) u( f' w% v6 P6 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>