【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) {0 j$ i, I( g9 A; _- x' |0 n& N% [2 hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 u% _* N+ i9 ^3 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 z6 V7 w7 e1 p9 r; \6 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 [7 k( J3 s7 }! @4 F  REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( ~. r) E1 @7 I# a7 e3 ?5 J* ~1 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 ^' ?  r+ ^0 _! HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; J6 Q* m( s. [$ I# F! rWith such a tongue as yours,
! O3 s( B) s- Y) GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 D0 ^. ~6 t3 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% A# u7 [/ w; Q9 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 w7 c( W3 q- U' C2 D' d7 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; I8 L- |1 z# ?2 ~8 Q& F/ O3 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% g2 m! h. G$ {9 P# c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* s$ M0 G0 n6 O! D5 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ v+ h9 T) o; b+ N+ V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 i+ Y( T; r' ?3 o! S% r' w; {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ w0 Y+ m, a" |5 c- m) @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 n+ n8 t3 D+ T6 [6 [, d# x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; o. v' g7 u% A- e( m* V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ u( I7 ?2 |: t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ q/ p" J" a/ F/ O  T0 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 Q7 c5 S6 Y6 ?0 J  P7 X8 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 N1 X+ B! w1 Q; g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ^' i& F* K% d& x9 b' H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ H7 `" w# d; {% k9 A. Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 w" ?5 q2 B5 U( ]! y& Q8 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: e: t8 [$ G9 K$ V9 t" v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; F* J2 x. Q* c4 I' G3 L0 @( [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 A/ M+ g% i) \  @7 Q" t& l' h0 Y& V9 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- M1 t0 B/ D! O, ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: ]* Q9 B/ D" Q" c  z2 U( W# a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 q5 @  K- L  n1 w/ D" J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Y4 B& P6 K% W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! h. u1 d, l/ i1 b$ {$ D' s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 ?0 U# [7 o2 i" n" y% A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, T; g2 N1 K  c" p7 i  a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: s! A5 ?4 d5 o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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