【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) d0 W0 B- c* ^6 H& f9 h0 r歌词我附在后面。
. `- S; F# t3 ~2 f% kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 [" I/ U# i, f  I8 z# X4 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: f5 U9 q' |% s6 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* g  t6 `7 m) I$ ]5 R+ zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 F- e; i4 L/ E5 P+ V5 @6 qEvery other word you utter is love
4 w% A% S! M# D+ l; N9 kI really want to know just how much you love me
% j) [" ?; c/ X& A4 j' II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 |/ i8 z  X, e" k: t- {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! f  A2 ?# [% Z1 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% ?2 e9 `3 O( X4 ~; OI regret not dying
9 z: ^3 Q# O7 Y! r  J- X4 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 @1 z- p8 S# J, hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 \/ O) e( d; c3 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* s9 k# y% |* M) s6 o2 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 ?5 F2 }" M) V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 `' M3 m9 t5 b; b$ E; u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. `8 J7 @7 [& P  m& I. X" j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ m$ y2 {  `1 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 H. v# g4 k3 L6 U4 g4 k' U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) H+ w+ O5 M% R5 H+ R+ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! S, J, w8 r. ~, \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 D, J& e- `2 n) c4 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' g( m% f' C% o5 w. s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 n$ o& f3 Q3 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! f, C% S% J: ^' b$ l  b4 J3 z' k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. a: O3 b3 ]. B% i- c& g# b6 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, A6 V4 I1 [1 `3 y9 X5 k: M$ U" D3 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: L7 |! h& O( q. J7 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. g# T, U* [3 _, ], v2 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 z; [* I) I% _; o$ t# }  [! g7 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" ^  t) x$ x% ]% e* C* Y& l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" P) M& b3 V' H# D/ S" C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 }5 T! X3 |  s$ j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# A8 U. m  M2 }4 P& n<P>I regret not dying</P>
% U. c2 ^) i$ y( p# }) f# T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* B  ~# Y7 f* `& p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 Y+ ]( n, l/ H0 e  r, b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

: }- b/ u/ R- n6 U! q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>