【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: b6 v8 ~5 q, w歌词我附在后面。
  G3 W! l2 [' @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# a' D  a, M" z5 V0 R% m9 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( c) y( A8 m. L  jThe sky is happy down to its soul
' G( _# T4 a# G0 m+ dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# N+ T* k6 I1 \8 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 w0 \; \8 G5 GI really want to know just how much you love me
& v% a  E6 o7 s4 J3 KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Y- _# b' \- r( v# q% XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 Q; e  g: {  [+ M. Q4 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 r3 ], r6 F7 i/ I3 gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' v* @5 v- J/ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) E: ], _. O4 Q/ A" }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 x, e/ `) m; K: ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# L6 T7 W9 U3 J. E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& g) N' A8 S- @1 K+ P* h2 e5 Q0 `# X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! g0 O$ ~: i2 Q2 I+ N! |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) T* B: Z, i' O  A3 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 a: a8 n4 \8 L; S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 a% \  b( Q# r# i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" J8 g6 B. _+ [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* }5 s7 u. Q& O3 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# q/ S4 [& m" y: [8 x1 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: [5 F3 L& k0 d% u# V# w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 \' i% D; c" l6 b7 I! W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& R5 r5 _) k  O+ q8 m7 }( Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 Q& \; u: M/ X* J+ {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 h& D" S( E* }+ n4 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ v" p$ _# u% l' i* }7 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: q7 b5 G( s% I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 l( \' M, |; d5 f0 l- f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! \; F! y. }9 j. A# a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 x. q$ Y- k, f/ n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 l# u( ~5 D( q. b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ ~, [4 p- ^' v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>