【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 H+ L/ o) b" x* n, Z5 n* M$ I+ `歌词我附在后面。
3 ]& b; C, Q1 m- Y  _+ C( L& w2 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ^2 w8 n7 p; }5 A7 X6 Z$ u! ]* kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 h, |; M5 O6 g2 F- j2 {, Q1 F2 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) w' D7 C) ^! E' [+ v  w3 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, ?) u# p& w; b7 D  G! @  h7 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* L( r' A) X' \. b% X* T3 f* _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 q- o# ~9 a$ r2 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% R, G4 Z. T2 R! L( z* w, }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# ~' X5 q, ?, R6 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 _* t) E( ~  `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 R. u/ ~& r  f6 F6 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 u& b) u" d4 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: |" b7 U% `+ a# f! ]! w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  a  t% t( B! E& z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ z& o9 e2 ^0 _7 E4 F- ^  p, a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 Y) p6 Q. K5 a: a$ [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 i+ I3 b' x6 N! h! w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; E" n! \# X. }( o! Q. p6 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, `! s# B. {1 k1 h; p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 S4 R* p4 m# V2 _+ Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 y2 u5 t+ P; \6 [& s- `% A+ M) Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 T9 S$ K& t  E$ v1 O8 i2 ]% Q  H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, q2 X0 u& u6 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" M) K, b4 C1 a$ v" e, f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: m$ j1 {# i8 v; _7 |' X$ u. [# `& t  Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) r. W! ~5 p0 B- p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 E" a: z3 j8 c* b" i& U4 b0 k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. X" y/ l- L: {2 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 z3 s/ S  C. ?- Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 a6 T# E( H. ~& h5 f2 N$ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ Z0 m/ C4 }3 g( C# y<P>I regret not dying</P>
% X% B& D' `. L, T4 O* h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 r) P. F" A8 E9 q$ z- G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& m- y4 {5 y& e( w7 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# f6 i2 ~8 v" d# Z1 u# S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 T- m! g' }5 z8 W- n( b% g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>