【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: i" v  Q; a; _# G1 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 c8 r# e& h: [8 F: ~3 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; s! {# B8 V% I0 y2 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 B  H+ t* j1 U1 f, @5 x8 sNothing can compare to my love
# S$ Q$ G0 a1 ]8 T& o# z3 n$ dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ {+ {0 {. L1 Q% c- `: R1 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. ?. w* k1 i: s( F" lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 u" |; A+ e- n7 b0 Q3 p. aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  ]3 G, f3 G$ ^/ I; dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 ^  J. L" y2 ~9 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 w0 `* y, U5 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. G' b# h- ~' S2 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. F6 f" h% Q! N8 _% B. r+ ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" m% Z0 v6 {* A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ H. B+ R, A5 I, r% j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" j; O& `$ C& [8 c$ N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% v8 S# e. g+ o& W" K% R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 @+ Y2 h) c3 \* v) ]" {9 K2 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 G: P5 N0 Z5 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 C5 V& T" `8 [, l5 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' |5 I+ A4 L! z- E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 b; w3 Y2 P/ Y9 ?$ @) S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ o. m- ~4 X4 `0 x; V. w' x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 u7 s7 W% Y' _; m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ~, _# k! e& x7 f5 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 W' T  o" v6 j/ ~; H9 z" Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 D6 H2 t! o% r$ M+ e$ S- \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! z  ]: n0 F# t7 H% J! p/ h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 M/ y) |, b6 l3 `. N( N9 i! B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, h, f) X9 K8 `" u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 T+ H( X/ I2 \! D5 }6 U) \) k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f- P* C, Q- b7 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 h- X' V. Q7 M8 Y- K6 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  o& d7 F( w$ ~- D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& v* p! `3 B2 t+ `8 ^* ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 [* x1 H7 `. ~. s. G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. g2 s9 M8 P" }6 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: d9 S1 L6 C* h. d' T( C6 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 H! w% I, j4 b& h2 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>