【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) r7 Q  ~! _- |; P: t) F歌词我附在后面。
. m. _8 o  |8 ]' S( MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 w$ |$ i8 T2 m* X& N- A  oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# D6 ~: d; w* ?5 P9 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 `* O! k6 p& L+ jSeeing the sky content with its love
$ l8 o$ o( J$ V' y" Z" p: o1 S4 n8 [& {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 v" J' P, g1 A% x( G2 `) _  T: TYou needn’t fear anything
' k! l# G5 I7 G: L+ b) qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 l. ?' I3 ^  m, [8 V6 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" _% F" _2 p: {Nothing can compare to my love
- \. T+ ]4 K+ d) fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: {8 {6 ?% E" Y+ a  SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: R4 D2 I+ a6 _; z( p; |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 V% ]. n( S- x1 o5 eWith such a tongue as yours,
% a7 ^9 H4 F# g* F0 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! _9 S/ G1 C, M* k: F7 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ a6 x. A+ i# Y8 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ [/ w. O4 u% {; c# L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* \- r7 v% f, s- U$ p0 I8 J7 A3 S2 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 k! ?& g/ M% S% t' j5 c" h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 [0 n* C4 d1 L/ K; _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' B* z: M- Z6 F; b3 R! s/ }+ N* q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. {7 o3 n. _2 S* R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, P- {" z. ]0 H% y9 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 e6 M/ Q9 I) \3 [3 \! P# L* @2 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. ^2 R0 U1 _) a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 ]: h# ?0 Y4 ]* i; @: M7 }0 {& I1 B" x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. E5 }; w7 q7 w- I9 X8 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' h& _) M! ^- C9 A1 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ R6 Q" z/ B* Z9 [7 I3 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 p1 Q  Z, o: w# R+ `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 C0 V' d: w) n+ Q& I/ M6 \, V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" _8 M6 x8 \$ J  Q& C2 ^3 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ]+ ~$ `7 ?0 d3 R& I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ [# }; v( l. l" X- u) M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ e! ?" p, c+ |) b6 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 U' ]& n  [& J( p5 B8 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 a" q& N7 C. l. d4 ^, s; |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 G# W" \0 }! w% z  Z: C5 E6 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ V5 j% k. n6 f+ y* w, p3 o# z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' q/ \$ t8 |7 t9 R% v6 w9 L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Q& _# ?; [  n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>