【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 k* B4 z, R! w$ D$ I5 F5 X3 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 n% N* }& n' ~' I; j0 B+ U7 Z5 ]3 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 p. Y3 g' R! P5 K) S4 h& FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 D7 p6 w/ J1 Q6 {$ x$ ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' u* m' \2 [5 E% h, g- N  pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% T4 l; U9 {6 e7 r1 ^5 d8 tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( _" e2 G1 O) |, y% g: Q* C$ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% r  K' b) h) ^+ L( u: E" qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 O" u$ d2 _% Y( R! z5 a  KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U' S+ {# y0 B# X  \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" u7 Z2 s) x8 u9 kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 T$ M1 E3 ]* R( RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& Y+ u; x# p4 J; Y4 J  B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ b/ q  j. N5 b: p, ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 {1 S6 a6 n% s% H* _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 T3 \+ G4 N# X# u& i; X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 s0 {# j4 {# D- J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ @4 O/ F! P8 }' |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; |* U& S9 n# r3 Y/ G2 l6 ]- u<P>你无需担心</P>
, h: k; M% X: j! Y, j/ P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% k: e: W- G5 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) \" ?+ R/ {' k, z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' p6 V& M8 o  a+ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; C' V5 e) J8 Q9 m$ ?$ l! ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 J3 x4 e5 @( U$ D. X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! Z  V/ G- Q- n. L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) D& Q0 ^& W: x! P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" x* F  |+ }6 i- S1 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% U1 R% q' G+ p: |2 c/ R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 P. Q3 _3 W( A& Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 @: d( Y8 S; A# z1 N7 b+ Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% v. ]) [' b) ]0 e' [9 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; p5 j" d- g2 c" ^+ g+ g' E( P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 D6 J* c. ^! P: g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' J2 Q* F- Z# o- ]' @# z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 e3 n4 z2 l- K4 \0 ?) c* e1 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ z7 G& [( K/ N0 v% q- ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  k3 x/ f3 {4 j- S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 G7 y1 z0 L: x8 X& g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ P" Z4 e; u6 \. E& f9 D* C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ p% W1 C9 v' |4 D8 S! p$ V3 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, D' b' A# l( P7 W# @" D0 C  J9 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- I( G3 `, G8 X3 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 j9 X) W+ c; y4 _0 n我请你剖开它

; v7 J; A9 p! _' \: d. C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; A, W( V; ^" I; Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>