【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% [2 X* q0 \5 h7 ]$ [8 N3 m& K* d- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 F1 G# e0 R' h6 G9 O+ B9 c2 i0 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- d) M" h7 m1 M0 f  `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 f' n- |* F. ]7 z1 J; nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 n6 D) H6 L( X1 [9 Z! ESeeing the sky content with its love
* I' T" j' T& jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* c' [5 X, _( x. u1 g( YYou needn’t fear anything
9 U) n( V) ~% r4 K; w  ^; w. HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 b, ?4 t8 O, x  |8 RI want so much to see inside your heart
$ z, d9 t) F8 U7 e+ k( fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* |1 V! L/ D' y! D4 C& PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ~2 |# u$ N6 G/ u7 GI regret not dying
$ {* {% c3 X# C- OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 l" y0 Q- I3 y$ a+ BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  L  F% r5 G! n5 F9 h8 L, jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 J1 |/ U7 l5 W& K: l* m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 N4 p1 i* T; q& T# b0 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 }( l- x, e! h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 t- \+ B/ u" \- z( y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 n/ p) s, D) c! t8 A, z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 q" e, q/ y6 U6 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( f  r+ t' _8 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 r7 Z5 b0 k# F3 I  h9 ?+ G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ I  Z" v2 g( d3 F% l( a' N<P>你无需担心</P>
. w' F7 J5 y0 V* n/ d( M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( w8 c) t; E9 M* T; U( j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) [. G2 p) ~1 c7 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 F4 U7 K# `; u( o: d& G3 N$ t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 d8 m. r: F# N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, i% ~, D3 i8 l  ?0 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 F- C2 o8 A( X! c0 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# T1 @* c* k$ h5 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. e. [; g8 ~! H5 j' \  ]. k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. X" |% M9 ?$ j! g8 o/ J  P4 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ O' r9 n& U5 t" H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: J# k, e1 ]% r4 W3 ~' c2 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ |2 Z" y! W: s6 O" n  B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ M; m* z. r/ ~- {/ s7 _" O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 e$ |+ v4 e: Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ z4 v! d5 J* h: L; u( {. ?) U<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 a9 Z, }5 t& y8 f5 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! s! t! t3 D% B( {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 m; H. o# M' D+ B3 ?+ r* y9 Q3 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; p* M. p& ]# J+ W2 c7 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ ~1 l$ M  N: K& L/ H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' a5 K4 s5 Q4 O4 n; `  G% J) Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ ~5 Q5 d5 M- e3 X% @  L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>