【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& S  C5 [+ b- C% f* C" XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 z, e' B2 G6 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! r/ D, J& m' ?3 l6 J  c1 E: eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  C9 T' q; t! pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, @) Z2 ?6 J8 _& {1 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ c7 m+ q  h% n3 ^0 f+ UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) D* X  c" P, \& k; X+ RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 @+ Z; ^" [+ VEvery other word you utter is love
6 \! |" S3 @4 E) FI really want to know just how much you love me
' Z2 O  u- q7 R! Q) J/ RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 a, y) i- R$ `3 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( m/ W1 }0 {* M+ Z5 G" \  _* DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 R1 y$ _; \4 X9 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. A4 ?- U; ]  M: b2 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 y: \1 x+ ]' N( n& _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- _1 i( _& [6 g1 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 b; M, y4 h' t, C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' v, L7 L; a, r8 g% ^5 D9 l* L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 Y: g# |' I. l0 b. `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( q6 f% s& P) W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 {  |: W+ j/ e/ s  M2 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 B9 H- x! r+ N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 z2 P1 v: R' I- A/ {4 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 e% h- x1 ~! e% d) B# Q0 N* i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 P0 E: v6 S. t* [  f/ R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 w9 [6 ?% S( Z0 P+ b) E1 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* \- \* N9 L( a1 F( n/ S, y4 ?$ T% g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 @4 ?. Z3 \4 v% ]4 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  ?! i: `8 I& j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 Z5 J: x  H1 D1 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  P& C8 `1 H; a4 X2 n  f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Q3 ^, ?# \5 F' c  a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 K/ H/ ^* a0 F3 H; a! @8 h4 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 b2 M3 C5 G' u: h1 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) t  y1 n+ ], f& Q. P9 `: L$ H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) x1 F% c: Q: K3 g* d9 W4 Y" o' y0 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 q7 l; s& o. H# t5 {' g5 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 I; N% c) c  e2 V; P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! B9 }, p; [& d+ I) E2 W) o7 X, J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>