【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ~3 O' k! y( R+ yThe sky is happy down to its soul
& H: p; z+ e% q' z# dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, [% S$ G. V$ d6 ^! o6 d% ^; t& tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! ?' y9 v. ]5 Q/ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ^! L) b: Y$ AEvery other word you utter is love
0 c+ b) ~0 Y+ E6 |I really want to know just how much you love me
4 X' x- x" r7 f( V& sI love you I love you with all my heart
# |4 c) k" E. VNothing can compare to my love
  y) v" ~) Y1 O6 ]: rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 {2 G( {" H7 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( i' I* ^% X  w# U) ~5 N& s9 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 a' g; |9 R  j. k" k- @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ t4 l# f! ^! d5 |6 U* E: W* NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 q& ?- k# m) {% [2 m0 p3 A& dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 \* V9 z5 T+ G  D# \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! W- [$ u% @8 O6 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ q9 f7 |7 P. n1 {; v2 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ q& \& s5 W! ?$ n# ]* |# X* Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) @! M6 d. v( Y* e* z1 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 ]( C/ N/ ]) k9 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: J& f- `* \6 s' m5 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 J7 \2 j: m, g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; j: }. F. \# ^. V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% Q2 ]2 L: X$ K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! i( }- V7 L5 e: g) m8 f- K) A+ E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 i" \) |9 R( a: W& g' M. K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 _) I9 H2 g) Y; Y. }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! |( R2 F- d& g; _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 k9 {2 ]. q3 B8 ~  o! r& `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 V, t8 p2 A3 w8 |; E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% P5 ]+ J  \& W  V' W! \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) M/ v4 R% i1 m3 S1 J; G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 R3 E* f9 c6 y% u4 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>