【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' ], _9 Q5 [6 K$ j/ S歌词我附在后面。
, t' U( _) w0 w3 W5 U$ cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ B; c6 J7 u9 f' S: K# y' LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  t: j, w+ F9 _5 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 w$ _2 `% K; t: t" S. n. ~+ jSeeing the sky content with its love
8 P# c$ @- [0 c* @6 u) fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 p: {6 d* Y  j4 r7 \I really want to know just how much you love me
$ k3 A& t1 p; p2 C* G- UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 f) X2 c! c, _, B5 P& d$ C3 Y& sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) q0 ^5 I% O7 N: Y, b) h' Q+ wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 m) |! ^/ U  m/ V) P6 F6 o$ |4 R+ {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 C3 _+ @6 B/ p- A  t, f- ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" g9 Q3 L5 k0 W4 F! E2 LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& v: u, W- ~! Y9 {1 }With such a tongue as yours,
$ J: R! b8 k/ o8 ~$ WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" k% O9 Y! F% x0 s4 b3 e& H  \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* I( `" W- t: T. A8 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% ]; p# g) R$ \+ t' w* n7 E4 I! K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ o2 r% b4 m, u* h" B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 r3 V# L4 W; c" M" c8 s+ R2 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- z- b6 T  ^$ y7 p3 Z4 B+ ]$ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 w: v0 \' e/ z$ _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 A5 x* A3 a7 ]4 ?/ C' f: N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 u4 m) _- y1 q, [4 o0 ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: Q9 R" b9 C4 e# b3 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 d1 `# T, D8 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 k- y% r- E( F) m* C2 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, f* Q% Y5 j7 b' Q: b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 `7 L9 d/ W! Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 F+ p, q1 g3 l) z0 G% \  d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 v. T' l* \& |, x; N# ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 J, f( P0 Z, Y! K5 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( I4 g) E0 }% _% z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ l+ d8 G5 e( M9 h; I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  O7 ]2 t4 J+ o$ {6 I8 {/ k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. s1 S0 i7 P: l6 s3 d; \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ s. A7 c% ~" V6 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- `7 k$ X1 D1 U! }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; S6 I/ g7 ~. E8 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ T% x; s& o$ m% P) x+ y! c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 H, H: z: b+ g; x. F9 {/ L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  d- Z5 [  x! z# Y6 g, H6 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 w) J5 N& A/ k9 f5 Q: F+ ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 k: n+ ]0 f" s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 V& n- S+ S& _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% j! y' j$ q, p- D8 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ X4 S; Q# o- `4 x7 W1 x* e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: k4 L: V3 Z. I$ f6 c; Y# i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>