【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 Z1 g5 z% ]7 P歌词我附在后面。
4 e# s) t) H2 y0 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 A% _/ x9 m8 _; P) cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! Y2 [7 ]# d. X0 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 R4 g* E$ |- A' A. mWith the moon kissing it every night
% Q$ o/ b, B- T/ bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: S9 o8 E  l% T! @1 v* I* ~& y; aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! w9 l1 m# `. bEvery other word you utter is love
3 w! Y* R! s6 k. h, K, K/ mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 n2 e9 x- b: INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; o) \  M9 K9 w" M, X: CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. n4 i; {8 O+ V* e! h3 YI’m still filled with fear
" Q' W6 g' ~/ L; D) nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, T/ V5 ?1 s  T: I+ l, Z% W! GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" x* b9 h0 n+ N! }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, r6 o3 O  p$ P0 z. G+ NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- C2 f4 b7 i3 M0 j9 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 B! q- B! |9 o# X" I( g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. e; J$ v& v) I' o# j  a7 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ n/ {& A5 C$ v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# L" w0 \3 y7 e6 ]( _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 F3 E" A" L- @/ M% p7 P: F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 x2 G. c0 c2 O( L. }" Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, w. D  X  L) Y, j- u0 `( o( M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: v0 ~$ Z+ y! v3 `0 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 c* k0 ]# Q$ c* B& z4 [% ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ O6 f! w& U4 P1 e) x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 K: B8 I  y4 b: q& J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* k# g2 w9 D) E" h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" }0 E, I- }2 U8 {$ O9 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- l% A% I0 i4 k6 C2 Y* Z  c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 J' ~  l; E& h8 S& j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 M6 c/ l: C, L& }  _1 @/ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ V. K% ?8 a7 F" u. p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 x" H% g9 E/ ?( P0 u' m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- W8 j. x! ^8 P% W! x: b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) V2 c$ U+ p: {! M* ]0 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 d( p5 @, n+ ^/ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ }/ }- Q5 F  z6 R; A8 E" T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& R/ p6 ^& E1 y6 d8 ^" `* v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- h+ D( H% J2 l' Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 j; E: o$ O0 {$ S$ @* V) Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
; P# d" C8 v& Y5 J5 k1 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 y; `' g8 e; Z9 U$ W* i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ]$ J& H" R9 ?6 L/ s3 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 `$ L# u- v' Y/ V. ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; r+ S: `. g- g$ m8 H8 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  \8 q6 b( t0 I9 A! ^2 w* l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>