【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 z  k$ m* m  x, g& x/ ^歌词我附在后面。
" I! q* c2 |- u. t, L5 Q& yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 }, W! P  P1 a& q9 E$ J. t" `+ PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 ^( k$ S8 n( h) X4 Y1 x9 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 a# X0 D2 V- v) h1 K) ^3 |# p! C/ @; ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 K6 C+ ~, h, `2 O' ?/ TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ }( R, ~. H5 p: W9 Z% F! w8 b; P# ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# |0 A  O' G" k9 b" S+ V& [. qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ]( Y2 h4 @; d+ P8 F. z( P7 P4 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# U7 z5 ~( z. K) I+ pI’m still filled with fear
, Z! }& n/ a0 s& N) [4 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 g& _; \5 g; |4 x2 n* u$ @9 [: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 U# [, @0 E6 F  b4 j- fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  b/ t0 k4 }, v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# r# D4 C9 ^) u& P# |# N2 w2 u6 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 }( d. b3 I# }+ i8 f5 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" ?% S; g: E% d7 p6 Q8 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ [( G& j0 P7 k6 R1 q/ G# N8 a* `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 u! C: l2 X3 }# z2 X2 y; M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' M7 w) h# E2 U* }' y+ B0 O2 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! M  v" w5 P, b( N. p1 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" S) t* K) x. j) K! ~, d6 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ [# O0 U# \; Q8 ?8 u- O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  Y3 j; k8 u9 c4 }' W5 m0 F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( e, g* [  D; x. j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& H2 B/ H! q. ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ W4 p& q9 _. j4 X( d' e: V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 Q/ p4 ?2 G( ^5 }, z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( F- u; S$ I3 j* g# j+ k: q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 F2 a4 x- q" _2 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& G  Z# p* ~; g- s" [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ S( d/ R8 M! n+ F& z9 }/ l% O& [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 X) g6 f; S! y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! R$ v  B- \" o% X: n- [8 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 f& ?  d( l8 I2 X4 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ O! k$ O! D+ G( M6 y+ `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 g- j; s& D$ S" S& g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, \+ @, C- t- F+ x9 @$ S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: z: O7 G( R8 H# i) P( r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  T5 E2 v5 Y, x1 U/ d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 l3 ?: G& Y; L. [# z8 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  x: q4 M* }# N7 W- I( [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>