【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 _3 w% P: U3 `# I4 W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 b$ \8 g7 m' B9 m& C) _; V+ a' zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ^1 m7 e. B1 |3 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 ^6 V( _& K' Z( W9 e+ K9 z: L2 sWith the moon kissing it every night
8 U; r; Q4 ]( CSeeing the sky content with its love
8 w0 T) [& J$ J: }' Z9 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 i- z; f/ v& f1 b0 F0 R3 P$ C8 \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 p+ v+ s: v: p+ ?6 {I really want to know just how much you love me
& ^, L* Z9 K) R6 |I love you I love you with all my heart
5 J0 v. [$ U  v$ m5 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( |0 y* H3 N. k4 D+ oI want so much to see inside your heart
% A" R& M8 y. U0 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 G$ V( I1 V9 f3 x3 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: u  ~+ F- p+ s1 B% ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" U& C6 [. p4 T+ l. aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ m  u8 F; [5 D0 s% y% j  pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ W& v9 L& \/ z7 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) ~, Z  k: s) }0 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, Y$ P, d/ h' i6 X0 k8 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  F6 q* I0 c/ P/ [5 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- j" E6 b' T; w+ o0 B8 R2 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% d4 G: j' y$ F, R8 b) ], M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 B. [* W. K# ?1 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: d: P2 s7 \5 E  |' R7 Q' D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; T5 ?/ {" f& t+ K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 K! ?8 L  ?  p) g6 M. G1 R* ]' W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 L3 x# i) W" ?! M. M. ]: b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ H. q' H+ W7 Q# u5 K6 [9 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& q  Y3 z5 g7 h; e0 j, ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, `+ x/ Q% o# I+ ^! {& `5 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. @, k3 V7 J7 W* \/ [' ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 Q* Q: Y7 @7 l1 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- t* F8 P! r0 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' D8 t7 h% V4 C6 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. p9 [. R: r4 f% C7 `5 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- r) y5 z2 _' m) ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ r7 i  I+ Y+ U7 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ H9 Z: x" l; h( I1 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" C2 |% u0 `3 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  {; n2 d3 `% O+ Z+ |, o; `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 k' I' m# r- Q% F7 c6 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ y* L$ B* c* R8 W- O5 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 j/ o$ _; Q# K0 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 e* `, {9 |- `# M+ p1 A% e" R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  ]3 s2 C# k! G' s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>