【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' G2 k0 I; K! w+ eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. p* p4 q5 J; ]2 Y: l, xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, Q& Y* ^' V# `1 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 d0 F5 l# M/ B% u* CWith the moon kissing it every night
) I9 M* B  j4 K/ ~8 G3 H/ ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 }, \3 j: a% ]* Z- nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, m, L4 r# x+ d* LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# i" T* {2 M9 [; O3 K4 aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' t; Q. f0 ^+ u- {/ bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ^0 `7 i7 h( ~; X, ^" d) VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( l: }6 `7 I9 P" _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 ^/ F5 W6 S# O8 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 j. H" u, C0 L- T( R. t1 c( mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" Q, \) \8 m! u+ a1 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: K/ m  [6 f4 \, a; H" k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; Z( ~4 F: T  W+ x  r: M( ]& E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 t1 S! s' B$ Y& D1 r2 O# Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% d8 N( [& A+ ]3 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  E7 L" U2 m, w2 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ [0 z) ^4 g0 [# z: s$ N$ Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 J5 C  H/ B0 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& D3 ~4 ~$ o! U; d4 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( q4 n! }* b& {/ s( O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* g1 a- q) G( ]/ {, E( i- c<P>你无需担心</P>
% Y- P0 Q/ z6 s' E' k) O' }5 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, \5 C9 r+ j* u7 i2 K. X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) \( N5 U: \, G- Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, A6 r8 e: {2 r6 \( N. ^/ N& L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ F! j- W6 w7 S% g: k! S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 j7 s! M. [3 l& u$ c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. S. k4 h/ w* [5 B3 D1 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- A9 g- T4 V) g/ k, I4 E7 _8 w% x8 m: U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 F: [/ V" o- I5 b# t" ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& ?& x% P: j9 L8 ^; l( W6 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 _7 a; y6 A  i1 c$ }' f" h: O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 S  s) j! r" q# Z  F& g, h/ @/ ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 m- H4 c5 _* h4 O  V9 z! h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ n+ }/ e& e& n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# J. O. H# @' y% O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) U, d; Y1 m1 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>