【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ g3 Q" J6 }; l. DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% H: H( q3 _6 M8 Z* fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  f: Y- j( e" Q' H- r3 s! REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 ~0 H, z0 z5 A7 F) d/ ?: JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- E/ Y4 I; ~/ L1 O* Y9 L% O1 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. e: H: F  G3 K9 v& ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' Z3 J) u1 ^, ?2 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! j: `/ n: @2 J/ W/ x1 q' X0 |6 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 t- }$ k+ |+ ?  S, ^9 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( S6 ^: r5 t: |2 `! `4 [& D  A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( P8 U- P! ~% B, y7 E$ m0 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 F5 {9 W6 |) b1 q- I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 r: F" E9 [- k/ F5 b/ t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! T1 m9 H/ ?3 S4 R4 p/ F, P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 d: J, i5 l$ D1 K, O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 B9 s2 X: m4 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. v) p" U  I3 f! e9 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. z9 |' q7 q. t( @- H) s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% V/ |; Z0 M' F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. ]9 G5 r. w6 b* k2 ~+ W9 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ^" l5 t/ k- n* R2 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ^8 z9 f$ f: C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& w( @6 ?2 y8 o: P( u" ?+ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( m; N; U4 A6 ?2 \' R# a3 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ a2 {) k7 @! C8 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ }. i; @9 L( R0 v! b0 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: m' N) n% H$ s9 u3 F' @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& a4 K$ d* l0 d" {5 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ x- U# q/ J3 l$ a: V6 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 w  G$ }/ x% }, y( n$ D  J& u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 K5 I- D2 n# R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; B, I3 X2 ?0 X% K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>