【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 a' s% A  D+ }# h/ D& TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( Z* [3 F( P% `1 k; x7 f7 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 @/ n/ l1 J' q5 s' g1 _The sky is happy down to its soul
' c4 g- D4 C1 y. A# Q# KWith the moon kissing it every night
. Y7 V* h3 ?% _* @- d6 ?6 K- rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) s4 m8 R5 a: ?- k$ r. X) RYou needn’t fear anything
# h- i! u! k- G7 d9 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# A  L9 U' W- t, ~Every other word you utter is love
: M% _: _# p8 c; NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ ~1 y& Q( E/ z0 z* l1 @. V/ a* bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ k  @! S6 Y5 g. K& o  @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 I$ z1 g  B7 G8 z8 {. c6 tI’m still filled with fear
6 Q8 K5 S5 J) @* L- a: y7 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ S( V3 F6 Z1 \# t$ X( L) k# UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: y3 P, q: J* X3 K& NWith such a tongue as yours,
, y2 k, t# ]/ OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' s7 P+ S: g. U& T2 M' V3 |* ~2 U' fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 g% }' t% L: ]" @& h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; k2 [4 S" ^) w9 ^/ c5 J% M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( j) }$ R: H( V( N- S/ N: Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- L  {: n& f- U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 E3 v6 Y7 M7 p, H- T8 t  Y' m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 c* E) ^4 P) C1 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ N5 R8 {8 ]3 m: a: b% K3 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 l/ d; t) d3 w: f0 O* O6 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ f& U$ O  u9 G9 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 W$ R4 M) m% f1 l* [2 y% s9 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" Y; }; _0 X* B& p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" @0 O1 a+ P- R5 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ M9 b  I6 K' P8 V  Z  y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( J$ ?/ A; e/ i" W. Y% x# q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ [/ L% F! `0 b  z4 a( [6 N0 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% _+ B/ P" S4 c2 J: ~. ?4 A+ x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ u% ^+ o- V) }1 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* L$ V6 j( u( M$ i/ u# j! Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ _& A$ V- N. W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. U8 \) p; X7 s( i- I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 M: _4 e. l! J2 b- g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 Q0 T1 e( K& T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 g9 w0 {- s4 \% x0 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 f0 i+ X& W" v; R/ y8 A& m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ ]( V) S. d7 I8 K6 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; F  ?0 C# s0 L; k0 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 t! O9 d5 B' |: I, \; z: g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; `' @5 L2 }! X9 T$ ?; _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, s6 Z( ^3 _. Y6 r) d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 Q5 Z9 I/ w) ~2 y8 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ]& V0 X, U5 n; `$ {. e" G3 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# M3 S' P9 h9 L2 f- p' S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, l0 c+ R  J. b% Y3 ]- b5 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ x$ U4 b2 f" k+ M8 v7 L" I我请你剖开它

+ H0 ]. U- V3 j3 u6 L1 i$ p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>