【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& X* s) l$ T8 }0 n: ^" N$ H3 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; Z- |, O9 `$ y/ G% d$ u$ y: |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. p. d7 i) m& i9 d, D  uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* \0 _+ T; x, g6 f) S% N( `. eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 a) O7 z- s% c' {* w9 C4 cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# L7 [5 G3 K5 g; N7 I  _& INothing can compare to my love
' ]% ?8 N4 _/ \$ NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  ^& X. I' U2 X1 N  k/ `* eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ~, R) o8 G# c" w& JI’m still filled with fear
* ?4 |" ]* |* r( ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* ~) D- X. Z* L: i" e4 G, LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& O4 }* K; M2 T  IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ [" P( O& D; k- j2 l4 R, v! m& VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" `5 U6 d+ Q) U$ Y% e; h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- y  }: U/ Z' k& P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& |) A6 k" {  i% ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ F- o1 u, S. D, ~5 r# {2 A) z  p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 _0 f, j. `8 ~; [# Z( M4 c: X. h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# W( G8 A% G3 f$ Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 f9 D- k) \) W' u; l% i, ?4 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 z  l$ V1 S6 |% t& m<P>你无需担心</P>
7 @% O! H/ O% R" _1 L9 Y+ x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ l# W$ z! w& u$ ?: ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& y4 C& ?. ^; K% I+ V# u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& q1 z& j2 J: r7 B9 V% ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 H4 d! G- V/ ?0 S0 x3 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* w: I% D- f2 f# P! M$ N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  [) I. A: Y: p2 ?+ J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 e6 R( M+ s: Q2 E& Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# [% n' w% B' P+ y; V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 A- `. Q7 `* z7 g; t: q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) K" S1 {' B# v+ }% l. H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. d2 z  T, q- p7 g) K# J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ^4 r6 `# i4 ]& [; ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Z/ e0 P6 `% j) }: G# t$ J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( K) {  F8 l# H* P, G  L6 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& N$ m/ h9 F8 Z. v! Q3 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>