【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) G1 `- }2 X* T! U8 H" pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 q" z6 A$ j: d* m% oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 o# \$ o  q$ L; P" |: oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' k* A' z& y9 @9 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 c2 {7 }5 l  RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: O7 G# Q, A! K9 V+ q& i+ q/ `9 Z% sEvery other word you utter is love
5 }) c% w7 R1 NI really want to know just how much you love me
7 G4 v8 W: }& u, E3 G3 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 s3 S+ L* O' I" \$ j: n- b& j3 l+ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( n0 \% |. {4 q0 [2 j+ eI regret not dying
' k9 F1 g: c. {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' n0 m. @1 u" U2 ?1 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ @- O; ?- |; Q- E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- E3 L% _- V  X, l. s% U0 X* Q: D3 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 D1 a( L7 f9 A( R5 a" o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% z# M2 m. J  K0 q- @! z4 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 P' r& W3 V% P+ Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 z% J! @" d3 f( [3 Y8 F; }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 p9 E4 q. b0 a, i. }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 `4 o! k' @- Y+ i2 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- g) ?0 o7 V  i1 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 g* ^* s0 Z, P+ ^, [( B3 _9 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ^4 R+ |+ s- i0 \" S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 q* Z% E# ~2 y! I) j" V+ t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 X* M/ T2 c3 d- c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! q3 |# j2 w2 c. ^- B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# T8 V1 Z% W# g9 [2 f  G: \2 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ n, h5 h1 m1 B0 j/ [# e' A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! @# I  e# X$ j, H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ~. g' q9 B" t" N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 @& m0 |/ ]0 P( E; d' m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  m( |6 {/ s% X, B  O  y/ q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( q/ p$ l, I7 W' L* c3 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
" P7 ?* }9 d- [' q/ y2 H& H! V0 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  D6 o# Z  G- ~0 a2 B2 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% E, y# p% v7 S- T) p$ X7 Y* F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 X8 S0 Z2 [$ @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 r6 G, c2 _+ _( u我请你剖开它
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9 R' u7 A) N+ }1 E% p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% F6 s: J3 U8 p# R8 h# `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>