【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 G& ~: _. l3 l" x8 q4 \; kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. w) a  c$ H7 Z$ y4 ^/ Q8 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% N7 A0 N5 h# `* N; e# cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" C5 a  b' ?+ I# z/ {% {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% {( V8 r; u. |: i7 }( e' rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* k& r% U7 M6 E" x5 d: k+ J7 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" k' l3 M( X: tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 P+ u7 r' l: ^0 d8 H) T- RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. C4 Y! {+ d' {- c$ h9 Z& r8 b6 A4 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# r7 z9 I5 L) URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 k) d' _; u% S- q) y# g9 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& D/ l$ C% ^8 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' p( V% s+ Y" c3 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- L5 I0 J/ Q+ |7 E# ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 ?! z+ ]+ W1 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 a1 ]: X: E9 L* i6 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 q( C# U$ ?! u* F6 |2 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 o# [. u0 Q( v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- r, _3 }" p$ o6 W# o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) Z0 t8 M6 Z; n( P% X2 W+ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ m7 `1 i# Z- f0 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 ^$ N6 T4 q: j; b+ B+ W% }0 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- p! x$ W  H& W' E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 h4 n# M2 ?& H% Z, \9 ?  [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 p, R% }$ X4 C% j9 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 l0 T# k0 U; B8 U7 p; L1 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' H7 i9 ~$ |+ x+ A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) R" a4 i1 O1 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ L7 k9 ?: `: p: E9 N- K, O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ?0 @" d, T6 q4 ~) @. `1 i- t/ K1 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- A6 V5 ~$ x3 V( ]* `0 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! e; q" D- Q! v" Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ p* ~- B2 I6 j9 x1 m1 G# p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: y8 n: M! r# \' x* X' X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' F( w& B& W& ~7 |7 _6 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& h9 x) t- ^6 ?' C& o, z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 ?, g+ Z& O: e/ h1 J$ m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>