【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ ?& A* v- @' c( S+ Q歌词我附在后面。
; L3 R, ~2 P, y4 e* G# m# B" aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" ?: D+ U* R4 K, wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 M0 O& M5 Q' L& ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 Q" c" X8 X" @! `The sky is happy down to its soul
, c( [) E$ T1 H1 w; g- H+ X3 D1 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" ^) F! p! x. k! AYou needn’t fear anything
) K8 _, k  g- fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; o* N; w4 T2 n) p, h8 Q0 X. bI really want to know just how much you love me
# [/ w* V) R2 f' z7 _" [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# k7 E  H$ q% x2 F; [, F" sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( E$ L  j, [2 l3 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' F+ ^  S7 \7 I) BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( |, i3 W; f9 O7 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- r3 @0 ^% k  W; B$ JWith such a tongue as yours,
! y; }, ?. ]3 a" W9 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ O# {. E* |/ N6 L0 g- y, {* y' rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ G: c/ v: ^3 g6 I$ o* ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 [4 P  E7 J) k6 j% C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ]- ~% v% ?7 q2 G1 c: n  F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 S) `6 V' k# K! p* z7 N* q$ U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& E( a% d' s' l4 t* K$ i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. w: [# ~* r( ]! d" Q0 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; h( q1 b9 ^6 j3 {% C1 n2 A5 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* T( V+ G' q% D. O! \  @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- [% E$ {% T" D2 A- t  b<P>你无需担心</P>
! K0 l. \: g0 V) R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  k+ c/ @( t& l) v+ C& t) c8 I& g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ p1 t: A4 a/ O6 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ c* `2 Y/ C8 J) K5 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# m" b3 L4 R' u4 C6 O0 ^5 Q2 b2 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 ]" H0 S( I$ O: X2 A( I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: W7 e0 o' ^# S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ x2 R" S: h- X' |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 @1 N4 ?" j  ]( N& b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) x5 l8 n6 V9 U! x, X% ]! q. Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ T/ X# m6 N* T$ L4 {. h! ?6 M5 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 C  U( P9 U/ H/ P; u0 n$ L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) h9 n! l* M5 d6 T+ D% ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! z9 V& Q8 o$ E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! s( W; j4 g4 M8 _# }5 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" {  P! W: A. B4 k) p1 ?6 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  i. f6 j( ?2 k+ o( g4 J3 o" U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' _+ Q, p/ p3 L2 K' E# l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ f) _4 b$ h3 `" j+ ~3 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>