【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; j! _6 Z. d. gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" P5 l% U) A3 G# R0 v" S. n; vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 d2 Q* @; b) [% A, T/ y! _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# a+ h! l, J# wWith the moon kissing it every night
: M6 o: R8 m: f4 ~  N- j; RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ x7 c. m  N- S0 w- @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) _2 E! j9 V+ P3 }9 I7 Q; ~/ [1 `I love you I love you with all my heart
. m8 C5 U; d2 ^# j6 }8 O& u* G! tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  l- j  P! h  A: e  \% S+ G5 \" M3 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 w1 v9 A& a  i$ OI’m still filled with fear
1 F( ^0 O- c5 b) ]. V* |5 E0 i) y; sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' P5 A' S; H* f- E1 rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% y- t: }( w# i. oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( h0 W3 H0 P. S. t5 g) X! l8 c2 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 O8 f5 X  n6 a8 q8 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 G1 a0 w5 t7 V7 [$ M, r( A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ?: _5 M9 K2 E. V* J* P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  i$ T! q( W( O7 @) x( J. d4 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  S# ~% R8 A# o; ~. R: Y5 I" S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 M7 K) H4 H; ?' T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 E8 Y" j& m  F  h8 m3 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( T7 X/ ^8 c1 y0 M( u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 K& ]9 M. F7 ^6 V9 A/ H9 P4 t9 O; b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- v9 B5 W: a$ A" M7 s5 x0 R! o5 t# M) e9 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' y; d' d1 n5 j<P>你无需担心</P>
# @8 F$ h3 r- ]% K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' `+ W) |5 C8 C7 U" w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 d" C! @9 q3 ^- @: p2 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 ?5 d, d& H0 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 y  d" p: }7 I" B  P7 m' W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 {9 n# R9 [) _2 F) i/ t! ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) K$ j1 L! F  i4 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 p* f  b! b7 U* R  l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ~, ]5 M: u5 Q0 B/ m4 D' F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 E8 W* e- G3 y1 C/ ]8 E) Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% T4 n  i1 e$ d/ B# }6 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 W  e, w- M7 T% r! ~' s/ v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" W$ b/ ]5 R# S" f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" L. B* ^: k9 e7 f; U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 I4 O' k( f; l  H, m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. f# f5 K+ o+ }' d8 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 x. x, |8 {8 Q; ]0 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; W- @  J0 W) w9 `, X+ o7 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 |: T- K6 A+ p+ C. z4 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% u" j+ @% o, T: d; y我请你剖开它
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6 @+ b( j) w9 Y' M, d/ D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# `. e0 \) L$ q  [* R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>