【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: s; m, _( P; x9 K3 q# z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' B+ [/ v' O" V7 z5 T  F* v6 w8 A: A8 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 F) ~9 R" [  WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 S8 e' P. G4 x% GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" e. }1 V  A% w3 tYou needn’t fear anything
  t0 y% B: M  A, o" ?! }& SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" _2 p6 g# T* t: w# Q. J1 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' u* O! B) h3 h: [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 S- y1 D# t  \  o/ FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* J- c6 L1 m& b+ G" P8 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* X  j* u( \% z9 L$ F* u. u4 t: F+ o, @I’m still filled with fear
3 S! s, X* I2 g& P  }7 L( FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% \9 e/ _0 L. [; t% i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Z1 h" s: f" V" Y; j+ I8 {) f6 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ O! e6 H' i9 O# \; ^  l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ B4 ^) q7 v  G' x% ?  Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! g) M6 P7 N5 o/ M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# U7 G# r/ t" z5 y3 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, Q3 \4 H- }: p" H6 S) v/ F. u, U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' A  _: |& ~0 g3 ^4 p5 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ K6 L# S: Y* p; p- x1 O4 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 j. U3 b% j; D3 m* o7 W* ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  l  w8 z$ _1 [; R! J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 M$ k: Z& P: k$ Y. b$ Q" D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Y9 D" D) g# a9 F+ T8 f, }" c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 }5 r8 X: k0 g/ \- G) \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 z% a5 l+ @7 [4 n" [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& j: w1 d8 v( a# t/ U8 H+ z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, N+ O; |% A% M8 J$ D+ H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. K$ n1 Q* I" t) C' N) g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 m! k1 T. g0 x6 }2 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ p# W, o1 M, q+ r2 J% `) n+ C<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 R8 z0 ?+ A+ n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( `4 |$ r! s, e/ N6 h, a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ j+ ]1 d& c& n6 S. L9 i/ x# t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ N' L# v: f0 y6 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 _8 l8 c3 v: [9 G; C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ l+ l  g: E- g) ~9 |4 ]5 J8 N. }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) W" a4 N; d& n, N( P! T6 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 e* P$ u- Q% D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 {$ _1 _! s5 ^2 r) z3 ~7 U( E4 N6 Z% l. R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- X% C7 ?  ~" ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>