【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: T" x! E- t2 B: H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ K: X8 k2 w% tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 y. b* Q; u* H3 l5 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  |+ ^5 }% V1 i, ^Seeing the sky content with its love
  Q7 _2 C) m2 r: tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 t* ~& |( k) I* j6 [  zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' I" E4 r) W; O& a/ vEvery other word you utter is love
' N1 a2 |' P$ _% jI really want to know just how much you love me
. q. W+ J6 i1 p6 E& f1 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& D3 A, s# E/ l5 N7 i$ L3 c" vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 E, i( Z5 D1 L5 C: J( u/ tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 L# m' q) W$ [I want so much to see inside your heart
/ z. `8 C; J; M( oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. a. k' U1 D4 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 S6 Y0 p% a6 x: ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* W9 C) {8 X$ M  O; B7 W. OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 }: z6 [% }: H4 G+ F/ R/ D) }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& o% X+ j7 e  ^2 t$ c, }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  h4 F# T$ X4 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 Y/ x: O6 R4 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 u# u8 `* K! A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: A' L$ _% \( E6 c6 w, @- w4 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* C4 F. U) Q. ^4 K1 u5 @0 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' e! N) M# b! F& ?0 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  W/ t4 ~. M2 h! S/ R7 L8 V0 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 a4 N7 j% S, l( N% N% O, e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 Q" w- l: d5 N) d6 }) M# A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 X! w% L% g% T- j& n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( O5 t% z9 I  w& N5 C# }/ S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- B9 J+ j; F5 F, S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ]3 A  ]8 k6 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 k, x" }7 u& {( `* g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 u8 _: d7 p: r! q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ d  }3 k4 {/ i* D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; B$ g& d0 D" i$ A' h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ N+ }3 G; }# F3 E" j$ A: c- z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 W$ L. G8 y6 {# l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, \) P; i7 }% u8 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' m( X4 m/ B  E8 C: U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ @7 F, b+ O" _, D: W+ K3 R0 L* ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ \- W9 m+ E! W  T2 J- F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! S& h2 P: O6 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* A8 z$ p8 _/ C+ M0 V7 z# \: T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  j; ^2 Z! v9 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ j; b4 h2 x& _, A% l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; ^4 s$ C  @  n  L% x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ D1 t  g6 z6 m1 S3 ~3 b, u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>