【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 [, }6 J/ f/ q0 m8 o- R1 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) B" e* e0 R4 w" r' t9 I5 |$ vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- R$ e+ g2 R" [- F: C( E- tThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ W5 F4 ]/ E4 \" Z( {' _" pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  u5 ?2 X4 S  ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: o+ J* g2 O: C# v4 T" M  Y# cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 n' s' Q$ f; H* yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 \* R  t  z: T! }6 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. W5 v: W# c& V& q- H- @" [) c7 ]+ cI want so much to see inside your heart
1 X7 y* U/ L3 k  s3 p8 r3 A# |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ _2 I# k# B/ G/ x8 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 R  Q3 V) X' o& b+ u- q" u* ?With such a tongue as yours,
: D2 J4 d. _; e! a6 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: N2 o0 a4 j# \2 `2 r6 P  ^# dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 t3 S8 H) d8 n  M) o) q( h" v3 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! n1 J3 o, M6 h' g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ y. J' y! k) E# B6 u' n  q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* n3 g) n! h  A) {% F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 ~' u5 p* E. p7 k  b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( w  I9 q7 |$ d4 D5 d- W  U. r; d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; c1 w  _9 b2 }1 _* U/ K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  A# Z+ }; r$ i1 t) P/ J. h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. N( O# d: g4 W8 ~6 L' _- i, N4 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 c; c! c' v. \0 t, b, W' F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 }3 s5 I/ v7 }, |! M4 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 i% X7 M& l  g$ X8 Z; n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- d' I) A  t+ u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) }% {9 P  e: c; o4 `5 C0 i# {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 Y- e7 Z3 I# Y7 m5 o9 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ X) e$ W; h, [1 H& B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. U) N3 D( }2 o$ n0 b2 q0 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 K5 m+ X9 R9 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# R* q9 `7 y6 M' n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: l- D5 p' P; K4 T$ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' k4 @3 P9 g# m8 @* p9 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 x( ^5 B4 k2 M4 w! ?$ m$ Z  \7 L5 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- p+ _+ L, t* p" ~* ~$ [3 o$ s& s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- e8 y. l: B  Q2 O4 D3 D  l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( R8 G- q4 d4 b1 A9 I1 R- o5 A, W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) \- m) Q# x2 y9 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 M0 J; O- C1 }  f7 u! |+ M% x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* R2 P" q: T6 `) n& e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& ]/ `$ e( L8 |- y% [& k; r9 v. W1 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 B' w+ S7 e& ]4 o# S/ E- f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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