【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) z( y* U; J7 n! rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: I% w& T  M$ Q$ L4 y$ p( Q% I  aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, o( A  k5 v# R( c* vWith the moon kissing it every night
0 z+ |3 _( g+ ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 ?  i. o& E" [" DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; z( ?7 t5 S/ ]$ v2 A2 u3 b6 G" G' yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' \5 s7 q/ y: ^9 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 i( ^# X; Z# t/ u4 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 \$ _2 H# P8 O4 Y5 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; V, Z8 [; m2 q1 I; c( F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; a8 v0 Z; N( A5 s& w1 a; Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& ^4 r& U" v! F+ ?% n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& E% G, z9 T' i$ S; {% C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' O" {- u6 ^' f8 \: L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& \' k+ S: q8 D/ \- u; {' D5 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: E$ L1 S/ d" h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, w$ u% P' e9 F" K. l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) y: g0 J; U! V7 q! O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ [  n8 l+ w! g7 B) c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ H) A% c% P* L& J! ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) ?; X4 m7 B4 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* q, d7 I# y' F  Y<P>你无需担心</P>
, l# E1 T8 Z  V2 M3 r" H2 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ^6 t8 k- e; t% D* d3 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* H* L+ v$ R, q" X. [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* C. E/ `! I  ^$ O6 j* X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( Y, M$ c, D# f5 H" s/ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 J6 L3 N; ~  t3 M# g: g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ]- h5 K5 y+ C3 }1 {9 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' ~. K5 J* `: S  E  A" n" F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( ^  |( Z% v, d( s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* `: K& f2 p# F% p* I( F$ e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 U3 O8 i/ b6 G1 w+ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. W1 [' E5 I$ _2 u9 O. |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j( D* l, V$ G( o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- v. t- P5 s7 \6 G- M6 g& G% U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) v, t0 B6 g# x9 K% s: E6 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' S, y' _; U. C4 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) W+ X+ s( b/ a* `$ s+ }3 r" F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" ]; P& y, {/ a) W/ U  r1 D8 `9 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& B# }. f9 ~3 |* g& _/ S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* U2 o$ ^) \; T$ R5 Y3 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! C0 A: a. G( s1 H& a, f- d* F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# K. `5 f3 R6 t6 B+ e- A* j, Q- x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 n$ a' [/ g( a) [( a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 M2 J( ^/ Q! H* y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 Q, [6 l/ P8 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% [4 ~$ G* F4 D( F' Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>