【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" _  U; E( v4 P# K7 N/ c歌词我附在后面。
# ]( d& q* d- C9 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, L& {$ C" e! W% A1 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ m# k6 f# n% M! u# P1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* x- `( _/ q4 B3 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- _" F+ L& _& T' V9 N. O" {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: [( r$ q, ^& d" e- \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% {: }4 |. L6 V; i6 w4 SEvery other word you utter is love
0 v& ^$ u3 P4 N. `' AI really want to know just how much you love me
$ p/ r4 `' c$ m; O9 u, sI love you I love you with all my heart
( ^( c( z. Q8 c( i1 pNothing can compare to my love
/ z/ x# }5 J& V' a5 c8 o* g2 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: C6 Q* T7 P3 V7 C) ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 l) a& Q1 M7 a: k; U% S" X; nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* X, g% G( a7 {7 S' D* jI’m still filled with fear
7 Q9 M4 X0 f4 D6 r6 t6 x! D0 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ ^4 Z+ [: S4 f1 Y  `( bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% [; S' s. a% S( Q6 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: d" f9 ?  I% B. K8 w6 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) A" n! A& b) m- T( g& L' L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: ]) e) K5 r+ _' i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 T* ]& R1 z- D. H4 G* M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* q* E1 L& N2 k4 ?3 u5 V# c, N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 [; e3 e0 o% B; ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 q/ b5 {2 g% n9 V$ @. @3 v! m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 b: @2 Z" u. h9 h# a<P>你无需担心</P>
' ]+ k' L9 G& f0 U% p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: R- L4 e! @5 Q6 `# A* w: x9 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# ^; y% E0 n$ t8 u+ T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( |, m1 H. G6 T* X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 R- ?* }) O# n9 G# I8 i2 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 _5 F# d' X3 w! B! b9 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& f/ D6 h4 ~- e0 m5 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 ~) g4 S$ {, ^. \' N- n! W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 S5 X5 |. _# `. O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ b( k: |! S& x( X3 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" o. O9 \  e, \$ ~- j<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ `: y7 Q' Q: f( ]' V" z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 w* u$ G2 [5 s  d4 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 j& Y) \" Q1 y" T! \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 V# g, O# W% q  b2 ?+ [: o$ h  T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 A+ u5 F/ U4 ]/ [% s* v- O9 G% }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& k' a; k8 G/ K4 p* n. s5 R- ^. m9 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. u5 g# @; ]; n+ r' G5 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 }; o0 Q; u6 Q- E; E% W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>