【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% O+ d6 V, p+ W6 D' {The moonlight is shining brightly,
% i2 c' N# v% C3 E$ L- z$ J4 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' q* n0 s  h5 v4 L. XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; j- A9 _* U  [1 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) N1 ]) Q* q/ E0 d4 U) [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' Y' o* w  O$ l5 I1 d- I: I+ K4 m! JYou needn’t fear anything
; Z+ R$ W5 q( N  b9 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: a8 R( j& S8 eEvery other word you utter is love
7 ^/ ~, V6 |% V$ U+ r+ O: A# U6 |I really want to know just how much you love me
' a. {4 }8 w8 b! bI love you I love you with all my heart
4 ]3 \* M( Z0 e3 c$ @/ n! ]8 ?Nothing can compare to my love
) ~- K7 J7 O' P( sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ L) W3 S+ n/ H& X1 aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 p  w( d- A4 v. QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& r# `6 k8 E& `3 Q8 d  WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 K# ^) C6 X# O/ m6 j: d4 K& yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ j, w! I- D" H4 [, c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 q9 y) d( I! K: ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# l' A; L% o0 `  O; u7 n9 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 G% G6 r# r( P9 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 R( S. n% N. T9 C2 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ M) ~* z7 g$ g: m. g) L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% M, ?: C( B" n5 t5 r8 @' y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- g" q4 ^9 X- L0 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( C( k4 P& Q! B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: X) O1 Q6 u8 v: ?7 a5 V* y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; U. j% H  D" `; L8 z4 _& B. x* u) D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 S) h" w1 A. Z- \; m* O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 `$ u4 p) e/ l$ Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 j. H8 _8 v6 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" n& R  H% P; V1 Z( j  z0 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 {- W7 w3 `' y4 G$ {# j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: M. ]7 a0 z; R; u6 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; z' G/ Q( P# w2 K" d: p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 K& _7 {6 a% t: L8 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; s# W+ H7 o9 ?8 A5 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; c3 E/ Y* `# n1 w) r/ p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# x' X+ ^- v) I( o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" Y* A5 w& L5 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' s: u" {& e7 l) q* \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 [4 b# q: J' S& N' H6 t+ D! s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! _/ v: b+ K2 m1 ^# O! m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 y0 d6 v: g: K* X* G* k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 Z- A' j+ D2 I/ O+ y- v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  ^1 H2 C+ p5 M2 v7 @9 |" a' E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* ~. H' p+ Z' R- }$ R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  D$ V- N: `8 w9 ]  Z! i5 ]5 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>