【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ?4 o  q% Z% ?3 K: ~7 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 T  i3 U3 L6 G# B2 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- c- g! C- i8 V$ {+ e  @' wThe sky is happy down to its soul
# G6 U$ ^2 Z  ^. mWith the moon kissing it every night
) Q0 r: L% ]; k% u) vSeeing the sky content with its love
  l4 m. h1 G0 i* ?: i* N+ f/ y2 d( i4 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% m* D7 e: q2 g% A" X6 M* PEvery other word you utter is love
1 f: Q9 Y& h  \4 \4 l4 K- EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 q0 D3 f0 G; ?$ U5 L0 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 c4 S- ]: H3 U! }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ?0 ?6 h' N/ ^9 T  e  ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% C/ s: a1 _! X4 X, P3 W) Y# QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, f7 x9 c$ w! T) p5 n. TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: E) J( R* C. `8 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ m! E, m9 Z+ t4 N+ B# S4 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 y! b& q2 |, Y1 b2 K) l) |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 ?% W2 B0 r, u0 @2 o1 _, h% Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ a5 R3 g  I& L: r9 B( U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# E2 E' _0 H9 |/ w4 @1 _9 a9 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; L* B. b  A( D+ h8 Z; N, ]7 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  T% \* q9 ~+ x) e- L7 j1 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ Y: @! q& ~& a* j7 O# S4 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) B1 a  c: G. K8 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& u7 ?: ^# ~; _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 O- }+ H. D; k( I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" X' l# W. }) Y4 }, q4 I8 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: }3 V5 \, H2 D" E5 ]$ A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. |' P( H. S# B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Q7 Y* s4 S( ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ k" T! C3 \3 _3 |2 a" Q; C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 }7 c1 J* a5 B- d1 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ]% M, n) _( d$ J$ D/ E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ k3 f* D, z0 t; y2 S/ V2 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% S7 f! g! k1 |+ y1 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 v% `/ q7 i" o/ G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 i9 M& K, J# N0 q$ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 r" e5 S, R% H7 }. f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  N1 ^7 W" l$ [8 n) e$ P. p+ r7 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. I+ Z5 l+ i# l3 |0 \3 }7 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ N. O+ q- C$ a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( y- q" @2 {- F$ }' u: _: o# ?2 f7 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ \$ l2 o  Z0 F6 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- B+ D) T  X: f1 u. C8 ]. a- y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
; W: `5 r& E" |8 O, G& @& g  I  s
我请你剖开它

7 a" b. Y- G# V4 d: C9 R0 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>