【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 a% k; N# N' P: z0 U" HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ~9 M# c* ?+ \% c( `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! T) @9 R2 S- l3 x& C  l  R) S4 i4 a( sThe sky is happy down to its soul
( O2 A2 }0 v6 O7 K8 Y/ |! bWith the moon kissing it every night
1 s$ f- X; k1 M* CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  V( N. l& s$ ]- @You needn’t fear anything
: S( L2 I: B/ C- J: @: |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 L3 {- T9 `+ S) G$ UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" e; s0 z6 N6 c6 o1 ]  z/ z' Q! dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- r; a; L! K3 H5 }4 x* kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 j4 N; [1 T. Q3 X+ qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 Q1 A& }: ?2 M1 }( NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! |: ^: C# B* x1 y6 R0 z; k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! R0 K5 |! {- b1 x* F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  i. Q4 U$ J4 P' c# d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) `2 s$ @# I1 Q, X2 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 V" O) W2 V. ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ C% |# r) j3 ~9 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 Y! A  t& k3 A! N, a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ e. t- [) b* a. l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; a8 ~* P; b% m- J/ f9 P1 N3 }( a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: d0 ^0 B9 |) @$ X8 ]0 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 @+ B* \  v) o: m# g% X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 J- p- \6 Q  r# ]. X4 G<P>你无需担心</P>
$ m: g" M2 D6 s0 z: D: F( T+ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: Q- E! a9 g" f: o+ x/ R% R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' B( w$ ]; F+ v, o3 ]+ E# v1 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! b+ {4 n# c( `+ g6 h- m1 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 ^$ n- P) C  r/ j6 B1 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 N8 U# Z; }/ I. g& B# A, r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' T0 q% z( I) u" z5 u! F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 c; }6 ?. f- C- N7 ?7 c* u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: `/ O7 M" A+ B1 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" {; x8 }! a3 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ^" K. C% E, j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 d1 I7 k% I4 E8 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 `( S  f" Q# n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  F" B& o: b+ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ^) a. J( S7 B. m& W. h' v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" h) t+ b  Z: u( ^7 ~/ Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( H2 {) C/ s8 I2 t9 @& d; L/ I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Y# D; Y) B9 O2 i: N# _) h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" D% x5 Q. x( v9 i0 [$ R5 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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$ _  F, O& }; P3 a1 a) Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ R) Y+ t. m  T; ?/ X) {' ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>