【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 Q0 b' |3 j2 z! j( V8 O% I歌词我附在后面。
% K) w8 l( t+ h& d) O0 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& y& H0 n: h5 Q- O+ }1 ~0 `  ]) KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" J& x! e% H* ~+ `8 w& \; e& k" oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 y6 K- X3 ]  s8 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 z( u8 H* p% U* ?( QWith the moon kissing it every night
. `" b8 U7 E* E8 e  S4 w! OSeeing the sky content with its love
# L7 c5 Q, \2 \* p# [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 I9 i: `" }# p  l) i2 h5 H& m8 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 d. }! `4 ]; u2 `, D9 _9 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! R- b1 _! U. ~7 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( b% d2 d& R' Z* Y7 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 D, i7 J1 _" a4 \I’m still filled with fear
" ]" X+ t/ i( ]) r: E/ LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; `5 F1 r! Q0 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 A; t3 ^" j3 x$ |5 E: s' [5 ]With such a tongue as yours,
7 b- M. Q) K7 o6 s  k8 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 d4 `" \, F2 |. d1 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  f3 s, ^9 ~: }4 w  L5 Y' f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, s0 ^5 Q9 d( M2 T$ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 g0 A' K$ \# y" X. ?! w2 j5 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  {4 e  o* Q8 j$ K2 w  i9 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ r; H4 S4 B) W9 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, h/ q: _1 N' {8 k, w# \) r1 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 ?4 p8 C! {. I( M# y<P>你无需担心</P>
  T, k1 A5 |* t! r4 n# u' s( B* z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" M: w  x* @. k6 W9 C% |6 U3 X( Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 }# n! r$ f" q; @% l& c. N* A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ N$ |- u; [5 V9 e' ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- n4 N+ l! F, \$ `+ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, p4 c5 c6 W" z  q+ ~( N9 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 V* k7 _, D% j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 o) ^/ ~8 I* L, m, y5 V+ q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Z9 F- h: O2 x; ]8 R% H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! o5 t) A( D+ T2 W2 P/ Z% n! J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 _& p  ]" Q7 o2 S8 j' k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- |0 F6 ]+ p& s2 y7 J3 ]% j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) {3 x4 M+ A5 n' t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 \' L  k6 T# R: o<P>I regret not dying</P>
( ^) d4 ^, L$ u, C& h# {0 w' j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 H5 s: x) S  Y6 L. R& o) L: w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# T) l+ m) D$ i9 m6 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) N' [  J7 d9 P; ?9 S9 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, S  j: Q* V+ G$ P$ E5 i* D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  W: v- y& L* g0 W$ b+ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# F! V8 e6 r# l! @& S; o2 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>