【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 p$ e- t# R6 S6 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. t9 c) k# a) a% v0 ~/ i: J9 e6 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 Q  r  c! [* PSeeing the sky content with its love
+ G& f; P9 O, h1 ]: t  [/ ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 O! F* |' D& N! k6 O+ jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 w; E% l; I8 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" t8 D' Y# p' `* ?* I& e, DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* Y5 t# P. o' @5 c3 D) [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 n8 `4 X/ i5 w7 j, [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, T6 s& L3 |+ R+ _+ E5 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 A+ e0 l# a4 c; x5 o: y( Y7 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: T! ^# E. ~, Z; `% B1 {4 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 L4 z& Z& ~; d; @0 c' Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 z$ ]/ m5 h5 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& N" g( u: \% T4 b0 R$ m1 A1 w  A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) f% }& O8 B6 j/ F+ Z$ Y9 }; u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) W9 f/ g" |! {! Z7 q, P* [$ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 t7 c( n& I: h$ h+ w4 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" V( X' x* B* b$ B; ^/ q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 D* z+ l+ c5 j; z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ ]8 W  _1 o3 W8 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 s+ d* g' _4 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 N1 U0 o% X0 H, \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 T2 e. O" v9 J3 Q* U! D; E" N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 @, {+ s8 r9 B1 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ?" U3 ?7 D: ~7 D6 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 s- z# R. N; U5 H! M4 m* X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ?% ~2 M- F- i6 X  B9 S# w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* W0 ^' b1 o  D! ~1 r6 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! \9 J% l5 z: _' j: q) S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 j' P: Q- d9 a& P, i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 i6 g! V5 F/ Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  Z1 x* d9 u2 v5 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" }0 w7 T; y& R" D* I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>