【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' c2 q3 `4 k6 I1 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 B4 {' ]2 r7 t9 @! Z% jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ L+ W0 a% s) |3 Z- g( sSeeing the sky content with its love
* D: m+ h; b' Y6 u4 M* ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: p8 R) z1 P9 @1 z8 l/ ^9 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 k4 ?! k! K$ L* J7 m3 Y: NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 z8 U" M+ t  Z9 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) M, W5 B6 I8 b' TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. j' l4 z; v: {: [I regret not dying
, T% I7 p0 G. [& L& `5 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& X* s2 z0 h3 ?7 Z8 j0 G+ X; rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) k* s5 {9 v) a, K$ f, h) D9 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ D+ u, \) o# {2 W% z0 E0 G# pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& Q2 S/ Q; u' D" t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: o( J6 F- G8 _2 R$ u# A0 Z) v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% W5 u, _5 f, [: j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: A' u* O7 T" Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% N6 z7 A$ G! ?7 R: W4 d" C( K0 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! |8 y) ?) M& Q9 L" W+ E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* U4 m! R- P3 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# B; P, Y  i8 u! [  n; a$ t0 r1 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 v: x* S& {+ b) b4 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 @( d' _" W8 p  P3 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 J9 F' L; B2 P" n3 {/ M$ F" g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 E" G1 _1 S2 H' o0 u: c# r1 L* ~<P>你无需担心</P>
0 o. j6 J" I% e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 a' c2 s5 m# C3 z7 T, r/ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ e6 w: R& w; f& J! U7 x. z/ `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) m( D5 H8 ^4 ]. W8 O" Z8 V/ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 _! ]/ d8 K& L  U4 P: D* K! u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 k* n8 t: x7 j$ L% N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! d' j  a9 Z8 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  h% B* d( V% y/ S$ t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" Z' m" {7 y- G- A% k8 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 D1 r: V. w- F9 i) M- i, J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 Y0 S" ?! i' P3 f2 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( b! d/ @1 d8 ?- L2 ~( O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; T; X- e, F. {$ j5 \! ]# ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 [) g0 N& ?6 f0 X3 ?) j! |/ a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 \" T% W5 q! G0 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" ]  y! y" E2 _, O: O! _" P! j9 e5 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 q: v/ d+ B2 ?# ~# w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ i# \$ r0 j0 |# d& R5 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 v/ Y* U  A- H* I3 b. ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) c6 u, Y  M0 M% K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* g0 U! c$ }  i9 d! m" R" S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( h) F+ L/ D9 M# }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ G! z. Y0 n. U! p6 t* e" g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& v& s9 R. B5 m" b/ H& ?" R# |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>