【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 a" g2 v! }( f3 i; w" {The moonlight is shining brightly,
  P  U$ Y2 {# u! C5 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
, l' w! u8 q$ W. d) [# Z1 V7 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ C, ]+ V) Q  SWith the moon kissing it every night
- o  k/ T/ @: Q$ U; P& R* ^Seeing the sky content with its love
$ g- F) Y  N4 g5 ?* NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: Q' m$ _% V" o6 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: w+ K! J; A2 m5 O0 vI really want to know just how much you love me
; `( T5 c2 p" M' X% l/ PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ P; b% [- t, |' }I’m still filled with fear
$ L: Y% X+ I( h. AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 A$ c2 \" r: Z% v' l+ w9 g; tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ v) z5 T( `: Z! N. u* I7 ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, a; ^. S4 s* }, ]6 Q: w5 J  U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* m. ]$ }: ?. g% v) X( X( V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& _* Z5 v' i9 A& b  g+ M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  w- J/ i: \: o0 G" e3 H  C: l' S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- Y3 B7 }9 o4 ]* Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 T& o+ h% m7 n6 x1 ~' Y4 y, b+ q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" i/ m  O; a" T0 u0 `& ]  Z5 q3 {" O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& W! v2 T' v( n. b  A' _* Y/ i  T$ d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) _# z6 N% V  E6 Q4 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& S. {2 f. M6 K2 u" B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ ~: b" z6 J% Y# e2 l) X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' z/ N6 J; b* u3 v6 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 `9 ?  p' f/ n6 [/ M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! U$ O9 Z( E0 W4 Y" |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; ^# H/ P/ U# U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, H8 ~. o% _1 Q/ d: W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, [" o8 t& k- y& j7 {: G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 n: w' c$ c  m1 d+ O: \( O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, {8 m0 s$ Q9 p' R: h8 _( m8 q% W$ _2 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 v  l' H2 y) H0 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 B. E* a7 S  s. p2 n8 R我请你剖开它

# h4 Y5 F/ |9 m  p& X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 R8 ^8 T! Z/ ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>