【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 s; f$ ]1 e* k) T1 a& mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 W% o% i8 W3 ^: i: v: }- HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 C: U1 _/ G1 ]5 F8 e' W: z6 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 m. `; P/ e3 e) Y! a4 s. C- j1 xWith the moon kissing it every night
0 {& K9 O7 j, p' }! ~0 U/ u, _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 N; T1 H, i8 F* [( P9 ~I really want to know just how much you love me
3 z: r8 i5 [2 z0 fI love you I love you with all my heart
1 h" C( g1 ]+ [- u. E* @* ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ?* u+ ?  v, c$ D6 n& ^" }# [  KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 _6 A, L0 z% V' ^: l1 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 Q+ K/ O; y& a' P9 ^: kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 H. {% s, s9 P7 j5 m( ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 S  a3 [5 W+ M# q+ n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ h! ]( Q# g# [( O  L7 D+ e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 R8 D  l" ]+ y  c. e' v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 w$ O1 h; C5 h0 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& w5 S3 e( c, W( \5 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& e! H5 C1 Y( `2 v+ ]+ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 t2 k( }  j% }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 g5 `! r( P0 T3 P7 f+ O$ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 W  I( k  @% e5 E3 T( h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ E% E0 [( w" X2 B<P>你无需担心</P>
' I2 Y5 [6 ]0 E8 F5 R' g* R: Q5 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 V/ o6 J7 ^& T  w% B8 j( w8 v8 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 I5 [3 M! k  x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# S/ `4 ]$ Q* `! D( a$ K0 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  z; d" A, I4 ?% _+ d! a( U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- J# h1 A% E6 x& o! M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 a& L6 r4 v- ^3 J! y; E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 z! @: b8 V1 H2 P% R# E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 B' p0 L, A; N; j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 H/ s. L+ v( M' L& F+ G2 l' o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 H! h* @/ U" u+ Z2 F' d* @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 `- }4 X8 J9 K$ v6 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) a( H1 F5 b1 k  ^4 x. v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 I* b# y5 M" j' E( P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 e8 Z! f) O' V( ~8 X9 ~( B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. S& M7 t0 m- m6 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- R7 l& ?3 o$ [) q% K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ^/ b3 Z7 B6 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 N7 r6 `0 L# u( e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 p, Y8 r0 }6 W, O/ y' g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>