【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 _6 L' l$ P- w2 i/ Q& C2 Q歌词我附在后面。
9 B3 t5 _$ {, T) }The moonlight is shining brightly,
- x7 t- E3 v) m: {Making the sky glitter like gold,
; L0 {( K9 @* G" U8 U; s  Q, Y. HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 A- Z4 K' X' m4 ?2 }0 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ I' E4 ^+ l! W3 xSeeing the sky content with its love
1 H" g! ?/ a- GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ b5 O( n$ F' Y3 y8 Z+ k, NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) T( J. c! J2 P. g( p* U% WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 j( G2 g6 e% s9 Y$ `' _' q2 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 D. m" q- ?+ W; b& cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% ]4 r: _3 B, o" e" l9 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ Q8 [: U8 N8 ?2 }) s0 |- |2 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! f" K/ v% q5 w9 L1 V) l+ NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# a3 ?$ G3 i$ e3 Z9 vWith such a tongue as yours,
3 G) M' X) [3 Z6 l4 Q  WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 e9 N! v% K4 T+ v& PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 T: T  }& _, b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! A: d" [. z1 w  D  q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ h0 D( \4 K* Q9 \# j) ]4 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. W' I- O' k% Z$ n+ N) C; R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& f5 X  b* q) M" N3 |9 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) v) u! S9 V6 l% i: H5 \" M! g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: y9 T! Z5 W( x* c0 u" P9 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 E. H9 x) {. h8 j/ x% M+ y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: t0 |7 y5 u; x/ r" N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* X) Q" {4 T# L6 M" q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ^, L1 u/ X- K/ ]6 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 t" v9 B# _$ `0 I  g$ y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, E' n) G* |) H' G# q9 a6 s5 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" ?6 g3 P) T# B+ B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 Q* T/ Z$ K3 z! C" [: z, g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ~9 Y& r; ~8 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: j8 i* ?8 d- j7 k6 ?: B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 \8 K- F( C. M6 k! e1 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% C% v) f' _! d/ T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( s0 G9 X2 W8 z7 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 @# d% E& D) v, P: s3 e5 ^3 ~/ A" K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 R. G! Q  I6 f3 n9 j' M+ M' y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: y8 N* m# m- a+ S; o6 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 o$ g! q5 n; b% C! M* h9 u我请你剖开它

- n8 {4 z5 B2 h: |- U4 b6 M/ z( C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>