【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% r* v3 F  P, U. Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ |, A  E0 t& `: q& NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ v( V4 `$ t1 j0 x; B! \- I. QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 J( d7 j. A+ E$ w& d8 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" k& \! t. }1 \8 QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* X+ X- `' m* _# m+ UI really want to know just how much you love me
1 ~9 u; U$ r! l- h: p" [1 n9 RI love you I love you with all my heart
# e9 V5 v0 S5 ~/ w0 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: W+ V( @# D  G3 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ^1 u- H/ a% `: V/ J, Y& zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 s: [3 Q! c1 W; b& m3 gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' q# U$ M; E7 r' _$ J% JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% F  t1 x# e  z* Q! z/ m! eWith such a tongue as yours,
# l$ c6 T5 l- D% j$ c6 N+ q" aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* S* R/ G- M  B* I/ C/ U0 h+ n: l9 C" aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 J: @$ N. X7 j' B3 ]7 p( ^+ gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 n' m, W; H) ^9 c! r/ R7 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 X& k5 S$ p4 f+ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 e# g7 P/ J! G+ ?/ {5 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ q0 f/ S( F9 G* Z4 n* y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& t- N# U' P) C. y% J+ P& a$ S7 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 a- D( x- ^1 I1 b' B- C8 t$ Y4 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 s9 P1 W* C9 {" `5 |2 Q/ v( f3 e- Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; W( d$ w# y& s, S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 Q- A7 {/ G0 Z  w; B& Y; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 F# g3 q/ d- P: H0 w  t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- e% J+ l! y- D  s9 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: n# u* r, o- r4 w; F( o" H  C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 V+ F8 E1 b! A" ], Y0 ~' s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  x+ k5 O- E4 p* |4 Z! b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 o( k: C' ^* e* B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 J" T. @  H& X+ l! m) \; U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) H/ m# _! k. f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# d! L* u0 K8 C) \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 y6 a# @) \) z+ y* C# W) D" Z. l4 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 P7 N7 A" p; Y- i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) e  @7 y+ y7 ~* M7 b7 K! G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 _  b4 B  z9 d5 ?. r% I7 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 D, a3 K7 @* f- H* ^. x8 P. t) n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, ^) t0 s5 x* u( p* d4 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- G) I/ h! R3 c' I7 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 Z4 A4 K, V! d% P/ H3 f" f% ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( {" @8 }7 j* T' I; l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; p4 }' S. q& C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ A% m1 V" ~$ l# i4 b( V* L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 g* ~8 t% {' K5 Z9 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>