【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& i& E+ b! z, d- q) c9 R; @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! d; O. i8 j- y0 z  V7 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ W: e; e+ k6 V5 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 U6 u* W6 R- x) V* \0 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 ]* ?. I$ d+ n) H6 `- ^; aThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 e7 F  P3 _6 ~/ w/ j; l8 y& D# dWith the moon kissing it every night
9 Q8 [1 o$ }* b& ?# gSeeing the sky content with its love
# J1 }* U, ^4 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 d0 u: }0 [5 Z' _5 |  yYou needn’t fear anything
' W5 t3 T# K7 |& W! e3 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* |; a; Z. m" lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ O+ Z( @/ G" O6 K0 aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% E/ I, p* ?/ g& a+ ~9 g' HI’m still filled with fear
& N3 X+ {) n& q" `: R# {8 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ ^0 @* ~6 R. B: c! r, |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: A& x* j" y5 P6 \( }4 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" M- A1 J' d, M& s" ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ?4 {5 t6 g6 P& t9 I6 P; `+ oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( m, \; g$ S( M' z+ ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% P" t% ~& g1 N! P5 R7 H  z6 i' ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ b0 P/ S  [/ Y' H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. K7 J7 V2 X; X! K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: Z5 J* P4 a8 [1 ^5 B0 V2 U4 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 i7 y4 R2 ~: {4 [! s2 W3 u2 Y9 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 D' y- h5 P  e0 h7 X, T+ s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: a1 \3 V3 `5 z( @& y' B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 D% C/ C& e/ a  r! v1 ^$ T4 L/ ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* r. @/ f& A; }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 B; Q& C6 j% r: G; G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* h7 [/ U2 ~' i- g6 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- ^2 q& n" I/ M8 e2 f0 l9 \- w' ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 y$ N, B. Q; x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. v( Y/ Z8 ~) ]* z1 }! J6 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ?; v& o! }: i4 u; Q+ X) E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* _( u2 Q$ f3 W8 U( V1 S' z: m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* s6 g) u8 Z& w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 m' `- h6 c- G7 R  |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) f! H. h6 r" |* M$ _9 H  H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ k' p& _. b0 s& c6 r/ y  O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, s" n" f3 q2 m5 S4 w& m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ _- x2 l7 b# R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ w" s! n8 Z! X& @+ \, P+ i9 V" Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 d6 r# U% V8 h; D8 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  z& o, c2 d% [7 \$ E; P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ?3 c# v4 V2 d" s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# @) x6 W: |- I* V$ s3 A* [) v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>