【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! S0 O3 \$ f% x. ^: A( {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 d& X& Y" q+ k) O4 A# U! V, }% K5 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" R9 q' R% \0 m3 D) H( N) Q& `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ J, K* a; M6 q. JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 J: S0 ^8 X4 q' `" m* oI love you I love you with all my heart
. X/ I- M0 P! W' WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 D# Y7 q+ [  M( CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 |' P+ o/ N4 ]% I; dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' T1 b  H. s! e4 |6 Q3 {: ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  j# Z  c: K( L- ~# e$ H! tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 M& ]+ V: p" D' I0 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! I$ Y* q2 C) w4 U7 t  i! ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: m  A& C+ t) G0 N8 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 @0 M% h, ?& F& J& T+ F1 K; o. P4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# K! F. ]1 T3 G0 r. i. |/ i  [, L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ Y! _& T: l$ s3 X! t* T: Y) B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; G. X" r3 D9 P4 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 w; h' `# \) ]7 w" W8 |  h1 e( Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% n# l: r& C6 N+ D+ L0 U. V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 W, Z! J& r  E5 J; ?4 d+ y$ d3 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 O2 |% v/ D1 l( I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 D! d/ w0 y/ c4 m) @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, S: L. C  R2 T5 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% `0 X- D( P9 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, w" B# Y4 |( u" t& [4 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 T5 h7 s$ ]% _& A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! Y- t1 S3 R3 C) J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: H8 L. h! o' J7 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# S% F8 O3 {) Q0 {1 T6 g$ c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 V; l3 e4 C' G3 {/ ]. N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( J9 R5 p: M" i+ O/ M7 j& O4 r4 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) s" t+ L6 R6 d+ t3 ~* `6 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% t) m$ T- F; S& Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) Z1 h' I0 h0 Y; O0 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- @$ w! l$ g% q) V8 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ N- m1 Y; k8 ^  F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& k: ^( _9 J' @, l: f# ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ~+ w6 z& {% o- P+ R- X! s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>