【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" Q) V: ^: |6 w, j* O7 P( T% Z歌词我附在后面。
) ]0 {+ k- r2 H" s' \' TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' a" _2 e! \5 V1 b% `  N8 j9 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( z. r' d8 A7 z# B* jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  C2 e: Z2 @* z5 F% P: AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& j, ]& [" W5 `( z  q6 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 i0 B9 v# ^& HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. q- t$ J# U% j% ?8 }You needn’t fear anything
% M" K- B* }; ]6 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ |' l( _3 R/ o0 e1 P( VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 g% g: f4 {! [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  H" {5 m( t' |- L- N: d1 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( |; k; E7 O5 i/ d- |+ H+ r) NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 i) E9 ?+ W' m2 q$ v: BI regret not dying
1 y- \( T/ s( B) ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: X4 \' N2 _9 A3 O; hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; l+ `; W1 g2 L+ zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( d4 k3 X% [  [' a$ F5 I5 F8 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 k4 i# h  S* C9 t/ n. z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 W* ]* M; _% u# Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: h1 t. P% }& v' s  @5 T2 n: h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  @9 P8 J3 S$ e% e$ j. \% ]) Y# M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- Y  S- [, \% U5 j, D# E: y% G% g# r% m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" x1 V6 d) ^8 |8 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 S1 n. e" Y+ p$ E+ d0 {# G( @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" ]$ o8 F: z( U+ r" i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# N3 w' {( T' b' V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* Z! {, r1 C5 M8 ?" ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! b/ _6 r8 ~5 w- S0 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ |8 x7 h0 @9 j; W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 @- S, a; Z! C: F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 d( q% s# v$ I$ f, C' s. x$ ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 r4 S9 P0 O1 `# \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 x6 T: H" O8 ~: _. p, @+ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! a5 E( Z# m) e0 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ \7 v0 `/ t# p; n<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 H- |; W4 a* q* Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 w4 M+ F7 q6 F7 Q' }' ~+ {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 N2 o3 |( r8 t7 t/ @8 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 H, x" m- ~& f* t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 w4 x6 U9 B9 E8 \0 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 T" @2 C, g; q! g& J8 l: `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' V7 T; c( B+ s) E4 \" o8 c) s/ X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 d2 y9 O1 a, _! N1 |7 P9 m) [$ _我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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