【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 m& }# E$ o8 j4 S9 j& E. QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" X1 v* s0 r' V5 M6 g" H  kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& T$ u2 g& t2 K: U4 H" t! qThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 q+ |/ b2 r7 ~+ U9 V7 O0 }1 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& M8 g$ B7 v/ F$ C$ `+ PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( T7 d  i" g+ R9 l, ~0 ?2 r# ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% I: h4 ~' K% V5 e/ WNothing can compare to my love
( E" b1 o: E- z1 W, S5 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ {) R' I) p, I5 W( I8 r% EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. Y" s- v1 m8 Y4 S7 k' \6 W( yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 a2 p1 b( D/ P- ]6 c6 D8 b8 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  c1 p7 s/ M! N/ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  J" e6 N1 m2 _6 C7 F- mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! l2 q7 p! w' i9 w3 m. w/ |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" {, B' @/ i7 M0 h3 }& y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) N/ y* ?2 Z; Q+ y5 t1 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 w& L) n: C4 \/ _1 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Y4 T3 ?9 b$ t# m: I% I' B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 m0 l& d1 a5 i: X. e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: Y5 H0 J' ?1 y0 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 M% C$ D  ^  R% ?' G) R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- B  Q! Q! [# ~<P>你无需担心</P>
+ [% l  [9 [  Y0 j* S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) u  W. Z9 X# j* V; S" \! f1 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" g; x4 L  l! x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ~2 O" v! I6 g0 J  U0 n; o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ Y& m1 x$ o% C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, s9 z5 ~1 l' c( L0 ^. K. u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* `6 O( S' W% i& J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j! H8 k$ a7 m+ z4 @/ v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ M! T# k9 T7 G9 X6 S6 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ l; K/ I/ @, M* N" M  v7 @. X# ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 Q- f) k/ ^: X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ m& d5 T0 q0 o0 w% V7 S2 c  O8 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  J' x2 f$ F9 J" [; y1 A! Y. {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- A& p) X0 \& L, c& y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>