【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. d2 k2 I' O% _; AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 R1 X* D* x7 G- K! V9 k: f# U9 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. ]' a% t2 y# K: R/ [" `" A& mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 O& S. r4 f/ m- aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) q4 }. i( D# g3 h) f: t9 CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) N" y* ?1 H7 s5 Z9 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* U9 ]5 K  k: Q9 C- kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& p: {" `9 M8 k  m" q+ YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. d/ p9 S( u+ [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ Z2 V/ D' `1 P5 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% G% d/ d% }8 T5 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 z  c' q% D9 |0 ?) R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 S3 E% d/ \. e& [8 h& H; R- h( j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, m3 G7 P* O9 ]# p6 j: E' b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 `8 w) K1 b4 |- v6 a! @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. G  }& C9 X1 y- }; Y; D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: ^3 t4 l# ?+ v+ V9 |3 i- {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 v; @! K( _3 x- |# x9 c0 ^: }6 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* O7 _7 q8 d  O7 f" \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 ~. d  }5 F% h2 @- J' Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; r2 l- U7 R% V" i& |$ n5 v. e) P% z( L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! b# B$ x4 w$ b& \) k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# V1 J8 V/ b# o2 n' g: b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, d4 x: Z" k, i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 R/ Z0 A% [0 {$ @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- k1 ], A! A7 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 h. x! D  w8 m' M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: R+ r* y1 D- G5 x3 Y  T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- w! }% p5 W! G6 Z+ `" c<P>I regret not dying</P>
' Y( x9 m. h; I9 Z5 c- U  j6 d9 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 c: m1 l: v' R  q7 r" ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 R) h+ S1 e% T- C$ A+ Q, Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: |! _, E4 Y2 d$ \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 [1 Z# h2 b, |我请你剖开它

. `2 H; p. }, w# o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>