【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ X/ w" U! H' j' S2 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ W# i1 R2 r8 N+ z  w$ dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- L7 b( s0 m: f, j- t7 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: R) t- t9 W/ e# g& X0 N; VThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ u. s6 f. E# l7 r, cWith the moon kissing it every night
6 |8 S) }& S  o* r  SSeeing the sky content with its love
: [: c8 F' ~" I  bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; m2 o3 ?  ]9 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 Y8 N. i# G2 y7 A" C9 a) TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' c3 D" {% U3 V2 n% @+ oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% U& Y6 K& x4 u6 y% k0 H- K. i/ x, D& zI’m still filled with fear
$ @1 q* B' K$ W4 r0 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 H( J- U5 @, {' D) Z) H# F: J' y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 a  O  J% u3 L$ E; v1 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 c$ }# U6 z6 ]8 l( l) f- n% Q& U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ G, Q" i8 R, T$ o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ f* |! B7 n3 `) I, ^9 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 z8 J2 L0 V$ K9 s. G" O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* @, H; t2 e6 i( k& y! J3 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ N  @+ o: P+ M: l* W<P>你无需担心</P>
8 _4 C. A& _; l. {4 @2 z# Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! @' R& L5 C  R: u1 l3 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 R4 I* ~5 y# N3 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 v9 W8 c$ v8 F" T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! a; m+ }7 {) p) d0 r: \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ I8 u" R9 H5 z8 {! g/ b2 n: s" [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. @7 i7 R( M* r& ~+ r  D. |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* p  s) s9 U$ K4 D8 u& ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  x0 A$ M0 s5 _( r& j0 N! `2 }4 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: J0 i- b5 O1 ^" r7 B' j2 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  c2 \. L9 s  h. m) u! i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 v5 Y5 e& E3 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. y* b7 B& Q0 _  S8 G! n. v) }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 A. K$ K* V7 c& ]* q, m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ^% \9 F+ L9 r% ?8 j$ g$ ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  w7 Z6 v2 v' I  [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, ]' c% Q2 ]% q2 p2 L8 Z/ `% S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; m7 N/ o4 M- B6 X  J3 o) q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 w% ^  z0 m* a8 [我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  m7 r- H! i8 T, B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>