【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 O2 E: w* l, R# H! DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 S% Y2 [5 }2 v/ }) F9 P) ?: o# uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; v$ T! F& W  E/ _' r1 ?0 {2 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 t3 H/ ]8 C+ gWith the moon kissing it every night
+ F& F# a) K* ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ K, Y# R! M/ g5 T& s# b) @6 sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 G4 z( B( W# @9 w7 aNothing can compare to my love
. ~* w( t! ?$ Y& \+ m% ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ R* o# X& g3 Q% {- S" yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Y( j5 P0 \3 DI want so much to see inside your heart
; z$ W6 r3 T  ]4 {  UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ]. S; L, ?: k6 j1 S; C& f; F! \I’m still filled with fear
8 i8 ?$ k! c0 k  JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 ~; h' U% F, o! G* T) [2 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( n3 R) M! y; A& s4 b: h* dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ x& d8 N/ y, F/ h9 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! ~6 z- h5 _( h& X3 J4 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ w. M. L! b5 l3 J5 X3 H( w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& o9 B% W& e9 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* r- A, w% [3 w  e' i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. \, e& G0 @6 G# [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# f5 [: N7 S6 p! |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 }  [" ?- l! f" Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: K3 l: @" a. S: A' h& D3 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& x+ o. y; O0 [4 n% k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; n# f3 e7 }( l" m; C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 v+ ~! h" |/ i1 ]& Q* y: ~: }0 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 f( u' H  p, h+ K4 n% k' D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- W+ H8 L8 F0 v; E* k& S) c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ ~- Z7 ~$ k6 y6 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ _8 b0 W. a$ J; _( [' \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* N7 u2 e- `% E, O* w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; W' i3 {8 v7 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 q0 t+ }6 @/ _2 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 {! ~0 l2 {$ ]/ I  R# ^3 b& T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, ~8 o) X6 B* M9 a  F& e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 R" j+ ~* @! N5 X% p; d" Y- K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 Y- f& [' ?. h/ D3 l' L' M! k9 M/ {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 s6 E. W, L5 A4 c  L4 C3 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ k+ S4 s+ p$ a9 Q+ t1 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, T% M  v$ [5 W  @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 S% j3 X1 u7 ]) q1 h7 n1 x% ~  |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* Z& B0 ^* p: L9 [我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>