【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 N- X; ~5 A& X2 p6 K# I8 @- o" XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ?) ~0 A6 j" R6 N; SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ _/ H1 m- O" q% L$ `/ F# U; b. KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- c5 U. e' N5 e. E& g2 C8 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 g) l0 F* g1 S7 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 h* a" v' x5 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 o4 T5 z, y) f& ]' n" _% VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 T* P" h$ x% U. ]" B* l& l# WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ g, }  |. _2 z  V; rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 H% V: N) B- KI regret not dying
. d2 d8 y1 W. L: m5 F# s/ ~# aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 m  V; @% w, Y2 R. X! q) b1 L$ ?5 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 b! Z) f( z5 m. B0 K. u) t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 T; g) x: s- p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 d' |9 Q6 C" T" _# i) b" T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 M; t* v) p- b( {* i2 x9 H# J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: f2 {- N7 B, s, _' X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! S  g3 e2 K' b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: ?: J8 J9 D7 _' ]  x4 u  \9 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) h  A1 O1 W& W3 s& N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; G7 K" Y0 f9 g  F6 n0 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- z* q- R+ L" l4 Q% o6 O( x" L  D5 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- I8 p, w8 O& u% |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ C5 E9 T% k% `; W. \. F! X& [3 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 w9 r0 b! @+ B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% Q* m5 H6 w- z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 i/ ~# ]' f% K  O; i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 o$ ~9 L. k* p1 F  a6 y* T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 [/ T3 M( Q# _* n. g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ _  x! d& o- ]" `! }$ _" A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; J2 _3 ~% s& e1 W$ B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ H3 \; T1 a4 k" N0 E- `6 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) I' `! B5 {; k( ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% I7 I* Z- F1 E9 X, }  r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# L- c& l! e3 X( W2 Z3 m3 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 v4 w' D. g+ E( Q# `- E# l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; H: i3 V; H& j* h, S9 j9 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>