【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ ^; }4 K' L7 c, ^$ d! {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" e$ G* c9 ], c& g2 s4 E5 w, l+ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& O: b2 d+ l0 y9 yWith the moon kissing it every night
4 W* h5 `, ^# u7 k% fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( k* W- f& f: V- z* zYou needn’t fear anything
& r2 B% q( @3 I7 l1 P' ^; S9 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& X9 N/ @8 m8 _5 @/ cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  t. l# P+ L) ~/ `7 y7 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 s& k! P3 s: r6 U+ OWith such a tongue as yours,
( D: h% x1 l4 ~7 F2 Z& u$ d3 q" pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 p3 _# x7 x) O4 A4 q7 G; x. p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. a3 |, f: n( E: x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 M9 V# T$ D2 J2 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 Q7 J1 t# d% ?  {" W3 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 X4 r' k, l, l  q5 q5 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, z- L7 v! o. E# R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ |+ Y) d# r) X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 q2 o$ p0 ~+ ]1 z) [$ d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 V1 z0 ]/ A/ i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ i$ Q! M' Z. w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, S3 x* y0 y* K6 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 W+ u+ V2 O8 r: I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 C5 a" a/ U% O0 j& K8 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 g. q! ]% h. i) p" d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 j6 B: {" ~  |; ~/ l2 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  q' g: h; s" d4 w8 K. r* w2 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& B% Q' S" C4 T4 ]" h* P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 J2 D+ e, F, E7 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: X; }: }. s% U1 X* R; |3 u7 t3 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 P! p9 q9 ]+ t  k: h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 Z, @. B7 H# N* ~2 _7 f8 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 \" \5 Q# J& ?! z" {. P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ C- p' D% G/ x: `+ y+ p( _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. w( D: ^, x3 W/ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ Q# _  Z+ k: k- ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 J: g( R2 b  p1 q# j1 C$ P- t4 }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* Y; I5 A6 d- r; V0 X$ @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>