【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, b4 |( p" G: z8 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& b  b* Z1 i1 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: H4 a1 f) X& e. ~6 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. @9 B4 ]0 F0 H. D4 eSeeing the sky content with its love
$ G- _) l! q& W. e; \+ f- s) ^- T. uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ^+ ^, P; N* z# g) `- V- i; bYou needn’t fear anything
5 D2 f- c7 m$ W$ t5 |: d2 W/ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ E( S' c8 \4 |: B; Q. E6 QI really want to know just how much you love me
* A* a* Y& `# `* k( z0 I1 y, fI love you I love you with all my heart
9 A3 Q+ f' }) ?! }Nothing can compare to my love
* F* e" F* d9 g1 l9 R7 l% UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ t% o! _( ^) B3 Z; XI want so much to see inside your heart
3 A/ H( I1 q" A0 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) m% g( v; ?" P$ n, X6 a: x9 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 w% `3 ?9 u, c: l* s2 F1 M, T+ nWith such a tongue as yours,
: D* m- g3 `1 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 l( C1 @& p. E/ J- hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 Q6 i: ~3 v3 O+ ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 v0 S2 u2 C8 O0 ]; U4 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% l3 U5 V0 N- J3 ^4 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 [$ R' i) Y/ i( Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 B; B$ x) L: _- h; f  z. k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& f" F. d, w8 D3 C/ y* h/ Z. R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. v9 V4 Y$ k$ w. j3 k+ \, z% \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 I6 t9 }, N; H8 t3 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( H) ]/ ~9 J0 V$ l, ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 I5 H' C  W, f6 E+ x& n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! R$ J: f/ r: M% R6 j7 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! K% t) @/ _! P1 J  F, m6 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* j3 @: j. K- J( G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 n+ o" u) e7 o+ H- o7 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) a. V+ T6 m1 j4 M* F/ l/ z0 \# d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ z% `& s: G8 Y7 H. V8 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, }# y. w1 W% c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 m. Y/ r; G$ V! K. {. F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 f2 G1 ~7 q  }8 W0 P/ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" g6 f% L4 V4 p1 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* h' @$ z+ \$ @8 k# g. I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 i2 h( E6 M4 P我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ?/ ]$ W$ T2 q& {6 h* _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>