【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. {: i1 B8 l# A' t8 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! g$ C$ `) M- M1 p& l; SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 t+ y& ~2 V' j# qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  S6 i* Z  Q. ?! {. e( YSeeing the sky content with its love
& T: u6 y5 ~( e+ D+ yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 w" a& Q" X$ |- FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  y2 g% @8 B4 T. n" J0 a/ ^2 LEvery other word you utter is love
$ \; T7 x+ |# H) p+ e* fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. r8 b) W' C9 r6 N4 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ Y/ m; t/ E; Z% O: p1 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, y* s/ S( S# Y4 h, \8 CI’m still filled with fear
8 ~- u; c0 P8 x7 r( y5 M( T6 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' K& c/ g# g) |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) S  j! t$ v- Z% y3 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 h' A7 B% D, E+ m: nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; s/ z* E! a- j* W. P2 j. L3 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. b, a; i4 K' P5 a: `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' g3 W, d# @8 I2 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* `8 D" C" i/ g7 \, J; B6 _7 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" _0 c% ^' w$ F, I' X+ m& q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ^0 m3 x8 D8 Y- S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 F1 }7 B6 B1 a4 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: ?; l- Q$ j( s4 n8 e# w+ X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ?7 q1 [6 S' Y0 r2 G6 B! B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 Z9 [7 F) L+ C0 n5 u7 L( J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. P- f6 l+ W8 d6 D3 B4 m6 s: O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' G2 h* O5 J; s, d7 N1 y7 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* G2 E2 W+ n# v0 f, v9 }- b. W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) e7 _* V! }* n$ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ^* u( @) V, ^) I! j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 h8 y1 I4 Z( ^9 x- y7 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 p% V& [* T$ b: N1 y$ O1 t8 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) K0 ^$ e2 K  F& m4 x) g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- L* P( q" g2 r  m, s/ z. w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 W8 y+ N- Z( b- f; Z$ q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" h8 h! P+ E% E$ q# [5 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 _/ e: A# f4 Q6 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 y. T* o3 g8 }$ n1 Q5 u1 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: U. T) |: [! P8 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; q7 D- r' y& x4 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- ~/ q/ S* ~" _& J# N& a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ ~) o6 y) b0 a4 w% {1 J" J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
( h% _( |) @7 j
3 b9 ^' p% U, |6 }9 P我请你剖开它
# h- x7 ~. w  o5 {+ G/ w" ]) h
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  X# P3 u9 v+ \- l, K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>