【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# M, ?4 E& B; p- ~1 ]; Z: u2 Z4 G! `The moonlight is shining brightly,
  N- u- b/ |% Q. u+ R* \2 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- e' ^8 g# _( D  g9 M: BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, M! a  M6 |( l/ u) eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. D5 ^/ z- |* y2 LSeeing the sky content with its love
8 g* H' D0 Y" @6 x3 @! YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% p4 e$ ^, y/ q7 B5 O2 zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ H2 z) L9 W: w3 G) o3 [9 cI really want to know just how much you love me
: z# l( w* O3 g: `! D  uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( f0 O  K+ ?2 Q$ F+ `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- N/ s* l* k6 e% P* K, HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 k" a9 c6 F% P! u1 ~9 F; BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 N8 z% Y, \& W1 ?, F  `, V0 i7 F" l4 b; eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ w, \; p& O# a3 }. I2 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, R' n, l% `+ F2 W6 w2 O$ V: f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 D1 H7 }: {9 X- w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 Q# ~; c! ~* d5 Q6 x! j2 D- V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Z$ |7 J3 O( G0 _1 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# A6 l1 I2 G) i+ V. n- s2 t6 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 \0 k1 F( P: c" H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 D" T5 X; e0 m. F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! M6 Q- W% E3 `7 N# {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ O: R# ~/ S, J1 j  H1 ]- a! y: y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 e. H1 E. o3 Z/ _6 \( ~& g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ [& a6 Z$ d! X- s8 Q& r+ l7 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 M! K9 l7 X! }" ]/ ^; _& x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 \- U0 w. L" o5 m/ V% l/ n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: X+ k! n* d6 R" N2 q. Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. M, Z0 \2 p) @! X* ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 q/ o1 G1 J( J5 k5 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% ^: A! |8 A. R6 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 G9 o# s% x: G, y- f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# s: @& B- w% i. @: R0 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 k$ d- p0 P  a2 w* r, N: g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 a. u. x1 _( p" I3 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" {5 j, x2 ^2 Y- s) v+ s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 I, C! L% N0 l# y; b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ x+ V0 ~5 Q" W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( s3 q: c1 Y3 J, L# k5 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" u) {( O( k% t" f5 e% f: m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) k0 v( f6 e9 Q+ A9 ]& i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* Y; p5 ?/ V/ Z4 D' W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  B$ g1 k$ a$ t9 x5 _! |/ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ L& K9 Y4 b7 F; R, ^5 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 A( q% r5 r/ K8 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>