【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ o) N( ^& f6 w1 I' Y& x# u8 S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% Q+ v3 p' h5 Z1 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 z- T3 B% [0 K" f9 a4 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 x  e) M8 S& Z$ X+ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 O" w& T0 z9 f8 G& u, pWith the moon kissing it every night
: X/ g# S( h, a1 O' USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! g( Z4 O! h; r- Q$ {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 v/ z' X. {) @/ L0 _Nothing can compare to my love
. K3 v) u  z% {% a9 K1 ^7 V* aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  C. M3 }7 L' l( C# ]/ B' `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 o2 ]& P( Y9 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# ?6 a- D5 b" Y. L( U$ |( D' dI’m still filled with fear
0 |( p( s2 W" J4 [7 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- s! O3 b. Y" s7 o8 q" b1 m+ PI regret not dying
' Y1 p7 u$ V  C  V" JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: ^2 ~  a7 h' ^5 W2 H$ b3 a/ jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 P0 n0 M: @. B) M, _) t# y8 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ^4 d# w+ P6 i" W  v& X, X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 B, A- p  \1 }/ _( [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- W" S9 o/ z1 ^' J- R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ a: [0 o$ E2 T" w: H/ Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ j/ q  i3 H2 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 i3 e$ l6 j: c+ q( N/ U8 O1 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 h8 u& K) K5 O) j- l1 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 h* ?2 N+ b3 T8 q" `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. W; K+ B' L- M# u5 g* J6 l7 x+ u& R<P>你无需担心</P>
" e$ Y/ s/ ]) m3 k- |: Q! J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" G; r& [0 n  S+ ^5 u# D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 f. I" A, d' M( c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 m( A  b3 ~! f) h* y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ h4 x1 f3 v- p  D5 A4 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ e/ Z/ ]6 X" m8 E6 b% X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. v! J4 S: i! R; l$ A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& e- F* D( T3 t5 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! I* r- J! z; j3 c, Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 u- `; m+ E% O4 X% u, C& e4 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( Z  S+ E: P' w/ I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" z( T; I* l) Q7 t  W; t0 ?- ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ x6 G% S; `. u% D; m, w2 n1 l+ w, Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" ]/ v3 d, H- m5 @8 t  P( n3 F9 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" d" r/ q  v# B7 y8 h) |9 i: N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 S" L/ p6 ?% T* }* q& @4 u我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ q1 {# t! [3 d, w1 y3 p' Z0 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>