【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 I1 s! X7 X) i  Z" VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 z+ x/ _8 U9 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 y% N; [5 p5 s/ H4 [6 a/ g$ g" oWith the moon kissing it every night
# B0 d' H( V4 u2 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; K0 W! B$ `$ u8 k6 h* V, v5 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 A( N  V! Z. C6 c# eNothing can compare to my love
" n# [  j- f9 I* }# BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. T3 n! P0 q5 {- }3 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  X2 J, S$ J& o' A8 |1 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# v* ~: C( u$ _2 ]; Q; G# l. p/ LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. x! J1 M0 x7 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ ^) S/ `5 _& X, F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 s5 M! c0 D6 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 x. h* g, P" N7 b2 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 B9 p3 f& ^& m& I8 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' r& k0 i$ }9 `# ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- j  X6 R: w6 @: M( J5 @  A  i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" q* C; z5 J- c. m4 [2 E* U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |/ w7 H" @2 w2 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, W) `' e7 I  [- ^, C1 q5 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" }3 B# [0 @0 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 d2 [0 P" Q/ ~. e  G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ [" ^6 G3 m; @; a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 \- s' I" x* y  j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 j! h! I* Q$ @2 _* V% S( V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: T" k2 Q7 I* {! P/ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# \6 ]% |9 J; r% _% ?; @6 S4 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 K7 H! C8 E! t8 Q, Q1 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: N# W7 X& u5 T$ g; g5 r. b$ F+ H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 g( G4 b# {$ u6 \! ^3 H( Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 Q: y: \" o7 S9 {9 ]5 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 I9 c8 V9 X. U+ a% w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  S% g0 v+ ?. ?" f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>