【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ F5 A4 g4 D  n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# O! o5 s' U  _; G7 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ l9 G9 M1 y' j# H+ i0 r5 gWith the moon kissing it every night
0 d* m9 M3 ^& w! F: vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; r2 M7 @; f  }1 c3 kI love you I love you with all my heart
+ h+ r6 Y+ }4 {( M  {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 C: W5 w0 x8 o  Y" FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 r0 r% {; V6 |3 [. _! VI regret not dying
+ }5 D+ d6 A' }3 Y8 ^! qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ G8 F* z  Y8 k+ Z+ K& Y5 \" W, {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! }, [/ [4 L5 }7 G$ S* Z3 [# j. rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* c. l1 X8 v) d0 d, Q  V" c* I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. [% I& W  E% Y: U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 x& F: z, R! {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  ^. j* w4 i; r1 r9 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: B/ R8 ?0 J& v9 _) N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 W  J" ~7 J/ ~5 y6 f; U9 z6 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# {# E0 P1 ^& c& i" M$ E' S. V7 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 T! i: g4 P' S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" v  @2 h: W. y% A, S/ u0 Z5 {7 k* N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! f# `! I  @0 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 t: N6 p) d$ ]/ Y2 [, S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) O1 s0 K* g: p! e" P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 ~) o/ I& f! F* w0 ^& Z, E% `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, B) j0 u' X( I8 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 g  ?" ]: `4 V; B# T1 a- ^2 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" O$ x$ W) `4 @  z7 C' K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- r9 T* d' R3 k, ]3 \# O& b) J! V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 v' h# i2 W7 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" U" V- f5 f4 V7 l  c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 \. m/ x! N( `- J0 k4 }, T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ Q$ V" [3 n+ ^( }' @& e2 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( H. [4 R- K( k; j" N" F1 w: Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 [" ^: M, E1 l7 g/ J% w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  |- }- J+ Q. g! }+ v3 z; I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ~) L! {- M; K7 T9 ^4 Q$ J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ Y! o; B9 Q1 X- E- D+ f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, E' i6 Q4 q- A/ r1 c2 r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>