【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 o8 R5 k  C4 J7 F9 [0 U0 E  dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 s+ {3 G, D; \8 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ i5 v* C' n  p) F( p1 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" y4 o, X" c9 r# d% L, GWith the moon kissing it every night
5 f# O+ N, a. A, O( I9 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 v0 w& z! S& b: {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ ~7 o8 {2 @0 KI’m still filled with fear
# s% p; Y3 ^6 y6 |/ N7 r# BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# U' p) w0 p. }/ WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" S: {* k( [2 g+ K8 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, x& n! K8 ]0 u/ R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 s7 n+ F7 ?8 L7 Q1 g2 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ K/ i( ~" c" \. Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 E- Q7 F  d% U$ r" G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: o/ k2 N/ z  D" j; z9 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ U, D( x. Y$ a* q, ?- w3 }# c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( |& i# x) |- p# b' h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 |6 U3 U. e0 Y: f) [1 |8 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 S, z1 }: o. J2 a( \" e/ _& S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ z& H1 m5 S9 ^1 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' i% r6 t. v6 I. v# _3 W1 r) [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ `* |- G& t$ p2 L0 o7 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, G. Q# U/ K' _0 m7 @4 k( G/ u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, v7 j6 s- ~3 q5 H% Y3 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* S; E. C/ b7 o* [* L* F. t+ v& |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, S9 V( b- D7 c+ _% L9 a; j$ X8 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ m& \4 W. g4 Y5 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; K5 h* A7 V, B. d% N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- n2 _1 v3 u; T4 |5 Z# T+ P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ s/ S  u' f& w) h# g; |5 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& k7 }/ n" p6 |- C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- k0 {/ R& N. |3 V7 ?6 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 o) W, [/ E! _2 T: k: I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( S& b4 d0 j( R. S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: t( O) {, T7 g. x. o$ w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 @1 K$ x# P1 y1 V! X: i7 |2 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" @1 Z+ Q; [" y6 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ H0 ?; j. M: {( \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! G& ?& W3 q  P& ~& S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ N7 C+ p  h  R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! e# \. r* t# h( \2 K. |9 i* p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 W' Z) K% e: A4 Q8 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 X! Z% H6 \& B. n. X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
" m1 W- P( ~, o6 ?! N$ `
我请你剖开它
0 i- N5 s% r0 O' x  K
  l$ [1 [. ~) D+ q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# z( s3 e. k. n& F9 i$ V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>