【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 n  c" {. e# RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 h+ G5 r2 t4 V' _! H- PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ K3 ?: z; M; g( TThe sky is happy down to its soul
" K. e% w6 r& W9 l; C$ nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# }8 p$ _5 ^( Y7 M$ b) WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& M+ W2 |' d  P0 d% C/ YEvery other word you utter is love
3 C1 Z/ v& N& y# l5 p8 P% [) aI really want to know just how much you love me
- R4 Q4 y" H7 l' l, YI love you I love you with all my heart
6 Z9 w' V- v" b; J: }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% J" t% Z5 H) n" N* o+ zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' f, u: u7 V! b- A1 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; N! M7 D% i6 V. E) CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. t7 m' @6 d. z! u' E# GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 O0 Z$ `# F1 C7 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: f$ [6 O0 K& ?) `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( s7 N# `7 L2 e8 m% ~' [( F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; h0 R9 f/ Y! k( i) Y7 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. w* }% a+ b# r/ p) v$ l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 M- D! [$ F* F, s, T* g; @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ]7 U' ?7 ]8 S5 \* a0 R( ~$ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ]6 O2 c1 L, w1 t% M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) T! G1 c. j& C: s/ `9 v. E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ |* |* q' @  _( f5 A! k9 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% k& z) p3 U' i8 @* z. i+ i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' B, |9 d, z7 a  A+ ?1 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 Z# L, g* \, T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" S8 P, V' I4 {$ k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' [" J* q4 z( C) ^( k1 H) ]; ]7 O- U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% k& s( n& a/ w* b& j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& _# l3 e% D; C: Q$ \3 ?4 U3 ^# C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ r+ z- s: Z" n9 W8 d: K- [; u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 s  [2 _6 [/ j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" `# B( f; K' A, x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& A5 U' V* e% N* N3 `$ t$ M% F# t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. q/ N5 R, N9 `( Q6 q$ c/ q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ?5 o9 W( |6 r. O+ s: Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 X9 u" J3 _6 c; e* _7 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 d7 ~7 n, Y* y# \+ y7 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% X6 E; ]2 q" q4 m: ?  q1 w. {( V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 G! i7 v" l7 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ h% i' h& x; d7 W  |  V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ]$ {3 o; E2 V! w( U6 T7 h' k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, F0 f. }" a/ {7 s9 W; }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; D, ]2 w) ]5 b. ^9 x  o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>