【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 v; m1 C8 ]4 ?- s7 C4 \7 K4 H歌词我附在后面。
+ i' \2 s" D% _7 \1 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 Z0 f7 g; d2 H3 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; [+ \# I5 ~* ~& wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ~3 T* \: {2 s6 w' B/ p) [You needn’t fear anything
; h: x( t8 {7 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, F  O$ E, O+ D. q" _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% L* G& M% B4 M, ]* v# INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, J  e* `. O$ q6 g# p0 x# UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; X$ o  K  |  v. c# ~I’m still filled with fear
' \& J# n8 W2 X5 ^, A% sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 q1 P( p- L6 p7 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; x/ ~* j8 b: V. C9 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 m' i6 K8 P/ k: RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ L4 W5 i* d9 d' I0 e5 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" e! O9 J( ]1 O  |& o6 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# ]' r) J8 H) C/ \" k& r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ @. ~1 A! y6 i$ [" J9 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% R% c6 Q7 r5 t; ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ]4 A- j' L! G  }% M& F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 w9 a2 g' P- K7 \5 e( |. f& `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ P4 O7 {% _/ U# N. \; _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |% ^: D0 N# F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) @# D/ b% i+ b! I; e! j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ F1 n! j" o3 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 T. p. {6 _, \  x3 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  k5 o/ [- q, r3 I" W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- R5 G5 g1 h4 l& d, B7 n) n2 q2 o" R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 ^2 g  D3 ?5 T# R" R  @! |8 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ a( @! c4 s) ], M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 Z" O$ b: F# V  I, f9 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- T! y" l4 ^* [! n* T* `7 r7 e" q# ?- v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: W! N* T- D) Z! B  w+ ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 T- g4 ?1 ^4 ?/ K9 Z4 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. D1 M/ L5 c. b* o5 w/ n2 a" A4 R9 p8 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, @1 i$ z1 N0 v+ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 n; |& W' p! c; T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ T3 h9 V- t7 U, h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( M' o0 }# [- G: c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* ~7 k# @# Q% b& H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* Q% g) K) ^( s3 F, U, ?6 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( k2 D1 ^1 D$ F+ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 @+ O, g; h3 [- n! U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 A; [- ~* r2 Q/ Q! F& }9 I9 f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ d2 s- u0 y4 [1 B8 q. M: B, e我请你剖开它

# |' I5 f4 V2 k  A, `$ b: T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>