【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 |" t3 t3 \5 S- Z8 I; d: [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ p6 i6 s: l6 CWith the moon kissing it every night
5 [4 o3 Q6 K% \/ i( a. H" P; u7 U1 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. p  J3 L; a( q3 Q5 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- e$ L: d3 o' {; yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 O7 n2 D. k1 q' f& {/ _- p. [! ^  BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  b$ A% q$ j" s" K( ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% z) V0 m  \; F$ m; T  JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. H3 a1 Z7 R1 ~) w$ S$ }: M6 rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' X6 ?; j. q! ]7 L8 i2 M& mWith such a tongue as yours,
  z7 z6 Z( @7 ~  b! y6 `" v2 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) L% r' m  p, f  v8 @1 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. s& h7 p4 T6 F9 K* O6 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: r& }8 V' \/ a8 [6 y- m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  x3 }5 ^4 K& h- {, W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ]' E6 G+ G* I9 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ v0 H  h  y* r7 E% n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' \0 Q$ S7 X  N+ l* o  E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 M# X# c+ x& e0 G6 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ q( b+ j% U# o2 b& J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& f/ k( s9 @/ Y, E. g/ @5 p, i0 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; q; C: Y: \) C, T0 a% c" h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 o2 ]+ q5 k/ N, q$ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 y6 w: z0 z4 _9 h% G! z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& U) L8 {: ^  m  @3 M. {- \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- r# Y+ D+ e( i8 s  r& O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' P7 b- J4 M1 g. Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 o! `4 S; w! H" E- F% n& Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& V0 K8 F! m' N4 R% R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. d  }) g2 K3 z3 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. E* L5 L+ q; _3 u% u! ]# A- y, q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ H. o8 n3 z4 V, X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& j' s3 d: a& I) j9 q) T6 u5 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& ^8 ?# d7 d4 j# q6 O7 D. h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  e8 ]) d& {( m7 q6 Y0 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q+ t: \0 ]2 F! z. h, ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- Z/ J' \/ w6 L3 t5 y) g& l/ c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 \! x9 r/ Z) _4 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>