【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" S" `# q) }& xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 }9 r& X- R' g3 J+ l; lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% R6 W! ~9 ~. BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  @3 ?5 t6 ~! @4 s; T6 r0 a, J- C- Z: ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* {% q4 f9 R, Y; M5 e7 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! x. m# S9 m/ VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' A) v9 Z" ]6 `# Z: D, u/ q' K: `. dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 |) W: o, }+ H# k' {I really want to know just how much you love me
: _% g" V+ w+ ]( |I love you I love you with all my heart
( `; Q: E% }+ J* I; c1 INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; U. [. ^, i$ l- IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% D, e* r: A" \+ wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" i7 D1 s4 }9 k+ j/ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: z+ L) C1 l! w2 r! ]2 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: Q. G) v5 j! l5 j9 K0 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; F1 B1 n* i$ R$ U2 j" b/ r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 C. R4 A- u' o8 H8 I: W8 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 T& l# r8 F" u  m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 O5 }" ]% `2 n; N: B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  H; {( B  J; z. X" _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) o, R6 |/ v1 b- j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 X3 n$ f" d8 u% d3 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 V8 i, |5 M" a* N, `0 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 O  }7 o' g, }( d$ v5 b+ R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 H) ^$ J3 u# ^( k- \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* o6 [. q- B+ G- U2 p( r( O. G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 J% T! K  m" P8 F) H' u4 i% i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* j$ r* _7 ^1 r* J4 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 X" G, l5 G& p; f7 l1 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: K( A1 x4 ~$ h) \7 ~) O  `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, ?5 y9 q4 `6 t6 f& K" s) ]# i. {0 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 K+ o. S. r* p4 y  w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' N& p  N+ A; F4 z+ u/ e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 r) N6 k1 T) O2 o9 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 C6 D4 G9 K) L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" t6 L+ Y" t- u8 i6 p/ ~+ v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. X! X. _2 S# B& Q! ~! l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ }7 u" b! n& u! C& r/ ~; M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 K5 ?' J0 X$ S% i; m/ D! S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& H3 k, m5 T5 d  M4 ?2 `* ]0 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( z7 V$ `6 @/ ~* K" \) w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. A8 o. S. p$ o* F# C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. R: Z& o$ v0 c  j, J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! \* n- v0 i8 {: j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; x5 V: Q6 h- [* ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>