【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 b2 o; S4 f" A$ G  y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 F  j' K9 N% G8 P' M) B8 f  LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% Z! x6 h8 ?, R% jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& n( a( T6 ^3 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 |9 ^8 D: N! d, s0 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  E' [- X) j3 h# IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  a4 a4 a; f; Q# O7 C$ I5 tI love you I love you with all my heart
' J4 a: e6 @" o- o, ?# Q% b* u2 xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% e7 \8 l2 p) w0 u0 ~4 vI want so much to see inside your heart
% D  s7 j) z' uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- v& H) T+ b6 T' R: c! u7 |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, C+ r- w8 j. g6 S3 M2 r& qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 z/ J$ l8 ?, ]( T) r. [% OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 O$ v: H- H5 c/ n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 t4 l# w  `* [; \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- C1 Q$ K. A' N9 B! j( V8 j& G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- A1 A4 ^; X  a4 i$ d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! E4 }, I4 X$ \  g9 @, _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ~# k3 z- h5 y2 Y( F- P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 {- M% y# E8 A- b! m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ M: F! v* x- [. f5 s4 X4 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  x6 E& ~* i! b* a4 f! ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, D  V7 j, V' c! a( u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% f. J' V" }5 ~/ `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ ?, l( B3 J% [$ g7 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( L. X; a$ U2 ~9 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" K! |8 _, v: v2 a( v  M, H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 E2 B- J7 f  c! ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ `6 w2 S1 O  ^+ L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 t/ G1 o( C" }, ]7 {; x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% l+ e9 K: {6 m6 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 h( B4 M; V9 T5 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  X5 T: J0 Y5 `0 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' w3 V9 n) B4 {9 ~& [) z# ?- D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. X; D! p8 l0 A* U. O/ s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; p: T, Z+ R" ]" N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 C0 G- n; r9 \- d5 X1 i2 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 m$ X+ z8 }0 E$ r' B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 M; C! i. F( q: F7 m* J, B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 N6 t8 i5 c" c! f  ]' M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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+ e! }+ B6 X/ ~* e( j% U  G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ?0 ^8 b& o- ~6 O9 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>