【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" v2 o$ W7 {$ ^8 f- W# N, LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 O2 E; b. d# o1 E1 G, nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 y. Z5 }$ T0 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* Y8 V5 M2 s# c- R7 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& z1 c! C7 V6 h( F- {; I8 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, {, A" v0 f. e! RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! V; l& G* c0 lI love you I love you with all my heart
1 ^$ W! v- }; c3 [' b" p! uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 W/ f1 w- K7 g1 |* LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* k8 H( _% C, \1 I* c9 xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; A2 v& R# c! n, s3 r. B* f- [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' H8 x+ i' a8 Q; h1 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 M7 v6 w% d+ z6 W+ X8 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' [; E- o3 _  q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! g1 q* R8 d7 |% Z7 D, C6 J) s# q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Q- U6 J& k$ z. M: \( n3 n0 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. O9 D1 C9 `0 G) M# i9 V1 N; o8 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- r& n5 I; [. }& X: D$ _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 R( \, M2 B( ]6 `- @+ `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 K  W6 Q: T1 Z9 z6 v( }7 A5 K- {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 k5 ~1 c8 S. I8 |6 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 x( Z) A' J$ T  V8 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ P3 ^8 j! N1 U! b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 H# s5 }" \. {5 \9 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ x) [) Y5 z6 Y! B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' C+ H6 T7 P8 l" j- Y. W  s- Z9 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ?+ p1 z$ G: {/ _5 h( z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) M. o2 ^5 Z6 o" J3 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. R% h5 j3 D& L5 ?$ n# a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ Y/ d. n) i' P% u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% n, G4 K9 G4 L8 X% x  b# g5 d: D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ], V; A4 K6 m( p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, [# @$ }# `3 Z1 f4 O. t) B( Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, |9 S" ~# [1 y0 Y) O# _/ V: E1 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" O. C! x% O& R: X0 ?8 G+ v& |& ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* m9 d$ O$ ]* O' A* |" A! \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, T' S' F9 ~  d8 d! k  O+ ~  c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 W8 a* K% }, v/ E+ S0 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 E. f* |+ z2 q( _6 [7 s' E# L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, _8 _* K, {' V, S8 r- X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 d6 k8 O) [8 p8 D5 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 f5 C2 }! k6 ~- r* |+ o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 q1 b9 z8 n9 j9 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! r/ W; m2 x- n  c, L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, @9 N! V) U7 |7 X! O. C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. F) c6 g8 _9 e/ E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ c& D2 Y& a( ?4 U0 e# J  b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 g8 V4 d+ R4 Y0 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ E" W$ O& ~( q: k5 w我请你剖开它
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  Y/ O4 @0 |) c: h' c; ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>