【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 F9 p) X3 E% N' |! V# q) F  dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 G$ z8 T( y: h2 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ?* q- C9 S6 A, D+ VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. o0 V; X* C1 }  H4 y8 l5 s9 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 f# p# @" ?9 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* t8 V& z- V# e2 W, pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 x' x% f9 _. [* h6 \* D; zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' T* }. V0 Z  ~5 N- N. r% G# [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: M5 y6 r) N4 {( wI’m still filled with fear
' }( i6 |/ q& p- c7 C& F' N; MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 f) I6 L7 _) p3 x, w) NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 ^! h6 M) O9 d+ qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 i0 U: U$ H  y1 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 D" t4 k* Q3 c! o0 I! v6 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; R% ]& Y( K; t& X2 E1 Q: b  l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 I. K; B$ K# K4 a! j# b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  `. _  @6 D1 x5 z( S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 F2 Q5 y/ c) [+ m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) I2 M* }3 G( A3 L" E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- i& K7 b! f9 G3 |, A- J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" j! k% p3 B6 e) k8 _9 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" l+ f: i( ^6 c( @1 [* }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 D1 I  x5 Q3 z+ b8 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 a; A4 S1 F# M" J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 B, F0 }/ n0 [( _% [+ F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 R) q: m. r3 i. P- N# h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( A! _9 i  H8 l* z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 h% _& r# B8 m2 A1 _8 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* Y- X- X' B2 q1 h/ L6 F! M! H, B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' [% d; z  {0 u5 P$ Y9 N- E8 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% K* a& _1 f3 S6 D; j8 V, V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, R% {6 L1 c/ n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 O& G( I  m7 V: t1 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 d' M6 Q# V* w! U, Y/ {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  Y. s' C: b: k9 \& v: ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 v( p! ~# J1 D$ N6 I: n5 Q& K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ w  y1 s/ K3 V, W  a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- P& h6 e4 T$ r- F: D% F7 S; q$ x1 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 t( a! N, G/ q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- K1 l5 k# b9 Y3 D, b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( i0 L2 `# @. @$ S$ m  {9 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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, i* f0 o" o* v, V* I. u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>