【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ W' _( N( J4 W; lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ I6 p2 j8 s" a* XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% i. R0 C6 p, lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, `$ C7 q/ |" e2 cYou needn’t fear anything
5 a0 S- G! q7 {4 g5 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 _' N/ @% u7 Y0 E# X6 REvery other word you utter is love
3 t& i+ }; s, F& B, n# ~, i5 oI really want to know just how much you love me
- v5 [( a. l1 q& H, `) ^2 \+ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
# H: u. Y6 j3 ?) W6 c! i! H, hNothing can compare to my love
: u( Z2 q$ m7 B5 B2 `# VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) K9 M1 S  }9 {% h+ MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ Z! w2 n, E. I7 y! rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; H) p7 ?6 g- w: L2 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 z' O, y+ y- f6 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 U1 J7 J+ a, q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: B& f0 ], \% a+ Z2 n. g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" B+ D0 b& z& Z& Y  I6 d" i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ O8 w+ g- H( B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! Q- E! {: i  T, R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ J1 G# E" D  x9 U5 w& X0 h# A8 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# E3 t* h# @1 x% G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ P0 S3 m5 o3 ~& }: K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ H4 Y0 W  r! r$ U+ E6 d. x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 o: Q2 f  R% L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, X$ g0 Y; {5 ~0 g) X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 W: n* M& P9 f% m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 W2 W3 `& K& w* m* ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  e& W- C6 |$ i8 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, }5 i3 Y$ f0 B, R  i+ u; X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* @# f8 t* F( X5 A, ~) U' n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) v$ R+ p6 j& u0 [2 c! L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) L& h! |! D8 r- p. G- ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" T0 y# E6 Q* t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 G5 N6 q; B4 F  S+ E' c- q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# b, S% m0 R0 B( [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% w% f: Z$ g2 ?/ S0 p% h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 }2 j, _$ x8 s& w$ j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 T, p; z- N$ {7 y3 {3 i* h, }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ ~- t2 n) j. {: f3 o& r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 R: ~# T8 b! ?5 |* z9 w+ T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; C; \7 e$ t/ L! j4 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ E* F1 l4 I3 I9 {1 i5 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 O8 @$ E4 `2 b' K" _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! R; j$ M' ]8 x) Z" b$ X. R/ x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, h; O) Y+ Q! |- \% \6 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 F3 N9 z* c2 Z我请你剖开它
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7 p% V3 `8 }  l7 ^& v! r% u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>