【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ M9 c3 c' @, g3 G9 U- r, aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 N  A% f$ b: Y5 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 V: E5 }4 S2 F# J3 X! B% ~8 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ G! {4 n! W5 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 G1 ?/ @; H! w2 @9 TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 A6 y. Z1 o; t' v1 f2 l% XNothing can compare to my love
% r# U3 T' a8 F, }; n9 l: uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; m1 f( M( K3 w: R# ^' `' HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 E. T4 a; @- \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% X$ h8 i3 Z- q) P8 [/ GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( U' n- J( c3 v6 c$ W9 HI regret not dying
6 V4 ~* H! }6 Q) \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 K: q7 K! b6 [! ]" mWith such a tongue as yours,
! `& x3 p4 J; k: k+ mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 q8 D$ M2 O2 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& |+ M$ f6 [2 h- G) w9 [# s. R; o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; P! F5 [( n' y' d; D$ p/ N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 r7 b8 i7 A0 _$ D! v+ U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& G' ~+ h/ i# T( ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 k( H+ u7 T; J6 D( D7 ~) _9 d5 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 t, f4 W  V; Z- I9 @; t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" e# ~2 P0 N# Z/ S* D1 T+ _5 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ^- J- z  A7 D, |! i' \$ |6 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( W& p& V& _7 ^) t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, I8 d& v" n7 X: Z0 d, I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ k' s$ A! O7 B* i- i2 x8 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( t4 l1 k4 l" E* f0 f6 b" D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; [9 Z8 M$ H4 J1 B: ~5 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. T' J2 f/ v2 K  D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' X- ~' s* x% k: E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- M* y2 M7 E5 O# `4 L% X  i  M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: M% X2 z- M" I. c+ k+ ?1 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, W* {. G6 |$ _* A+ d/ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) {9 ^' }; w" ]5 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
& `* u9 R5 }9 c: ?' c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 t1 |8 V/ k+ ~6 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 e* L. n; ^+ r8 @6 J) C& U8 q. j8 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ~) ?* q( c* c" f: ^+ N1 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 n6 m1 u* T: T4 H0 }/ [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 l& |2 m* K, Y8 _. m2 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>