【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* E  `  [! `6 t% a7 N( N* PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( x, t; V8 z& E/ Q* C7 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 K6 h2 y9 Q+ TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 M! D; B8 R  k  p" P6 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 P1 W) Q; Y. J6 q6 Z9 c. pSeeing the sky content with its love
1 U% C) I5 W' w, }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) y8 J! Z" Y/ \/ N* ?  K: B5 f+ NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ]& [& Z' W7 ^5 }* b  bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 F6 [4 H1 O' l, U  C" AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 N# G5 v2 M; D4 A2 U' o0 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! N8 L9 @" F- B. J7 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 w6 o, E8 I2 L# Y! ?* b1 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- p2 M+ Z& Y/ |* V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: a* P# C& H% z- g' l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ a% g* h' l  O! ~! t! J! K" g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) O2 u+ g& b- a4 l; T! Y$ ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 t( u" S" m9 ~0 x: Z' }. E# Y% Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ W+ ]4 s7 X! R3 V* V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 y) l' l6 v4 k" Q, t3 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 w$ W2 [" _0 s$ y4 ?+ z% e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 r6 x' V: V/ Z4 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
/ j/ H/ X2 }9 X! {! w; x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 i7 O6 k* K' ]* c- K! \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 S( \8 `- n9 E! K" q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- @! g+ L7 x; Z# |$ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 ]: L" s9 z$ t% Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 Q6 j) {. T0 r3 x9 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: W$ E( H$ }* k0 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 S& V0 H/ ?" h. E& X5 @$ j) M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& q/ f+ c7 N" d5 @$ ]; q) h& a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% S  d( O$ _6 J. h3 L- X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  ]# K: Z& J; g" f! n& C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ @6 ~' A7 N( B% q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# Q+ o0 f( Z0 k) k$ ^# y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  z- ~9 O7 S+ v; a" G$ _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ c' ]: C; g/ W0 g4 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  S1 M( U% [# f+ u  m/ r* P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! e# V4 N! }6 u% k& t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ O) @8 Q( z% w3 T' O$ @! }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 d% f! d) ]! s# x: S2 H- U7 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% B. f- \: ^! y( R2 t5 V0 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) {) b) S" \" X# G0 q7 {1 D; B( m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# U  K6 ~/ t4 n5 j: F. f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( P& `6 |8 x% \# v' b我请你剖开它

2 z* q& w0 S6 L3 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>