【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 e+ c$ w; v  zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 @# [- t2 V3 @, @3 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 P: r7 c9 V7 C& Y/ P% rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# _( O/ ~4 C& K3 ?4 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
" O3 {' S2 d: ]With the moon kissing it every night
+ E5 H# q' B) g- P" zSeeing the sky content with its love
6 z9 r' M+ V& c& PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 j0 ~" c7 k" c3 D2 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 d8 x5 O+ k$ K! QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- @$ `: k9 H! ?6 V) XI love you I love you with all my heart
5 Z. C0 _6 \$ x, e3 z. I% vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 R0 `: P' J1 Y3 {# e6 }1 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 C( K% [9 D# D/ ~# ?: `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: f, d& S# O' M0 Y% U6 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, h9 i1 b$ ]' N+ c# v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" f3 Y+ [0 w1 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 {/ h8 M3 A$ f: ~, K$ v* p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 v+ V- O/ X& z  L  ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m1 g+ @5 k' _  W- s- f! R) m: U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  e$ U1 F8 s" W( e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 _# K, U! n' [* _- H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ n% i6 D- f) W9 A: d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ]0 ~, o" Z& `; v<P>你无需担心</P>
: w' Q5 j( U$ f& P0 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' K/ {9 Z3 v: v3 c- k& K/ `* h) v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* d9 s& f& w; ?. ~- o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* T" |# g+ e' V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 c* ^8 ?2 G' l8 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 _7 X3 @6 O/ S: g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 N4 Q4 R3 c9 `; z! ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 G( S& p$ J3 y9 D  w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; }4 G- Z  i# k8 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( `- b9 ^6 s0 \/ T6 o) d7 `! k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 h" w( e0 w# Q% ?' i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 X: `/ o. q+ }' K) ~  f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. t3 s( c2 c9 r4 H$ n- O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! m8 A. j- {. w4 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- o4 _! k+ _$ t) N9 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% L& o8 ^1 M" Z, G0 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. U" T' u% y# {9 `2 N' |% I6 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 D  l  ^. A3 e; \! I! E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. a# ~  E$ E/ f8 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ R) c) W( l& ~" _- K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
- X1 d0 M9 e7 y% g% s1 H
# u+ t: c$ L4 s! J# p$ v' G8 ^我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 c2 D9 y* d2 O& s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>