【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* e; W) Z6 _6 ]( x! Q. vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( v* x( X6 C/ F, N( PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ |9 ]7 b5 X2 g6 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 L- t; C# x& I' zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* c% l* I. g* R; S/ H$ |9 E, |( MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' {" A/ f: K3 X+ M  [/ h" {6 L# tI really want to know just how much you love me
* O% M* ]/ H) V' P# wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 ?" T) g8 f! f1 [& ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ P4 h) t7 U/ ^$ N; dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 t% D" Z3 f3 O  U3 S- E3 z/ R1 E! t) dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' o1 B4 F4 [4 o6 B# I4 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' t% `# s2 H: T2 u* KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 F- _0 q7 l5 _: L7 Q/ P+ tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 \; q8 a$ W" o. h  n- Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% b# j5 f! H7 @( R2 t: J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& w& E. O' u. Y' i; x  y% A$ ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; _. `* [& R' E; F. x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ b" o1 n0 |& u" b0 |* l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 _9 w9 Y4 q# v- f0 s) r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* d  ~$ i4 ]. C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Q7 ~2 u1 l; i. O! `  T7 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 V" z/ D4 @! f: M+ `6 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! t6 L  W- C3 @5 N/ l0 G9 r# N" b, N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ F: [$ r7 Y5 H6 G9 W3 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ U6 e. _! n, P$ A0 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ^: c2 O$ L  }* d( I/ r. k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) f2 n8 k9 u: p4 T! s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 c1 J, O" ~, f. m4 J# S5 a, Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ s3 u+ t0 e; g# b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% G9 B$ B' p3 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 t" q2 P4 a% p, B3 l' z1 [+ A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ v; Y7 X$ X% M; S4 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: K0 q0 z2 H- l( [$ O8 c9 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! g7 U$ c- C* J" x- z% T. E9 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ o8 ?$ S! ?0 W. s- l& G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 K% g. X1 k+ K5 j  u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ T7 ^. o' `) ^3 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ G/ l! r- t) h- ^+ Y8 }- o4 u% K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- u: S+ _2 P' Z6 {7 ]( o  }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; `, ]" }" N8 h# J' m. M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! n# N+ J$ e6 x9 [% ]  W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& L. m7 J! a# Q, X% ?5 r3 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% s; q! J) D# {; ^* I% t  r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. C1 f$ W3 F9 m; \5 `2 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 ?: Y! @1 Q8 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" d8 ]" S$ E0 G- x4 z! @0 j$ R6 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 B' T# P3 I" n9 z! u我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>