【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( h$ ]0 n# F  L  h; f  a/ u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% n0 b' ~1 O9 Q# Y* N! SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& c$ m3 w8 J, c5 Q* eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" b1 M: ]" ]' s; o2 ^( e& \6 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 r/ k% ?% b7 ^0 I& S, dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( q. p+ y! X3 uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( X. v/ T: u% g( u7 oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 W& z+ f( `$ Y  X" S; b5 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" L& G! n2 m5 n5 @* V9 B7 MI’m still filled with fear
6 `1 n$ |8 X) m1 H1 Y1 C; mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' i3 ^/ L' w8 r' A4 VI regret not dying
; {8 u1 h, L  PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 Z  }: j& R) }0 E# }* hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 x$ v2 l! Q- s! P! g& z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 u) X( H- H2 X4 ^) v+ u; t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 r5 X2 T' P$ s1 ?( G( N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* X. d% o4 `9 @. t6 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 D5 Y% B) P- x9 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; n0 ~* ^5 d  k' z3 L( z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 K5 F: S6 O4 m1 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ ?8 H' e" |8 ^. a9 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ~; _" ]* S  [* b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ u  v, N+ a0 d# w& W5 ]# I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, Z& P  u# }1 x6 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) U1 b# v8 [6 U) y/ M$ _. Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& h$ E* M. Y) b2 {1 ]2 G9 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& |1 @  a% f% U" B& e# R& ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& L; R. [7 |* f1 e: q% `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 P& n+ _* _8 U& M% N6 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" m4 s: e9 V; [/ C6 P$ G  f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 ^2 y3 L7 v* N* X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 _7 m: v1 j' ?4 U/ B2 A4 ]# w% U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. U. q$ |5 J1 S6 N( z& f6 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 X/ w! h1 V) }  Z* _8 m1 G" v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 L+ V; Y, u+ U& d# l9 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 n  i% H# r# F4 d8 t* E0 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. [' t; Q4 F: K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! Y! E5 n+ C. e$ m/ J. |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 |6 B0 v$ q& t7 J9 F* {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ J5 H" B( O3 F+ G我请你剖开它

) x  _6 J( T! g" }( N0 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ d3 t& Y5 o  w  A5 \3 [- M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>