【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# h4 G% I+ _$ ]# B9 Y$ @  CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* H1 }: C8 G) ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
* Y3 I2 A( i; a! t- c  WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 M* U6 X# s% O$ k* k8 ^2 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 e5 L) C+ s8 c3 h, GSeeing the sky content with its love
* H& B0 N) T& l/ ~- f* T' IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ A7 V& T  G) i2 v% Y3 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 l; k2 c5 F2 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. Q1 d/ S( G  z5 @, iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( ^$ R4 l# {  h, w+ l& {# D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ Z' f0 [% U; L! ^; G- `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 |3 e, V7 p' }) _! K6 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Y6 Q/ W4 N( P/ d2 t3 N9 b  R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 G4 t6 |  z. r' j4 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 l/ q4 T% u: C0 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 W: B9 T; q2 x6 B# L# a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  V: u* Y/ S' o, E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. R+ f: A7 p# s/ }1 W# I  K1 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! I2 E( B& Z4 n" j; a; c7 \8 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  g5 s- y0 }4 J+ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" g( x$ b% O4 L8 e" J/ z* h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ]3 n& q7 {) O) V# P) y& r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- f3 y% U6 P( u" U6 v! \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( D4 w6 {; u$ y4 r. E0 Q  ^; f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ^* ]" g3 y2 I5 i' {. V, Y, ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  @7 h! ~8 R& p/ Q5 g1 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ {& Y' Q' x' G& g: {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& i  ~( n/ ?9 |5 t$ u' r5 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 ?' O4 J3 ~/ c! @* z( K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: Z6 J2 ], ~- z9 ~9 F1 [( Y/ k<P>I regret not dying</P>
" }& G/ j2 a  C2 }( _6 T$ E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 g5 O9 E+ @! F" `, i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 T. W; j" m4 ~* L; B- [4 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 d, Y* u, r8 L! O8 N) J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 T! ?7 o2 Z1 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- w% n( K: p" }3 \. t% W8 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( u2 T9 z3 Y: ^$ ~# J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>