【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 j2 n6 v0 H' b& t* y: f0 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ N; L  F' j1 `2 P* n+ Y: EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 f7 r  D( ~8 E& h( J2 PYou needn’t fear anything
8 k2 s, G+ P4 I8 u9 Q. `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ S' C4 h* b  q3 ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  c" \# `5 h! ^: i0 v+ ?1 XNothing can compare to my love
1 O3 X# H, T, l; O+ {) FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 d" |6 {9 ?. A4 w% VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' @, u. X. ?: p4 Q( ?- B2 }7 n% @8 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% {4 I4 p7 J7 i7 {1 E( S0 q$ kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 F2 h3 S0 P& d; q4 D# Z0 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; e( E$ A; _; N6 ?1 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( i! |. g: ]0 G# a8 t: z7 y( c: R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 f+ V3 H- s3 p4 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 U0 {! t& V+ P" v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ]7 O  c# R3 a  n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( l' Q: n6 y. r2 K* K8 y& P" g, W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. o. S8 n4 j& Y9 ]/ u. [& J& r( E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. @4 R, r! F4 J1 r; }6 u, F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- Z+ s1 G, h7 _9 {8 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: D! v6 |2 y0 o8 u3 V( v1 [& |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& B, E1 m' h6 ?6 Q4 i$ `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 W, y5 {+ A" o2 W8 L& h; I0 W7 @7 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: j# K6 ]) A& s5 D8 C& W- @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( H0 U- F% ]* v2 f: B+ T. V( x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# C1 L+ W3 L; p1 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 B8 ~; `9 i: c. ?( T9 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& @4 D: y* `5 }6 [8 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) s1 r4 b5 c* I9 E$ W, V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 \; f' o- P0 }; v& k8 c' l- k8 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# o- r. A. @) D! H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; F9 l% G2 a0 |7 c" \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 j- c& b5 s; ?  H* S' j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 x5 z5 h8 H4 T, U! }0 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% v6 r+ J$ b4 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: {/ X7 W1 N2 U  C  w' p( C( d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ w& p! v- @' a. q3 u' r) i! p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 I8 i' v  F# l我请你剖开它
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$ O1 d$ B2 {+ k& l6 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>