【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& R4 i. T9 A, z# DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' S5 u4 y' j! U: i/ ?8 y! U7 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( Z' r) U3 T3 x2 y, R+ k) fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 ~+ I; b# U  ]9 k4 l3 tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) ?- `9 C8 ^6 ]  f. N  FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; G8 X6 t' E  lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 w1 h7 O. c7 o/ O/ KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 p4 N9 W; A2 L# F: EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ t4 Y/ q2 q6 _' u! S  [+ gI want so much to see inside your heart
9 c* K3 L0 V+ ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; P. K5 u+ Q) n5 K' ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* m6 |+ V8 M5 [( N9 G4 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* R( C% C6 f) d9 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 `/ f& i+ Q: C+ @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 d. K2 e9 B: D+ L6 I9 _& T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! {0 H, b% c( L" L6 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& p% H, Y) r2 [6 L6 |; W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Z2 T3 R% u8 l0 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 A" N7 C9 c9 W2 v  r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 Z: i8 m/ D8 p' n8 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 V3 V* e( h# g- i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ y; x# X* }# b! ~% o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" Z: I$ N$ B" @) }) M0 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ?% ~+ z( s$ V4 m- s0 f% f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; e5 f! ^& I' @9 s3 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 a% u# R2 S% X# i0 a2 ~  H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  s  _" ^. R6 W& N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% U  I2 a. A" @) j- N( e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ ?+ [- L( x8 l. S" j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ~* H  w4 `' p+ P3 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ f7 z2 D1 Y% i2 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 a1 j" j: ?5 j" y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, m9 B5 ]7 @4 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 K1 j# @- n3 [& T5 Y. F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; y& P  J+ P+ I) q/ r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' l# n2 {2 {- ]9 h2 w1 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! r% o* z  t" z( ]0 w3 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 T/ Y# H& Y- t2 ^" X! H2 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ P: y+ G; j9 W* r4 j( r9 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ M2 k2 f% z8 d% _' S2 S我请你剖开它

; P- c! v5 x" | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>