【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 P8 P* Y. j6 g6 a$ C7 B( i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 M" O7 Q2 R+ Y/ v' f' o6 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( L  z* \' ?8 H: bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ R0 Z: ~! O$ e; nThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ a) F) k: j' z, M0 x+ U7 N! yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) s0 p; c0 i3 y# L! D# R5 B) ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 O, d. @+ N8 j' |3 _I love you I love you with all my heart
6 ^9 _4 `/ @6 y5 d# @Nothing can compare to my love
$ M& J) w. @" ]+ y  X( f, [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) r  L8 H4 G6 E& e' f2 }+ eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 B; v- ?9 l1 B' O# XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# _' L* E( h& w; c* bI’m still filled with fear
% V' ?5 c: V; }, `- |/ K' pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* W% O9 Q- H( Y. YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) b8 \# f2 ^- d, ]' C0 t; WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* D$ Y) o- e; S+ A; ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' m: \3 f3 x, m0 Y* p  n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 C) A, j, q) a" s) i1 ^' u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! M8 F2 R$ f$ G$ V5 `5 q$ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& c! t8 B" W8 q, y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' z, M+ j" v# I7 U7 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 E8 A. |5 M; k+ j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  J6 I- L/ [; k! }: s$ I# Y* w: J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ f$ Q3 x2 h- v+ y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  n) S+ C5 K+ }; [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ ~. V7 x# u2 \! }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 {. e1 ~2 C" o; E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 H- \+ ?- D$ ~/ ]' y  n: f4 X: ?' P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- m1 |7 \0 {( a7 N9 N7 A7 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 N: m1 x$ |; [! F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 j2 c8 ?# |' o% J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: t* D/ K$ P& T9 D: R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 }& l2 j7 K! o7 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, p9 R5 Y1 P7 v: \2 }6 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 P% ]" w7 u& q. x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  j; h8 a' K, N  q; a5 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ x8 r: V, S* q6 ^- O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- z' k' @! f4 e  q* N& F0 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ q  d+ H: @% y0 H& r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' p+ B# q" d2 P7 b; W2 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 M9 Q6 }3 ^, R; u$ t我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>