【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 J0 I  q: ^0 w: I4 H2 [The sky is happy down to its soul
  F7 t* H9 N9 ?, f. D& ^4 `5 U; x+ mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, ~8 A# j5 ?8 e% c- ~7 Q7 P! b8 B6 K' jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ s3 B, c' r2 M" u, ^I really want to know just how much you love me
" {" [4 ~- ]! C, Q* q# c% _+ y  RI love you I love you with all my heart
8 @( h4 @6 W, L6 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ J% F( s1 F% l: ]9 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; p. j; |2 ]& s9 Q; R. @- xI regret not dying
# F) L0 q1 Y; o0 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# u; v) X3 V' d1 O5 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! A' s0 R8 G9 H4 j, C: i* y# zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 t( X% ]$ O3 n  y9 [! _1 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& [: w9 X$ b: E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, X8 o3 ?* ?5 q1 J7 A5 t9 y. O' A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ s3 p! ^( t( Y: T% V$ P" u  U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- W4 V2 h- _6 B& J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 g9 b* o! ^+ ?# n0 `& u& A( K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% i+ h+ g6 C3 g% e) ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 p6 V" T8 b' ~0 g* K. Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, w6 y3 ^% Y) N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( k  _1 a8 Q+ J: @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. X6 _1 _) K3 G4 M6 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  ~8 g# G8 L2 t, @) a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; G; S( }4 k8 A. ]' _* |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 T! h5 s8 r# q. i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: ?6 F3 A: x' o7 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 a+ R1 }5 J- E8 I5 F& _5 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! g  s$ \. _$ I& O8 Z. B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# V) `0 `+ O* L" L0 a; K% i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- }6 [/ S( ]: W" L7 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' D6 z0 f8 F8 q3 l, q! ?2 p& q<P>I regret not dying</P>
; C2 _) l( M0 l/ i2 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 T9 ^6 z; [& O2 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ X  Z9 e; W7 R" J+ |  ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 t& f! L- d. Q' B) v/ s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( T  [" h9 W4 T  n. Q8 X1 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: v6 b. l$ S: l$ @( Q1 }+ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 l$ \" P& P1 d* j4 W+ ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 u3 |' r; V4 N3 h7 z: h8 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>