【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  B3 Z2 q) \* q8 ~  V. h* gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* N; w# q# R/ r" f; v+ v' N+ ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) k: p- p, ], G4 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- s3 o( V  i- z7 d" NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 V$ m2 G. X7 d4 ?5 K2 SYou needn’t fear anything
3 \: G% u' M! _) Z7 n" S3 a4 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) B% t! N2 E0 g. nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: U8 T: U( q5 I& @: W% \; ?Nothing can compare to my love
' ?) {# H! u3 qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 V. Z; `% |* W! B1 ~# GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, v  ], n) h+ G/ E3 t0 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- @6 w0 z9 L' @/ zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 N; e5 o1 e0 B' cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  R( d0 Q) d% S7 U' Z; R+ jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& G' T0 Q8 Z$ n: Z* F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 u, m! z; i( I2 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 X, \9 U' w, b1 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 j8 x/ q# P; u, F" @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) F$ g; s- I0 j' n$ \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 i9 j8 y% Z: N$ W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ h8 z, p( K8 O3 f1 H9 k+ h3 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 |# `& r$ j: q/ I; H7 u# r$ ?! O+ O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 t3 P" u( p' c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 f7 k- q5 i2 A% M( K3 \0 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 v5 g7 E. \+ {* R0 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 z  `5 H2 {$ f3 D4 |! B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 ?  d" \/ J2 H+ m: [# t0 h  d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 Z* R3 i6 c* I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) y* g3 [( o( W0 \/ J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% e' N: z5 O2 |& d9 F9 E; O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( E7 U1 i9 S/ e9 I5 u/ U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ {& [- X+ r/ ^4 Q3 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- i( n. \: x* U: z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' C9 X9 {/ \. Y/ ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ^% x& B1 Y9 |* {' U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ [( b! }& G% D8 [! d4 L) |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& x. S" i+ J! P' t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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+ l8 e0 j5 l9 [0 O, T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 j0 X0 W1 V' L8 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>