【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 r: ?3 p4 O" @/ s( f0 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' [& D  k* a# EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 x  U" Y4 e+ h7 D/ xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# |( g7 ~/ x( IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' i8 i) k" r% l$ p1 \4 o4 L2 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 D' u( t! c0 W! ]# T) qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- g6 m0 ]" D2 u. J: s* Y, ^  vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 ?& F! f3 g5 x6 ^" v. jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 ~3 n, p4 Y( {, \. [- t; d) ^$ o1 ^$ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' r9 B3 b" `$ i5 |* z- l% vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, y! w2 @3 }  |* PI regret not dying
8 j# R# S0 V! d9 {  I7 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& s, z, Y% C5 h. g$ uWith such a tongue as yours,
  Y- r7 d7 _: [& VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* e, r) P! m4 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ B4 `- G1 V" d( m% t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 w" w5 G" S1 `$ ^6 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ]! k9 H# P* L5 v4 {& y* x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 I( b& p/ w- X% [7 \% b2 u, X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* }' R. o4 M$ Z0 y) x' }$ _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 U( e3 S( P8 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* d# q5 B% E# M' H( s* Q8 M5 f0 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* v5 J. v* a5 I, ~+ R2 E1 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 M$ k/ f2 N# @. r$ C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 K5 }8 F/ o; z. [9 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 W& x9 I' b& S5 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ f& O' C4 C! s) V: d* M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 `" \! J. K3 r; O, V: `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( {3 F3 k  f! u& c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ^7 Q1 T  Z8 k1 i  R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 r, f/ t- E6 t7 r! A  t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: p8 {$ y: U2 d- C* g9 ?& a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 k) K; u: ~; Z  I2 R1 N8 b* h4 X) n# ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# u9 ~4 }8 z3 j0 I' k3 `. s& N1 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ s- l. ]% _, a& G. N5 G0 J% h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* V) x+ O  c" L8 l7 d+ ?/ G6 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 x6 u3 u2 e5 z% c# o- m/ D" o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& `* V; q/ w# }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ r" _$ o& b, n. q( b# {! F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 i& w: ^' c9 A1 a9 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; |- G6 T: i/ K, }4 P8 K$ J& p<P>I regret not dying</P>
) C1 r9 {4 W$ W3 J' L* R5 H9 ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 a) ~( B6 j& B1 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 o6 c/ D3 n. V: n3 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, X8 D- V) p8 Y; s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. r5 W6 a% d9 ~3 r/ y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ W' d: A' H' ]# }# q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 r) R# {/ c0 z4 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>