【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 c$ {) _+ B! w" S6 K  k2 d4 a. Z歌词我附在后面。
$ L# ?% u3 f  R' s& Y) oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* _1 V7 m. F4 u" V. m4 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 b: z2 R& y) w" w5 W3 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# |5 i( p' c8 h6 G) f5 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# [; ?& f5 o, \- u7 }! `% fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. b7 A! f6 P4 x1 U9 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ L4 U5 F$ q3 ]' dYou needn’t fear anything
7 v) ^3 h  T4 r0 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) e1 V6 E0 k$ K; _I really want to know just how much you love me
/ f+ J' a# ]4 _I love you I love you with all my heart
* `" S' K; w, h: K/ WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 s- j# Z; u( M5 A$ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 M% k; w, ]4 `( kI want so much to see inside your heart
/ v3 I+ l* @4 Z% k$ Z- X# i6 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& @# t" h0 L$ T( C3 G/ k3 V' O' J, F! DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 {6 a+ f6 \; W! ~: U  OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* |6 Y8 {5 l/ V5 u; {2 G  L+ [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( H2 h2 ~1 C8 k* Q1 y2 ^0 K3 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  Q; _6 Y) C; _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 I. B+ N2 G% r( c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* e$ e8 P0 O" z3 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. k8 T, I8 G# h- Q" X3 Z$ i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 Q% Y- r" A& [* i  h* }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ `4 W; V/ Y- T6 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' I& _  ?- i- I8 r# Q. |" m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( \; k0 }# M! j, p+ `* z* M( P' e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 L# u4 i# M' p& {5 t8 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ q4 s7 g3 L( t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 x! P  K9 ^* c( i( B; f- v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ `3 t& o$ i+ K8 ?+ g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 c" K! z7 X0 @+ T% r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 M! ^* i  G% i5 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 T% K9 m8 K1 U5 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# z6 s% u3 Z6 \3 i5 Q: j- C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 t. C3 j) y' N; \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. s- {6 y6 ]2 x+ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# n* h7 F! k- G6 s5 q, E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 @1 ?" s/ X7 ~( [" f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 C3 {# ?4 ?7 K. C6 w* t) X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* p) t/ v/ I/ v' Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* M9 D  t7 o+ |* A5 e7 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 W3 ^$ h: e- u" N( V( W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' @5 T4 Z% f* N, h& K" M' u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 j+ G& I8 d# n; a9 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 m1 ?0 ~) J; C. y+ k$ u& r/ q! v2 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 B4 n  R+ O; q4 |2 J- r. E; C1 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, {- x7 v5 P- }* C- p/ f; x: _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( {+ O, j9 ^2 }1 p* ?) i. \& n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 B0 x* s' p4 _3 Q, _$ Z0 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% x9 p$ Z. l+ ?6 d' s( P: V/ ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 E( E: @9 K. S" y* e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* f1 _- ^) Y5 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. q: u3 h) g6 n* p& A9 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ l/ c3 Q7 I% i4 v9 z. T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ y0 m+ o# _& c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>