【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! @8 D9 \7 Z: D1 E1 X. B6 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 W0 U9 s3 J) f; qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 ^( B+ Y6 c2 \8 {5 J  VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 j9 R& j& W, D  k6 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 r2 s% s* V7 [& D) w- h+ J- \5 ]0 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: ~# Y6 y# c# d7 oEvery other word you utter is love
* Q  I" b5 o" u4 I% O9 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- l! f2 g1 o4 T6 b' HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ ^( \! S6 m9 ~3 \) iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 P& [5 K, n2 `* a" Q+ yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& I- a  Z( Q$ r* j8 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! a' v, ]1 J3 B9 o! E. WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 n8 _* ]8 f. l! m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% y( c/ Q( N" f/ n/ Z$ U9 ]/ {, }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) ]  e) u- r8 a6 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 ^: ~8 b" ^# O3 I. X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 r: f/ K* t2 Z* X* P5 q) p- n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% ^1 n( b: N0 k% J3 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 G  A- b! q! \/ ]/ a; ~% o* }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ c7 M' E% @+ S( I1 n" I9 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- t; s# M! h6 C) t7 y& @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ G2 `& u  y0 v" O8 s, n) z: C* K* u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 o' _- v' T, W( P1 [% C' l1 D  y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 y3 U. H7 m( i! f" |! `% `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 h! }+ T9 N" a0 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ e1 Z1 u' {* U2 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 z0 ]6 u5 t/ J( u+ |' Q- x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% a+ B5 Q$ J# d1 W* b9 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 {& [+ P6 l/ H: p; A/ u; o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 q- ]) Y6 L6 y0 q1 o- c+ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( U7 I9 ]  n  i  i3 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& ^9 C) i* t7 y6 y! v  |  ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 ], h1 d( A( ]1 \0 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 k' c9 m  T: \0 u2 P2 L5 p" |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 E3 k. }7 ~6 N; ~/ E" I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ N4 O% N1 o3 h# U+ t4 K2 f  c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ z2 R. {+ k" i) V/ a  g) S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ]9 @: q9 D) q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( R( S( z& _9 O+ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" N1 k1 L* `) C  z8 A, c% T% D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ]* g8 c# U3 H1 ^; j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. T4 i( `3 W* E9 U6 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* w6 p; C& x4 I. r7 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% M- b- O( E6 q, d4 {% x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( r% }0 K+ @! m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 H+ t7 w7 D$ b( o2 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( _, i4 Q8 l: X' I; g3 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>