【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% V1 w  k9 S( pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; `5 j/ r" l* V9 @- s+ \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 V" q. w/ r! P/ k0 V- @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ q3 Q1 D/ z  w6 j# K) kThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ ?, X3 Z6 A+ S0 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# `. C# e$ D' g! C0 H) O- l9 N: QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- H1 \& j$ [. \: p/ {2 s/ tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ ]8 U* c9 J! ]5 m5 [' nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 N$ _& @( K. g: V7 T2 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* f* I- l6 k0 ?0 F* g  ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! E& T( O. R' r/ }+ pI regret not dying
1 Q, g7 `* j+ V: bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 G" i( d6 y, T, C1 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& k% v5 y" G  |, R  X. A1 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 {1 Q3 Z+ X! n# k/ E" r. Y! C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' Q& x& v, X1 M; }' c2 B+ m! D5 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ T  U$ E, b* u7 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, [" e+ K) X& J9 O% w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 p# w( d, @5 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& E: {2 [) o$ t) E% M: q/ h: \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 I: E& ?) t7 T. p: [7 z3 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( {7 U) N0 Z: Z5 x5 A7 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 c6 T0 B( r; X7 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 b2 G8 b) S% g) {2 M8 s6 A6 R- K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 y4 Z) p2 g) Q4 I9 U9 C" t! I<P>你无需担心</P>
; U" ?7 f2 ?' S. h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# n; \( F5 r* v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* |1 \  l& ^: X/ ]8 k; w# P" h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 G9 `+ z( g' q0 W  q2 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" e1 ^9 M$ a/ i4 S+ W% D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# w, x4 f/ i1 |0 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 M; s# Z. j3 h: S, v* U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 f, n% n0 P8 P# m  D& J" e0 k3 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 [$ w& ?5 U" M8 [! v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ |$ N& M* ?8 \4 g( l- R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 b1 {, Q6 p( y: d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( v9 z3 n' d% D% O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 ^# C) g6 i1 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 t6 _8 |% m8 p# V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' U+ ]; a1 |( @6 r! V. e- |" C<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ x4 i& r% B/ F- `: a3 ~# n: [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: f( c5 k' Q  U! x* a8 `) u% g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ J% R1 a! r! T9 S1 R6 q" V6 C7 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  z) ?! |* l* d$ ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% G& Y/ k- W5 @$ i* M% w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 S, V7 O2 C. [5 x' U; R1 e" P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  E4 W6 d$ @% p/ J8 {3 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>