【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- G5 A# B$ T+ e: ~" r( o0 h  x歌词我附在后面。
  F% [1 ?6 |- n  HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! n' ^7 ~4 w1 h% rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; S& [3 k4 V/ ?" A* CThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ j0 G: L( R% C% j# RWith the moon kissing it every night
% y, r8 K8 y. H& [6 {% v" ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# N* w& N9 l, ]4 I9 |; rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 S  L1 `( z) Q/ bEvery other word you utter is love
3 R. t7 a$ Q2 sI really want to know just how much you love me
. `! r5 `3 O! L  B  QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; ~& C; F) f. X8 T) [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! {) B  h& f" P0 _: {+ XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; t& x* h. W- Q& w: xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) n* D( T* g  w" UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" p9 {% k. R2 w, y2 }* |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ T: x# F, a, u# `) t+ NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& Q1 Z3 h8 F! _" i' dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& `2 Q5 m- ?1 R9 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 d, `+ _8 R5 J- O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; @/ {3 h( ?6 }  i: O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; \- W7 t1 L! `9 E! P5 s: z' S; ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 }2 {. @6 |/ R8 W  K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 J' o1 T! T- I/ i& P0 R  R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 D- }! d% s, r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: x0 n4 l# X% B5 j' H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* G4 u" T- i- K$ _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 I& v3 N) |( C- A" u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, k/ i4 w9 D( @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! F! I! M: Z  ^* M) ]1 z$ @5 P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ~/ u8 ]  s$ U* T- w; N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ G( {6 ?$ G. X& F; c0 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  _3 T9 [8 M% M9 {& w/ D3 v" Z% V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n( G& e2 H- T; A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 B# K% u1 ]2 W: P& ^: D# T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 B& t+ ]; x% }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 l* G- K' U- Z1 r* n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* x' f% U8 z6 G8 l+ q8 e& D<P>I regret not dying</P>
" r* k- ^' c3 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 P" P( T$ r& d5 w7 K5 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 q, G% g* V9 [, I4 \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% M; D) P1 {( u9 o7 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; E, A) J2 O& D$ d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ `( j/ p& r! a& ?& \( g$ u2 y. @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 V! P  Y8 E$ ~0 p6 K, A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 O3 v/ {0 C3 \% \6 a- g7 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>