【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" [8 g/ E& c2 s4 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, F# V; J( z0 y  h8 y+ s1 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- r' J8 S1 W+ q$ X0 l1 h& nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' k8 c9 n# a6 j( n% rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% h1 A4 S2 f6 @! g  g% UWith the moon kissing it every night
# q8 B/ r3 `% R# u  M) k4 cSeeing the sky content with its love
1 {. N- o! o3 Z8 p! {. b% q7 w# zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( [  \9 z4 D, b8 }( UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, P5 }3 I9 A( OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 l1 U- s- P! ^( K5 o$ R# ^Nothing can compare to my love
5 Q* b( U/ |# w) QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 {0 H) k" z# LI want so much to see inside your heart
+ \! i- c, G8 O' M( z) ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  v# Z4 h1 H5 g. BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( l, @* Z- ?: q/ TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ [0 f* J9 N$ B8 N/ r' O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 x; C" W" J9 V- A+ t7 ?4 |! F/ H; c0 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 A! \# h! U5 I% V% _5 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 h  D9 }( u! S" f/ X6 ]9 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 ]2 ^  P1 z; u  Z2 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 D4 O* l, T/ l* B2 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( S# y) r1 h. L- ?7 [. w9 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& r) ]( L3 R3 A9 b; L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: o3 g( G0 E7 q. D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! @+ H) o; Y8 Q  I7 I& m& A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! _0 e( h8 G. h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ J: k2 M/ o% A  d- w3 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 \0 G8 t/ h/ d( r) M; Z; K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. g3 m" S, G$ f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 P, F# Q7 z6 Z% y, Y! M6 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" I- g' n" q/ l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 |' t3 a& @9 w2 @1 }6 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, D! X8 a. S6 {! U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ m2 @0 W  Z  B, I% w7 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% {5 O9 p2 Q$ c2 w: _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 R$ v: S  F% l8 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) S7 a# E6 U6 u0 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: }: p. k% i) L* G8 X% ]+ S" h! S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 k* ?+ b8 K! w' a$ u4 w3 T, h8 B6 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e- y* Z( Z  T/ h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 H0 s: N3 ^' w0 e8 ~. R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 V* O) [) _. g' l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 ], v# u3 k6 v7 ^, e( A1 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 [! Y: R* z" k+ w, w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>