【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: E( i: K# |/ v$ FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, {2 [( q3 ]' i# d5 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ U  Z" F+ Q! H/ c2 v( X8 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 |' f; i7 K- V+ L- b1 R2 F, {1 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
% j4 w; N8 d  Y5 m  S7 L, F1 a/ RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- B. \/ |7 Y- J: EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 r0 Q7 ~6 ~/ t2 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 Q9 _5 m& s: R: o& hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 T  C5 J/ i, Y6 K5 |: TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* D2 y- i; O9 U1 a. wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& v! n/ H# v% C) Z! YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ S+ i' R- T) f; q  X( ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! h7 E$ Y# T" t& tWith such a tongue as yours,
9 b' c: q+ T% k5 t* fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) r( F( M, s1 N/ fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 W& d9 K' k6 r" r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- m+ J, @! Q; p( K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 k' A( C' {# R( K! e; F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ n3 {& Z( ]6 _! W* a% E* b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% q: d8 i. \4 Z* G0 |$ b  \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 y/ h$ `- z% X7 Z; I  f$ N" d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, b' K) g& `  x) k( W9 O, ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, A- _  s  W: x0 K# K, a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ [/ o$ d! X: Z6 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Q% j8 o) J9 b- Y9 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. K; d3 ]3 p; x- b2 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ^- |% T, P% @! o, Z  _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ?6 X/ W! X; X, Y3 ?: u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& s4 C3 _. l6 ]+ @' y3 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" V9 x; P  B  z5 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: Q) m, d  u3 S. I2 V8 I+ a+ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 p7 \" @% S' M6 f% }: H$ i9 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- q3 }' l( Z( J# U3 |8 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* G: r% u. r3 C' R! p7 P! o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" w: `5 j. [+ }( z, K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: |7 ?0 M$ p0 A& O4 M% ^4 ]$ ^" l( D$ c6 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" G7 T$ j1 a, y, I: W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ B) [" j$ l7 _3 Z7 o! ~: \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, N9 ?# l. c  U5 I& a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! z1 @% U' h# D& d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 P) w& `9 M, p( c% Z7 h, W+ h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 f. T6 t" G9 ~! X' K5 T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 m' I3 E$ X5 B4 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; I" h$ s/ T% j# ]( j  c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" }4 ?: Q: I+ n  q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

  t) u6 H+ K' X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>