【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ \6 Z* }% ?! N6 z2 [. V9 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 {8 }8 u6 m2 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. q8 ]4 T5 [" Z0 f1 d- ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' Y5 v; a# K, C1 q6 P, X0 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 ]$ E( M  F& t6 ?1 X7 XI really want to know just how much you love me
* D# z& F" o/ ^8 T6 CI love you I love you with all my heart
! u5 b8 A! z5 I2 u# dNothing can compare to my love
1 h" C. R6 M  p& B5 ~( S  X5 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 F  K0 d) X. r2 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' K$ ^0 H2 S6 ^5 K8 L! T4 fI want so much to see inside your heart
" i+ J$ S& X0 r* rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ @9 ~( V- {+ t& y; ]+ RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; v, H9 o& _$ K7 _! p; ^& K: @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& I1 I# V& k1 d0 k7 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 `, p# O$ k7 A+ X& \% A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  n6 y6 \; F  H- H) b. q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 [& U* S6 Q  M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. i1 M) H1 Z* T8 s/ L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% |& m& B0 N' B3 |, G& Y3 o' A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- @0 w/ ^! F5 c- H- |/ @' u" h. U; G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# a9 w- w# w$ L4 N. I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ D& Q* e0 a4 C3 `# u0 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) i  d" t9 a# p, A! |/ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% a5 ?1 X3 ^+ k2 [+ X8 j8 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' T: g" ^) G1 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 l' ^2 i. y  _0 N3 A3 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 _6 i, _2 |! ]" l- f- P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! \* ]: X4 f( |9 t! \5 L# o( L3 P' ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 a! ?; i" ?' `! ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 w1 |( e: s4 U2 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 ?. P6 ^. ~4 {) L2 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, q! D" h. G6 o/ o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 e$ B" x& q$ d' ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, h* h: K, K. e- K6 e1 h% q2 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  a' i# d$ H+ t1 S+ K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ~* @& i2 v# y% ?+ V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 t( m6 O" ]# D, b" T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 I& H( S9 h3 A4 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>