【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 D% m3 t1 f9 }: b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' e5 \/ v4 Y1 K' i' L3 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
& h) Y( t, v  r; m( MWith the moon kissing it every night
! a( u, x5 X* k- h% a5 lSeeing the sky content with its love
6 Z  t/ Y+ \5 d# u1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 |* i, D  E  r- fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% Q. l: S& P- O  A( |! t& c7 y# II really want to know just how much you love me
! T9 x( C+ @7 T9 A. K) G& gI love you I love you with all my heart
6 G) n6 z. ^! o7 Z1 sNothing can compare to my love
* q0 u7 U3 I$ z1 r6 a3 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 P  D6 Q4 R) h0 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
9 }- S1 S* t6 d- a: o9 R. lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; t& z; C( c; ~) k3 |5 zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 G$ Y+ ]8 T1 ]( b: q8 O, F$ m- L+ O; ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. p' }3 ^9 g1 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( V& h* s: T4 c# d5 N9 |: B! ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ {! c9 Q# I: q6 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( z2 p' o/ x- ~& q4 y7 l: T9 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# W+ P5 {. @# F" l" ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( X1 J: y) n7 ^# \) X6 R3 I( C3 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 |/ D/ R9 \4 q# F  c3 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 g6 |  Q- V, T1 \" p$ X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 H9 ?( ^! l' i  j4 z' F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 R$ V4 o  l- ]% L0 \5 @. M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* z  X! _! ]2 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 q! o& e! W/ y2 U3 F! ~/ T<P>你无需担心</P>
, |: k: m1 r+ A9 z9 R7 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& Y3 Y! G7 F6 w( k( A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) r% t; `- @# `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Y) t# S# X& S0 O1 Q% }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: Q# p& f* F# ^6 |- Q# r" L" B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! F3 m  t7 r7 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) k" Y1 B9 i: Q+ S. [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" i6 k# h0 T6 e5 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  _5 n& ~, t# F' V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ s; w. k  G) b$ x5 D9 O. ~" {# P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  z6 P$ }1 c3 H; o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 F3 g. ~) X* e4 v3 e' p3 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 r! q. j* ^& C  J5 R3 Z" O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 J/ E# V, W) R2 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% H$ M3 v' N2 r* w$ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ W$ n- ^- O, l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 @1 B3 _# N5 ~' S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  H6 e3 @3 Q( |9 a$ C; E我请你剖开它

. Z4 E6 G4 W( F# x, Q; {5 O% \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>