【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 x- s" o% M. iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( f3 ]3 T7 P. l- y  k; `5 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( p, d) b3 S- S% K. WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- e" v/ S# ?: x1 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, x/ r4 E9 h6 P7 P7 a0 _* `1 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 H# B4 S" {" |7 F( Q9 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
$ j) X4 E: V1 n5 G7 ]7 R9 ?Nothing can compare to my love
- [! W, z5 J% o( d. |' ]7 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ z9 V- a' Q0 n" [) j- E% fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% `! i0 j8 {4 ^: KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 p7 j" S& S: G" V5 v+ W. {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( b% O, G8 c- P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; L9 p8 ^9 Y7 c3 [  Y# f3 T! X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& e7 D# V6 V! B" L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 ^6 C5 y) P) K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! K! l# R% Q/ _  O8 i# D" J: L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ N2 l: o% I0 b$ N* D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 \5 c3 N2 ?9 U8 h. `& R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& _) L  e# G0 H6 z6 g: f# F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ]3 F. \6 J: j( A6 M+ p% c+ j; ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; i* _8 V* {4 L2 a1 T1 e3 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 Y4 M$ D7 _# O8 m( M# \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 u4 x) @3 t" }7 L& k: r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- F% m$ H; z- o3 J/ u, _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 V8 A  o- s) y* s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: ?% ]2 a5 U8 ?1 D( h7 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ f+ r* U. M* p* J; t) k' G* `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, j; k) g4 ]: A, W$ j5 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 u- J+ Y4 b' ~5 u5 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) C/ r- X- T1 ]# B* |  {& M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 D$ a6 H& l5 @/ S- E1 U, z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 d" Y6 L: x; v& k  b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' g/ P' o, P' H& d% J! M" o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ f6 J* ]) N; V& e, j7 a& b& K% D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ [. _: o1 M' S) t5 M4 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, _' e$ \' s  k: p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, E3 v. f* {- u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 e6 t- r3 b+ w" L, T7 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; |9 U8 H7 m; u0 R( Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' G2 h# d7 j* v5 b! p% e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. u5 c) o5 `% m. A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>