【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ ~' D( ?1 v/ {( l* j歌词我附在后面。
/ h- U4 `- G3 |. ~" _0 G3 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. }% O2 Z" ?8 d+ SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  \' q8 x; q/ vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ |  L- p" R: R' `1 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, t. p/ `4 \: P0 e+ L( pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ z! Y4 Y' Z' \3 Y  V& E# SI love you I love you with all my heart
+ T% _- j0 |! U8 UNothing can compare to my love
# B- q6 @( {; w3 }1 q3 b2 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ B* P9 q9 B6 H7 C8 P* {, h4 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: a% {8 E/ Q! t: eI’m still filled with fear
" `8 E- k- n. Y+ Y. ]" EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 K, B  F$ f4 l0 D1 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& ]% P3 w' W$ q5 x: ?  A* YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; k. t. U& }7 A- M2 m2 E! SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ ~* X( \( B: _$ U1 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! y2 L! I# z, j0 P# o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: @( V( O2 ?7 u1 V( T- R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  y7 i0 Z( n" s# ?; j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 P- d9 B. k- _, t# V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, |. f$ N1 p$ _6 Z' @7 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 r* W: t; J( n/ ~  c) x1 P& g5 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. g) M, U4 ?9 q& k+ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ~% V; |: v9 O. n4 {5 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: ^- q& [* @9 m0 w+ U1 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- q( g# T! k4 w8 v& C8 G$ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 k" U+ q# T5 E# M; a- i) A2 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 o( `/ g' N3 _8 E. m( @& S3 M/ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 `8 ]$ b8 i  @0 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& X" J6 F3 W" `) f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 E1 e, f0 Q4 K$ {) X5 {8 M% M, k. }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ r7 e: M8 f) ^& u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 F) e: R2 @  h/ J1 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 E) j/ i6 m$ ]4 `5 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ?: I: h0 Q( C. l* v# u- v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ P+ U  e# H' U: `& a! m& G8 ?4 U( f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) y2 g. D4 @! t: `8 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: S2 a* I; [8 {5 {4 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. J, ~' x5 {+ l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* J- y+ W1 v- H: `/ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! P' d( j2 a3 C: G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 q  H- z4 b) D+ g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& u9 F: ^/ ^3 y+ h- i3 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ o5 X+ a" R: x6 u1 p, W: i: J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 b9 A5 {0 ^8 R7 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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  C/ T+ t9 D- Y6 v7 u# H/ y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 N# _; C/ A/ k3 I' V' I) d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>