【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 b/ \5 r5 E( D( x# w" M) _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; s! V  a5 S/ v# C( Q' u' m9 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) C0 K0 k& J. CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 x: s" y. l) [! d( w# Y2 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# H7 ~9 {! E/ j8 m3 }% WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ^3 E! D7 a6 \* aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 `+ |5 h8 V( A; q8 M0 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( e. }" [; d- N7 \$ K* PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 h# {4 t0 B/ ~, C, D, ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 F# q0 j4 F2 ]+ u# Z% U+ QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 |* h4 t% n  C; [. DWith such a tongue as yours,
2 U4 m* D& j+ f) t4 X+ mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 z) z/ K6 g( N, V' R% f6 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" @' {. y. J* }5 H, [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  r% Y3 t% x7 V2 K6 i) L/ Y* \: b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 B$ Z7 G4 `4 a6 S1 }1 y) n' u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 w4 K: \7 _6 N5 m, u) b! p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& Z) U5 o2 P1 D+ F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" @* K$ |. e- Z! L2 r/ ?) ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; w2 a9 P7 r, g+ [. i<P>你无需担心</P>
- b( V* O" V1 c$ P2 E+ i3 s" M/ M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 {' c9 t9 Q% S/ M6 [9 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' D% _. v4 T5 w( d( R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' L3 J8 R: g0 G4 C* G7 c  X6 w6 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; [5 n4 m1 N; ], h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 U9 m( z" P& D, {+ j* b5 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( ?$ u% j5 @4 B. _% B8 z$ @1 e) `" ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- n0 }5 u. b( `# s: q) a0 n  X9 c/ @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ]" {3 ^" U; D; v9 c0 O" O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! _+ f. L8 i3 ]9 ]! I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, H' U  N' q3 H  n+ F8 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- z+ c0 a: @. H+ z" Z- U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 O+ J& }* e6 d<P>I regret not dying</P>
) W+ V; {. @+ v# i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 s8 Q. \% s2 H4 n, u% S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ~7 o) j+ t3 N# @) W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# t! @, W! w4 p9 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 X3 G2 [3 j/ p0 V' b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>