【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 U4 f* }( Z* _3 [1 [歌词我附在后面。
3 b! A" b, E. c* T- r4 P+ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ~4 z8 ]- [: D& j7 g0 u" H' S2 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. a! X% C5 J; O9 a1 o2 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# N6 Q: }4 r4 F. ?7 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 o. _! Z) K! X0 C% l" Y7 USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. X% q7 t) Q7 g9 ?  ]3 CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' z& S7 _4 d0 f; SEvery other word you utter is love
4 \- I9 u8 B: X1 ]% U. @1 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. _9 o+ X  |4 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* y) e  ]2 v5 W# a* t7 R5 oI regret not dying
6 ~- T) _" E9 e( u* V% rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 `0 X+ A  L  g3 l' e3 G7 P# RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" k' D2 M; q0 ~: K0 p; `0 B3 e! @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" j" Q2 e' p( @+ I1 _+ `- \$ _0 ~7 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 s& L( I& \; c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 c* ?4 |8 U2 p1 K2 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% J/ o* g8 [& p% g% @! F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 {  e" B5 o/ C4 f, @. ^0 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* T/ n8 E/ T6 m' R1 P3 j- I3 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ w- k1 K" Q2 k( n0 W- q% J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 E  K# T8 X! X: u7 W2 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Z. j9 |2 N/ F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' p. S5 C$ m3 o  f3 W) A6 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; _* G, D9 x% ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Q5 H2 `& e% F# V/ z! m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 K- w# @% e) b! l) Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: t2 W/ N3 t+ R3 F8 q5 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 O  ~' Z! G- P) W  M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ ?' N7 q/ g) [: H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" N7 z7 P- v; ~2 J* |9 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 y9 W# t  b) c* j. E0 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  W. [! N0 Q' M/ x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% G9 o& m+ X. h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  l( j& f+ ^' [$ x+ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! C/ p5 k- v7 a1 A+ V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! [( q* c8 h- P: q" j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 o' h8 X  Y' j$ x- k1 z( y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 z: [( _# j" w0 a# m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# b+ F7 T5 z" i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 F  T5 D- _6 {0 A2 {我请你剖开它
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* w( B! A8 D, g( o: ?: h$ x6 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>