【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 h' s0 y* ]" a& h  [* w4 c9 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 T4 \1 N0 s" j! Z) K7 qWith the moon kissing it every night
% t3 Y( d! w" _# f- `9 @; \Seeing the sky content with its love
( l& R3 I2 F6 d2 H5 \0 k  }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, h3 N9 O/ b8 S6 o8 P" [3 s& I' AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 C/ j; `: ^" ~) B0 x+ ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 O: u6 a, s8 v& b& H7 \0 \5 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# F) v- \1 ^! Q; M7 XI want so much to see inside your heart
3 T/ }/ t  E3 X; |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  x+ l( H4 T4 H' H# NI regret not dying
( t- [2 `* R! L( V  N5 o6 f6 _9 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* f) u" g: o  Y1 E5 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: [+ w! e! b* M$ b% I4 k9 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 l2 B; G+ l& m  Q3 P. y7 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ {. [1 v5 O( N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 X( w3 _, A8 A/ [# e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: T$ j( A7 @: W4 k0 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; F6 T9 o7 c8 P0 }5 {! k6 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! b+ j+ Y. g0 Z$ z4 b6 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 G3 q4 m4 W- s* J2 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 X7 \# [' i) }5 n7 i' T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 S* {4 q2 x  @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) B7 ~: g( G( h% p! d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; d; {/ a9 M3 R6 a* |1 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ T  T! @+ a5 g) |/ d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  F  e4 t0 _# u$ w+ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ s6 \% o2 C# O, e% {0 V/ t; |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 e2 e, F1 ]& X0 m$ P% V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& t; Q4 }3 G- e1 L0 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 H0 P7 s4 ~- r: t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 Y" F# I; T& P9 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ P5 n8 k, B4 D' P0 M  j, |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 _* u# f7 Z$ N1 B2 u2 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 e9 ?% @9 c" s3 I6 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ G, m  e  }$ Y! H  L- R2 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( I* u% C. ]$ q4 n) I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 I: P7 m& Q4 I, R. j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& d: i% s: c8 x) ^5 \* H% c! u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 |% X) k& g. G; E3 n& V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 c4 ]3 ^7 |. h" Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& q( P; a0 J/ h& |/ Y; X0 |! f5 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ u0 f/ ~5 @8 w, O0 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 ^5 @: C2 P2 W7 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 R  j7 l/ t5 E' h* J# H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>