【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( V# i& x8 ^) K) O( Q: P1 P: F, D4 ~7 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ D$ @+ W+ R* S' C& Y$ LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 Y" k' m6 x1 L( C! CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! {/ [* L3 p) q: g/ P% C- wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" S3 Q5 m. t) a* [) X* S" i0 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! ]1 j' R9 I% o( `: f" D% d" hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" \8 a6 j- c0 UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ g( S  f" O6 k- b# [) g6 R6 t9 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& _, |. j# r) iI’m still filled with fear
5 Z, E$ j5 d: u% MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# r" W+ `: ]' m$ c1 v, m5 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& C7 e% Z4 M+ A% M) gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, l% x) E% {% d( F5 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ i2 }5 u9 R( ~  L+ f) ~  U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" H# J6 G$ K  W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 x7 Q1 o* f, n/ ]6 e" f$ L1 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) K( X" \( X  \; m  ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 f, M2 p- y) q/ q/ {# i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 I3 G4 y6 }2 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 m% q+ k& t/ [2 X! Q7 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# C$ V: w" H6 w; M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; W6 V2 X1 \  c% K. a) e2 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 a( Q5 h2 k+ k( u0 b$ v9 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' c4 x+ E) U7 o, `" O* d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ R, I. z, c" `3 |) K4 C5 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; `: |* h" ^) Q5 o/ Q; j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  k+ p( E3 m; s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- F! a) z: q- J; M, Z4 k* }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 z: z+ T5 ?' h# ]7 ~4 M9 ~. E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 N5 T  k7 }) e9 H$ W* C+ b) Z( @3 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ?" K% X0 y( a$ a% X. W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" K: k; }" H4 l/ T& y) K* N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- S1 u% A  m" }3 q. y0 I) e! r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- j3 M$ l* V& i5 A0 a$ X% x( w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' [  W- T5 m2 i! [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  g2 ~. E0 [4 m7 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- Z" i& E! J6 c" J; `8 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ c& z) A* C9 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 X5 V! w* \& j# r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# o) M+ y. O2 V- p( L, j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 ?$ ]* Q2 \0 U  O; B; h: _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ t9 j1 m. X" i/ B; Q: U/ S4 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! ?* B# n5 i" L# i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( e' g3 v. t$ a( e6 D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) ]2 p. m. [( l; _我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>