【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; L( e" q, n- O! N& F- b- I6 x: k歌词我附在后面。
. M! E* F9 U. ~8 d1 M2 Y" |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: g0 f6 C( y/ h8 \+ S, qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ x+ x+ K  d1 G) P8 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: y  e- P6 j; {% t( jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% D9 w; s' U1 j7 `Every other word you utter is love
; {0 o9 N% S, B, iI really want to know just how much you love me
* v8 }, S- R$ y  n. O  Q( _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% ?& o9 Q, L  {- N2 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 p6 z6 @' R$ _, h2 e' m  AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% b5 ]2 D. z" q+ k/ RI want so much to see inside your heart
# d; l1 C4 Z4 L; t% G4 D1 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 y5 u: N3 z5 \1 x" s: N; BI’m still filled with fear
) E3 K2 c$ [) A1 l0 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, j" X) K1 u. G9 Y  V; w, f/ qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ^4 G, X/ ^( G9 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  D* t2 O, v: |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 W) ^( I2 K8 p& l* k/ a& X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, @$ T( x3 x7 `6 L8 Q6 w! M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; I6 y; y: D6 a! ^7 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 g8 d2 ~4 l' w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& {/ V5 f. I. B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% ^9 m3 @% G9 k- E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Y% x, A' a7 M9 C3 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  P1 C( B# i9 _  g. B* [3 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* V) ]' j  t# T* J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; w* `1 M5 _/ o/ e& {) U) j& A5 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. \3 t8 E8 {. `1 r& d1 w  T0 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- d" ?1 l9 v' q  }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( {0 l; J" [: k3 E% ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: X1 _" ~- o3 P/ t) F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 u1 l; ?! t* X% y  n$ C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. Y8 _$ R9 S$ q1 Z2 A: o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 f) X  r9 v. z$ z5 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* d! x" N- L: F" R$ B7 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 H* o$ x* r( g! s; g* S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" s1 a3 `% n+ w9 E" h- G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% r% [5 [6 }5 k6 Y7 a9 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 a" P7 I2 A# ]+ ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 Y0 }6 v! K  E/ I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, }* ]- X+ ^$ G- I8 e7 Q4 q) ?* \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ]$ x& B. Y6 ~; g# L& }# D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- L0 f: j0 `: o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 w/ [8 y3 g) x) [! v1 R+ t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  M3 a9 B) Q; c- [: K2 ^7 c  }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ D3 G6 t& Q- ~. |: U9 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>