【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ S8 E  |1 t& A: m9 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 R9 |& G6 Y  t, l7 k5 _2 O# eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 s; Z; y3 Y1 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; ]. \. K; o, a9 r% ]5 Q% W' `& TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& j- o. V1 Y- z7 F% [% w) A1 a3 GEvery other word you utter is love
8 G9 |* W: e; [5 C% R/ f9 \I really want to know just how much you love me
" ^/ \. @: k7 \7 hI love you I love you with all my heart
) j1 I; g) V* s. Y; T7 ~+ lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ h$ t4 }; o+ X8 y3 NI regret not dying
. T9 ~  r( I& a  ~. l) \4 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! Q: \" z9 g5 v+ n2 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: X$ w8 X/ \+ Z) PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 V# i: }9 E- M: f; O9 x7 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ W" x5 Y4 o8 d4 g: F% N7 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 a+ T- r. p6 Q+ v9 w+ r4 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' o7 v; b, R* U7 S& V( D$ t; |3 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- ?" o6 \1 C+ A% k: |) z* o: J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 S8 X. O2 R! d7 ?$ E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( s7 |# ?8 V/ G, @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ l/ ]! h3 o& M, R# {/ |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 \5 L2 e: H; E$ E* F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- e0 l1 w& ^0 R+ r5 e) X! f" O4 r. y  l5 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
9 g8 s# ^* n; n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 R3 a: h1 E  C  X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& h3 u6 `# L9 i. \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  \+ t7 r2 W( P" G* e2 ?1 C+ u0 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ l9 y) A: T9 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- \- ]6 ]5 U! v" E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ Z5 Y6 G$ N% v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! b5 V+ Z9 D- R, q/ ^' ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' \* d  I. y" q: c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 y1 u7 y8 k: B  P( N  V/ l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 e! A* o+ ]. S! o; U/ d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 o6 L9 p* ?9 g0 e  R<P>I regret not dying</P>
- x7 B4 X; x: E2 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 \- n$ D" b+ O$ N/ m# I3 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! L, I/ D/ j$ k  w4 `. f1 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 b# w5 t( }$ `/ G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" V- `9 G) I! g7 u  G" P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- E- F, ~, g; X4 _+ n& @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: b- g6 a$ T# ^8 C( M, j' a- U9 m% c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% s5 E  `2 }/ b, ?0 M9 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 L( [5 ^; m8 K5 i3 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" o7 N" k1 {7 R7 o! t8 D# Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! [& @, r: h3 A/ B2 w4 H1 c0 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 u; ~- c* I& i/ _& ]/ W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" d8 q' P3 g1 {2 g# K0 I3 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>