【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 ?9 X8 P0 ]( [3 p歌词我附在后面。
" Y) o5 W2 |! O$ H2 i  i; f, c8 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  W' z4 |: \+ Z" f6 a8 n- h; OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; ?8 P% I5 s' T! v- [5 P9 ?2 |With the moon kissing it every night
+ z) o# L5 I1 E# f; _: CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, }) \- o5 Y( P( t5 B* dYou needn’t fear anything
4 W- r7 `0 Y* @3 QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# U. ?5 Q1 t% g1 W& D3 l8 mEvery other word you utter is love
/ G$ v8 u, L* V, ^. g* LI really want to know just how much you love me
% l# {0 X2 m0 |1 G3 j) e3 s' V% MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 v! {& G2 p/ I3 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  ]& l% V/ S  O" rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ [5 P  h* X0 K. O( C4 D' O, x) lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: E* U0 T3 r4 w9 W" l: t1 q$ aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) M; \6 P  ?/ n' p+ XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% R% r4 Z  d+ s5 n* W* gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ m% N/ }  u) a. ?. ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 Q% F1 p1 S7 w4 x' a: [" G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 R0 G* [3 I2 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! |5 z. _9 U! R: S% W% f$ Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( ^; T) A9 @3 T5 ^2 O" p! D( X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 y/ M  Y. a% f; u) O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ R& h0 w5 I- X; @' X6 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* Q  A6 L0 q# b  s* z' m  o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- I( p* T  h/ g- z) }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ?/ q( I* ^4 z* F! x) n, P<P>你无需担心</P>
2 E( e5 y; X5 W6 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 g/ l. L, w/ K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ ^% h# [" ?" d- F, I& d7 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; i/ r4 U5 v5 G7 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, ?8 E' F" _. l& k+ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& L6 i8 l, b+ l/ |& w" Y4 i. Y" T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ ^! W2 V  ?' x/ Z1 a% [( q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& T9 ~* s  t5 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" \! K# i& X/ }$ F- \+ R) X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" [" `/ e, X  x- k3 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 w% m- }# I" z; H+ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" [0 K# r. {; D& Q) O0 P5 Y( V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* A5 E  G8 f' |  S: j, Z: H$ p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 d& B% {% g9 F1 w% _, V0 a! N<P>I regret not dying</P>
: Y$ r$ T7 r5 q2 ]( a! O! p' w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 i8 V$ n4 ^4 f! O* ?+ J, A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( L6 ^. D9 k/ z/ [4 j! Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 q7 D3 n# X' l( B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ P( q8 e$ e/ _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 n* [' x/ d: T( z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( D* K8 X8 d, ]" C! n1 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 ~3 Q6 _6 t$ g0 W+ X, `. v- x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 }' h+ b! d  K/ |6 Y( y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! E0 }/ J. H0 \  I, D我请你剖开它

: `: o. }, a% Z2 Y3 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. i& E+ b$ ^. p" r+ e1 j. P0 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>