【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ G0 w; ]1 X; v4 `$ I. u1 ]9 z( mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 x  o5 i1 J! N0 s; T% T3 k3 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  q. c( E% P6 H3 B1 m) MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# j2 W+ Z( r# J. J+ NWith the moon kissing it every night
. }: f! x0 k) D0 E) r+ ]$ [+ T! u/ L( [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ Q9 J8 O6 U# s7 m6 ]! XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 E; a, t# |5 c. U- S1 A+ OI love you I love you with all my heart
. c; j- _- O, f2 {: W7 T. o9 FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( p4 l# K; @  w9 ?7 Z$ cI want so much to see inside your heart
% V4 }0 U  A( Q" u4 @+ e6 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, \, y8 i( [0 _, }. _I’m still filled with fear
* T6 G3 X1 h& u. z& t5 t& @- ~8 LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* C/ X/ R; A6 sI regret not dying
6 V$ ]9 U1 J) CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 M3 u! J+ G( ?0 s5 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* A0 ^( c2 d3 G$ x1 b: z7 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' h3 {8 e# y. K) s& B1 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& i3 ~" p: @. g/ A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ A  `1 C" d6 u; Y) a/ f, q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! m. r; m9 {! S; H3 j0 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# e5 U$ n5 Y0 @1 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. l. @- {4 \; N" x7 ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* r4 R- B$ L; w, C) u6 T# S" g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# v5 s  q3 S3 u+ A% Q7 X- M# V+ g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" R  o! y' G0 R# P4 ?; J5 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 @6 l5 Q$ h7 W& V$ r9 R4 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 e) V! R4 u9 V; I, i% ?+ g& j3 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" U. w1 }7 U7 @; r+ Z/ \$ ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% _# c+ @3 r! E/ s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" v5 v2 P/ _1 ?. Q* F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ y: ?$ S- i' S; z+ e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! F2 r( ]/ J6 b" Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. v( e$ S* ?+ p) g" n& M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( V0 k' F/ Z# H: W6 w0 W8 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# B; H' _; X6 U: a% q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* I  ^7 y: W' Z& c5 Q- h! g2 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" ]/ n8 v. |" C) N+ V& }; v. q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! e' t" ~4 ~8 S- v7 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) K6 M2 R: U* v$ w1 L7 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 \. b6 H9 a0 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% s5 l' Z" J+ e! A2 ?8 m$ ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- J+ `' y7 P3 S" r* `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) C/ T: P- ]; V( i. z% C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' ^4 k0 E. y1 h' {+ G我请你剖开它

' Y1 V6 Y5 t) E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>