【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 p8 Z( U  [; q9 g! G: }Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 h/ ^- O( n! ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( z! W3 r+ b$ h, bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 \  r$ l% u* N  U8 f# VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 G+ u& y7 T% `" d& C) \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- {' @) t1 N" W3 i" XI really want to know just how much you love me
  B! d) z+ B2 W1 U& q3 }I love you I love you with all my heart
% L# K+ o, }4 z  ]4 q2 p" ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" r$ ~, e0 z8 m1 r. R% z7 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: ]- x: k' U6 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ N+ [( |) H- g( U/ @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ ]% Q% g: S+ c4 T1 D2 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 q* S0 z% q2 w1 r+ w2 e! C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 v" q3 T  g- |  C* b" @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 |/ |2 w" b% ^" k5 d$ h% b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" v* G- h! Z1 A: {: ?- S* E" |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" r* W% s0 v/ M6 y/ T- ~1 r& f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, N  d8 R( r& B; b, k( m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 N9 H( X) X1 @& X# ^/ G0 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 M/ r7 o8 f, S3 h( u# ~/ l& O; b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Q( i8 J- X; z1 I% b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, \4 V2 o" n6 U& G0 d- b7 v7 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% Z* ?; V/ \% ^0 I7 O& c. `5 o& o2 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" H0 E2 b+ `  O) ?. N3 r/ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ V' c/ ^; ]0 a6 z0 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; G0 r8 [3 x) S8 ]3 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( o5 e' a9 Z7 r% \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! W9 l: V+ I  x+ x9 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# @6 {; E! j: \2 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' I7 u1 w$ J, Y+ d( p9 i# r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 `" @: O- k, J$ h0 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 e2 X) ~7 |) h5 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 r6 I3 S  Z2 t2 N) W9 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ V5 i8 [. ]8 Z* Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. R5 X; y& ?$ ]# H: R6 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, m9 k( r/ A! D; v7 `8 R1 G6 w" F) E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& a; y- N5 l$ B3 C, q* V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- \7 `0 X& ~: W* p5 V) I# A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>