【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 x" D& m5 A' R2 a5 ^/ M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# `3 V) T4 V& u$ m% \3 p1 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 {  k3 R: L$ h' H' `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 f$ _6 c5 G9 g6 N4 H  `With the moon kissing it every night
. T: z( d: _3 ^3 d6 tSeeing the sky content with its love
( I* q7 _  |' N) N9 x. eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) c) ]7 G2 a/ O* O" i+ v+ s' mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" C. I, P, G, B9 E0 o& MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 Q* l* u( F( B& E  D9 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ G% q5 F6 v7 s$ F0 g" a- p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 ?, h! s  h5 }: |: D% W9 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ]0 z0 e% s1 T* E9 e! ]0 T" G  T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% {4 m  j" R9 J6 V- ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 ]* d1 E# @7 e' N7 k; z) z1 V% j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ ]' n1 k4 E, D. ]0 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' b% O' g& K0 O' _' E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 [2 X% Q9 y. Q$ P4 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- N" Z9 X$ q; |* W. s% \4 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 g0 G( a# v+ F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) x; s# ]3 P. q/ G0 N' N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  v; b# O& S1 R9 R  y; _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 j( B, j& G; g2 \+ L- N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 W# _2 h$ K/ p6 G7 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ J2 y" z' R7 X# p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; t1 x" O  o' x; w( O8 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 m5 T# G* k4 b# b$ `2 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, b& g7 b2 w2 r! m$ K' K/ q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 ~# T4 E3 o6 ~7 F+ M; S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 Y& d+ c6 V8 m6 a: A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" f; V& T6 l# U) c4 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* c/ B: _- ?' L' S- S$ F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) {3 U/ N# @- d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

" g1 h, T2 J# I# _: @7 `- n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>