【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ [5 s% G% h; O/ z9 g. PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ \2 ?0 R7 w$ M4 U; F4 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ L9 t$ @; ]+ K! J# ?8 |. W0 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 G7 K/ T- x9 Z6 }2 G" eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ F$ z! b; D) l: jI love you I love you with all my heart
+ y* }; l$ V: K  S; {3 z3 [$ dNothing can compare to my love
9 k) u' g& W1 f, dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 E/ L3 u, k3 I4 v- r0 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# d, Y+ }5 b; ^! XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ d8 u' l, j3 x* U" I4 X8 i6 x# J$ tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! b# Z- `4 ~2 T3 Q7 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 Y! r" U: q- X  `" f- ^' ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 v5 |: C8 p, I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ~: M( L6 N7 L! Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 d9 T* o/ t' O! y& q" n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# M- T: U# ]8 |8 r$ N1 O, l( g( G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* I# f( F/ @: V& |" [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# z2 J0 B1 M" N; `; P% a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: p4 U" O6 _9 f, d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) n; T- d1 J0 O+ ?' y3 y3 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 X$ F! t' }" T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ?! z, H, J# _4 Q, N+ P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ~- C+ g. T$ [! w: s5 R9 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 t8 U& A1 @5 w/ I4 }- u& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# w, H. _5 H( {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 \+ }7 H% e: b+ `" ]  Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* _3 F- I/ [9 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" H7 ~5 f' Q" p% S* ~1 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 e) Q# k* i9 N5 Q' L' P9 j, s, E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 {  n3 j, e) Q7 F- g9 f! i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ i7 F, _" J5 s; x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: v8 m+ ]7 D3 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; g1 G; M4 k2 N4 @* H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ Z% H0 }1 F3 X* r4 u" e0 d5 F' N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 M/ }4 Q7 i6 J& E! v" g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# X' Z8 {  u  M# ]9 j: |0 j" Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 A+ W. y, i3 l; `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 q4 U6 J8 z# r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: K* v7 u5 a8 ^5 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 d. l4 B& H" m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 @. j& D3 h: I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& `6 B7 d6 z: ?/ ?/ S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 X# i4 z7 K5 H6 x6 J7 l  E7 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. A, X! l" C) }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, I0 a" R. s, W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 y; A% E& b' S! a- p% Z% B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>