【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 Z  H$ Y, p% T) J7 _' X) M4 Z1 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) N; p% F' C- ^3 U$ p: ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ B: T9 k! y# I2 B  M0 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
7 S+ d* T& J! ~3 c9 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! k' e+ m9 r. c3 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 k0 U' i4 k8 X: s, U( w- T/ WNothing can compare to my love
# I/ @' N& |  F7 [2 Y  P2 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ T9 s7 _) j, ?/ @6 V# m: PI’m still filled with fear
3 [" S4 z5 D' [# FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 [& c5 B' k  o3 v! F( X5 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 V/ N$ M* P$ }8 kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ L- ]4 `8 i- ?, T9 f8 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  I5 B% l" V5 {, l2 U7 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. x6 N0 T! e! S9 O4 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% }! n7 L5 G- J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- D6 v0 G8 o0 Z3 Q2 p4 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ e$ @, T: t6 L8 {8 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 y, _  @; w1 f+ \7 s' k$ X- q/ k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 W: M: l1 C$ n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' N2 w3 I! h% P$ p# X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 X$ f* k% j; T: }4 |# w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 I( w- I5 d; n& s3 n4 |2 r1 R! x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 H5 ~+ V  g$ v5 P6 Q# p; q" r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; q9 D: }: k, j- [/ ], v% P" h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( G+ }4 H2 b: ]. n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! |3 j+ G4 n! K  e1 K3 Y  Y$ T& b2 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! d( K8 d+ p' p7 T' j) o) o6 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* V0 s8 m4 \, a- L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( `, V2 X( l3 }- U( i+ ~: {1 I1 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& I, I6 u: }' U( C- f9 l, _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ R1 a1 g3 G) I5 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ e% [. C) G4 a8 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
) S8 s  f; k& v4 y2 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 V! L; H9 ?6 }0 ~* S8 Y  K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; w9 H2 U7 A2 e7 Z: F0 [) Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" f* K2 @( C, Y  C5 S0 X1 g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  @/ L3 @* {$ H2 B4 ]! |* n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ~. X$ |- I2 O& |9 v: L- y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 z, t; ]( K+ }/ a: r. l, e2 `/ I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ c2 H" Q1 }" g  r# P7 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( h7 N( Z+ i. ?2 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. G; u/ C) R9 a; r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  K+ J: V% y/ m7 ?4 r( L' ~+ g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>