【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! X+ B7 Q6 b. m; h0 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* \$ I, v# T& x5 _4 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 k6 {7 G: K( H% }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, R( }3 S$ B0 |The sky is happy down to its soul
. \7 I$ l# e$ r4 O% G- NWith the moon kissing it every night
( X0 N2 ?9 [( x+ v1 Y$ cSeeing the sky content with its love
: {$ n6 U0 ~, o. ~! hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# c# g. d& \$ h* s$ ^" @% h/ E1 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ n0 P) l$ _* D4 ]) b- aI really want to know just how much you love me
! `0 {  [; I0 r: ]I love you I love you with all my heart
6 b6 t" Z4 O) B; SNothing can compare to my love
: ~. x* d# `3 f1 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 _2 c0 O! o! x% @9 h' HI want so much to see inside your heart
, ~/ x7 j3 M5 @5 }7 G$ F! qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% A" ]3 @/ z. A$ u2 JI’m still filled with fear
% G& {0 |' \' F: ^) J: RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 z1 x  u: z- Q) Z9 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& q' t1 O/ U2 PWith such a tongue as yours,
/ X: [: Y9 g& d: ?& OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, x1 O9 F' W/ y/ S, P6 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. D$ {) c6 f1 `7 ~7 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 N; R; y, j) T- [) m  i& A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ~3 Q* j1 ~8 J& e. C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 H' v* l3 `* w# Z8 Q! W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 n5 a5 t3 t  G) S* }7 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* m8 ^) e! Q) d) x+ T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' p( `. {6 `; Q# T6 v: I" A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! u: |& z: F1 C, p+ X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Z# o$ A' y' o1 G3 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 A3 ^; {$ a) T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- c# }+ `$ M8 G1 r  X1 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 l8 Q& k& c" m  p4 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( }  O. r# Z. r, E% g- p. j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" E! ^% _, S$ w+ ?, N/ \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ @: n& X$ x) U; t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* s- G' N8 R+ v( b9 `- B7 _( e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 p' y+ \1 ]* d: J8 e7 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' o& ]7 V" I2 f$ o; A1 i2 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Q( U$ u7 W7 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! s7 M( b  e6 }$ S% A; Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" S1 W/ a" L2 x/ R: N" V; b) U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, D4 F" o  @7 v0 Z7 q/ a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ l4 E' I: \; X7 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 O8 N* K0 r7 Y4 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' W, j+ E  N8 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- p/ |$ a) @5 A6 ?9 ]. ^/ h1 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; q$ p% u" N. B, Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ^# x1 f' D5 G7 m9 d  @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( x, u0 @4 B& t" z  q1 k" d5 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 d6 g5 K- y% H, ?, O( \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! w7 G8 v. y; O& K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>