【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* F+ w" {5 b: }/ x/ O1 X5 u6 K$ w, X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 y9 {* O  b* D" BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! e8 L5 T+ A3 F8 N" J6 h" |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 A+ R, V5 m, ^& t" @8 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ E( ~' C7 z7 A" e7 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ W1 \! ^/ R* R8 m/ \( ?* VWith the moon kissing it every night
$ i! Z) L& V. w4 wSeeing the sky content with its love
2 {2 ]% u7 T" u0 U/ mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( W3 v" s* R9 M( L0 ~. MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 L+ O' y+ v' W: ~$ l7 KEvery other word you utter is love
* E3 ^! h1 q# hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* {! o: d' p# L4 K# I  jNothing can compare to my love
, U6 M% |5 b. L7 |, W8 G/ ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" I, }/ R/ k. m8 e5 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  u7 K% h! y9 _! e! [1 GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 f- P4 _% T2 H4 _I regret not dying
6 I2 O' x+ v* Y) t5 }( P6 ?8 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 g2 s: Q! H# @- `, A$ |. {* HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 N9 |6 u' s8 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 b. ?4 ?- P  y, S" a8 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ a% t) U* W$ d6 d& R* w) X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! |6 c5 h, {2 _+ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 Q' j- t; ^  ^8 K1 ]9 s/ ]* F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 H  K3 r' o4 ]. t! m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ _% |4 B, d! P+ P0 I* S% E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ @" P3 X! R: H3 \6 j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 E  Z. f. v' ]2 P3 l6 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! \2 C# M4 X- k+ l" m7 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. W) V4 b7 C* r' u% {! x* O* {* p- W4 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) S6 v; r# o: q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) j$ R9 R1 r: h% E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 ?; U" ~2 i& |" ^7 M) Y& c0 u( s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Z) _! w9 K* x' b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 a0 m- t/ `- X  R) X# a6 l$ Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 p" H5 m2 P4 w1 b& l" k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& k  [: V) {) M4 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 C  M7 i; R1 p; ^$ n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 G; l$ F1 v' ?5 K, W# c" F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- m7 U: I9 @7 J5 M1 N: G. ^+ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ^: I/ V" x, G; p$ x" m: u3 d  E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  W* t4 `8 d1 [/ L* ]" x# ~, p$ r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 b! S+ L: Z7 X( z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: G1 y/ F5 q! T7 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) Z; r; U! U) o6 s! t. {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 Y' H* I" }$ w3 X/ q/ |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 u) R9 B2 c1 Z( |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 {1 ]" O* E* E7 `+ l: g& u: W! I我请你剖开它

4 B- l1 z( f8 D9 x1 J  _' K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>