【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# s5 S1 y- p! V( V. m歌词我附在后面。
6 m; w# Q) p2 \# D, Y+ r- B. _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 f4 R4 v# Z2 U: |3 N7 y+ p. ^" JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( D" u0 [6 ?0 V) B( g  LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% D0 [1 n) l- ]The sky is happy down to its soul
# T2 u% ]8 r/ U+ k! Q/ I( eWith the moon kissing it every night
  A7 H/ J, t  E" dSeeing the sky content with its love
9 W  k$ W( M4 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 q. Q! r8 R$ O4 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" d5 a( V9 G# O1 p0 O3 {Nothing can compare to my love
! o2 E5 |- g$ I+ O4 {: f/ @4 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* P% ~# h1 X$ Y# O1 K5 ~9 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( S0 Q, u3 e4 }' m0 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. g; U- ~4 M# J8 R% b2 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 {- J: P. u2 H3 r4 k! L- ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& @. G3 C  G: t3 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 W% V* _5 d3 ]! \( M4 U. r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# K, Q+ V* h) o0 k+ [# [5 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) ]: G7 L- S9 ]. s3 ^1 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 H1 I* Y& j& {( A; g9 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ z$ T* b+ p% Q$ F5 f, Q; F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: p2 o0 ^' \4 _$ F6 o8 Y7 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 D  o8 w' k. r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; S! H7 |7 w% ^; `# W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 M) Z. n( T7 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 }1 c! S3 I6 ~  k! b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ ]: d/ m: F. c2 }8 i6 w# {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. S* R* ~$ ~' t/ }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% n& O6 L# _4 |; W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! d0 g. I5 r; y5 Q7 ~8 {, P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 ~; F8 ]) N1 o6 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' X; }2 h2 D; W+ ^" E. E- Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 U- a4 }+ Q2 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ F4 g0 H: K* O6 B2 E. o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# F- [+ A* s4 j+ R# B' {7 |2 X; w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 k; x" D' Y$ V! r) V* u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 l8 o8 U% h3 ^9 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! \# ]* l) _8 |" i% l5 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 a& w* y  E, T: p! ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ G! d- Q. ~7 x+ x, W; C& h, m5 I+ j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 u$ ]8 R6 R% E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) `0 ]; U; n  i! t4 m% m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) I) M, V' R9 ^6 t3 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* T. ]7 G6 H( e% c( T4 m( `% C( ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 f' `9 ^' {4 ]# u5 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 j/ Z" V0 Z! e! J( R1 t( Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" O0 F- ~& m8 T" d7 @我请你剖开它
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' E4 u; e9 b: M& J" f3 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 w4 H4 R6 [/ @/ x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>