【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- [9 f; \* k5 n, w0 H歌词我附在后面。
' j) Y9 P+ K" y* w0 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ h3 x* c# R4 B2 E- D: nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ b: c) r. m& `" V& f+ r" zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 V7 T4 B0 r, d, M2 o0 `3 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
) ?3 o6 O3 d5 {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& F2 n6 [. }) x" d) BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ y+ P+ o4 x: X( ?8 b+ l4 q- {You needn’t fear anything
4 c& @# ?: G3 y4 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ @8 {2 {% h' E" c! kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) q$ E* c: f1 \3 j- q  g" H6 a9 ?' zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ?, `' W) `$ X% q' [& `I want so much to see inside your heart
: z1 ~0 ?: x6 G0 N- C, N# vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" L+ p3 W7 P( s7 r7 x( e& a& lI’m still filled with fear
# b9 S2 ?; X: U& Y% dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" `* g. |0 C& ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: D) {- d: ]( QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- p8 d' ]9 D: D. [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Y3 s0 d2 F. I6 J/ c5 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* y! v) y0 W" G% c( s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) C; Y9 x. X9 n( {, p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 U% I; z% [* z5 o3 J" h! N/ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 P. ~% ~8 O. \9 B6 T8 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) A7 c  ~6 M1 h% U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ H# u, Y. Z% Y5 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Y# a4 R& G/ L- q9 x# m+ e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% V5 u& `' `) b/ Y2 h- ^: N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 z2 q' I' p# y8 W" Y6 ?; P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 n( {. N+ U" X0 l0 R) k8 p- x4 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! f0 V3 W( R# D4 z  ^- o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- j. I" |1 {8 s& m, I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 }4 Y  U: r( g0 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; C. z- c2 J3 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 C* A8 L! `! k$ O+ b( A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 [" Q; s. d/ P. z7 I1 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% Y. a7 h" E* D- {) `; g! {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 g* |" _+ B& s- I9 M+ r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. `4 S+ Y% D+ p+ p- v+ r9 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* r( [, R- e& L3 u* {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& `; s3 l. E( C9 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& t; F, w0 O, ^* d2 Q2 r, A- k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ }# ]/ p, P" J3 n/ A- c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ U2 k+ v2 R$ E! l) n% t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* ~( l: K1 p( S, t9 n9 L, B
( T$ z+ t5 A; y# Z/ s我请你剖开它
9 L  J1 P) e* ^
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( m; a$ H6 A- z, e$ c; q4 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>