【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 i6 e# L6 x9 h. X( }% o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! h1 T0 B. |5 s. f/ j( OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. x$ K8 ^0 h$ [3 B  vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ Y+ f0 F  U7 n+ kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( i7 A$ E/ i2 e/ ]9 [- k( KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 F: b+ n# y3 [7 Y) JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 J+ L/ P3 ^; WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 S  b1 T) o1 C2 aI’m still filled with fear
& J5 o" I6 N; [* C1 m) u! qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: C$ T4 }3 K6 _5 `2 e2 qI regret not dying
1 v  s! {/ T( w' k) P% Z* DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 ~! b; ^/ e/ LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 n5 a/ E" l; c" h5 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 e8 ]  g2 A: N: [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, A% r- [4 S) Y2 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# j8 @' s8 t. I- C& ?6 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 h6 k9 h' `0 E7 a/ Z' E; T/ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. {. l( \3 V/ \' w2 E: r* @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 _" V% w3 f% W0 x% n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ h+ W; I2 p- N+ Q9 s: O: R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Y2 B8 E6 e6 `# R9 x$ I$ z+ R: f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 [' n, R8 G& [# w) k9 O! O4 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
/ A# b% ~) s5 w" V' ]9 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 i% C5 c' R. c+ L+ ?  P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ?4 E7 o2 t. I: |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. p) @: o; k- m4 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 A8 @( O5 |3 Q3 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 O  v, _8 ^, W. }4 s0 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% U% T  A  Y2 {' D4 a$ R8 r( ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, z, ~- r6 U2 N* l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! z, F+ Y% \, L/ M: l8 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& i" N" [# w- p/ |/ `/ ]0 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. u2 a1 c/ i( T2 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; s5 E0 t/ B. l9 J$ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: L9 D; [" p% {: T/ l# j6 g) s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' m6 k% x2 j  t! A+ ]3 ]" S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; B9 L1 j4 {1 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 \' u* L* }- u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 L* c: L6 w4 _+ O! @) W8 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- b) I. \. ]  h7 ?6 n6 L+ m0 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 a9 S: \$ d: x7 ^* j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>