【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) V7 z! \3 \- C+ e$ l1 l歌词我附在后面。
: j" ~0 Y( s) _The moonlight is shining brightly,
# \& L# Y& b8 D7 {3 I4 w- WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) w$ E! t% G5 a5 a* KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 A- a* r+ |+ U2 K  ?  kSeeing the sky content with its love
. F" q1 H) G9 ?7 B" @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 c8 b9 I! H* W- H! }! yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 `: S4 x! z' K3 \( J$ z. u  P; JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' T5 O! t' k( H  ]! b. a& HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 @9 t% w3 F; f4 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 l& x& ^! [0 N: x' QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% y7 ]" G1 C3 r' R9 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 |5 z! W# ^7 Q5 L' l) h" uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ d: P, j: B1 V0 E6 f5 e4 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 X' s$ |9 l" b$ {0 U) _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 b" j% M8 @' I5 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' @7 b+ J- h4 s: o3 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& q3 I( E1 D! N1 Y$ v4 }# n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  ], o: D$ Y  z+ \- H+ P* Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 ?& w4 K% e% z" G4 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ s6 N2 P% Q' v1 |9 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- n1 T* c$ u. U: d4 B& g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 ]$ P0 ?# B8 T3 O, [3 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 w/ |6 H$ J9 |2 V<P>你无需担心</P>
' W6 {$ S7 X4 v2 e# w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' D2 M( t* j) K3 v+ C3 z5 ?) {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* z5 Y% w" L  S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- f- |% @/ r" z& m- D/ T# y' I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 w" q& a# x" t& J5 i  a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' E8 \2 b7 i" |# N6 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 q$ X. C* p: s: b5 D2 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  `$ O1 C% b& c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 T+ R; z$ A/ E% D* Y+ ~+ ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ p$ D0 J* p# c) T) @2 O) t2 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% u! T3 U8 v5 O# K4 y+ ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: Y  E! L* s' H! l+ J1 k( s9 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 {" P. A8 j  Z$ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ]9 t) S0 r# R8 y3 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ]4 [; j- g( m7 M0 B" l$ W$ r, x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 }* k3 x+ k/ g* P, {* o  \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ O6 p6 U- r- z& w- g7 v' P: e. R9 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% S$ X2 F) E9 n% @% E! f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 \( h+ `  E  l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! X7 t: {1 }' X2 T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  v3 `& E( \7 {6 r" e1 \, {我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>