【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 A/ X6 |0 O5 [9 H* uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" D4 h' m$ q6 \# c3 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ D$ }  |- ^. f, g3 zYou needn’t fear anything
" R' D4 |: B$ {) `- [( L. e/ H; `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 n3 I0 P5 l; [4 w: Q' CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ q& H8 K: m# b2 @2 C; y4 q, `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 C5 o# B( [' p; t. SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) C- B4 H0 Y& Y0 l# m: L8 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 s$ O0 w! a5 b' [; {. j2 N9 y( @* CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* ^4 C* V2 J; `0 Z  M' K/ s5 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ c8 c# f' j' K7 g; b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 d0 B) M( a3 K0 i7 P$ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  y8 o" R6 O8 M5 J" M3 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 K! J" L( W; A: v% F' p& B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) f' g! q' c0 q1 ?2 c1 p4 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 M( A, h6 E" x+ W. O) c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, T+ M% [1 b! S- E4 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 B4 z) n: V. ]2 ~, g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 d: W6 x+ `  Z7 l5 ?- p. Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 c9 J$ O- s/ A' |7 |9 U1 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) s- M' \' Y! W1 n5 L4 u0 ~' v( K<P>你无需担心</P>
  {1 j0 E. }3 i0 E! Q: u& ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: M2 e* ~3 e: z0 B4 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( B- Y1 R! S6 C2 O# F( H+ l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: J/ j; x' n6 \! E4 g. H; Q% P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! P& I9 _' `5 t7 b( r3 ]( P+ ?* l# W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- L/ _: H. M# q, C* [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 l( C1 w4 D# L- Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ ?3 f# o0 ?' S% r) ?  @, e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" _6 t& `+ T& J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) t* H# H# V& R: }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 y- a$ e8 r) `5 h4 C* A$ l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. R. n3 X2 W. U% Q4 E* \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' D4 s7 S: L7 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
% H0 t' M2 p; L. l7 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" |5 H/ X3 p7 F3 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: a9 F- N! F, n9 `* Y: `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ e6 P0 u) i) }6 \7 Q2 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 g1 U" r& f, z& S/ w, B! X2 N7 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 M; o; r* B9 A2 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 i$ h' p$ x: ?+ Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' m, Y* j4 B- Y" K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- e2 c; J7 w/ |" f. Z. F7 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 Y  T; I& n( L, A/ m我请你剖开它

  C* [7 I: t& u3 p: Q: P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( x3 x+ K3 }2 d  n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>