【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; O7 t9 X) X. `9 ?歌词我附在后面。
0 D6 C2 h3 D- u* f% J% gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ o8 c4 R; L6 f8 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# \& I4 F! x# T8 a4 S2 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 w8 _" P; r4 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! V: u& A* |. J7 X8 sI want so much to see inside your heart
$ |5 x' x0 @8 R, X/ ]5 c+ zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" @8 t1 U( W  jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 k" a1 a7 O6 e8 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 D2 V; P" B9 n2 y6 w, ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# @6 }! m, |- A: Z  H2 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! s3 Q+ z" k2 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# l4 y# j* A& A+ j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- H, G4 K0 A/ M' o7 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 H0 c( O0 \- N$ P4 p5 L' _! K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; Z' m* p/ A0 I$ x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* d! @- A) Q, S" q  D5 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 d! F/ O; y5 Z2 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 [, o- q% I0 v8 [( {# Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' X' M4 Z6 Y, l; O  L2 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' z2 e2 H9 m8 }# }+ d5 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 B* v6 i9 r# e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% Q' L' y1 r. K) l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 a& b+ V' |5 O4 o& Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 N5 X% U3 k  U. F  u* ?* n) p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( U0 N( a6 I) R$ W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 N+ ]" F2 i& g$ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 W) X3 @9 @4 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 H1 F1 d- I5 d' U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; O( d6 k' _, I7 j- U$ S5 I! L. i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* d# q6 H5 z* N2 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 j: j% M/ r8 e2 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 W, c+ q' G8 T( g  S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: B/ o* b5 q3 F  D) m3 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 c- |# {. J+ j) n8 m# ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* R+ j  C! |' J, X" `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; v: v* P/ Y- @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  e; ]3 T' F; e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 ?" x& {4 i1 I, l; |) j/ ~% _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ {2 \8 P% T/ A, n% d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# R1 m; w" y( j, p5 o. S& o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 u* F4 i" d& ^/ m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>