【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# z" l% i4 i* W+ h歌词我附在后面。
, u/ X2 f5 A, \  g1 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( q9 z; q" B  rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ]' |' x: M/ R& l7 m% PThe sky is happy down to its soul
" j" P! q$ D- F& s" |( pWith the moon kissing it every night
. a( d: {6 _  K! d& z: @Seeing the sky content with its love
0 l! n( c/ \/ t4 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( p) N9 N8 L0 }, v1 d8 S! GYou needn’t fear anything
2 _5 w- v( H; o+ [1 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  }: V" A  S7 NI really want to know just how much you love me
! F" Z8 ?/ O- S! d+ d$ BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: b+ W. t+ }& UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ w. k* D0 s8 c2 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
  O. n% Z6 }7 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 ]% j$ C# l6 c) OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 `  C. h8 U& [3 K  p1 v) |5 M7 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ }( E) m' _' X  o" V9 n& [$ B. P- ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- P7 m0 W8 s) [2 l6 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 Q( z8 A9 H9 [7 K% @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; y: V* L& _& ?  N3 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% N9 u/ E+ E+ M" X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) G2 K0 r/ T9 ^% P; j/ b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ]3 @& X. T0 T5 F1 R! A% q" Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 ?5 J0 W: T6 M, [$ s7 i<P>你无需担心</P>
$ H: k9 C: t7 e+ Y7 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 [, U2 \# X9 F% M" o6 R' {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Y6 I; f* w! G! r. O- l$ m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 k8 W9 j0 i0 x( o, c( E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 I; |+ S" T5 Q* `% v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% g& s- X  c8 Y$ C! h9 z) f9 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 k, D$ Y4 b" \/ p' G$ R" l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: v6 r& p0 B9 L- I* [) l: }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* G8 N3 ?- u( q: L4 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 [1 @3 t5 U5 h1 T4 R9 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 L2 s, @1 v: r' b- c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 k+ W7 B/ D+ H; u5 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: F+ d  q' T9 P# X+ V' r6 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Y" t0 E0 A/ f6 ?8 Q5 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 A5 g2 n  j* X: A+ G; q( S7 T0 C1 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 `0 ]" |! ?1 G9 a0 L5 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 _. a  o4 x6 _" S0 M: \' }% R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 {0 l9 j, Y) |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 k% ]. H& M7 T- s) _/ }4 p我请你剖开它

; b" T& x5 L, c; t7 B1 Z$ Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>