【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) m2 m3 k) P" S* k歌词我附在后面。
+ E" a: C& n! K# p6 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" V. k! I* B2 [1 h: T# g4 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Q5 b7 u4 c1 p" s, s  }' KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& g+ b$ j( }. k8 d3 O, z# x3 V* X# GWith the moon kissing it every night
8 m' Y; X% P6 HSeeing the sky content with its love
8 d9 N$ S1 w8 ?, }& }! w* ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! n. n6 X: ^, C& Y4 Z( wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% B6 `. Z( ]4 u( M# y! |Nothing can compare to my love
; u, p3 I# }% Z  wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ]& I2 ?# X9 }, cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" I1 c$ q& [: p+ M) C+ j5 i' ^3 AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# T2 a! i3 H) }) D: a1 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# F2 H  D& E6 f/ ?2 E4 Z8 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ f) i0 w3 H& k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( C7 A+ U( R) ]) u6 u0 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( [1 n: o( r1 X2 a  p& v7 E$ V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* [. ~7 b; I. F0 T! t  s; D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 e$ Y# |4 m( A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 t+ b6 h0 D- w+ n<P>你无需担心</P>
" h7 ?# v% m) m; r7 x4 {7 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- S* Q6 I1 v3 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 R" l- T+ v: ?! r. G+ x+ B  `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ K* k: C$ Q9 p& w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 p! j5 \: q( ~9 N: `& K& V  z, m& U% O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: q5 z0 p! _4 h( ^1 \( A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  n* k' ^9 Q: [- r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ L% f7 F* j! z, b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) w9 _, w( B& S1 l" c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ a* f) s1 z* N' ?& X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 A  I' z9 s/ m. O, _# `- a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- v  G) y( k! z/ C. w  z7 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" _7 b1 V- Q( y: [5 o* T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ S" o. V- ~3 M' ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# d" D. E4 D1 \2 j# C5 O; V9 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- _0 b1 \' @! Q! D6 N2 s3 j' u<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 W4 W' }5 g$ n' C% Q" q0 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( d: O& Q) @% o  X) u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 N* q7 K: p$ s( f, j3 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, X0 C( P# \3 t$ Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 ^- z7 S4 |9 b$ N! A, Q+ T3 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ w8 S/ u& t# B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( g$ p7 r7 S3 F/ ]$ b' P& }7 w) C3 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' `: X1 U% Z8 V. o& `& v. C/ U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 r/ B8 t3 C# F; l% I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>