【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 S0 e' D  l4 z. q  jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 h4 N* G( o( S: T9 d5 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ B' p" G/ Z$ q% d# L5 O. gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 k" e  W' N% m4 z* o1 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
7 t/ k- B8 _, m) B9 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! g9 H' f) A9 N! H4 p9 |You needn’t fear anything
8 Q) O& o0 w: ]) @% B+ j5 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' e# }1 ^* g& K+ b8 ~Every other word you utter is love
! v# s/ h3 N# T1 i: i3 C7 {I really want to know just how much you love me
( P3 u) \, {! O, e8 |! Q2 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
" D4 U/ Q, `+ eNothing can compare to my love
! p- C, b9 U! Q* _. \3 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 k# s" P, ]" m6 u9 U6 ~0 f/ W( HI want so much to see inside your heart
1 q6 J9 Y; W, R1 y5 u5 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ v) x; H0 c+ f! C1 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ o" u* f% e; zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) K! ]5 I' w, a8 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! n4 T' O& g/ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. f8 J3 X% l6 K4 F6 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 x' k+ D2 h# v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ]3 e2 p. @2 @7 Q) a6 q( Q! ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, k4 k  T; B+ K0 U6 }+ P9 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& O9 L) N. z7 J3 W5 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( a: \% n. @7 W3 K5 k* a# X  e4 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; h% p( E  u( g9 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 L2 T0 `, _: Z! Q1 p& N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; k4 ]) o. O+ n  M2 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 k4 I6 B* W* `  h1 R  S4 e+ n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' t$ }' B& m+ T. v# ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ i0 J4 X# z. f$ _* X4 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 q( q+ W' @: O, Y/ @' K  Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- i  F# a/ `* c! W& ^: l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 j  ]8 Z$ l3 y3 ]/ l, `  K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" u" l/ u  E' w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Q8 h* A/ l& Q) M% Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& U% L! t( L2 M, @# K! {. z7 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( }6 I- L( S+ {$ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, O/ N- A( B2 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, I! q1 O! e5 H$ f% v9 G" ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  [3 N& l2 Z3 N" N# L4 C2 G. w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( n8 ~% A, T9 {5 S# g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 q1 ~& W4 Q0 P5 v" m1 _+ e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% ~4 z0 f/ k, I" J& P7 X$ P* o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) ^7 O( U: p9 K. \  E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) ]  ]9 Q0 b' T) j我请你剖开它
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6 U$ t0 P6 b! f- f+ ?% Q/ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 {+ l2 D/ @, k. }. s( I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>