【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 u/ Y3 b  \$ F# N6 Y; ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) P1 t/ l# [( V! k1 T) H2 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 k) p  s9 s7 T% S. gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% [+ W3 \3 v5 g0 Z- G; GSeeing the sky content with its love
$ }5 n8 a5 S; EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ W  G/ ]4 J0 T  T8 R" u; oI really want to know just how much you love me
7 v, j+ E$ n8 j! }" L' M0 CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" H6 e7 Q# O6 p: L, D9 O9 f; Q# oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 R. i, E% K& w0 Q& P2 {$ ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ k1 d9 ~4 z7 Y7 P8 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  c+ k6 B8 V/ j8 h8 C# f% z% x5 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 p' X6 }7 }6 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 p  P- @8 F* F( W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Y' x* b! @  w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 B' O: i; P6 G# s/ @% L  v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 s4 t1 ]9 M! Q* B+ i7 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 i# S( |, d6 ~7 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 \, R0 I" d  H1 N3 {9 C. p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  T8 E4 j# i  ?7 O7 N' g* v6 Q2 h4 G6 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! f5 i" Z# z+ B% P( E4 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 a. t* g3 O3 n. L: C8 r, X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: C5 J: S4 M/ h9 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 }5 Y( E7 F, C/ n  H( _! k2 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, i! |" B) L- d& ~0 \8 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 u1 O3 T$ J4 @3 p1 L: j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 Q6 g' p2 @4 \( v8 G( y7 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 m" }, Q3 _" C6 R& t# s  B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 b% _8 R! h6 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 v( F6 v% n9 L, ]: l; S3 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: g. P4 ?* j& N0 }" ?5 y/ x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' G, ?8 S1 E8 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) P+ h4 |. M* P/ X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ X; z& H) S% e8 e/ M. K% z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 Y! k5 ?  n4 ?) R0 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ f. D. h; v9 F# N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: F+ Z8 N- Z& o6 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 E6 @6 l! \# h- Y* R+ V1 H0 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# D$ u2 M& ?9 T$ o3 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# g. U5 e- x  B: I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 U9 [* @7 e2 N+ d, O( m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- h% N' _9 V% \! |, m5 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' _5 Z  J/ {& \7 g3 }' A9 \" n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# H, Z, S2 H/ o6 z7 e/ K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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  p6 G3 @; V1 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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