【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  ^2 G# m% J) a7 m$ FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* e3 f1 Q6 k, M7 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 g% F* g' c+ [& wWith the moon kissing it every night
1 S* @  ^* g6 ?- d( B; WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- k7 y: G: v5 {- b3 s; u# M: h' {+ OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Y5 j5 V* `/ n/ ^" z& q* KEvery other word you utter is love
1 s7 O. D9 ?; h( t# ?% o4 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ T! ]6 Z* B$ r* p: GNothing can compare to my love
; L6 x/ c$ O! L! O% O2 Z7 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' I& F1 X/ ^" l; L; e! yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( ?. ?6 @& n1 i4 X% A! jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( p+ S3 b7 a& V- u. A# u5 VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 {' D! D, ~# OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! y- I( Z/ m2 R* c2 R  RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 j$ n) }0 T6 I5 y( F# v4 B) YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) q( P& n1 `& w5 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* r# G1 h/ A& {* V- a% [* ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; U* D; w  v' K  z9 L) z9 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ H( i6 r: ~; f; Y/ E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: q- d& W; f0 {+ e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 s& B; v  p9 ~9 G8 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" N, f% P+ a( Y; X  R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 K% h. F# y. y' @/ k$ b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ {" D1 X0 U9 o- z, l. X- v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* S/ ]  m( u  N2 Q5 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' m1 m2 h- [' Q$ S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; d0 L; Y2 P4 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( O, O5 H8 U! W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 R3 }, O1 R& W. ?0 N2 }& d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: T& b7 z1 Y7 q4 P" z6 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* B" E/ U8 d0 Y9 }- c/ @6 \5 g# ?+ S/ ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 o$ k$ s2 U5 N2 u; w0 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& I6 a. w, C" P4 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% I6 V: O0 b: H& c- ?1 T/ o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ v- s2 O2 s1 y" v6 N6 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 ?( D1 H; t3 M  E$ o. _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! A6 b4 M7 k: A3 y: M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  r: S0 u" s& ~. s& i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 `+ u& m2 y( A# h$ j7 D. z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) Z8 W# e0 l" F( b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 T/ w1 I# y) u7 }( `: n, Y0 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>