【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Z% _/ j- _' N- T' Y5 }5 R; @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; }# o0 ^. o1 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& g- m0 w. ~# D7 s# p: i9 r& _% _+ aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! H4 H5 C* _2 n* X# P9 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 v& p/ g9 ^5 W; eWith the moon kissing it every night
) ?# s/ v' }; _- mSeeing the sky content with its love
; z" E7 v0 T: F% F. o$ V2 R+ P, V/ fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: D: y+ ?, K2 f& @' c7 C$ hYou needn’t fear anything
& I# ?$ E9 S( B. G, X( }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 d" P9 ]2 _/ q2 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) i, F- H  S+ n( UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. J# P8 i& h( P/ Q7 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 s+ a* b! C- N% U0 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( i8 g  `" b/ J# m- m4 }I want so much to see inside your heart
/ w. p  Q  s! E# SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% L2 I2 o! c! Y. Q) k$ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 p/ j8 O/ Y& F/ L* H) D% YWith such a tongue as yours,
$ R# g( v+ h. e- D9 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; q9 \$ ^! g% {" N" W# T4 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) P( ~7 R3 l! ?/ L0 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 F/ I2 p4 i$ v) X* |7 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  G8 r5 X2 y. H' \) N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# f& t6 N1 Y- T* A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 I- H1 f; Z7 F- C/ x- r6 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& C# X" B1 _& [& ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! h# k+ w1 X# N0 w% B2 \6 Y  \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: B4 p9 |( D8 Q; `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& }1 S& L: J# _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: l/ w0 k3 Z! x; P# z9 z0 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  n& |2 V3 V9 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: C7 X7 q; \; ~7 E% k" R$ p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 w0 `! A5 [+ x5 a% k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 d1 G: h' _1 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 Y  `; ?! S) x; V6 O5 d) X2 [7 _( N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; t* S! u9 ~9 t' j$ s2 R4 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* b8 W& e% g2 C5 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 q9 v. X  }1 x; T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! z! i  A" }% o9 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ Q3 Y4 `6 ]0 l$ u$ X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- H1 M2 ?& m$ r' j2 P* |- n我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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