【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# m. o; |2 b4 }$ [: O; t歌词我附在后面。
0 J4 A: ]) {+ |6 B+ r5 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, ~+ V+ Y1 U2 j" t! a& w: qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ C4 X! N2 N# M; MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ^" M* ?# j- tThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ _- y0 h2 ~" i! e3 K, IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 c9 u  s4 [2 L+ k8 MYou needn’t fear anything
( G  \( n! g; O4 I! dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* D9 Z6 D9 P; u1 J3 }  Q6 fI really want to know just how much you love me
) f# M0 @% A( DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 b3 s' w! h  L7 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ^# r: \8 ^( ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 Z4 A+ K' N/ K  F4 T. Y. o8 h* ~1 ]I’m still filled with fear
% R+ h; j) n4 ?/ K& KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' b! Z7 }0 J! s& t' k% O( RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- c4 K9 {% v% Z% Q+ I# N& e9 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ~7 T! Q" O$ i( k( sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. r% X' Y9 B9 C' W; r  k  V) P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; [! ^, x  c0 M* O  {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 H5 _$ k  r: j; [3 q" [& t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ Y# L" ?- ?3 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ?! S6 _6 K0 v  C8 t3 w: Y4 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 M2 q, a/ D' E% \8 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) h3 [" y$ M$ L: r: @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 O" B) y: u9 U) m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ U( V3 F5 E- l9 b- ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 O2 v- q* x* d3 O* }+ c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* N& }+ ^& N" H! g1 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; h6 ^8 O' ]$ J7 `1 i: s/ @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ T7 i' D+ k* H/ i0 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 C/ @9 n( z* S8 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* F4 J' G+ Z4 U, T. F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Q5 K" R5 Y2 t: B: V" P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 D. P. U- `* q  M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 F& {' E3 x0 r" T2 ~/ e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 b' m( X  q% g0 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! e* Q/ p0 j% `8 d1 K0 O+ A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- u: Y+ e/ I; U; k7 u8 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 C5 _/ c6 Y+ Z  z5 M! R  ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 J& ~) c; A$ o) @* ~5 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>