【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 D- X* R7 z1 [! I: ]; xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) j% ~3 |% `* {! t* E5 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, L. D  G2 A' c7 ]7 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 i% [+ \$ n( j; K0 I% qThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 v) v% h& s1 f. |. u/ @: \2 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 Y! g5 c& {: L" d6 p( DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& \9 I; Z  y) M8 d) FYou needn’t fear anything
/ s8 p3 M' D, Z9 B9 [5 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  j9 v1 {9 G+ v% x4 h3 l$ rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, q4 N5 t; s3 I: A/ b- M8 w; DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. _/ F; r+ Z' H$ u3 V8 M- p! B8 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 ?$ _0 q! }0 h  d2 u' W# R9 E+ ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 D8 v9 q$ t2 L# O+ W/ UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  r1 i* r, b6 H8 |9 Z1 VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! m" b2 ~" Q* ^. O6 q2 FI regret not dying
, J# l/ a( `8 a& K/ x$ HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ]4 Y7 }! @& X( EWith such a tongue as yours,
* b; H6 p% C$ ~* p; t# G5 z& jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 i: @' z8 U& f1 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 S1 s+ O# R7 r! y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% S3 D7 S8 V: ~2 T- ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ k5 j  F+ `0 a' O5 g: z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! I) u1 Z8 E6 v0 i$ [; X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: X5 r/ V) F# S5 a. ]; Q' p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ]1 h+ E6 k6 ~2 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 t; y% L, [1 C5 V# l- ~& J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# E+ B: [+ v, g' L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. M7 \' R$ M, @' T: r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 T9 U3 f$ Y% ?1 a6 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' @, p6 M  D: I+ S" X- \* W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ j" R2 v: b; ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. |: f' v4 G# d: V6 J) W) e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 h' N+ L* x& {/ S% T' V3 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 H6 ^  M. m! }: Z- {7 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 S" Z" c% X. U$ e% D3 l+ Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ Z* J, ~: P2 V  C1 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ e3 m% t% |: E1 Y# ~$ T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ L9 s6 c4 ?- u& |# E( x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 q2 T! a: z( V* c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# e. f$ h& R2 D+ a* {, Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! P8 C  b; l. a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 q1 {! B8 y* q: A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 f$ ^# p; f' G& v! x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 `. `0 X$ A* {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 q, {% l2 M; Y5 y! ?4 Q) D# P我请你剖开它
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: T- U, `, e2 y. T  U6 Z# r' R2 @) T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>