【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) R$ X( k- [+ C- L: _+ b% H' CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: s- v# H7 X7 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 r- c1 a9 S) hWith the moon kissing it every night
3 }* v6 H1 U" J( [  t  gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; }3 E2 u( S9 ^5 \# |You needn’t fear anything
# W8 d) V% T! W) a# pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 O/ R) X# j& L) z  _% @  ^) qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 ^7 Q5 g3 K6 U: v6 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: Z1 r9 |( n/ x& P8 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; ]4 {2 m$ j6 a& MWith such a tongue as yours,
0 E- D9 d; Q1 `, V# X# P; [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; G: p; |9 |  f0 m1 P- n. aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 }- D! C2 I" p6 [% H' dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 l6 z6 S! J2 d$ p9 A! Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% `6 l% C9 A5 N- S1 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K: n% U& t6 p% ^7 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 X! V3 B6 E/ I% u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# U& n. V* Z5 @4 c% C' b% }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( n1 j) s# }' z0 U& H) A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' N' H2 ~" F! E% ]8 r* H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) G$ h2 F3 I2 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 O3 a1 ?% j) B1 Q5 r) L0 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 H6 ^" f( z0 m% w' T1 T- k- N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. l$ r8 c1 a" `, {. s. z5 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& s3 y. |' u: |# i7 z5 t2 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% k; g/ v3 t, ~& X0 Z6 k' l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. n$ ^0 y. y3 P  K+ c: m- _9 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. q4 E  q" B. v; d0 k' M+ `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# e- s2 Y+ _4 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& e. J! w# ]6 w. k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 a, j* A, T% D" Z$ }$ K- j" C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ i" t/ M6 ]7 S/ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 j- B6 x- d. w1 L0 M) d! }<P>I regret not dying</P>
) q; `1 V. j: ]. O& n9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- M4 i# g4 p/ \- c  L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% l# H- }9 S" A6 [4 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- N5 W/ s, R& ]$ e# S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  k7 A: U0 p0 r2 x; f! Z& f$ l+ [6 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# F' ?2 c7 a5 M8 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 P4 a% E' @; Z7 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# c6 R4 s6 q9 O! y% [) @5 D/ ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 O, b- H! M0 f1 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 M6 T; x+ H0 ~) u: h* |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 v/ H" u- i; d; W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>