【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 O* ~* g3 p9 O# P8 Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 X% B! ?- w+ Y- F9 ^/ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 Y) t5 L% G( bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  G" k, L5 }- T4 R9 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 y8 b5 f9 s3 T2 ?5 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 O- q# y5 `/ E3 [, tI really want to know just how much you love me
' N0 S* ^( E" M1 P9 T: yI love you I love you with all my heart
' y$ p% x; H1 R/ N* b3 ^9 L  aNothing can compare to my love
' w) L  B  f/ bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' X. w/ A% A& i7 Z1 ]) U' ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 x: D' i2 D0 o7 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ]- o/ B" y; R6 K* ^6 I; PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# C; r/ |) r$ |+ |/ _1 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 F" I0 H. g% ~  y! v" BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 C# w0 E3 v6 c( K8 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% f/ A& n! u8 o4 o, ?+ }) X: ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# F+ |9 h' ~0 ?# z% N' H. F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) i: d, w2 _1 L" c% k/ ~6 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 G9 T0 H9 s8 T/ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 T3 u$ q5 s6 v& c- m' m- M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; h; ~; q. L& e: E7 e: b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* g# `6 W: }$ ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ \; f0 X# q% p: n+ P( o5 ~; |0 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ^9 f, M" e0 r: ^; B. k8 @! b/ e9 |4 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. r+ g4 }4 d, j9 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ h' A) D7 {5 h9 h" e  k& J/ v+ _; I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! T# |# n2 F0 @7 L4 e. i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% B2 r, g2 o) h" F$ W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' c$ r& V% Z* L( c4 Q# d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* p% Q5 l. H7 p: m  y# i( Z( p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 ]( N$ g; E3 I6 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; \2 ^5 Y! ]3 [$ @( v* D. L5 e; ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ^7 |! f1 p9 s0 t' g( d* S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 U: m2 k* G' ~. G- i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 Q+ V, ~' x8 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 @  C7 C, D; l/ d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* I  a3 y) b" X& m+ k$ i/ i+ i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ p; J7 X# t, `+ I, s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- H- E+ A5 }; }, C/ z& `) u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" I& s. b; d0 [' a- M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, k. t' f2 f' m/ k8 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) L( N  t# N0 ^- u, `8 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ }! N' P5 x# P: i2 T( b: X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 D/ n. x7 M' Y/ e1 V* o  o% g& k我请你剖开它

2 y2 B9 b7 E' g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>