【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 j1 f$ j) Z3 Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 i+ d4 \2 Q" d7 L9 Y+ k, yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% c- S9 ?/ ^9 u/ ^  _! u9 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 b; {! g2 M9 i; ?, N& eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 \1 x+ d8 y; b1 m6 @You needn’t fear anything
! v7 M% o4 H' u8 ~" R; i7 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 ]3 M8 n' Y* pI really want to know just how much you love me
; U6 d: g; W1 P8 r1 D$ yI love you I love you with all my heart
; L' o4 a$ R4 L9 V7 }0 D5 fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  l6 T6 s5 ?/ yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. e+ A; r& u9 g; A4 I: `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ }: K! ?, ~0 B1 P# s! iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 U* k6 j; k4 r( }5 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; W  b* n' {& M' c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) Z- p4 L0 u7 n8 `5 D' ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ~# X7 Y8 l& t$ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, a9 E$ m  `8 E% \# h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ~5 h3 m' n, N" S  o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: g' w' V' \' x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 e! d/ [' N& a& {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, x, x, s* g0 E( `6 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 x' T( o7 H% J+ I+ s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 q7 p, W; r6 p; J9 X0 p/ Y, B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  L6 ]4 _8 m+ ^9 s( N7 {& p3 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 m7 E6 q7 |/ n) `$ G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) }0 k; g+ N+ ?7 r2 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 `; X, x2 q, y  V. U% r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 {" }7 C) {. f" b7 N6 y  v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' _" j" j9 Z# z! m9 m7 Z8 l- D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 |* C, E7 r$ d7 _+ z/ U0 E, i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# _- L3 }3 F( J1 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* h2 \6 y" P; f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# U4 G) u) {8 M3 |& u8 O; ~( m$ V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) M  w8 l6 }! A7 ]6 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 A# N0 l0 s( g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' i: n1 r- ^8 s7 g& k+ V% e7 X& U/ y<P>I regret not dying</P>
- B6 }( Z* |/ Z! R* K8 I2 [. j* }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' u. s; e, X2 e/ _( @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 `& `. |1 N" Q- T" i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" f4 A" D; g, ]- x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ m! a$ {6 z" I, M: Z$ C: M7 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q: `6 u8 A2 ?% I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% f4 L3 m! W3 S2 d3 k3 }4 a- j& [5 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, v5 b7 o: l! o% z% e我请你剖开它
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& Q/ x- u' D( N+ W5 N/ n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% X" q/ f2 s* }( t  k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>