【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ p* J6 h9 ^. D3 m3 u8 D歌词我附在后面。
6 s" m( B0 e; A" c1 C' M4 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# r9 b: q3 ~5 i  O: fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ N% E7 R5 j9 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 x& a) n  g* ^$ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# M' V  `) s2 D& D7 K1 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 L8 A3 g7 {4 }* |! _1 |Seeing the sky content with its love
; y( V0 `2 T" I, MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 H- G7 l$ O; H7 b! Y2 i: r7 lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( b2 a; l5 T! Z$ xI really want to know just how much you love me
0 h- d8 ]! n$ g# A9 b& f5 c! v/ _& [I love you I love you with all my heart
" G% o. I2 q& W% I) s8 aNothing can compare to my love
) l& A) I% L4 s3 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, c- g+ y4 D" T" E- G$ b# k6 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 w& D8 T7 B! p6 b7 X3 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; G% l4 [; C0 L% |5 p. w4 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 B0 W6 j  W$ |/ o; g* _' D+ Z7 `5 A; d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Q4 q: c' W9 Y* O& x4 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 V/ J5 g6 L! Y0 R6 U, W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" ^5 z9 F9 z, N' Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ i  `# I1 c! X8 @; g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" G4 Z& _7 }" c9 M" m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( E) ~5 P' h+ t/ _& X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 |# ~( T. P' `1 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 M; X# H7 L, M0 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: k, C* b! k4 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 w2 f6 }% K. b& o( ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 m! S( t6 P, r9 _# r/ ?. P9 ]3 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" `( |. B& a0 o! U9 ~/ q( u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' x$ `. Q; i; x: {# u0 s* \<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 X# K* }$ ]8 h! z5 b) o& e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ e1 q' v7 j( g* }9 q( E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>