【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 Y1 }# {" Z# F. N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  a. |6 k8 }' n3 q& s$ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 H$ H9 D# M  o) _( ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 J9 |6 c! B8 R3 b5 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
& Y2 ?9 _9 l4 f! e; VSeeing the sky content with its love
1 S2 {4 Y1 f5 N# ~3 U6 o8 W' ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; X8 T" W9 W$ \+ I% s" P$ O9 r+ KYou needn’t fear anything
' X5 p' L$ J. }% X  Q; G' i- bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" o( K$ H( s- X$ N- k0 ?3 PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 g$ [  w' R  T5 T; U' qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! D& U/ T& s  h9 ~" R' wI want so much to see inside your heart
$ g% i5 t& V; ~6 ^2 `* xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ ]3 |) O6 d# v: E; O' U4 A) YI’m still filled with fear
! w+ Z: f2 _1 v- f" ]8 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ ~2 @: K% x9 TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 Z, W( L% y- B5 ~. \! XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 v+ X( z) O9 V- a( t/ A. vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; C$ k/ C2 l4 e+ }  Y4 Q* C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 |  F* U4 H% a, e* n! g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- c7 \8 g! z  y. ~4 R. ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ w. Y# f, [5 E+ {" u  [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) z2 n+ M/ H: [" T. V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) u' z, @: @6 n" \, J' B+ V' k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* \) D; H+ b0 P<P>你无需担心</P>
' [; H' f" i8 x5 p& [) O9 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 f9 Q# ]5 j, p% `& q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 Q% n  d( `" P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* q, k6 G' S5 G, f, I% n8 P# N/ j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% I# E4 O% [- ^# N, Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# A$ H# [, z- d/ B0 t; e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 l0 E7 l" V" s7 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: l0 F& {. n# I) |* t, ?& I$ f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 L3 N  m0 T- @3 C- w2 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 f0 r# \9 |( k# m9 N( w/ ]2 z6 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( g# {) X% x! t. U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 A* p5 p' M& j; D' x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. U4 l# }) S' Q. U* V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ S+ O' p# [. G" a  a6 U/ h/ A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! W0 P) l0 b2 ?/ T; S9 ~) G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 w* n6 f, N. X, ~" l( Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 x$ P" R+ Y! ^3 K1 w4 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ i9 b2 j8 h6 p0 q# ^. p2 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 P2 k. P; y1 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 C, i9 ?4 H3 y+ S5 e0 S" E. A, r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: I& F3 D8 z" k% l* g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ B$ i+ E! ^- \/ B  j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" L5 e6 s7 X: T3 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 ?9 R1 i6 V) \  P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 u. H7 u7 U0 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>