【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ N2 y+ W- }  V2 e% gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ^# s$ x9 v$ ?1 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 y6 |) I8 t1 a2 o" xSeeing the sky content with its love
. i( l3 \' l+ Y9 `6 u( X$ g4 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" L4 c: c7 w8 `+ wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; I8 ^! w: {# F) II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 l" q8 d" ]9 J# ?0 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' r( C9 s9 [1 X+ g- ~. A, _0 N2 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! ~2 v2 r& }2 T2 B" f9 S: ^I regret not dying
6 |! C% M& }/ d9 n( I! H3 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& f6 X! h* ^1 T. J$ f; |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 a6 E! X3 ]9 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 p2 R8 A0 k0 J, J+ R5 Z! V! K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  H- S* B' E0 Z  b/ u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( x: f& P7 I6 T/ j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 `# m4 r2 l' i9 j7 P3 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. z8 U* W+ R  u, h% n9 E+ A) e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 K  H) ~  f* G4 L8 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. R- e! t' c9 n3 Q( `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 T# A0 ^! u" d' I* r) V$ r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ f5 p+ k! W  F" H" d& h% @9 Z4 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( ?8 f6 N* k1 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& K7 M1 t1 A' X1 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' q  L3 P8 V% _; V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; c7 s8 s6 J. L% Y5 x! w$ @( g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 g$ B- |6 [! k, z9 g" t2 A" F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 S: c. Z# ]) F, G' l: q/ h$ K3 B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& A7 y, O, W8 @' w; C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# E9 I% |! I2 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- U- ^7 E. E- w9 X* ?: X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ h1 y/ ~* q0 p5 R4 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ I' c8 I4 F, a) J8 m* U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( ~. E) t; u. `& g. d$ G9 C- M. R$ q, ~0 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 P6 A3 |/ m) X+ k0 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 S. y- c; P: Z6 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% Q1 R0 \) j6 I# C8 s* v8 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& n- D' u7 i9 }3 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' U# h) z+ a8 J! S% G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ M% i/ j* ^+ `2 [8 T7 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 I' h2 [3 q" ]! @; K; I0 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' O8 b  d8 g$ e* b6 ~! @) j  v) u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 @* J# h; g& v: e. _+ G7 `( H' N" T8 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>