【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 a. P5 l; f8 f6 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: I+ q: h8 V5 w' N9 S0 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: g; f3 Z8 I7 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 ~+ {6 }2 [1 q3 U& e! N( eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 q7 j: B0 q6 j1 w- \You needn’t fear anything
% u% i* B5 M& C& JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ k. B' O$ n( c+ p6 REvery other word you utter is love
$ R, m8 G% _8 P$ R! O1 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 h: @  ^9 u- T, v# i# e0 U/ aNothing can compare to my love
- L+ o3 j5 L+ L/ v* {2 P# cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 o- o! K2 k: A  f# D. U* `. ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 j  {! H$ P/ i, k$ B. U0 E" lI want so much to see inside your heart
% v( t7 M0 W! j) \3 x: M- MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ~' e4 `8 h( v( G/ Y& u5 r+ YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 m1 _/ P& b" f# xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' t" a6 L# T7 c2 T2 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ f! E0 _9 A! f5 ^8 K7 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' [" D% y4 L! rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, W4 h! W5 }: m. |. \$ D& B- V% p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, l$ q+ F+ t; w4 }" j' O4 g$ u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; e* e0 o, w/ u  i' ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 I& s' r( b7 Y5 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ u2 |0 Y) {( I- c. T2 ^. ?9 `6 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 S' f7 M9 P- _2 @) c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: V  }6 O/ |; ^4 G: @6 D$ w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 F, W- @2 d, s& [  V3 H8 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 d- J: g1 k" {! M) r5 v: M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  f/ l( ]: r; `# O# ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 o; o& F# ]8 B3 d1 u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ^- C  o9 M% H; d2 g- s" X! C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, G9 p2 y3 Y, k8 k$ N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- _) ]) f. r6 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% u7 l' w! v7 N4 ^! L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 R  [/ ?) e- _9 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 K- t, @3 q5 Y) a. }8 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& g0 ^/ Q$ l  B% W# d; p- ]8 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- v. n4 H! x8 ?5 ^  @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ~2 v# Q) k* Y$ W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! e# B" }4 C6 |5 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ]! Z1 z' c0 S1 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- ]- X' V0 D; ]' v9 q- o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 J! _" g1 ]" d4 w/ d5 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 v8 @  H' |) I: m9 R" O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 e. [% X. H2 \) j3 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& a8 R+ b) s7 A1 y0 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, R5 j5 ^8 F0 B& {9 O$ d0 d0 T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( X  r% ?* {7 x; L6 e我请你剖开它
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# D! v) C: w5 _- u! [" V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>