【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 U# F- n, a4 }7 b0 j/ Y8 R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 K# T. \. J0 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' n, L. `4 ?2 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  G" N" Y- m- s' @2 J# }) C2 @  LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* r) t+ d2 P- Q+ R' PEvery other word you utter is love
; D6 U7 G2 b6 ]7 F$ x. o; EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. C* a7 u$ k8 }) n0 r' qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 n! _0 Z: p4 Q( ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; @. p# j" t3 G9 Y/ }* {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 a$ }9 u# c8 Y8 a9 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 m3 W. G# ~6 O/ q- d3 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 j) y, ^& G1 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' |* c9 V) `( ^5 r/ E; C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ?0 F- h/ B: o0 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 G+ a5 Q4 B7 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 j& Y2 j) A0 q' @" J3 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( p8 T" U- x0 |' m+ Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 L! u3 l) g) F2 Z' R5 @/ r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 g. `% T' Z# }) Y% Y3 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. u  `, Z$ t0 ~8 Z  k6 D5 o! c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 p, K9 |+ {  ~1 {: A/ q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 j# U) }% U1 ^7 d0 z: X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 }" `  `7 W  ^) Q) C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 @# T8 r6 [1 b4 N/ p3 F; q  B" V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" j: ^/ z! p( \: D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 k* R3 P% Q: k  u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 R7 {1 {- B. a  g2 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 l9 ]5 \9 Y8 F; i- W7 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* d, k7 V2 Y: L% q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: K7 k$ C& v1 b% s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, s' i4 {- c8 S$ d) p4 v, z% `$ [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" f+ F$ }! O9 m2 ?( Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 p* X- `9 |4 M) ~  n7 [我请你剖开它

' E) E  O/ |: A4 e6 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>