【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ ]% \9 U" ~( U" y' x歌词我附在后面。
  s& y2 X& l" g/ `$ IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: }7 h, O( I7 T0 N. ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( P5 }2 w- D! `8 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# b# c4 R, Q4 O, T$ oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: Z7 A0 d7 a5 b1 L; GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% Z6 H1 i, k- u% ]+ t2 I# u# |Every other word you utter is love
# b6 ?3 ^) P" M9 b" jI really want to know just how much you love me
2 l8 J% U: d3 N  a. @" m+ c  q( q# YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( e) C9 ?  O2 \# i- v1 R/ xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 ?( O( s+ I# [' zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, b, W9 s7 p) H# Z% L' v, i, V" II regret not dying
0 W5 ~( }- c% g' }5 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ Z0 C' c. f: I0 G2 h; r$ MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! t$ c7 z4 Y8 \. z* }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) J+ ^, {5 h2 U! ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 A. L6 ?8 ]$ F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! d  L& E+ `# B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" X/ w: X9 C: D4 x, ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 h3 D1 O4 K8 x) F3 k$ X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, q+ @: @! p' Y! B3 f4 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% e; ]0 U7 O' v; {* l: L" f3 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 W% K$ v1 s( s4 k7 U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" q5 h+ k. i+ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 N8 ~6 I( f7 @" ^: h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' ]5 @& N' Y4 @4 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& V% [' F" i$ V$ ^% ^- X' f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 X% J5 K+ g: @3 L* V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 T; G& G0 c- h" K8 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" O8 G5 \$ `7 g5 R/ G: N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 x$ G- r. f  z) h) Z, C1 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& a9 H- ?# P: w0 R7 i" c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' G/ \- v9 b6 u  y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ p4 C0 ?4 X/ t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# @0 T" b3 B- L8 L/ k2 g, S" o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! ]+ i$ O1 Y1 H, W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 z' P* r0 x- l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Y# I: N* u4 m5 y0 |4 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ^& ]$ T8 G! W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 W- V" c; ?1 c! @, F% i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 R  K2 b  P( Q" M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, s2 Z+ Z+ z9 C8 w: W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% p" L2 v; _% {5 M# t1 n' U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>