【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
& u. w! t. ~7 a5 P/ OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. E8 X* ?! F( y! z9 O3 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 o' V$ M6 \9 }) r+ c  XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# d' S& y* `; O4 r# D5 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 V/ g8 d7 q# M/ {4 J7 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, R5 l# `9 t% L. n+ PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 k/ n, I8 D) QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 b' @6 B0 ^# v# `$ Q; j1 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! q7 N4 n; [$ q7 R5 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 k% B2 Z. n6 j- D) E- X/ ?3 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 f7 Y# i% x: T( w- ?+ JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% E5 u( _; g( A- \. ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) t6 z% y' Z* y7 ?$ t8 W/ k' ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ O% o8 E- ~( P( L0 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* T% K1 S: b* X; v* ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 ]8 D1 t- |# N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: |! Q1 k6 v" w$ k, I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  \* C, P* C, \+ D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' p/ l' Y, G# L/ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ J0 F+ _# Y; A& y* r$ G$ R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" P/ }( {+ t: T3 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' @5 ^5 U  o; W6 g5 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: E# ]' D0 f5 X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" \# i8 w! k( \" i, B9 E* y9 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. r  u+ q- L7 [* D, k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# N3 k) c7 O% G) ^/ A) [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. w% @- R& j1 z7 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; R  C3 R3 A4 @1 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 e! I# l) Z; d: S! {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' w( I, m+ [# E, n5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 r1 }4 A, n9 p( V6 i4 [" A6 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 }* y5 \/ k2 i* H% r* l, W  U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 L7 q, J. v1 M5 i1 t. y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 T2 F# e9 E# _; V9 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ f' g( D$ y+ `; B& j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" v7 s# I& E4 \/ m& g7 y3 m4 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 ?& W# L. y& N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q& A' ~6 P( l& X) {! C, K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 _- F0 @* a: ]5 o* L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% |* H" k% l# l+ s! M% H  ?5 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% G2 u, I' Q; V" |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& {8 @  x5 S" O* M$ X7 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: c& [2 L  `, l* ^  |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ i# g6 Z4 U* E4 F) g4 U  @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ B* r9 u' V3 _1 ]6 a+ c( O- u' x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 w5 h* ~. _6 M. H( n3 s# M我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>