【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 j- F% j, L3 @4 u6 w6 h3 ~% z* U( |! ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 M' M; E; A( LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- {$ K6 h3 j' G) T" b6 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
) Q3 E; z8 u- MWith the moon kissing it every night
1 V8 J( n6 I: _0 xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, u5 r* s7 x# P% A- N' GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 S0 p) ]: u. ~$ s2 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) Z6 f% u: A% bI love you I love you with all my heart
& v2 e1 j% F7 `1 Z' ~$ PNothing can compare to my love
9 Z* r% D. ]1 A) c9 `6 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 }. ~* U' _) S. z4 \& D) OI want so much to see inside your heart
* U' R$ L% a* h% HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 l2 R4 Z+ b1 T, k) ^2 ?I’m still filled with fear
3 P$ E$ h2 c9 f$ w% G/ }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 P- v; A% A3 H: ~% h1 p/ NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, X2 K1 @+ s; y$ ?$ J& b9 u: SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ e( Y8 s3 r% g* V3 ~5 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; @+ r5 e. c3 c: C" p0 r, N6 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 ~2 \# |6 M* Y2 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ ^; I& J0 {$ j% n, I/ ?, S0 a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 P8 [0 c' i9 A% B2 S/ o' ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( C; ^0 P* P9 f5 A$ s0 N! ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: o* X5 |* f# S, |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 Y* t- S, k7 @: X- F! S- L5 ~5 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, a9 x4 b; Q# t+ r: X  n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 C! r2 c0 o4 V/ P+ m  V9 w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: x$ `9 U; n& x" m/ M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; y" m2 u( e* `* w+ |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Y4 t3 c  F& X( G9 }6 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 {. U/ h7 a8 G# }! n* d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 V- E$ b7 X' P! F1 l7 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ v" a7 D) U2 L1 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- p: P9 Q* P4 E3 R9 A3 z, e. X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* t) q9 O' q7 B6 H8 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 f0 H2 {  ?+ H+ k2 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 F1 t7 F4 n& T/ z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 w  b  T" U+ A" n. u我请你剖开它
1 U. t$ y; y1 f! t* h0 Q: b% Y$ R1 J
0 R% Q; F. J: s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 i) w% l1 r: @+ n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>