【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- k1 o& i2 |$ k3 a8 r9 q  g歌词我附在后面。
, o0 b3 u/ b/ N9 ^) T6 z5 z2 l$ T0 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% h6 B, p' v' V# h- J7 S8 H! pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& s4 r( K$ k, N2 e! z+ s/ {With the moon kissing it every night
2 E, u1 h( o; {4 L( a2 L# BSeeing the sky content with its love
: o- C2 t; W+ j" JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# {- e9 k& E' R' pEvery other word you utter is love
- x% j, P& n7 E" s# d4 i8 [I really want to know just how much you love me
& I% d4 ^/ N1 A' YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' G% M" t- Q$ S. ?" @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 Q( D& y/ i( ^" B3 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 D; ]/ h2 e5 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# G. t1 s" H9 ^& dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% I1 f! }# W4 o* m% j1 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. y/ [) Q; g; ^! t7 m. l" W0 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 }7 Q4 v! V4 L' E7 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( k7 q" B2 k+ C; [% h5 [* e8 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ N. }; `" r  O2 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 j: d0 t, Y4 ~# c" L# l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& p' s" B5 G- Q8 i) L1 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 t8 c# d3 t" W: b8 m* h. N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( p3 H  x* L8 q! n4 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! \0 O/ |% U; G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 K, C9 |& o* i. a  U6 w* S) m5 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 \' D8 s% S! M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* f; a7 m) V" X/ G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 l$ _" v* Y. ?7 H8 c! p. J<P>你无需担心</P>
& }+ X- N( a. n0 r4 p: |) Q+ N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 g9 A0 R$ R& {) {% Y7 L* B: d& F1 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ a, c) ]4 `9 ]- J' N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 `' o7 w, [) V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 u+ L3 ~# r0 W7 d1 x: W7 ]: ]7 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 F! `! f8 s# |+ o6 \7 [2 m* d' L0 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 C$ ^- x& L* d3 k& Q8 Q1 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- n) E# e) i/ I7 z5 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: c9 ^5 }$ I0 D8 S" i8 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 k7 [  G9 D+ {  `, j# P! D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 k4 J  P( G8 {1 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 s1 X4 B- g8 U- ^' N8 ]/ Z; C+ n, j. |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, z- f4 ]! i4 A) |* c* A9 J' f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) C$ S! E8 F) w/ a2 y: x3 @8 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" e& h6 ]0 ~; ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
, ]; Y$ w9 I2 i+ |( c5 C- D, b! }' s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ k4 Q6 ]5 I6 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 w! L+ |1 K& O# k" O9 p5 \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 N; [& l/ W. i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 X5 z/ _% L, S; Q1 l$ U1 N4 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! _# M; J& V! q3 @) P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 {. h8 f7 z" Q2 U: Z6 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: [1 L  Q! L2 L* L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>