【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- }2 f& P& ^; j& q! B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 m; W( P: }' d5 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) Z* U6 m$ G4 B. ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ N3 ~4 w9 d3 `$ y6 x* G% PWith the moon kissing it every night
4 R1 X, j+ [$ |8 }- |; V* [! `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 h0 x; i3 ^( [* eEvery other word you utter is love
; u/ a, {8 \+ H9 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
0 w% X1 z* u. w! f6 y: y7 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( o; ^" O/ p+ n9 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 x; X& V8 w$ {  k& L& W$ }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, `4 L1 t+ l; x1 `8 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ~# }( x* Q9 {I regret not dying
( `' k0 Q# i: f, Q( QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" i/ C" Y; T5 a* u9 \# I" EWith such a tongue as yours,
9 h0 |1 T" e8 b3 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& C0 X( R/ V% Q* z5 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& p. @' c/ V4 B. y; I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ f* S5 w  y. u1 V# c6 m! |2 M3 w7 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% o6 O. c: `7 B/ N& i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- a. t5 ?9 R1 C1 b; f, {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# q) V# o0 d/ \( V- Y. t5 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- ]# c, ^! j# T! a) P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 o* [$ f; ~- {! Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 @/ X1 X) P2 L" K' u, Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ^4 D- c! M3 O/ U) c# {+ |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ T. j- |) \) H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& Y; i. S- S/ N# O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 K5 [8 i6 S/ y! ?# p4 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( v5 M0 Q! z& P! @0 Q  f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 e6 V3 O- J8 y: W' b1 r- F, M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 ]/ S" N9 c/ P1 Y% p1 e# U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. n2 x( M7 H1 F) z8 [" [9 t, G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" o' Z; p. z2 c$ m! X, E1 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' k1 V0 u2 O/ {+ n. U' r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( c9 c0 J5 S5 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 i& a+ {2 ~5 S* F3 `/ {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  ^& s7 L% U9 c$ `0 o& t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* `6 m) @9 U( h' a2 t: U6 p: F$ j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' f2 B2 ~  p$ s& V8 u. ~2 R0 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 D" a) E1 P/ [$ }9 y% `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
4 C. @0 V+ y: b  o7 R. p6 g
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>