【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ o7 ]4 X7 W$ P+ H2 P* t/ c" p$ gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ C: m+ O7 u! C* aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 J7 B5 g8 n. e! S3 `- v/ h" jThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 r/ L8 ^% N; q0 H! lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: |, d$ ^6 g2 R# Z( b: l9 Q  k; `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! R7 R# ~" Q- @  `You needn’t fear anything
% [# t; `2 `/ I% U* ~) sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( x2 W' d+ `" G2 QI really want to know just how much you love me
5 _* H, \) O' p& Y* |5 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: M1 G$ w7 R8 N( s) |: ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 L8 J& G- L( S9 BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 p: D! |! ?7 B9 LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 S; H1 n4 y- Q# \& L" |8 B4 a/ Z7 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 y4 ?, B2 }% j0 T8 \3 E) y% R# ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 T& u9 ~8 d( ^: Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ n+ }0 T0 t1 |& L. X) Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: k4 Q" B3 A- q  K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  X$ K  z9 ~, P8 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( c8 B" [7 o0 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* J1 I; R( {0 r2 X8 {8 t7 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; z( b6 z: `& P" l" L2 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 a4 H  e3 N" }+ {4 \. w  w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 Q+ u0 v2 S/ V' w. O: r3 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 l4 u- w; W' p( i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 \/ E) m3 Q) w0 [7 d( t( z2 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Q6 \; @0 s% s' d9 H9 M; L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: F) I* j1 X% a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) e4 i/ t2 N) e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 V# C0 f8 o( X- D4 z+ _; Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# A5 V& w2 I3 Q# y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 g6 q3 U& ^3 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 j+ x! m& V6 o2 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 Y- A9 l; \) Y* p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 P2 B2 k% o$ ]. v, b& j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; i) g9 w: S7 `. \& R1 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>