【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 p8 n0 F, Y/ M" e, [6 g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Y1 F- H5 b; `7 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ e" U4 `/ Y4 B7 G3 J# SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 i& W) b1 a. E" S/ ?" M1 b) DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! K) S; S  ]# sI really want to know just how much you love me
8 p9 j5 C& V4 WI love you I love you with all my heart
& M6 J: X$ i$ T* X: L1 w* VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* t2 u: x8 G% |, S, r1 v0 I( PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 a3 o: |& e% |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ D* D9 z% J5 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 r9 W% ^+ X  iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- Y$ L8 o8 \5 r# \" ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) R) d/ o& R8 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- F1 I& G/ i9 V7 O4 B+ C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" \; L: G* y  j+ A" ]; k- j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  s, h) V, k: i3 C& M$ `; {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 N3 B0 z7 Z& Z% \+ n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 T& P6 y1 ]8 e0 e  N, ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# E! N; O$ j) k( A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 x. x: c6 O, I4 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Q: o$ a% r- {) c( u: C+ f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% o' d3 q4 q9 L" b. @8 J8 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) L" A7 T" Z, o5 l5 o. R" P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! V' p& L8 J4 w1 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) J3 P% N( d$ [  i  d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 e* h4 C4 y# S8 t  U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 J" g7 K; W4 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- D3 N8 U) j0 m$ t( M1 k! }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- x- S- }" C& `0 C; ]- h: B) M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 d( [- x5 H4 H) h; N: B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 n. O9 b& V* x. ?' K/ t- X+ h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* @( i8 `9 v: d% L' ?1 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 k+ ~# z: z! Y, V7 Y% S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* I  q+ f* t7 t+ l$ e* I) r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ U, V# l! f, C7 e" {! \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) B' p# K* r+ J) x: s. k$ }8 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 V. n  f. R( V' U: y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' t: _" Q+ G# E; A. Q  G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! d6 k" }8 `6 P- B& _3 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* a' c6 O- a- M; H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, q" c* S  N% C# z8 r! d: U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! W2 V) D$ m4 I" d7 J- j! u6 M6 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- B; G3 Y2 T  q( J  `6 \" V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) a! p" o+ F% ?% M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>