【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 c% F2 x  B' E  d7 Q5 h* l4 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. }9 G( O- f# m" M& ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ s: u. B4 \7 v  j+ cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* L2 r% Q( N6 C% o9 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 e  c8 c. M8 c* o; X% t9 E1 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" u. k3 L% _$ b( M( B* VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ c0 e; G& ~6 ^& IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! i. b4 F, {' g& kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* q( e, f6 k0 p& W* `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 _/ X, W9 w8 z4 D* l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 P. {: F9 h* F& \, g3 O& g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! d. n' f* u% }" j: y7 L$ H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: D* z+ `: Y& p/ E1 ?7 c$ s$ @' o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 v9 j/ o+ H. m6 a6 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Q/ _( J5 k) ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; ^4 ~' c3 d7 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 G6 ^. Q+ Q9 n* E  W: `  S4 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! |. A) N: X& Q" k- R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 d) Y5 L% n& K0 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ o; \7 g1 Y& J/ m8 q9 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 j. j+ Q5 `$ Z: u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* Y8 [6 f. y6 t9 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: j) o1 X0 n, f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* h2 k: u$ R8 v' c1 [5 \$ N/ k" ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! s# w5 r5 ?, X. r! L0 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" C5 }7 B* H- T, s0 R) `* B. `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 _/ m& n4 W$ r' s% Z' a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ f# r* Q' X& F& [" a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 K+ c' ]( M9 c0 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ N3 f& A- y9 j. U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% n5 e4 I# {1 V2 D. `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; W, m: r* a  w, W5 E+ a/ \  z4 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  {/ T( D' ~1 t. l5 O# Y% @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 L+ c% W0 E- n3 b& J$ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% @  G) A1 ?# a/ ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>