【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ F: L+ l( Q8 F, f' KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 x' Q! p7 l& G, Z/ r% h1 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 O' }8 ^) u' [# I5 I7 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# f+ c5 A$ c; O! H% y$ |* iThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 ]9 P$ j! Y7 i- {. \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 `  t& v  I' L: y( aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) ]9 O% i$ ~7 N. W! |5 u, O4 {6 |Every other word you utter is love
) r  s& c7 O7 ]: V0 L1 m' hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! Q9 [0 J; e: e& M% t5 }6 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. i) i+ ~4 H$ B7 _; `: u- r* oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- ]% w) J: t9 n3 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& Z- Q7 |, M8 w3 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, {9 P3 C3 n5 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- t) Y! T0 V+ t8 R$ c; h( b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 |8 v* V. K) o6 a8 L* z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! p1 |, I& `1 y# ^9 l* |5 k0 d5 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ I8 r! o. Y2 B4 V0 e( X6 \) Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 s" s1 `  O  G+ k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' t% f/ S0 m* K/ m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 b% S4 i. P2 w5 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: T; _( U4 S8 i* Q( `) r<P>你无需担心</P>
4 f8 M9 M5 _. N) ]5 f9 b3 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 v# E5 f2 P: l' @6 @/ X" }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! V, e2 O, z0 Z2 B: T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& R& |" I, M6 m* p% ]8 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 X" U" a8 H+ ]+ b- D9 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 y2 T; U; N% X" V- |$ G4 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) c0 {  X8 p) j+ _/ k" b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& @* b# c) A& t3 ]% p' r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 V1 B5 M8 _% W/ i- B1 I1 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, z/ l0 i* r& _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; q' a( ^" D' |  U+ V# y0 h! v& a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ g6 }. `. J& s+ g$ ]! M0 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 y( [0 W, }. E0 `- x0 o: I7 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 e0 B8 I6 M% C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ^. \6 j" C4 }* u) k7 D2 M* G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 x" G* b  A' t; A9 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( A, a! j) [4 _; V7 l6 ~; q0 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- x: j% Z" y# W2 A' C! O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 _% h% B" S3 Z$ i  f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 F" @& d8 k- I4 _3 _: W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& M9 i' z: f# t8 A- ~) s$ |" V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>