【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) ~6 R9 T* l* r7 A) _& I- ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 _9 b0 g* v# A! y) d0 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% i. O( n9 y, y/ Y& h9 ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Q3 M7 x6 A( @4 s7 {7 B/ m$ ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 H: U: ~. j0 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! Y9 z/ }* w& X9 F( bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! s6 M1 W& J& O" [" BI’m still filled with fear
8 i2 J8 `' {( f1 ]- u% M. uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 P6 h) i! m' S5 n7 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ E& K1 s. i! `5 V8 N; [; v2 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; D) f1 `9 z  t$ V! ^% LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" m% E4 ~+ C$ f' a$ \/ pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( n& r8 m( g+ w! Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, f$ V- X; d0 I' ^6 f3 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 P4 U% y4 \: D. k2 G* O$ v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 d# s) w3 ~3 G2 J/ Q: Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. G. d- X# X  N* ]: a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* }1 Q0 c6 ]/ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 T1 x+ n, }3 X9 f; G5 L/ w<P>你无需担心</P>
7 S2 [( D7 K4 R5 x. u9 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ q' t; U8 g9 ^' q6 p0 E: W% j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: L6 s1 f4 n' f+ w) I& K% ]* S! c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: f0 h1 T9 B9 T: e/ n; {! v, e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 g5 I1 m7 Z# K. Z( _+ H: ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, \0 l& V  r7 w, ^4 x1 s2 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 v: ]8 b( j1 Q  ^: I8 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% N# r( N* _, ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: S  o4 b& P1 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) n- P" X7 i& b2 [! L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 M% f: }; I- y, }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  C) H. @. f) `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, B* m; i2 D6 B' n( W2 p/ i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 Y- R' K7 N* O1 Z1 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ f; `8 I. e" {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ [# [8 t' T; J7 t1 q& Z7 o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! F; }" ^+ d' r  T4 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 T$ x0 ~& _. n( W- u/ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, }( [- \! }+ n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) J; t7 m  R; [. @5 @6 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* M) }6 m3 }# j" N7 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 k% D8 _) P, Y8 f' U. e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: d, r3 ]# M0 R  `& @; V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ y# f. E" W/ l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' T1 A9 h! R9 ?# l; j7 z* w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! n& L- L/ F9 U  }- d. f3 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- M9 K  p/ @, d: [" \1 l: }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# f) i( h+ H! u5 D9 C; Q我请你剖开它

; S: h5 c* V  ~7 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ p; Q! ~8 L. u. X  g" d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>