【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: y, P& z, \7 K6 ^' C7 w, s1 p7 \歌词我附在后面。
6 F- N' L3 I+ O: ^, [+ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 _$ z* O- m; {- D9 R. Z# q+ gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 y# s* s8 B( ]" `3 l' [) l& bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: m/ G* T, _3 s8 t* T' F! S" JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 S6 n- z% z: ~6 |. W! HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: p  l3 U8 \* ^! G" V  FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# E3 R  N2 v) K- H% B. EEvery other word you utter is love
2 L9 k+ r. B% r7 b! qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ P7 T3 v, j" n) @I want so much to see inside your heart
( ?; i. l) ]3 n+ W9 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" Q4 s7 c9 u9 d  S) ^% \+ jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 F* W4 F- H  Y7 }7 d8 OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! p! o7 b0 p/ {) {1 c9 Q2 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 V( R7 x* w0 G" c1 }5 m3 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& H: t! D- {4 Q! C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% p  E) w  h4 i1 u8 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Q: ~0 ^7 `2 G1 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: V2 t/ V6 T6 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: F8 A: B0 S9 T# Q6 B- R- u3 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 g5 W9 p  {4 r* D! q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" a4 V5 Y, T; {5 J3 v. N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" A# \6 A2 K$ [<P>你无需担心</P>
" t  U" E; J% ^7 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* x) r( v8 B9 g) c# b( n3 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 r. c- K) r4 I1 a2 B% @: t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ k) p5 t4 p1 M0 A* v' A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 g8 r$ t- W6 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 `* k0 W9 o9 n7 |+ P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- N) J- F) Y5 p3 c" r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ]! H+ m! m& s' d' {2 [3 k$ x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  `5 G! s  n7 i- G% u- j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- Z( g4 P0 b8 V# @/ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- d; p3 J$ x; g* m4 g' z6 [, W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, R  z' W* A# s& l6 c( k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ q0 a( ], ?  U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& M) R* g, m9 m) U1 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
, r3 W# `' ]( i2 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. _) Z4 k' {. c1 c% `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; E% n6 M4 a3 P# l# m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ D6 i8 g# z2 k# L" O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: b) B) F1 N9 N+ v: m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 l4 d+ k# j( x; V) H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ^+ \3 W) m; }( ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>