【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ g8 x6 f% H8 a+ J7 P' `" S+ mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. b" e6 ^, v0 K; vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 h' M7 M7 O3 R) j) xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ F! `1 L7 s! F5 l2 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 Z' O1 `, q; c) F( N" pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 H( x( c0 z8 j3 j! L% ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 u, O( O6 w+ s  e) FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 [6 h' Q7 K, L8 V  H: b9 s. F0 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ X5 U. N0 Y1 P! kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, G% O; E4 x: s! r  c* X: V+ w$ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- p+ h5 U& A5 O4 ?5 f+ ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 f; r) {; I5 }7 o% qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( m2 z) f' s: X3 O" `) VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: z: G% u# N8 p+ W6 ~" n+ d: ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' J/ p3 `7 w+ x* N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 B6 y$ ]4 |" j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ W1 [' I! a; f3 b# d7 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; z1 L; n6 Q! L3 k* u. R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 o* O: r0 Y6 d7 }6 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 g( b$ Q2 ]$ v) z" d# a, @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 ?0 E/ j2 w2 H" a. y, n+ i6 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ~& _8 {# j' q/ u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 _( R+ ]+ |% U+ n' G3 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 U: ?: x1 Y4 d: H0 c) i) K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ L3 n/ w. A- _! g! [" N$ r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  C' I' K5 K1 ]9 [( ?" J& \: ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 u4 }! U9 J/ T$ d# K/ M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; ]% W( m0 W8 z; P( n9 a4 {' ]9 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 G7 |, O9 w  s- o0 K& l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 I$ s: W! e* [. j2 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' d' W, A) }' Z" V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: h3 K* p0 k1 B. }# W# V2 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 w. _4 q5 v" q% K, j( S5 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. @* D6 {, o& _7 y# @$ M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( v  X: p2 m0 H/ b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) y5 M9 |4 `$ M+ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. c$ S6 {, J3 S2 H/ B# W8 @( K' [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) s- q1 X4 T7 k2 I$ x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: J+ K0 F) E2 a* a& T7 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) w+ `* Y& F5 G9 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- H+ L1 _8 `9 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" K9 Z4 T4 z! h5 Z9 n. U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 l0 J2 W) s/ H2 m- S% N- h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>