【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, E/ H8 I5 @. J2 N# s+ ~% iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 {' H4 |9 R% z" E2 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ o8 \; j" v6 l% ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" a: D+ m7 K$ ~% xThe sky is happy down to its soul
* p3 g' u% ]! d0 [% _With the moon kissing it every night
0 J3 C' m5 ^6 c* H: z2 D! Z2 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' \3 p1 i' u7 ?4 n$ ~- P, g2 YYou needn’t fear anything
% S6 {7 z# G% L3 D/ z* B; ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 v; I! @: G4 ~# t9 \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 [, }* Y% r) |2 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 |' P1 Q' P) [6 r( MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 }5 I$ Q; R; Y9 h( k6 a  wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# l- [- B4 m8 X) P9 w# s, m9 ]2 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# T9 Z" m$ w7 W$ \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- |5 I' y( U7 r4 E% g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 o8 r8 Z* ~  f. @0 K& p. Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' n9 O; B& I, ?& C, b. d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' J3 B  ^3 U! o! M' E* [1 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ^) a/ a' [0 O$ a; V) K  M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, z$ v" f: m6 O7 u. K: f- [& W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 y) o! n$ L9 f5 W+ |2 z1 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) _6 z6 r% k, C4 X- }6 O, k) Z& K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& \! M5 f0 z3 s7 }6 b" r: O5 B% T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# w; m. x% t5 s6 a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) F  H& s- E% N" u5 P8 X. B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' M& x+ p, G# r$ f* C2 `, r, C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 q  p7 ~' Z4 B/ E* S% R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# |7 I6 V/ Q# X% ~4 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 B) ]0 J+ l" C! c: Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 e( z5 {6 y$ g0 X+ z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; W3 E' X% n. S3 q# U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; o1 u5 d# |" e6 H8 B4 v7 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 V- ]% ?8 T! B0 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 H3 a+ z# X, |# i6 g: v7 z! l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) G% z* Z& o4 m, J+ f% A2 ]8 W1 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: [- r) t, {( u5 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 @5 d) ^4 u* e6 p3 A1 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: t6 Z/ P) w% T' Z" t, R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ y+ L" Q/ b1 L/ J% l- c& \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- z: u3 H4 H) T! }: |5 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# _! W7 T( f$ a, H4 [$ K4 @4 X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" {5 r- x# W6 w  p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>