【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; e  ]& X6 ]8 d6 y+ m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- D" H1 L2 Q4 p" KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" i$ T+ M3 v: {2 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 @6 M" P4 K7 p0 u. FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: N1 B) x$ C  f$ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ G( \# q6 Z+ W4 g1 g0 o( E/ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  z) o8 ]5 S1 R8 }  UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# Q- b! T+ |& ^7 uEvery other word you utter is love
$ w+ m' N: X6 L1 hI really want to know just how much you love me
. E! }' F8 @( ]$ z& O: ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" t0 C7 M; Q4 Y8 f, j) \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) O9 M  r$ k8 I$ WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ {  t; k/ M6 O; hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. I1 R1 G1 v, ]1 f0 C; J" _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! E( Q" f7 c5 i, E9 ]& JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& K1 g8 Z, g: b+ L. m2 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 m: P% E6 d$ r# {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 @2 s  L( U! o+ z4 Q/ m' Y7 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 ]4 Q4 I; k" H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& o) b+ W4 k8 Y: ^7 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 [( n! s/ k/ x4 w# g# r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 M  L3 a, U2 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 {/ ]3 T+ m/ A. q6 {% @<P>你无需担心</P>
! S) s- B; s+ H, f3 {3 O( O3 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; P8 E9 L2 N) V+ w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 h. ~) b* V, d+ G6 F0 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, d5 \( A- T  o6 ~4 L7 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: f# R4 J- {2 f5 E( L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ u2 s: j/ K+ J1 i$ {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. R2 F/ c% B$ @% E9 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, |! c# t1 A6 a1 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, q; ?( O" N2 T8 N3 ^- y- m% O+ p: r7 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! \3 F& C2 t! X' y, }; o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; ?2 z. f/ p" x* O: N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 L6 J, h/ X9 n% `9 T4 v2 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% H# t1 |! s4 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% J; r3 n3 K" Q% X! w& v8 ]0 \& W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>