【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 b2 I6 \# ~" M- cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 `! d3 ^8 u) Z8 G- \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ^5 ^! X; [) bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# J$ L' L0 _2 i$ U" hWith the moon kissing it every night
. i8 I) K7 k3 }7 \! h, i) X- GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: s" [# J& x: h/ B8 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- ]0 e; g" m* nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 s2 P4 O, f  HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, t- x4 H9 N  x) A1 z- o5 M, q  TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* n; x( N, s. h9 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 O" b! x5 A& i3 C+ i. e- N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# B  a) W& Q* o& i2 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 E2 X0 X3 u9 ~2 s0 r" T3 \9 ~' d! o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) |$ {+ r  V' f9 J( @$ l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 S# w; Y1 V) l4 D2 B* f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% n$ [% j% k0 _; \2 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' \; o/ ?" s$ {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 q# e! D% j: S8 |' M, b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ }1 X. O* o+ w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. G! M  v8 D7 _& z" Y7 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# e  |( v+ @8 M, N0 z0 D: b: b4 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" V& z6 X, r' n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) u* _" s0 T" Y! F: B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 y" w4 O2 |6 Y. b- M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! i: V, s+ z6 R9 q8 c. _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, O5 x3 o2 I& O9 c  i/ t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: I' `& b" k7 U$ O% \- \( i<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 q9 E0 E( a8 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, f1 R3 i5 v% R. \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- ^. P: ]7 T7 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 r( @; c7 G2 k3 c$ }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 G$ j: g  M1 S2 J% g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# z* D5 s$ N/ V; {# P) C$ y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 g; T  J6 Y0 R& e4 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 A; L& {% Y  _0 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: n: a+ ^3 m3 l" c" C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( z  }4 [/ K* p. d  ?% l我请你剖开它
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% f7 R. N. V; V/ s( O) p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>