【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' j* h6 P, O9 a: @) z; mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 ~2 w( h$ d5 k7 q( {8 ~& y3 N0 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* v, ]6 [7 o: K( }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 o4 z  P0 ^9 M" B$ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 G4 t' O9 L9 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. `0 K* t% G- _+ D- O" OYou needn’t fear anything
( n8 F# t" _/ U5 X9 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 t, B3 z) v5 pI love you I love you with all my heart
  p1 M  E/ D( O3 g& W9 @1 NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 T  I# Z( }( s) @7 W: BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* ]8 d3 t' `# D8 R8 H7 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* |0 k, [- _0 O; D' IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 c4 x5 E+ M! u+ z2 \" n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 J( F7 x6 s0 F4 `( e8 s) O7 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 A- K- X# g/ @5 ]/ J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: v+ P& X& p3 S+ d/ m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 a! _' W/ P, m) Z/ c) z. V' S- z/ w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  g' O: E8 o7 n7 q+ N; X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! Q6 c% E$ t/ B  a0 `6 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, E. V) {  q4 v  Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 p1 ?+ R* d9 m% K' d/ r+ c* N( N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( v! S( n) y5 C9 H4 M/ n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 F) S' P# t7 b6 V4 F: F3 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  E" W" W* X+ c' N" v3 `$ H4 ^- y<P>你无需担心</P>
6 w, P  O9 ?& d. E* J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! J) H- S: m  l$ M4 R! S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) h: s8 o7 [% E. l. O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- l! x# w" w" d& C5 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' Y, h$ P, h) A3 y, p4 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ C  M% S1 i* @" g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! `' p# A  K3 R% G- N; o4 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& v: L/ `3 S) Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! z) S) Z0 k5 t5 L$ {& n$ k4 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ~3 U5 W% z4 m" S) B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( q( {% A; ?) j( f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ }4 F+ o: i3 X- d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, q. l' ]% p) j6 u  e  x" G3 F" x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 F. d- d& d0 h9 C; I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 f" d  O. `& J. W( ?2 _/ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 T# ~- S, i+ d. ?$ V; |9 M  o+ B! C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ H/ {0 {* F9 e6 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ]4 x1 u/ w+ j" F5 `  u- ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; W; z3 L' s* E; O2 u3 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) T6 V- g) u; d6 g& H' z: H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ^& B6 u. S+ L& m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 t. x& S( M8 g3 @- \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: U. y4 ?1 o; n7 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 X  E9 [7 Y! O8 i- c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 H3 P. t- E$ U* ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>