【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 ]6 Y- l2 X8 a! N  O1 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; d: }4 y4 V( f4 O6 O2 y" gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 c$ R8 u9 D  f4 k3 {4 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, o, P" Q& v/ e& pYou needn’t fear anything
. z- D2 ]9 g/ ]! t2 p2 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 h# K& s: t1 G" X& X0 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& ]; d4 _' {; Q8 e/ u2 z( _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 k0 J7 w1 C( g4 P" `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- ^( u4 ^( R: T% ~, `# X) `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- x/ ^* A9 ~- |  Z1 w7 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 u6 y- Z. E- L8 w0 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 m$ d- j8 [! ]5 p) R7 G/ SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: ], m4 W+ l6 T! Q7 Z" E6 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 @1 Q  ~9 w) D) QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! F3 R9 ^& y6 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% b* J3 z7 x( X& |4 C4 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 r4 h7 i6 y& L, n) p7 {6 @9 V! M9 G/ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' b# {6 z$ N$ K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, o+ k4 i+ k6 ~+ l; x* J$ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. v5 Q# l5 q3 Y' F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' F% M, J9 q9 [. p" _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 E4 y# R5 z$ O9 s' G. t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" P3 r9 X- p+ P7 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ B+ Y% _1 l4 ~/ Z, e$ _( Y8 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& L0 m$ j8 E: C4 {5 s; m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) X: b( P: Z% d) }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 x" K/ k! Z& ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# o# r$ c6 V1 T. C" Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 c' F7 m; w8 `/ S: u3 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ e, i$ B0 Y0 f$ H3 A, w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# Z& k2 b2 y+ U/ V) p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ Z1 D9 H) J" E" g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; ?8 [4 n4 Y2 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, a2 \+ \& f. Q8 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' N9 P/ k- {3 N# V2 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 F+ I' a9 w0 Q9 n7 r, u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' d! l9 F8 c# x$ O! s* d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- M1 ^) S$ e. h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 J6 `8 n$ b" h5 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; X7 x  _2 v. j1 k/ W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>