【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 |9 P5 j/ w' @' o/ T5 f) ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; m% ?, ]: r4 i1 s7 N3 A$ e' bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& A5 `  T) v7 T6 u; g) j% xWith the moon kissing it every night
+ |3 q  G6 t4 Q( L$ Z1 p" _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 {% a% h8 ?& i0 W9 D1 |- p5 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# Y8 k: H4 h& sI love you I love you with all my heart
  `9 x9 ~: D( d  z# d  l+ PNothing can compare to my love
. i' w4 h* |3 h. ~# k) e* b9 L. mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  p5 [) s$ s" f% I3 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) H' y1 N9 p. i7 n/ ^- b, v5 [I’m still filled with fear
8 v7 T. J) j; iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% {) S. V, l+ L; H; I* ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& F/ U# G8 R! S' J. F( `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 M& ~" X. t: y* r. l. qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 V  b6 K8 d5 @+ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; D1 m7 Z2 y) P' ~$ h0 a) m, \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 L7 N, i! Y) h' Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( z8 G) f3 l' o# N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; {/ A' n5 {4 g+ |/ {8 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ A, R0 e* ^$ G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 E2 z3 f2 E1 p" ?6 j5 ?6 u: B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 W+ K& R  _# v3 V& {" q0 w& R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 l' b0 C, L" U: n( x+ u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 ?; c/ b$ f3 B# Q7 J( j- z% ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# X9 e$ M* [) w$ Z! e1 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 S# d1 U9 V8 G# Z9 _0 x  J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ?  ^" k  Z( [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 m( ]2 i9 m" ]) D" O* ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& e5 j& @* ~8 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 [0 B- E7 `- @4 J+ B6 l/ l6 N2 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% |/ Z* G$ D% K( m8 }. l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 m7 [6 N, R: g. ]2 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ~4 ^7 T; e0 Q' I: f  f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 L) S0 j$ a# J2 @, o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. s. @. N. v3 q- M$ D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
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; c( h6 d' W$ q! v! @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' K8 v0 ]) G( J% b$ @( z% r3 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 s1 P( l" m/ F9 i$ j! ]; U1 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# P: J' {/ U* e, j) ?7 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>