【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" H/ N' w; |. k9 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& @/ h& \( ]' M) XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# W- J, g9 P+ P* hWith the moon kissing it every night
: V% ^* M4 f) o  y& B, U+ n5 jSeeing the sky content with its love
& G# h  I0 [: Z  @, j8 [: F3 k: Z8 B9 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* K- A7 P) f- ~& C. HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! h  U$ H7 m5 P$ s& \) q2 w/ M/ _0 wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ }0 _. ~! U5 {, T3 W( D6 JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. k! y8 m4 w' m- x! _, QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 m) {) \; T% V* l( o: d3 DI want so much to see inside your heart
' h+ m$ f, L9 ]1 h! nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 ^( c6 l) I" f# Y+ g! S0 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 k8 B+ ]) s" G5 r& v" y3 \With such a tongue as yours,
* P- W2 P; ]- HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 b- {1 O9 g: G- R7 F( Q; L! tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" q6 B& q3 U( {6 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ n& b" I& q# p4 S4 R$ O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" K$ j) p  V9 l# x# p: ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' G& N! g4 M6 a5 G2 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 U/ g& t) h- w3 k: l0 C2 A+ b) |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: n. Q! [  {( W$ {) ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% P, g. X, o% ]5 b. l' V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 V5 v, {: m3 @1 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ M9 e/ r# Z2 k2 g/ R: t7 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 z  u; K/ t' R+ p+ Q) B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ ~  E3 c2 _. \* m- t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, |; D) ?2 N  r2 f1 q8 m7 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' R  u, D/ w4 p; v9 X' S! [+ I2 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: z+ U- F  ~4 k+ x8 x9 N; W& Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) _4 M: D0 m6 _# Q8 Y& o7 s/ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 h6 ^( V0 z9 {& Q1 P7 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 p; u( l) i  R' c& u! S8 `, z- f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( c; Z2 E$ P9 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% B/ i7 e* ^" f) j5 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 c& E2 N$ {! d/ i* F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 B* a, }+ e3 |, r( j/ S; ?' C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; N# g/ Z5 V. p" u! |0 s8 E7 \7 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  b: s) ?6 u' Z7 B. D9 @- {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: F8 K# r$ F2 y7 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>