【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 o+ n- [/ f' K$ A/ F* t4 |9 ]+ g歌词我附在后面。
# N; v) Z% p  H3 y: M& f% X# VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 m5 [4 W6 l  h8 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! {6 y# |  u; f3 n3 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 |' e+ b7 m; A3 wSeeing the sky content with its love
) c* H$ T/ u# b1 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' L$ ^% `; w5 U. U* t& q, AYou needn’t fear anything
8 X* M: k3 r+ H+ b; I% \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- U) m+ m% ~* uEvery other word you utter is love
5 j# J+ C2 z+ [+ D+ o% }- o1 |9 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  I1 Q/ i$ E  c) p' wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 d; D  m5 u% D4 q  I8 @$ p! u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 h0 S& o8 L% z& M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 n% s: m% K* G. I4 }9 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' r" [0 A- |& }! n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 |, N  Q  y* r" {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  K1 l% j& M) _, g% C( q( v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: q5 t. i- [; B: @+ w, Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 m# J. u2 i& K" M  r' x( D* }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. _& \/ A1 @0 e- a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- o4 f; L5 ^! j! `: Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- P" w7 _$ I3 o& u+ ]' O: ~, i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% D& X) q9 n, J1 V; E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ s" P  u" i8 a3 \7 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 X6 ^8 a1 J6 a; X. p2 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  L6 [$ O2 m$ e* ^3 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. z9 q1 G( c) F3 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ o) y, X; n: F2 |! C9 Z3 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* _/ H* i' }) c4 o0 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 x3 y9 [$ ~- M, i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& ]% H! e" r4 e$ q1 O* Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" [7 D9 A) O* h  T$ Q6 X. n2 N( d' r我请你剖开它

0 V! s! {# |4 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>