【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) A- P8 q- [" d) Q1 O8 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% V/ X' W! O$ z' CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 z7 C9 }! X6 q0 F% j1 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 R  y9 E0 }* r2 _: }You needn’t fear anything
# y! X1 p: v2 _6 w$ `# DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- z" G9 p& `# o6 _: D- ]; q% {/ @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 o' ?# S6 X) u! D: J3 Z- PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 z/ y% m" O8 `8 O" u" h3 x% }# n$ TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. m% x* J! d1 ]I’m still filled with fear
" v7 D" Q. B0 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 B) K8 E0 P" h3 g5 h, p+ pI regret not dying
- x3 N. `) i# B4 p/ z3 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% K' n: i! N  H6 g' `6 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% A7 I) _5 @# C% B& yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ I7 d' K9 A: z$ s4 B( BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 `( h5 [' ?0 i0 i# g! z, e' Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* b! C3 [( |1 K: A: Q% Y! L0 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 p7 `' N; K# W* i6 i' N& P# Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 E) s' Z$ X6 F4 F$ Z6 K: Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. P: c, j. @% S. J1 p1 c! l8 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 x' C) G; G/ v  V" K& n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; D$ B* X1 W) j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ v6 R' ]4 k- D* a8 y) ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 g" h$ r) z6 }! q" H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ U* ~3 `  G- Q  O1 R; T( W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. A7 w6 Z) X  ]4 [: Y1 }+ `! e2 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: E- F# V8 r( Q3 W5 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ C; y4 C/ M& u( F2 Q" W( J1 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 W1 F! j, T& p! F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 w/ X1 f4 j! H! S( g. b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. m' l4 e& @( L6 @7 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! A9 k7 n' B* O3 j% l; j/ ?8 D6 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) n9 m4 X7 a! ^4 m8 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; ^$ f1 N0 m! R" |7 m+ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 u& P3 y: O4 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 i2 u6 y! L8 ~! C, L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>