【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 Y" O3 ^$ u; sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 [" \$ S' O8 v% j. C" M4 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  `% ^# v+ C3 z. DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 a8 Y. f+ n/ D1 h+ K) }* Z" sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 E' [" y/ d, C) AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ^' Q3 V9 S) FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( [% ]0 v& G* {7 }  MI want so much to see inside your heart
* ~+ h0 S& k- K7 A3 G. \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ ^0 B' H2 o& _# t: {# p4 S. mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 v# T8 Y9 k9 x6 ~/ c2 D6 U+ mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! f9 U6 T" X8 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; ?5 }  ~) C* Y6 u* }1 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  j6 V5 z0 Z% x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- g7 t" n+ B' J# {8 Z( c0 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 H+ H9 M0 f6 M" \- o8 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. I( M& I% E* C. o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; m+ y; e. D. U! T2 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ ?: G$ B1 @* m3 h% ?% B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 Z/ H; y# {0 m1 q2 L* `0 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 j1 E+ r/ x/ U8 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 O1 ^& b7 v# J: }1 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ?8 V9 ^# n2 n- b/ w% a9 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ p- ?- E# C  [( y<P>你无需担心</P>
5 h: i% g+ ?; x! B/ @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% z; P  ]$ c9 L# q. J$ x' a9 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: N# C6 c- r! a4 x. G5 a5 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 d! u% A0 f$ F0 h7 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ o! z+ E5 l3 V; l" k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 [. m4 j) V: g, F1 O$ [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, B* C8 f0 Z* s9 w. M6 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 G. P& p) B" f6 P( Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 O$ p6 {1 J; j( E* T$ H! w: q<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 O" f# R' j7 A2 }; j/ P# L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; D# r3 ?. v" ]5 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. |: E4 z9 R( f; Q5 i! B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! X& S+ ]7 J. z9 j/ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ g* M$ i) `6 l3 C4 I1 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: W9 [6 y' z# w; x! C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 W" }7 \- k' E: \9 J8 _9 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 \4 m3 G& Y, H6 Y% R: ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ?! k; \' i- O: e* b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>