【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 U+ L; R1 C8 R歌词我附在后面。
# M3 F+ b* L4 }& E6 k& aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! \/ @# V' y7 g- dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ [' \  v" X& C, {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 y, k' a# A; L; c! TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& P, H' z- p+ ]) Q1 l$ SYou needn’t fear anything
9 M- C1 u$ l0 h) T3 ^7 C$ `) m2 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 E( k5 x, Z; q  u$ O1 N7 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ M) y( W1 g9 T6 hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& s( r- y, R' n; _" PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ E$ [, X; H- JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: T' q5 Q  d6 N1 r. B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 {& y& m  g" h$ D) g' @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! X3 I& |1 g& ?& J: v+ V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 R7 ?8 Q2 I# Z- n3 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% Q" \9 X0 B, B$ p% M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 v3 s) G3 m* F1 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# o+ n% @# Q$ s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 {4 d9 l1 O" ^8 v, q; d1 }/ t* ]% a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 }$ C" y$ i: c& G, o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 f5 r# O* y# Z, c8 \; \/ U/ Y* f* m2 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: Z4 C  |8 N' e! i8 {: k5 L' @6 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 D& C1 Q. o6 {) O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; E" M3 U; G/ h1 ^5 b# l0 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. U, |6 C7 |3 q  Y4 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. p: ^/ [9 H8 x8 W7 d. ?4 [/ J6 B: [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ s& \+ I: X6 Y/ u: c2 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: }: f" g+ P# \1 V; e# R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ P& @0 q7 R2 a+ e. l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ i7 `6 z2 ]; \6 H! E. V& s. k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" N4 I( e  c* q  p: M/ o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 A! O; K) K8 ]$ T5 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 Y+ a1 f) _. X6 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, u; F  G" y- v* Z/ L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" s3 r7 F- }4 Q: k2 g( Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# @" \5 `0 \8 e: {+ o/ i' R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' K! b4 `' W9 i4 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* j9 h$ |5 o& O/ r( {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  k+ @3 D+ Z8 t* [  @9 K1 Q$ N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: D$ _  O. D, p* z' g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 R& F- F& L* v9 B5 Q& |8 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" }% [8 w2 r9 |& {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>