【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 }! q- v" J8 h& d9 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" z4 m8 r( z4 g9 X) @3 u* t: jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  K: f+ ~" k2 U5 Q: i3 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) W0 Q/ F& M, S. N5 V7 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# t6 T+ @/ ^/ c8 {Seeing the sky content with its love
; D; N) }, r, Q8 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& R- h) M$ F% L6 P' L% _* UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. `' h( W6 P2 N& t) |& L! XI really want to know just how much you love me
/ ]- T! m1 j9 W8 E+ z! S2 mI love you I love you with all my heart
8 \5 e# T4 w) i- t! bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: |- z7 N* H# @- |. t1 ~$ zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% y' b/ k$ X4 G7 HI want so much to see inside your heart
  K! s5 S; k% [5 F' ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 d( Z# Z. w# L8 i# e! EI’m still filled with fear
, {. n: y2 v. X2 Y+ \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; V3 x1 \* |" K( E# wWith such a tongue as yours,
$ G. @% o% t) MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 c( I" Q7 z. o8 v8 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ m) L+ J5 p7 l+ j% |1 `7 n3 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' i  @+ A5 g; T" B2 I- Z4 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 E/ ?1 c2 i- }$ o6 _  _' ]  p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ H3 F  U- s, k* t0 @! e& Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' _" O  u9 I1 y. u8 x4 f0 j. `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! f; \8 t, \8 f* y6 v: L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& {" ^) @: y9 R2 `# y9 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 r" j: \9 i$ g4 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ X) M& W3 V$ j# d4 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 a5 u; }) k/ B. y+ L" ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 g! n( m" V0 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ T6 ^, X6 X# z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. d* P  K/ G. L6 @+ J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; V/ x& f0 U: Y4 [/ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 ~+ r% f; m) Q" I3 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 m& }% |9 `4 L% Y2 T0 z- @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, e( S- x! m& a1 _8 K  }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# v6 w0 j' W/ h2 P$ v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 ^! S  x, N* M4 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! s& p1 z# n* }! B9 d% s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 j5 c7 e- w! d" s+ K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 M' @$ Y2 k; v9 j1 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 \3 z# f% J6 ^: E7 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: o( `5 D  d3 J7 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 j$ t! u8 X2 t. X) G7 Y2 Z/ x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ H" X: @" Q5 ^5 j; Y8 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 \. h* T# S+ b+ h7 x8 @我请你剖开它

" `+ `% }' D; ?8 e6 s& R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>