【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  J) U2 e! G) S! E9 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! S6 M/ Z: ]: [3 [  L+ E. f/ _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 S9 c7 h8 C0 l& P- X- v( z" S' hWith the moon kissing it every night
4 d+ V+ _5 u3 d  ]: B- `9 J9 J! jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 n3 R9 |5 Y* V& u) u/ C8 WYou needn’t fear anything
: X; ?2 c$ |9 P$ t4 s! o, d2 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 p$ S3 K6 a+ Q) B- @$ U  z5 nEvery other word you utter is love
7 n/ y& n: v4 ]( u' _I really want to know just how much you love me
8 ~- h' F6 a3 r+ W5 pI love you I love you with all my heart
$ Q% R1 \% Q7 U2 [( ONothing can compare to my love
' |( K/ V$ j. ?) M% T' F, oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ [& C# Y. Y& TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: X( Z% F* C6 \8 [- ?/ V; @6 xWith such a tongue as yours,
9 d/ K+ R+ s+ ]" `: eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# A7 G8 T7 P; O  L6 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; V- h& c4 ~6 y" \9 c: V2 U" R& E: y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 }4 w8 y# H) y% s1 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" W0 G5 }7 }9 B; _% [  V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* l& v$ [- O( U3 G8 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ~- }, N) m% f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 f2 [% C4 u3 Q% s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ^4 W( c4 \' _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. c% l* `" n+ V& T6 Y( n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& A% f1 Z) ~8 }: P- ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, \! Q9 D# R0 `" L; y! @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 Y1 k; l5 t" O/ z' y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ w0 E) x3 k- ?0 ?1 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 F. K, T* g: F. d9 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 t7 ~$ G7 j& M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" l; U7 x: a( w" V( {0 \* s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 H' G# c4 ^% H1 _# I3 [1 j/ h+ n+ |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) W6 e: U: ]7 U& f7 s$ e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; J4 d/ X( v3 Y: y' Q% @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 L7 z2 u9 p% ~; f) E3 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( H# T' |6 ?5 p$ V$ v4 ]6 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* m1 b! j2 S/ o( `9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ P' q" L& t  [) c! g$ y9 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 l0 B- ^1 U& m" A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" V# a, `0 i5 x+ j/ T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( @  m+ i. f& t; ^7 Q我请你剖开它
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! G' c2 {2 Y: X$ C2 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ {) F/ u3 c' s# a# Y0 N; ?* i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>