【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 b3 E4 D& H/ O- [- XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* J. j* X$ t, t+ v1 w0 V0 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 M* c5 P6 p# K0 I( U' CThe sky is happy down to its soul
) b& L+ @) [: ~# u2 Q  YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 R% e2 O  |+ X/ X+ `! a+ HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# F- ?& i( m5 b/ O1 G8 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! T0 T, O! w$ i( U, \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# S1 T# \/ J5 V, z; b+ L5 p: P. JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 E& G( n* w  ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 A; T( g- G. x4 M& qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 i- G/ u+ l  o4 `I regret not dying
* A' c1 v: }" U* p7 s8 W1 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 O+ Z( Q1 _: F' {0 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 `* ~+ |% O& H& @2 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. E/ Y2 G  Z- u2 i  c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 {  w, q$ [3 h, N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  E) F5 Z  x5 Y) H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" `( R; K7 C% X+ J% A; e9 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 |% _, d  M' U' y' U5 x; e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 L* H( l3 |7 y3 H4 C% v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ?; F/ i" S; G; L  O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  q  R5 g: o0 J# J0 s: @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 c" t7 w" Q! s$ R( r+ h6 t+ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ J9 U& m) n4 q$ w" {<P>你无需担心</P>
) s! J, w7 j& f  ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 x! z/ O- L$ N9 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" e0 O$ E. |5 c9 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 \9 A. y5 b1 m6 S; @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 r5 u( h* Q% X+ f" G- k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! q3 O9 n1 J# x. D% g. ?, u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ @. x/ w4 O: n: b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 o) O% V  p6 f- b! K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. y8 `* [; Z6 ~, r" Q8 z5 d1 \, `0 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  |8 L. `4 T' Z0 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" Z  x; F) l) A# ^& @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 t. K' [+ b2 ]: r4 q2 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. Z: b) z1 U7 Y4 W6 N3 F: G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 T2 B; [; L/ }1 T& a! Y8 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 k- S) p7 v% g& [/ |* V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: e4 Z. M6 E: g( }( t* t5 _- d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 T3 D" Y3 D& ^5 {# z; c# }1 u& q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 D. b1 ]; o: L! T0 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) _, [- f9 ^( E6 Q0 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( {9 f% v& O- E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* a( r) U+ d/ \* J) a+ B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>