【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' ~; y* y" a- {5 y1 o+ W3 q; ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! i# N; V: A* ^1 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 \- O, B) ~3 o. S6 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 s2 W4 `. f3 z) _& p- D# QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* R0 i2 W* q5 X' [, }2 X" K0 J9 GWith the moon kissing it every night
7 T4 b* i2 m. b3 bSeeing the sky content with its love
0 ?" T6 B$ b. R8 I! ]0 Y$ q% {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 Y4 @- t( \* ]2 JYou needn’t fear anything
5 S+ a: M/ I; @6 [3 V/ \, F: z# I0 x0 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- t4 |. Y* r& ]+ AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! z5 D3 D: P- K) bI love you I love you with all my heart
. i& {) ~9 ]. H8 t5 T1 jNothing can compare to my love
5 c! f/ o  \0 Z# D) p" MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# g! f  m7 T7 u( k) e+ n# n. a( L  iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 j' U  {& |3 j; I& E( ?I’m still filled with fear
1 d5 B7 X! ^/ f  B% b& KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 }. Q/ G# P. D. S; C% I% eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: ~  d+ O) k& k9 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ J) t( }& d- h+ K6 D, z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, a& R& w4 @" x1 |) {' d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ {% j( n3 R7 F4 _/ \# M" s6 i+ B( x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! P/ }4 y3 i$ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' }% T8 F4 k* u  g2 z- m. K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 |& O" g, m% m0 Z9 O' H# p# d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 i+ n% j0 g5 {6 c( T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 v; s6 B. Q1 E4 o- R' @7 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 s( D0 _: Y2 |4 H* K/ j5 i0 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" K9 L) [! R4 [7 I2 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 k' }! x3 d9 a) d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  |1 p* i- u3 y# p2 N. Q( a0 W* M8 [) r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ r- R, H- Q/ ~' a9 j0 P8 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 }* c5 |* k2 q4 s  ]: h) b( y! \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. ?/ l6 N* M9 u' a* ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Y% ?/ a9 M; a1 |8 P' }: n8 P# T) x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" I- N% d  }" a: \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 \" l* v# Z: t  h: ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! n+ W2 F' C9 ~& x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ b  L( d/ ~3 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! d3 O, l; X, v( \, o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ O7 j; L! o; y6 v' _8 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, t- [: @) g* E  @" A! L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' S$ j1 O2 w! l: d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: I: G/ D2 U+ p8 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% k9 D) y8 F- j; H! N8 |0 L+ k, P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ L: u: X) L( V7 i+ \我请你剖开它
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7 y5 `5 }5 W. p) G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ z4 O5 u0 B# L4 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>