【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! S3 V, M6 n, U- t$ P8 O  y' UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 D8 c, ?: a( F( e# ?8 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' w6 S6 C% N# C8 h+ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 B4 N- N5 u) n% w# _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, ?4 M$ {7 \/ a! s" S/ C! VYou needn’t fear anything
4 O, Y: U) g6 R- uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 z2 [- F. I! O+ H! vNothing can compare to my love
/ u8 s# D! W$ jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  B: Z5 T4 @: L  ]7 Q/ [  JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ k6 a: |9 M6 x( aI’m still filled with fear
1 O& @" U( H& o) J5 O% pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! r# X  G$ p6 P3 _* XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& t8 b3 G& _+ P2 O8 IWith such a tongue as yours,
8 J6 d7 U8 D/ c' m/ [- {" @4 e" yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 N8 ~( ^9 Z5 e6 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& e* E2 @9 X( l7 w. k# G, _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, @* ], H7 f) o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) J, G1 J0 |' n( f2 z/ q% X4 w1 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 h" H- S+ _  i' j8 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) v5 S$ C" Z: }5 f, {- \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 f/ p! Y- w4 f7 t, b; I, Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ D3 _5 Q8 `0 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ n; Z8 `5 z+ Z$ l2 C. z! _  j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 [9 X0 L' n8 m* ~; d4 f! b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) t+ S2 Y  ]* Y8 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 ]" u8 v! p) E: @  D3 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 `" G7 M  v/ a; y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' \  k5 l9 |/ m. N9 n/ L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ X1 B& _) l5 B0 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. J4 _: E( I4 N9 ^* a  p7 A+ h; U% T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ^; a* p2 z6 {5 g1 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ~  ^4 x( \7 x6 X8 [/ L/ ^  g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& m% V. J, K" @5 l- _) @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( }5 g& z5 _9 [- ?  X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: t9 r, _( Z- h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. D! ]5 H7 Y$ ~$ H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 e& {& C/ u8 O  F: d. M8 r: i1 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- r) Z1 U9 A; X% S0 @) e/ T/ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' [3 u- [8 {" c, L" \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" e6 O! j' g+ C% N<P>I regret not dying</P>
! b; W( n& F1 d# p3 f, V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 w& ]: W  F/ u7 ?$ O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ [! Z2 L/ A- E6 |- \! E" \4 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  s* f, Z4 @# d6 i& s4 U# T: O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  A% S3 q* }# F2 T( t8 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# f, }! U# j! K% v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. i7 _) D0 E8 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& v& f, X2 B1 u, \8 i: ?3 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 M, h# N( w% J4 R. K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 V5 H. ^2 @6 f! Z/ i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 E  r' \9 R0 A8 ~; C% v9 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>