【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 V5 Y& S$ o5 U: Z  c4 x2 T3 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 h: E* h5 o( n! `) _, p1 EWith the moon kissing it every night
$ j4 T2 Y, [; Z! A. r1 M2 {Seeing the sky content with its love
: A/ v7 n! J% N3 d; `) X0 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 I% @# U+ S/ k! I! B1 D! f- }You needn’t fear anything
* ^7 v$ N. ?7 f) B7 y( A" u* e4 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. A5 @+ c- T/ |4 p% q; m  r' ~Every other word you utter is love
8 _% }7 L! x, W9 L* RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 A' v7 V  U/ I, UNothing can compare to my love
  q% U% B1 K6 N/ A2 e0 L  tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 _2 K; S3 ~& {+ NI want so much to see inside your heart
- `2 r! Y3 u6 X0 t/ MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ p: R0 }; w- D4 E! V2 p) i/ vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 B3 n. t9 \' b% P& l* \$ G* v" D$ DWith such a tongue as yours,
9 y2 i2 L% y7 F5 \* |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 K. V) }3 j4 s$ eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 b7 C: E$ S, m6 z$ z( d; ^! s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 @3 J3 e4 l8 S, u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 m2 Q  ]' y  W6 h( G5 ^5 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, L" }& K1 s/ d% q3 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 h! V2 Z% \$ Y' u, L4 w, E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ?* r  n6 c" w8 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; ~; _9 o( a( i! J3 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 N  H$ q! i. i% L& z+ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: l$ U4 l4 Y7 B& j8 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 N4 t1 M" d! ]% i: s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- Q9 |& ^; n1 W+ g<P>你无需担心</P>
7 s% R1 b" ]) f* i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# C7 N4 D( V  I  B: M$ N% R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. r7 l" a( Z/ O& i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# g: C0 P, V$ \& V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' h* C; C0 ~% C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ }7 {: j6 j% L8 a  c4 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; v1 L6 Q% ]! v# I: W  }* X0 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Q. ]( n5 L1 ^- M1 N9 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) b2 d5 e$ ~6 n6 v3 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( j3 \7 C, y7 ?4 f  R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ s4 Y9 }* I) e+ b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! e: f/ ?6 L$ c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ _2 y! m* r# U) j4 G* p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. O9 T6 ?/ l9 i- w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* o  E/ [7 @9 L! v/ m6 N1 k! C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 K# t9 w- s8 I: U# T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 f9 J+ M' r4 [' f8 G7 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 z3 r% U/ i  v, Z6 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 X' N- I% V) M9 E; o: d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>