【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 s& k) J/ v# T- QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 l. q7 U5 \( J) mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, _, s, I+ |# @8 A# DThe sky is happy down to its soul
' ?4 `. u, {4 A; R+ U3 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ |* b9 v" ^  KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& ?% S' z/ Q) c8 Y4 O) WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# b# v6 a; _' u- C) q* bEvery other word you utter is love
6 i  C3 z* @# j1 W7 [  QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 a+ v$ X& ], C6 W2 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  x# Z" F; F/ g8 ]# Z7 |3 VI regret not dying
$ C" b0 f, L& c; MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ U8 P5 Z4 g. v1 K' q4 u$ ~& tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 {+ F! r' d! d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 h! e4 |' E( A) b+ t. J* \, `6 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ^3 a. j2 \( V6 O6 c, T  O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 E9 J" b! f# C& l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 _2 U/ q9 r0 d+ ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, Z" S  c3 M2 N+ Z! X8 B& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  v7 v1 c, p4 a- [, p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: O7 c8 s  w: J& h# ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% L) o0 x; e. _- h  H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' o$ M4 s& Q5 X4 f2 U9 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ O8 r* d, v" v% y; b<P>你无需担心</P>
0 d# {3 I; c/ X' @5 q' O/ [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 X/ T  ?7 Y6 t( y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; z$ d0 l( e( ]1 p. e- d2 ^1 t! V+ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" j4 Q: I6 Z, V+ M- @' ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ]/ T9 }( s! }/ X; _" h  k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# C8 ?! \% L% f1 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 L$ ~. V) r& @- r  g) I7 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% [3 A$ N: Z6 o  |/ g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 }& w2 v6 G' X- r% X# U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 B, z6 N9 C7 \2 D0 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  ?% \/ [1 B/ S" B, a2 F6 L% ~" U' x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 o$ S0 c# U5 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 h$ A, Q8 c8 R1 h, W/ d+ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 j: G) f) k- ~0 ?5 P6 L/ `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& ~" e% F6 H$ O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; c) k% l8 N. H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! R) S( m0 T0 G' u5 ~5 r* u: @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 g3 T; `7 t) j% w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) v. j/ K+ k5 ~1 T! U9 d& _8 H) Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- R6 d  F, B6 ^5 m0 z; b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 e$ m+ g/ C4 @2 ?! V1 u* H1 i2 P+ D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: A7 T7 ^1 Q% k1 T2 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>