【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% l$ g# O- z! u9 c: g歌词我附在后面。
% p' {$ u, H" F# Q+ f3 Y& T+ c! K( g, nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* h7 N* D! {7 L& CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  X) J  S) E2 _2 t1 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; g' a2 T5 p( g" y) T5 P: h" ?8 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% h6 C! p6 j7 C5 I. x. wSeeing the sky content with its love
: \, o8 y6 ^3 L, `/ z( E: JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* K  S/ L! Q! t- U% ~You needn’t fear anything
3 [* P, a% Z( r$ Y4 d1 n+ rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ I# B! r2 t" s$ E- s7 o/ ~) FEvery other word you utter is love
8 j/ }+ d" k+ e. wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, T- s* C( Z* _- u2 a5 y; VNothing can compare to my love
) S* ^* O0 P. G) `: |8 E5 q, gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 g* }! t% J" u7 h! D$ F4 [6 ]0 W( wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( n; r$ `4 i/ ?9 J* j+ a( LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 H' S. B# J- i2 S1 S* Z) U* f. kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! m, b! a  j3 m" v6 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! @, Q) F+ a5 u4 `9 Q' ]& V, E- TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 t' @( E0 T; x1 Q- c/ i% q1 K; F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 r9 j$ J1 J. T$ Z- c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 _& P$ ~' D( ?/ K2 Y' |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 s: y: b: B/ r* G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# c4 D! D  s' o) D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ ^& `! ^) |- O% c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ y" o$ b' M# C5 h, z& Y- G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# w7 R- h3 M5 n  B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" H: o) Y5 s7 f5 u* F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 N; B' i5 x9 g8 \6 |0 t* A% `# O<P>你无需担心</P>
% {! n) B5 {* X. `3 k! P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: Z; ~- s5 u% c. V2 M5 J* C" U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ]( w/ T# z' _8 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 `' h0 T; @8 k/ a  {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 m  s/ t5 {5 P  p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 H% G: G0 [% D+ Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  Z# _: y* L2 H. \: A- x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) h; K* v  }6 E+ i( S  r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) c8 b; n8 A. x/ X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- F0 N7 S! }# `! U( M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 F5 P( v% O2 `7 I( M5 W: C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ]% J& p$ e! A) M. Z+ `  L7 K* t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: I/ a* J: }/ m8 }, d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! v6 O. j  J4 L/ M$ X5 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
" Y3 a$ N- ^9 p6 ~* x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# B4 T& }5 D3 E# G: f, T& q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  A" d  r* z7 ~6 w) y: r9 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! q: b2 R! J* t% \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. i1 ^0 o+ \9 s/ O" P! V5 d0 G! j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  X! d4 g/ ?- z0 }/ |! d: ]& V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 v* c- @1 N' X8 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 k& ~( a9 ?: q" M* `我请你剖开它
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% W+ W6 u  d% @6 r, ?. @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 m; U6 B1 a: V, U. [9 \0 N" Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>