【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% s5 r, m" H5 z% BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 B' d* b3 i2 f3 R6 t/ B- pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. b: d; ]0 s3 {0 W* U) [* ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* C9 ~5 Z# g; `* I% q, YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 J% |# F/ t$ ^3 j7 q; GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ L+ e% {- y2 O7 ]2 y, S% U9 N" fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% b5 x  T: o  F0 H3 j  p3 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, ]5 P* q, Q- P4 ]6 q- H2 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. u# d3 k2 B; z- h1 [" tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 H% Q& p# w( @( [3 t$ A/ C5 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 }+ J8 z9 ^$ w$ q  u- u2 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( T) B. _% G  A, w: L3 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: j1 N! @: C. d# H3 Z% ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" |4 U) \7 U1 D# q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 D& u6 ~4 Q$ ?; u( v" T. b$ Q1 e) P/ q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Z: S9 [, c  X5 O+ E& y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- u1 @+ ?# f+ Q% T0 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 i% Z$ ~. ?- C% B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ z! E. ?9 X9 n( s' m3 _# S7 b) b& w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ [0 T9 S$ Q; ?: C* ]; C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 f+ H# b$ G: i9 ~; s6 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; _7 S( ]0 a9 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( R" G4 I5 o, x0 Y& o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. G2 w+ ]6 C( }0 |5 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, @: ?/ ^9 H9 @0 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 W) b5 D0 T0 p, {8 o) C: R# G. f: i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& s3 c" ~1 c6 w/ a8 W6 D- U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# g' h& l/ D! ^# U<P>I regret not dying</P>
: v/ Y# @: E2 z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Z1 ]+ z! ^& p, M' {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" N4 T% J" `5 |" W( c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 J' e$ E/ z# K; f1 u! E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: U; b3 R2 v' n2 a; y" x& n* _; ?( z" {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% @3 }6 s6 z* h. c5 t, f: x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ t* X5 J7 |  Y2 x% q7 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 p+ I7 Y4 }. B7 @8 r( Q! o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) e& ?+ E, q' w+ o' ^% F0 Z6 e* c7 ]9 D& H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 P5 B; r$ E& t; X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>