【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 ^0 }/ D5 G( W4 N歌词我附在后面。
0 c0 {6 T* B+ n6 n3 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) a8 a1 F# d$ lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ \% v7 i8 V3 e6 G! f: LThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ |% z( @( i; JWith the moon kissing it every night
. z- x& n0 p5 r% xSeeing the sky content with its love
% e& A" }# r6 c5 h/ QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 p+ u1 X9 l* r- C: U: nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; h8 |: o/ p* c) ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- H* u7 L  G( P: U; X0 K% K! sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) C) y7 J) J! Y0 e/ uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 b% g' y: E2 C' u* D  G% q$ l1 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' D; h5 O0 ^% f- v& t$ Z; g. tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- _% L' B$ ~2 O+ {. s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 t* v. O8 G+ c) z9 h! {4 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 i) R$ ], P: W* z# \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 r  S: y/ Y0 l1 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# F% n  B2 d( z- Z  G+ |. B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% w! V+ A: |% R6 J$ s% \% b4 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 m" Z2 b+ h7 @* ]+ I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& `+ ^& n5 q/ A$ ~+ e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 j6 X6 F0 h: }  ]' s/ }) A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ z- u% Y- ]7 c+ p$ _, n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, [5 ]8 f. u* \9 Y- \" G! B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  K. w' w$ U' U+ O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ D! U  L: K" x4 a, l; B! ~4 E  ^% `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. `: M7 K; s& [2 [3 M. U/ y$ O7 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 a7 B+ I$ q- K6 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 }- e% e+ P& P0 H9 ^7 b5 J, s  }<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 Q2 V$ a& h  y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 _5 j5 c) E+ _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 {; N( X& x8 L3 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 ?  ~% @/ [* k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 |, k% }8 ]) [, N: `  o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>