【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. |: D; T* c0 T: z8 k4 ~$ ]+ vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 H3 b$ I5 n( c$ g" G8 E, ~With the moon kissing it every night
1 Q: L, y/ w% f! i6 C; P0 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
5 ]2 S9 U; [! n7 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ S/ @) ^  i. {" v" Q; _, l* L7 HEvery other word you utter is love
( }2 @" W1 ^% N/ @  L! F* d$ k8 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% @( t% a& ]  aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! e; Y5 r6 f- [4 i" ^! l7 fI’m still filled with fear
% m1 O1 t1 L- k7 M0 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, I; X/ U+ H: H9 ~  GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# [$ f5 }. G* }9 M  X: RWith such a tongue as yours,
7 V5 m/ A/ c; P. c5 E1 E0 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% i$ H) ?3 z$ g( S6 ]' }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ r1 ^- X: J2 A7 B8 P, n; @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 \  _: B/ H, ^. A3 [$ x5 s4 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 |4 Z7 I3 x8 w" U6 G/ e. y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 X. D/ ]/ L) F5 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- v. t$ w- m; p( Y' X/ h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 e. l2 s* g, k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D8 D4 Z3 T* A! M: H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( Z( C1 q; I, l9 w* q2 ]6 b& X6 C( v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( _) u; K; A1 k" X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 d% \& c9 T5 m+ E+ D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 D6 g5 ]/ @. I" m7 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 f5 z  ^+ n8 `* j3 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 f+ E- [* _; K% d% o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ [: I- x2 x, V8 F3 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ u& a, D! d& z* m, l% C5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- D4 \, P1 L# A3 U# b! u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ S$ x- s* Y, c5 ~$ n9 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 o5 g5 C& O5 f. y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. H+ k/ a) P, W3 G9 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ]: k$ r7 q: L$ w& N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% H0 w3 Q, B- I+ w2 _2 M5 }% U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ Q, u* U9 W+ ?& M& M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% p) A+ K9 @6 i" h# x! m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- F' Y# ?% ~5 O, A9 i: D1 r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 d; V/ D- U$ V" I  p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 F$ _7 q' n4 K1 d  m0 B, G! i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>