【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) H; u: N7 K6 _; EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" k" q- @! j! h0 N- c+ A  kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% A- ~2 h) N( xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, Q% o8 t% g/ T  Z$ u% q8 A, v" PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 R# e2 D  P* o4 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% G9 B+ Q0 w) L! v# i2 {+ K1 u6 CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ f7 E, W2 x  z, z$ e. SI love you I love you with all my heart
: }7 ^0 @; ?0 j) j6 q& Q4 sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 c: r  S/ I+ ]1 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- B" |* S2 }( n2 @+ s% y( rI regret not dying
4 i$ j. k0 K- g3 j" ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ R: l' W, Y2 f/ yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  }5 Q& K- w  m9 ^2 @8 Z% NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 f+ }4 R4 w0 M' C! Z5 O3 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 w0 D" j% s0 J% M" }7 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' h$ e( W: n; d( @$ j7 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 n+ O2 X. l2 z& s  D0 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 I/ d) g8 r$ o* J+ ^) B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* z& B3 I" w6 y( }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) W# ?- P" G8 b6 }7 D4 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 s  z- c# x& q3 T3 P: y' U# |( c8 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 x$ R6 ^: }( U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 b  B  Q- |* p% }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* @( H( h* B# I! `# \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% u( Y/ v6 S* v5 @! L% ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; z) e' v' ~& j5 X: ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) j6 ?& c2 E% c0 O6 \4 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 j  t* Z0 x4 u. u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' }- t  W2 ^; F7 p, B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ~) n; Z& q# X6 p: @: W8 K7 d1 J# W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( a8 Y0 K) }. N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. I7 S5 A, C' F1 c1 h: a1 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ L2 _  `2 X" o' j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ?3 j9 G; ~9 U& U1 k  P) r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  m' C. V) D7 f: I+ `  R+ Z; ]; a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 T1 H1 O) D! @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- b, W; Y7 ?* o. w- @! L1 I' ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 I4 d* G0 h3 ]* }9 P( p' S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# J! |( ]: \; v: Q; ]4 N: {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>