【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& b6 D  j- m! L  q$ R' NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 t# Y9 \- R6 ], J! j+ NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, [! o# g/ O3 @# M& c+ v- }' fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ M! ~* P7 [, \: b' x! U5 l9 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
6 t0 x& U# A1 [( u9 xWith the moon kissing it every night
8 B# x6 K/ F: W% |7 v1 Z5 @3 xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 c0 ?6 V( J! d- J  W, VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ u4 S, u9 V' G4 ]0 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 Z* W! r7 b# n. {! wNothing can compare to my love
1 o" X! u" n2 I  u( ^' ^" ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 {/ M5 o/ u: T8 M0 eI want so much to see inside your heart
" G; {! O3 n" f; C/ d! g$ ~2 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ b9 b6 }3 M% D( n8 JI regret not dying
% D, B7 L7 D. |" m7 W0 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ R- Z; J. l* C4 ^3 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" D: [. j' V  Y3 F5 l$ g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Q, ^. ?7 j" g2 S9 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 F6 r+ R7 j2 {- B* W/ p4 F+ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 E" P- r. |5 K0 Z0 l: O3 z% L1 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& F6 k0 G, p: K  _$ K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 z& B. g4 \! v5 y5 Y& K8 y& M9 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. E0 p3 m* j. c7 z# j; t$ |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" `1 O: Z7 ~) D& a# o* {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 V  w" s" o: I, G! Y, R" |3 |, f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: I8 Q6 z2 D4 M4 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ N. r. z6 N0 X8 v& ]0 ?4 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  a8 ~, I# I6 P6 d* d! F0 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' T; C* n; q$ u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! T5 W' ]4 y+ g( t& H, x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( Y, S3 x. }; I9 h) V0 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ l( j* Z$ `3 P$ X+ r, T7 x" ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 v- r+ W! e) r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: V, X, b9 Y) |3 V7 P9 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 Y9 R! d' ?8 _) Q' T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 o4 {& T; a- w% N: n% W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, r2 Y2 t( ^% m: ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- h7 [, p3 x$ P! q9 q4 C5 }: y<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ B( F" Z3 v' k. I: l+ d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) Q6 N) D* m. Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 v5 i; a4 f. a1 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 g; k# S- B5 [4 u7 T0 K( J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 e% u+ y, ?6 r4 z& B: ~9 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  [3 {; ]) ^+ U' u2 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 n/ c1 X9 _  \% c% t6 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 Y! W# H9 `5 W# w, J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 L% ~; w1 O/ ^2 [0 C我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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