【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; K- W, b9 q6 g歌词我附在后面。
( k" c8 o) K; I0 X% j, ?- t! G# _The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 t; r3 k: h- A! h* G& d, Y. CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 u" |9 y5 _1 {2 X6 c1 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 L  v6 o9 x( d, zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; d2 d3 a$ x$ I: SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: x% w' N0 E3 @# k$ K/ W- F" E0 UEvery other word you utter is love
0 R/ @# Y# E& v# H! {* }+ ZI really want to know just how much you love me
. u8 H7 ]; F- o. h$ M. BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: W0 E% [9 s3 G7 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ i  G) @) s! ]8 H: V9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
8 o0 f$ @( U  C/ d; Y; TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( U* @* {8 J2 x9 O) kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 g: l; M9 W, j$ E1 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ~- N2 m  j& X3 F$ ?' y% ^4 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; c" a$ a' a3 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ y  j* @- l1 ?1 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* l& x/ E% b/ _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! C' w' {7 l5 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. }' l4 J9 `1 _" h; u- j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& k9 \' K/ K5 S8 t  }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' T( i0 Q: _/ i/ r! {" |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* w, ~1 E0 z3 A: c& z0 d; f' H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 L  V! j" r- D# E5 e6 c' \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Z" n# D+ q8 A2 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 A, T% U- r4 _. t4 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- M5 F+ t8 x- y1 j4 m5 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 V: n) q$ y" Y( T; a. [* T) ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 B) ^' h6 Z0 U& o' ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# E# ^0 N: l2 f( u; _: O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# q) r: Y7 ?0 L  }$ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ U2 K8 [  W9 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 T: X1 x0 X7 M3 E( M; h6 Q  h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 |  L0 N: i% G# w: g9 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ B7 f. N& `' W; Z, F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. N  F. B! P9 r6 C  ?0 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) s. _, `5 [0 R7 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; l/ z# K/ V# n, f: b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" l: G1 o* _- K- Q! K/ e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ E3 n6 k/ \+ ^) |$ z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ h( M- r( C; t2 w. w+ T9 Y$ z8 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 n3 Y: g0 Z# F; ~. Q7 k: H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ^9 s. W0 b: h4 Y1 Z! e$ L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>