【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# G8 I. ^- `8 m" z- C0 o5 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 E1 ?! P; r8 ~+ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 s% K8 Q% O: U' EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 B3 A2 U% Y+ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 z' [. A7 S7 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
* B" E$ c  B. lWith the moon kissing it every night
# R) X; m0 a7 ^. k3 E5 g7 V) X8 fSeeing the sky content with its love
2 {# C0 L0 n* o+ FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. e' t: h! U! C' [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 m" I' I! X4 M- _5 }. bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 W7 N( M& d5 p3 p# o! _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 |1 _8 h/ b* }. b, g7 F. HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- x" ^$ W4 G- tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Y$ [. E5 a3 T8 K- TI regret not dying
9 ^* D7 e0 x6 @& ^1 j) U, MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# v" i; _" k) ]6 I7 x. WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 x: A, y" y8 T% v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ N! q: g4 W; U4 j  N. W, t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  e5 R8 W3 D% u+ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" r$ ]7 o1 {" G$ U8 @9 ~; k0 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 s+ Z6 n* N1 B8 _, v+ c# l. j/ Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 A2 a1 C: ]: {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- ~4 ^: B* ?6 Q5 i! v% h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: A. ?# H. L1 X& W) p. R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' d6 M. H1 f9 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% y& f( ~' C; J7 i% H, C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ `( O5 p' p  I<P>你无需担心</P>
$ f" R# P  ]* K4 R5 x& |0 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: t3 I( U, V) A; x4 v3 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ L  I5 K( e% H# a! S$ J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 L4 k1 V7 u" x0 I' h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 |% n3 g+ W3 ]+ t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ I% x7 Z+ d. w  w% F+ `8 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, e* c9 x4 I) C' O' ^' Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; m+ U# X! |/ D7 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" W( [4 x# f+ j  K! p9 F: B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; C0 B6 K8 V! k/ ]9 T" z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* y, G& T9 Z. a3 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! \' c' X/ P; |% _6 T7 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! s2 Z1 F: u( j2 n2 O( d0 m( K/ X' P8 ~7 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# A$ K2 N/ q. b5 p2 R' J6 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ u) n# w' z, m, f* {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# C9 N! f! {6 r0 c$ k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ s5 y9 j6 X! Q; K: h" L) U3 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- t" f' n; p) J0 `. v1 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 b" e2 k/ a$ V/ y& d8 X$ c; T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# m* T9 H6 S5 d# N9 k7 H5 Q我请你剖开它

7 R% i: T' J8 P3 U, J. {* m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 N# ?9 ]6 L- W# C" u, b' o7 P2 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>