【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% r$ x% @& ^3 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 B2 ?5 F5 p9 s3 m7 w$ x" ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ G$ v: g5 y$ U4 b3 m! t. [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 P' N, P9 C8 j0 L- NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& K9 C: K  R% E( cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; B, t2 a6 B! D3 ~' F# kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 a7 N/ |# H6 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% x; M9 P9 k! j' ~+ E- wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 B1 |" D& u; @* V9 O3 j1 @/ T4 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 [& N  h; y6 ?2 PI regret not dying
! E! E0 n+ Q1 Q2 ?. O+ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 ?/ u0 t7 r4 K# L  AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 A! l8 ?- k9 y8 W2 A6 F! Z0 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: X# d# C  H  y/ H4 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; z- g& D0 |3 e( B% P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 F! S3 l: R8 B) S5 X+ t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* u  ]2 p8 n! {# }3 h, F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% n. {& ]- f1 L$ q( x$ A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- i6 ~9 G9 ]3 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 q, \9 r, T9 Z8 Z6 I+ N& l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. x# D3 X% C1 H; Q7 a& J! l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 P, f) X% U' ^! `0 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 E& y3 A% G. y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 E9 }- z/ W, n( c2 c+ O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( Q( ]& ]' Z+ U1 \. A, o6 a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 }' y8 |8 l' R% C. m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! f% o' s4 {: E+ S, F" U, M! i6 }* Z9 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Q# r6 E; {" J/ f* s( m! j" x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! J% d9 X* E+ T2 `6 ^& Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! Z4 O2 ~) E( N- c0 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, V+ L) P# I2 n9 `. t* E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 J6 S' k" Q! l( F$ O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- W1 R7 c, |6 M4 d5 H' S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: i+ j8 a1 ]4 y; y6 H  ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& ^9 E7 Z0 g$ j6 u7 [. C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ~2 P; P4 ?9 c  Y0 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' y$ g% n  T# {6 z<P>I regret not dying</P>
: z2 ^$ r3 m! V, l/ Q2 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ L( ^5 A4 v& a) N' [' K+ e; `8 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" t8 ]$ y" S# k) I# u2 j* s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) c# \4 ?. D. y8 L1 R/ R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 F: H# h9 w" {% U0 J, i$ X. Q4 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 Z; i- g! S' W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 B6 _3 z2 ~. P$ W7 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. r4 ^6 P# [' ]0 C我请你剖开它

, d9 Y2 N) ^- c% ~$ E" W$ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>