【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 R8 J1 X: L4 B( \/ i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& [+ y, e; ^, A7 ~8 C9 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: y8 t/ R; o/ H' P9 K# p8 b9 NWith the moon kissing it every night
- F  o4 [- R# l8 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( L7 o. a) x* l) h1 P9 H5 v' x" {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' l7 O  j8 x4 M$ \" \0 v6 r: \9 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ l! O9 W; _% _% R& ^I’m still filled with fear
+ Z/ A8 }2 [9 L5 u! b( ]4 X- N' lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% n( x$ d% ?1 G& ~( vI regret not dying
1 C' E1 k2 O; x; PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 t) Q; l2 J% Z2 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* u/ v+ o% k* W" ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# ]( B$ s$ w" ^/ {( ^3 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" ~" P* ~. |! H& {; r" n  D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& ]8 n9 v7 B$ J' {7 v- e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 v2 G8 v0 m# F5 t. J+ I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 Z/ f/ I4 o: ?6 Q$ @" n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, F* v! O. a( W, s7 s; k6 G9 r! B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" M) H3 w( ~* g" Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) |* P/ o" p3 p6 B<P>你无需担心</P>
. o+ F: r1 y- ]' E1 L  C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) V4 _# x% p$ w7 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 z5 d, v* L: _2 p( Z1 K2 @( o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 y$ m. {' y: W2 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- {+ ]+ I. |! S$ Z' a1 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ S; h: C2 N+ c. Z  g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* Y: l  t. R, o1 {( B7 _0 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' M& N/ c/ C, V8 J; ^! J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ r; V) N# d& s7 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. U7 p5 H& m7 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 ]; {# \" J" }9 |* d( B0 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 O* E. `" Z) K2 X9 I# g+ h2 ?+ N<P>I regret not dying</P>
; u; t9 ^# z, S2 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, n6 Y/ B; i0 }" [' A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% d( T0 a! _+ z- y: @; e/ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; A0 o$ y' d% c6 T2 e" H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 X$ u" I% g. i7 n$ w0 P7 q6 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 N3 O, g4 h! }: y我请你剖开它

4 F  O* s( @( s; A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 o( s" ]1 g" V7 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>