【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 p: W8 c0 K/ v" nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: L# D5 @6 `  w) Y& XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, q) ?' {6 ]+ B% eSeeing the sky content with its love
( q4 D. |' s$ j7 C' n6 _; i9 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* Z" ^# Z' o$ {; x0 UEvery other word you utter is love
" q0 X. p% g5 E* g/ J; @! eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ O% t. ~( c0 e/ I' ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' ^( ~* R1 e/ X: ]) b# LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. d# Q5 R: ]1 `9 b& HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ l# f7 Q7 T5 X8 G6 W- H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! G, i6 I* o: Y6 P5 Z) z- f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 u& c3 _' m1 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% \, \+ a0 r3 @- k: b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! n  {* ]' D$ K/ X: p% F( P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; ?1 W' q. Q  b" m, Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" W# S7 h$ U/ h( i, k9 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% G/ k: s( [* x& s4 K+ q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 T! B/ q, C7 E- K8 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- k7 S8 |% w" M+ s3 U3 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ m9 {4 H! P4 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 u2 b; ~8 Q( K! B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; S( S: }& B& R- D0 o2 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' }+ ^& V- C. |  X) k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: n2 l, C# @3 {' z8 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ z4 w0 e5 c: ]8 f; h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 q4 @& Q  |1 W4 I8 R1 W8 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' y- a6 i" d0 M2 A2 h" {5 v% [- m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 v) W0 i# r3 B/ q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. Y* s* c# i' M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' f& X( y" l2 g5 k# R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 v1 U: J- Y: ]0 h1 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 I2 k, H: g+ p  z0 o9 O( n7 A: ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 H; K( e3 Z2 I; t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; j1 K' [0 \7 F4 E4 Y6 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 K7 Z5 ~  X: Y+ Y' @% V; R& `/ A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 O6 l( T3 u! U" m! o1 l: w, n+ [! k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 j7 `8 l/ d1 m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>