【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 Q4 B5 y/ W8 W4 v( U7 C歌词我附在后面。
0 G: v0 P: F; T$ v, fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" J0 z# A  n7 u  p$ DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 f" Q: {) ~5 S4 r5 I4 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- I5 D8 h6 O, C) i8 P$ `The sky is happy down to its soul
) C0 C" R. f* L- P5 d# a" t# WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, A; g* Z3 ]0 I, J8 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% X8 C3 B" m7 T  eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 b) @5 u8 T1 K; o! ]0 Y$ {0 C- _I love you I love you with all my heart
0 e6 a0 j* f: u+ W3 A2 RNothing can compare to my love
9 H8 }  I+ E* m1 ]3 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 Q) l% _$ ^: U5 p1 \; g* M+ {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; n1 k8 k& P! zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 Y. S0 ]$ Y4 O, p8 {# Z4 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 E, L6 n3 |4 E6 s# Q) o$ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 {4 x" ?' W- F7 L+ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 G8 a# P. ^/ ]( x' q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' `  y. B& q4 U1 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! L& i. ?4 L% |9 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 n7 ~6 M5 ~) U2 k; b6 M6 h$ c8 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" P# g4 h* W7 Y& ?6 r6 A+ M$ q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( t/ {* @: a$ Y; {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* o' i) q- i2 D1 ]1 t4 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' j6 |/ s# u" K, W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 K; {9 V! @7 l' p$ \; U" B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 X; A9 @, P1 Y; L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 ]/ @- U- q: R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 _, k4 a2 i  W. `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 m1 e; e: r4 f2 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) v0 s' W* U" v- s* @+ I, w3 d" a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 \3 D( `$ }$ v5 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 d( P, L/ V9 [7 q8 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 J' K2 q9 {( T/ \4 Q1 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ s; h2 G5 k3 c/ p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  A7 ]. n# Q2 l! _: _: t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ M# V5 q5 L) N4 o1 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 ~0 v7 _4 r! Z% X3 m$ H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 k( J+ ~7 Y0 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ c, b" E% v  }2 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! H1 v& y, |' Q& y: }6 X7 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 Z. {( {7 a  v. g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 t" b+ q" e& y2 I# i: X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 x$ s  l, R# O+ }0 k9 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% E8 b8 |( A- V) t' P9 s6 }# x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' U9 O' c( }9 I; r/ }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>