【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, f6 q7 L0 L% \9 l/ p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ^3 d& I# n8 z7 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 U. X3 L5 p+ ]" R, t4 }. TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  a& E: ]0 K  f3 M  }& k5 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' h1 g& Q) `6 K1 V& H" ~/ \2 G4 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, U" f0 g6 B8 b. V, o9 c9 JYou needn’t fear anything
5 @0 y. A! s0 H6 \' ]( v/ A& EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. \3 z7 m6 ?% h$ q% C# J9 X3 K5 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' j8 e' F0 X* w' l2 A" h1 {  |1 sNothing can compare to my love
. d6 D3 z4 v4 a, _5 H# l  r# s( K8 ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& c3 F/ @" m) r. uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 K4 e0 }: i. O: i% C) xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 x& a. m9 ]; H  CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* N$ u' P9 H2 M. H2 W8 u/ e) SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, ?. b! s8 D' T. wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 f$ }5 E; |/ P$ f) l6 `" a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 q% T8 v) \' T. t) v1 B4 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( y2 Q  s; D3 O2 r: o* ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) N3 n$ e+ m8 j( e8 Y, F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: V1 Z4 ^7 K, [  Y2 T. H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' q1 N: I/ z# `1 h, u# d+ v. f% d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; {4 c# X& _2 k& o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) e5 @" u( m7 y6 ^6 n6 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ w, @3 U5 A8 M$ t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 [2 A1 f& J- [; Y% y& h: [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% D2 b8 S* H$ l) ]% d; _& f- g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, }" W1 Y, ~+ L- \. n! b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( T7 w/ g' g9 I- ^7 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 T* c3 o* D* g6 j" a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 k4 e' g+ v, l: e1 \/ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ V' N- i! ~2 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ e8 x: i5 Z3 {" p; [! o/ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ]% i9 ~1 w* J4 W$ @+ ]; h" t, F, C$ E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  w0 H2 s7 G" F+ s+ m<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 g4 s" v5 @% m& p3 _5 s) h1 F8 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; k# j$ H3 D' v; m% b) l( O: x3 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) Z' @0 r) u* M0 o- F1 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ q# s4 [2 n( \% q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; a, ?; I2 C, O8 s6 d- k) T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 z# P/ a7 b- R0 p7 w# }& p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" }4 Y/ P' O) F' i7 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( G' [  i0 W; e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ G, @0 g" C9 L% G我请你剖开它
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1 {/ _: Y$ Q' D6 E! H$ v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>