【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 a) ^9 q5 K/ tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 w  h2 e* ~0 Q0 @' zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 l; ^6 b$ _2 ~. ?2 P$ w/ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 G. Q9 g9 X' A  vThe sky is happy down to its soul
( o! n: e# S! R$ x8 P2 ]) QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 `( h( @3 o: tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 |5 ]' A% c4 N9 P% A, nYou needn’t fear anything
5 M/ S* I6 Z; t; pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& k& ]5 Q! ?( c- I* BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! c! c6 w% M1 |0 X! nNothing can compare to my love
- `& H! m$ O9 w/ D& O9 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* p/ P+ ^9 }7 E8 G( p( ]8 s' W' ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' o( S: y+ |( I5 d" L0 s0 f* k+ VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ S( f. v: n, N( p9 R" u' jI’m still filled with fear
8 }. U5 T( l, y# FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* d$ w3 \* f1 {$ V0 {6 TI regret not dying
( ^7 j) b" o. QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# V8 Z8 ?( e; o4 Y( I2 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# p8 r: g: a6 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ H: M1 z9 s4 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) z# J+ m. i. U0 v! p2 F  a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 N: W+ l/ F# B; ^0 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ v5 j, a- W9 |' p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; d" m/ j2 J1 l, y1 D( J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 B5 X& ~. Q( i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ e, o" q  _" Y' K/ F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 C8 f  Q; ^& c( a8 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 U0 ]0 l5 ^( G6 W% ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: u0 J3 e3 K, b9 F# Z# B) Z  L6 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 x: t3 D9 Q* W% Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" R% Q, y2 P' P1 g8 R4 c! |& Q5 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- m* Z! b8 _9 }6 D2 |+ S( m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ e4 u9 i1 [! j- U9 ~, O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& B( E8 e/ t$ {. A) D* i; D+ v2 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( U4 K, H' E- k! B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% \' S& s5 {6 `" |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 z- o. Q; C, }  w% t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% z% x- r' Q5 b5 r$ O. s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 u( J& {8 k$ O, S' z# R' O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' }- Y. A" P: S; N; w% L9 [% V) N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' O% S6 D2 Y+ {- O% \  C; ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: C: n" ?: j) w: z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 U$ a. Y- G$ W: f3 x. R8 }# k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 U3 H* U' b* J) E; D9 }7 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: L8 h  e8 C5 o0 Z. l' ]) x/ q: A0 u3 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; ?% t  m8 Y1 E% I- A! e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>