【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ U* \5 n/ k% t5 k) @/ T( KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 |; u( b# I+ I2 B8 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ S* V* U% q0 m# |( n0 C+ mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, x: g/ ^: E2 g) a, wYou needn’t fear anything
# e/ ~% j  ]& r" j+ Z1 [0 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& l5 M. E2 z, v9 _: M+ P0 b$ l1 \9 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* j$ T" q. }- U5 W; }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 Q" y1 A5 ^1 W: RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! u7 J8 Q+ }* W- AI regret not dying
# ]; ?3 N3 _) RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ]  f4 |5 U5 u3 X/ S6 v: {( CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 W5 N$ u2 d" I3 Q/ `; W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# l$ T8 {9 G/ z: y/ S7 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  `+ t) n* [7 b$ u: }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: C, G" J: A$ P0 H2 M' \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- A1 K( N' v# n# l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# d+ Q( e. R8 ^5 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 A2 ^( Z; d- N( P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  w, H: l2 H8 Y' r, ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ~6 v/ Z& g3 c3 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 [1 {# S3 K* I4 ?' C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" }, c7 |3 d( J2 c  W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 [1 F) Y7 _0 Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) K# r$ J6 f$ A  R8 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( g; x# a: P$ H3 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ k. k% D8 z' a& ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# g1 V8 U# Y; s& s) L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 X1 A' V- f6 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; y0 M. \! |' ?! |- V: J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ R" t2 B" X# M; {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  y( [% [& p; g( x/ d' `' n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- S& A8 O1 w' O7 b. F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) ~% F+ f' C6 v% k" B( Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  k+ T' L/ ?+ {, d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) [  g  P1 G8 {" Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' C# p9 Y' M) l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 |0 M" N  q0 @7 L1 c) x1 {: f: N我请你剖开它
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( e/ R& w& e, M& i$ R9 _/ l, N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- b4 h' ^, w, T+ q, R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>