【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: I# h( {0 \" S' ]2 F: B歌词我附在后面。
2 B' w1 P+ b- }- n+ @' FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 t- k+ n. R# A0 y  `: ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
. l) y. Y' h- K5 q* e$ D& jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ z3 z( r0 g" F! d5 F9 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
; \6 `' l8 c  Z; x. g/ NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- q( z& n+ u2 Y, H4 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, b0 E& j5 w& {( }4 L3 Q8 E0 G4 |' ]I love you I love you with all my heart
1 a0 {. |, K! V7 n' h1 p1 `) UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, b5 f! `8 f  P, R" Z- S/ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 B" Z, _' i0 p$ }( JI regret not dying
. F0 F+ ?3 A5 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 N0 e# p% x2 V9 K  p: _/ YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& X( W- G, c+ Y7 F* MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 a! M' @9 b8 b2 Q6 `, r: [/ r% y- Q- V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# I. E( c5 h4 ~  X) d; {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ~: l8 c6 `& }3 V3 N9 D' Y& m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: @: J2 \8 K- s0 C, H% [! d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! T8 `- k3 D8 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 ]# ?+ V; G8 H! L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! m' M/ w: y! r* l  q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) k& v# L' ^8 z7 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! r( H9 _; P% D( G+ q$ u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 w3 c' Y* B0 _- F; r, R' V1 Q1 f6 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 t, L% O; n$ e<P>你无需担心</P>
3 K" b6 N4 R4 h. A$ e/ U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 d* k; |9 G' Z, u+ G' V: `" s' D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 M0 {. V! r! y; F* y& Y- t& T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; a1 y4 Q/ Y; D0 T6 P+ n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  z# h- k" x* a1 v. w7 u. y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 W( j" T$ U) H5 x! C, _& j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ @( V- M" T: ^4 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% {( g: x' E" M0 w! f7 X. J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! ]. [, B2 S  V; R- n6 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 k; E5 \7 h' I$ V- t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 j# ?& a- ~/ u- q0 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 a: D1 R5 t. e4 \+ [( J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; \- E! h" q, s1 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ o8 a5 J) z+ R) b& I5 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: U3 p  T8 B+ Q$ |+ N4 W& Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, a3 k! g0 }. w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ i! E+ P) E  W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 `* q9 `) v7 R" h) m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 T) F3 p% d, f. ]4 E! Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) }# ~# l5 z) h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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