【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 y4 _  ]( C( u3 I6 s歌词我附在后面。
5 L& k8 k% g! D* W. `. _0 Z5 F. ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 U( V# p; \- v- o/ w2 i" I' CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 C" s( I/ e+ E' WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) l1 W6 G0 R  R2 g* jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ [9 H+ J% q$ G7 Q* C9 yI really want to know just how much you love me
* i* ]) R" c: K  S0 aI love you I love you with all my heart
# C: ^. }" {/ p9 |Nothing can compare to my love
+ [& R5 }9 X  D+ S2 W4 ^% qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 C0 M  ?5 c9 q+ n  W: ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) E' ^$ V! Z& I4 g$ J* qI’m still filled with fear
, l, {6 |  K- f" kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 K. z# I3 ]! i2 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 j- i: F) _8 a, i  ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 K2 Y  Q2 X& _" @" W% d( E: q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: d- m3 G& I0 I9 m( W) `0 y' S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 q; m2 f2 ~/ i3 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 G& O8 m9 C! H! p3 P, z9 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ a, a2 Q* f7 o3 r0 b# F( N4 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ B- F+ Z3 \8 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 o1 R0 Y& D& }6 o7 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 n( b; |+ h9 }5 Z+ G. s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& P/ n# s! C4 O  S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 h: B8 E6 E  l$ R2 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ u: A9 t9 B2 x- X8 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- y- g" x5 @/ k& G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& c% O6 G0 S9 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 Q! Z; p, i8 n, d8 j. G& v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 D8 h" l: L! h4 m4 b9 g- [  I; L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- E' ~' G2 f+ P! X  f1 O" J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 O- F+ d, Z) V7 E3 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 U3 }2 W) s/ h, z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 l  h# g+ t& ?3 }9 Y" Q& ~: d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 E9 a, b! a' i/ A/ `+ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& r8 v# \4 |& }% u2 L  }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 r  ?; |: t% O- v! e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 E8 _+ x. L6 ?. W( i3 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 f7 `7 F4 t" I1 d" X9 X5 u  w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# b4 _( ]+ ?  t" [! T, V& Y- t4 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* e1 g2 A. M! s: T- w: ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 _1 Q  z4 C$ c0 C6 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, [# {2 n3 v. F! S/ n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  J4 m% @8 C( u. c: Z; \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 H- K; g# T4 m; g- \1 K0 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* a3 P( |$ }7 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. c& d5 z- @' L: W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* o) P7 g) k6 N) J- s8 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ _$ b" g# `: H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 P5 E. |) J8 s# M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 F8 v3 I9 q2 Z" l* h8 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 z; `- [9 \$ r+ T# v' e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>