【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ U, j8 `8 p. R, d) o2 x5 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) n! ~1 {$ B9 c( s+ ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- V" P" X( ~- ]: wThe sky is happy down to its soul
' D5 k- A5 y, u4 YWith the moon kissing it every night
  m3 ?- A" @1 k$ \" bSeeing the sky content with its love
0 X+ w" _6 Z% [+ o6 @$ U4 L) FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 G) V. |/ t# i8 bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  m, f" g# U2 `0 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: L$ E% ^5 |- M: a( NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 P8 E- M. ~; b! w$ d# \+ ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; N( t& m5 H& H6 M0 K- M' W! FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 o: j1 g2 c8 D4 M& }; sWith such a tongue as yours,
" b0 o0 I  t! H, ]  g0 a6 X. \1 N9 IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" J7 E7 D6 v0 H- K% a$ c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ ?! l7 `& n, U8 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 e9 }" x7 w; G" q; o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 y: m% z: ~1 V* G8 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" B* @3 V5 i% w  ]  G& [9 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 P3 v4 S: V: Q( y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- L0 a  I4 F! _3 h. S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 b: f: i7 W* E/ n4 f3 V" N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 t" _: v+ I! }  s* J& u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 A2 a- E; F  c$ v4 t7 ]8 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Z) Z- f* [; U4 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; U! V; Z* C  r4 V, h% ]$ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' T9 _* K4 R- K$ x5 V5 `0 ?; d! ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 f( ~( t9 E8 }2 ]6 p+ c: r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; |- t, x2 g+ ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ?/ x/ f( M: \1 }0 c( P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 {( h6 W9 @7 v* V  F; N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 u1 s" R* v6 p* W4 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% O) o8 h; D; Z5 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! k* I8 x* ]$ t' p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ l& A& g( p1 }( _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 {( C  {) R' K( H$ }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 f0 b, A, ]8 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ M9 S1 w# a0 w! J1 y: f9 w) P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 Y, j4 G( x0 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( J  g4 W! s, s) A! n/ A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; n: f, Y" h/ g$ i% Q9 X: N* R! G! R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* Y! e/ I: c1 x% W) y% v$ m# b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, _5 x# n5 p: t8 o, k- O& P1 b4 O我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) I0 m; R* j3 G' \& B; }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>