【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 f4 q5 @1 O, XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 M) c$ G- y3 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) T6 c0 [2 s/ O" p; KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ N* b7 B" L' t; @$ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 F5 R. S; D2 b* F! E5 u* sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* c; E; G- j0 W6 q( J7 [9 }; ?) [0 G( @( QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- {$ @; U4 T, q8 F0 E/ {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 P1 ~6 y" V0 o' JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  \# ~+ h5 X& B3 u; Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 L" Z  [; F* U, m# t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 u6 M1 k7 V- k6 U2 x* m5 ]8 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 r! Z9 p6 j  k& c* q- |+ Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 v" N( C* X3 S( U- l2 p8 s/ B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, `* u) ?) ]3 y# U: x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: c  [; R# `9 k& j6 Y' n! C/ i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- ^* `  U# g9 f+ c5 ^, s; w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& y7 F+ l$ [9 r- x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 N- ?3 G3 M8 v/ F6 G: C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' Y8 J& \& u" s# c/ E) y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 l7 Q5 `' X' s$ u1 |, f; f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' U% d0 c+ T& o( b6 `0 \3 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ h9 O6 l5 P7 b( ^5 M, B/ |/ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& \1 F& ^  @% J& F, |( V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 O, U* m+ F% Y; {$ h& w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 [3 T+ i" c! f; E; @9 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: i: {$ [8 O% _2 g  \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# V& z5 f; v! f1 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& @6 z3 n8 O' H/ g6 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' p+ a' I2 g. g  @3 K9 W! T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; v7 n6 h, c; d: i6 {8 a' I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 K0 L: ^2 @# n1 e! j$ ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; m( F" }/ A7 z  C; h6 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) I: [2 d0 |# T/ T- n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: L+ B. A# w- V1 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( v/ a: L+ E# P% R我请你剖开它
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# _  I/ y) T2 C* n$ M3 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>