【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* J1 l9 [1 Y. C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 }7 J2 ?' Z2 @5 V" n6 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. m! J- J7 H* G" R, e6 \2 X1 }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: K% c- U3 d  O' v  SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 z% R+ x  r& h+ h& b2 ^, O& @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% ]' f: U) q. U, n% q+ Z" [* [1 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, x* l& ^0 Z6 |; p( M+ D( g$ QI want so much to see inside your heart
7 _6 v) \) @) D1 ?9 d* CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 o3 i& M7 ^3 |9 C! XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ p+ V1 E) d/ MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& f; ^  L9 g+ X8 H; Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- ^3 A8 w4 X: X" u5 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, F2 {; K5 s0 D8 S2 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  e9 v- I/ I/ n# b" Y/ _, z' N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 B/ y3 S; k) Z, t, H  M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, \0 o" _+ M0 H, I+ z% V  j& k4 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  l. G# e- U' [0 K* |& g( x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* ?8 l7 X: g3 ~  @7 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# E$ {+ S0 B3 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. G( `, A4 Z5 R* l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 G( N/ p. @$ o) V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 J$ g  r: V% Y+ s. U; r9 }: q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. t* p3 t7 n2 I8 A" {$ f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) z6 T# t% S! b( @! a) E/ e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 j1 x4 H, y1 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  r% N1 w5 [! y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 M* q0 H, F- e, M$ l5 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 k. ]( m, T* R! R3 [! ~0 X/ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" w% @. z  k0 O5 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' n; j9 }3 p; y, W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. K, }* B  M; g9 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 Y+ s, x; `0 I& [: e. ?: N, m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
) \8 y1 ~* w* C
我请你剖开它

0 K/ d9 ^6 g0 O# ]$ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 A+ Y. S; X& p; S& Z& O3 H0 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>