【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! `1 P# V+ q+ m$ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 u' ]- ?, D) A: FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 ?& T/ W" j" a- p; Z7 ~, w% wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* N* d  T% E$ nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 o) q4 j2 B7 R! C, G# yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 j, N  ~8 q, h1 A$ K4 Z& PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, L8 d; E. ?% n' |0 b4 bEvery other word you utter is love
) j8 v  e. s9 D& \  cI really want to know just how much you love me
$ o  u5 L4 B/ ~: f* K3 YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' l2 e, N" Q2 x& A6 uI want so much to see inside your heart
4 c2 W- i4 X+ O9 TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 t' [, f( r2 a1 JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 r6 E9 _/ N+ {0 y4 NI regret not dying
. U' l+ R1 R* o, f+ @7 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 d& d2 J- l* ?, n' S$ Q8 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 Z) M7 h2 a; l6 H4 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* E4 z* q3 U8 ?  A( f& x% O; B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, B( @6 w. Q/ Y( z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% _* }6 ]2 b; u" [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 m6 G. s7 r8 o' N" N- u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! c) h: h$ N4 n2 q% J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 I8 K/ u1 @% _, X- s6 o# g5 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 C  }2 s/ O. e% e6 ^; ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 o, _1 B3 `6 N; @& O3 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 w6 o  f) l6 v. Q  a$ A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* c. n/ _7 m8 m+ w) j) a- M% r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 U/ e8 [5 ]% P/ f4 K9 c- t' s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- a& P! w" G1 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* v$ B: _' G/ [0 }) G# X, n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& C& K- J( _5 \' t' C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 G+ i" g1 F) S" p5 l) |4 B" Z7 t  V+ P: H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ X; `. S$ O6 ~0 _+ X) j. Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 n. c6 r$ I7 u' Q; \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 E+ C/ ?% k1 m( s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# n0 Q6 u% r- E4 R% r0 w' d* Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 v7 T* g, Q# `, v& \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, @: x9 E: C, x6 [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* q& Q, m6 h4 ~( c* ]4 S6 P/ V7 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 T* s7 z  [4 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; b5 r$ B, G2 ?2 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ y* \: l" @5 l7 z9 B  F9 `  R9 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 f: {; g  g; f% l. X* u5 a0 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ c' n) v1 [7 L! }& N8 c1 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( l" t. `7 K4 q  L; p" z4 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  b7 B3 f! F2 e8 t6 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 }* K% c3 i7 U/ T' D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 |$ z( `# J  O7 x! m- k2 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ c. u$ n" y$ y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* x' M; X+ ]4 Q! R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 M- ~- q- ]! l- @" L: Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# [2 {% k6 E, f$ T/ O9 C6 A. p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# K  q# y* N3 \+ D' a/ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ V0 ], \$ T/ j, X# U7 e% A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 @7 a& |3 F! N- e' ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>