【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' i: s. Z8 W0 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 _2 U% b4 E- p8 e4 Z9 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. X% m4 ]4 T  s+ x/ ~! W! o" n: m7 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( E' I4 E0 i! _' A4 [8 C- S1 GSeeing the sky content with its love
. s$ G7 S9 N( [3 w! F0 ^4 E% xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: E; v/ @3 P4 _Every other word you utter is love
$ ~% l2 r2 C9 d% h- a/ eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 o, {1 X  c' X1 A/ mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ y' f+ r8 \) `; m0 ^1 m: V0 @6 o" o/ EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* ^  Q" C* L( v2 MWith such a tongue as yours,
9 W- x( j- y" ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ~+ N( c" X, E; F- j+ R( x2 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ^* X& S# m/ ~" r' _+ U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% Y  |3 @5 U) a0 @' q9 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 q- j- p% n1 H/ x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- d5 F& ?' S1 D; e/ u7 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' ?' d  g. X. \  R3 H1 \% O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# l! w! W" l/ G/ s% m1 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 q) H4 k) O$ f' e+ [' n5 j8 {0 \" k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 s, c3 e/ R) X; u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 G, x( h) x. Y( G8 |/ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) G- c0 z5 C/ b2 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; T0 C; J5 u$ I# n- Z' u# R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- p9 P& R; J# t- W0 y% U# \8 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 J+ }* Z8 I& a9 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 h0 ]2 B9 o  {) v2 Y' [. l3 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ Y/ I( K+ |; G+ @% \% e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 {) r8 @6 M4 W7 |6 W1 Z; x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ^3 i/ x2 Y, _2 q- ]6 K0 J& Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 ~5 {+ T4 S# {8 r& X4 J. v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  F4 m; E, i4 f+ [( {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" M- }+ \3 F% n- |5 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- {; c2 S4 C2 B0 \8 H. c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 _, Y. R9 m; M5 o4 H+ y: v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; _" C$ X3 F. B: B% B  E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 P7 z. n4 `2 ]8 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 o2 ~) b9 Z0 [/ s# y1 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 H$ r- c1 S' X7 V: @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# C  o" q) |* K. X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! h( c" W" |6 w  R! L$ j( l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ b9 H9 x, `+ i, J3 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. g9 ~3 r$ J7 r. L3 [我请你剖开它
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4 ?7 o8 H/ x6 ?. W% T9 n- @0 J2 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' i( _- c. T: H0 L+ a! Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>