【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& l) Y8 G% r9 c" r0 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* v' G$ P. D5 G7 m# ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: H5 x( i0 ^9 ^8 w& f0 T& [$ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( }' e! B& i$ l% g5 R+ {$ f( `Seeing the sky content with its love
6 |: M: I/ L) @" c8 F7 O: V) O, S# h, [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 G5 `: x. U2 o8 M( V0 B' P4 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 Q& Z( J) u$ KI love you I love you with all my heart
0 \: Z4 q% L9 }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; _- e$ q2 L0 C, ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 @0 [  V2 s( u9 |: oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) u. r' @/ q1 b# T+ C* a: x: p% \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 I! s2 {" ~3 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 V6 m1 o$ O* M0 d# W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" x2 u: w- j6 {. X& Y8 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; F) `# w6 U) l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 j4 X& R" g, O. `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. Q; ]6 Q6 v( k. n. q8 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ Z5 ?9 P8 `7 ?2 N6 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" ?1 I* ^0 W9 V/ v0 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% V' w9 v- ]8 r2 ]& w8 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 M5 ?3 x. a. X) g4 {0 {* E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% W, I' @; T1 W: N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 K. v8 y; O6 D% I$ v; H<P>你无需担心</P>
: h: U$ u1 r: Z& `5 H3 a% R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 l3 v2 f5 S/ j+ o: G! U" s  Y: @' Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ `* L2 B5 M: _6 k3 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; o5 v3 Q* e! K3 E" y% \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, w* o$ ?" g0 j5 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 V, {  {3 x1 ^2 x' t$ q' `) r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# I, @* I6 D/ z' `. c; s- D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( T4 X* t' ^/ y7 v9 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  j0 \/ s& ]& E" w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% ~6 J$ `; e+ T, l! O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' O% S& B7 T( Z+ w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  t, a! V( ^" |/ \% `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( h! O1 y! Q2 r- p7 l* N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% m" @8 G: k7 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ^7 [& r3 `1 {+ C* w8 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, X( Z& [4 L* R3 x" r+ B* n; S6 Z' N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) K# M$ T# Y& x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 K8 L; j5 n+ Q( v$ n8 H: u5 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% Q. z* Y# D& \: d2 g+ j& L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- Y. P$ x5 Q4 i" E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 ?8 U  Q( e$ j% U3 t" @我请你剖开它
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+ a- h& q' ^- R; f, q) w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 \8 o" _- H' r0 v$ r: ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>