【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 n5 ]9 v3 d& u/ H: I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 |- d. C. S8 w( ?& \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ y  b& m, e$ S; T' sThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ X# V7 n6 s. m: o1 AWith the moon kissing it every night
- L# f' m( p5 iSeeing the sky content with its love
2 K6 K( O5 }) d% \. Y2 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! G/ \8 n  b; u2 f) ?: mYou needn’t fear anything
1 J$ p; I2 l- z0 ^0 Z& ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: g& g# p4 I' y; u# r" ?3 \# VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. k, ?' `6 C! B: q' |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 w0 h/ N5 |9 L( V& [5 r4 o& G4 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" o/ k3 `7 K5 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 g7 I6 S9 w; o- o3 S) g( b, y- yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* Y6 C" d! ~1 d+ AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: ?$ D  ^8 o# ^  ^$ d  X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 S4 e, A# s% r# m' D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. j- z  c0 K& A% x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, D8 \5 J5 x7 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 g! ]. M8 p. s, x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 t* q! G7 l" R7 U* [2 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( P6 E+ e3 M! ?1 D" ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# M. u' ~( x0 [5 n' C7 q, d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" }+ b" ^) y2 s6 g" n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" Q( ?. [9 E- p2 K$ n  A; D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' `- ^+ g! O& F2 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 y. D+ K& U& a. h- A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# v! _( n  m2 Y7 Q% {/ H$ X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 F; E9 e; g. }4 I" @/ P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& o$ u5 C) y6 c6 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% z" X# G5 o* w/ T* I+ z) |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" t( d1 }1 ^& z" q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ y1 E/ ?/ s2 p$ p8 x# U: [" y4 B/ U* [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ i* f6 s# ~$ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ p: M) ~) T( p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 [2 c/ w5 Q& H; K9 k* o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% D7 L9 L1 ~8 H1 B( b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# d% l. ?  a( s3 v  q7 `+ o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: ^( R2 \4 u+ u- M7 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 [' [: G- v4 U6 Q, J$ w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; f. I( }6 G( |! [* y/ [; P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ i- g& @1 Z/ L- K; u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 t: Y: ^# a% {* k1 y  H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 p# B" K2 `0 M, c- H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 I, s( V7 K- g' A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! r+ d$ s7 y0 W: h/ t3 k: ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ v3 j+ E3 n$ L/ a% Z7 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 Z8 ~# r5 l- n6 z; G6 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>