【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% {+ `/ ], i2 |4 o- P1 o, Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ^( l: }% \( F7 b# \" y" s) m' X4 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ }( D5 I- r" t: g6 R( PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 F8 u2 \+ y3 P, }- wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 p. i2 _+ p" [7 D/ @/ G5 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# c! \, \3 G3 Y2 l9 B$ |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, v1 X9 @6 P% s+ [/ y  b( l$ b# LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, y1 s  \( b8 p" U, }( A2 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 _1 }) Q! u$ g; D/ P* FI want so much to see inside your heart
7 Q5 }" |, e) G$ z0 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 X0 ?: m. k, W& X: ?/ |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; h) d7 ~* U. d- m/ q, rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 W/ T+ F" i6 SWith such a tongue as yours,
9 `9 y& m1 v+ |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 u7 x0 j, E$ `1 b/ p- ~0 T& lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) b$ {  _- z9 l, V, Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ^3 L# Q  W. U. F" }5 E9 e- T6 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 O* r/ V1 F& c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 n, Z# z% c3 z& ?% F& [; ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Y6 K$ `- @; T0 B& C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: e9 z. f5 b' K1 \: j0 Y) l/ s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ a8 Q9 |' U! h: Z$ F2 W. P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 B2 f" m& |4 t+ g# d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 t$ O  C- t) ?3 A2 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 C. b2 t+ v8 k% ]" O- `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 J2 l2 L, B5 k( S: Q3 q2 O6 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% G3 G1 x; Z& G; Q" ?( g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ _9 E; |, W3 z4 A* k5 s4 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 @8 g7 h2 B  \. @  u& T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 R  ?/ x5 M* m$ [# ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, k: d  |. D& C) B; ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* f8 |& u, c' Y) R8 d" _3 t- q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 J- o) r& K6 y* w! j9 y8 s* P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) U  }, W2 u3 T' j2 ]) }3 T, Y, X, N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 J+ D( @- F8 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ m0 |1 ?& q0 v8 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% i6 k! _4 p$ O& a' k% `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* }9 s( [6 _# Z+ v+ y. F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. R* Z/ M& W) i8 _8 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ a+ N1 l9 }4 h  R2 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ]) v4 L( {  o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( I! a' Z& @: J3 t9 G4 f) R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* G4 D4 s6 [) G: E( H2 s' l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* Y/ V5 C2 x9 _2 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: [: J, Y, r. p+ p# c4 ?6 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>