【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 l6 I% h1 Z8 W! l8 ~6 N( U, ~1 J' yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% ^. D, v; [$ e+ S$ I# {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; X! Y1 |% b. _7 X- o2 |7 b7 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( |' c  d/ w5 X; `& T: h4 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' |4 p. ^* `$ e' J# D" t' tYou needn’t fear anything
3 Y! E6 V' G" x6 N- mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) v5 ?/ e2 c% q1 W3 t! uI really want to know just how much you love me
# ?* {! b' T  G2 b* ~% E" E) T7 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& Q6 t  E; V3 B9 d7 L- OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 m! G' G6 h4 d9 g+ H0 h& @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. C; g1 ~: I0 H/ Q, w' x3 T8 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" G1 k6 j# ^# E$ O1 p: QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* h2 W- _$ C- _' ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  Q2 E& h1 O; X8 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. h' b1 N9 C* N( ^! ]# Q; d  J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 p# o; Q, y$ V8 _9 x2 `5 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! f9 _5 w. L7 s% X& C! i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 ?+ ~0 ~' R! r% ^% c: S3 Z3 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ]8 A; ]- g1 J$ r7 ?/ }  F( Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 }) j# f: y  Z5 [* V) W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" l; j' q# h, Q$ I4 n: m6 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ a+ S2 x9 N; R0 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% I3 u( j1 D% `0 f$ I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ q/ C9 ]; _7 k8 U* y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* C3 J' ~$ i  `0 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 n; w0 z/ e0 d- g! K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& y5 e- |3 h7 Y) h. ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) M. m- x- M2 m* a" y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# j( }1 X6 W" v* }" X2 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- Z4 O5 g# p  S1 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ V2 X. }; r+ ]6 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- W8 A/ N1 p! j9 i' h! X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 N" Y; O- j1 K1 P' f: F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& t, L3 ]/ E' V0 k0 Q" Z4 J! p* L; s+ G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- s6 i6 k  H! D8 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! n" t! S- `7 _0 A, s4 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# v# e* P6 ]' U& J, i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>