【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 v$ z1 N0 D& U/ _7 A8 h, D9 t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% I; ^7 o+ X. p/ bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 Q9 L- |+ p& Z; s% `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 ~$ w! S, w- l2 p+ r( K3 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
" b8 g. P8 [  \2 YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' m6 k* R' N8 v6 d( n- TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 [% k! R/ \9 r6 l, GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ n3 [/ j  O# ?4 a3 p( C6 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: u3 P( ^% h3 |/ F+ V4 |4 _I’m still filled with fear
2 h- B& G% \) W* K; mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) K; r0 B3 i# j, R8 z, r- g9 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: X4 t. s3 Y4 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: b: w# ]0 y: V+ f" JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ }6 |8 |7 g! F) o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 |. i9 L8 O! n" M  B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ n( Y- D! \8 K& i. P) A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: h0 d7 I2 E- ?2 I# l5 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ T; c" V- X& X+ a, Z7 E, j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) e& ^+ S2 M5 J% k* A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( r3 r& J  u5 X+ z4 o  A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& A9 {0 s# h8 }3 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, b5 H; B1 \1 @; `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 P6 ~; d0 }6 S9 a: ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 v6 E5 K3 t6 Y* W& ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 q; ]& j* h. B& c% X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 p) @2 `+ i; N$ O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ r# e3 N5 k  b7 L5 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! Y. w7 w8 E; h: t6 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- z% ]4 L0 x) w. V- C& I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- Q+ |( q+ j) m. K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 u: e. {( h9 t" o+ U) Q; g" Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" J8 ~. ^2 g2 [+ K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- m& B% I4 ~& F0 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" t9 m5 d( l4 x5 a' W! @: p8 A8 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# [' V6 c2 W; T( J  e0 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 I+ O0 w. c+ B5 B/ [0 s# `" n, s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 _7 _% B' ^: q* d8 O" N. c3 _/ X% H<P>I regret not dying</P>
- M. V1 J. l" r! v, I* ^6 y' w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% J; @/ k5 z) ?& \1 ?* P1 `1 J6 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ]+ z3 r0 U: w/ a8 c" ~6 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; }, `8 K, b3 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* k3 O0 ~5 r% V4 a3 H1 K4 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ ^# c) }+ S/ f2 l& g$ E0 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: f% ?+ u- F* X; A1 C. z# a+ l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 s  U# \: T! ~7 U) I. L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. K6 c5 H$ h9 {" G2 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>