【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 S; }- ^2 s% Z2 E+ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
' o' j7 I6 {4 u2 j; h9 U/ U1 NWith the moon kissing it every night
! t6 W) j% c/ ~Seeing the sky content with its love
4 j) T2 M% K4 u( oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 U4 X) M2 \: e7 K: i  fYou needn’t fear anything
5 R# O2 y' g" V$ i& cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) k, x0 \& w7 s# Q- `; s9 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. @$ x: m( o) _, {( y, F! v: R% _I love you I love you with all my heart
7 u) V5 L  I! MNothing can compare to my love
5 f7 ^3 d& @+ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# |6 T, U& I  u, [7 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  s2 {' l+ [% d4 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- [; c/ ?( Y7 ^5 Y9 S0 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* R( L' a' V7 ?1 z4 u- k6 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* n( o5 h  U* j: @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( g- j  S' K0 G( S5 x- t8 g8 P5 N7 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ D6 z7 h; B" A# `! h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 y2 i8 a$ s" m/ U1 s* t5 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 g6 U4 `* L' D- `. e  f7 p' |3 `! d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ \8 P7 L  R- a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 `# c/ D- l7 y) t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 @$ x# u! r7 v; q5 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 e* \. `! V' X+ t1 Z3 T4 Y' _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 R0 m; O( r. e, U/ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ^8 n! t# Y& ?. ^2 [( J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- }7 r% k1 W5 O. I9 i3 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 j1 Z; W  i! `3 w! ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! x0 \! l- ~$ [7 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ O2 J/ o7 V7 `! _3 Y: ~4 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. y# D) d, s$ u0 q8 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- c" R3 l) D) c  x& C" X5 v; }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 R0 |0 d. w8 k  v$ y0 w4 y! W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. R/ d+ J; o. n4 u8 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 ], r$ B0 l+ R  [& Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& U$ O. }9 i" {$ I' n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 \0 G4 r( J  n2 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! e# o. p( |( }5 b# B! Y: Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 }) z. Q; p1 t6 E6 a( \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ p) r" \3 q1 m( J) {2 a, @. F3 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 [" d& b5 G# ?' H9 k6 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! Z3 E7 f/ j& Y# a# f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' l* b  y9 q! Y/ N4 p# m我请你剖开它

; G' S" e: C. |5 ~2 A' B0 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 o( ?/ }3 W  W! `, S2 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>