【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 K% I( w4 Z+ F& m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ ?  W9 ^# ^. ~9 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 b5 @( Q, l3 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# p3 ~$ z& C& U4 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: Q+ R9 X2 I# T+ _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* ]4 V. p1 ~) q7 t( G) Z# nI really want to know just how much you love me
9 Q9 H4 a6 n. E& T) R7 y, HI love you I love you with all my heart
1 _( E0 t+ Z6 f8 T3 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( Y8 i  L) A# N* u' L; bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 D! T2 A) d5 a3 [) i( O! X! f+ YI want so much to see inside your heart
2 C' |- |$ [* s/ PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 d8 P. _. c; x( _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ f$ P: F+ R8 \  A& Z" N+ OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  n5 C) |/ N( R$ dWith such a tongue as yours,
4 G: P* j# `# S$ I7 Y  ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* ^/ v1 ], Z2 i# X) T9 q5 o" g' DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- W" t. i7 k: E% I6 k. _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# U. Q4 W! H$ u/ H) @% Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" z* q, T& L$ Z/ g8 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: E3 K  ^' l9 h' C. n  g: ?) F2 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- C2 a* U7 `3 D5 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, U) P4 N. X; I3 S6 ?+ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; B6 `! z7 a* Q" m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& {, o6 B1 L3 `7 i3 c1 \" L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ L# O5 H& F0 W( v, N. [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 R' R7 u7 L% n: A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) x9 M' @) d1 S2 P1 S- b7 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
5 r9 r7 h. Y9 V2 S1 y0 M& p# k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" L+ Z- p: N# E/ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' {- h2 {. S/ ^! K# r5 }6 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 a- g0 T2 g) ~8 E3 w1 N2 Y- y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 N/ D' W. m* a  R+ Q7 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* Y  S, \9 y$ F1 |: o- c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ^* p) ?0 T' n0 B6 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, U9 p# a3 v& q: B) }+ b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. C4 d5 B9 Z- L6 j# [. e% h7 g: j! W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 N8 S$ Y$ b  u2 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 l4 R3 l5 B" ?& ~1 g! n3 I$ Y" m! B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 S' n, a: B& k& b& Y" J  Q: ^. G4 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' C! P$ N( J9 N6 ^1 M+ E/ x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# d/ E  ^7 }1 K5 P# o; Y, C7 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>