【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ s+ @+ p: M* ]2 |7 _歌词我附在后面。
/ L% j1 ~- J" c3 S5 a1 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 z+ h3 B+ ~: _0 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" c0 W- Z+ }4 w+ v- \With the moon kissing it every night
0 U5 r  H8 t2 D: MSeeing the sky content with its love
: B# P" |9 s0 F0 Q1 u% x0 S0 a' uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* y7 _; l# k% KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' W2 D" `1 C8 d$ F! P* M, j  ~Every other word you utter is love
3 j1 I! c  A) y6 i5 y' ?I really want to know just how much you love me
- E0 [  S; A( e* GI love you I love you with all my heart
6 O7 Z3 [) N( F5 r7 F1 E0 DNothing can compare to my love
! b) W9 @: z/ s* A' J# ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 v( B0 A3 R+ n4 {) xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 \7 F7 W4 Q, m" VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 \) i5 T' k- T* n1 ?9 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% o  k* R) m6 L/ c% \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" z8 w7 p, @  b  SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* o) {" i% ~! z" r( A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" L/ G/ \# I5 x% x$ R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- g" u, U# J# o( P: a* I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ~% G4 T+ D. C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ [  g* p3 A* }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ L, j3 Q& ~& g: t4 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- U1 w( Q1 |' x$ b7 S5 j9 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- F* }# y" @# k5 y6 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  r4 L4 T0 y2 M, [. O% I. s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( k* V7 V& B1 O6 ?2 N$ j+ @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ]* ]$ P8 H# q6 e: A+ _3 h0 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 Z- m; b: R7 \, Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 v/ n# o) U3 I  b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 Z( w6 e: I  P: U- p4 |9 x6 d# Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 i2 @8 ^. q: _7 p! y& u4 L6 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 h0 |" \. n; h* v# q/ k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ P' ?+ J% y6 V9 O  @# f/ L+ s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: L  ^5 J. @' L( R+ j$ `' r% d/ j1 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ A8 k; V( V$ t3 d7 R2 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ c4 K( y& K8 n; D5 p* s. G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 W5 M$ ?8 x( F0 O  y9 p1 g. o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 n. \& T: D5 S5 O9 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ^" `, g" \7 M, m3 W4 ~5 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ [& m$ l' M9 q9 ?5 `3 R1 \  \4 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; `) [% k9 F. H' L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 e2 @9 W6 u1 j: i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  {0 \( u, G$ }/ g0 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( v' F! Y9 C$ p8 r4 x1 w' y+ q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 @; f. B% [5 p; U5 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' ?$ M1 K9 ?& m9 Z; S1 V2 d7 x( }; p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: L* s, e6 E6 A) e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>