【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 J" v% J% n& l2 l& T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* `0 P4 L2 X1 M# @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 [- J; t& H2 @6 R) T7 w! PThe sky is happy down to its soul
; T' V3 ~( r  j3 U, _* cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 V2 M( n2 I/ KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 c' Q$ F4 e; @8 [) nYou needn’t fear anything
8 q, X0 |' s+ k0 a" r9 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: d: m, H* a" N( XEvery other word you utter is love
. Z# K* B3 c& I4 b4 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 S' Y7 E# E' l0 W* R; TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 r9 G8 D0 d% y7 ^) i! DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 z5 b; L8 J/ T6 I/ t1 e! m1 {; ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  E- k9 u6 y8 W8 s* B; R; Z6 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# I# A/ Z( R; N: wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( }0 I9 O6 ^' x  y' ?2 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 e/ v% f+ T* \* ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 M9 I% n  N5 E) w6 V9 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Y* l5 R/ @' Y1 \& k, K  e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: W4 k( C  m8 [  w. ^- {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# \) z- l2 J/ a2 F9 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 M( _* @: C" e. l: m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 [* Z! l8 J1 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 N6 L6 |, C6 ]$ T& @5 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ?6 r* Q8 O$ r  Y1 S9 F6 d: N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- X' t1 H4 I, d2 v" C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, l3 ^+ u- Z6 [( D7 j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 }5 |' o$ N: s8 R5 q3 _* ?- h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% u" V% z9 L; J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- Z* t/ Y, W! R1 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( `; a- ?5 h; W1 v  x: r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 u7 H* q) Q$ D5 e: B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& \6 X0 w$ L6 _+ z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 Q4 d$ U: x- w, A7 U5 U+ E# y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" j5 b% y2 p: h) f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 U2 s7 h2 M$ O) d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- I! M; y$ L* q" {% n# A9 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) h* z$ n2 w  H6 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ K9 ?. Y  r1 B  J+ ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; E& J2 s& |2 K( z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. x) F: E; ?2 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" L% P" ~3 u( u2 Q2 X; A0 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 e8 f1 E, \, Z; a8 `我请你剖开它
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  {% c& N% l! m$ X, }+ [* X. H+ t# f  ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# r' E$ k4 R# Y8 Q, }- w" g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>