【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, r: o- e) V! b+ g( l( @: e歌词我附在后面。
9 v9 E& `' H$ b7 n8 j9 e- nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ h# |' l; r- d: zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ \  x+ m" N; O, {% K2 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 q- L5 v4 w4 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 {! e7 q) T' V* t8 P) j4 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 Z: A( p  ~/ Z8 e; B( Y1 i; J) t1 GEvery other word you utter is love
+ a5 b* U7 H; P* HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- u' i% d7 M7 t* d/ d$ JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, {/ E0 T' ~- Z+ j1 I+ g- hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 F% f8 \  \4 b7 t1 ], @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' ?# t& Z/ |1 }- x+ p7 v2 f1 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 U3 t3 y2 x: G4 w; L: ^7 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; I$ B5 y5 Y4 g5 R+ y. O6 {+ W' k9 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# A4 N- G+ U+ C2 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- P9 G7 \2 G$ w0 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) f& O" [* V' H- I) E( r- Q8 k0 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 t6 |9 k. }5 \, b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ B8 a+ ]! @0 C1 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ u  p5 F3 I! L  m6 `  ^& r, w, X7 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 z& |0 L9 A+ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 R9 X( \- F! b2 d9 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. P) i. x1 @" S5 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 T/ _- Z2 D( @& E( i; h+ f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ [  e" Y3 O9 ]1 l6 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: h5 `5 n8 i# P, w0 k0 n1 `# f- r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  h- a: ]1 D8 r; `7 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 O( {8 e' R; k6 j0 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ r* B  g9 I: T" E" e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! N5 u6 j) D2 t9 U# g! S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; A; r# e, ^( C# A1 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. j% W! i5 A- s+ a- c9 r/ h; Z% X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>