【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" j& f5 V4 ]$ O1 k3 T$ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- U. ]5 z& S+ jThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 g0 _! B3 z8 WWith the moon kissing it every night
- b- o( S3 T0 h6 B3 ~7 t8 @/ `Seeing the sky content with its love
- N. j- p8 Q' y- u! lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 e# k' L6 W7 f1 |' v* QYou needn’t fear anything
! ]. q$ j" g( H5 L/ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ?0 \9 e' L1 ~/ Y# Z  h! WEvery other word you utter is love
) _4 c( M0 a7 U+ T" O& b" II really want to know just how much you love me
9 l0 f; j. W  j+ }5 Z: pI love you I love you with all my heart
, F  M: S7 |  \9 n  e' x! {: Y' k  jNothing can compare to my love
9 P. C$ y1 d6 P8 v8 O- I6 Q3 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 c. S1 ~* i% D9 O/ YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ K( L8 R2 T. b% M3 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! L1 c2 c( b2 u9 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ ]0 N% S. a5 ^/ |' U# Z. d7 P1 g4 c: N2 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" O6 _5 s2 i, V/ g( tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, I, Z1 m; `1 ~+ ?4 G; n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' ^9 S; N0 x0 A" q: u0 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- W7 T4 f* [: _) C  X  q( m1 L+ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! P1 e5 j, n4 ~0 `: z' u9 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ?  {- j) \; L- i: N2 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ h1 A/ q0 U. c! f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ J9 k" ?! }% C# h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 c5 M9 S' N; t4 R* V5 c* O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 r- B* L, R: p/ w" K! f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# H* O* U# @8 g- |1 F; k6 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ]8 a& t4 ^# b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& G! t( R" b9 }. h. H, y4 d# ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) T, M4 u6 C& G* s+ k% k+ E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. W4 }0 E5 Z+ K) ~* P: W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& u- a* Q0 Q6 p1 T/ X3 h& y8 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 X& U$ M$ w3 N! B' Z  O; E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. u8 S3 ~( p; z7 Z3 X& o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ {3 C6 g6 z8 E$ {$ u8 l- v1 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# F5 o& i: N6 ~2 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 W9 F8 Q! t. ~& C& w, ?, a$ \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' x( r) Q3 e/ _7 j" j1 @8 K) S) h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- H  n( a4 M# c; [$ c% f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* N$ b1 H& J: x1 ?# D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>