【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- \. M6 E7 y! z6 i7 w! S8 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; x8 Z; x! Q9 f$ jThe sky is happy down to its soul
& f# j* T2 S& f8 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 n9 H! }7 r8 z$ I3 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 v7 g: {! t7 N3 ?% OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ m% ^1 l9 i7 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ v. S7 i% l1 K9 l: ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ]2 J4 _* N* c  O- Y. b" T+ ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 T. N' a$ @9 L5 o- ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* c4 [; L2 F; ~* _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: m$ M! K- P( m0 K$ M) X0 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: e: [# P+ s2 V! ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# t* |2 a) J9 L& F* N8 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. d# `, M: V4 g1 ~! U! g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  W* T( o, R, g  U+ u2 i0 x$ F' G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 o3 K% K' z" F9 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# d; E" _9 W6 j6 f! T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. t9 S' n% O5 B2 X) p: V; G; d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& |8 N5 N% A/ i$ y) B6 y$ E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 z, U4 _- Z3 y' J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 c% M2 |! t0 Z3 y4 `  {7 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" r* E6 o6 n- O5 F* b' o6 d9 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" W8 I. w  j9 |& F, s2 d3 g3 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) l9 x0 r. w7 V6 a<P>你无需担心</P>
( ?% g% ]! m7 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( d) P( A# p' \* {1 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' x3 Z0 {7 ]- F# V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 o0 {( |/ t. f9 {0 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 G4 ?4 w+ R7 I& A2 k* f5 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& G! x, U% c' r6 B' Y! V  f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: u  A9 O1 P# Q( v/ W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ M* X( a. k) |& m' f* w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" G$ J: O) A# |- R* p" |7 t2 A+ n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 G' @# |5 D" F! r0 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- _! D% J% m: R0 y; q) k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* z6 g9 V9 l, \" ^7 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 Q  @; v8 ]* u! N& Z' o3 G, ?# x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" M5 z. i# I8 \& g  a1 |: \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' S5 e9 D6 w8 L! H) l5 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# s4 P/ ?$ [) G+ c2 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 x! T! I8 v, W8 b! W/ j/ D/ l9 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ J" J% g" T) Q我请你剖开它
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1 c3 J5 Z$ P' w; ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>