【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" a! Z& U6 ^# z歌词我附在后面。
5 Y! |$ |* j9 {/ O/ D' @+ x( U, sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ M! i: C% t& [. G3 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ W% c2 c4 L0 k8 x4 q6 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- U6 w5 g0 \  E( L. r) e8 S& XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ r) ~) O7 |$ D4 R" C* f. KThe sky is happy down to its soul
# u$ j  D6 B3 cWith the moon kissing it every night
  X8 D4 M# g. \: F0 PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( H5 T  @2 R& `# D6 BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ B+ G( F& O1 B0 i' o& xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ^9 Q; c& ~4 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& `2 C* T. S; B' S. cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 i$ A! i8 s3 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 h5 j5 \8 d: L+ {! a% ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% N, n0 ]; C+ T& GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; g% e  X9 |. E8 {! G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ Z  E) {- w' U3 Q! u& y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 S8 T8 {2 W. T5 ~6 P, C; W* c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 r9 N1 S+ S1 V/ E+ r, v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 t9 c* O& ]& v  p) ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! v' v: G/ ?/ I- v/ M7 ^% a9 [) {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 z7 a( i8 o2 m) J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 T- C/ I9 t9 v+ r% p& r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 `) ^( u& r2 x<P>你无需担心</P>
/ x2 A, H# Y( ?) O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 q- D0 k* Y7 q/ G3 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; J4 D5 \+ q* D1 _- T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 T# u3 x2 S/ p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! }! o8 Y0 }! ]( _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" w# R4 s: f7 |6 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, Y; j% _& E0 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; D5 ~: s6 v2 j: B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 K7 x3 |2 \3 V/ T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& L8 K; A% k: G6 a- d# O3 a: f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  c: _2 Z7 |) ~$ u% B1 _' @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 \" d, i+ p+ D) L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 p; a  K, n( @. t; }7 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 f2 ?" v1 H; `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! K5 F- @$ n) {$ X" g8 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ^+ g- n5 F2 Z+ `$ n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 N; Q" u" f+ i. O" C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( `' n  x) X7 I" a- F- I* a" T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ u6 I  A# }) \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 x2 j+ a0 k* n+ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 u% ]9 O5 K! c: u5 ^6 S9 F' ]) I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>