【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 g( U* U0 y: s0 |2 _3 hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% f1 E0 W; D; ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) o: [  s' s7 N2 \) P1 n& h. |With the moon kissing it every night
$ e/ k; D( Q$ D9 V+ QSeeing the sky content with its love
% m$ `. g% P  t# wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& d; O. m; @# b  T# bYou needn’t fear anything
, U( M/ N% Y) h1 F: w( {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 i1 `0 G1 F/ w; j  F4 S; PEvery other word you utter is love
! a0 F6 s8 @0 T3 X0 j1 l; b* cI really want to know just how much you love me
5 i' y6 i3 y, P; r2 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- w! ^" _9 w2 Q" h& }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 c2 s- ]7 ~/ W  p; P0 u0 M5 g- \With such a tongue as yours,
2 }8 I7 q& M9 j' j) s- \, g9 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; ?6 i: f' i4 L' CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" ^% o+ M6 K6 c# S- v' B* {6 M, N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 A3 L5 ~' k: V) d/ i  t' g# v% j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ a: o  M, h5 K2 l" f" J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# g8 V8 i3 H* k' R/ f& E+ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ I+ F/ w  l* F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; ^. y3 T, p/ ]- ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- W3 {) S* `5 `+ k$ E* G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' J# B/ |0 H- p6 f) ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ Q3 w  G9 L; F8 K6 x9 I2 V! O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" }; j5 w4 ?) o) Z, A0 q. a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) }8 B% E9 j$ `; V, g- y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' y  B+ A: V: b" m% }! n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 S& [" W5 F" }, E6 T, {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ d. K1 W$ z, ^+ o! i7 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! q+ R! v8 n& l' M& d# @, s+ M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: b5 `6 E/ Y1 R1 ^% H- t& U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  G' d3 z5 x( @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* o0 g0 O- v$ a' ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 M+ z! t& H  [- }+ M7 X% X7 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; s5 \( n' j0 ^, D% j% x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( c, c% \' v9 V1 W2 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* H6 |& ?: [* q; R! }) g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# {, B  N2 _1 G5 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Y" w/ Z  G6 {! C: z5 `4 ?; c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 {* K; ?2 O$ w% ]7 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) j3 A- _4 }; w4 E7 f5 I& Z9 R9 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 k% N0 `* ^8 ~0 {/ G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 g+ J6 |' q. L- z3 e: X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>