【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 d% ^6 m& |' V7 V: I8 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 P7 r: y$ n/ q. t) ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' d* m/ h2 j3 ?7 `" @; |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% Q: Y& G7 x/ B; l. f# d( T# b7 N# bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 r. W; I2 P  I, X3 HI love you I love you with all my heart
( x7 \+ _6 m- |9 `Nothing can compare to my love
% O4 c% r- B- O6 M1 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& x' o9 \& Y- j) T6 v( rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 {. l( K& q2 Y, D# v) _2 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* C2 W8 ^- v' ]0 P1 W- O% a) g. {$ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 x' J7 u9 T- J8 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# O/ `6 L9 B, ~( ^; ^. V' eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* C+ o' r& B( a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 u* ~1 a7 `" K0 V, ^, T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 R" d) j3 o7 u7 m; L; ^, d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 k3 h' g/ ^7 h$ b$ s" n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# |. s, J' [3 }& K; u7 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 N2 n$ ^4 d* N8 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( ?; w$ A8 m4 i8 a1 q2 p* d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- F& n5 A  P8 |- ~$ ~/ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: t1 T3 O* g5 s6 l: o* Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 X" P# |( }# v' e8 q" ^' N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. ?  `% X& D, d; a( F% X; a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# f: [- E2 |8 G' F4 r0 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Y" h1 R% t) V# |+ _$ c6 `- Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) `. `1 v# G. g3 l, z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* G; T* c3 S. P: V& ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 n. z6 V$ S: \% \6 Z2 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 [# b! i" ~! s, m& J) I" `# I5 t* F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& l: F, b' y. c; l7 Z$ y2 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 T& j8 j- s+ R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 \6 Z, @$ G. }  U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 F3 B+ D/ \3 A4 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 u( c( H+ M- [" c' K7 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 A1 r5 X7 [. G+ g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- ^1 m4 _, V# J) m3 y; y: @我请你剖开它

# W* I0 k6 X$ U5 G$ s4 I2 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" j1 ~9 U0 r4 M- {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>