【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! h2 a# X. ]' f- i: v& BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" f) S( f4 x' c; OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: ]& Y! X  ~0 v5 C, x6 S7 X6 w0 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 L( `! w' u6 A4 h6 I; uWith the moon kissing it every night
. s3 x( b3 v2 I& r. R9 \! dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 o3 z5 T, }  x, b$ A1 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 J/ V2 m9 L( ?3 n& y+ W4 VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 I6 d0 C6 f6 I- p7 V2 u9 |I love you I love you with all my heart
0 N# O+ x  ]9 O  p: w, T% |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. K& U- z. {4 i- ~7 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" N& J, ~. P/ ^$ n; c0 i8 M* JI regret not dying
0 v; P% q) N3 {. HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' X, v2 U" r: r5 T0 d' ]9 ~5 }9 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ _: n5 j+ o& o" n5 g2 w: BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& w, g) O' W, WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ H1 ^9 _: c( [& D6 }, Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 w1 I2 J8 B/ z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 O: d/ }1 O& X2 l7 n/ _$ w/ ?, R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! U* ?! J/ e# D! x( x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: f0 k$ [# }7 e% I8 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: r0 c, r  G& V8 d# o' A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  M- `, Q6 S7 I- `# U5 O& z9 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ I. F0 ~7 A/ i5 Y: g5 N2 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% G, a' r( {1 ?3 f7 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. f* \2 c, I) z) [2 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: F( Q" Y+ }8 ~. {  K) H# w6 i% y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# v; E7 l% p  F& K$ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# s5 {& o# q; K8 q& C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 `# s/ ]: F+ V4 y7 p8 ^. I! C+ B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 W/ `8 J: y2 J0 m2 U7 j. O4 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ?# `# w; H- M( s6 g: C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- Q" j; d# o# i" {- A) a9 v' K9 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 U8 I' Q8 `6 V: @: h( t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 p1 q0 [0 |- @, u) f4 h5 m9 g/ T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% G% ?! S# P" Z$ U$ c3 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* o) q$ u3 m/ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# B+ A, r& M2 `$ d8 L. m- z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 o9 }; S: H' R  j' M; ?4 ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>