【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 n" C0 w) S4 v# ~* _歌词我附在后面。
7 [+ @' o3 g1 u: e' J8 Z$ v! PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 O1 v; i# k  `2 Q1 Z. F+ [4 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ^: u/ W. w8 D! ~% V$ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% V- o5 Y# n; g6 [4 m9 U+ JThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 y# [" w/ R- a5 [1 T/ n9 {( nWith the moon kissing it every night
3 _9 w: H/ i  j/ y! {3 e+ f- ZSeeing the sky content with its love
# U9 U/ p5 K; y, Z: K# j' S% _. ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 k, I% x: t! y0 {$ E% d5 ~+ DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* G) N3 a# V, [0 z* E4 H( CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; o9 V8 d$ E1 c2 [: g) ?4 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 f( e4 o% ?. {2 U) i: z0 k! D  ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- g% w9 j- g/ L; C* t% ~1 ~& CI’m still filled with fear
- C7 Z6 w& M" w; w, Q2 F; ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 ?5 O3 }6 J; W* }! i# vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 }! a0 N( a) m* @: u. d) ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# n3 L8 M# O. s9 _* `) DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; U# p/ g4 e, B6 o. g1 v3 _# |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% _7 n# B% b4 ^: z1 I9 Q& f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 T8 K2 U+ P/ _, b4 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! j) k5 l0 {* b, `: g4 _5 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 J8 `  H! \+ H$ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 ~# ~0 Z  A' h- Q8 b+ x; j# \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% d$ T% E9 z& Z$ T. D7 Z4 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 U7 T) M5 Y( v+ h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! H! S- ^3 G8 ]# ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* u4 i; `$ S: _) X& Q& v1 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 P# q. i7 [+ c* K7 R<P>你无需担心</P>
$ F, j, Q/ a. v1 g2 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 S5 Z4 W% _* v. u3 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 @% ?. ^- x" D" V  V  b6 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" f. a4 }/ E8 n! H3 _9 Q0 ~! a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 l$ F9 q7 `3 Z7 {/ x1 l1 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# t; \# Z0 ]3 U+ B$ _; P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 X  a) A' P& |" q/ }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) k$ U7 j! P( y: X3 J# ~+ u) v# Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 z) c' L+ g) [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" B$ F4 n3 X4 |0 ]( D" |  h; w( ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 V" P0 [, h; C+ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! y+ W8 y! L* p) Y, A& ?" {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 B$ K# i" t* L0 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 I. ]9 N! l. F0 i- q/ e! E$ I3 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& \$ \+ O+ W7 h; }6 F6 {: V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; c7 I& w) Y7 O9 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: d0 O' Q! u6 W) g9 P% `6 ^我请你剖开它
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8 G9 [. ^- N) i* I7 A2 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>