【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* @4 C) ]" H9 a2 u5 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; e& U+ M9 P1 {; l  n/ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 F* R: }( o3 k; y6 Y# B0 E; I# w( M, ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; x7 B, w) k4 t8 b; JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) A; r7 ]0 j1 X6 \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% Z! W& u, q" LNothing can compare to my love
- R7 p7 ~& E% s' t. ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ l5 V+ q8 x, ^+ j) \I want so much to see inside your heart
) a% u/ R  x2 \- U- B: i+ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% |- s3 r+ T* ?; Q2 k: [2 p: z: hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 D, @0 k* |; l: iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 K7 c$ S+ u! _& e; L9 z! @  f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" d& k. T! T, t5 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% u" f' d, o+ n# B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ E7 j% M6 ^, `6 M( i. C1 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# J1 _/ X! {, r4 a7 [' p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  I* p0 s; @" S+ B9 g4 X% M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 A) B3 e& {' m7 Q" }* K0 T2 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, j5 t8 l3 Q( X2 [! b5 E2 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) B$ S, u3 Z* x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- x. Z8 R* z8 c, t7 s3 B2 J0 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! {/ U+ f/ j& ?; q; o, ?# b# V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( l; @& I0 }+ G' `( r6 o' \& I1 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) q! e4 J7 w' N2 T% J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% A. y  a; }4 ?: ]) v% N, {3 ]) ~, J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ~9 x# ^8 E$ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) G3 F( C7 |1 O; B% @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 X  W& n7 W- n' S# c$ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; V5 Z+ b1 S0 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 W# @2 q3 e% a% [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 t* O  `/ _2 G, l- |7 P) l) `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 D' u6 P6 l& O) E( E* E3 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  z2 b1 v' i8 _$ P3 U! ^3 d4 ^6 F* q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& g3 u; `9 i  W# d/ F. E' G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ y% i" Y, e9 L/ F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% A, h; F2 w+ }$ \+ q% {! F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ N0 F' w. }! e4 x  g7 h' C4 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 v# {4 L+ e9 D% j4 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M7 ?7 ~$ p. p0 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>