【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 h% F& b( N; G' Q+ W1 C6 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 O$ E7 }, b2 q4 {! o$ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) P4 N( w* Y7 @Seeing the sky content with its love
6 H3 y4 K2 z$ L7 {0 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- h, K( X- X* W* UYou needn’t fear anything
+ {" P3 h$ }* I1 A3 @" jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. W) L  _' |  G% _* @0 ZNothing can compare to my love
! r- e" g: g$ f6 c8 I& Q8 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 `/ i: q8 q! M8 _) nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: {( b1 j1 q/ }4 P# `: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& B/ y: E/ c, O2 Z- u$ \$ DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. c3 p) G- [& S+ c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ k; i, i+ ?  L+ U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 v5 c* Q6 u! X- H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( W  U1 R. d3 e7 x* t; E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. h6 V8 N# @, j9 W3 y1 E4 g7 ~; j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" U3 a7 D7 u2 D8 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( x! l3 K  e: r1 P9 W6 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 m, i/ U* K  ]" p: G0 z/ @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: w; [- o8 [- v2 w3 T+ F1 v( o  ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 J; ^" l, h/ J+ ?, z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: g4 g. a6 l8 }4 p3 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ W8 E2 C9 X% M4 E) ]4 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% C' n- I" x' L1 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* J8 g$ K" P; u! ?$ R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: M6 I. c+ ?8 Y( \6 _6 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) G% a2 a4 V6 c5 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 J$ m, H1 a+ L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 {# C) z  S+ \; P! u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ m- w+ T# u4 R! Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! N. _+ {9 _3 T! U& W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* k( ]) V& D9 |  W# K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; t% j7 Q  T! p3 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ Z+ ?( Y6 S3 G4 e# B- e0 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; A9 g3 y- Z9 [) X# ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. v1 C5 T, ~# A6 f4 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: l- O2 e1 U; _3 v4 T: \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>