【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 g, D4 l1 a5 [! k8 w) [- L+ |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) @$ {  s9 y" v4 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Y' J! E) M- T. @- s+ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
# g4 H) a5 O) ?* ~0 P1 Z) l4 DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& W- _! D* ?. M2 w* IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, X# w1 w7 f, \4 Q9 P1 {7 M+ C2 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 @3 P+ z" H0 X. @9 OEvery other word you utter is love
: n* S  @3 R9 T4 I* I9 JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- W' ^% S9 C) L/ _& t* vNothing can compare to my love
- q$ d7 R! _: U# @4 h; w% @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 K: e. I$ Z% E! W6 [. mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: s6 P# A# b! X- V  N% SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' `0 ?% X! z% {* LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& V/ G7 K7 o; H6 ]% H& h& TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* t, }5 N7 V+ M0 L; W, fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# U6 v% P3 d& T( b# Z6 E# j" VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ ~7 o3 B0 g1 S8 ]# i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, B' b$ Y3 M, Z/ q  |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* k0 A, J3 ~3 |1 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" ?7 l# v3 Z' r. m/ H6 O: ?$ s" P2 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! \. [; W* i2 ^; z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) ^$ T3 S, H! j* z7 ?0 E3 O5 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 D" f" z( M3 j+ v" v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Z/ u. m0 d: _6 F2 q1 }2 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 [; @( Z9 W6 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; e3 x% T5 N( ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 B/ ~" |1 S" A2 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) n. v# N) R5 G' D" _# r0 c. b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( M! y& q, t% B3 J% e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) d0 I+ K* `8 u# j4 p; K: E6 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& R2 x% T0 _6 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- l. F/ y( _4 G& o8 [9 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% B- {3 [/ w' @$ {3 X! x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 O" y% ~, L3 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; K6 E, o+ a' I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 g' r5 o- d" f, \! [4 T' e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' j( E3 Q3 d3 E2 u$ j( S" F! G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 t. C. X' w. @" f2 u/ x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! P% o7 Z* I; H4 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# k% ?" d% k$ c4 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& X) I6 U- I" K/ l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 ]& f$ \. d2 |. A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 J( Z+ I5 n" e) |# E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; T& [9 m, {6 P" }2 n( c; ~9 d) A  c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  L& ?' ~5 W8 D) F! G, v8 g; _& d- W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& P7 Y. T" e+ }, M  M, K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, R$ i, A0 k( h* z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. k0 L) Y, g$ i4 l) ]" h; z. ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 q7 B; U4 Z5 \. L4 E" m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 m) o9 {) O* z: a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>