【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
) j; M0 [/ u6 g& @2 L  Z
, C# n3 z. M* |/ t# E9 J2 m# a; F2 d<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

+ M9 G: ]3 F# p
: [: k+ {  O$ Y7 t# F+ @- A# y) ~8 D* r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% n: F$ m: F' s9 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" B$ K7 ~( X' pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* Q1 J2 Z# ^" d- LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& Z1 W* q6 f9 y* ^4 Q! wThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 U4 |9 ?6 s2 @7 P* HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 o; w( _1 S5 J: B3 Q# h9 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 d1 Q% z& @! L- P: \Every other word you utter is love
) m5 d/ u2 f2 rI really want to know just how much you love me
2 y$ i  B+ K! H1 nI love you I love you with all my heart
# g* S3 A5 @8 z  K  f: YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ }' M6 j) X+ b8 G3 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% V2 a$ T% o2 x% ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ^; r) }, U) U( y7 xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" g# v: q& m* Z# wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 z  z! R% }6 J  |2 Y! J; a+ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* p. ]0 O, e9 u* g7 T( Y
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* \$ J7 N( }% d0 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! y5 E. C/ ?6 z% V7 l& ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# B0 ?* Y* a' V! B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! }6 P9 Z# h. y: E; s) x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: U6 U3 X2 g, q. s" g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; c" q" c" F0 _: m# e. z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 o! c/ @# r. o! D/ R; N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: p6 U0 D' u" r# K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' w9 Q* O1 i7 S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! Y( a# [" ~+ K) M* L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% b7 u7 V8 U2 r& t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% v3 q- N' G2 H& [6 a8 H$ Q% n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) n! i! h4 I6 g3 a3 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( h0 @& n# ~/ Q$ G0 p4 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 q, C( a6 v# k7 A6 {: A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 t1 D) ~. r. L' Y; Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% w0 B5 k) t& b7 P9 i) Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ T+ _& _" N- F: n& `  s; A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, m+ O  X4 p3 v4 t. T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 ?4 V9 X6 m7 a0 R& _& x+ Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ ?2 o) |6 _4 e) k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: F* d# v4 C; F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: R/ [. i& X8 {# m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 j: U% x7 b0 s5 ^# {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ Q4 f4 v5 B9 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 z, k$ h) c6 p0 b- L2 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) h, W6 i! z9 o7 \& V3 K1 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ d7 Y( g2 ^* S- z0 C! m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ f0 W. e; {: L: A* ~7 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
4 O. ~7 V" }5 p7 S5 L
' X$ F4 K. y& c) N+ W* }- Y4 T我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>