【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# t6 j* q) t( Z. f$ h% J) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' E4 W- _6 D  N8 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 r$ z1 G0 `, P% ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; p" u' K( m2 r5 \, JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& Q/ K4 D. f( d, eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, i% O( [" c" P" r7 A1 s8 j: a5 \! @6 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, d1 d. K, W2 w2 u+ w- w7 x9 pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 ]% X0 A3 s* z3 W) t8 \) RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: |# N0 m( B. B! S8 o: `I’m still filled with fear
0 _' p( {  f/ WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 W) y) j3 a- H: @* s% kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 B+ }1 ?% d7 _1 F  f/ W2 Z  i! wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 K2 m- e) v) {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ^- f2 Z1 ~# v) `* }, I+ I: }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 U5 E' N# J6 D5 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ g# U, p* ]! r. O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 X7 T# v3 ]4 p9 n- z9 w: w, F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 p: _9 i2 |' u% L0 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* A& g0 p7 A2 e; j3 F" F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 O6 v2 \% m. ~/ I- Z/ D: H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; U& {* W- x8 L4 h% K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ U+ W( g7 q4 |3 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- g: a6 W4 z% I( X( Q$ Y4 |5 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: T) {2 O. c3 l" A- m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ V4 m7 {3 _, E: Y9 T8 V( ]. a( ~  ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 B& h$ ]( [/ F9 {, x. E$ ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( y" J0 N" ~* E- w6 Y7 X! T' Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ n" h/ J% F) D7 x3 w. @3 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( I1 F2 }# c6 R5 V5 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 W/ c) X2 O! t, R5 L- e$ r: q. {7 `8 n0 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 ~7 T: X$ Q1 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 u  `3 d6 E: b7 I3 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 M3 R9 h+ p: p6 ]7 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" t1 Z5 U( z- X% @$ [- }7 d& r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 G9 e1 Q: W2 v0 y/ R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 S6 m0 [/ ?$ j3 f# Z; p7 n& [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 T* _$ s" A# ]) I! v5 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: X1 M" p% F1 `. M9 @4 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* n4 `; k6 ]6 u( h- ~7 q' O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 q0 y7 I6 N) S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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; n, I% T# U1 h5 ~3 g* D( X8 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>