【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, G- p  Y4 x0 [( JThe sky is happy down to its soul
- D* s/ q. m& ?; ~/ u; W7 {0 @With the moon kissing it every night
6 @/ v/ M9 h) jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' {5 S  w- V$ c. A- R& Z% w/ GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ j0 J0 q+ x& h; a. S* L: nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ z( ~2 U) {/ X1 ]7 R- A1 n0 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% p* |- b% @- f8 c: g/ y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ A3 t; Z# t# a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. h3 @) ?9 R" G6 n$ s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 f9 n* k- d% |) ]- S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 f( o6 p9 Y9 X4 E3 ^: U+ |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ |$ P& @7 P. R, o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 f) j7 h; c. b5 ]! ?6 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: z1 M; \& \- {0 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 \1 \2 [0 d$ D& A$ o. ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; r: F0 a, L; _3 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' m. I, N; a! N" ~# F) ]: U8 e8 N, v/ K<P>你无需担心</P>
+ p1 ^2 `3 h& b( r3 ]9 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 o( o' }8 s- _9 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 r+ b' f0 u+ L2 S7 E# i3 Z/ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 |5 c9 M1 _  ~. _4 n$ F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! `& N" J4 [7 q: L% T0 n$ Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# h8 x' o9 f# G7 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ q2 N, U0 S4 d' d% T; o. Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) {; ^; }  q1 N6 m7 z# X( r) m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 Y7 I) J6 I! i: o& R6 Z3 V' s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 P1 w0 o7 |- D3 M0 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& K  Z% u, z: J2 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ H) C% Y" {1 Y+ c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  @- K1 U, x2 u' N- O& d, O7 G* b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ m! ]5 M! Y- c) |0 g* ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
! v+ `8 v, ~$ w) {* F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" g( ^+ l2 ^  E% R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 j  e. n  z. K  E5 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ~) R8 s9 X5 {" o- M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& e! [$ H1 [$ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, {/ q/ J  x, b* c8 [5 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" i: c+ @- @" q. e/ E5 Z3 |' O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>