【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ x0 n4 x  ?: |8 ]8 w+ _4 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: Q* v' r/ u; D3 H  U" SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ x0 |5 L- _5 Z, y# v: uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 F% v+ q8 y- M- A6 W5 K5 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 u; e: V: O& S; t+ q3 @The sky is happy down to its soul
- y5 O) Q0 \1 \7 t: }, jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- G$ ]7 U9 t4 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 i  d8 N8 s' e, \7 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ r0 E5 h- }" }' V! @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  c/ }% n! D; J5 pI love you I love you with all my heart
  d. N+ {  I  DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 _* p9 j$ y( \8 mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' g8 I& P+ Z  W1 L' EI’m still filled with fear
. D) D# a2 k! XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 b/ ]4 S4 P4 Q& {- `1 z: t2 g7 N1 ?With such a tongue as yours,
1 ~6 n6 {3 c# R6 Y/ i" @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# @5 w. n! M. P: b, PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ J. y$ w) ?" F, q  b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. j" Z( O) l5 H; J" i/ f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Y; e* T( y7 N8 ]) z1 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ c2 G2 S, q& a  }, F9 D, l# `! E; w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ H8 X- H* J7 x2 v  ]' p# V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! w& Z5 P; G  \3 Q' ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  J; O- E5 x8 l6 S5 R/ f* L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 }8 w0 _0 Y/ @* p' N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& [" t3 i2 }6 s2 p( [8 T, K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 D5 [" H+ b* u2 v3 }* O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" V  {; p4 K  c- P" }. p' R" C2 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 w" s& [4 |# |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) I# M0 b" e5 z+ f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( D, Z) _* u. F" T4 u: e) n* V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 P$ n- ^/ N# O0 u' X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 j4 u1 @( N" c5 g1 c6 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- ?" |" T  @5 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& D0 s6 v/ L3 u1 x8 r4 Q, }. C! g) a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 K7 ^( n) N# c  ^: t0 C; v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 u3 L4 d" Z  L% E/ R2 ]3 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' q5 m3 p3 M8 p( K! R$ u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 [4 R8 A( f1 L: A4 b9 Y3 K! f& o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 E/ L, D  Z7 @6 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% q" Y; S8 U) l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( {' D; P* f& Q  {' z% ]6 ], E7 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 J( F# D2 f' a4 ^! `$ L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. I) v4 b& k+ ^9 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' b+ A( p& C' Q% }5 q" A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 z$ Q! _  }9 z& N6 s% W0 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# T" ~: @8 T# V5 z( y<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ q! [6 q" q" P* g; Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) J1 r: W7 T1 u7 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 V2 d% s1 a5 `  e1 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ B$ G* E+ p9 t* i7 _& m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 S# _% x9 P) P, g, t% R  |! a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 Y+ Q+ d5 Y& K4 [: I2 M1 b- \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 a9 u7 _4 u, N* S2 G. [9 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( J0 U: X, n" P- A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, Q* l) R: P5 P; c. |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>