【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! o% L& T" W9 K; H9 y# ^% P歌词我附在后面。
- V, S" V1 c: P+ O1 {1 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! u# {2 S6 p( E; h2 N9 n7 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- G0 A+ Q+ w$ K' [: ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' z: U3 y) `0 l4 P' i# SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' L) `- d) g% @! BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 z) S6 f  `* c; q+ r- [2 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! W, u, G, i6 R/ o& x, ZYou needn’t fear anything
' p- Z* ?, z0 L9 w# u' H! \* QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 u* C5 t) d- `. {" B" Q3 REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- W- x: Y: V9 Z/ h! m! |) P+ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 h2 f' ^; a6 B) a6 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ k5 z* z- _2 `" g  k) H$ T7 k; XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ q6 H1 r/ h1 ?6 G/ w' oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) c# P5 t- B1 Y$ z7 h0 y+ ~5 u0 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 L5 X3 z: w! JWith such a tongue as yours,
" [- y" W/ h: H, {* ~; V$ Y# TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' s. c! q* r3 m7 p- l/ ~/ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% r( z: y( X6 L3 g  h2 U: R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 K; [5 c5 n; w9 }# P3 [* d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 i. w  d! h& ]' ?8 G' v4 h: i2 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- p/ V" `+ }, o0 @$ N' n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 g' u4 w  n& e# t6 o& M* \8 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( X* a* B' c, W# m$ p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ C, t1 S, B0 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ A$ I0 ~* ^1 A: \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" c& _# K8 y$ E# `2 y, {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* q! b5 T8 g# ~2 b1 L) [9 x$ d% l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" S7 ~( h" X9 ~! M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 H3 ^& l, a0 F- T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# o% y" s0 V; _) e! q" D9 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ Y8 i, s# y6 J( Q! v8 ?+ |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 @7 n5 C8 U2 H' u: C, O6 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 M7 Z8 |5 g$ [+ Q3 e0 d% J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 T4 }% G$ k& ]! u2 P  N; O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ Y) [" c+ ?8 B6 |/ o; |9 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 [; l3 p' k9 p. C5 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& A4 U- D1 E! q3 |" k; _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  z! c1 V  A$ k8 F( c) T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- v' g: b/ W2 v5 D6 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 Y1 q3 H* \  z3 f+ _4 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: }8 M8 ~0 K3 a7 H5 E0 ~$ F; h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( i) Z; y: \  b# c% u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% G- P, |  [& r( |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- J# I  q$ s$ {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. r! B+ e! e8 M, c7 R, z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ j. N* Y& e$ g( C9 }; \: c, t# @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>