【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ S( S7 q, D1 f" r  O6 l9 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ u# G) H8 u5 u" Q2 h: JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) a7 w/ {3 {7 w& s$ f+ J* [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' e, i2 S1 f; |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 {4 \* h* c+ P% h; uWith the moon kissing it every night
6 q" f! `! A+ t; I4 p" MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( v% K! g3 e% `4 ?3 t: j7 W1 W1 WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) V; H) k" R6 B8 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% l% G. o* v' y7 a  Z9 k2 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# \3 p# K" n! MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 i+ D" O) [1 O. |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 m- }8 l: }. x, @' H4 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 t' B* e8 [& w, f( \; s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 F( q2 u# a% Z* X4 g2 o# m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% C/ q+ r. X) h+ _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: x9 i  o( [' M: q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 `/ G2 Y8 X: z0 m3 E" _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ a) Q- ~& e% q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 v& u; R4 j9 y8 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
+ {+ i" M1 U9 l5 m6 d% }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  u2 g! @& P3 ~$ T  ^4 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! H. C. ^# ~. m! i: A. M2 M1 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 y5 c9 R# G4 W: ^1 o& s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- j; J8 F9 _' {: e9 G! O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( U2 M& c% R( [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* j* ]' x6 m+ T) h  o7 O* j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" _0 C- Y+ n! [) s% C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  s/ i; G* k5 M) e+ H- ^8 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 l$ G( z, k4 i1 Y4 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 i6 t: e2 o" |1 C# `4 n' h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! u: A, H- S7 b1 N% N! j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 [/ h/ e8 k( M2 H; z2 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 R' `. D' ^, X- u5 p  D4 r  K/ x; a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' |, S0 R" e- m( o- Z! n7 ~3 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! {+ F* h, j* m  X我请你剖开它

6 z0 \# ~0 ^7 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( p+ e# t+ Y( Q( v. v! K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>