【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 x8 b8 j+ k+ r  k4 c  P歌词我附在后面。
3 u/ P9 _# I' e2 z& \# C8 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 Z( s/ P/ T3 Y% h. T8 j. d$ Q1 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* N+ A) R! n+ L9 V. NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% E7 U1 ~( i8 M1 l7 J) }3 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 H" h# d, c1 F" V. CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 R% q. I4 J3 B1 K3 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% y8 J# ^2 w( L2 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 @# o6 h  ~! ?5 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: G$ m4 `8 E+ b& E$ q6 ]* JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& Q% `3 _* z. g) F% SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 N1 k) B" [( Z1 f, v3 l; iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 i. @$ a# }% j8 z0 g$ S/ SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 s# j9 e8 E& M, x7 g/ M' J" K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 P& b* E: W8 w& ^: ^; Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 X' z3 e( L% M5 F& K. a) y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' t2 ~5 d3 V% P/ ?8 W! r5 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  R, V' h: p& G9 \" I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% }) v8 l* i. t& Y: e" n$ B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ e' M: z" W, O7 ]3 A' t" V  A# z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 \  G0 I8 u* R5 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  |+ B  i, k  G' @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: G, ]+ }/ C- ]& y  {9 `. r+ i9 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 E, f7 y6 M8 h& J* k; o  b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ O. h- V# o' h, f$ k# z8 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 G- e1 P& h  x4 \3 }) M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( W5 d3 j2 |4 L  }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 X- F! C$ J: ?" E' W& V$ u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  l- D5 |2 p* a. f- A& t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 ^9 [3 z9 E- K5 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! u2 m0 ~. K$ H9 T4 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ~2 [; Z5 t* Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, b- y# p4 @0 b  z4 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ x6 Y; @, h* m  Z" Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 J+ l$ D2 o$ l- j; s% ]6 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; a5 O$ I. K. z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 e1 e# D. G0 U0 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 j5 K/ o4 \5 `, o) N! f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  d( H( g- l% V& J& X. c# b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* l$ S" q; v+ g& a& p$ h8 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>