【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. s: K- [0 n( F( ]歌词我附在后面。
: h% I; M! y. P4 J2 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  s7 J* G! [8 \; ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
& b4 P" |1 v8 C% O. j& ?; iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; b7 p: T+ E. b/ N$ pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( @& Z9 L3 S: r, J( F  b; bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* Y5 n# c2 H2 K4 K& v& i! g  J- Z7 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. b$ a4 c* V5 @6 j' ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 i: G% X% a+ a9 p2 fI love you I love you with all my heart
9 k; D, ?9 y! |$ G8 ^0 \Nothing can compare to my love
7 r0 o% E4 n0 _' F+ ~6 \0 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) |7 l& I  _8 A' U: f5 C- i# e1 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 B* h& e2 I4 e5 e$ RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& n# z2 [0 Y5 t% u" Y( j- `* k/ X6 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! _. z5 c% I' {" K! \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 z5 p0 v2 y$ e- J8 L( o" J; ?/ i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; d9 a, _# s: F) O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ v0 E. \$ w( ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 b2 \* T* H9 `* Z- F' g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; v3 H/ @- x$ J# m) T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 J) L! V7 N/ G) W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ^! b5 Y- {4 H. A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 @0 l  G" F3 S4 I/ p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* M$ n6 ~8 ]) e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 j2 X( \' |7 p: s% {& X2 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. `0 F# f  e& R" O9 L7 S. v* U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ e6 i( F( v! T: Y2 x: Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' C. A! Z1 F0 E* \4 P8 o. M+ v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 J7 t1 r( v9 N3 H% f  g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 D# f/ s0 `# @7 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, X0 U4 q4 M! o9 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( V1 ~% G, D6 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ a' }/ i; m9 Q, W6 w" i. F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' a/ Y8 B# f1 K& n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' i6 s+ P1 Y. F  k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ s% N  G/ A/ ^- F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 l7 ~4 P" ^+ l- h5 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) _2 ^0 u" {! r+ D, w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% f- v7 y2 L0 W1 C9 x9 |0 O% T0 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ w  u' l" [/ C  S) I6 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ]4 g; p3 ?/ Z2 ?% j) q! b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# j5 N5 z7 g% M% I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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