【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) x5 L  u" u, SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 Z7 K: i4 p7 g  v- f9 |- Z8 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' ^- Z7 p' h  t) T: O. SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: V5 O) a( z% _' a9 v4 w! y  aI love you I love you with all my heart
5 _' h. S, O9 _" z7 ]Nothing can compare to my love
6 X$ X9 {, t" ~# W7 O1 O+ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  P' W( V' O8 J: NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% ~. ^- o6 {0 Q$ N& f8 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% v6 d5 b; W, `3 s& EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) o/ k6 D* `+ P3 h2 X5 g! K; ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ ^# {% T- _1 ~5 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- _/ c' K# {. S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! z7 J! N. j7 c9 t4 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: c8 k) N7 |# \6 q, f0 d/ f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 J6 J+ k$ G! D9 ]! J& ]( z7 _; d8 R" x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ r* b- u% ?# l2 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ {. O& \1 |" G, t3 p# ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 Z0 E0 [/ |; q" V  c. }* i  w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: V& o8 S/ O- Q+ m. ?, e& ]) P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! S% f! [: n9 R, J) j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 ?. N. F" F/ C- W7 D& d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 L+ ~6 U% R  m) e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 X3 X- b6 J9 R' w1 X5 _- U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" N' r4 d% n: z" ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; F6 _4 G0 }7 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 J. W% \7 i& N1 q; |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 _& `+ B0 r" F9 l( D5 U6 P$ E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# ^+ ^$ J8 l: C, \" {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 G; ~2 t% ?3 }3 L9 ^" b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& @. J; U3 Z3 o/ k7 d; B; _8 H; y: }3 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ N$ v' y8 }6 p. h- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 H8 N; q6 e1 v' u$ {<P>I regret not dying</P>
- s5 A, W/ }9 q, T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' Z" I2 l$ L- A+ E2 i9 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& Q* B. V7 P* y# c+ C- P- i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  D- `1 f* C  R' z7 J3 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( Z$ a5 G2 x; e' x0 U. x( P! _' T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 v  b7 O! F) l4 i: J/ x) u1 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 {6 e1 l7 C1 {2 ^$ { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ r" L8 g0 N5 G' G7 `/ b/ D0 e+ v+ [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>