【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# W3 v8 s+ m; m0 }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. m) j+ o+ }# Q# A" vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, M' ~. z' q9 K: u; h, }7 G0 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ i: q8 U; {) e9 Y/ J/ NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ F9 k5 k/ N: g$ F5 C: TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 Q' a. G( ?& e# PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, G, A8 _( z+ |/ v" J9 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 r& ?, {5 h2 C+ z. w1 _' {3 ~. {- ?' s' ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 H1 y" {! B+ x3 q$ b( K3 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ G+ n# O/ N  y  z7 {) FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; W, M+ k  m, L9 B/ u, rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 c, E9 ?/ z0 ^6 {: d  o- X1 OWith such a tongue as yours,
* }6 V% J* z  n& e) d' n: {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 @  ]% ^- P4 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! J# i, W! I5 l5 w: z$ x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 g1 r( Q6 R0 j4 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: k; Z- {; n: G5 }5 E0 o, D, v/ B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  ~3 g5 a/ s8 ?/ C  O. K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& M% o, ~2 Y9 Z4 \+ `1 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 I4 N+ {4 {$ L1 z+ `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 {( V1 m. `% c! i8 v! O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( d0 G6 y4 P) G  l3 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; _& c+ d. r+ Z* {" L2 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) C8 }" Z* `0 U6 T  R  r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; d: b& x# d& H  C3 ?9 |3 ~0 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 I* |( A, ~! d+ Y  c. r/ P( C; P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( w, ]. ?$ f, z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 U8 Y( w6 C# ?5 J) ~/ M  x0 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" o' K2 C9 Q# V! e: ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% p) L1 W/ [3 n9 q3 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ G/ w! _1 K" ~. D9 ?- T. ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 N& H# j2 J% m: e" U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& z' i" P7 l* ]8 J. [<P>I regret not dying</P>
; B1 m5 q$ e$ \$ P1 V; I$ y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. z! x& _/ }8 U- c4 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ H9 c+ m- Z9 i: T% D6 _/ J; n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 ~& ~( t+ Q$ S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, n+ S. q4 G; G' @3 i. b  T$ `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  L  [- c" d; h" A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 o* [& J" G" I. ~, Q  _7 ?我请你剖开它

1 w: ]+ G9 {8 t* G" r) h6 u- y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>