【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 T  z8 J* E' `- d! wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 r+ b6 g% G3 p) d* j6 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 K1 k: ?6 ~* R4 Q. ?9 P- d) MWith the moon kissing it every night
- _' J9 Y; y9 ^: `Seeing the sky content with its love
( z3 F2 I' G7 g# ]" I# x: x* \( T$ _+ YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 d* `. Y7 Q6 y+ X& iNothing can compare to my love
7 z+ ?/ L! n7 M8 H+ N  VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 N- I# h+ p, l+ j* OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ J9 H& k! ?) `" m) R3 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" L# n  \1 o7 j0 u9 }7 ~% yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ [: h' u% l' H8 O; r" i5 ?0 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% Y) C' t2 A4 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 I3 r! |3 P1 C6 [; RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, \; i5 D/ G/ ^6 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% x' w0 p8 r5 C/ `8 }- ]0 D5 G, @- ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- {7 @9 V- l2 x6 _5 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ L0 r, r' }8 K6 P, {0 z- _& h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ o8 s5 |% ?; o8 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 z. f$ Y/ O  q; k0 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 k% S" ~+ d2 D" l) o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ~  C4 V& f2 [; t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! w6 Y. W# l0 H, o& T. k0 H  h0 D7 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  W+ e6 D* S2 I% o<P>你无需担心</P>
/ X% S8 w: |( o" s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 v7 n1 u- m3 X+ ]/ i2 i" H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( N! ]7 d% a. u+ @# R, F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" O1 W% M0 t% q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; U$ f, W  p; G( L! O) o" ^+ E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) z; R+ d) P) I( ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ h" [* j  i8 w+ f! U$ L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: J) G2 x$ v+ t: @2 B. ^& m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 _! f) m4 Q! f2 @; z9 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) q. l! a: t+ W* C% e5 c# f7 j' x4 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% e& N1 }! c/ C! V; h4 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. s, O. B; ]- K2 E! [6 f4 S2 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ?# R* d" |- r2 t; D4 }* R9 N0 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 \* |8 @, n+ s( x. r- W- ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 O4 a8 x+ p4 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 ]4 d/ f+ ]7 p3 W) U# ^+ U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  W+ Q2 q: O+ T) u8 d% |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. L1 \6 _; \1 [  C! P+ k3 P, s% i) m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, e# I, P8 E$ d% T: }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ l9 _2 K8 e1 T  @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 q6 ~& X1 L  `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>