【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( @1 E/ `4 v; zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. Q2 A, L9 M  @9 U6 Q' c! I1 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# O4 ?7 x  ]0 ]" ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# o$ c: V& A9 u: ~With the moon kissing it every night
  O' {1 r+ a, @Seeing the sky content with its love
: s) b; P( ]  U, }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% V/ X# G  D0 w: D4 P) `6 u) dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- S7 {7 X" f( W3 `2 r. bI really want to know just how much you love me
! C. ]1 ~/ f) `4 fI love you I love you with all my heart
1 M' W2 Y# K( Y3 h3 _; ~4 x7 mNothing can compare to my love
8 L# N( ^1 v2 T# F% \' T. VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; u0 Z7 g7 e4 y+ x  IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. }- B" T! Y7 L8 b  @$ U5 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  F3 R5 b6 s0 |  Z) r1 z0 K/ ~; AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  F" l! q8 c1 G8 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 o' v, u4 k. m2 S; ?With such a tongue as yours,
4 ?2 L/ o5 Z; K0 _) o1 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  K$ L$ D' y- s  n1 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, B* B8 s9 K' j( o/ ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 i+ [/ U' I1 x$ x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- _4 @5 w* E* ^) K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ i2 i. |( J- ]0 R5 }8 s% {/ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. C& M2 G; m, ]6 r& z# Z9 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 |: I$ J' Z) {: {3 K2 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' i$ u/ E3 q# p, \<P>你无需担心</P>
1 p; f7 J( k5 t5 a( X( }5 z# W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! K1 T( V$ Y5 ?  R3 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ T  K7 D, ^5 f" o) r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 V2 k5 k6 @3 v3 C/ Z  {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% p; C% ]; V; D8 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 S0 R4 X* v# _# o+ `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 e" T: Z5 w! D$ f1 r6 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- b+ ~4 ^  N8 `. G( L$ |# Y+ y- r6 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, v8 Z& i) ]' X8 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 {' ?* v3 b4 J& L3 w0 D# H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" o! F7 z* t: R& x( ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ f/ a  y# L! i" \# p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ ?# W$ c  ~2 U% f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 G1 Q$ }. W- k" l- A/ z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 k9 P1 j# q  y1 |) |7 i& ?+ d9 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 ^, E' G2 p4 h# `6 T5 p: a) b1 C5 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; \/ @" q. h4 y& }: R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- H/ r- O- w* k, z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 S- [( H3 R  i3 K9 U. a8 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% J4 y% e; }- ~5 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 R& \% O" z; D  X0 n) w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  z+ k1 X- ~5 W3 |- s' y" ], X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  F5 {; V! x7 }7 `1 f. [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ h3 ^" J  N3 j4 T5 ]! P2 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>