【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& m. c- D- z( S% I" Y( R7 n) OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 p+ X! B, e5 B6 [% h" ^. r% zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ ^2 Z; V8 X. q4 r3 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 e% B0 L* _; c" g" eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! c6 Q2 m% W6 y; KYou needn’t fear anything
' T; d1 z1 ?* Z! jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- A( ^  R9 J4 g. h' vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# m# v" W/ g8 h5 b5 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, y9 M! c* v( A2 }* {+ V6 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 E1 h5 |1 z6 c- PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, y/ J% E8 `: g/ X+ {# k' tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% K. U0 l2 u& Z0 \: VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( r5 f1 ]+ y  y6 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 B! n/ e8 C& R& ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 ~7 N; e( P" ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( L$ c, x5 X* w( H% @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Q! a3 I. g3 E0 C( Z, Z9 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* \  x1 ^$ |. r. X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 S8 T& O+ f- W2 S; f$ i/ d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 q" i0 f/ @5 ^! Q) u( H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 q8 r, n1 c$ h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: Z/ Z( K. r* H. W8 d' L! Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" X3 Q& x$ s7 d8 N' I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' ]3 k, W: h2 i1 r: f; x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& w" @* C! W+ R! I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  V9 f0 x, w/ s' a) a7 p% ~7 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 Q5 d# f; r: f" r2 e& M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' }1 l6 |6 c! O" f$ f9 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. q5 X% E/ u) `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ n& J$ u6 h: B$ a1 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* p7 j  w. ]! n0 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ D& G  C8 @. ]1 Q0 u1 O3 M- U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& T6 J+ d$ `% d! g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ^6 n; x8 f" h4 [6 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ \; K; i+ D: |" b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: l7 v9 V) J2 g2 M, K$ E4 U( K9 F; X  G, h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% N! ~4 z8 K, A& _- \: e3 M4 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 O# B4 Y/ l. U, N, @- M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ v) }0 Y" U  B! n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ C8 C5 y( h/ e. c9 H# o6 z1 }2 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( V; U/ [4 e( m. k/ j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 H/ a7 C; W# Z, e; Z1 ]5 B我请你剖开它

% Q6 P/ f5 Q) ~1 c7 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: o- C# z0 E$ P$ e& j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>