【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' x0 I2 B; R- x0 y+ j; u歌词我附在后面。
+ j: c/ p9 X5 R; W1 c. gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! E! y* C0 d0 r1 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 o, }. w# i  o4 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& p& E3 ?2 g4 l8 U" w, mSeeing the sky content with its love
% F  f7 P% m; u2 N  z2 }  gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- x/ W! ^' _  C) t% i, hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; r' Y; y2 ^+ N+ d" ~Every other word you utter is love
$ X8 j4 }2 t( |# d4 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ h6 b. R" n2 z1 y8 B' K+ ?/ d" T$ B7 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* z! m% M* y3 F2 T3 E9 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ?2 f9 x. e* `3 b8 l" \& hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 v( T. C. N( l; @3 O$ c4 h9 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ }( b  k8 ~. i4 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ R, F' z- Q) V1 ^- T, oWith such a tongue as yours,
; @, ?2 W" l. \5 P1 j% [3 p( xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* A2 O/ ^, Q. g- M  x% k$ f8 |1 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% ]9 b6 I2 D- c1 S4 q6 G! U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 H) N. A  z$ B2 g: ?0 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! m( S" T: [) _3 e/ _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# j7 O1 R& R( V- y/ a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: Q& m+ s, `% G9 U! a& n) P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ Z  _' L* x) b: [* |$ v' T# P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 \+ J/ I; D9 r9 i) t( D% w6 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- U% a3 s1 T' l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 q: J) w, E6 X3 F7 w. w- f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 l; O& p1 j3 O+ y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% t, e( d: {$ R+ M% [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 c. ^7 O6 C6 E' A! T) B. t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, r' s0 O3 I0 \9 F. t# {# N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 t0 v7 y0 R; G7 |, X/ f1 D1 `% d6 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: P9 z7 Q/ U' A; `. J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 Z- q8 P4 I* e; j, h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 n/ g( q  R( w  F8 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- l5 J/ z4 v! G( m) b+ g; _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% e9 N) U& m4 M) i' n$ h  U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 C" X; x& F6 J9 Q) J( z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ f% L' A/ f6 P1 h# X9 B' }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" t( S1 a1 R+ M; C! E' C) B. |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ M0 W  z9 y& E* w  ?% _: j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 Q5 T, H' P. h2 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" f% j( n  b% a9 K2 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 \  i- d+ \. R4 i  ~5 Y7 i! ?% X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 c. v0 K' m4 L# E5 H/ m* k' q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 r: e0 x' ~- A. i7 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 u) J) X4 K0 [* j/ p, H" u2 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 l4 p& i; m3 P* r6 r+ J, [% M我请你剖开它
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/ A/ F$ y! u% b$ ^: _. e- t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>