【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ p" G1 X1 K, r, TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 [5 L( b9 j  M/ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  T; @; U& C6 _. A. C. e' QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. v2 A; T1 Q9 N$ ]& gThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ Y7 d) |3 C! W) e& T* dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- c/ {2 X( ^; j- B# r5 D4 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" d- x4 H6 p" `2 S9 eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 J( G8 \% H) n3 K: I' jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" F1 |. Y# f( {' m: d0 R/ F. mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& {+ C& r3 d5 m, D& XI’m still filled with fear
7 g9 n8 D1 `- p. m" m' FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 Q) J. j: E: U% Q' SI regret not dying
! p! P) v8 R6 B( LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 E' D& n# l5 e3 @) jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ B7 `+ G3 S0 O7 s1 U1 Y; z( q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( E3 S/ b: Z2 f" Y0 X7 U6 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: u, X+ w5 l- ?7 ~" c5 L) L; r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 @4 |( {4 P3 s! `5 W' s3 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* z3 E. A! [; e! Q& c& E, ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* y6 ]# G5 e6 s+ T4 y$ C: d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' D# X, t( F) R8 i% ^& i  B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 {' W. d2 s) j% p" {* V1 D- _( E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( }. I9 Z% p/ C6 X& e<P>你无需担心</P>
) V; ]6 G& z* J% g* o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, e. x  T- p6 ~! K, U0 U* R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) ~" [! S2 ^2 b. G2 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- e: K1 r; C0 A- ]$ o$ q, A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ L  q% j% G" o( t4 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 d5 c1 L9 K, [- k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( r+ }* X1 k1 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( k3 S2 u) @3 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 m. f( g0 I6 r1 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. I" _2 O  G! K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: V0 m% e8 Y1 Q6 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 }3 i, M5 @) ~" {8 f1 Q! i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 z# s1 k: T( O/ h+ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 \3 o, }  y5 O, c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 f- G# u; q$ M% d- w4 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
% X7 M; x2 p0 ^9 M9 O8 s/ d, W4 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" O' t3 T+ z; I& K( S5 o0 P) x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) i2 L& V, y* z/ K" o2 P# g$ K" k) O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! }3 F2 C/ t8 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 B# G" R) b+ e# n) ~8 b! _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 }4 Y! e9 P  f5 O0 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ c/ y, _4 B4 t' g. M, Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Q: H. H8 R% {. G5 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>