【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& N: v5 _3 T7 {3 ]8 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 i$ ?' G( r4 R% fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 ^& }8 \2 K: E6 k2 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  E3 N* H' [* O( VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- O2 ^% H- O8 T7 a0 V+ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ b0 ^# u6 J: a1 b1 K; ]With the moon kissing it every night
4 j' l+ U5 @7 dSeeing the sky content with its love
9 {: Q& v0 a, [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* h2 z; E* X* _( g: u1 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 R5 M) ?6 a6 F5 L% ?/ l, JI love you I love you with all my heart
# H0 R+ g3 G$ f8 ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  A7 m; q, |' g" a( lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 e2 `, @1 [# `7 Q! D  c1 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
" k5 U: y) ~& j4 C* NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 D% l8 _! R) k: W# O: B" YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 Z; E% W( _( f8 P4 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: U3 b) ?5 b: o$ z# \- \7 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: F( Y# E9 Q; V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 V' i# ~; X) o# [& M) Z/ M8 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! x1 e4 l) E1 Y- I) c3 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 D" k& I/ F- Q& ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% W0 L  F0 l/ E/ N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; R$ k+ ]9 R3 \7 ^5 |+ o7 B5 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 {4 v4 [4 j) X  }3 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; v7 f; [$ ]. z4 e/ k8 `0 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ Q+ f) u! E) Q- f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 e9 g- |; `$ K9 F0 A/ t  \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: ~& k+ i1 e- c4 Y" _' o, @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 D) p4 R) p: O8 L& V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 v9 F! R6 t' W4 Z4 m( g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 H, j: B9 e- n0 |2 n7 N% A1 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 e; }6 L$ v/ `/ P8 T4 ]% s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 V; G- a, W; m/ {" {% l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 X" u) I4 n1 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) z" S+ v$ I* s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, r' _6 i/ a& R4 q' A5 L" h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 a* y) w. i, s$ D7 n2 C0 ?: Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& c; z3 P. h& B8 `, f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 V( z1 g# m; ^( F0 q" n0 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; s7 E# H6 F& X6 Y  s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>