【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ^' G& K7 l% [' U+ ~6 T6 h5 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 H" f" T9 r/ G% a* tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' x- v% e/ ]4 u) A& F( g' JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; w' E# a# u& BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) f# ?6 `8 ]4 a3 m& l* N' ?; a" S; wSeeing the sky content with its love
# k2 W7 o1 b0 ?- t1 r+ fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# T1 g+ z# [, E$ J9 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" A, v3 t/ G( i5 c2 l4 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" a' E* E6 Z0 `6 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% @1 w7 Y: F! |' c4 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 |: D- l. U5 l" d% R% E2 cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& A+ l1 P9 V/ }1 TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% g- u( \5 ~0 U5 `2 W* nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# }, \3 C' c5 H5 K6 }7 B4 e- jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- n- y# \- R! N1 ?9 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 v  ?: x: |  p$ [6 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- K& P1 A3 L( S% W* ^1 u" D; ?, r1 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 y6 l1 Q$ r8 p. I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 e! `. \0 G- O. }5 E0 R# P1 Y6 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# F. G6 |5 G' G8 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! T  q$ ]2 A, T# k# H' B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: l8 T2 b) ^& X! r! B$ Y# L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& D- S0 b( y5 j2 t, I3 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" v* |# A* a3 }, g: D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! E) P& u  R+ z; D  V0 E4 n& @1 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 g  @& z8 }, n5 e  ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% a1 }( N' m1 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 F9 \! F' x% q  e8 z. E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* N) F+ S) B; \/ t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, x+ U' ]% [2 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 |  O* s  g( ]6 C! l2 L. }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 a0 H- L3 s9 T. E+ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 c/ U2 Y# |# b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; R9 `% f0 B1 A' }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 d! `' K6 z# X$ T- A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" j* S4 R( H$ P# f" @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 \/ \# g+ b% T0 U( f+ ]- `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 t, [# {# W9 j6 r2 r! r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( q3 T4 w: D, X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! L3 O$ z6 `, d9 \/ R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, a4 x$ P5 Z& K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% j4 p/ ?! u8 ?$ p2 G# N! L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>