【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. t* T1 u/ C( H) NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( \, F, E3 }& z  @7 s: P+ xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 q6 I; B: b% w( o- O* E3 LWith the moon kissing it every night
' A  V1 I: }8 Z7 P9 G: s  s3 cSeeing the sky content with its love
! z5 d5 g2 @6 k! Z! T6 p8 p5 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" _! _7 |' ^  x5 K" @) d+ j3 e" `$ OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- j  v" W0 e! fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' d# C( b$ Q: E, P+ @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! Y- P- u$ x- H& eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" c/ s0 W, F( JI’m still filled with fear
* J  m3 i! |( T7 m/ T" ]0 Z7 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- |; v* ~. b/ h) n, o( RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 S  I7 B$ c; _* Z+ y9 DWith such a tongue as yours,
7 B7 J4 t1 B( ?. W/ O$ xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- P+ v4 h" q0 s, `% l4 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  j. j6 ]* b0 f+ D7 F$ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ G" n9 ~$ a5 i' Z/ T4 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( k4 `* D5 {: W0 [* r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K' V( R, T* r! l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 c5 C5 h3 c5 A" N6 @, F0 e2 {( i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! e& z7 O, p$ |# l+ l( B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. [8 Z9 j! a; l9 W/ s' q$ H( G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m5 I* s, }* j- h- U3 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( K& O& o3 ^: W4 p. _' u. m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ {& i# c5 H) V' Y6 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- g% ^. ^0 I' p4 P+ j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 D' ~4 I+ C! l8 x. q( }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 M: T/ g- N( |# T0 r! `6 J4 I<P>你无需担心</P>
# B% s; _. _: W+ u9 f8 F% A) H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 X! U6 H1 Q) u: q' k0 }; A. y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ S& B& F# C* R' d- K3 ]$ D. e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( E( i9 Y6 ~. E0 I- s  `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 [' J" G' `0 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( w' b4 ^  q( A6 G/ i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: M5 {7 _. B+ ~; n+ c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 L/ }1 c  W6 _/ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' |4 x' F2 }9 y5 `& Q# I6 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( n2 j: @0 t$ E* X/ j/ l- q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( Z* A+ t0 u' C; {' T' D8 u4 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' R7 k4 q$ k# v  j' ^' j5 j% D$ V0 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 U  U  M  }8 j6 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& M) K% A0 ^6 B3 ~, b; x* T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' b+ c6 V9 e1 N( x# {* R$ k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ M& l: t2 @7 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>