【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: w% Q- X  w8 l+ b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 M0 y+ _7 e% lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 X9 |4 h7 V8 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" k$ I9 g' u2 s6 D' kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 P, [9 l( g2 ]1 }1 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 {; X/ c& d( {  u. D, j! BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 g2 F8 s8 @+ k. e! L5 L( dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 Q6 i. k/ {3 o2 Q+ xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ P' L! x0 t( {9 v5 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- a  S1 s$ o$ o2 J% yI’m still filled with fear
3 q2 e9 y% T& h4 l4 k+ }9 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( l& n+ Z* ]8 @. a  B: NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 u: [& S9 Z- G: }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 o9 J2 T/ E; j2 T* t  R/ `" l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, P3 f" C. S& d5 b8 x  Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 @$ u0 A( b4 c( H7 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ v+ x, U  w' X% m( ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) L: O% g& X' h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ n0 H( g1 M; S: O4 `' ~2 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) ^9 e4 [2 I- \! U. D% b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ ^& F2 @5 W# \' t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 U: P, Y, m9 ?7 n  p4 w9 @- h8 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 S. i( [& {9 e; }5 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. L% x9 e2 y6 N8 \0 [1 V5 X9 v0 {8 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% u+ L/ _; l3 r. d/ J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' T" d( f$ _& Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; Z+ |9 t/ M. c' ]: s, L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# |* f+ W. T) f3 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( h2 x1 A7 N( a, y2 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 v3 E4 L/ z5 E3 G7 I3 T& V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, t! s) F" O4 J% B. C" l' u8 F8 Y$ T! I! ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 k1 N# `' i" X( g  D2 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ?: e, [7 s. D7 r" h$ l: J8 t5 g3 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& M7 i, e* s! D1 \9 ]) F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; f# j8 C# ]2 f. U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, `$ {  H) [( E" [+ f: Z0 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 K2 M; O" |& Q% z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# x+ @9 y6 ]' ?  [4 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 T+ ^( Q. b1 G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ D0 v7 K2 g) x! {' {5 x# F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 l/ q0 _, l3 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 h4 e- |5 g4 X. u  }- }; r- Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# N3 G5 I4 ?6 x! H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' I( h1 K: K. o2 Q6 _( N5 K' Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 J) O+ W. o/ @9 c/ @- D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 m) D! \% c2 }8 d5 O# ^6 p6 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
2 X( y' z+ o0 x8 Z/ y1 S
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ^, x% h: \+ o  e& B- ?9 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>