【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* X, A) @6 p# T3 C4 F3 s7 H. J: ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 y1 x  s, a! j; L8 Q( t4 [The sky is happy down to its soul
- K' {. w- D! R6 U* v* [4 X$ e  OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 N  E! c$ H+ ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, L" m) @* H  F( P4 Q* R. jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# e; ]. F( Z( P- hEvery other word you utter is love
+ b$ a4 U# g% w8 ~: y$ H* jI really want to know just how much you love me
2 [' ]8 t0 |7 {$ v8 B/ UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# s4 b1 b- b7 o. |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  L8 n+ ]1 C3 \1 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 S, `# g# V6 z# BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# _$ i+ k) S' c! JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  w  p0 J: B: M/ `8 |- h. F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ V' i2 B. w" a+ k1 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ a* S+ }" u. Z  h% l: c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 j  |% X/ f# d% [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' R2 l1 ^8 @6 r3 O! Q, J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) L. u, R7 E3 a+ D; e6 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ I: E- \4 H1 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 J% Y" Q& x$ E$ h/ r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 s" E# ], ?; S& K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 m# T1 ?/ o' H! f' c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 n$ T0 P1 M; f3 N# M9 _& E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ |- @) ^* E6 v/ Q! h: C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( \2 W$ M; B: |4 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& S; ]% k5 a6 p/ k# L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) N) U( T% w3 r4 W% Q8 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. W  v, d: e; P+ {( X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 U6 w3 M: ^7 c* a$ n1 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 j. m' T0 s0 f+ Z$ Q: [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) X0 A! _$ j* G% E4 |2 F( g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# L5 i9 x6 r( k6 T) n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# _* \' [  T6 ~) Q% }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 X! {" Y, \1 D' s7 _# _4 g! q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 C, z$ f$ L$ _( n1 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  }, Z, V3 k6 c: b! h; X: d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. u, i  @. I4 X5 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. l; w1 ^8 F* q0 b0 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>