【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# {  k6 F4 ~: _0 r) |3 b2 m. h) ~4 I歌词我附在后面。
* Y( o( U8 v1 e; bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 d9 o  [& N9 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. U4 K* {$ I' _, L' LThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 `$ i( j7 Y( I3 X( FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 L4 B' U+ `) s0 O7 {1 X2 O, {You needn’t fear anything
: W% ]# c1 c) E# ^1 {( Q' [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 w2 e8 E! I, c+ G3 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* q4 V* E0 Y3 ~. gI’m still filled with fear
3 l1 @4 R! U2 `3 D! K. SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 S4 P. y, U& s0 o7 i" SI regret not dying
+ S7 e, q9 z3 J1 N0 L1 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! C' h& Z7 \; i) C. n+ X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 S3 h3 J: ?: _+ m  t: k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ v' p+ j$ A7 z& {) {9 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# _# E) n, f5 W: {3 U% _% j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. R! j) K2 l* n1 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: D- n5 ~/ f& S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 @# K, g* r2 j# J% R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 f) `6 j/ t. n/ J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! m9 Y+ U6 {( O0 w; |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, T5 J! z" s4 k8 \& u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- [3 T$ K- H* B! N5 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: F; [. T3 e4 B; `0 {4 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# ?" `+ V$ G% B8 G# g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 r  B' H7 c+ m- f! I" q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ B3 f  U7 ?; a( X3 f( q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" F& S3 K9 }# t5 ~  [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 P/ I( a( @' P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  E' }) k& T1 ^0 _8 J0 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 z$ \0 m  r4 M# G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ v6 I6 N( `4 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) f; H5 O$ W  F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 \* g' Q8 U5 n  T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 c( |" ^4 i9 v" }9 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" z- Z  v7 G. V# n7 N" g5 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 q) e* ^' U$ t$ E, m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 u: N% I* Q. w" c' [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 o. y: j3 Q9 N7 N6 @+ z; A" m- {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 `  a: a  r/ d' s# g* p# `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ]: }' C/ i9 K+ G: f6 i+ [, `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: F% e0 n9 ^" U+ M- X7 J2 d/ s$ L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: B; F& M0 q0 U4 r# {% P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 {3 ^8 J; o# Z1 O/ B1 I! E& h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 J* I6 {& Y- G) H- F  u+ |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ~0 z0 _$ k3 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* T% h& M/ p( o  i0 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  P& o4 ]" G: S4 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 \* {4 x8 ]! \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, }5 G5 d$ n( |# ^/ p- q& k我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 R) G# l1 X. W3 c" T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>