【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ r* u! S" K$ @+ R. JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, O* u4 z, Q1 h2 F6 J; S, XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 D+ p8 a* ~+ S5 ~' E6 ^9 G$ QSeeing the sky content with its love
& f9 ?$ V3 T" A& o6 I/ g/ A' ~( MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) D, q3 }3 N9 k4 X( `) R# @You needn’t fear anything
8 ?4 P7 y% ]* ~5 A/ O/ YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ g8 {: U' {5 ]% \7 `* fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 R, U+ K) m+ i3 W, B7 C3 F( h8 _Nothing can compare to my love
, z: `: [' ]( y5 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  D% Z# M4 [9 }# b) ~1 \) rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ }% P3 w/ N; {) U6 C% k6 DI want so much to see inside your heart
. J0 r) Z; t6 w, F0 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 n- d# v2 q! w) X4 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 ?0 y1 E% W6 Y- L: G% _I regret not dying
0 O1 A% v% x; Y; {$ EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 G8 H. H* h) a' n4 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) ^- P$ M! Z0 K  R9 P' k) vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ M$ j( x/ u3 X" f$ ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 M8 u6 ~7 i8 {3 `: M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 P0 |! g0 Q% ^& U/ b* W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& p* t# l% A$ l/ `1 D! M; N/ r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ v( p3 T* j1 J0 C% ]# l0 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% J5 K: e- J* U+ L! ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( z" I1 X  b& ~) P4 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) @7 B1 U+ X- V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- Y" s* J4 `" @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& P9 ]% m$ A. w; M* h1 F, }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( }9 D- l& F& C* Q: f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 n- [6 ?+ I7 h" P# s! R- f: R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 s+ p1 q' f3 U# b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- S# y0 M6 a4 E6 T4 O+ J5 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: E' b  Y3 k, H# t2 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) z7 S; M" K4 x  ]% g2 l1 U' S' S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: f1 g2 ]& E* ?3 _1 U: w, v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 j% l2 i/ b( f% v1 M4 w) I2 l* g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 c0 ?2 K' h' h& n0 M( s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 |* @! G6 o- @( `) X8 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 a" W8 Z: a: q+ m% W$ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: t0 x( Q% h' C. z3 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 H- E# R: h0 x8 d* b: U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 A. M& d1 [0 M+ g  T* `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( k  R+ f1 r; j: f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# h3 Z0 s2 S/ Q' `6 f# |8 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 J% \, T: }" G1 D. R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 B& e' O- E1 z0 o( S8 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 E; H, _3 O( N( e. I+ O& n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* S6 T5 a$ ~8 T+ Q; J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% I) D" R4 s! n% ?6 |$ m2 B4 R我请你剖开它
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0 s. \! [; O* ?, @/ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>