【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
, @  X  ~6 T' A8 s" E' u
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

+ `4 l! M5 J$ F4 \5 A  v
7 X! T, L$ @) @! ]9 t3 S3 C6 [歌词我附在后面。
, u0 X! E$ T2 d/ dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# S3 R. ~1 x" b* n9 z! F0 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
% q3 n8 f7 G1 i, Q4 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 M( N! p2 B3 m4 H- \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 s9 r4 E" G' n, F) @The sky is happy down to its soul
$ x* G( B3 t, G6 BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' l9 s3 i1 I( O6 m2 FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* ^! }, \2 ]; C1 V! b  g3 p2 ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ^# T2 C2 Q# r- @0 ]/ aI want so much to see inside your heart
: C( G- B1 B% K: `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ b0 T+ s5 ~. j7 i% m( R9 RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 ?  ?; ?5 e3 x8 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' E% t' X3 [. `; X9 h( [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 \2 O* j. S/ ^$ J' d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: m0 l8 b) W5 N' }6 z/ i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* C9 E7 j6 M* ~! z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 t- B4 x& x0 U5 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 w  Z7 l/ G( v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ]6 _. Z" \$ d5 }9 R2 v! D+ ~# D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  H: }9 y1 N' X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 t0 N8 V# a- P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 k, G+ M) r9 o0 C& D! G<P>你无需担心</P>
, f: ^/ a% F0 q0 B/ H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; ~" _; Q; l  n: g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& p, M" @# t6 D3 J3 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& F+ n/ q- ^4 ]0 X6 v/ W& [* G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ a: z7 J1 N  `3 h4 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. F; t7 k) B$ ^3 ~4 X* o1 E! W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' z) P* d3 c' u) j( x4 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: t8 n% S/ u: m: S0 X, o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" C# x8 `8 l$ d+ H1 Z3 Z% L& Y) ], z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, L2 a" y$ W! T% a+ F" f5 `3 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 u% Q2 [. q( h% m9 ]' H<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ M3 a* E. C& P+ A3 a0 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 N( T! v! M- S5 B5 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; s6 _9 O) g9 T1 j9 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% y' T0 u& M' K& F* [, r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 f! `% r8 ~1 w" {" J' X: C( B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' }. h/ w$ u  B' H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 Z  W& c! J5 K/ P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) S# g  E" C/ s1 X5 V$ F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 r8 d& `( [" Y8 Y, }3 t/ N% |* m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
3 D0 d9 `3 T2 H$ B+ |
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
6 Z  p: F( N+ x+ F/ I" M7 W2 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>