【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* v" z+ {' X7 E" B5 U; d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 L  U' l% ]/ @+ }( NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  s& Y) H3 u2 N6 _4 F6 s. aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, q! D% X9 B1 j. }2 P$ G0 rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 g/ u1 Q' d5 i, r9 E, E! _3 qYou needn’t fear anything
2 z( {( g% ]5 u& ~+ S1 c- h0 MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! g# `* @+ P8 `& P0 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! z7 c6 q* k* |0 L6 Y, xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 I: o8 B7 U) ^+ Z  YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 {# b2 I5 p( H+ `* k9 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& g1 a- i+ ]/ ~; e: _! d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  b4 R0 X' O. `, X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% G  R1 x& Z3 w: i: j7 E( b* X3 U  ^. p, X, Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- X- a; F1 ?8 ]3 R+ e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 K% e0 W7 c* u' q/ F" d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& m- b% w) _8 x9 d# \& }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 I$ s$ J/ Q# L" Y- G9 {$ x* T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 K+ @6 \1 \) z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# b0 c1 E1 z- b* |$ M2 N<P>你无需担心</P>
5 a; Q$ I* i8 z1 J& |! K9 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 y4 F, t9 L: T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- m' z: l( c' o+ A* B5 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 H$ G% d8 ^/ M, K7 W) }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 a# Z5 o/ t: W# U& Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% p# |9 M/ ^1 Y, {' l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# }2 n: y% I" o, k! |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 ?! N- {& ]- M2 G1 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 s% I6 M1 d; _/ n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, X& F2 R2 ?+ k- F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  O- R8 H$ ^& s: u) ?0 m' Z' j3 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- G/ `% l- a, L& r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 A2 Y9 x4 J' _9 T, ]: U( Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; O) ]# R* Y) r# V% ?" e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' p) n( {0 ?' G4 {" B' a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* ^" t- i5 R( u- _! f7 }5 [- ~- j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* e5 c9 w4 ?: W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# v- z3 x" E! p7 M/ o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ b9 [/ B6 M7 L$ `. X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. n8 `3 L/ m( \( u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# U2 s5 x/ v  f# j8 K* \) R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
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<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 O& l. l/ y  i; l  b' V* H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ]1 Z. [$ x7 u5 L0 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>