【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 U( B& D, o6 y2 A( z歌词我附在后面。
8 w) T# u& Y; P$ k3 k8 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! b, L& v+ O$ D: ]: k+ D% H6 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 g. e' h* Q/ Q6 o/ QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% n$ {& I7 D! I! SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% w: D' X8 @* f( z2 c$ LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' t4 b8 |5 G. i* E2 mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 \9 w0 s* r" r0 K( {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! V2 w( b6 g8 h& X) N$ p4 B" w% {Every other word you utter is love
' `2 W4 J9 }2 a+ ?6 T  K: @, bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# r' d: ~$ Z! E. NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 e* ]- M% w% oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ], i) M2 Q/ Z7 U7 N9 M$ z5 E9 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 Y( \0 Y' h; C" lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; \) j5 @4 X/ ?0 [8 I) w1 dWith such a tongue as yours,
) l" n: l$ T' H* [1 X: zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ B% c6 r; {5 @5 i0 n' v) a$ ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, R; M3 c" _. ^3 H4 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 @* T# r' G* s9 B! F& X. k5 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: E8 }8 x+ k" I* a( M. V: f4 [- z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 |+ C  q# U9 u& }) H* ^/ d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: Z$ \7 Z; K7 w2 H2 [9 I- h% x1 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 \4 n4 m# T1 e+ r* U4 r3 M3 @% D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: |$ }6 v! W6 L; z- q  ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) {! D" |$ Q! M8 m# d& W! U( E+ s" ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; b, l/ b1 N! c2 t( i: Y: D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! e  H! [" d9 M3 m! H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 @( L$ B1 ~" i) }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ^) }" R4 b7 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' @9 G4 l% f* Z+ @; l2 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. C0 b- _% I% P0 ^; @% \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 X% A& w" L5 D& H) x2 B( M5 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# n1 Z; g1 K0 t# J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; R2 I0 d6 X# U+ Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 @& Y0 i1 D7 C: ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 [7 |9 O; s3 t: L3 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 _* a! m# G" l# n7 {0 C' z" G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* I4 k0 Q, k& }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! |6 J1 k* g. L" U$ c  E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ]. k. g6 b+ r: \* y. Y9 o- o8 Q" {$ z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ R) z9 V$ u8 A" F+ I/ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( F; S  ?% c- F5 W9 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: d/ _7 I$ N8 n7 A! b5 |# r8 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. \4 k9 D9 j  Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& @- L5 I3 I: W: a9 U4 T, B& i& R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 Z" y: n2 E3 N1 S) j  m3 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- u1 c6 I. L( \; e& h% L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% L8 i! N1 m7 t8 j9 B9 g+ e/ p* F! W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>