【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 B. k; l2 o4 Z, k& N+ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: n! T( I% n) w5 Y/ j+ wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ \. D* z, h" \( y% A0 s6 w! EThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 u5 X: X. z% S! p8 }" S8 i3 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' L- q# e" _1 A! p  E/ vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: }5 ]- d& j; a  {  Y) FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! R8 V) R/ X, @3 @9 i# xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. Q5 p% ]3 A( y2 j3 t/ a2 f9 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% |8 \5 \  \1 Z+ eI’m still filled with fear
  [4 n3 n2 ]8 Y) }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 Q: Q4 K7 z! l# s: x9 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ B5 a7 h2 l3 J3 H/ z6 M$ @With such a tongue as yours,
& _3 f. ~( W4 P5 g: cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ X/ {0 t2 _  Z9 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, i3 P) u) ^- f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) f9 o; X2 B. C- x9 C5 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 w7 t: k* D/ v5 j, W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 P5 J+ E. L0 K4 ]3 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( I2 a2 y( u6 ?+ c: d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 o2 N3 ~( l- U5 L5 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ x* M8 G6 h0 [) s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( d( `9 p" I* w5 h! u- m, {0 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& |3 R/ y7 N3 o7 u; k2 |* O3 n6 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 y: |( u* U- ^& z4 }& W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% L: s1 s" r, X% @# n5 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 h$ n( H" Y  J- Z. W9 J( q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' A: P7 ]1 W% b! `, q- n  O0 w- Q8 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 p9 a( v, B( S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 Y/ E" R" b" m  F4 C7 w# e5 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% w/ s' G1 b& `" m' {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* Q9 K& `& b9 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 g- \- c+ `7 V, A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! ?; G: ?1 E5 x5 W8 G( c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" R, Y2 S* \% Z% j6 S) t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ U' |& z+ ?) i0 |* Y7 S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- `% r& U0 ~# L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 b2 }4 [3 Z* o% l3 E8 R2 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 x3 ?0 d& W# I8 `# \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  T. G' o* `7 q$ `1 ^4 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, `1 L, N- d% b* U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>