【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 h0 X) [, D" l" c1 e' G- {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& a- ?8 Y% y& S$ \8 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 u" w9 d% G9 f2 I7 r( N6 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 @& j. k6 R7 N  l* TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: i: K: {3 z/ E$ aYou needn’t fear anything
/ C& V% F! p. F8 h; ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, I9 o" Y+ q1 p& [9 U% {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" I( \. V4 N$ J" P3 F- NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 {1 B/ a5 U* R; }1 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ m6 p9 c, W) sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 v' _4 z3 |' l) @9 @) k2 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 t* ~  h4 f; w7 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; d4 s1 z7 v) w1 w, b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, h! u4 F0 B+ g% X% N( s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ [1 x8 f/ G' V& Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 k" f' M, r: I- r' e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 J' g6 U5 h. E! x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 p& c! u# D) }% M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. @* L" _9 {4 b2 g2 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ~7 u6 d+ l3 U( P$ |0 |, w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 V3 v, `% H7 N8 A. l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 K7 _  K. U: ^. R, \! c3 O1 o' x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% p3 z. q, j) {- c! k  T4 [; c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! _0 \, ], ~3 \1 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* s/ w6 c* e# j% G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- \# j" t3 }$ t% q1 b3 |3 Z! x8 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 E6 P0 Z1 s' p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! f" ?* i$ E9 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 C& X8 O; ~" x: \( ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) N# r. Q5 h) P# S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 \& S  s# }3 I9 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 [  H0 R3 v) o- d/ a; {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- K+ n$ X3 A1 L* S. k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 z( o6 X  s+ O4 C* K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 l% ]" I3 c  r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 h* ~. Y( u9 K' M9 C  b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& C  E' e; ?. |/ ^3 }6 ?( G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& r2 _9 k! i$ S5 L) f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ k& Z/ o  Y- K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ `2 a. R1 L# N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# T0 G% z  H. m1 \/ p9 M/ y3 H6 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" w5 R' k( a- S- y" E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 l- f6 ?& e. h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% w4 u. j+ p, S5 d$ ]+ |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 _; J$ D: \( ~7 D* N6 U5 c/ E$ f6 Q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>