【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 J3 T2 `' H7 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& G5 V# I7 p0 M8 s1 `6 O1 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ^/ g6 z& ?2 i6 j# L+ mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, g# L2 y6 ~  O, G. g: ^: P6 F5 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# O, P# C; u& g) E0 O- t; g& OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; Z$ V' s$ E* v0 lI really want to know just how much you love me
4 b6 ^+ |5 S& O) oI love you I love you with all my heart
, |5 ~! P. b  l0 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 Z( f: I! G' p- @& u/ Q* ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, p" I" G  j  }: T+ VI’m still filled with fear
4 j, q/ e5 m* S, R+ ^6 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& A9 A1 l5 R# B# K0 N) {I regret not dying
6 i5 @$ x7 b0 M/ Q8 Q6 q7 x8 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' A' T# C: ?; W- TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& B% c7 `' N& q& E* W+ {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" \' N1 a7 t9 B( Q- `) QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; m; n3 |+ v) Z4 G7 T+ y$ k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 p" Y" o2 m' f5 ^. M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! g% |5 `7 H* V& L" F9 s8 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  L- L, v& q/ r0 J# ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* }, ^9 S: o. U; H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: T% {8 z) _) c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 Y  }2 z6 k  c$ z$ Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; C! O! x0 C/ ^# e) U4 b2 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* V" G! o" `; v* x4 a) G4 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" X6 H! T  a. c+ s, r3 ?. v+ x# v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" p. v0 v+ a% \+ @; b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 O8 |, [; W; h) F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" J, e8 Q# `# |0 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ d7 d% T- V) u1 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  j1 ?+ `! x/ ]$ g2 p4 A9 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 e) u9 F) t1 L% U; T5 d2 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 n% _8 a2 z( x) ~  V5 o8 l; B( U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; F6 \' w2 S: ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 Z9 J" v4 i# r; Z( L9 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' |; L" V, r% u  ?) T# G$ r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ j# J( t4 \. W0 N' v' Y: R  C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 J5 x6 l& U* N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ M; W! e0 a+ @, K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 G" B7 {. C  k1 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 k- d( P) ]# d! m- N" s3 h! `8 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 d7 F; f- v3 x  p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
4 \* k' y: `, b; l3 [0 p
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 c. u. U  m  I5 m0 Q, ^' c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>