【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 n1 V/ n8 T1 t) c& r4 P  XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. [2 ]. b1 B8 [& dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; I( a( m* C; s" ?3 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 I+ X, D9 x2 E" |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! U" o/ w! l6 W% @/ m$ D0 _  V: VEvery other word you utter is love
: q# Z  V+ s& cI really want to know just how much you love me
/ B/ H2 p8 O0 p0 S) TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ~5 Y" M' }6 o2 a  P# hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 a" A& G0 s% AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 w9 e2 N" f' {% L$ T# rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% f$ Y5 M1 F' T5 zI regret not dying
* `& F: k! s# a' rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. G7 x+ o6 Y, P& WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 \( D% P# d5 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" i, Y- X9 u5 M( I8 t+ W% j/ H: F! k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Z+ C% A$ X5 N# W) S% k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 C3 a! i- B% W$ O- I7 \8 X1 |$ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 A, ~( F$ m2 v3 F8 J: ~$ K" E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ V9 @6 y" {8 J$ k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- S  G1 A( L" X( T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; h9 p4 \% N8 t1 a/ z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& W9 S* a# m& X3 x3 s$ ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# u: z2 O4 f9 K6 U- k7 j4 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 A: q# `1 N" ~) r: i6 k5 s" r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( D- s. Z# F) e  a4 {  s9 v9 q6 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ B4 \0 f" K! r  _7 L' ?$ c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( X$ d$ Q! D7 d4 |8 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 p. T1 J' \6 M; W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ _' P' I; F1 d- T0 f: C/ F" i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ S7 p& x: ~5 P0 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ M! c' V( l3 k# U( N9 |7 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 B- s+ q2 V. e1 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 Q* p9 t; D8 ^/ _- X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 z3 \* @; y- Q. w+ N8 r+ ~! d) `<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ B# |$ |7 s, n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. h  }- T# I- X3 I: ]% R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& c4 |5 z$ F+ L* \" s( R: M# N8 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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