【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' q2 t! n0 d# P+ f) UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) ]6 ~6 R% W7 {' a9 ^6 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 |* I" I: g  O; QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) {& q* q9 z. P9 K# f  f* dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- E( O3 ]4 S, b* ^9 w# DYou needn’t fear anything
1 A0 v3 t5 H; e; _6 Y: HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 U* q( A  U; O  L' J/ II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( r+ m, l3 I, I, C. YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: ~9 L) b7 i& WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* I6 M- x$ A; m3 ~I’m still filled with fear
+ I* I9 P* q. ?+ P* eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) Y* j! m! Y# u. N, A! {! }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ u" |3 ~: L. u0 Y. JWith such a tongue as yours,
! Y% C9 O' M. _+ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 W) Y' }% Y1 Y  B1 \# XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! t. ^' h! o; i4 w, z3 Y: u" M8 A5 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 C, z3 k) H  S. m+ D) S0 H9 N1 s  v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 l7 `! y1 V* Q" P. s2 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# m' e& ~7 Z. g' k0 I1 C$ K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) c6 J( g/ e$ A9 L9 E/ u% j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, P4 w- O# _2 S. u7 `% j$ l4 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Q5 V4 E: Y+ H5 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! `& M! J* _& b" z4 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; I" ]; f/ T( f2 A' |, v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 S3 m/ ]( f& N! p! X1 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 y1 U& f' Q7 E! T6 U6 r- N. E# N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 b+ t1 J3 c3 q% F/ G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, a) G5 H8 j7 M; T+ t* Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& Q# K: W1 G: t6 B7 Z% P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 K; B# f' H6 q" c# K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 G7 c+ |. Q! _& l' O  ^  t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; |2 O4 o: W. Y; H/ d4 p4 ]" @3 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 Z, d# o* A4 ?0 T2 J& O5 ^, ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( W: Y- @; A0 L3 w  h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ T( x3 O  d( P/ a, j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 u9 P* a/ }7 L! Z! S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 s" j$ i' X# G3 |! Y6 C& u% K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; U1 |1 X. {2 r+ ^* d# y+ N$ f3 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% S+ }( [4 @0 m8 K9 C3 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( d$ k  _0 ~3 a* X3 j9 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# N) ]# ?1 C! c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Q- x& h4 a* J/ u6 Y" d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# P$ ~! L' O8 V/ s& ]3 d1 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: P% w% f9 e6 q# G$ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 p: H7 g3 l/ e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ x& _& ?7 f6 s6 q& h; Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 n/ h+ x, u; c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 g# G2 ?$ H9 S% H7 G3 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 K8 \! m8 l3 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, m$ d1 O5 M6 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 O* a/ \$ w. ?+ P; ?  r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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0 w3 O: {$ E0 y1 [6 i8 a6 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>