【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' o5 Y8 G2 _9 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 T2 M3 b/ M3 Z% uYou needn’t fear anything
) Y) U, d  p4 u2 Z/ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 e$ {, j& j8 o. d4 J! QEvery other word you utter is love
& o5 W; N$ x4 |& ~I really want to know just how much you love me
7 [: }$ @' S; Z: Q3 TI love you I love you with all my heart
5 ~4 a+ w5 L) I& x$ INothing can compare to my love
7 i. i! ?. i$ l- E( E$ b& yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 h/ `- R' T+ L5 I0 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 v) ?# ?/ V0 d' a8 m9 k" aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& z& E9 K) p# rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% N+ d% R/ K' t1 _: d3 K) PWith such a tongue as yours,
, P# u) d# N  H1 P' v( WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 O) Y" Q( q& U2 v2 B$ c2 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ B( ?1 j5 h% d) p& y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 q+ W) Q& h  K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 m8 K: k& q+ P& j. b. o5 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  R) I# W0 I  A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) @5 a; {7 d: `& \+ I" b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' V2 o1 m9 {, G1 ]/ x3 C! D  p" L2 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 l; r# y- Y% b# G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 g. V+ z& ^9 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& H' h* u6 y6 n1 X5 G2 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ g/ N6 n5 w4 s5 u% e$ P: y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 Z$ a; ?6 [# _% R! ^& L# [3 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ g- s2 I" ^' }& Z  A( G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 e: h- u2 o6 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* X& W% s- ?1 P9 J7 f6 n3 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 H4 V3 E4 N+ O; V* d9 R5 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 R, p9 C+ }/ b  d' G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 g( G; U6 L6 x: b# k; {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* Q) A# ~9 o1 O: C" O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 P: c4 |5 S; `8 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 V  e% K0 D& N( g) L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
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<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 q3 G9 B- ^) r1 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  Y& Z8 R/ x* r2 P5 v' ]% n0 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( g$ S! H& T* q# t+ f: A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; {; I6 {+ r: W6 [' q" I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ?* a  l8 F5 ]7 }& ]' W$ \/ S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>