【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* f$ y: ^0 |: p" A7 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; [+ l) b' W+ T) V2 n4 r% YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 a( H+ P6 _. x7 O% TThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 p# `5 p) Q4 Q, }With the moon kissing it every night
. _' h3 f' c) }9 B; B6 W$ V0 Z+ ^Seeing the sky content with its love
9 N  Q% [" o6 O8 l3 s( j' dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 U! @7 ^1 }; J- H" C/ yYou needn’t fear anything
* j( ], w3 a9 b9 b1 Q% T* ?; JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 W6 d2 I0 }! n0 C7 IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ f* \2 u4 R$ sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, C) X' A* H. V$ P$ m5 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- W5 b4 `& f: r4 ]( ^# Z. WI’m still filled with fear
- f3 w$ z& ^7 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 a: n. j2 Y- jI regret not dying
  `; J: A5 J- F  O0 m5 O. a+ G( xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ?4 t: m( q2 o' P6 KWith such a tongue as yours,
& ~, @3 I! F" R4 Y2 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) y$ Z" u. V* aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 _% o' p+ Z3 J0 n& J/ ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. U! a1 z9 Y9 e' w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* }0 K& ]  g8 [) m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* l' X6 j1 Q  i( V9 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ ?3 C) F# F/ Z8 r  T6 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" [9 A2 ]$ V  Y! R" Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ?% ?5 c7 U- N6 U7 Y- K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 @& M3 {0 v9 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ?4 n* u/ i$ y9 P! W* ^% @  S9 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 p3 V/ u4 S4 Y8 F" J! ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 F( P5 l% S, ^: t  o  C9 `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 S1 G$ S* ^  ~. ?, r* F8 B* }  h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 e0 X0 x4 ~4 e- r8 H0 R- u4 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: z  H; }  y6 L* S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; Z; z9 t) {8 P& Q( e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 w* N$ G- X# y- o, a1 O1 N7 n6 U2 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: Q; |1 F  B0 \% a* s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 T* b# S7 j# j1 U8 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 J4 w  Q3 U! p$ [  s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) `& V2 P. N: H" Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  N% t3 l: T& `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 j) l1 [5 Y6 C4 B  X& M/ O<P>I regret not dying</P>
, `! h* u+ I2 X0 j! P0 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 |* ]& ]  v/ H+ G, f* |& _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ F  H6 Z8 P- H9 s7 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: i3 b' u) A, m" ~0 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! k2 E' U/ o- A6 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ U$ Q5 t  _. z( V- n$ R( G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 c3 A8 \2 L! F7 q/ S$ O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! U, R1 X. M% v  j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 \7 g& g# Z' Z4 |1 j$ O我请你剖开它

; r/ ~! a0 e  E5 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ D6 N6 Q1 e. H6 V( l3 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>