【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' g& O& J% Y6 t0 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 \* Y/ [& V3 h- T$ K2 vWith the moon kissing it every night
7 V$ x& D0 }$ w6 z8 A  ?Seeing the sky content with its love
# E( @; [5 G4 |- \9 E9 S$ IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& Z, J5 y3 [2 s1 c  HNothing can compare to my love
+ Y! a; O: I# \4 M+ d" |5 }+ d- O3 P9 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ I5 W( j) m! b" ^1 x, s+ B/ P" rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* C8 W5 Q! }$ [- V3 \  ?+ i& lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& I# z$ e" p7 F( h. V. OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! R( B8 |; i- d8 [1 h" s4 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! X: w) a, w# _/ X3 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 m5 \7 r  I0 _3 O& y4 ]+ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& _! J1 P2 e5 h6 X' u4 A' g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! a9 b8 P# k7 [- Q/ @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 P( L! N  g$ p! f$ a4 R- k9 m4 b1 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, |! m  N  c+ a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* h$ ~; t) k% O6 u- f+ N<P>你无需担心</P>
! R$ }! D; d1 d* t) k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" \7 c( O9 t6 ]1 v1 c$ o+ h8 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& \. R" d- u- C/ e8 c3 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ~0 q5 }  f1 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  ]* y5 i. C/ G( k1 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' s" x5 G3 p6 A: \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ~" S* y3 L, l. n+ @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 ~( W) Y  B; c' R  K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; `* a, d; l% d2 Q( ~& ~" ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 A4 e  v! F$ _$ j5 v8 \/ C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) f" C1 {  d4 ?6 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' l* a1 Q8 Z3 C7 H5 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 e; {  x  S4 O" s: k$ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ m& `0 m& D5 z1 ]) |: @# ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ H+ Y- [, f9 w8 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 D% A# `! v$ r8 [. X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- O3 l/ u3 A, @. @) |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>