【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 H( w. R, \+ T/ uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. U' E5 x0 M' d& Y2 {, e- F7 _7 w" \! \Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 O, w# ?3 V; D& z# E/ S/ R. RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) C0 ]0 T+ C& y' P* H6 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# s5 n' I) s) y. D! m: s* KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 U3 I$ @" g! J4 EEvery other word you utter is love
* R8 w% i: N- S+ I% b% G+ }I really want to know just how much you love me
4 H! H- a4 D( {7 c! A" cI love you I love you with all my heart
( r8 ?# A  j  e. t) `Nothing can compare to my love
$ m/ o2 W! @* g9 h6 W4 X3 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) X# E0 ]) X% }8 |% [* hI want so much to see inside your heart
7 A9 A3 [; }. S! t' [0 Q" DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 ]. Z$ e: G; Q; G* r+ NI’m still filled with fear
& p/ ~+ b# o/ U  t/ N6 j# JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" b7 }, V) i2 k! H' F/ ?$ c! Z( vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ l6 W, c, ?. S$ P+ K3 C# ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% `" D! h6 \: c! H2 \) V( o7 D8 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! g! A0 B. X( X  U1 R6 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( l0 \" d/ H! a4 h1 f' g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 A; y- ]7 T, Z. d6 n% X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ~/ C% y2 W' L! O* Z& ], m& h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% p/ d  J: G8 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ^" X( G3 N# t* I! p- [* E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Z! \# u+ l5 D- N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ f* b2 u: ~& {. W9 g3 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 Z' e% v; x0 |8 m- ]2 e' x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& y* {; M; x+ @" b( G! L3 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' t6 M% }! M1 o0 b% Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, i' |. v; B; v5 y5 k& {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( _9 ^  k! I0 \1 d' C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ D+ i" N, M. M8 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 H+ R# @% M- b7 _. z' {! r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 i( ^) B$ \& @, Q2 e. N3 v2 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* |% B- j7 u. i( g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( U2 @; `# ?) g# A9 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" m" Q; p/ I+ P' \6 I* l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 P5 W/ A5 N6 N- p( c4 f0 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 ?6 D5 u4 X  `- X: o& @8 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 n5 d) V; l# z6 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# D1 t; \6 Z5 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: Y8 h4 S# p8 v! o. h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ @6 L: k% t7 h8 u  K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 H8 d5 I% l: W% c* K. M. d5 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 v4 H4 Q) g, W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' T9 I, N8 Z6 J) r! o6 T我请你剖开它
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* _* M9 j9 o3 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>