【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ k* s" z% y: z4 u* |+ FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( M' V9 P- {+ k6 u4 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 N; A4 m* e8 K, j  BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  f- M1 B! i% |9 N1 L: C" WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# X: j+ u0 N" v% Y+ C7 J* G' @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, t/ O* H4 K8 z% ~' i# u% PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 U+ z! H$ X& ~2 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ u2 }0 t* N: m# g, ], u0 i) CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 T6 I2 s$ ^4 E* x  s* x" RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 h+ X! W! n: J) e. _With such a tongue as yours,
- Z! }0 u4 J2 R% R" U2 j1 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 _+ |8 T- ?2 {! W; J  J' yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% Y! b1 k+ K2 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' |0 `. x, r* ^8 e" U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% d8 I$ N4 j( m" L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" P7 q  \9 u# ~" ?5 K1 ?; d# j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: E- L) I& E  V! K& M- s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' n, K6 j3 F' }* u9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: L" Z9 ~: b. X& Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 \( G' e( j: |7 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) }" b) x: R) ]4 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. n- M8 O9 O% n# o! x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# S& s& U0 C5 `! K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* @2 Y& E2 U5 h, x# v" L5 {. _- s" j+ k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 e9 R. M, ?6 Z' u& k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 g) @+ q! c% h4 Q+ h1 ~! s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# q( r- w5 Y8 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ z8 }8 ]3 P& s: M- w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ q3 A) B  Q1 [: z+ E: u" Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 k) I# n5 E' U! I8 c& ~2 T( y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- f5 M$ \7 r  Y( P& ^% w8 ?# U: G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 X) Q% K$ h/ r7 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, n' U1 F) s! Z. m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% L' ?, u2 o9 _1 U" k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 Z. Z6 {, r3 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ [/ F& h# [* x% E& u% r: L& v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 F' D/ I8 L: u" D$ }, Z9 T8 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>