【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- p4 ?) j% B( {* e$ K/ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 O7 y: F$ [; H" R$ n/ c2 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) Z8 J$ d7 E8 y# bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 Z9 b% g3 c6 G! d4 x5 bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 j1 }) _3 G2 j8 t. VEvery other word you utter is love
' b2 E, r1 @3 \" r( q- zI really want to know just how much you love me
1 n& K1 b! y; C8 d1 b2 aI love you I love you with all my heart
& A. v. w6 f7 l5 W* NNothing can compare to my love
/ P1 I' u- R* @* nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 i7 v% I  o* f4 _6 I+ @$ L: E5 \I want so much to see inside your heart
: v+ F1 T& K- @% sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: x0 p# |8 \" k( d" I& o. jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" o& G: w8 I+ MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ N8 B4 L) \5 U; O* @8 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 S% W3 ?1 e* L8 R/ `1 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ K9 ~: v4 G% V+ u# T. U- R* k2 n+ r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 M3 D# l( z" A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 F& ~% V' o4 [! g  D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 m' I) o* }2 c& Y/ r0 N! a: L% t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 U9 q9 R" E" X" ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, c# B, r: \0 |/ c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' s: }. t  D1 ]4 M. _+ K) B5 Y# {6 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# ^  \" ~' W% ^$ ~; g6 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% X* W7 D  `! J- S9 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 t$ ^' e' V) j# l- ]! M6 z+ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* F8 z; a' D: u  Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- ~) K1 |9 }4 K8 Z  D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 H+ U( q- n; _! ?) d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ a6 h' w) m6 P6 ~2 A4 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- [% E* u) X: |8 l; m" G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 `( M+ q4 F0 s& k- [6 P' a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. M) Q/ A' _$ ]9 D, ~6 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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3 m; @: Y8 F& ~3 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>