【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 f( z7 T4 _2 l! t' ^2 _! lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( _% S" ]% m( u( iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 n! t; ]& _( B2 d$ pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  D2 t6 B# k7 w8 e$ y3 n% kYou needn’t fear anything
# P( O2 h. r. C" f& D6 T) }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: j: p5 X+ `0 i/ r# |; @0 m. ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 p4 w3 B! Y% s& {7 u# ~1 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 `# t/ B  z5 A/ p0 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) s: I7 u; |5 r. Q6 Z% P. w3 SI’m still filled with fear
" V+ T% F  {* h; U8 c/ D# [, AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, x4 c. ]$ m: o% i- HI regret not dying
0 c$ [% D! G* r* f+ o. Y5 q) sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& h' M" T5 e- E$ L- Q/ nWith such a tongue as yours,
: y5 a0 `$ Z6 w/ \) b' xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. A/ n7 a7 E+ Z4 d! ?+ |9 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, R1 U: K& J4 q0 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, n) A, C2 P' j! J6 r( P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; W3 f0 p4 ^9 s8 ~4 ^8 n. {0 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: p5 `* }' `- _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 R/ e& Z0 b& ]/ l$ W; F6 E. k1 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 S* }! D5 g1 `: b  D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) `4 R! p2 C! Z- P7 T' l; j' [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ d; [  Y* M# h* e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, i# V1 K! U$ ~7 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 {  y* N0 `8 c2 z, c: p( u0 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 V- o1 q) q' {5 \# f" j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( F* Q) |( j( I" r' W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 y0 C( H1 P, h) _( x: A: P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Y# s* M/ K1 j! S; H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, f. i- j7 _  X3 B$ n5 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 x, \5 A. v; u) Q8 r/ K  Q3 q. K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 J+ F% k! L* ]8 s9 ?$ J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ H$ u0 f9 K7 _5 u, z" ^" v/ a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: i) F' V0 k: m% Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 B4 y7 o8 i/ [# `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 i% z" d. P4 l; a2 w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 f! ^. }" |6 ]7 X. k" K我请你剖开它
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, g0 T- Z! v- B3 r) A: w. E& [( @+ B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>