【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" |& d& t- N' |, G: V3 F1 }. kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ]! h; D( C2 F! o/ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, d3 j4 D" I9 R5 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 C& @& j3 I% pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 l/ O& X  F" i2 C% B1 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" B& Q. ?2 @/ {3 w- T; S7 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 j! I0 e/ I7 t( R- S9 ~9 B" O$ g; F3 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& n$ s/ P) N: sEvery other word you utter is love
# y6 |4 n) D: R2 ?. B- ?, B/ H( ?I really want to know just how much you love me
- X/ G# B" f& B  F% cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- G4 D( K7 I6 U7 ]) `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  H8 ]: n3 B# L& b8 H' `I want so much to see inside your heart
) b' i* k. t( s2 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% }7 [- t" u+ _  ~6 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  t3 e7 ?: w9 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' k% ^" d; z( wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 ?! Q0 T: x' z& aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% c( a1 o% k- u6 R' Y/ ], h; N9 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ~  I0 k0 T" e+ p; B: E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 n  B' k  f1 y& H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ M. N9 j" m( W. t( y4 H" s- z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ s6 H% p( @5 ?" G. r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, R, R$ d, a- n1 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 `4 m* E/ d: A# T- t/ f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' [* J9 I9 Q0 @' V  S5 K5 v! Z$ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* M( J( E6 e& T; t$ e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, D7 I- \9 \6 h( a. G2 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- _$ I* h/ G5 p, E& W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ w/ Z( R& }+ l6 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 b) _1 X4 S' t, |0 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 g8 q2 F  L8 a5 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- \2 x4 z& u0 z# C+ W" I  Y1 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 k  M. o; V5 [) J' y; A; N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# @+ ^2 Q! Q* O: ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; Z4 I$ u% r6 P5 j1 n/ u4 M: }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! {$ o: h: V0 o1 N2 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) w+ e, ]' V3 X: O3 A, n2 G+ x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" j1 d& _5 t& o  R4 N5 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ Q6 r; S6 a  r. R+ J: P0 S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 h8 Z+ ?5 c/ x0 u/ E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! s; y$ E  x8 }: d3 x5 b# i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: p- I% A' z+ n) `0 V, A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; M6 j* ^& z& L0 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 R& @  K/ z( r: S/ n5 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# Q$ F' t3 S1 ^: d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  B% v! c* L$ n5 X( |9 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 E1 x! s. B) g1 U! l5 r+ \% A" U: W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>