【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 \* [$ }, j/ t1 J歌词我附在后面。
5 \9 L# {% J( \The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 H- O3 m' R( `8 ?8 Y# B( xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ E2 z& y/ _$ S+ u, a, kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! }: N; }3 H: _; M6 O8 _# LThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 x3 x) K/ M% ]1 j% J( N2 YWith the moon kissing it every night
. P, |$ l! s+ d; Q- mSeeing the sky content with its love
* {$ A( `5 a$ B, BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' M* q! i1 ^% |6 k& @- s/ kYou needn’t fear anything
6 a: c/ L# D' y; {* sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, l: P0 R/ q9 KI love you I love you with all my heart
4 u4 Y5 p8 u0 F" }( O* @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 I; M; Z, q" sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 f1 _& G$ k: H1 u# r2 u. ]) k' h$ rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; k8 o4 U" m, l- D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* ^4 |7 U, N" h2 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# X# U7 B% a$ v( i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ `0 o. G9 ?0 U! c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 L! c) O4 e7 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* M0 F8 r' m  ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ b' b* z0 {2 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& [7 C, B" X6 G  }6 |8 P5 j9 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 k  P9 {( h# @  o2 J* O: f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 I7 Y4 ^0 e1 j2 t2 @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& A5 P+ }/ q- c% T' s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' l( }* Z1 W1 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& v0 ~( `$ [/ i/ L7 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& y  \+ [2 C" y+ f8 @9 E" h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  G+ T9 Z2 W1 X- {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; R2 G" _7 Y7 P+ t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, I% r1 @- `" \$ m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 S; ?5 `' D4 ]5 p, p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ?1 A$ ^2 l/ Y4 D1 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# {( O: [$ i7 k, ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% _4 t0 u8 i! Y: N6 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 [% M; ?& N1 S; C! `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, N0 u! y9 {3 @' }$ F4 C2 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' d" s2 Q; E# I, e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ Z& u9 ]3 f2 H& z2 U5 V- x" G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 I4 M, R0 @1 ^5 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ B. _0 X. a9 |6 c- G( g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 T, ?# H3 s& S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( j0 f! [- M# r) Z0 W$ z% H8 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 E) ~0 B5 T- ]5 d  F+ n/ w2 n我请你剖开它

" u2 ]2 Z, H' n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>