【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ A) a6 g4 Y" h$ w% Y/ u3 u# ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 u" z/ V5 D6 i8 U5 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ B8 F( J  {4 ~+ e/ R  V- `0 XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% H3 B3 ?4 G2 ^6 r# I! i: [# J6 kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 h- N  s# E; R) I  _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 k. H; f/ q/ g* ]  i* qNothing can compare to my love
1 L+ J# R- n& b* c. C; nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 o% m4 J+ q3 ~& n$ `9 a- P7 Q; K/ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: X' x& O) _1 Y& _6 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 C+ r. O2 g3 Q' ^* {! {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 K+ V$ s- Q9 N, _With such a tongue as yours,
! Z! u1 j* O3 N/ t9 P+ CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 q, O1 }; E! @0 ~7 m& k3 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 t  Z2 w) z1 r+ H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- G' w. Q9 x: ^8 w7 R7 t) o1 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 R1 r# B: p2 a, t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 j7 x' K% }" z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% C! y: f; r# f3 _6 Q! T% i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! w4 u% A; t; |1 U. ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" t7 _: }2 K& o2 W2 ]% }! {8 k; l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) e9 y: t: C: F% c# D! O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 X) x1 \4 d" B+ g' Q# b' x<P>你无需担心</P>
. |1 N+ i1 ^1 i+ ]- [1 B2 b% z" }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 R/ n5 E" R' \; Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 j) M7 S; c( t9 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 j( `2 V) A% i$ ^  h/ U/ x' w: ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 H* C+ u) f0 l% I% _; p1 A" \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% n+ I; o, ~7 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 R/ S$ I1 ^8 }: P; S7 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* c: f8 g1 _4 m7 @% _0 e6 g8 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ C* p. p  h4 R' i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# ~0 ?+ ?) b! W$ ?2 \; @& w  {4 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: @" B% o# c8 F8 S. L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) S/ A5 }; f( I6 u+ C6 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: v+ A/ d: g6 {& m' s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" s9 P9 x; n4 d( d4 m' I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 w$ W7 {3 O" z$ x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 l0 }8 m8 E/ Z/ E( [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>