【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# g& `3 T1 _6 D( {4 B3 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  j* \( S( M% E, i: r) ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 b" ?) p) |- m, {, eThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 h3 W5 G+ s. a3 O0 ]- d5 C8 YWith the moon kissing it every night
  O! x4 G) f. ZSeeing the sky content with its love
2 m) m7 T; H: {" E1 ?0 F( ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ l+ [8 y- J, {6 v3 ^You needn’t fear anything
) V2 a; {: a0 }+ u, H3 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 }  ^9 E* r% e4 u/ ]0 D( WI really want to know just how much you love me
! i' O# j  p1 S! _! j: F! II love you I love you with all my heart
! o  I) O8 ^% f7 A/ @6 [Nothing can compare to my love
1 i2 m6 \' y/ ~' ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 Q  k7 d/ A6 S6 u8 [I regret not dying
; s) r+ r5 E6 B( f& OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 J- e  F2 l/ P) C7 M1 Z+ }With such a tongue as yours,
& {9 e. A" g5 Q  w4 ^* YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' }) W; G* q) ^% Z, S5 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 d0 \9 C) G& o' A  H# yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# D: [5 Q4 Z" L- E! |8 O7 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ `, }  h. g- \. Y  S7 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 v7 p* t6 ?8 g) L' w: F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 M: X. |3 F4 d1 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# {4 _: a, F! ?. ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 n, i# d) s2 P, T* z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* g8 d  t2 [' M+ u% H2 C7 B, V9 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ~3 C7 z) b1 S, d* t: }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 O. i" T0 I/ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 [5 }3 _8 _; i/ {# F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 r' A9 U- f, A$ C( V# K9 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 @  k0 Z! E7 ~$ Q9 Q* L$ {<P>你无需担心</P>
( Y. }# _, ?* {2 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ n4 F  K+ l! C9 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; S! M/ t4 k8 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 J* a! {; B- o/ X( w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 @; f+ J; _; c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, R" Z" V6 [" A+ `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# M& i/ r# W' b/ P" V/ N+ g/ a% ?! K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. U2 g0 p, g6 ]8 Z( ~) b: s: S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; T5 |& c3 I/ ]3 W! J7 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, Z# W* s4 Z' E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 j/ a0 N' K% {, j. m# N$ G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- U, L% F1 M" O, e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- y3 W2 d# n. R  n. _$ f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 [. J0 P' l7 J' L, F8 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' }7 I, S# q* P, T% R' ?2 N& b( Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) z/ B; ]9 z- [: i/ P' V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ]. F8 v$ H. Q; ]9 D! G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ w: q8 j' e; P* e" r% x6 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, M. f) r# m6 M9 F" Y* V( F# I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 H5 k0 e9 s& P' Q, b6 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
( n; S. ?0 v- S; s
6 t# T) \# E9 W" @+ x9 J$ ~我请你剖开它
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7 S% Q1 o" s5 z. N, {) @/ X; W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>