【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 L" g6 t0 C( Z/ TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& V$ E- q. v. i+ x2 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# u3 s! p' C) CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 `. z' k& P. N, u/ \/ S; M# RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 y; l/ B) F+ n$ H5 l( R+ sSeeing the sky content with its love
8 ?; ^5 K, P  V! G  S8 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 J; _! E% ~- N0 mYou needn’t fear anything
: H4 B+ @& h, \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( R$ l& ^; Q# cEvery other word you utter is love
! Y$ R/ F% y9 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, j0 e5 ]& K1 S, {. J! p+ ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 {4 l9 l+ F* y, D  F! Y6 W* qI want so much to see inside your heart
* j2 y7 {; r) o, gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 N4 D6 r4 l1 w! A0 c& w' OI regret not dying
  U% L5 u. A( T" ^1 P" L" h6 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 e2 I- ~$ q$ {3 {4 R3 hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* g$ d. L0 K2 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& t4 x$ Z8 v7 Z9 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ]' t  |& n* U% `8 s  ?" @" y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) F. @; Q! ~) k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% J2 @$ n* {5 i& z1 k" w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, N7 c+ ^0 y  B7 F) E+ g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 o$ v& l- t9 ?( G# q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. e. r: M" n7 y6 O$ S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 R" [' w- @: d+ z! I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, V7 F* t7 ~/ L: x6 L- w3 Q. Q) p2 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. [* t/ O! T7 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 S" t0 ?' |2 i% f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 Y* o8 Z6 M4 Q, B+ M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% v$ i# w% w! f7 ^2 b* G5 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% L+ j# r  J* _& I. Z4 i- {4 |* R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# G8 C, S$ k9 O+ R/ O* J: b! M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 i1 y$ K  r3 }4 z4 L$ [4 ?& z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! C! z1 n) K8 t( v! O) r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: Q  q. b: J8 _7 P3 ?" R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% V) H. D' E' R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; Q3 J1 S! t# J' T0 l5 L% p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 S0 c2 u5 t% G6 z( B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, ~" e7 f' J: A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 K& |7 `! U% B" T  [" A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! q& d( w- `" g+ A8 a. w$ x5 }, Z5 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 M) n4 A$ f$ _& o/ z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, U  U$ l: Q& V" h3 c; L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 R  I0 h+ A9 v; _* x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( {3 L0 h0 d3 o! x* b, G' R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 |) _; E, S7 y1 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ ?7 h1 R3 Z, H$ t8 R) u3 u9 N6 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ }( {- k; p6 W  Y+ `! ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. S, M6 C. e/ G! L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& K9 }% d8 `: v! m+ I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ s4 }- P( G" p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. U0 D9 D* q5 |  [2 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>