【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' X6 J+ r; v# P# ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' K$ v* @6 \9 J: Z  j0 p2 I% vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 R# H( B, x4 Q! \$ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! G5 s  |* @, _5 o2 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 {5 U6 R8 c, I6 W+ WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' e" C$ d! T! L& [, JI love you I love you with all my heart
/ E$ n4 c  d3 M# l1 L3 D) BNothing can compare to my love
) c4 i7 X4 m" c& b$ u/ p, x  i: q" BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 I% K& `: g# G0 F+ R: [% tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ G5 {$ q, u9 W6 v! g5 T# gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 m8 K1 S: c1 u4 A1 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" {1 y# }! f# w* }( X, j6 E2 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- ^8 x( t7 B; a. G) ~7 H: wWith such a tongue as yours,
! M8 L" Z9 N6 |0 [4 _% h3 X0 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 B3 N& i6 k7 L3 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# T# o# h9 o! k6 p- H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. q6 x4 K0 _$ g! D9 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 ]4 V; w1 N9 @% q7 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, e, E, j. R& D, v. r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 p' C, _9 R+ I4 ~" D- ], S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. V6 I9 b, B( |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& Y) m) t6 C5 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 C3 N6 B) M' {! b$ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 M  z0 z7 C9 p1 R% a0 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, E9 k. H7 p- [0 n5 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" |7 r+ ]# O: I3 a* ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( C% Q$ c4 i* q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' M. n6 G: ~5 y0 T7 ?) b7 F; g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 C& Z0 y3 S, N) q$ @" {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) N; q! E- ]1 Q; y3 l' L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ o" G9 `4 T0 W+ S$ ^# d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  s! t! Y3 J( J5 O& r' R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, m! c# A3 q1 S! y* z- n% f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 M, K, z* S! \2 E8 H3 t  ~. @6 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% e/ \! {7 I3 W  r- u' I: O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, e3 I! [4 ]* q6 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ ]/ R  m. Y. ^! e- |6 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: I6 i- _4 g/ [) n( M/ b# Z$ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 w* R7 d& ^6 a) S* M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! _: H' q& f5 I- u8 Z' M  x3 I+ h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  h& i. n' |4 x, o. W8 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# m2 u0 Y: }) U1 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 Y% ]) l5 D2 s. ~# }- u" N& ~! V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ L: G0 E% a. {3 T* }/ X  \) ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& \: A  e) L& s& j( X0 h1 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# ]- i9 ^' U! f) e8 A& o) l# i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 D2 u4 E( a% ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 H& u7 D4 b* }. e, l  O% O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 c- X# v: t3 c* b0 Y$ q7 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( ]4 C2 l9 E9 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ D& |8 M- q6 Z2 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: a- |7 z; v& c. [' h# b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: \/ c  V, W" u  i- W: R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ^0 `6 k) d8 b7 X! a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 c) t) F4 ?+ f, v$ A0 _2 X7 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) h7 X; G* {' z! q/ j) {' Q  ?- [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ S% K  R* E2 W: e% D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. I9 G& |4 H% Y; z- z8 z我请你剖开它
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; L/ g; R# Q  f: m( Y9 `6 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>