【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 ~) Y5 k* @/ A+ d6 n. x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 H- \0 Q& H) e. r) KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 `+ R8 a1 d- l( hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& W& i0 T, [( ?  q7 ]1 uWith the moon kissing it every night
6 m7 j- u/ `  ^5 _! b5 DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' e: Q1 t, [. U2 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
4 B( q+ H* M/ r& S6 V2 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ Z  B. X9 C" fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ^! }8 x" Y. L, HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) z! h6 g9 f, @4 N, u% Q0 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( q: q' W( f& g$ YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 E, R! ~% g: B2 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: W- {+ v7 a4 h  W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 h1 P$ V4 `5 m" p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Q* W( i. C2 `2 s6 o5 m0 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ^. l2 T3 J% y2 H$ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, @- c' F; d( u0 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  L5 M! I; d; d+ q: v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& T) @& E& x7 U0 j* v, i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# |; T& }5 j1 i- m+ H7 |$ Z9 j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% v+ A8 |/ s) T, q  Q' J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 c, b& @5 o7 W) w: `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. D! d) z6 q$ {3 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 N% r8 X; P9 \; P+ ~  ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- X; \& Q! v, z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' }% F9 B$ i$ w' _' w2 t- p# a! E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 U+ Z5 Y9 O) a0 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; I6 i' q6 l9 S+ H% n- s! m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ u& R- Z) i. y7 i! O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 C4 ]6 W$ Y& u  B( a- O$ V* h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 e& K7 w, i1 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: F/ Y; m( O2 o/ p  E" t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 z; z. V, }* G8 c3 B# l* D3 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 f4 ?$ W' y# D1 V! h. C- Z! D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( @1 G0 h6 t7 U4 W" c1 p# B/ I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 {5 b0 R! Z& \8 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% V" F- c- k/ K0 p( j0 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 w6 N7 w: q+ w6 _9 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 f% ]; w5 y+ n; d4 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 |) u' ?3 L" N8 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# d9 ~2 [7 A, q/ q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 p( c- ^4 h% l2 Y* o3 S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" i: F4 F0 T+ m6 u, s5 |4 [% q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>