【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 Z4 k" H) f1 {1 M( n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 o4 }) ]+ O8 m  J$ RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; R5 j8 U3 X' oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' _( ~9 J: Q/ }) Y# f% gSeeing the sky content with its love
/ D9 E( e$ I# B# s& m/ o8 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ y6 F5 l; W! l' H+ j+ RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# D5 p% `' R2 h, S& E+ b& QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 n8 o/ X# e. k- C/ N. q' iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 r" ^. |3 ]/ b# T/ y/ X" b# @I want so much to see inside your heart
% V5 J  {$ Z* DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& b: J; j6 y" E6 H' lWith such a tongue as yours,
7 k; A! o* _, Q) j5 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  h( M4 \5 F6 @  qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 r' h4 R9 E; O5 j7 \, H/ o4 `- q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 Z8 `( `& C7 k1 r! U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ q) `( ~/ @* s, T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' q, G' a# Y& e1 o' P7 }( Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% s$ D* E3 @" n$ b  X# ~1 a( t4 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 P3 m$ z' G7 ^" i3 y( M, G, T0 n; ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 l+ A% m8 z4 c* j6 l. @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 n+ j4 ?% a2 }: _2 f* ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 \4 {/ k) v) b9 l" N: h9 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 J6 ?% h* o; y/ x! e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ P9 X0 p  b0 h" l7 T) w! L, Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- {, P# {& ^+ Y  d* d( w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 u0 x  q+ Z7 D$ d5 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 u4 W8 a3 }  Q% A; C3 r9 M0 @& @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 l. G' [, S. N, t8 b! D# \8 g* _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 G2 _% r" P. K' |+ s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ]6 l  ^) W9 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" K* w6 I9 _/ D0 V. B1 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ `9 v, u' M+ N/ g0 `8 a1 s: Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" U+ @; ~7 I% B# s+ n5 u, @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _, m- M( J5 s- w/ p4 @- y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) d7 i! v. E/ u6 l8 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 W# Y6 a' M6 J+ l/ y( z4 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ C! Y# O+ Y# @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# [5 E$ z- b  b% L' Y! v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 {& v  v' g% f" r, A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>