【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; h  [# H/ _7 G( ]0 g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! a5 r6 `( @: E' WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 c; \. D3 Q% D0 b6 q2 u  g2 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 C6 e. Q: X) R$ m4 J$ RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" R1 k4 w  v/ Z1 V7 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, I( m% W: R( {) }$ s# fEvery other word you utter is love
- v$ }1 [1 j( KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' `. c$ E( |1 H% F6 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) q! x9 L6 v7 y3 b- zI’m still filled with fear
0 r1 a" P# G1 {- NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  |5 O/ r1 h/ G0 ]6 B( tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% y% j7 D2 c5 TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% [  S6 I& X0 e7 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( a7 o0 g0 \+ |6 t0 F0 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 e& e# ^5 R) A" b  `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# ?' b! D  m+ T7 W, H' O/ g! h/ W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; U: c6 l9 L8 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 }( B3 X' v9 W5 e& E/ t% `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 j; G. t* x1 ^; R$ ]; T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' K. f/ z& |0 u9 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
$ @$ y6 J. Q4 H5 B) |+ t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ n0 J( \* U: j( [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ j* b* U2 U7 c3 N: i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 p8 V7 Y# c1 j' T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 N/ |) @% p8 c" Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ W5 L/ q1 l& J1 V8 k$ J6 r1 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% |* {3 T; c2 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ |8 {6 n. P* x7 ]: f8 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; \1 D& Z5 G- E& r' O( w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 n. Q8 M' p" s) q7 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# U8 z. Y# x7 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( Z4 ?! H1 Y( Q) `  e9 b' d( ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! w* u' l2 V! _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& \: u0 F& O5 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" U% T2 G- T1 x: B6 |4 T3 o5 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  ?0 {: T1 b2 S0 z- e0 x( z1 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. T- {. t3 Q" s" N# ?& E# Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" X. I  t  o& h+ I4 o" g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ _, b2 M$ r2 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* C/ x: \, x, Q3 [2 b' b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. b- b8 }6 S. r$ o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>