【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 K6 r6 |9 e  c+ H. d, y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 @/ }8 C! [: _3 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! j! k8 @5 w  HWith the moon kissing it every night
% C; ?$ r- W5 i& q, F7 Y6 LSeeing the sky content with its love
7 U4 O5 U: b2 M  bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# X8 o) e% H" @% x& i' I8 V! NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 r  b. @9 ^; c9 CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# x5 K) w+ N# w2 t4 s/ MNothing can compare to my love
* P0 f$ c7 B- [4 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" l5 i, s1 q" |2 x7 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 m9 R* `) R' O8 C! _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 A4 t) c8 m0 W1 l& i: y/ c2 D4 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: z3 o8 J4 ?# O/ `! m; Z5 V7 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 o& B- E) c6 E$ ~9 N: z0 @1 }) Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 D, b+ t) m/ D* c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, S  L( W1 M1 T2 P# `: }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' U* V9 A/ d9 \% N& H' f, q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* V4 l5 q/ R1 w) S, @. x7 Z2 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, s% a4 w' ]1 H9 k  F: l2 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# N4 ~! t; ~6 [6 a9 P; G& E6 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. ]7 @% B9 f( S; ?: z. h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# `$ ]& y2 R* m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( s: O! X$ a% `2 `% N+ c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' e  A* e5 p; m- P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! {9 z* c' [0 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) O- e2 r& P' V# M1 u* M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 M2 w' j  e* t; b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* _/ h: Z' r4 a$ z5 r6 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ w) S! a$ u, n9 D% ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; p3 m2 \' j; Z- ]9 i! M  }6 b) V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( @% k7 Y, ]' j1 d4 s) X) j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ]+ U. c% g4 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 V  Q  L/ M/ X8 ]; C1 u# W( o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; j: b' s# h: E. s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ^+ t' T. H: r0 l6 @. n/ D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 |9 l7 g; Q# l( A7 i0 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
- w/ i, w0 h. u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 I- R0 W( F, q" ?: A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ~9 Y! T# \  ]) @# S/ K2 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* C$ B' b5 e1 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 ?' c4 U2 B, i6 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& N8 ^) B; g) }3 Q- ]' [9 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 |; s( _# M/ p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# V. y8 F& o3 @* A, |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" L, X8 K# ^: X! i! I$ t3 `( y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ R2 _3 v  G9 o* T( e% t7 i& O! G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>