【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* ~  {6 l) C8 d3 t& F歌词我附在后面。
4 F, M  i  l4 H$ D" Q2 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; g& m5 z: ^5 Z9 N9 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% [: b# |: ]7 [) Q# ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ]/ E6 @: Z' h  d: V4 S9 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  b* L8 Q: @) _1 x3 Y; XSeeing the sky content with its love
' q; R" y% O: DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, c. m- M/ X7 |8 s! I6 I7 O) jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" R3 s. W- Y2 NI really want to know just how much you love me
& A7 j9 Y2 l# u) k% W) P) P$ xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* L8 {3 v* y  I: D. TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! f6 @# u( P( qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 Z: Z. N) v! L" P' oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% e# M) K2 M) X( UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 x. f; p9 t! n8 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. E3 o5 ]/ W. ~2 G. h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) F0 b& e5 _  `+ T! }8 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# j4 U+ w. h% F- q: f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 ~0 G! n( M! D0 L) f2 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ~1 k/ q3 }2 Y& K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 b' |, U9 A/ Z+ x$ b7 {% i) b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! v9 O- M: W8 C9 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, @1 Z- G3 R0 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 G' V  t1 Z( F" y9 G) W/ r9 z; C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) t4 D; o* [0 i# ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& d9 O4 N. D* X. ?( g# L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( d$ U- {8 ^* T) Y9 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% [6 H; Y7 v1 h# P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ A! r  I: x, k3 A4 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& O/ q" s3 f/ `. B  R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) E; [" g( Z& _: B8 O  S: ~1 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 j- Q0 Q; H6 D6 _- h, ~& w5 _5 {9 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# u7 h' I. t( S" w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, z. M  e: q1 \2 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" {& w  V! w' ^5 \7 u! h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ K. ~- {. h: ^/ t9 I5 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ e4 L  d0 y( G; A) x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 A& {0 @! V! j4 R/ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- N2 w1 t5 C9 ^% `/ y4 l. b# \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ s+ ^6 L( P9 N  \- y3 x5 i9 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>