【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& u% m; O) q. Z9 P2 E歌词我附在后面。
. P+ e7 v8 C; E) YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ `$ W% v& u3 ?. J4 l( _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ F7 B4 J! o8 C: I# ?) @; x, gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! t! H2 n; R( Y* \+ [4 d8 c5 H' W6 I( |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 r, A, i# C6 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% u+ E1 g; B& q. A2 W# xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: t* v% g, \: I& Q2 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  P6 X8 o1 B# X  ?+ [! t: U8 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! l: o6 o) V% V  @7 B+ I8 f, ~0 c& sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 _% J- ^5 M& {. f' gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' y6 S. ^9 H; q0 U* |1 c6 x. BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ G0 U$ Y( p  r1 C, sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, F; C1 E, F7 x3 `+ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 W3 M1 l8 a) M  j6 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% |" w3 a8 [5 j9 ]; f# D/ k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* c' |2 |5 k$ ?. Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: K; V. i% m& k5 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' p) m; ^6 H& U7 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 b) u$ z  k# d1 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' M- C$ l2 p8 `, s) s  v2 i# \- U  t) i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) Q, I+ J% f* y( [7 G6 V; h! Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' b0 j& b/ I* @; E* N' k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ J+ H, ^+ }, z/ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Q1 H! A' C: w' C) B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 A/ t0 @- S: q( C# ]+ Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% |7 L% ~+ `6 M& n. R. W, L2 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 [1 W* Z! g- b# ]- T1 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 F" i' Y/ d! N& l  ~/ a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 Y1 `; T+ _$ v1 w: P0 a3 b& `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 M- O' [' v& ?# z2 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' R6 V- m0 ^0 B. X/ ]0 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; P! d/ G, M$ A: K. V5 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: Y) Q/ ~; C# \4 W+ P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 J. `) W& N$ p7 S1 D9 g5 v/ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ S  w& }* J0 h  _. V9 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  \+ [/ p8 l) _# w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 a, C' J9 B% c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ G; U. T- ?5 V2 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>