【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 \2 R$ T6 F# K9 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- _) M/ S  |: N7 n) O1 X% ~# S1 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ?. Y( r2 A8 S+ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, s% X& V! @! f) n9 v2 @1 b( ^9 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 e. P2 ]% F% z7 U) aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  D9 T& B  _4 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 I: s7 S1 O  o! d/ BEvery other word you utter is love
/ @, L& W1 [; tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. n$ R! E. O- w* u$ b: @; RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* D7 W7 X* W" R) Z3 II want so much to see inside your heart
: D  A# m; u5 T. r- UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 L: H8 T' A- [& H1 q. W$ y3 CI regret not dying
5 b' K9 {2 E& [% A% E4 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 {. @( u+ J" I' Z" W& O/ p* m/ OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 S# W9 e" n) Y+ p7 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 U) e: ^8 B0 Y/ P6 wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. x; r6 @* m7 T5 u. s8 v+ N  o0 F
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 H& J5 U  s' _3 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! {! p, _3 t; P  t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; J$ ~2 D9 |1 v: Y3 P- L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 s& J3 X4 ]) P& O7 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* b, S  S) M$ \( f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" w5 n) ]+ Z9 I' W; [+ t3 J% Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, |* R: }3 t6 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. d  F) d8 H1 J; K7 d7 `- V  `) Q1 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 g5 C8 K( i1 D0 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% w9 G/ Q5 w) Z" ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  Z; j& J" m6 Q! j<P>你无需担心</P>
! @3 v$ @$ ?- @! Z; b1 Z" S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% u  O( n, I0 ~+ a  f6 D3 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" e  V  p9 B% z8 ^# V. h+ N: _( }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  t7 ?9 j& o# {* C# N' B. Z2 E# G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- X% F# E' J* i8 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. w0 b1 g" P4 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* Q4 }$ X( x$ K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 b  D+ Y; ~$ [# j# s8 ~: i) x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 n2 K4 G2 s: O+ \) s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' e, L* L3 V2 }9 r# O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 h6 K3 z8 M) i3 J  o8 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 A4 O5 r7 v; Y( `9 c# `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 v+ F6 X: y! |5 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# P! p- R. k# P& c& m& d! R) t9 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 J* U* i# a; g; ]' M, r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ Y7 x' n5 h( ?+ x/ W; W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 q1 _; T9 d' y/ ]7 B- P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>