【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 V2 Q- a/ S6 C9 v# U) Y4 u歌词我附在后面。
% k6 N- d! w* [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! E; J( ]/ T$ u- ]( d+ o" pThe sky is happy down to its soul
' i3 I2 b. S9 N8 C6 [. @5 ~1 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 [- r3 g0 D" i- p& z( b* rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% w- w- p6 H% t, ?I love you I love you with all my heart
6 ~, w- Z: F0 F# VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 `& n/ u0 Q  N$ q& zI want so much to see inside your heart
5 Q. ]1 A- Y1 P' X" {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 o) \0 f# h  [. CI’m still filled with fear
7 X5 a7 b+ e+ _, BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 j( \4 L; y! q# g" V: VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 I7 ]* c0 ^* L3 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, p7 @8 [$ ?9 W, [0 b3 X" `, `) P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 K/ m4 f& w) \( Z% u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; s9 H: H# i7 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# R. l3 s- O- G8 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ O* m% a) L9 M( j; W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 ^% {9 V  P' q9 u; G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) T4 h- a/ L+ Q7 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X& c/ q& ]* ~  m! g1 Z/ G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 S* ~% ~* P: ]: L% O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  `% t0 k! |3 V; j2 k- I/ l; }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ ~& u% {4 R5 f* H2 ~+ {& c1 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* X+ H+ V" p: U0 n4 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  z2 y! D; `; _: [4 b& r) O( [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  J: }' T) W( {+ Q% R( t1 k9 f. T, t- B7 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 k/ C5 t0 A; j1 c% B% K! Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: I: ~, J* W, w1 B+ e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 u, |! i- ?0 b% Y, b9 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, ^5 v7 E9 S3 n7 [7 ]7 Q$ X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( @& I; M: u8 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. g) F3 v* H' V% ?1 {. F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ X: K0 G) T. ~8 ?; ?- e4 h9 }" A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 p  f9 O/ t, U, g2 q/ F2 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 ^$ w% ?; D8 `; o  e$ j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# J% [8 p, ?, @  f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 w- v0 \7 s  t6 ?4 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 A1 K6 v1 w1 f5 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Y. P1 z4 n+ {. n% u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 T) }& q( p9 _1 f1 P5 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 Q, u+ ~8 k; @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>