【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 k1 P$ N* b: ]9 z4 H) c. B  IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 g1 M  a( s6 s3 T6 B% wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& y0 P! r, F' xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ P( Z- }6 J2 r9 n1 r7 @# Q' lThe sky is happy down to its soul
* i/ i- z, L7 x0 y. eWith the moon kissing it every night
% U- S) N# w; B# T) t. c! w; tSeeing the sky content with its love
9 _, m: @% E! h$ TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) J3 y, Q  [' z/ qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 i: v& ^+ Y6 |9 \5 uEvery other word you utter is love
4 M# Y( L, h4 p# `+ `3 h# aI really want to know just how much you love me
6 y. Y0 [$ G8 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. J+ K* Q/ C$ s( Y  b9 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ @% A, D; n* u' U+ n. N6 e5 M& @5 MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& B9 f" i& m3 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, G* C8 f+ G( G+ X+ J! Y1 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ q- w# e; O) `# m6 Y# A) U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. \% P, ?' C" h0 Q0 E) T: i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" k3 @( |1 m  I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 F* u/ f9 b( p& u9 o3 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 t" K+ U  ^. o# b' f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: y0 A# N7 J9 {' d' O: J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 c5 q- `) x6 E7 v2 O' b7 [! G3 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; d; \( c- ~8 R# n, h; _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 e/ R: m' B+ \( d. k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 K9 m  h  j4 x& @) ^. J; b2 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 T" t; a1 K% p$ g6 B6 _4 Z' B# P$ U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 }" A6 c' L, Z* P. I% T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. Y$ r: u: p9 N' ^; v5 W1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ]$ \+ K% v2 h% L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ `* C8 y1 o2 ]9 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; l3 M0 u. i0 g5 U9 U7 y' T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# }# r" c( F7 e2 j5 i' k<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 j; {3 }7 w8 l5 Z: U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* o% I6 J3 b7 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( b" _! ]3 r- g1 a% s* H! i% g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ P! `% a0 e" I' f/ h, W; F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' W: R/ j! [& V! g1 h5 Y" ~2 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. C  E" O1 c) D8 k4 F6 T0 p; P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- ^3 Z6 O# X( B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; I- t8 c* e, b我请你剖开它
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& Q7 Y0 U: Y: Y& ^3 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>