【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ Q! M* r/ v) @- ~- q, HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! e4 J! I8 I) O; Q" V: |4 y$ yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. J7 b+ E$ v' }: P; bWith the moon kissing it every night
. C  B% f+ ~4 @7 ]1 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
: Z# s. ~% ~9 W9 E5 x! RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" h; B2 V' E# s1 L! @7 ]! PEvery other word you utter is love
  l2 ?8 O2 E5 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 r/ P  `4 J* Q" {3 [% TNothing can compare to my love
9 O& E5 u" C8 ]9 p! h, W) a$ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. n8 M0 q! O0 E4 n! \, cI want so much to see inside your heart
/ _+ I/ T; f4 E2 y) f4 L( bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ^( j0 M, A3 J# x5 O5 \I’m still filled with fear
; U2 u* H: Z* i9 F, u  v/ IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 k1 R% R; N$ w2 K. Z0 HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) u+ m$ P! v, N9 `% p$ N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' i7 j, L$ m7 ]  y+ ^4 x" u3 f0 O! @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% F2 d2 C6 w# Y( S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ q+ k- q& ]6 \8 B% O6 n2 x1 S" Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" V/ U: h1 _2 ^9 J4 q; l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ k$ m! o4 t) ~$ y% J/ r2 ?: ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- i3 l$ R( f! v4 T9 F( |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( r5 k" V- V" @0 B' p0 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ?( `6 P1 Q3 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ A$ Q. H! A+ e' B) ~' k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 I" L* R+ a/ g$ q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 k" c; a+ L2 |* f# r. J0 ~+ k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ F9 K) l5 ?6 ]5 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 R$ c0 ~% x4 {8 A3 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 \5 B$ h; E/ f! Q4 Y% _/ L9 x* b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 i  x0 |" m+ ~+ `& ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 O% H; k- h: ~5 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( J5 ^" P2 Q+ z  y( t$ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; [" Z) x/ r- V( ~% \( D! S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( I1 e. \1 b! o" r( |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( Z+ {% W1 m; Y$ z( H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 }3 Q5 }5 T  `9 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. O2 e2 W6 \% R6 }* I" A8 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ p3 F; M' T. p4 g) s/ w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 A$ B- h4 Y# l- G2 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  C# x7 V7 n% Y) r) C7 V" V  h) S9 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 G5 p- q$ c: ^( x, r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 f  g8 r- X/ ^& l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 Z  U; W: B' g+ w5 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. w" K$ h1 d" F; a2 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, J# F, _" K" j' g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>