【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ S0 j. `8 C# z4 \8 W6 G* _6 U歌词我附在后面。
# B4 X- |0 N, ^3 G4 ]8 }8 s3 |% lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: `7 Q+ k' w1 B; Q! z9 @6 x; bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( A0 g( z5 r6 F: Z" G/ I4 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 _) z/ ]+ ^9 v2 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 G( F+ {) X) n0 r" w- f" p5 UI really want to know just how much you love me
, z$ u* Z8 w$ P: ~2 l$ oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 u/ O& x" z3 ^3 c4 e. z! k" h, JI want so much to see inside your heart
; ]' ~, ^7 }; f7 _: HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* W+ ^+ g. o: a+ @1 L% I* N" ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 [9 L# v2 T5 D* z7 w8 @# w. V0 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  D" l3 U" X. o# j8 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. h! i# m  P( F# V1 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 f% ?+ N7 a; j% q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! c; O! w+ M' X4 I# v& p! j3 y- h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  y" ]1 t3 Z$ Q! K! k, H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Q8 B6 f2 x: _! T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* `1 v; N( P; M* E& E; N& d  _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 @( d5 Y; n+ y' `0 n<P>你无需担心</P>
# z7 S+ r; n7 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 j, m8 J" s9 m9 ^6 b1 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 c' _  b8 f/ w6 `. Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! [, W8 _2 w2 K8 m" F2 @! M: D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& @, P! M7 h7 W: i% k' I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: P& f3 {0 e# U* J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ R0 s" u0 _: N' `) G8 a9 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 A- Q) n: J) j9 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 V" g( N* K# Y9 O# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  b) n8 A. ~: j9 ?% @% ?$ J! A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& F! Y. f4 f1 o- B) {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* o/ M/ ~$ {. G7 {1 L7 |, [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# H7 |+ ~7 m  F. ~/ I! O* x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, ~" n! w, D$ C0 m% U我请你剖开它
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; I& E+ ]* l3 K8 q# x% H+ m& f: n' g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 d% h' }2 o; Z8 R/ z  j" S% q9 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>