【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ ]8 c, q5 {) s+ f6 U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 d: b" G) p5 X, _5 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. T+ D5 g  s, `* ]The sky is happy down to its soul
2 L8 e+ C9 Y( z# l4 AWith the moon kissing it every night
: r" g8 M$ j% i% [Seeing the sky content with its love
. f/ c" [6 w: s+ }* N/ G6 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% k& |9 n" M  W9 y. i5 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 Z3 L$ E5 D$ z4 u5 V6 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( w# ?  }/ H* Z! m$ vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ S9 x9 y/ y+ }# w2 B+ DI want so much to see inside your heart
1 ?# e, n+ l! R( p$ ^( p2 i# eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% ^4 `# ~" F" ^" o" MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% m) V* x$ o1 f; II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 C' M( Y# H$ aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! }, n: h% y/ A) y# ~7 g, rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" L& |8 K+ i, j5 Z; v* }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 b  [4 Z; d: C$ }. x# f/ U. f) k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( f: Y& G& v; m4 {- |" M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ ]' z- Y" n8 T, L6 T# v- X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! s7 c* t9 Q4 O0 Y5 U+ x, i- ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. s: u" R; G8 s6 K0 g5 I4 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  t6 d! f2 O( \3 u' T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ q- d1 p" c: a! r; m. n; U. _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! i$ [3 l# R/ E) q" H8 ?& s6 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 O1 ]7 N) J3 A! r0 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 M/ Y" A- P1 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 X2 G6 F0 V* `0 ?; b. j/ R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 s5 V  d2 {- O) ~7 Z& \$ J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. J' J: M: J7 A+ e/ }* d+ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ `& f. k, P: |  b- [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 [2 |$ [! o& W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ h! q) S4 w7 ^% p# p6 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ z  a, C7 g1 X  K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ m7 j6 W! T  q) _$ d; A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, Q& b9 x- h7 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% c& G: z6 @1 D5 L& T( ]9 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 D! i  ?  @" e) [1 r9 F% Q8 g9 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- _# _3 q- j0 G; k- i* x<P>I regret not dying</P>
: h3 |5 C9 g. X" w, T: b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ Q0 h0 Z8 e, H3 ^, P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- d: V4 [; B. o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ r4 o1 i. Y5 }  J4 j% T+ N$ S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 z1 u1 F$ A$ b( d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 ^7 q5 C2 {" {& y+ o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( z$ E# t2 [4 o# N( e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 _! W) q8 w# C! U; x3 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>