【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% x/ B! J* i$ U% D歌词我附在后面。
% F" P, E  k# W# r# g: A( K1 s8 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* A" s3 c0 |: p/ O3 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 |* Z- J) N0 g" P7 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 P2 ?) f1 T6 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* Y* V, u( b; G2 n4 j: b1 WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" l5 i8 K" ]! M; q4 e, m) T6 W. sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% P" A4 I2 b# ~! K- c0 SI love you I love you with all my heart
/ P) u% n6 S5 y4 _4 G, nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 r' \* ?$ n, O2 b; f6 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 L+ n; t* F- ^; [$ PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 @: F8 j) V5 L: ~$ y7 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& N) K1 ?8 v- X% D  @% z0 R  i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ K# F0 F# {4 K. w; @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 T3 @+ ]3 y2 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; E) N/ H4 @$ ~+ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 `7 b" G2 V+ o. i5 t) V1 W% x9 P7 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( D3 i; ]" e5 M+ D6 a9 g: e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. e7 i+ ^* C# y* w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 z: ^9 {! P, x7 b, p, d( o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ K: {( P' A+ c. k0 x$ O1 g<P>你无需担心</P>
( Y& t1 _( E1 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 `7 v# E# F+ }/ g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" _; C) ]6 a4 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; c( U. D4 o8 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ C% X. T, _1 m& ^2 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ ^: `( j3 T" j6 P* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 y) L; Z# M- C1 O4 _9 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 v( v( |1 h% r! _9 n; \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* ?( ^1 a9 P0 u" R7 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 K% s' u: I( @: N) {5 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' p( m! Z% \) r% @% |/ j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# a& R$ P! p7 W# y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. w" Y! c# i$ w6 g" T4 S3 S4 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ q+ Z: ?  M9 Y5 Y$ i, M9 c3 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! L% a; r3 {7 V# n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ e4 I2 [$ o8 e, }, H9 Q( [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% d1 e$ W6 j; V3 c; v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ G6 K0 @- a( y! n; x+ k1 e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>