【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- V, ^7 x9 e! H. T歌词我附在后面。
- S: ?$ r7 U( |The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ T8 i) n& K; e  b, gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  h4 |! y( E( AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# E2 ~& j$ J' d- ]8 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 i/ e, _* c/ k0 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; A& i( O. t& c( D) I6 s, Z( zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. z0 g0 x' [9 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) G- ^! W2 c5 R! _. R/ J7 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 w0 q0 ?+ u/ N  R. l0 Y7 d1 _I want so much to see inside your heart
9 @# G* x/ Q- B" U- U# TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 A( O* l. c5 ZI’m still filled with fear
' D) i2 r  y1 W' h9 B# HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" D2 s3 K/ m4 Q' u1 D" w8 S) O2 Q# KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( _, s" F2 g5 X  W5 X- }With such a tongue as yours,
/ O# x! e$ N( X* I9 ^% j# KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 _' a4 P5 I" F: [7 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- Z1 M" }) G: Q; L2 S8 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- w% x  L1 P( @/ r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" q# k2 E2 ]' l: f: _! j0 y* A, Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( t2 m- X- d3 o! X! a5 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) I1 @( x  p" n8 ~' E2 _5 O5 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 |: d0 S2 B, M) H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; r) C$ X1 i0 B9 r" a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: C$ V+ c! H8 J3 l. g2 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ O4 y, m1 o. P9 W9 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. D7 \- y: S6 T: {: [: ]2 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# S' H, y2 ?, x3 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# c' J3 F$ q/ a$ }5 n- B& l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  v# [% w: q! ?+ }9 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& [" U9 Z6 C* D0 f: @9 I5 u: i/ l& [0 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 D% c, \) {4 Z& C& I5 Q2 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; V3 f7 f1 F- K& p" @: p  ]0 C8 J/ n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: a) L4 t5 ^  Q8 F% q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 ^" S3 F+ e- y; z1 L( Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 J* E+ J( w' K1 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 b  F+ H- n( b( b9 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) o  z$ T* t* p* s/ {  W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. _5 \7 y+ h, P# r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* w: S1 z& ]; N# ], U1 m& {9 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 L2 r% F7 ~4 n* g! X: ]! Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>