【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ v* r0 Z" D' ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# Q# W) q9 v6 a! I4 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( }3 W8 a: R2 m7 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  n) U* Z* d& ?  O4 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ e$ H1 k% k" w  Y( k; e  KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 y( |1 a, s  }5 t1 `1 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 z5 m) K3 O6 ]1 CI love you I love you with all my heart
$ E: R* X3 U' b$ p1 {2 J5 ]  T/ d5 QNothing can compare to my love
1 ^; t6 @- H; r+ p" @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ^& ~* d6 r9 Y: u$ YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- q3 J2 j$ W8 q) HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* n0 F$ H: z2 l+ i3 U0 h7 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 x( F: q. A4 V3 i) c& y" P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ S' f% X) F& Y. G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* h# l7 C) l/ |& R5 F4 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ q! B9 _* y2 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: J! k/ K1 r- l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 i( w4 e' {5 \2 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 L) n* X6 u2 G. N* g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 j) B7 q; \- b. w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: i) {4 _' A4 D# x+ J6 Z9 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" g: {6 W3 _& a: L. ]* K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) A5 Q2 L* ~& z/ L* S( Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% k+ ?) V" J# e7 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 Q& m2 B9 z0 g( m0 z% J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' Y+ c# e1 s/ p+ S' `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Q" ]) d! R% g! [/ T0 O3 _$ y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 I. x# m) j: t6 |: z% j7 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" x' C' c  L7 W5 P% D, Q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>