【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! y) a4 ^5 \$ ?7 k: ?3 I. i歌词我附在后面。
2 @( Q* J& o/ w# y; _9 h, \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 m1 z- L. w# G1 s# t' f' [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) R) h0 t' ~1 F& _1 I; Y8 u3 U& EWith the moon kissing it every night
# j% G2 C9 k  M* s  J+ NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, R2 i$ K- m% XYou needn’t fear anything
1 Y& S2 d" T! S- _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* w, F" o& d. g% i7 @6 ~- WEvery other word you utter is love
3 t/ ~" z  X2 m: {# ~+ r# l& oI really want to know just how much you love me
9 M, b; S2 P6 E5 jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ f$ _6 b) b, F  P. f; }! eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 Q: E8 \9 ~" G4 o( K8 O' WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; q8 v; a6 q; l' M  EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 Q3 ^' G( v: S5 q% QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 x2 |3 ?7 m) l/ R2 R3 a- H: PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 C/ W0 a/ v$ X& P. v. D% K* x* L' E% W' X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. y/ O6 r* x( `7 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" b9 H- ^5 ?- R6 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 Z. L5 r3 i) O# P8 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' @$ }! a1 ?  A' @; k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 v6 E$ n/ @$ D( Y: [* C+ K4 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' ?+ _$ O4 I7 B* i) E% I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 m. F1 W% L: E* i: }7 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 x. b; v6 K& a& c6 |7 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, G) R1 I6 i& w9 v6 U) Q% [( V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% W) l8 H2 T  @) M  F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- ^0 z% R$ }# i7 x2 |6 q7 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 B& ]2 f( l. i" w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ q8 g! d# j( `7 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" f. c3 G: `; u, h" J% X2 ]3 A) ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ T$ J* V% r& |* b" Z6 x2 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ]/ i9 i0 e/ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" |- I9 `" F  O( S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; w: g! v4 \! n2 p1 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& [" _$ [% T; J$ Q0 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- k! m5 v/ Z( k* m) }8 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: x1 @, o' l2 i% c/ F7 P% r$ P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ F$ k" f2 \; E/ N' S1 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 R$ b- t% h, `: M$ |( h2 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 R- x* |9 D% ~- i+ u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 x* T" `& |" K! {' n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
1 K% G3 b/ f* a7 v9 p
我请你剖开它
. J! T& [$ O* Y/ m- K2 ^1 K
/ o& q7 P/ ^2 z2 O/ i* T! ?+ g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>