【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

: f' S: w/ l. W- K& b8 u<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


3 P* H* g3 ^" [6 h1 o- K歌词我附在后面。
8 z* [- [% w* s9 R4 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
% I8 g/ Q" x) z* U( Z% x' g' K# MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( G8 T8 t8 l5 K7 t" q2 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 Q3 B/ @" J. h# ?' |3 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& B# n# m( s4 [/ [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ T& C, U) @5 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' K( P: x% `% G! x; KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; M, b' b: E; C+ a4 n6 s! y) MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ L" }0 t+ {" D' B# m% II’m still filled with fear
2 f9 a) ?6 ~. h4 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 [) [  |2 ~: Q( k; HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 V- E5 s. X8 ]$ P* b# \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 A! a8 K+ e7 p( f8 E6 M# b# ]7 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 p1 H/ C, |" J9 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 x8 @3 B5 p6 {2 i# k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- C$ G# ~* t: ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& M, ]3 N* R0 m9 x% n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ }0 z+ b- G4 Y3 i. m' }! n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* L) f" P# G8 C# Y2 Z4 f6 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, n  }, S( N( H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% l/ T- T/ x3 [# \0 s, I5 f) \% q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 s: b9 b$ R' z! O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' g$ O8 C" P; t1 p  k' l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 |4 y  m3 J6 S$ [<P>你无需担心</P>
  Y& N9 ]6 ~* z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* _2 W$ u  t& J5 R8 X0 W6 B7 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ [( W3 u+ J% i8 F  B( h! Y2 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 b( v  i- Z7 G6 A1 n- h- _! N% N4 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 c/ q+ e/ g) r, m2 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. v0 E' A6 n' v+ Y  `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) ]; A4 k, H: e$ s/ J! f3 U: {  m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 _6 q) D8 R4 K3 `8 p7 }8 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 e; G0 l2 N" P5 I0 [* p& W+ s% [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 Q' a) Y; @- {' Z2 T* Z, z: U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! t8 v; _. F, h2 d% G( J: [0 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- @5 m) D9 \$ Q+ |3 @! U8 R1 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 V% ~/ U  W6 {4 w' V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& x8 x; r1 R  W/ R( f<P>I regret not dying</P>
- c, \6 d6 Z- Q, q& O! [7 r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 Z% P/ d. _& W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ v; E! |4 C' d: S/ W7 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* x; t. f) d1 W' h3 w' K3 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( c- \3 c3 o, ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( A& _+ X4 q. h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Z) t) g* z! \: f* E5 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 t7 y2 W: q3 i6 X$ {8 A! c0 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, i) _# n1 J( X  W9 }  V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
5 h  {6 w' Q2 O
我请你剖开它

% ]" A* U" l3 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>