【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. }" q+ {, `3 c8 i歌词我附在后面。
3 J9 Y1 i* j8 F8 G6 t1 S9 w, g+ D7 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. Q! G4 b5 K2 o. u) b6 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 i4 }9 x5 x; q5 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 Y8 m# k+ h3 D1 ~$ ?+ B; bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 _8 g0 d2 K% y2 D: z' sThe sky is happy down to its soul
" `5 U. c. {0 N0 c2 v  D+ wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 q0 ~- |4 O! w  yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! H* n$ {' I7 m; H8 l" g" i, t" u2 REvery other word you utter is love
' r2 y' T- I/ a2 c8 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ `6 z% v0 q( K* z+ s; z% fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 Y+ e' g; F% {2 I' l' Z# z! hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" `3 N4 J+ d0 f% \+ n- Y% bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, w% v& z2 q1 X: EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( A- O. _, v: G) J( }! kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 f+ Q) ^4 p& J5 c9 G9 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. H  ~) f- M/ {5 ~6 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& H* U% C0 c* v4 F4 @) ~& b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% x7 \% p5 |5 i5 |+ f7 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) f/ A. v3 b5 j/ W+ g% L1 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- }: ^: r; y" |. S6 `7 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. h" d+ t9 z4 i+ x+ X/ H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ ]$ S9 k9 ~% {2 n9 J  M6 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ]' G6 S% ^5 j" t8 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# J1 @6 v0 w3 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 D, E* j5 z1 \% y4 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 y, j  f/ @6 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 l( _7 _8 z4 D5 i! s<P>你无需担心</P>
* g, `& f( a! d" `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 w0 t/ W0 g; b, P. W# l3 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 d9 o7 v( G1 C- v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" e- p8 o$ p1 ?* y3 Z+ l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! M: Q2 O2 s+ i/ d8 G, {' i/ ]6 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" T; z9 ?* D) l/ S( S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ O7 L2 e  p/ D9 i* L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 F$ f. e7 S- U! j  q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# }' d! C0 p7 |0 R" {8 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ [* L: g$ ~1 R3 V6 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 `/ `2 j0 X9 L- }; A9 ]7 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- a7 }/ Z! A* v( s, C5 u* q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 _( j  H% c" F: Z% F8 n0 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 i* c/ R  k- r, J  G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 J4 j2 C) k, N* T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% k3 U2 B  k5 B" C- g7 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* k" t% b+ Z9 U1 \, z8 o; Q, \3 `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ G. U2 s: q5 j7 P8 c* N3 H我请你剖开它
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' s/ O; {7 N2 j7 x; T; K* J' o! c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>