【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) S/ [; P7 q0 m6 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ s' O; s/ h2 b* P0 R, aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, J' t* k, s! L) J4 D; jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 H, B6 G8 k" Z7 J( J; o" o: w& c! nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% ~2 X" B8 }; e) \2 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 F6 ]4 y# I: b; |! `Every other word you utter is love
, |) |' q; |9 e! a: mI really want to know just how much you love me
( G5 r# M+ y( O8 e# O3 f) w6 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; N$ m& {; c, @, G" HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 E; X6 @9 B) @$ nI want so much to see inside your heart
8 `$ Q  u1 j  i/ S8 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) R. q, h+ K2 U0 k% F2 T3 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# k* v0 b) z, D3 y; |/ zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) V5 U5 D0 i0 CWith such a tongue as yours,
- o- C2 y& I) uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 n3 @; a9 k" C$ O% V5 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" g. ]9 i- L3 P$ u3 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, @8 v, ^. A3 N' c1 L% M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 f+ f) L1 F* [( J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" x: ]9 n% T9 C% G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* O7 P& U+ O. T6 j* P' ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 m  u5 W9 V/ R  U/ |* J& I2 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( \2 |; C6 a% o<P>你无需担心</P>
5 N2 c% w- y" v6 D3 m: `- L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 J: N9 y' s, [$ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 F; c7 h2 L+ Y7 H- k; r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 Y; p$ F* ?9 X+ s8 I) X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. `' p& i  x! z3 R6 I0 j1 k6 u: S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 z' M% I2 N5 Y/ O* e# _. P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 A( x7 I* t7 _" V; F2 x+ J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& v7 g- {+ U# w8 _& B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- n4 A) U8 S3 s7 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 Y% `* u5 d# }% j1 E8 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- V( w8 `/ c6 _5 q+ S: f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( [5 t6 x+ O( Z/ U8 F( _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 T) I4 }  W# X3 w' Z* }% n* h' S9 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) J7 L/ z/ q; |9 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ g9 T# S8 F3 i! ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; ~. z5 g7 M$ Y8 A6 A8 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' U' ]8 [4 `+ p: h$ G! T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- G6 v* F& t$ `! ?# l4 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 p: |6 J$ Q4 Y& i$ F! C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>