【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 u5 `$ T+ _6 ~! E3 c; w6 r歌词我附在后面。
: p7 S* U% X0 d5 s( Z& dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 w2 y: x9 |( O' l$ RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& a2 q- [+ b  OWith the moon kissing it every night
! P! B; j) |/ F4 d( C; cSeeing the sky content with its love
( [$ R* X+ X/ I+ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ }- k9 H5 M$ C$ tYou needn’t fear anything
* A% W2 @6 P% b$ O& N5 ?9 O$ @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: K# [% {) l% v/ A% hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 E+ b. I3 k: S4 O# j" Y) n# jI love you I love you with all my heart
: ]$ l, l# J" Z! I/ @5 a. UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ {8 n( [; F, B* a9 ^; |' jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 M7 I: G: M3 u. E/ rI’m still filled with fear
0 f  r+ ^% y/ i6 o! ]+ SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 q$ H0 a5 V1 \. h/ A8 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ^& J- G) k- q" z7 j3 \With such a tongue as yours,
  r, C* ~& o6 J! m* a$ e; ~/ HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* o5 b+ ^  F2 H2 f- URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# l( z8 @  A- {3 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Q6 J7 v7 {3 [% ~6 v! D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 U, j* ~; @( _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( b8 Z4 K* p0 }0 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, `0 e7 f: R- T9 f. f% \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 }6 I* V$ A9 @# l/ r  w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  O- P% D  T4 t+ h. ^8 C0 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# o0 U% L& l' F9 T0 M, j* {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ n$ ^5 b+ w; r6 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 `( s  m) }) W$ S& B, |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, S" _" R8 M  D8 q. J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ J: i+ j# H! z. P6 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. Z1 a0 A- d2 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 i" {4 F# |. r- a; Y+ `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, }, L$ I, \( [9 g+ D, G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 L4 e% d) v' J* I$ f1 e: e9 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, g! O; ]& E& e% L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: X" \3 O7 |8 n: C/ h' p  i, Y# s2 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 D* I# f4 v; C. w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! P% H1 S$ T$ k2 U. c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- Q* ]& ?# ]3 G8 n5 G  \, O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! {6 p! K. w: {" J! w2 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; }0 ~# F0 o( G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: s# @# q- U% k: @6 s. f# b# @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, s+ r" k, [- _  P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) k+ R6 ]; B) U. H  W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- J9 R3 I( s$ A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 G7 V0 W$ c4 @( \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ G  K" W/ j. Z1 k& n2 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" ?8 l8 G3 P( [" k. \# A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 Q+ @7 p7 k$ ~( P  f2 w# |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>