【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, }! \8 i* ^: z2 q) [1 }歌词我附在后面。
9 ~2 }7 j" |6 A$ TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, Y  [( T$ O, e2 s/ j( Z& I9 G3 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) @- r. f0 L. n. y0 h% A9 D( O; R9 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ ^# k; ?0 m0 k* O" iWith the moon kissing it every night
  G7 D" |8 \) e2 e: I7 V# RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 w: Z; y, q$ p$ Z7 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& [) I+ e5 Z2 p% A! C4 n/ XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- d! S- I1 a: m" O- J, f. O) DI regret not dying
! }6 D, O2 z0 P- d8 i2 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# u3 o6 S# X) h/ k& l, pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; {4 M, D7 o# t/ sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# D: L3 e! M5 j; I' p6 Q3 k2 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% n1 v0 `6 D* B1 W, V& i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- h0 ^* X+ k) e( y% J/ Q2 c& t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; n( }8 O9 g# C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: q. t! y+ c' T9 u+ G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 [# _# W5 l# d& C' e+ W2 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 W9 N( y8 `% u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) V" G  T, O2 @" h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ a- B8 [) }/ C$ l% I% w+ d3 r9 d<P>你无需担心</P>
5 b' U1 a) ~2 f: [; ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 T- Z, {, }5 Z& h% \" i# l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. W' n0 b  I! U* o: z$ m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% V8 |% S0 @+ Z/ m( v" k7 r6 d) O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 p% O$ r, f  c. W! \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& R( ]1 h$ ~: G+ b, y; R! S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% X+ _; p/ q1 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& c( |8 k$ v3 V3 \0 F" d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ ]2 g% j8 M* J& Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 r2 F. A2 D0 w" y/ s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 p. [! K1 l' _: K  X- t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ \  B$ @% t5 e8 u! z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 e+ c$ |0 o$ l/ w9 h$ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ ^* q. ^. s4 l' G% f2 l4 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  N% e: D, ^, d6 u9 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 t: c  d) P; k' J' ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) z8 }. S0 E& g5 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ `1 m' f- Q  H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 k9 q1 U- p  t: l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' i( F* A+ v- J. `, q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, x7 z& p  `% Z" N* s. w9 Y/ U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& \2 t2 C% }: b' w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 C7 [6 w: X* A& C$ d( t5 @* p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 X$ N$ r! `) F7 @0 L( k: ]7 J% r* u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 G$ F1 U5 n; k! L+ Q/ ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 s  D; U6 q# p( |/ u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>