【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( a1 ?5 O1 w' N; ~: |* O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ ]2 w( F7 b# }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( F; m; T. K: A3 I4 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) j# m5 s0 Q8 L/ a2 F! q3 [' USeeing the sky content with its love
4 R' i% _$ F8 ^$ }% PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; Y" G9 Y( @0 G5 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. |* X& {3 C+ S  ]I really want to know just how much you love me
& {0 c5 P- V# Y! r5 ^% M* H8 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- K6 J' R6 \& z' d2 z3 a2 C! U2 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& D; h; t: M0 H0 n* qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" w5 k7 E- t8 _1 w" T+ `  _; M2 p0 mI regret not dying
8 H1 n4 n0 [5 {. {0 \: w  D6 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ~' S. l& S- x4 ]& e) \+ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Z) L) g" ~: H$ O  D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 Y  T) A$ }0 {1 q( z( x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ P% O4 t- |6 [5 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 s' J$ W. Y2 F5 r" x- t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 h, `+ z" \8 V9 X$ W$ E; W4 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! V8 n4 G" Q. u* r8 h2 {% j& \& L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. y! t9 k0 M8 x* e8 I+ j% x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, r2 Q1 k+ R* ^. f( y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; a" ?" `+ H$ h5 X! G. {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" x9 F' p1 A+ x) K  U* K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 H& Y, ^+ ]$ e# t- R: N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. i: t8 I; G2 y+ \$ Z9 X! L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 `) W: D$ T6 C- r9 |2 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 r. J; j. M5 f1 X: _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' C; S; u0 {. Y! [5 R- r/ H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 e8 _# R; p$ e( A4 [% _3 ~5 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& ?- n4 `& T# g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 v' \- z% l5 T1 E7 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' k! [! t; m8 w2 q& Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 N5 c; P3 a$ j* }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ V' u8 a$ T$ A' p) X& r: R+ x6 `$ `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, _  k; w1 R7 f, P$ t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# e# Q9 O& z3 j" g* Q* f& A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 L/ S7 |5 B7 ~* v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) ~0 C9 U8 D# E; {. X+ B, i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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