【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 i' v& O' f, ]* x, q5 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 _/ o; d( ?! x, Y7 ?& L6 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- B' C. e# \* E) s' Y$ BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! K" A( f3 Y+ f/ s! SI love you I love you with all my heart
- |9 y" C( G  u5 `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" K3 q8 }# v5 S* {; t( U2 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. p& w* [6 H! a+ w- XI want so much to see inside your heart
% B, A# Y: E6 x5 Y- [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! ]/ V0 U/ E& S( a; P- Q8 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 d3 u/ z3 w9 Y  K) W- R( mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 l1 I' c. q( E: X6 c; q5 x% pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' c) g& z% L" D5 s+ R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" b, S% c: F: y1 U5 i9 k. o- H4 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) v, U/ a* R5 i8 x, e/ G' c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 E* ~# u" |3 A' f: l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 g! x5 Z' O, X; u9 o" `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 a% \* c% ]! n$ c& W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 I9 z! I# t; c1 k& X! s9 V! `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; T0 G* {5 c/ y5 P* g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& m  t7 O, k2 Y3 \" G* ]9 r$ Y; i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 D" [4 m4 }% \+ s3 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. W! H- t$ O$ p! ]! ?; X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 a6 F8 L* ]3 `& s. d! p& |+ [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ u% J% g5 X* P& ]1 N& c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ~' l$ U& _6 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 J5 ^2 H2 N4 a* T( [  }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( {" h6 f! Z4 s7 P" y0 g2 ^/ F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( S5 E% J! [/ Y  L2 t8 H, w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. a5 |2 B$ M8 Q* a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' L, t# B5 b( M4 ^2 Q# X7 c5 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' f' d, K8 A7 V; O; @+ L! t3 a% r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! c/ N8 d; j$ t' A: s  e  @/ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 b/ Y* P1 |; n. ?  v, G! p6 p! z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: }) l! f/ ?5 r! @9 @3 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 }; }$ a3 g% W. ]1 N6 ~, V& e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" o# c6 x& u/ @( y9 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ Q4 k5 s0 b' j, t. b" _) V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Y& ~+ M. o2 q0 h- F' \; R. h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- [2 Z( y1 w" W* L( B7 W* W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 r8 v& Z2 c) k! ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 Q  i; x' ~' a' S' \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) \( O0 f2 y$ _: u) S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>