【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! `% C- d* I) n/ J& t歌词我附在后面。
& o# q) h1 Q4 l( S( \5 a" T* b" lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! F8 v0 K) ~+ R; g: k' [2 j% [0 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; ?+ ]$ F1 |# ^2 Y$ lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Z& @2 t- G; ~4 I; @3 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 V7 u  Q# }: [# T0 Z2 o# bWith the moon kissing it every night
( }! A. _7 W0 m0 l8 v; V! i+ oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ]% N9 f! l3 `! e2 ^  J1 P3 ~1 ~$ R7 CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) D) O3 y' W) u% G! N# E6 O3 d9 m/ [I love you I love you with all my heart
, X2 W$ V( \: `Nothing can compare to my love
4 R2 I: r7 ]* i# eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# w5 m( N& e, f2 c, l$ f8 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 I, E8 }. O; ~1 B3 A4 ?* R! h0 ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ \5 B2 `0 `2 u1 c- g5 ]0 ^I’m still filled with fear
4 ]- g9 s9 U% M6 }* z8 K& lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 g0 n; l/ z' a! o% g- ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" e0 q0 L; n( p) x; eWith such a tongue as yours,
- g/ Z) S; [: E5 J6 d$ ~: D& W- LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 c8 h4 K4 u; Q  E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 H3 ?' ?; W- t1 U) f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 V& t' d+ [, D: H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 e( C2 R" k2 Q. l( J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 s$ W! N( Q! u) [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 X0 V6 r7 Q4 I* ]6 q& M4 ~4 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( o5 }  Z, E% @; j: a+ b* f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ W: o7 p- u! ~. Y% V! J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 y2 E, V) ^& `+ |0 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 V: v2 \  m9 q0 T8 H3 Y9 c( ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 _) E3 D3 t; ^  j% ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ^" t2 Y, \" y' l8 F+ p/ D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 l( @# k0 P5 I- k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& N6 M" D7 S6 K& O0 k( X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- B2 x+ U% C0 E" c1 W5 L2 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( G/ y5 ]2 {7 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# J1 k! O- |( y  s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ F, m# P5 ^1 B; t, |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ w* J% `& [0 L/ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ]* c( I# Y9 C+ K, O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" d. t8 y3 c  F- t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! s; h' c, D1 c! ^: r4 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 D+ Y0 b7 W6 \- G$ u; r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( `5 D8 g; Q) S1 C6 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 e, F* n) w) {5 R0 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ _; }6 ~" m# M+ p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 y' j/ b6 D0 {. `  P% w7 p; g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 Q1 H! q$ J' j# P5 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 F5 ]+ z5 o$ {, u* g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, s2 \  ?; ^- @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Q7 e3 B7 @* e/ G, [! N2 A, a! i( R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 y) n. ?2 \2 a0 ^' x* X  r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 ?% r6 i6 y# p" ?7 c6 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* E" P  ~( _' v' p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>