【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  T9 T' H7 F/ h0 D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ k; ~5 ?& |3 t+ @Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 v, }  V6 N& T7 q9 i; g! EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* \! {/ y; D9 r1 T/ j+ C; D; t# ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
& _* ?# c/ _6 dWith the moon kissing it every night
+ ]6 j6 n( q7 fSeeing the sky content with its love
$ g' I' K6 [* l5 b( t: h8 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, O3 L( j$ n6 R0 }1 W+ P" Z% NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& o$ s0 ~; z; I( q2 S- HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ J, x: y1 e& {/ p- kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: @- y7 o3 B1 k# G$ W& MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 b) J  [) d4 a# z' E$ ~I’m still filled with fear
5 {$ h, O. U$ _/ H7 ^5 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 {7 w& J4 _- ^# a) UI regret not dying
) R6 q* ^9 l4 z# nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: p0 I; t/ T0 _: i* YWith such a tongue as yours,
: O# K2 }/ C; E2 j; v; }  LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 T1 x1 S* [# i4 L' B% X, URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 h& ]. g# Z  Z7 h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ `' {! T, Q/ [3 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* d/ U4 B6 L* G, _. \* ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  r0 A4 s' l" M+ }% R2 w6 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* J. b- N' Y; N9 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ V+ E  F$ ?3 \) @, e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: ?: Z# n1 @4 O( M; J& A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ S. J7 V1 R" P9 @2 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ p9 H) a# S; H& N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  T. `. |" @' x$ ^, h- ]8 E8 g5 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 F& |: n3 U- t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- o: r4 ~5 F9 x% u% e! c# y$ z( z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" @6 U# a  d: ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* ~! P! \) O1 S$ ~5 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% X% A8 K+ J4 f, X! `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) B- b3 l/ c( g0 T& f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 I1 `# k4 `. b( n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 x3 w: A4 P9 N/ f% f/ m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, u) O; q/ p" w, A0 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: K- @8 d% [* G" B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& S$ e8 W' W. _( W5 S( Z2 D, g* ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: c+ U" z. M' o- R, j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* U/ A& ]- X7 t! v4 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( H  j3 e1 ]9 H- C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 P4 X! R  @( R/ Z3 p4 B0 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ s; d6 M3 o4 a% v+ O- M我请你剖开它

- q4 r2 ~& @3 M, Q4 r. u. P+ A& P% C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& A3 c" u7 f; O0 D& f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>