【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ i4 B5 [5 V: q' Y4 S+ E, \4 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 z1 e! D" o! R) J0 y5 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* \+ o7 G5 l! F3 X8 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ @% C- ^% s3 f5 q8 N9 [% [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 ~2 x/ ~8 F5 ]7 y2 g. nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( \. J( q6 G8 x( B+ uEvery other word you utter is love
5 D- l/ o( k/ C% R0 `I really want to know just how much you love me
* K, U7 e0 v0 ~% c+ |$ II love you I love you with all my heart
% }: A9 V5 W' v, TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 @( [$ z9 ~) ]% {) q! V8 JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; D. z/ a( ?# _6 p; i2 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 N( z- ?0 V: |5 f$ y4 K- ^I’m still filled with fear
8 K; H0 l5 p# q- B4 J$ G& O; \$ cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& \1 U0 N! s. t2 t0 j! `! i) `, i& jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 [0 L" E9 {3 r& u0 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( a+ Y# x1 @1 w+ z5 W) w% T# y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ T( _6 m- E; Z( D5 x. q% O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ y' a# N% l- O' k; ]7 v& l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 A8 G9 u  ]- g4 ~( I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; j" q% B. I, ?# S3 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 d: z, t' F+ I, J! u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 a0 G5 D5 w. |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 n( }2 E7 ^* t- X" Z) S) l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 {5 `' U+ V; |; P4 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- A' e+ c' }& G$ B' I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  d; u* A, L: l" P9 n# G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 _2 v) u$ v! W# q2 R4 V5 |1 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- Z2 Y( t' E% b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. F: s8 k' _5 h. Z2 i1 K" w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 U/ y1 l. E5 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. x, ]! T3 ]5 i9 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 u, Q4 G2 F' Y! T% a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ L  l3 L- K; n" n% }- K  l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" ?# F/ ~. _; m# Q+ y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ z2 Z3 P3 n3 h8 {7 z9 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: e% d9 a5 Q0 I0 w. k. o4 P1 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 b( @0 p# Z, O) K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 {% _& V4 [7 \7 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 G) f3 u3 b0 z' @+ n1 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  z) @0 w8 n6 o2 F) d: q5 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Q: W# p5 N0 N0 i. \6 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ R6 p" j9 \/ s2 o7 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 r, A6 U) q! k* L% Q, U" S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ~+ Z" y6 r. y; m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>