【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 E3 Y: s* p8 ~. N4 c2 W2 @歌词我附在后面。
+ Q( Q* C. Z7 [7 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 c- i. P, A* y1 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ L7 `2 \3 z3 r, N- M5 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; L. X  e7 \# Y1 }) eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 g5 z1 k! t: J, Z- mI love you I love you with all my heart
  c8 Q) j- [; Z: S. B: R; ^3 z6 |Nothing can compare to my love
- |. D/ b% y2 J4 c* xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, W- U" m( J- JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y  ?" K  c/ Y4 f, a& jI regret not dying
) v: a$ e; }% b- s2 P% [/ j3 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" b' V  z/ a* L) wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 b; ~4 Y6 g" U$ iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 N5 a7 V- g9 K# W8 X! R' ~0 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( p" F2 K+ [; j0 Q2 l$ b" S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) G  D1 Y4 b. y5 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 j4 H' n( y2 T& N/ F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ~! N1 h5 Y. |/ [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" m( T3 H9 m! [! b) b) l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# }+ s8 q6 I/ f3 P' N% Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ z& J/ g1 ~1 C5 e4 D& E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; E7 h3 Z+ p! D- N) `9 C$ D* f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. T9 z) \. z, r0 O* i+ k, p, G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' h3 O* Q$ d9 @) s& P/ i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, @3 M- Y) f7 X3 D2 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# [9 N. c: }) J0 k+ ^  t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 O& r/ y) r. w8 d' _0 J) x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: U# M8 t% ], Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 L4 C* o- E: w! }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ B7 l4 e/ ?0 g+ `# @% q2 h5 Y% Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; T% D7 i; L% P& n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 w, C6 v/ ^" C# c" {) f$ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 X! V2 Z5 u( }; a4 l$ {; L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: d' t4 ~' d4 S; O2 U; c9 ?( \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* R. m5 N# g# |: G9 E5 M, r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" @  ~7 k0 E- @0 j  p7 j! Y2 D( A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% U, F% [) g, [7 b3 ]2 F6 }$ o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ N1 \9 A9 M- n: e# G( }$ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 D2 x- W& N! i$ f. B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! U. N  H" |+ r% \: Y# F- b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& w; D/ [6 p& |$ a7 M$ O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! p1 z  o  Z- Q# {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& p0 r4 b- P9 w& [3 D+ H( W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ [3 {$ L% h/ {$ ^$ d3 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 G& V  ?! t1 V; b' F5 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! Q2 m; ~1 n4 C9 }# z+ a: t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>