【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
' ^$ M, \2 M8 f2 {$ ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
: H2 X3 C; t5 q; [7 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 i3 x( {1 ^% QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; i) w6 u% F. }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( V6 i+ @1 N4 \4 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ d# ~/ U( G0 k7 u0 g( KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 N* X+ m$ C9 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ V6 z  p- Q7 u) {* w/ D. j! v4 @+ ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% \/ g* _1 T8 Y  ^# h0 cI regret not dying
2 c+ t6 f1 Q# v( E* ^7 U4 h" iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' R. r' i! K4 u$ S1 W; C- l) A$ k  H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# H' o0 F8 F, l0 e3 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% G, n& C* l3 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) t# }- H# P4 n, O9 T$ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" W, O) x9 V- ^& F  C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 g0 u; t" p; r$ \; r4 j! V$ q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 t( [- w+ o; }/ ], Y; M$ ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 H! e& b" E& D6 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ a& \, B' p7 H# t) `* l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 \/ H, O* y8 j$ \: ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 |: {6 _0 x2 [6 ~& y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ p, H9 F: r& b+ A2 r% R6 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 I4 n8 u+ h% T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 [" z: ?3 r: k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 B" a. m% D, X1 @, M7 A4 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  J& ]5 c$ f) x  x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ [: y: a9 f' |( j6 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 v, W/ c8 D+ R1 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% N+ E6 [# b" E( Y$ `+ a1 u' I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Y# h5 m# Q9 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 {# o: |4 ]5 L% T, J1 h" {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, }8 E, Z" H6 |9 v% D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>