【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: A; r! S1 R% y2 \  fWith the moon kissing it every night
4 m. Y3 `* s+ P7 c3 o& ^! {) aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 I8 q/ `% b! z8 ?. AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# j6 r7 ?/ \" A) b, fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 m% N$ g8 ~; l  I1 R9 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 }2 b. H* q( yWith such a tongue as yours,
% p, H" J' E* h% }, M' ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% y5 H% x9 n" Y% h' F; c& H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ U8 H9 n( ]* a% I5 j4 w# j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 E0 y" G, }2 g& Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" `! d: [) g+ f: E+ V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% P; @0 N6 x( K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* S. m0 a; ~5 r$ o. M& ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 _. o! g8 G& C/ w7 T% l. \; v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 y& ^6 P* U. w; e8 Z& R' U, l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& a/ \' _+ M1 P& T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 _- o! @3 ]; y( T$ E0 f! n- `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 L- E; @& @: M6 M. I6 z& E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 t0 b  t3 Z$ G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( p, Z+ h# |3 q/ L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 [6 f  A5 A) `! t, j& h3 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. I7 Q# I% d5 ?/ I' q* S5 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) {8 Y" B7 B. A' U( L9 H0 O# r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ `( `, K: A* i- V0 |6 F7 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" T, i1 J5 \7 A/ S2 e- v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) a6 y6 K6 H  M* U+ b4 `$ a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 o5 H/ p  f( Z) X  j' o) h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# D$ P8 M. a5 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 ?+ H; B1 o" u; L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 ?8 n% F# p1 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& z' j- _$ x& o/ T# v  B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 U5 d' s& v; A( X# I6 m& C0 M% I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# T" e1 h' Y0 N  j: v, [; @- O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' K1 j: [" E3 C  F1 k我请你剖开它
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# g0 g' {: u. l7 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( A; p: l  O/ {1 u- y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>