【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& C& B: L1 V& T! h# _# V/ ?. ?2 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! z) X: ?0 E$ d6 C! c1 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) x+ l5 i- Q( ?With the moon kissing it every night
5 W' g' w2 m9 mSeeing the sky content with its love
2 v. j0 L" `* aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  ?+ A+ ]9 _% r0 y0 SYou needn’t fear anything
. m: K+ {- d2 a5 Y$ nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' u, L+ Q* {# n3 P) }+ fEvery other word you utter is love
) g% }( P  W7 \/ o# Q$ ~$ hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- D9 D9 P# q# I  mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; G) U9 C, A  v0 o: ?' o+ _I want so much to see inside your heart
) G! I7 ]: \$ A7 R2 T: i0 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ @) Q# r. I1 `9 e& E2 S0 w5 }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ~  B! g0 i8 P& J* H8 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; V7 @5 m) L% `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: c8 X4 d0 @; o: o4 g7 u5 w6 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ i9 ~, v( K, G1 v* N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 R0 S+ A6 ^  i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ c0 @( `; B9 a5 D% a! ]5 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* S' f- J0 S2 F4 j! _2 s, J1 D4 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 {7 k  B+ ^- B% w. Z' {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; @3 ?# G+ ]8 z* d& }, c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 _, M9 U+ u1 A* w. N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 |) U# p0 C# _( \" `6 h, C( N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' ^& t$ {7 }3 z. z  F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, A3 Q6 _" C4 [$ D( ?' j) G# g' }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. H/ G6 U( ~- u$ a2 ~4 e$ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 j1 E, ~+ b% r( g# |+ ~  J  o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 B' p9 v* h: S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  f, W' Z! {& s7 T7 [2 d# c; S8 ?! X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  }" f3 p. K( Y- T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% f) l: Z9 n$ `; U# [  m. B5 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 o; b" A7 e% }$ Q' s; U2 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ {* ]' d; F8 `# s* ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- q4 M: f) B2 N7 V1 C* X2 n/ |6 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 {  N& I* Z' S/ c7 {2 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 {! ?. U7 n' q' h0 @6 v; F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ j# P& u; I# V3 Z7 k- t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 o& ~( H% i9 {$ I, T  _0 R! [1 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  _8 {9 v0 R6 y6 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 K5 ]0 q7 r$ ]. `/ \, r& F5 s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, x: r5 i# ]- U! l) m, v: H( X: {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' g/ @& `- A1 o' g9 E. O" |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: c- E: G# X8 g' R+ B* }" ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* D" s; ^9 }" h4 g* W8 e: _: d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, e6 n3 U" N: k, n$ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, G5 {" x7 h7 Q# W9 C8 G+ [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 x& U( v. [/ M5 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' L- b; V; E: d8 o$ G+ ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( E8 M: s0 c3 L2 k- P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 U6 Y1 }9 I  u  ^, X! e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 Q3 ?5 v4 Y" }  J: [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ W" i8 j0 ]) ~; X% M6 M1 J8 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>