【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( }8 B  @/ V/ a+ D) f" E$ I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ], P, R. w" E5 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" N3 q: ~, l7 N1 `1 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 H, I- s2 w$ N0 p0 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  D* \# o" v( |9 \. X2 sSeeing the sky content with its love
0 H0 s( b: s6 O+ a) L% c) nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( v9 t& B+ L: MI really want to know just how much you love me
: c* R  `" W# n# `I love you I love you with all my heart
& `7 ?. b  p1 J$ N, r0 r0 q4 xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 Y- S% G# X' p3 f3 L( `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 b9 o: h1 U9 @; q3 B9 v2 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ D# h, o) [2 s  x! vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! `6 U: C- Q, }2 n  k1 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! A$ s; r6 P; J# D. YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" K. l) h/ Z9 r2 L/ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 T8 ?0 {0 i' d6 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ b, B2 p, l  ?# \6 S4 [+ N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 F) v5 l7 w2 l; C* ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ l! g4 ]. h) \( e# u3 Y5 E2 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: @5 t: J" e1 ^/ ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) D* b. ~' t" {% X. N3 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 p# t( E) q4 ?: h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ f9 Y' o( R4 f% t2 k- o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' P% z2 p" I# e: T; h0 H; D8 a; j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ V3 n, _/ z/ Z& j, @7 Z6 F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ e9 z  O) H. V# z/ w9 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 p: R( r5 V" [9 p  W9 H& o  O) {" T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. {8 g5 Q* C) M) q9 G( y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 o& u# N% O2 U7 q+ e0 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 t9 _9 L: E, i3 T" O  p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 k% c% b! M4 x$ }/ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" [/ g; f* s$ i$ f  k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 V. C5 [% ]  B  M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 F0 ]! Z( p( y- U" c2 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 b9 |! X" s9 D% Z& `! g& g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 p/ q1 r; \& f! C' z$ A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) v5 S/ o" t4 n) z1 a% I- f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 c8 F2 Y2 P1 n( P" ^, E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; Y! l. x! K- \( Q* Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 K- ~  V! i' q, |6 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% |; Y# D: ~1 y% S6 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>