【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 w# Q( W9 b* Q; vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# |9 O& A: k  W; [; R4 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 T$ O  i: C& ?( e' L7 pWith the moon kissing it every night
- c' u$ g: p; D1 P5 ^% n) DSeeing the sky content with its love
: b. F9 @5 Q0 k2 _4 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 U# b7 D1 a7 d8 I% u! Z- H, wEvery other word you utter is love
1 Y( W; Z" C; n8 R8 j' ^I really want to know just how much you love me
; t' ^/ m, O2 W% W4 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ C+ G+ s0 |  {. P( ?; iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 Z9 r; C+ H, {3 ^6 QI want so much to see inside your heart
* r$ N$ h4 T; e9 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 A: P* q) ?/ @/ h" f2 N4 [I’m still filled with fear
' V' h6 A) ?/ i. {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 p" v( o* c5 I) H. tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 G* f) E3 n+ N0 I1 ]7 xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ E* ^! a/ |0 M5 @' O+ H* KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 r2 B1 J; l2 v7 U! w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  q2 g' u# Z/ m- @$ v- Z. w  V. i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 \) u& X9 W! `8 F( J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& V. f* e1 B/ B4 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 h( p; t  A& v+ s; h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" l' [/ e  p6 [0 b: S* q" M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- d& B2 S8 P+ c* f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 L. @' L. k7 E0 e; g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 J) _! P7 K! ?5 V3 w4 j8 q. \# M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  u- G6 e! z+ h: r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- Q5 ~. L" M* j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: n0 d% W; A4 E( I5 e8 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: |5 {% X' o% e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; o8 W: T- L0 `8 n7 ^6 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! E8 h: d& ~7 n6 H7 o, i8 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ~% T) H: j( Z/ M$ j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. a% X4 J3 W1 R0 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& m/ f2 q" n2 J* B1 ^8 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 I0 \% L7 @( W, G/ g+ g' a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ i7 z# w& c" W* z) _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% u6 g6 `: j0 L9 Z0 q/ Z7 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 g- z) L2 |6 P5 z4 h! K4 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 J+ G( X8 ]! v+ [3 u4 [; f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ f' ?) s0 i) l2 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' F$ J+ M0 L: D4 V$ X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 @: P; n" b4 k8 @( {& \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 e. u) i" C- _5 m; Y( q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' q! a3 [$ P  u7 d' _% Y  p% u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! C. d# P; z% q% b. A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 f' R2 I9 a1 @9 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# t+ V" r! E4 x, ?" ~4 {2 ]# k; y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>