【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* c2 l* C' `6 R: Q3 [' |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- @2 P) _0 u1 S* xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& P) _7 m3 v% J4 k5 i/ _/ `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! @, S, G! ~4 ~2 i. H: aEvery other word you utter is love
. X2 g) Q+ z! x/ B/ @! Y; FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- c6 ?7 X( q3 F4 d& EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& X8 K" J; A; i+ ^3 d, TI’m still filled with fear
6 a3 I4 |- O8 G' v/ I3 U! E+ u6 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ y6 d- c, v. `, o+ m6 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* j5 Y! b# B9 @0 b0 @; }% ]. HWith such a tongue as yours,
- p" ^  |9 e: g  S, [4 _  }/ I7 V7 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! j5 X3 _. U6 N3 \) W) e, pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* A: C; T0 I  K: E. }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! {' J/ w5 g5 s' _2 }( T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 n: k1 y, c+ g. N7 y: ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 G; X% T4 |' \3 ^* t. m2 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" y. r8 ^% R/ F# P) `: A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 L4 X; {% Z) P6 @" ?6 l. ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, B( {9 u* F7 r- ^, O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 q7 B" `- O' d- ]" l$ _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 t) `, u6 g& U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 k$ j+ t4 T; i7 {- q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Z5 H4 E8 B( |2 @# d' Q- f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) }; E! ^+ \# M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 e/ N! e* l! Y  `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! a/ w/ Y: b6 F8 o! ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 w$ T) `4 ?* s, [7 \2 G* I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) X3 f  D1 m! Q7 h* o. ]8 E/ f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& Q: G' ^: w" W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 I6 K4 e. i" j! |8 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 Y& j1 v' J" g6 X- Q' C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 E) N/ D+ i( m( P* N/ ?) t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% j/ Q( k0 W; e5 F! a; q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- k! o. s  a( Y+ J! i4 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 [+ E8 I) r4 d* {* y* J3 D' L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 r5 V9 B; G( O$ N* ~# ~& u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; k0 ~1 S$ u! \9 G, A3 {3 B; K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( i9 Q9 E! s% A6 ?- g1 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ M, I5 W+ a0 o2 d' ]3 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' |; T' `; B. q- Z1 H! ]8 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# }* e. R: H5 d) n/ J( V% P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  z  q3 t. c8 C6 M, E5 ?& M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ d' y1 e4 E5 m6 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" }6 `7 ^; g) k4 y6 ]" w2 X) h  V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 d% b! q9 }) ^% x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 Q6 N! w1 A/ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  W2 l9 Y- l  r- R, y9 Z. K  r) q+ w. C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% s+ ~( p/ q" `, k0 `+ [& V0 f* ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  R2 F$ Z6 ]* x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>