【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 G7 W% n5 T: i9 {$ r' lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 g; T. z7 _( W0 f  fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* t( p: N4 f' m# Z0 AWith the moon kissing it every night
' [: D% n; l' I/ t) H/ r5 t: j. FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, h: P# W8 z. P# y+ i# h) HYou needn’t fear anything
1 p- {# b$ k) A2 l$ H( J8 s  @/ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 ]+ p5 n/ b- E! ]) B5 B! g8 CI really want to know just how much you love me
2 t1 [& `' p1 ~% I- }! ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 o" ^0 d6 a$ e# e( m' i" EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& Q, s6 X+ w0 M% J9 k" {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 M$ i7 p* t/ ?2 V+ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 K( F5 K; k" ]' q6 v, |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# N3 n4 o+ a' l- NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' X* G; o4 I7 r; jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 L7 s" E! G3 ?6 k7 I2 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& |8 Q2 {( B9 D- \8 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 F2 c, s, G0 c* ]- @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 u' r" l( A( g- g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 E5 l% L' e# g8 d" Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% N" L6 x0 p; w) h  \  b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. p1 \; ]/ }% C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 R( D) D2 a* T. b& Y8 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. ~1 ?! `4 P: K# ^/ A! Z- s; g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; {9 P: D6 h( c& Y! e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ v( v1 n, Y/ N* g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ B4 |( e# |( m3 W# P. E$ C% H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 N* T' p2 `) ~! S% u0 @6 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 I$ J: u6 p1 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# K: c4 }) H3 r8 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! I, t( F" [9 i# G. z, ]8 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" x9 {; r6 |) F6 g6 A& R1 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. Y/ l$ f+ K- `9 Q3 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" x$ C1 M" K" y/ V* V" b& k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 u7 B5 G  W0 b3 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- d% |, S8 }, x  X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% b* g$ c) J8 l$ O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 j3 E8 t2 B' f2 a& V. o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 c, `8 E# D" A/ x3 w! `! i# v/ O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  R8 w$ \: B/ d( |" I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  g; p4 k) m: t5 R  \2 s' R# o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Q% A$ V& @% A- I9 G/ s* y+ P9 V1 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 n. `" K: U& u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* o8 j+ L, B0 j9 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, ^5 C- \" h' y* h  v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 F. v: Z8 h% j& `& E0 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# s" ^# v5 t% f. k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' e" F0 y1 P0 [2 X' G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ R8 s6 X9 t) q, Z$ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 x- }2 g, f  Y7 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>