【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, l6 a+ E7 D" N7 c3 }歌词我附在后面。
/ |0 Z* R5 x) h+ wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 `6 i* V/ t) r+ V% @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ I! Z$ |7 T) z  G; E2 Y0 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% T. H1 Y3 c  g. q3 c! p# z8 e/ |2 VSeeing the sky content with its love
% e- @" J5 V8 @1 G/ _1 @' ^5 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, ~8 q/ \. S2 t& VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& R) K; n7 E: D6 O- c9 Z2 REvery other word you utter is love
0 r. ~! f2 \2 ^9 R+ o( ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ p" n! b$ e6 ~% f: e5 D# cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, h+ B5 w. E0 }3 c+ }8 _+ j; \6 `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 u5 ?9 M  u2 Q( u) S+ w7 e5 i/ zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 F/ f+ {; |$ I: F- gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  v( f5 ?0 S/ L9 M+ ^  J6 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) h  V, e& {+ k& F$ _) J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! j6 l2 s) W0 G1 j4 Q2 ]) X. H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ W3 z1 {, p2 W1 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 X$ y* x9 ^2 H# g& g+ L, X$ d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 P: m1 d! w5 [  c/ s( o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 g6 J  a- X3 N, I% Y, g) O6 A+ V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 L' @1 c; e' Y; m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 {& \) x: b* F5 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 o# d2 u. m% ^! {$ i/ r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! u! s  ~; s! I# v3 w/ i  u+ A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) S3 d" d) r7 ^& g6 w4 K% |1 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ c0 |4 O* d, |8 E0 K6 r+ e8 j$ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  h; N0 H( `* o6 K# h2 h% U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 L( F& T& b! S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 |) h; K8 K3 y1 s1 d7 S/ o& ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) o9 ]# p+ W1 C5 C1 h9 U; D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: e6 Q8 B+ {# x9 [4 ~# I4 I3 h# }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 H9 Q! T" r# M5 N2 C8 k! f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( {4 ~* }! F, a: U& w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ u7 y6 i7 _7 k2 m, {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, H% m; O5 s) [  g+ J7 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ A: o7 q; E: h3 u$ j2 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 ]/ z, t  `4 q7 G& x. S" o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. z8 ^0 c% g$ w: P) I" _* d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 E  R0 `. _' O* V6 J, u+ s3 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ B  C- f/ D) D/ F$ C0 `3 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) Y! ?, g$ _" N$ z- g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  t& `( h8 s( r8 i' R; r4 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 W9 C  m4 P% x/ H我请你剖开它

) X6 m: v8 [6 }1 D0 J* v. }  l+ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>