【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% \$ ]* R- P9 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 L: M. A6 c9 k  _: ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 f' d2 ~. Y4 G: S" X. h1 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 W' R1 M4 c4 \6 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( q# d3 @1 F4 x4 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ p' H& X, [4 m' x- n. y$ F* \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% o* A; K2 K2 j* e  B0 D% HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ |, w- V! h' ^, U+ {6 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 c" n" ~# B: m' G4 a  {2 v4 {3 J4 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 x) `+ u9 k  G$ U# u8 ]I’m still filled with fear
) e1 S# [0 ^! h; }; i8 i( zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) Y1 W) C  A; c2 @) l! ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ I$ U5 I9 \2 X  [5 F" ]3 G: D, fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# y# u% f/ Z0 q$ z! ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ s$ n. [  T) A9 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 G* G6 F+ y* F3 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% f' l) u7 y. Q0 s2 r. E' t! t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" j& w) R9 E, W5 r; N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 q2 `" K' T7 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 H" I; G+ e" C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: `1 b4 h& p5 P6 b5 I+ d  ^1 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% [& j) o% U  N$ D; M" Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* d1 y& c- z" t5 ?2 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, n( P# J( c0 K, Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" ?$ E" Y% @- w7 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( ]7 [7 \5 a, b, Z8 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ h- P/ C' L9 T: k9 Z. `; i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! B( v+ g/ [1 S  D1 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 X* {; R& h7 ]2 }$ O  H# z; I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; a) {: d6 O5 X2 c# Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 h! v8 f  i# h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 o9 M7 h, x% ]$ F6 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ q3 m( o! ]) w9 U3 A7 p; k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; S3 @+ g) ?$ A" ~9 i& O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 G' d2 I- G  o% J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- X- N/ T. k1 x9 J9 D3 t+ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 K% Q  {. L% U$ G3 R& q1 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! m2 T( T- }+ t3 K8 a9 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 ~% Y( y( P8 s0 p6 Y4 _* E" Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ ~4 s" ]! q" s我请你剖开它

/ x# I5 \# o6 p* f6 \) X, ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>