【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& E( p$ |+ I2 X- q. F# uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) F% o- F. L- o% d. N4 ~2 _* j8 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 G* L9 }& ~1 r. v+ R* ]3 o7 }The sky is happy down to its soul
/ N2 g+ E% p1 K; ~' N: ?9 YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 T5 U: T" |- C: K/ N8 H4 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 y1 Q, q& f# H6 A. @% l+ N" GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( k: }5 G7 Q2 J: kEvery other word you utter is love
0 T8 _  D% F* O0 {' }1 }I really want to know just how much you love me
6 y1 e2 w3 K0 `. Q. OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. M8 |$ x# ^: x7 `: Y2 O' {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ H; X5 y1 k( Y3 iI want so much to see inside your heart
2 K3 I5 d6 B/ V1 C% @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 K* c- H# E4 NI’m still filled with fear
2 [8 N' R5 w$ ]6 B7 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; H* G$ y4 I: G( xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ]* V. r1 n/ M' UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# `6 E5 P0 |  P) g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 j6 x$ ?' {4 m9 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 x) e8 }8 q4 h# f3 a/ t% [6 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 ^+ R- m, K/ o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 l5 @. O8 T  C, h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 {  V% p7 j. |* s& [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 M* _- Y! ?, ~6 [' F- R! D<P>你无需担心</P>
; F6 j! M/ `2 n& B+ v1 m/ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ b( H5 a# _/ P) A0 J' E6 }+ a( n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# n+ e% T) d- y# h+ D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ c0 }: z( w1 m  A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 b/ D- H$ Q& S0 q: ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) d, k' I) J* L% A" ^1 `% c" T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 u3 w% A# {) ?! G! ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 T6 E3 t5 H* s$ ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 G2 D7 [) `+ f+ ?  m+ Z0 O- W+ _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 u+ ?: v1 i$ {6 L0 @$ W" z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 I8 q2 M1 Y! V0 f* |7 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>