【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ k8 g% c% o9 N- T  V' J7 ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& P) K2 L) [* U6 y, RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- `& D0 h7 s/ `+ ?' LThe sky is happy down to its soul
  B0 B5 t- g2 o8 O$ E$ O9 W# \5 ^. kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 }$ v1 I7 S$ ^7 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ S0 G# E4 c/ y. |2 o5 M# mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) |& Y! P8 f2 X1 @$ LNothing can compare to my love
3 \- d/ j. c  n2 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! L' R  \1 j/ P/ }! jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. g2 w$ w" P% B0 U/ [I want so much to see inside your heart
  f  ?$ z) I7 c5 b" |( L  F# EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' v0 }) V, Q+ k+ L0 f+ N4 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 G4 I, d2 q2 m2 d% Q/ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 a' V; l$ P& C' G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" g! e' g0 |# i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 s+ }$ C3 ~4 Z' B6 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: u) ]5 k8 F7 o  K- C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  t3 i, h( Q  g) F- |/ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- V* j7 [3 m' d. c! r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ]# z8 u, n) B" ~1 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  L& X( Q1 M  M( m, }1 t<P>你无需担心</P>
( ]9 J1 y# i8 y' v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; m" s9 C% J. {# [, V4 U  B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' t7 F" q% V" U+ k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 }3 s6 @1 v& B, q: e; N4 s3 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( L' B. ~8 V% [3 e4 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. r$ R! g$ @' J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 f" B1 Z  ^& B6 f- `( _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& i; u4 z7 \8 w9 m6 Q" y1 N4 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" o) Y% w/ p  K$ I- l! |0 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 N$ b& `' `/ W! a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# D3 I) ?: V  Z6 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& N" M, \; u3 k8 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 h7 I0 a5 _* ?2 h6 h: D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 Q7 h- q! h8 v. a, D* J, E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  k- F9 N5 s7 g5 s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, G$ z. Q; R0 i; O) C4 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 v: T) y" J8 n  R. t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 R6 f  Y9 {/ |* \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# B; J/ s- x" y% B2 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 ?4 n" N+ c$ ]) v$ E8 r+ Y& K- R+ n3 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' j2 T, _; a* V5 ^8 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>