【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ g! I# ^/ {+ Q: z- vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 d8 k# W" W/ Z* Y7 K7 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, |: s# k! F4 ~7 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ a8 h; l' _  A, H6 n' E2 q* CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 I! C3 k2 h/ D& N, G. ]( @3 WYou needn’t fear anything
. q) P9 n7 c! S* _* i# yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Z1 L+ K+ L! A  Y3 R1 }9 `) z  r2 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! p. t. [3 m) p! t2 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( P- |+ m+ z/ BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; S3 k$ T5 R0 K7 Q4 \. G0 J2 o% \I regret not dying
) |; G% m. N9 X& EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ E+ S4 f6 G' ?4 W' q% l5 A' `4 gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ?7 Q" v" ?: [$ h! {3 M+ q% HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 O  a# F- o0 o& J/ J$ P% H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( H5 a: K7 i* S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 O9 h& m2 Y# z: G3 a0 K' Y/ F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ u$ W4 a2 d. n" S1 B1 I+ t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; q+ g# S5 w) {4 z( k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 J% r9 h; r2 Q1 I3 @2 x/ G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 e4 U/ @: t- L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! C, N6 [/ Z: P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ U# X3 e0 r1 c: b$ T, a. n; }<P>你无需担心</P>
' e! v& k- L" Z4 f2 u6 m& R; ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ _, U. Y: N" i- K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' j: y/ j* }) h: ]+ I7 R. c* }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. ]8 \: m  `! V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 Z5 S9 e4 f) x/ X- U: C7 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* e' `7 w  q' B7 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ h! u0 \# M4 ~6 A( z  J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) ]5 H9 i, Q$ R' L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- G$ ^4 t4 K* Z# B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% X3 g0 t$ s: S- l3 V, m1 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 u( E$ @; d' B* b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* f  D  j$ v3 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* O' c6 ]. r9 q1 b" X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 e% x% v7 `0 C2 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  U) l. y7 Z+ s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ M6 _7 u0 H) U+ [5 C6 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 O% g2 ~& J+ X" S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 \7 L" d1 t, q) _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 v! j$ f1 w& `3 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>