【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; N# m. G  m" ]歌词我附在后面。
- [9 W; Y: C$ h4 e% d3 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 S. X* C/ f  |7 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# Q! Z& Y9 }5 _) ^2 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
( X& L  V. M) n" V5 wWith the moon kissing it every night
7 o9 C3 f; ~  I" j9 a/ {Seeing the sky content with its love
1 T2 Y/ j* Q4 S( oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) A  {0 Y4 [- O) PYou needn’t fear anything
4 @' x  ]" z5 K/ z! |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( ?1 I$ y( H( C' P9 D' _5 s! U9 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 b1 |$ c0 I5 H$ w2 V: P8 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ k2 o& E0 V1 l; A; s/ |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 p! f" t/ i  gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 e! }8 H& c8 n( [9 y( x8 s9 q, [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! a" I1 \& Q! b- qWith such a tongue as yours,
; D% }1 l8 G1 A: L9 D. u, u3 B- u. o# ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: ^; K* I! Q: m6 p! [7 r. kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 v2 L- O9 J9 S) S' W1 y# A' {* d" }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& y- I, g/ T& t" \, K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 u4 j+ W4 }( w) _: A! n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 J( {, C7 F3 G/ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ]' W+ W( w# D) I6 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* S$ \% d2 O( a4 b- V6 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" n% a! @7 }9 q: P) p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% R: ?( r# R& w! ]& u+ \# R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, g, B8 C, U8 w: A; F0 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( c- ?- `! J0 U9 l6 e4 T. t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 J! s/ c3 K2 L% ]0 w: F7 g* H# P<P>你无需担心</P>
' a% i$ c% `) L6 a4 K7 w# w5 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 O  W/ p/ ~& d; E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 n9 U" @7 Z3 Q$ X2 B$ N# Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& \. F% D/ Z2 C/ [$ [& `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: N0 ~' r* m1 p+ [/ i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 y% k  ?, J9 P: w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- t  Q" n( e4 r5 b/ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 x6 j7 B; S( ^. R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 g9 A8 J& Q9 t5 \! ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 L) s+ J- t0 M' ~$ K! i" X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 }3 u) B9 Z4 T" e% a5 z) n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  ?3 G: u$ X3 j6 F$ ], D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 f4 G- M; Y1 q% X2 d/ ]8 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ E; d3 S/ S% j8 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 ?* {3 f  o' ?8 [  p6 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" M" l) o8 J. Q" @5 x/ a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ Y6 ^2 c' M+ D7 j- H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>