【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  O( f0 M4 M( ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ E6 h; l* }) y1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ~# ?# o, y( xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; G# t' L# ^; j0 ?" n; ^4 j* g: \Seeing the sky content with its love
! x5 I" x2 H3 t6 P9 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; T& d6 l5 w; S& D5 XYou needn’t fear anything
0 B9 k1 y7 P5 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* T0 _# q, x; f; @) KEvery other word you utter is love
/ N  _2 G1 F, [' K+ QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* M# J7 l4 J8 D% W; x& x  |1 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( y1 X7 v& X' y- q/ s1 R! oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 S$ z6 G% T* j# kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" V  y* {' A, fI regret not dying
0 R; C7 G+ L4 y) ]  A2 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 T3 ^% c: y0 `: uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  Y5 A2 v0 ~6 t3 T$ F" f+ W* kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ L& `% B6 L$ p, j5 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Z+ x. n& Y1 L- c& U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 v  a3 L( n) H" Z4 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 t* O% }/ W3 X2 U9 ?/ O1 u7 y* U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: k& ^: C3 Q* o" R. x/ [3 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" y* n  {) Q  ?/ {. [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 f) ]/ H( {7 R. X# }3 i% M* i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ e6 k9 Y# J7 h9 A: f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; K4 D2 c7 x0 h' C9 |* i$ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' t& k& U8 m  H3 w4 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ]' C# @" _) G7 [. M$ U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; l( K! X  A$ f) E- k% k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% m2 N* q" D/ w" X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ w3 n  V( V( |( O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 H8 ]9 L. a0 g/ o% O8 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& ?  d% N9 O, n6 m* b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; [5 [/ R/ I4 R3 P3 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; n1 Z! R5 J' s& n5 {, a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& s: F* a8 [! K; R  l8 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( F0 {& l. [$ l) v5 x8 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- Q! O$ e* @% F2 _8 G/ V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* J: {. p/ l. O* A# r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* v( c! K% Y( ^6 G7 k" ?" t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, p- u* p1 y, k8 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: T; \* s9 O9 j2 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! P" k# h/ L# V/ {( h9 K0 l( N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 Z$ |+ @3 F* R* O6 d6 Y% O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 M* _6 D8 E* i) K9 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ L6 _# c2 |6 W! U* [# Z# g8 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 s: ^4 d/ \. _  a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 W& _, Z6 g) a0 j. p' m我请你剖开它
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- X! d' r4 ]2 [$ n2 L# ^$ _! k; }* G* D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>