【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 y1 O. n! \; q- iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 b% @% [6 A$ P3 }4 X* P- vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% [( k0 F+ x% W4 y& KThe sky is happy down to its soul
% z% s5 T" a. ]7 D1 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' f. N7 G7 n+ I* ^' FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& X: h) K' e) sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, Q$ a8 M. q+ R$ s$ |, UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 ]+ d3 n$ N0 y0 H- k3 JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 s% }7 h, I* L1 d  gI’m still filled with fear
: l! Z4 ~3 W! [0 d: _5 xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 ?$ r% W- {- G8 `/ u" hI regret not dying
% {; A% r: |. p% R' g6 g, CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ H3 M" L# p( Z: l! q" T8 V; eWith such a tongue as yours,
4 U* \0 y9 F8 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ p* m3 h  j, b0 H! e7 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% f8 `) a6 ^- y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% j( J" N) l. o$ E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( \/ M5 y: p% B$ Z; L* h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' |  r. q) t2 Y- _  ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 g: }3 }! D+ I4 C' B) j' l' r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' E0 B, r" s* L) E( J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 }) g& Q, q3 y7 d7 ]  \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* O. e0 }) |2 {4 d/ U. w" W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! Y" K6 w* \1 t4 C/ s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ T  U1 u" ~" }/ o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 n, A  N0 E9 [' E- n' ^# l. J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 y5 q) ?+ f  T5 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 p# d" `# {" S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 d1 V/ p# W. j8 j7 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ^- {( T+ X) o, Q7 a$ }! v8 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( k/ C  F' @; h% S4 ?- K) b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ], L- U  w3 C4 |' |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  u3 L$ W) j- `) i/ E& n8 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% m8 q9 w2 ^+ c0 w( H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* ^0 B0 q8 A$ q! @6 f: W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 M2 a  t" W4 [: Y+ u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; g- `! c2 @* a1 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 B" N! B7 ^0 d& d# t( ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 P; B" `( h4 g+ `( ?% ?; J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% {7 x% o) _' B" M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>