【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 H/ J/ e2 Y; n* q1 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) B" X; F& t4 i1 M/ ~& BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 u, C9 T; j5 a* F) dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ c* |+ F2 r: W1 P. e; USeeing the sky content with its love
0 r, u" Z- n$ c5 \: i( `3 g  |8 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. I" Z! T3 d2 G0 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ o/ {3 }' }$ k8 u2 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& s$ G1 A* l& @' O1 `/ INothing can compare to my love
( e* Q4 \! J4 I% L; OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# r  L  t0 [' T6 ~3 I! [0 U  K" vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% q4 q3 y* ^  v5 }% \I want so much to see inside your heart
' T. T$ F; h, D) C! q: O; wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 ~2 n! E5 @/ v3 V/ Q# RWith such a tongue as yours,
7 ]+ l5 T2 D" p7 E7 c. K2 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 N- ]$ _/ W% N# z& b) G; o5 ?4 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; L0 }! L7 s" p& h' ?) f2 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# l# S. D1 k0 E4 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 f2 D! s/ O! a" N! t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ e: ?! B& C5 w) j/ _5 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ B: s1 v" ?1 G3 M! k% X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, f% C6 @" B, F( @. K6 x3 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# v8 a3 C. Q( p/ M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 R" R# ?, q8 H5 L2 k3 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. f7 ]- i. A0 a2 N. h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 b8 K6 X3 ~. j9 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# n6 m7 H. H0 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 a0 s2 h3 z8 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& l+ M9 U" [0 i& f$ ^+ c2 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& h/ {6 N( m# q4 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 r% K3 j( O8 b3 l3 I9 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: Q- H- T' Z4 q3 a  A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. C- N5 A; L' I+ w& `: ]+ K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ T# I* Y( a! Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 K0 v. |$ ~+ o; m& O* D# p: [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 B* R( w; f. X' I1 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- _, W  C8 d$ G" ~' n, w6 ~& h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 S6 d9 a# I+ R$ u" e8 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 f9 _. `  G7 S$ Q+ j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 [" X; p/ l! U5 n" M9 i0 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: X0 R  f) T) h- F. t2 m1 D1 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" a6 x2 e* _3 r& r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>