【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' ?0 B; t) p, {1 }) p5 p' g! _9 V歌词我附在后面。
+ o6 Z+ w4 s9 d. ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
, W9 ?  L4 p" c* o% w+ B4 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; e3 L+ Q7 X$ r) d' t& FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' D$ k0 V& _( @& x* I& j* ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  P3 [0 V7 y: Q; \6 ]; k9 E& @9 ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: E, f* Y6 S% N* e3 s+ b8 K* Z9 @. bEvery other word you utter is love
& U+ c  b7 z1 |6 M" _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# l. @! t3 d8 l6 T  ZNothing can compare to my love
' q8 x9 [2 |+ A* p* hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' C( K7 e9 @" T# E( ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, m% W$ }+ l* a" ~1 B# t! D$ \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& z5 l7 a) M" k! s) rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. H# O4 _' b3 ^* N/ x7 {8 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 l! \/ |0 d/ g+ j# U7 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ~0 f) ~! w8 h. _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" C- l7 u1 {7 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* I" }, l" y! X% B( ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 ~* M! z) v8 g% w7 v8 U" K3 y0 c5 z7 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. E1 e# Y& B7 M! ?0 m( {9 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 m& V* Q7 }: \& }9 E2 w' R4 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 R, z) Z: N5 p$ U" u9 ^6 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; t# `1 @4 n2 [3 v- D4 b, r! C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# r/ j' U  ]& S  I% n# S# Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  T& _1 ^9 w, Z  r' i! I; M: I2 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# q* S/ O+ N: v( k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: Y& W' ^' G0 w2 ?+ o$ \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) H% I3 v$ c( z2 N  T$ b. {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' G/ G2 X; G  Y$ M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. t, }3 {) f! X5 |3 A; x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& l! }4 P  i1 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 M) x3 e- r/ M" @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& n0 ^% K( ~1 A4 c- P' U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( B! C& N6 b1 o2 U8 f- }2 Z0 f) E; A! c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- ]* w5 x! N; B, f: g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 c1 g6 k6 R( N/ \3 w  F5 x5 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; K* j) K$ z1 O( u) t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 j, R7 S* z: v) ^/ H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 x# a; L" C: X. R( \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( J& |1 a5 L1 I9 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 v$ M( k* k7 K7 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  x' W- B" T4 K3 t: C  q" B6 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 s# m$ c! Z1 }: y, t9 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) `5 o: \9 G, ^  ?4 `5 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ j: _" b# ?$ f- ]: z- v/ x7 W* H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ u8 @1 N2 F$ f: h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 B8 e! q3 t( f; b2 h0 @, M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. P: \) f  Y* ~: T5 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) F0 H1 s, W4 J: a) n: j4 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 E6 }: h$ _9 `) `+ S/ R. r/ G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 _: d7 V% u2 w; S# }5 P; @3 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! u+ F0 x2 _* R- m% j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>