【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 T4 I% Y- \/ m) x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* j3 g3 o+ o$ q- `3 k9 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& e% ^7 L6 U+ w. rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; r5 [/ n, i" qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# G- f5 i; N0 B! i' l' BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 x* z4 ^! M2 q3 X8 T5 r$ xSeeing the sky content with its love
! S) t! ]- R9 @% ?# n7 s2 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) f  Y1 `" a1 M1 L5 j" h0 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  W8 M8 |1 |4 L1 h5 J% mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! }# _: p# Y6 N! D+ ]# z/ R* ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ b+ R- K' y0 A$ `% ]6 B# mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  S$ B  x' d) ^7 qI’m still filled with fear
/ [6 }5 |# e3 A: `4 }7 O1 y; BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 t3 ^6 U& d2 s% R8 L- _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 S% }. u2 X- k! J4 r5 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" X% n5 S+ y1 N5 w8 n5 R8 `, S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& y4 e* V& Y1 }4 a. J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# Z' @" B( ^- ?6 |4 z4 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" _4 e, R3 I2 \3 C' Z1 c* o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; k# n6 ^5 N" O5 F1 x) H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 N  I( o, X5 e" |, |& _' e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ H; K! E6 ~* l2 A  Q" t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% @. ]+ o( U0 ^) }) k( f* f  t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( b. w/ T/ h8 c" \3 G( o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, v4 b$ `% |; K) g# b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, a+ z  t0 h% o7 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! v, M, A# Q2 ?) ~* Y- I7 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* H( a/ W" h- a4 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ Q$ q2 f4 M' B5 r5 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ w& e9 j/ I* M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ z5 d0 Y; ]3 S# w% P- w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& f* }: C% ^# E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 y3 a0 K8 V* {& |. o0 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ n/ |# N9 e7 c  P+ B; o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% e% j+ b/ Q+ _% u3 `% W2 d# G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ i9 i3 n* x4 N% \. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! }# p. Q3 p3 P1 A" d1 W. L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" [, n( O+ {$ {: g. y. p# w我请你剖开它
! k2 x9 E  R5 ]% d9 |
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>