【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& M, q! X* V5 f& g( v& U" M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ o4 S! ^0 Q) |. V# TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 \5 U) D/ V( h! Z! ?' \  YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 T0 S* c+ m6 M' lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& H, n& `5 m6 f4 L9 `You needn’t fear anything
' s  ]4 z) E( W9 _, a+ r: v" VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% T  `" U: V* l6 [& I, V4 EEvery other word you utter is love
4 e2 v9 y+ D$ S# `$ G4 oI really want to know just how much you love me
% `2 d" e' I2 r" o# w$ b% y$ M* CI love you I love you with all my heart
7 Z% R" B* y/ `6 v% c# O2 M) ENothing can compare to my love
. X' i! h1 a' [0 e* n3 f- O! C) QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 `; c! Q2 p: R; b7 y! eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 s  W! J( W- ^* c2 e/ d+ P9 hI want so much to see inside your heart
' q& g: e7 _1 M! Y  S. zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" d9 p3 i, v9 N! x2 p7 b- XI’m still filled with fear
( d+ D3 t: z" H, P: R2 T- ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ F! b# c7 m4 S& QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ W! R/ c0 w& |! x! Z( {" RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& e1 Y) ]+ S7 W/ G  Y6 T. v3 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 e. o: d  v8 w) L2 ]( ]  j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. c' B- `( Y3 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* a2 V4 Y1 ]0 r  V& p2 t. ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. A, U6 X2 P* @8 V4 F# U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& G9 y' w: @9 D& w& p) z+ o! l8 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ X4 w& M0 ?7 c, P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" _! c+ Q, p& u# T4 D% j1 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 q+ f) H* _7 s* C* g* k/ @) g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- k( J' D1 S- |2 Q. r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ M/ x" R: h& K' y: t. C1 ~1 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* @$ ^" m: A/ J' k% k8 a4 m. E0 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 o+ B7 M. N. t" p/ K6 [, d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 T  w9 `9 {1 B% u6 W5 F1 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% G- w3 y+ d+ d9 D7 @7 v* r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! ~; a& [% `+ H+ J. e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! f! U6 N8 g- M9 p' ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ^9 c5 x/ W1 V( a' f6 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* n0 E2 ^+ U* |: ?* @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, L) W& _0 t" c9 g5 [" ^. a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. @" a0 Z. [$ q( r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- I+ v( m& O# [: d% N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: c7 q! D+ z2 D' g7 \+ \, ?% C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) Z3 T( b7 n& @# |( \) M; X( _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. r! n, G7 |$ n+ U& }$ `) G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 [; E1 D; g7 X, ]$ O# D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 U$ ^9 n' @8 Y5 j9 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: ~3 G% \: j! \: C/ N" X& I; v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ?! O6 L0 e4 g3 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ A0 c7 s& W- E& w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) }! N. @" h1 U8 c我请你剖开它
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3 g: j" p( {9 z7 d( G+ @: i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>