【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 A3 _6 m' {  W: [7 S$ KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 i  |" o& W/ r, I# e) B& JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; c5 l, d! X) s9 L0 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: i( K& z  g% |; a" e: JThe sky is happy down to its soul
& {9 t- M( ~- `& NWith the moon kissing it every night
- P4 M! w+ E9 O3 j! n+ _7 @Seeing the sky content with its love
5 L, s; Y. O( `/ P' ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 F* ?- l- u3 r! \5 Q+ ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 y3 i8 J5 E! J9 T! VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# B7 J. @0 e; W9 X4 K& jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ m2 b* ~1 h1 D5 C$ RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% m. t2 ~$ i  W2 ]1 ^' ?/ ^1 P" EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* X. x4 r( l0 F2 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 _1 A: \! w. P$ |+ n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: e5 `; v4 e+ ^+ R! G3 V9 w0 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 B! k! N4 m! y! ]; H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& v, f- r3 `, e/ T" N( X0 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, o& E+ T* V3 }: M' J6 I& f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 E8 P1 ^3 d3 T  ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* m, G  _) o8 E  n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# h9 i6 B$ E) d) e1 I. s- R9 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 u5 w6 c/ J2 ^) G6 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ q# k, p( n- ]9 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 y0 t8 v6 w: l. d: ~* J8 x0 F: S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: B- s; t' l# g5 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  _$ X! D, W3 F. A+ v  u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 e0 S; E0 C( q) {1 \. `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ p5 p) Q: A9 H. C% u& q( ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ A3 ~7 y' S$ a) u% }) _- r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 Y" H" @$ j' s9 E# x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ U' U; Q# e2 F  Z0 q7 g9 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 a  N7 |. p1 k6 R4 e& G) [9 l) @8 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 s& ?' f% `: l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  d) F' }+ J% k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) S+ [6 p( {2 g$ k4 Y( d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 `3 X; {4 E4 e4 @: s  H5 {. O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ f( G$ W  ^) _$ |: G( ?9 N! T, p; i<P>I regret not dying</P>
% y/ D5 t( T) P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 P$ a" q! R7 z5 g. M2 p1 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^! E- z+ p1 v' @9 b6 d1 K& N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 \0 W+ f" I8 w3 ?% J4 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 a& A( B- p* C* |6 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" K- J6 S& v: ~7 R! M$ a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
& `* \0 `9 a5 s5 J" ^3 J# R
) E$ T9 x( N! p$ W! _# `5 y我请你剖开它

4 f- Z, U" @: \7 M3 N$ D/ u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>