【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 g! f0 R6 p2 D& W/ F( h$ q7 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, U6 E; G8 Q4 y4 I' [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. \! Q" h3 `& \2 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
: n: f5 b/ |! QWith the moon kissing it every night
4 O; y2 F$ t! Q7 S  D1 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
4 A* }! W( K- G" f# ~# y5 Z/ NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: W% d4 T) J5 o* \" tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; Z/ B' w& I, I' t4 M5 j0 pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! i# h8 W5 ]& j4 P: gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  R3 k$ A% G0 ]6 k' ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) r$ f" X- ]% q8 JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 |1 B8 W% Q' F0 v  mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 h7 N! Z: e% gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" h: Y( |, J0 r# ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; P* U' U) m: a( [" l! u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& l8 S0 f' a/ i" h( C) R  y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, b& d0 v  [- c% J& L2 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 M: B2 ^5 e- q4 h  }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) D9 N5 A' r; C+ i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- V% a) |* L/ Q# }* K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 H) H" {4 ~" ^* \9 `( |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 j4 |, L: G; G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 ~" }5 r5 @. u$ x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 A* I3 X1 `/ |: y+ |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 A6 m& E8 }& I7 K6 ]/ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 D/ K8 }5 [! Y3 {' g( M% G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; M% Z9 G  ?' U' D9 h" N8 n) s3 l- I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- L7 U, O; m) o0 S' ~9 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( L8 R6 V; }4 j" e5 O, K2 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; c4 Y/ j9 ~' I6 q8 |8 q% M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% j1 _( p3 W1 A: X0 K2 j& p" |7 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 T7 ~! V/ A9 P+ T& w% S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ r; e1 f" m" q. {. ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. C0 u0 o- m! j% A7 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% D# ]& e' X* s& e7 q! h* r, A/ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( l7 l# t$ U3 H% Y3 X) [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 P- ]! P1 Q' P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 I& b" C5 T4 X2 B. K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% a1 I2 G4 h! Z# Z7 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) V/ \5 f& g" ~* Z; c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% u4 X9 }' e9 o& o6 T/ \7 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! d1 u: \0 Y: V, n. E$ [% v) e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! D$ U, H" I+ \/ T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. o% Z) C7 U7 ^4 _: Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& K: l; {. |+ u/ x+ Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>