【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 Y  o4 M6 g* ?- l0 r, o  R9 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. w! d0 I2 c+ U6 l& R# G! pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 [' T& A- ]$ [; b& X9 P! [+ J; rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 J% b% E+ A' I* @4 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ s6 ]" }+ S  O( H8 s. \# M6 mSeeing the sky content with its love
& w" Z% Z8 @* l$ q+ h2 j$ oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 N- q6 L! T& P! z8 H  U* C; ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 z0 T8 T1 s2 Z$ P8 S, V8 v# _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  s8 N9 C. z' ~2 G2 UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" C0 N, S2 S. KWith such a tongue as yours,
6 f5 d) Z2 v4 t2 T& y) N8 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 g0 n! K: F7 i' \( b) r9 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) Y! x0 a5 ~4 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' F  H# ^  D, t! m$ v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: A# f) B: B8 A! P1 N! g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( X, X+ E. G' Y! I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 q2 W3 x: o7 M3 s7 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& r1 {: N8 P2 @/ W; t) \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; G; [0 V9 V1 _1 q. v5 u) ]: w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& s" y  Y% ?  `" u1 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ c9 z) K* {3 ^4 d" d* [/ S6 e% |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ |9 T# d) u# I1 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( Z* V. q" m9 ~, C) ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* }, Y6 ?+ h) Y, Y) m  L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% ]" {8 v% `% R, p+ n  r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 B. j0 K# Y! }  x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# t' V- c# Q) V& C# `: v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, v! D% j7 T5 Z  l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* u) P0 R  _9 {, [2 X4 n# M+ E/ c& g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 B1 Q. |: @* r8 s" e& X$ [, ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% Z% R( m+ C) ~* L$ j; E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% C  \7 O4 a4 P5 p! }9 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 l- \" s+ ?3 w/ J6 {) f1 [+ P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% J  l" x8 ]. D% `2 R7 H/ |& v: K& M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* h# n, Y  ?, `8 e9 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ q' t5 L, b3 r1 e) J' N  D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 f7 g( E, o; a1 W, S1 y' w我请你剖开它

) g) c% l) R9 p- `# I, x# D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>