【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# y* j9 Z. Z+ X' S4 H) O1 H$ {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% Z& w" }& O/ Y) |  B- H0 p' MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 F& ]! g: v5 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! j! X7 z* \" ?  j. I, wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 f# t1 D' L3 |* g1 X' _3 o% JSeeing the sky content with its love
& `1 ?6 c: w: G% OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 l  `+ i3 p/ GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 I8 Y9 Z' [# \& q% O  lEvery other word you utter is love
# P" |  `) U1 U/ ~0 RI really want to know just how much you love me
& q8 p) t. ^0 U2 ]. W' p8 mI love you I love you with all my heart
0 d# o9 r' w0 N; ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 n3 @: I, y6 M8 L: n$ W" \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 S' @7 p+ ?  O: F, U6 A5 y$ i2 H" v+ sI regret not dying
0 ^+ O' D' |1 |& _  V/ XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& A! s- S" c/ l1 Z% @/ OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 w' g  y3 _0 M- x! m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; M  E9 J- G% D, U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 b2 P: B, P1 e) B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! l7 T8 T7 [; D5 Y2 X1 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' n+ E/ H# O* ~7 A' L( }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; s' b2 I3 v- i+ _2 P  e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 A) r. ^6 I6 u3 r* Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ n: |, u2 H# p' B0 \! X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: e# D1 H, C/ T/ u& ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* X( ~/ A" m: R1 a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' W3 r9 D5 l$ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 X" W! E% q( b' _# v8 c3 c' G- k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ \/ L* e; Y1 ?; a* @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 x! f* t' m" [, u# z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- ~! E7 s2 f2 i( r4 V5 F& a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" r  G& \) ^+ {. `# S' a1 c' @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" \; O3 x  P2 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" u" f+ G. X. D! {- ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& h* p% q4 g* Z( P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 O% D6 ^0 \0 v: U8 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( o+ q5 T1 I4 l2 `; N, n3 m+ d/ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) k8 N! c! d! u' p( F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 V; L* @! K8 z7 h# v1 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 a2 j2 Y) R/ T, W( w. y) Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; x2 n! L- |' s: e/ Y; z5 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 H3 a' c! e6 l3 j: F2 j) J6 S, X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& U5 S% z7 U! e$ r- x4 @  W. Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; }) S' @1 x9 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 f& {  h$ W2 c. I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 q8 e/ @6 A. Z* W7 e8 I  T0 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# }" J$ }1 v- p0 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ s* m7 D7 a, E: T2 R7 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 R' f& p+ N1 k& b+ P0 N我请你剖开它

& j4 q# l, t4 V  \6 E$ o! e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>