【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ |# C; M( y% F! s8 H4 q% RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, s& r; R6 N+ x: m) r& a8 W0 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- A' h# L8 t) f+ w, \The sky is happy down to its soul
( R2 ?2 C, P) ^, T5 H0 I9 dWith the moon kissing it every night
6 w% M2 Y6 V( H9 ~4 U" WSeeing the sky content with its love
0 ^/ ]/ t* p& \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 d$ p# ^) O  ?$ |2 \" S* a0 ?' k" RYou needn’t fear anything
8 f4 O) [5 r+ h  u9 h) LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# U: H6 W) O* iI really want to know just how much you love me
& j8 ~' _5 ?! H: I/ }7 w+ W1 FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ x+ F( }: j1 l3 b7 zI regret not dying
: d5 D" j. @2 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- X9 M# |7 D( r0 o  u5 n) EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- c" l; S3 J( jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 |+ }/ e! @1 `, z9 Q) i5 ~: P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, x) n9 u/ B7 ]) `& u7 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# Y% _8 w* O3 s7 U" n0 @4 F  B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, z1 S2 x- Z- ^& @- D- H, ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: F5 Y2 k) z! W5 j% r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# e, x( i, E% O- y+ e; b4 J4 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ @0 K; V6 n) z7 s: I+ x; V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ u# ?1 p% L/ R8 H& l8 n) ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' ]6 q: A7 A8 r) C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ D. X; c1 w, X7 p- p5 Q/ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
( U# I% a0 y/ {6 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# `- @$ s* B5 b& m' u, v( J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 W- }) n, v: D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 o& W2 l' V+ {. ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 T4 e' \( E/ L4 H9 B  P6 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  x3 O6 ]+ o  j& |7 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# y* X+ y5 h, r9 F3 e* x) k: N0 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 G% I# j, {: |2 U+ X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, @, X" I* ^% J/ {( ?% c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- U. ?9 D$ b8 a1 a! F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 i4 l& Y0 `( v) F6 D9 a5 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( P/ h7 {5 R5 p5 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& J3 H' |5 K3 g' }+ F3 F. d) l% G  W2 Q9 d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; \0 i% f8 c/ O* S# B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 M- L! R; |1 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ u7 `6 U( W7 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 a! [6 B: a6 v. b. F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* T4 r" `* y5 u  `' m3 B. b& N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; p7 m" c* s; _2 Y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; c6 V" c7 t" i5 G% {- H$ }, @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>