【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 a' N* o, R/ n: ]3 w8 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ i5 B* B2 p- j, S2 i( Z4 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 \2 N% u2 v: y, T' s0 S. VWith the moon kissing it every night
- l& k! d8 _5 O: V  v5 WSeeing the sky content with its love
; K# B( t8 l; V8 {2 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 m' @. D3 Y, m2 P: eI really want to know just how much you love me
# ]- p4 ~6 ?- D" [/ _) GI love you I love you with all my heart
! e6 R9 {+ R" o' m- PNothing can compare to my love
7 m  \5 h; j" u8 V$ A. cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! ^& F; l  a- x2 h7 S+ QI want so much to see inside your heart
  }) O- C% y4 H+ P! yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& t5 O. ~# x7 s. J$ ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& _4 r% y; E4 S. z- tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& K1 l5 w, M) j+ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ l( q4 d1 S5 c, M3 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 A$ m8 ^5 y+ e; c7 v; h3 v) URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" g. c/ p6 v+ M$ t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- U7 X4 ^  n0 {3 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* U$ T8 j/ C" q3 `9 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; s4 j0 B( g4 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ^  {) d! |2 R; a* E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ j$ _  ~2 D2 `3 z! Y1 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! |: a+ _! r) a* e  O2 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  a! _8 h7 a8 X' V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& N/ [- y* }7 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) f- G9 Q  f6 X) j  m1 R* w, ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' ~+ f/ ?+ T7 k& p) O3 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% I& i# z! d; T' J1 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; g4 U* F7 b7 v0 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ d( H: b- d- N0 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ H/ c- {2 Z) M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 j. V8 e- Q0 a, u/ l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ h  _0 F4 @0 [4 ^. Y3 K: `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 i0 m' Y3 Y3 H" v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, r& \3 B9 E- g, ^& o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ z$ J& u0 N# s& z+ I" o" {/ C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 f2 Y7 t4 R& y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; o! V9 |0 _/ L5 U/ ?3 k+ S<P>I regret not dying</P>
* N0 o/ \7 X; _1 l) u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" o$ P( A& Q$ b2 ?5 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ _' K  P7 w# s% _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! I1 c* _) l  H; s9 p% F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 ?* R6 Q0 r' \/ P" @/ X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 T( u2 g9 O: e5 e, w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( V' k" H) \9 z& S9 n  C8 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* \# }0 _6 e! _$ m1 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! r' C+ m8 v4 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>