【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, d3 A2 e( ?- f! F! i. iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! V" L7 c6 I. H/ i% @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; T) e1 a) ~  _0 E, `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' k  K0 r! e/ f% ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" `  `5 Z% L* i3 G' OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. E! K( C* z, L* Y' ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' \/ W# Q; O9 l) B) ]" W# ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) J; n$ r$ ^4 ?8 I2 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' k% T) }& c# U6 N( F& g' Q, tI want so much to see inside your heart
  F+ L* u; o7 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 S; r6 H! o& f8 J+ b7 K& x9 x6 UI regret not dying
. l# f3 V9 L  m7 _2 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" w2 E7 N# }  Z/ ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ I( a2 m9 k5 C! I2 c. ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& k* F# i$ W! d3 y% r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) R& Y1 k7 p! i/ e9 K# j- g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 Z* z7 m$ s$ `1 m7 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& N5 @9 t+ c) u% Q; s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 u5 w1 {3 V' O% P! z4 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 P* Y; Z, Z! t2 t! [$ J8 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 ]" l: ~0 {5 F, F8 L: t3 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ]' D; l0 @. W) c3 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 ~. v$ T6 j, k) w3 k2 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, q. Q) L6 t" |- Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ O* B3 y) M. g+ E2 [0 O# w7 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ B+ x5 B0 u3 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% K1 I( h0 \. ~' J: A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 J6 V) W% r7 P2 A& t( q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 u- n: K7 {! {" s/ C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 b8 x7 `% n3 \0 y. ]2 _. [: b, J! P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 `; M1 h$ T) U( s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! b8 l. v" T4 x# L8 n8 H. z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& l: J- Z$ A) b& R5 n# ^1 \3 i' P: y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ H0 s; t* _+ C. g. D- p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( q+ O' h. |& r) U* r% Q( b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- u  S9 h2 S+ G7 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ~5 H1 J8 J5 O$ [. t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. T3 @7 ]" u* h  U2 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ R9 U8 o) x, Y, s7 Y  ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, P5 l: m$ k  D) X+ T* e& @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, P% k( ]  G  S4 [9 ~8 D6 E- s# ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ X0 y; H. F. t+ L& l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* V5 [0 B4 F7 e0 [3 Q" ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 Q3 u5 e8 {. I0 H3 N. |3 G3 P/ ?# k我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>