【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  v* Q* a, ]9 t! A( {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 M- g$ j. U) ]. S" {7 e) GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ n- _' v- S. P. |$ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 H) V( G7 r1 k- y  k" ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ x. o4 K! A. _) R. ?5 [0 j" m. NYou needn’t fear anything
1 \9 V8 K( Q9 E0 ]7 Y1 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, h) z! t; Z; c1 N5 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 X4 e2 T6 S$ Z" tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 p' v  `; A( ^; h* H9 l8 ~1 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U' j2 p: F2 AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 N2 |" x0 a( R1 p* B& c, i, e. lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 M, y1 x! a) a, [+ d. QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ S7 G! v* ^8 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% \8 y& b. O  Q2 O0 \- @9 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 z* }  {7 T& P, t9 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ \; m# V! h% h4 l4 r8 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; P1 q" K) b: ~2 I+ r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! P' g& g# ]) Q6 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; t! E2 ^+ C3 K" }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% n1 b+ ~* @2 `, ]1 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 C  e4 i% ]: {' p  _- U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 h  c/ B7 S. X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- S* y* |+ S! J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ y( k7 B, P! b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 E3 m9 X; i' z1 k% J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. T0 V" P$ [' `$ @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- p% g3 ^7 R, V" r3 I7 C8 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, N; G# @4 Z  W/ X7 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ ?7 `. c9 U. q: P" U9 g3 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, i1 }" O: s" P# }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Q( A8 }+ d3 u/ b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 l: J4 ]) S8 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 K: x8 M) B0 M% B* b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Z( H% N. ]- O& U" ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) J) o7 U) z6 T+ e3 D0 I, h+ A) S5 }2 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. }8 `) v9 |& [( h2 a4 t, D. m4 m' X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- D- V7 P. Z% n7 R  R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 g$ g8 O  B" q6 ~* o$ u4 H1 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 c2 V2 u7 [, c- u' @# i2 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 m9 C& ^! k- {) D6 L2 j3 o7 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& Z( S8 \8 i* L4 v# L( D. _/ d  L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>