【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, a2 `+ k  _" b3 N# c+ r/ g* M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 Q+ d" q+ W' `The sky is happy down to its soul
3 T8 @9 G; g) \& \- I' y/ ?  oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% p% d8 ]" m+ H* h/ r$ \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ A3 ^" w3 t# _9 l" w+ a1 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ d* z/ I  c$ A; p$ zI really want to know just how much you love me
! e, P6 h; L1 r0 o) t' hI love you I love you with all my heart
% y0 D: r3 U1 f$ s( h! HNothing can compare to my love
$ j: h  P1 @: s* q9 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 @' N) m, T" D% ~/ g' C8 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: b, b4 h, [, QI regret not dying
3 m% D# _) i2 U3 z6 L0 j1 O/ ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" q) T- B8 e+ [+ x( H6 P, ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ Q/ L8 G- P4 A* BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 i9 [3 k0 q/ S! t; G, m' g( pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% W- j% C  w0 c  G  v0 ^+ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 y- f4 g6 f& t8 ^* L# B% a8 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 v. f, o; N# z- E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( s; k2 r, u1 \, x7 _, @# X! Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* Z) l. t: d. o% _7 E- q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, P' t, I7 w+ v) t* s( h" h/ b4 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 L& q1 ]! x3 P) m' j: F9 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 }5 J- q5 I+ N0 {: V7 d: |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- I! r& e! ^& D8 b4 S$ I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 w) z. H# ?1 k) ]( y$ i, |+ s! g% [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 N* [$ l1 W( ?' Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  @0 d* ^! [, F, p' {8 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ h8 ^, {. p) D7 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, e1 |* a1 H* b) Y4 M- x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& S9 z* }; H/ ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! N- z8 t$ T- i! v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) r7 F1 Q+ m, u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- O6 p& Z+ J$ c% Y; F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 L( @5 \. n0 i( t/ o! c1 |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 f8 V+ p* w- ], I& E# j  B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 d* `4 b7 z* F! ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 W( o" _) R$ j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& r$ c3 O; }! P: A* W" l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" N0 F3 s) i, Y) P8 ~! j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& E4 `3 g5 P8 X- q2 ]0 C1 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 Q; D* K+ W! T/ l5 d* D# z! N; r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>