【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
& }" V$ \' ]) u9 X- b- P* V- ^
- @- M: x$ a* b<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
2 X' t2 [. U" s8 O  u$ J
0 R# B. [# |; ]
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; m  `- {$ g' {+ A+ u' o6 z9 f, mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 n' Q) c  r1 |The sky is happy down to its soul
+ I; p4 q2 I" ]* y; eWith the moon kissing it every night
  D5 t. M  C  ]1 U; J# A: HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 J9 G: a; `, C/ }1 u4 P! JYou needn’t fear anything
# p: \/ H% J6 S9 |" q) {8 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& X1 m3 K4 R. DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( Q7 H4 n% Q+ V, D) a+ h' cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: n5 i0 Q8 }2 i& R6 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 h5 e: N, Y3 I) PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 f( D# G; V: N& P: wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( }" y1 |# y1 L4 G! e$ P9 yI’m still filled with fear
% E5 J$ u8 y. Z- V  t  d1 J. HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! x) E6 b# C, `" l9 h8 hI regret not dying
0 U' f8 @8 x1 Z# D" wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 z/ n# E4 w) V/ [: KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# |, e/ a- F7 D+ `, EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 p6 }1 x$ c- L$ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 t4 X% y2 T3 F5 n9 f8 M5 c
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! G9 h( `9 J: h/ B8 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& u  ^. [" ^  |5 u+ a/ F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: k0 Z% Q, z/ z# d! R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 n4 A/ n5 L! E5 V" i1 }0 ~; w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# q( t% U" ]& d% g1 l* p: g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  Z0 y" _- Y" t7 l6 `: k& S" S! z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 d& B/ k/ o: U. N; q4 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 O; D5 H; o" M+ h2 h4 M& r% z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 F% g* ?+ |: r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' A: d; q6 v5 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- x8 f3 K7 ?* U- X# n4 ?2 h' B5 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 S' w: m9 W0 o! O2 u( u2 t% S" I  `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ]* ^0 e, y0 b3 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) M8 y  J) }# y5 B) J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( f5 x+ I/ z% ^$ c9 E4 B* Q8 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  Q6 `9 i$ j& D7 U" s  D  F; v7 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 H9 y( z' x# w, ^6 @& ~- G4 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 }6 v6 b2 E  W7 T. y, }3 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 H* K$ s! s1 L7 l6 w7 Z& i( ~# f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 E9 T* U. x, ^$ M/ ^9 {/ T# ^  X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 i  i; O; J7 X6 y: z5 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* k1 \0 _( Y; O0 r7 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ v2 b7 m3 e( g3 o7 C9 e' F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' G/ @+ f! l' k/ w* {2 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 I6 k6 k" s" d( F2 S" d. M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* t( O7 w2 G& C4 p6 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 U  l1 ]! M3 I) z1 [5 E" P% L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! _% r) X1 C. _0 d: n1 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 P6 w& }$ _- O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" {: ]* s9 V2 Z' j/ P% C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
) u2 W% U( K- Y/ s# l% q/ O# L2 B
5 [( O, P" j4 R$ G: f! P我请你剖开它
9 s! }; E$ P' S" R# O/ w4 t
$ o0 j! Y4 U* k+ U+ T9 g* m. m* z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
+ B0 g9 I9 a" g7 t* W8 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>