【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) R: O# J' E1 n& RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* V) `( d3 y# C  o* tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ U6 o. f" c3 c% U  f# g' B4 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ b4 W% r9 T- x3 \/ F+ R5 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ w, z' l* z# h2 }9 t* X2 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& v9 Z/ \/ H: x  ~' WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 v2 `0 F9 B8 O+ P9 NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# i- q8 |8 L) Q1 MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 d; K7 N7 V. C  ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" D* u) P6 S& W. ?' [) R3 e" \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 q5 b5 Y. s/ C  _% H+ r. Z% v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! @/ M4 c0 |' H' _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% J/ n2 z1 C* \" L* m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" O- x1 [  u, {  J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 H; z2 z7 P8 c' i3 \7 ~0 d8 H1 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' S* g7 Q5 F/ n# u$ P" R* N9 T0 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& T5 V: N+ x+ `! h# Y! l3 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 X6 J( [7 L7 c  l/ a# J; @<P>你无需担心</P>
, y7 W1 a! U8 K% b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* Z& F2 f, r  ]1 g3 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 D# g  a3 ~: @+ S+ {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 P# Z7 A2 x. r' i0 j; }6 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- i+ K) b1 o) a: u  i* H' o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. K; M4 R$ u8 y! `/ q4 F$ j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: a' t( f5 K" R1 _/ j8 _6 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 o6 x% j6 r+ L( t2 N; Q. ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 X" k: _  p/ }  D; L+ M0 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 \6 k; b) J' o( L0 K" y<P>I regret not dying</P>
) Q3 v) L. @+ F) w4 @& P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, G% Q# f, N1 [/ S/ z4 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 W' [0 @* m5 z$ e5 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ v, H7 ]+ p" O: v+ y) A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 u) a2 n/ g( _; I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 I  I5 d4 I! x7 _3 T+ E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) L- e1 \7 O4 _% P5 {! Q$ V& o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# S1 k7 y; Q, a; ]- l6 z2 e$ Y) Q. F% S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 e% |2 F! f$ q3 R2 n! i8 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>