【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ l  W( n9 t* n. C歌词我附在后面。
# c3 f* x: a5 ^! @5 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) a8 X: g6 j& ^3 Q, ~3 ~0 V- EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 ?$ x% Z$ y/ u5 H; h  Y$ pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 H% }9 f6 t6 F- }# VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 `& C; C1 x- P& |% |5 w' C# KSeeing the sky content with its love
# m: t. @5 Q( |: C  eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 N/ c! i4 {7 YI really want to know just how much you love me
* `. I8 L$ o  L9 t' xI love you I love you with all my heart
3 u6 s% ^# W' mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& N! }: v7 {6 C/ W0 Y: II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ^5 F/ d7 L7 t4 [! P3 z6 Z& CI regret not dying
$ |5 b7 P1 ?' o, ]! }! }9 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ |4 U) O( i* n  m4 m- h: o% ~2 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 c% W4 k0 |& V0 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 F; K; n& A, Y; P9 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 m' c/ B( j1 @+ O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ~! p$ n0 l' n5 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 w3 E& ]9 P  f' p2 L2 Z3 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ }9 z: P7 {& O; |3 L- H7 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& T, o/ a' E) L# C) R4 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: k5 h- A# j5 d! ?3 Y- Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 l9 }) ^/ A: ~; h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- j& u2 {+ p6 F: u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" o6 s8 M1 }7 [' B: U( t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ n" s; l' B  O( Y: @( @6 L7 e* y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 v6 D- M1 U- V! p) N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! V' E9 B. Y( `- P" |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& m2 n) a& d. \. X3 u5 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 K5 a& \8 N7 ]& W; K8 C9 ?& y( m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  D9 b5 M2 s3 E# F# k3 |& J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- H. L3 H0 Q; i) C+ y$ O) O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( O, X4 l% V) k4 x5 m. m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 }# ]7 z! _& m' q# y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 g2 ~. J7 R' z* P1 Y0 \. z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 v3 ]6 ~( {: p/ Y$ [, L, Q# r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 U( L2 O, x) F* v# D, `* l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 j' _# L' P- \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- H8 B; l- |+ V8 K) Y: b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, n( }. U! v. {0 x" _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  g* I1 q) S) _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ c/ v. g, E) S# @/ _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, M: e; m0 X. T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Q* Q# n# m" a  ~, d4 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 C2 o, `' ~0 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 \& F% K4 J& Q3 f" V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. g+ {$ o$ t* p5 F; m2 X  A! W% F我请你剖开它
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7 {' a  F& r- e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>