【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 C2 \& R/ I* @4 x  a2 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 s# B2 V  o6 s2 N1 H, VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 C$ {! S5 c. T% HThe sky is happy down to its soul
" u& U: K, _* p; H0 \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% {4 U% D  m3 ?8 A5 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- ~, E- F' u9 z, q9 aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% |% J4 Q8 S) ~6 H$ |3 S, XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 t# c5 k5 S* E! BI’m still filled with fear
$ V$ ~# @1 Z  [+ z! |1 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ {. [# V1 D/ q; q$ II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' T2 M' w3 Q' J, cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# a' W- H0 ]5 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& R  u& ^* Z& Z5 |; V% I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 n; A5 {% H/ @& w' r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& k' n$ Z& v" N( R8 F$ ?0 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: f4 O# E$ S9 b) ~# b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; M' a# H/ p' C, F+ a& A# F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" N' M$ O3 B6 z7 w% ]# k+ }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 `8 u0 u) ^3 ^- c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 @  L5 |# D* p* w( A# h. d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* i% X) ]( ^6 \& S* _2 G, E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' J# ?" |# T7 K4 ~7 @) E  k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 \: g0 L- ^9 b  V; ?+ q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 d# m0 ^; M) g) P/ I$ Q4 j0 y0 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& b/ f  y, c/ l4 M  W$ w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ K  {1 s4 S* p) A) \- D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 _# C# r4 ]+ a: j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ w7 h8 n* q- u8 F: U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 {4 M. z" Y% B& X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' u2 ?# L/ E" W/ A1 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 {; p- X+ Q5 m3 w3 Z: ?1 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& _5 j8 A4 h0 ~4 s7 w2 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* J- R) j& `# w' u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' ?7 ~5 z+ l# G. ^: O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. r; V/ ^* {# U' M5 G' H1 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 h. l8 l  ^$ g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* l+ D8 _3 j3 t9 y7 r2 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! Y! U, \7 U3 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! E! J, q* [- q7 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. C2 K' \: [7 A8 [/ r<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ^6 d, r0 v( l, {$ X* `" _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 n0 S% D' K0 m9 a: [4 E8 ]# S* }1 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 k- G2 _& K+ k  j8 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 Q. A/ ^9 d" I2 k0 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& G  [( B+ {) w* V  q# [; Z: G; ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 j. U. b) l3 E+ `3 P3 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& z, c, i1 s  ~8 U' f我请你剖开它
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% X" o4 L, J7 K+ h& M# o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>