【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- o0 k' N. ~# E1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 B5 Z; U4 ?) T$ X/ iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" M  v! K# t5 o- w5 YI love you I love you with all my heart
  [' h4 ~) e; \: H5 A! L1 F( ANothing can compare to my love
+ u6 L" j% T* Y9 S9 Y/ n4 U! o$ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 S7 u. O# S7 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 h$ y- R1 h' B5 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ l' S- k% {( h- xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' m2 A2 Q" i5 p0 _6 E8 I4 S+ J3 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 P8 x2 S6 n! F' q/ A4 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' w  ^5 Q/ b; L" F" S' O# c' z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 I  H; n. a: H8 ^7 d/ X% J2 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 y1 Q$ I7 {' h6 V- |$ k/ j4 B/ L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; `% T& |2 K$ v% l# M- P' D+ c1 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 ]/ O' S( P3 e4 @- X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 j1 s$ G2 k" W) z9 R. f5 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ^& r4 S# L% R9 w) T9 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& J- T$ C; O  }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 G/ T5 x$ [3 y; J% T" m( d* Z<P>你无需担心</P>
& x4 q. Q4 O3 K- {( f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 [- B; ]) v- d+ r7 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ k' M  V  @* x4 Q4 _1 D- k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" W. J* v( ~, S% B- K/ T  ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 [5 }  ]7 B3 d/ v- w( w( v& R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) v2 M$ N) [  q5 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ K% G0 b3 I. b! G& ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: x. g! V* Q2 C' j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! ?/ ?7 E* r$ g9 q- c2 J# Y) J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 c& k6 e" J/ X7 B5 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* p5 Q: ^7 C' c" T: U6 D+ L+ i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ H" z: h6 T! U+ N( ~1 ~" c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" G- u( G- u* S; D# I& H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 h7 l2 C/ C6 f5 f( H( B, m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ u8 q: t2 n% ~& W1 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- s& V" j5 y6 _: b+ }4 t0 Q7 u6 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ Q$ S1 @9 Q5 Q我请你剖开它

" D  Y& b# a, Q' Z7 F' s0 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>