【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 u1 I( H" T5 ?; B  X% e7 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 |) B! X* Q- \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 A3 b3 K$ ~! EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: g! X( i3 j3 O: t# x* [The sky is happy down to its soul
# ^) S4 R* T9 w# F$ {With the moon kissing it every night
* X( K- K& ^# W4 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& ?) W0 }4 z) @2 }* e& AI love you I love you with all my heart
& ?9 V  V2 ]! fNothing can compare to my love
6 x" S; _0 N+ b- w5 ^, fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 Q. L  L0 X( V' X! wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; h3 ]& w5 ^, }/ F5 e( eI’m still filled with fear
9 Q+ u" F. k1 p# @% }, VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- ?! S+ U* g8 ^/ NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 J3 }6 R0 S" n$ t: j* v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 z  k4 c( u. V9 t: V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% q- p0 u$ d7 T* }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ O7 A  r1 d2 O4 ]5 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 p2 _& l- h8 [" ^3 }+ @) r& |  U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; l: J& i0 T2 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 N. I2 T+ Y* {8 O- Z0 |1 ], T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: i0 D" N; o- ^* K( ^& U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ w' X/ Z) r$ S& R8 K6 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% L* n; @% C0 I$ V8 ^2 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: }: v  g* j' o4 a* X+ a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! {/ h: M' f, H' n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 T' L: V) w% \! q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 K" r) h9 \# n2 D& j/ ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" E. A$ v6 W6 f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 h3 `! `4 ?& q7 U+ `+ Q7 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- @, G/ A, @9 |7 {2 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# z' K- n3 G9 e  u5 ~) }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ u  d# ^- p0 I/ M4 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 t. G& R( e: U+ T, i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 O+ ~5 A$ I' B" q6 ^& }5 v7 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! O% h$ i- a/ d* O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  R) f4 l) ^* t3 [4 x9 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 s. D* U7 f  W8 v5 P- O# @& n. `4 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 d+ R% S8 C  n8 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# X% K$ Q3 J/ x" @9 s4 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 J9 E4 g% |1 D: G9 e# b6 g2 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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/ e$ p2 a3 @3 A! O0 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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