【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' t" T3 f# V" p+ }; S6 ^& O# y歌词我附在后面。
) _, ]0 L+ l5 F: c3 L1 z& ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; `  W+ O: i% xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 S, F# o/ {, t9 Z% f; oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 s7 ?" ~- q# M: @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& S: J9 x2 F& n" Q6 g  pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ _. B# D: |, m3 C0 A4 K0 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 E& f0 z  M/ B! SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 c" H* U3 R$ y" b6 X# sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& C+ u: E3 d; O  N' @  b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: w" v) a, b" G* _2 `- Y3 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' ]7 G4 r" p5 _4 I/ J! H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) Z+ N( L, l' n7 Y6 x1 t# v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: c2 e- }$ a* f1 y* L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ w' R2 |% E. b" L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 J( m* K; h3 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: E8 l) \! t; t/ a- E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! }) j+ u* E: j: w/ r8 m6 _, M7 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( T; P, t8 F' z" A7 {! I2 c: ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% Y$ [+ P6 u  h1 T$ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 i5 H  i6 }  W; X8 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& {) x. Z" Y& N( g2 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 q7 a3 W3 Z7 ~7 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 X4 B1 \- c/ j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ p$ k8 `* O9 O% r" J/ D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; K  u7 E+ Z0 e) `- A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# a) i/ V7 n7 m9 D3 E& j9 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 W% W/ \8 d) T6 c& h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, v" l  o+ e! t4 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 \( x$ A5 H, j1 `# b  [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ h/ _1 r2 d0 g: h7 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 w4 p% Y. t- r) m6 k: C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% H# s2 P6 R  w  P1 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* T. h7 s7 x. u( [! i) x* F: n- G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 W& M. p9 F7 E% F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 l3 R: l2 V/ l% A3 ~5 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& c2 _% c  A" s6 a, y/ A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' }. i* z1 i4 ?+ |1 I% S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; I/ j/ ^8 R. D7 R我请你剖开它

# v" l. p, N, D" s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>