【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ y! C# q( c0 N1 n3 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  j3 d, B- g5 t; P5 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ H' z( K: Z8 l9 v6 ~$ d+ A# V& RSeeing the sky content with its love
& B. s7 q0 v; w1 q! p0 l9 nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; a/ B% h# |3 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ h5 c, ~5 }7 o! AEvery other word you utter is love
2 Q* O$ E8 \3 T7 II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ R" S3 [4 x7 p7 h/ yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ `2 ]8 S3 H; _2 ]5 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 s. n  n/ {2 P$ e6 r/ ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; N1 h9 H2 ^( Q, K7 ?I regret not dying
; j7 z2 b! v5 T* t, l& @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: w6 t7 O6 B0 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! O" p/ G. Y9 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( a; u& H& B& A0 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& e' I7 p& M2 Y; Q& h3 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 a/ Q& A! S; z. T: A) s5 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 U' A7 T# ~5 m+ N5 m. N: n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 b2 k0 B' p- P' [  S; E5 L" G7 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 Z. [5 ]+ |& E: q- {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% T- s7 H) _/ _/ D6 g+ K( z! D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( u8 B+ p& d0 Y( c, V- g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- p% A$ o( h, Q9 j/ l" h! ]  l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( F* d& \$ Q& D4 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% h! U+ g& j. E' Q: H2 z* o' b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" y6 S$ a7 c) `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 `6 G8 a% z9 M9 s& r4 ~! O) f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 i% \: B: L9 g: j" J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ C& S: J! V7 ^- b+ E8 {; Y, x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# y! v) J* O5 A1 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ J7 B1 k+ o; u1 E( [# g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 o% g" Y, n! g' p& O$ @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' g- P$ H9 k6 a1 U6 E" G3 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 F# r- {- t& J, u2 L& m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 M% h' y6 H# g6 X# c; X8 l4 o7 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 V0 z) x" e9 k' L4 d( w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 c2 I2 i. V" j7 e9 r- V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& G0 a3 U) C5 _* k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; G9 n: F* l3 V( A9 J8 R+ F; }/ v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' G- D. K0 k& G; ^3 |. P我请你剖开它
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+ t; o0 V5 A% f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>