【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& ]0 h2 }+ i0 }歌词我附在后面。
6 {1 q. b1 }& c' z# S$ r8 [9 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. ?$ ?+ V6 H5 k! xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, P6 c1 c& @! w3 z' h" J! ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ^6 m  j9 {9 c8 S# v* AThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 A% K) a7 F, p0 zWith the moon kissing it every night
  u6 r- s8 D7 r0 ~$ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% H0 s  {8 `& A6 e, ?3 \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 \. d1 @$ `% f! VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 o" V# g& y8 INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 L" m. }) h) H0 h$ `3 q) T  O9 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& d+ u+ @7 S' M  s8 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 W8 i, u+ B8 r' \3 OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# X( N: T0 ^; P# t3 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 s  \( `8 y' j* @( URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# p% Y2 @: O) I/ Q1 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 b' t( F! `+ B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% N% h3 B7 v6 r8 h: T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 [* ^/ t9 R5 S4 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! _1 F4 t. Z2 m( H) Y* b  i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: Q6 u+ v4 }! R2 A, w6 p7 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) b3 x. `( N* ]4 D& a* |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& T/ L3 j- ?* f( H. u5 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  j! T8 H+ x% i. f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# {2 o3 U" ?- {4 ]3 Q! P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' `, V1 T* p+ s, k1 A( H% j  i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* a# {9 d7 i) K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% q) j! M5 t" ^0 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# B) f# [* E2 }4 F2 \# b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 w' H7 @  w1 A% l" Y/ Y3 ?0 m* G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  S7 N$ O7 y0 i8 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. l* {, L) @0 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 K' u! b& N7 z4 y( Y& P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) I; m  S1 j. {+ [3 K: d9 K# {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; F, N* |- t2 W# j9 m, H0 Z% V9 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ @& I9 G  r+ w  e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& \: t. i8 X$ V6 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( a- Y" |9 X! C* z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ K" d8 P5 l& v* R* ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 S/ ?$ d: ~; Z5 L- g) O2 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! Z3 q% ~/ U. ?  x0 G' G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: h- d& H9 i6 D* \/ M7 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# k$ z5 Z$ p9 U% D/ r% _2 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- h6 [, U# v) |6 z4 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 _7 K, q& m, n我请你剖开它

2 j7 W! S, K9 E0 Z6 U+ ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( S3 F) D) Z6 m! B7 f% x- q! [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>