【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 \" q3 J! X" ]3 V% z$ }歌词我附在后面。
* T7 w1 C6 `( |' t& s: _9 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  G# [4 [: V! ]: F9 U$ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 B) `. c- @, d, K# {+ fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ F# u* L* W8 @- S2 ~  R, lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ \& y7 R" i& l# dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 C* K" v$ x2 u1 }& W; B8 }$ K5 jYou needn’t fear anything
0 O0 V, \% S6 l* l5 n( R' XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ }( R* \" R2 Z; j8 KEvery other word you utter is love
9 z4 {- q; P. O7 k- FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) y8 |( {! s3 d/ B% |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 P0 L, _3 ]$ p; f8 S; KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- ]/ U1 [5 h' II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; U# x& f% ^4 b  m3 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& U# L/ {7 j5 M" JWith such a tongue as yours,
. b5 {, l/ N1 t- }  a) D- {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 J8 A  N  H; G: S* g# \, z: O: i# zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 }9 X* ~& @, p. q5 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, O! @& w0 M$ v! k, j$ x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 U2 X( X* g  ^0 a8 T5 B( |; c/ ^1 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( A$ Z+ D' Z) Q& s: z* d1 p4 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; m9 s* `0 L& Q2 u/ p9 ^  w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 L; O5 s9 J0 V# ~, r6 q  h& }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& a. B" I' Q% v$ A2 c0 b0 D, V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 S% `# b- P+ _' _) r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 ]2 G( s5 e# \( u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: d. m: }# t! W# W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 [. J. R, L' `5 W7 x1 C6 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- X3 b, C) @- w; o4 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 [, O7 c" z) ~& M# D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# v  b' B' ?6 ~; Z' E( M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 c  l' V; S8 R: H7 `' d% O, X<P>I regret not dying</P>
# v8 a1 v+ `- _% W) t7 Q' b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z$ y; x7 _* \0 @( N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& n# A9 T4 b7 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* v5 z% l, d+ z, J& ]0 ^$ H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 }& G* C0 V8 u4 h2 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( ?6 ]* V2 b0 E( T% ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ E" F% q2 K# \" A& q$ K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>