【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, r, i/ h; I' q- h1 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; |+ G( P6 x4 _' c9 ^3 C5 k6 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  C! ~5 |- Z  w' O- |' l. \Seeing the sky content with its love
4 ^' x6 F( {; z3 G0 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 Z$ N  M3 m/ I: AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 \2 V7 C& t' _9 sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 s" D' s: p/ o" \/ k% W' R# ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 p" v% k1 K  UI want so much to see inside your heart
4 F" J$ l2 N+ d$ E9 c5 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  S6 o4 l  M/ X, pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' o6 n% \# S0 w( `8 b$ ZI regret not dying
4 D9 P% [3 d8 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& P, R' {& F# w% N. B" F( @" KWith such a tongue as yours,
* x4 r0 ~0 V* _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- u/ @! y* t! v( ?2 i, w$ s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 x* ?8 I2 u( H3 B; A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 S5 S) `- d& v7 ]& h6 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' ^! V) m: C* O" T+ X) q1 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i, b( Z7 p# c$ L- }+ @" b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 [6 x- x  h$ z8 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) p4 \, z( x6 v0 b. T' W6 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! K  w5 |8 B5 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 v. z" [: N' W" q. D& M) `/ X% O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 V$ |1 M/ Q) c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 I5 t/ p; w3 U* G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ]+ j' J2 T8 ?2 V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ j% R, f, ^& v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  m# ~: r3 |# _, W% r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ e! Y7 v$ v  Z0 s5 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- H* ]2 z) X" f6 V5 W/ }  w/ x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 A, x0 a8 T0 j, X4 }0 l$ U1 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" l, E: Y0 p. ]1 f' f: B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( z, f6 u/ W4 E5 ^0 P: Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( m+ \( n& r5 u" ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, {5 S/ d5 H: L1 ^$ Y" K) J0 U. K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& f6 T: \- @; u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: x& K9 L3 \& D# X9 N1 f3 m( G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 m. Q* z8 o5 o% s( |- M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 g+ B5 D; ?! x) Q9 t  Z( J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 V" o( X- p) y0 I5 d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# r2 b, }% _* p5 _" T* @/ Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 P" y1 V* E6 P# z9 }7 ^) Z+ s! Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( F' Z! d+ W8 S! b3 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 F' ]/ k2 n3 R: h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ \, ]5 I* B8 G7 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>