【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# l5 W; H3 {' {: X  o! A. v7 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; e0 F9 q- `# n) ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; m7 K6 b: ^3 s/ TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  g2 `8 G4 R  a9 H7 e: nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, Q4 d( \6 e" J/ I4 {. tEvery other word you utter is love
2 U, F' l  w* nI really want to know just how much you love me
. ^, W, ^5 d$ |3 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! M! p8 P5 {! L0 L' EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 e. O( L+ c3 r: V" p4 bI’m still filled with fear
( `2 ?; g4 B1 m! o. z( nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 X# v/ ^8 D; s6 X9 DI regret not dying
3 z3 L5 i# O! a/ yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 Q* C8 s- P  r. w0 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* K( F6 N2 O; S  }1 k) x- R+ k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' |5 @- q1 [2 E" e# m, T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. L3 [1 |1 A; ]6 R1 k4 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: J! g" C* w( }9 c( y- d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 k. V! o7 B3 {8 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 G! i( A7 G1 H2 z- T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 i# f! V9 F5 X5 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% G0 q* D4 f: q3 v5 Q: L8 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ k. I& P' b2 r0 `% C8 Y$ T7 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 B* R% _, ^/ W+ v! c' Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! a; e* `% }1 K3 e" f8 ~3 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 V, Z1 \2 ~5 a; f+ T8 n8 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 q% L3 g0 z. h+ {- Y# w& R- a! R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& S8 R4 Z2 f5 o; O5 m# O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ^+ o8 x. m( N$ R7 P, s) f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 l- A$ p  \& |: g' x  G' k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 J) u) g7 h7 D- @2 G" I) I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 n  x' ^1 ~) l  c; _, {4 Z! k% \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' s* x2 i3 a2 R1 a% g' z: \& t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 f. a/ z% {+ y0 x7 i# D, ~" T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  }! z: i! K* ~5 w* e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% m5 Z( ^$ p  F' ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" r" C  V) a9 a( t. Y/ x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( j: X3 N: r8 V9 _0 L  z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 b1 Z- Q0 T! b* }我请你剖开它

0 d- Z$ `$ c9 J4 o4 P0 y: Q- U, h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: y6 m! s( Q7 k, [, I& y- `5 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>