【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
! E9 j) D6 ^6 G, j8 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" Y2 P* a& n5 K& vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ a8 y- Q) X8 S+ k; ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: ~% O4 C6 i$ lSeeing the sky content with its love
" ^6 e. g* y9 e$ R1 V& {1 V- A7 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  p2 c' [- _" F! X( t/ pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* A2 i0 P3 d) b& y+ w" GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: i) [$ a5 j6 L$ n# gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# Q5 _$ h8 N, o5 Y: HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 J# p" r4 p% s- B# nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ V' D; K6 H9 P) @2 ~- r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 B" }$ J7 \$ S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 r+ B/ D0 T# y0 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 X" ~- ^1 C1 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" |+ J2 L. Q! T% X; ^- A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 a+ r& Q, L2 l$ P# C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 M  _9 ?$ D/ ^: w' }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ W. h4 N) l+ D. w/ U- ]- s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ?; {9 ^. |  w1 c5 g0 ?* A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 b' w3 T& ]; ?9 \6 D* r  _; h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 @5 W1 w( d  l% \) F7 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% s, ?9 U7 U) d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 ~" ]; x, ~: q( e; _3 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, i8 f4 H3 t+ m& Y- U4 P% U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 u6 y5 j  ^2 J1 d- g3 v* i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) |& D6 W+ ^+ I5 k1 X; u2 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ x8 c! a" c  a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: h' s3 O( _% M1 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' D6 _- y5 O; @# o  U% D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: B' U/ h1 |4 s7 ?7 J4 X3 B- J/ `$ c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. c* S8 o4 o+ R4 W' O/ j$ x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 Q: l6 {6 Y' w. Z7 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( s7 h8 i; u: \& {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 v5 @, p9 {, M  _% `7 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ M5 T8 L! K" [6 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 `8 E* l( ^. g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 ?. H0 {$ K/ K% o0 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 Z3 }4 }1 J" t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>