【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 X! g* R# o7 F0 A* Q" q( r# @% {/ C歌词我附在后面。
. V/ ?" h6 R: WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* U, f2 G  G7 w- r+ b; z- qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( a  ~+ A- h4 K2 BWith the moon kissing it every night
: w0 N0 O9 ?0 w; pSeeing the sky content with its love
3 a7 U: j0 T2 U, j. L/ M; j4 {$ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( D& }+ S% e( N& {# H1 }2 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 e+ z! u; g5 t" u  wI love you I love you with all my heart
  G; n9 J% n8 P8 `* yNothing can compare to my love
+ L( P1 B6 u5 _0 C. ~. u; |1 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, g& J& T$ j$ p8 f% H2 r, |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ n1 u- ^! J5 g% pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) v" G7 t" ?7 g. F( q0 [/ Y$ BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- }9 m* s, o3 J# y$ E) f. L- b+ lI regret not dying
; `, H; v1 n  vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 B# G' F" h7 u! p, nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ s! a( b9 V' P3 J( v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 P- ~6 L% g3 f8 ~+ ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" M  y* y  P! t/ e! p2 a+ G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 X+ A. N! k  ~1 |% X  ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 }$ q$ `$ c! M0 O& y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 J1 F' m& @& H$ R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ s( W! p9 d- B# n9 t5 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 Q( Q. H- |' K. `6 [) x9 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 S8 d( y, Z9 f- s' t0 g<P>你无需担心</P>
% {% @1 `: S- @2 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  W1 }1 C" b: Y3 Y( t  B8 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  S, t: M9 z: R6 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- F. i( T4 I! t/ d  _  h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( P& `# p4 `8 I+ R, E9 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  m5 ~& s& {$ y7 I" D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 d4 Y; z* {. e2 W7 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* j* P) e6 p3 @3 |( U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ t# A- t1 G8 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* E4 ~* k: Z4 k$ g- B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ T: i. N) z5 z+ P9 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: n" N, F4 ~& X' G  |# y+ {+ q4 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ f$ S8 C$ X+ {6 y. m3 b( k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Y7 h# D0 D/ B  u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 o- A9 j9 g  A& ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 E" U/ O, S4 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>