【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 x, f; L5 U- ?6 ^9 f3 s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ e# B" z0 k3 Z% ~4 \/ @4 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% \8 k, ]& v, @* [5 V2 m) WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ H% S( W; Q- `  ZSeeing the sky content with its love
# t% D: T, u% H3 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) f) @  H$ z$ x$ |/ H3 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ~: V3 y- f( K& F% \/ QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 A$ I7 ^7 F( P0 K0 r+ ?% mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) p) s$ M* Y: UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 O$ Q: Y  i. i" a0 B' iI want so much to see inside your heart
1 N$ k8 K& {8 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; [1 w! C% _5 T  RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 m8 J& D/ u9 G; w& a2 GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# h: i) L6 x+ U% AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, b; s* c% j: ?+ J! U7 D& g* u9 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' e) w1 E8 H0 U3 p' I$ }$ F- u% g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 O, U! K( v1 ~: R, q+ q. Z8 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ~" t$ N& M, R* y; ~- |2 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" O; A2 B/ [' N9 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 H8 O& c! p7 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ M" t( c  E/ B( z% p. P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- T6 I9 }! W, q) m) c! s! ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  U& m, C- q  e8 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: C9 T  d3 ^8 V0 I. I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ^6 }+ J3 K$ Z$ Y% L* E/ o7 B2 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  {* M. J$ ~6 z+ v, V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' r1 |& r8 q& G8 x- k1 {4 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 q; l, ?2 L9 W( T! r+ m5 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 g! T$ o1 f" v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ X4 E8 a, o3 n8 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, d+ c  d0 w/ ^& c# V% H0 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' J2 S2 E0 r5 b2 j& F; c  y$ h5 `( a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 S2 f( z; F  i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. X2 V/ G6 f. w- ?8 k2 g) ?9 u. z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: m* H5 q/ B4 J% R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& X  C9 n# P. U' H/ X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 H  g! M* n4 G9 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ l, [0 k6 @$ h/ A! _  p: a2 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- M( O1 A% _8 b/ g1 v- B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 N8 W1 o& \' E8 F3 x9 e: a/ s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
6 |: ]4 z1 h& Y6 p
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 T7 h& ]- m& [9 A. n/ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>