【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ }# d/ p4 j& }4 [& h  K; K) I' N9 y: C' VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ z( X( R3 g6 k0 X# O+ j7 i  xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; }% p3 H1 s' V; J( }' u  KSeeing the sky content with its love
* E; h- Q3 a. S7 b( jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 R: `  S4 ]: k% a0 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; B$ [9 y) O3 K" n3 y# JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! ^1 V# a* `% n, RI love you I love you with all my heart
; p' c  u3 v: ^6 k; jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 k7 E$ d6 v6 k8 D2 b7 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) r3 V! V2 v8 b1 TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 ]  ]1 w6 c" k6 K4 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 i  C4 u' t/ _" gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ w& {4 G: X7 `! ?+ URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( x+ a! A$ ^: I( B! _. S0 H. \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& J8 v; U% k4 v' ]- Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 @9 n! }$ d! [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ \& I. L* G4 J3 L' S& A2 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% k* J$ W. i" K( y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 h3 k& l# `) L5 V3 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* m6 M+ j# @6 w- m2 Y. I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ y9 B: {( O5 t0 d* f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 p) o- u" r9 b( A( d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  K  \( L1 H& M3 p" s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% F. p3 p) q& M7 j* A. X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 @3 T5 j( J& I* h  a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 v; s9 I2 r, k6 K* a6 |9 O  N7 n; u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. v: U4 k8 J/ T. E$ S3 X' J- A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! t3 h7 g: H8 K% ?. n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 G) B+ F+ A+ Q3 l. t! R- }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' v+ K1 I& d, P! u9 F4 d% h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 b0 L* O7 c( i! x/ z$ s3 X% ?4 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 c% o9 t! {* J  l/ `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. T/ ^! G* P4 P5 L$ Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 Z- z* ?0 F0 _, k3 q# ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- \& C+ T) H& ~$ t  ^8 v. ?7 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 e9 v# Z, Q, a) }, m6 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% y4 L( C1 P% n7 B  J& e" j4 Q; Z& j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 _0 Q7 F- u! |+ t1 T: i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>