【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' {( \- A" E" u4 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. `+ {% G! O+ R/ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ I! p) o9 m+ f' q* ^9 _# oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 p  m' @3 s# t) ?3 F- k, k0 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, a1 Q: U$ K9 o5 g! oEvery other word you utter is love
* J* V9 K8 W8 F& I& V% u" e; s# |0 cI really want to know just how much you love me
( ?0 b6 k# E; b  |9 XI love you I love you with all my heart
7 D& A% J! U8 s! QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! i+ @* W5 b: g, m9 Y$ h0 I" e& d8 II want so much to see inside your heart
9 u. J$ P- C( [! f" l2 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 C2 v3 J0 g4 ?: t1 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 c2 K8 y- U4 m, }4 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, M% x5 O8 u3 G! q( \/ \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 D1 p8 R- {; t& V# K8 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 F  y6 U! v4 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ }2 |7 _- H" E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ^  A  m) u% r- _6 F7 {2 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: X7 W0 U' ^$ n2 L" U) T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( k; f1 ^) C! c; |. r" [1 J) I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* z6 q$ }9 z" e+ r, Y4 X, Q0 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Z0 H0 ~  @# `# q' X0 g7 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ T' f* [% t$ `) r! F9 @! M4 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, U2 c/ d3 m( t. k/ C# y. }2 D<P>你无需担心</P>
6 s( R5 o* }; G3 O. T* {! R- F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 a, c3 W3 m  s: K# \% o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: z7 m8 S$ D1 C/ W' H$ y0 r3 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- E* V( Y' ]/ N( p; U  P/ j6 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: f7 m% @- Y1 Q( e7 d3 j$ B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ F6 m0 N' C; T/ r# v% r) n$ g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ `: E/ R3 B5 n' U4 y: E: Y3 I+ @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  m) I; ~6 D& j) ?9 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( I- M3 e3 ~: m' b& I8 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 g0 u+ ^' W9 W/ V2 d: S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) a$ O5 H! z7 B+ g+ k8 x! B* n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) [0 M+ E; m8 r' q9 r: [0 w: J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ]6 d9 y1 j1 g. n, E1 f+ g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ R; I* d5 T% J- g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, q' J) E2 A3 E% |/ ^* g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _' O8 r: @6 l9 ]. L! _1 e# G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 ^. S) S7 q  `/ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) g) h" I  W0 Z% u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>