【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- t) O( H1 E- i6 `( YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" H, S6 U$ Q# D1 ]' o( QThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 q5 c9 O# v8 |/ e' X9 G  @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ k4 J9 g8 N) M1 n6 a* B0 |' L1 J; UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ p2 ^) E7 L/ z) [6 Y6 j1 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 V: |- x0 z/ A/ t$ N2 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# f: M1 Q; L8 u/ YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" C) B9 [8 Q9 P" H4 d& k& Z3 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* v4 J  k( E/ k. _& f# z) DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 h) x( U( a6 e% @' _& zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 O! A! `' I9 {, rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! j5 u+ r: A3 {$ X# Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ M# G+ _9 `% N  C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) ]* X9 S. ?/ p- Q1 \7 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, M4 N" S, D& ^( y# v: P( c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. l+ q2 \, C& R1 \- c6 y- p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 }1 _7 f" s. G: ~% H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ Q' X1 i$ _3 d% w" z0 m9 d, Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 i+ I. g" k* @' u  I9 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 t6 m: g7 h3 x5 `- G, r9 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 l$ W  Z8 I' h" h* I* v; P- }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ v% G$ M6 P  l4 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) j7 N$ b* \9 {. C! }' o) s6 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 \, `' l% e. \) ?6 A* b$ n, G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 J* W8 [- q. z* S2 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) \  ^# |; W7 @+ r- R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 z2 \9 U& Q0 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* j" I  L* @! Z; V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 }, n& i0 P! s7 d" l2 P4 D8 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; e/ N9 [9 l, _; a0 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 B/ _  @- Q1 n( J9 l( |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  h( W4 E; M! N& v, I! I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) g" W- R3 Z/ q. S4 a4 k# j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 V* L- q8 Z! W3 P% P/ H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# K& b6 G4 f7 Q7 l) p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  v+ k1 t% C/ _! r/ a8 z1 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% \6 }( l  X8 U4 Y1 L! Q9 |5 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ k0 @0 \! D! b7 S5 V7 @+ E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" U" `8 _2 ]( w$ {' c$ l/ c) `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# C% k9 w! j+ I2 B9 ]* t: n: q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 I# y' J4 {9 Z5 E0 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* I; B! T$ R$ I( n1 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 w* O+ O6 e) b/ p7 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( C+ ~" `% A4 t4 O4 b1 ~我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. ?+ F6 p9 Z: C5 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>