【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ I$ B$ V% Q" S, ^& G歌词我附在后面。
9 [/ n$ e( @8 T' r2 @# sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ^; g* e6 Q8 w/ u  Y6 c: CThe sky is happy down to its soul
) ]- S# H2 K9 n# pWith the moon kissing it every night
& M; C2 j1 h7 E" i* d* USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 L5 B  q( [0 O1 J0 z' K9 \9 mEvery other word you utter is love
. E2 Q6 P& O* Z* M0 w  v# ?3 d' kI really want to know just how much you love me
. R- }2 S7 c' H9 a& JI love you I love you with all my heart
8 s, B5 z9 f  b' x1 sNothing can compare to my love
( @. t0 h0 q+ y, rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 ~3 m, r" |6 V( M3 y8 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 @, U. F* s2 z- J; o& O4 |: BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N! F2 p$ v0 B- XWith such a tongue as yours,
) _) j$ T0 r* u) x* gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& g0 K: c6 L7 M- BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 z4 Y) {6 K6 d9 |  C- ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 C' g  g2 u* o3 a0 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 v/ F# y/ ]( K1 A0 G! F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& L5 M' h0 O" q: ~. g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 ]% q/ j  C' a6 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- Y4 `, W3 X& E( V% S' g5 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! l# V1 s/ A3 E% Y' t0 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: v3 C& A9 v. u1 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 {9 a, q1 U5 p7 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% K/ p$ K5 W4 a2 `8 z1 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 f: Y& D4 J/ X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; m$ S6 n5 _. y  Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 r6 q) }9 ?/ h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 q. j. l- @% b1 p, E( u* U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- Z% v' P4 Y' D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# X+ l4 [2 g* ^% |+ ]# {- r' M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( g8 }! O3 J9 N8 s4 z- @& d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) b+ j# \" k6 M' [1 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' u6 R' `" }, e& |0 ?8 j; Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' K! v3 Q4 p: H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 M# D( r0 p/ ]0 E' q1 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 a2 s  I, }/ E; L+ y" J( M* D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. {& |( J% K4 ]' ]/ R! m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 i7 h% h" a9 E0 W% L/ S3 x4 h' s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  K( _6 _6 Q- ?) V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) h( y) [* Y. D4 K8 d; u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 b7 d: \* [6 @% U6 x. y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 s1 H0 |# {& Z- q/ @' X( `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ v; |0 P, j* t1 a8 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% P; w! e+ o6 C7 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 N; n6 a9 h, \* {% D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& U. Z% m1 y5 d/ A& R& Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* `! c4 x/ ?& ]. a8 U+ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 Y9 ~4 N8 q/ Z, z; K0 ?. l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>