【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& m- R0 L# Y6 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: ]! v# d1 H; d5 G7 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 W% b2 x; G) W& g. q3 m" ]The sky is happy down to its soul
! P; J8 q# x8 n/ V5 ^, uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( @3 l1 c' Y* S- Q  _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. c4 a$ k6 g5 {# R# CI really want to know just how much you love me
$ p+ }3 Y  n0 M, l, J, lI love you I love you with all my heart
% V8 Q6 t- s# @' iNothing can compare to my love
) |. Z+ g; R! t: HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, s9 O7 u! L. B" I8 d8 k# K9 oI want so much to see inside your heart
0 S# U, B2 N! p4 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( l* m# I  w) B+ v* Y, s; ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 \) P9 K7 V6 r% B, q" Y1 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. W, c- ]2 F& M- \% t1 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- P" ?8 R1 t3 o- b5 H: w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' s1 K* n* S/ D% m5 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, {0 H: F7 e9 E* @" X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 F  \) S7 ~3 B9 Q! a5 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% {5 n. I7 I3 X1 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 E: S# ^" {" x6 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% `3 m. S1 F$ X. S7 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( q7 R1 ]0 m% W& l% P) s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% z7 A* d* T! e, K, l: M% I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ g* e; [/ T' ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 ?4 P$ j2 n, i, e: C  D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 x9 x4 G& n2 j7 A, g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: |& ?/ s  W3 C+ Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" K2 @, p3 r+ d. [, Z- a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- A6 H$ s: u; B, v% \/ q1 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- G! H. V# l) W8 m5 n6 v; h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( V- ?# L+ M8 b% }/ M" C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* [8 u& ~7 S; V9 d- A2 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% t& H+ I3 l+ `0 d% [* U( J, O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- H6 x) ~9 w, x5 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. a7 J- `+ ~& O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% N5 g5 y8 s. b' z% O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 G( a9 G; M+ P0 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 F0 j  P; s8 x  J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 ]* Q" k2 Y: V/ N; W4 u% t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>