【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 a8 B# ]3 |- c. Y0 ^3 h' ]: ]歌词我附在后面。
( V/ {; a% z1 [/ G0 }4 J, B3 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& [; S/ R9 @$ Q2 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) o  t! L( Z/ n9 ~, b5 Y/ {Seeing the sky content with its love
9 X  O' D2 _% [, ]  MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% J* V( d7 i9 S2 P5 _+ |- p5 i6 }! S# kYou needn’t fear anything
  E0 |; v! u2 f  ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& }* p8 F2 x, {. `6 q- _. X; @; MEvery other word you utter is love
: m" M$ u0 `) _: r; ]I really want to know just how much you love me
( W( V7 }3 A! h0 MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( I5 }* s; {$ T4 `9 x( Q' X! cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( |7 U; I% O+ V0 B+ ^I’m still filled with fear
" ^) q! p* V/ }; lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% n) A" \+ T6 Z/ n/ e% }' `  I' B# ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: [* I. `. M7 p- K: A" f) jWith such a tongue as yours,
. M+ T6 q% _. b! O0 [7 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 }2 n7 r( E* u  m. s# D0 A5 T) {3 a" oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 w% ^, J% H+ T7 M' Q: yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' I1 E8 s) ~& _; S# r. b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% R) B6 H; ?2 l- o. z' Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* \% J. }- [( \, t" t/ |: }0 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% D& F! ~( c6 e1 X2 K3 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% x6 q* m: {6 }% K$ m; z# T3 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# j' Q7 V0 e/ I; x) k7 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 V  \8 ]7 \+ r( x+ {  {: \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ J! G/ g  w$ A& K3 x- H" v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 `" l: k/ t0 i' v) J! o0 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  z* a; R; B2 v3 h) o8 W7 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 I  p' k9 f8 b4 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 x  c" t5 l! d+ W( [8 H+ a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& T' i* G, \3 D: O: `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ H. E1 g3 f) q$ t# x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 E% A5 M# O& A2 E$ k/ d8 e! B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. E" O* J2 b. ~) u" ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# \! c+ s% s/ z& B( S7 y2 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* l6 p& u' r6 }4 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 q  \# ~# n! J3 R; a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; q3 D+ F$ n3 h9 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) {8 o9 Q  y% D0 I( G$ `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" T6 v7 f# M  ~- V- l( A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>