【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& P( x; ?9 P2 M6 p) l4 I0 h歌词我附在后面。
1 s) N+ w2 g% F7 V* }& }8 [' yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ M# ]$ f' P, s; RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: x' q$ g7 s' ~3 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 Z  @* M& I) |The sky is happy down to its soul
8 a: I; _) j* I$ i1 c3 M0 i3 dWith the moon kissing it every night
) _- @) z2 s9 y' wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ Y  n3 v/ S* O( |0 w0 {( W+ @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& z0 L* f" [8 W# B! {2 z6 CEvery other word you utter is love
+ L2 M9 n7 S! K5 x' xI really want to know just how much you love me
8 V% @' Q& O) @" d" r( CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% \2 U' l  C' R$ T6 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 I0 s/ D1 Z* [4 H1 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 u9 N  [; A: P; x$ ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ z2 Y/ E0 X  [9 i* jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ T. }; K, ~0 U; P6 h+ cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 P6 t9 T: s0 g5 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ D7 p4 g% s3 ^) r. v1 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! I& M) D3 s! i& U9 s+ k0 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. C! a7 V. T. g; i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 Z' g1 |" M$ k4 K' X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# |& {+ f  q8 G7 C) `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% R2 D) j5 b) ~+ |* \! W" S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% v. G6 p6 Q. U8 p0 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  t  g: h! O) w9 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 p8 l7 m) E' e$ ^& m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( l/ H4 z/ O. X" M% |* `* g3 J" u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; v5 k6 s2 M8 n3 Z9 I6 y! F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 N$ ^  m4 n  @8 F% P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ f& C& V' o% W) G' Z( A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  N& w4 y& F$ n/ p. v! \( v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 d+ l' k6 ^7 B) b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 T2 ^0 J  T( X. Z, q8 |  W" U0 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, v6 }3 X# R6 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# y( T+ H& n0 R+ y( G" c: n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ F# P, y# }3 n$ P1 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 B% [6 p  |8 l. k8 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ ~* [9 e& @. ]' _0 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) F1 {3 V/ b& l/ c& x4 A0 ]* i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ~4 Y; F$ H8 R5 t* J3 U8 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. V- F' ~% x1 z9 k6 C0 q2 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, B3 q/ N2 r5 w3 M9 l1 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 \3 b7 h2 [) W* I0 ^% }1 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, q. ?- \: H( Y7 C  U6 y1 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% i6 m; t- t  p9 u# }+ j9 G8 F5 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) C  n; }) }4 g1 x6 u0 J7 L$ n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% p/ n2 T7 }' h7 S8 t# O  N我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; A  B4 w" _9 N2 ~, O" O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>