【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 P! G0 z3 Y2 M7 g2 |+ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% ]0 |0 t: t4 r7 o& uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 x! M2 {  e8 T* O# [! n$ H8 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ G; N# N$ _- o" F% ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) [) `4 H8 e, E4 C2 ~. E+ xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 F7 `1 d/ L6 |$ W# @) _- DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 P% M4 n  y% }' g, g4 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% N: F2 {2 n8 m, N3 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, s; k1 `7 C8 x  t$ UI’m still filled with fear
; B' s8 \" D6 B* N; m7 G0 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. R; S- {0 ]1 m+ p0 i( B0 aI regret not dying
2 f: t- F, |2 \: B6 \* j& o  jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 {) h1 o1 O% L* k' |- \# JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 [% z! N% ]% I8 e+ q! E$ cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 e$ a( y6 [; ^! o* b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 |1 t) B" y$ X& ?7 S' y% c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ `( ]# k, m- l( t+ i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- N3 x- A; t/ h1 }7 c6 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 F/ L. }  ~- I5 C& r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 y) S- H" Z% {( U+ G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! A% L+ N7 t: J$ {  r! d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# }- _; z8 Y$ @+ c2 X% Q: p3 r, R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 V3 g: H. R/ z7 V( [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) g' |3 F! s$ s) ]! O& }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 c" [1 b2 ^2 E* I. |& m, l) ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 w! j, M6 b: F9 s) K$ }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ^" {1 j+ e+ l  F, C5 V: T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- f+ x5 E9 X6 [0 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! @  L+ T6 c) O' t0 w( J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 x$ w/ M4 B* w+ S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" h" y7 L$ p2 ~; l: Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, U4 z. f( w5 l; C+ i" O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- F; }3 \1 l& w! Z2 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& @  e3 r: o0 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" N3 M# Q0 k! }7 R* D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ ~& d0 d2 A5 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( s( I4 ~$ R3 J# H* G8 q4 m6 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 ~# y( S8 P$ x8 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 x7 y9 e+ D+ i! l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>