【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 Y* M/ r1 X  V& \( ]4 n+ fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* f* N  Q2 N" q3 O* F& s3 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# P4 z) W9 n( {* a: R4 r$ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 n3 K7 ?& {2 Z- @& I7 u$ iI love you I love you with all my heart
# N& s5 H- t& Q. D8 u3 V4 `" GNothing can compare to my love
  a3 T$ C; Z& j. P4 Y$ u: ?8 T* GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 W% U  g' G% _0 G( nI want so much to see inside your heart
5 A+ h" b  x1 J& a5 x0 _2 p. ^  GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* R/ ]; |! T9 `2 A# z% C3 b1 [With such a tongue as yours,
0 |1 Z- e0 p6 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, z% L! W1 n: [' wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; ]. w- l6 k: ^$ k& d: K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 Q% p" {, S  n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& s: ~; R3 Q; Y- B9 O. B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! W, G3 v- A, s# o' Z' K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  Y! W+ U$ E# r2 x# h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ Y: W- L, G; Y% ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 V; x, [! S2 \( \$ x! G6 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 Z! n' Q4 ~/ l# m  J) B5 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 s' }: v5 t( n2 z, D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 _! L8 H+ X$ g% c! \/ y: C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( [- P: L1 J2 Z' Y: S; ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: o  d* i! G- V9 N; n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& y5 Y) H- j" M: M/ Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; t/ K+ c/ z/ d$ Q: O( Q6 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 N, W+ ^- w% e' R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  o7 y& h9 K+ J9 I; ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! c: Q! H0 Y3 y9 T" \) a4 f. |7 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 u: i/ o0 U/ f$ C: p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- `" K: f: q0 }% A& Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: s8 E5 R  o  c# o1 ~5 b( V) T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 W0 |& i! z/ @7 O/ J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' W$ o7 x( u% a$ D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 Z' ]8 B& V! y" J7 K+ _3 r* s" O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 z) _& X' I7 F# g& @# F) c, ~' `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" a  D6 M6 [7 a0 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" x3 [+ a8 F' L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 k5 q# H7 r* K/ B8 Y, h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& c" Z; H4 T3 G3 i6 Z& |1 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 t- D1 V# B  D9 k- Q. |6 R1 m9 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 o. O! U2 A+ F% f: `6 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>