【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. g/ i" T" O  F8 j; |, sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# b" |5 c! A  c! }' EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* C3 q& ~; I% n* L9 D/ TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% L& V9 u3 N$ A3 _; VWith the moon kissing it every night
; F  H( d0 w0 T- N6 n, |0 B" pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ c1 L& Z2 {; hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! K5 f- r# c  b, Q: [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" W" I: C9 A, t# E) Y8 {6 CNothing can compare to my love
: `/ \+ b0 }' E. z  jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- w; g: m  }* g! n: n: w  Q% II want so much to see inside your heart
% k# h- H  ^" c. a/ b- X  A; ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& F4 O# r$ D& }. rI’m still filled with fear
+ S7 w' Q/ k5 v# \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, n. i8 [. P+ h; e1 X' e' ^4 M- ]I regret not dying
4 D% C! D% M/ I& z% x: `  O) ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ e' M. h1 h* `* S4 }* WWith such a tongue as yours,
1 x% R  r, `- S# ]4 `2 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& K% r* F) [5 P4 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 ]& I* S% l: R+ [0 `) K( r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ V+ Q% o' p' `% A' D. c" l# a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 y# `3 c1 I& b; S9 ^, a, ?6 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% h8 ^0 o! }( J9 n! m. d6 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 F! B! V% X, p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 |' P; T- y/ f% O5 V# B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* T: f3 H2 k$ W3 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" h1 S" T, A) P9 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 K  h- u/ ~6 g4 j3 X2 ^( J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* d+ C5 X3 s9 ~7 S7 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 h6 M; F8 {1 D- ?# P. C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, [( f: P. M9 K. l1 ~0 f+ d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 ], R; w8 D) L  S/ U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ?- A1 A0 ?/ X$ o4 c. P) q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ d" V& Z1 s& M) C7 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( D+ S7 A) r3 F" X- N  O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 [8 `! I7 ?: H2 d# g9 K4 ?0 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& X5 o- H" o( \" h4 V, \  g' x6 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, [6 d$ b) `/ _& {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 f# S. @' @. s6 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 Q8 L; W' k# `6 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) t! y5 W+ a" z: T" F1 b! r! D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 x. K9 L; [* N0 [- i: Z) i! F$ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, j* U% U) q) `& x4 k8 X. K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 s5 y! B7 i% d9 N/ D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' M1 q+ s5 k: U& W; a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 k5 S! @/ Z/ ~  U0 }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>