【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& ^/ c3 v/ _, V$ ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, M; f4 I" ^  C0 o* z& }8 Z- ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ ]- |& k" H# m( z6 P1 Q5 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
# O0 o# m! ?  P& T* a* j0 R7 G. R* LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 M& c4 Q/ }, F0 X& @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 @; M) K9 L) E7 GYou needn’t fear anything
5 y& @* M" T# |1 G! eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. h1 k9 _/ x3 P) ~  Y  o, WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 ~4 ~$ V) o* u3 ^) vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 P1 S! p: a: M# C- oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  U+ x/ L8 m1 q- c; A9 r: G% d5 f' VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, K% c! g) \- S3 XI’m still filled with fear
* R( ?, I9 Z# F+ f9 u, n, XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. Z; W% U( i4 q8 g1 _  [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ H2 p0 x1 N6 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ ]) P0 H" [  h. S" I, P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. E* N8 i+ c9 ]& v# j+ _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' I$ I+ p6 K  j/ e1 U! W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 C% q8 X7 c$ i/ }1 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. c# t8 }4 p/ C1 D1 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; d0 ~7 m' _; N5 m6 O4 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ h, P* s% `2 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 s5 c3 Z" \) ]- S8 n( J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" V2 I( M( l$ ^' y1 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ D7 o: Y% v+ i& P" i5 o. X! E8 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ B* D1 F! v, @( c( H8 ?/ W<P>你无需担心</P>
$ U4 w+ @9 {$ _% J0 m& @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 v7 m" t9 A) ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 u3 ?/ I3 b5 l; P) n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  J# l6 q$ ?. @8 r" U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" i# j" ~" @2 [* b: Z% C8 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 q) t5 `+ X% C& B* H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, m3 p0 M' N7 _) c9 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  j7 B/ R) c- l9 X! E- z8 P. b" a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- [- A" O3 r' M( ^+ M. @# X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: g* [/ K9 u  x$ n% [5 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ |5 b/ W/ Q" e; D. {! T- ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% m  S% o! Q5 F3 G* M! o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: Z' P+ [9 [7 x; _6 C4 K; c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; a8 Y& v* w) V4 V# U- C2 u$ m# r& q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( P. V4 G6 D% \' A3 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 A4 B: i7 t4 U1 a% n* }8 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
, S. M0 p6 t* S0 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# u5 B9 _: S  P+ O3 E2 s4 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( o7 w; t4 U0 ^# L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% I9 p& D" F  f9 r; J9 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! s8 K- `+ F& ]; k& S( L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# @3 P0 h3 P1 S+ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- S3 Q2 i6 w* P, U% M( ^3 V0 W7 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 I) F3 W- D5 [- k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* M' p. u6 {6 Q& G* u! q$ N5 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; e/ b9 \$ a# q4 A  J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 M8 g! f2 D( t6 T! b: [9 _4 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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