【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 g1 J) O" p4 D4 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ N/ N4 z9 J; r+ x+ G) sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* I2 z# u2 T) E* V( ?With the moon kissing it every night
$ V& P4 \" Z6 d- E9 h/ U, oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% l9 Y. b9 _# R. H/ [8 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 s4 }8 r& X3 q7 HEvery other word you utter is love
  v5 q4 f( V$ d1 @, |6 v% t, eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  [$ T* h2 l/ N8 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ m: X+ l0 N  oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; B0 t7 r0 M9 yI regret not dying
+ f7 W( Z% ^2 X" ^& LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- b/ P- @2 ?( q( z- jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) r3 [6 }4 o/ D: yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. `: n' B, y; p, o* T3 _1 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" P6 |. A! O4 K" c- a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( [9 m' {+ W3 g" l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 e# g2 ?$ j/ {. Q, i! m# q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ f+ I6 |% O- u( f8 Q  D  s0 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. f# `; a$ b" r+ }7 B& x# }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' g' i( F! E% c( [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; V' ?9 p, F$ g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! u1 R# t& |% z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  X( h. r$ O8 Q; u* A+ Q* o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 p1 T: X" M" t7 }( H' x- Q2 X! E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- o8 I. \# T0 p0 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  c3 D1 a0 }* P; q/ B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  Y8 C5 Q) ^* q! o# Y! s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 Y- {+ Y  C: e# }1 m3 p4 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# S& H0 J3 M' _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  Z3 K* `# ^& ?' S0 C* p% j5 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  f2 @3 N% V: M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) A# q* @2 a0 |: m+ K3 z; v; x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 p0 J4 w2 _! h( u3 c+ {, a$ s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" b4 @+ }5 ~, O& Z9 G/ P& D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 N  x" d/ t  k. R9 T; ]- T, {* {9 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 d3 T% k* X, q8 \, q5 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ z  t; j5 |& X0 h& r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" R- W. l0 h9 b; e4 F- {8 z; z( B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 I9 ~8 L& M4 @9 Z- @) h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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