【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ N! q* A1 V3 [) pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 f* S2 M6 d. Y: U3 q3 L& HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* e3 ?- `1 x& y" K4 }0 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* a6 {3 K0 c$ I6 iEvery other word you utter is love
! d- j* @7 l, e0 M# ^, u3 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ b0 h8 q/ Z/ Z5 i) QNothing can compare to my love
8 v$ v# C) _3 V& b7 \; u7 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 s, }: x# ^- [3 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" J9 u1 |3 e  H7 H7 J. FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  \+ ~" |9 O' O, J, }With such a tongue as yours,
' w* y% d1 R  x4 |8 ]5 h! LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, C4 r* R' C) A  M- b% qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( E: i" d/ z% s' D  ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: a2 N+ ]% a2 |" \% K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& Q! U& S# i7 k# b( F7 d( J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# t- d$ N5 t  Y6 Z0 L* B2 x3 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- d& G$ w  u& |) x, O9 \$ f: r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) A' ~" _6 V* ]* `1 ]/ ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, o0 ]' N$ g2 ?# P3 P3 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 b/ D* |4 D: B( B0 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 o3 A4 v4 J2 @5 }9 Y* u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 K# h: D' M# x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 o( `: O& V, u( }0 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 A( |' T$ @7 r8 l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  N) U+ L$ ^6 W8 E+ w8 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 v6 i* f/ l  `) Q: a! Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' u' |7 |0 P* Y6 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 N4 }$ U% \$ O  z( O* E2 ~. @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 ?6 J8 b* _. n8 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 |4 U0 A  @8 a" S( N0 C! _: o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 r# n& B3 h, E; ?( Q$ S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 Z4 N& l' `9 o5 T2 @- _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. _; @0 d% P# m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: A, V4 W: j; s+ Z, ^, a, p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 D2 A6 G* g4 g* h# H0 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 Z' `. D" H/ o0 G) x5 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 S+ M0 Q$ I+ r3 P* U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 t  @! N% Z8 H" u8 }+ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! W- I" A# p# z9 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 V4 T  ]" O7 r( j3 O0 n* w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>