【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ I( Q7 p! P3 U* i& NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 P: p2 C, j8 F% l6 O( ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 u3 N# u3 i" `0 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. T5 Q8 a: k2 h9 k4 o7 U! Y$ rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* V' r3 |6 f5 u' [With the moon kissing it every night
1 f7 p) X; @2 hSeeing the sky content with its love
; C. t, |  S5 l! J# PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( A( X- I* W1 c+ \$ a- {" EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ]: q/ |' q+ E/ W2 E5 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" q: {7 ?1 _6 M5 L' NI love you I love you with all my heart
. O* k' p2 ?0 G8 l+ @" fNothing can compare to my love
2 p0 ?0 }7 D/ ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 N) `4 M2 [, v. s) q3 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. M0 [: ]+ Q) D0 r, D9 ~, x3 W' BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 C! O& ~' _7 y' `3 @4 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 e7 H1 h0 \7 d& bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ B" T  W; G! P$ A  z0 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* S% ?: U& d* N) S* M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 s4 b+ N) D' b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 N1 z, g7 G  o; N3 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ]( V, \- p/ ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 o+ i" V) f) u; [4 y) V" z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' i4 z" }' S/ c' l' U2 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 e2 M; x8 D6 I( S3 B* T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 q4 z3 L  C: W6 O) j- Z8 J9 x" z2 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- ]+ w$ g* d1 z6 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' W8 Y; T. X' {  S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: Y: f3 a/ @/ G- t$ p$ F0 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ?& K4 s; Z5 Q* [- `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 Z+ ]8 u, N$ k4 w) e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" u, d8 F, g. _$ H- u9 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 _5 }' B" J9 Y1 a/ R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. D+ N! p4 p! c# ^/ a4 s7 |8 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 Y0 e2 \$ \8 i, d6 `3 }6 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ f: c* x9 {& D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" X& a5 O, z  A- p0 P# a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) P* o# q. I. |0 m) d- G) G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. l, r8 X3 f- g+ }1 L; J$ v; E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! x1 J* f6 M% d1 A1 j8 j0 a& H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>