【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! `) {% |( Y, q& @0 ]+ X/ b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, w4 B+ p$ l3 ~2 g$ u4 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# B- H- p( S. g3 z  pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! A) S% c8 f+ P+ k' yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ N8 i0 i; ~" ?: }' W' AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) t) i$ [. C& y! V' TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 l  e  W; x) Q! ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 i7 j! o8 z+ {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) Y3 P( V8 m% W4 s4 W) f. p7 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' c) K* W9 i* o: H+ zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 }. c- ~  M- v/ E! pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% [, x/ C" ~/ Y% c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, i6 \2 x$ ?8 [+ U* ?# h, K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, H4 @1 g2 ~  o) q: Q: r  e; T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 J% r: ^; n* }. s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 [0 p5 p' [* j# F3 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! }5 ?; }1 h, \+ Z' k! {, o8 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 d0 O& ]$ V5 l: q0 K. O3 y; X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 n8 i3 \4 l! Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ G0 W! M; T) Q1 h! r; _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: p( N( t0 a# N2 B1 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( U: G3 K; n  W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 F; O7 }: n0 d8 M6 d. R2 M* c/ H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; u4 q+ h  L8 ~2 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 S( i+ b& `; l0 a5 k0 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- H" [# Z; A8 g/ E6 f& {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: g8 e8 y0 V- m! x9 j2 y5 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# V& a2 u8 |  P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, U$ v1 R' Z& V; ]: m0 [+ u% M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% T8 E) c, |4 v# e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ q; h# }' s& Y8 v1 @: W- \" Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ t$ a) |% E, P/ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, a( K( R( R& B0 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. |, ]( b& f+ Y; Q, U8 N8 o3 u" I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 E# K$ n" T* X, `4 f8 d6 j+ Z# D8 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& o8 c, c4 e* |/ l+ \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* T4 n2 `6 c. R! `5 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 M; x8 c- H4 _( p' ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) W7 l0 B$ [, _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 ?/ L+ A1 e7 b7 k9 A. `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  T) S+ ~7 N4 n- b  @9 N! M1 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; w. j1 ^0 q6 g6 V  B* A1 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 s# [5 W) C9 W  b$ ^8 `) w; M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; E$ ?" g" p- B4 L- h/ k6 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- e. J# u: a5 C# y我请你剖开它
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! [$ Q4 g1 |1 O& b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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