【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 I. u) B1 b/ C( P! jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& F' W4 D9 o/ ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# H# e: z* p3 f' |2 m8 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 S6 E( e8 C( J' h9 {* FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 L7 ~4 Q5 W' L5 m4 C( gEvery other word you utter is love
5 r* m( [& R  ?8 _8 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
+ E7 f. v5 c  }6 J2 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  m! `2 p8 `, N, P9 j  oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* k- P) s- y5 m- t( \( OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- G  B. M! S6 o  f9 P/ D9 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ E) K2 b+ w0 s. u; u; }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& f7 a  H; d- O4 S5 f4 D, E0 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* W1 G- s  A. eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 d! ^! _2 y6 b) y5 ^4 G  R$ i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! \$ T( x" `; r1 l( C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% F4 f& m* n4 z; p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 e. r/ a+ E; g$ c, Q% p0 T6 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  v  O" r  g  F& V" k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 r$ R0 L, k1 n2 G( @1 F% P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% T, q+ d0 C# K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 r2 B* g. P7 @8 I<P>你无需担心</P>
- h3 ^  ?- f* r. n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. G7 T% L8 }6 G, d* Z2 X, d7 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& e2 i: b2 I/ l# l# S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! r/ Y  b3 @" n$ K- ]9 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 N; t& u* t' P' Y9 ~& x5 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' n+ F0 d  z7 d( C# m- x" Y2 o* n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! S+ g+ s. |4 z/ z8 l; Y5 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ p# C$ u( \1 y% x7 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ A- }5 j- \1 a$ k( N- B( v- y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ M7 O  O4 G5 {$ L$ s+ e9 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, Z. ]# u# l. o# E% z7 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- |' l0 N' q3 @8 L3 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ h! t) p4 f0 ^2 G1 Q" r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 S+ |) H0 U& G8 b1 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* E" E8 r& ?' w6 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 r. S5 O' H4 R2 Q2 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ~3 n2 e0 O4 d2 {1 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 }9 Q% }1 F! W9 r" Y6 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>