【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 ]3 q+ {3 N" e) }1 O7 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 L: k0 J7 |" R  Q; X% E! F: }0 U/ |% FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  R: i8 R$ Z/ f8 I; |! f8 J' ~With the moon kissing it every night
3 ?, f3 B9 \, {7 D. {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; l; ]0 G$ N- y, jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 F5 o- ^; m% u% f. }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 j& A# h, e# U' {$ _! @# gI love you I love you with all my heart
! x7 T9 v8 h1 ?) S: K4 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! h& g8 t& r/ A  e7 p- `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" C$ p" m0 c0 m% ]! RI’m still filled with fear
2 T; H  J/ R7 t$ [4 G) ]5 L: N# VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ M) S& f' i* Q3 h5 C% f& U, S, `With such a tongue as yours,
$ W( q" k7 e1 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* u7 a+ E3 {# Q6 R4 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: t, }/ p! U8 m9 M  E* w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( Z, j2 k- d: r5 [/ c$ U! L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ F& I* F" C) ~2 R% ~" U& |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: y; m, U8 K/ ]  Y" Z3 l$ p- M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 |& Q: O" _/ j7 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& E* G8 ^. e& H: z7 A1 |+ M9 h" t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 E: S1 U- s: c4 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) S4 G8 o) w& W5 [, S  R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 G( Q7 f: ]( k/ W& r* n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* T& A7 [. E" j6 p: N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( a5 g! g' \( E1 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' R9 M0 G( m; i/ O; A1 S  X4 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& a5 i1 O7 L2 J( S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) G  W: G' s- ^- ?/ [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; r7 ^$ J+ c1 y/ {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 |3 b+ x" t! r  Q3 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 n5 a+ D# g, Q$ I$ ]$ ^* B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% t+ _8 |* R+ i% V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 r/ V" u8 M! T2 M4 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. m6 D: y9 V: n  w, [' o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( F( W/ S: V6 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* P; N& z1 X% g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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  J  r; \6 e. e" i7 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* X$ E! m+ R7 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& v6 S2 r. f5 s, J, T1 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>