【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 k( z! l3 I& |; r1 F' ~5 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, @9 H2 M% ]; }  B, aWith the moon kissing it every night
8 \% F! v6 |5 G' jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 A& {0 g) U. U' OI really want to know just how much you love me
! j* q! H& X0 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ q, n0 s" V" ]& u" e) Q3 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( n  S5 g/ E  x: |- SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 c% F5 V/ f  q$ jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ }# Q# ]* r. k0 h* Q* ]9 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" n/ a0 q1 P& h& V' ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 ?: ?2 o% H: ?; q' \9 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: G: B1 O, [# @% j5 ]( v$ K% t- H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 ?8 }* [5 Z+ S+ Y& B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 T3 ]/ _) I; n  F: t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ L: |$ v* x' Y: r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 z' z6 ~$ p- r$ e# k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 a0 U3 e% D8 L5 N8 p" V- u1 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 c' n0 @1 a) D5 D6 O7 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ^9 L3 R4 ^" [1 \! r- a' Y) b) @, T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ X4 i' {, U6 L+ S, t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) A; f' a/ ]8 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ q& S; F) d; w1 S0 g- p. m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 }4 q  D& Y9 K# k' ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 M' z) T9 c7 M7 o+ u, X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' n/ x9 H# {* P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ T$ J: u! G3 P: @) a/ ]6 x, i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" o+ G3 A2 a0 k! W! k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& i% X  ^' Y/ d8 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( U/ b# A% K4 i9 W# N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ m/ l2 R0 g0 N" `; T4 w' V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# U4 |7 b1 D3 V  j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Y/ q) B# \, [- N3 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" z/ d! b, G) X. ]+ O9 f% n9 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  [* f+ ~4 w/ w<P>I regret not dying</P>
. {6 J2 Q6 |* \1 S$ G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 x$ s3 c6 y; t3 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ \( G( |: S& u5 p  j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ k/ r7 U" x, h4 I/ Q, }; o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; F" ~; k) a+ R- k! D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& C5 F+ t4 y. C: X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% C+ _3 ~; m2 Z我请你剖开它
# Z7 U) z. `% T4 n
  Q) R% l2 e9 D8 Y/ ]8 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>