【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" U; R7 g# |% q; [; i* IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( G( v$ E/ Y' V0 U1 t1 d! l: bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! w& I6 i" L: L9 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 b, s' D* Q" m8 ^) a, ?. qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 o/ D# Q, o: @! x9 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ |, |/ N; p! w9 s( TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  i' o  Y) O, m7 O9 N+ i8 d; G3 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 j& Y! S4 ^: fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ X/ }7 q/ V) N& b4 |- ~With such a tongue as yours,
9 d/ o! l2 W5 `! pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, D: Q4 p( }8 z, V/ eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 o  u, O  A9 \6 X$ f' \6 D9 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 l! }! l8 z7 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' _) K6 `; @5 L- m3 T6 W6 x6 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- _* g: F$ u+ g, q3 C$ B/ B: _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 f1 M8 B8 i. C' T" @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: T2 t6 J  `) W& L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& B) O: i, n+ y  p) }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 p2 t: M+ D9 Z  K2 a0 s1 G1 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# p9 G$ w6 B* Y7 z& ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* X: @7 u* |0 }7 [. U7 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 @5 ~2 [  [1 D6 r0 h. D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. b- p! k- g7 f9 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* x6 B, y6 p% s4 a  G( ^5 ^9 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 z$ Z0 N) e/ ^* Q+ g& ^9 p3 q' R- u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 Z8 D( [- r+ f- h4 _. k4 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Q$ W' Q: |5 x3 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 a( e  j: ~" z# y8 ?( d. [5 V4 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ T9 i, l8 ^# b' y5 e8 z6 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 q* C) M; ]1 p+ C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 z# D) Q% J4 c( W: Y# c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 k+ @% [- q$ p7 a- O2 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) d# p# s" D0 l: w0 Y, N! E) S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ^7 s  `$ ~5 k3 B/ y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 J; R/ s1 w  S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ H3 h/ B6 i, g7 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>