【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# i" q' F8 b' O6 k; I歌词我附在后面。
4 x% G9 ?( M; W: L6 h/ g8 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ s* C" o) c1 K! @$ ^: LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, K) d! N) f+ T' u/ o2 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% e% s9 G; u: |4 W5 R# XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! V' D% b( ?, |9 [5 u4 SYou needn’t fear anything
6 I) h3 ^" T3 \6 @/ |5 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 h5 P6 u- N* s' q! }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, C- V3 \! o8 J# BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( I# d1 ?8 a+ q* p/ J" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! j4 q8 u6 C9 W, X9 @( zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 b) c0 Y# T2 T5 j- L* J4 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 I* c- ^3 [! G' r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- f* ]! U6 ?% \7 Y) p( b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 Z+ h. {% F& n9 w# A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 }/ K  B  e* b# n0 n- P1 _- a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: J7 g% x3 O$ ^" g( L8 V5 ]2 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: Y0 F: d# m: O5 z1 @; q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' i2 a; D& i2 e0 Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( t- p/ \; ~" s& _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 W' T, _4 J: N+ \! o8 Z2 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  j& {7 w, N$ b+ w' T4 [0 A, S( x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, n1 z+ S5 c( p, G0 z! M4 @! i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 r4 w% i9 o- B; _. S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) t  _8 j- N+ z  D' s: ^* {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  h2 ]% }  B3 e. N* Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* `2 e! J+ |* ~, I$ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ o& C. K* x' Q7 d* q1 a" l& ?3 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 N+ k2 U. ?7 @: N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* q5 m; z0 P3 v" R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! q* f$ t! E  z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, P# V4 q  |; s7 U- }8 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. A. ]" w$ j  {8 [9 p; s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' S) W, L+ w+ I8 Q& w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: Q" Z# V* `, G/ w5 V, J8 S$ v. U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" H4 A- c. x" v) R" p; m5 K6 C* @1 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. w1 E* c! Z! }6 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& C- [) l! {. m. Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 G( i8 x" H2 j1 l% |- W5 T; F我请你剖开它

; M) I, d% L5 J5 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>