【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) I8 R7 R3 U( K- w, xThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ |( d7 I2 I) JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) _' k+ _3 p4 @9 ~+ \9 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 H$ l  Q2 z7 C7 ~6 V- jYou needn’t fear anything
5 Y4 n5 l0 F: C4 M9 B4 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ W, V8 i' C3 yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, z* t  @" m3 \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 w  o! r- g% y1 z) ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 j0 W: h4 U7 K& z, e; nI want so much to see inside your heart
! {/ W' u5 j  g1 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 Q* o+ S" G) HI’m still filled with fear
3 N9 Y5 b6 ]( IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, a, T" w. b: n# Q- x* zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ {: H8 A7 w, M; ^/ \* F; l5 XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% ~: H* Y+ j3 s; F% J( uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 k+ e8 g3 r( l) I( n2 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 u, J$ d, b( n/ V: E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' n4 Q: z) v# V# k8 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% W. Y2 P: a2 ^: @; A9 s<P>你无需担心</P>
' T, L  f# Z) @; a  m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 Q1 D; r: j# f9 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 H9 P  }8 X& Y, T6 c2 E. z& |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 v, @- w' p: h1 m8 p, ^# f# W0 V7 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. |$ l, ^; x$ d2 v  ]1 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 Q( P$ M0 T8 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' H$ U4 w/ n8 R9 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: v# ?4 N2 f  ^5 F/ R7 i9 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- {) d8 b1 N, i! A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 X- T. m0 M) Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, @. x# ?' f4 g  a' M1 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- {3 O( w; b6 ~. V" t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ d' Q# Z3 P- R- c7 i! c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. p% Q& f, E. }8 Z3 t; C<P>I regret not dying</P>
, y( R6 V- C1 d) S5 h- V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( U7 Q- L  l$ H! G' e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ?1 n' h0 o/ n$ l9 {. Q8 ]# Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  E6 J5 P5 J& b/ d5 [+ a; p- A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  N2 _" Z4 I1 o& j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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