【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" b2 ]8 t1 ]. V, d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% K2 U$ T) |# C- a5 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) t* \0 C5 [4 V% m! H, N, `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% R, ^5 |, u- N& G. \; e0 D9 @5 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 R, t6 r" b% e4 ?7 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; j0 j8 q- @6 R2 W- M! M4 Z7 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 f+ N) ]8 E. u& A- R6 WEvery other word you utter is love
0 `' \. P+ D' h# qI really want to know just how much you love me
) x' o8 D& y4 N+ `& V" G1 K) e% _" E( y3 o, [I love you I love you with all my heart
5 c. z0 A* t4 j! L! [* GNothing can compare to my love
+ \; c" Q2 g' w! R/ w+ U/ zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 Z' t* U3 @8 M$ N- iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* k: s! H! g, A( ^% p7 Y# T% O9 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' u8 u1 P8 g3 }) d/ a; K5 VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; g2 D4 E; I* }8 D% k; E: e( mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 F2 k: j7 P3 v/ S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& |* O, |5 v' a  b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* I' q% ?8 ?4 h5 o7 D0 a- i- G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 s3 b/ @: w5 i4 |" g3 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 {4 z7 k- n" F: {# I" `2 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% E6 [9 }& O: `2 U, S% Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- S" `3 s- Q  [0 W" {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 y2 U5 P1 `  l  O5 w7 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 [; g, f, y$ @3 G/ y- d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& [' h8 ^# ?9 V1 b  |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ E5 b7 j- d9 V1 w' f9 F4 K0 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 N3 j: B! D4 M, ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 u. }* o6 o3 V; X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, U; ?8 V1 t  r% E( a/ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* A% e, s: ?4 _! o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, \8 D  {6 u" q2 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  P  F1 A9 T& i8 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( |  R9 r& d# Q8 j% g, R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 R; n3 \6 q& j  E* p1 I6 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) P% h$ i2 X9 K5 u9 W* j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! c8 b" n, _5 j6 _- \* ~& Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# r/ k9 J$ m7 W- z7 m* W; P  M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
- H! p! X$ S3 D0 U# v: m/ u
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! I4 _* Z4 _; J0 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>