【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 v  A' F1 D; \$ S; u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 k) m3 ~6 ?% M9 N6 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 i" I7 c: z) e- q+ x/ m  }: nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& n1 h+ e" d+ _2 ~( T* P$ H" y# `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* q% e, b$ W2 M% ?9 N5 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; l! P9 k. D+ X' QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 N$ ]' R. e. i8 W( J0 fNothing can compare to my love
) j! V9 c, ~/ s4 s1 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 J3 l* u/ ^4 @3 M  Y+ @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 `: v. @- P/ zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( C5 S3 ]2 K4 J) IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. @8 n* ?, U2 {( z* h* O4 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 Z' u* t8 }  Z; |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& R& ]% D- y9 t  R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ n, s7 u3 t" K! M- B) Y* h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 |8 n+ Q4 D) o7 C+ W$ @' e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% H0 ]; c4 Z3 m, u+ F8 ^7 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 x" h7 C  }) d% a/ M# t# K: e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- u8 D/ v1 _% S3 V- \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ B9 p, z4 z% I( N0 g5 P: {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 h( X' S+ P) d( m+ A4 g* @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# A, Z6 F8 _% P2 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) N) n+ E1 @( [. [2 W/ U<P>你无需担心</P>
4 {) c0 a( h% m+ x3 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 s* C, B9 r! @1 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; `. b  i0 [2 C8 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: f7 _! _( [2 {  d' G) l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' E: F$ e+ L4 b6 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  D+ d  S" _8 r: N" }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. s7 l- N  C* T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* C' X# U' T0 c# h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 U: @( [5 u5 h: F2 Q) E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! U1 i' }7 o" @' @: M9 w. H5 ?8 r; Z1 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# O9 ]0 _8 o, L3 X: `$ Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: @- l( T" y5 i4 U+ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) L0 q5 g' r+ @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) S5 [# c5 {2 v. y; ?+ b$ f9 Z% @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( L: }, |8 g, n% X0 k( B  Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ P5 ?" g+ v* }7 o2 T- `' `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 m8 b* R0 F+ O/ ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 P4 j+ J- Z9 i6 D7 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 }6 o8 j" }. C  y8 K: a" E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! X1 w( j/ Z0 W. S$ d  y* l( d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>