【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. K. f: s. i# e9 r( ~' P歌词我附在后面。
7 o4 T% F; r9 V# e+ OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, s/ l" H; M7 Y3 C1 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 Q4 ?9 z! k  RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% l9 h# N6 P; @8 P3 aWith the moon kissing it every night
3 D8 Y7 F$ m9 O3 K5 gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* t+ c+ n* S7 d) w6 G. }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 \& U  C3 Q! a6 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ V! W0 F7 B9 q9 T/ pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* Q% e7 y7 P# H* R# n( EI want so much to see inside your heart
" r. G: Z6 n# NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ `( D* M0 T0 r$ N) i2 OI regret not dying
5 ^# M/ I0 m$ \7 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* D$ \7 Y* H1 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% b1 h: K5 @8 x; `. `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 y, {1 o& v- \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 W1 B& b! [- y7 o/ H4 W$ k* {9 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 Y6 A$ m4 o, A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 C0 N" N5 ~& ~9 j& Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' z+ T* O" k; t  M6 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 O! |( N8 g3 D4 p  P$ p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" o0 W  i' W( P; B+ n% _9 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ P2 l: ]  o5 b8 X8 g/ H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 s9 X- `4 q, w. B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( b7 B6 S; f$ [: ]" d$ U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 ]6 H# l" n' B! z. X  c; f% D<P>你无需担心</P>
- }/ G5 o+ [$ ~! Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ g  h( v1 B# Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 `! m) w- ~9 ^' m/ {: e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! U% K: B1 c2 @" ^' Q9 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( @5 S5 r' `; P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 S+ `; v8 L$ c8 K+ G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, U& E3 }9 w/ ~+ z/ M, u8 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 K- C7 G% f# d5 K/ w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' ?5 L# Q( B4 k- v$ L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 E% \: h7 R, B1 M5 c8 ^, t8 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 N9 V1 P8 ~9 ]2 P6 s1 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  i0 e2 b  `; l9 B" ]0 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  k. O, u5 q( T: W  E* U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 y- u! B! i( j8 @$ d/ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; q4 c9 O0 F0 _6 t- E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- F! D# x4 G- P2 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! ^5 J# E  L$ o. `2 I0 ]% G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( P7 V6 P! ]- P, l) M$ ?5 ^4 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 v& F8 Z  |) S7 v7 e/ _# T8 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! c9 o8 M/ X: P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 u& o' d+ B; [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 }% ]4 i4 Y' C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* s1 y8 P: D# e9 d/ F: c0 {我请你剖开它
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' a7 J7 @. \; y2 d; k8 j8 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ V0 i% f' Y, W4 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>