【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! w  F! ~. H% x9 l( c0 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 l  d3 s) [$ [/ u* y( zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, z3 B; C9 \$ x3 N( ^1 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ V- J$ Y. N3 f  z% M. M4 jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: @5 ~$ J* z* X5 D. ]1 |3 D. kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! E9 ~- o8 b4 Z* ?I want so much to see inside your heart
8 o7 y  F. Y5 ~+ ?+ QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) x, U# N8 T/ J7 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  }& ~4 n4 J0 A0 A! |1 t/ NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 y. t; z0 ~: h! U6 w( L+ gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 k- C  G/ Q% t" P! z5 g4 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* f0 o& E) @* `9 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  x; P; [+ k9 m! j4 v" F6 q) w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 o! z6 _& i2 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) Y6 `% W6 k' k6 O$ ~+ s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 A/ W: ?+ Z3 w+ P! r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  S. i, u( f$ V% q3 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! `2 v  J$ f% y8 v<P>你无需担心</P>
' v$ Z3 F7 p5 H$ c0 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" q, r$ s, h; l( q: e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 C$ A# h& C+ V* u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 E$ g$ e2 _. w5 u) V' d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; T2 e! W/ d) o5 ]; \6 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' @5 S# [7 _$ ^" [$ {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( n& N) a; y* a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" X$ a; Q3 N! r; w: k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 T6 {- m) z) @- B1 e/ B5 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 n1 L( s6 _- k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  a0 v( L/ V1 N$ t+ ]# i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' ?" ]7 W" |2 ]' m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ t0 A% R1 e% I- U1 }0 u  [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 T6 J% z) p2 P' l0 B: z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ j" }" ?* x9 s- u# g+ G  e. O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 @, D' w7 y& X: K: M9 _8 R  V! z: Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; S; L9 B- y7 \5 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 h% A* \! U  t7 O( w  t; B% j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 V, |2 I1 b: l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>