【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 P& a- I+ O9 a- t! }& _& ~: H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: t5 l* U* E/ o5 a' e. zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 N; l6 s0 T& V1 A+ h. FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 K" s8 _& L2 P; V) S" y7 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) G2 \  Y- G! f( a8 A" o, dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* g9 P) [% M7 n4 B$ s; O5 A  XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! k" v* l$ D7 g) n6 B( u/ qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) Z& X; I$ L5 V4 B) H9 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& \. G( b- d  I8 Q5 T1 z2 [I want so much to see inside your heart
' H8 w4 E/ o4 C) @. B+ cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 L% O0 N& j: ZI’m still filled with fear
6 _; v& q5 k. x: xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' [; E, O& B" P  K. _I regret not dying
' ~4 t) z  L1 M% v3 Q/ y1 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 s3 \  Q$ _! l! ^. E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ d" @% O: U) A* w; ]4 j; \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! v8 c2 m  b6 H2 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 c* ?6 r, Z2 e8 U; b1 J- L' V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 b8 F& C. V( t; n1 I- S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 e7 H' m, P  R. W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 y2 t, K3 }( s' G3 v7 w3 N" v9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 _0 Y3 Y5 O- M4 Q# N2 }0 \6 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ {5 s) M- J; c# U) J: H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 I- X- `; C  \. q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) P" [3 G! {4 e0 k' n9 `/ O2 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 y2 H% \3 [6 T9 |# W. Z# c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( J. H+ {  H2 r3 A  w9 {# y5 o' b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# O6 j5 q/ E( a/ q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# J6 a; S, ]& Q5 K2 F" F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 L7 K3 x% ^; c% a+ Y8 T5 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 C' o( t2 S. J* d! p& Q3 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( h! b) T2 N. l- l  C; f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 g" c. H$ J# D4 `# c0 r7 z0 [! o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; D4 R( m" V: s9 @1 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 h8 _: W+ l1 b$ D2 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 s! T  {. D* f  o0 n+ _* g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 Y3 r+ T  Y0 j; v& {$ V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 e/ y8 A! ^  h4 g2 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 J. W! C; V8 m7 U1 M! |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ G1 U& c: K# ?' u2 F0 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# }/ ?, e3 o/ _; K2 q: ~. n  H" y( L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 b8 V2 ?) J% i, s* G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% Q3 U0 j- w) K/ K# z) c4 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 v) Q/ _/ I0 `  k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 E! e/ g9 ^" W& W: H* A$ D' p! v- v9 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# J2 ^/ V) t8 I" X7 |2 ^2 D8 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ M  Y' J7 R! [6 O# J8 i7 J4 |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ B1 o( \  a) K, }* H8 P6 j$ `我请你剖开它
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7 l5 T9 C4 I8 Q+ W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>