【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 C( O' y  S. B% z8 Z歌词我附在后面。
5 x8 [2 y% C- D5 o8 J7 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; l  W( n0 l& gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; R" x$ H. D5 h. r1 @  d4 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ^, ~" X8 p1 N5 X, bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" C2 v' l5 z5 w: XWith the moon kissing it every night
6 |% c9 X7 D* P& p: p; H/ G  n; cSeeing the sky content with its love
8 k' X3 I' C6 @  }) }* iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ g6 z0 r' n- G3 C( \8 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 T- M2 A; c7 ~+ v! l% }Every other word you utter is love
2 h* Z+ X* V3 c% U: a2 z; a, hI really want to know just how much you love me
7 @8 Q0 g- o4 X. _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% e" f! P: C$ _  i: `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" v5 x* Z: O/ L7 P6 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: G* L* |* f0 X4 l4 q" y9 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, l9 W7 {& y6 Q9 B( `) l* q0 }. Y' VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; h, j$ e, B6 ~$ {5 H1 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. V" M9 ^" f  O& H/ P6 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 D9 _7 q3 W( p4 u, F- V" C$ h6 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 z1 {1 Y! o0 W  H' k$ v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 L( j% U: c+ I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 r6 @8 M7 b; @  J7 o6 z* D/ a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 b: y  Y: Q+ G; J) E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 J7 Y- u9 U3 u. a6 `# c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* k+ x5 f! F6 w1 V- e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ n4 Q- w/ l) S. N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 a/ `; h% ~: M1 u9 s6 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- G1 e2 H3 T, j5 N- T<P>你无需担心</P>
& n( c) f6 H* \1 E+ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 K" L+ n) h. B( e. ~: _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ D0 E7 d! j; L( t; b4 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  G6 b+ {1 @9 e% g8 r0 Q7 `8 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& c0 ~/ E$ v, p. O! o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 y: b% R' @9 a6 b; {: _5 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% ?/ O- r1 W5 q4 o& K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 a) f# q3 v# W, P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- v% E( W' K7 ]/ B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 M) q5 S/ _+ ^, u/ j* g3 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- Z# P4 x  E% T  n$ t4 R# K, q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, j; j: q, E+ D- t6 z: N+ d, C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 K( k/ Q0 @* C2 Y& O: F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 b- L7 H/ j7 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 S2 i9 K3 _. K. S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% k+ w; O( w- H& A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 U7 T- c4 ?  `* [7 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* h: f" R* [; `$ u( r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( k+ j6 b# ]/ Z9 |6 S& G# d! A- {& V0 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* i6 ]+ O( m  v! w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; p" W/ x5 e$ F- }0 u9 Z3 C" F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. R  D5 H8 Y" F7 V3 Q9 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 C5 L0 y$ U; Q1 c+ `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* E: T  U! ^+ G$ c, g4 r我请你剖开它
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/ ]' {% s4 n5 \5 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% E) ^8 n3 |* m, f/ Z5 k+ g- M; q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>