【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' o1 o' y' D% O1 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, {0 b' [( A! g5 m7 M# [The sky is happy down to its soul
8 k  ?- D% b' B$ d" D6 E. ~  Y0 I" rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, G1 @4 ?' `8 |( A: `6 `, |/ q; MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# m0 j2 [$ G9 Z# EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ^0 l: C# k4 P. y1 W% r; j, `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 I( u' f+ O) \8 R( HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 q2 G" Z9 E7 }) d) w0 gWith such a tongue as yours,
( g" i5 t% f, G. \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 q3 u/ U6 _5 `6 Q! bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 f6 {: ]! S/ p, [. |- v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 Y$ |! F, x0 B& ^$ |( S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! s# ^  ]9 Q2 X- ?: g5 F) }3 J5 N7 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 T; ~+ ^# E) f9 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, z8 l1 L6 @' q! @% p, l) W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! J# I6 ]7 }5 {1 J- m! I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 \9 q) m" O! q( Z" Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 l+ W0 T$ L, ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# Y5 E( |2 S% e9 e7 {. N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 \" ~; M0 k. R; [% u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ T( k; r6 ^$ Z6 ?" p" [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 a5 A3 ?) E: S; a% k& `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 y3 ?3 [9 S' @( t9 i/ u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 p: K7 K; t8 W! @, A5 s% J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 q, |* _/ o% n8 O, j: @4 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ I& u- I. [7 k9 |# Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& d( W! A5 O9 b7 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 \' F2 w4 V# U6 S& ]. j) A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' k" M6 S' v  q  z, S% Y8 Q2 B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 g9 h  ~* F0 m; p! F% A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% X( @# h# e1 Q* M" d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ k9 n4 }5 {1 S; r4 D* s3 @+ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 C' j) `5 `/ m, g$ _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 c$ o/ a2 i$ ]8 [: [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 d6 b2 i7 a" x5 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 X9 ?) K+ a" U5 i% G  ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- U. x3 }1 {2 t: B/ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 H/ E) V+ Z/ S' h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ N7 _8 K/ ?# p3 g4 G+ Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ y5 x1 A+ S9 S2 ^0 A% ~/ y0 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( w- u# q: C4 |, Z+ d, U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& R0 q9 i- k  |' u4 G0 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; Z. P+ M1 k7 Q" ]& A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& ]. o7 a: o6 H5 K5 ?, K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) L& i2 R! R' z; H我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>