【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 S2 ~$ @+ j3 u- s% h1 k+ v- W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 R( B5 @$ c" z7 g) xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- _3 y: W2 b; A% _) O( r( f( TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( p& x0 d. C/ KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 A+ k6 m, `0 H, q8 }) {You needn’t fear anything
. L- `, P% C8 M  s$ M* PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 H0 D5 Z. @% Z0 m4 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 M3 d  ^. u" ?4 K& ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ }1 ]4 w8 O- d4 o8 q7 a8 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 y+ u2 [. s* MI’m still filled with fear
$ v+ ?2 c9 f; g4 j+ k5 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 [, b$ L. W0 N% d: u6 N4 d: GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- i& @3 F; r1 {$ O4 D) C  iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 r/ f. g, X' W8 d# s' FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* K9 O9 ~; B+ {; u/ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 M" y: @; k9 x, q4 ~2 k" ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 z; W2 Q) j. M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Z5 U) c4 x4 A3 q5 B8 U8 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ], C0 ]  y8 `4 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, T! M' d# W! q1 |+ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( j2 }  o0 `" z" N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% y. M1 O" @* |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' B; n& D$ t3 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 w7 Y' E1 t0 l7 S/ F/ v* H) K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. t! R1 p( g5 o, g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 C2 D6 D1 Z. Y/ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ p6 u* j) d$ Z5 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 I( ~, ?0 u( \# \- e0 F; k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ Y6 u0 ^; N- s/ I' u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, Q2 s( M  ^9 a" V# g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 V% f$ ?; p0 j- H6 I3 J4 E* _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  x: E  m! S& t/ C( X& [. B" \9 |0 C2 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* o) p- ]. b) T2 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, b! _& ^8 V/ i' [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 }" G5 A, l; o( y# }# u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- W8 D9 L$ v3 }9 w) x. s- u* J我请你剖开它
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4 Z* k% x+ U2 u8 o/ _" |5 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>