【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ q( H0 c: c* B0 I/ {/ YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. ~+ H* D( Z* [% G% ?/ XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' C6 ?, _: c! p& M4 @# _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 S1 A. t' S6 A1 H6 A: ^  E/ oYou needn’t fear anything
' P% T6 V2 d- u& o9 d! k" k+ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 f" c0 x- U# j: bEvery other word you utter is love
( l# x& A; ~) R4 S5 v+ s, lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 T+ P! d. q" `9 B9 g7 y  kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; k; B7 ], f: F/ TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ `( q8 H, C/ I. E! r, F2 QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) A! b" U' z; @5 S! ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 t, C+ G5 n8 x  I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) x- w2 V/ N* b& S7 F, P$ q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 {% S" X, v+ ]$ L5 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& N$ J- g3 I3 N. E4 a; Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ m% P9 g+ i  c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ \9 L% h9 ?; N9 D: R+ Y" s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ^( f! G& S- w! q& Y  ?3 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( `$ k* E  S8 A) y7 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ m0 u! g7 T- E4 ^4 o! Z$ L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* A5 a9 o9 o0 N; A- A& J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 q5 l( [  ~2 n0 t/ o6 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 j3 A1 G1 z4 e0 \9 }% s$ X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; A# ^8 h; l1 e2 c5 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ Y- }. }  Q% Q$ p; `. m" y2 e" |  r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 G' z/ _; f2 c# Z) Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( V! }3 e4 n% P8 o# I8 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" V" S% N! R! J8 b5 p) [4 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ]2 t0 J% o0 b( W: ?: p  {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 f9 D! p4 w8 V9 D4 ]7 q6 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% e6 h4 I: q5 m; m) A# e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 W7 w% f, x& T9 K0 p9 \& M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 E! m3 k; [3 r  p$ W! {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# X/ ^# e# b/ l8 m! P$ p4 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* J1 N! U$ J' p. o* B2 Q) Y* O* {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q6 z8 E, W! v$ l( w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
+ M- k- a: x0 c- ]: d
我请你剖开它

" _/ [- W/ i4 Z6 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>