【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 m& P4 \% Q# l! W- F  Y& w" M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) o/ S3 C! }; `: P  Q) sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- x1 Y! Z0 Y1 C/ eWith the moon kissing it every night
5 _! [6 b: b& B) w! I: ?/ M6 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 B8 s+ Y9 o+ ~4 ]0 L: T* a  RYou needn’t fear anything
& @, j! Z% L! ^) t0 B1 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; P: N) Z' S7 a! _% u6 f5 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 N0 |% m1 v. |5 d7 T, R8 n7 j; @6 fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# \# N. J8 H9 y- \- wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# m' A" R4 D  A0 h% @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! v! s0 B" K& [5 b& o1 j2 Y+ A" k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! s2 _1 Z1 E7 _7 Y' H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' b* \. Z9 f& u* `$ l/ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' R# Q1 ^$ f) s, i0 ], M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) V% O4 @& P6 O( k7 K( S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 R0 Q% `. Q! b9 h+ [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 K+ B' ~% e+ }  C( ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 ~6 A9 G0 X$ T! ~7 |2 _<P>你无需担心</P>
3 P6 P& l6 n3 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( m7 H- \- }8 H, h4 c! \# ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  `/ C( Q+ ~7 k8 F9 L1 D8 H2 y! T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 A: c! S- V! P, ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. u8 s  L6 G/ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 o; l/ @$ v8 H. c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, p; D: a' A6 f0 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ m; ^8 E: I4 s$ V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- y2 j: p/ P9 Q4 W- h9 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 V' q3 y" `5 S4 P+ K% u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& p' Z* W" _) w- ?: ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ M- P: d0 o+ w& [, ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, n2 |2 f6 @5 z* u" }) u) q! i+ |8 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ v7 a; v5 n% M4 f$ W3 h0 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- U0 N3 Z- w* E+ ^& n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 X  E- b9 X2 w0 k3 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 |; N8 n- |+ l* A$ v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 V$ f+ V" ^$ D5 ]+ J0 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 A1 a7 |: J+ e  J4 d+ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 R8 ^2 `0 [1 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- _2 R. L) T$ m) e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 i- q2 o3 ~# H8 ^% M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% R  i6 q& q5 c+ S8 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 R5 G' C* Y9 e, B, [' l0 Y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>