【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' \$ W- }2 }1 t# s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# c8 O9 x/ ]2 K+ z( X9 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Y+ ]) g% ]) mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 m7 F! k$ H1 I( y2 s, \0 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' J; E3 y3 L$ l" e5 m! H& t% xSeeing the sky content with its love
5 e6 ]4 W( F! T- a4 f- @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ X" X% }' ~# y" v8 tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 [6 z" b& E) [6 y) SEvery other word you utter is love
& Y+ ]4 m1 X/ k; y9 u( F  U  [/ KI really want to know just how much you love me
" ?) @& X6 H" f# h- D# l7 lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 T& k, E$ `$ ?6 M  @6 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 @  X5 a) E- d  b, z9 ]3 ^+ _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. o. f5 ]: v# k* F$ @. bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 d1 a; y( v$ f: }! D, ^+ ?1 ^I’m still filled with fear
5 \( B2 U$ p  ^# e0 P( T) W# IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ N6 f0 Q* ^; B# @& MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 ^4 `6 N- {* Z. V$ I2 ~  f2 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ b; Z9 i% K7 p8 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, y8 v6 t( s% |9 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% [( v6 x. X! T3 _* Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 u4 R( m3 i/ X, t% `+ ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* s0 e/ c5 F& B/ g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 J6 _/ M7 a  `, I2 u2 A: k! D% E# P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  U% V# X* j- D  _0 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. r5 c! C, R, U) ]- L1 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 d0 s1 R5 e! n7 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# a! A. `4 o( I8 ?' g. f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, F8 {2 T7 ^4 c' a: |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 S  q$ {/ N) p  J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ^5 f0 I8 U0 x$ W+ w% D' g" s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 q& |' D2 I& ^, q7 t5 j$ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 ~0 f$ G. X/ r# f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, d* |+ `% f7 r6 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 J0 E2 v: C% L+ g8 h& ?2 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* B* U( C4 P9 C# Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ f$ q8 o* e7 `6 b" B! p5 o# o' R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 c- L6 B8 j: g" d/ h# L- S' N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) Q; n7 L) i7 Q3 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# r$ T; l! O  ?) K. d; v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" o6 s, T1 p  P5 w& |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" d6 t( U6 R1 k0 I5 f; A9 C+ u" `- u0 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% K% _1 T8 b- H# @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# @& u5 u( Y" K+ U' E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 t/ E( ?- x' L" ~  G我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 N9 Q8 Z0 @$ f0 J$ P1 N# ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>