【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; @% x* a- I: }) PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 g5 p% ^" K+ |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% s, Q! U5 K5 K0 K* sYou needn’t fear anything
( |) A: x2 {1 k' ~) k( W% C3 D, EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ L8 p7 D; ~7 Z" \6 P. t' m9 HEvery other word you utter is love
/ w6 w3 ^2 }4 l8 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 C7 i7 n# _8 D5 I9 A* bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 L$ a5 n! A- m5 i; b2 {4 i" E% tI’m still filled with fear
5 w/ T9 U# c8 p! tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# N' R. r( E2 C& B5 K, W8 K, MI regret not dying
5 s: T% N& k2 R3 Z! U( ]$ OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: g& |7 K3 N4 @* a8 W6 [/ }- MWith such a tongue as yours,
+ G0 b! I6 r& `6 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# s% |* R9 y+ \6 w$ p0 r# ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 t) `9 Z) }. d* `' w( r7 I, L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& U. ~! T1 [) w2 j0 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 C2 @$ K/ \' A2 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  p: T+ q. }5 j/ v% k( d8 y! i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ]* i1 b$ p. v, L- B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" D' {; n0 R- f, s* O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* d+ l; x+ t! x: @6 I/ p( y; T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' z, L4 h* {" @+ K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; |/ X5 m7 r  l. h8 n: g8 ]; d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& _6 z. F5 w$ x  t7 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ L$ n" B9 q/ Q0 {3 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* e, p+ P) K, a9 P, e' S7 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 D, N4 T# \/ E6 k* [; A+ X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' P. }- M6 t  O( `: ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 d2 m& y7 J5 J  @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! J, c5 M9 p5 J5 g) g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% ^+ ?) P$ P$ \2 C. z9 u  z, E* {. \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 I8 j8 b3 G% q$ c# q7 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, O( c5 Q3 w  q3 I. n2 |3 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* `) U1 g8 r9 A) r' p, U" f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) j, R) v, j* ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 f( w2 Z1 c, g& x, D( T  d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ t3 _+ L' y" {" z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# x. A6 F2 F* g" a2 Z# F9 M9 _4 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ d( w4 e4 m' ^3 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
* J/ I: m" |, T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" s8 ~1 q" e2 q0 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 @+ d  ~  X. o  `. y4 R3 Z! F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Q6 G5 O9 c: P# F' Y6 i( R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 o  F: j) k# E8 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ G$ u6 Q% ^+ [; {' r  y" \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 J+ [5 q' l' Z' i% ?6 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% d3 p7 y+ y+ }" l: z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- J  M: X! a$ e. E  \' M- f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>