【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 K% Z7 M' w* B% i  [( T5 z0 ^2 R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 S5 g' r1 w% ^# g! ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
: H/ ^1 ?  ^( K, m( t3 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 l" s2 c' m+ g' Z$ q; tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 X7 ~% n) N$ j+ a; ]2 n& L/ ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ w1 [' c9 X* x8 N. u% I6 ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 @. i, x: d) G  kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 Z3 Q8 ~4 K$ K; Y: p/ S9 D) B$ QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. M! W5 U: X' y$ v+ F' GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 A' @: R3 J  E( o9 |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 u1 I, [! @1 n* `% `# [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 c0 E7 z5 S, o1 }$ m5 `3 L  ~; VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 p4 z; H# Q  Y* u( Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 L0 \2 z7 i, A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 t- ~: r7 ~% W! {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 s. Q2 T. S/ q5 k  R: B, W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 H* {% w% j+ o! K9 h$ b/ ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' t; m2 t( `5 u* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; F2 o3 r# q( n/ X6 O8 o* e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* B( T; s. t1 x5 B1 F+ y% I- h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ H& o' F4 r( ?1 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 Z* u# N* [) ?* v7 z0 G/ b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ C0 n5 E7 ]/ T0 b2 e: s4 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 s+ l/ w5 v, N& P) w0 ~& _+ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% |* J3 q6 F: c  {& C2 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 `$ v+ ?" k" z9 j- h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 \. }9 W, s+ s9 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- c0 U6 m) v( t4 c6 P" J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 }: p3 `! J" h7 k- @+ h, X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  _! ?1 y7 b  w: h$ n$ @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 s/ ]& \. V( X) f/ Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  F5 W& F! w4 f3 [6 m  |0 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  q1 f; Z! g( ~  j: h  Q8 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ^3 Q( w9 w" Z& ^3 o) s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% H% {' z- b$ m9 K; D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ R3 P, `, Y: i) i! b4 l0 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 a0 i6 ^. T# ]4 l  Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 \1 _0 F3 m' u9 T! `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* q/ w+ m; Q/ s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ?  r3 J$ u4 D) e1 e0 m5 n9 }" K9 Q+ N% ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 J1 |' k9 c( Q- A- h* R* G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; j" g0 P! N1 S3 {. K( r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! F6 ?3 z9 I! s6 d' S2 U: y# S( O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& ~3 O0 j+ Q9 W9 o- P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  Q. X( D8 g* A( c: O) o3 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>