【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
# r1 j1 b; I8 Y5 b. p+ T
' n" F6 K, f" Z<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
. R1 D( U0 p; l3 |+ P. c

( w! |0 g% ]% ~: {: `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; P) F6 x. S* sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 w, J' _$ A( f" D2 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. m/ y! Q7 L) A7 y/ \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 B" c& m4 w3 p! b6 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
+ Y# I. r" I4 c2 Z3 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' A/ J  T" p- @- pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ~9 S( V2 z7 U) vEvery other word you utter is love
& R# r3 t3 A& S6 b, z' t  EI really want to know just how much you love me
6 m* `4 B  y- e/ P' a; CI love you I love you with all my heart
( D7 ?2 ~' R) K9 |- G: C6 `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" Y/ L# A( x5 {: L9 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ^* d' j) T8 K! W6 SI’m still filled with fear
, H$ P5 V; }+ q& _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ F6 |0 I& s0 e: }( i6 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) i' \! a7 Q! i; b4 N% PWith such a tongue as yours,
3 Y' d+ ]  @$ g( YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 g# }2 R! u' W/ p/ b2 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ }% l0 D1 q/ f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  s0 i& i, H+ l1 }8 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( ?* L6 ?- {" b7 b7 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- \) S  w9 h$ X9 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 y$ m2 O. N9 q$ e. ]: G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ]3 U; z* P3 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 t- j, s4 _: l7 c" F% u$ |  q& w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 r" E. U! l0 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 z6 F/ F) O8 o5 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 d4 V( X5 q" K5 v( S& P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 q  m5 o8 b6 ^* C9 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 ~8 h: G* Y* G6 v! C8 v' o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 _( |, s, J: h( y/ {  A4 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ m: T9 E% c& o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( [2 R! Q5 K' K  U; R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 G% n- B. Z0 l9 _- s" e' C6 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) Z" C% j9 `6 J7 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 E& ~: s) l# c5 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 x* X1 [# ^( b" u  g! r5 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 x" n) L- r( y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 R2 v5 b" w' C1 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ Z" q9 H! o5 M" y6 X/ c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% L5 U2 R7 {; w6 m  @; e. ?6 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ [& a' }; v7 N" K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
% t+ u. q3 @3 R* |& g) ?3 D
我请你剖开它
, r4 t" e" y7 C- g, w0 A
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>