【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% b1 D% Z$ c  f5 u( [3 C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: Q8 s  z% R9 s% b8 V. fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 H& |) i4 R  C% {8 W, E3 ~. }8 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, n# h4 ^# F" n& Y' d; _# j2 C; c7 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ x" j( _' R$ B; J/ g" rSeeing the sky content with its love
# V% W& R, K# M2 z0 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- d1 \# R6 z2 C5 T$ S( t! C  MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) C' U1 J: v4 i, y! [, gEvery other word you utter is love
) P- q; r( ~/ ~9 LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# P/ @( `$ P0 o$ Z9 _( D  ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 p9 O4 Q' e8 @) O& ]# f  wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; K& G* ^( [1 w5 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( _% d6 g3 Z  [$ O! {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* ?* k, [. S2 y0 U3 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 M! `3 V2 m& ~: ?% E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 H: G! J# E2 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 q3 Q- _% M3 K* Z2 \; x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% s$ i. k9 R# l9 I( F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* U+ T: I5 b6 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 z8 m8 Q. \9 k* A# R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 S- }! n/ g. x$ l" ~9 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: c/ [" B5 b, h" U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& m& ^: u! p4 X/ {/ l+ D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" O( ~' d$ v" S2 K9 g( R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 H) j* y3 ~  p) i  C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# n& t" z/ V# i6 N( {+ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ O6 a4 _2 v1 t( ^5 |0 ^5 Z' ?' R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) f. E: l- u1 w% b) X0 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% K- _" D0 c# r( ?! L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 f# V% V' S, h9 I5 @" k& {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. D% a( g/ g7 m! o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 k( W1 w2 j3 J) x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 g5 N- [7 f0 P& q, |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% A8 \% s  I) R7 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 V2 I( V: v' c) F& M/ D7 s% }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# s' H# E4 B1 X- J' A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, [$ ^' D0 s. G& I# Y7 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ N- N& }1 U6 J% ]* S, e+ R) h+ ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 Q6 Y( z9 Q( M& {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 D( d+ C0 R7 ?6 j6 `. t$ p7 X8 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# X* g! o( O/ t0 W' N6 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  N/ h8 v/ ^' H5 P3 n- O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! ]1 |6 l$ N3 C& |" u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, f7 Y. N3 M5 @  b" m" n" a* a% `4 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>