【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: q- H1 a& p2 q: s& zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' \8 I9 j! }+ w  x) M. i  {8 R. n( sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) x7 R- R% |# I% J7 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 H4 R) c% d2 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 T+ g% B! Z: S- [) kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 U+ W& e! j" Q% YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; T# @7 W+ @9 l8 o: v' aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' }+ a" ?# F; S8 H# cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 g/ {; }3 y- ]# n$ a; N  ]- _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ z# B% W. x9 ^, l3 |) G0 P% GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, a' f% O6 g: d' ?/ jI regret not dying
0 q) S( D2 _! p- C: t9 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" l- y9 r2 p' ]# D; ]6 }6 D5 Y1 kWith such a tongue as yours,
+ |& ~: j9 Q7 Q, w  A5 G1 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 Y- d8 b) N( \' hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ]% `, @! ~& ^+ r) y4 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& x( Y! @) ?, ~3 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* r( n4 d- ^2 C! ^5 a% x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 }4 q; |" {! F4 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 v5 ?! n& y" `; y8 y& H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* z( N' M: p4 U2 i! e1 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! u( g/ U/ @/ D2 i7 e2 e, {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Y8 _7 s% f2 m6 p+ f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. l4 o0 i% k2 W4 W0 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, W% x1 v) ]& m( I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' D& }+ W! y/ Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 l2 F7 n, e! s- L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. y5 K/ G  Q% Z: r& M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 {" r& W( A0 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ X8 S4 E8 |+ B8 B. _; {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ O  d% U( @2 m1 A5 s4 w* j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% B) r9 ~) {' o* r0 J% F+ Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, q, @8 i% k' [- ]% z: x3 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 y$ @1 V9 k& R: l& c" O+ d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  H6 P' G  P3 X4 b3 h8 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( X! h1 b$ b3 w5 o6 t6 k6 @- ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 Q! X* \( _3 A# V5 W# U% U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ g/ y4 W; m$ V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 V! [% J* N1 K+ c  q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% E: g0 B! i8 }- w! A# k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 `3 b- ~' s9 Q; o1 y8 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" H/ d. u  z$ _+ ?! c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 ^- `& m' D9 S0 V3 t1 a5 F) ^! }5 j1 \% r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& V3 A1 i( U% O" y* U7 c' {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- l9 V, P7 |# u, i- Q9 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 x$ D5 A$ e" P- b9 i* l$ ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* r1 R2 }' \$ j2 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>