【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 ]' }% S6 Q5 h, F+ w# y  tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ J% w2 S* E' e" e& AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 a: v) S9 e, {6 j% rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 X/ `+ e) i' n1 FI love you I love you with all my heart
9 P* `  |4 y' G+ Q6 Y( HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! j+ w( s9 a6 `/ a4 s' rI want so much to see inside your heart
8 p: b# w$ i' A2 E, z' PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; p$ t& P( T" b6 M8 `: B+ u1 YI regret not dying
; m0 }; ^0 H* c( G0 H2 V+ f$ JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; X5 W4 O" w1 @With such a tongue as yours,
# ^& D4 F  z$ J1 q, FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 w2 D+ T7 }" W% `- ~3 A& @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 G8 C* t3 o- [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 W# {& C* _) ~% w% L/ Q$ l# T- Y/ `1 q1 x5 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ~" i2 }4 b  U% D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 c3 M/ G8 D3 o. y! F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# Z9 }3 R6 ?; Q( k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& J/ I! Z6 f" H, G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. m* N0 V0 S( i: \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& V8 Z4 p" G& M6 F7 ^( p* @. S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; U4 m  x: R) n7 C# S7 G5 N. s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, [: A! x$ `4 X! Z! D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 _5 q$ [- Q7 U, W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ `+ B" c7 U3 t  y+ j! W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  G1 [# o9 K; b5 Z. C( t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: d" _! {" P7 C8 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 T- {" Y' a( \1 o; \5 s* i- [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 C8 P. B( [9 a! o" i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- i3 |) g' D: L* t8 p: B( m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, g! [+ E" i8 Q' H4 ]1 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ P, {" _0 c3 ^' e$ t- ~( f6 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) w) d- H/ y. q/ n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 v; j, _6 R2 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 c* d/ I1 a  v, p/ ?+ j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q$ E* T$ A* m6 \* t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 X9 \0 k/ e# d5 E$ m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  N  g4 N2 ^, ^9 C  b) x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>