【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 E$ i7 J; g# ?# O1 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 E* f' ^* a" I* zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ~5 l* i& h' Q  u' ], N/ }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 A  T+ U- O: {. Z2 j/ M, P7 s- }The sky is happy down to its soul
% I, i, }& g* U( t1 K* s/ c* ^- XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& u( k: i/ C: \/ e4 h" I: b0 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! @3 ?7 `* c9 I/ K' G7 \% O- oEvery other word you utter is love
$ P$ X5 |; s4 F( iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! N. q4 j$ K: ^/ f) q9 p1 uI want so much to see inside your heart
3 }, w* c6 g! M8 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; q, q% u7 T1 p$ ^I’m still filled with fear
- \, u2 n4 ~8 x+ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' @6 L, j$ B1 [8 O0 p5 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ b! J: e9 h# o5 S5 e, C8 ^With such a tongue as yours,
7 v4 C, I% \1 j3 ?- U0 ~2 V# jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& f7 a5 y4 ?; I% z- uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# l6 v/ N& F6 O0 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; E* E1 @5 v: [  u) `  \/ q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ \9 g% O* Q: A  {( e3 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 W8 z! J1 ]3 L+ J% a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- x$ o% ]" s0 N) b9 v, Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( B# T7 l" X9 [6 M  ?( o- P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% t2 @, H4 R4 U# o4 Z4 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 z" V% ]9 l/ }) c4 H4 j9 T* O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 ~1 v* u: k5 U9 D1 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  w( c: ~  _! U) F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, `! `* b8 N- b( k7 x: @<P>你无需担心</P>
2 T, g. K9 @2 c! Y6 A" Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* z8 G6 s2 a6 b( {( U( R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 k) d% n( c+ K! t$ f1 z' ]' |4 p% O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 O1 z) ^5 n7 T+ J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' r2 Z2 k5 _* ~* ~' J5 a( i6 k7 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 k9 C* r: P* ?$ f5 ^& n9 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  e# L$ q& Z( V5 Y; I) N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( w  x! k% ]2 [: |+ f  j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- q) m  f; U8 t0 O/ m) p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 t6 i% F& a, _* m  o/ i) c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 A& Z6 f5 B, o0 d4 c5 {5 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 c) `* D5 |1 B- ~5 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# A- K8 u. v& a8 Z. J& z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 [7 W! V& y$ W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  K3 J5 ?3 s& l, p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) y2 E7 A  W% X( l9 @5 C) x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 B! o5 j) j  v; ^8 H" C我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 g6 r* c. F: F" M: ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>