【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! b- t  n& L" R; z5 v/ d! BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( Z9 p7 O3 J; T; P+ _You needn’t fear anything
- I0 g; U$ ?+ F- Z+ a% XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& [  E- ?# c0 ~  E' V2 \Every other word you utter is love
* [# ]0 R$ ]# M  s9 t( oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" q( K( G6 z9 s3 g, f0 e, VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; z7 o, G; U. t* p6 t# [5 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 e8 `" T3 D9 M9 R( F2 UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 j, N4 I* R6 v# [7 M$ qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 N' B4 ]; N  ]% G3 c" M& wI regret not dying
  I0 j* h/ z' Y1 m$ FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 Z, ]0 @1 l7 ]" ^  x5 N' D" [: S5 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% o: I' c* n$ c# w' p" a5 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; h# \0 [& H% {9 n: d5 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. e9 B. |" \# e+ ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 b. B6 n: p7 v9 g9 D, C, d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& K% t9 N. K8 j3 T' c# F7 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 U5 h2 B0 ^7 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ B7 W1 R( W1 w( `3 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 i3 C1 S: X+ o2 m+ E; E. ]% f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* V$ |; D' p( M8 l# q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% g1 y8 \  p7 L& ~/ {1 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ H/ h' |3 [& G1 @  }( r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 m, _: C7 u- \2 s% f. S& ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 a* y$ _3 Y- b7 a( _0 v3 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& O5 O7 U& y$ t' U( M: W: g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! N4 m! I, W' t5 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# F" M" I0 P1 E  T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 o; m/ {9 a4 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- {) c  {3 G9 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- A1 W7 n4 t' Z. k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: M2 h9 {- b0 w% x' B$ ^' ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 M! z- n, ^9 C# F2 m1 h; ^' j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 X+ b2 {1 Q& @4 Q1 M* H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& q- |! z9 @) \3 A, e8 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. Z' H6 q2 v, H6 x6 w. L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 S5 r; X( A7 N/ i& c) U8 @; \! {3 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; S% q! Q$ j$ d: P! e2 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  y0 f& W: }" s; m0 }# U: ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>