【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 ]# c7 ?% \; c: \1 d8 [8 \1 QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
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From the first moment we met,
1 b( g2 W3 [( |I already loved you with all my heart

$ B) [4 c- {) r$ ]( U在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
0 ]( |1 I: f% u( _0 a1 D+ D1 `( n我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
5 M5 o- W. N3 @1 Z+ a0 ^2 NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
0 Z# J( [- I: \還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ L* W. J; h, f: A, uI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
: o4 T6 n( K  b! w! x/ @Why is it so difficult to express?
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& |" ~) n, @+ S+ `4 r  C愛  簡單的一句愛
; d! @! C5 ]9 I3 u% P為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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& [" i, |/ N: k5 u5 X愛你 想要告訴你
. }- ?% ^) h- ]2 d! C# N卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
; Q$ K8 n% X: n: _0 |6 a我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

' }" ?/ q& ?# x4 TCan I entrust it to you?
  S& }2 G9 n$ V) _4 _" p/ O; X  _Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
8 \/ ^1 Z2 K) b& P  T6 s6 f托付我的愛
# B( @; I8 n* N4 m: c2 i3 d4 G收在你心裡

5 ?: B6 u7 F# D& y) H+ P; z+ mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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! |* J, S& |4 Z) @  p愛你 我想要告訴你
+ y+ q4 B: m/ {0 |" I/ i卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

8 n. n) t( |$ M7 j也許有一天
# D  ~. _' J" |你將從我指間滑漏
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  h4 M" p6 X4 w: K& }; o9 j. H( lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
/ U) b% Z" k$ D& w讓我向你表白
4 l' _' {, Y6 c  i0 {* D$ Z( o我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

( ^, L0 U4 z% i. J. w不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
  G( ~1 |4 F5 @" q( TEntrust my love within your heart
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( T9 U0 B6 n4 F: L+ r6 u. _/ |可否讓我托付給你?
# D0 u) v% s: `2 x托付我的愛
& [/ W* W" x+ u+ K6 Y" I收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
- x/ B9 Y( O( {: W' f- uEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
7 {( N* H0 f4 C: V6 l6 [- C. O托付我的愛 收在你心裡


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对唱曲参赛译稿
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$ o5 x$ h6 f8 M# _2 x. z3 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 T1 g. X1 V4 a) S1 |3 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
2 O: D/ ^/ n6 ^, ]: C5 @9 t天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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( H; `% K- I: Z: O( S7 r, lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. n9 t- |7 @, B3 K% PThe sky is happy down to its soul
; n, C7 K9 K+ k- S5 q8 {With the moon kissing it every night
! k* S& w  ^# b  C( ZSeeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
: W$ G6 c$ @& {* s月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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5 P. E: n* t5 |5 ~% e$ L8 l, R+ LIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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, Q5 r) L6 X' j7 t2 C& ^我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

! D: l8 v; r# H1 J5 M. D9 j7 ?You needn’t fear anything
8 i1 q* C2 X. G& O# {- y8 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
3 z: `% Q% |& ^9 o/ o6 ^$ R8 P7 \' ?我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
" I# p) K1 I6 R, u; g堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
" X# D7 i: ~( Z我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
/ W& V# S( H$ V( ~你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

$ T8 Y* j* z8 g2 \3 _- h/ d& |+ ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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1 W& H. ^0 l. i  c: b- nI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

+ a% j+ O% @+ D, JI invite you to rip it out
- a) k5 B2 b  P- G7 W  lTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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9 m0 a4 x9 a& d( B. g我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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$ y& @5 _+ E, T  q5 ]我依然滿心憂鬱
/ X! `' D" n( S) l+ M; ~你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
1 }! r, O; i* V7 c* H+ NIt’s nothing close to 100,000

. e3 O0 V0 M# w  h! X8 I( l* ~& @+ p可惜我未能以死證明
5 j8 f& n- ~, m, y我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

( T5 e( M; m3 |. KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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% X! j# _4 n6 P7 X這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
6 }0 [2 D3 `0 T0 q7 l6 {( ~千萬個心思
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) i% I* J# X/ A( r. p2 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
4 T$ }2 J% U( d3 O2 q愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

/ k' B( L, f5 U' C是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒