【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
- J+ D- X- ~$ j. a袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

7 b# P- q* H6 n" G% m. AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* a8 Y2 B( a8 a2 G* A5 ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

+ e, {9 i% K$ G8 H" D我想我從未表露出
  [9 F: f/ \; N* n! o深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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. ]7 S5 r: j" _- n" B5 Y3 [' z# AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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. Z; U9 S6 I& k在遇見你的第一刻
% P) y4 m* z0 V8 Z4 P$ v5 B你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

0 z! y0 a1 T3 i) B( I; `6 lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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$ o6 ]( ], a* I! J# d$ r: `縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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7 }0 W" Z) v# ~: @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- N% k( S2 P* w) S5 i( yI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
3 I5 G5 |4 D' E0 w7 [( d7 s2 Z你的心情

' @) B( c! F3 Z0 rLove… just the word love
8 \6 x1 f0 w: U+ j3 b" iWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
. w  ]- ]& G1 r  i" j6 A5 ^But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

  T( o- _0 @* zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# f) `6 h& n0 {, x也許有一天
- u- d+ L- Q5 M* U你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
- n* {+ ?4 S5 A1 I; u- |. [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
0 G9 {! W; M6 b7 |  z) _2 P我心底的秘密

' o  A, u& y. i+ W4 |( `2 YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

0 t& S9 f7 c9 `  N8 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 ]& W: [; u; t  R6 F可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
) O, Z" x( ~& k4 |" P' n收在你心裡
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8 U: ?+ s8 I( e) @8 l) J6 T; U5 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

/ D) q3 A! x) p' T1 Q" S愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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6 l% @5 ^, a$ D$ W' I4 F0 gI want to confess that I love you,
8 l' ]3 L! @" Z* U0 i5 \# b1 DBut I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
: f/ Y2 c; K0 R# F你將從我指間滑漏
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* ?/ o, T/ w+ o  ]9 u0 ~' q, a; g( \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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' c7 F1 H0 b7 P) B希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
5 P  K- |5 {, F' P我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
' Z# v, a9 l# T% a" c7 GEntrust my love within your heart

3 y& y6 |* K  ?  {2 l( Z6 u3 E可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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* I' J% j* Z$ y/ u- I6 `对唱曲参赛译稿

2 z- i9 I6 ^- d- dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; ~6 C& G- g" a; bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 W) T' D' V" J: p$ JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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6 C) k! C, H' m7 C& g) s! h/ c: W皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
" {9 I: Y( j* x! p凝視著星空
; A% }  O. i) ]( U) U我心充滿快樂
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3 ?9 q) O0 B) [! G3 \& hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* R, K) G9 m$ g! Y6 yWith the moon kissing it every night
& d) m) I" h, A. g! @% @Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
; x% x) c" M6 c' d' `& I, g星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
2 s8 Y9 x8 j1 l+ m# H終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
6 v% U! K7 w+ V我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
9 `$ H. ^" u9 M+ @& C2 l$ e堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
5 u% M6 q; p* qI really want to know just how much you love me
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! `  N& n8 L$ |- R/ l- r8 O你的一言一語都是愛
! \% I3 z& a: w# `& \5 t我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

6 b3 I  ]. n% `6 T1 D/ D( AI love you I love you with all my heart
  P% k) Z/ Y! I7 c7 l: C: B% \: }Nothing can compare to my love
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0 W1 f0 K  `5 D1 \& d4 ]我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

) U, [" O7 S8 [, X2 Q* X能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 n+ K; y4 r( k' u5 Z整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

- ^0 u8 Z8 D/ W6 m: d' Z( ?I want so much to see inside your heart

0 @% Z  g. q4 ^' Z  [& s1 ^' l我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
$ R: F/ C+ k0 D4 f) t7 Y4 m. T4 dTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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5 b  U3 B; d5 `# d) s8 i% `我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
0 \* {, W4 S! u/ u; t來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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! |2 ^7 |, f! _& h1 ^0 c0 [; u我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

- }9 X3 i& @, o, x0 t( ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
5 E# A& l$ ^3 o! Y2 j# U我只有一張口
' Q; I' s2 e/ {7 w. h- [遠遠不及千萬
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; E$ m! \( f( OWith such a tongue as yours,
2 l0 @) g9 z" O% Q$ l3 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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/ j8 p( J$ _! v- a: h8 J這樣一張巧舌
; w  y! d) G$ ]: T! y( @. s0 {' D你的言語都跟不上
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' v' Q2 S9 f9 y( f# ]( B% }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

+ P5 l) I1 o) A; n5 ~) G( WRambling on about a thousand words of love
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" I5 Y1 r) u! `8 c7 ]訴說千萬個
! |. e& W, ~1 C) {# `+ p9 R愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
! \+ H: Z+ s7 H% Z8 `4 A# t/ Uxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒