【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
7 R% x/ t; P, M& w; u* h袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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) o! G3 ~; P1 H( T! uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
0 s4 o, t  P$ S. I9 H% k) ^$ A深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

$ k" L/ W# ~, R7 h/ {5 JFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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9 N+ d4 G. ?, T: f. }  O8 nWe meet and talk everyday,
3 ?7 g$ v/ X% m/ b$ y3 C1 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

. R, Q' U# t2 M% n( I6 j縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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3 c% @1 K6 N' P8 T7 {. G; d5 L/ }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 g5 K: V+ j$ @6 G0 [7 h! y凝視著你的眼
! f. M' @) }7 J3 ^: p5 Y% s% ]搜尋著你的魂
* I9 q7 B+ p) Y6 a  q' M% m8 b我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
! _' [, N" w! e3 N; FWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
# l4 x( u! n' @7 q; O! m為什麼
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. q4 d6 x" `' x: j; |2 [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
- f% x5 o) r& v% eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

3 {1 \' J. z' B4 O希望今天還不會太晚
9 D3 D8 Q9 z. C0 |讓我向你表白
9 V  z/ U  ?* e% n& }我心底的秘密
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% H6 g7 E% J  ?& J. hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

) Y' b9 r" U* a, c* {: G; E: z不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
0 e$ ~  y: n/ Q5 IEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
9 S" J0 n, ]0 _: _6 C& x2 I2 x  E托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
) Q% ~/ n( D; B# V5 p! LWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
6 p2 |+ I0 u4 }/ o6 h為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
) a3 R& g( e4 L% ^9 y  VBut I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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) h" ^; D& o* M7 r" D# B6 ]- KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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7 ^! A( b) C! C7 `8 `) O; i也許有一天
+ y: r# w( t/ b- Q  _2 z, R你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

2 \; \5 G' K$ F# f* I. N希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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  Y' E, }* n6 F3 U不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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( J% i8 q, G2 W$ n( f% hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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* ?% k: k" E; _, XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 Y8 o# e7 ^% q3 @. l( x2 Z- x" rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

( H6 v6 r" C: d4 p皎潔月光下
2 {; h- X# V$ a3 _& {: ?  r/ U天空金銀閃爍
2 }/ {- d7 s) D8 V凝視著星空
3 a1 B  W8 P# r$ p我心充滿快樂
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5 K# G" [$ z. {2 M8 [* r2 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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$ {$ d, S) @# y月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
$ ?& I* S% s# g+ _  p星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
' K# `) k. n+ E: S! e2 r& A終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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. F# D2 a  O/ X5 _( F- }你勿須擔心憂鬱
' G" e/ {% ]3 \6 N- p我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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+ Q( C& K. k5 [你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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- e# U0 H7 p% T/ s8 \I love you I love you with all my heart
1 b: p+ W: A% {/ c7 n( w: mNothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
+ y% [; M+ y& z你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

+ Q3 H8 I1 O( B7 B; ^" R3 P2 tI want so much to see inside your heart
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2 z3 o3 A+ q1 O0 u我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
( }8 m* ~4 v) H9 MTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

( q4 Z- V+ p6 X& f$ j5 D0 r我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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# \' Q) G, v! v4 J+ [I’m still filled with fear
4 Z. L$ z7 p7 ^9 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

$ n- n, L  w2 Q. w! z2 `我依然滿心憂鬱
: V$ g# d4 z" u' v' v8 G+ s你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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% {$ v; |9 k7 ~* pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

, c1 }8 R: Q) H) Z" ]: e: r1 T可惜我未能以死證明
7 @2 [0 }5 n, ]5 K% j我只有一張口
/ o7 a0 ?/ o0 C# _% ?遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
/ @& e. p' t+ B. B1 o9 y/ j+ ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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& ?  U: s3 {. h6 r& P這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

& z- ~. i1 l4 Q9 R. w% OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# u8 j/ x& O/ H* x  C如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
% C3 D8 P1 Y1 J* w7 `4 o. wxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

. ]4 U+ r* ~  r是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒