【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

; M; j0 [4 H! R4 i! V一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
* T' g/ M8 ?( L- z5 r- e; w. ]vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
3 Q0 P  ?" y# L5 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
: {2 ]+ s% c! o0 x! L& D  U: T9 l夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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( K- ?9 H/ ^4 ?' b& _; dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 W2 r& Y( l- H! Q  `* \/ f凝视明月 我心欢畅
6 |. E' z9 _2 o$ ]9 q, ~. wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- Y: w+ `& r  H5 h# `$ [月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 D$ D( D5 c' W" m' g4 v一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
6 m/ s* B+ M% c8 @看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 y8 |  q: n3 i' h3 \夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
* P* @' N* z; a* i/ K2 _我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
, x& h# ?. Z& U  s! {& m9 w9 IYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
$ @* {: M$ R6 l/ h& }1 p  uEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
0 u7 z2 H2 B3 Z; ]I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
& `' K/ R  Y/ k8 f9 z/ cNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

. e* T  T6 |/ Z$ l) O7 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ {) a% i- f. Y+ e, ~7 `  `6 v7 u# Y能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
3 i) D# \0 t* M% W% l  x. `8 g* kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ D3 K9 b) h* {# j( ?! \! O整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
. `2 R% F; g7 [' V9 P, _I want so much to see inside your heart
6 ]; Y: t. Z, I% y我真想看透你的心
) }! M4 k6 J8 \$ II invite you to rip it out
, q$ {1 A# X! ^4 ^% T你尽管把它掏去
. g& y) s( w3 ^. ]* zTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- n" I9 T2 j, S$ w+ x: y, \+ K你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
7 m( d7 ?2 F! K' c0 h0 RI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
) @* X, @! ^) e* A3 {我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ Q) A6 W0 D: H8 h1 J也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
+ ~( w1 {% O6 q( d你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% R' w7 V8 |' r能说会道 无以伦比
; m& d0 Z& B7 O. wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 d. q0 i# }! F% n5 v若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
; ~7 b2 y+ P6 l- s1 p( y* M; SRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

& P6 G7 z, y. t* b. J# xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ s7 {7 ~3 O! D爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
  x1 B7 O- Z# T3 O( I9 B) UI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
) f6 T+ Q: I7 ?& A1 n8 S! G7 C  ZWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
6 @) e* m- _4 Z5 j+ e0 X+ vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
' _0 Y$ }' h, S! }' f/ ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
# t4 ^& r9 g3 V1 ~I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
* P9 i$ B( ?; R9 j' jWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
1 [& z. k- F$ r% S& B  N% p: O) KI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
1 s% `1 i( a6 O+ N2 LBut I never did
1 ^) m+ {$ H9 [% X2 p却始终未曾出口
% J) `. a. E' ~9 ?; A$ `  ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
+ ?8 [6 L- s+ ~& Z( G3 j: `假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) I+ n* @8 ]/ N" E6 A% j, X今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 k5 ]3 e8 |) l9 X0 b不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
# _6 O* I3 H7 r' F8 i* T可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
* D7 O' Y  K  v% e" ?3 U9 H2 ?5 u从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

/ B2 s4 x( e. j" JLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
6 W# h7 b+ U' P0 {But I never did
+ R. K- }" O8 ]' H却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* ^; d. b7 @/ X$ ?/ {5 V只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
( w0 q5 U% ~* p$ K* k$ ]4 r6 m假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
* N* ?- Z, x+ l" `& n* t可否将它 托付于你？
9 Y- g6 h# s4 u" y5 ^; DEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
. L# c) {2 Z9 y$ B- K$ R$ U2 G从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
) K" r2 r7 t) D" h" D老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
) d6 e  l; }  c老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
% b/ B" E' H6 m! c" vvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。