【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

7 p6 c. u1 m: _6 n1 b一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

( ?" U' K- u: _8 ]+ e) M再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
: F& X  N' w; r9 P4 t  ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
. U8 w4 x  b; x  p) j% W8 E夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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/ |/ N7 x1 \/ u$ W" C( ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ |% r7 |  ?9 A' I月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
) w9 u( h$ d1 N" P7 r2 i一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
# K. g+ j) R; h看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
+ x4 ]4 F' a) v  q7 OSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
. n3 h! u& ~  l4 x. c: H  vIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
; L- C2 q9 T/ q, h9 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& _, t2 H& l& V9 h+ c我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
( g0 I! ?' T9 U! T1 mEvery other word you utter is love
( k, P( u# \6 H/ t' y( v5 \口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 r8 w! f& P8 [: l6 N真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
- \7 h' {" H9 t4 K1 p) c; G4 _世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% y) ^- n. m' t9 x9 H. i8 Z能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
0 T7 |* q; L0 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) i) T& P: W& n9 V' G整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
9 x' m8 H. }" j3 s& s0 u+ ^/ Z, R+ fI invite you to rip it out
9 ?+ ?& `1 v. n$ @9 c你尽管把它掏去
9 ?4 W$ r- w  [) g( cTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
# W, z7 i2 Z! O4 q7 B0 D* xI’m still filled with fear
9 x3 }# K5 W0 O( E" c可我依然满心忧虑
% `' f9 N' ^, A& O! z' `9 `$ B% zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
* [% U7 K3 F( y1 ^$ k; W0 q3 uI regret not dying
. C0 D1 S" ~: f- `真恨不能 以死明志
1 i. B: ~4 }6 ^0 PI only have one tongue
$ N0 \! M: ]/ `- Z我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
* {7 S: l6 @6 [也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
; S. ^, ], x5 ~5 z# u  W) v你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, U8 D) W$ h+ N1 z$ |5 w/ }/ m能说会道 无以伦比
6 N; K; W2 p; X2 W$ I' lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 a- e3 G1 k4 W! k: ^/ a若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
& U% k# E/ g/ U+ d. v# p' K向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
6 n; r% i8 j7 ?2 n# }+ VFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
5 r. @0 v: e- O7 @从此别无他意
) C1 j' t* p$ K) Y& N( b+ NWe meet and talk everyday,
0 R: n% E0 j& s% a2 C" C* f你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" F. F' z" R5 f, n6 B; S3 Y1 y奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
' b  w- ?1 v  [3 Y" G! \I would probably know how you feel
! c" ?- ~% u$ Z: I! ]( x8 t! h或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
2 }2 k- r" B( T! ]3 b1 K" ]" AWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
) R/ U% M0 ~( n( ^2 A+ C7 \: L$ @* x我多想向你表白
But I never did
0 ^6 z- |3 P' G却始终未曾出口
& E- g: q( m! a# H; D0 `  MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: g1 ]* @: @, o3 E  i只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
4 o1 A! o, t  S$ ~) SIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" Z% r( |7 `/ c/ `' K今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
. W% [5 r6 u# Y0 ]5 O0 c/ `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
0 v/ z8 Z. a# O* b$ D& M5 VCan I entrust it to you?
8 m. S# N( z( o5 \# x可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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8 b, K8 g6 A6 \# X5 M( P" `6 PLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
- |  q2 [8 s9 b3 A; N1 i3 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
; C$ S+ ]& T3 K. s/ t# E! g! ~But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( U5 w/ _+ b6 ~4 E: Z) M$ y. ^0 V只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
3 B4 ~/ N, f& p; NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# }8 T' A# y' s; {  z不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
& u" c: U$ y6 ?8 X可否将它 托付于你？
' S) S1 i5 E6 }* dEntrust my love within your heart
6 d8 Z, ~9 N7 y从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
& h/ W2 p- u! ?" J1 Z0 hEntrust my love within your heart
% y. ^. Z8 P: K: \' M" F从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
3 z# k9 [2 n, z! R7 u老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
4 A$ A: ~0 Q2 l$ X* V/ O% Z8 @6 p) Z刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
8 v6 E+ P0 Z# V- ~7 L6 c. g1 M" A! R老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
5 z, n) m5 Y: U  Q3 _刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
4 L  A" X! E# m/ n! P- [9 Jvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

/ H( @$ a5 j- i/ s" y不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。