【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
  H. d7 e7 l1 W; M& G5 z/ x% x! v, Ixxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

5 Y* f3 \. r5 p# j- r3 f3 u" T再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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# F5 [/ y$ {5 r! uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 c* ^$ F8 T) m3 G' N+ j" j皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
  h+ N$ R. p% N( M) ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 S: y( X7 q  {6 M夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 d* E# H" L: G4 y凝视明月 我心欢畅
2 W' K( O/ o2 I4 L+ Y3 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
. O; t0 Y) g7 H4 E' W* ?, x* `/ E一片丹心 照耀夜空

0 h& ^) ~, v# Q8 S. ]+ mWith the moon kissing it every night
2 D+ C* [" C6 w: W8 q7 q' F0 i看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
9 b, V, y8 U  a  N2 K' w# _+ YSeeing the sky content with its love
9 |# f, C4 F# S3 ~4 M. c夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
6 z' Z( j& c: M4 i. aIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
$ [+ F% I8 R/ i, tYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
: Q4 k" ?2 d( D9 z口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
6 p, E$ M' P# c' @/ CI love you I love you with all my heart
+ s, M  G+ P8 @7 W, @! n爱你爱你 全心全意
* T. _: u9 D8 F1 ~& KNothing can compare to my love
5 ]: q& [, T; [6 _9 Y2 q世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# I/ @3 Q+ j3 e2 ^# _. H1 O能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 v/ Q0 P* R1 m  F% A% Z; m5 G! t. H" x我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
. p, L8 e6 R, H* y9 @To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
, B* c: Y0 _" M* `: HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
) {% Q0 i# c+ s, q, t/ [2 `/ gI regret not dying
$ @+ s, ~7 L) K( r) T真恨不能 以死明志
& L$ M* u3 u; [  h. n0 W' LI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
2 l6 c- W9 n9 f2 Z1 P4 bWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
. n5 g" l* s% p- AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
  z  }4 p/ Y+ Y+ v! v% hRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 E6 x/ A0 N2 r3 r从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ L& g/ r, K5 Y* M% K3 q4 ^爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
& d+ w3 s/ y$ C! JI already loved you with all my heart
1 q+ @# W9 I# y4 K* |从此别无他意
4 B; t" G" P9 t9 a; gWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
/ w/ D# o' R0 W. P/ yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ l! Q+ j8 `4 Q2 s, g% Z4 B' X0 V奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
+ G$ Q" X! R9 j1 b4 xI would probably know how you feel
# k+ i$ i9 C+ v8 g; Y或能知你心意
# [; V  @1 k! Q" c  OLove… just the word love
6 ]% f# h+ l* ]* z1 g: P/ k9 E爱呀，爱就一个字
8 g/ \' ?: z+ u  HWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
) r$ a. @2 P( a7 ^But I never did
却始终未曾出口
! b7 s: c5 C1 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, A  W: Q7 @9 W/ }, g# k只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
/ z- X* y# ^+ ]: i8 Y3 _/ o& h* X$ _If today isn’t too late,
: M& `+ l2 i' ^9 U) B假如还不太迟
% P3 \# q3 \  A1 F  {$ {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 s5 Z! Q' B( k9 u3 m6 @+ ~) g今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
0 V2 ?  A5 ~  y/ XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 N  G: q7 o3 t) G2 M6 b# O不愿这份爱 逝如流水
) m, l  l4 I1 m6 S+ l# lCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
3 R7 F; R9 U) r' H3 v) ~, VEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

7 p# R2 `8 S$ @1 p; tLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
2 |. x% a4 [2 R) MWhy is it so difficult to express?
, o$ \, @3 `% W, C0 h' x8 u为何如何难言？
# R( f& i* W' k# LI want to confess that I love you,
4 X1 Z7 \; i- A! C% ~2 u我多想向你表白
# U  i, m! r8 H# D7 H  PBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 J8 {! d. e) B2 |只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
7 Q5 t* a; C% |' H4 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 [; ?9 N1 v4 _* h: {9 @不愿这份爱 逝如流水
0 |% a: }3 i% S- t, Z: ^4 }Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
$ ^4 I; e4 M5 P3 FEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
6 b( ^4 w7 w( F4 z/ O/ k( s$ o从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
9 h- r1 t* S0 I老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
! ~, L& U8 N; a/ D/ o2 [  J' a刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
4 b9 c0 u+ W1 }3 g3 F; a* X刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
- j; o1 c+ T: l( ?- ^vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

  ~, _& S' j3 R& K/ _2 x不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。