【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
3 N% \3 S8 l& D" r; |0 o" l+ Wxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
8 c2 @# I* |% Z/ O  ?vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

0 d/ r& n, }& ^8 d) _1 P  R  }再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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1 P- A7 Z/ ]2 L( kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 t& `- h) o; N/ A8 N夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
* u) b& o; y& Y) oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ N1 T' a2 ^# b) _一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
8 V+ K; M& B& |; z5 dYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
1 n7 l$ X! I0 b5 M+ x1 g口口声声 说你爱我
9 x' s9 @; J$ b# _; zI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
- X9 c. I" P( o5 U( i2 f* oI love you I love you with all my heart
- o5 Y5 F# F$ D: s" }1 J4 g爱你爱你 全心全意
2 @' b0 e; t' D# sNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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+ F9 c5 o, ]' T# r5 o: qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 \& L* v$ L. N: ?. M+ u! k能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
  E- ^/ I7 A/ N) h7 PI want so much to see inside your heart
2 s3 d# {% {) C. D5 [$ ]5 D我真想看透你的心
+ m' O$ f0 {' HI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
; q7 X" z) u) x# XTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 B1 M" m7 S- W  `8 Y若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
9 b# @* R7 Z% L- j& X: R- H6 wI’m still filled with fear
5 {0 k: u% O3 W# ^可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: B2 g& o7 Z; Z& ?  z你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
5 v! c7 V& W+ k( F- D( v- kI regret not dying
) _) Z1 j  y8 ]9 w/ i0 J. j真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
  ^- [3 j! `5 W8 n  V7 O( P) Y# OIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
8 Y' `( O) @+ i你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- c4 N! @9 o* T2 X能说会道 无以伦比
- S% @  n& J' U. ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
1 n0 Z5 w- i4 S) b5 k$ c  pRambling on about a thousand words of love
4 N/ X( ~. r# s. s3 q向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

/ J/ F$ r! B3 p7 Y6 _8 tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 {9 A; E& {9 I' x从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 B/ Y, p- I# F; o/ ]5 E3 A爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
/ m3 Y- Z9 `: I3 h; U% h' v对你一见倾心
% Y* k2 i! m9 Z5 r7 aI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
$ H/ }. S6 V) x( E; [- _. d) s! SWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
* J) f& o$ D$ X- BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- R( [" I7 E; c' v( y0 q奈何从未谈及内心
( S0 F, e: S& e2 d) I1 XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: g8 a( ]. b  \% P& H若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
3 Y6 x6 O/ y: _2 E/ n或能知你心意
' h9 o! S, Z$ z* \& aLove… just the word love
$ K$ _) W# z% u# e/ e爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
, V2 y' c. K; G2 G我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
2 x8 B% C% N! j% @$ G: jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ?. M5 v. j3 U6 w+ x/ I只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
" C: l/ d. g  x( C$ `) T! O+ D9 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
8 t/ r' ?, M5 p4 i5 u8 J. O) s! ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
8 [4 ?) w( F. M2 k9 Z, g! m3 L8 q可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
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9 ^- ^- j8 o$ m7 s3 E% ]Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
0 d9 \2 w/ o# t2 }) x8 f: O; qI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
+ m' u" n4 m# K5 _+ \But I never did
却始终未曾出口
7 C" s$ B$ f9 G; y/ bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& l+ d/ X8 {$ h8 G: j$ u& z只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
! B7 [% R' F: ^If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
/ i+ H4 ]9 Q7 `3 Z从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

$ D3 w  D" R% L0 [# G; i% v, N- p0 iCan I entrust it to you?
4 [/ N; I5 B( ?; x! h# G1 I可否将它托付于你？
1 a) g' j! h/ JEntrust my love within your heart
$ e. Z2 m* X. F从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
0 }3 `! |8 m* O" G4 t9 w老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
/ n7 O% q: e  W' M' S$ H3 b刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
8 `' _  ~4 N; U# o: [( }老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

# X0 f! S# b; e' i4 {2 Z不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。